Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ALFREEN, FLORIN AUR MARIA KE BODIES SE EK INVISIBLE RAY NIKAL FORBIDDEN FOREST KE ANDAR CHALI JAATI HAI WAHIN ANNJAYA PLANET ME EK BAAR FIRSE RAAZ BEHOSH HO CHUKA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-44



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS




2 MONTHS LATER:-




PRATIBANDHANA

BIND THE POWERS



ek saath puri class ke is spell ko uccharit karne ke kuch der baad hi MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN aur VALDIS ko chhod sabhi SAVENTS ki aankhen wapas khul chuki thi...

aur aankh khulte hi un sabhi SAVENTS ki nazar pichle 2 mahino ko tarah MAHI par aakar rook gayi thi....

reason...

behad hi gehri paused CEREBRATION me doobe ye chaaron SAVENTS apne SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION ko badhane ki kosish me lage hue the....

par is process ka asar in chaaron ke liye ab same nahi raha tha.

jahan MABEL, ALFREEN aur VALDIS ko apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ke liye bas us asahaniya dard ki chunouti ko sehna tha jo unhe is process ke dauran hota tha wahin MAHI ki chunouti ka sthar ek level aur badh chuka tha...

aapko yaad hoga ko VOILET WHIZZ ne MAHI ko bataya tha ki 5 percent soul AMPLIFICATION ke baad time addition toh band ho jaata hai par pain ke saath saath kuch aur bhi hai jisse SAVENT ko handle karna padhta hai..

aur is waqt MAHI ussi extra challenge ko jo ki wakayi behad mushkil tha,handle kar rahi thi aur us challenge se hone waale prabhav ko hi wo saare SAVENTS jinki aankhen khul chuki thi,dekh rahe the....

is waqt MAHI ka pura sharir vibrate kar raha tha..itna hi nahi,uske sharir ke aage chaaron taraf har thodi der me kuch naa kuch naya banta chala jaa raha tha...

ab aisa kya ban raha hai and most importantly kyun ban raha hai,aayiye jaan lete hai par usse pehle ye jaan lijiye ki 5 percent AMPLIFICATION ke baad ek SAVENT ke saath AMPLIFICATION process ke dauran aakhir hota kya hai...???

aap logon ne aksar ye baat suni hogi ki kabhi kisike dil ke saath nahi khelna chahiye...

par dil se khela khel jitna bhi ghaatak kyun naa ho,agar buddhi sthir rahe toh dil har zakhm ko jhel hi leta hai aur isiliye is khel se upar bhi ek khel hai,ek zakhm hai,ek asar hai jo bohot zyada important hai aur wo ye ki kabhi kisiki AATMA ke saath,uske SOUL ke saath nahi khelna chahiye...

kyunki aisa karne ka natija soch se pare ho sakta hai....

par 5 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION waale SAVENT ke saath yahi khel khela jaata hai...aur sabse badi aur ajeeb baat,ye khel khud us SAVENT ka SOUL uske saath khelta hai....

5 percent soul amplified SAVENT jab apne SOUL ko aur AMPLIFY karne ki koshish karta hai,tab usse ek hi waqt par is process me hone waale aseemit dard ke saath saath ek bhaavnatmak jung bhi ladni padti hai...

wo jung jiski roop rekha khud uska SOUL uske khilaf taiyar karta hai....

jaise ki is waqt MAHI jiski CEREBRATION process band hai,uske antarman me is waqt uski earth ki life ki kuch jhalkiyan chal rahe hai par ek alag andaz me...


wo grizzly bear toh yaad hi hoga aap sabko jisse kuch students ko bachane ke liye MAHI ne maara tha....

apne SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION ko shuru karne ke baad MAHI ke SOUL ne sabse pehle uske saamne ussi jhalki ko paida kiya tha jisme MAHI ne us grizzly bear ko maara tha...

par ek alag andaz me..aur wo aise ki us jhalki me MAHI ko sirf wo bear marte hue hi nahi dikha tha,balki MAHI ne marte hue us bear ke dard ko,uski tadap ko bhi mehsoos kiya tha...

jaisa ki har jeevit praani me SOUL hoti hai,toh MAHI ne us grizzly bear ke soul tak ko uske marne ke baad uske jism se nikal hawa me gayab hote dekha tha...

aur aisa karte waqt MAHI ka sharir jo ko us jhalki ki wajah se hi vibrate ho raha tha,uske chaaron taraf laal rang ka dhuan,jo ki us grizzly bear ke khun kaa pratik tha,ghira hua tha...

us grizzly bear ki tadap ko MAHI apne andar tak mehsoos kar paa rahi thi aur issi wajah se uske andar ek alag hi taklif ne janm le liya tha...

par in 2 mahino se is kriya ko lagatar dohraane ki wajah se MAHI pehle ke mukalble thodi sayammit thi warna shuruat ke wo kuch din jab MAHI ne apne SOUL ke 6 percent AMPLIFICATION ko shuru kiya tha,us waqt uske SOUL dwara dikhayi jhalkiyon ki wajah se wo din bhar depressed rehti thi...

par VIOLET aur baaki WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ke samjhane aur housla dene ke baad MAHI ne khud ko thik aur mentally strong banana shuru kar diya tha...


khair, pehli jhalki ko MAHI ne bina apne CEREBRATION process ko wapas shuru hone diye safalta purvak dekh liya jiske baad...

aaj ki dusri jhalki MAHI ke SOUL ne uske saamne prakat ki par ye jhalki thodi alag thi..

aur wo isiliye kyunki is jhalki me MAHI thi hi nahi par haan,ye jhalki bhi ussi TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST ki thi jahan MAHI rehti thi...

is jhalki me ek tendua ek mote se rabbit ke piche uska shikar karne ke liye doud raha tha...

par kamal ki baat ye thi ki MAHI us rabbit ki ghabrahat ko,uski uttejana ko,uske dar ko feel kar paa rahi thi...

usse aisa lag raha tha maano wo tendua us rabbit ke nahi balki uske piche bhaag raha hai aur wo apni jaan bachane ke liye zigzag hote hue bhaag rahi hai aur tabhi....

us tenduye ne us rabbit ko daboch lliya aur aisa hote hi....

MAHI ko apne gardan par tezdhaar daanth ke gadne ka ehsaas hua aur aisa hoti hi gardan se hote hue uske pure sharir me ek dard ki ek tivr leher doud gayi...

wahin baahar is waqt MAHI ke gale me ek ajeeb si thirkan hui jiske baad uske chaaron taraf bane ek gaadhe safed dhuen ka ghera chhatne laga....ye dhuan rabit ka body colour tha jo dheere dheere kam hota jaa raha tha...

SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION me waise bhi bohot dard hota hai, uske upar ek naya dard bardaasht ke baahar ki baat thi aur tabhi....


AHHHH.....AHHHH.....AHHHHH....


ek tez karaah ke saath CEREBRATION process shuru ho gaya par MAHI ka nahi,balki MABEL, ALFREEN aur VALDIS ka..

teeno ki hi aankhen khul chuki thi jiske turant baad un teeno ki bhi nazar baaki SAVENTS ki tarah sidhe MAHI ki taraf hi ghumi jo abhi bhi apne CEREBRATION process ko kisi tarah paused rakhe hue thi....

us rabbit ki ghabrahat,uske dar aur aakhir me uske marne par hue additional dard ko jhelne ke baad bhi jab MAHI ka CEREBRATION process band hi raha toh MAHI ke saamne ek nayi jhalki prakat hui...

is jhalki me bhi MAHI nahi thi aur ye jhalki bhi MAHI ke forest ka hi tha jisme ek nar cheeta ek maada cheetah ki smell ko sunghta hua ek disha me badhta chala jaa raha tha...

wo kuch door hi aage badha hoga ki tabhi usse apne saamne ek king cobra dikha...

is king cobra ko dekh wo cheetah agressive ho gaya aur uski taraf jhapta..

par king cobra behad satark tha...isse pehle ki uske sharir ke kisi ang par wo cheetah apne daanth gadata,usne us cheeteh ko das liya...

behad zehrila hota hai ek king cobra ka zeher aur isiliye uske dasne ke kuch pal baad hi us zeher ka asar cheeteh par dikhne laga...

us cheeteh ke mooh se halki halki jhaag nikalne lagi thi wahin jis waqt king cobra ne us cheeteh ko dasa tha,us waqt MAHI ko aisa laga jaise us king cobra ne usse dasa hai aur uske asar bhi MAHI ko mehoos hone lage the...

paused CEREBRATION me hone ke bawjud MAHI ko apna dimag ek andhere me jaata hua dikh raha tha wahin MAHI ke honthon ke side se ek halka sa jhaag dikhne laga jisse dekh sabhi SAVENTS dar se gaye the....

ALFREEN turant MAHI ke paas jaane ko hui par tabhi...


VIOLET-no ALFREEN...baitho apni jagah par...


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun ALFREEN kuch kehne ko hui par VIOLET WHIZZ ne haath upar kar usse chup rehne ke liye bola...

VIOLET WHIZZ ke ishare ke baad bebas si hote hue ALFREEN MAHI ki taraf dekhne lagi jiske chaaron taraf is waqt ek kaala ghera bana hua tha...

ye kaala ghera wo zeher tha jiske asar ko MAHI mehsoos kar rahi thi...

vish ke asar se tadapte hue bhi jab MAHI ne apne CEREBRATION process ko paused hi rakha toh....

MAHI ke dil waale area ke upar ek tez prakash hua jisse pura CLASS dhak sa gaya...

sabhi SAVENTS ki aankhen band ho chuki thi...kuch der baad jab wo prakash khatm hua toh sabhi SAVENTS ne apni aankhen kholi aur jab sabki nazar MAHI par gayi toh sab khush ho gaye...

reason...

MAHI ki aankhen khul chuki thi..wo kaala dhuan nadarad tha aur wo jhaag jo uske honthon ke side se nikal raha tha,wo bhi gayab ho chuka tha...


MAHI ki aankh khule dekh ALFREEN uske paas jaane hi waali thi ki tabhi...


VIOLET-congrats MAHI....just in the first PHASE,you become the very first SAVENT to AMPLIFY 6 percent of your SOUL...





PLANET-ANNJAYA


PLACE-THE FROZEN OCEAN




AB YE KYA HAI...?????


aankhen band kiye hue hi maine apni ye baat kahi thi...

reason...

kaafi der tak behosh rehne ke baad abhi abhi mai wapas sense me louta tha...

par sense me aane aur aankh kholne ke beech jo ek nano second ka gap hota hai,utni der me mere brain me naa sirf behsosh hone se pehle ghati saari ghatna guzar gayi,balki usne ye bhi predict kar liya tha ki mai tab tak hi aaram se hun,jab tak meri aankhen nahi khulti ya fir jab tak mai koi moovement nahi karta..

mere aisa karte hi mere saamne fir koi naa koi chunouti khadi ho jaane waali thi...

mujhe ye bhi andaza ho gaya tha ki ye chunoutiyan kabhi khtam nahi hone waali thi jiska matlab tha ki inke hote mai aage bhi kabhi nahi badh sakta tha..

aur iska matlab ye tha ki mujhe jo bhi karna hai,us gap me karna hai jisme mujhe kisi bhi chunouti ka saamna nahi karna padh raha ho...

aur jis state me mai abhi tha,yahi wahi waqt tah,wo gap thi jisme mujhe react karna tha...

in saari baaton ke mere dimag me ghumte hi maine apni aankhen band hi rakhi..

aur sirf mehsoos kiya.maine mehsoos kiya ki mai kisi sakht chiz ke upar leta hua tha..

pehle mujhe laga ki shayad mai ussi surface par leta hun jahan behosh hone se pehle tha par fir mujhe yaad aaya ki behosh hone se pehle maine jo aakhri cheez dekhi thi wo ye thi ki wo surface uske dusre hisse se takrate hi toot gaya tha....

toh ab sawal ye tha ki mai aakhir leta kis solid cheez par tha???

aur jaise hi ye sawal mere dimag me gunja uske agle hi pal mujhe apne sawal ke answer ko jaanane ka tarika mil gaya...

ye sahi tha..jabse mujhe mera pura brain mila tha,tabse har solution mujhe mere sochte hi mil jaata tha...

khair, solution ka link is baat se tha ki lete hue bhi mujhe wo smell aa rahi thi jo is PLANET ki yaa fir ye kahun ki mere blood ki thi jo uska AURA apne me samete ghumta tha...

aur mere blood ki hi tarah mere brain aur mere body ka bhi AURA tha..

mujhe wo baat yaad aayi jo classes ke waqt shuru me hi bata di gayi thi ki brain,body aur blood interconnected hote hain jiska matlab tha ki unke AURA bhi interconnected honge....

aur solution ye tha ki ab bas mujhe inhi teen chizon ko jodna tha..mere aise karte hi mujhe aage kya karna hai,iska pata chal jaana tha...

ye khayal dimag me aate hi maine lete lete hi apni CEREBRATION process ko pause kiya aur


DVIJA KAPILOPA

INTERCONNECT THE AURA


mere dwara uccharit is spell ke agle hi pal mere brain aur body dono ka har hissa tezi se chamakne laga....

wahin kuch seconds lage,par jaise hi is PLANET ne,iske AURA ne is baat ko samjha ki mai kuch karne waala hun toh usne turant mere saamne ek nayi chunouti laane ko koshish ki...

sirf koshish..aur wo isiliye kyunki isse pehle ki ye PLANET ya iska AURA kuch karti,mere spell ne apna kaam kar diya tha...

mere brain aur body se nikalne waali roshni jo ki mera AURA thi,usne is PLANET ke hawa me ghumte hue AURA ke saath khud ko mila liya...

aur jaise hi hua....

KATKATKATKATAT....

mujhe ye pata chal gaya tha ki mai kispar leta hun..darasal mere behosh hokar niche girte hi is PLANET ke ocean ne khudko FREEZE kar liya tha...

aur isiliye mai is waqt us ocean ke frozen state ke upar leta hua tha par ye state ab kuch hi palon ka mehmaan tha..

aur wo isiliye kyunki teeno AURA ke judte hi is ocean ka frozen state tadakne aur pighalne laga..

tadakne ki awaaz ke saath dekhte hi dekhte pure OCEAN me daraare banane lagi aur fir.....

CHAPAAK......

jis surface me mai leta tha,wo toot gayi aur uske agle hi pal mai niche us khoon bhare ocean me gir gaya....

mera kaam ho chuka tha aur isiliye girte hi maine apni aakhen khol li...

laal rang...bas yahi dikh raha tha mujhe apne aankhon ke aage...

is laal rang ke andhere ko apni aankhon ke putiyon me utarta hua mai khud is ocean ke gehrayiyon me utarta chala jaa raha tha....

yahan tak pahunchne ka idea successful raha tha aur ab baari thi aage ke baare me sochne ki par mai aisa kar paata ki tabhi...

mujhe aisa laga maano koi mera gala daba raha hai...

ye koi aur koi nahi balki wo khun tha jiske andar me tha...

mere aaspaas ke khoon ne khud ko sakht kar mere gale ke ird gird fanda banana shuru kiya taaki mera gala ghota jaa sake...

apni saansein roke ab mujhe is nayi problem ko bhi solve karna tha par mai ye bhi jaanta tha ki mere aage khade hue har ek problem ka solution bhi ek hi hai aur wo hai apne blood ko haasil karna aur isiliye maine aage ke baare me sochna shuru kiya aur tabhi mere dimag me kuch lines gunj si gayi...


BLOOD AMPLIFICATION karna hamesha ke liye khud ke upar ek natural shield build karne jaisa hai par is shield ki strength usse banane waale par depend karti hai....


BLOOD AMPLIFICATION ki pehli class me NOX ke dwara boli gayi ye baatein mere dimag me gunji thi jiske baad mujhe aage kya karna hai,ye pata chal chuka tha...

daras mai jinhe ab tak chunoutiyan samajh raha tha,wo asal me mere blood ki shield thi par apne maalik ke naa hone ki wajah se unstable ho gayi thi aur isiliye ek ke baad ek mere aage chunoutiyan banane lagi thi...

aur jaisa ki NOX ne kaha tha ki is shield ki strength isse banane waale par depend karti hai..

ab is jagah ko maine toh banaya nahi tha par ye bani toh mere liye hi thi..iska matlab tha ki ye meri property hai jo tab hi control me aayegi jab meri brain aur body ki sangathith shakti isse zyada hogi...

aur ye khayal aate hi maine apne brain aur body ke AURA jo ki is waqt yahan ke blood ke AURA se judi hui thi,usse yaad kiya aur mere aisa karte hi wo dono bhi is red ocean me samate hue mere andar apni apni jagah par sthaapit ho gaye...

aur tabhi....


STATHADINA SHATIYEM

RELEASE POWER


BOOM.......


aankhen band kar maine is spell ko bola jiske baad mere brain aur body ki shakti ek jhatke me baahar nikal pure planet me bichi is ocean me samati chali gayi aur aisa hote hi jo fanda mere gale me fasa sa lag raha tha,wo chhut gaya...

wahin dhamake ke asar se ek pal ke liye is rakht se bhare samandar me bhi roshni faili jiske baad mujhse lipta blood ek pal ke liye mujhse alag hua...

sirf mere paas ka hi nahi balki jis jagah se hote hue mai dheere dheere neeche jaa raha tha, us puri jagah ka khoon dono taraf se ek second ke liye alag hua aur aisa hote hi mujhe apne se bohot neeche is PLANET ki asli zamin dikhi aur meri aankhen choti hoti hui chali gayi...

reason...us zamin se laga hua maine kuch dekha tha..aur wo kuch maine pehle bhi kabhi dekha hua tha..

wo bhi ek baar nahi kayi baar...aur jab maine us kuch ke baare me socha toh jaisa ki hota aaya hai,ek second se bhi kam time me mujhe mera jawab mil gaya tha...

aur saath hi mujhe apne blood ko haasil karne ka tarika bhi mil gaya tha...

darasal jo chiz jo kuch maine dekha tha,wo thi PLATELETS...BLOOD PLATELETS....

andruni sharir ka wo hissa,wo bhaag jisse blood clott hota hai...

aur ye baat clear hote hi mujhe ye bhi samajh me aa gaya ki is planet par khun faila hua kyun hai..???

darasal PLATELETS ka kaam hota hai behte hue khun ko us kate hue bhaag ke paas pahunchkar rokna...

par kyunki is khoon ka koi maalik nahi hai, isiliye iske PLATELETS kahin jaa hi nahi sakte...unke paas wo adhaar nahi hai jiski wajah se ye kaam karte hain...

par ab toh hain...aur yahi toh tha solution...mujhe un PLATELETS ko unka adhaar dena tha yaani mujhe dena tha...

is soch ke mere dimah me gunjte hi maine apni body ko us disha ki taraf zor se push kiya jahan wo platelets thi aur mere aisa karte hi...


ZOOM......


ek teer ki tarah khoon ko cheerte hue meri body aage badhti chali gayi aur dekhte hi dekhte mai is PLANET ke tal se halka upar aakar rook gaya...

ab mujhe do chizen karni thi aur wo bhi ek saath..

pehli...mujhe ek baar firse jahan mai khada tha,uske aaspaas ka view clear karna tha aur dusra,apne body ke kisi bhi bhaag par halka cut karna tha...

ab ek LONSDALEITE hexagon diamond jaise sakth sharir me cut toh nearly impossible tha par ye impossible dusron ke liye tha..

mera brain,meri body mere gulaam the..unhe wahi karna hoga ho mai chahunga aur isiliye...

pehle maine ek baar firse apne brain aur body ke power ko release kiya par sirf aage ki taraf....

mere aise karte hi mere aage ka pura blood thodi door feka gaya...

par fir wo blood wapas meri taraf aane laga..waqt kam tha mere paas aur isiliye...


KHANDITA....

CUT.....


apne haath ko chhu maine is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske agle hi pal mere haath me ek gehra cut van gaya.....

aisa hote hi maineapna haath piche kar diya jahan ke hisse ka blood ab bhi wahin tha..

haath us blood ke dariya me ghusate hi mere us gehre cut me khoon bhar gaya...

ab tak mere saamne ke hisse waala blood ka area mere kaafi paas aa chuka tha.. kuch hi seconds me mai wapas us khoon ke dariye me doob jaane waala tha aur isiliye maine turant neech jhukte hue mere us cut waale haath ko wahan ke tal ke upar biche PLATELETS se chhua diya aur aisa hote hi.....


SWOOSH...........

maano apni saans kheenchi ho PLATELETS ne kuch aisi awaaz aayi us pure tal waale area se aur fir agle hi pal....

mujhe aisa laga maano koi behad shaktishaali force kheenchata hua neeche jahan mai tha,wahan aa raha hai....

aur jab maine neeche ki taraf dekha toh paaya ki mera andaza galat nahi tha...

darasal un PLATELETS me se tez roshni nikal rahi thi aur us roshni ke beech is pure planet me biche us khoon ke ocean ko wo PLATELETS khudme sokhte chale jaa rahe the...

pura PLANET bana hi tha us khoon se par dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi minute me wo pura blood un PLATELETS me sama gaya...

aisa hone ke baad RENAISS aur ANGIS ki hi tarah ANNJAYA PLANET bhi apne asli roop me aa chuka tha...

ek laal sakth dead planet jispar ab bhi mere khoon ke itne saalon tak hone ki wajah se halki halki nami bani hui thi par wo bhi tezi se sookhti chali jaa rahi thi...

mai chaaron taraf dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi....


AAPKO JO BHI DARD HUA,USKE LIYE...

MAI-maaf kar dijiye....


mere saamne mera hi blood ek laal aakruti ka roop liye khada mujhse maafi maange ko hua par maine uski baat ko pehle pura kiya aur uske baad...


MAI-maafi bhi tab maango jab mai tumhe uski ijaazat dun...


meri baat sun jab wo aakruti chup hi rahi toh....


MAI-mai tumhe apnata hun....


mere aisa kehte hi wo laal aakruti ek laal gole me parivartit ho gayi aur fir aage badhti hui wo mere us haath par jahan cut tha,usme se hoti hui mere andar sama gayi....

aisa hote hi mujhe mere andar ek behad tez pravah mehsoos hua...

mere pure sharir ke upar ek natural shield jo ki mere blood ki den thi,ban gayi...

wahin wo cut jo ab tak gehre gadhe hone ke baad bhi sukha hua tha, uske andar ab khun tha jo baahar aane ko hua par aisa hota,usse pehle hi wo cut,wo ghaav bhar chuka tha...

issike saath mera ye teesra padhav bhi pura hua...aur ab bacha tha mera aakhri par sabse mahatvpurn bhaag...

mera SOUL....


zara sochiye..jab MAHI ko uske already present SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ke liye kya kya dekhna pada, kya kuch sehna pada,toh fir mai RAAZ jiske ird gird ye puri kahani hai, usse apne SOUL ko haasil karne ke liye, SOUL ke saath us chiz ko haasil karne ke liye jisko paane ki chaah liye VIKRAM ne khudke saath pure PLANET me base logon ki jaan gawa di thi, kaisi pariskha deni hogi...

par naa toh mujhe VIKRAM se koi matlab tha,aur naahi un karodon logon se koi hamdardi jo us CHIZ ke bhet chadhe the...

mujhe bas us CHIZ se matlab tha..usse haasil kar bas apni jeet se matlab tha...

kyunki yahi mera sach hai...



wo sach jo meri soch ko KAWACH DETA HAI....

ye RAAZ wo RAAZ hai,jisse jaan kar naa maanane waale ki ye RAAZ jaan LE LETA HAI....








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....








AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Fantastic update bro
 

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muje aaj tak samaj nahi aya is story ko likhne wale sach much insaan hi hai ya koi dev maanav

me kasam khake kehta hun ki apki ye talant sirf xf ke liye seemit nahi hona hai

or age badna hai or badte rehana hai


mera ek question hai apse

RAAZ FLORIN OR MARIA KA NAA PAIDA HONEWALA BACHA HAI

HAINA THO....

SHRI KRISHN KE GEETA KE ANUSAAR JO PAIDA HOTA HAI WO MARTA HAI OR BACHTA HAI SIRF AATMA

KYUNKI ATMAA KA KOI MRITYU NAHI OR NAAHI PAIDA HOTI HAI

WO THO BAS SHARIR BADALTI HAI

ye maine kahi pada tha exactly nahi pata kaha pada per pada jaroor tha

mera prashn ye hai aapse ki aapne kaha ki raaz ki mrityu hoga jisse mahi thode samay ke liye taalne waali hai

LAKIN JO PAIDA HI NAHI HUA WO KAISE MAR SAKTA HAI
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE SOUL KO EK BAAR FIRSE AMPLIFY KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ APNE BLOOD KO BHI HAASIL KAR LETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-45



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS





YE ABHI KYA HUA THA MERE SAATH....???? MUJHE AISA KYUN LAGA JAISE KUCH THA YAHAN....

AUR WO BHI BOHOT POWERFUL...

MUJHE AISA KYUN LAGA JAISE KISI NE MERE DIMAG ME PRAVESH KARNE KI KOSHISH KI THI....

MUJHE ITNA NEGETIVE,ITNA GHUTAN KYUN FEEL HO RAHA HAI....


lambi lambi saans leti hui MAHI,chehre par bechaini liye idhar udhar yun dekh rahi thi maano kisi ko talash kar rahi ho...


midnight ka waqt hai.... MAHI jo kuch der pehle gehri neend me thi,usse achanak aisa feel hua maano koi uske pure sharir ko scan kar raha hai...

par kyunki MAHI neend me thi,toh uske dimag ne is ehsaas ko sirf sapne ka ek bhaag samjha....

par tabhi....

MAHI ke brain ko aisa laga jaise koi usme ghusne ki koshish kar raha hai...

maano koi messege hai jo wo uske through MAHI ko dena chahta ho...

itna hi nahi,jaise hi us KOI ne MAHI ke brain me ghusne ki kohish ki toh soyi hui MAHI ko khudme ek ajeeb si ghutan mehsoos hui...

usse aisa laga jaise kisi ne uske astitv ko,uski personality ko,uske ATTITUDE ko change karne ki koshish ki ho...

aur is ajeeb ehsaas ke feel hote hi MAHI ki aankhen khul gayi....

feel hue chizon ko yaad kar ye saare sawal khud se hi puch rahi thi MAHI....

par in saare chizon me sabse ajeeb baat ye thi ki MAHI ki aankh khulte hi baaki saari feelings jo usse feel ho rahi thi,wo toh gayab ho gayi thi par jaate jaate bhi ek aisa ehsaas tha jo ab bhi usse halka sa chipka hua tha...

wahi ehsaas jisse ye puri kahani hai aur jisse MAHI ke andar badalne ki koshish abhi abhi hui thi...

ATTITUDE CHANGE.....

MAHI ko ab bhi thoda thoda aisa feel ho raha tha maano uska chizon ko dekhne ka nazariya, situations ko handle karne ke tarike ko koi change karne ki koshish kar raha ho....


MAHI-par ye kaise mumkin hai...!!!!!


khudse hi is sawal ko pucha MAHI ne aur uske aisa karne ke agle hi pal uske dimag me VIOLET WHIZZ ki kahi gayi baat gunj si uthi...


JUST DONT CHANGE YOUR ATTITUDE AND NOTHING WILL CHANGE YOU....


VIOLET WHIZZ ke ye shabd gunj se uthe MAHI ke dimag me jiske baad MAHI ke dimag me uske ab tak ke jeeven ke saare important drishya dikhne lage....

uska har faisla,uske har shabd jo kisi situation ke final moments ko define karte the,wo sab usse jaise live dikhne lage the..

itna hi nahi, MAHI ne ye bhi feel kiya ki dikhne waala har scene apne mukaam par aakar MAHI se jaise puch raha tha ki kya aapka liya decision sahi tha,aur is sawal ke baad jab MAHI ka brain apne liye faislon par swikriti dikhata tha toh aisa hote hi scene change ho jaata tha....

kaafi der tak ye sab hota raha aur fir ek dum se sab kuch shaant ho gaya...

sirf scenes hi dikhne band nahi hue the,balki uske saath saath jo ATTITUDE CHANGE waali feeling bhi MAHI ke andar rooki hui thi,wo bhi khatm ho chuki thi...


MAHI-kya us din VIOLET WHIZZ issi situation ke baare me baat kar rahi thi...!!!???

par unhone toh woh baatein PHASE 2 ke liye kahi thi jisme abhi kaafi waqt bacha hai...

fir tha kya ye sab...????

kaafi der tak MAHI apne dimag ke ghode ko daudate hue is 2 plus 2 equals 5 waale naye theory ke baare me sochti rahi par jab kaafi der baad bhi wo kisi natije par pahunch nahi paayi toh apne dimag ko jhatak wo wapas so gayi...






PLANET-ZEAL-THE SOUL


PLACE-ABOVE THE AURA





SHURUAT YAHIN SI HUI THI,
ANJAAM BHI YAHIN SE HOGA...

BADNAAM BHI YAHI SE HUE THE,
DOBARA NAAM BHI YAHIN SE HOGA...



ZEAL PLANET ke atmosphere se ek meter upar khade hokar maine neeche dekhte hue is baat ko kaha tha....

kyunki yahi wo jagah thi jahan se maine drishyam dekhte hue apne safar ki shuruat ki thi...

yahi wo jagah thi jahan mujhse pehle VIKRAM ne us CHIZ ko haasil karne ki koshish me apne saath saath yahan base har bande ki jaan gawa di thi....

aur yahi wo jagah thi jahan ab mai us badnaami ko mitate hue is jagah ke upar ek naya naam likhne waala tha...

RAAZ......


khair,mere thik neeche se shuru hoti thi ZEAL ki wo khatarnaak saltanat jahan har taraf wahi gehra dhuan faila hua tha aur isiliye hi mai is planet ke us dhuen ke daayre ke just upar khada tha kyunki bina is dhuen ke AURA ka intezam kiye mai aage nahi badh sakta tha...


MAI-dushman hadh se zyada taakatwar bhi ho toh khud ke pure wajud ke bharose usse lada jaa sakta hai,ek perfect planning aur ran neeti ke tehet usse haraya jaa sakta hai par agar ladayi khudke hi wajud ko pura karne ki ho toh fir bharosa aur ran neeti,dono bhi aadhe adhure hi bante hain....


RENAISS, ANGIS aur ANNJAYA me mera har pehla prayas, koshish naakamiyab hui thi par wo naakiamiyabi mai yahan afford nahi kar sakta tha kyunki baat yahan mere SOUL ki thi....

wo SOUL jiski shakti brain body aur blood ki joint shakti se bhi zyada hoti hai...

aur wo AURA jo mere pairon ke neeche se hota hua is pure PLANET me faila hua tha,mai usse bin chhue bhi mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

mai mehsoos kar raha tha ki beintihan shakti thi us AURA me...

itni shakti ki mera poora brain aur LONSDALEITE hexagon diamond jitna shaktishaali sharir bhi us AURA ki shakti ko jhelne ke kaabil nahi tha...

jahan kisi bhi natije par pahunchne ke liye mere dimag ko 1 second se bhi kam samay lagta tha,wahin mere is naye challenge se nipatne ke liye mere brain ko saare guna bhaag ke ganit ko lagate hue kaafi samay ho chuka tha...

aur aakhir me mere dimag ne mujhe bas itna bataya ki is aane waali chunouti ka solution sirf tabhi mil sakta hai jab iski taakat ko aur isse milne waale challanges ko ek baar parkha jaaye..

par ab is choti si yukti ko kaam me laane ke liye bhi ek yukti sochni thi aur wo isiliye kyunki agar is AURA ki taakat ko aur isse milne waale challange ko parakhna tha,toh uske liye sabse pehle usse apni existence dikhani thi aur agar mai ye directly karta toh iske pure pure chances the ki meri existence aakhri baar hi exist kar paati...

mujhe yahin nipat jaana tha...

mai ye sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi mere dimag me ek yukti,ek idea koundhi aur isiliye...

maine apni shirt ki pocket me apni ungli fasayi aur....

CHRRRRR.....

ek jhatke ke mere shirt ka woh hissa fath chuka tha...

kapde ke us fate bhaag ko pakde maine ek baar fir aage ke baare me socha aur...

maine us kapde ke bhaag ko neeche chhod diya...

tezi se lehrata hua wo kapde ka hissa niche ki taraf gaya aur.....

usne us dhuen numa AURA ko chhu liya aur aisa hote hi.....

second ke sauwe hisse ke andar hi wo kapde ka hissa jal gaya....

mai is scene ko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...

jis point par wo kapda jala tha,thik ussi point par maine kuch nikalta hua sa mehsoos kiya....

aur tabhi....

SWOOBBBBB.....


us point se ek teer ki shakal liye us hisse ka AURA upar utha aur meri taraf badha...

uske aisa karte hi maine turant apni body ek taraf kar di jisse wo teer mere just baju se hota hua upar chala gaya...

ye sab behad jaldi hua tha par fir bhi jab wo teer mere side se nikal raha tab maine us teer ki energy mehsoos ki thi jisse feel kar mujhe behad hairani hui aur wo isiliye kyunki us teer ki energy itni zyadi thi ki agar uska nishana niche ki taraf hota toh wo teer ek pure planet ko cheerti hui dusri taraf nikal jaati..

ye toh acha hua ki mai bade dhyan se us point ko dekh raha tha jisse mere kapde ne chhua tha aur isiliye hi uske baad hue hamle se khud ko bacha paaya kyunki agar galti se bhi AURA se bana hua wo teer mujhe chhu bhi jaata toh fir pata nahi kya hota....

successfully side hatne ki wajah se maine socha ki mai bach gaya par tabhi...

BOOMM......

mujhe thodi upar ek tez dhamaka hua jisse sun jab maine upar dekha toh...


MAI-lag gayi....


lambi saans chhodte hue maine ye baat kahi...

reason...


jis teer ke bina mujhe chhue upar ki taraf nikalne ki baat par mai relax ho raha tha wo teer upar uththa hua ek point par jaakar fath gaya aur aisa hote hi...

dhamake se hua dhuan...waisa hi dhuan jaise mere pairon ke neeche pure PLANET me bicha hua tha...

par ye upar waala dhuan bas kuch seconds ke liye hi tha...

kyunki kuch der baad us dhuen ne apna roop badla aur is baar usne ek bohot hi bade chaadar ka roop le liya...

itne bade chaadar ka jisse pura aasman hi dhak chuka tha...

is naye roop ko dhar wo dhuan,wo AURA neeche aane laga...speed us chaadar ki zyada nahi thi par kyunki hatne ya bachne ka koi rasta mere paas tha nahi isiliye ab mujhe is jagah ki AURA se bhidna hi tha aur isiliye maine khudko taiyar kar liya...

par tabhi....

mere dimag me ek naye vichar ne janm liya....

maine socha ki chaadar hi kyun...aakhir is AURA ne yahi roop kyun liya...ye sawal mere dinag me ghumte hi mujhe iska jawab bhi mil gaya aur wo ye tha ki is chaadar ka maksad mujhe direct haani pahunchana nahi tha balki mujhe ek machli ki taraf fasakar neeche dhakelte hue yahan ki asli AURA ko touch karana tha...

kyunki isse pata tha ki wo mujhe nuksaan toh pahuncha sakti hai par mera khatma karne ki shakti usme nahi balki mere neeche biche AURA me hai...

jaise hi is chadar numa AURA ki planning mere dimag me gunji toh iska ek temporary jawab bhi mere dimag me aa gaya jo tha ek famous quote ki attack is the best defence...

mujhe filhal jitna zyada waqt mil jaaye,utna acha tha aur iske liye is chadar ke mujhe lapetne se pehle mujhe isse takrana tha aur isiliye...

maine apne sharir ko puri takat se upar ki taraf jhakta diya aur mere aisa karte hi...

SOOBHHH...


mera sharir bhi behad tezi se ek teer ki hi tarah tezi se upar ki taraf utha aur agle hi pal....

mai us chadar se takra chuka tha aur jab aisa hua tab maine ek saath do chizen mehsoos ki....

pehli ye ki bhale hi wo chaadar dhuen ki bani hui thi,par uski parat lachili thi aur saath hi itni strong bhi ki jisse dhakka toh diya jaa sakta hai par us bhedte hue uske paar nikalna impossible hai....

aur dusri chiz mehsoos ki thi mere sharir ne...actually sharir ke andruni bhaag ne...

chadar se takrate hi maine aisa feel kiya jaise mere body ke andar behata khun mere body se chipak gaya hai aur aisa kar mere anduri sharir ka bohot sa hissa khaali ho gaya hai aur un khaali husson me maine ek behad tez jakdan mehsoos ki..

mujhe aisa lagne laga maano mujhe kisine andar se jakad liya hai...

mera sharir pura tan kar akad sa gaya tha aur ussi position me mai us chadar se chipka hua neeche ki taraf girne laga...

in sab negetive chizon me mere liye bas ek achi chiz hui thi aur wo ye ki us chadar ke mujhse chipakne ki wajah se mai bhi uske saath dheere dheere neeche ki taraf aa raha tha jiska matlab tha ki mere paas thoda extra time tha is situation ko handle karne ke liye...

par mujhe situation ko sirf handle hi nahi karna tha balki is PLANET ke pure AURA ko yaa toh khatm karna tha ya apne control me laana tha...

behad tez jakadan ke beech mera diamg tezi se daud raha tha....har beetathe second me mere dimag me hazar se zyada idea aa bhi rahe the aur unme dum naa hone ki wajah se wo sab cancel bhi hote chale jaa rahe the....

daudte daudte mere dimag ka dhyan mere body ki jakdan ki taraf gaya aur tabhi...

meri aankhen khul gayi.....

solution mujhe mil chuka tha aur wo solution is waqt mere body ke andar daud raha tha..

mera BLOOD.....

the purest creation of universe...

aur yahi wajah thi ki mera pura body jakda hua tha par mera blood is body se chipak jaane ke baawjud bhi lagatar mere dhamniyon me bina kisi rookawat ke beh raha tha...

is PLANET ka AURA mera tha par fir bhi ye mujhe khatm karna chah raha tha aur wo isiliye kyunki is waqt mai human form me tha..

the most corrupted form of life... wo form jisse yahan ka AURA bardasht nahi kar sakta tha par wahin ussi form ke andar behte khun ko is AURA ne mehsoos kar liya tha..

sirf mehsoos kiya tha..isne ye nahi pehchaanana tha ki ye khoon bhi issi body ka hissa hai aur ye body us AURA aur uske maalik matlab SOUL kaa bhi maalik hai...

aur yahi tha solution.. AURA ne jisse mehsoos kiya tha,mujhe usse uski pehchaan karani thi...matlab mere blood se aur iska sirf ek hi tarika tha...

aur wo ye ki isse pehle ki mera body neeche faile AURA ko chhue,mere BLOOD ko us AURA aur is planet ke zamin ki satah ko chhuna tha...

sharir ke jakde hone ki wajah se mai hil toh paa raha tha nahi aur isiliye maine apni aankhen band kar apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kiya...

aisa kar maine apne brain ko apne body se joda aur ek baar firse ussi spell ko uccharit kiya jiska istemaal maine ANNJAYA me kiya tha....

KHANDITA...

CUT.....


apne pair ke anguthe ko dhyan me rakh maine is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske baad mere anguthe ke bhaag me ek cut pad gaya aur aisa hote hi usse khoon ko kuch katre nikal neeche ki taraf tapak gaye...

khoon ke tapakte hi mai us kati jagah ko seal karne ke liye spell bolne ko hua par tabhi...

mera wo cut apne aap bhar gaya aur aisa hote mujhe pata chal gaya ki mera socha solution sahi hai..

reason..

jaise hi mere pair ke anguthe se khoon nikla toh mere sir ko dhaka us AURA ne mere khoon ko mehsoos kiya jiske baad uske nikalne waali jagah ko usne khud hi heal kar diya...

wahin jo khoon ki bunde already tapak chuki thi,wo tezi se niche ki taraf girne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte us AURA numa dhuen me gayab ho gayi...

wahin iske agle hi second mera neeche girta hua sharir bhi us AURA ki chapet me aa gaya....

maine khudko is waqt ke liye taiyar kiya hua tha...

jaise hi mai us AURA ki chapet me aaya...meri jakdan 1000 guna aur badh gayi...

mujhe aisa lagne laga maano wo dhuan mujhe squash kar dena chahta ho...

mera pura sharir dabne laga....beintehan dard ke beech mai aankh band kiye apne sharir ki jakdan ko sehne laga...

waise toh is AURA me itni shakti thi ki iske sparsh waale second me hi mujhe ye pichka kar maar dene ki capability rakhta tha par kyunki mujhse ek second pehle mera blood isse hokar niche ki taraf gaya tha isiliye iski shakti mujhpar dheere dheere dabaw bana rahi thi...

wahin in ssabse alag mera blood us dhuen numa AURA ke beech se hota hua neeche ki taraf girta chala gaya aur fir....

mere blood ne is ZEAL PLANET ke satah ko chhua aur aisa hote hi....

ek saath do chizen hui...


pehli ye ki mere sharir ki jakdan kam hone lagi...

dusri ye ki is pure PLANET ke AURA ne khudko sametna shuru kar diya...


aur jaise hi tezi se neeche girte hue mera sharir ne is planet ki satah ko chhua toh....

meri jakdan puri tarah se khatm ho chuki thi aur wo dhuan,wo AURA jo is pure planet par faila hua tha, usne bhi khudko puri tarah se sameth liya tha aur ab wo AURA ek football jitne chote se dhuen ki shakal me mere saamne khadi thi...

mujhe pata tha ki baat wahi shuru karegi aur hua bhi aisa....


AURA-ZEAL ME SWAGAT HAI AAPKA RAAZ...


is awaaz ko sun mai man hi man halka chownka tha aur wo isiliye kyunki mai is awaaz ko jaanta tha...


MAI-WOOGER....tum ho yahan ke AURA..tumne mujhe jakda hua tha....

WOOGER-nahi..mai yahan ka AURA nahi hun...yahan ke AURA ko sametne ke baad usse contain karna zaroori tha aur mai bas wahi kar raha hun....

kyunki iski shakti sirf aapse yaa aapke hisse se hi control ho sakti hai...

MAI-aage kya karna hai...????

WOOGER-piche dekhiye...


WOOGER ke aisa bolte hi mai palta aur dekha ki meri sidh me hi mujhse kuch door par ek nahi balki do do roshni ke gole line me lage chamak rahe the.....

par meri nazar aur mera dhyan un do roshni ke golon par sirf ek pal ke liye hi tik paaya kyunki maine un do roshniyan se thoda piche ek aur roshni ka gola dekha par dekhne se zyada mai us roshni ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha..

mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise wo roshni ka gola mujhse juda hua hai.....

mai us roshni ke gole ko ek tak dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi....


WOOGER-jis roshni ke gole par aapki nazar tiki hai wo roshni ka gola hi aapka SOUL hai....


aage badh un do roshniyon ke baaju me khada dhuen numa WOOGER ne is baat ko kaha jispar..


MAI-aur ye do gole kaise...???

WOOGER-ye do roshni ke gole aapke wo do chunoutiyan hain jinhe paar karne ke baad hi aap apne SOUL ko paa sakte hain..

MAI- chunouti kya hai...???

WOOGER- ye do gole asal me do logon ke jeeven ke,unke karm path ke chune hue kuch aise pal hain jinhe aapko jeena hai...

sirf jeena hi nahi hai balki un palon me jo paristithi aapke saamne aayegi,yaa fir utpann hogi,usse aapko apne hisab se sanchalit karna hai...

aur wahi sanchalan aapki chunouti hai... aapka sanchalan, apke faisle,yahi tay karenge ki jis kaarya ko uske anjaam tak pahunchane ke liye aapki utpatti hui hai,aap uske yogya hain yaa nahi...

agar aap uttirn hue,toh apka SOUL aapka hua.....


MAI-thik hai....waise ye do log hain kaun jinke jeeven aur karmpath ke pal mujhe jeene hain...

WOOGER-ASMODEUS AUR VIKRAM.......








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AAPKA APNA V.....J......
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KE DIMAG ME KOI GHUSNE KO KOSHISH KARTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO ZEAL ME DO NAYI CHUNOUTIYAN MILTI HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-46



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS





KYA HUA MAHI...???TU ITNI KHOYI KHOYI KYUN LAG RAHI HAI....????


subah ka waqt hai..INSTITUTION jaa rahe hain MAHI aur ALFREEN...

jahan ALFREEN lagatar kisi naa kisi topic par kuch naa kuch bole jaa rahi thi wahin MAHI kuch puchne par bas hun,hmm,is tarah ke jawab hi de rahi thi woh bhi kabhi kabhi...

zyadatar toh wo bas saamne dekhte hue khudme khoyi hui aage badh rahi thi aur issi baat ko notice kar ALFREEN ne MAHI ke kandhe ko hilate hue ye sawal kiya tha jispar MAHI jaise kisi tandra se jaaagi aur...


MAHI-haan,kya hua???


ek dum se hosh me aate hue MAHI ne ye sawal kiya jispar...???


ALFREEN-tu bata ki tujhe kya hua hai...??mai kitni der se dekh rahi hun ki kahin khoyi hui si hai...???

MAHI-aisi toh koi baat nahi hai...??mai toh teri baatein hi sun rahi thi...

ALFREEN- MAHI,tu SAVENT bhale hi best haj par jhooth bolne ke maamle me tu worst hai...

isiliye bina baaton ko ghumaye chupchaap bata ki problem kya hai???

MAHI-chupchaap rahungi toh baat kaise karungi....????


ALFREEN ki baat sun mazak me MAHI ne ye kaha jispar...


ALFREEN-very funny..par funny hone ke aur bhi mouke milenge, isiliye filhal tu bas itna bata ki what's fishing..???

kis khayal me khoyi hui thi tu...??? what's disturbing you..???


MAHI ko maalum tha ki ALFREEN maanane waali toh thi nahi isiliye ek lambi saans chhod usne ALFREEN ko kal raat uske saath kya hua tha wo bata diya jisse sun ALFREEN bhi hairan ho gayi....


ALFREEN-you know agar aisa kuch hamare saath yahan aane se pehle hua hota toh mai bas isse ek brain illusion maanti..

ek dream dissorder jo kisike bhi saath ho sakta hai but this place is fucking insane...

yahan anything is possible...aur isiliye mujhe lagta hai ki hume tere kal raat aayi feelings ke base ko dhundna chahiye...

MAHI-aur ye hum karenge kaise.???

ALFREEN-sabse pehle toh hume is baat ke baare me VIOLET WHIZZ ko batana chahiye..i think wo hume proper guide karengi....

MAHI-ye khayal kar raat hi mere mind me aaya tha par somehow i feel ki isse koi faayda nahi hoga..

kyunki jo bhi hua,wo bas ek khayal tha jo mere dimag me aaya aur fir chala gaya...


WHIZZ ko batane ka faada tab hota jab wo situation unki aankhon ke saamne occour ho taaki wo usse sahi se samajh paayen...

ALFREEN-Yhmm..ye bhi hai...

MAHI-and you know what, actually mai WHIZZ ki help lena chahti hi nahi hun...

i want to face every problem all by myself...

mujhe khud apne problems ko handle bhi karna hai,unhe tackle bhi karna hai aur unhe harana bhi hai....


full confidence se kahi thi ye baa MAHI ne jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-wo toh thik hai MAHI par agar koi problem hamare bas ke baahar ki baat ho toh aise situation me help toh leni hi padti hai naa...

MAHI-agar situation,problem hadh se baahar ki hai toh sabse pehle hume usse apni hadh ke andar karna hai yaa fir apni hadh ko badhana hai...

aur issike liye hi toh hum hain yahan..is INSTITUTION me...to achieve the impossible...

ALFREEN-teri aaj ki baatein aisi hain jaise tu kisi competition me participate karne waali hai aur uske liye khud ko motivate kar rahi hai...


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI muskurayi aur...


MAHI-pata nahi yaar par kal mere 6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke baad ek alag hi energy doud rahi hai mere andar..

aur kal raat jab wo weird feeling mere brain ko ghere hue thi,tab bhi mujhe aisa laga jaise wo feeling mujhe challenge kar rahi hai aur fir jab us feeling ne mere brain ko chhoda toh aisa laga maano mai usse jeet gayi hun..

aur jab aisa hua toh mai bata nahi sakti ki mujhe kitna acha feel hua.....

ALFREEN-jab tujhe kal raat hue haadse ki koi chinta nahi hai toh fir thodi der pehle itni gehri soch me kyun khoyi hui thi tu...???

MAHI-arre mai toh bas kal ke pure wakiye ko analyze kar rahi thi..

soch rahi thi ki agar aisa kuch kabhi aur firse hua toh mujhe us situation ko kaise handle karna chahiye...???

ALFREEN-waah re teri soch.....maana tu hum sabse abhi aage hai par abhi hamara first PHASE khatm nahi hua hai..

toh agar sochna hi hai naa,toh apne next SOUL percentage ke AMPLIFICATION ke baare me soch...

aur usse bhi pehle ye soch ki hum aaj ki class ke liye late ho chuke hain..


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI ko bhi realize hua ki baaton baaton me wo dono late ho chuke hain..

aur ye realize karte hi shuru hua dono ka blame game jo karte hue wo dono CHOSEN'S ki taraf badh gaye....




PLANET-SEAL- THE SOUL


PLACE-THE DEAD SURFACE





KYA AAP JAANANA CHAHENGE KI YE DO NAAM KINKE HAIN...???INKE SWAMI ASAL ME HAIN KAUN...???


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS..wo do naam jinke life ke palon ko mujhe jeena tha aur un palon ko apne hisaab se mould karna tha,unke baare me pucha mujhse WOOGER ne jispar....


MAI-kya un dono ke baare me jaankar mujhe unke life ke palon ko jeene me kuch madad milegi...???

WOOGER-nahi...

MAI-toh kyun jaanu mai un dono ke baare me..???

WOOGER-jinke zindagi ke palon ko aapko jeena hai,kya unke baare me jaanane ki jigyasa nahi hai aapko..???

MAI-zindagi unki toh jigyasa meri kyun...??mujhe sirf unhi cheezon ki jigyasa rehti hai jisme mera faayda rehta hai...

isiliye ye faaltu ki baat chhodo aur mudde par aakar ye batao ki what's the catch...???is chunouti ka wo kaun sa hissa hai jo tumne abhi tak mujhe nahi bataya..???

WOOGER-bohot ache...mujhe bas aapki doordarshita dekhni thi..dekhna tha ki jo saamne hai usse toh aap dekh hi rahe hain,par jo chhupa hua hai,uspar aapka dhyan hai yaa nahi...

MAI-mudde par aa WOOGER.....


thodi kadak awaaz me maine ye baat kahi thi jisse sun us dhuen me jisse WOOGER ki awaaz aa rahi thi,usme halchal hui maano usse mere bolne ke tarike ko sun dar laga ho aur isiliye....


WOOGER-is chunouti ka asli pench,sabse badi rookawat hai EHSAAS....

ye wo bhaag jo aapki chunouti ko behad kathin banayega....

aur wo isiliye kyunki inme se jo bhi gola aapke andar samayega,aapka astitv us gole ke maalik ke adhin ho jaayega....

kehne ka matlab ye hai ki gole ke aapke andar samate hi aap aap nahi rahenge balki wo ho jaayenge jinki urja se ye gole bane hain...

aur aise me aapko jis bhi pal ko jeene hai aur saath me apne hisaab se sanchalit bhi karna hai,us pal me aap aap rahenge hi nahi....

aap wo ho jaayenge jinke wo pal honge..aapke brain,aapke body aur aapke blood par us kirdaar ka raaj hoga jisne originally wo pal jiye the..

yahan tak ki aapka wo bhaag jo filhaal aapke paas nahi hai,aapka SOUL,us bhaag me bhi us kirdaar ka ek temporary SOUL fit ho jaayega jisse aapki bhaavna bhi uske hisaab se chalegi....

aap puri tarah se us kirdaar ke ATTITUDE me DHAK jaayenge....

aur aapko ussi condition me us kirdaar ke palon ko yaa fir ye kahun ki kisi ek khaas pal ko apne hisaab se mould karna hai...

ab wo pal kya hai aur usse kaise mould karna hai,yahi aapki asli chunouti hai.....


ye chunouti kam suicide zyada lag rahi thi..jab mai mai hi nahi rahunga toh sanchalit kya ghanta karunga....

uske upar mere SOUL ka bhaag jo filhal khaali hai,uspar bhi kisi aur ka kabza hone waala tha...

aise negetive waqt par jahan haath aur pair baandhe nahi gaye hain balki kaat diye gaye hain,mujhe tairna tha...

par aage badhne ke alawa option nahi tha mere paas.. actually tha,par mujhe koi option chahiye hi nahi tha..

aur wo isiliye kyunki maine aaj tak kisi competition me bhaag nahi liya tha,kisi race me douda nahi tha par sirf isiliye kyunki mujhe koi competition,koi race apne standard ke barabar ka laga nahi tha par aaj jo chunouti mere saamne thi,wo thi mere takkar ki..

ek aisi chunouti jo mere INSTINCTS ko, mere confidence ko yahan tak ke mere existence tak ko challange kar rahi thi...

and i,like it....

MUJHE YE ACHA LAGA.....

aur isiliye...


MAI-shuru karen....????

WOOGER-aap bataiye,kisse..????

MAI-ASMODEUS


mere is naam ko chunte hi us naam ka gola tezi se meri taraf badha aur agle hi pal....


AHHHHH...AHHHH...AHHHH....AHHHH...AHHH.......AHHHHH...AHHHHHH.....

kaale andhere bramhand ke madhya float sa karta hua niche gir raha tha mai...

ASMODEUS....

PARMESHWAR PUTR....THE CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT....

par ab ye designation meri nahi thi....

kyunki abhi abhi is bramhaand ke raichaita,par usse pehle mere father GOD ne mujhe mere hi ghar HEAVEN se baahar fekh diya tha...

aur kaaran....

us gande,ghinoune,maamuli keede ki haisiyat rakhne waale manushya jaati ke liye...

ankhon me beintehaan krodh,tadap,bebasi liye HEAVEN ke darwaze se hota hua is kaale universe ke beech girta chala raha tha mai aur mere saath mere wo saath humsaaye jinhone har waqt,hat lamhe me mera saath diya tha...

mere SEVEN OPOSTLES...

jo karah bhari awaaz abhi abhi nikli thi,wo un saathon ki hi thi....

reason....

GODS THUNDER....wo jhatka jisse GOD ne mujhe aur mujhe support karne waale mere in SEVEN OPOSTLES ke upar chhoda tha...

ye koi maamuli thunder nahi tha...is thunder ke mujhe aur mere OPOSTLES ko lagte hi hamari designations humse chhin chuki thi...

naa mai ab CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT raha tha aur naahi mere OPOSTLES ANGELS....

is waqt mera dard aur mera ghussa itna zyada tha ki mujhe us THUNDER ke mere IMMORTAL sharir ko lagne ke baad jo taklif uthi,usse mai apne jabde bheeche zabt kar gaya par jaise hi us thunder ne mere SEVEN OPOSTLES ko chhua,toh unke mooh se cheekh nikal gayi.....

itna hi nahi,un sabke senses bhi kho gaye aur wo saathon behosh ho chuke the..

wahin mai us sharirik, maansik aur roohani dard ko jhelte hue kuch aur der tak shunya ko ghurta raha aur fir..


MAI-FATHER.....ek taraf tha mai...wo shakti jisse aapne apni urja se banaya,apni shakti se seencha aur apne saamrajya me bada kiya aur dusri taraf thi wo maanav jaati...

ek aisi prajati jisse banane ke liye aapki sirf ek soch hi kaafi thi...

ek taraf aapke hi kano se bana aapka IMMORTAL putr aur dusri taraf wo MORTAL manushya jinke astitv ke hone naa hone se koi fark nahi padta....

chunaaw kitna asaan tha..kitna saral...kitne ek paksh....

par aapne kya kiya,apne putr ki jagah manushya jaati ko chuna.... roshni ki jagah andhere ko chuna...

mai jaanta hun ki har pitah ko apne putr se ummiden hoti hain par ek putr ki bhi toh apne pitah se kuch aashayen hoti hain...

manushya jaati ki najane kitni hi galtiyan,apraadh aapne maine dekhe...

unke vinash ke mere har tark ko aap bas itna kehkar taalte gaye ki punya ke panapne ke liye paap ka hona bhi zaroori hai...

purnatah nirarthak vachan....

par koi baat nahi father....jo hua,acha hi hua...ye acha hi hai ki ab mai CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT nahi hun...

kyunki ab mai aapke aadhin nahi hun.... mujhe kuch bhi karne ke liye ab aapke ijaazat ko zaroorat nahi hai....

isiliye ab apni pyari maanav jaati ke sangrakshan hetu kawach bicha lijiye...

kyunki ab unpar waar ASMODEUS khulkar karega....

haan,shart ke mutaabik sidhe sidhe toh us jaati ka samuh naash mai nahi kar sakta par koi baat nahi...

hun toh aap hi ka putra..har sawal ka jawab,har pareshani ka hal nikal hi lunga...

aur sirf utna hi waqt hai aapke priya manushya jaati ke paas.....


behad zoron se chillate hue maine ye saari baatein kahi thi...mai jaanta tha ki bhale hi FATHER ne mujhe cast out kar diya hai par unki nazar har waqt mujhpar hai...

mujhe ye bhi pata tha ki meri soch aur mere faisle se wo achi taraf waakif hain aur zaroor uska hal bhi unhone nikal liya hoga par mai apne faisle par adig tha...

ye sab sochte hue kaafi der ho chuka tha.. mere saathon OPOSTLES bhi ab tak behosh the aur kyunki unhe GODS THUNDER ka jhatka laga tha, isiliye wo tab tak hosh me aane waale bhi nahi the,jab tak mai unki chetna nahi loutatha...

is waqt mere krodh aur meri bebasi ke beech ek aur chiz ho rahi thi jo mere liye thodi aascharyajanak thi aur wo ye ki GOD'S THUNDER se jo dard mujhe hua tha,wo ab tak kaayam tha...

aur ye koi sadharan baat nahi thi kyunki kitna bhi bada prahar mujhe ASMODEUS ko zyada der tak dard de nahi sakta tha...

par fir mujhe laga ki shayad CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ki meri upadhi ke chhin jaane ki wajah se mere self heal ka koi ansh kamzor padh gaya hai aur isiliye hi mujhe dard ho raha hai aur isiliye...


KAMURADHAWE

SELF HEAL


apne chaati ke madhya haath rakh maine is spell ko bola jiske baad mujhe ek halka sa jhatka laga par fir dheere dheere mera dard jaata raha...

dard ke jaaneke baad meri nazar ek disha me ghumi jahan ek tairta hua kaafi bada sa asteroid ghum raha tha...

us jagah ko dekhte hi mere sharir se 7 kirane nikal mere saathon OPOSTLES ko jaakar lagi aur aisa hote hi mai aur mere 7 OPOSTLES gayab hokar sidhe us asteroid par prakat hue....

asteroid par pair rakhte hi mere sharir se ek baar firse saath kirane nikli aur jaakar sidhe OPOSTLES se takrayi jiske kuch hi der baad un sabko hosh aa gaya...

hosh me aate hi kuch seconds lage un sabko pura maamla samajhne me par fir jab unhe yaad aaya ki unhe heaven se cast out kar diya gaya hai aur ab wo angels nahi rahe toh unhe bohot bura lagne laga...

un sabke sir jhuke hue the aur wo saathon chup the...mere OPOSTLES kabhi bhi mere saamne khudse baat nahi karte the...

unke mookh tabhi khulte the jab mai unse kuch puchta ya fir aadesh deta tha..

aur filhal mujhe un sabki manosthithi ke baare me pata tha isiliye....


MAI-agar tum saathon chaaho toh mujhe chhod kar jaa sakte ho....mujhe bura nahi lagega...


meri baat ko sun un sabke jhuke hue sir ek jhatke me upar uthe aur....


OPOSTLES-aap hamare aaradhya hai...aapke bina hamara astitv hi nahi hai...

ASMODEUS-ek baar firse soch lo..kyunki abtak tum sab Angels the...

mere saath saath GOD bhi tumhare taraf the par ab aisa nahi hoga...

ab wo mere saath nahi mere saamne khade honge ek pratidwandi ki tarah..

aise me tum sabka ye immortal state bhi khatre me padh sakta hai....

OPOSTLES-hum taiyar hain....aap aadesh karen ki hume kya karna hai???

MAI-hmm.... HEAVEN se cast out karne ke baad meri shakti ka ek hissa jo CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ki upadhi ki wajah se mujhe mila tha,wo ab chhin chuka hai aur isiliye sabse pehle mujhe apni shakti me izafa karna hai...

shakti ke us rikht sthaaan ko bharna hai.....aur isiliye mai chahta hun ki tum sab bramhaand ke har power source ki talash karo...

aisi shaktiyan dhundo jo mere dhaaran karne ke yogya ho...


USKI KOI ZAROOAT NAHI HAI....AGAR TUM CHAAHO TOH BRAMHAAND ME BASI SHAKTI KA SABSE BADA SHROTH TUMHE ABHI YAHIN MIL JAAYEGA....


mere aadesh par OPOSTLES kuch kehte,usse pehle hi mere piche se ye awaaz aayi jisse sun mai palta aur dekha ki mere saamne ek badi si kaali dhuen ki chaadar thi...

ek aisi chaadar jisse beintihan shakti ka sanchar ho raha tha...

mai jaanta tha ki ye kya hai aur isiliye...


MAI-BLACK ENERGY......


bramhaand ka wo kaala sach jisse naa chahte hue khud bramhaand ne banaya tha yaa fir ye kahun ki mere shatruon ne, manushyon ne....

maamuli se manushya jinki utpatti ke baad unke dwara kiye gaye paap se panpi ek aisi shakti jo waqt ke saath behad shaktishali ho chuki hai...

mere baad wo dusri aisi chiz jisse god khatm nahi kar sakte kyunki aisa karne ke liye unhe apni priya manushya jaati ki bhi kurbaani deni hogi....


wahi BLACK ENERGY jiska koi form nahi,mere saamne khadi thi....

wahin us black energy ko dekh mere saathon OPOSTLES bhi kaafi hairan ho gaye the aur saath hi wo ye baat samajh gaye the ki abhi utpann hui paristithi me BLACK ENERGY ka mere saamne prakat hona kisi anhoni ke hone ka sanket hai aur isiliye un saath OPOSTLES me se ek kuch bolne ko hua par maine usse feel kar liya tha aur isiliye maine apna haath upar kiya jiske baad wo OPOSTLE chup hi reh gaya..


(ATTITUDE PART ONE KE LAST UPDATE ME BLACK ENERGY KE AANE SE OPOSTLES KI NAAPASANDAGI KE BAARE ME BATAYA GAYA HAI)


MAI-kuch keh rahe the tum....???

BLACK ENERGY-ASMODEUS, GOD'S SON ko baatein samajhne ke liye un baaton ko sunana kabse zaroori ho gaya...

tum achi tarah jaante ho ki mai kya keh raha hun aur meri baaton ke fal se tum kya kuch haasil kar sakte ho..

tumhe tumhare apne hi pitah ne bedakhal kar diya hai....tumhari shakti ka ek bada hissa filhal tumhare paas nahi hai...

tum kamzor ho.. tumhe shakti ki zaroorat hai...par ek sach bhi hai ki bhale hi tum kitne hi shaktiyon ko prapt kyun naa kar lo,kintu tumhari shakti ka jo bhaag GOD ne tumse chhin liya hai,us shakti ke barabar ki shakti tum khudse haasil nahi kar sakte...

par meri madad se naa sirf tum us shakti ke barabar shakti prapt kar sakoge,balki pehle se kayi guna zyada shaktishaali bhi ban jaaoge...

itne shaktishaali ki fir tum jo chaho,kar sakoge...

MAI-sawal ye hai ki tum meri madad karna kyun chahte ho...??

kyunki mai toh manushya jaati ka anth chahta hun...wahi manushya jaati jinki wajah se tumme shakti aayi hai...tumhara ye adhura astitv bana hai...

aur agar maine aisa kar diya,toh inke saath saath tum bhi khatm ho jaaoge...

BLACK ENERGY-khatm toh mai waise bhi kisi naa kisi din ho hi jaaunga aur wo isiliye kyunki mera apna koi sampurn astitv nahi hai....

mai immortal bhi manushya jaati ke sahare hi hun...

agar manushya jaati khatm nahi bhi hui toh mujhe yakin hai GOD kisi naa kisi tarah mere astitv ko mitane ka tarika khoj hi lenge...

aur isiliye hi mujhe hamesha se kisi aise ki talash rahi hai jo naa sirf itna shaktishaali ho ki mujhe apna sake,balki wo IMMORTAL bhi ho...

aur tum me ye dono goon hain....agar tum mujhe apna lete ho toh mujhe ek sthayi astitv mil jaayega aur tumhe apaar shakti....


BLACK ENERGY ki baat sun maine uski baat ke baare me sochna shuru kiya wahin is waqt OPOSTLES ke man ki baat bhi mujhe sunayi de rahi thi jo ki BLACK ENERGY ke khilaaf thi...

par kuch der pehke mere apne father se mujhe jo dard mila tha wo itna zyada tha ki OPOSTLES ki soch filhal mere liye matter nahi karti thi....

wahin mujhe sochta dekh....


BLACK ENERGY-jis saude me har taraf se faayda ho uske baare me zyada socha nahi karte....

bina vilamb kiye mujhe apna lo..mera dhaaran karte hi tumhari shakti ka wo bhaag jo filhal khaali ho gaya hai,wo wapas bhar jaayega..

itna hi nahi, mujhe apnaate hi mai tumhe is bramhaand me chhupe aisi shakti ke baare me bataunga jiske baare me tum khud se kabhi nahi jaan paaoge...

aur ek baar tumne us shakti ko haasil kar liya toh tum pehle se bhi zyada shaktishaali ho jaaoge...

(black energy warriors world ke odridge mountain me chhupi shakti ke baare me baat kar raha hai...zyada jaanane ke liye part 1 ka wo part fir se padh len)


MAI-thik hai....mai tumhe dhaaran karne ke liye taiyar hun...

BLACK ENERGY-atti uttam...toh fir apne shairir aur apni aatma ko jodkar kaho ki..

MAI ASMODEUS APNE SHARIR AUR APNI AATMA KI HI TARAH BLACK ENERGY KO BHI APNA ATOOT ANG MAANTE HUE USSE APNATA HUN....

MAI-MAI ASMODEUS APNE SHARIR AUR APNI AATMA KI HI TARAH....

EK SECOND......


bolte bolte mai achanak rook gaya yaa fir ye kahun ki maine ASMODEUS ko aage bolne se rok diya...

mai matlab RAAZ....

jee haan doston....mai RAAZ jo kuch der pehle tak ASMODEUS ke rang me kuch aisa rang gaya tha ki mai bhul hi gaya tha ki mai ASMODEUS nahi RAAZ hun...

aur shayad mai is pure scene me,pal me ASMODEUS hi bana rehta par anjaane me hi sahi par ASMODEUS ne us parat ko khol diya jisme mai chhup gaya tha...

nahi samjhe,samjhata hun par uske liye thoda piche chalte hain...

aapko yaad hoga ki GODS THUNDER lagne ki wajah se THE SEVEN OPOSTLES ko dard hua tha aur wahi dard ASMODEUS ko bhi hua tha..

darasal wo dard ASMODEUS ko nahi balki uske andar chuppe mere astitv ko hua tha..

wo astitv jo us gole ke jo ASMODEUS ke jeeven ka pal tha,mujhme samate hi vilupt ho gaya tha par us jhakte ke lagte hi mera astitv ASMODEUS ke andar jaag gaya..

itna hi nahi,us GOD'S THUNDER ke lagne se mujhe hadh se zyada taklif bhi mehsoos hone lagi...

aisi taklif jiski wajah se mujhe yaad hi nahi raha ki mai filhal ek scene ka hissa hun...

par ek sach ye bhi tha ki filhal meri taklif ASMODEUS ki taklif thi aur isiliye jab usne us taklif se nijaat paane ke liye spell bola toh uske saath saath mujhe bhi dard se chhutkara mil gaya..

aur aisa hote hi meri buddhi jo ab tak ASMODEUS ke adhin thi,uspar thoda thoda hi sahi par mera control aane laga...

aur jab aisa hua toh maine apne chitt ko shant kar khudke dimag ke un bhaagon ko jo ab bhi ASMODEUS ke control me thi,unhe apni control me laane ko koshish karne laga...

is beech aage ka scene chalta raha...par fir jab BLACK ENERGY ASMODEUS ke saamne prakat hui aur usse khudko apnaane ke liye convince karne lagi tab mai badi dhyan se uski baat sun raha tha..

aur kyunki mai aur ASMODEUS filhal ek hi the isiliye apne pitah ke faisle ki wajah se uske dil me lagatar uth raha dard aur saath hi SEVEN OPOSTLES ke dimag ki soch jo ki BLACK ENERGY ke khilaaf thi, usse bhi mai mehsoos kar raha tha...

par aakhir me jab ASMODEUS ke raazi hone par BLACK ENERGY se usse ek specific sentence ko dohraane ke liye bola aur ASMODEUS ne bhi usse repeat karna shuru kiya toh maine ASMODEUS par control lete hue usse chup kara diya....


ab baari thi is ASMODEUS ke khamosh hone ki kyunki BLACK ENERGY ke saath deal bhale hi usne shuru ki thi par isse khatm mujhe karna tha aur isiliye...


MAI-mai tumhe aur tumhari shakiyon ko apne hith ke liye apnata hun....


BLACK ENERGY ko baat ko repeat naa karte hue maine apne hisaab se baat ki jispar.....


BLACK ENERGY-aise nahi..tumhe ye kehna ki MAI ASMODEUS APNE...

MAI-wo sun chuka hun mai....par wo baatein mai kahunga nahi....jo maine kaha hai,wahi sahi hai...


BLACK ENERGY ki baat ko kaat maine apni baat kahi jisse sun BLACK ENERGY chownka par fir baat ko sambhalne ke liye..


BLACK ENERGY-par jo maine kaha hai,usse dohrane se hi tumhe mera pura laabh mil sakta hai...

MAI-laabh toh milega par mujhe nahi tumhe...

BLACK ENERGY-mai samjha nahi...

MAI-itne nasamajh toh nahi ho sakte tum...khair samjhata hun...

meri body aur meri aatma,inki utpatti se hi meri utpatti hui thi...kehne ka matlab hai ki ye dono hi mera atoot hissa hain...

par tum nahi ho..aur jo tum mujhse bulwana chahte ho usse tum bhi in dono ki tarah hi mujhse jud jaaoge..

ek tarah se mai tumme badal jaaunga...mere body aur soul ke saath milkar tum mere swami ban jaaoge..

aur ye mai hone nahi de sakta..tum mere saathi ho sakte hi,mere maalik nahi...

agar tumhe mera sharir chahiye,toh tum isme....

EK KIRAYDAAR KI TARAH REH SAKTE HO,PAR ISS KHARID NAHI SAKTE....


CHAANNNN......


akhri line bolte hi ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir....


back to ground zero....

maine dekha ki mai wapas ZEAL me tha....

meri chunoutiyon waale dono golon me se ek gola gayab ho chuka tha aur ab mere saamne sirf ek gola tha...

mera dimag ghum raha tha aur issi wajah se maine kuch palon ke liye apni aakhen band ki aur fir jab mujhe kuch thik laga toh...

maine apni aakhen kholi aur mere aisa karte hi mere kaano me WOOGER ki awaaz gunj gayi....

WOOGER-pehli chunouti puri hui...ab baari hai dusri chunouti ki..


taiyar ho jaayiye apne agle safar ke liye jisme aap honge....VIKRAM......







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V...J......
Awesome update
 

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muje aaj tak samaj nahi aya is story ko likhne wale sach much insaan hi hai ya koi dev maanav

me kasam khake kehta hun ki apki ye talant sirf xf ke liye seemit nahi hona hai

or age badna hai or badte rehana hai


mera ek question hai apse

RAAZ FLORIN OR MARIA KA NAA PAIDA HONEWALA BACHA HAI

HAINA THO....

SHRI KRISHN KE GEETA KE ANUSAAR JO PAIDA HOTA HAI WO MARTA HAI OR BACHTA HAI SIRF AATMA

KYUNKI ATMAA KA KOI MRITYU NAHI OR NAAHI PAIDA HOTI HAI

WO THO BAS SHARIR BADALTI HAI

ye maine kahi pada tha exactly nahi pata kaha pada per pada jaroor tha

mera prashn ye hai aapse ki aapne kaha ki raaz ki mrityu hoga jisse mahi thode samay ke liye taalne waali hai

LAKIN JO PAIDA HI NAHI HUA WO KAISE MAR SAKTA HAI
thanks brother....

aapke sawal ke do jawab hain...

dekhiye,RAAZ ansh bhi hai aur urja bhi....

ansh isiliye kyunki aapne update me padha hoga ki RAAZ ka ek bache ke roop me nirman MARIA ki kokh me pura ho chuka tha...

matlab RAAZ ek insaan ke taur par pura ho chuka tha jisse womb se nikalne se pehle gayab kar diya gaya..

is tark par RAAZ bhale hi paida nahi hua,par kyunki woh as a human pura ho chuka tha, isiliye woh insaan hi hai jo saamanya se alag tarah se janma hai..

scientifically isse ek tarah ka scissor keh sakte hain par isme kaata piti nahi hui..

urja isiliye kyunki paida hone ke baad us ansh ko urja ke saath mix kar diya gaya jisse woh ansh urja ke roop me dhal gaya...

aur haan,urja maari nahi jaa sakti hai par khatm zaroor ki jaa sakti hai...

par kyunki RAAZ ansh bhi hai aur urja bhi, isiliye usse maara bhi jaa sakta hai aur khatm bhi kiya jaa sakta hai...

matlab ki RAAZ mortal bhi hai aur saath hi immortal bhi...

lastly,ye mat bhuliye ki is kahani me RAAZ bana hi VIDEOUS ko khatm karne ke liye h...

ab jo VIDEOUS jaise immortal ko khatm kar sakta hai,woh uske haathon khud bhi toh khatm ho sakta hai....

ummid hai aap samajh gaye honge...

khair,jaise ki RAAZ ek human bhi ho sakta hai,iska ek hint pehle hi uske apne emotions ko paane waale safar me diya gaya tha,waise hi ek dusra hint bhi aaj ke update me diya gaya hai jispar kisika bhi dhyan nahi gaya hai..

khair,zyada sochne ka nahi,bohot jald us hint ke baare me aur uske jawab ke bare me pata chal jaana hai..

isiliye saath bane rahiye...
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI ALFREEN KO EK RAAT PEHLE USSE FEEL HUE EK AJEEB EHSAAS KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNI PEHLI CHUNOUTI PURI KAR LI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




MEGA UPDATE-47



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S





3 MONTHS LATER



KYA HAAL HAI LOOSERS...????


ALFREEN aur MABEL jo ki ek dusre se baat kar rahi thi,unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jispar jab unhone palat kar dekha toh dono hi thoda chownk gayi....

reason....

unke saamne ANWIR aur MORANA khade muskura rahe the...

subah ka waqt hai...classes shuru hone me thoda sa waqt hai but sabhi SAVENTS class me aa chuke hain aur apne apne groups bana kar khade hain..

filhal MABEL aur ALFREEN ke saath MAHI nahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki kuch SAVENTS jinhe apne SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION me kuch zyada hi dikkat aa rahi hai,wo sab MAHI se apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ke ideas le rahe the aur MAHI bhi badi khushi aur man se un sabhi SAVENTS ko unke will power ko aur strong karne ke tips bata rahi thi...

aur issi beech hui entry MORANA aur ANWIR ki jinhe dekh sirf MABEL aur ALFREEN hi nahi balki MAHI aur uske saath khade sabhi SAVENTS bhi chownk gaye the....

MABEL aur ALFREEN ki hi tarah MAHI ne bhi un dono me ke mooh se looser shabd suna tha aur wo jaanti thi ki ye word un dono ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ke liye bola hai par filhal wo shaant hi rahi....

par un dono ko dekh ALFREEN ka acha khaasa mood bigad gaya aur unke taunt ko sun uska dimag bhi ghum gaya aur isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar MABEL ek baat bata..looser hona zyada galat hai yaa fir bhikari hona...

MABEL-mere hisaab se bhikari hona...

ALFREEN-haina..chalo fir,hum looser hi thik hain..kamsekam in dono ki tarah bhikari toh nahi hain jo baar baar apne ghar matlab apne PHASE ko chhodkar hamare PHASE me aakar kuch naa kuch mangte rehte hain...


jahan ALFREEN ki baat sun us class me moujud PHASE 1 ke sabhi
SAVENTS has diye wahin MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghussa aa gaya aur...


MORANA-apni zuban ko apni aukaad ke hadh me rakh kar mooh khola kar ladki....hum jinhe tu bhikari keh rahi hai,wo PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain...

wo SAVENTS jinke saamne teri koi haisiyat nahi...

ALFREEN-haan wo toh dikh raha hai....tabhi baar baar apni sadi hui shakal liye is PHASE me ghusse chale aate ho...

ANWIR-sirf isiliye kyunki filhal tu first PHASE me hai,teri zubaan hamare saamne chal rahi hai...

par koi baat nahi..sirf 3 mahino ki hi baat hai..uske baad teri azaadi ka,tere bolne ka yahan tak ki tere sir uthane ka waqt khatm....

kyunki PHASE 2 me sabhi SAVENTS, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saamne teri akad nichod di jaayegi aur koi kuch nahi kar paayega....

MAHI-self obsession ki hadh ho yaar tum dono...ek free advice deti hun,tum dono bola kam aur kiya zyada karo...

warna tumme aur ek kutte me kya fark reh jaayega....


MAHI jo ab tak chup chaap saari baaton ko sun rahi thi, ANWIR ki aakhri baat sun usne apni chuppi todte hue baat ko aage badhaya jisse sun ek baar firse ANWIR aur MORANA ka dimag ghuma..

wo dono fir kuch kehne hi waale the ki tabhi....


VIOLET-GOOD MORNING SAVENTS...


un dono ke piche se VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz aayi jo NOX aur OMMIN ke saath class me enter kar rahi thi...

wahin VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz ko sun MORANA aur ANWIR ne apne aap ko control kiya aur WHIZZ ki taraf mud gaye aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS ke saath un donko ne bhi VIOLET WHIZZ aur dono WHIZZDERS ko wish kiya...


VIOLET-arre MORANA, ANWIR..tum dono morning me hi aa gaye..mujhe laga tha ki class ke baad aaoge...

ANWIR-actually WHIZZ, pichli khch classes itni hectic rahi hain ki aaj hum dono ne hi class se off liya hai aur aapko toh pata hi hai ki hum hamare PHASE ke best SAVENTS hain aur hume off lene se koi rokta nahi....


pure ghamand se ANWIR ne apni baat kahi aur is baat ko karte waqt uski gardan ghumte hue ALFREEN aur MAHI par tiki rahi...

wahin ANWIR ki baat sun VIOLET WHIZZ toh bas muskurayi par NOX ko ANWIR ki baat achi nahi lagi aur isiliye...


NOX-toh apne PHASE ke best SAVENT...ek baat batao ki apne is off time me tum yahan kyun aaye....???

VIOLET-ye dono MAHI ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ko dekhne aaye hain...


ANWIR kuch jawab de,usse pehle hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne apni baat kahi jisse sun MAHI pehle toh shock hui par fir usse maajra samajh me aa gaya aur isiliye wo muskura di...

toh jo MAHI ne samjha aur jo asal me kaaran tha jiski wajah se ANWIR aur MORANA yahan the wo ye tha ki MAHI ne jo karnama kiya tha,6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ka wo bhi first PHASE me hokar,wo pehle kabhi bhi nahi hua tha aur isiliye ye baat pure CHOSENS me fail gayi thi..

ANWIR aur MORANA bhi is khabar se acchute nahi the..waise toh is khabar ko sun unhe bilkul bhi acha nahi laga par fir unhone socha ki bhale hi ye baat unke liye negetive thi par saath hi important bhi thi..

wo jaanana chahte the ki MAHI kis tarah pain aur emotions ke bahav ke beech khud ko shaant rakhti hui apne SOUL ko lagatar itna zyada AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab ho rahi hai..???

wo aana toh bohot pehle se chahte the par khud ke PHASE ke task se ho rahe vyastata ke kaaran dono aa nahi paa rahe the but aaj finally dono yahan the....

par yahan aate hi MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko dekh dono apni aadat se majbur bully karne se baaz nahi aaye par aisa karna unhe khud par hi bhaari padh gaya.....

khar,jaise hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne un dono ke yahan aane ka kaaran bataya toh...


NOX-arre par PHASE 2 ke best SAVENT ko bhala PHASE 1 ki MAHI se kya kaam ho sakta hai...???

OMMIN-bilkul ho sakta hai.. kyunki ye dono sirf is saal ke liye PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain....

par MAHI PHASE 1 me sirf is saal ki hi nahi balki CHOSENS ke itihaas ke 25 thousand years ki best SAVENT hai..

aur aise SAVENT ke paas kaun nahi aana chahega...???


OMMIN ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR ko andar hi andar behad ghussa aaya par dono ke chehre shaant hi rahe..


ANWIR-WHIZZDER OMMIN, WHIZZDER NOX...sikhna toh hume har kisi se hi chahiye naa...

aur ye baat issi PHASE me aur issi class me aap dono ne hi humse kahi thi...

ab dekhiye naa, sirf 2 PHASE me aur usme bhi hamara second PHASE abhi khatm hua nahi hai,itne kam waqt me hum dono hi 8 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke dhaarak ban chuke hain...

MORANA-aur shayad itna hi percent aap pure life me AMPLIFY kar paaye hain, haina WHIZZDER OMMIN aur WHIZZDER NOX....


ek khilli udane waali smile ke saath MORANA ne is baat ko kaha jisse sun ANWIR toh muskura diya par OMMIN aur NOX,dono ko behad bura laga...

waise bura toh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko bhi laga tha..

ALFREEN toh kuch bolne waali bhi thi par MAHI ne ishare se usse chup rehne ko kaha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MORANA-aur waise bhi is class me agar MAHI ko alag kar den,toh hum pure confidence se keh sakte hain ki aur koi bhi hum dono ke takkar ka nahi hai...

first PHASE me hum dono ne hi 4 percent tak apne SOUL ko kar liya tha jo i am sure ki is class me MAHI ke alawa ye karnama aur koi karne me capable nahi hai....

VIOLET-tum galat ho MORANA... MAHI ke baaju me jo do ladkiyan khadi hain, MABEL aur ALFREEN,in dono ne hi abhi tak apne SOUL ko 3 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai..

ye dono tum dono se bas 1 percent hi piche hain and i am sure ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono tumhari barabari kar lenge....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR chownke...unhe is baat ki bilkul bhi ummid nahi thi ki MABEL aur ALFREEN itne aage badh chuke honge...


aur jaisa ki VIOLET WHIZZ ne kaha ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar lenge,jiska matlab tha ki ALFREEN aur MABEL un dono ke barabar ho jaayenge aur ye baat dono ko hazam nahi ho paa rahi thi...

isiliye ANWIR ka dimag tezi se doudne laga aur fir usse kuch click hua.


ANWIR-haan,ye ho sakta hai WHIZZ ki ye dono is PHASE ke khatm hote hote tak 4 percent tak pahunch jaayen par fir bhi ye dono humse piche hi rahengi aur wo isiliye kyunki humne apne SOUL ka 4 th percent first PHASE ke khatm hone se 3 mahine pehle kar liya tha matlab abhi jo waqt hai,is time tak hamara SOUL 4 percent AMPLIFY ho chuka tha..

par ye dono toh abhi 3 percent par hain matlab ye humse piche hain aur humesha piche hi rahenge...


ALFREEN-ye waqt abhi khatm nahi hua hai aur jab tak ye hoga,hum apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar chuke honge...


MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghurte hue ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jispar...


MORANA-really..??par kaise karogi tum ye...???kyunki aaj hi wo din hai,wo waqt hai jab humne apne soul ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya tha..

jiska matlab hai ki tumhe bhi aaj hi ye achievement haasil karma hoga...

ALFREEN-aisa hi hoga..hum aaj hi ye kar ke dikhayenge...

ANWIR-aur agar naa kar paaye toh...!!!


MAHI jaanti thi ki MORANA aur ANWIR ALFREEN ko bhadka rahe hain,aur isiliye wo kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi..


ALFREEN-toh tum jo bolo,mai wo maan lungi.....and that's my promise....

MABEL-my nahi our.... that's our promise...agar hum unsuccessful hue toh tum dono jo bolo hum dono wo maan lenge...


MAHI ke interfere karne se pehle hi ALFREEN aur MABEL ne promise kar diya tha jiska matlab tha ki ab MAHI kuch bhi kar nahi sakti thi...

wahin in saari baaton ko sun VIOLET, NOX aur OMMIN bhi thode pareshan ho gaye the kyunki ek toh wo jaante the ki SOUL ko asaani se AMPLIFY nahi kiya jaa sakta aur saath hi unhe ye bhi maalum tha ki agar MABEL aur ALFREEN unsuccessful rahe toh MORANA aur ANWIR zaroor un dono se kuch ulta sidha demand karenge....

par in sabhi pareshaniyon ke beech wo teeno ye bhi jaante the ki MABEL aur ALFREEN ko agar wo bacha bhi len toh wo sirf abhi ke kiye hoga..

par aisa karne se next PHASE me unke problems aur badhengi..saath hi wo teeno soch rahe the ki next PHASE ka ek halka sa swaad MABEL aur ALFREEN ko abhi hi chakh lena chahiye kyunki us PHASE me jo hota hai,jo zindagi jee jaati hai,wo chunouti, ghamand,sangharsh and most importantly shakti pradarshan ke beech hi jee jaati hai....

kamzoron ke liye wo PHASE hell se kam nahi...aur yahi sab sochte hue wo teeno chup hi rahe...

wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ke promise karte hi....


ANWIR-thik hai fir...toh agar tum dono aaj ki class me apne soul ko ek baar firse AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab hue toh hum maan lenge ke tum dono humare equals ho,humse kam nahi ho par agar aisa nahi hua toh....

MORANA-3 percent AMPLIFICATION me ho tum dono..iska matlab hai ki tum dono hi next PHASE me STELLARS group ka hissa ban chuke ho...

toh hum ye chahte hain ki agar tum dono aaj fail hui toh next PHASE me STELLARS group me nahi balki WEAKLINGS group me enter karogi...


MORANA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS including WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hairan ho gaye..

wahin MAHI ek baar firse kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi...


MABEL/ALFREEN-HUME MANZOOR HAI....







PLANET-ZEAL-THE SOUL



PLACE-THE RED SURFACE





TOH DER KIS BAAT KI....???SHURU KAREN!!!



meri agli aur aakhri chunouti ka waqt aa chuka tha aur isiliye ye baat maine WOOGER se kahi jispar....


WOOGER-ek baat hai jo aapko is chunouti ke shuru hone se pehle jaanani zaroori hai...

ye chunouti aapki pichli chunouti se thodi alag hone waali hai....

kaise,iske baare me aapko aapki chunouti ke douran pata chal jaayega...

bas ek hi chiz hogi aapke paas..aapka focus..usse mat khone mat dijiyega....


WOOGER ki baat sunane ke baad bhi mai chup hi raha aur isiliye...

wo dusri roshni ka gola tezi se aage badha aur agle hi pal....


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YE KAISI JAGAH HAI....HAR TARAF SIRF ROSHNI...AUR IS ROSHNI SE ITNI ZYADA URJA KYUN NIKAL RAHI HAI...

BUT MOST IMPORTANTLY,MAI YAHAN KYA KAR RAHA HUN....

MUJHE TOH KUCH PAL PEHLE US ROSHNI NE CHHUA THA,USKE BAAD KYA HUA...???


us beintahan roshni ke samandar ke beech fasa mai ye sab apne aap se bol hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe laga jhatka...


reason...



SAMAY SACHALAKON...ISHWAR NE AAP SABKI PRARTHANA SUN LI...AAP SABKE DUKH AUR TAKLIF KI GHADI SAMAPT HUI...AAKHEN KHOLIYE....


ek tez awaaz gunj uthi mere kaano me par jhatka mujhe us awaaz ko sunkar nahi laga tha....

jhatka mujhe is baat par laga ki jaise hi is awaaz se aankhen kholne ki baat kahi,toh mere saamne dikh raha tez prakash ek dum se gayab ho gaya aur aisa hone par maine dekha ki mai kisi badi si jagah par khada hun...

mere saamne bohot se log khade hain par filhal wo human form me nahi balki SHADOW FORM me hain..

aur mere aaju baaju kul chaar log khade the jinme ek ladki thi aur teen ladke...

ab ye sab ho kya raha tha,iska toh mujhe koi idea tha nahi..mai bas apne dimag ko douda kar situation ko samajhne ki koshish kar hi raha tha ki tabhi...


AHHH,AHHHH,AHHHH.....


mere saamne khade un spirit form ke logon ke mooh se dard bhari karah nikal gayi jisse sun...


MAI-ab saala inhe kya ho raha hai...??aur ye inke pair ke niche aag kyun jal uthi???

ye sawal maine man me nahi,balki apni mooh se bola tha par aisa karte hi mujhe ek naya shock laga aur wo isiliye kyunki bhale hi maine in baaton ko apne mooh se bola tha par ye baatein bahar nikli hi nahi balki mere andar hi gunj uthi...

par jaise hi maine ye sawal kiya,toh uske agle hi pal mere brain me is scene ka data jaise store hone laga..

aur is scene ka hi nahi,balki is scene se ghata pehle ka scene aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,wo scene bhi mere dimag me clearly ghum gaya...

saath hi jo filhal mai tha,uska naam aur saath hi mere aaju baaki jo paanch log khade the,wo kaun the aur is character ke saath jo fihal kai tha,VIKRAM,use unsab ka rishta bhi mujhe pata chal chuka tha..

aur aisa hote hi mujhe aadhi baat aur half situation bhi samajh me aa gayi...

toh chaliye, jitna mai samjha tha,utna aap bhi samajh lijiye par usse pehle....


(WRITER'S NOTE-RAAZ ko toh scene samajh me aa gaya..ummid hai ki aap sabko bhi samajh aa gaya hoga...

ye scene hai SHADOW WORLD ka jahan ASMODEUS ne YELUPTUS planet me basne waale SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko kaid karke rakha hua tha...

detail me dobara yaad karne ke liye update 110 padh len..)


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toh jo aadhi baat mujhe samajh me aayi thi,wo ye thi ki bhale hi mai abhi is VIKRAM ke sharir me tha,ya fir ye kahun ki filhal mai hi VIKRAM tha,par tab bhi mai apne hisaab se chizen nahi kar sakta tha...

mere har sawal ke mere dimag me uththe hi mujhe uska jawab mil jaayega jo ki mujhe is sharir ke maalik ka brain dega...

aur isiliye hi WOOGER ne kaha tha ki meri ye chunouti meri pehli chunouti se alag hone waali hai..

kyunki us chunouti me toh mera wajud hi gayab ho gaya tha par jab mujhe mere hone ka ehsas hua tab maine ASMODEUS ke body par apna control le liya but yahan toh maamla hi ulta hai...

yahan mera astitv shuru se hi mere paas hai par fir bhi mai is scene me is VIKRAM ke jiske pal mujhe jeene hain,uske aadhin hun...

and this is bloody scary for me...

kyunki yahi toh wo chiz thi,aadhinta,samarpan,kisi aur ke chaaye me jeena yaa saans lena jisse mujhe sakht nafrat hai..

yahi bas ek aisa condition hai jisme mera dimag sthir nahi reh sakta...i bloody hate to be someone,live like that someone and most importantly, depend upon that someone or anyone dammit...

is aadhe sach ko jaankar mera dimag hi ghum gaya....mera uddeshya,mera target,sab bhulne laga tha mai...

mujhe bas kisi tarah is human choge ko,jisse mujhe zabardasti pehna diya gaya tha,utaarna tha par saala ye bhi hone se raha...

ek ajeeb mental state me fasa mai bas chupchaap honth sile saamne chal rahe scene ko dekh raha tha jisme bas chutiyaapa ho raha tha..

akhand chutiyaapa...arre,kare koi bhare koi....fase saale ye nikamme the,par nikalna is saale VIKRAM ko padega..

arre kyun bhai...dusri ke fadde me padhna kaayko... marne de,tadapne de saalon ko..

mera matlab is VIKRAM ke baaju me ek bandi khadi thi,jiske baare me mujhe pata chala tha ki ye iski maal hai..

abbe lekar ghum isse.enjoy kar...chota sa lounda dikh raha hai shakal se par saale ki chul badon waali hai..

sabki madad karenge ye....aur us madad me apni mahanta mujhe bhi dikhayenge...

ek aise bande ko jo is scene ke actual date ke najaane kitne decades ke baad paida hua hai...

par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain...apne aap me badbadata hua mai bhi sabki tarah scene ko dekhne me lag gaya jahan is waqt dialogue dialogue khela jaa raha tha...


MAI-najaane kitni sadiyon tak aapne pure bramhaand ke samay chakra ko sahi tarike se ghumane ka daayitv nibhaya hai..

aur aaj bhi aap jis aag se tap rahe hain,wo bhi ussi samay chakra ki nirantarta ko banaye rakhne ke liye sah rahe hain...

aap sab ne pehle hi bina kisi galti ke itne varshon tak saza bhugti hai....

mujhe aapko bachane ke liye pehle hi aa jaana chahiye tha par mai aisa kar nahi paaya...mere aage jhuk kar mujhe aur sharminda nahi kijiye....


un SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke jhukne ki wajah se ye gratefulness bhare shabd nikle the VIKRAM ke mooh se jisse sun mera dimag aur ghumne laga...


abbe jhuk rahe hain toh jhukne de....har kriya par pratikriya dena zaroori hai kya...????


maine apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar khudko is scene se nikalne ki koshish ki par naa toh mera CEREBRATION process ruka aur naahi mai kahin jaa paaya...

mai samajh gaya tha ki chupchaap is scene ko dekhne ke alawa mai aur kuch nahi kar sakta....

par sawal tha kyun...????is ajeeb si situation ka mai hissa aakhir hun hi kyun..????

mere dimag ye khayal,ye sawal utha aur aisa hote hi....


BAS EK HI CHIZ HOGI AAPKE PAAS..AAPKA FOCUS..USSE MAT KHONE MAT DIJIYEGA....


yahan aane se pehle WOOGER ke dwara kahe gaye ye aakhri shabd mere dimag me gunj uthe aur tab...


MAI-FOCUS.....toh isiliye WOOGER ne wo sab kaha tha...


sirf ek hi chiz hogi mere paas yahan...mera focus... WOOGER ko ye achi tarah pata tha ki aisi situations mujhe pasand nahi hai..

aise haalaton par mujhe behad ghussa aata hai aur isiliye usne mujhe focus karne ko kaha...

par sawal tha ki kis chiz par focus...???

aur is sawal ke mere dimah me aate hi mere dimag me ek aur vichar aaya...

aur wo vichar related tha is scene se,is scene se pehle hue scene se aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,us scene se...

aur wo vichar tha INTERCONNECTION....

in sabhi scenes ke beech ka interconnection.....

yahan aane ke baad mere brain ke paas jo bhi ho raha hai,us situation aur uske kaaran ke baare me bata diya tha jispar maine abhi tak dhyan nahi diya tha par ab jab ye interconnection waala thought mere dimag me ghuma toh....

maine sthithi ko samajhna shuru kiya...


SHADOW WORLD....jahan par ki is waqt mai hun aur ye scene chal raha hai....

par is jagah ka main base hai YELUPTUS.... YELUPTUS ke phase log jinhe SAMAY SANCHALAK kaha jaata hai,ye VIKRAM unhe bachane ke liye yahan aaya hai....

saath hi iske ek dost RONIT ki bandi bhi yahin par hai...usse bhi ye bachayega...

wo bandi jiske SOUL ko yahan rakha gaya hai par uski body YELUPTUS me hai...

toh VIKRAM in samay SANCHALAKON ko aur us ANJALI ko wahan YELUPTUS lekar jaayega...

is beech usse ek banda (ASMODEUS)rokne ke liye jaal pehle hi bicha chuka hai par is VIKRAM ke paas uska bhi kaat hai...

jitne scenes aur unme chuppi baatein mere brain me feed hui thi,un sab scenes ke baare me mera dimag sochne laga tha....

aur jab ye bichaye hue jaal ko kaatne ke baare me maine socha toh ek aur baat mujhe click hui par tabhi maine saamne dekha jahan filhal scene badla hua tha...

filhal mere saamne wahi chutiyaapa ho raha tha jisse mujhe sakht chidh thi...

wo RONIT aur ANJALI ek dusre se chipke ro rahe the...

ajeeb hote hai ye insaan,par inke aankhon se nikalne waale aansu toh saale inse bhi zyada ajeeb hote hain....

khushi me bhi tap tap...
aur gam me bhi tap tap....

ye sab dekh mera FOCUS ek baar firse dagmagane laga tha...

kisi tarah khud ko shaant rakh maine badhte hue scene ko dekha jisme is waqt VIKRAM sabko us ANJALI ke baare me bata raha tha jisse sun....


MAI-yahan aane se pehle hi VIKRAM ko yahan hone waali ghatnaon ke baare me pehle se pata tha...


ye SAMAY SANCHALAK toh yahan pehle se fase the,par ANJALI baad me aayi...

toh iska matlab is ANJALI ke liye hi VIKRAM ne ye sab plan kiya tha...???


khudse maine is sawal ko pucha tha jiske baad jo jawab mujhe mila, usse sun mujhe behad hairani hui...

darasal mere sawal ka jawab ye tha ki ANJALI ke chakkar me VIKRAM ne in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko nahi bachaya tha balki SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko bachane ke liye hi ANJALI ek bate ki tarah yahan fasayi gayi thi...

ANJALI ke rooh ka yahan fasna,fir SAMAY SANCHALAKON aur usse bachana,uske liye jo jaal is planet ke baahar bichaya gaya hai,usse todna,in sab chizon ki planning is VIKRAM ne pehle hi kar li thi...

GAZAB.....

zindagi me pehli baar mai kisise impressed hua tha...itni doordarshita,itni gehri soch aur har soch ko sach karne ki itni perfect timing ke hisaab se ki gayi planning....

ye banda haarta bhi tab tha jab wo haar uski permanent jeet ke liye zaroori ho.... brilliant...

aisi soch,maine pehle naa kabhi suni thi aur naa dekhi thi...

aur is bande ke ganit ko samajhne ke baad WOOGER ki kahi gayi us baat ka matlab bhi clear ho gaya tha jisme usne kaha tha ki ye chunouti meri pehli ki chunouti se alag hai...

mai us alag shabd ka matlab samajh gaya tha...darasal mujhe in chal rahe scenes me VIKRAM ke dwara kiye gaye kisi loop hole ko nahi dhundna hai aur wo isiliye kyunki is bande ka jiski doordarshita itni adhik ho,uske faislon me koi loop hole ho hi nahi sakta....

no chance....mujhe bas chal rahe scenes me kuch aisa dhoodna hai jisse meri kahani aage badh sake...

mujhe koi faayda ho...aur ye thi pate ki baat .

kyunki baat jab mere faayde ki ho toh mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun..kuch bhi......

aur isiliye bilkul shaant dimag se maine ek baar firse ho chuke scenes,chal rahe scenes aur aage hone waale scenes ke baare me sochne laga...

itna toh mai samajh chuka tha ki mere hisse me bas ye 5 hi scenes hain..

jinme se do khatm ho chuke the.. ANJALI ke saath VIKRAM and party wapas SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke paas jaa rahe the jo ki third scene tha...

fourth tha sabko yahan se lekar YELUPTUS jaana aur paanchva scene....

jahan VIKRAM in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haath me unki khoyi hui chiz,wo PARIVARTAK....

ek second....

paanchva scene...wo PARIVARTAK....


in saare scenes ke hone ka maine reason..in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke yahan fasne ka main reason...

PARIVARTAK...

jaise hi maine us cheez ka naam liya...ek ke baad ek 2 chizen hui...


pehli...mere dimag me us chiz ki saari qualities ghoom gayi...

jisse jaan pata nahi kyun par mujhe aisa laga ki ye chiz mere kaam ki hai...

dusri...jaise hi mujhe ye laga ki wo PARIVARTAK mere kaam ka hai toh...

scene achanak se badal gaya..aur ab jo scene mere saamne tha, usse dekh mera doubt clear ho chuka tha..

mai jaan gaya tha ki maine jo socha hai,woh sahi hai aur ussi soch ko sach karna hi meri chunouti hai...

toh baat ye hai ki filhal mai YELUPTUS me tha....the last scene...aur mere saamne wahi scene chal raha tha jab VIKRAM SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko unki amanat wo PARIVARTAK dene waala tha...


MAI-maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi....aur haan,ye rakhiye...


SAMAY SANCHALAK jo abhi VIKRAM ke samman me jhuke hue the,isiliye VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi aur aisa kehne ke baad usne apna haath aage kar diya jisme is waqt PARIVARTAK tha...


uske aisa karte hi ek SAMAY SANCHALAK jo VIKRAM ke paas khada tha,usne PARIVARTAK ko lene ke liye haath aage badhaya par tabhi...


MAI-meri ek choti si shart hai...


haath ko band karte hue maine ye baat kahi....


MAINE....VIKRAM nahi, RAAZ....


ji haan doston,jaise hi is chunouti ka,is PARIVARTAK ka ganit mere samajh me aaya toh uske agle hi pal mera lock khul gaya jiski wajah se mai aur VIKRAM ab ek ho gaye the..

jiska matlab tha ki ab bhale hi sabke saamne VIKRAM tha, par bol mai raha tha...

wahin mere moothi band kar lene aur shart waali baat sunkar sabhi SAMAY SANCHALAK thode hairan hue par phir...


SAMAY SANCHALAK-hamari zindagi aapki rini hai...aapko humse kisi bhi shart ko rakhne ki aawashyakta nahi hai..

aap bas aadesh karen...

MAI-is PARIVARTAK ki wo urja jisse ye kaam karti hai,bhavishya me agar mujhse jude kisi shaksh ko uski zaroorat pade,toh aap usse wo de denge....

SAMAY SANCHALAK-jaisi aapki iccha...


SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haan kehte hi maine apni band moothi khol di jiske baad us SAMAY SANCHALAK ne mere hatheli se us PARIVARTAK ko le liya aur aisa hote hi....


CHANNNN.....


jo pichli baar hua tha,wo ek baar fir hua...

ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir back to ground zero....

mai wapas ZEAL me tha par filhal mai kuch bhi dekhne ko haalat me nahi tha aur wo isiliye kyunki filhal mere sir pichle baar ke mukable 10 times zyada tezi se ghoom raha tha...

mujhe kuch zyada hi chakkar aa rahe the aur isiliye hi mai aakhen band kiye neeche zamin par baitha raha....

kuch time tak aisa hi raha par fir dheere dheere mai normal hone laga aur jab puri tarah control me aane ke baad maine saamne dekha toh halka hadbada gaya...

reason.....

mere just chehre ke saamne wo gola tha..mera SOUL jo lagatar hawa me rotate ho raha tha...

WOOGER gayab tha par fir bhi mai usse mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

us gole me....

kuch der tak us chamakte hue gole ki taraf dekhte rehne ke baad....


MAI-MAI TUMHE APNATA HUN...

KADKADKADKAD.........


bura bramhaand jaise ek akeli bijli ke kadkadane se kaamp gaya tha...

har planet ke mausam ka rookh jaise badal sa gaya..dead aur living...dono hi catagories me aane waale planets halke halke shake kar gaye the...

aur ye sab hua kyunki meri ijazat milne par wo gola aage badha aur mujhme sama gaya....aisa hote hi meri aankhen band ho gayi...

par mai mehsoos kar raha tha..zindagi me pehli baar mai feel kar raha tha..

apne sharir, apne khoon,apni dhamniyon ke andar ke khaali jagah ko bharta hua, mai mehsoos kar raha tha....

mujhe aisa mehsoos ho raha tha maano saalon ke banzar tapte hue zamin par kisine ek saath hazaron laakhon litres paani chhod diya ho...

wo sukoon jisse ab tak mehroom tha mai,wo jagah banati chali jaa rahi thi mere andar...

ye saare changes the internal..par in internal changes ke saath saath kuch external changes bhi hui thi mujhme..

aur wo ye ki jaise hi meri SOUL mujhme samayi aur meri aankhen band hui toh uske agle hi pal mera sharir hawa me uthne laga...

dekhte ho dekhte mere sharir ke upar ka kapda bhi change hone laga...

sabse pehle mere sharir ke chaaron taraf ek White AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere sharir ke andar sama gayi...

aisa hote hi mere sharir par lenin ka ek white robe aa gaya...uske baad us robe ke theek upar white AURA ki hi tarah ek Black AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere white robe se hote hui mere sharir ke andar sama gayi..

par aisa karne ke dauran jab us black aura ne mere white robe ko chhua toh us robe ka colour light grey ho gaya jo ki white aur black ke mixture se banta hai....

aisa hone je baad dheere dheere mera sharir neeche aane laga aur fir jaise hi maine neeche zamin ko chhua toh...

meei aankhen khul gayi....

gehri kaali aankhen jinke side ke white layers kuch zyada hi white lag rahe the...

khair,jaise hi meri aankhen khuli toh ek aur cheez hui jo aaj se pehle tak kabhi nahi hui thi....

aur wo thi mere chehre par aayi smile....

ek aisi smile jisse agar koi dekhe toh khush ho jaaye par agar us smile ka matlab woh samajh len toh khade khade hi mar jaaye...

waise mere chehre par muskurahat bewajah nahi aayi thi..ye aayi thi saamne ke drishya ko dekh kar....

kyunki mere saamne is waqt ZEAL ka wahi CAVE tha jo ki mere yahan is planet ka aakhri padhav bhi tha.....

wo cave jiske andar rakhi thi wo chiz jisse paane ke chakkar me ek living planet dead planet me badal gaya tha....

jisse haasil karne ki chaah liye hue hi VIKRAM ki aatma is duniya se kooch kar gayi thi...

wo chiz jisse maine ab tak toh dekha nahi hai par wo hai meri..

aur jab maine ye kaha hai ki wo hai meri toh iska matlab hai ki wo hai meri...

khwahish meri us chiz ko paane ki isiliye nahi hai kyunki usse mere liye rakha gaya hai...

balki wo chiz meri isiliye honi chahiye kyunki uspar ek pure planet ka khoon chadha hai...

aur har wo chiz jisse jaan ka souda ho,wo meri milkiyat hai...mera possession hai...

kadam aage badhaye maine aur mere aisa karte hi us cave ke dwar par lage kawach ne ek second ke liye roka mujhe jaise meri ability ko check kar rahe hon...

par mere sharir ke layers ko chhune ke baad wo kawach,wo SHIELD hath gaye...

jaise ijazat de di hon mujhe andar jaane ki par mai aage nahi badha..

wahin khada raha...

reason....

ijazat nahi di thi maine us shield ko mujhe chhune ki,mujhe check karne ki...

mai saamne tha uske..usse mujhe mehsoos karte hi hat jaana chahiye tha par usne aisa kiya nahi...

aur ye MUJHE ACCHA NAHI LAGA...

meri aankhon ki putliyon ne us pure cave ke saamne ke hisse ko ghura aur unke aisa karte hi meri aankhon se ek tez beam nikal us gufe par padi aur aisa hoti hi...

BOOM........

ek behad tez dhamaka hua jisse har taraf dhuan dhuan ho gaya par jab kuch der baad dhuan halka sa chatta aur nazara thoda clear hua toh....

mere saamne ab koi gufa nahi thi...

wo GUFA jisme kisi shaktishali cheez ko rakha gaya tha,wo puri gufa baarik kankad me badal chuki thi...

meri nazar saamne hi tiki thi jahan kuch door par abhi bhi gehra dhuan tha par wo bhi dheere dheere chhat raha tha..

wo jagah us gufe ka aakhri chhor tha jahan wo CHIZ thi jisse mujhe lena tha...

mai us chiz ki shakti ko,usse uth rahe vibrations ko bohot ache mehsoos kar raha tha...

par filhal us dhuen ki wajah se maine us chiz ko ab tak dekha nahi tha..

par ye bas kuch seconds ki hi baat thi...aur wo seconds bhi aakhirkaar beet gaye....

dhuan chhatthe chhatthe chhat hi gaya aur jab aisa hua toh zindagi me dusri baar mere chehre par smile aa gayi...

reason....

meri yahan hone ki wajah,meri milkiyat,mera prized possession meri aankhon ke saamne chamak raha tha..


beintihan shakti sa labalab bhara hua LORD OF ANGEL KA........



..............SWORD.................









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......








AAPKA APNA V...J.....
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thanks brother....

aapke sawal ke do jawab hain...

dekhiye,RAAZ ansh bhi hai aur urja bhi....

ansh isiliye kyunki aapne update me padha hoga ki RAAZ ka ek bache ke roop me nirman MARIA ki kokh me pura ho chuka tha...

matlab RAAZ ek insaan ke taur par pura ho chuka tha jisse womb se nikalne se pehle gayab kar diya gaya..

is tark par RAAZ bhale hi paida nahi hua,par kyunki woh as a human pura ho chuka tha, isiliye woh insaan hi hai jo saamanya se alag tarah se janma hai..

scientifically isse ek tarah ka scissor keh sakte hain par isme kaata piti nahi hui..

urja isiliye kyunki paida hone ke baad us ansh ko urja ke saath mix kar diya gaya jisse woh ansh urja ke roop me dhal gaya...

aur haan,urja maari nahi jaa sakti hai par khatm zaroor ki jaa sakti hai...

par kyunki RAAZ ansh bhi hai aur urja bhi, isiliye usse maara bhi jaa sakta hai aur khatm bhi kiya jaa sakta hai...

matlab ki RAAZ mortal bhi hai aur saath hi immortal bhi...

lastly,ye mat bhuliye ki is kahani me RAAZ bana hi VIDEOUS ko khatm karne ke liye h...

ab jo VIDEOUS jaise immortal ko khatm kar sakta hai,woh uske haathon khud bhi toh khatm ho sakta hai....

ummid hai aap samajh gaye honge...

khair,jaise ki RAAZ ek human bhi ho sakta hai,iska ek hint pehle hi uske apne emotions ko paane waale safar me diya gaya tha,waise hi ek dusra hint bhi aaj ke update me diya gaya hai jispar kisika bhi dhyan nahi gaya hai..

khair,zyada sochne ka nahi,bohot jald us hint ke baare me aur uske jawab ke bare me pata chal jaana hai..

isiliye saath bane rahiye...
hmmm matlub aap ye kehna chahte hai ya me apki kehne ka matlub ko aisa samja ki


Raaz ansh bi hai urja bi

ab muje lagta hai ki raaz ki is bure waqt me sirf uski urja shakti katam ho jayegi

or jo wo ansh bi hai apni saari yardasht khoker kahi or milega hame jo kal ki update me apne hame dikhayata


rahi baat viduos ki tho wo asmodeos or vikram ke astr ki urja se bana hai tho jaisa apne kaha urja ko maar nahi sakte katam jaroor kiya jaa sakta hai

iska matlub jaise raaz ke paas 2 vikalp hai or viduos ke pas 1 apni urja shakti
 
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