Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ VIDEOUS KE SHARTH KI WAJAH SE APNE MOM DAD KO MAAR DETA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA AUR BRAWNY RAAZ KO MAARNE KI KOSHISH KAR RAHE HAIN JISME MAHI RAAZ KA SAATH DE RAHI HAI..


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



MEGA DARK UPDATE-121


PART-2



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-STELLARS GARDEN





chaahe lag rahe uspar kitne hi TOHMAT HO,aaj RAAZ KA SAATH MAT CHHODNA...

uske khaatir agar tumhari bhi ZALAALAT HO,aaj RAAZ KA SAATH MAT CHHODNA...

ilzam lagenge uspar,ho sakta hai woh sab sach bhi nikle...

aur agar woh wakayi GALATH HO,tab bhi aaj RAAZ KA SAATH MAT CHHODNA.....



GRIFFIN ki kahi ye pehli baat jaise achanak hi ghum si gayi thi MAHI ke dimag me jiske baad jab usne saamne dekha toh chownk gayi..

reason...

is waqt meri body hawa me uthi hui thi aur mere seene ke beeche se ek talwar nikal mere upar ghum rahi thi..

us talwar ke beech se ek behadh hi shaktishaali urja nikal upar akaash me jaa rahi thi..

us urja me MAHI ne woh taakat mehsoos ki jo ab se pehle usne kabhi nahi ki thi..

usne ye bhi feel kiya ki sword ne us urja ko khudke daayre me sameta hua tha..agar woh aisa nahi karti toh woh urja sab kuch khatm kar deti...


(NOTE:-GRIFFIN aur WOOGER ke beech ka pact toh yaad hi hoga aapko guyzz...ye urja RAAZ ki aloukik shaktiyan thi jo ab FLORIN aur MARIA ko maarkar woh kho chuka tha)


anyways,jab woh saari urja mujhse nikal gayi toh ek baar tezi se chamki woh SWORD aur mai neeche gir gaya..

sword ke chamakne se MAHI ki aankhein kuch pal ke liye band ho gayi thi par phir jab usne aankhein kholi toh hairan ho gayi...

reason...

RAAZ sofe ke paas nahi tha...woh is waqt ussike paas khada ALFREEN ko dekh raha tha...

naa udaasi,naa khushi,naa dard,naa talash..ek ajeeb si khamoshi dikh rahi thi MAHI ko RAAZ ki aankhon me..

ek aisi khamoshi jo tufaan roopi sarvanash ke aane se pehle hoti hai...

kuch pal unhi khamosh aankhon se ALFREEN ko dekhte rehne ke baad RAAZ aage badh gaya...

pehli baar MAHI ne RAAZ ke kandho ko chalte waqt jhuka hua dekha tha..

aisa lag raha tha jaise woh apna sab kuch khokar,barbaad hokar ek anjaan safar par nikal gaya ho...

aur aisa hi toh tha...pathrayi aur bojhil aakhon ke sahare mere kadam yunhi kisi anjaan thikaane ki taraf chal pade the...

zinda hone ka ehsaas toh apne mom dad ke chita ke saath hi jala diya tha maine aur unki raakh ko khudme mal khudko bhi ek zinda murda maan liya tha...

bas,taange thi jo bina jawab diye chali jaa rahi thi,aur mere mare hue aatma ke wazan ko dhote hue mere sharir ko bhi apne saath chalaye jaa rahi thi..

mera lakshya,meri utpatti ka kaaran, uddeshya,sab kuch puri tarah se bhool chuka tha mai...

mujhe ab bramhaand ke rehne naa rehne, manushya jaati par VIDEOUS naam ke khatre,kisi se koi matlab nahi reh gaya tha..

infact,dil ke kisi kone me ab mai khud ye chahne laga tha ki ye bramhaand barbaad ho jaaye...

har jeevit prani,ussi dard se guzre jisse abhi mai guzar raha tha...

nirdosh logon ke khoon se nahane ki talab uth gayi thi meri aatma ko..

ek madhoshi ki haalat me netro wale andhe ki tarah mai aage badhta hi jaa raha tha ki tabhi....


DHAAKHHHH....

ek behadh strong energy aakar lagi mere peeth par jisse mai udte hue mooh ke bal thode aage jaakar gira....

par girne ke agle hi pal kisi sharabi ki tarah ladkhadate hue wapas khada bhi ho chuka tha mai..

par aisa hone ke baad mai wapas jis direction me gira tha,ussi taraf badh gaya bina palat kar dekhe ki kisne maara tha mujhe..

wahin mujhe jaata dekh jisne mujhpar waar kiya tha,woh apni jagah se gayab hokar mere saamne prakat hua yaa phir ye kahun ki prakat hue....

ye aur koi nahi balki ACCHUTA, SLUNDER,HIDA aur BRAWNY the jo apni jalti hui aankhon se mujhe dekh rahe the...

toh hua yun ki jab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER
wapas CHOSENS pahunche toh apne dil me jalte aag ko liye woh sidhe mere ABODE me aaye jahan pehle se hi BRAWNY aur HIDA moujud the...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko dekh un dono ne maine unke saath kya kiya hai, woh bata diya aur same cheez ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne bhi ki jiske baad woh chaaron STAVAH SPELL ke help se mujhe dhoondte hue yahan pahunche the..

khair,kuch pal mujhe yunhi ghurte rehne ke baad..


ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-sirf ek baat bata..??kya wakayi tune hum dono ke mom dad ko maara hai..????

BRAWNY-meri mom ki izzat se khelne waala kya wakayi tu hi tha..???

HIDA-REGIS ke saath jo hua,jo usse kaha gaya,kya woh tune hi kiya aur kaha tha...

MAI-mujhe jo bhi karna tha,maine kar diya..sawal toh ye hai ki tum chaaron kya karna chahte ho...???

maarna chahte ho mujhe...maar do... but just make sure ki mai mar hi jaaun...


meri baaton se ghussa badh gaya tha un chaaron ka...apne ghusse aur aap beeti me woh chaaron hi meri aankhon me dikh raha dard nahi dekh paaye...

yahi wajah thi ki meri baat khtam hote hi un chaaron ke haathon me ek ek behadh strong energy rays dikhne lagi thi jisse un chaaron ne mere chest par waar kiya aur mai ek baar phirse kayi feet piche hawa me udta hua jaakar gira par girne ke baad wapas lehrate hue khada bhi ho gaya..

mujhe yun araam se khada hota dekh un chaaron ne ek ke baad ek kayi khataranak pain aur body break SPELLS bole jinke rays ne mujhe hit toh kiya par nuksaan zyada pahuncha nahi paaye..

ab baat ye thi ki bhale hi ab mere paas apni aloukik shaktiyan nahi thi,par SAVENT power toh thi..

aur mere AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER powers hadh se zyada strong bhi the aur un chaaron ke mukable zyada nurtured bhi...

yahi wajah thi ki un chaaron ke waar mere kapdon ko toh jala rahe the,mere body me halke halke cuts bhi padhte jaa rahe the par naa toh mere mooh se woh dard bhari cheekhen nikal rahi thi jo woh chaaron nikalna chaah rahe the aur naahi woh mujhe zyada der tak neeche gira paa rahe the...

aur isiliye un chaaron ne mujhpar apni shaktiyon ko ek kar hamla karne ki sochi par woh ye process shuru karte ki tabhi...


ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND GUYZZ...KYA KAR RAHE HO TUM CHAARON...????


MAHI jo mere ghar se nikalne ke baad bhi kuch pal tak statue bani rahi thi,jab woh sense me aayi toh usse yaad aaya ki aaj meri jaan khatre me hain...

usne behosh ALFREEN ko room me letaya aur phir meri talash me mere piche aayi par yahan ka nazara dekh uska dimag hi ghum gaya jispar kahi thi usne un chaaron se ye baat jispar....


ACCHUTA-stay away MAHI..tum nahi jaanti ki ye kitna ghatiya insaan hai..

isne mere aur SLUNDER je mom dad ko jaan se maar diya..


jahan ye kehte waqt ACCHUTA ke aur uske saath SLUNDER ke aankhon se aansu chhalak gaye wahin MAHI ke liye ye ek naya jhatka tha jisse puri tarah hil gayi woh...

par kisi tarah khudko sambhal...


MAHI-ye kya bol rahe ho ACCHUTA...!!! i am sure ki tumhe galat fehmi hui hai..

SLUNDER-galat fehmi hui hai nahi thi..ye galat fehmi ki ye ghatiya insaan hume apna dost maanta hai..

par aisa kabhi bhi tha hi nahi..hum iske liye bas istemaal waali vastu hain aur kuch nahi...

humne apni aankhon se woh drishya dekha hai jisme iske kehne par iske ansh ne hamare mom dad ko khudhi ko shoot karne ke liye bebas kar diya tha...

BRAWNY-ye sirf apne baare me sochne waala neech hai MAHI..aaj isne meri mom ki asmat lootne ki koshish ki...

HIDA-iski nazar toh mere sharir par bhi hai..ye mujhe apni property samajhta hai jisse ye jab chaahe,jaise chaahe bhog sakta hai..


SLUNDER,ACCHUTA aur phir HIDA, BRAWNY...in chaaron ki hi baaton ko sun aur un baaton me chhalak rahi sacchayi ko mehsoos kar honth hi sil gaye the MAHI ke par phir bhi is waqt uske dimag me GRIFFIN ki aakhir me kahi gayi un teen baaton me se pehli baat gunj rahi thi..

RAAZ sahi ho yaa galat,aaj tumhe har haal me sirf RAAZ ka hi saath dena hai...

GRIFFIN ki kahi is baat ko yaad karte hi MAHI ne baaki saari sochon ko apne dimag se nikala aur turant RAAZ ke paas pahunch gayi jo is waqt bhi apne me nahi tha..

sunya ko ghurta hua woh kisi zinda murde ki tarah khada tha..

khair,RAAZ ke saamne khadi ho gayi MAHI aur...


MAHI-hum is baare me baad me baat karenge guyzz..filhal,leave...

halke kadak awaaz me kahi ye baat MAHI ne jisse sun pehle se ghuma un chaaron ka dimag aur ghum gaya aur..


ACCHUTA-sahi hai..humne iske gunah tere saamne rakh diye, phir bhi tu issiki side le rahi hai..

fine...hum toh isse khatm kiye bina nahi jaa rahe..aur ab tere paas do options hain..

ek..yaa toh chupchaap yahan se chali jaa...

dusra...tujhe bhi RAAZ ke saath marna hoga...

MAHI-RAAZ ko toh mai chhodungi nahi...haan,iske liye marne ko mai taiyar hun...


MAHI ki baat sun ek baar usse ghusse se ghoor ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY ne ek dusre ka haath pakda aur aisa kar woh chaaron apni shaktiyon ko ek karne lage..

MAHI bhi is baat se anjaan nahi thi par uske iraade adig the..woh apni jagah par hi khadi rahi...

wahin jaise hi un chaaron ki distructive powers ikatthit hui toh...


GINADHAVUHE....

RELEASE...

apna apna haath aage kar un chaaron ne hi apni energies ek saath release kar di jo sidhe jaakar RAAZ ke saamne khadi MAHI se takrayi...

aur aisa hote hi ek dardnaak cheekh ke saath MAHI ka sharir piche ki taraf ghisatne laga par phir bhi MAHI ne khudko un rays ke radar se door nahi kiya...

haddiyon tak pain feel kar rahi thi MAHI is waqt jiske kaaran uska pura sharir kaanp raha tha...

aankhon se lagatar aansu chhalakne lage uske aur un padh rahe rays ki garmahat se usse apna khoon tak jalta hua sa mehsoos hone laga..

MAHI ko apna anth dikhne laga tha..usse laga ki woh ab nahi bachegi par tabhi....

jaise hi un rays ki jalan MAHI ke khoon se hote hue uske dil ko touch hui toh wahan ek tez sensation ne janm liya..

aur us sensation ke paida hote hi MAHI ke dhamniyon me ek urja ne janm liya jo ek jhakte me uske sharir se bahar aayi aur un rays se jo uski body ko hit kar rahe the,unko touch ho gayi aur jab aisa hua toh..

AHHHHHHH.....

ek,do yaa teen nahi,balki chaar cheekhen ek saath hawa me gunj uthi joki ACCHUTA,SLUNDER,HIDA aur BRAWNY ki thi...

MAHI ke sharir se nikli energy ne bas un chaaron ki energies ko chhua tha, aur aisa hote hi woh chaaron andar tak kaamp gaye aur agle hi pal woh sab behosh ho chuke the...

par unke behosh hone ke baad bhi MAHI ke sharir ke andar se nikli energy unke paas jaane ko hui par ye baat MAHI ke unconscious brain ne read kar li aur saath hi us energy ko aisa naa karne ka hukm diya jiske baad woh energy wapas MAHI ke andar chali gayi...

jo bhi hua,MAHI ko uske baare me kuch bhi pata nahi chala..woh toh bas apne body me ho rahe aseem pain se nijaat paakar thodi relaxed ho gayi thi..

aur aisa hote hi pehle usne saamne dekha jahan uske chaaron friends behosh pade hue the..

unhe ek baar dekh MAHI ki nazar piche ki taraf gayi jahan RAAZ tha par wahan nazar jaate hi usse shock laga..

reason....

uske chaaron friends ki hi tarah RAAZ bhi behosh pada tha aur iska reason bhi MAHI ki woh energy thi jiske AURA ke impact se ye hua tha...

MAHI jhat se RAAZ ki taraf badhi aur uske paas pahunch uske sir ko apni godh me lekar uske gaalon ko thapthapate hue..


MAHI-RAAZ...RAAZ..please aakhein kholo...


halke bharraye awaaz me MAHI ne kahi ye baat jispar RAAZ ki toh aakhen nahi khuli par ek nayi awaaz ne MAHI ka dhyan apni taraf zaroor mod diya....


YE KAISE GOD GIFTED LOG HAIN JO KHUD ATTACK KARTE HAIN AUR KHUDHI BEHOSH HO JAATE HAIN...!!!!


VIDEOUS ki thi ye awaaz jo is waqt ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke paas khada tha aur usne un chaaron par nazar ghumate hue is baat ko kahi thi..

par uske saamne RAAZ ke sir ko apni godh me liye baithi MAHI ko toh samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki VIDEOUS yahan kya karne aaya hai aur woh kya baatein kar raha hai..???

khair,apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


VIDEOUS-waise,isme inka bhi kya kasoor..ab SERAPHIM ANGELS ke ansh ko nuksaan pahunchane ki koshish karenge toh nateeja toh bhugatna hi padega...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun aankhon me sawal liye usse dekhne lagi MAHI jispar...

VIDEOUS-zyada mat socho MAHI.. jinka zikr kiya hai maine, tumhari aur is RAAZ ki soul bohot jald unke paas pahunchne waali hai..

tab araam se saara sach jaan lena..filhal bas itna jaan lo ki jo kuch bhi ho raha hai,uska ek maatr kaaran mai hun.

aur jis shaksh ka sir tumhari godh me hai,uski uttpatti mujhe khatm karne ke liye hui hai aur mera ek maatra lakshya hai,isse khatm karna...

jo ab mai karne waala hun... aur haan, unfortunately tum bhi ussi radar me ho..tumhe bhi RAAZ ke saath marna hoga....


VIDEOUS kya bol raha tha,MAHI ko kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha,par itna toh woh bilkul samajh rahi thi ki VIDEOUS jhuth nahi bol raha...

aur isiliye woh andar hi andar kaafi tensed ho chuki thi..

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue....


VIDEOUS-anyways,isse yunhi behoshi me maarkar iski aur apni insult nahi kar sakta mai...

RAAZ......uth jaa mere bhai..???dekh,tera bhai tujhse milne aaya hai....


apni baat kehte hue VIDEOUS ne apna haath lehraya aur uske aisa karte hi uske haathon se ek ray nikal mere sir me sama gayi aur aisa hote hi mere sharir ko ek jhatka laga aur meri aankhen khul gayi..

aankh khulte hi jab maine khudko MAHI ki godh me paaya toh usko dekh phirse ek pal ke liye apni aankhen band kar li...

par is beech itne waqt me pehli baar mere sense ne kaam kiya tha jiska reason ye tha ki maine VIDEOUS ko apne paas feel kiya aur isiliye...

maine apna ek haath zameen par maara aur mere aisa karte hi meri body bilkul ek sidhi lakdi ki tarah uththi chali gayi aur agli hi pal mai VIDEOUS ko dekh raha tha..

wahin mujhe khudko ghurta dekh..


VIDEOUS-tutututututu.....ye kya ho gaya RAAZ...!!!!ye kya ho gaya..!!!!meri tarah acha khaasa urja tha tu,par dekh,kuch hi palon me tere astitva ki haqiqat hi badal gayi....

insan hone ke ehsaas bhar se tere emotions jaag gaye,aur jinki wajah se jaage,tujhe unhe apne haathon se maarna pada...

khair, VIDEOUS se takkar lene ki saza itni toh honi hi chahiye thi...


VIDEOUS ki baat khatm hote hi mai ek jhatke se uski taraf aage badha..

meri speed light jitni tez thi..agar VIDEOUS kuch der pehle ki tarah tak sirf apne SAVENTS power ke saath mere saamne hota toh mujhe dekh tak nahi paata,par ab aisa tha nahi..

mere saamne khada VIDEOUS ab apne purane form me tha..apne aloukik shaktiyon se bhara hua..

aur aise me usse dodge dena impossible tha..yahi wajah thi ki mere aage badhte hi usne apna ek haath aage kiya aur uske aisa karte hi mai apni jagah par jadh sa ho gaya..

ek adrishya impenetrable shield,ek diwar mere saamne khadi ho gayi thi jisse takrakar mai apni jagah par hi reh gaya...

wahin us adrishya shield se mere takraate hi VIDEOUS ke haath me bhi ek tez kampan hui jisse feel kar...


VIDEOUS man me-damn....this guy is really tough...bina apni aloukik shaktiyon ke bhi kaafi strong hai ye...

i am impressed....


apne man me is baat ko sochne ke baad...


VIDEOUS-ek aur try RAAZ...

us adrishya diwaar se takrakar mera pura sharir jhanjhana gaya tha..

waise bhi mai is waqt pyscically aur mentally,dono hi tarah se unstable tha aur isiliye...


MAI-bina bakwas kiye khtam kar mujhe VIDEOUS aur saath hi is khel ko...

VIDEOUS-kya baat hai..jisne tujhse tere hi maa baap ko marwa diya,usse maarne ki jagah uske haathon marne ki baat kar raha hai tu...???


VIDEOUS ki is baat ko sun RAAZ ke peeche khadi MAHI ki aankhen badi ho gayi...

FLORIN aur MARIA mere mom dad hain aur unki mout ke piche VIDEOUS ka haath hai,ye uske liye ab tak ka sabse bada shock tha..

par kisi bhi revelation ke piche ka logic aur reason woh jaanti thi nahi, isiliye uski koi bhi soch kisi nateeje par pahunch nahi sakti thi..

woh bas mujhe aur VIDEOUS ko bolte sun sakti thi,aur woh wahi kar rahi thi..

khair, VIDEOUS ki baat sun...


MAI-tune mere hi haathon mere mom dad ko zaroor marwaya,par ye mouka tujhe kisne diya..???

usne jisne mujhe banaya hai...meri utpatti ka kaaran tujhe khatm karna tha..

par iske liye woh do BHAI itna gir gaye ki baaki kisiki jaan ki parwah hi nahi ki..

apni jeet ke liye un dono ne ek aisa rasta chuna jisse mai paida hone se pehle hi apne mom dad se alag ho gaya,phir manushya se urja ban gaya aur phir jab is jhooth ke saath ki mai sirf urja hun,jisse sirf ek maksad ke liye banaya gaya hai,jee raha tha mai,ek book ke through mera sach mere saamne aaya..

aur aisa hote hi mujhe hi unhe maarna pada...

tujhe khatm karne ke chakkar me un dono ne mujhe hi jeete jee khatm kar diya..

aur ab mai chahta hun ki jo aaj mai mehsoos kar raha hun,waisa hi woh dono bhi karen...

un dono ne jo kiya,uske liye unka ek maatra tark ye hoga ki pure bramhand ke bhavishya ke liye do jaan ka souda galat nahi..

par ek tark mera bhi hai...aur woh ye ki mere mom dad ke balidaan ki keemat agar pure bramhaand ko khatm hokar chukana pade,toh ye souda bura nahi...


VIDEOUS cheekhte hue-hahahahahaha...........suna aap dono ne....aapka banaya woh hathiyar jiska nishana mai tha,uska rookh badal gaya...

meri gardan par chalne waala talwar, uske hi gardan par chal gaya...

aap dono ne lagatar chaalen chali,aur un chaalon ke badle maine sirf ek chali,aur us chaal se mai ye jung jeet gaya.....

VIDEOUS....THE LAST LEVEL GENIUS.....

RAAZ yaar...aaj dil khush kar diya tune...aur isiliye,idea thoda change..

socha tha ki bohot dardnaak mout dunga tujhe..par ab nahi..jo pehle hi mar chuka hi,usse kaise tadpaun...

bohot asaan mout dunga mai tujhe..tujhe pata bhi nahi chalega,aur teri aatma tere sharir se hamesha ke liye alag ho jaayegi...


VIDEOUS ki baat khatm hote hote uske haathon me chingari dikhne lagi thi jisse dekh mai toh shaant hi khada raha par MAHI jo VIDEOUS aur meri baaton ko samajhne ki asambhav koshish kar rahi thi,woh turant harkat me aayi...

MAHI aage badhte hue mere aage aakar khadi ho gayi aur..


MAHI-to reach RAAZ....you gotta go through me...

VIDEOUS-ofcourse i will honey...RAAZ ke saath tumhe bhi marna hoga..yahi tumhari niyati hai MAHI...


apni baat bolte bolte VIDEOUS ne apne dono haathon ko aage kiya hi tha ki tabhi....


DHAPPP........

IN DONO SE PEHLE,YOU HAVE TO GO THROUGH ME....


mere aur MAHI ke beech hawa se neeche utre shaksh ne kahi ye baat jisse dekh MAHI ka dimag chakra gaya tha...

aur reason bhi obvious hi tha...uske,mere aur saamne khade VIDEOUS ke beech MORANA jo khadi thi....

RAAZ ke liye toh samajh bhi aata hai,par MORANA ne in dono se pehle kaha tha, matlab sirf RAAZ nahi balki woh yahan MAHI ke liye bhi aayi thi,ab is baat se MAHI ko jhakta lagna toh laazmi tha hi...

khair,jaise him MORANA humare beech aayi toh usse dekh aur uski baat sun...


VIDEOUS-MORANA... meri bacchi..ye kya kar rahi hai tu...!!!mai koi SAVENT nahi hun jisse takkar lene tu beech me kood padi hai...

ek naye bramhaand ka nirman hone waala hai..aur tu us bramhand ke bhagwan ke saamne khadi hai...

MORANA,meri bacchi,tere is SAVENT carrier ke growth se mai wakayi bohot khush hun...

apne PHASE ke BLACK ENERGY ki flag bearer hai tu...meri duniya me mai tujhe ek bohot hi uncha ohda dene waala hun..

par us duniya ki shuruat ke liye, VIDEOUS ke chaanv me palne waale bramhaand ke liye,jo yahan abhi ho raha hai,uska hona anivaarya hai...

isiliye anjaane me hi sai,murkhta mat karo.. aur jaao yahan se..ek bohot ujwal bhavishya tumhara intazar kar raha hai..

aur mai, VIDEOUS,tum aur tumhari tarah KAALI SHAKTIYON ke samast upasakon aur dharakon ke liye us ujwal bhavishya ka nirman karne jaa raha hun...

jao yahan se...

MORANA-bakwas ho gayi ho toh ladh len... jaise tere paas zyada waqt nahi hai,mere paas bhi nahi hai...

VIDEOUS-ladh len...!!!! VIDEOUS ke saamne khadi hai tu ladki ...ladh le shabd bolkar tu mera anadar kar rahi...


VIDEOUS hai bole,usse pehle hi MORANA ne uspar ek behadh hi strong energy blast kar diya par woh blast ray VIDEOUS ko chhune se pehle hi mood gaya aur sidhe jaakar wapas MORANA ko hi pada....

apni kaafi energy sametkar kiya tha waar MORANA ne VIDEOUS par,yahi wajah thi ki jab uska waar ussipar wapas aakar laga toh ek tez cheekh ke saath woh piche ki taraf udti hui gayi aur MAHI se takrayi aur us collision se MAHI sidhe mujhse aakar lagi..

wahin mujhse hue collision ki wajah se MAHI ka sharir mujhse lipat gaya tha par isse pehle ki woh mujhse alag ho paati..


MORANA-TRUST ME.... IT'S TIME...


neeche giri hui MORANA ne MAHI ki taraf sir ghuma ye is baat ko fusfusaya tha jisse sun shocked ho gayi MAHI..

REASON...


GRIFFIN-jab RAAZ ka antim waqt aayega aur meri di gayi pehli hidayat ke tahat agar tum uske saath rahi toh,jo bhi tumse TRUST ME,ITS TIME kahe,toh uspar bharosa karte hue tumhe RAAZ ke sharir ko khudse lagaye rakhna hai...

you should me attached...

un teen instructions me se dusra instruction tha ye jisse sun MAHI mujhse alag toh hui par usne mera haath thaame rakha aur jab ye MORANA ne dekha toh uske face par ek smile naach uthi aur agle hi pal woh khadi ho gayi jisse dekh..


VIDEOUS-you should have stayed down MORANA... upar se tumne mera kaafi waqt bhi zaaya kar diya hai,that you are not worthy of...

isiliye, you too are going to die...


apni baat kehte hue VIDEOUS ke haathon me ek killing ray dikhne lagi jisse dekh MORANA ne ek baar palat kar mujhe dekha toh..


MORANA-khel khel me sach me tujhse pyar ho gaya tha RAAZ... anyways,abhi tu hosh me nahi hai,par jab hoga,toh apne lakshya prapti ke saath mere anth ka hisaab le lena...


ye bol MORANA ne ek baar MAHI ko dekha aur uske aisa karte hi MAHI ke aankhon me aansu aa gaye...

reason..


GRIFFIN-tumhare aur RAAZ ko bachane ke liye jab tumhare aur tumhe maarne waale ke beech khada shaksh tumhe ek baar dekhega toh samajh jaana ki uska antim waqt aa chuka hai....

ye us aakhri hidayat ki aadhi baat thi jisse yaad kar MAHI ki aankhen bheegi thi..

wahin dusri taraf killing ray ko apne hatheli par create karne ke baad us hatheli ko saamne ki taraf halka sa jhatka diya ray ne aur uske aisa karte hi...

AHHHHH.....


MORANA ke pure sharir me aag lag chuki thi...aag me jhulaste MORANA ke sharir ko nam aankhon se MAHI dekh hi rahi thi ki tabhi usse MORANA ke sharir se ek patli si layar piche ki taraf se jahan woh aur mai khade the,nikalti dikhayi di jo sidhe hum dono ke paas aate hue humare sharir se chipak invisible ho gayi...


GRIFFIN-uske marne ke dauran kuch feel karogi tum....aur jab tum dono ko maarne ke liye tumhara dushman SPELL bole tab tumhe bhi ek SPELL bola hai...

"MAARGAM BHAAGYAM"

ROAD TO DESTINY....


ye us aakhri hidayat ka bacha bhaag tha jo MAHI ke dimag me ghum gaya tha..

aur is dauran MORANA ka sharir jal kar raakh ho chuka tha aur aisa hote hi...


VIDEOUS-alvida kehne se pehle kuch aur baatein karne ka bhi dil tha mera par unfortunately MORANA ne tum dono ka woh waqt absorb kar liya..

so,that means,we have reached the end of the line..bye guyzz...its was really nice playing with you...


ANSHAM........ URJAHAM........SAMPURN VINASHAKAM....


apne dono haathon ko meri aur MAHI ki taraf kar uccharit kiya VIDEOUS ne is SPELL ko aur uske aisa karte hi uske dono haathon se uski puri taakat ki complete energy joki uske khudke urja aur BLACK ENERGY ki taakat ka mishran thi,bahar nikal hum dono par padi aur aisa hote hi...

pura ELYSIAN ek tez roshni me naha gaya..

infact, ELYSIAN ka core aur upar uske atmosphere ki aakhri hadh tak hilne lagi....

baat choti toh thi nahi... GOD'S SON ki urja ko khatm kar raha tha VIDEOUS...aur aisa karne ke liye usse apna sab kuch jhonk dena tha aur woh yahi kar raha tha...

lagatar apne dono hathon ko hum dono ki taraf kar woh apni puri shakti se hume pal pal khatm kar raha tha..

kuch pal beete aur phir uske haathon se nikalne waale urja ki shakti jab badhne lagi aur uska pressure jaise jaise kam hone laga toh VIDEOUS samajh gaya ki hum dono khatm ho rahe hain...

dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi pal me uske haathon ki urja se nikalne waali roshni surya ke tej ke saaman badh chuki thi aur phir achanak...

BOOMMMM.........

ek zordar awaaz ke saath woh urja wapas VIDEOUS ke andar chali gayi...

aisa hote hi VIDEOUS jisne apni puri shakti drain kar di thi,apne ghutno par aa gaya..

lambi lambi saansein le raha tha woh is waqt par saath hi uske face par ek vijayi smile bhi chamak rahi thi..

reason....

jahan mai aur MAHI the,wahan ab hum dono ke sharir se bana raakh jisse ab bhi hamari urja halki halki nikal rahi thi,hawa me dheere dheere vilin ho rahi thi....

aur jaise hi woh raakh puri tarah vilin hui toh....

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli... VIDEOUS jiski ENERGY restore ho chuki thi,woh apni jagah par wapas khada ho gaya...

aur dusri...

GADGADGADGAD.....

pure ELYSIAN ke aasman me kaale baadal chaa gaye, tez bijli kadakne lagi jiske agle hi pal pura ELYSIAN tez paani ke bundo me nahane laga...

aur is baarish ko VIDEOUS apni baahein pasare mehsoos karne laga..

is beech uske teeno DEVOTEES,DORIAN aur GASTON jinke saath VIDEOUS ke dono primes bhi the,saath hi woh anjaan GAFFER,ye sab apne apne kaale labadon me prakat hue aur VIDEOUS ke aage jhuk gaye...

waise ek aur chiz bhi hui thi..aur woh ye ki tez baarish ke bundo ki wajah se wahin behosh pade ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY bhi hosh me aa gaye..

hosh me aate hi woh chaaron yahan wahan dekhne lage par RAAZ aur MAHI ko talash rahi unki aankhon ke aage kuch nakabposh log aur unke beech khade VIDEOUS ke alawa aur koi naa tha...

tez musladhar baarish ke beech MAHI ki energy rays ke takrane ki wajah se kamzor ho chuki aankhen aur aadhe khuli aankhon se woh chaaron situation ko samajhne ki koshish kar hi rahe the ki..


VIDEOUS-zyada sochon mat...bas itna jaan lo ki jis maksad ke tahat tum chaaron yahan aaye the,woh maine pura kar diya hai..

RAAZ aur MAHI,dono hi ab nahi rahe....


VIDEOUS ki kahi baat par woh chaaron kaise react karen,ye unhe samajh me hi nahi aaya..

haan,ye sach tha ki woh chaaron khud RAAZ ko maarna chahte the,par ab jab aisa ho chuka tha tab bhi woh sab andar se khush nahi the..

aur us ajeeb si feeling ko MAHI ke khatm hone ki khabar ne udaasi aur pain me bhi badal diya tha..

khair,apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


VIDEOUS-GOD GIFTS SAVENTS....tum chaaron ko mila ye vardaan ab tum sabke liye avishap me badalne waala hai...

do options hain...

kyunki tum sabke shaktiyon me GOD ki urja ka AURA hai,jiski wajah se tumhare dilo ko,maansikta ko, ATTITUDE ko badla nahi jaa sakta, isiliye tum chaaron ko maar diya jaaye..

par ye option boring hai, isiliye tum chaaron par dusra option laagu kiya jaayega...


apni baat khatm karte hue VIDEOUS ne un charon ki taraf apna haath kiya aur uske aisa karte hi..

AHHHHHHHHH....

un charon ke hi mooh se ek saath tez cheekh nikal gayi...

reason...

VIDEOUS ne un charaon ke GOD GIFTS AURA ko unke hi andar seal kar diya tha jisse unke ragon me behti unki extra shaktiyan jo un charon ko baakiyon se alag aur aage karti thi,unme vikaar aa gaya jisse un sabko hadh se zyada taklif hui aur woh chaaron ek baar phirse behosh ho gaye...


VIDEOUS-sabko pesh karo...


VIDEOUS ki baat khatm hote hi unke saamne moujud uske saare disciples gayab ho gaye aur kuch hi palon me woh sab CHOSENS me basne waale har shaksh ko saath liye VIDEOUS ke saamne haazir ho chuke the..

TEENO SOVEREIGN'S bhi in sabme moujud the aur is waqt sabse aage khade the...

wahin khudko achanak se hi ek nayi jagah par dekh saare CHOSENS waasi kaafi hairan the par saath hi un sabko VIDEOUS ki aseemit urja jisse ab usne khula chhod diya tha,woh bhi feel ho rahi thi aur isiliye usse halki ghabrahat ke saath sabhi dekh rahe the..

SEBIL jaisi powerful WHIZZ joki teeno SOVEREIGN'S ke left me hi khadi thi,woh bhi is waqt VIDEOUS ke sharir se nikalte unidentified but hadh se zyada strong urja ko feel ghabrane lagi thi..

khair,sabko apne saamne dekh VIDEOUS ne apni ungli teeno SOVEREIGN'S ki taraf ki aur...


VIDEOUS-your services are no longer required...you three are terminated...


VIDEOUS ki baat khatm hote hi teeno SOVEREIGN'S bina kuch kahe gayab ho gaye jisse dekh wahan moujud sabki hairani aur badh chuki thi..

waise wahan moujud saare log kaale dil waale WICKEDS aur unki tarah ke ATTITUDE waale hi the,jinhe waise bhi teeno SOVEREIGN'S jinse pure WHITE ENERGY feel hoti thi,pasand nahi the,isiliye woh un teeno ke aise, chupchap chale jaane se man hi man kaafi khush bhi the..

khair,teeno SOVEREIGN'S ke jaate hi VIDEOUS ne apna woh AURA jisme uski haqiqat thi, release kar di jisne jaise hi wahan moujud har shaksh ko touch kiya toh unhe VIDEOUS ki sacchayi pata chali aur aisa hote hi woh sab ek jhatke me apne pairon par aa gaye...

waise apne baare me sabko jaankari dete waqt VIDEOUS ne RAAZ ke baare me kisiko kuch pata chalne nahi diya kyunki RAAZ ke ab jaane ke baad woh nahi chaahta ki usse koi yaad bhi kare..

apne saamne sabko ghutno par dekh..


VIDEOUS-mere baccho....

bramhand ke har kone me sirf VIDEOUS aur burayi ka WAAS HOGA...

acchayi,aur acche log jahan bhi honge,abse unka sirf NAASH HOGA....


mere bacchon... CHOSENS banane ka mera sabse ehem maksad tha,mai ye chahta tha ki yahan se burayi ke aise shaktishaali SAVENTS nikle jinhe mai apne is bramhaand rupi riyasat me alag alag daayitv de sakun...

woh din gaye jab universe me basne waale log apni problems ke liye GOD ki taraf rookh karte the,ab se sirf unhi ka hi uddhar hoga,jo VIDEOUS ko apna GOD maanega...

aur aisa karne par sabko majboor karoge tum sab...isiliye, apni apni shaktiyon ke charam ko chhuo,aur mere raj me raj karo....

tumme se jis kisiko koi bhi taklif kyun naa ho,us taklif ko mera naam lekar yaad karna,taklif door ho jaayegi....


VIDEOUS ka aisa bolna tha ki tabhi SEBIL ne man hi man VIDEOUS ka naam liya aur apni behen ko yaad kiya aur uske aisa karte hi usse ek ajeeb si feeling aayi..

darasal MABBA ke saath EXERTION me jo hua tha,uski jo condition thi,us wajah se SEBIL uske AURA ko MABBA ke AURA se jode rakhti thi aur ab jab usne VIDEOUS ke kahe according kaam kiya toh usne MABBA ke AURA me ek spark dikha..

ye spark uski disability khatm karne waali urja thi jiska matlab tha ki MABBA ki body heal ho rahi thi aur is baat ka ehsaas hote hi SEBIL ki nazar VIDEOUS par gayi jo muskurate hue usse hi dekh raha tha...

VIDEOUS ke is ehsaan par SEBIL uske paas jaakar uska shukriya ada karna chahti thi par uski itni himmat nahi thi ki jiski wajah se uska astitv hai,jiski shaktiyon se un sabme shakti ka sanchaar hota hai,uske saamne woh khadi ho sake...

khair, VIDEOUS apni baat keh chuka tha aur ab baari thi uski apni jeet ko unke saamne celebrate karne ki,jisse uska asli mukabla tha jo uske mutabik aaj haar chuke the jiska matlab tha ki ab VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS dono ko apna ohda aur HEAVEN,dono hi VIDEOUS ke hawale karne the aur isiliye VIDEOUS CHOSENS se gayab ho gaya....







PLACE-OUTSIDE HEAVENS GATE.....








FINALLY........ FATHER'S,DEKHIYE, AAPKA LAYAK LADKA AAKHIRKAAR JUNG JEETKAR AAPKE PAAS LOUT HI AAYA....


HEAVENS GATE ke bahar pahuchte hi gunj uthi VIDEOUS ki awaaz chaaron taraf jiske baad HEAVEN ka gate dheere dheere khula aur uske andar se bahar aaye VIKRAM, ASMODEUS, AVANTIKA aur ALESANDRA jinhe dekh...


VIDEOUS-kitna arsa beet gaya aap logon ke yun samaksh hue...

kuch bhi kahiye,aap chaaron ko dekhkar mera dil khush ho gaya...

manushya lok me kaha jaata hai ki ek PITAH apne PUTR ko khudse aage nikalte dekh bohot prassan hota hai...

is tark ke adhaar par toh aaj aap dono ke liye sabse zyada khushi ka din hoga..haina FATHERS....!!!!

toh kya hua agar us khushi ki keemet ab ye pura BRAMHAAND hai jo abse aapke is putr ki milkiyat hai...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA......





aapne nahi sambhala,par dekho,aapka ye beta khudhi SAMBHAL GAYA....

jo dekha tha sapna aapne RAAZ ki aankhon se,aaj ussike saath woh sapna bhi JAL GAYA......

aap dono maha buddhijeevi bhi aaj haar hi gaye,

shuru kiya tha aap dono ne jis kahani ko, aaj VIDEOUS ke haathon woh ATTITUDE BADAL GAYA.....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......

















AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Excellent update
 

Kill_monger

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tumhari khwahishon ke saath
bohot kuch AZAAD HOGA....

mera bhi toh aarambh
anth ke BAAD HOGA....

Kya isi Anth or Arambh ki baat kar rha tha Raaz?


Jab tak nya chapter nhi aa jata tab tak wait ni ho rha time ni h jyda fir bhi Mann ni manta time nikal ke purane updates pdh rha hu...I hope naya chapter jaldi hi start ho jayega.
Cz Attitude-KAKB is like drugs to me , updates pdhne ke baad lgta ab sukoon mil gya❤️

I think naye Chapter ke sath first update me God ne jo warning, suggestion ya jo bhi tha uske revelation ka time bhi aagya h❤️🤩...

Vese mujhe yaad nhi but kya aap bta skte wo jo ek Puzzle tha jo class me diya gya tha ki Choosens ki history me koi bhi use solve nhi kr paya tha wo solve hua???

Ye review nhi bas kuch questions h 🥺❤️
 

vj4u

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Kya isi Anth or Arambh ki baat kar rha tha Raaz?


Jab tak nya chapter nhi aa jata tab tak wait ni ho rha time ni h jyda fir bhi Mann ni manta time nikal ke purane updates pdh rha hu...I hope naya chapter jaldi hi start ho jayega.
Cz Attitude-KAKB is like drugs to me , updates pdhne ke baad lgta ab sukoon mil gya❤

I think naye Chapter ke sath first update me God ne jo warning, suggestion ya jo bhi tha uske revelation ka time bhi aagya h❤🤩...

Vese mujhe yaad nhi but kya aap bta skte wo jo ek Puzzle tha jo class me diya gya tha ki Choosens ki history me koi bhi use solve nhi kr paya tha wo solve hua???

Ye review nhi bas kuch questions h 🥺
thanks brother..class me diya puzzle bohot jald solve hone waala h...

aur jab aisa hoga,toh ek naya angle bhi create hoga..

aur haan,final chapter ka first update ab tak ka sabse bada revelation update hoga yaa phir ye kahun ki back to back khatarnak revelations honge jinme bohot si baatein clear ho jaayengi....

ASMODEUS aur VIKRAM ko ek chote se flashback scene me ladhte hue bhi aap sab dekhenge...

aur issi update ke saath hi kuch nayi aur mind bobling turns ke hone ki shuruat bhi hogi...


THIRD CHAPTER INVOICE....


1-kahani ke naam ka subtitle KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL kyun hai,ye pata chalega...

2-jo competition ab tak CHOSENS me padhe hain aapne,uska level badhega..

RAAZ and company ke liye har mod par challenges honge...

3-MAHI ka character ek baar phirse nikhar kar saamne aayega....

4-ALFREEN aur MABEL is game ke woh joker honge jo puri baazi palat denge....

5-waise toh final chapter me aise bohot se negetive characters aane waale hain jo RAAZ and company ko bohot zyada pareshan karne waale hain par ek aisa naya character aane waala hai jo RAAZ ke liye VIDEOUS ke jitna hi important hone waala hai....

toh ye rahe kuch important events jo aap sab last chapter me padhenge....

agar har chiz ko summerize karke bolun toh ye final chapter apne aap me hi ek nayi kahani hogi,ek naya ATTITUDE hoga jo pehle dono chapters me bataye aur dikhaye saare samikarano ko badal dega...

but as i said earlier,abhi kuch din mera yahan se off hai..

so,milte hain ek break ke baad...

TAALI-HO.....
 
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thanks brother..class me diya puzzle bohot jald solve hone waala h...

aur jab aisa hoga,toh ek naya angle bhi create hoga..

aur haan,final chapter ka first update ab tak ka sabse bada revelation update hoga yaa phir ye kahun ki back to back khatarnak revelations honge jinme bohot si baatein clear ho jaayengi....

ASMODEUS aur VIKRAM ko ek chote se flashback scene me ladhte hue bhi aap sab dekhenge...

aur issi update ke saath hi kuch nayi aur mind bobling turns ke hone ki shuruat bhi hogi...


THIRD CHAPTER INVOICE....


1-kahani ke naam ka subtitle KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL kyun hai,ye pata chalega...

2-jo competition ab tak CHOSENS me padhe hain aapne,uska level badhega..

RAAZ and company ke liye har mod par challenges honge...

3-MAHI ka character ek baar phirse nikhar kar saamne aayega....

4-ALFREEN aur MABEL is game ke woh joker honge jo puri baazi palat denge....

5-waise toh final chapter me aise bohot se negetive characters aane waale hain jo RAAZ and company ko bohot zyada pareshan karne waale hain par ek aisa naya character aane waala hai jo RAAZ ke liye VIDEOUS ke jitna hi important hone waala hai....

toh ye rahe kuch important events jo aap sab last chapter me padhenge....

agar har chiz ko summerize karke bolun toh ye final chapter apne aap me hi ek nayi kahani hogi,ek naya ATTITUDE hoga jo pehle dono chapters me bataye aur dikhaye saare samikarano ko badal dega...

but as i said earlier,abhi kuch din mera yahan se off hai..

so,milte hain ek break ke baad...

TAALI-HO.....
Ok bro....
Jb aapka off khtm ho tb update de dena
But off ko jaldi hi khtm karna
 

ashish_1982_in

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thanks brother..class me diya puzzle bohot jald solve hone waala h...

aur jab aisa hoga,toh ek naya angle bhi create hoga..

aur haan,final chapter ka first update ab tak ka sabse bada revelation update hoga yaa phir ye kahun ki back to back khatarnak revelations honge jinme bohot si baatein clear ho jaayengi....

ASMODEUS aur VIKRAM ko ek chote se flashback scene me ladhte hue bhi aap sab dekhenge...

aur issi update ke saath hi kuch nayi aur mind bobling turns ke hone ki shuruat bhi hogi...


THIRD CHAPTER INVOICE....


1-kahani ke naam ka subtitle KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL kyun hai,ye pata chalega...

2-jo competition ab tak CHOSENS me padhe hain aapne,uska level badhega..

RAAZ and company ke liye har mod par challenges honge...

3-MAHI ka character ek baar phirse nikhar kar saamne aayega....

4-ALFREEN aur MABEL is game ke woh joker honge jo puri baazi palat denge....

5-waise toh final chapter me aise bohot se negetive characters aane waale hain jo RAAZ and company ko bohot zyada pareshan karne waale hain par ek aisa naya character aane waala hai jo RAAZ ke liye VIDEOUS ke jitna hi important hone waala hai....

toh ye rahe kuch important events jo aap sab last chapter me padhenge....

agar har chiz ko summerize karke bolun toh ye final chapter apne aap me hi ek nayi kahani hogi,ek naya ATTITUDE hoga jo pehle dono chapters me bataye aur dikhaye saare samikarano ko badal dega...

but as i said earlier,abhi kuch din mera yahan se off hai..

so,milte hain ek break ke baad...

TAALI-HO.....
bhai aapke update ka besbri se intezar rehega
 
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