Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

vj4u

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Bhai last 3 updates padne ke baad seriously words nahi hai bolne ko... Dhasu updates hai sari ki sari.. ab lag raha hai ki story apne title ko justify karegi.. superb writing skills V.J.. or sach kahu toh meine attitude part 1 phir se read kar dali hai so that koi character miss na ho jaye mujhse.. honestly ab toh story mein bas beelzbub or bhuvika ya asmodeus or Alessandra ke bacho ka wait kar raha hu mein toh.. khopdi ghuma hi rahe ho waise bhi last kuch updates se.😅👻
thanks for appreciating brother...yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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Bdi didi to hulk ki trha gussa ho gyi ab agr abhi raaz uske samne aa jaye to kaccha chaba jaayegi ye haalat h...to aakhir ye paheli alfreen ne solve kr li jisko aaj tk chosens me koi solve nhi kr paya aur inaam swaroop bn gyi wo mallika kali aur safed shaktiyaon ki...like raaz jisme bhi dono powers h black and white...chaliye dekhte h didi kaise thokti h raaz bhaiya ko but usse phle bhaiya ko chosens aana h waps aur apni yaadast bhi to laani h waps use.. Bahut maregi didi fir bhaiya hida brawny achhuta and slunder ko thokega...too much fun...:mahboi:

Wahi dusri trf maddox ne apni kurbani bhi de di mahi ki life ko bchane ke liye apni life pr abhi mamla uncontrollable h dekhte h wooger aur griffin kitni der tk ye sb smbhal skte h kkyuki jyada der lgi to sb khtm smjho videous chacha aayenge sbko kha jaayenge....yummmy yummmy krke...

Raaz bhi bina reel wala camera bnke jaag gya h...dekhte h kb tk yaddast waps aati h aur jb aayegi tb apne emotions ko kaise control kr payega wo..aur erappel usme uski kya madad kregi..baad me to usko bhi raaz me sma jana h...

Behtrin update brother... Waise aaj hm bach gye dhamaka km RDX wala tha aaj...waiting brother...:toohappy::respekt:
thanks for the review brother..bohot maza aane waala hai..yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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We saw a glimpse of what was happening to Horus in today's update in a glimpse of the future, even though death would be painful but it would give Horus salvation and do the same with Maddox. After that they will get liberation. :applause:
Maddox's words made us understand everything and eventually Mahi and Fallon became one and Mahi became an angel human. But giving power to raaz and removing the particles from inside that are hurting him is still left and due to this particles memory is gone, wow. :shocked:
The puzzle that no one had yet solved, Alfreen solved it and she became queen, great, she does not know the truth, so she is having trouble, it is not easy to bear the pain of losing parents. :approve:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

🖤🖤🖤
thanks for the review brother...be along
 

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Mind blowing bro. But ALFREEN to Bhadak gayi. Ab to Raaj ke liye problem bad gaya
Nice update bhai
bhut hi khtrnak fight hogi ab asa lgta he...bhut khubsurat update tha
Mindblowing update.........
keep posting bhai............
waiting for next update...........
avishmarniye update mitr
Fantastic superb update waiting for next
No word for this story
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Awesome update bhai...
Lajwab update brother
SUPERB FANTABULOUS UPDATE BHAI.
Bhai ye baat to apne sahi kahi ki Vikram Jairaj Singh ke dimaag ke aage har koi natmastak ho hi jata hai 😂😂😂 ab to mai har choti choti detail bi yaad rakhne ki Koshish kar raha hu, pata ni aapki konsi choti si baat hi last me sabse bada hint ho.
MIND BLOWING DEAR.
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai 😊
fantastic update bhai maza aa gya
Nice update
अदभुत, अप्रतिम, अलौकिक, शानदार अपडेट भाई, आपकी ये स्टोरी अतुलनीय है, इस स्टोरी की तारीफ के लिए मेरे पास शब्द ही नही है, और निशब्द हूँ मैं आपके लेखन शैली पर
Awesome update bro
Awesome update bro
Super update hai Bhai
Nice update bro
Mind blowing update bhai

Excellent
Boht zabardast update
Bahot bahot shaandaar khoobsurat lajawab mazedaar update bhai
Thanks for lovely and wonderful update
Great vj4u bhai
Chalo RAAZ bhi ab thik hogaya aur shayad bohut jald hi uski yadash bhi a jayegi and FALLON ka kaam bhi khatam hogaya ab ERRAPEL jo ki ALFREEN ki tarah hai uska kya role hoga dekhte hai
And as expected ALFREEN ab badle ke barey mai hi sonchegi aur to aur wo dono hi shaktiyo ki malkin bangayi
Dekhte hai agey kya hota hai.
Superb update
nice update bro....to alfreen bhi ab raaz se beintha nafrat krne lg gyi......dekhte h ye alfreen ki raaz k liye nfrt kitni muskile paida krti h...............
Wow bhai kya se kya ho raha har kisi ko power mil rahi hain bichare videous ne kya galti kar di jo use hi power nahi mil rahi hai aur agar errapel jo ki raaz ki 10 percent power hain aur agar woh use mil gayi to kya hoga

Waiting for new update
Awesome kitny jhatky dogy bhai

maza aa gaya padh kr
Fabulous update
Last 3 update me pura story hi Change Kar Diya
Keep posting
Bro VIDEOUS power ke mamleme sub
Ka BAAP he
Akhir vo
Vikram or Asmodus ki first chapter me
In dono bhai ki ladai Horahi thi or
Jo urja Baher nikl Rahi thi
Us urja ka mix collection se bana he
Vidouse
Jo takat or soch ke Maamle me Bhot aage he brother
VIDOUse Khud ek Shakti he
Jo Vikram or asmoduski ladaika natija he


Awesome extraordinary speechless amazing update. Ye chapter suru hote hi story ekdam bumper rocking ho gai hai VJbhai.aab toh soch ko bih sochne ka idea nahi bacha hai.:10:on:10:
Super Duper Hit &Mind Blowing & Fantastic & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah wah bro har update m dil or dimag hila dete ho Superb kamaal ka likhate ho lines ka kya kehna

" woh andar se toota hua hai bacchon,aur jab tak woh toota hua hissa wapas jud nahi jaata,woh baaki sabko todta chala jaayega... "


Kisi k bare kitna bura ho sakta h aapki y lines hi bta rhi h esa hi mene sbi updates m dekha h






Waiting
Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Mind Blowing & Excelente & Out Standing & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah Wah Wah kya baat black or white dono ki queen ban gyi alfrin super lekin raaz ki dushman b ban gyi

Oh teri raaz ki memory lose ho gyi ab to game kuch lg chlega esa lg rha h

Mahi ko abi apni puri power use krne k liye abi or mehnat krni hogi

Y sahi h Vikram jesa koi nhi abi hero raaz ho lekin is khel ka game maker to vikram hi h




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thanks brothers...be along...
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF FALLON MAHI ME SAMA JAATI HAI AUR AISA HONE KE BAAD MADDOX BHI APNI KURBAANI DE DETE HAIN, DUSRI TARAF HORUS URF DIGVIJAY BHI MOUT KI KAGAAR PAR PAHUNCH CHUKE HAIN WAHIN TEESRI TARAF ALFREEN PAHELI SOLVE KAR LETI HAI JISKE BAAD WOH EK AGATHOKAK ME CONVERT HO JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


( THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE )


UPDATE-126



PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-ERRAPEL'S COTTAGE






YEE...INNNHE...KKKYA....HHO RRAAHHA HAAI....?????


shayad ye zindagi pehli baar tha jab maine haklaate hue baat ki thi..

itna hi nahi,saamne HORUS ko,unki haalat ko dekhkar meri aankhon me dar bhi dikhne laga tha...

kuch seconds pehle jab mujhe hosh aaya tha aur uththe hi maine "MAI KAUN HUN"ye sawal kiya tha,ab HORUS ki kharab condition ko dekhkar mai woh sawal bhi bhul chuka tha....

khair jahan mere sawal ko sun ERRAPEL joki mujhe hi apne baba ki is kharab condition ka zimmedar manti thi,usne mujhe ghoor kar dekha wahin unke paas baithe aadmi ne jinki haalat kharab thi,unke dard se bhare chehre par bhi halki si muskaan naach uthi aur...


HORUS-kuch nahi hua mujhe beta....bas umar ho gayi hai naa, isiliye mere jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai...

MAI-umar hone par toh araam karna chahiye.. phir aise me aap kahan jaa rahe hain....???


behadh maasumiyat se bhar ye sawal pucha tha maine jispar HORUS jawab toh dena chahte the par COGNIZANT WORMS ke zeher ne ab unke pure sharir par apna asar kar diya tha aur isiliye...

AHHHHHHH.....

ek tez dard bhari cheekh nikli HORUS ke mooh se joki unke life ki aakhri cheekh saabit hui..

cheekhne ke saath hi ek safedh jhaag nikalne laga HORUS ke mooh se aur unka mooh ek taraf ludhak gaya...

HORUS urf DIGVIJAY ne apna kartavya nibha diya tha aur saath hi apna sharir bhi tyag moksh ki taraf badh chuke the...

wahin jaise hi ERRAPEL ne apne baba ko marte hue dekha toh...


BABAAAAAAA......

ek zordaar cheekh uske bhi mooh se nikli jiske baad woh HORUS ki dead body se chipak kar rone lagi...

jahan ERRAPEL ro rahi thi,wahin meri bhi haalat kharab ho gayi thi..

abhi abhi HORUS ne kaha tha ki woh kahin jaa rahe hain aur phir achanak unke mooh se jhaag nikalne laga aur woh mar gaye,ye sab dekh mai kaafi dar gaya tha...


(NOTE:-RAAZ ke saath ye sab MAHI ke ANGEL PARTICLES ki wajah se ho raha hai... COGNIZANT LEAFS ki wajah se woh hosh me toh aa gaya hai par dimag me un PARTICLES ke chale jaane ki wajah se uski yaadasht chali gayi hai...saath hi un ANGEL PARTICLES ne RAAZ ke devilish side ko suppress kar diya hai jiski wajah se uska sensitive version saamne aa gaya hai.)


dar toh mai bohot gaya tha par us ladki ko dekh jo us aadmi ki dead body ko gale lagaye ro rahi hai,mujhe bohot bura bhi lag raha tha aur isiliye mai dheere se utha aur us ladki ke side me jaakar uske baaju mai baith gaya..

kuch pal usse yunhi rote rehte dene ke baad maine apna haath dheere se uske kandhe par rakh diya..

waise toh mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aise waqt par kya bolun mai par phir bhi kuch toh bolna hi tha aur isiliye....


MAI-please mat roiye...uncle ke soul ko bura lagega..


badi hi maasumiyat se ye kahi thi maine ye baat jispar ERRAPEL ne apne kandhe ko tezi se shrug kiya jisse mera haath uske kandhe se chhitak sa gaya..

aisa kar ERRAPEL tezi se meri taraf palti aur....


CHATTAKHHH...CHATTAKKHHH...


kheench kar do behadh hi tez tamaache maare usne mujhe jiske asar se naa sirf mai piche palat kar gira balki mere honth bhi kaafi fath gaye....

khair, mujhko tamacha maar ERRAPEL thik mere saamne aayi aur mujhe mere collar se pakadte hue apni taraf kheencha...

jahan aisa karte waqt uske aankhon me mere liye nafrat thi wahin meri aankhon me dar...

kuch pal mujhe dekhti rahi yaa phir ye kahun ki ghurti rahi ERRAPEL aur phir...


ERRAPEL-bohot se sawal honge naa dimag me...dhyan se suno meri baat..tumhare saare sawalon ka ek hi jawab hai....mere baba ka marna aur aise hi jo bhi galat ho raha hai,uska reason sirf ek hai..TUM...

sirf tum..bas itni si baat ko apne dimag me rakho aur jab tak sahi waqt nahi aa jaata,door raho mujhse...

ye bol ERRAPEL ne mujhe mere collar se pakadte hue hi utha diya aur...


DHAAKKK...

main door ki taraf usne ucchal diya usne mujhe jiske baad mai udta hua sa us door se bahar ki taraf corridor me jaakar gira...

AHHHHH...

pichle sir ke bal gira tha mai jiski wajah se kaafi tez dard hua mujhe apne sir ke pichle hisse me...

kuch pal ke kiye aankhon ke aage andhera bhi chha gaya tha mere par phir jab mera vision clear hua toh mai uthkar baith gaya...

pehle thappad aur phir uthakar mujhe bahar fenk dena,in sabse kaafi dar gaya tha mai aur saath hi bura bhi bohot lag raha tha...

par sabse zyada taklif is baat ki thi ki mujhe apne baare me kuch bhi nahi pata tha..

ghar ke andar us ladki ne jo kaha,usse sun itna toh andaza ho gaya tha mujhe ki woh mere baare me zaroor kuch naa kuch jaanti hai par jo usne kiya tha,uske baad uske paas jaane ki himmat nahi thi mujhme...

ek aur taklif bhi thi..is waqt raat ka samay tha aur ye jagah kuch zyada hi thandi thi...

har jagah barf dikh rahi thi aur aise me maine ek patla sa outfit pehna tha jiski wajah se thand mere sharir se hote hue mere haddiyon tak pahunch rahi thi...

andar ab mai jaa sakta nahi tha aur bahar kahan jaaun,ye pata nahi tha..khair,jab nazar ghumayi maine toh left side ek jhulla dikha mujhe jiske upar ek moti chaadar rakhi hui thi..

mai utha aur jhulle ke paas pahunch us chaadar ko utha liya aur apne body me shawl ki tarah lapet liya..

thand toh ab bhi lag rahi thi par pehle se halki kam..

khair,aisa kar mai wapas main door ki taraf gaya..ek baar door ke andar ki taraf dekh mai ulti taraf mood gaya aur halke halke kaampte hue sidhi utar gaya jiske baad kuch pal idhar udhar dekhta raha mai par phir jab samajh nahi aaya ki kahan jaaun mai toh dimag jhatak ek anjaan disha ki taraf badh gaya...





PLACE- ASTER




AHHHH......


kaafi lambe samay tak behosh rehne ke baad ek karah ke saath aankhen kholi usne par saamne ka nazara dekh uski kamzor aankhon me bhi ek chamak si aa gayi thi par phir woh chamak achanak se hi halki ghabrahat me bhi badal gayi..

reason...

GRIFFIN baithi thi is waqt MAHI se kuch aage jisse dekh aankhon me chamak aayi thi uske aur ghabrahat ka reason tha woh vishalkaay aur ajeeb sa jaanwar jiska ek panja is waqt GRIFFIN ke upar rakha hua tha...

ye dekh kisi tarah apni taakat batorkar uthi MAHI aur us jaanwar ki taraf badhne ko hui par woh aage badhti usse pehle hi...


WOOGER-shaant MAHI..mai tumhari GRIFFIN ko nuksaan nahi pahuncha raha hun...


apne panje ko GRIFFIN ke upar se uthate hue kahi ye baat usne...

wahin WOOGER ki baat yaa phir ye kahun ki uski awaaz sun chownki MAHI...

reason....

us jaanwar ki awaaz hubahu RAAZ ki tarah thi..

MAHI hairani se WOOGER ko dekh hi rahi thi ki...


GRIFFIN-ye WOOGER hai MAHI....jaise me tumhari urja se bani hun,thik ussi tarah ye bhi RAAZ ki urja se bana hai...


jahan apni baat bol GRIFFIN bhi taakat lagate hue kisi tarah khadi hui wahin uski baat sun MAHI ke chehre par jo shocking expressions the,woh thode kam hue aur...


MAHI-RAAZ kaisa hai..????

WOOGER-kuch der pehle tak behosh the woh par hosh aa gaya hai unhe par tumhari ANGEL PARTICLES ki wajah se yaadasht chali gayi hai unki...


hosh me aane ki baat sun jahan thodi relaxed hui thi MAHI wahin yaadasht jaane ki baat sun RAAZ ke liye fikr badh gayi thi uski jiske baad....


MAHI-toh hume chalna chahiye uske paas...mai apne particles wapas le lun usse,tab toh uski memory wapas aa jaayegi naa...!!!

WOOGER-jaise tumhara ek extra roop FALLON ke roop me yahan moujud tha,thik waise hi MASTER ka bhi ek roop wahan moujud hai jahan is waqt woh hain...

us jagah ke upar us roop ka kawach bicha hua hai jisse tum abhi tumhari jo condition hai,usse bhedh nahi sakti...

aur jab tak MASTER ki yaaddast wapas nahi aa jaati aur unka woh roop,woh shakti unme sama nahi jaati,tab tak mai bhi us kawach ko bhed nahi sakta...

isiliye kamsekam jab tak tumhari pyscical power restore nahi ho jaati,tab tak hume wait karna padega..

MAHI-pyscical power toh kuch der me restore ho hi jaayegi...

WOOGER-tum kisi race me lagataar doudne ki wajah se thaki aur kamzor nahi hui ho,balki ANGEL form ke samane aur uski wajah se tumhare sharir me ho rahe inside structural changes ki wajah se weak hui ho..

aur aise changes se aayi thakaan aur kamzori waqt ke saath nahi balki un changes ko adapt karne ke liye jo mehnet ki jaati hai,usse door hoti hai...

MAHI-mai samjhi nahi...!!!kaisi mehnet...????

WOOGER-sab kuch mai hi bataunga toh tum yahan kis liye ho...???


GRIFFIN ko dekh ye baat kahi WOOGER ne jispar ek pal ke liye ghoor kar dekha usse GRIFFIN ne par phir..


GRIFFIN-jaisa ki MADDOX ne tumhe bataya tha ki tumhare ANGEL form aur shakti ne tumhare heart ke ek taraf apni jagah banayi hai aur dil ke dusre bhaag ki taraf is waqt tumhare human form ki shakti khisak kar jam chuki hai..

aur tumhara task aur challange hai,in dono shaktiyon ko merge karkar ek karna...

khair,aisa karna kaafi time taking hai par is process ki triggering point filhal ke liye tumhara ilaaj hai...

tumhe apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION mode aur REFINER power,in dono ko hi ek saath open karna hoga..

complete devotion ke saath tumhe us zero state me jaana hoga jahan sab kuch blank hota hai...

aisa hote hi tumhare AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER powers tumhe tumhare ANGEL aur HUMAN, dono hi shaktiyon ke glimpse dikhayenge..

us glimpse se generate hogi ek healing power jo tumhare pyscical strength ko restore karegi...

waise isme bhi thoda waqt toh lag hi jaayega...

WOOGER-aur aisa hona zaroori bhi hai..jitni deri se MASTER ki yaadasht wapas aaye,tumhare liye utna hi acha ho...


WOOGER ki baat sun chownki MAHI aur...


MAHI-RAAZ ki yaadasht late aane se mere liye kya accha ho sakta hai..???

WOOGER-MASTER ki bhuli hui memory me waise toh dard bhi hai aur sabke liye ghussa bhi,par jaanti ho us memory me is waqt sabse zyada ghussa kiske liye hai...???

MAHI-nahi,but i hope mere liye toh aisa kuch nahi hoga...!!!

WOOGER-tumhare liye nahi par tumse jo sabse zyada jude hain,unse behadh naaraz hai RAAZ...

tumhare PITAH,LORD OF ANGELS.....

jo kuch bhi ho raha hai,har chiz jo ho chuki hai jisme RAAZ ka human hona aur jiski wajah se woh human hai,uske mom dad,unki mout,ye sab kuch unka hi plan tha...

aur in sab baaton se is waqt RAAZ ki bhuli hui memory me tunhare pitah uske liye VIDEOUS se bade dushman hai..

aur tum unki beti ho,toh zaahir hai ki woh bhuli memory tumse bhi nafrat hi karegi...

MAHI-waah,pyar usne kiya nahi,dhoka maine diya nahi,aur dagar nafrat waale raah tak pahunch gayi...

sahi hai..par koi baat nahi, berukhi sahi hai,nafrat bhi seh lenge....


ek feeki muskaan ke saath kahi ye baat MAHI ne aur phir apni jagah par paalthi maarte hue woh paused CEREBRATION me baith apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER powers ko activate karne me lag gayi...

wahin paused CEREBRATION me jaane se pehle jo MAHI ne jo kaha usse sun GRIFFIN ko uske liye bohot bura laga...woh WOOGER ki taraf palti aur..


GRIFFIN-tumhara MASTER itna insensitive aur patthar dil kaise ho sakta hai....??


frustration bhari padi thi GRIFFIN ki baaton me jisse sun apne bade se sir ko left right hilaya WOOGER ne aur...


WOOGER-hatheli par ishq-e-lakeer se acha hai PATTHAR banana...!!!

naa GHISOGE,naa PISOGE.....






PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-NEAR CELESTE MOUNTAIN






FNNNFNNNN....


YE NAYI GANDH KAISI...!!!!

hawa me sunghte hue ek bade hi vishalkaay aadmi ne kahi thi ye baat jispar uske saath baithe uske 3 saathiyon ne bhi sehmati jataate hue zoron se sunghna shuru kar diya...


THE NIMRODS....

yahi pechnaan thi in chaaron logon ki..aur ye pehchaan in sabko inke kabila jiska naam THE NIMROD TRIBE tha,usse mili thi..

pure badan par jungli jaanwar ki khaal se bane kapde in NIMRODS ko aur bhi darawana dikhati thi...

aap sabko ERRAPEL ka intro update toh yaad hi hoga guyz jisme usne us SNOW LEOPARD ko thik kiya tha..

waisa karte waqt usne ek kabile ka zikr kiya tha..ye NIMROD TRIBE wahi kabila hai jiske baare me usko uske baba HORUS urf DIGVIJAY ne bataya tha...

is tribe ke log naa sirf vishalkaay aur taakatwar hote hain balki saath hi saath in logon ke sunghne ki shamata kaafi tez hoti hai..

yahi wajah thi ki un chaaron ne hi door se aati ek anjaani gandh ko naa sirf sungh liya tha balki waise hi sunghte hue woh us gandh ki aa rahi disha ki taraf badh gaye aur tabhi..


1ST NIMROD-woh dekho wahan..koi bhaag raha hai...???


ek disha ki taraf ungli dikhate hue kahi ye baat us NIMROD ne jiske baad uske saath khade NIMROD ne apne kamar par bandhe 3 feet ki rope jiske dono hi ends par lohe ke do bade bade lohe ke nukile charre lage the,usse nikala aur hawa me ek pal ghumate hue us saaye ki taraf pheka jo ek chaadar odhe hue pedon ki ot lekar chhupne ki koshish karte hue bhaag raha tha par har taraf faile barf aur half moon night ki wajah se woh un NIMRODS ki tez nazar se bach nahi paaya...

woh rope ek sadhe hue andaz me apne chharron ki wajah se gol ghumta hua sidhe us bhaagte hue saaye ke pairon me fasa jiske agle hi pal..


DHAMMM....AHHHH

woh saaya barf ke beech dhas sa gaya tha aur un nukile charron ke chhubne ki wajah se uski ek behadh tez cheekh bhi nikal gayi...

wahin rope fekne ke baad woh chaaron NIMRODS tezi se us saaye ki taraf bhaage the aur kuch hi palon me woh sab us saaye ke saamne the jahan woh saaya joki aur koi nahi mai tha,us nukile charron ko jo mere pair me dhase hue the, chhatpatate hue kisi tarah nikaalne ki koshish kar raha tha...

aisa karte hue achanak maine saamne dekha toh meri jaan mere halak me aa gayi...

reason...

is waqt mere saamne aakhon me ek aisi chamak liye jo ek shikari ki apne shikar ko dekh kar aati hai,chaar daityakar size ke log khade the...

un chaaron ko dekhkar toh ek pal ke liye mai apna dard hi bhul gaya tha...

aankhen faade mai un chaaron ko dekhe jaa raha tha...waise in chaaron ko door se hi maine dekh liya tha aur isiliye chhupte hue mai bhaag bhi raha tha par ab jab ye 8 feet lambe jaanwar numa insaan mere saamne the, toh meri haalat kharab ho gayi thi...

wahin meri haalat se bilkul ulat woh chaaron mujhe behadh khushi se dekh rahe the maano unke saamne koi insaan nahi balki unki manpasand dawat rakhi hai....

aur ye baat sach bhi thi..THE NIMROD TRIBE se yahan ke logon ke darne ki ek wajah ye bhi thi ki is kabile ke log narbhakshi the...

haan,woh insaano ko kaccha nahi khaate the,paka kar khaate the par khaate toh the..

khair,yahan mai in chaaron ko tukur tukur dekh raha tha aur wahan mujhe kuch der ghoorte rehne ke baad...


1ST NIMROD-arre waah..aaj toh hamari jholi me khudbadkhud ek shikaar aa gira...

2ND NIMROD-aur woh bhi itna chikna...dekh zara,thode se chuban se hi iske pairon se khoon risne laga...

iski haddiyan chabane me bada maza aane waala hai...

3RD-haan..isse naa,dheeme aanch me pakayenge...

4TH-aur woh bhi bina maare..dekha naa,kuch der pehle kaise cheekha tha ye..iski cheekh bhaa gayi hai mujhe..

jab yunhi cheekhte hue marega ye toh maza hi aa jaayega...


BHEN***D...

saale kya baat kar rahe hain ye log..??sunkar hi haalat kharab ho gayi thi meri..

mere aankhon me dar kaafi badh gaya tha jisse dekh woh chaaron aur khush ho gaye...


1ST-par sabse pehle woh karte hain jo hamari pratha hai...apne shikar ko halal karne se pehle thoda khela jaaye iske saath..

oye uth...


neeche jhukte hue us NIMROD ne mere pair me fase rope ko ek jhatke me nikal diya aur fir kahi mujhe uthne waali baat jispar mai darte hue khada hua..

mai tha 6 feet se thoda upar..lekin iske baawjud un chaaron ke aage mai abhi baccha hi lag raha tha..

khair, mere khade hone ke baad...


2ND NIMROD-chal bhaag..agar kaamiyab hua toh bach jaayega...

ghanta bhaag..saala itni door me tha mai kuch der pehle par phir bhi pakad liya tha in chaaron ne mujhe aur ab toh saamne hi tha mai, toh aise me mera in sabse bachna toh naamumkin hi tha...

yahi sab soch raha tha mai ki tabhi....


4TH NIMROD-kya soch raha hai..bhaagta hai yaa tere andar sariya daalkar tujhe pakana shuru karen...???


bas itna hi bolna tha us bande ka ki tabhi mai un chaaron ke beech se nikalkar bhaaga...

pairon me taklif toh abhi bhi thi jo yahan pad rahi thand ki wajah se badhti hi jaa rahi thi par in sab cheezon ko side kar mai jitna ho sakta tha,tezi se bhaag raha tha...

abhi mujhe yunhi bhaagte hue kuch 20 seconds hi hue the ki maine ek baar palat kar dekha aur aisa karte hi mai chownk gaya...

reason...

jahan kuch der pehle mai aur woh chaaron log khade the,wahan ab koi bhi nahi tha....

but is hairani ko dimag se jhatakte hue mai wapas sidha hua hi tha ki tabhi...


CHATAAKHH....

ek zordar tamacha mere gaal par pada jiske asar se mai ghumta hua piche ki taraf ful force me gira..

us tamache ke impact se mere gaal fat gaye the aur sir bhi bhanna gaya tha...

do teen baar sir ko jhatakte hue kisi tarah mai khada hua toh dekha ki woh chaaron log ek baar phir mujhe circle kiye khade hue the....


3RD NIMROD-kya hua uth..chal ek aur mouka dete hain tujhe...bhaag..


us NIMROD ki baa sun is baar mai bhaga nahi,khada raha jisse dekh usse ghussa aa gaya aur..


CHATTAKKK,CHATTAKKK,CHATTAKK....

ek ke baad ek teen baar tamache pade mere face par us bande ke..

kehne ko toh ye teen tamache hi the par asar unka mukkon se bhi zyada tha..

yahi reason tha ki un tamachon ke asar se mai lehrate hue neeche gira aur behosh ho gaya...

aur jab aisa hua toh...


2ND NIMROD-arre ye toh behosh ho gaya...

1ST NIMROD-koi baat nahi..waise bhi bohot khel liye...ab apne shikar ko pakana shuru karte hain...

apna sariya nikal aur iske andkosh ki jagah se ghusate hue iske sir se bahar nikal...

aur phir latka isse aag ke upar....


us NIMROD ki baat sun uske ek saathi ne apne piche teer ki tarah latkaye sariya ko kheencha aur usse haath me strongly pakadte hue meri taraf badha...

mere dono pair toh waise bhi halke faile hue hi the..usne us bade se sariya se mere dono taango ke beech aim liya aur haath ko piche karte hue woh mujhe bhedne ke kiye us sariya ke nukile bhaag ko tezi se aage karne hi waala tha ki tabhi....


GHHHRRHHHHHH.....

ek ajeeb se gurrahat ke saath us un chaaron ke beech chhalang lagayi kisine jisse dekh woh chaaron naa sirf hadbada gaye balki chaar kadam piche bhi hath gaye...

piche haththe hi jab un sabne us beech me koodne waale jeev ko dekha toh un sabki aankhen badi ho gayi aur un chaaron ke mooh se ek saath nikla...


CHAARON-SNOW LEOPARD....(ye wahi leopard hai jiski jaan ERRAPEL ne bachayi thi...)




BACK TO ERRAPEL




SHIT.......ye kya kar diya ERRAPEL...???kahan gaya ye...????


khudpar jhunjlate hue kahi thi ye baat ERRAPEL ne...

RAAZ ko thappad maarne ke baad woh apne cottage ke andar toh chali gayi par phir kuch der baad jab uska ghussa kuch shaant hua tab usse ehsaas hua ki usne kya kar diya hai...

jisse usne thappad maara tha,woh bhul gayi thi ki woh toh khud ussika hissa hai..

bhale hi memory loss ki wajah se abhi RAAZ ka ATTITUDE badla hai,par woh ye baat jaanti thi ki ye condition temporary hai..

jis din uski memory wapas aayi toh pehle se hi frustrated aur ghusse se bhare asli RAAZ par aaj ka ERRAPEL ka maara tamacha insult to injury jaisa hoga jiska khaamiyaza bohoton ko bhugatna padega...

khair,in saare negetive thoughts me ek positive thought ne bhi ERRAPEL ke dimag me ghar kiya tha..

aur woh ye ki kyunki woh RAAZ ka hi hissa thi,un dono ki urja ek hi thi, isiliye usse dhundna ERRAPEL ke liye mushkil nahi thi..

yahi wajah thi ki agle hi pal naa sirf ERRAPEL ki aankhen band ho gayi balki saath hi saath uske body se uski urja nikalkar har taraf failti chali gayi jiske kuch der baad hi usse RAAZ ki location mil chuki thi..

location ka pata chalte hi ERRAPEL ki aankhein khul gayi par jahan RAAZ ka thikana jaan usse khush hona chahiye tha, wahin uske face par chinta ki rekhayen dikhne lagi thi..

REASON....

RAAZ ki location ussi jagah se aa rahi thi jahan NIMROD TRIBE ka thikana tha...

aur abhi RAAZ ko jo condition thi,usme woh jagah uske liye bohot khataranak thi..

ERRAPEL ko turant us location par pahunchna tha aur isiliye agle hi pal woh hawa si tez bhaagte hue NIMROD TRIBE waale area ki taraf badh gayi...





BACK TO RAAZ:-




YE TOH EK SNOW LEOPARD HAI...PAR ISKI HEIGHT ITNI KAISE BADH GAYI...???


apne sariye ko aage karte hue ye baat kahi thi 1st NIMROD ne...

wahin woh SNOW LEOPARD RAAZ ke behosh sharir ke paas usse sungne laga tha..

khair,us LEOPARD ki poonch is waqt 1st NIMROD ki taraf thi isiliye usne badi tezi se us sariye ko LEOPARD ki taraf fek diya par tabhi...

apne punch ko halka sa lehraya bhar us LEOPARD ne jisse takrate hi woh sariya door chittak kar gira...

ye dekh pehle toh chaaron NIMRODS hairan hue par phir un sabne apna apna sariya nikal liya aur ek saath uspar tezi se waar kiya par tabhi....

us LEOPARD ne apne pure body ko tezi se shrug kiya aur uske aisa karte hi ek behadh hi strong force field uske body se nikal chaaron taraf fail gayi jiske asar se do chizen hui...

pehli,woh sabhi sariye jo us LEOPARD ki taraf tezi se badh rahe the,woh beech raaste me hi us force field ki chapet me aakar neeche gir gaye..

dusri,us force field ki wajah se woh chaaron NIMRODS bhi udte hue kuch piche jaakar gire..

aur aisa hote hi unhe us LEOPARD ki taakat ka andaza ho gaya aur isiliye bina phirse attack kiye woh sab wahan se nou do gyarah ho gaye...

wahin un chaaron NIMRODS ko bhaagte dekhne ke baad bhi woh SNOW LEOPARD unke piche bhaaga nahi balki wahin RAAZ ke paas khada ho gaya....

woh uske pure sharir ko sungh hi raha tha ki tabhi...


RAAZZZZ....

ek cheekh uske piche se aayi jisse sun aise araam se palta woh LEOPARD jaise woh us awaaz ko pehchanta ho..

aur aisa hi tha...aakhir woh awaaz thi ERRAPEL ki jisne us LEOPARD ki jaan bachayi thi...

jahan woh LEOPARD badi araam se palta tha wahin uske ulat ERRAPEL badi tezi se uski aur RAAZ ki taraf aayi...

usne us SNOW LEOPARD ko door se hi pehchaan liya tha aur isiliye woh thodi nischint bhi ho gayi thi par phir uski nazar padi RAAZ par joki behosh hokar neeche us barfile zameen par pada hua tha aur ye dekh hi uske kadam tezi se RAAZ ki taraf badh gaye...

RAAZ ke paas pahunch ERRAPEL ki nazar uske bigde huliye par padi jisse dekh itni der me pehli baar usse RAAZ par taras aaya..

usse ye bhi andaza ho gaya tha ki yahan zaroor RAAZ par kisine haath uthaya hai jo ho naa ho NIMROD TRIBE ke log hi kar sakte the aur us SNOW LEOPARD ko dekh usse pata chal gaya tha ki uski hi wajah se RAAZ sirf behosh hai,warna woh narbhakshi kabile ke log usse ab tak maar chuke hote..

ye sab andaza laga ERRAPEL ne ek baar pyar se apna haath firaya us SNOW LEOPARD ke chehre par aur phir neeche jhuk usne RAAZ ke chehre ko apni godh me rakh liya..

aisa kar usne apne FUR COAT ke pocket se ek shishi nikali aur RAAZ ke mooh ko halka sa khol us shishi ke andar ke dravya ko usse dheere dheere pila diya..

aisa hote hi RAAZ ke saare zakhm apne aap hi bharne lage.. ERRAPEL jaanti thi ki abhi kuch minutes lagenge saare ghaav ko puri tarah bharne aur RAAZ ke hosh me aane ke liye...

ERRAPEL ektak RAAZ ke maasum se chehre ko dekhte hue uske cold heart ko jo usne aaj tak lagatar feel ki thi,uske baare me soch rahi thi aur yunhi sochte hue hile uske honth.....


ERRAPEL-baba kehte the.....



ki TU woh hawa hai jo sirf apni marzi se BAHEGA....

kisika dil dukhe ya toote,jo tere liye sahi hain,TU sirf wahi KAHEGA....

maasumiyat tere chehre ki tere dil me utarni zaroori hai....

warna mujhe paakar bhi,TU hamesha adhura hi RAHEGA......
















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.......

















AAPKA APNA V...J......
 
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF FALLON MAHI ME SAMA JAATI HAI AUR AISA HONE KE BAAD MADDOX BHI APNI KURBAANI DE DETE HAIN, DUSRI TARAF HORUS URF DIGVIJAY BHI MOUT KI KAGAAR PAR PAHUNCH CHUKE HAIN WAHIN TEESRI TARAF ALFREEN PAHELI SOLVE KAR LETI HAI JISKE BAAD WOH EK AGATHOKAK ME CONVERT HO JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


( THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE )


UPDATE-126



PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-ERRAPEL'S COTTAGE






YEE...INNNHE...KKKYA....HHO RRAAHHA HAAI....?????


shayad ye zindagi pehli baar tha jab maine haklaate hue baat ki thi..

itna hi nahi,saamne HORUS ko,unki haalat ko dekhkar meri aankhon me dar bhi dikhne laga tha...

kuch seconds pehle jab mujhe hosh aaya tha aur uththe hi maine "MAI KAUN HUN"ye sawal kiya tha,ab HORUS ki kharab condition ko dekhkar mai woh sawal bhi bhul chuka tha....

khair jahan mere sawal ko sun ERRAPEL joki mujhe hi apne baba ki is kharab condition ka zimmedar manti thi,usne mujhe ghoor kar dekha wahin unke paas baithe aadmi ne jinki haalat kharab thi,unke dard se bhare chehre par bhi halki si muskaan naach uthi aur...


HORUS-kuch nahi hua mujhe beta....bas umar ho gayi hai naa, isiliye mere jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai...

MAI-umar hone par toh araam karna chahiye.. phir aise me aap kahan jaa rahe hain....???


behadh maasumiyat se bhar ye sawal pucha tha maine jispar HORUS jawab toh dena chahte the par COGNIZANT WORMS ke zeher ne ab unke pure sharir par apna asar kar diya tha aur isiliye...

AHHHHHHH.....

ek tez dard bhari cheekh nikli HORUS ke mooh se joki unke life ki aakhri cheekh saabit hui..

cheekhne ke saath hi ek safedh jhaag nikalne laga HORUS ke mooh se aur unka mooh ek taraf ludhak gaya...

HORUS urf DIGVIJAY ne apna kartavya nibha diya tha aur saath hi apna sharir bhi tyag moksh ki taraf badh chuke the...

wahin jaise hi ERRAPEL ne apne baba ko marte hue dekha toh...


BABAAAAAAA......

ek zordaar cheekh uske bhi mooh se nikli jiske baad woh HORUS ki dead body se chipak kar rone lagi...

jahan ERRAPEL ro rahi thi,wahin meri bhi haalat kharab ho gayi thi..

abhi abhi HORUS ne kaha tha ki woh kahin jaa rahe hain aur phir achanak unke mooh se jhaag nikalne laga aur woh mar gaye,ye sab dekh mai kaafi dar gaya tha...


(NOTE:-RAAZ ke saath ye sab MAHI ke ANGEL PARTICLES ki wajah se ho raha hai... COGNIZANT LEAFS ki wajah se woh hosh me toh aa gaya hai par dimag me un PARTICLES ke chale jaane ki wajah se uski yaadasht chali gayi hai...saath hi un ANGEL PARTICLES ne RAAZ ke devilish side ko suppress kar diya hai jiski wajah se uska sensitive version saamne aa gaya hai.)


dar toh mai bohot gaya tha par us ladki ko dekh jo us aadmi ki dead body ko gale lagaye ro rahi hai,mujhe bohot bura bhi lag raha tha aur isiliye mai dheere se utha aur us ladki ke side me jaakar uske baaju mai baith gaya..

kuch pal usse yunhi rote rehte dene ke baad maine apna haath dheere se uske kandhe par rakh diya..

waise toh mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aise waqt par kya bolun mai par phir bhi kuch toh bolna hi tha aur isiliye....


MAI-please mat roiye...uncle ke soul ko bura lagega..


badi hi maasumiyat se ye kahi thi maine ye baat jispar ERRAPEL ne apne kandhe ko tezi se shrug kiya jisse mera haath uske kandhe se chhitak sa gaya..

aisa kar ERRAPEL tezi se meri taraf palti aur....


CHATTAKHHH...CHATTAKKHHH...


kheench kar do behadh hi tez tamaache maare usne mujhe jiske asar se naa sirf mai piche palat kar gira balki mere honth bhi kaafi fath gaye....

khair, mujhko tamacha maar ERRAPEL thik mere saamne aayi aur mujhe mere collar se pakadte hue apni taraf kheencha...

jahan aisa karte waqt uske aankhon me mere liye nafrat thi wahin meri aankhon me dar...

kuch pal mujhe dekhti rahi yaa phir ye kahun ki ghurti rahi ERRAPEL aur phir...


ERRAPEL-bohot se sawal honge naa dimag me...dhyan se suno meri baat..tumhare saare sawalon ka ek hi jawab hai....mere baba ka marna aur aise hi jo bhi galat ho raha hai,uska reason sirf ek hai..TUM...

sirf tum..bas itni si baat ko apne dimag me rakho aur jab tak sahi waqt nahi aa jaata,door raho mujhse...

ye bol ERRAPEL ne mujhe mere collar se pakadte hue hi utha diya aur...


DHAAKKK...

main door ki taraf usne ucchal diya usne mujhe jiske baad mai udta hua sa us door se bahar ki taraf corridor me jaakar gira...

AHHHHH...

pichle sir ke bal gira tha mai jiski wajah se kaafi tez dard hua mujhe apne sir ke pichle hisse me...

kuch pal ke kiye aankhon ke aage andhera bhi chha gaya tha mere par phir jab mera vision clear hua toh mai uthkar baith gaya...

pehle thappad aur phir uthakar mujhe bahar fenk dena,in sabse kaafi dar gaya tha mai aur saath hi bura bhi bohot lag raha tha...

par sabse zyada taklif is baat ki thi ki mujhe apne baare me kuch bhi nahi pata tha..

ghar ke andar us ladki ne jo kaha,usse sun itna toh andaza ho gaya tha mujhe ki woh mere baare me zaroor kuch naa kuch jaanti hai par jo usne kiya tha,uske baad uske paas jaane ki himmat nahi thi mujhme...

ek aur taklif bhi thi..is waqt raat ka samay tha aur ye jagah kuch zyada hi thandi thi...

har jagah barf dikh rahi thi aur aise me maine ek patla sa outfit pehna tha jiski wajah se thand mere sharir se hote hue mere haddiyon tak pahunch rahi thi...

andar ab mai jaa sakta nahi tha aur bahar kahan jaaun,ye pata nahi tha..khair,jab nazar ghumayi maine toh left side ek jhulla dikha mujhe jiske upar ek moti chaadar rakhi hui thi..

mai utha aur jhulle ke paas pahunch us chaadar ko utha liya aur apne body me shawl ki tarah lapet liya..

thand toh ab bhi lag rahi thi par pehle se halki kam..

khair,aisa kar mai wapas main door ki taraf gaya..ek baar door ke andar ki taraf dekh mai ulti taraf mood gaya aur halke halke kaampte hue sidhi utar gaya jiske baad kuch pal idhar udhar dekhta raha mai par phir jab samajh nahi aaya ki kahan jaaun mai toh dimag jhatak ek anjaan disha ki taraf badh gaya...





PLACE- ASTER




AHHHH......


kaafi lambe samay tak behosh rehne ke baad ek karah ke saath aankhen kholi usne par saamne ka nazara dekh uski kamzor aankhon me bhi ek chamak si aa gayi thi par phir woh chamak achanak se hi halki ghabrahat me bhi badal gayi..

reason...

GRIFFIN baithi thi is waqt MAHI se kuch aage jisse dekh aankhon me chamak aayi thi uske aur ghabrahat ka reason tha woh vishalkaay aur ajeeb sa jaanwar jiska ek panja is waqt GRIFFIN ke upar rakha hua tha...

ye dekh kisi tarah apni taakat batorkar uthi MAHI aur us jaanwar ki taraf badhne ko hui par woh aage badhti usse pehle hi...


WOOGER-shaant MAHI..mai tumhari GRIFFIN ko nuksaan nahi pahuncha raha hun...


apne panje ko GRIFFIN ke upar se uthate hue kahi ye baat usne...

wahin WOOGER ki baat yaa phir ye kahun ki uski awaaz sun chownki MAHI...

reason....

us jaanwar ki awaaz hubahu RAAZ ki tarah thi..

MAHI hairani se WOOGER ko dekh hi rahi thi ki...


GRIFFIN-ye WOOGER hai MAHI....jaise me tumhari urja se bani hun,thik ussi tarah ye bhi RAAZ ki urja se bana hai...


jahan apni baat bol GRIFFIN bhi taakat lagate hue kisi tarah khadi hui wahin uski baat sun MAHI ke chehre par jo shocking expressions the,woh thode kam hue aur...


MAHI-RAAZ kaisa hai..????

WOOGER-kuch der pehle tak behosh the woh par hosh aa gaya hai unhe par tumhari ANGEL PARTICLES ki wajah se yaadasht chali gayi hai unki...


hosh me aane ki baat sun jahan thodi relaxed hui thi MAHI wahin yaadasht jaane ki baat sun RAAZ ke liye fikr badh gayi thi uski jiske baad....


MAHI-toh hume chalna chahiye uske paas...mai apne particles wapas le lun usse,tab toh uski memory wapas aa jaayegi naa...!!!

WOOGER-jaise tumhara ek extra roop FALLON ke roop me yahan moujud tha,thik waise hi MASTER ka bhi ek roop wahan moujud hai jahan is waqt woh hain...

us jagah ke upar us roop ka kawach bicha hua hai jisse tum abhi tumhari jo condition hai,usse bhedh nahi sakti...

aur jab tak MASTER ki yaaddast wapas nahi aa jaati aur unka woh roop,woh shakti unme sama nahi jaati,tab tak mai bhi us kawach ko bhed nahi sakta...

isiliye kamsekam jab tak tumhari pyscical power restore nahi ho jaati,tab tak hume wait karna padega..

MAHI-pyscical power toh kuch der me restore ho hi jaayegi...

WOOGER-tum kisi race me lagataar doudne ki wajah se thaki aur kamzor nahi hui ho,balki ANGEL form ke samane aur uski wajah se tumhare sharir me ho rahe inside structural changes ki wajah se weak hui ho..

aur aise changes se aayi thakaan aur kamzori waqt ke saath nahi balki un changes ko adapt karne ke liye jo mehnet ki jaati hai,usse door hoti hai...

MAHI-mai samjhi nahi...!!!kaisi mehnet...????

WOOGER-sab kuch mai hi bataunga toh tum yahan kis liye ho...???


GRIFFIN ko dekh ye baat kahi WOOGER ne jispar ek pal ke liye ghoor kar dekha usse GRIFFIN ne par phir..


GRIFFIN-jaisa ki MADDOX ne tumhe bataya tha ki tumhare ANGEL form aur shakti ne tumhare heart ke ek taraf apni jagah banayi hai aur dil ke dusre bhaag ki taraf is waqt tumhare human form ki shakti khisak kar jam chuki hai..

aur tumhara task aur challange hai,in dono shaktiyon ko merge karkar ek karna...

khair,aisa karna kaafi time taking hai par is process ki triggering point filhal ke liye tumhara ilaaj hai...

tumhe apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION mode aur REFINER power,in dono ko hi ek saath open karna hoga..

complete devotion ke saath tumhe us zero state me jaana hoga jahan sab kuch blank hota hai...

aisa hote hi tumhare AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER powers tumhe tumhare ANGEL aur HUMAN, dono hi shaktiyon ke glimpse dikhayenge..

us glimpse se generate hogi ek healing power jo tumhare pyscical strength ko restore karegi...

waise isme bhi thoda waqt toh lag hi jaayega...

WOOGER-aur aisa hona zaroori bhi hai..jitni deri se MASTER ki yaadasht wapas aaye,tumhare liye utna hi acha ho...


WOOGER ki baat sun chownki MAHI aur...


MAHI-RAAZ ki yaadasht late aane se mere liye kya accha ho sakta hai..???

WOOGER-MASTER ki bhuli hui memory me waise toh dard bhi hai aur sabke liye ghussa bhi,par jaanti ho us memory me is waqt sabse zyada ghussa kiske liye hai...???

MAHI-nahi,but i hope mere liye toh aisa kuch nahi hoga...!!!

WOOGER-tumhare liye nahi par tumse jo sabse zyada jude hain,unse behadh naaraz hai RAAZ...

tumhare PITAH,LORD OF ANGELS.....

jo kuch bhi ho raha hai,har chiz jo ho chuki hai jisme RAAZ ka human hona aur jiski wajah se woh human hai,uske mom dad,unki mout,ye sab kuch unka hi plan tha...

aur in sab baaton se is waqt RAAZ ki bhuli hui memory me tunhare pitah uske liye VIDEOUS se bade dushman hai..

aur tum unki beti ho,toh zaahir hai ki woh bhuli memory tumse bhi nafrat hi karegi...

MAHI-waah,pyar usne kiya nahi,dhoka maine diya nahi,aur dagar nafrat waale raah tak pahunch gayi...

sahi hai..par koi baat nahi, berukhi sahi hai,nafrat bhi seh lenge....


ek feeki muskaan ke saath kahi ye baat MAHI ne aur phir apni jagah par paalthi maarte hue woh paused CEREBRATION me baith apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER powers ko activate karne me lag gayi...

wahin paused CEREBRATION me jaane se pehle jo MAHI ne jo kaha usse sun GRIFFIN ko uske liye bohot bura laga...woh WOOGER ki taraf palti aur..


GRIFFIN-tumhara MASTER itna insensitive aur patthar dil kaise ho sakta hai....??


frustration bhari padi thi GRIFFIN ki baaton me jisse sun apne bade se sir ko left right hilaya WOOGER ne aur...


WOOGER-hatheli par ishq-e-lakeer se acha hai PATTHAR banana...!!!

naa GHISOGE,naa PISOGE.....






PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-NEAR CELESTE MOUNTAIN






FNNNFNNNN....


YE NAYI GANDH KAISI...!!!!

hawa me sunghte hue ek bade hi vishalkaay aadmi ne kahi thi ye baat jispar uske saath baithe uske 3 saathiyon ne bhi sehmati jataate hue zoron se sunghna shuru kar diya...


THE NIMRODS....

yahi pechnaan thi in chaaron logon ki..aur ye pehchaan in sabko inke kabila jiska naam THE NIMROD TRIBE tha,usse mili thi..

pure badan par jungli jaanwar ki khaal se bane kapde in NIMRODS ko aur bhi darawana dikhati thi...

aap sabko ERRAPEL ka intro update toh yaad hi hoga guyz jisme usne us SNOW LEOPARD ko thik kiya tha..

waisa karte waqt usne ek kabile ka zikr kiya tha..ye NIMROD TRIBE wahi kabila hai jiske baare me usko uske baba HORUS urf DIGVIJAY ne bataya tha...

is tribe ke log naa sirf vishalkaay aur taakatwar hote hain balki saath hi saath in logon ke sunghne ki shamata kaafi tez hoti hai..

yahi wajah thi ki un chaaron ne hi door se aati ek anjaani gandh ko naa sirf sungh liya tha balki waise hi sunghte hue woh us gandh ki aa rahi disha ki taraf badh gaye aur tabhi..


1ST NIMROD-woh dekho wahan..koi bhaag raha hai...???


ek disha ki taraf ungli dikhate hue kahi ye baat us NIMROD ne jiske baad uske saath khade NIMROD ne apne kamar par bandhe 3 feet ki rope jiske dono hi ends par lohe ke do bade bade lohe ke nukile charre lage the,usse nikala aur hawa me ek pal ghumate hue us saaye ki taraf pheka jo ek chaadar odhe hue pedon ki ot lekar chhupne ki koshish karte hue bhaag raha tha par har taraf faile barf aur half moon night ki wajah se woh un NIMRODS ki tez nazar se bach nahi paaya...

woh rope ek sadhe hue andaz me apne chharron ki wajah se gol ghumta hua sidhe us bhaagte hue saaye ke pairon me fasa jiske agle hi pal..


DHAMMM....AHHHH

woh saaya barf ke beech dhas sa gaya tha aur un nukile charron ke chhubne ki wajah se uski ek behadh tez cheekh bhi nikal gayi...

wahin rope fekne ke baad woh chaaron NIMRODS tezi se us saaye ki taraf bhaage the aur kuch hi palon me woh sab us saaye ke saamne the jahan woh saaya joki aur koi nahi mai tha,us nukile charron ko jo mere pair me dhase hue the, chhatpatate hue kisi tarah nikaalne ki koshish kar raha tha...

aisa karte hue achanak maine saamne dekha toh meri jaan mere halak me aa gayi...

reason...

is waqt mere saamne aakhon me ek aisi chamak liye jo ek shikari ki apne shikar ko dekh kar aati hai,chaar daityakar size ke log khade the...

un chaaron ko dekhkar toh ek pal ke liye mai apna dard hi bhul gaya tha...

aankhen faade mai un chaaron ko dekhe jaa raha tha...waise in chaaron ko door se hi maine dekh liya tha aur isiliye chhupte hue mai bhaag bhi raha tha par ab jab ye 8 feet lambe jaanwar numa insaan mere saamne the, toh meri haalat kharab ho gayi thi...

wahin meri haalat se bilkul ulat woh chaaron mujhe behadh khushi se dekh rahe the maano unke saamne koi insaan nahi balki unki manpasand dawat rakhi hai....

aur ye baat sach bhi thi..THE NIMROD TRIBE se yahan ke logon ke darne ki ek wajah ye bhi thi ki is kabile ke log narbhakshi the...

haan,woh insaano ko kaccha nahi khaate the,paka kar khaate the par khaate toh the..

khair,yahan mai in chaaron ko tukur tukur dekh raha tha aur wahan mujhe kuch der ghoorte rehne ke baad...


1ST NIMROD-arre waah..aaj toh hamari jholi me khudbadkhud ek shikaar aa gira...

2ND NIMROD-aur woh bhi itna chikna...dekh zara,thode se chuban se hi iske pairon se khoon risne laga...

iski haddiyan chabane me bada maza aane waala hai...

3RD-haan..isse naa,dheeme aanch me pakayenge...

4TH-aur woh bhi bina maare..dekha naa,kuch der pehle kaise cheekha tha ye..iski cheekh bhaa gayi hai mujhe..

jab yunhi cheekhte hue marega ye toh maza hi aa jaayega...


BHEN***D...

saale kya baat kar rahe hain ye log..??sunkar hi haalat kharab ho gayi thi meri..

mere aankhon me dar kaafi badh gaya tha jisse dekh woh chaaron aur khush ho gaye...


1ST-par sabse pehle woh karte hain jo hamari pratha hai...apne shikar ko halal karne se pehle thoda khela jaaye iske saath..

oye uth...


neeche jhukte hue us NIMROD ne mere pair me fase rope ko ek jhatke me nikal diya aur fir kahi mujhe uthne waali baat jispar mai darte hue khada hua..

mai tha 6 feet se thoda upar..lekin iske baawjud un chaaron ke aage mai abhi baccha hi lag raha tha..

khair, mere khade hone ke baad...


2ND NIMROD-chal bhaag..agar kaamiyab hua toh bach jaayega...

ghanta bhaag..saala itni door me tha mai kuch der pehle par phir bhi pakad liya tha in chaaron ne mujhe aur ab toh saamne hi tha mai, toh aise me mera in sabse bachna toh naamumkin hi tha...

yahi sab soch raha tha mai ki tabhi....


4TH NIMROD-kya soch raha hai..bhaagta hai yaa tere andar sariya daalkar tujhe pakana shuru karen...???


bas itna hi bolna tha us bande ka ki tabhi mai un chaaron ke beech se nikalkar bhaaga...

pairon me taklif toh abhi bhi thi jo yahan pad rahi thand ki wajah se badhti hi jaa rahi thi par in sab cheezon ko side kar mai jitna ho sakta tha,tezi se bhaag raha tha...

abhi mujhe yunhi bhaagte hue kuch 20 seconds hi hue the ki maine ek baar palat kar dekha aur aisa karte hi mai chownk gaya...

reason...

jahan kuch der pehle mai aur woh chaaron log khade the,wahan ab koi bhi nahi tha....

but is hairani ko dimag se jhatakte hue mai wapas sidha hua hi tha ki tabhi...


CHATAAKHH....

ek zordar tamacha mere gaal par pada jiske asar se mai ghumta hua piche ki taraf ful force me gira..

us tamache ke impact se mere gaal fat gaye the aur sir bhi bhanna gaya tha...

do teen baar sir ko jhatakte hue kisi tarah mai khada hua toh dekha ki woh chaaron log ek baar phir mujhe circle kiye khade hue the....


3RD NIMROD-kya hua uth..chal ek aur mouka dete hain tujhe...bhaag..


us NIMROD ki baa sun is baar mai bhaga nahi,khada raha jisse dekh usse ghussa aa gaya aur..


CHATTAKKK,CHATTAKKK,CHATTAKK....

ek ke baad ek teen baar tamache pade mere face par us bande ke..

kehne ko toh ye teen tamache hi the par asar unka mukkon se bhi zyada tha..

yahi reason tha ki un tamachon ke asar se mai lehrate hue neeche gira aur behosh ho gaya...

aur jab aisa hua toh...


2ND NIMROD-arre ye toh behosh ho gaya...

1ST NIMROD-koi baat nahi..waise bhi bohot khel liye...ab apne shikar ko pakana shuru karte hain...

apna sariya nikal aur iske andkosh ki jagah se ghusate hue iske sir se bahar nikal...

aur phir latka isse aag ke upar....


us NIMROD ki baat sun uske ek saathi ne apne piche teer ki tarah latkaye sariya ko kheencha aur usse haath me strongly pakadte hue meri taraf badha...

mere dono pair toh waise bhi halke faile hue hi the..usne us bade se sariya se mere dono taango ke beech aim liya aur haath ko piche karte hue woh mujhe bhedne ke kiye us sariya ke nukile bhaag ko tezi se aage karne hi waala tha ki tabhi....


GHHHRRHHHHHH.....

ek ajeeb se gurrahat ke saath us un chaaron ke beech chhalang lagayi kisine jisse dekh woh chaaron naa sirf hadbada gaye balki chaar kadam piche bhi hath gaye...

piche haththe hi jab un sabne us beech me koodne waale jeev ko dekha toh un sabki aankhen badi ho gayi aur un chaaron ke mooh se ek saath nikla...


CHAARON-SNOW LEOPARD....(ye wahi leopard hai jiski jaan ERRAPEL ne bachayi thi...)




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SHIT.......ye kya kar diya ERRAPEL...???kahan gaya ye...????


khudpar jhunjlate hue kahi thi ye baat ERRAPEL ne...

RAAZ ko thappad maarne ke baad woh apne cottage ke andar toh chali gayi par phir kuch der baad jab uska ghussa kuch shaant hua tab usse ehsaas hua ki usne kya kar diya hai...

jisse usne thappad maara tha,woh bhul gayi thi ki woh toh khud ussika hissa hai..

bhale hi memory loss ki wajah se abhi RAAZ ka ATTITUDE badla hai,par woh ye baat jaanti thi ki ye condition temporary hai..

jis din uski memory wapas aayi toh pehle se hi frustrated aur ghusse se bhare asli RAAZ par aaj ka ERRAPEL ka maara tamacha insult to injury jaisa hoga jiska khaamiyaza bohoton ko bhugatna padega...

khair,in saare negetive thoughts me ek positive thought ne bhi ERRAPEL ke dimag me ghar kiya tha..

aur woh ye ki kyunki woh RAAZ ka hi hissa thi,un dono ki urja ek hi thi, isiliye usse dhundna ERRAPEL ke liye mushkil nahi thi..

yahi wajah thi ki agle hi pal naa sirf ERRAPEL ki aankhen band ho gayi balki saath hi saath uske body se uski urja nikalkar har taraf failti chali gayi jiske kuch der baad hi usse RAAZ ki location mil chuki thi..

location ka pata chalte hi ERRAPEL ki aankhein khul gayi par jahan RAAZ ka thikana jaan usse khush hona chahiye tha, wahin uske face par chinta ki rekhayen dikhne lagi thi..

REASON....

RAAZ ki location ussi jagah se aa rahi thi jahan NIMROD TRIBE ka thikana tha...

aur abhi RAAZ ko jo condition thi,usme woh jagah uske liye bohot khataranak thi..

ERRAPEL ko turant us location par pahunchna tha aur isiliye agle hi pal woh hawa si tez bhaagte hue NIMROD TRIBE waale area ki taraf badh gayi...





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YE TOH EK SNOW LEOPARD HAI...PAR ISKI HEIGHT ITNI KAISE BADH GAYI...???


apne sariye ko aage karte hue ye baat kahi thi 1st NIMROD ne...

wahin woh SNOW LEOPARD RAAZ ke behosh sharir ke paas usse sungne laga tha..

khair,us LEOPARD ki poonch is waqt 1st NIMROD ki taraf thi isiliye usne badi tezi se us sariye ko LEOPARD ki taraf fek diya par tabhi...

apne punch ko halka sa lehraya bhar us LEOPARD ne jisse takrate hi woh sariya door chittak kar gira...

ye dekh pehle toh chaaron NIMRODS hairan hue par phir un sabne apna apna sariya nikal liya aur ek saath uspar tezi se waar kiya par tabhi....

us LEOPARD ne apne pure body ko tezi se shrug kiya aur uske aisa karte hi ek behadh hi strong force field uske body se nikal chaaron taraf fail gayi jiske asar se do chizen hui...

pehli,woh sabhi sariye jo us LEOPARD ki taraf tezi se badh rahe the,woh beech raaste me hi us force field ki chapet me aakar neeche gir gaye..

dusri,us force field ki wajah se woh chaaron NIMRODS bhi udte hue kuch piche jaakar gire..

aur aisa hote hi unhe us LEOPARD ki taakat ka andaza ho gaya aur isiliye bina phirse attack kiye woh sab wahan se nou do gyarah ho gaye...

wahin un chaaron NIMRODS ko bhaagte dekhne ke baad bhi woh SNOW LEOPARD unke piche bhaaga nahi balki wahin RAAZ ke paas khada ho gaya....

woh uske pure sharir ko sungh hi raha tha ki tabhi...


RAAZZZZ....

ek cheekh uske piche se aayi jisse sun aise araam se palta woh LEOPARD jaise woh us awaaz ko pehchanta ho..

aur aisa hi tha...aakhir woh awaaz thi ERRAPEL ki jisne us LEOPARD ki jaan bachayi thi...

jahan woh LEOPARD badi araam se palta tha wahin uske ulat ERRAPEL badi tezi se uski aur RAAZ ki taraf aayi...

usne us SNOW LEOPARD ko door se hi pehchaan liya tha aur isiliye woh thodi nischint bhi ho gayi thi par phir uski nazar padi RAAZ par joki behosh hokar neeche us barfile zameen par pada hua tha aur ye dekh hi uske kadam tezi se RAAZ ki taraf badh gaye...

RAAZ ke paas pahunch ERRAPEL ki nazar uske bigde huliye par padi jisse dekh itni der me pehli baar usse RAAZ par taras aaya..

usse ye bhi andaza ho gaya tha ki yahan zaroor RAAZ par kisine haath uthaya hai jo ho naa ho NIMROD TRIBE ke log hi kar sakte the aur us SNOW LEOPARD ko dekh usse pata chal gaya tha ki uski hi wajah se RAAZ sirf behosh hai,warna woh narbhakshi kabile ke log usse ab tak maar chuke hote..

ye sab andaza laga ERRAPEL ne ek baar pyar se apna haath firaya us SNOW LEOPARD ke chehre par aur phir neeche jhuk usne RAAZ ke chehre ko apni godh me rakh liya..

aisa kar usne apne FUR COAT ke pocket se ek shishi nikali aur RAAZ ke mooh ko halka sa khol us shishi ke andar ke dravya ko usse dheere dheere pila diya..

aisa hote hi RAAZ ke saare zakhm apne aap hi bharne lage.. ERRAPEL jaanti thi ki abhi kuch minutes lagenge saare ghaav ko puri tarah bharne aur RAAZ ke hosh me aane ke liye...

ERRAPEL ektak RAAZ ke maasum se chehre ko dekhte hue uske cold heart ko jo usne aaj tak lagatar feel ki thi,uske baare me soch rahi thi aur yunhi sochte hue hile uske honth.....


ERRAPEL-baba kehte the.....



ki TU woh hawa hai jo sirf apni marzi se BAHEGA....

kisika dil dukhe ya toote,jo tere liye sahi hain,TU sirf wahi KAHEGA....

maasumiyat tere chehre ki tere dil me utarni zaroori hai....

warna mujhe paakar bhi,TU hamesha adhura hi RAHEGA......
















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.......

















AAPKA APNA V...J......
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