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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI NE APNE SOUL KO 2 PERCENT TAK AMPLIFY KAR LIYA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MABEL AUR ALFREEN NE BHI APNE SOUL KA FIRST PERCENT AMPLIFICATION KAR LIYA HAI...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



MEGA UPDATE-33



PLANET-EYLSIAN


PLACE-ALFREENS ABODE




NAHI..............


ek tez cheekh ke saath ALFREEN uth gayi thi....

reason.....aaj usse fir wahi sapna aaya tha jisme RAAZ ne uske mom dad ko maar diya tha....

kuch der tak apne chadhe hue saanson ko kaabu me laane ke baad wo turant apne bed se utri aur apne mom dad ke room ki taraf chal padi....

aaj bhi FLORIN aur MARIA araam se so rahe the jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-ye sab kya ho raha hai mere saath...wahi sapna dobara kyun aaya mujhe???

aur aaj toh pichle baar se zyada realistic lag raha tha sab.....kahi ye sab mere INSTINCTS dwara catch kiye gaye pre intuitions toh nahi hai...!!!

nahi nahi..ye mai kya soch rahi hun.. aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta..mai aisa hone hi nahi dungi....

kuch hone ka intazar karne se acha toh ye hai ki kuch hone hi naa diya jaaye....

& i am gonna make sure about it...i will turn each and every stone around...


aakhri baat bolte waqt ALFREEN ki aankhon me ghussa saaf dikhne laga tha....

jaise har road ka koi na koi dead end hota hai,har aaghas ka ek anjaam hota hai,waise hi har soch se ek faisla janm leta hai aur har faisle ka ek natija hota hai...

ab dekhna ye hai ki kya faisla liya hai ALFREEN ne aur us faisle ka kya niklega natija...!!!!?????



NEXT DAY AT CHOSEN'S....



SWEEP-STAKE:-



GATHER AROUND SAVENTS.....


apne apne groups banaye khade SAVENTS ke kaano me VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz padi jisse sun sabhi apne regualar line formation me khade ho gaye...

subah ka waqt hai...as decided,sabhi SAVENTS apne regular waqt par CHOSENS ke PHASE 1 block ke ground me jama ho chuke hain aur unke saamne unke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS moujud hain...

kal shaam ko ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne mujhe bataya tha ki aaj mujhe bhi INSTITUTION me aane ke liye kaha gaya hai aur isiliye aaj kaafi waqt ke baad mai bhi yahan sabhi SAVENTS ke saath khada hun...

sabko dekhne ke baad ek nazar chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne meri taraf bhi ghumaya aur fir...


OPHILIA-so finally,its SWEEP-STAKE time SAVENTS.... excited..!!!!

SAVENTS- yes WHIZZ....

OPHILIA-hona bhi chahiye...aaj jis competition ko dekhne aap sab jaane waale hain,yakin maaniye,aap sab ke future performance ke liye ye competition kisi moral boost se kam nahi hoga...

kaafi inspired hone waale hai aaj aap sab....


OMMIN-abhi thodi hi der me hum PHASE 3 block ke liye niklenge par usse pehle 2 important baatein jo aaj ke din se hi related hain,uske baare me jaan lijiye....

pehli.....

jaisa ki aap sabko humne bataya tha,aap sabke apne abhi tak ke performance ke according hi aaj aap sab SWEEP-STAKE witness karenge aur isiliye....


MAHI, ALFREEN,MABEL....aap teenon ek taraf ho jaaiye....aaj ka competition aap teeno PHASE 2 ke sabse respected group STELLARS ke saath baith kar dekhenge...


OMMIN ki baat sun khush hote hue MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ek taraf hokar khadi hi gayi....

iske baad jinhone bhi apne soul ko trigger kar liya tha, OMMIN ne un sabka naam ek ek kar liya aur unhe bhi ek group banakar khada kar diya....


OMMIN-aap sabne bhi aaj ke competition ko witness karne liye ek respected jagah own kar li hai....

and now ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BROWNY and RAAZ....kyunki aap sab baaki SAVENTS se piche hain, isiliye aap sabko sabse door khade hokar ye competition dekhna hoga....

itna hi nahi,wahan ke saare spectators, competition ke dauran wahan moujud sabhi PHASE 1 aur 2 ke SAVENTS ke liye snacks & beverages ka arrangment bhi rahega,siwaay aap chaaron ke...

aaj pure din aap chaaron kuch khaa ya pee nahi sakenge....

ACCHUTA dheere se-din bhar bhuka rehna padega....
saala koi apne ghar ki baayi ke saath bhi aisa nahi karta yaar...


OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sun ACCHUTA dheere dheere sabhi ko gaali de raha tha, SLUNDER aur BROWNY ka sir jhuka hua tha, mujhe koi fark nahi pad raha tha,aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS humare liye pity feel kar rahe the but in sabke beech ALFREEN bas mujhe ghusse se ghur ghur kar dekh rahi thi...


NOX-ye toh hui pehli baat.. aur dusri baat hai khud SWEEP-STAKE....

is competition ko dekhne se pehle mai aapko iske baare me bata deta hun kyunki ek baar aap SWEEP-STAKE combat jahan hone waala hai,wahan pahunch gaye toh uske baad humara aapse intaraction nahi ho paayega...

aap hi ki tarah hum WHIZZDERS aur WHIZZES ke liye bhi alag se baithne ke arrangements hote hain..

jaisa ki aap sabko pata hai ki SWEEP-STAKE ka matlab hota hai khudki saamne waale par superiority dikhana...

bas issi defination ko ek roop deta hai ye competition....

ye competition do teams ke beech hota hai..ye teams aur koi nahi balki wo do groups hain jinse third PHASE divide hota hai....

WICKEDS.....

MORALS.......

ye wo do groups ke naam jinme se koi ek GROUP final PHASE me aapka ghar hoga....aapka parivaar hoga....

ab baat karen is competition ki toh WICKEDS aur MORALS ke beech ka ye competition ZUNYATA aur SATYATATI ko aadhar banakar khela,lada aur jeeta jaata hai...

ZUNYATA matlab unreal
aur SATYATATI matlab real....

ek bade se stadium me jo ki maayavi hota hai,wahan hota hai ye competition jisme samay ke saath ascending order me alag alag real aur unreal metaphysical aur magical chunoutiyan milti hai jinhe as a group dono hi teams ko handle kar jeetna padta hai....

samajh gaye aap sab????

SAVENTS- yes WHIZZDER...


utsah aur khushi,dono hi bhaav jhalke the SAVENTS ki awaaz me.. competition kaisa hoga,iske baare me jaankar sabhi ka excitement level ek alag hi mukaam par pahunch gaya tha...

MAHI ne toh abhi se hi khudko ek din us competition me part leta hua dekhna shuru kar diya tha...

MABEL ka bhi same haal tha..waise ALFREEN bhi ye sab sun kaafi excited thi par uska aadha dhyan kahin aur tha....


OPHILIA-its time SAVENTS...lets go aur haan,aap sab ke parents pehle hi battle ground me pahunch chuke hain...

so let's move....


ye bol chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS aage badhe aur jis tarah hume khada kiya gaya tha,ussi formation me hum bhi unke piche ho liye...



BATTLE GROUND.......


YES MAHI....any problem???


PHASE 1 block cross karke PHASE 2 block se nikalte hue hum PHASE 3 block ke beech bane ek bohot bade ground ke baahar khade the......

ye ground darasal ek bohot hi bada stadium tha,jisme alag alag entrace the aur unhi entrance me se ek ke baahar the hum sab is waqt...

yahan pahunch OPHILIA WHIZZ kuch kehne hi waali thi ki tabhi MAHI ne apna haath upar kiya...

wahin WHIZZ ke kehte hi....


MAHI- WHIZZ, PHASE 1,PHASE 2 ke end me do bade bade gigantic bells lage hue the...wo kis liye hain...???


aate waqt MAHI ne un do bade bells ko dekh liya tha but kyunki aaj tak wo bell kisi bhi reason se baje nahi the, isiliye uske man me ye sawal aaya tha jo usne puch liya...


OPHILIA-wo bells is INSTITUTION ke danger alarms hain...ek invisible information force se jude hain wo bells..

waise do nahi kul teen bells hain..third PHASE ka bell is block ke aakhri chhor me hain...

agar kabhi kisi PHASE me kuch anhoni hui,toh us PHASE ka bell baj uththa hai...

par har PHASE ka bell sirf wahan ke incharges,matlab us PHASE ke liye appoint kiye gaye WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se hi juda hota hai,aur isiliye sirf unhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko un bells ki awaaz sunayi deti hai jis PHASE me kuch bohot galat hua hota hai....


OPHILIA WHIZZ ki bat sun ek baar fir sabhi SAVENTS hairan hue...kya kya chizen possible ho sakti hai magic se,ye ab dheere dheere un sabko samajh me aa raha tha...


wahin OPHILIA WHIZZ apni baat aage badhane hi waali thi ki....


WELL,LOOK WHO'S HERE...!!!!!THE WISE FOURGIES....


ek awaaz aayi stadium ke entrance ki taraf se jisse sun WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS palte aur saath hi hum sabki nazar bhi us taraf gayi toh humne dekha ki 3 log humari hi taraf aa rahe the...

jinme se 2 male the aur ek female aur jo baat abhi kahi gayi thi,wo us female ne kahi thi jo muskurate hue hamare paas aayi aur apne waist par apne dono haath rakh khadi ho gayi...

wahin uske saath jo do males aaye the,wo aage badhe aur baari baari hamare chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se gale mil unhe greet kiya...

gale milne ke baad...


VIOLET-kaisi ho MABBA.....???


apne waist par haath rakh khadi lady se VIOLET WHIZZ ne ye kaha jisse sun...???


MABBA-taklifen zameen ko hoti hain..aasman toh hamesha mast hi rehta hai....


MABBA ki baat sun uske saath aaye dono bando ne apne sir ko shake kiya aur VIOLET WHIZZ bas muskura di wahin hamare baaki ke teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS normally hi khade rahe aur wo shayad isiliye kyunki wo jaante the ki MABBA aisi hi hai...

a troubling bitch.....


VIOLET-SAVENTS....apne next PHASE ke teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS se miliye...

SAPIUS,REGIS aur ye hain MABBA.....


VIOLET WHIZZ ne un teeno ki taraf ek ek kar point karte hue hume unke naam bataye...


SAVENTS-GOOD MORNING WHIZZ...GOOD MORNING WHIZZDERS......

SAPIUS/REGIS-GOOD MORNING SAVENTS....toh aap hain hamare agle batch...its really nice to meet you all...


SAPIUS aur REGIS, dono hi hamare WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki tarah kaafi milansaar the,aur ussi tarah unhone sabhi SAVENTS se baat ki.....


MABBA- aapme se MAHI kaun hain....???


SAPIUS aur REGIS ki baat khatm hote hi MABBA ne ye sawal kiya jiske baad VIOLET WHIZZ ne MAHI ko aage aane ke liye kaha...

aur MAHI ke aage aate hi MABBA uske saamne khadi hui aur uske kandhe par apna ek haath rakh diya..


MABBA-khushi sirf deserving logon se milkar honi chahiye thik waise jaise mujhe tumse milkar ho rahi hai...

ummid karti hun ki jo galti dusron ne ki,wo tum nahi karogi...bas ek baat yaad rakhna, acchayi,burayi sirf shabd hain aur kuch nahi..

important hai TAAKAT...SHAKTI...jiske paas ye hai,wahi accha hai aur sirf wahi saccha hai...


aadhi baat VIOLET WHIZZ ki taraf aur aadhi baat MAHI ko dekhte hue unhone kahi thi...

wahin unki baat MAHI ko sahi toh nahi lagi par kyunki MABBA uski next PHASE ki WHIZZ thi,isiliye wo chup hi rahi...

wahin apni baat kehne ke baad....


MABBA-chalo...tumhe aaj humare PHASE ke best SAVENTS ke saath baithna hai...

MAHI ko pakde pakde unhone ye kaha aur usse apne saath lejaane ke liye mudne hi waali thi ki....


VIOLET- ek second MABBA... MAHI ke saath saath MABEL aur ALFREEN ne bhi tumhare STELLARS group me baithne ke liye qualify kiya hai.. unhe bhi saath le jaao...


apni baat keh WHIZZ ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ko jaane ka ishara kiya jiske baad wo dono bhi MABBA ke paas jaakar khade ho gaye...


MABBA-impressive....jo baat maine MAHI se kahi,wahi tum dono ke liye bhi hai...baakiyon se aage ho tum teeno,par agar future me bhi aisa hi chahte ho toh sirf POWER par focus rakhna...

uske shroth par nahi.....


ye bol teeno ko lekar MABBA aage badh gayi wahin unke jaane ke baad SAPIUS aur REGIS kuch der tak hamare chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se baat kar ek taraf chal diye...

OPHILIA- mere piche aayiye SAVENTS...


ye bol OPHILIA WHIZZ ek taraf ko aage badhi aur unke piche sabhi SAVENTS ho liye...


OMMIN- ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BROWNY, RAAZ...aap chaaron mere piche aayiye...


OMMIN ke aisa kehte hi hum chaaron unke piche ho liye..

ye teeno toh behad sad dikh rahe the par mai hamesha ki tarah normal tha...

aage badhte hue hum ek jagah pahunche jahan pahunchte hi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BROWNY ka face aur sukh gaya..

reason...

hum stadium ke ek entrance gate par khade the jiske baahar UNDERSERVING likha tha...

ab mooh sukhao ya bhale hi ro lo,jaana toh yahin par tha aur isiliye ek ek kar hum us entrance se hote hue andar chale gaye...

andar pahunch humne dekha ki pura stadium audience se bhara hua tha...ye audience aur koi nahi balki purane passed out SAVENTS aur unki families the...

sabhi audience zoron shoron se awaazein nikal rahe the,gaane ga rahe the jisse mahoul kaafi sahi lag raha tha...

kaafi saare blocks bane the stadium me aur har block ke side me wahan baithe logon ke liye food aur beverages ka intazam kiya gaya tha...

par jahan hum chaaron the,wo jagah pure stadium se alag thi....

baithne le liye seats toh the nahi par saath hi behad garmi aur humidity bhi thi yahan....

floor pura ganda tha...aur ek ajeeb si badbu bhi aa rahi thi,jo ki saalon se safayi naa karne par aati hai...

hume wahan chhod OMMIN WHIZZDER jaa chuke the...mai ek jagah chup chaap khada ho gaya tha...


ACCHUTA-ga**d maarne aur marwane ke liye badhiya jagah hai ye bhai....

SLUNDER- tu chup rahega..yaar kitni garmi hai yahan....pure din bina khaaye aur bina piye kaise rahenge hum yahan....???

ACCHUTA-mooth piyega...waise lag toh nahi raha hai,par teri dosti ki khaatir mai koshish karta hun nikaalne ki...

tu bas niche mooh khol kar baith jaa....


issi tarah SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA hamesha ki tarah apni bakwas karne me lag gaye wahin mai aur BROWNY chup chaap khade the...



PHASE 2 STAND:-


WOW.....AMAZING....BAAHAR SE PATA HI NAHI CHAL RAHA THA KI ANDAR KA NAZARA AISA HOGA....


MAHI ne excitement me ye baat kahi thi jisse stadium ke shor ki wajah se MABEL aur ALFREEN aadhi hi sun paayi thi.....

MABBA in teeno ko yahan second PHASE ke STELLARS group ke beech laayi thi aur fir group ke sabhi SAVENTS se unka intro karwaya tha...

sabhi in teeno ko dekhkar kaafi khush the siway do logon ke...

ANWIR aur MORANA...

dono hi ghusse se in teeno ko dekh rahe the,khaaskar MAHI ko....

khair,intro ke baad teeno apni apni seats par baith gayi...har taraf nazaren ghumate hue MAHI ki nazar ek jagah rooki aur...


MAHI-wo dekh AL,uncle aunty....


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN ki nazar stadium ke dusre bhaag me gayi jahan par stand ke upar PARENTS likha hua tha...

unke stand ke pure ulat side tha wo stand jahan is waqt baaki current aur ex SAVENTS ke parents baithe hue the....

wo stand kaafi door tha but MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN clearly wahan baithe FLORIN aur MARIA ko dekh paa rahe the aur iski wajah thi un teeno ki SOUL...

apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY kar lene ki wajah se ab unki drishti bhi pehle se 10 guna tak tez ho gayi thi...

apne mom dad ko baaki parents ke saath milkar hooting karta dekh ALFREEN ke chehre par smile aa gayi...

par ye smile kuch seconds ki hi thi kyunki apne mom dad ko dekhne ke baad uski nazar thodi aur aage gayi jahan stadium ka last stand bana hua tha aur wahan is waqt RAAZ ek jagah tik kar khada tha....

RAAZ ko apne mom dad ke stand ke paas dekh ALFREEN ke man me ek ajeeb se dar ne ghar kar liya tha....

par tabhi.....


MABEL-arre wahan side me kya dekh rahi hai...???saamne dekh....


ALFREEN ke kandhe se hilate hue MABEL ne ye kaha aur jab ALFREEN ne saamne dekha toh...


SWINNNNNNN........


maidan ke ek taraf KAALE aur BHURE rang ke gaadhe colour se bane dhuen ko neeche chhodte hue ek saath das aakriti upar hawa me uththe chale gaye aur ek point par aakar ruk gaye....

unke upar hawa me rookte hi unse just upar bade bade KAALE aksharon me kuch akshar ubharne lage aur jab un aksharon ne khudko likhna pura kiya toh....

....WICKEDS......


is naam ki dhwani se aadhe se zyada stadium goonj utha...yahi likha tha un aakritiyon ke upar aur aisa hone ke baad un aakritiyon me bhi badlaaw aane laga aur dekhte hi dekhte wo 10 aakritiyon human forms me badal gayi....

complete black stretchable outfit pehne ye 10 PHASE 3 ke pehle group WICKEDS ke SAVENTS the jo hawa me uthe hue sabhi audience ko haath hilate hue abhivaadan de rahe the.....

sab unhe dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi.....

maidan ke dusre chhor me kuch same nazara banane laga...

maidan ke us dusri taraf WHITE aur PINK rang ke gaadhe colour se bane dhuen ko neeche chhodte hue ek saath das aakriti upar hawa me uththe chale gaye aur WICKEDS ki point par aakar ruk gaye....

unke upar hawa me rookte hi unse just upar bade bade WHITE aksharon me kuch akshar ubharne lage aur jab un aksharon ne khudko likhna pura kiya toh....


MORALS......


ab is naam se aadha stadium goonj utha...


yahi likha tha un aakritiyon ke upar aur aisa hone ke baad un aakritiyon me bhi badlaaw aane laga aur dekhte hi dehte wo 10 aakritiyon human forms me badal gayi....

complete white stretchable outfit pehne ye dus SAVENTS PHASE 3 ke MORALS the jo haath hawa me lehra sabhi ka abhivaadan kar rahe the....

wahin ye sab dekh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ka excitement level bhi kaafi badh gaya tha...

aakhon me attha utsah liye wo teeno is nazare ko dekh rahi thi...

kuch der tak WICKEDS aur MORALS ke naam ki gunj pure stadium me hoti rahi aur fir....


BOOM........

MORALS aur WICKEDS ke beech ek dhamaka sa hua aur us dhamake ke beech prakat hue MABBA aur VIOLET....

apne WHIZZ ko competition ke beech dekh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL khushi se ucchal padi....

MABBA aur VIOLET is competition ki ARBITER (REFEREE) thi...

WICKEDS ke dress colour ki hi tarah ek black robe me thi MABBA wahin VIOLET MORALS ke dress colour ko match karte hue white robe pehna hua tha VIOLET WHIZZ ne....


MABBA/VIOLET-MORALS,WICKEDS...GATHER AROUND....


dono WHIZZ ke aisa kehte hi hawa me tairte hue WICKEDS aur MORALS unke dono side me aakar rook gaye...

dono hi teams ek dusre ko ghhuse de dekh rahe the...


MABBA-ummid karti hun ki aap dono hi teams fair play khelenge....

ZUNYATA AUR SATYATATI ke challange me aap sirf apne performance ko better karne me dhyan denge naaki dusri team ke performance me dakhal dene ki koshish karenge....

aisa karna foul play hai jisse aap disqualify ho jaayenge....

understood.....


MORALS/WICKEDS-yes WHIZZ...

VIOLET/MABBA-so let the show begin.....


apne haath ko failate hue dono WHIZZES ne ye baat kahi jiske baad....


PRATYARTHTHAYATI SAMOGAMA

CHALLENGE APPEAR..


SPELL bolte hi dono WHIZZES hawa me upar uthi aur ek nirdharit uchayi par pahunch rook gayi...

wahin unke spell bolne ke agle hi second stadium ka pura nazara hi badal gaya....

kuch der pehle jahan WICKEDS khade the,ab wahan aag ki ek diwal ban gayi jiski gravitational force itni zyada thi ki wo 10 WICKEDS uski taraf kheechane lage....

wahin dusri taraf jahan kuch der pehle MORALS khade the,wahan is waqt ek paani ki diwal ban chuki thi...

us paani me ek tez chakrawat aaya hua tha jiske gravitational pull ki wajah se MORALS uski taraf kheenchte chale jaa rahe the....

behatarin drishya tha jisse mantramugdh se hue sabhi audience dekh rahe the...



PARENT'S STAND:-


WO RAAZ HAI NAA....!!!!


FLORIN ne apni gardan me halki akdan mehsoos ki jiski wajah se usne apne sir ko daayen baayen jhatka diya aur issi dauran usse apne stand se kuch door ek bada par ujda sa stand dikha jiske ek chhor par khada hua tha RAAZ...

usse dekh FLORIN ne ye baat kahi jiske baad MARIA ki nazar bhi udhar ghumi aur....


MARIA-arre haan..ye toh RAAZ hi hai...


RAAZ ko is tarah ek ujdi si jagah me khada dekh FLORIN ko acha toh nahi lag raha tha but MAHI ne kal unhe bataya tha ki kaun sa SAVENT kahan baithega aur kyun usse wo jagah di gayi thi....

is situation ke liye wo kuch kar toh nahi sakte the but unhe RAAZ se baat karne ka man hua aur....


FLORIN-mai aata hun uske paas se...


ye bol FLORIN uthe aur baahar ki taraf chal pade...



PHASE 2 STAND:-



YE MOM AUR POPS KAHAN JAA RAHE HAIN...???


apne stand me baithi ALFREEN jo competition dekh rahi thi,wo bhi beech beech me apne mom dad ke stand ki taraf dekh leti thi aur is baar jab usne aisa kiya toh dekha ki uske dad RAAZ ki taraf dekh rahe the aur fir wo uthe aur baahar ki taraf chal pade aur unke piche MARIA bhi chal padi jisse dekh ALFREEN ko ek jhatka laga...

usse shak hua ki kahin uske mon dad RAAZ ke paas toh nahi jaa rahe aur ye khayal aate hi ek ajeeb si bechaini paida hui ALFREEN ke man me..

usne ek baar MAHI aur MABEL ki taraf dekha jo is waqt competition dekhne me khoye hue the...

wo chupchaap uthi aur apne stand se baahar nikal gayi is baat se anjaan ki wahan do log the jinhone usse baahar jaata dekh liya tha....



PARENT'S STAND:-


STOP FLORIN.....


FLORIN jo apne stand ke gate se baahar nikalne hi waale the,unhe piche se MARIA ne rookne ke liye kaha jisse sun wo rook gaye...


MARIA-mujhe nahi lagta ki tumhe RAAZ ke paas jaana chahiye....


MARIA ki baat par FLORIN kuch kehne hi waale the ki...


MARIA-i know ki tumhe uski chinta hai..aur itne din baad usse dekhne ki wajah se tum usse milna chahte ho, usse baat karna chahte ho but don't u think ki wo aisa nahi chahta hoga...

i mean,koi bhi usse kisi bhi matter par baat kare,ye RAAZ ko acha nahi lagta...

tum bhale hi usse kitni hi positive ya normal baat kyun naa karo,par wo usse negetive hi lega aur negetive hi bolega...

i think we should just leave him alone...jab tak usme logon ke lekar badlaaw nahi aata,hume bhi usse door hi rehna chahiye...

ye uske liye bhi acha hi hai kyunki usse akela rehna,kisise bhi baat naa karna acha lagta hai....


MARIA ki baat sahi thi..kuch der tak uski baaton par sochne ke baad...


FLORIN-i think u are right...usse space chahiye aur hume usse wo dena chahiye...


apni wife ko side se thaamte hue FLORIN wapas palte aur apne seat par jaakar baith gaye is baat se anjaan ke unke bas RAAZ ko milne ke khayal bhar se uth kar jaane ki wajah se ye...

PURI KAHANI BADALNE WAALI HAI.....






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V.J......
Nice update bro
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION SHURU HO CHUKA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF APNE MOM DAD KO STAND SE JAATA DEKH ALFREEN BHI APNE STAND SE UNKI TARAF NIKAL JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



MEGA UPDATE-34



PLANET-EYLSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S




SWEEP-STAKE:-



AGAR IS BAAT KO BHULA DIYA JAAYE KI HUM APNE GRAH PAR NAHI HAIN AUR YE EK MAGICAL COMPETITION NAHI HO RAHA TOH YAHAN KE MAHOUL SE FEELING PURI SOCCER WORLD CUP KE FINALE JAISI AA RAHI HAI NAA!!!

saamne ka adhbhudh nazara aur lagatar ho rahe hooting ko dekhte hue FLORIN ne ye baat kahi jisse sun...


MARIA- absolutely..vibe bhi waisi hi hai...

SORRY FOR INTERRUPTING,BUT KYA AAP USSI EARTH KI BAAT KAR RAHI HAIN JO MILKY WAY GALAXY ME BANE SOLAR SYSTEM KA EK MAATR LIVING PLANET HAI....


FLORIN aur MARIA ke thik peeche baithe ek noujawan shaksh ne unki baat sun jigyasa purn tarike se ye baat kahi jisse sun MARIA aur FLORIN piche palte aur...



FLORIN-jee haan,hum ussi planet se hain...

UNKNOWN-oh,wow..matlab finally....

us noujawan ka reaction un dono me se kisiko bhi samajh me nahi aaya aur isiliye...


FLORIN-matlab!!!hum samjhe nahi...???

UNKNOWN-actually CHOSENS ke 25 thousand years ke history me ab se pehle universe ke lagbhag sabhi planets se yahan padhne SAVENTS aa chuke hain siway EARTH ke jahan se aap aaye hain..

isiliye jaan kar acha laga ki EARTH me bhi GOD GIFTED SAVENT paida hua hai...

MARIA-oh accha..

FLORIN-waise kya aapka bhi koi relative yahan CHOSENS me padhta hai...!!!

UNKNOWN-jee nahi...mai khud yahan ka X SAVENT hun aur har PEACE MAKER ki tarah aaj yahan invite kiya gaya hun...

FLORIN-PEACE MAKER!!!!wo kya hota hai...????

UNKNOWN-lagta hai aap kisi fresher SAVENT ke dad hain???

FLORIN-haan,par tumhe kaise pata chala???

UNKNOWN-kyunki agar aap second ya final PHASE me moujud SAVENT ke parent hote toh aapko PEACE MAKER ka matlab pata hota...

waise chahun toh mai aapko is term ka matlab bata aur samjha sakta hun but filhal ye inappropriate hoga...

sahi yahi hoga ki sabki tarah aapko bhi saari chizen,unka kaaran aur unka mahatv aapke ward ke through PHASE 2 me pata chale....

us noujawan ki baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA ne samajhne waale andaz se apna sir hilaya...


PEACE MAKER-par haan,aapke grah aur yahan se realated ek baat mai aapko bata sakta hun jo kaafi interesting bhi hai aur kyunki aap dono first time aisa kuch sunenge,isiliye aapke liye shocking bhi hoga...

FLORIN-itna kuch dekh liya hai yahan aakar ki ab shock lagna thoda mushkil hai but fir bhi batayiye kya interesting baat hai jo yahan aur hamare EARTH se judi hui hai...

PEACE MAKER-darasal har living planet ek natural way se bana hai...matlab saare living planets GOD MADE hain but CHOSENS jahan hum is waqt moujud hain,ye ek artificial PLANET hai..

kehne ka matlab hai ki isse sirf is INSTITUTION ko dhyan me rakhkar apni shakti se banaya gaya hai....

aur jaante hain,aisa kisne kiya hai...???


us noujawan ke sawal par naa me gardan hilayi dono ne jiske baad..


FLORIN- aap mil chuke honge unse...yahan ke teeno SOVEREIGN'S ki shakti ke ek bohot bade bhaag se bana hai ye PLANET....


us noujawan ki baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA shocked ho gaye the...


PEACE MAKER-arre ye wo baat nahi hai jisse mai interesting aur aap logon ke liye shocking bata raha tha....

interesting baat ye hai ki kyunki ye PLANET artificial hai,isiliye universe ke baaki natural planets se iski timing different way me work karti hai...

har planet aur is planet ke beech ek time loop hai...aur saath hi dino ke hisaab se bhi ye PLANETS universe ke baaki planets se nano aur micro seconds piche yaa aage chalti hai...

nano aur micro seconds ka gap toh maamuli hai jisse planets ke beech 1 saal me 1 se 2 din ka hi difference paida hota hai par jo time loop is planet me aate hi create hota hai,wo bohot bada hota hai...

aur kyunki aap dono earth se hain,toh aapke planet aur CHOSENS ka time loop kuch zyada hi bada hai...

MARIA-zyada???kitna zyada....!!!

PEACE MAKER-aap logon ko yahan aaye kita waqt hua hai...???

FLORIN-6 months...actually abhi dopahar ke 12 baj rahe hain,is hisaab se to be exact hume yahan aaye 6 month aur 12 ghante hi chuke hain.....

kal raat 12 baje exact 6 months hue the...

PEACE MAKER-iska matlab hai ki aapko apne planet ko chhode 2 saal guzar chuke hain...

MARIA/FLORIN-what!!!!


ye toh sach me jhatka tha MARIA aur FLORIN ke liye....


PEACE MAKER-jee..EARTH aur CHOSENS ke beech ka time loop 18 mahine matlab dedh saal ka hai..

jis waqt aapne world door ko cross karte hue yahan CHOSENS me kadam rakha aur wo world door band hua tab aapka planet 18 months aage jaa chuka tha...

aur haan,nano aur micro seconds ke fark un 6 months ke hisaab se hi aage yaa piche hote hain,jis waqt par yahan log pahunchte hain...

aur issi waja se EARTH aur CHOSENS ke beech ke timing ko agar seconds ke hisab se calculate kiya jaaye toh aap kal nahi aaj raat ki date ke hisaab se CHOSENS pahunche the..

kyunki CHOSENS ke calander year me EARTH se difference pure 2 din ka hota hai aur 6 months ke hisaab se ek din jo aaj raat ko 12 baje pura hoga...


us PEACE MAKER ki baat se wakayi FLORIN aur MARIA hairan ho gaye the...

apni apni hairani liye dono hi wapas saamne palat gaye...

par jahan MARIA sirf is time loop ke ganit ke baare me hi soch rahi thi wahin FLORIN ke dimag me ek aur baat aayi jiske aate hi...


FLORIN- MARIA...time loop aur seconds ke badlaaw ki wajah se aaj raat 12 baje hume yahan aaye 2 saal ho jaayenge.. iska matlab samajhti ho...


MARIA ne aakhon me sawal liye FLORIN ko dekha jispar....


FLORIN-HUM RAAZ KE 16TH BIRTHDAY KI NIGHT YAHAN AAYE THE AUR AB TIME LOOP KE HISAAB SE AAJ RAAT 12 BAJE SE RAAZ KA 18TH BITHDAY HAI...




OUTSIDE STADIUM.........



MERE MOM DAD KAHAN HAIN RAAZ....????



stand me rukne ka man nahi hua toh mai STADIUM se baahar nikal thodi door ek ped se tik kar khada tha ki tabhi mere piche se ye awaaz aayi aur jab mai palta toh dekha ki ALFREEN behad hi ghusse me mujhe ghur rahi hai....

kuch seconds usse dekhne ke baad mai wapas palat gaya....


ALFREEN-maine pucha mere mom dad kahan hain RAAZ....


MAI-mar gaye.......


DHAPPPPP......


mere aisa kehte hi mere peeth par kuch bohot bhaari saa laga jiski wajah se mai aage ki taraf udta hua gira....


ye ek urja ray thi jo ALFREEN ke haathon se nikalkar mujhse takrayi thi...

is urja ray ki shakti itni zyada thi ki iske mere body ko chhute hi isne mere pure sharir ko hi khudki urja se dhak liya aur mujhe tez jhatke lagne lage..

jaise ek mirgi ka patient mirgi padne par chatpatata hai,thik waisa hi kuch is waqt mere saath ho raha tha....


WRITER-RAAZ ne jo kaha tha,wo bas hamesha ki tarah ALFREEN ko provoke karne ke liye kaha tha but uski baat ne ALFREEN ka wo ghussa jo wo bohot mushkil se daba rahi thi, trigger kar diya.

ab ALFREEN ek SOUL AMPLIFIED SAVENT thi aur RAAZ ki kahi gayi baat ne uske ussi soul ko trigger kiya tha jiski wajah se anjaane me hi sahi but uske brain,body,blood aur soul ne khudko bind kiya aur jo ray ALFREEN ke haathon se nikli thi,ye inhi chaaron AMPLIFICATION ki taakat thi jiska asar behad gehra pada tha RAAZ par....

wahin anjaane me hi sahi but itni zyada power ek saath release karne ki wajah se ALFREEN ke upar bhi thakan haawi hi gayi thi....

par ghussa abhi bhi ALFREEN ke chehre par dikh raha tha....aur isiliye wo fir se RAAZ par attack karne waali hi thi ki....


OYE PAAGAL HO GAYI HAI KYA???CLASS ME SABSE AAGE HAI TOH KYA KUCH BHI KAREGI TU.....?????


uske baaju se RAAZ ki taraf tezi se badhte hue ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi thi..uske saath SLUNDER bhi tha....

RAAZ jo ab bhi halka halka chatpata raha tha,uske paas pahunch ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne uske dono haathon ko rub karna shuru kar diya....


ALFREEN-chup chaap niklo yahan se warna tumhara haal bhi bura kar dungi mai...

ACCHUTA-haan tere baap ka raaj chal raha hai naa yahan....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ALFREEN kuch kehne hi waali thi ki....


SLUNDER-tumne bewajah RAAZ par waar kiya hai..humne tumhari baat suni thi..tumhare mom dad wahin apne stand par hi hain...

yahan aane se pehle humne unhe wahan dekha tha....

ALFREEN-ye jhuth hai..maine khud unhe apne stand se baahar jaate hue dekha tha..

ACCHUTA-oye hum tere hired personal watchman nahi hain ki minutes ke hisaab se kaun kab kahan kahan gaya,uska hisaab bhi den aur tujhe yakin bhi dilayen...

tere maa baap wahin stand me jaa..jaakar khud dekh le....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun usse, SLUNDER ko aur fir RAAZ ko ghurti hui palat kar nikal gayi ALFREEN....



WAHAN SE KUCH DOOR:-




AB AAYEGA MAZA...MAHI KI JAGAH USKI SAHELI HI SAHI....


ye kaha tha ANWIR ne MORANA se...yahi the wo do log jo ALFREEN ko apne stand ae baahar nikalte hue dekh rahe the aur uske piche ho liye the....

waise toh wo dono MAHI ko unke khilaaf bolne ke liye punish karna chahte the,but ab ALFREEN jo ki MAHI ki bestie thi,usse yun akela dekh unhe usse sabak sikha uske through MAHI ko message dene ki sochi...

par unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kaise ALFREEN ko punish karen par ab shayad ALFREEN ne khud unhe idea de diya tha....


MORANA-mujhe pata hai ki tum kya soch rahe ho ANWIR and i like it...


MORANA ki baat par ANWIR muskuraya aur....


ANWIR-tumhe sirf samajhna hi nahi,karna bhi hai....


ANWIR ki baat sun MORANA bhi muskurayi aur uske agle hi pal....


KAPTAVESA.....

DISGUISE ACCORDING THE IMAGE


aankhon ke aage ALFREEN ke image ko rakh MORANA ke mooh se ye spell uccharit hua jiske agle hi pal....

MORANA ALFREEN me badal chuki thi.....

disguise change karna, roop badalna ek seven percent plus SOUL AMPLIFICATION holder hi kar sakta hai..

aur kyunki MORANA aur ANWIR abhi 10 percent par hain toh isiliye ye karna inke baayen haath ka khel jaisa hai...


ANWIR-now that's my girl...ab jaao,aur haan,josh me aakar un dono par zyada waar mat kar dena...

aakhir wahi dono toh eyewitness hain....


ANWIR ki baat par sir ko haan me hila MORANA aage badh gayi....

toh plan inka ye hai ki RAAZ jiski haalat abhi behad hi kharab hai,usse MORANA jo filhal ALFREEN hai,uspar aur waar karegi....

par sirf itna ki RAAZ mare nahi,par haan marne jaisi haalat me pahunch jaaye..

aisa nahi hai ki MORANA ya fir ANWIR ko hi RAAZ ya kisi aur ki jaan lena galat lagta hai,but isiliye kyunki wo dono jaante hain ki agar RAAZ pe shaktishaali prahaar hua aur wo mar gaya toh first PHASE ka alarm bell baj jaayega jo naa sirf us PHASE ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko iske baare me suchit karega balki apni Shakti se gunahgaar ko bhi beparda kar dega....

par agar RAAZ par ek do maamuli waar hue toh aisa kuch nahi hoga...

sirf uski haalat bigdegi aur ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke through jo ki eyewitness honge, ALFREEN ko behad kadi punishment milegi...

pura CHOSEN'S is waqt STADIUM ke andar tha jo ki ANWIR aur MORANA ke liye plus point tha...

aage badhte hue MORANA wahin jaakar khadi ho gayi jahan kuch der pehle ALFREEN khadi thi aur....


MORANA-nahi hai mere mom dad apne stand par...


ALFREEN ka roop dhar ussiki awaaz aur andaz me chilla kar boli MORANA...


wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jo RAAZ ko sahara dekar khada kar rahe the,wo ye awaaz sun palate aur ek baar phir ALFREEN ko dekh chownke par unke chownke ka main reason tha wo current ray jo is waqt ALFREEN ke haathon me chingari sa ban chamak raha tha...


ACCHUTA-tu fir aa gayi...arre agar tere mom dad stand par nahi hain toh hum kya karen...???

jaa aur unhe dhund...baar baar yahan kyun aa jaati hai...???

MORANA-mujhe pata hai ki is RAAZ ne mere mom dad ke saath kuch toh kiya hai..


RAAZ chupchaap bata de ki kahan hain mere mom dad,warna acha nai hoga....


SLUNDER-dekho ALFREEN....hum sach keh rahe hain,humne tumhare mom dad ko unke stand par hi dekha tha aur RAAZ ko toh unke baare me kuch pata hi nahi hai....

MORANA-jhooth....aur tum dono se toh mai baat hi nahi kar rahi hun, RAAZ,bata mere mom dad kaha hain...

RAAZ-bataya toh tha...mar gaye wo dono..


apne nature ke according RAAZ ne baat kahi jisse sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne apna maatha peet liya par teer toh kamaan se nikal hi gaya tha....


ALFREEN urf MORANA ke haath se ek current ball nikla aur sidhe RAAZ par pada aur.......


ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-RAAAZZZZZ..........


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki cheekh ke saath saath kuch aisa hua jo ANWIR aur MORANA ne apne sapne me bhi nahi socha tha.....

darasal jo current ball MORANA ne RAAZ ki taraf feki thi,uski energy kaafi kam thi par pata nahi kaise,us current ball ke lagte hi RAAZ ka body ekdum piche hawa me ud sa gaya....

RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER is waqt jis ped ke niche khade the,uske kuch piche ek pagdandi bani thi joki asal me ek sankara raasta tha CHOSENS se baahar jaane ka....

pedon ke ghane jhurmut the us pagdandi ke ird gird...

behad tezi se hawa me udta hua RAAZ ka body unhi pedon ke upar se hota hua piche ki taraf jaane laga jisse dekh MORANA aur ANWIR ke bhi hosh ur gaye...

kyunki jo hua,wo unke liye ek impossible chiz thi...

un dono ne hi dekha tha ki piche udta hua RAAZ ka sharir kisi bhi point par neeche aaya hi nahi tha..

wo toh bas udta hua piche ki taraf jaate hi jaa raha tha....

MORANA ko toh ye samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki itne mamuli current ball se jisse 5 feet bhi udte hue girna mushkil hai, jo hua wo kaise mumkin hai kyunki apne pure 10 percent ki SOUL shakti ko ek saath use karne ke baad hi shayad MORANA ye kar paati....

par jo hona tha wo ho chuka tha.. ANWIR aur MORANA dono ko hi lag gaya tha ki itne bade jhatke ke baad RAAZ nahi bach paayega aur isiliye...


ANWIR mind me- MORANA,turant niklo yahan se...


apne mind ko MORANA ke mind se jod ANWIR ne ye baat kahi jiske baad wo dono hi gayab ho gaye...

wahin jab ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ne ALFREEN urf MORANA ko gayab hote dekha toh wo dono hi RAAZ jis taraf udta hua gaya tha,us taraf bhaagte hue nikal gaye.....

wahin in sabse alag mai ulta hawa me tairta hua sa ek disha ko badhta chala jaa raha tha....

kya hua,kyun hua,kaise hua,in sab baaton ko darkinaar kar maine apne haath faila diye aur is naye safar ke shuruat ki taraf badhne laga...

kuch 2 minute mai yunhi hawa me udta hua aage badhta raha aur fir dheere dheere mera sharir neeche utarne laga aur tabhi....


DHAPP.......


zamin par girte hi is awaaz ke saath me thoda aage fisalta hua ragdata raha mai...

ALFREEN ke pehle waar se mere sharir me ek alag hi jakdan si aa gayi thi aur ab jab mai yun niche gira toh us jakdan ne mujhe ek aur jhatka diya jisse ek pal ke liye meri aankhen badi hui aur fir dheere dheere band hone lagi par aankhon ke band hone se pehle maine apne saamne kuch chamakta hua sa dekha tha jisse dekh behosh hote hote mere mooh se behad dheemi awaaz me nikla...




THE FORBIDDEN FOREST.....





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KAHAN GAYI THI TU....????


ALFREEN ke wapas aate hi MABEL ne ye sawal pucha jisse sun...


ALFREEN-washroom....

MABEL-oh... chal baith,dekh competition kaafi complex aur interesting hota jaa raha hai...


MABEL ki baat sun ALFREEN ne ek baar MAHI ki taraf dekha jo sabko bhul bina palke jhapkayen competition ko aise dekh rahi thi jaise wo spectator nahi balki khud participant ho....

MAHI ko dekh muskurate hue MAHI ne dusri taraf dekha jahan uske mom dad ka stand tha...

apne mom dad ko apni seat par baithe dekh ALFREEN ne chain ki saans li aur tabhi....


BOOMMM.....


ek tez dhamaka hua jo ki maidan ke beech hawa me hua tha...reason....


WICKEDS ki taraf jo aag ki diwal bani thi,usse nikalte gurutwakarshan force ki wajah se aa rahe khichaaw se bachne ke liye WICKEDS ki team ne khudko ek human chain ka roop de diya tha...

WICKEDS ke sabhi SAVENTS ek adrishya rope ke sahare ek dusre se bandhe khudko us gravitational pull me khinchane se rok rahe the aur issi beech jo is chain ke sabse aage khada tha,us SAVENT ne us aag ke diwal par dhamaka kiya taaki gravitational pull ka asar kuch kam ho jaaye aur issi wajah se ye awaaz nikla tha...

sabhi is drishya ko taktaki lagaye dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi.....


CSHHHHHCSHHHHHHHH......


ek ajeeb si awaaz ne sabka dhyan apni taraf kheencha...

ye awaaz aaya tha us paani ke diwal se...

reason....

jahan WICKEDS ki team human chain ka roop le problem ko tackle kar rahi thi wahin dusri taraf MORALS ki team ne alag yukti nikali thi...

wo 10 SAVENTS 5,5 ka group bana us paani ke diwal ke dono taraf khade ho gaye the...

har group ka ek SAVENT apne opposite khade SAVENT se ek adrishya rope ke sahare juda tha...

har SAVENT apni taraf se us paani ke bane chakrawat ke uphaan ke upar jisse gurutwakarshan force generate ho raha tha, uspar energy balls phenk raha tha taaki paani ke uphaan se nikalne waale force ki taakat kuch kam ho aur gravitational pull dheela pade...

sabhi spectators me saath MAHI, MABEL aur ab ALFREEN bhi pure focus aur interest ke saath ye sab dekh rahi thi is baat se bekhabar ki thodi der pehle uski lagayi chingari ne ab aag ka roop le liya hai aur kuch hi der baad wo aag us jwalamukhi me badal jaayegi jisse is kahani se jude har kirdar ki bhumika ko maayne mil jaayenge....




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RAAZZZZZ..........RAAZZZZZ........



ye do alag awaazen thi jo mujhe pukarte hue mere kareeb aa rahi thi....

jaise jaise ye awaaz aur iske maalik mere karib aa rahe the,waise waise mai apni behoshi se baahar aa raha tha....

aankh khulte hi maine gardan upar kar saamne dekha toh....


ABBE SAALE TU ITNI DOOR AAKAR GIRA HAI....


ye ACCHUTA tha jo mere sir par khada mujhse sawal kar raha tha...


SLUNDER-abbe sawal karna chhod aur usse utha...


SLUNDER ke aisa ACCHUTA mujhe uthane laga...uske saath mere dusre taraf se SLUNDER bhi mujhe sahara dekar uthane laga...

ALFREEN ke chhode pehle ray ki wajah se sir se lekar pair tak mujhe abhi bhi akdan mehsoos ho rahi thi aur jis wajah se mujhe halki kamzori bhi aa gayi thi..

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono ne mujhe mere dono kandho se pakde pakde sahara diya..

mai un dono ke sahare khada tha....

ek ek taraf se mujhe halka halka gale lagaye...


ACCHUTA-bhai tune toh dara hi diya tha....

SLUNDER-haan yaar..hume laga ki tu nahi bacha hoga....

ACCHUTA-haan bhai,agar tujhe kuch ho jaata naa,toh hum us ALFREEN ko jaan se maar dete...

SLUNDER-aur nahi toh kya....itne din hum isiliye toh saath nahi rahe ki ye sab hota dekhen...

tujhe sirf............


............HUM MAARENGE...........

KHACCHHHHH.....

KHACCHHHHHH.......

AAKKKKK.......

DHAAPPP.....


apni baat bolte bolte SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA,dono ne mere pet me kuch ghussa diya jisse mere mooh se ek kism ki dakaar nikal gayi...

mere pet me kuch ghussa dono ne mujhe dhakka dete hue piche phek diya....

mere pet me kuch bhi nahi dikh raha tha but fir bhi mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki koi nukili chhurre jaisi chiz mere pet ke pure andar tak dhansi hui hai.....

zamin par girte hi mujhe halke halke jhatke lagne lage aur mai ussi haalat me saamne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki taraf dekhne laga par ye kya......!!!!!

is waqt SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA, dono ke chaaron taraf ek black aura banane laga jisne un dono ko hi pura dhak diya par fir dekhte hi dekhte wo aura chhatne laga aur aisa hote hi mere saamne do log khade the...

par ye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER nahi the...jahan ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER patle duble sadharan se dikhne waale ladke the,wahin ye dono jo is waqt mere saamne halke hawa me uthkar khade the,behad hi handsome aur lambe chowde the...

ek alag hi aakarshan tha un dono me..paini nazar,lamba aur perfect jaw line se nirmit chehra aur behad confident ATTITUDE....

kaala robe unke vyaktiv ko aur nikhar raha tha....


JAB SHAKTI HI MANZIL HAI,
TOH RAASTE SE KYUN ACHRAJ HAI...

PAAP PUNYA SAB JHUTE HAIN,
SHAKTI HI EK MAATRA SACH HAI....


un dono ne hi ek saath ye baat yaa fir ye kahun ki ye phrase bola tha....


muskurate hue apni gehri aankhon se wo dono mujhe dekh rahe the aur mujhe apni taraf ghurta dekh...


FIRST-jaanta hun bohot se sawal hai tere..waise bhi tu marne waala hai, isiliye tujhe sab bata kar hi rukhsat karenge...

pehle introduction ho jaaye...

bande ko GASTON kehte hain.....

SECOND-aur mai DORIAN hun.....


naam toh yaad hoga aapko in dono ka....GASTON aur DORIAN...

CHOSENS ke itihaas ke sabse kaamiyab SAVENTS.....

wo do log jinhe dhundne ke liye
AKSHAANT aur SHAILA nikle the par wo unhe mile nahi..

milte bhi kaise,jinhe wo baahar dhund rahe the,wo toh unke ghar ke andar baithe hue the..


GASTON-yaar,teri sabse gazab baat yahi hai...tere expressions kabhi nahi badalte....

DORIAN-abbe waqt nahi hai uske paas... jaldi baat khatm kar,hume jaana bhi hai.. humare aura se hume yahan sense kiya jaa sakta hai....

KRRRR.......

apna haath aage kiya GASTON ne aur uske aisa karte hi uske haath se ek strong ray nikal aage badhi aur sidhe jaakar FORBIDDEN FOREST ke entrance me lage shield se takrayi aur khatm ho gayi...


GASTON-ye dekh raha hai...ye ek shield hai jo pure FORBIDDEN FOREST ke chaaron taraf bichi hui hai..

hamare yahan hone ka kaaran bas yahi jagah hai...is FOREST me kuch hai jo hume chahiye aur us chiz ko paane ke liye humne kya kuch nahi kiya but sab bekaar ho gaya...

wo kahani yaad hi hogi jo humne tujhe sunayi thi...

arre wahi SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA waali jinka humne bhes liya hua tha..wo kahani mangadhan nahi thi,sacchi thi bas humne tujhe adhuri baat batayi thi....

SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ke maa baap ko MIRTHJEEVEN ki haalat me pahunchane ke baad wahi chiz humne SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ke saath bhi ki thi...

hume un dono ke grah se kuch chahiye tha jiske liye aisa karna zaroori tha par dono raaj gharano ke sabhi sadasyo ke jeeven kan nikalne ke baad bhi jab hume WO chiz nahi mili toh humne ek nahi yukti sochi...

humne socha ki jinki shakti se ye FORBIDDEN FOREST bana hai,zaroor unke bheeter kuch na kuch aisa upay chhupa hoga jisse hum is jagah ke shield ko hata sakenge...

hume ye bhi maalum tha ki ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono ka hi chayan yahan CHOSENS ke liye ho gaya hai...

aur isse hamare plan ko execute karna aur aasan ho gaya...

humne un dono ka roop lene ki sochi par ye itna asaan nahi tha....

hume maalum tha ki is INSTITUTION ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke dhaarak hamare chhal ko pehchaan lenge..

aur khaas karke wo teeno SOVEREIGN'S....unse bachna asambhav tha...

par jahan mushkile hoti hain,wahan unse nikalne ka marg bhi hota hai...

aur hamari mushkil se nikalne ka maarg tha ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke jeevan kan jo humne unse nikal liye the...

humne un dono ke jeeven kano ka khud me samavesh kiya..

aur fir humne apne jeeven kano ko bramhand ke ek durgam maarg me bhej diya..ek aise maarg me jo CHOSENS se juda hua hai taaki jab bhi hum chaahen,hamare jeeven kan hum tak pahunch paayen...

(ye wahi jeeven kan hain doston jinhe GASTON aur DORIAN samajh SHAILA aur AKSHAANT dhundne jaate the par unhe kuch milta nahi tha..)


GASTON-aur humne bas apni Shakti ka ek pratishat apne andar rakha par kyunki hamare andar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke jeeven kan the,isiliye hamari us ek pratishat shakti ke baare me pata lagana lagbhag naamukin tha....

par koi tha,jiske liye humari shakti ko sense karna asambhav nahi tha..

VIOLET....


VIOLET bhale hi first PHASE me padhati thi par uski capabilities 2nd PHASE WHIZZ ke jitni hai. .

aur kyunki 1st PHASE me hone ki wajah se hum ussike under the isiliye AMPLIFICATION process ke waqt VIOLET ko humpar shak ho gaya tha...jahan sabko hum yahan ek weakling SAVENT nazar aa rahe the,wahin VIOLET ko humara AURA feel hone laga tha...

usne ye baat baaki teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ko batayi par jab unhone is shak ko nakara toh usne shakti sense karne ka spell un teeno par kar diya jisse un teeno ke zariye bina saamne aaye bhi wo humari shaktiyon ko sense kar sake...


(SELF BRAWL AUR ACCHUTA,SLUNDER KO MOTIVATE KARTE WAQT VIOLET BAAKI TEENO SE YAHI BAAT KAR RAHI THI)


GASTON-par humne usse aisa mouka hi nahi diya..wo ya aur koi bhale hi humare saamne ho yaa naa ho, hum ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke character me bane rahe jisse dheere dheere uska shak bhi jaata raha...

in sabke beech hum lagatar SOVEREIGN'S par nazar banaye rakhe hue the par kuch waqt baad wo teeno hi gayab ho gaye...

humne kuch dino tak unki waapsi ki raah dekhi par jab wo nahi aaye toh humne yahan se jaane ki sochi par hum ye nahi kar sakte the kyunki SOVEREIGN'S ke jaane ke baad us MARILIZA ne CHOSENS ke SENSE SHIELD ke upar ek STOP SHIELD laga di jiske kaaran CHOSENS se naa toh koi baahar jaa sakta tha aur naahi koi andar aa sakta tha..

waise humare liye us STOP SHIELD ko todna koi badi baat nahi thi par aisa karne se humne jo bhi kiya tha,aur jis kaaran se kiya tha,wo ujagar ho jaata aur hum ye hone nahi de sakte the...

aur isiliye hum aaj ke din ki pratiksha karne lage... kyunki aaj SWEEP-STAKE hai, isiliye hume maalum tha ki pure bramhaand se is CHOSENS me padhe SAVENTS aur unke parents zaroor aayenge aur aisa hone dene ke liye MARILIZA us STOP SHIELD ko aaj ke liye hata degi jisse hum asaani se nikal jaayenge....

as simple as that...

ye toh hui hamari kahani par jaanta hai isme tu kahan se aaya???

kisi bhi SAVENT ko maarna toh door chhedne ka bhi hamara koi prayojan nahi tha...

agar aisa hota toh us raat jab MAHI ne humari Shakti ke bhaag ko dekh liya tha,hum usse ussi waqt maar dete...(UPDATE 29,KAALI CHAADAR)

par hume pata tha ki raat ke andhere me dikhi koi cheez ko adhar bana wo kuch saabit nahi kar paayegi,isiliye humne usse kuch nahi kiya...

khair,is bramhaand ke har kism ke maanav aur jeev se hum mil chuke hain,kisi me positive aura hota hai toh kisime negetive, par tere jaisa AURA humne kahin feel nahi kiya...

jab humne tujhe pehli baar karib se dekha tha,toh hume apne andar ek ghutan si mehsoos hui..

ek aisi ghutan jisse bardasht karna bohot mushkil tha kintu humare plan ki wajah se humare paas koi option nahi tha...

hum tujhe ussi waqt mout dena chahte the par hum wo bhi nahi kar sakte the...

kar sakte the toh bas intazar,yahan se nikalne ka aur jaate jaate tujhe maarne ka....

aur dekh kismat se ye dono hi kaam aaj hi ho gaya...

jab ALFREEN ne tujhe maara toh humne socha ki uske jaane ke baad tujhe behosh kar yahan le aayenge aur tujhe maar denge kyunki yahan bichi shield ki wajah se alarm bell kaafi der se teri mout sense karega aur tab tak hum yahan se jaa chuke honge...

par hum tujhe behosh karen,usse pehle hi ek dusri SAVENT aayi jisne ALFREEN ka roop dhar tujhpar attack kiya...

aur jab wo current ball tujhe lagne waala tha toh maine apni shakti se tujhe piche udda tujhe yahan pahuncha diya....


AKKKK.......


lagatar halka halka kampan kar taha tha mai....aur tabhi ek dakaar sa nikla mere mooh se jisse sun muskura diya GASTON....


GASTON- VADIN......


hamara banaya ek khaas astra hai ye jo is waqt tere andar ghussa hua hai...

iske pravesh se sharir par koi cut yaa ghaav nahi hota....par agar ye kisike sharir me ghus jaaye toh iski nok se ek urja nikalti hai jisse sharir ke andar ke har koshika me khichaav aana shuru ho jaata hai aur dheere dheere us manushya ka sharir andar se pura sadh bhi jaata hai aur khokla bhi ho jaata hai...

a very very painful way to die ...


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA........


apni baat bol zoron se has pada GASTON wahin uske baaju me khada DORIAN is pure dauran bas mujhe ghure jaa raha tha...

wahin dakaar lene ke baad bhi ab tak meri aankhen halki hi sahi par khuli hui thi jisse dekh

(update-1)


GASTON-hai toh tu ek mamuli mortal,par maanana padega,jaan fir bhi sakht hai...

arre...ye kya kar raha hai.......????


chingari dikhne lagi thi DORIAN ke hatheliyon me,jisse dekh haste hue GASTON ne pucha.....


GASTON-agar aur prahar karna hota toh kya mai ab tak yunhi baaton me waqt gawata....

iske jism se iske rooh ko alag karne ke liye jo waar hume karna tha,hum kar chuke hain...

agar ispe ek bhi waar aur hua toh iske tadapte shareer ko shanti mil jaayegi....

aur pata nahi kyun,ye mai nahi hone dena chahta....isse yun ek kide ki tarah bebas laachar tadapte hue dekhkar bada anand aa raha hai....

yunhi tadapte tadapte dheere dheere marne de isse....iske chehre par umadta ye dard,meri jalti hui kaali rooh par thande paani ka kaam kar rahi hai.......

DORIAN-tumhara bas chale toh tum isse har roz maaro....

GASTON-wajah toh maalum hi hai tumhe...hai toh ye nashwar...maamuli mortal...par pata nahi kyun,iski moujudgi ek ghutan paida karti hai mere andar....

ek chingari naachne lagi GASTON ki aankhon me...

mai unke saamne pada mar raha tha,mera sharir reh reh kar jhatke khaa raha tha,par ab bhi unki aankhon me mere liye wahi ghrina thi,wahi krodh jisse lagatar apne andar zabt karte aaye the wo dono...

wahin neeche zamin par kisi kide ki tarah pada mai unke chehre ko ektak dekh raha tha...

marnasthal par pahunchkar bhi mere aankhon ka sunapan jyon ke tyon tha....

mere chehre par dard saaf jhalak raha tha fir bhi mai bhaav shunya tha...

naa moh na maaya,naa koi khwahish...khush hone waali paristithi toh thi nahi par koi gum tak naa tha mere chehre par....

par haan,ek sawal zaroor uth raha tha mere zehen me..ye wahi sawal tha jo mere zehen me tab se uthta aa raha tha jabse SOCH shabd ka matlab samajh aaya tha mujhe...

aakhir kaun hun mai....????kyun alag hun mai sabse....?????waise toh sabki apni soch hoti hai par kuch baatein toh sabme common hi hoti hai....

par ye khubi bhi mujhme naa thi....khushi aur gum,in dono ehsaason se hi mai aaj tak mehroom tha....

aur ab toh zindagi hi apne aakhri mukam par hai.......apne saare sawaalon ko khudme sametkar ankhen band kar li maine aur tabhi.....


GASTON-tere paida hote waqt tujhe kisi ne tujhe company di ya nahi ye toh hum nahi jaante par haan,marte waqt tujhe saath zaroor milega...

ye bol DORIAN aur GASTON ke haath se do roshni nikal mere left side par padi aur dekhte hi dekhte us roshni ke andar se do log prakat hue...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER..par ye asli the aur mere baaju me behosh pade the....

mai jaanta tha ki DORIAN aur GASTON ne ye kyun kiya tha...bhale hi wo dono yahan se jaa rahe the par jo bankar wo yahan aaye the,unka toh yahan hona zaroori tha....

khair,khuli rehne ki ab aur shakti nahi bachi thi meri aankhon me,isiliye....


.................HICH ....................


AUR YE AAYI MERI AAKHRI HICHKI.....



DORIAN-AKHIRKAAR YE KIDA

..........MAR HI GAYA.............






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Nice update bro
 

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Gjb to jo future ki jhalak dikhi thi last update me uski equation kuchh iss parakar bnai thi videous ne ye to pta tha ki acchuta aur slunder ko videous raaz ke khilaf aasani se kr skta h unki mom dd ki maut ka sahara lekr lekin brawny aur hida ke sath to usne gjb ka khel rach diya..waise bhi agr aankho ke samne agr aise hadse ho jaye to us aankho dekhi pri-isthati pr viswas ho hi jata h aur us waqt satyata ka praman jaanne ke liye wo jo kr skte the us conditions. Me unhone kiya baki us manshik isthati me usse jyada sochne samajhne ki unki halat nhi thi aur jb samne shadyantra rachne wala itna shatir aur mahir khiladi ho to ye to hona hi tha...khair ab jo hona h wo to hokr hi rhega ab new characters ki entry hogi wahi ek cheez aur h jb raaz sab kuchh bhul jayega to filhal ke liye haar jayega to videous usse apni aloukik shaktiyaan abhi to kaise nikal paayega kyuki wo to agarshen ki talwar me bnd h na aur jb tk raaz na chahe wo unlock bhi nhi hongi to isiliye videous puri duniya pr raaz krne ke liye savents ki fauj bna rha h sayd taki jb tk uski aloukik shaktiyan uske paas nhi h tb tk uske samrajya ka vishtaar wo log krenge...kyuki abhi to sayd raaz ko wo nhi maar paayega bina aloukik shaktiyo ke. Waise ye dekhna dilchashp hoga ki raaz aakhir mentally disturb kaise hota h ...kyuki agr raaz ka jo attitude emotionless wala h uske hisab se to in sab se usko koi fark nhi pdega aur usko kisi ko koi safai bhi dene ki jrurat nhi pdegi...baki dekhte h kya hoga...kyuki shadyantra ke andr shadyantra h yaha pr.
So waiting brother...
Ab mahi ke role bhi sbke samne aane wala h sath me uske bhi raaz khulne ki kriya shuru hogi videous vs mahi dekhne me bhi mja aayega bahut...
Intzaar h brother
thanks brother...saath bane rahiye
 

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Pichlie jang mai RAAZ jeeta tha
aur VIDEOUS hara tha
RAAZ k roop mai SAMAYE nai
VIDEOUS k GAAL PAR CHAMATA MAARA THA
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PAR SAMAYE BADLE GA
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RAAZ KA WAAR VIDEOUS K SHARIR PAR THA
ABE VIDEOUS KA WAAR RAAZ K RUH PAR HOGA
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RAAZ NAI VIDEOUS K EGO PAR WAAR KIYA
ABE VIDEOUS RAAZ K EXISTENSE PAR WAAE KAREGA

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satya Vachan
 

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Nice one vj bhai
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update
Ye plan kahi Videous ka na hokar Raaz ka hi hua to Videous khood hi apne jaal me bhramit ho sakta hai . Abhi to Videous ki chalne wali hai par dekhte hai third phase me jab Raaz lautega to kya hota hai ?
ShShandaar jaandaar update Bhai jab mitra hi shatru banjata hai to baht kuchh badaljata hai. Ab RAAZ Videous ki ye chaal ko kese handle Karega dekhna dilchasp rahega
fantastic update bhai maza aa gya
Nice update bro
Aisa kaun sa Raaz hai Raaz ka.... Awesome blossom
Superb update
Zabardast update dost
Awesome update bhai...
Nice update waiting for next
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Awesome fabulous update
Bhot darawana update hota ja rh h aur raaz la kahi pata nahi h kaha h
Keep posting
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Tow yeh sab videous ki karstani h saare sevents ko behosh kerne ki
Taaki jab woh hosh m aaye to videous ka kehna maane
Dekhte h achchai ki jeet hoti h ya burayi apne mukam ko hasil kerti h
Bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update Vj4u bhai
Thanks for lovely update
Excellent mind blowing update brother
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Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Awesome & Excellent & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah kya chaal chali videous ne jo raaz k sath use usk khilaf kr diya vo b raaz k aura ki madat se yani videous ki planning pahle suru ho gyi thi us fight se Wah



Waiting I m excited
Mast update bro
Mindblowing update.........
keep posting bhai............
waiting for next update...........
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Mast update bro
Bahut hi khubsurat posts hai Bhai
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hmm to videous ne chale chalna suru kr diya h.....uske apne , uski takt ko hi uske khilaf krna suru kr diya h.....dekhte h kya khe dhayengi uski ye chale...or raaz ka esa konsa raaz h jo samne aane pr use ess hd tk mently diturb kr dega ki uske wo dost jinki takt hi khud raaz ne jagayi h wo hi use chotil kr denge.......dekhte h raaz iss sb se kese par pata h ....halanki use isse kuch frk shayad hi pde .......but ab kahani konsa mod legi ye dekhne ka intzar rahega..........
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Mast update bro
Zabardast update
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Congratulations 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 for 900 pages pure hone par
thanks brothers...be along
 
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