Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF PHASE 2 KA PEHLA DIN SHURU HO CHUKA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ AUR VIDEOUS PEHLI BAAR AAMNE SAAMNE AATE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)




UPDATE-58



PLANET-PHASE 2


PLACE-THE GREAT HALL





HMM..TOH AAP SAB HAIN IS SESSION KE STELLARS....


THE GREAT HALL ke side me bane aneko rooms me se wo room jisse STELLARS catagory ke liye rakha gaya tha,wahan VIDEOUS ko milakar kul saath SAVENTS ek taraf bane seats par baithe hue the jinhe dekh MABBA ne ye baat kahi thi...

wahin un saathon ke group se kuch doori banaye hue ek aur 19 logon ka group baitha hua tha...

aur ye group the pichle 2 sessions ke PHASE 2 ke STELLARS SAVENTS jinhe is session me naa toh WICKEDS me aur naahi MORALS ki team me jagah mili thi aur isiliye wo sab bhi apna PHASE 2 repeat kar rahe the...

VIDEOUS ke group se ek baar mukhatib hone ke baad WHIZZ MABBA ki nazar ussi dusre group ki taraf ghumi aur....


MABBA-tum sab jaisi hi haalat hoti hai aksar un sabki jab jo taakat se upar kisi aur chiz ko rakhta hai...

STELLARS the tum pichle session me aur sirf ussiki wajah se is saal bhi is prestigious catagory me jagah mili hai tum sabko...

PHASE 3 me naa chune jaane se tum sabne bas ek hi chiz saabit ki hai aur wo ye hai ki you guys are good for nothing...

loosers hi ho tum sab...par fir bhi mouka mila hai tumhe,try karna ki pichli baar jaisi aadhi adhuri will power aur incompetency repeat naa ho....got it....


SAB-yes WHIZZ...


sharm se sar jo jhukaye hue un 19 SAVENTS ne ye kaha tha...


MABBA-waise tum sabke motivation ke liye kuch live example tumhare is batch me hi moujud hai..

MAHI,ALFREEN,MABEL,VALDIS yahan aayiye...


WHIZZ MABBA ke bulate hi ye chaaron aage badhte hue unke paas jaakar khade ho gaye....


MABBA-yahan moujud baaki sabhi SAVENTS first PHASE me apne apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar paaye the par unlike you all, mere saath jo ye chaar SAVENTS khade hain,wo tum sabse,infact har session me padhte chale aa rahe SAVENTS se aage nikal gaye hain...

jahan VALDIS ki soul 4 percent tak amplified ho gayi hai wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ne apne SOUL ko 5 percent tak AMPLIFY kar diya hai...

aur in sabse aage hai MAHI...jisne first PHASE me apne SOUL ko 8 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya hua hai jo ki CHOSENS ke ab tak ke itihaas me sabse zyada hai....

aise AMPLIFICATIONS har session me dekhne ko nahi milte aur isiliye hi inke talents se sikh tum sab bhi khudko nikharne ki koshish karo...

REGIS-MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN, VALDIS...we are really very proud of you...

SAPIUS-absolutely...aur hume tum chaaron se is session me bhi kaafi
ummiden hain...

CHAARON-thanks WHIZZDERS..we will give our best....


jab REGIS aur SAPIUS in chaaron ko congratulate kar rahe the,tab MABBA ki nazar baaki ke SAVENTS par padi jinme jitni bhi girls SAVENTS thi,wo sab VIDEOUS ko hi checkout kar rahi thi aur isiliye....


MABBA-focus SAVENTS....


girls ko ghurti hui MABBA ne ye baat kahi jispar wo sabhi girls hadbada kar saamne dekhne lagi..

wahin MABBA ki nazar VIDEOUS par aakar rooki jo unki taraf hi dekh raha tha...


MABBA-VIDEOUS..speech toh tumne bohot achi aur satik di thi...mujhe pasand aaya par SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke maamle me tum filhal borderline ko touch karke hi yahan STELLARS me jagah bana paaye ho jo ki bohot common baat hai...

par kyunki tumne ye yahan nahi balki apne planet me kiya hai joki karna wakayi mushkil hai isiliye mujhe lagta hai ki tum bohot aage jaa sakte ho...

mujhe tumse bohot ummiden hain....

MABBA ki baat sun VIDEOUS halke se muskura utha aur...


VIDEOUS-its just a matter of time WHIZZ..i will surprise you....

behad shaant par confident tarike se kahi VIDEOUS ne ye baat jisse sun MABBA ke chehre par bhi ek muskaan aa gayi...


MABBA-jaao,apni jagah par baith jaao....


MABBA ke aisa bolte hi MAHI, ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS apni apni jagah par jaakar baith gaye...


REGIS-well aap sabki actual classes kal se shuru hongi...abhi hum aap sabko aapke is PHASE me hone waale important activities ke baare me batayenge aur saath hi institution se baahar jo PHASE 2 ki duniya hai,jo ki aap sabhi STELLARS aur aapki families ke liye kisi heaven se kam nahi hai,usse explore karne ke liye jin ACCESS CARDS aur teen different coins ki zaroorat padti hai,wo aapko provide karenge aur aapko in chizon ko use karne ke tarika bhi hum batayenge...

SAPIUS-so lets start...is PHASE me aapke kul 2 hi class honge...

pehli class ka naam hai CLASS OF EXPANSIONaur dusri ka CLASS OF ELABORATION...

details aapko kal class ke waqt bataya jaayega....

in do classes me aap jo bhi sikhenge,us growth ko 2 baar EXERTION naam ke ek test me check kiya jaayega...

baaki ke jo do catagories hain,wo bhi is test ka hissa hote hain...

PHASE 2 ka aapka tenure bhi 18 months ka hi hota hai par ye 18 mahine do bhaagon me divided hote hain...

har bhaag 8 months ka hota hai aur uske beech ke do mahine jo ki 9th aur 10th hota hai,usme PHASE 2 aur PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS ko majority choice ke hisaab se kisi ek tourist PLANET par le jaaya jaata hai...

details aur bhi hain par wo time ke saath saath aap sabko batayi jaayengi...

MABBA-ye thi INSTITUTION ke andar ki baat...ab baat karte hain aapki us life ki jo aap aur aapke saath aapki family INSTITUTION ke bahar enjoy karne waali hain....

aur enjoy karne ke liye aap sabko jin chizon ki zaroorat padne waali hai,wo hain ye...


apni baat keh MABBA ne hawa me hi apna haath lehraya jiske turant baad sabhi SAVENTS ke saamne line se chaar chizen prakat hui jisse dekh wo sab hairan bhi hue aur un chizon ko dekh khush bhi...


MABBA-in chaaron ke combination ko LUXURY GATEWAYS kaha jaata hai...

ye jo tum sab ke left me RED CARD hai,yahi hai is duniya ka ACCESS CARD....

is card ka use yahan kuch bhi kharidne ke liye kiya jaa sakta hai...

is card ki koi limit nahi hai par jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki is PHASE me 2 baar EXERTION naam ka ek test hota hai jisme tum sabki progress record ki jaati hai,us test ke result ka asar is card aur saath hi baaki ke teen LUXURY GATEWAYS par bhi padta hai...

ACCESS CARD ke side me jo PURPLE COIN hai,ye hai ETHERIUM...

ETHERIUM ka use tum sab pubs,clubs aur bohot si alag alag night life places me entry ke liye kar sakte ho...

third me rakhi BLUE COIN hai TETHER...magical thrill parks,private party venues,the SEA SWIMMING POOL,aisi alag alag amusing jagahon par aap sirf is TETHAR ko dikhakar jaa sakte hain....

and lastly jo yellow coin hai,ye hai RIPPLE....ye coin tumhare parents nahi balki sirf tumhare liye hai...

is coin se tum sab the ANYLIZER naam ki jagah me jaa sakte ho aur ye facility sirf STELLARS ko hi mili hui hai...

haan agar tum chaahon toh dusre catagory ke SAVENTS ko apne zimmedari me wahan le jaa sakte ho...

ANYLIZER ek aisi jagah hai jahan tum sabne jo kuch bhi yahan institution me sikha hai, usse wahan jaakar seconds wise tak dekh, samajh aur apni galtiyon ko rectify karna sikh sakte ho...

par kyunki woh jagah extreme metaphisycal activities ke har moov tak ko detect karti hai, isiliye wahan par air pressure bohot zyada hota hai jis wajah se zyada der tak wahan par rehna bohot muhskil hai....

toh ye hain in chaaron LUXURY GATEWAYS ke kaam...got it...!!!

ALFREEN-WHIZZ ye chaaron toh sirf ek,ek hi available hain..kya hamare parents bhi inhi ek GATEWAYS se sabhi cheezen access kar paayenge...

MABBA-family strength ke hisaab se hi cards aur coins baatein gaye hain...

tumhare GATEWAYS ke andar tumhare parents ke GATEWAYS moujud hain....

ACCESS CARD ko hold karo...


MABBA ke aisa kehte hi ALFREEN ne apne saamne pade ACCESS CARD ko utha liya...


MABBA-card ko do baar jhatko....


MABBA ke kahe anusar jab ALFREEN ne card ko do baar jhatka toh....

ek ke baad ek do baar us card ke andar se same do aur cards bahar aaye...


MABBA-tumhare haath me jo card hai, usse baari baari baaki ke dono cards ko touch karo...

MABBA ke kehne par jab ALFREEN ne waisa kiya toh wo dono cards automatically ALFREEN ke card ke andar sama gaye...

MABBA-coins ke saath bhi same process karna hota hai...

bas ek RIPPLE ko chhod kar..wo ek hi hota hai jisse sirf usse allot kiya hua SAVENT hi use kar sakta hai...

any questions....

VIDEOUS-EXERTION test me WEAKLINGS bhi participate karte hain naa!!!!


jaanbujh kar pucha tha ye sawal VIDEOUS ne aur jis maksad se pucha tha,wo maksad pura ho gaya...

kyunki jaise hi uske mooh se WEAKLING nikla,toh MABBA ke dimag me pehle ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki wo wait karne waali baat aur fir RAAZ ki usse ki gayi insult yaad aa gayi jiske zehen me uththe hi MABBA ka daba ghussa bahar aa gaya tha...


SAPIUS-haan,ye test har catagory ke liye hota hai bas tarike thode badle hote hain...

REGIS-aur wo aise ki unka us test me participation STELLARS par depend karta hai...

STELLARS agar chahen,aur jis tarah se chaahen, WEAKLINGS ka use us test me kar sakte hain..

but kyunki wo test ek average aur below average SAVENT ke liye khatarnaak ho sakte hain, isiliye zyada tar WEAKLINGS ko us test ke bade aur important tasks ke daayre se door rakha jaata hai...

MABBA-par is baar aisa nahi hoga..is baar hum WEAKLINGS ko bhi barabari ka mouka denge...

aakhir unhe bhi toh EXERTION test ka maza chakhna chahiye...


halki devilish muskaan ke saath MABBA ne ye baat kahi thi jisse sun pehle toh REGIS aur SAPIUS hairan hue aur wo isiliye kyunki isse pehle MABBA kabhi bhi WEAKLINGS ka kisi bhi task me involvement pasand nahi karti thi par jald hi wo samajhne lage the ki MABBA ye sab un teen SAVENTS ko sabak sikhne ke liye keh rahi jinhone jo pichle saal missing ho gaye the aur filhal WEAKLING catagory me the....

khair, STELLARS ko saari infos de di gayi thi aur isiliye...


MABBA-ok,toh ab aap sab apne apne ABODES jaaiye...PHASE 2 ki duniya ka key card aur coins ke roop me aapko mil chuka hai...

explore aur enjoy kijiye...kal milte hai aapki first class me...


ye bol teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS room se nikal gaye par jaate waqt MABBA ke man me jo khayal aa chuka tha,usse pura karne ke liye wo hall se bahar jaane ki jagah ek dusri taraf nikal padi...

wahin baaki ke sabhi SAVENTS bhi apne apne cards aur coins ko lekar PHASE enjoy karne ki excitement se bhare room se nikal apne ABODES ki taraf chal pade par in sake beech tha VIDEOUS jo room se toh nikla par fir hall se bahar naa jakar wo bhi us disha ki taraf chal pada jahan gayi thi MABBA....





GROOMERS ROOM:-




TOH YE HAIN AAPKE ACCESS CARD AUR TEENO COINS KA KAAM...


card aur coins ke use ki details ko batane ke baad kaha WHIZZ EDWINA ne....

SAVENTS toh jaan gaye,chaliye aap bhi thoda bohot GROOMERS ke is PHASE me hone waale major activities aur unhe mile hue card aur coins ke baare me jaan lijiye..

waise procedure is catagory ka bhi STELLARS catagory jaisa hi hai but with some restrictions..

aur wo aise ki jahan STELLARS EXERTION me directly bhaag lete hain wahin GROOMERS ko bhi aisa karna allowed hota hai par har GROOMER ko nahi...

sirf wo GROOMERS jinki apni padhyai me growth rate STELLARS jitni hoti hai,wahi us test me directly as a participant involve hote hai aur baaki GROOMERS WEAKLINGS ki tarah hi as a SIDE KICK STELLARS ki marzi ke hisaab se us test me involvement rakh paate hai..

wahin baat karen agar GROOMERS ko mile card aur coins ki toh iska bhi ek limit tay hota hai jo unke session me kiye performance ke hisaab se fluctuate hota rehta hai...

saari details ko disclose karne ke baad GROOMERS ke teen WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS EDWINA, ROVEL aur PETRA ne class ko conclude kiya aur class se nikal gaye wahin is dauran WHIZZ MABBA aur unke piche piche VIDEOUS pahunche...





PLACE-THE GREAT HALL....




BHAI,ISSE NAA DOUBLE LOUD SPEAKER KI ZAROORAT HAI....BOL KYA RAHI HAI,KUCH SAMAJH ME HI NAHI AA RAHA..!!!!


HIDA,jo ki WEAKLINGS ki ek maatra WHIZZ thi,wo wahan moujud unke catagory ke chararon SAVENTS ko is session me unke activities ke baare me bata rahi thi,par unki awaaz itni kam thi aur saath hi baat karte waqt wo itna atak rahi thi ki unki kahi ab tak ki koi bhi baat un chaaron ko thik se sunayi bhi nahi de rahi thi aur isiliye hi ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


SLUNDER-mujhe toh ye samajh nahi aa raha hai ki ek educational INSTITUTION me itna bhed bhaav kaise ho sakta hai...???

haan un do behroopiyon ki wajah se hume WEAKLING catagory me aana pada par SAVENTS ke saath itna apmaan janak vyavahar meri samajh se pare hai....

baaki dono catagories ke liye rooms allot kiye gaye hain aur hum yahin hall me hi hain aur toh aur humare liye baithne ka bhi koi prabandh nahi hai...

this is so embarrassing....

ACCHUTA-bhai ye toh shuruat hai..pata nahi aage kya kya dekhna pade..par mujhe ek baat samajh me nahi aati ki RAAZ kyun is catagory me hai...???

SLUNDER-puch ke dekh le...

ACCHUTA-puch ke dekh le..!!sidhe bol naa marwa ke dekh le...aise hi meri shakal kuch khaas nahi hai,uspar agar maine inhe kuch keh diya toh pata nahi mere thobde ka kya bhugol ban jaayega...

SLUNDER-kharabi ki aakhri hadh hai tera chehra..isse zyada aur kya kharab hoga...

ACCHUTA-haan bhai,tere chehre se toh noor tapak raha hai,kyun!!!!..

beta jinke ghar sheeshe ke hote hain naa,wo dusro ke ghar me pathar nahi maarte...

saale,bandar ke pichwade ki shakal liye tu mere thobde ki burayi kar raha hai....


is tarah SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ek dusre ki burayi karne me lag gaye, WHIZZ WIDA hume dheere dheere atak kar hamara schedule batati rahi jo ki naa ke hi barabar tha,BRAWNY toh bas chupchaap gumsoom sa hokar hi khada tha wahin mai in sabke beech hokar bhi nahi tha..

nazarein bhale hi meri saamne thi par andar hi andar mai pure ELYSIAN ko scan kar raha tha...

reason....

mujhe ye toh nahi pata tha ki mera agla step kya hone waala hai par itna zaroor andaza tha ki jo bhi hoga,wo yahin ELYSIAN ke andar hi hoga aur isiliye mere sharir se SEARCH RAY nikal pure ELYSIAN me ghum rahe the aur tabhi...

mere chehre par ek halki si muskaan aa gayi aur wo isiliye kyunki maine mehsoos kiya hamare paas aate hue WHIZZ MABBA aur VIDEOUS ko...

aisa hote hi pehli baar mera dhyan gaya mere saamne khadi WHIZZ HIDA par joki behad under confident dikh rahi thi aur ussi jhijhak ke saath baat bhi kar rahi thi par ye dekh meri smile halki gehri ho gayi....

HIDA jinki baat sirf unhe hi sunayi de rahi thi,unhone pura schedule abhi batana complete hi kiya tha ki tabhi....


OHO....DEKHO TOH....LAGTA HAI KOI ZABARDAST PLANNING HO RAHI HAI STELLARS KO COMPETITION DENE KI....


WHIZZ MABBA ki thi ye awaaz jo hamare piche se aayi thi...

awaaz sun BRAWNY palta aur uske saah hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi palatne waale the lekin....


PALATNE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI....


meri awaaz gunj uthi un dono ke dimag me jiske baad un dono ne meri taraf dekha aur fir wapas saamne dekhne lage...

wahin BRAWNY ke saath saath WHIZZ HIDA ki nazar bhi hamare piche gayi thi aur jab unhone MABBA ko dekha toh wo kaafi nervous ho gayi...

reason...

10 saal pehle WHIZZ MABBA bhi yahan ek SAVENT thi aur tab wo bhi bohot pareshan kar chuki thi WHIZZ HIDA ko..

aur ab jab wo khud ek WHIZZ hain,tab bhi wo aisa karne se baaz nahi aati thi par ye sab wo SAVENTS ke saamne nahi karti thi lekin aaj wo yahan hamare beech unke paas aa rahi thi,toh zaroor kuch na kuch negetive aur apmanjanak baat WHIZZ HIDA se karengi hi,yahi soch kar WHIZZ HIDA nervous feel karne lagi thi...

par in sabke beech jab MABBA ne ye dekha ki unki awaaz sunkar bhi naa toh mai palta hun,aur naahi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER toh unka ego pinch sa ho gaya...

hamare side se hokar hume ghurti hui wo WHIZZ HIDA ke paas jaakar khadi ho gayi...

wahin apne saamne MABBA ko dekhkar HIDA ki nazarein neechi ho
gayi thi aur dar ke maare wo halki kaampne bhi lagi thi...

ek vyang se bhari muskaan se WHIZZ HIDA ko dekh MABBA ki nazar hamari taraf ghumi par tabhi....

VIDEOUS jo humse thode piche hi khada har taraf dekh raha tha yaa fir ye kahun ki place checkout karne ka naatak kar raha tha,uspar WHIZZ MABBA ki nazar padi aur...


MABBA-VIDEOUS...tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..???

VIDEOUS-pehli baar yahan aaya hun WHIZZ toh bas is GREAT HALL ko checkout kar raha tha..

MABBA-hmm..chalo,idhar aao...


WHIZZ ke bulate hi mere baaju se apne shoulder ko halka takrate hue VIDEOUS aage badh gaya aur tabhi....


dekhne waalo ko VIDEOUS ka aisa karna mahaz ek shrug ki tarah hi lagna tha par asal me VIDEOUS ne apni shakti ka ek bohot bada bhaag apne shoulder ke through release kiya tha aur isiliye hi uske shoulder ke mere shoulder se takrate hi mujhe ek tez jhatka laga aur mai aage ki taraf girne ko hua par maine turant apna balance bana liya jisse mai girne se bach gaya...

par jahan VIDEOUS ke shrug se mere disbalance hone par ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER hairan ho gaye wahin MABBA ke chehre par ek khilli udane waali muskaan naach gayi...


MABBA-arre VIDEOUS..dhyan diya karo..ye WEAKLINGS hain, STELLARS nahi..

ye kamzor hote hain..tumhara chhuna bhi inke liye dhakke se kam nahi hoga....

waise bhi body bana lene se taakat nahi aa jaati..ye sab sirf ek show off hai...aur iski sirf kadh aur zuban hi lambi hai...hai toh ye bhi har WEAKLING ki tarah khokla hi...


MABBA ki baat sun jahan VIDEOUS muskura diya, HIDA ka sir ek baar fir se jhuk gaya wahin mai bilkul shaant hi khada tha...

kuch der tak mujhe ghurte rehne ke baad MABBA palti HIDA ki taraf aur...


MABBA-arre,aap itni nervous kyun ho rahi hain..???aapko toh khush hona chahiye kyunki mai yahan aapko ek khushkhabari dene aayi hun...


MABBA ki baat sun HIDA ki sawal bhari nazar uspar tik gayi...


MABBA-najaane pichle kitne hi sessions se aap mujhse har EXERTION test ke waqt request karti aayi hain ki mai aapke WEAKLINGS ko bhi thoda hi sahi par participate karne ka mouka dun...

par maine kabhi aisa karne ki ijazat nahi di...lekin is baar aisa nahi hoga..is session ke pehle EXERTION me aapke SAVENTS bhi bhaag lenge..

aur wo bhi test ke kisi ek part me nahi,balki STELLARS ki tarah pure test me....

jahan MABBA ki pehli baat jisme usne WEAKLINGS ko bhi EXERTION me hissa lene ke liye haan kaha tha,sunkar HIDA khush ho gayi thi wahin uski aage ki baat sunkar HIDA ke chehre par dar dikhne laga tha...

reason...

EXERTION test kaafi dangerous tha jisme STELLARS tak fail bhi hote hai aur chotil bhi toh aise me WEAKLING ki kya haalat ho sakti thi us test me,iska toh andaza bhi nahi lagaya jaa sakta tha...

aur isiliye HIDA aisa karne ke liye MABBA ko mana karne waali thi par tabhi...

ek invisible ray nikli mere chest se jo kisi aur ko toh nahi par VIDEOUS ko dikh gayi thi..

wo ray jo ki ek MIND MANIPULATOR thi,nikal sidhi HIDA ke dimag me ghus gayi aur jab aisa hua toh unke chehre ke expressions badal gaye..

dar,ghabrahat sab gayab ho gaya unke chehre se aur fir..


HIDA-challenge accepted...agar mukabla barabari ka hone waala hai,toh theek se taiyar karna apne SAVENTS ko...

kyunki WEAKLINGS se jeetne ki ummid bhale kisiko ho naa ho,par unhi WEAKLINGS se STELLARS haar jaayen,aisa kisi ne socha bhi nahi hoga...

par is baar hoga aisa hi...


halki unchi confident bhari awaaz se ye shabd nikle HIDA ke mooh se jisse sun MABBA ko laga jhatka....

jis HIDA ne kabhi ek puri line tak thik se ek saath nahi boli thi, abhi abhi usne naa sirf pure confidence se baat ki thi balki MABBA ke challenge ke jawab me ulta ek naya aur naamukin sa lagne waala challenge tak de diya tha...

aise me jhatka toh lagna hi tha...

wahin VIDEOUS, jisne us ray ko mujhse hokar HIDA ke dimag me samate dekha tha,wo mujhe hi dekhkar aise muskura raha tha maano maine koi bachkani harkat ki ho par wo ye nahi jaanta tha ki ek aur ray thi jo mujhse nikalkar kahin aur jaa ruki thi par bohot jald usse pata lag hi jaana tha..

kaise,aayiye khud dekh lijiye...

HIDA ki baat sun kuch pal lage MABBA ko shock se recover karne ke liye par fir...


MABBA-aukad se badi baat bol gayi aap HIDA...aap darpok hi thik thi..

pehli baar kuch confidence ke saath nikla aapke mooh se toh kya .???bewakufi se bhari bachkani baat....

CHOSENS shatranj ke khel ki tarah hai... jisme RAJA aur RANI hum hain,STELLARS...

GROOMERS hote hai WAZIR aur GHODE ki tarah jinka kamsekam ek respected ohda toh hota hi hai...

par WEAKLINGS sirf un PYADON ki tarah hote hain jo hum STELLARS naam ke KING aur QUEEN ke isharon par chalte hain..

unke khudka kuch wajud nahi....


hume dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat MABBA ne aur fir..


MABBA-chalo VIDEOUS...


ye bol MABBA aage badh gayi..


wahin HIDA jinke andar se meri ray ab gayab ho chuki thi,unka sir us ray ke release hone ka pressure jhel nahi paaya aur isiliye unhe chakkar aane laga aur wo ladkhadane lagi jisse ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ne dekh liya aur turant unki taraf badhe...

mujhe ghurte hue mere baaju se hote hui MABBA aage nikli aur unke piche mujhe muskurakar dekhte hue nikalne laga VIDEOUS aur tabhi...

maine apna kandhe se uske kandhe ko halka jhatka diya...

is jhatke me bohot pressure tha par VIDEOUS ko mere aisa kuch karne ka andaza pehle se hi hi tha aur isiliye wo taiyar tha...

issi wajah se us jhatke ka uspar koi asar nahi hua par wo mere baaju me rook zaroor gaya...


VIDEOUS-tu toh baccha nikla re RAAZ...ya fir wo jo MABBA ne abhi abhi bola..ek mamuli pyada jo bas badi badi baat hi kar sakta hai aur kuch.....


DHAPP...........DHAAMMM


NAHI....ye shabd VIDEOUS ke mooh se nikal hi nahi paaya kyunki usse pehle hi usse piche se uske right kandhe par ek tagda pressure pada aur aisa hote hi pura ek flip maarte hue niche gira VIDEOUS ...

ab ye kaise hua...????

toh ye hua us ray se jisse maine ACCHUTA ki body par bheja tha aur jo uski body se ek inch aage rook gaya tha..

wo ray mere BODY AMPLIFICATION ki shakti thi...aur jab HIDA ko sambhalne ke liye SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ke saath ACCHUTA aage badha toh maine usse aadhe raaste me hi mind to mind jodte hue bata diya ki usse kya karna hai..

aur isiliye ACCHUTA wapas palta aur tezi se aage badhte hue VIDEOUS ko apne shoulder ke through jahan meri body ki shakti thi,usse ek jhatka diya aur natija sabke saamne tha....

jahan ACCHUTA ki wajah se ghumte hue khudko neeche girta hua dekh VIDEOUS hairan ho gaya wahin MABBA jo thodi hi aage gayi thi,takrane aur girne ki awaaz sun jab wo palti toh unki bhi aankhen badi ho gayi..

kabhi wo neeche gire hue VIDEOUS ko dekhti toh kabhi uske baaju me muskukar khade hua mujhe aur fir hile mere honth....


MAI-arre WHIZZ...aapka KING toh ek PYADE se hi gir gaya...

par isme is bechare ki bhi kya galti...naahi isse aur naahi aapko shatranj ki baazi ke baare me thik se pata hai...

sahi waqt par sahi chaal chalte hue agar ek PYADA aage badhe toh wo aakhri ghar tak pahunch jaata hai aur jab aisa hota hai toh RAJA ho yaa RANI,us pyade ke aage har sir ko jhukna hi padta hai....


MABBA ki aankhon me jhaankte hue maine ye baat kahi thi jisse sun wo bolna toh bohot kuch chahti thi par uske lab khul hi nahi paaye..

ek baar VIDEOUS ko jo ab uth chuka tha,usse dekh aur ek baar mujhe ghoor MABBA wapas palti aur aage badh gayi...

wahin MABBA ke palaththe hi mai bhi VIDEOUS ki taraf palta aur..


MAI-sahi bola tha tune...baccha hi hun mai..dekh, khel hi toh raha hun tere saath...

par in a spirit of sportsmanship,ek raaye deta hun tujhe...


Kota jitna ho,
utna hi BAK...

nazar bhale saamne ho,
dhyan har taraf RAKH....


waise maalum hai mujhe ki...


dekhne ke maamle me
tu ek BAAZ hai...

par jiska waar dikhayi hi naa de,
wahi toh.........RAAZ...... hai.....











AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....









AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Bahut hi khubsurat posts hai Bhai
 

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ye scene bhai usse matlub 1 part thoda alag hai fir bi same hai ki

khud apne mom dad ko marna

Pichhle paath mein bhi aise hi hua tha Vikram ko Apne mum dad ko maarna Pada

Aur ismein Bhi Apne mom-dad Ko maar raha hai raaz

yaha me raaz ko hero nahi samaj raha hu fir bi mera or raaz ka attitude ek hai so....

wo jo bi karta wo uske liye sahi lagta teek mere ko bi aisa hi lagta hai

the point is

ITIHAAS DOHRA RAHA HAI
nahi brother, first part aur is waale me zamin aasman ka fark hai..

ASMODEUS usme main protagonist nahi tha par yahan VIDEOUS hai..

aur naahi RAAZ VIKRAM ke character se ek percent bhi match karta hai..

yahan koi coming back waala game nahi hai..dekhte hain, aage kya hota hai..
 

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OMG ....ye kya tha bhai....ek pal phle apne maa - papa ka pta chala or unhe apne apne bacche ka........or agle hi pal unhe hamesa ke liye alg hona pda........ab AL kya kregi bhai.......kya wo bhi raaz ke khilaf ho jayegi........or videous ka esa konsa wada tha jo raaz ko apne hi maa - baap ko marna pda........aapne to kahani ko alg hi level pr pahucha diya bhai.........
wada waala funda toh clear hai brother.. RAAZ ko jab woh book mili thi,tab usse kholne ki ek sharth thi aur woh sharth ye thi ki jo bhi VIDEOUS chaahega, RAAZ ko karna hoga..

ussi sharth ke waade ko nibhaya hai aaj RAAZ ne..agar woh aisa nahi karta tab bhi FLORIN aur MARIA marte,par woh mout kaafi taklif deh ban jaati..
 

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OMG ....ye kya tha bhai....ek pal phle apne maa - papa ka pta chala or unhe apne apne bacche ka........or agle hi pal unhe hamesa ke liye alg hona pda........ab AL kya kregi bhai.......kya wo bhi raaz ke khilaf ho jayegi........or videous ka esa konsa wada tha jo raaz ko apne hi maa - baap ko marna pda........aapne to kahani ko alg hi level pr pahucha diya bhai.........
wada waala funda toh clear hai brother.. RAAZ ko jab woh book mili thi,tab usse kholne ki ek sharth thi aur woh sharth ye thi ki jo bhi VIDEOUS chaahega, RAAZ ko karna hoga..

ussi sharth ke waade ko nibhaya hai aaj RAAZ ne..agar woh aisa nahi karta tab bhi FLORIN aur MARIA marte,par woh mout kaafi taklif deh ban jaati..
 

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Bhai first part mai bhi esi situation thi is mai bhi but that's how character you designed but hopefully you justify this I know this story is about raaz and videous but the creator is same
We know you are the best,.....
woh situation alag thi,ye alag hai brother.. naa VIDEOUS ASMODEUS hai aur naahi RAAZ VIKRAM...

wahan achayi aur burayi ke beech jung thi, aur yahan burayi ki burayi se hi hai...

RAAZ aur VIDEOUS gehun ki tarah hain jinke saath ghun bhi pis jaate hai jaise aaj FLORIN aur MARIA pis gaye...

khair,padhte jaaiye.... bohot kuch hona baaki h...
 

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Fantastic update
AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WHIZZ AUR WHIZZDERS APNE APNE CATAGORY KO PHASE 2 KE DETAILS DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF EK BAAR FIRSE VIDEOUS AUR RAAZ KA AAMNE SAAMNE HOTA HAI JISME RAAZ ACCHUTA KE THROUGH VIDEOUS KO NEECHE GIRA DETA HAI


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)




UPDATE-59




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-WEAKLINGS STAY





AHHH.....AHHHHH....AHHHH.......


ek saath teen baar ACCHUTA ke mooh se dard bhari AHHHH nikli thi...kyun..???aayiye khud jaan lijiye...


ACCHUTA-abbe saale kaise macchar hain ye...???saalon ka size toh normal maccharon ka one fourth bhi nahi hai par kamine kaaththe normal maccharon se 10 guna zyada tagda hain...


apne haath ke us jagah ko masalte hue ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi jispar abhi abhi ek saath teen baar maccharon ne kaata tha aur ussi wajah se uske mooh AHHHH nikli thi...

shaam ka waqt hai..halka halka andhera chaane laga hai par kyunki WEAKLINGS ki quarter jahan is waqt ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER baithe hain,wahan light ki suvidha nahi hai, isiliye wahan andhera abhi se ghar kar chuka hai...

RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER...in teeno ko ek hi quarter allot hua hai wahin BRAWNY aur uske parents ke liye ek quater jo in teeno ke quater se thode hi door me hain....

aaj classes ke baad ye teeno yahan paidal hi pahunche the jo ki institution se aur PHASE 2 ke city se kuch 6 kms door hai....

jab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan quater pahunche toh yahan ki haalat dekh jo ki dekhne layak thi hi nahi,unki haalat kharab ho gayi...

baithne ke liye chairs, couches ya sofa nahi balki ek hi badi si chatayi thi aur sone ke naam par bed nahi balki teen khatiya...

paani peene ke liye ek bada sa matka jiske side me teen glass pade the..ek chota sa kitchen jisme naam maatra ki kitchen equipments the aur saath hi mahine bhar ka rashan bhi jisse inhe khud pakana tha...

toilet aur bathroom ek ek hi the aur unki haalat toh aisi thi ki pucho hi mat...

jahan RAAZ toh institution se aate hi apne search rays ko aur shaktishali banane ke liye quarter se bahar ek ghane se ped ke niche paused CEREBRATION me baith gaya wahin ye sab dekhte hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER is jagah ki hazar nooks nikalne me lag gaye the....

khair, ACCHUTA ki baat sun.....


SLUNDER-tu toh aise bol raha hai jaise apne planet ke maccharon ke kaatne ke impact ko measure kiya hua hai tune..


apne haath ko idhar udhar hilakar maccharon ko khudse door karte hue kaha SLUNDER ne...


ACCHUTA-bhai,tere har sadhe hue mazak ko tere chehre ki tarah hi jhel lunga mai par filhal apna mooh band rakh...

saale in invisible maccharon ne haath pair ko kaat kaat kar ga**d ki tarah suja diya hai...

SLUNDER-mujhe toh yakin nahi aata ki apne planet ka yuvraj hokar mai aisi ghatiya jagah par reh raha hun...

ACCHUTA-abbe kya sirf tu hi yuvraj hai...???mai kya apne planet ke kisi school ka chaprasi hun...!!!

mujhe kaun si aadat hai aisi jagah par rehne ki par ab jab sir okhki me daal hi diya hai toh kar bhi kya sakte hain...???


SABSE PEHLE COMPLAINT KARNA BAND KARO...????


quater ke darwaze par ek parchayi joki MERI thi,dikhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko jiske mooh se ye baat nikli thi aur meri awaaz aur baat ko sunane ke baad toh wo dono rehna chhodo jeene ki bhi complaint karne ki haalat me nahi rehte the...

wahin apni baat keh mai un dono ki taraf badha aur SLUNDER jis khatiye par baitha hua tha,uspar baith gaya...

par mere baiththe hi SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA turant mere saamne khade ho gaye...


MAI-mujhe dekh ghabrana,sir jhukakar khade rehna,ye sab akele me allowed hai tum dono ko... institution me ya fir city me mere saath tum dono ko ek normal PHASE MATE ki tarah hi behave karna hai..

SLUNDER/ACCHUTA-jee....


mai itna taaktwar hun,fir kyun mai aisi jagah par reh raha hun..???agar mai chahun toh is jagah ko turant ek rajmahal me badal sakta hun...???fir kyun maine ab tak aisa nahi kiya....???

ye sab baatein chal rahi thi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke dimag me is waqt jispar...


MAI-jo baat ghum rahi hai tum dono ke dimag me is waqt,wo ho nahi sakta...!!!


meri baat sun meri taraf hairani se dekhne lage dono..ye baat alag thi ki andhere ki wajah se mai unhe dikhayi nahi de paa raha tha..

par fir jab unhe ehsaas hua ki mai unke man ki baat bhi padh sakta hun toh...


SLUNDER-kya mai jaan sakta hun kyun??


halke dar aur sankoch bhare awaaz se pucha tha SLUNDER ne ye sawal jispar...


MAI-CHOSENS ek maidan jaisa hai aur iska har PHASE aur uske niyam us maidan me khele jaane waale khel ke niyam ki tarah hai jinhe mai bhi nahi tod sakta...


OH....


dono ke mooh se bas itna hi nikal paaya par wo dono ek baar firse udas hone lage the jispar...


MAI-samasya ka samadhan sirf samasya ko khatm karkar hi nahi balki us samasya se khudko bachakar bhi nikala jaa sakta hai...

ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-matlab...!!!hum samjhe nahi..???

MAI-DRISHTI VARDHANAM

apne apne BRAIN, BODY aur BLOOD ko jodte hue is SPELL ko uccharit karo,pata chal jaayega...

meri baat sun ek pal ke liye ek dusre ko dekh wo dono wahin neeche baith gaye aur kiya apne apne CEREBRATION ko pause...

jab ARROW aur CARAPACE ke kings apne apne logon ke PLANET shifting par kaam kar rahe the tab mere kahe anusaar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER, dono hi apne AMPLIFICATION ke teeno active chakron ko steady karne me lage hue the..

waise toh dono hi kaafi hunarmand the,par maine jab unke BRAIN, BODY aur BLOOD ko AMPLIFY kiya tha toh saath hi unke seekhne ke process ko bhi thoda trigger kar diya tha jiski wajah se in dono ne 3 din ke andar hi apne teeno AMPLIFICATION ko sthir kar liya tha..

aur yahi wajah thi ki abhi jab dono ne apne apne CEREBRATION ko pause kiya toh uske kuch hi palon baad un dono ke teeno AMPLIFICATION chakra jud chuke the aur aisa hote hi.....


DRISHTI VARDHANAM....

ENHANCE THE VISION....


AADHESHAM mode ke antargat un dono ke mooh se ek saath ye baat uccharit hui jiske baad....

un dono ke aankhon se hota hua ek ray unki puri body me failne laga....

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jinki aankhen filhal band thi,un dono ne bhi apni aankhon se hote hue apne pure sharir me ek thandak feel ki thi...

aur kuch der baad jab unhe wo thandak feel honi band hui toh dono ne hi apni apni aankhen khol di aur aisa karte hi...


ACCHUTA-iski maa kaa,uski maa,sabki maa....mujhe toh sab clear dikh raha hai...


aankhen kholte hue ACCHUTA ne dekha ki ab usse andhere me bhi sab kuch clearly dikhne laga tha wahin SLUNDER bhi ab is andhere me clearly dekh paa raha tha..


MAI-tum dono ki bodies me jo chill tumne feel kiya tha,wo ek guard tha jiski wajah se ab tumhe yahan ke macchar pareshan nahi karenge...

meri baat sun un dono ka dhyan bhi apni body par gaya jispar ab wakayi me koi macchar nahi kaat raha tha...


SLUNDER-thank tou RAAZ.....

ACCHUTA-haan bhai,bohot bohot thank you...agar in maccharon ne mujhe yunhi kaatna jaari rakha hota toh mai pehla aisa banda hota jisne maccharon ke kaatne se pareshan hokar suicide kiya hota...

MAI-chalo, city ghum kar aate hain..


apni baat bol mai utha aur bahar ki taraf badh chala wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi mere piche piche bahar aa gaye..

aage badhte hue jab hum teeno BRAWNY ko alloted quarter ke baaju se nikle toh hume andar se halke halke rone ki awaazen sunayi di jo ki BRAWNY aur uske parents ki thi...


SLUNDER-bechara BRAWNY aur uske parents...wo bhi royal bloods hain...pata nahi kaise yahan survive karenge...???


SLUNDER ki baat sun mai uski taraf palta aur jab aisa hua toh uski haalat kharab ho gayi..usse laga ki usne kuch aisa bol diya hai jo usse nahi bolna chahiye tha...


MAI-humdardi se sirf bheek milti hai aur CHOSENS bhikariyon ki jagah nahi hai...

ye ek jungle hai..and every one who lives here,has to fight to survive here...

rone do usse...USKA FRUSTRATE HONA BOHOT ZAROORI HAI...


apni baat keh mai aage badh gaya wahin meri baat ka matlab naa samajh ek pal ke liye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne ek dusre ko dekha aur fir dimag ko jhatak mere piche hi liye...





PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE




WHAT....!!!! ITNI BADI BAAT AUR TUM YE HUME AB BATA RAHI HO...AUR ITNI DER TAK KAHAN THI TUM...???KYA CLASS ITNI LATE TAK CHALI....!!!!


sidhe shaam ke waqt pahunchi thi ALFREEN apne ABODE aur wapas aakar jaise hi usne MARIA aur FLORIN ko bataya ki RAAZ wapas aa chuka hai,toh laga un dono ko jhatka aur ek ke baad kayi sawal kar daale MARIA ne usse....


ALFREEN-mom itne dino se is jagah ko dekhne ka itna zyada man tha ki hum teeno INSTITUTION se nikalte hi sidhe kuch jagahon ko checkout karne ke liye nikal gaye the...

wahan waqt ka pata hi nahi chala aur isiliye aane me thodi der ho gayi..

pata hai pops,mom,ye jagah hamare imagination se bhi zyada cool hai....

hum bas teen hi jagah gaye the..ek tha ROYAL CLUB..it was like a KING'S PALACE with a modern touch..

dusra tha VENOM naam ka ek pub and that place was awesome...pata hai pops,us pub me pure universe ke har planet ke best music's play hote hain....

and lastly,hum gaye ek ILLUSIONARY OCEANERIUM me and guys,u have too see it..mai bataungi toh maza nahi aayega,aap sab khud hi check out kijiyega....


jahan ALFREEN yahan ke happening places ke baare me bata rahe the,wahin MARIA aur FLORIN ka dhyan RAAZ par hi atak gaya tha....

un dono ke andar usse dekhne bhar ki tez iccha jaagi hui thi aur isiliye....


FLORIN-AL.....RAAZ kis catagory me hai..???

ALFREEN-WEAKLINGS me....


ALFREEN aage kuch kehti,usse pehle hi FLORIN ne apni baat keh di thi...

wahin puche gaye sawal ka jawab dene ke baad ALFREEN ko bhi samajh aa gaya tha ki uske mom dad ne RAAZ ke return hone waale baat ke aage ki koi baat par dhyan nahi diya hai...

saath hi usse ye bhi realize hua ki usse pehle INSTITUTION se aakar ye khabar apni mom dad ko deni thi aur fir ghumne jaana tha par ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya...

wahin ALFREEN ki baat sun...


MARIA- ELUSORY....kya tumhe WEAKLING catagory ke SAVENTS ke alloted quarters kahan hai,ye pata hai...???

ELUSORY-yes MISTRESS...

MARIA-then lets go there...


MARIA aur FLORIN dono bahar jaane ke liye uthe aur hall se hote hue bahar lawn ki taraf chal diye...

lawn me unki CHARIOT khadi thi jispar wo teeno baithne hi waale the ki tabhi....


HAIN...!!!AAP TEENO HUMARE BINA HI CITY EXPLORE KARNE JAA RAHE HAIN....


un teeno ke piche se aayi ye awaaz jo ki MAHI ki thi..awaaz sun jab MARIA, FLORIN aur ALFREEN palte toh dekha ki MAHI apne kamar par dono haath tikaye unhe ghoor rahi thi aur uske saath khadi thi MABEL aur uske parents jinhe dekh ye teeno unki taraf badhe aur...


MARIA-tumne aisa kaise soch liya ki tum sabke bina hum city explore karenge...

MABEL-toh fir aap teeno CHARIOTS me baithkar kya apne hi ghar ke rounds maarne waale the..

MARIA-chup badmash...actually beta hum RAAZ se milne jaa rahe the...


RAAZ ka naam sunte hi MAHI ka ghurna bhi band ho gaya tha...usse bhi realize ho gaya tha ki jab tak uncle aunty RAAZ se mil nahi lete,tab tak unhe chain nahi aayega...

wahin mr and mrs FELLAR ke liye ye naam naya tha aur isiliye...


FELLAR-RAAZ!!!ye kaun hai..???


FELLAR ke sawal par FLORIN unhe RAAZ ke baare me sab batane lage jisse sun...


FELLAR-oh.. poor child...chaliye fir,hum bhi mil lete hain RAAZ se...

MAHI-haan uncle,hum sab chalte hain...


FELLAR aur MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA ek dusre ko dekhne lage...

reason....

bhale hi wo RAAZ se milne ke liye excited the,par wo jaante the ki RAAZ kaisa hai...???

usse kabhi dusro ki feelings se matlab nahi raha tha aur naahi zyada logon ko apne aas paas dekh wo kabhi comfortable feel karta tha...

toh aise me sabka uske saamne jaana,ye koi acha idea nahi tha..pata nahi RAAZ un sabko dekhkar kaise react karta aur agar usne apne aadat ke anusar kuch ulta sidha bol diya toh unki MR & MRS FELLAR ke saamne beizatti ho jaani thi...

FLORIN aur MARIA ki ye soch koi aur bhaampe naa bhaampe par MAHI bhaamp chuki thi aur isiliye...


MAHI-zyada mat sochiye uncle aunty..kuch nahi hoga...aur waise bhi ab aapka RAAZ wo purana RAAZ nahi raha..kaafi badal gaya hai...

appearence se bhi aur aadaton se bhi..pata hai,jo ladka kabhi kisi ek bande se bhi baat karne me uneasy
feel karta tha,aaj usne pure PHASE ke saamne ek choti si specch de di thi...


MAHI ki baat sun hairani dikhne lagi FLORIN aur MARIA ke chehre par..


wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MAHI-hairani bacha kar rakhiye.. kyunki asli hairani aap dono ko tab hogi jab wo aapke saamne aayega..pehchaan nahi paayenge aap usse...


MARIA-matlab...

MAHI-khud dekh lijiyega...ab chalen...


sir haan me hilate hue MARIA aur FLORIN wapas palte aur ALFREEN ke saath apne CHARIOT me jaakar baith gaye...

wahin baaki sab bhi apne apne CHARIOT me baith gaye jiske baad teeno ELUSORIES ne unke chariot ke navigation system me WEAKLING CATAGORY ka destination code daal diya aur aisa hote hi teeno CHARIOTS apni manzil ki taraf badh gaye...




BACK TO RAAZ:-




BHAI,HUM YAHAN KYUN AAYE HAIN...???


halki jhijhak ke saath pucha ye sawal ACCHUTA ne muhse jispar...


MAI-sabr ek aisi medicine hai jisse zinda rehne me asaani hoti hai..


ek baar ACCHUTA ki taraf nazar ghuma maine ye baat kahi aur uske baad wapas saamne us bade se gate ki taraf dekhne laga jiske bahar hum khade the...

wahin meri baat sunkar jahan SLUNDER ACCHUTA ko dekhkar hasne laga wahin ACCHUTA ka mooh sirf band hi nahi hua balki seal ho gaya...

khair,jiske liye mai yahan khada tha,wo pal aa chuka tha aur isiliye...

humse kuch door par laga wo automatic gate bin awaaz ke khulne laga aur jab wo pura khula toh...

ek saath teen teen chariot us gate se hote hue baahar nikle jinke andar FLORIN & party baithe hue the...

wahin jo chariot hamari taraf thi,wo MAHI ki thi aur isiliye sabse pehle mujhpar ussiki nazar padi thi aur aisa hote hi...


MAHI-UNCLE,AUNTY,wo dekhiye RAAZ...


meri taraf point karte hue halki chilla si uthi MAHI jiske baad...


FLORIN-stop....


CHARIOTS voice command bhi follow karte the aur isiliye FLORIN ke stop bolte hi unki CHARIOT rook gayi wahin unke baad baaki dono CHARIOTS bhi rook gaye...

FLORIN aur MARIA,dono ne hi mujhe ab tak dekha nahi tha..unhone toh bas MAHI ki baat sunte hi CHARIOT rukwa di thi par CHARIOT ke rookte hi jab wo dono usse utre toh har taraf dekhne lage..

unhe unse kuch door teen ladke zaroor dikhe par unme se koi bhi unhe RAAZ nahi laga tha aur isiliye....


FLORIN-beta MAHI..kahan hai RAAZ...???

MAI-mai yahan hun....


isse pehle ki MAHI meri taraf point kare,meri awaaz FLORIN aur MARIA ke kaano me gunj uthi jiske baad aankhon me avishwas liye wo dono meri taraf dekhne lage..

wahin apni baat keh mai unki taraf badh gaya aur thik unke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya...

mai bilkul un dono ke saamne khada tha aur wo dono aankhen phaade mujhe dekh rahe the aur fir..


MAI-kehte hain ki waqt ke saath sharir badal sakta hai,aakar badal sakta hai, chehra bhi badal sakta hai par aakhen nahi badalti...

meri aankhon me dekhiye,mere RAAZ hone ka saboot mil jaayega...


meri baat sun un dono ki nazar turant meri aankhon ki taraf gayi aur jab aisa hua toh....

mere wajud ke pura hone se pehle waale appearance me sirf meri aankhen hi aisi thi jo dekhne layak thi..

jab mai bohot chota tha,chal nahi sakta tha tab MARIA bohot baar kaafi der tak mujhe godh me liye meri aankhkon me dekhti rehti thi..

kabhi kabhi FLORIN bhi aisa karte the aur yahi wajah thi ki meri aankhon me dekhte hi wo dono mujhe pehchaan gaye aur aisa hote hi...

RAAZ....

FLORIN ke mooh se nikli thi ye awaaz jo halki bhaari bhi ho gayi thi..

aankhen nam MARIA ki bhi thi..wo dono hi mujhe gale lagana chahte the par mere swabhav ko yaad kar hichkicha rahe the par tabhi laga un dono ko aur unke saath thoda piche khadi ALFREEN aur MAHI ko ek tez jhatka...

reason...

chehre par halki muskurahat ke saath aage badh mai FLORIN ke gale lag gaya...

mere aisa karte hi pehle toh FLORIN ekdum jadh se ho gaye par fir unhone bhi mere ird gird apni baahein lapet li..

kaafi chowde the mere shoulder aur uske upar meri height joki FLORIN se zyada hi thi isiliye unke dono haath mere shoulders ke bas three fourth area ko hi cover kar paa rahe the...

kuch der FLORIN se gale lage rehne ke baad mai unse alag hokar MARIA ke gale lag gaya....

mujhse gale lagte hi ek baar firse MARIA aankhon se bhi aansu nikalne lage the..

wahin in sabse alag MAHI aur ALFREEN jo is scene ko aankhen faade dekh rahe the,wo,.....


ALFREEN-yaar,ye RAAZ nahi ho sakta..zaroor ye koi aur hi banda hai... kyunki shakal badal sakti hai,par fitrat nahi...

MAHI-agar hum apne planet me hote toh mai bhi yahi bolti..par mat bhool ki hum CHOSENS me hain aur isse SOVEREIGN'S lekar aaye hain...aur wo dokha nahi khaa sakte...

apni apni baat keh wo dono bhi hamare paas aa gaye aur ab tak gale lagne ka daur bhi tham chuka tha aur isiliye...


MAHI-tum yahan gate bahar kya kar rahe the...???

MAI-aap dono se milne hi aaya tha mai yahan..??par WEAKLINGS ko aapke colony me ghusna allowed nahi hai..

par mujhe laga tha ki city dekhne aap log nikloge hi, isiliye yahin wait kar raha tha...


MARIA ko dekhkar ye baat kahi maine jiske baad un dono ka dhyan mere pehne kapde par gaya jo ki WEAKLINGS ka uniform hi tha..


MARIA-ye kaise kapde pehne hue hain tumne...???

MAI-WEAKLINGS ko extra kapde nahi diye jaate...bas 2 uniforms hote hain,that sit...


meri baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN ko bohot bura laga aur isiliye...


MARIA-chalo fir,sabse pehle tunhare liye shopping karenge...


MARIA ki baat sun mere chehre par ek baar fir se smile aa gayi aur...


MAI-hum CHOSENS ke PHASE 2 me hain..yahan yunhi kuch nahi milta...

yahan har cheez haasil karni padti hai aur filhal mai extra kapde deserve nahi karta..but its just a matter of time...bohot jald ye equation badal jaayega...

tab tak mai aise hi rehna chahta hun...


MARIA aur FLORIN jaante the ki mai maanunga nahi isiliye unhone is baare me aur kuch nahi kaha..

par meri baat sun MAHI khudko bolne se nahi rok paayi aur...


MAHI-oho..matlab is baar tum bhi humare saath competition me part lene waale ho...

MAI-tumhara competition mujhse nahi,in dono se hoga...mera COMPETITION kisi aur se hai...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki taraf ishara karte hue maine kaha jispar...


MAHI-kisi aur se...???kisse...

MAI-jis competition ka hissa tum hone hi nahi waali,uske baare me jaan kar kya faayda...

MABEL-ye toh bata hi sakte ho ki tumhare appearence me itna change kaise aa gaya..???


MABEL jisne subah jab se mujhe dekha tha,tab se hi mere is badle hue appearence ke baare me puchna chahti thi,aaakhir usne puch hi liya jispar maine usse aur baaki sabko jo kahani SOVEREIGN'S ne MARILIZA ko mere gayab hone ki batayi thi,wo bata di aur saath hi bataya ki ussi wajah se mere appearence me change aaya hai...

baaaton ke dauran meri nazar ALFREEN par gayi jo mujhe hi ghoor rahi thi par jaise hi meri nazar uspar padi,usne apni nazarein ghuma li...

khair,saari baat batane ke baad....


MAI-acha uncle,aunty, I'll take your leave now..kuch kaam hai mujhe...

mere FLORIN aur MARIA ko uncle aur aunty bulane par wo dono bohot khush ho gaye aur wo isiliye kyunki ye do shabd rishte se baandhne waale the..wo rishte jinke naam se hi mujhe hamesha allergy rahi thi...


MARIA-thik hai..par promise karo ki tum ghar aaoge...

MAI-promise...

FLORIN-smile tumhare chehre par bohot achi lagti hai beta...hamesha aise hi muskurate raho...

MAI-aisa mat boliye uncle...kabhi kabhi kisi ek ki khushi kisi dusre ki taklif ban jaati hai...

MARIA-jisse taklif hogi,wo apna dekh lega..tum bas muskurate raho...


MARIA ki baat sun mai ek baar firse muskura diya aur fir un dono se bye bol ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,jo bilkul chupchaap ab tak ka mere conversation ko sun rahe the,unhe lekar nikal pada...

MARIA ki aakhri me kahi baat,"JISSE TAKLIF HOGI,WO APNA DEKH LEGA..TUM BAS MUSKURATE RAHO...."

is line ko yaad kar maine apna sir shake kiya aur....


MAI-

sharafat bhare alfaaz,
BADSULOOKH ho gaye....

pehle sirf naadan the log,
par waqt ke saath,

BEWAKOOF ho gaye...









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....









AAPKA APNA V...J......
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