Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI VIDEOUS APNE DEVOTEES KE SAATH MILKAR ACCHUTA, SLUNDER,HIDA AUR BRAWNY KO RAAZ KE KHILAAF KAR DETA HAI JISKI WAJAH SE WOH CHAARON HI RAAZ KO MAARNE KA FAISLA KARTE HAIN.

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


( UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



MEGA UPDATE-119



PLACE-HEAVEN



RAAZ AUR MAHI,DONO KA WAQT AA CHUKA HAI....

RAAZ AISI HAALAT ME NAHI RAHEGA KI APNA VIVEK SAMBHAL SAKE, ISILIYE AAGE KYA KARNA HAI,YE TUMPAR HAI..

AUR TUM ACHI TARAH SE JAANTI HO KI TUMHE KYA KARNA HAI....


LORD OF ANGELS ke aage jhuki hui thi is waqt griffin jisse kahi usne ye baat jispar..


GRIFFIN-agar LORD ki ijazat ho toh kya mai ek sawal puch sakti hun...???

VIKRAM-pucho....!!!??

GRIFFIN-kya is baat ki sambhavana nahi hai ki VIDEOUS ke waar se RAAZ aur MAHI ka hi anth ho jaaye...!!!

VIKRAM-bilkul hai...asal me aisa hone ki sambhavna zyada hai...

par is khel ko iske sabse ehem aur antim charan tak agar pahunchana
hai toh ye jokhim uthana hi padega...

agar RAAZ aur MAHI bach gaye toh ye kahani chalti rahegi par agar khatm ho gaye toh ye kahani aur hamara varchasva,dono hi saath me khatm honge...


bohot badi baat keh di thi VIKRAM ne,par GRIFFIN dekh rahi thi ki itni badi baat bolte waqt bhi VIKRAM ke face par halki si bhi shikan nahi thi..

naa koi doubt,naa pareshani...bilkul shaant aur chamakta hua chehra jiske piche aashiyana banaye hue tha bramhaand ka har RAAZ....





PLACE-UNKNOWN






YE KAISI JAGAH HAI,AUR MAI YAHAN KAISE PAHUNCH GAYA....!!!!


halki dhundh se ghiri jagah ko chaaron taraf nazaren ghuma kar dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat maine...

ek behadh khaali jagah jahan door door tak chaaye dhundh ko chhod naa toh kuch nazar aa raha tha,aur naahi kisi bhi chiz ki awaaz sunayi de rahi thi,wahan khada tha mai..

kaafi der tak is nayi aur ajeebogarib situation ko samajhne ki koshish karta raha mai par phir jab kuch bhi samajh me nahi aaya toh maine aage badhne ki sochi aur apne kadam saamne ki taraf badha diye....

par tabhi....

kadam aage badhate hi mere dil me ek ajeeb si harkat hui jiske agle hi pal mere dimag me ek disha ki taraf badhne ki baat uth gayi aur mere kadam apne aap hi dimag dwara bataye us raaste ki taraf badh gaye...

jaise jaise mere kadam aage badh rahe the,waise waise mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise mai apne anjaane manzil ke kareeb pahunch raha hun aur phir achanak se mere pair rook gaye...

reason.....

dhundh ke beech mujhse kuch door ek round sa gate dikh raha tha jaise koi bada sa safe..

ek pal us safe jaise gate ko dekh mai uski taraf badh gaya aur thik uske aage pahunch khada ho gaya..

us safe numa gate me koi handle yaa koi opening substance nahi tha isiliye usse kholne ke iraade se maine apna haath aage badhaya aur us gate ko push karne ke liye usse touch kiya aur mere aisa karte hi mujhe laga ek jhatka..

ye jhatka bhi mujhe mere heart se hi laga tha...woh haath jisse mai us gate numa safe ko push karne waala tha,usse apne heart ke upar jahan is waqt jhunjhuni si ho rahi thi,wahan dekhte hue halka rub kiya maine aur phir jab meri nazar wapas saamne us round gate ki taraf gayi toh man hi man mai chownka...

reason....

us round gate ke jiss hisse ko touch kiya tha maine,wahan kuch akshar ubhar aaye the jo the....


"THE PAN-OUT VAULT"


ab ye kya nayi bala hai,ye toh nahi jaanta tha mai,par ye jo bhi hai,mere safar ka hissa hai,iska andaza tha mujhe aur isiliye taaki ye vault khul jaaye,yaa phir ye kahun toot jaaye aur mai iske andar jaa sakun,maine apne moothi bhinche aur apne AMPLIFICATION taakat ke pure zor ko apne moothi me laate hue ek zor ka punch maara maine us vault ko par, result kuch bhi nahi nikla...

tootna toh door ki baat hai,woh vault aur uska woh hissa jisme punch maara tha maine,woh shake tak nahi hua aur ye dekh maine apne emotions ki shakti se punch karne ki sochi..

aur jaise hi apne emotions ki shakti ke ek bade bhaag ko apne moothi me laate hue maine us vault ko punch maara toh...

AHHHH.....

ek tez jhatka laga mujhe aur meri neend toot gayi....

mai jhat se apne bed par uth kar baith gaya aur lambi lambi saansein lene laga..

aur kuch der baad jab mai halka sa normal hua toh ek saath do chizen ghumi mere dimag me..

pehli...

jo bhi maine dekha,woh ek sapna tha..

dusri...

bhale hi mere dekha drishya sapna tha,par jo bhi maine dekha tha,woh bilkul sach tha aur iska suboot tha mera heart jahan mujhe lage jhatke ki wajah se abhi bhi sensetion ho rahi thi..

aur is dusre sach ki jaan mere jabde bheench gaye aur woh isiliye kyunki meri kaam ki chiz jo dekhi thi maine aur bina us cheez ke RAAZ ko jaane khwab toot gaya tha mera...

maine ek baar phirse us jagah par jaane ki sochi... bhale bhi jo bhi maine dekha tha woh ek sapna tha,par us jagah ki chavi abhi mere dimag me puri clear thi jiske zariye mai us jagah par dobara jaa sakta tha aur isiliye apni aankh band kar maine us jagah ka dhyan lagana shuru kiya par tabhi...


ROOK JAAO RAAZ, TUM US VAULT KE ANDAR AKELE NAHI JAA SAKTE,AUR NAAHI ABHI WAHAN JAANE KA WAQT AAYA HAI....

UTHO, INSTITUTION JI TARAF JAO,AAJ BOHOT BADA DIN HAI TUMHARE LIYE...


ek awaaz gunj uthi mere HEART se jisse sun naa sirf aankhen khul gayi meri par saath hi badi bhi ho gayi...

MAI-ab ye kaisi maya hai...???

ye awaazein suni hui hain meri par halki kam khanak ke saath...

kuch toh hai jo saamne hai par dikh nahi raha..parde ke piche bhi parda hai aur parde ke aage bhi....

kaafi der tak alag alag ganit lagane ke baad mai bed se uth gaya aur fresh hone bathroom ki taraf nikal pada bina is taraf dhyan diye ki us AWAAZ ko sun naa sirf mere HEART me ho rahi sensetion turant gayab ho gayi thi,balki aisa pehli baar hua tha ki maine sirf ek AWAAZ ko sun uski kahi baat bina kisi hil hujut ke maan bhi li thi...

ek aur chiz bhi hui thi us awaaz ko sun mere andar jispar filhal toh dhyan nahi gaya tha mera par bohot jald jaane waala tha....



(NOTE:-ACCHUTA, SLUNDER KO VIDEOUS KE THROUGH APNE MOM DAD KE BAARE ME PATA CHALNA,HIDA AUR BRAWNY KE SAATH JO HUA,ABHI RAAZ KO AAYA SAPNA,YE SAB EK HI WAQT ME GHATNE WAALI GHATNA HAI..)






PLACE-CHOSENS





SHAKTISHAALI LOGON PAR WAAR AKSAR US WAQT AUR UN LOGON KE DWARA HOTA HAI JISKI UMMID BILKUL BHI NAHI HOTI....


institution ke garden me ek khaali bench par baithi MAHI ke man me SOVES SHAILA ki kahi bas ek yahi baat lagatar gunj rahi thi..

aur ye sirf abhi ka haal nahi tha.. balki us din THE GREAT HALL me injured hokar behosh hone ke baad jab MAHI ko healing room me hosh aaya toh....





A SMALL FLASHBACK:-




SHAILA-how can a girl with your caliber can act so stupid MAHI..!!!


ek jhidkan si di SHAILA ne MAHI ko jisse sun pehle toh MAHI ka sir neeche ho gaya aur phir....


MAHI-woh actually SOVES...woh challenge ke waqt RAAZ ki taraf...

SHAILA-invisible weapons aa rahe the aur tum lage laga ki woh weapons RAAZ ko hit kar denge...

common MAHI...you say you love RAAZ..aur uski potential ka zara bhi andaza nahi hai tumhe...!!!!

tumhe sach me lagta hai ki aise normal waaron se,attack se RAAZ ko khatra ho sakta hai aur woh bhi life ka...

MAHI,protective hona galat nahi hai par over react karna kahi se bhi sahi nahi hai..you will endup being embarrassed infront of everyone and most importantly RAAZ...


MAHI ki baat ko beech me kaaththe hue kahi apni baat SHAILA ne jispar ek pal khaamosh rehne ke baad....


MAHI-toh mai kya karun WHIZZ...???sach jaankar bhi mai yunhi haath par haath rakh baithe toh nahi reh sakti naa...!!!

SHAILA-iske awala koi chara bhi nahi hai tumhare paas...

MAHI-please SOVES..aap toh itne powerful hain...aapko baaton se pata chalta hai ki RAAZ ke us RAAZ ke baare me aap pehle se jaanti thi...

kya aap RAAZ ki madad nahi kar sakti...!!???

SHAILA-kahani sirf utni hi nahi hoti MAHI jitni nazaron ke saamne dikhti hai...asli kahani woh hoti hai jo parde ke piche chalti hai...

RAAZ ki kahani bhi aisi hi hai..jo dikh raha hai,usse kahin zyada gehri aur chuppi hui...

us kahani me mai kuch nahi kar sakti...


SHAILA ki baat sun chehra bilkul murjha sa gaya MAHI ka...us dil me har pal badh raha dard bhi saaf dikhne laga tha uske face par jisse SHAILA bhi achi tarah samajh rahi thi aur isiliye....


SHAILA-ek choti si help kar sakti hun mai tumhari...meri ek baat ko dhyan se suno,isse RAAZ ko tum bacha sakogi yaa nahi,ye toh certain kiya nahi jaa sakta par haan,jab bhi RAAZ wakayi khatre me hoga,toh us khatre me uske saath khadi zaroor reh paogi tum...


MAHI-itna hi kaafi hai WHIZZ....


MAHI ke murjhaye chehre par SHAILA ki baat sun achanak hi ummid se bhari khushi dikhne lagi thi jisse dekh....


SHAILA-SHAKTISHAALI LOGON PAR WAAR AKSAR US WAQT AUR UN LOGON KE DWARA HOTA HAI JISKI UMMID BILKUL BHI NAHI HOTI....





FLASHBACK ENDS:-




MAHI-aisa kaun hoga jisse RAAZ ko khudpar waar karne ki ummid bilkul nahi hogi.....

HEY GUYZZ,WHATS UP...????


abhi MAHI apne sochon me goom hi thi ki tabhi uske kaano me ye awaaz padi jisse sun jab usne us aayi awaaz ki disha me dekha jahan is waqt do girl WICKED SAVENTS khade the jinhe abhi abhi MORANA ne join kiya tha aur ussine woh baat kahi thi..

jahan MORANA aur uske friends aapsi baaton me busy ho gaye wahin ek baar MORANA ko dekh MAHI wapas apni soch me goom hone ko hui par tabhi MORANA ki ek friend ke mooh se kuch sun MAHI ka dhyan wapas unki taraf divert ho gaya....


WICKED 1-yaar MORANA,ek baat toh bata...tu us RAAZ ke liye serious hai kya...????

WICKED 2-waise banda hai toh serious hone laayak yaar..

MORANA,yaar no offense but mujhe toh usse dekhte hi kayi baar orgasm ho chuka hai...


us WICKED bandi ki baat sun jahan uski friend has padi wahin MORANA ne bas smile kiya aur....

MORANA-usme offense kya yaar..???natural feeling hai,aa gayi toh aa gayi...


MORANA ki baat sun uske dono friends toh has diye par unki baat sun MAHI ka para chadh gaya tha...

beete dino me MAHI ne kayi baar MORANA aur RAAZ ko saath me dekha tha aur us waqt kuch aise moments bhi aaye jab MORANA ka RAAZ ko lekar concern dekh MAHI ko laga ki woh wakayi RAAZ ke liye serious hai...

par abhi MORANA ke friends ki baat sun aur us baat par MORANA ka reaction dekh uska dimag ghum gaya..

saath hi MORANA ne pyar waale sawal ko bhi dodge kar diya tha..

ab ye maana jaata hai ki kuch baatein ladkiyan jo apne b.f se bhi nahi bol paati,woh secrets unke friends ke beech open kar deti hain par MORANA ne puchne par bhi aisa nahi kiya aur isiliye SHAILA ne jo baat kahi thi,uska ek sira ab MAHI ki MORANA ki taraf jaate dikha aur isiliye woh turant uthi aur uski taraf chal padi aur uske paas pahunch..


MAHI-MORANA...


apne peeche se aayi awaaz ko sun MORANA palti aur apne saamne MAHI ko dekh usse ignore kar woh wapas palatne ko hui par tabhi..


MAHI-tumne apni friend ko jawab nahi diya MORANA...do you really love RAAZ....???

MORANA-and why do you care ki mai RAAZ se pyar karti hun yaa nahi...????

MAHI-just answer the bloody question MORANA...

MORANA-and you just mind your fucking business MAHI....

mai RAAZ se pyar karun yaa usse dhoka dun, isse tumhe koi lena dena nahi hona chahiye..


DHOKA....jaise hi ye shabd nikla MORANA ke mooh se toh MAHI ka dimag jhanjhana utha aur uski puri body ghusse se kaampne lagi..

issi mode par tezi se aage badhi MAHI..is waqt uske dimag aur puri body uske control me nahi thi..

ek strong AURA nikal raha tha uske saare sharir se jisse uske paas aate hi MORANA ne bhi feel kar liya aur woh tezi se piche moodi par tab tak naa sirf MAHI uske behadh kareeb pahunch gayi thi balki uska ek haath jisme is waqt hadh se zyada urja ka prabhav beh raha tha,woh bhi MORANA ke gale se bas ek inch door tak pahunch gaya tha...

MORANA ne feel kar liya tha ki MAHI ke body aur uske haath se joki usse chhune hi waala tha, uske touch hote hi uski haalat kharab hone waali hai aur aisa ho bhi jaata ki tabhi...


AHHHH.....DHAAPP...

ye dard bhari karah MORANA ke nahi balki MAHI ke mooh se nikli..

reason....

MAHI ka haath MORANA ke gale ko touch hota ki tabhi bilji se tez speed ikhtiyaar karte hue ek dusra haath aage badha aur MAHI ke badhte hue haath ko pakad peeche kheenchte hue usse dhakel diya jisse MAHI piche ki taraf jaakar giri...

neeche girte hi woh turant wapas uthi aur ghusse se saamne ki taraf palti par aisa hote hi uska ghussa bilkul shaant ho gaya...

reason...

saamne mai jo khada tha...maine hi usse piche dhakela tha...

khair, jaise hi MAHI wapas khadi hui aur mujhe dekha toh...


MAI-MAHI..jo advice MORANA ne di,uspar dhyan do aur amal karo..

just mind your own fucking business.....

MAHI-but RAAZ ye...

MAI-enough MAHI....just go away....


MAHI ki baat kaat apni baat kahi maine jisse uski aankhon me dard aur hatasha,saath me dikhne lagi aur apne kandhe jhukate hue woh piche palti aur ek disha ki taraf badh gayi....

wahin is beech jabse maine MAHI ke haathon ko pakadkar kheecha tha,tabse subah us anjaani awaaz ko sun jo feeling mere man me jaagi thi,us feeling ne ek nayi urja ka roop le liya tha aur is waqt woh urja mere andar do alag alag hisso me yaa phir ye kahun ki do AMPLIFICATION modes me jaakar rook gayi thi....

ek mode tha mera HEART aur dusra mode tha mera SOUL...aur aisa hote hi mere ye dono modes me ek whiteness joki purity ka chinh thi,failne lagi thi...

par ye change temporary tha jo mai jaan chuka tha par mere liye itna hi kaafi bhi tha aur faaydemand bhi...

reason...


"shabdon ka spashtikaran DIL aur AATMA ki SHAKTI se hi hoga"....

UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS ki book ke dusre bhaag jisme mere baare me ENOCHIAN code language me likha hua tha,usse samajhne ke liye yahi sharth thi..

aur us sharth ko pura karne ke liye mujhe apne HEART aur SOUL ka pure AURA un aksharon par daalna tha aur jo temporary change abhi mere andar aaya tha, usse aisa ho sakta tha par waqt kam tha aur isiliye..


MAI-kaam hai mujhe....gotta go....


MORANA ko dekh ye baat kahi maine jiske agle hi pal mai gayab ho chuka tha....

wahin wapas mood MAHI jo aage badhi toh garden ke dusre hisse me ek ped ke neeche pahunchkar rook gayi...

meri baaton se dukhi toh thi MAHI par saath hi mere liye uski fikr kam bilkul nahi hui thi...

woh aage kya kare,ye soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi...


KAISI HO MAHI....!!!???


is jaani pechaani awaaz ko sun MAHI ka jhuka hua sir ek jhatke me uth gaya aur aisa karte hi uske saamne jo khadi thi,usse dekh itne waqt ke baad MAHI ka dil khush ho gaya...


MAHI- GRIFFIN.....


ye bol MAHI turant aage badhi aur GRIFFIN ke lambe gale me apni baahein daalne ko hui par aisa karte waqt uske haath aar paar ho gaye...

GRIFFIN spirit mode me yahan aayi thi jispar aakhon me sawal liye jab dekha MAHI ne GRIFFIN ko toh..


GRIFFIN-mai solid form me yahan nahi aa sakti thi MAHI...is jagah par aise bohot se negetive energies hain jo mere solid form ko sense kar sakte hain aur unka aisa karna naa toh mere liye acha hoga aur naahi tumhare liye....

MAHI-khatra aur mujhe..!!!par maine kisika kya bigada hai jo mujhpar yahan khatra hoga..

aur tum toh yahan first time aa rahi ho....!!!fir tumhari kisise kya dushmani bhala..???

GRIFFIN-kuch logon ka astitva matra hi dusro ke liye khatra hota hai MAHI..

khair,abhi detailing ka waqt nahi hai par bohot jald meri kahi baaton ke RAAZ se parda hat jaayega..


RAAZ...ek yahi toh shabd tha,naam tha jisse MAHI sirf sunti nahi thi,balki feel karti thi..

aur abhi bhi wahi hua... GRIFFIN ki baaton me jaise hi RAAZ shabd aaya,toh GRIFFIN ko apne saamne dekh jo ab tak khush dikh rahi thi MAHI,wahin ab uske sundar chehre par udaasi ke kaali ghata ek baar phir se chaane lagi jisse dekh...


GRIFFIN-kya baat hai..???maine RAAZ kaha,aur tum udaas ho gayi...

kya ye naam itna impact karta hai tumpar...!!!!

MAHI-asal sawal hai kyun...???kyun ye shabd RAAZ itna impact karta hai mujhpar..???

jis shaksh ka ye naam hai,usse toh parwah hi nahi meri...parwah toh door ki baat hai,usse toh mere existence se hi jaise koi matlab nahi hai..

har baar insult karta hai meri..aur mai phir bhi pata nahi kyun,uski taraf kheenchi chali jaati hun...!!!

uski har problem apni lagti hai mujhe...pata hai GRIFFIN,uspar jaan ka khatra hai aur ye baat ussike through pata chali hai mujhe,aur jabse woh baat pata chali hai,tabse aisa lagta hai jaise uski nahi,balki meri jaan khatre me hain...

pata nahi koi baat jo usse judi ho, itna asar kyun karta hai mujhpar..!!!

sabse ajeeb bast ye hai ki woh hamare PHASE ka sabse strong SAVENT hai.. har cheez me number one...

khatarnaak se khatarnaak hamle sense kar leta hai..

hard se hard attack bhi araam se dodge kar leta hai..

aise me bhi jab usse lagta hai ki woh nahi bachega toh phir mai usse kaise bacha sakti hun...!!!

GRIFFIN-woh isiliye MAHI kyunki tumne pehle bhi RAAZ ki jaan bachayi hai...infact agar aaj RAAZ zinda hai toh usme sabse bada haath tumhara hai....


ab ye ek naya revelation hua tha MAHI ke saamne jisse sun uske hairani ki seema nahi rahi...


MAHI-meri wajah se RAAZ zinda hai..???ye kya bol rahi ho tum....???

GRIFFIN-bohot si baatein hai jo filhal parde me hai MAHI...par jaisa ki maine bataya ki bohot jald woh chuppe RAAZ tumhare saame unfold honge...

filhal ke liye ye samajh lo ki RAAZ agar aaj tak zinda hai toh uski kaaran tum ho...

MAHI-toh kya jis mout ke baare me RAAZ jaanta hai,usse bhi mai rok sakti hun...!!!

GRIFFIN-rok toh nahi sakti par haan,taal zaroor sakti ho...aur isiliye hi mai yahan aayi hun...

MAHI-mai samjhi nahi...???

GRIFFIN-aaj RAAZ ke upar mout ka saaya mandra raha hai MAHI jisse bachna uske liye next to impossible hai...


GRIFFIN ki baat sun MAHI ka dimag hi ghum gaya..ek pal me hi uske chehre ke aage RAAZ ka chehra aa chuka tha jisse mehsoos kar uska haal behaal ho gaya tha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


GRIFFIN-par tum RAAZ ke taraf badhti mout ko kamsekam aaj ke liye toh taal hi sakti ho..sirf tum....

MAHI-RAAZ ko bachane ke liye mai kuch bhi karungi....please batao mujhe,kya hone waala hai aaj,aur mujhe kya karna hoga...!!!???

GRIFFIN-kya hone waala hai,ye toh tumhe us chiz ke hote waqt hi pata chalega...

isiliye aaj tumhe har pal RAAZ par nazar rakhni hai..par haan,saamne se nahi,door se..

kyunki tumhe bhi pata hai ki agar RAAZ ne tumhe apne aas paas dekha toh woh wahan se gayab ho jaayega...

STAVAH SPELL ke istamal se tum ye badi asaani se kar sakti ho...

par let me warn you MAHI,RAAZ ko bachana asaan nahi hoga...

aisa bhi ho sakta hai,infact chances is baat ke zyada hain ki RAAZ ko bachane ke chakkar me uske saath tumhari bhi jaan chali jaaye...


GRIFFIN ki baat par yaa phir ye kahun ki uski warning ko sun ek smile aa gayi MAHI ke face par aur....


MAHI-"ishq pe MAREN,ya ishq me MAREN...

ishq agar saath hai,toh bhala hum kyun DAREN...!!!





PLACE-RAAZ ABODE






PUSTAK PRAKATAM....



mere is SPELL ko uccharit karte hi mere book shelf ke ek khaali jagah par roshni hui jiske agle hi pal woh UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS book us roshni ke beech prakat hui....

is book ko is tarah hi chhupaya tha maine jo ab mere saamne prakat ho chuki thi...

book ko pakad usse khola maine aur woh bhaag jisme mere baare me likha hua tha,us jagah ko open kar us page jahan ENOCHIAN code likha hua tha,uske upar apna haath rakha maine aur...



HRIDAYAM AATMAM AURAVA SAMEVASHE.....

HEART SOUL AURA MIX ENERGY....



aankh band kar apne HEART aur SOUL ke AURA ko joki MAHI ke touch se naa sirf hilne lagi thi,par saath hi in dono hi AURA'S me ek purity aa chuki thi, SPELL bola maine..

khair,apni aankhen band kar jaise hi maine SPELL ko uccharit kiya toh mere andar se mere HEART aur SOUL ke pure AURA'S tezi se mere hatheli ki taraf aaye jiske agle hi pal meri hatheli aur book ke beech ek tez roshni chamki aur jab aisa hua toh mere hatheli me ek jhatka laga jiski wajah se maine apna haath wapas kheench liya..

wahin roshni joki mere HEART aur SOUL ki AURA thi,uske prabhav se woh ENOCHIAN language me likhe code hilne lage aur dekhte hi dekhte us page ki puri banawat badal gayi....

jahan kuch der pehle tak ENOCHIAN language me code bhare pade the,wahin ab us pure page me chamakte hue kewal do words likhe hue the..


TOUCH ME....


yahi likha hua tha us page me jisse padh maine apna haath us likhawat ke upar rakh diya aur mere aisa karte hi...

mere chaaron taraf ek tez roshni faile gayi jiski wajah se meri aakhen band ho gayi...

par kuch der baad jab maine apni aankhen kholi toh hairan reh gaya..

reason...

is waqt mai ek ajeeb se jagah par tha aur tez raftaar se aage badh raha tha..

par sabse shocking baat ye thi ki mai is waqt human form me nahi balki ek dot ki shape liye hue tha...

aur mere aaju baaju anginat white dots the jo mere saath tezi se aage badh rahe the..

par dheere dheere un anginat dots ki raftar aur shayad unki life khatm hone lagi thi....

kuch hi waqt me mere aas paas bas kuch ho dota bache the par dheere dheere in sabki bhi raftar aur life khatm ho gayi....

ab sirf mai tezi se aage badh raha tha aur phir kuch der baad mujhe laal colour ki sperical chiz dikhi jisse mai takra gaya...

mera khud par filhal koi control nahi tha..

mai bas dekh paa raha tha ki us sperical chiz se takrane ke baad meri movement rooki zaroor par puri tarah nahi..

mai joki abhi ek dot ki tarah tha,usne us sperical chiz ko push kiya jiska natija ye nikla hi us sperical cheez se hote hue mai uske dusri taraf pahunch gaya jahan sirf laal hi laal dikh raha tha..

us laal jagah par aakar mai float karne laga tha...

meri samajh me toh kuch aa nahi raha tha par maine sab waqt par chhodna hi behtar samjha..

aur tabhi....

mujhe aisa laga jaise mai us ande ke andurni satah ke saath milkar ek ho raha hun...

abhi ye attachment hue kuch hi der hua tha ki tabhi mujhe laga jhatka..

reason....

maine khudme ek badlwaav feel kiya tha..achanak se hi mere aankh,kaan naak,mooh pair,aur ungliyan banane lagi thi...

abhi ye ho hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe apni heart beat sunayi di aur saath hi mujhe aisa laga jaise mere naye naye fefde ban rahe hain jiski wajah se mai saans lene laga tha...

aur phir hui ek nayi cheez...ek aisi cheez jiski wajah se mujhe saara ganit clear hone laga..

aur woh nayi cheez thi mere brain ke banana aur jab aisa hua toh mere sochne samajhne ki shakti jaise achanak se hi wapas aa gayi aur aisa hote hi jo abhi tak ho raha tha,woh process meri samajh me bhi aa gaya aur mere naye bane dimag me us process ka naam bhi gunj utha..


FERTILIZATION....


mai is waqt kisike GARBH me tha aur sperm se bache banane ki vidhi mere saath ghat rahi thi jisse mai feel kar raha tha...

yahan ye baat mere dimag me clear hui aur wahan mera us garbh me ek purn bacche ke banane ka process chaalu tha...

mera sharir pura banane laga tha,aur phir meri swaans ki nali aur baaki organs bhi banane lage the...

chehra,kidney aur brain mera pura viksit ho chuka tha...

aur phir aaya woh waqt jab mera sir janm lene waali nali ki taraf ghum gaya..

aisa hone par mai samajh gaya ki janm ka waqt ho chuka hai par tabhi...

ek ejeeb chiz hui...

us kokh ke andar jahan mai tha,ek tez roshni faili jiske baad mai wahan se gayab hone laga..

aur thik ussi waqt jahan mai tha,wahan us kokh me meri hi jagah ek dusra baccha prakat hua par woh baccha mara hua tha...

wahin mai us garbh se gayab hokar jab bahar aaya toh mera sharir ek urja me badal gaya aur jiske baad us urja ke bhi chaar hisse ho gaye aur woh chaar hisse chaar alag alag PLANETS me jaakar rook gaye..

ye planets wahi the jahan se mai purn hua tha...

RENAISS,ANGIS,ANNJAYA aur ZEAL...

in short...RAAZ.....

aur jaise hi ye hua toh us UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS BOOK me ek baar phirse roshni hui jiske baad mai usse nikal kar bahar aa gaya...

par ab mai pure pasine se bheega hua tha... zindagi me pehli baar haath mere kaanp rahe the...

dimag mera uncertain tha,dil mera aise dhadak raha tha jaise mai milo doud kar aaya hun..

aur in sabke beech gunja mere dimag me woh sawal jo is situation me gunjna chahiye tha..


MAI-kya tha ye sab..!!!mai toh sirf ek urja hun..phir mai kisike GARBH me kaise pal sakta hun...???

abhi mere dimag me ye sawal gunja hi tha ki tabhi mere haath me pakde book ke ek page me chalchitra chalne laga..

ye chalchitra wahi vidhi thi jo maine abhi abhi dekhi thi.. sperm ka ande me jaana,phir us sperm aur ande ke milan se fertilization process shuru hona...

aur aisa hote hote jab woh baccha joki mai tha,us garbh me puri tarah ban gaya toh woh chalchitra us garbh se nikal bahar ki taraf jaane laga..

aisa hote waqt dusre page par kuch lines bhi banane lage the..

pasine se bheega mai is waqt un dono hi pages ko ek saath dekh raha tha..

ek page me is waqt do logon ke chehre the aur dusre page par mera un do logon ke saath connection jisse padh zindagi me pehli baar mere dono aankhon ke kinaaron se aansu nikalne lage aur apni bhari hui aankhon se mai un lines ko baar baar,lagatar padhta chala gaya jahan likha hua tha ki...



maana ki tu bhavnaon ke samandar me bhi kabhi NARM NAHI HUA...

aag me kitni hi tapish kyun naa ho,tu kabhi usme jalkar BHASM NAHI HUA....

par naa toh tu bhaavna hin urja hai, naahi koi anaath....

tu FLORIN aur MARIA ka woh PUTR hai, jiska kabhi JANM NAHI HUA.....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....
















AAPKA APNA V...J.....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WICKEDS SWEEP-STAKE KE PEHLE TASK KO JEET JAATE HAIN WAHIN WOOGER KI URJA RAAZ KO USKI ASLIYAT SE WAQIF KARWATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-36



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-SWEEP-STAKE




UNBELIEVABLE........


MAHI ke mooh se nikla tha ue shabd....

reason....


saamne ka drishya hi aisa tha...jahan ek taraf WICKEDS ki puri teams ne khudko ek bade se DHAAL ke roop me badal liya tha wahin dusri taraf MORALS ki puri team ne khud ke form ko transparent kar diya tha...

reason....

SWEEP-STAKE competition ka dusra charan,second task shuru ho chuka tha jisme ek nayi chunouti dono teams ke saamne thi....

aur ye chunouti thi wo anginat baan jo lagatar hazaron ki sankhya me unke upar baras rahe the aur wo bhi non stop....

un teeron ko sankhya aur speed itni zyada thi ki unhe dodge nahi diya jaa sakta tha aur isiliye hi WICKEDS aur MORALS ki team ne in baano se bachne ke liye alag alag yukti nikali...

jahan ek taraf WICKEDS ne khudko ek bade se dhaal me badal liya tha wahin MORALS ne khudke form ko transparent kar liya tha...

par jahan aisa karna in do teams ke liye faaydemand tha wahin iska ek bohot bada nuksaan bhi tha aur wo ye ki bhale hi in yuktiyon se dono hi teams un baano se bach paa rahe the,par bachna is samasya ka sirf ek temporary hal tha, permanent nahi...

un dono hi teams ka task tha,un baano ki varsha ko rokna...aur ye wo dhaal bankar aur khudko transparent banakar nahi kar sakte the....

par filhal wo kuch aur bhi nahi kar sakte the kyunki agar dono teams me se kisi ne bhi apne form ko change kiya,toh uske agle hi pal wo teer unke aar paar ho jaane the aur aisa hone se wo khudko bacha bhi nahi paate.......

dhadakte dil se MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN baaki ke darshakon ke saath jigyasa purv ye sab dekh rahe the aur soch rahe the ki ab kaise ghumega ye khel,par anjaan the wo sab is baat se ki asli khel toh kabka ghum chuka hai aur saath hi ghum chuki hai ye puri KAHANI.....





PLACE-INFRONT OF FORBIDDEN FOREST SHIELD



ASAMBHAV.......YE KAISE HO SAKTA HAI......????


aakhne chowdi ho gayi thi WHIZZ MARILIZA ki....behad hairani se wo apne saamne ke nazare ko dekhte hue uspar yakin karne ki koshish kar rahi thi.....

wahin unki baat sun apni apni aakhon me naasamjhi ke bhaav liye chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS unke peeche khade the....

unhe toh ab tak ye bhi samajh me nahi aaya tha ki wo yahan FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne aakhir kar kya rahen hain...???

uske upar WHIZZ MARILIZA ki abhi kahi baaton ko sun unke dimag me naye sawalon ne janm le liya tha aur isiliye....


VIOLET-kya hua WHIZZ MARILIZA...????kya asambhav ghatith hua hai...???aur hum yahan FORBIDDEN FOREST kyun aaye hain....????


WHIZZ MARILIZA jo khud bohot zyada confused thi,unhone VIOLET WHIZZ ke sawalon par kuch kaha nahi,bas apne left hand ko ek taraf kar diya jiske baad unke haath se ek ray nikal aage badhi aur neech zamin par jaa lagi...

ye zamin wahi jagah thi jahan kaafi der pehle RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER teeno gire pade the....

jaise hi WHIZZ MARILIZA ki ray us zamin par padi toh....

us ray ne bhi RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke gire hue bodies ka aakar dhar ek digital ray se sketch bana diya...

har sketch par usse jiske liye banaya gaya tha,uska naam ujagar ho gaya tha jisse dekh chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS samajh toh gaye ki ye sketches RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke hain par ye jaankar unki hairani aur badh gayi thi....

unhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki wo teeno aakhir yahan kar kya rahe the..???


OPHILIA- RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan????par kyun....????wo teeno yahan kyun aaye the???

OMMIN-usse bhi bada prashn ye hai ki wo warning bell aakhir baja kiske liye tha....????

MARILIZA-kiske liye wo warning bell baja,ye baat bhale hi chhuppi hui ho kintu kyun nahi baja,iska jawab toh saamne hai....

NOX-saamne hai matlab!!!

MARILIZA-FORBIDDEN FOREST....

iske chaaron taraf lage abhedya SHIELD apne andar ke saath saath aas paas ghati saari ghatna ke asar ko chupaane me saksham hain...

inhi ki wajah se aas paas ghati badi se badi ghatna ki khabar bhi CHOSENS tak nahi pahunch sakti..

VIOLET-iska matlab un teen SAVENTS ke saath kya hua tha,wo is waqt kahan hain,kis haal me hain, kya iske baare me kabhi pata nahi chal paayega...????

MARILIZA- jo dikh raha hai, samajh me aa raha hai,baat sirf utni hi nahi hai...kuch bohot hi bada hua hai yahan...!!!!aur jo bhi hua hai,wo koi akasmat ghatne waali ghatna nahi hai....

itna sab hona wo bhi ek saath koi ittefak nahi ho sakta....

aur jaise ye ghatna sadharan nahi hai, waise hi isse rachne waala bhi maamuli nahi hai....

kyunki baat agar sirf un teen SAVENTS ki hoti toh fir bhi is gutthi ko kisi naa kisi tarah suljhaya jaa sakta tha,par 25 hazar saalon baad aaj achanak FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ka badalna,ye toh hamare soch ki hadh se baahar ki ghatna hai....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sun chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS chownke...jo MARILIZA ne abhi kaha tha,wo toh wakayi kisi maha chamatkar se kam nahi tha...


VIOLET-SHIELD ka badalna!!! FORBIDDEN FOREST ki shield badal gayi....!!!par ye kaise sambhav hai...????aur aap ye kis aadhar par keh rahi hain...

MARILIZA-har WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ke sikhane ka apna ek tarika hota hai...

jab mai yahan SAVENT thi,toh apne sharir ko ek shaktishali hathiyar aur kawach,dono me badalne ki practice ke liye hamare WHIZZDER hume yahin laaya karte the...

issi FORBIDDEN FOREST ki shield par hum abhyas kiya karte the...yahan biche SHIELD aur uski urja se bhali bhaali parichit hun mai....

aur is waqt jo shakti aur urja mai mehsoos kar rahi hun,wo us shield ki nahi hai jo pichle 25 thousand saal se is FOREST ko guard kar rahi thi....

ye ek nahi shield hai par sabse zyada aascharya ki baat ye hai ki is SHIELD ki urja pehle waali shield se bhi zyada hai....

wo SHIELD SOVEREIGN'S ki shakti ke ek bohot bade bhaag se bani thi,aur ye nayi shield usse bhi zyada taakatwar hai,toh zara socho ki isse lagane waala kitna shaktishaali hoga!!!

aur ho naa ho,jisne ye shield lagayi hai,ussine un teeno SAVENTS ko bhi gayab kiya hai....

VIOLET-par sawal hai kyun??? SAVENTS ko gayab karna, FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ko hatana nahi apitu usse badal dena,itna sab aakhir kyun????

MARILIZA-jo hona tha,wo ho chuka hai...usse badla nahi jaa sakta...ab dekhna ye hai,ki aage kya hoga...???

kyunki jaise jo ho chuka hai,usse socha ya predict nahi kiya jaa sakta tha,waise hi jo hoga,usse bhi predict karna kaafi mushkil hone waala hai....

ye puri gutthi un teen gumshuda SAVENTS me se ek SAVENT ke naam ki tarah hi hai...RAAZ.......





BACK TO RAAZ:-




WO CHAAR DHABBE DIKH RAHE HAIN....WAHI HAIN WO CHAAR PLANETS AUR AAPKI MANZIL....


FORBIDDEN FOREST se gayab hokar mai aur WOOGER ki wo urja roopi ray antariksh ke kisi andheri jagah par pahunchte the...

yahan pahunchte hi khud ki roshni ke daayre ko badhate hue WOOGER ki urja ne ek patli par behad strong ray aage ki taraf chhodi...

wo ray aage badhti hui sidhe jaakar ek bade se dhabbe se jo ki planet tha, usse takrayi aur aisa hote hi us dhabbe numa planet se bhi ek ray nikli jo ek disha me badh chali aur kuch hi seconds me hume us ray se nikalte tez ujale ki chamak me kul chaar dhabbe dikhayi diye...

ye dhabbe hi the wo chaar PLANETS......RENAISS,ANGIS, ANNJAYA,ZEAL....wo chaar planets jinse mera adhura wajood pura hone waala tha...

ye chaaron planets ek dusre se kayi light years door the par fir bhi in chaaron ke beech ek alignment thi,ek connection tha...

ye chaaron planets ek dusre ke bilkul seedh me the...hum in chaaron planets se hi kaafi door the par bade bade dhabbe ke roop me inke hone ka abhaas mujhe ho raha tha....

un chaaron planets ke position ko dekh....


MAI-ye left side jo first planet hai,yahi RENAISS hai naa matlab BRAIN....

WOOGER-haan....uske baad ANGIS planet hai,fir ANNJAYA hai aur aakhir me ZEAL....

MAI-ye planets kaale dhabbon ki tarah kyun dikh rahe hain...aur ye PLANETS jis system ka hissa hain,uska star matlab suraj kahan hai..???

yahan se dekhne par toh in chaaron hi PLANETS ke kisi bhi bhaag par surya ki roshni nahi dikh rahi hai...????

WOOGER-wo isiliye kyunki in planets ka koi star ya suraj hai hi nahi....aur yeh chaaron planets DEAD PLANETS hain....

yahan jeeven ka waas nahi hai....

MAI-jeeven ka waas nahi hai!!!par tumne toh kaha tha naa ki ye mera paanchwa janm hai...

aur in planets par hi toh mere pichle chaar janm beete hain....toh fir ye dead planets kaise ho gaye????

WOOGER-ye aapka paanchwa janm hi hai par human form me aapne pehli baar saans li hai...

isse pehle ke aapke chaaron janm unhi cheezon ko roop me the jo is waqt aapke andar nahi hain...

BRAIN,BODY,BLOOD aur SOUL.....


ab ye ek nayi aur ajeebo garib baat thi....janm toh hua par bas mere alag alag body parts ka....gazab....

is naye khulase se sawal toh bohot ubhre mere andar par maine kuch pucha nahi kyunki mai jaanta tha ki abhi jo jawab mujhe milenge,unhe sirf mai sun paaunga,par puri tarah se samajhne ka waqt abhi aaya nahi tha...

ye sirf tabhi ho sakta tha jab mai apne missing parts ko in chaaron planets se haasil karun....

aur isiliye.....


MAI-toh hume pehle RENAISS jaana hoga naa...!!!!

WOOGER-nahi..pehle hume ZEAL jaana hoga....

MAI-ZEAL....!!!matlab soul...mujhe pehle apna SOUL haasil karna hoga...???

WOOGER-nahi...haasil toh aapko pehle apna subconscious brain hi karna hai par....

usse bhi pehle kuch hai,jo dekhna aapko zaroori hai.....


apni baat puri kar WOOGER ki urja ne mujhe apni chapet me liya jiske baad mai aur wo gayab ho gaye....





ZEAL....THE SOUL:-



YE DHUAN KAISA....????


gayab ho hum sidhe ZEAL ke atmosphere ke andar prakat hue...

prakat hote hi jab maine niche dekha toh mujhe kahin bhi zamin nahi dikhi...dikha toh sirf gaadha dhuan.....

jo pure planet me faila hua tha...bhale hi dhuan gas ke form me hota hai par ye jo dhuan hamare niche dikh raha tha,usse ek behad strong solid force mujhe feel ho rahi thi...

ek aisa force jisse dekh lag raha tha ki agar isse chhu bhar lo toh sharir ko nichodte hue ye dhuan usse raakh me badal dega....

maine us dhuen ko dekh apna sawal pucha tha jiske baad....


WOOGER-ye aapke SOUL ka AURA hai jo pure planet me faila hua hai...

MAI-tumne kaha tha ki pehle mujhe kuch dekhna hai...par yahan hum kya dekh paayenge...yahan toh pura Planet hi is dhuen numa AURA ki chapet me hain....

WOOGER-zyada der tak nahi....


WOOGER ki urja ke aisa kehte hi us urja ke andar se ek badi si transparent sheeshi nikli jiske andar ek neela drav dikh raha tha...

ye sab dekh maine kuch kaha nahi kyunki mai jaanta tha ki jab aagaz hua hai toh anjaam bhi hona hi hai....

WOOGER ki urja se wo neele drav se bhari sheeshi nikli aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal us sheeshi ke upar jo knob laga tha,wo khul gaya...

knob ke khulte hi wo sheeshi apne aap ulti ho gayi aur aisa hone par us sheeshi me jo neela drav tha,wo neeche gir gaya....

neeche girta hua wo neela drav is planet ke upar tairte dhuen me samata chala gaya...

ye sab kya hai,mai ye soch hi raha tha ki tabhi kuch aisa hua ki....


MAI-AMMMAAAZZZIIINNNGGGG....


mere mooh se taarif ka ye shabd nikla...

reason....

dhuen me vilin hone waala wo neela drav us dhuen ke beech se hokar neeche zamin par chala gaya tha aur jaise hi us drav ne zamin ki satah ko chhua......

uske agle hi pal pura drishya hi badal gaya...jahan abhi tak wo jagah, wo planet jahan hum the,wo dead thi,har taraf bas dhuan hi dhuan tha,us jagah ka pura nazara change ho chuka tha...

dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi seconds me wo dead planet ek living planet me badal gaya....

pura dhuan chhat chuka tha aur ab humare neeche hare bhare pedon se dhaka ek jungle dikha raha tha....

maine apni nazar har taraf ghumayi toh maine dekha ki ye jagah kisi vintage riyasat ki tarah thi...

humare neeche ek jungle tha wahin humse kuch hi kms door right side par wo jungle khatm ho raha tha aur shuru ho raha tha koi kingdom....

us kingdom ki banawat ko dekh maine andaza lagaya tha ki ye ek vintage jagah hai..

mai ye sab dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi mera sharir neeche zamin ki taraf jaane laga...

mere saath saath WOOGER ki urja bhi neeche aa rahi thi.

kuch hi palon me hum neeche hari hari ghaas se bhari zamin par the....

kuch der yahan wahan dekhne ke baad is naye chamatkar ke baare me WOOGER se mai puchne hi waala tha ki tabhi.....



TUGDUG...TUGDUG....TUGDUG...TUGDUG....


kisi ke behad tezi se hamari taraf badhne ki aahat mere kaano me pahunchi jisse sun maine aa rahi awaaz ki disha me dekha toh....

sweth rang ke bohot hi khubsoorat ghode par ek usse bhi aakarshak vyaktitv ka yuvak baitha humari taraf aa raha tha...

khule hue lambe baal aur baalisht sharir se dhani us yuvak ke netra hamari taraf hi tike hue the...

par hairani mujhe tab hui jab ek haath me baan aur dusre haath se ussi baan par pratyancha chadha usne hamari taraf nishana saadha....

aur meri hairani tab aur badh gayi jab hamare behad kareeb aane ke baad bhi uske ghode ne apni disha nahi badli...

aisa lag raha tha maano yaa toh wo yuvak hume apne baano se maar girayega yaa fir uska ghoda hume kuchal dega....

ye sab dekh mai ek taraf hone ko hua par tabhi.....


WOOGER-aapko hatne ya chhupne ki koi awashyakta nahi hai....bas khade rahiye,kuch nahi hoga...


WOOGER ke urja ki baat sun jab maine uski taraf dekha toh...


WOOGER-vishwas rakhiye....


WOOGER ki baat ke baad maine bhi sochna chhodna aur saamne dekhne laga....

ab tak wo ghode par baitha yuvak hamare behad kareeb aa gaya tha..ghode se halka upar uth hamari hi taraf apni pratyancha ko taan usne teer chhod diya...

wo teer tezi se hamari taraf badha..us teer ka nishana theek mere sir ka madhya bhaag tha....

sansanate hue aage badhta hua wo teer mere karib aata gaya aur fir...


SOOBH.....

ye awaaz nikalta hua wo teer mere sir ko bina chhue,uske beech me se hote hue paar nikal gaya aur fir....


QNNNNQNNNNNQNNNN.....


ek tadapti hui si awaaz aayi mere piche se... jab maine palat kar dekha toh paaya ki mujhse thodi door par ek cheetah gira pada hai aur us teer ne usse hi bheda hai....

ye scene dekh jab maine wapas saamne dekha toh paaya ki ab tak wo ghoda thik mere kareeb pahunch chuka tha aur agle hi pal....

us teer ki hi tarah wo ghoda bhi mujhe bina chhue mere beech mese hote hue nikal gaya...

mujhe paar kar wo yuvak us ghode par baitha aage badhta chala gaya aur us cheeteh ke paas pahunch usme dhase teer ko usne ghode par baithe baithe hi kheencha jisse wo teer us cheeteh ke saath uske ghode par aa gaya....

apne ghode me us mrit cheeteh ko liye wo yuvak aage badh chuka tha.....

ye sab dekhne ke baad jab maine WOOGER roopi urja ki taraf dekha toh....


WOOGER-ye sab ek DRISHYAM hai....aaj se 50 hazar saal pehle ghati ghatna ka DRISHYAM....

MAI-par mera isse kya lena dena...???

WOOGER-pehle aap mujhe ek baat bataiye..???ab tak jitna bhi aapko khudke baare me pata chala hai,usse aap apne nirman ka kya nishkarsh nikalte hain...???

MAI-maksad...kisi khaas maksad ko pura karne ke liye hi mera wajud hai...

WOOGER-bilkul sahi...kintu jis maksad ke liye aapko chuna gaya hai,uske liye aapse pehle us yuvak ko chuna gaya tha jisse abhi abhi humne yahan ghode par sawar dekha tha...

kintu wo prayas asafal raha tha...aur isiliye aapka nirman hua...???aur wo bhi bohot hi alag tarah se....

taaki jo galti pehle ki gayi thi,
us galti ko dobara dohrana naa pade....

MAI-matlab mai bhi bas ek prayas hun..jo pehle ki hi tarah galat bhi ho sakta hai...

WOOGER-bilkul..aur isiliye hi is grah ke vinash ke baad bhi yahan ke DRISHYAM ko sambhal kar rakha gaya tha....

taaki aap isse dekh sako...aur samajh sako ki chuk kahan hui....????

aap abhi yahan ek ke baad ek us yuvak ki kayi jhalkiyan dekhenge jisme uska vyaktiv,aur uska hunar nazar aayega aur aakhir me wo drishya dikhega jab is grah aur yahan rehne waale laakhon bekasoor logon ka samuh vinash ho gaya tha....

yahan se jaane ke baad jab aap apne pehle padhav RENAISS ke saamne pahunchenge,tab aapko apne hi subconscious brain ko jisse lene aap wahan jaane waale hain,usse ek line me batana hoga ki kyun asafal raha tha ye yuvak...

agar aapka jawab sahi hua,sirf tabhi aap RENAISS planet me enter kar paayenge warna is yuvak ki hi tarah aapka bhi anth ho jaayega.....

MAI-jo yuvak abhi yahan se gaya,jisse mujhse pehle chuna gaya tha,uska naam kya tha....???



WOOGER-..........VIKRAM..........








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V...J.....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION KA DUSRA TASK SHURU HO CHUKA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ PLANET ZEAL PAR PAHUNCH CHUKA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-37



PLANET-ZEAL


PLACE-NEAR ZEAL'S CAVERN




ye CAVERN (a big cave) toh earth ke sabse bade CAVERN HANG SON DOONG se bhi bada dikh raha hai...(fact...earth ka ye cave veitnam me hai..)

par ye ladka VIKRAM yahan kya kar raha hai???and more importantly mai yahan kya kar raha hun...???


is waqt hum ZEAL grah ke is kingdom ke border par bane ek bohot hi bade CAVERN,ek gufa se kuch door khade the...

wahin VIKRAM apne ghode me baitha us CAVERN ko dekh raha tha....


WOOGER-is gufa me ek vastu hai,aur ussi vastu se is pure adhyay ki rachna ka aarambh hua hai.....

jaisa ki aapko pata hai ki ZEAL ka arth SOUL hota hai...

par ye naam is grah ko ussi vastu ki wajah se mila hai jo is gufa ke andar hai...

us vastu ki shakti se is planet ko iski aatma mili jisse yahan jeeven shuru hua...

jo nazare aap dekh rahe hain,unki rachna hui....

par ussi vastu ki wajah se is planet ka sarvnaash bhi hua....

filhal hum ek drishyam me hain...ek bhuli hui kahani jo sirf aapko dikhane ke liye sambhal kar rakhi gayi thi kintu is bhuli hui kahani me agar ab bhi kuch bacha hai toh wo hai ye gufa aur iske andar rakhi wo vastu....

aur us vastu me hai aapki SOUL jisse aapko haasil karna hai....

MAI-wo VIKRAM us gufa ki taraf kyun dekh raha hai..??kya usse maalum hai ki us gufa me kya hai...???

WOOGER-ye har din jungle ke madhya bane vishal jharne ke paas shashtr vidya ke adhyan ke liye jaata tha...

jaate aur aate dono hi waqt,ye yahan is CAVERN ke baahar rook usse thodi der tak dekhte rehta hai aur fir chala jaata hai....

aur rahi baat uske is gufa ke secret ko jaanane ki toh usse aadhi hi baat pata hai...

usse ye pata hai ki is gufa se hi uske Planet ka astitv bana hai...usse bas itna gyat hai is planet par jeeven ka rahasya us gufa ke andar se hai....

MAI-kisne batayi usse ye baat..???

WOOGER- is sawal ka jawab hi hai aapka pehla drishyam.....


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi hamare samne ka scene change ho gaya....



SCENE-1


is waqt hum kisi aur jagah par the aur abhi raat ka samay tha...ye ek basti jaisi jagah thi jahan mashale jal rahi thi aur humse thik aage ek reth ka bada sa akhada tha jisme is waqt 6 logon ke beech malyudh ho raha tha jisse hamare dekhte hi dekhte unme se ek ne jeet liya...


WOOGER-is waqt hum is planet ke shuruati dour ke DRISHYAM ko dekh rahe hain...

sadiyon pehle jab is planet ka nirman hua,aur yahan logon ka vaas hua toh is jagah ko chalane ke liye kisi ek vyakti ka chunaav hona tha aur jo mal yudh hum dekh rahe hain,yahi tha wo tarika jisse us vakt ke sabse shaktishali manushya ko yahan ka sardar banaya gaya...

jo abhi is malyudh me jeeta hai,wahi tha ZEAL ka sabse pehla shashak....


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi drishya phir badal gaya....



SCENE-2


is drishya me wahi manushya jo ki ZEAL ka pehla shashak tha,wo ek safar par nikla hua tha....


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WOOGER-ye jaanane ke liye ki ye planet kitna bada hai, is shashak ne apne kuch vishwas paatr logon ke saath is planet ka bhraman karna shuru kiya aur pahuncha is jagah par....


ek baar firse hamare saamne wo CAVERN tha par ek alag dour me...


WOOGER- jab isne is gufa ko dekha aur iske andar se aarahi beintihan urja ko mehsoos kiya toh usse andar jaane ka man kiya...


WOOGER ki baat sunte hue maine saamne dekha toh paaya ki us shashak ne apne ek daas ko andar jaane ke liye kaha aur uski baat maan jaise hi us daas ne gufa ke muhane me pahunch andar kadam rakhne ki koshish ki toh wo bhasm ho gaya....


MAI-arre,ye kya hua????

WOOGER-dekhte jaaiye....


WOOGER ke kehne par jab maine saamne dekha toh....


us aadmi ke bhasm hote hi us gufa ke baahar hawa me hi bade bade aksharon me kuch likhana shuru ho gaya...

ye lekhni thi ZEAL planet ke baare me...jab wahan ye likhaya ki is gufa aur iske andar rakhe vastu ki wajah se hi ZEAL planet me jeevan ka vaas shuru hua hai tab sabhi chakit rah gaye.....

is sacchayi ko sun abhi sabhi chakit ho hi rahe the ki tabhi wo akshar mit gaye aur unki jagah naye aksharon ne le li jisse padh wo sabhi log aur chakit ho gaye....

kyunki ab wahan jo likha tha wo ek tarah ki bhavishyawaani thi jo keh rahi thi ki....


rogiyon ke beech wo
akela AAROGYA HOGA....

jo mere RAAZ ko

jaanane aur sambhalne
ke YOGYA HOGA.....


ye shabd likhaye the us gufa me muhane par jiske padhne ke baad wo shashak ye samajh gaya ki har koi us gufa ke andar nahi jaa sakta...

infact sirf koi ek deserving banda hi us gufa ke andar jaa paayega...

in adhbhudh sachayiyon ko dekh aur samajh wo shashak apne daason ke saath wahan se chala gaya....

par usne tay kiya ki itni aloukik aur adhbhudh jagah se wo door nahi jaayega aur isiliye usne is gufa se kuch door ek nagri basayi aur wahin rehkar is pure Planet ka sanchalan karne laga....

jo gufa ne bhavishyawaani ki thi,ussi ko adhaar bana saal mese kisi ek din us shashak ne apne planet ke sabse kaabil aur honhaar logon ko us gufa ke andar jaane ki baat kahi aur saath hi ye ghosna bhi kiya ki jo koi aisa karne me kaamiyab hoga,us din se wahi vyakti aur uske baad uske vanshaj hi is planet par raaj karenge....

SCENE ENDS....



ye saare drishya dekhne ke baad hamara drishyam gayab ho gaya aur hum ab wapas apne original waqt me aa chuke the aur ussi gufa ke saamne khade the,par is baar wo VIKRAM wahan nahi tha,wo jaa chuka tha.....


WOOGER-us ghoshna ke baad har saal kisi ek din is planet ke sabse hunarmand log us gufa me ghusne ki koshish karte the...

par koi bhi kaamiyab nahi hua....aur isiliye tab se lekar is planet ke tabah hone tak ussi pehle shashak ke vanshajon ne hi is planet par raaj kiya...

MAI-hmm..matlab ye VIKRAM bhi ussi vansh ka vanshaj tha....!!!

WOOGER-haan wo vanshaj toh tha par uttaradhikari nahi....

MAI-matlab....!!!!


mere aisa kehte hi drishya change ho gaya jiska matlab tha ki ab hum ek naye DRISHYAM me the.....



SCENE-3



TUMHARA ITNA DUSSAHAS KI HUMSE PRATIKSHA KARWAO...

ITNA ADHIK WAQT LAG GAYA TUMHE JAL KA EK PYALA HAMARE PAAS LAANE ME....


ye bolte hue ek bade se mahal ke beecho beech bane garden me baithe ek chote se Rajkumar ne apne saamne khade sewak ke haathon se jal ka wo pyala liya aur ussi jal ko us sewak ke mooh me fek diya jisse wo dara hua sewak aur dar gaya....


SEWAK-skshama Rajkumar..... kintu mujhse vilamb nahi hua hai...is udyan se rasoi grah kaafi door hai...wahan jaakar jal yahan tak laane me thoda waqt lag jaata hai rajkumar....

RAJKUMAR-jab humne keh diya tha ki tumhe vilamb hua hai toh iska arth hai ki tumse vilamb hua hai..

tumhara itna dushaas ki tum humse zuban ladao.... humari baat ko kaato....

sipahiyon,le jaao is batamizz ko aur iski nangi peeth par 100 kode barsao.... iski dardnaakh cheekh pure mehel me gunj hamare kaano tak pahunchni chahiye....


Rajkumar ki baat sun us sewak ki rooh kaamp gayi...wo kuch kehta usse pehle hi wahan khade 2 sipahiyon ne usse pakad liya aur lejaane lage par tabhi....


RUK JAAO.....CHHOD DO US USSE.....


ye awaaz un sipahiyon ke piche se aayi thi jisse sun jab un sipahiyon ne turant us sewak ko chhod diya...

wahin is awaaz ko sun us sewak ke dand ko nirdharit karne waale rajkumar ke chehre par naagwaari ke bhaav utpann ho gaye....

wahin wo jisne sipahiyon ko rukne ke liye kaha tha,wo chalta hua aage aaya aur rajkumar ke saamne khada ho gaya....


RAJKUMAR-bhrata VIKRAM....aap har baar hamare faislon ke beech kyun aa jaate hain....???

VIKRAM-kyunki tum hamesha galat faisle hi lete ho....


VIKRAM jiske drishyam ko dekhne ke liye RAAZ yahan pahuncha tha,ye wahi tha aur ye DRISHYAM tha uske baal kaal ka...

VIKRAM us rajkumar ka bada bhai tha par umar me usse bas ek saal hi bada tha....

dono hi bhai sikke ke do alag pehluon ki tarah the...jahan Vikram ek shaant aur sacha baccha tha wahin uska chota bhai choti si umar me hi behad hi negetive, egoistic aur bigda hua tha....

aur iska kaaran tha uska raajshri pariwaar..sadiyon se ZEAL planet ke shahshak hone ki wajah se ye parivaar apne aap ko is planet ka bhagwaan maanane laga tha...

unka bas yahi maanana tha ki jo bhi wo karenge,woh sahi hoga...aur sabke liye anniwarya bhi...

unhe kisi aur ki feelings se koi matlab nahi rehta tha.par inke negetive parivaar me VIKRAM inke ulat positive paida hua tha...

uska vyavahar udaar tha..wo har kisi ki kadar karta tha....par uski ye aadat uske pure pariwaar me kisiko bhi pasand nahi thi....aur isiliye...


RAJKUMAR-agar faisla humne kiya hai toh wo sahi hi hoga....aur waise bhi maamla humara hai..

aur isse hum jaisa chaahenge,waise niptayenge....isiliye dobara humare maarg me aane ki aap koshish naa karen toh behtar hoga...


apne chote bhai ki baat sun VIKRAM ko ghussa toh bohot aaya par usne apne ghusse ko dabaya aur....


VIKRAM-kisi par anyay karna kabhi sahi nahi ho sakta mere bhai...mujhe apne raaste se door raho,ye kehne sa acha hai ki tum apna rasta badal lo...

RAJKUMAR-hum rajkumar hain aur is Planet ke bhaavi maharaj bhi..aur ek raaja apna raasta kabhi nahi badalta....

par aap ye nahi samajhenge....kyunki naa aapki soch raajsi hai aur naahi apke khoon me ubal hamare pitah sa hai...


CHATAAKKH......


Rajkumar ki baat sun VIKRAM ne usse ek zor ka tamacha maar diya jiske baad wo ghusse se rote hue mahal ki taraf bhaag gaya aur aisa hone je kuch der baad....


KYA TUMNE APNE CHOTE BHAI PAR HAATH UTHAYA....???

VIKRAM-haan par.....


CHATAAKHHH..CHATAKHHH.....CHATAKKHHHH.....


aage kuch bol nahi paaya VIKRAM...

wo kuch kehta usse pehle hi uske gaal par lagatar teen thappad pade jisse uske honth tak phat gaye...

VIKRAM ko ye thappad maare the khud uske pitah ne...

reason....

vikram ne jaise hi apne chote bhai par haath uthaya toh uska bhai sidhe apne pitah ke paas gaya aur badha chada kar VIKRAM ki burayi karne laga jiske baad VIKRAM se unhone sawal pucha aur aadha jawab milte hi usko lagatar teen thappad pada....


KING-mujhe vishwas nahi hota ki tu sach me hamara hi khun hai...????

kyunki hamara khun itna thanda nahi ho sakta.....


thappad padne se VIKRAM ka dimag kuch seconds ke liye sunya ho gaya tha par jab wo sambhla toh...


VIKRAM-par pitashri hamara apraadh kya hai..???humne toh bas us nirdosh vyakti ko bachaya tha....

aur chote rajkumar ki abhadra baat ki wajah se humne unpar haath utahaya tha...


KING-us aadmi ko pesh kiya jaaye....


VIKRAM ki baat sunane ke baad uske pitah ne zor se chillate hue ye aadesh diya jiske agle hi pal....


dhamm.......


is awaaz ke saath ek vyakti us king ke kadmo me gira..

ye wahi aadmi tha jisse thodi der pehle VIKRAM ne bachaya tha....

neeche gir us aadmi ne apna sir upar kiya aur kuch kehne ko hua par tabhi...


SWSSSSS........


behad zor se chali KING ki talwar jiske agle pal us aadmi ka sir uske dhadh se alag hokar VIKRAM jo thoda piche hi khada tha,uske pairon ke paas giri....

is drishya ko dekh VIKRAM ki aankhen jaise pathra si gayi thi..wo jadwath hokar ekdum sthir khada ho gaya tha....

wo waise hi rehta par tabhi King ki awaaz uske kaano me gunj uthi....


KING-isse humne nahi,tumne maara hai VIKRAM......bhale hi iska sir hamari talwar dwara kata hai kintu iska kaaran sirf aur sirf tum ho....

agar tumne rajkumar ki baaton ke beech hastakshep kar isse us dand se nahi bachaya hota jo rajkumar ne iske liye nirdharit kiya hai,toh abhi ye zinda rehta....

ab meri baat kaan kholkar suno....is planet me sirf hum aur hamara parivaar jo chahenge,wahi hoga..hamara har faisla yahan ke basne waale har vyakti ka mukkadar hai....

hamara diya har dand yahan rehne waale har manushya ki niyati hai....

jitni jaldi ho sake,is satya ko maano aur jaisa har raajshi khoon karta aaya hai,waisa aacharan dhaaran kar lo warna hum tumhe is mahal aur apni zindagi se nikal fekenge...

aadhi baat hi sun paaya VIKRAM...uska aadha dhyan toh ab bhi us kate hue sir ki taraf tha...aasuon se bhar gaya VIKRAM ka chehra....

kuch der tak yunhi thaga sa khade rehne ke baad wo apne pitah ke saamne se aur saath hi us mahal se hamesha hamesha ke liye nikal gaya....




SCENE ENDS:-



ye sab dikhane ke baad DRISHYAM gayab ho gaya.....

drishyam dekhte waqt jahan meri aankhen us chal rahe chalchitra ki taraf thi wahin WOOGER ki urja ka dhyan meri taraf tha..

par pure scene me mere expressions kahin bhi nahi badle..maine yunhi pura scene dekhta raha tha...

aur ab jab drishyam khatm ho chuka tha toh meri nazar saamne dikh rahe gufa ke taraf thi...


WOOGER-koi sawal!!!!

MAI-ye sab bas ek drishyam hai,right???matlab live kuch nahi hai,bas jo ho chuka hai,ussi ghatna ke alag alag clips hain...

toh kya abhi mai is gufa me nahi jas sakta..matlab andar se dekhne bhar ke liye...?!!!

WOOGER-is pure planet ko shakti ussi gufa ke andar rakhe vastu se hi milti thi....wo vastu yahan rehne waale har jeev ko jaanta tha..

yahi nahi,agar koi baahar se bhi aaye tab bhi us vyakti ke is planet par pair rakhte hi uske baare me wo vastu sab kuch jaan leti thi...

bhale hi ab ye planet dead planet hain,par ye gufa aaj bhi yahan moujud hai...aur iski shakti aaj bhi utni hi prabal hai...

MAI-wo sab toh thik hai par ye jo gufa dikh rahi hai,ye bhi toh bas ek drishyam hi hai naa...original thodi naa hai...

WOOGER-suraj dharti se carodon meel door hota hai par phir bhi uski tapish har dharti mehsoos karti hai....agar aapko bhi karni hai toh koshish karkar dekh lijiye....


WOOGER ki baat sun mai aage badha aur sidhe us gufa ke baahar
jaakar khada hi gaya...

saamne andhera tha..kuch seconds rook jaise hi maine apna ek pair aage badhaya toh....


DHOOB......

ek tez jhatka laga mujhe aur mai wapas jahan se chala tha,wahin aakar gira....

MAI-ye kya tha????ek yaad me itni taakat...!!!!

WOOGER-maine jis tapish ki baat ki thi,ye wahi tha...

agar ye asliyat hota toh aap bhi raakh ho chuke hote.....




PLANET-ELYSIAN




PLACE-SWEEP-STAKE





YE RAAZ KAHAAN CHALA GAYA HAI...???KAAFI DER SE DIKH NAHI RAHA.....!!!!


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ne bhi RAAZ ke stand ki taraf dekha jahan se RAAZ nadarad tha....


MARIA-aap jaante toh ho usse..wahi karta hai jo uska dil kehta hai....competition dekhne ka man nahi hoga isiliye bahar chala gaya hoga...



STELLAR'S STAND


YE RAAZ ABHI TAK KAISE NAHI LOUTA...AUR WO DONO ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER,WO BHI NAHI DIKH RAHE HAIN....

KAHIN MAINE JO RAY US RAAZ PAR PHEKI THI,USKA ASAR ZYADA SERIOUS TOH NAHI HO GAYA....!!!!


RAAZ ke stand ki taraf nazar ghumaye hue ALFREEN ye baatein badbada rahi thi....


MABEL-arre tu wahan kahan dekh rahi hai....???saamne dekh, competition kaafi interesting hota hua lag raha hai.....


MABEL ki baat sun apni sochon ko jhatak jab ALFREEN ne saamne dekha toh....


SWWWWW...SWWWWWW.......


WICKEDS ki team jo ki dhaal ka roop dhar aa rahe baano se khudko bacha rahi thi,us dhaal ke beecho beech ek ubhar aana shuru hua aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal us ubhar ke beech behad teevr gati se ek baan nikla aur aage ki taraf badh gaya.....


par kyun???aayiye pehle ye jaan lete hain...

darasal dhaal ka roop liye WICKEDS behad dhyan aur baariki se un anginat baano ko dekh rahe the...

lagatar kaafi waqt tak dekhte rehne ke baad unhe kuch alag dikhayi diya...

alag ye tha ki un anginat baano ki varsha ke beech rah rah kar kuch seconds ke antaral me ek baan unki taraf aa raha tha jisse halka prakash nikal raha tha....

aur jab bhi wo baan unki taraf aata toh us waqt us baan ke aage peeche koi aur baan nahi hota tha....

ye dekh WICKEDS ko laga ki ho naa ho par in asankhya baano ke beech ye halka chamakdaar baan ZUNYATA matlab UNREAL hai...

aur ye abbhas hote hi is dhaal ke madhya ki jagah par jo SAVENT tha,usne apna roop ek baar firse badla aur second ke 10we hisse se bhi kam samay me ek baan ka roop dhar wo us dhaal ke madhya se hota hua aage nikla aur jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki us chamkile baan ke aage aur piche koi baan nahi hota tha,isiliye wo SAVENT numa baan bina kisi avrodh ke aage badhta hua gaya aur sidhe us chamkile baan se takra gaya aur jaise hi ye hua toh.....


BOOM..........


is awaaz ke saath pura STADIUM ek tez roshni se jagmaga utha aur tabhi WHIZZ ki awaaz gunj uthi...


MABBA-SECOND TASK COMPLETED....

WINNERS,WICKEDS.....


par kyunki ye competition best of three tha aur pehle do task ke winners WICKEDS rahe hain, isiliye is second task ke saath ye competition bhi yahin khatm hota hai aur isiliye with a clean sweep, is saal ke SWEEP-STAKE competition ke winner hain WICKEDS......


jahan MABBA ki anouncement ke baad WICKEDS ke samarthakon se bhara aadha STADIUM unki awaaz numa hooting se gunj utha wahin dusri taraf MORALS ke supporters se bhara baaki ka aadha STADIUM ek dum khamosh ho chuka tha...

is khamoshi me MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN bhi shaamil the...yunhi udaas ho wo teen apni apni seats se uthe aur baahar nikalne ko hue hi the ki....


MAINE KAHA THA, CHAMPION HONA AUR CHAMPION KI TARAH HONA,IN DONO BAATON ME FARK HOTA HAI....


is awaaz ko sun MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN palte toh unhone dekha ki unke saamne MORANA, ANWIR aur unke kuch saathi khade hain....


ANWIR- CHOSENS ke pichle 25 thousand years ke itihaas me aisa bohot kam baar hua hai jab MORALS se WICKEDS ko haraya ho warna is baar ki hi tarah har baar in MORALS ki izzat hi utarti aayi hai....

isiliye yahan se jaane ke baad dobara sochna... ek WICKED ka ATTITUDE hi success ki chabi hai...

apna lo isse,faayde me rahogi....


MAHI ko dekhte hue ANWIR ne ye baat kahi jisse sun...


MAHI-har addhyaya,har chapter kahin naa kahin se shuru hota hi hai...

zaroori toh nahi ki pichle 25 hazar saal se jo hota aa raha hai,wahi aage bhi hoga...

isiliye tum hamari nahi apni fikr karo.. kyunki jis din hum PHASE 2 me aaye,tumhare aur tumhare jaise ka CHAPTER khatm ho jaayega,aur shuru hoga CHAPTER 2.....

apni baat bol apne dono friends ke saath nikal gayi MAHI is baat se anjaan ki flow flow me usne bata diya hai ki ye chapter ab khatm hone ke kagar par hai and now its time to announce the next chapter......


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTAL)

second chapters name.....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V..J....
Excellent update bro
 

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Behtareen, bemisaal, lajwab, mind blowing update bhai.
Raaj ki urja ke charo bhag se wo charo grah bne, par bhai ek baat clear kar do ki florin aur mariya to abhi kuch saal pahle ke hai jabki urja ke wo grah bahut pahle ban gye the, to kya ye Raaj aur uske parents (florin aur Mariya) ka Dusara janm hai.
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WICKEDS SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION KO JEET JAATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF WOOGER RAAZ KO VIKRAM KE BAALYA KAAL KI JHALKIYAN DIKHATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-38



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE




HUM ALREADY LATE HO CHUKE HAIN AUR TU ABHI TAK BREAKFAST HI KAR RAHI HAI....


hall me kadam rakhte hi MAHI ne ALFREEN ko jo ki abhi breakfast kar rahi thi,dekhte hue ye baat kahi jispar....


ALFREEN-tu toh INSTITUTION jaane ke liye aise excited ho rahi hai jaise aaj yahan par hamara pehla din ho....!!!

MAHI-first day me bhi itni excitement nahi hui thi jitni mujhe aaj feel ho rahi hai...

ALFREEN-aur aisa kyun???

MAHI-jaise tujhe pata nahi hai...???ye excitement SWEEP-STAKE ki wajah se hai...

kal SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION ko dekh mujhe feel hua ki maine toh abhi kuch seekha hi nahi hai....

kal MORALS aur WICKEDS ki team jis tarah metaphisycal activities ko anjaam de rahe the,usse dekh mujhe toh Goosebumps aa gaye the...

infact ab bhi jab mai kal ke baare me sochti hun toh mere andar ek adrenaline rush doud uththa hai....


MAHI baat karte waqt bhi kaafi energetic dikh rahi thi jisse dekh....


ALFREEN-wo toh dikh hi raha hai.aisa lag raha hai jaise next SWEEP-STAKE kal hi hone wala hai aur tu dono teams se kisi ek ki captain hai....

MAHI-kal nahi,par dekhna,ek din ye hoga zaroor.....aur haan,teams me koi choice nahi hai,mai sirf MORALS ki team me rahungi,lead karungi aur jeetaungi bhi....


AUR US DIN SABSE ZYADA KHUSHI HUME HOGI....


FLORIN apni wife MARIA ke saath ye bolte hue apne room se hall ki taraf aa rahe the...

MAHI ke paas aakar dono ne hi usse side se hug kiya aur uske sir par apne blessings dete hue haath rakhe....


MAHI-aur jab mujhe trophy milegi toh mai usse aap dono ko dedicate karungi....


kal ANWIR aur MORANA se bahas ke baad jab MAHI baaki MORALS supporters ke saath STADIUM se baahar jaane ko hui toh jaate jaate uski nazar ek baar ground par padi thi jahan MARILIZA WHIZZ SWEEP-STAKE ke winners WICKEDS ko trophy de rahi thi,ussi trophy ko yaad kar MAHI ne ye baat kahi thi....

wahin MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA bhi behad khush aur bhaawuk ho gaye..

itne kam waqt me hi unhe MAHI apni beti si lagne lagi thi aur aaj MAHI ki baat sun unhe ye ehsaas hua tha ki MAHI ke dil me bhi unke liye same feelings hai....


FLORIN-hum intazar karenge us din ka beti....


ek baar firse MAHI ke sir me pyar bhara haath ferte hue FLORIN ne ye baat kahi...

wahin ALFREEN apne mom dad aur MAHI ki bonding,unka pyar dekhkar behad khush ho rahi thi...


MAHI-tu kya daanth dikha rahi hai....ab chalegi bhi ki lunch bhi abhi hi karna hai tujhe....

ALFREEN-ek minute chain nahi rehta tujhe...chal....


paani peekar ALFREEN khadi hui aur apne mom dad ko side hug karkar bye kehte hue MAHI ke saath aage badhne ko hui par tabhi....


FLORIN-ek second baccho.... INSTITUTION se pehle hostel jaakar RAAZ ko birthday wish kar dena.....


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI chownke....


MAHI-aaj uska birthday hai!!!!

FLORIN-haan..yahan aakar itna kuch dekha hai ki ab lagta hai ki ab koi bhi baat par surprise nahi lagega...

ab issi baat ko dekhlo,6 mahine pehle jis din hum yahan aaye the,us din RAAZ ka birthday tha aur time loop ko wajah sirf 6 mahino me RAAZ do saal bada ho gaya hai...

aur aaj uska 18th birthday hai.....


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI ko fir se shock laga...unhe FLORIN ki baat samajh me nahi aayi aur isiliye....


ALFREEN-ye aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain...???6 mahine me 2 saal ka time loop....!!!!


ALFREEN ki baat sun FLORIN ne kal SWEEP-STAKE ke douran hui us PEACE MAKER ki baatein batayi jisse sun MAHI aur ALFREEN shocked ho gaye....


ALFREEN-man,this place is insane.....pata nahi kya kya RAAZ chuppe hain yahan....


jahan ALFREEN bas is karishmayi duniya ke baare me soch rahi thi wahin...


MAHI-6 mahine pehle jis raat aap dono yahan aaye the,us din RAAZ ka birthday tha....

thats strange.. kyunki us din toh mera bhi birthday tha....

ALFREEN-what.....!!!matlab aaj tera bhi birthday hai....


MAHI ki baat sun khushi se uchalte hue ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi aur turant MAHI ke gale lag gayi....

ALFREEN ke baad FLORIN aur MARIA ne bhi MAHI ke gale lag usse blessings di...

aaj pehli baar tha jab jeete jaagte log MAHI ko uske birthday par wish bhi kar rahe the aur behad khush bhi dikh rahe the aur ye sab dekh MAHI bhi behad khush dikhne lagi thi....


FLORIN-aaj hamari beti ka birthday hai aur hume hi pata nahi tha...

MARIA-par ab toh pata hai naa.... toh kyun naa,ek party rakhi jaaye aur sabse achi baat ye hai ki arrangements ki bhi koi tention nahi hai...

yahan toh bas jo chahiye,usse bolna hota hai aur har chiz aa jaati hai....

tum sab ek kaam karo, INSTITUTION me apne PHASE ke sabhi hostlers aur discholars SAVENTS ko aaj shaam yahan hamare ghar par invite karo....

ALFREEN-fantastic idea....

FLORIN-ek kaam karte hain, RAAZ ka birthday bhi MAHI ke saath hi celebrate kar lete hain...


FLORIN ki baat sun jahan baaki dono normal hi the wahin ALFREEN ka mood bigadne laga tha...


ALFREEN-iski kya zaroorat hai dad....let him be naa....i don't like him...

FLORIN-beta kitni baar kaha hai ki aisa bolna aur sochna is not good....

MARIA-yes AL...tumhe is tarah kisike bhi baare me negetive bilkul bhi sochna nahi chahiye...

par FLORIN...ek baat toh hai,ki RAAZ kabhi bhi party me nahi aayega aur agar hum kisi tarah usse kuch aur bahana bana kar bhi yahan le aaye tab bhi koi faayda toh nahi hoga ulta nuksaan ho jaayega....

tumhe toh pata hai ki usse apna birthday celebrate karna pasand nahi aur isiliye wo kuch aisa bol ya kar dega jisse puri party ka maza hi kharab ho jaayega....

ALFREEN-exactly..aur isiliye mai mana kar rahi thi..uske liye MAHI ka birthday spoil ho,ye mai bardasht nahi karungi....


ghusse me ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jisse sun....


MAHI-shaant maate shaant..thik hai nahi bulaayenge usse....

FLORIN-haan par usse milkar usse wish zaroor kar dena...

ALFREEN-par pops wo ispar bhi ulta jawab hi dega.....

FLORIN-nahi dega..hostel me bhi jab uske birthday me hum usse wish karte the toh wo thanks toh nahi kehta tha par kuch galat bhi nahi bolta tha..

usse bas celebrations wagarah me interest nahi hota....

MAHI-cool uncle..par abhi toh hum already late ho chuke hain isiliye INSTITUTION se aate waqt usse wish kar denge....

FLORIN/MARIA-thik hai...


baaton baaton me wakayi late ho chuka tha aur isiliye FLORIN aur MARIA ko bye bol MAHI aur ALFREEN turant INSTITUTION ke liye nikal gaye...




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GUYZZZ.WAHAN CLASS ME NAHI,SABHI SAVENTS GROUND ME HAIN....TUM BHI WAHIN AA JAAO....


VALDIS ki baat sun MAHI aur ALFREEN jo apni class ki taraf jaa rahi thi,wapas palat gayi aur ground ki taraf jaane lagi....


ALFREEN-ye sab SAVENTS aaj ground me kya kar rahe hain???koi naya task milne hai kya aaj!!!

MAHI-agar aisa hua toh maza aa jaayega....


excitement se bhar MAHI aur ALFREEN ground ki taraf badh chali...

ground pahunchte hue dono ne dekha ki unke pure PHASEMATES wahan maujud hain par saamne apne chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saath MARILIZA WHIZZ ko dekh dono zara sa chownk bhi gayi thi...

turant aage badh wo dono MABEL ke baaju me jaakar khadi ho gayi....


MAHI-kya ho raha hai yahan...????

MABEL-no idea babes...class me udta hua ek bolne waala circular aaya jisme bataya gaya ki sabhi SAVENTS ko yahan ground pahunchna hai...


MABEL ki baat sunane ke baad puchne ke liye MAHI aur MABEL ke paas kuch bhi nahi bacha tha aur isiliye wo dono bhi baakiyon ki tarah saamne apne WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki taraf dekhne lagi...

wahin jab MARILIZA ne jab dekha ki first PHASE ke saare SAVENTS aa gaye hain toh....


MARILIZA- aap sab soch rahe honge ki aap sabko yahan kyun gather kiya gaya hai...???

baat darasal ye hai ki CHOSENS ke pichle 25 thousand ke itihas me pehli baar kuch anhoni hui hai...

kyunki wo anhoni aap ke PHASE se related hai toh isiliye aap sabka hakh banta hai ki aap sab us baat ko jaane....


MARILIZA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS chownke..kuch anhoni hui hai wo bhi unke PHASE me ye jaankar sabhi ke man me ek anjaane dar ne ghar kar liya tha....


MARILIZA-darasal aapke PHASE ke teen SAVENTS, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur RAAZ kal se missing hain....

un teeno ko is planet ke har jagah par talash kiya jaa chuka hai par unfortunately unka koi pata nahi chala....

pure CHOSENS me har SAVENT ke AURA ka ansh hamare paas stored rehta tha jisse us SAVENT ki location trace ki jaa sakti hai but unfortunately in teen SAVENTS ka AURA bhi inhe trace nahi kar paaya hai....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sun pure ground me khamoshi chhaa gayi...kisi ko bhi samajh me nahi aaraha tha ki kaise react kiya jaaye....

MAHI jisse RAAZ ki har baar behes hi hui thi,wo bhi uske yun laapata hone par bohot bura feel kar rahi thi...

aur khaas kar aaj kyunki abhi kuch der pehle hi toh usse pata chala tha ki aaj uske saath saath RAAZ ka bhi birthday hai...

itne khushi ke din yun manhoos khabar sunanane se wo kaafi dukhi ho gayi thi...

MAHI hi kya sabhi SAVENTS hi dukhi the aur dukhi ke saath saath thode dare hue bhi the...

sab ye sochne lag gaye the ki jab teen SAVENTS ke saath ye ho sakta hai toh kal ko unke saah bhi ye ho sakta hai...


WHIZZ MARILIZA se SAVENTS ke man ka ye bhaav chuppa nahi reh saka aur isiliye....


MARILIZA-fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi hai...aisa koi haadsa dobara naa ho iska intazam hum har chuke hain....

CHOSENS ki har PHASE ke entrace aur exit par ek NIYANTRAK ek CENSOR laga diya gaya hai jo kisi bhi sangin gatividhi me naa sirf active ho jaayega balki agar us activity me kisi SAVENT par koi khatra raha toh usse handle bhi kar lega...

itna hi nahi,is pure planet ke chaaron taraf ek REVEAL SHIELD laga diya gaya hai jisse bahar se yahan aane waale har shaksh ko naa sirf identify kar liya jaayega balki usse us shield me lage magical door ki madad se sidhe CHOSENS ke testing facility me bhej diya jaayega jahan se us shaksh ke yahan aane ki mansha ki puri jaanch hogi....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sunane ke baad sabhi SAVENTS thode nishchit dikhne lage the par in sabme ek SAVENT aisi bhi thi jo ab bhi halki dari hui thi...

ye aur koi nahi ALFREEN thi jo kal uske aur RAAZ ke beech jo hua,uske baare me soch kar halki dari hui thi par fir usne khud par kaabu paa apne face ko normal kar liya is baat se anjaan ki MAHI ne uske chehre ke lagatar badalte hue expressions dekh liye the...




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ARRE DEKHO YAHAN KAUN HAI....????GARIBON KE RAJA, ZAROORAT MANDON KE BHAGWAAN HAMARE PUJNIYA BHRATA,VIKRAM......

apne ghode par sawar ek kutiya ke saamne haath ko jodte hue VIKRAM ke chote bhai ne ye baat kahi thi....

ye DRISHYAM tha VIKRAM ke jawani ka...bachpan me hi mahal se nikalne ke baad VIKRAM wahan ke praja ke beech rehne laga tha...

raajshi logon me ek bas VIKRAM hi tha jo garibon se pyar karta tha aur issi wajah se ZEAL ka wo nagar jahan is waqt VIKRAM tha,uska bada samman karte the...

choti si umar se hi VIKRAM bohot tejaswi tha...har kaam,har chunouti ko wo bohot asaani se pura kar deta tha...mahal ke aisho aaram ko chhodne ke baad VIKRAM ne khudhi apne liye ek kutiya banayi aur wahan nagar ke logon ke beech rehne laga...

wahan ke logon ki hi tarah har din jungle me jaa lakdi,phal aur vibhin upyogi vanaspatiyon ko wahan se laakar VIKRAM bech apna guzara karta tha..

usse ye sangharsh purn zindagi apne mahal ki zindagi se zyadi achi lagti thi..

apne hunar ki wajah se baaki logon ke mukabke jungle jaakar wahan se zaroorat ki chizen sangrah karne me VIKRAM ko bohot kam waqt lagta tha...

aur isiliye baaki ka waqt wo wahin jungle ke madhya bane jharne ke kareeb reh alag alag vidyaaon ke adhyan me lagata tha...

kabhi kabhi jab jungle me koi jaanwar aadamkhor ho jaaya karta tha,tab VIKRAM hi usse maara karta tha...

iski ek jhalak RAAZ ke yahan aate hi dikhayi gayi thi....

jungle se lout shaam ke waqt roz VIKRAM wahan ke bacchon aur yuvaon ko alag alag vishay me gyan diya karta tha...

aaj bhi wo wahi kar raha tha ki tabhi uska BHAI apne kuch logon aur sipahiyon ke saath wahan se guzra aur apne BHAI ko logon ke beech baitha dekh usne ye taunt kiya tha....

jahan VIKRAM ke chote bhai ko dekh wahan baithe log dar gaye the aur sabne apna sir neeche jhuka liya tha wahin uski baat sun VIKRAM bas muskura diya aur....


VIKRAM-taarif ke shukriya mere bhai....

RAJKUMAR-mai tumhara koi bhai nahi hun.....aur ab tum bhi in logon ki hi tarah hamare aadhin ho..hum hi tumhare bhagwaan hain...

isiliye khudko bhagwan banana chhodo aur agli baar jahan bhi tumhe hum dikhe,toh sabki tarah apna sir hamare saamne jhuka liya karo....

VIKRAM-is puri shrishti ka sirf ek hi bhagwaan hai aur mera sir sirf ussi ke aage jhukta hai...aur rahi baat tumhari toh maine tumhe bhai isiliye nahi kaha kyunki hum dono ek hi maa ke kokh se janme hain...

jis din maine tumhare mahal ko chhoda tha,ussi din maine bhi tum sabse naata tod liya tha...

ab tum mere liye begaane ho aur bhai bhi maine isiliye bola kyunki har begaane se bhale ho amir ho,gareeb ho ya koi bhikshuk,mai sabko bhai hi kehkar sambhodhit karta hun....


Rajkumar jaanta tha ki indirectly VIKRAM ne usse ek bhikari ke saath compare kiya hai aur isiliye


RAJKUMAR-tumhari itni himmat ki humse zuban ladao....

sipahi.... jao,aur ghasithe hue isse hamare kadmo me laakar feko....

Rajkumar ke aadesh ko sun ek sipahi apni talwar ke saath aage badha aur us talwar ko VIKRAM ke gardan par laga diya par tabhi....


Dhabb......

ye kya...????


ek second bhi nahi tik paayi wo talwar VIKRAM ke gardan par..kisiko dikha tak nahi ki kab VIKRAM halka sa right ki taraf tilt hua,us sipahi ke haath ko jisme talwar thi, halka jhatka diya jisse talwar uske haath se jhitki aur aisa hote hi ab wo talwar VIKRAM ke haathon me thi....

aisa kar VIKRAM ne ussi haath se jisme talwar thi,ek low jaw punch us sipahi ko maara jiske pressure se wo sipahi udta hua rajkumar ke upar se hota hua dusri taraf gira...

wahan moujud sabhi bhouchakke se ye sab hota dekh rahe the...

Rajkumar ki bhi ye haalat kharab ho gayi thi....

uski aankhon me bhi halka halka dar dikhne laga tha...


VIKRAM-arre ye kya??ye kaise bhagwaan hai jiski aankhon me dar dikhne laga????

abhi toh sirf dar dikha hai,chupchaap yahan se nahi gaya toh bhagwaan ke sharir se khoon bhi nikalne lagega...


Rajkumar ke behad kareeb jaa uski aankhon me jhaankte hue VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi jiske baad rajkumar apne saathiyon aur sipahiyon ke saath wahan se nikal gaya....


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WOOGER-kuch alag dikha is drishyam me aapko???

MAI-haan...us sipahi se bhidte waqt aur aakhri baat bolte waqt VIKRAM ke sharir se ek AURA nikal raha tha...

waise ye same chiz jab usne us cheeteh ko maara tha,tab bhi hua tha....jab wo us jharne ke paas abhyas kar raha hota tha,tab bhi ye AURA uske chaaron taraf tha...

but baaki waqt ye AURA gayab ho jaata hai...

WOOGER-bohot ache....


ab baari hai aakhri DRISHYAM ki....dhyan se dekhiyega isse...


WOOGER ki baat khatm hote hi scene change hi chuka tha....



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beta,hamari bacchi ko bachalo.... tumhara bhai usse utha kar mahal ki taraf le gaya hai...


shaam ka waqt hai... VIKRAM abhi jungle se lout hi raha tha ki tabhi usse uske kutiya ke paas rehne waala ek buddha mila jisne rote hue apni baat batayi...

darasal us buddhe ki ek beti thi jo behad khubsoorat thi aur rajkumar ko bohot pasand thi par us ladki ke dil me VIKRAM tha....

Rajkumar ne kayi baar us ladki ko apne rutbe aur apni fake taakat se rijhaane ki koshish ki par wo ladki kabhi rajkumar ko bhaaw nahi deti thi.....

par aaj subah ek guptchar ne jisse rajkumar ne ussi ladki par jaasusi karne ke liye rakha tha,aakar usse bataya ki wo ladki uske bade bhai VIKRAM se pyar karti hai toh rajkumar is sach ko bardaasht nahi kar paaya...

ek second nahi laga rajkumar ke man me us ladki ke prati prachand krodh jaagne me...

jo soft corner uske man me us ladki ke liye tha,wo khatm ho chuka tha aur ab uski jagah badle ne le ki thi...

Rajkumar ek teer se do shikar karna chahta tha..us ladki ko sabak sikhate hue apne bhai se apne kuch samay pehle hue apmaan ka badla lekar...

aur isiliye apni sena ki ek tukdi lekar rajkumar nagar me gaya aur us ladki ko beech bazar se uthakar mahal le gaya....

in saari ghatna ke baare me sun VIKRAM ki aankhen laal ho gayi..us ladki ke prati aakarshan VIKRAM ke andar bhi the aur isiliye jab usne ye sab suna toh apne ghode ko tezi se mahal ki taraf douda diya...

Rajkumar bhali bhaati jaanta tha ki us ladki ke liye VIKRAM mahal zaroor aayega aur isiliye usne mahal ki suraksha kadi kar di thi....

karib 1000 se zyada sainik mahal ko guard kar rahe the....

wahin VIKRAM behad tezi se apne ghode ko daudate hue mahal ke mukhya dwar ke paas pahuncha jahan 30 se zyada sainik tainat the par unhe kaatne me VIKRAM ko 1 minute se zyada ka samay nahi laga....

sainikon ko kaat VIKRAM aage badhta chala jaa raha tha..is waqt bhi uske sharir se wo adhbhudh AURA baahar nikal rahi thi....

mahal ke andar pravesh kar VIKRAM apne ghode se utra aur doudte hue aage badha...

age badhte hue VIKRAM har sainik ko kaaththa chala jaa raha tha....dekhte hi dekhte wahan khade har sainik ki laash bichti chali gayi....

kuch hi minutes me mahal ke lagbhag sabhi sainikon ke haath, pair ya gardan kat chuke the...

VIKRAM tezi se badhta hua mahal ke andar ghus gaya aur sidhe rajkumar ke shayan kaksh ki taraf doud pada...

shayan kaksh ka darwaza band tha jisse VIKRAM ne ek zor ki laat maari aur aisa hote hi wo bada sa darwaza ek jhatke me toot gaya...

darwaza tootne ke baad jaise hi VIKRAM ne andar ka nazara dekha toh.....

uski aankhen pathra gayi...wo jad sa hokar khada ho gaya...

reason...


jis ladki ko bachane VIKRAM yahan laashon ke dher bichata hua pahuncha tha,wo ladki neeche zamin par padi hui thi aur uski aankhe palat chuki thi jiska arth tha ki uske gale ko ghot diya gaya tha...

us ladki ke sharir me lesh maatra ka kapda bhi nahi tha jiska arth tha ki usse maarne se pehle uski izzat,uski azmat ko loot liya gaya tha....

wahin darwaze ke yun tootne se rajkumar jo abhi nanga hi tha,wo hadbada gaya tha aur jab usne apne saamne khoon se lathpath jo ki wahan ke sainikon ka tha,apne bhai ko dekha toh uski haalat aur kharab ho gayi...

wo soch hi raha tha ki kaise yahan se bachke nikla jaaye ki tabhi....


KHACHHHH.....

AAHHHH.......

ye dard bhari aah VIKRAM ki thi....

reason...

us ladki ki haalat ko dekh VIKRAM sab kuch bhul sa gaya tha jiska faayda uthathe hue ek sainik ne piche se uske peeth me talwar ghussa di jo sidhe uske pet se hote hue baahar nikal gayi....

wahin is scene ko dekh....


RAJKUMAR-shaabash sainik......ab iski gardan udda do....

khushi se khil utha tha rajkumar ka chehra jisse dekh VIKRAM ki aankhen ek baar firse ghusse se laal ho gayi....

is beech us sainik ne apni talwar wapas kheenchi aur VIKRAM ke gardan par chala di par tabhi....

VIKRAM tezi se jhuka aur turant palat gaya aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....

us sainik ki gardan piche ghum chuki thi....

gardan todne ke baad VIKRAM ne uski talwar uske haathon se li aur ek ke baad ek uske sharir ke ang kaaththa chala gaya....

peeche se ye sab rajkumar dekh raha tha aur uski buri tarah se fath gayi thi...

VIKRAM ki peeth uske taraf thi par usse pata tha ki uske paas itna samay nahi tha aur isiliye usne ek badi si chaadar ko apne body me lapeta aur bhaagta hua room se nikalne laga..

VIKRAM ke paas pahunch usne usse zor ka dhakka diya aur bhaagte hue apne pitah ke shayan kaksh ki taraf lapka....

par dhakka khaane ke baad jab VIKRAM aage girne laga toh ussi talwar ko aage rakh usne khud ko sambhala aur sidhe khade ho tezi se talwar Rajkumar ki taraf feka jo sidhe uske right hand ko faadta hua nikal gaya...

ek dardnaakh cheekh ke saath Rajkumar wahin gir gaya....

ab tak KING aur unki patni bhi baahar aa chuke the..apne bete ki ye haalat dekh unhe behad shock laga....

wo aage badhte usse pehle hi VIKRAM rajkumar tak pahunch chuka tha aur....

ek jhatke me usne wo talwar rajkumar ke haath se khinchi,usse ghumaya aur pehle,gardan, fir left aur right haath,fir pet aur fir rajkumar ke dono pair baari baari kaat diye.....

rajkumar ke khoon se naha gaya VIKRAM.....

is scene ko dekh jahan KING stabdh se rah gaye wahi queen toh behosh hi ho gayi.....

aur in sab se alag apne chote bhai ko maarne ke baad VIKRAM bhi apne ghutno par baith apne bhai ke kate hue ango ko ektak dekhne laga...

najane aisa kab tak hota rehta par tabhi....

khaachhhh..khachhh.....


do baar chali KING ki talwar VIKRAM ke peeth par jisse cheekhte hue wo hosh me aaya....

aur jaise hi KING ne firse talwar chalayi jiska isbaar nishana VIKRAM ka sir tha, VIKRAM neech jhuk gaya....

neech jhukte hue VIKRAM ne haath aage kar KING ke haathon se talwar ko jhatka diya aur agle hi pal wo talwar VIKRAM ke haathon me thi....


VIKRAM-jaise bachpan me us nirdosh vyakti ki mout ka zimmedar mai tha ussi prakar aaj aapke putra ki hatya ke zimmedar aap hain....

jee toh karta hai ki mai aapko yahi maar dun par kya karun!!!bhulane par bhi mai ye baat nahi bhul sakta ki badkismati se aap mere pitah hain...


apni baat bol VIKRAM tezi se mahal ke bahar ki taraf lapka..

usse pata tha ki bhale hi usne apni pitah ko kuch nahi kiya par uske pitah ussse nahi chhodne waale...

waise toh kitne bhi sainik kyun naa aa jaayen, VIKRAM ko pata tha ki koi uska saamna nahi kar paayega kintu abhi wo bohot ghayal tha....

uski aankhen reh reh kar band ho rahi thi aur is haalat me wo zyada logon se ladh kar nahi jeet sakta tha...

isiliye VIKRAM apne ghode me baith mahal se nikal gaya aur jaisa usne socha tha,waisa hi hua...

uske mahal se nikalte nikalte KING ne apne kayi sipahiyon ko VIKRAM ko maar dene ka hukm diya jiske baad wo sabhi sainik VIKRAM ke peeche ho liye....

wahin VIKRAM jo ki atyadhik khoon nikal jaane ki wajah se kaafi kamzor ho gaya tha,ghode par baithe baithe hi uski chetna jaane lagi aur wo ghode par lete lete hi behosh ho gaya....

wo ghoda tezi se aage badhta chala gaya aur ek jagah par jaakar rook gaya.....

kuch der baad VIKRAM ki aankhen khuli..usse behad dard ho raha tha...ussi haalat me usne un sainikon ki awaaz suni jo uske baare me hi baat karte hue usse dhund rahe the...

bojhil aankhon se VIKRAM ne dekha ki is waqt wo ek bade ae ghane ped ke piche hai aur jab uski nazar aage ki taraf gayi toh usne dekha ki wahan wahi chamatkari GUFA hai jisse ye PLANET bana...

us GUFA ko dekh VIKRAM ko aisa feel hua jaise wo GUFA usse pukar raha hai....

badhhawasi me ladhkhadate hue VIKRAM aage badha aur us GUFA ki taraf chal pada aur kuch hi palon me wo us gufa ke saamne tha...

usse us GUFA ke muhaane se behad tez urja feel ho rahi thi...par filhal VIKRAM ki haalat zyada sochne samajhne waali nahi thi aur isiliye...

VIKRAM ne GUFA ke andar jaane ke liye apne pair badhaye aur.....

uske sharir ko jhatka laga par wo baahar nahi fekaya balki gufa ke andar kheenchata hua chala gaya...

GUFA baahar se jitni badi dikh rahi thi,andar se usse bhi badi thi...par sabse kamal ki baat ye thi ki VIKRAM ke sharir ka saara khoon is GUFA ke andar aane se gayab ho chuka tha....

uske sharir me lage ghaaw toh ab bhi the par uska dimag ab kaam kar raha tha....

gufa ke andar pahunch VIKRAM ko kisi ek disha se behad strong energy feel hui aur uske kadam ussi taraf badh gaye...

us disha me aage badhta VIKRAM ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan behad tez roshni chamak rahi thi...

dhadakte dil se VIKRAM aage badha..par jaise jaise VIKRAM aage badh raha tha,usse uski zindagi me ghati ab tak ki saari ghatnaayen yaad aa rahi thi..

un saari ghatnaon ko ek film ki tarah dobara jeeta hua VIKRAM us roshni ke behad paas aa gaya....

aisa hone par usne apna haath aage badhaya aur tabhi....

uske man ke bheetar ek saath do films chalne lagi..ek toh ussiki zindagi ki thi aur dusri ek dusri kahani thi.....

par un do films ke chalne ke baad aakhir me uska dimag blank ho gaya aur aisa hone ke kuch der baad VIKRAM ki mooh se kuch nikla aur......

ek ray nikal VIKRAM par pada jiske agle hi second wo jal kar raakh ho gaya....

VIKRAM ke marte hi wo GUFA kaampne lagi..sirf wo GUFA hi nahi,balki pura ZEAL PLANET hi kaampne laga tha...

planet ke saare baashinde is kampan ko feel kar apne bachav me alag alag jagah chuppne lage par mout se hide and seek khelna kisike bas me nahi hota aur wahi yahan hua....

dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi minutes me pura ZEAL PLANET zamin ke andar dafan ho gaya....khatm ho gayi saari riyasaten,ujad gayi saari bastiyan aur naamoshinan mit gaya pure Planet se zindagi ka....

kuch minutes me hi ek living planet ek dead planet me badal chuka tha.....

bachi thi sirf wo CAVERN aur us CAVERN ke AURA se nikalta dhuan...



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WOOGER-ummid karta hun ki aapne saare drishyon ko dhyan se dekha hoga...agar koi sawal hai toh aap puch sakte hain...

MAI-ye aakhri me VIKRAM ke dimag me jo dusra scene chal raha tha,wo clear kyun nahi dikh raha tha...

WOOGER-question paper exams ke waqt hi milte hain,usse pehle nahi....

agar aapka waqt aaya,toh wo drishya aapko dikh jaayega....

aur koi sawal....???

MAI-RENAISS chalen...???


meri baat sun WOOGER se ek urja nikal mujhpar padi aur aisa hote hi mai gayab ho chuka tha...

gayab ho mai ek baar firse antariksh me tha par is baar mere saamne ek planet tha...meri manzil ki pehli sidhi


....RENAISS......

jiska shape normal planet ki tarah naa hokar ek BRAIN ki tarah tha....

mai thik RENAISS ke atmosphere ke baahar chupchaap khada tha ki tabhi....


RENAISS-agar jawab galat hua toh VIKRAM ki hi tarah tum bhi raakh hi jaaoge....isiliye agar chaaho toh lout sakte ho.....

MAI-sawal puch.....


meri baat sun kuch der tak khamoshi rahi par fir pucha kiya mujhse mera sawal......


RENAISS-VIKRAM ki mout kyun hui....???



MAI-hunar se,hunar se mili taakat se,manzilen haasil nahi hoti.... FAISLE......CHUNAW.....DECISION....

inhi ke sahi chayan se hi ek raahgir ko raasta,aur us raaste ko uski manzil milti hai....

VIKRAM ne sab kuch sahi kiya,bas FAISLA galat le liya......



mere jawab ke baad ek baar firse khaamoshi chhaa gayi par ye sirf ek second ke liye hi tha kyunki agle hi pal....

RENAISS planet se ek ray nikal jo ki ek rope thi,mujhpar padi aur aisa hote hi mai RENAISS ke atmosphere ke andar kheenchata chala gaya....

aur in sabka samooh arth tha ki finally, its time to.....


........UNFOLD THE RAAZ..........







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....







AAPKA APNA V....J......
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