Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE SOUL KO 3 PERCENT TAK AMPLIFY KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNA SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN HAASIL KAR LIYA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-41



PLANET-PAGAN


PLACE-OUTSIDE THE CONCEAL




PAR YE KAISE SAMBHAV HUA HOGA...????


itni shaktishali sheild ko hatakar usse bhi sashakth shield ko ussi jagah par laga dena....

is ghatna ko samajhna mere mastishk ke baahar hai....


CONCEAL ke baahar khade un dono PRIME VOTARIES me se ek ne dusre se ye baat kahi thi....


2ND PRIME- FORBIDDEN FOREST ke purane SHIELD ke hatne aur naye shield ke lagne ke baare me bhale hi hum kuch pata naa kar paayen par hum kamsekam ye toh pata laga hi sakte hain ki kya in kuch dino me CHOSENS ya pure ELYSIAN me kuch alag aur anokhi ghatna ghati hai!!!

sambhavata isse hume FORBIDDEN FOREST me hui is anhoni ke baare me koi sutr mil jaaye....


EK GHATNA HUI HAI....AUR US GHATNA KO HUMNE ANJAAM DIYA HAI PAR USKA FORBIDDEN FOREST KE SHIELD KE BADLAW SE KOI LENA DENA HO SAKTA HAI,YE KEHNA AUR JANANA KATHIN HAI....


second PRIME ki baat par first PRIME kuch kehta,usse pehle hi unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jisse sun jab wo dono piche palte toh hairan reh gaye....

kyunki itni sadiyon me pehli baar is planet PAGAN par unke siwa kisi aur ne apne kadam rakhe the...

aur wo isiliye kyunki ye PLANET ek invisible planet tha jisse sirf wo dono hi dekh sakte the aur is Planet ke chaaron taraf bane CONCEAL se nikalte behisab energy ke kano ko wo dono khudme sokh pure bramhand me faile negetive energy me barabar maatra me failate the...

bina kuch kahe jab wo dono PRIMES chup chaap apne saamne kaale labaden me dhak khade 2 lambe chowde khubsoorat naujawano ko dekhte hi rahe toh..


1ST-aise kya dekh rahe ho TRISTEN,UBEL urf PRIMES....


un do naujawano ke mooh se apna naam sun dono PRIMES jinke naam TRISTEN aur UBEL the,unhe ek naya jhatka laga....

wo dono kabhi kisi manushya ke saamne nahi aaye the, isiliye kisi manushya ke liye bhi unka naam aur unki asliyat jaanana namumkin tha par aise me unke saamne khade noujawan unka naam le rahe the,ye unke liye hadh se zyada surprising baat thi....aur isiliye.....


TRISTEN-kaun ho tum dono....???yahan tak pahunche kaise???aur humara naam kaise jaante ho tum dono....


1ST-bande ko DORIAN kehte hain...

2ND-aur mera naam GASTON hai....

UBEL-aadhe adhure jawab ka kya matlab hai???ye ek invisible Planet hai fir tum dono yahan tak pahunche kaise.??aur tum dono hume kaise jaante ho...???

TRISTEN-bina rooke,bina chhupaye ek baar me sab batao..warna fir kuch bhi chupaane ke liye bachoge nahi.

GASTON-yaar,hum toh waise bhi tumhe sab kuch batane hi waale the fir ye dhamki dene ka kya matlab hua....???

DORIAN-arre GASTON tu bhi naa..dhamki toh ye denge hi..aakhir ye VOTARIES hain aur wo bhi PRIMES...

uske upar jinhe ASPRIT CRYSTAL haasil karne jaisa mahatvpurn kaam mila ho,aise me ghamand toh hoga hi,kyun????


DORIAN ki baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL dono ki hairani aur badh gayi...

aaj se laakhon saal pehle ek kaali urja ke zariye unki utpatti hui thi....

utpatti hone ke saath hi dono ke mastishk me unke kartavyon ki suchi ban chuki thi...

pure BRAMHAAND me negetive energy ki vibes ka niyantran jiske liye unhe ye grah pradan kiya gaya....

THE PAGAN....ek grah jiska arth hi GODLESS tha...kaali urja se bhare CONCEAL se bana ya grah jo sab ke liye invisible tha par TRISTEN aur UBEL ko isse dekhne aur isme moujud CONCEAL se kaali urja bator pure universe me faili negetive energy ko taakat dene ka order mila tha....

aur kyunki ye ek bohot hi mahatvpurn kaam tha jisse in dono ke supudr kiya gaya tha, isiliye in dono ko kaali duniya ke baasindon me jinhe VOTARIES kaha jaata tha,sabse uccha ohda jisse PRIMES kaha jaata tha,wo diya gaya...

inhone kabhi apne janm daata ko nahi dekha tha...bas unki moujudgi,unki taakat ko ye mehsoos karte aa rahe the...

aur fir jab ELYSIAN bana aur usme CHOSENS bana,tab inke mastishk me ek naya daayitv mehsoos kiya tha...in dono ko hi ek naya kartavya mila tha...

aur kartavya tha tha kisi tarah FORBIDDEN FOREST me ghuss ESPRIT CRYSTAL naam ke ek POUDHE ko haasil karna.....

par ye baat sirf in dono tak hi seemit thi par aaj woh baat,woh RAAZ kisi aur ke mooh se sun unki hairangi ka thikana naa tha....

aur isiliye......

dono ke haathon me kaali urja se bani do behad hi shaktishali rays dikhne lagi jisse dekhne ke baad bhi DORIAN aur GASTON yunhi khade rahe aur toh aur dono ab muskurane lage the jisse dekh...

TRISTEN aur UBEL ne wo shaktishali rays un dono par chhod di...

tezi se aage badhti hui wo rays sidhe DORIAN aur GASTON ke paas pahunchi aur agle hi pal....

TRISTEN aur UBEL ki aankhen hairat se phaile gayi...

reason....

wo rays DORIAN aur GASTON ko chunne se pehle hi gayab ho gayi...

wo dono ye sab dekh hairan ho hi rahe the ki...


DORIAN-ego shaant nahi hua hai toh ek do baar aur try kar lo....


DORIAN ki baat sun krodh se bhar TRISTEN aur UBEL ne pehle se zyada shaktishali rays se unpar hamla kiya par is baar bhi wahi hua jo pichli baar hua tha aur saath hi TRISTEN aur UBEL ke chehron par bhi same expressions ne dobara janm liya...

hairani waali...


TRISTEN-ye ho kya raha hai...????hum PRIME VOTARIES hain..sabse shaktishali devils....fir bhi hum in dono par ek waar tak nahi kar paa rahe hain...

UBEL-inse bhi wahi nakaratmak urja mehsoos ho rahi hai jo ek negetive energy ke dhaarak se feel hoti hai...

toh kya ye dono hum dono se bhi zyada taakatwar hain....!!!!


dheere dheere ek dusre se ye baat kahi thi TRISTEN aur UBEL ne par DORIAN aur GASTON ke kaano ne in baaton ko sun liya tha aur isiliye....


GASTON-jab tumhe hum dono se hi negetive energy ke dhaarak hone ka ehsaas ho gaya tha fir tumne humpar waar kiya hi kyun???

bhale hum ek dusre ko nahi jaante,par hue toh hum ek hi biradari ke naa...!!!

sirf isiliye kyunki hum tumhare baare me jaante hain,iska ye arth toh nahi ki hum tumhare dushman hain....

khair, tumhare dusre sawal ka jawab ye hai ki nahi,hum tum dono se zyada taakatwar nahi hain...

humne yahan aate hi tum dono ki urja ko mehsoos kiya tha jisse hum jaan gaye the ki tum humare jitne hi taakatwar ho.....


GASTON ko baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL ke chitt kuch shaant hue aur....


UBEL-fir humare waar tumhe chhu kaise nahi paaye..???aur sabse mahatvpurn prashn...tum dono ho kaun aur is jagah aur humare baare me kaise jaante ho....???

DORIAN-tumhare waar hume isiliye nahi chhu paaye kyunki jisne tumhe shakti di hai,wo aisa nahi chahte the....


DORIAN ki baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL ki aankhen badi ho gayi....


TRISTEN-kya tum unhe jaante ho jinhone hume hamara astitv diya hai....???kya tum mile ho unse...???

DORIAN-nahi..tumhari hi tarah hum bhi apne maalik ko,apne LORD ko nahi jaante....

jis din humne WICKEDS ko chuna tha,us din ke baad se humari shaktiyon me zaroorat se zyada izafa hone laga tha.....

aur tab hume hamare maansik tarango dwara ye ehsaas hua tha ki koi hai jisse hume shakti milti hai..

CHOSENS se nikalne ke baad unhi mansik tarango ke sahare hume kya karna hai,iska aadesh milta raha hai....

TRISTEN-fir tumne aisa kyun kaha ki jisne hume shakti di hai,wo nahi chahte ki humara waar tumpar asar kare....!!!!

GASTON-kal,jab hum apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar baithe hue the tab achanak humare antarman me ek chalchtra chalne laga...

wo chalchitra tum dono ki utpatti aur saath hi is jagah ke baare me tha...

tumse judi saari chizen dikhane ke baad ek baar firse hamari maansik tarango ke zariye hume bataya gaya ki hume kya karna hai aur isiliye hi hum yahan aaye hain...


GASTON ki baat sunane ke baad TRISTEN aur UBEL ka mind clear ho chuka tha aur isiliye....


TRISTEN-yahan aane ke baad kya karne ka aadesh mila tum dono ko...???

DORIAN-kuch der pehle UBEL ne jo baat kahi thi, aadesh ussise juda hua hai...???

UBEL-maine ashanka jatayi thi..!!!kaun si aashanka...???

DORIAN-yahi ki agar beete kuch dino ke dauran CHOSENS aur ELYSIAN me hui kuch alag aur ajeeb ghatna ke baare me pata lagaya jaaye toh sambhavatah FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ke saath hue is naye ferbadal ke baare me kuch pata chal sake...!!!

TRISTEN-kya tum jaante ho aisi koi baat jo hamare kaam aa sake...!!!


TRISTEN ke sawal par GASTON ne un dono se unke dwara CHOSENS me ki gayi saari chizon ke baare me vistaar se bataya jisse sun....

UBEL-tum dono bilkul sahi waqt par CHOSENS se nikal aaye kyunki agar ab bhi tum wahan hote toh chup chaap nikal nahi paate...

wahan kiye gaye naye intezam ke tahat ab kisi bhi roop me wahan chhupna asaan nahi hoga...

DORIAN-mushkil bhi nahi hai aur yahi hume mila hua aadesh bhi hai..

TRISTEN-hum samjhe nahi....

GASTON-chalchitra me tum dono ke baare me humne sab kuch jaana..wo sabkuch suna jiske baare me tumne kabhi bhi baat ki ho...

apne vaartalaap ke dauran ek baar tumne kaha tha ki FORBIDDEN FOREST ke kawach ko todne ke liye tumhe apne hi jaise 2 primes ki zaroorat hai....(update 14)

aur ab tumhare saamne wo do moujud hain.. bhale hi hum tum dono ki tarah designeted nahi hain,par taakat hamari bhi tum dono jitni hi hai....

TRISTEN-baat toh tumhari sahi hai kintu tum bhul rahe ho ki ab FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagi SHIELD dusri hai aur adhik shaktishaali bhi....

aur saath hi tum kuch der pehle kahi gayi baat ko bhi nazarandaaz kar gaye ki ab CHOSENS suraksha ko behad kada kar diya gaya hai....

FORBIDDEN FOREST toh door ki baat hai, ELYSIAN ke atmosphere me enter karte hi wahan lage REVEAL SHIELD ki wajah se enter karne waala wahin phas jaayega...

DORIAN-pata hai hume...aur is rukawat ko bhedne ka ek upay bhi hai aur hume mila aadesh bhi wahi hai...

aur wo yeh hai ki hum chaaron hummese kisi ek ko apni puri urja de denge...

aisa karne se jisme chaaron ki shaktiyan sammilit hongi,uska AURA aur power kayi guna badh jaayega...

aur aisa hone par wo ELYSIAN ke atmosphere me bina REVEAL SHIELD ko chhue aar paar ho jaayega aur pahunchega FORBIDDEN FOREST...

wahan pahunch wo hum charon ki shakti ke ek bade bhaag se wahan lage shield par waar karega...

agar isse koi asar hua toh thik hai,warna kisi wastu ka roop dhar wo wahin reh jaayega aur intazar karega...

kyunki is baat ke chances bohot zyada hain ki jis bhi wajah se wo nayi SHIELD wahan lagi hai,wo wajah,wo kaaran bohot jald saamne aayega aur aisa hone par kisina kisika us jagah par moujud hona zaroori hai taaki aage ki yojna banayi jaa sake...

TRISTEN-appratim.. bohot acche....par ab sawal ye hai ki humme se kaun jayega wahan???

DORIAN-mere hisaab se mere aur GASTON me se hi ek ko wahan jaana chahiye...kyunki hum dono CHOSEN'S ke X SAVENT bhi reh chuke hain aur kuch samay pehle kaafi dino tak roop badal wahan reh bhi chuke hain...

UBEL-DORIAN sahi keh raha hai...???


TRISTEN ko dekh UBEL ne ye baat kahi jispar usne bhi sehmati se apne sir ko hilaya....


GASTON-DORIAN,tum jaao.....


GASTON ki baat sun DORIAN ne haan me apna sir hilaya jiske baad GASTON, TRISTEN aur UBEL ne ek apna apna haath DORIAN ke sir par rakha aur....


APABHAJATI SHAKTIYEM

SHARE THE POWERS....


teeno ke haathon se tez kaali urja ke kan nikal DORIAN ke sir se hote hue uske andar chale gaye aur kuch der baad jab teeno ki powers uske andar puri tarah sama gayi toh apni aakhen khol ek baar teeno ko dekh DORIAN gayab ho gaya.....




PLANET-ANGIS


PLACE-THE LONSDALEITE SURFACE



THIS FEELS LIKE A HEXAGONAL DIAMOND..... ACTUALLY, LONSDALEITE SE BHI HARD LAG RAHA HAI YE....


ANGIS ki dharti ko chhute hue uski sakhti ko bhaampte hui maine ye baat kahi.....

LONSDALEITE ..THE HEXAGONAL DIAMOND...carbon atom se bana ek aisa padarth jo kisi normal diamond se 58 percent tak zyada sakht hota hai...

earth me mere school ke waqt ek exibition me us padarth ki stiffness ke baare me bataya gaya tha...

maine usse chhu kar bhi dekha tha aur aaj,abhi jab mai ANGIS ke bright hard surface jo ki asal me meri body thi,usse chhu raha tha toh mujhe waisi hi stiffness feel ho rahi thi....

apne SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN ko apnaane ke baad mai RENAISS se gayab hokar sidhe yahan ANGIS ke surface me pahuncha tha....

kisi suraj aur uski roshni ka naamonisham toh yahan bhi nahi tha par ab mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke mere paas hone ki wajah se andhere me bhi mai is jagah ko halka halka dekh bhi paa raha tha aur feel toh mai is jagah ko puri tarah se kar paa raha tha...

jahan iske surface ko chhu mai yahan ke mahoul ko samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha....

wahin mai ye feel kar paa raha tha ki naa sirf yahan ka surface behad sakht hai balki issi surface se ek invisible bhaamp sa uth raha hai jo yahan ke pure atmosphere me faila hua hai....

ye sab dekh aur feel kar mai kuch der tak sochta raha aur fir jahan khada tha ,wahin paalti maar kar baith gaya...

reason....

ab waqt aa gaya tha OMMIN WHIZZDER ki wo BODY AMPLIFICATION CLASS jo maine directly kabhi attend hi nahi ki thi,usme batayi gayi baaton ke practicals ka...

par ye AMPLIFICATION bhi mere liye NEW BORN SAVENTS ke mukable behad mushkil hone waala tha...

reason....

NEW BORN SAVENTS ki BODY AMPLIFICATION CLASS se pehle jo un sab ki BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ki class lagti thi,usme maamuli spells bol ANURODHAM uccharit kar unke asar shuru hote hi ARAMATI spell ke zariye apne BODY aur BLOOD ko strong banaya jaata tha taaki BODY aur BLOOD AMPLIFICATION CLASS ke waqt BODY aur BLOOD ko bardasht ke kaabil banaya jaa sake par mere paas ye suvidha uplabdh nahi thi....

aur wo isiliye kyunki mera BRAIN last level commodity jaisa tha jo ANURODHAM matlab request jaise modes par kaam hi nahi karta tha...

kehne ka matlab tha ki mera brain us bijli ke khambe ki tarah tha jisme 24/7 440 volt ki current ghumti thi,usse kam nahi....

batao,itne lambe hone ka bhi kya faayda ki apne hi pair ko jhuk kar chhu naa paao par ab aisa hai toh hai...

aur waise bhi,jinhe samandar naapna ho,unhe jheel aur nadiyon ki lambayi se fark nahi padta....


neeche surface par baith pehle maine apne aap ko aane waali taklif ke liye taiyar kiya...

kuch der tak sunya me ghurte rehne ke baad maine apni aankhen band ki aur apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kiya....

ek second bhi nahi laga tha mere CEREBRATION process ko pause hone me......

apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar apne dimag ke through maine apne aantarik sharir me jhaanka aur..


STHVIRA PHALAKA...

STURDY LAYERS....


RRRRRRRRRR......


jaise hi maine spell uccharit kiya,jis surface par mai baitha tha,us surface se hota hua pure PLANET ka surface vibrate karne laga...

ye vibrations us bhaamp,us AURA ki wajah se ho rahi thi jo yahan ke pure atmosphere me faila hua tha....

itna hi nahi, spell ke uccharit hone ke agle hi pal mere sharir ke beech ek roshni utpaan hui aur aisa hote hi mai bhi behad tez vibrate hone laga....

par in sabke baawjud mera CEREBRATION process paused hi raha....

kuch der tak toh yunhi normal vibrations hote rahe par uske baad is planet ke surface se nikalte bhaamp, AURA ne mujhe neeche se jakadte hue upar uthana shuru kar diya.....

aur dekhte hi dekhte mera sharir tezi se 1000 feet tak upar hawa me uth chuka tha....

wahin in sab baaton se bekhabar mai apni aakhen band kiye hue paused CEREBRATION me baitha hua tha....

hawa me hazaron feet tak uthne ke baad mera sharir ek point par rook gaya....

mere rookte hi mere sharir aur pure Planet par ho rahe vibrations bhi rook gaye....

sab kuch ekdum se shaant ho gaya tha...par ye shaanti,ye khamoshi aane waale tufaan se pehle jaisi thi.......

kyunki kuch seconds tak hawa me rooke rehne ke baad mera sharir jitni tezi se upar aaya tha,usse double tezi se neech aane laga...

saath hi ab mera sharir aur pura PLANET aur zor se vibrate karne lage...

par jis tufaan ki baat maine kahi thi,wo ye sab ho rahi ghatna nahi thi balki wo tufaan toh theek us jagah par jahan kuch der pehle mai paalthi maar kar baitha tha,wahan ban rahi thi...

jis AURA ne mujhe upar hawa me uthaya tha,ussi AURA ke bohot se bhaag ne milkar jahan mai baitha tha,us jagah par khudko samet liya tha par is baar wo AURA naa toh invisible thi aur naahi wo sirf dhuan thi...

us AURA ne khudko bhi yahan ke surface ka roop de diya tha par wo roop sapat zamin ki tarah nahi tha,balki 4 se 5 tez dhaar aariyon ki tarah tha...

wahin in sab se bekhabar mera sharir double tezi se niche ussi dhaar dhaar aariyon waali zamin ki taraf girta chala jaa raha tha aur finally.....


KHAACHHH........KHACHHHHH.......


SIR ALAG aur DHADH ALAG......


MERE SHARIR KE DO TUKDE HO CHUKE THE.....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......







AAPKA APNA V...J......
Excellent update bro
 
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Bhai vj4u this is called a mind blowing, fabulous & out of the box update, what a terrifying revelation you had done, that Florian & Mariya are the parents of RAAZ (never expected that twist), it will be really very interesting to watch, how MAHI will manage to save RAAZ's life.....

brother vj4u congratulations for 900+ Page's, may you cross 2000+ Page's with lot's of interesting and shocking updates.

Looking forward for more wonder updates.... ✌✌

#Respect&Peace
 

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Zabardast update dost
AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF DORIAN GASTON AUR DONO PRIMES KI SHAKTI KO KHUD ME SAMET FORBIDDEN FOREST KE LIYE NIKAL JAATA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ANGIS KI DHAARDHAAR SUFACE SE TAKRAKAR RAAZ A SIR AUR DHADH ALAG HO JAATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



(CHAPTER-1)


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-42



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST




KARMATYAM KAWACHAM

BREAK THE SHIELD



aankh band kar apni, GASTON,aur dono PRIMES ki shakti ko ek kar uski urja ko apne haathon me laa usse FORBIDDEN FOREST ki taraf kar DORIAN ne is SPELL ko uccharit kiya jiske agle hi pal...


BOOMMMMM....

KADKADKADKAD......


DORIAN ke haathon se ek behad shaktishali ray nikal FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lage shield se takrayi jiske baad hua ek bohot bada visphot....

ye visphot itna tagda tha ki isse nikalne waali urja ek second me hi pure ELYSIAN me faile gayi....

jisse ek saath teen chizen hui...


pehli... pura ELYSIAN planet hil gaya....


dusri...ye urja CHOSENS ke sabhi exits me lage NIYANTRAK aur ELYSIAN planet ke chaaron taraf lage REVEAL SHIELD se takrayi jisse behad zor se bijli ke garajne ki awaaz hui aur issi awaaz ke saath REVEAL SHIELD aur NIYANTRAK,dono hi kamzor padh gaye...


teesri... DORIAN jisne abhi spell bola tha,us urja ke takraane se wo bhi kayi 100 feets piche hawa me udte hue gira...

itna hi nahi,uska pura sharir bhi jagah jagah se phat gaya aur har fati jagah se khoon risne laga....

neeche zamin par gire hue DORIAN ka pura sharir dard ke maare kaamp raha tha...

itna dard toh usse apne SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION process me bhi feel nahi hota tha jitna abhi ho raha tha...


filhal ELYSIAN me RAAT ka samay tha....par is kaali andheri raat me bhi DORIAN ki aankhon me beintihan dard ki dori ko saaf dekha jaa sakta tha...

par DORIAN ko is dard ki parwah nahi thi... kyunki usse maalum tha ki uski body jaldi hi heal ho jaayegi aur aisa hone bhi paga tha..

par uski aankhon ki putliyan me dard ke saath saath curiousity bhi saaf sikh rahi thi...

aur ussi jigyasa ko apni aakhon ne samete wo saamne FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ki taraf dekh raha tha jahan is waqt uske spell ki wajah se dhuan faila hua tha aur dheere dheere chhat raha tha....

DORIAN ko puri ummid thi ki itni adhik shaktishaali spell aur urja ke takrane se shield zaroor toot gayi hogi...

par ye ummid us dhuen ke chhatthe hi toot gayi kyunki dhuan chhatne par DORIAN ne dekha ki shield ab bhi jyon ki tyon hai....

uspar us spell aur uski urja se ratti bhar bhi fark nahi aaya hai...

jin aankhon me kuch samay pehle tak jigyasa naach rahi thi,unme ab hairani dikhne lagi thi...

DORIAN ko ummid thi ki bhale hi un chaaron ki sammilit shakti se nikli urja se puri SHIELD naa tute,par kamsekam wo kamzor toh ho hi jaayegi jisse kuch aur prayason se toda jaa sakega par yahan toh aisa kuch bhi nahi hua tha...

uske upar uski khudki lagi padi thi wo alag.....

yahi sab sochte hue DORIAN neeche gira hua tha par tabhi....

DORIAN ko kuch mehsoos hua...ek ray..ek search urja jo uski hi taraf aa rahi thi aur ye feel hote hi DORIAN ne apni nazaren chaaron taraf ghumayi aur aisa karte waqt usne dekha ki uske right ki taraf kuch door ek badi si chattan hai aur ye dekhte hi....

DORIAN khud ek urja me badal uski taraf ud chala...chattan ke paas pahunch DORIAN jo is waqt ek urja ke roop me tha,usne khudko ek urja roopi shawl ki tarah us chattan par lapet liya...

itna hi nahi,dekhte hi dekhte wo urja jo ki DORIAN hi thi,usne khudko us chattan ke halke halke daraaron ke andar shrink karna shuru kar diya aur fir kuch hi palon me wo urja roopi DORIAN us chattan ke andar sama chuka tha...

chattan ke andar samane ke baad DORIAN ne apni life ray bhi band kar di taaki usse aur uski shakti ko mehoos ya detect nahi kiya jaa sake.....

ab wo chattan aur DORIAN ek ho chuke the... DORIAN ka pehla plan toh fail ho chuka tha aur ab baari thi plan 2 ki jisme usse karna tha intezar....

intezar uske saamne dikh rahe FORBIDDEN FOREST me kuch aisa hone ka jisse uske saamne lagi SHIELD toot sake aur wo haasil kar sake ESPRIT CRYSTAL....


chaliye,ab DORIAN ko uske intezar ke saath chhodte hain aur dekhte hain ki aakhir us search ray ka kya kissa hai jiski wajah se DORIAN ko bhaagna pada...



PLACE-CHOSENS



YE KAMPAN KAISI...????AUR MUJHE AISA KYUN FEEL HO RAHA HAI JAISE NIYANTRAK AUR REVEAL SHIELD KAMZOR PADH GAYE HAIN....


apne bed se ek jhatke me uththi hui WHIZZ MARILIZA ne ye baat kahi thi....

DORIAN ki urja ke FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD se takrane par pura ELYSIAN planet zaroor hila tha par us vibration ki strength itni zyada nahi thi ki aadhi raat ke waqt is planet ke baashindon ki neend me khalal daal sake...

NIYANTRAK, REVEAL SHIELD aur usse pehle se lage protect SHIELD ki wajah se un vibrations ka asar naam maatra hi raha tha aur saath hi urja aur shield ke collision se jo dhamaka hua tha,aur jo kadkadane ki awaaz nikli thi,usse bhi in saare shields ne CHOSENS aur uske daayre me aane waale saare ABODES,hostels,aur baaki ki jagahon par asar dikhane ae rok diya tha....

par WHIZZ MARILIZA,jinhone REVEAL SHIELD aur NIYANTRAK ko khud lagaya tha, unhone un saari ghatnaon ko sense kar liya tha...

unhe NIYANTRAK aur REVEAL SHIELD ke kamzor hone ko baat bhi pata chal gayi thi aur isiliye....


ZUMABHAVAM

SEARCH


apne dono haathon ko apne dil ke upar rakh WHIZZ MARILIZA ne is behad hi strong search spell ko uccharit kiya...

spell uccharit hote hi unke sharir se ek urja nikal tezi se aage badhi aur dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi der me us urja ne CHOSENS ke saath saath pure ELYSIAN ko search kar daala...

aankhen band kar search ray ke through pure ELYSIAN ko dekhne ke baad WHIZZ MARILIZA hairan ho gayi kyunki unhe kuch bhi galat nahi dikha tha....

kuch der tak sochne ke baad bhi jab wo kisi nishkarsh par nahi pahunch paayi toh unhone apne dimag ko jhatka...

filhal unka sabse important kaam tha REVEAL SHIELD aur NIYANTRAK ko wapas theek karna aur isiliye....

unhone aankh band kar 2 naam pukare jiske agle hi second unke saamne do log prakat hue...

ye do log PHASE 3 ke WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER the jinhone REVEAL SHIELD aur NIYANTRAK lagane me WHIZZ MARILIZA ki madad ki thi...


(inka naam,intro next chapter me hoga)


jo hua uske baare me discuss kar WHIZZ MARILIZA un dono WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ke saath upar hawa me jahan REVEAL SHIELD laga tha,uth gayi aur fir teeno ne pehle us SHIELD ko aur uske baad NIYANTRAK ko pehle jaisa kar diya...

apna kaam khatm kar WHIZZ MARILIZA ne un dono WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ko kuch kaam bataya aur fir wo teeno gayab ho gaye....




3 MONTHS LATER:-




MAHI,IT SEEMS LIKE YOU ARE MEANT TO BREAK RECORDS.....

TUMNE AAJ APNE SOUL KO 5 PERCENT TAK AMPLIFY KAR LIYA HAI.....


behad khushi se VIOLET WHIZZ ne ye baat MAHI ke kandhe ko thapthapate hue kahi thi...

sirf VIOLET WHIZZ hi nahi, OMMIN, NOX aur yahan tak ki OPHILIA jo ki dusre class me thi, wo yahan aa MAHI ki is uplabdhi ko dekh behad khush aur gourvankik mehsoos kar rahe the...

wahin MAHI bhi apni is uplabdhi par behad khush thi...


MAHI-thanks WHIZZ...par ye sab toh aap sabhi ke guidence ki wajah se hi ho paaya hai...

OMMIN-guidence hum puri class ko dete hain MAHI,par jitna zyada excell tumne kiya,ye kitni badi baat hai,iska filhal tumhe andaza nahi hai...

CHOSENS ke itihaas me tumse pehle sirf 2 hi SAVENTS apne first PHASE me apne SOUL ko 5 percent tak AMPLIFY kar paaye the par itna karne ke liye bhi unhe lagbhag pura ka pura first PHASE ka waqt laga tha wahin tumne apne first PHASE k
pure hone se kaafi pehle hi ye achievement haasil kar li hai...

and that's what we call extraordinary....


WHIZZDER OMMIN ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS behad hairan ho gaye,aur hona bhi chahiye.....

MAHI ne jo achieve kiya hai,wo wakayi hairan kar dene waali baat thi...

pichle 3 mahino me jahan baaki SAVENTS 1 percent AMPLIFICATION par the, ALFREEN VALDIS aur ALFREEN 2 percent AMPLIFICATION par the,wahin MAHI in sabse doguna se bhi zyada aage badh chuki thi aur jaisi uske sikhne ki raftaar thi,sabko lag raha tha ki bohot jald wo baaki sabhi se itni aage nikal jaane waali thi ki shayad hi koi uske nazdik bhi pahunch paata....

jahan sabhi SAVENTS ye sab soch rahe the,MABEL aur ALFREEN MAHI ke paas khade hokar usse congratulate kar rahe the wahin VIOLET WHIZZ jo ki MAHI ke haav bhaav joki har waqt ki tarah abhi bhi behad maasum the,unko dhyan se dekh rahi thi, unhone...


VIOLET-MAHI....idhar aana....


VIOLET WHIZZ ne MAHI ko awaaz di jispar wo unke paas chali gayi aur....


MAHI-yes WHIZZ....

VIOLET-bohot jald tumhara ye PHASE khatm ho jaayega aur tum PHASE 2 me chali jaaogi.

a place with a completely different ball game...kuch bhi ho jaaye, situations kaisi bhi aayen,kosish karna ki tum jo ab ho,wahi raho....

MAHI-mai samjhi nahi WHIZZ...???

VIOLET-abhi samajhne ka waqt bhi nahi aaya hai... PHASE 2 pahuncho,
samajh jaaogi...

aur jab wo waqt aayega aur tum meri baaton ka matlab samjhogi to meri bas ye baat yaad rakhna ki.....

JUST DON'T CHANGE YOUR ATTITUDE,& NOTHING WILL CHANGE YOU....




PLANET-ANGIS



PLACE-THE LONSDALEITE SURFACE




AB YE SAB KYA HAI...???MERA DHADH EK TARAF PADA HUA HAI,PAR MERI AANKHEN AB BHI KHULI HUI HAIN.SIRF SIR KE SAHARE KAISE ZINDA HUN MAI....???

AUR TOH AUR DO HISSON ME BATA HUA HUN MAI FIR BHI MUJHE DARD NAHI HO RAHA HAI....


do hisso me katne ke baad mai ek baar firse kaafi waqt tak behosh raha tha aur ab jab maine apni aankhen kholi toh khudko in ajeebo gareeb vismit bhare haalaton me paaya....

in sab chizon ke baare me mai soch hi raha tha ki...


WOOGER- RENAISS me aapne apne mastishk ko jo pura kiya tha,ussiki wajah se aapki aankhen khuli hui hai aur aapke sir ke sahare aap zinda bhi hain..

kyunki bina dhadh ke sirf aapka mastishk bhi apne aap me ek living being hai...

MAI-aur mera ye dhadh jo kat chuka hai..kya iski bhumika yahin khatm ho gayi...???kya ab iska koi mahatv koi importance nahi...!!!!???

WOOGER-jo aapka hissa ho,uski bhumika kaise khatm ho sakti hai.....!!!!

har sakht chiz uske narm bhaag ke bina adhuri hoti hai jaise ki ek naariyal....

aapka ye sharir jo kat kar gira hua hai,ye us pyaale ki tarah hai jisme paani bhara jaata hai....

ye PLANET aapke sharir ka wo sakht, mazboot aur unbreakable part hai jo aapke is kate hue dhadh ke upar hi lag sakta hai....

MAI-toh fir isne isse kaat kyun diya..???

WOOGER-ye aapka nazariya hai...par agar is planet ke DRISHTIKON se kahen toh isne aapke dhadh ko kaata nahi hai, balki isse aapke sir se alag kiya hai....

ye sharir iska bhaag hai toh fir ye kaise isse kisi aur se juda hua dekh sakta hai....???

MAI-GAZAB......par ye planet waali body ho yaa fir ye saamne padi hui body,dono hai toh mere hi...

WOOGER-toh saabit kijiye.. jaisa aapne RENAISS me kiya tha....

MAI-par RENAISS me toh maine apne brain ko brain AMPLIFICATION process ke through haasil kiya tha aur jab same pattern maine yahan try kiya, BODY AMPLIFICATION ka,toh mere sir aur dhadh alag ho gaye....

WOOGER-hamare beech hui baaton me aapke sawal ka jawab chhupa hua hai...???dhoondiye usse....


is baat ke baad maine WOOGER ko feel nahi kiya jiska matlab tha ki ab naahi wo aaspaas hai aur naahi wo aur kuch bolega....

waise bhi ab baat karne ke liye kuch bacha toh tha bhi nai aur isiliye maine apni aakhen band ki aur on ho gaya mera rewind mode.....

rewind karte hue mai WOOGER ki kahi har baat ko yaad karne laga aur aisa karte karte achanak....

meri aankhen khul gayi aur mere mooh se nikla....


MAI-DRISHTIKON.......yahi toh hai wo shabd,wo fark aur yahi hai mera jawab....

maine jo solution nikala,wo mera nazariya hai,mera DRISHTIKON hai par yahan solution mere DRISHTIKON se nahi,balki is PLANET ke DRISHTIKON se honi hai...

badhiya.....par kaise...????


ye bol maine ek baar firse apni aakhen band kar li par agle hi pal...

MAI-ek second...


flash second se bhi kam samay me mere brain me ek baat ghum gayi thi aur....


MAI-DRISHTIKON,haan....

PAR HAR WO NAZARIYA JO MUJHSE ALAG HAI,WO GALAT HAI....

aur khaaskar wo nazariya zyada galat tab ban jaata hai jab wo mujhse hokar bhi mere faisle se bagawat karta hai...


ye baat bol maine apne kate hue dhadh ko dekha....


toh jis baat ne mujhe click kiya tha,ye woh baat thi jo kuch der pehle WOOGER ki awaaz ne mujhse
kahi thi...

us awaaz ne mujhse ye kaha tha ki is planet ne mere dhadh ko kaata nahi hai,balki isse mujhse,mere sir se alag kiya hai..

aur wo isiliye kyunki is planet ke hisaab se ye dhadh uski property hai,meri nahi...

matlab according to this planet,ye mere hi dhadh ko mujhse hi bachana chahta hai...


waah beta,matlab jisne paida kiya hai,ussiko baap maanane se inkaar kar raha hai ye..

khair,ab is planet ki soch,iska nazariya hi mera solution bhi tha...

kaise,aayiye khud dekh lijiye...


maine apni aaakhen ek baar firse band ki aur apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar apne pure brain me jhaanka....

kyunki ab mera CONSCIOUS aur SUBCONSCIOUS brain ek ho chuke the,isiliye aage aur peeche waala maamla bhi khatm gaya tha...

mere apne andar jhaankte hi mera brain tezi se chamakne laga maano mujhse puch raha ho ki mai kya chahta hun aur aisa hone par...


NIRBHINNATI PARIZEZITA

DESTROY REMAINS


apne dhadh ke chitr ko apne mastishk me utar COMMAND MODE ke tahat ek bohot hi powerful spell ko apne dimag me uccharit kiya maine jiske baad....

mere sir ke centre se ek ray nikal mere dhadh se takrayi aur aisa hoti hi...


KADKADKADKAD....


pura planet tez gadgadahat se gunj utha....ek baar firse pura PLANET vibrate hone laga.... saath hi yahan faili invisible baamp ne ek baar firse khudko yahan ke surface ka roop diya aur aage badhte hue mere kate hue dhadh ko gherne lagi taaki mere brain se nikalne waali urja se usse bacha sake....

par yahan mere paas ek plus point tha aur wo ye ki mera BRAIN mere paas hone ki wajah se ab complete tha aur isiliye uski shakti bohot zyada thi wahin yahan ka non distructable hexagonic diamond surface apne maalik ko naa apnaane ki wajah se mere brain ke mukaable kamzor tha aur issi wajah se is planet ka wo AURA jisne mere dhadh ko bachane ke liye khud ko kawach banaya hua tha,usme darar aane lagi...

aur is baat ko is PLANET ne mehsoos kar liya aur isiliye agle hi pal...


BOOM.....BOOMMM.....BOOMMM...


yahan ke surface se bade bade chattan ke size ke tukde nikal mere sir se takraane lage par is baat ko mere brain ne sense kar liya tha aur isiliye mere pure sir ke chaaron taraf ek urja fail chuki thi jo ki mere sir ki kawach thi...

wo chattan numa surface ussi kawach se takra rahi thi...aur kyunki wo chattan,wo surface mera hi hissa thi,isiliye unke kawach me takraane ke baawjud mera pura sir hil jaa raha tha..

mujhe aisa lag raha tha maano mera sir fat jaayega par aisa lagne ke agle hi pal mera sir khudko heal bhi kar le raha tha..

ye waqt mere patience ka test thi jisse mai lagatar jhelte chale jaa raha tha..

wahin in sabse alag mere sir ke beech se nikalti ray lagatar us kawach numa AURA se takrate hue usse kamzor karti chali jaa rahi thi aur jab is planet ne,yahan ke surface ne is baat ko sense kiya ki kuch hi palon me uska bana kawach toot jaayega toh uske andar se ek naya AURA nikla aur us AURA ne human aakruti leni shuru kar di aur jab uska wo form pura hua toh.....


SURFACE-ROOK JAAIYIYE...MAI HAAR MAANTA HUN....


pura PLANET us aakruti ki awaaz se gunj utha..uski awaaz mere kaano se hote hue mere brain ke andar tak gunj uthi jiske baad maine apni ray wapas kheench li aur aisa hone ke baad maine apni aankhen khol di...

aankh khulte hi maine dekha ki mera saamne sir jhukaye is PLANET ka AURA khada tha...

MAI-sir kyun jhuka hai tumhara...???

tumhari sakhti kamzor pad gayi isiliye yaa fir akad kamzor padh gayi isiliye....

SURFACE-aapke mujhpar kadam rakhte hi mai samajh gaya tha ki mera wajud pura hone waala hai...

par jo bhi hua,wo hona bhi zaroori tha...jo taklif aapko hui,jo dimagi mehnat aapne ki,ye aapko aapke astitv ki mahatvpoornata yaad dilayegi....

MAI-yaadasht meri kabhi kamzor nahi thi....tab bhi nahi jab mera brain adhura tha...

chiz apni ho yaa parayi,agar important hai toh mujhe yaad rehti hi hai....

isiliye gyan baatna chhod aur bas itna bata ki aage kya...???

SURFACE-kya aap mujhe apnaate hain...???

MAI-haan....


mere aisa bolte hi wo AURA wapas neeche SURFACE me sama gayi aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal...

pura PLANET tez roshni se naha gaya aur...

DDDDDD..DDDDDD...DDDDD....

roshni se nahaye is planet ne ek ajeeb awaaz ke saath khudko sametna shuru kiya...

wahin mera wo dhadh jo saamne zamin par gira hua tha,wo hawa me uth gaya aur wapas mere paas aakar mere sir se judne laga...

mere gale ke bhaag ke upar ek roshni chamki aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal mera wo dhadh mujhse jud chuka tha...

dhadh ke judte hi jab maine saamne dekha toh paaya ki ab tak is pure planet ke surface ne khudko fold kar liya tha.....

jis surface se ye pura planet covered tha,wo hat chuki thi aur ab ek baar firse mere saamne ek dead planet tha....

wahin fold hone ke baad ab mere saamne koi surface nahi tha balki ek tez chamakti hui roshni thi jo zamin se upar rooki hui thi..

ek pal yunhi rookne ke baad wo roshni aage badhi aur sidhe mere paas aakar rook gayi....

mere saamne kuch seconds rookne ke baad wo roshni ek jhatke me aage badhi aur......


ek baar firse meri aankhen band ho gayi thi...sir se pair tak mai itni tez roshni se ghir gaya tha ki aisa lag raha tha maano 100 surya ne mujhe khudme lapet liya hai...

meri aankhen toh band thi par mai apne sharir me ho raha badlaav saaf mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

mai feel kar raha tha ki meri height badh rahi thi,mera jism chouda ho raha tha aur saath hi mujhe mere sharir ki beintihan sakhti bhi mehoos hone lagi thi...

dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi der me mere sharir me ho raha parivartan pura hua....

mera wo sharir jo mere prithvi par aane se hi mujhse alag ho gaya tha,aaj mujhe wo mil chuka tha....

mere sharir ke puri tarah mujhse judte hi wo roshni jo ab tak chamak rahi thi, dheere dheere gayab ho gayi aur aisa hote hi jab maine apne haathon ko dekha toh paaya ki ab wo pehle ki tarah saawle nahi the...

wo kaafi fair lag rahe the..mai khudko pehle ke mukaable kaafi uncha bhi mehsoos kar raha tha....

khudko puri tarah dekhne ki iccha liye maine apni aakhen band ki aur....


AADHESHAM....

SWAMDEHA KAROTI....

REFLECT ME.....


COMMAND MODE ke antargat maine khudko dekhne ki iccha zahir ki jiske baad is SPELL ke through mujhse hubahu meri hi ek transparent chavi nikal mere saamne aakar khadi ho gayi....

6 feet se thodi zyadi height,gehri kaali aankhen,jitni kaali aakhen,utna hi gora aur aakarshak chehra aur sharir...

sharir, jo kisi faulad se bhi zyada sakht lag raha tha...is planet me aate waqt mere sharir par jo kapde the,wo mujhe kaafi dheele aate the par ab aisa nahi tha...

wo INSTITUTION ki dheeli dhaali shirt ab mere sharir par puri kas gayi thi..aisa lag raha tha jaise agar maine halki si bhi zor aazmaaish ki toh wo fat jaayegi...

wahin neeche jo pant thi,uske waistline par ilastic material lage hone ki wajah se wo bhaag strech ho gaya tha par uske neeche se pant chota aur tight ho chuka tha...

khudko ek nazar dekhne ke baad maine apni pratibimbh par haath firaya jisse wo gayab ho gaya....

yahan ka mera kaam khatm ho chuka tha... aaj mai 50% tak pura ho chuka tha..aur ab mujhe apne agle padhav ke liye nikalna tha aur isiliye...

maine apni aakhen band ki aur fir mere labh hile...


ANNJAYA......







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V....J......
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF DORIAN FORBIDDEN FOREST KE AAGE LAGI SHIELD KO TODNE ME NAAKAMIYAB HOTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ ANGIS ME APNI BODY KO HAASIL KAR CHUKA HAI...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-43



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-GARDEN




YAAR,YE MOM DAD KO YAHAN AATE HI HO KYA JAATA HAI...???HAR DIN SHAAM KO YAHAN AATE HAIN AUR YAHAN AATE HI DONO SAD HO JAATE HAIN.....


FLORIN aur MARIA ko dekhti hui ALFREEN ne ye baat MAHI se kahi thi....

shaam ka waqt hai.... ALFREEN aur MAHI ke ABODES ke aage ek bohot bada garden tha jahan aksar ye sab jaaya karte hain...

par pichle kuch waqt se FLORIN aur MARIA is garden ke bench par chup chaap baithe ek bade se ped ki taraf dekhte rehte the...

aur aisa karte waqt un dono ke hi aankhon me ek udaasi tairti rehti thi...

par jab bhi ALFREEN ya MAHI unke saamne aate the toh wo dono apne chehre ki udaasi ko turant chhupa lete the par unki ye udaasi naa toh ALFREEN se chuppi reh paayi aur naahi MAHI se...

abhi bhi FLORIN aur MARIA waise hi udaasi se bhare ussi bench par baithe hue the jisse dekh ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi thi....


MAHI-kyun,tujhe pata nahi hai uncle aur aunty ki udaasi ki wajah..???

ALFREEN-pata hai aur yahi baat toh sabse annoying hai..i mean why the hell are they thinking so much about that RAAZ???

theek hai wo unke hi orphanage me bada hua hai aur uske yun gayab ho jaane se unhe taklif hui thi par yaar ab is baat ko acha khaasa waqt beet chuka hai.

then why are they not yet over it...???

MAHI-agar mai achanak gayab ho jaaun toh kya kuch waqt ke baad tu mujhe bhul jaayegi....????

ALFREEN-are you out of your mind MAHI.....???ye kya behuda sawal kar rahi hai tu...???

MAHI-it's a simple question.. just answer it...

ALFREEN-pehli baat toh mai tujhe kahin gayab hone hi nahi dungi...aur dusri baat ki mai tujhe kuch din kya kabhi bhi nahi bhul sakti...u are my bestie,my sister...

MAHI-exactly..and that's the point..jaise mai tere liye important hun,thik waise hi RAAZ uncle aur aunty ke liye important hai...

isiliye bhale hi kitna bhi waqt kyun naa guzar jaaye,wo dono usse nahi bhula paayenge...

but pata hai sabse sad part uncle aunty ki udaasi nahi kuch aur hai...???

ALFREEN-kuch aur...???kya???

MAHI-tu pehle ye bata ki jab bhi uncle aur aunty abhi ki tarah udaas rehte hain aur tu unke saamne jaati hai toh wo kya karte hain...???

ALFREEN-wo apni sadness chhupa lete hain...

MAHI-jaise tu unke expressions se unki man ko baat samajh jaati hai toh kya thik waise hi wo bhi tere man ki baat nahi samajhte honge...

ALFREEN-mai samjhi nahi...

MAHI-unhe bhi tere expressions se,tere vatraav se ye baat pata hai ki you dont like RAAZ....

aur isiliye hi wo dono apni udaasi tujhse chhupate hain...aur yahi unki main sadness hai...

teri RAAZ ke liye negetive feelings ki wajah se wo dono apni feelings tere saamne open nahi kar paate.....


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN ko jhatka bhi laga aur bura bhi..sach hi toh kaha tha MAHI ne....

ye sach tha ki wo RAAZ se nafrat karti thi aur aisa karne ke liye uske paas ek valid reason bhi tha....

ek ladki jiski sabse badi shakti uski intuition power hi rahi hai..wo intuition jo kayi baar sahi sabit ho chuki hai,uska usse RAAZ ke liye alert karna yunhi toh nahi ho sakta tha..

uske upar usse ek hi sapne ka 2 baar aana wo bhi ek hi sequence me,ye bhi koi ittifaq nahi ho sakta tha...

in sab reasons ke baad naaraz hona,nafrat karna laazmi hi tha but having said that,apne emotions ko kisi aur par toh thopa nahi jaa sakta tha aur in a way ALFREEN ne ye apne parents ke saath kiya tha...

uski RAAZ ke liye naapasandi itni visual thi,itni clear thi ki uske mom dad ke nazaron se chhup naa saki aur issi wajah se kayi baar jab uske mom dad RAAZ ke baare me usse puchna chah rahe the,wo nahi puch paate the...

aur aaj bhi uski issi naapasandi ki wajah se unhe apne emotions apni hi beti se chhupane pad rahe the...

ye sab soch ALFREEN khudme kaafi sharminda feel karne lagi aur turant apne mom dad ki taraf badh gayi...

wahin MAHI bhi kuch sochte hue ALFREEN ke saath ho li...


ALFREEN-mom pops..... sorry....


apne mom dad ke saamne pahunch ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jisse sun wo dono thode hairan hue aur isiliye...

MARIA-sorry kisliye baccha...???

ALFREEN-mujhe pata hai ki aap dono ab bhi RAAZ ke gayab hone se sad hain par mere usse dislike karne ki wajah se kuch keh nahi paate...

i am really sorry for being so insensitive....


aakhon me halki si nami ke saath kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne jiske baad FLORIN aur MARIA ne usse kheench kar apne beech baitha liya

aur tabhi.....

FLORIN aur MARIA ke ALFREEN ko chhute hi ek invisible force ray un teeno ke sharir ke baahari satah par aakar vibrate karne lagi...


FLORIN-AL,we know that you have a golden heart...hum jaante hain ki tum kabhi kisika bura nahi chah sakti aur isiliye hi hume is baat ka bhi andaza hai ki RAAZ ke liye tumhari negetivity ke peeche zaroor koi aur reason hai..

aisa reason jisse tumne hume bataya nahi hai and don't worry..hum khudse puchenge bhi nahi...

kyunko jo bhi reason hai,hume pata hai ki tum usse handle kar logi...but we are really proud ki tumhare apne reasons hone ke baad bhi tumne humari feelings par bhi dhyan diya...

ALFREEN-proud aapko mujhpar nahi, MAHI par hona chahiye..ussine mere mind ko clear kiya...


ALFREEN ki baat sun jab MARIA aur FLORIN ne MAHI ki taraf dekha ki wo bhi ALFREEN ki hi tarah aankhon me nami aur chehre par muskan liye MARIA ke saamne hi khadi thi...

MARIA thoda aur side ki taaraf hui aur apna haath badha MAHI ko bhi beech me baitha liya

aur tabhi.....

SOOBH....


jaise hi MARIA ne MAHI ko beech me bithaya toh un chaaron ke bodies interconnect ho gaye aur aisa hote hi...

MARIA, FLORIN aur ALFREEN ke sharir ke baahari satah par rooki hui invisible force ray ek jhatke me unse alag hui aur sidhe ek disha ki taraf badh gayi....

wahin beech mai baiththe hi MAHI ne un emotional talks ki disha ko ghumana ke liye...


MAHI-waise uncle,aunty aap dono saamne us ped ki taraf kyun dekhte rehte hain...???


unse kuch door saamne jo ped tha,jiski taraf MARIA aur FLORIN yahan baithkar hamesha dekhte rehte the,usse point karte hue MAHI ne apni baat kahi jispar..


MARIA-actually saamne jo ye ped hai,issiki tarah ka ek ped hamare orphanage ke saamne bhi tha jiske ek daal par RAAZ har din baitha rehta tha...

MAHI-har din....par kyun..???


MAHI ki baat par MARIA ne FLORIN ki taraf dekha maano puch rahi ho ki WOOGER ki baat baccho ke saamne karna thik hoga yaa nahi....

kyun ELYSIAN pahunchne se pehle RAAZ ne ye bataya tha ki usse us ped ke aage bane jheel ke paas WOOGER feel hota tha..

FLORIN bhi MARIA ki aankhon me ubhra sawal samajh gaye aur isiliye....


FLORIN-bas aise hi..usne khud toh kuch bataya nahi par us ped se thodi aage ki taraf ek jheel thi aur shayad RAAZ ko wo dekhna acha lagta tha....


iske baad RAAZ se related MAHI ne FLORIN aur MARIA se kuch aur baatein puchi jiska unhone jawab diya...

unhone RAAZ se related ek do kisse bhi ALFREEN aur MAHI ko bataye jisse sun dono thodi hairan hui..

yahan MARIA aur FLORIN RAAZ se judi purani yaadein taaza kar rahe the aur wahan....

FLORIN, MARIA aur ALFREEN ke body se nikal wo invisible force ray tezi se aage badhti hui ek disha me jaane lagi...

arre,ye kya!!!ye ray toh FORBIDDEN FOREST ki taraf jaa rahi thi...

tezi se FORBIDDEN FOREST ki taraf badhti hui wo ray kuch hi palon me us FOREST ke saamne pahunch chuki thi...

par wahan pahunchne ke baad bhi wo ray rooki nahi balki aage badhti chali gayi aur....

ek chamatkar si ghatna ghati...


aage badhti hui us ray ne FOREST ke saamne lagi sheild ko yun bheda maano wahan koi shield thi hi nahi...

bina kisi vyavadhan ke wo ray us SHIELD ko paar karte hue FORBIDDEN FOREST ek andar samati chali gayi....




PLANET-ANNJAYA


PLACE-THE RED OCEAN




YE MERA KHUN HAI YAA PURE UNIVERSE KE LOGON KA...!!!!

ISKA TOH END BHI NAHI DIKH RAHA HAI...PACIFIC, ATLANTIC AUR INDIAN OCEAN KE MIXTURE SE BHI ZYADA LAG RAHA HAI YE TOH....


ANNJAYA...wo planet jahan mujhe mere sharir ke adhurepan ka teesra bhaag milna tha..mera BLOOD....

is waqt mai aasman me khada is pure planet ko dekh raha tha...

is planet me koi zamin nahi thi....jahan tak meri nazar jaa rahi thi,wahan tak mujhe anthhin RED WATER jo ki mera blood tha,wo dikh raha tha...

ek pura PLANET jo ki OCEAN OF BLOOD se bhara hua tha...aur yahi sab dekh maine ye baatein kahin thi...


MAI-ye smell apne saath kaisi force create kar rahi hai...???


jaisa ki maine bataya ki kaafi der se mai yaha upar aasman me khada ye sab dekh raha tha..

aur har thodi der me mere naak me ek ajeeb si mehek feel hoti thi aur jab bhi mujhe wo smell aati thi,toh saath hi mujhe ek strong push feel hota tha aur issi wajah se maine khud se ye sawal kiya aur mere aisa karne ke agle hi pal mere dimag ne hi mujhe jawab bhi de diya tha....

daras ye smell mere hi blood ki thi jo uske AURA se,jo yahan ke atmosphere me ghumti rehti thi,usse aa rahi thi....

aur jab bhi wo AURA mujhe chhute hue guzarti thi,tab mujhe wo strong push feel hota tha....

par kyunki mujhe in sabse koi khatra nahi tha isiliye maine apna dimag is topic se hataya aur lagaya main baat par...


MAI-shuruat kahan se ki jaaye..???ANGIS me toh BODY AMPLIFICATION waala tarika kaam nahi aaya tha...

jaise wahan ek alag logic tha,ho sakta hai ki yahan bhi kuch aisa hi ho....

par kya????

chalo,pehle basics se hi shuru karte hain...


ab mujhe apna blood AMPLIFICATION ka process shuru karna tha par RENAISS aur ANGIS ke mukable apne AMPLIFICATION process ko yahan shuru karna kaafi mushkil tha..

aur wo isiliye kyunki mai filhal hawa me tha...aur mai hawa me isiliye sthir khada ho paa raha tha kyunki abhi tak mai bas situation ka jaayaza le raha tha..

jaise hi mai yahan apna AMPLIFICATION shuru karta,toh mera ye hawa me hold toot jaata aur mai sidhe neeche ocean me girta...

waise toh mai kaafi ucchaiyon par tha aur issi wajah se niche ocean tak pahunchne me mujhe thoda waqt lagta par girna toh tay hi tha..

aur sabse badi problem ye thi ki blood ke thickness ki wajah se us ocean me ek inch bhi jhaanka nahi jaa sakta tha..

kehne ka matlab ye hai ki mujhe pata nahi hai ki us blood se bhare ocean ke andar mere liye kaisi chunouti ho sakti hai...???

par itne saare if's aur but ke beech ek baat toh clear thi aur wo ye ki filhal AMPLIFICATION process ko shuru karne ke alawa mere paas aur koi option hi nahi tha aur isiliye....

maine khade khade hi apni aankhen band kar li jiske agle hi pal mera CEREBRATION process pause ho chuka tha aur aisa hote hi...

mai tezi se niche girne laga....hawa ko cheerte hue mera sharir neeche mere hi OCEAN OF BLOOD ki taraf badhta chala jaa raha tha...

wahin mera chitt bilkul shaant tha...mai apne dimag se hote hue apne andar jhaank raha tha...par yahan ek samasya thi aur wo ye ki mujhe jis bhi part ko AMPLIFY karna hota tha,mera wo bhaag toh mere andar nahi balki mere baahar moujud hota tha..

par ab jo tha so tha aur isiliye....


AURAVA VIBHUTIEN

AURA EXPANSION


mere niche bhare hue OCEAN OF BLOOD ki chavi ko yaad kar maine BLOOD AMPLIFICATION me bole jaana waala spell uccharit kiya aur mere aisa karte hi......


SOOBH.....SOOBHHH.....SOOBHHH.....


us OCEAN OF BLOOD se ek ke baad ek teen bade bade TORNADO ne janm liya...

khoon se bhare teen bade chakrawat...itne bade ki ek baar me ek pura shahar tak nigal jaayen...

yahan mera sharir neeche gir raha tha aur wahan wo teeno tornado bade hote chale jaa rahe the aur fir.....

CHHCHHHCHHH......


mera sharir ek tornado se takra gaya aur aisa hote hi us tornado me ek ajeeb si awaaz honi shuru ho gayi..

aisa lag taha tha maano wo tornado mujhe apne andar sametkar meri chatni banane ki koshish kar raha ho...

aur shayad wo aisa karne me kaamiyab ho bhi jaata agar mujhe apna asli sharir nahi mila hota....

mere is naye sharir ki wajah se wo tornado mujhe upari taur par toh koi nuksaan nahi pahuncha paaya par AURAVA VIBHUTIEN waale spell ki wajah se aur us tornado ke asli swaroop jo ki mera BLOOD tha, uski wajah se mujhe apne andar behad tez jhatke lag rahe the...

aur kyunki ab mai us tornado ke andar tha jiska matlab tha ki mai apne blood se direct contact me tha, toh is wajah se us spell ka asar aur zyada ho gaya tha..

mujhe mere pure anduri sharir,aur usse hote hue pure brain ke har nerve me jhatke padne lage...

mera brain aur meri body, dono hi mujhe relieve karne ki puri kosish kar rahe the par in sabme ek sach ye bhi tha ki blood brain aur body se zyada pure hota hai..

isse bana AURA bhi BRAIN aur BODY ke AURA se zyada strong hota hai aur issi wajah se meri taklif bhi ab tak mile taklifon se zyada thi...

aur zakhm me namak waali baat ye thi ki wo tornado mujhe apne saath saath behad tezi se gol gol ghuma raha tha..

ek toh tez jhatke,uske upar se ye free circulations...in sabki wajah se mujhpar reh rehkar behoshi chhati chali jaa rahi thi par mera BRAIN mujhe hosh me rakhne ki puri koshish kar raha tha......

jis tornado ke andar mai fasa tha,kuch der mujhe usme fasaye rakhne ke baad wo mujhe dusre tornado me fekh deta tha aur fir yahi wo dusra tornado bhi karta tha...

saalon ne mujhe ball bana diya tha aur catch catch khel rahe the...

kaafi der tak ye sab chalta raha par jab wo teeno tornados mere senses ko nahi mita paaya toh....

mai is waqt third tornado ke andar tha..par is baar kuch der tak khudme ghumane ke baad usne mujhe paas nahi kiya balki mujhe ek jhatka diya jiski wajah se mai usse nikalta hua upar hawa me uththa chala gaya aur jab aisa hua toh...

wo teeno tornado ek dusre ke paas aane lage aur dekhte hi dekhte wo ek ho gaye aur aisa hone ke baad....

teeno tornado ke ek hone ki wajah se us ek tornado ki shakti aur badh gayi thi par is baar usne kuch aur karne ki sochi...

yahan mera sharir ek unchayi par pahunch kar niche aane laga aur wahan us tornado ne apne sabse ucche bhaag ko dhaardhaar kar diya theek waisa hi jaisa ANGIS ke surface ne kiya tha...

bas fark sirf itna tha ki wahan wo jagah mere body se bani thi aur yahan mere blood se...

mera sharir tezi se neeche aaya aur...

TANNNN.....


jaise hi mera peeth ka middle part us blood se bane sharp point se takraya,toh is awaaz ke saath mera body wahin rook gaya...

ab bhala ek LONSDALEITE jaisi strong body ko yunhi toh nail nahi kiya jaa sakta tha aur isiliye mujhe aur mere body ko us pointed DHAARDHAAR ubhri hui jagah se koi fark nahi pada aur jab us tornado ne is baat ko sense kiya toh agle agle hi pal...

jis pointed jagah par mera sharir tika hua tha,us jagah ne khud ko expand karna shuru kiya aur dekhte hi dekhte wo nukili jagah ek bade se flat aur solid surface me badal gayi..

ye surface us tornado ke aadhe bhaag se bana tha...wahin aisa hote hi us tornado ka baaki ka aadha bhaag jo ki neeche tha,wo side se hota hua upar uthne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte wo bhaag bhi solid state me badalta hua ek mote aur bade se surface ka roop lete hue mujhse kuch 100 metre upar hawa me jaakar rook gaya...

lagatar lage jhatkon ki wajah se meri aankhen aadhi hi khuli thi aur un adhkhuli aakhon se maine dekha ki mere upar ka asman us red surface se jaise dhak sa gaya hai...

us surface ne ek gigantic mountain jitna area cover kar liya tha...

kuch seconds tak yunhi rooke rehne ke baad achanak.....

wo SURFACE tezi se neeche matlab meri taraf aane laga.... aur ye dekh meri aadhi khuli aankhen ek jhatke me puri khul gayi...

wo surface sidhe mujhpar hi girne waala tha aur ye dekh mai turant uthne ko hua par ye kya...???

jis surface par mai leta pada tha,mujhe uththe dekh usne mujhe baandh liya...

waise toh mere asli body ke mere paas hone ki wajah se kisi bhi tarah ke bandhan ko mai asaani se tod sakta tha par yahan baat alag thi aur wo isiliye kyunki jaise hi mujhe us surface ne jo ki mera hi blood thi, baandha toh uske aisa karte hi ek baar firse mere andar jhatke lagne lage aur is baar wo jhatke aur tez the...

aisa lag raha tha maano mera BLOOD mujhe baandhe rakhne ke liye apni puri shakti laga raha tha..

yahan mai lag rahe jhatkon se khudko normal rakhne aur khudko chhudaane ke liye apne body aur sir ko left right jhatak raha tha aur wahan mere upar waala surface mere sir tak pahunch chuka tha aur is baat ko sense kar jaise hi maine upar dekha toh...


BOOM.......


dono surface aapas me takrakar toot chuke the aur saath hi unke beech pis kar najaane kaisi haalat me niche girte chala jaa raha tha mai....



aksar ladhayi me,yudh me KHOON nikalta hai....

par yahan toh mere hi KHOON ne mera dum nikal diya tha.....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V...J....
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