Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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woww nice bro ye to valdiv ka hi kand ho gya.......balatkar ho gya bhai:lol1::lol1::lol1::lol1::lol1:
BAHUT HU SHAANDAAR AWESOME FANTASTIC LOVELY EXCELLENT MARVELLOUS AND INTERESTING UPDATE
Hamesha ki Tarah Lazawab
Shandaar update Bhai
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Awesome fantastic wonderful update
Awesome update bro
Nice update
Yaha dushman bhi ban rhe h aur dost bhi dekhte h Kya twist lata h ye raat ka kaand
Awesome update
Keep posting
Wah bechara Valdis kaha raat rangeen karne ki soch Raha tha aur Achuta ne uska much hi kala Kar diya . Ab shayad Valdis VIDEUS ke kaam aayega
SUPERB UPDATE
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Nice update
Super fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai... Videous ko valdis ke roop me acchuta ke khilaf ek hathiyar mil gaya hai... Kyonki nafart Aur guess bhi insaan Ko kuch bhi karne per majbur kar sakta hain
Awesome VJ bahi
Mast laajawab update
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kya comedy tha yaar ha ha ha
Superb Update Bro...
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Boht zabardast update
JABE BHI vj4u BHAI K UPDATE PADHATE HAI
TO UPDATE K AAKHRI LINE PAR RAJANIKAANTH KA DIALOGUE SUNTHA HAI
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PURA HILA DALA NA
Mindblowing update.........
keep posting bhai............
waiting for next update...........
Bahut hi jabarjast, dhamakedar update hai bhai. Valdis ki to full beijjati ho gyi. "दिल के अरमान आशुओँ में बह गए"
Mable bhi gyi hath se aur ijjat bhi.
Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.waiting for next
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Awesome update vj4u
RAAZ ke prati chahe kuch der ke liye hi gussa ajaye ALFREEN ko par wo bhi janti hai ki RAAZ ke liye apni life se zyada jeet mayne rakhti hai.
ACHUTA aur SLUNDER ne MABEL ko bacha bhi liya aur VALDIS ke karname bhi samne la diye par ab VALDIS bhi chit khaya huwa shikari hogaya jo maukha milne par in sab ki waat zarur laga yega aur mujhe lagta hai VIDEOUS ye maukha zarur dega usko.
Fantastic update bhai
superb update bro
par mahi kab milegi apna second face se jo training le rahi hai master se jise dhundne mai vooger v bahut time lagaya thaa
intazaaar rahega next raaz ka naya raaaazzzzzzzz reveal hone ka

once again thanks bhai for a great story

thanks brothers... be along
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MARIA, FLORIN AUR ALFREEN RAAZ KE ATTITUDE KE BAARE ME BAAT KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER VALDIS KE MANSUBO PAR PAANI FER DETE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



MEGA UPDATE-115



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS

PLACE-STADIUM



SWEEP-STAKE






IS SAAL EK BAAR PHIRSE WICKEDS NE MORALS KO HARA DIYA HAI...

PAR IS JEET KA PURA SHREY WICKEDS KI SIRF EK SAVENT KO JAATA HAI..

AUR WOH HAI THE BEST SAVENT OF PHASE 3,MORANA.....

MORANA NE AAJ SINGLE HANDEDLY PEHLE DONO HI TASK ME APNE TEAM KO JEET DILWAYI HAI...

BRILLIANT MORANA.. ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT....


WHIZZ VIOLET joki is baar bhi last year ki hi tarah SWEEP-STAKE ki referee thi, unhone WICKEDS ke jeet ke baad kahi ye saari baat jispar pura stadium taaliyon se gunj utha...

wahin apne stand par baithe PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS bhi MORANA ke aaj ke performance se kaafi impressed the aur isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar ek baat toh maanani padegi...is MORANA me dum toh hai..

is bandi ne akele hi saare challenges me apne catagory ko jeet dilwayi hai...

maanana padega RAAZ...bandi apne takkar ki chuni hai tune...

mere kandhe ko thapthapate hua kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne jispar ek baar usse ghur kar dekh uske haath ko apne kandhe se hatate hue...


MAI-RAAZ ko takkar maut ka chakkar hai... aur koi ye chakkar nahi lagana chaahega...

SLUNDER-bhai woh teri g.f ki badhayi kar rahi hai..aur g.f ki badhayi par...

MAI-par kya..??g.f ki badhayi ke waqt jhooth allowed hota hai kya...???

rishta koi bhi ho, sach ko badla nahi jaa sakta..par mai bata kisko raha hun,gadhon ke jhund me gyaan baatne se milega bhi kya..???


jahan ye sab bol mai turant utha aur bahar ki taraf nikal pada wahin meri baat par ALFREEN aur MABEL bhi kuch bolne ko hue par unke bolne se pehle hi mai jaa chuka tha. jispar..


MABEL-ye kaisa vichitra maanus hai yaar....???hume gadha bolta hai aur khud gadhe ki tarah apna dhenchu dhenchu badbadakar bhaag jaata hai...

aur tum kyun smile kar rahe ho...???


apni baat kehte waqt jab MABEL ki nazar ACCHUTA par gayi,joki smile kar raha tha,toh pucha ye sawal usne jispar...


ACCHUTA-RAAZ ki harkat par hasi aa gayi...

MABEL-matlab..!!!

ACCHUTA-MORANA se comparison par bhadka woh par phir usse milne hi nikal bhi gaya...

ALFREEN/MABEL-WHAT...?????

ALFREEN-RAAZ MORANA se milne gaya hai...!!!

MABEL-aur tumhe kaise pata ye baat...???

ACCHUTA-pure WICKEDS me bas ek MORANA hi thi jo naa sirf injured hui thi balki hadh se zyada thak bhi gayi thi..

aur aakhir me ALFREEN jab baat kar rahi thi aur RAAZ reply kar raha tha tab uski nazar bas ek baar humari taraf gayi thi,baaki saari baatein usne saamne ground par MORANA ko dekhkar kahi thi..

aur phir jab MORANA ko uske friends sahara dete hue ground se bahar le gaye tabhi RAAZ utha tha aur bahar nikal gaya tha..

ALFREEN-oh teri..ye toh wakayi gazab ka hi banda hai yaar..kab kya karega,koi nahi jaanta...!!

par yaar ACCHUTA,manana padega tujhe bhi...

teri nazar bhi badi tagdi hai..itna lamba aur door ka connection bhi taad gaya tu..gazab....

MABEL-bas door ka hi thik se dikhta hai isse,paas ka nahi...

ALFREEN-paas ka nahi matlab...!!! ACCHUTA,tujhe short sightedness ki problem ho gayi hai kya...!!!

MABEL-arre yaar,tu chup hi raha kar..jab bhi bolti hai, ulta hi bolti hai...

ALFREEN-le,ghuma phirakar baat tum log karo aur ulta mai bolti hun....khair chhodo ye sab,chalo chalkar dekhte hain ki RAAZ kya kar raha hai MORANA ke saath...

agar pamper kar raha hoga toh chidayenge usse...

ACCHUTA-RAAZ ko chidhayenge...!!!!bhadak gaya naa woh,toh hum apni hi mout ka maatam manayenge...

ALFREEN-haan,ye risk toh hai..koi naa,bas taaka jhaanki karenge...

chalo naa yaar..waise bhi ye competition toh khatm ho hi gaya,ab yahan baith kar karenge bhi kya..!!


ye bol ALFREEN aage badh gayi jiske piche MABEL, ACCHUTA,SLUNDER aur MAHI bhi ho liye...

MAHI.... jispar in puri baaton ke dauran kisi ka bhi dhyan nahi gaya tha..

behadh hatash aur maayus dikh rahi thi woh is waqt..

reason....

jab se ACCHUTA ne MORANA ki condition par RAAZ ka concern bataya tha,tab se MAHI ka dil aur face,dono hi murjha chuke the..

par is murjhaye dil aur face ka reason sirf RAAZ aur MORANA ki closeness hi nahi thi...

balki asal baat thi RAAZ ki MAHI ke liye rudeness jo pichle ek mahine se kaafi badh gayi thi...

waise toh dono hi zyada aamne saamne nahi aate the aur naahi baat karte the,par jab bhi aisa kuch hota tha toh RAAZ ka MAHI ke liye reaction aisa hota tha jaise woh uski dushman ho...

ek do task ke dauran bhi jab MAHI injured hui toh bas RAAZ hi tha,jiske face par uske liye thodi si bhi fikr nahi aayi thi...

aur aaj ACCHUTA ki baat sun jab usse RAAZ ka MORANA ke liye fikr ka andaza hua toh aise me taklif toh honi hi thi..

khair, apne friends se apne dilli-haal ko chhupate hue woh bhi un sabke peeche peeche us jagah ke liye nikal gayi jahan usse ek baar phirse taklif hone waali thi...





PLACE-WICKEDS GREEN ROOM




WELL,WELL,WELL,DEKHO GUYZZ,KAUN AAYA HAI HAMARE GREEN ROOM ME...!!!

PHASE 2 KA SABSE TALENTED SAVENT AUR CHAMPION,RAAZ...


mere WICKEDS ke green room me ghuste hi wahan moujud sabhi WICKEDS ki nazar mujhpar padi..

jahan mujhe dekh MORANA ke thake aur pain se bhare face me smile aa gayi thi, ANWIR ke kuch friends halke dar gaye the wahin wahan kuch aise akhand chutiye bhi the jinhone mere baare baare me suna toh tha par vishwas nahi kiya tha..

saath hi meri taarif sun mujhse khaar bhi khaaye hue the..unme se hi ek bande ne kahi thi ye baat jispar uske saath khade uske kuch friends hasne lage aur ye dekh..


MAI-mai bhi teri taarif me zaroor kuch naa kuch kehta par uske kiye taarif ke laayak tujhme kuch hona bhi toh chahiye...

aur jis chaman chutiye ki tarah aaj tu SWEEP-STAKE me khel raha tha,usse dekh lagta nahi hai ki kabhi bhi tere baare me koi jaanana aur sunana chaahega...


meri baat sun bhadak gaya woh ladka par isse pehle ki woh kuch kehta...


MORANA-ek bhi shabd nikalna nahi chahiye mooh se warna dobara kuch bolne ke liye mooh bachega hi nahi tera..


MORANA ki ye gurrahat se bhari dhamki padi us ladke ke kaano me jisse sun naa sirf uska khul raha mooh band ho gaya balki saath hi MORANA ke facial expressions jisme ghussa bhara hua tha,woh dekh uski haalat bhi kharab ho gayi...

MORANA WICKEDS ki sabse khatarnaak SAVENT thi,aaj ka competition bhi usne akele hi apne dum par jitaya tha,ye us green room me moujud har koi jaanta tha aur aise me usse panga lena yaa uski baat kaatne ki himmat karna kisike bas ki baat nahi thi...

yahi wajah thi ki woh banda jisse MORANA ne dhamkaya tha,woh apne doston ke saath chupchaap green room se bahar nikal gaya aur jab aisa hua toh mai MORANA ke saamne pahunch gaya jispar...


MORANA-kya baat hai janab....!!!aaj
aap khud hamare paas aaye hain....??

MAI-haan, competition me kuch zyada hi injured ho gayi ho tum, isiliye tumhe dekhne aa gaya..


MORANA ke haath aur neeche edi ke paas bruises ko dekh kahi maine ye baat kahi jispar pehle toh MORANA hasi aur phir..


MORANA-kameene..kamsekam mujhse toh sach bola karo...

tum bhale hi mera haal dekhne aaye ho par mere liye nahi,apne liye....

MAI-har baat har jagah par nahi ki jaati MORANA...

MORANA-ye bhi hai...par ab jab tum wakayi yahan ho aur agar tum sach me mere liye concerned ho, saabit karne ke liye tumhe ek kaam karna hoga..

MAI-bolti jaao,sun raha hun mai...

MORANA-hmm.. actually mere pair me bhi swelling aa gayi hai..

waise healing spray laga liya hai..saare bruises ek ghante me thik ho jaayenge par tab tak mai yahan baithe baithe bor ho jaaungi...

toh tumhara kaam simple hai...tumhe mujhe abhi is waqt apni godh me uthakar mere ABODE tak lejaana hoga..



MORANA ka bas itna kehna tha ki maine bina time waste kiye usse apni godh me utha liya aur palat kar aage badh gaya...

mujhe yun MORANA ko uthakar jaate dekh wahan saare WICKEDS hairan ho gaye the par woh sab kuch bol nahi paaye...

khair, MORANA ko yunhi godh me uthaye hue hi mai green room se nikalte hue aage badhta chala gaya...

wahin green room se thodi door par khade the mere saare dost jinki nazar jaise hi mujhpar aur meri godh me chadhi hui MORANA par gayi toh un sabki aankhen badi jo gayi..

kuch der tak yunhi aankhen faade mujhe dekhte rahe woh sab..is beech mai un sabki aankhon se ojhil ho chuka tha aur mere jaate hi..


MABEL-waah,kya scene tha yaar... MORANA madam ko toh v.i.p treatment de raha hai RAAZ...


MABEL ki baat par jahan baaki sab has diye wahin apne aankhon me aaye aansuon ko poch MAHI bhi jhuth mooth ka muskura uthi...

MAHI apne doston ke saamne kamzor nahi dikhna chahti thi par usse maalum nahi tha ki uske aansu bhale hi uske doston ne nahi dekhe,par paas hi mai moujud ek shaksh se woh aansu nahi chhup paaye hain...

waise MAHI ke dilli haal se uske sabhi dost bhi waakif the par ye MAHI ka hi faisla tha ki naa toh RAAZ aur uske equation ke baare me koi kuch baat karega aur naahi uski fikr karega..

woh sab jaante the ki MAHI upset hai par concerned behaviour dikha woh uspar pity show nahi karte the kyunki MAHI aisa hi chahti thi...

khair,ab rookne ka koi faayda toh tha nahi isiliye woh sab wahan se chalne ko hue par tabhi...


MAHI,CAN O HAVE A WORD....


wahi shaksh jisne MAHI ke aansu dekh liye the,usne hi kahi ye baat jisse sun MAHI aur baaki sabhi us awaaz ki taraf joki unke left se aayi thi palte aur aisa karte hi un sabko bodies aur ATTITUDE turant badal gaya...

reason...

unke saamne SOVES SHAILA khadi thi jinhe dekh..


SAB-afternoon SOVES...

SOVES-afternoon...aap sab jaaiye, mujhe MAHI se kuch kaam hai,she will join u later...


SHAILA ki baat sunte hi woh sab turant MAHI ko wahin chhod nou do gyarah ho gaye jiske baad...


SHAILA-come MAHI....

ye bol SHAILA palti aur ek disha ki taraf jahan MARILIZA ka office tha,us taraf badh gayi..

wahin man me sawal liye MAHI bhi chupchaap SHAILA ke piche ho li....



MARILIZA'S OFFICE:-


SHAILA-baitho...


office pahunch jo filhal khaali hi tha,sofe ki taraf ishara karte hue kahi ye baat SHAILA ne jiske baad MAHI wahan baith gayi..

SHAILA bhi MAHI ke paas hi baith gayi thi aur ek tak MAHI ko dekh rahi thi..

MAHI is waqt thoda uneasy feel kar rahi thi.

reason..

ek toh woh kisi WHIZZ ya WHIZZDER ke saamne nahi balki institution ke ek SOVEREIGN ke saamne baithi thi aur uspar ye pehli baat tha jab SHAILA usse yun informal hokar mil rahi thi...

khair,apni saari uneasyness ke saath sofe par baithi rahi chupchaap MAHI..

wahin kuch der MAHI ko dekhne ke baad...


SHAILA-you love RAAZ, don't you.....!!!


is sidhe sawal par hadbada si gayi MAHI..usse aise kisi sawal ki ummid bilkul nahi thi..

usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhala SHAILA ko ye baat kaise pata chali & most importantly,agar pata chal bhi gayi toh bhi woh usse is baare me kyun sawal kar rahi thi..!!!???

usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki woh kahe bhi toh kya par SHAILA ko toh jaise MAHI ke man me chal rahe saare sawalon ke baare me pata tha aur isiliye...


SHAILA-first of all relax MAHI..aur man me uth rahe is sawal ko ki mujhe tumhari feelings ke baare me kaise pata,ye toh nikal hi do...

tum jahan padh rahi ho,maine is jagah ko banaya hai..aisa kuch nahi jo yahan hota hai aur mujhe nahi pata..

haan,tumhari ye soch ki mai tumhare personal life me kyun interest le rahi hun,ye soch jayaz hai..

par iska jawab ye hai ki tumme aur baaki kisi bhi SAVENT me bohot fark hai...

tum CHOSENS me rehne waale un chand logon me se ek ho,jo mujhse personally jude hue hain...


SHAILA ke is baat par chownki MAHI...woh bhala kaise SHAILA se personally judi hui hai,ye samajh nahi aaya usse..

wahin MAHI ke baaki thoughts ki tarah is thought aur sawal ko bhi jaise samajh gayi thi SHAILA isiliye...


SHAILA-zyada mat socho..tum kaise personally judi ho mujhse,iska jawab tumhe sahi waqt par mil jaayega..

but filhal kyunki woh waqt aaya nahi hai isiliye apni saari sochon ko side me rakh mujhe apne ek guardian ke hisaab se,ek aisa guardian jiske paas tumhare problems ka solution hai,baat karo..

waise sahi word share hoga...toh itne lambe chowde opening speech ke baad mai apna pucha sawal firse dohrati hun...

u love RAAZ.... right..!!!!

MAHI-jee...


sir jhukakar kahi te baat MAHI ne jispar..


SHAILA-toh problem kya hai..???

MAHI-woh mujhse pyar nahi karta..

SHAILA-common MAHI...pyar ke badle pyar milna hi chahiye,aisa toh hota nahi aur tum jaisi suljhi hui ladki is baat se pareshan aur dukhi ho jaaye,ye ho nahi sakta..

tum mujhe asal problem batao..woh problem jisse tumhare keemti aansu nikalte hain..

MAHI-RAAZ hates me...pyar nahi karta woh mujhse,koi baat nahi,par uski nafrat bardasht nahi hoti mujhse...

SHAILA-RAAZ tumse nafrat nahi karta MAHI..infact,tum ek louti aisi shaksh ho jisse woh nafrat kar hi nahi sakta...

MAHI-mai samjhi nahi...

SHAILA-pehle tum mujhe batao ki ab tak ke safar me,jitna bhi RAAZ ko observe kiya hai tumne,usse uske baare me kya guess kiya hai tumne??

MAHI-he is too cold..thoda emotionless bhi hai woh...

SHAILA-arre,jab woh emotionless hai toh woh bhala tumse nafrat kaise kar sakta hai..!!! aakhir nafrat bhi toh ek emotion hi hai naa...


SHAILA ki is baat par MAHI ko kuch kehte nahi bana,wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


SHAILA-acha explain the word emotionless...

MAHI-emotions ka absense...

SHAILA-ye adhura explaination hai..

emotionless hona nastik hone jaisa hai...nastik kaun hota hai..??

woh insaan jo har cheez dekhe,samjhe,parkhe aur phir apne tajurbe se is natije par pahunche ki GOD jaisa kuch nahi hota..

emotionless bande ka process bhi kuch aisa hi hota hai...

emotionless banda har feeling ke trigger point ko,uske pure safar ko aur manzil ko ache se jaanchta hai,evaluate karta hai,aur phir jab usse lagta hai ki us emotion ka end result yaa phir beech safar me pain se guzarna guaranteed hai,toh woh khudko us emotion aur us jaise har emotion se door rakhta hai...

bottom line,ek emotionless banda har bande ke emotion ko sabse pehle aur sabse zyada achi tarah se samajhta hai,bas he doesn't give a damn about it...

RAAZ bhi aisa hi hai,haan par tumhare maamle me uska track thoda alag ho gaya hai...

MAHI-alag ho gaya hai,kaise..???

SHAILA-arre,jab ek emotionless banda kisike liye nafrat jaisi strong bhaavna dikhaye,toh track toh badla hi hai naa usne...

MAHI-aap kya bol rahi hain,mujhe toh kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai..

SHAILA-woh isiliye kyunki hamari baatein RAAZ ke baare me..aur RAAZ ko samajhna tedhi kheer hai...

acha mai direct way mai samjhati hun...jaisa ki maine bola ki RAAZ specially tumse nafrat nahi kar sakta..

aur woh isiliye kyunki RAAZ ye jaanta hai ki you love him..

aur koi bhi banda bhale hi woh kitna bhi ajeeb kyun naa,us insaan se kabhi hate nahi kar sakta jo usse beinteha pyar karta hai aur woh bhi unconditional...

MAHI-but i haven't proposed him yet....phir woh kaise jaanega meri feelings...!!!???

SHAILA-propose..!!!MAHI RAAZ un logon me se hai jinhe jawab dene ke liye sawal ki zaroorat nahi padti...

ek shock hone waali baat bataun,tumhe baad me pata chala hai ki tum RAAZ se pyar karti ho,but RAAZ ko is baat ka andaza bohot pehle se ho chuka tha..

tab se jab woh abhi ki tarah hadsome hunk nahi tha,balki ek averege looking dabbu sa banda tha..

us waqt jab tumhari aur uski first time mulakat hui,phir jab tumhe uspar energy balls se humla kiya tha,us pure douran bhale hi dikhaane ke liye tum uske liye negetive thi,par andar hi andar tumhe uske liye ek khichaav feel hota tha...

class me tum usse tirchi aankhon se dekha karti thi..

ALFREEN ke mom dad ke through uske baare me zyada se zyada jaanane ki koshish karti thi..

aur phir jab RAAZ achanak se gayab ho gaya tha,toh apne ABODE me baithe baithe uske baare me sochte hue tumhari aankhon se apne aap aansu nikalne lage the...

yahi raha hai naa tumhara RAAZ ke prati attraction se love tak ka safar..am i right or am i right...!!!


SHAILA ki baatein joki completely sahi thi,unhe sun aankhen faade dekhne lagi unhe MAHI jispar bade pyar se uske maathe par haath fera SHAILA ne aur..


SHAILA-itna hairan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai baccha..bhulo mat ki tum meri hi banayi duniya me ho..

mujhse yahan kuch nahi chhupta, but yahan important baat ye hai ki RAAZ se bhi tumhari feelings yaa phir ye kahun ki future me joki ab tumhara present hai,aane waali feelings nahi chhupi thi aur isiliye hi woh tumse odd behave karta hai...

MAHI-but kyun..!!!kyun kar raha hai woh aisa...!!!

SHAILA-now thats the main question..aur isiliye hi hum yahan hain...

reason tumhe sirf RAAZ hi bata sakta hai,mai tumhe RAAZ ka tumhe avoid karna,yaa fir ye kahen ki tumse jude RAAZ ko jaanane ka tarika bata sakti hun...

wanna know..!!!

MAHI-please...

SHAILA-soch lo MAHI..kuch jawab waqt ke saath hi mile toh hi thik rehta hai...

MAHI-pata nahi kab aayega woh waqt..tab tak jaan hi naa nikal jaaye meri...

SHAILA-thik hai phir...ye lo..


apni baat kehte hue haath aage kiya SHAILA ne aur uske aisa karte hi uske haathon me mitti ke kan aa gaye jinhe apne aankhon me sawal liye dekhne lagi MAHI jispar...


SHAILA-tumhe in mitti ke kano me apne khoon ka ek katra milana hai phir in kano ko gol shape dekar ek polithin paper me wrap karke rakh dena hai..

RAAZ se milkar uske drink me tumhe in kano ko daal dena hai..

ye kan us drink me puri tarah dissolve ho jaayega..taste me bhi bilkul fark nahi aayega..

kehne ka matlab hai ki RAAZ ko shak nahi hoga..aisa hone ke baad jaise hi RAAZ us drink ko piyega,uske kareeb aadhe se ek ghante ke beech uske senses dull ho jaayenge...

woh ek antoxicating neend me chala jaayega..us waqt woh kisi naa kisi tarike se apne aap tumse juda RAAZ disclose karega.

tumhe bas woh tarika samajhna hai..aisa kar liya toh tumhe tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil jaayenge...


SHAILA ki baat sun bohot khush ho gayi MAHI..usne un mitti ke kano ko SHAILA se liya aur sambhal kar apne paas rakh liya..


MAHI-thanks SOVES...


ye bol MAHI apne aap aage badhi aur SHAILA ke gale lag gayi aur aisa hone par SHAILA bhi kaafi emotional ho gayi thi par MAHI ke alag hone se pehle hi usne khudko normal kar liya tha...

khair,kuch der baad jab SHAILA se alag hui MAHI toh..


MAHI-mai aaj hi try karungi RAAZ se sach nikalwane ki...

SHAILA-sambhalke...he is very sharp...

MAHI-jaanti hun..par hum bhi kam nahi..


pure confidence se kahi ye baat MAHI ne aur phir uthkar bahar nikal gayi aur uske jaate hi..


SHAILA-tum wakayi kisise kam nahi ho MAHI..bas sahi waqt aane ki der hai...uske baad jitni hi ye kahani RAAZ aur VIDEOUS ki hai,utni tumhari bhi hogi,infact un dono se zyada tumhari hogi ye kahani,ye ATTITUDE...





PLACE-RAAZ ABODE



KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK....



RAAZ KO DEKHNA HAI..!!!TU BHI NAA MAHI,RAAZ KO TERE DEKHNE KE CHAKKAR ME KAHIN WOH HAMARE GAAL NE SEKH DE....


RAAZ ke ABODE ke front door ko knock karte hue kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne...

raat ka waqt hai...

kuch der pehle hi MAHI ALFREEN ke ghar gayi aur usse yahan RAAZ ke ghar jaane ke liye force kiya jispar ALFREEN ne MABEL ko bhi lapet liya aur is tarah woh teeno is waqt RAAZ ke ghar ke main door ke saamne khade the..

khair, ALFREEN ki baat par MAHI kuch kehti ki tabhi door open hua aur darwaza kholne waale shaksh ko dekh MAHI, ALFREEN aur sabse zyada MABEL shocked hui aur..


MABEL-ACCHUTA,tum RAAZ ke ABODE me kya kar rahe ho....???

ACCHUTA-hum toh hamesha yahin pade rehte hain..sawal toh ye hai ki itni raat ko tum teeno yahan kya kar rahi ho...???

ALFREEN-arre in madam ko RAAZ ko dekhne ka man hua aur inhone apne is didaare talab me hume bhi lapet liya..

ACCHUTA-hahaha...sahi hai,sahi hai...aao,andar aao...


ye bol ACCHUTA door se haththe hue andar ki taraf badh gaya aur uske piche teeno girls bhi ho liye...


ALFREEN-waise RAAZ sir ka mood toh sahi hai naa...!!!

ACCHUTA-arre first class..aur waise bhi,tere saath bhi toh woh hamesha cool hi rehta hai..

infact sabse zyada woh tujhe hi chhedta rehta hai..

MABEL-woh sabke saath ache se rehta hai,siway hamari MAHI ke.. pata nahi usse MAHI se kya problem hai...??

MAHI-chhod naa..mujhe toh usse dekhna acha lagta hai naa....


MAHI ki is baat ke khatm hote hote woh sab hall me pahunch chuke the jahan is waqt mai aur SLUNDER baithe kuch baat kar rahe the..

wahin baat karte hue jab meri nazar MAHI par gayi toh mere jabde bheench gaye the par uske saath ALFREEN aur MABEL ko dekh mai shaant hi raha..


ALFREEN-hey guyzzz...kya discussion kar rahe ho tum dono...??aur ek baat bata,jab tum teeno raat ko yahan jam karte ho,toh hume kyun nahi bulate..!!!

aaj bhi hum achanak aa gaye toh hume pata chala warna hume toh pata hi nahi chalta ki tum teeno ki mehfil yahan jamti hai..

MAI-woh kya hai naa ki raat ko teri shakal dekh kar sounga toh sapne bhayanak aayenge..bas isiliye avoid kar deta hun tujhe bulana..


meri baat sun jahan ek taraf ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, MABEL aur MAHI has diye wahi ALFREEN ne ghur kar dekha mujhe aur..


ALFREEN-meri shakal ki baat karne se pehle kabhi apni surat dekhi hai...

MAI-dekhi hai,bohot achi hai.. khubsoorat se khubsoorat ladkiyan marti hai mujhpar...

ALFEEN-achi surat aur teri..!!kahan se...aur mai toh nahi mari tujhpar...

MAI-maine khubsoorat ladkiyan bola..

HAHAHAHA...


zoron se has diye sab meri baat sun aur ALFREEN,woh ghusse se mujhe ghurti hui meri taraf badhi aur mujhe maarne ke liye apna haath ghumaya meri taraf par tabhi....

maine uska woh haath beech me hi pakad liya aur usse kheenchte hue apne hi bean bag me apne side baitha liya aur ek buddy ki tarah uske kandhe par apna haath rakhte hue usse khudse sata liya..

ye sab dekh jahan baaki sab muskura uthe wahin MAHI ne ek thandi saans bhari....

MAHI jaanti thi ki ALFREEN ko mai as a buddy treat karta hun,par taklif usse mere uski taraf nazarandaazi se thi jo mai is waqt bhi kar raha tha..

par aaj ye nazarandaazi uske liye benificial thi..

wahin mere baaju mai baiththe hi..


ALFREEN-arre,teri ELUSORY kahan hai...??? usse kuch drink toh manga...

MAI-ACCHUTA,dekh usse,bol sabke liye drink le aaye..

ACCHUTA-tu tera regular hi piyega naa...!!

MAI-haan..

ALFREEN-regular..kaun sa,wahi KAFFIR COLLINS...yuk...kitna kadwa taste hota hai us drink ka..

pata nahi kaise peeta hai tu usse...

MABEL-haan yaar,mocktail hai par taste cocktail jaisa hai, infact usse bhi bitter...

MAI-it energizes the whole body..par tum jaise ledaron aur sweeth tooth waalon ko samajh nahi aayega...


meri baaton par koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


MAHI-mai wash room se aati hun...


ye bol MAHI ek direction me badh gayi..ab har ABODE ka design ek jaisa hi hota tha, isiliye MAHI ko directions ki zaroorat nahi thi..

par jaate waqt uske face par ek smile thi...

reason...

kul do reasons the....

pehla toh ye ki ABODE me ek general washroom bhi tha jahan se straight raasta kitchen ki taraf jaata tha jahan abhi abhi ACCHUTA ke batane par ELUSORY gaya tha...

dusra..

RAAZ ne MAHI ka kaam khud hi asaan kar diya tha..aur woh aise ki kyunki sirf RAAZ hi tha jo sabse alag drink peene waala tha,toh isiliye uske drink me MAHI ko uske rakht ranjit mitti ke kano ko milana badi baat nahi reh gayi thi..

aur rahi sahi obstacle khud ELUSORY ne door kar di....

aur woh aise ki jab washroom se hote hue MAHI chupke chupke kitchen pahunchi toh usne dekha ki ELUSORY ne RAAZ ka drink alag se banakar rakh diya hai aur filhal woh ek saath baaki sabka drink bana rahi hai aur ye dekh MAHI dabe paanv aage badhti chali gayi aur agle kuch hi seconds me usne us mitti ke churn ko jisme ab uska khoon bhi mixed tha,RAAZ ke drink me mila diya tha aur wapas dabe paanv lout bhi chuki thi...

is baar sach me wash room use kar woh apne friends ke paas pahunch gayi jahan abhi bhi mai lagatar ALFREEN ko tang kiye jaa raha tha jispar woh chidhe jaa rahi thi aur baaki sab hamari nok jhonk enjoy kar rahe the...

khair,kuch der me ELUSORY sabke drinks lekar aa gayi thi jiske baad apni apni choice ke hisaab se sabhi ne apni drinks utha li...

RAAZ ke haathon me uska KAFFIR COLLINS tha jisse dekh MAHI ka dil zoron se dhadak raha tha par usne badi saawdhaani baraththe hue khudko normal rakha hua tha..

MAHI jaanti thi ki uska halka sa bhi alag action ya ravvaiya usse RAAZ ke shak ke ghere me laa khada karega..

woh ye bhi jaanti thi ki RAAZ bhale usse nahi dekh raha tha,par nazar uski har taraf rehti hai aur isiliye woh normal behave karti hui MABEL aur SLUNDER se baat kar rahi thi..

is beech maine apna drink peena shuru kar diya tha aur kuch hi der baad woh drink khatm bhi ho gaya...

kareeb aadhe ghante hum sab gossip me lage rahe par uske baad achanak mere senses dull hone lage...

dikhne me toh mai normal lag raha tha,par dekhne aur samajhne ki shakti meri kam hone lagi...

aur isiliye...


MAI-guyzz..neend aa rahi hai mujhe..mai sone jaa raha hun...


ye bol mai bina kuch sune utha aur sidhe apne bedroom ki taraf badh gaya...

wahin mujhe yun achanak se uthkar jaate dekh..


MABEL-ab ye kya tha..naa good night kiya naa hume darwaaze tak chhoda..

neend aa rahi hai bolkar sidha kat liya...


ALFREEN-arre woh toh aisa hi hai...but guyzz,i think hume bhi chalna chahiye..waise bhi kaafi late ho gaya hai...


ALFREEN ki baat par sabhi sehmat the aur sabhi jaane ko bhi hue par tabhi...


MAHI-guyzz,mai ek baar RAAZ ko dekhkar aa jaaun....!!!


sabhi MAHI ke dil ka haal jaante the,isiliye uski baat sun sab halka sa muskura diya aur..


SLUNDER-jaa dekh le.. par door se hi dekhiyo,paas gayi toh kahin bhadak naa jaaye...


SLUNDER ki baat par smile dete hue MAHI RAAZ ke kamre ki taraf badh gayi aur door par pahunch usne andar dekha jahan is waqt RAAZ ne door ko open hi chhod diya tha aur is waqt bed par leta hua tha..

aankhen uski khuli hui thi par bina palke jhapkaaye woh upar ceiling ki taraf dekh raha tha..

uski condition ko theek se samajhne ke liye MAHI room ke andar gayi aur uske paas pahunch RAAZ ke face ke aage usne apna haath lehraya par jab RAAZ ne koi reaction nahi diya toh woh samajh gayi ki RAAZ behoshi ki haalat me jiske baare me SHAILA ne bataya tha,jaa chuka hai..

khair,kuch pal RAAZ ko ektak dekhne ke baad acahanak se MAHI ki nazar RAAZ ke right hand par padi jisse dekh pehle toh usse ajeeb laga par phir uske mind ki baati jali aur uske face par smile aa gayi..

darasal is waqt RAAZ ke haathon me kuch bhi nahi tha,par phir bhi woh apne haath ko aise ghuma raha tha jaise usne pen pakda hua hai aur kuch likh raha ho aur ye dekh MAHI samajh gayi ki ye wahi TARIKA hai jiske baare me SHAILA ne usse bataya tha jisse usse pata lagana tha aur usne pata laga liya tha..

ab bas result ki,apne liye us RAAZ ko janane ki baari thi jisse RAAZ apne dil ke gehraiyon me dabaye hue tha..

aur isiliye MAHI ne apna haath aage kiya aur..


LEKHANPRATHI

PATRAM


ek ke baad ek so SPELLS bole MAHI ne jiske baad uske haath me ek pen aur ek page aa gaya jiske baad woh aage badhi aur usne woh pen kisi tarah RAAZ ke ungliyon ke beech fasa diya..

aisa kar usne woh page jo uske haathon me tha,usse RAAZ ke haathon me jo pen usne fasaya tha,uski nok ke paas rakh diya aur jab aisa hua toh..

RAAZ jo ab tak khaali haathon se kuch likhe jaa raha tha,woh ab us pen ke through us kagaz me kuch likhta chala gaya aur yunhi likhte likhte kuch der baad RAAZ ke haathon se woh pen neeche gir gaya...

aisa hote dekh MAHI wapas pen uthane ko hui par tabhi uski nazar RAAZ ke haathon par gayi jo ab chal nahi rahi thi,balki shaant ho chuki thi..

ye dekh MAHI samajh gayi ki jo bhi RAAZ,RAAZ ke dil me tha,woh us kaagaz ke through bahar aa chuka hai aur isiliye ab uske haath rook chuke hain..

phir bhi apne pen ko uthaya MAHI ne aur aisa karte hue uska face RAAZ ke chehre ke paas aa gaya jisse dekh halki madhosh ho gayi MAHI..

uske honth khudbakhud RAAZ ke face ki taraf chal pada aur theek uske honthon ke paas aakar rook gaye MAHI ke honth..

kuch seconds RAAZ ke honthon ko dekhne ke baad...


MAHI-dil toh kar raha hai ki in honthon par apne honthon se apna naam hamesha ke liye likh dun,par aisa karna meri sacchi mohobbat ke liye tohmat hogi..

isiliye filhal issi se kaam chala lete hain..


ye bol MAHI aage badhi aur usne RAAZ ke pehle maathe aur phir gaal ko chum liya aur aisa kar woh piche hati aur us page ko apne ABODE me padhne ka soch usse apni jeans ki pocket me daal room se bahar nikal gayi..

wahin kaafi der se MAHI ka wait kar rahe uske saare friends ne jab usse finally aate hue dekha toh..


MABEL-oye tu itni der tak kar kya rahi thi..???

ALFREEN-kahin RAAZ ki izzat toh nahi loot li tune...

MAHI-shut up guyzz..woh toh so chuka tha..ab maine socha,waise toh usse thik se dekh paati hun nahi, isiliye uske paas baith usse dekh rahi thi...

MABEL-waah..itni der didaar-e-saajan me hi nikaal diya..sahi hai...

ab chalen,yaa aur dekhna hai usse..

MAHI-dekh toh mai usse saadi zindagi lun..par filhal chalte hain..

ALFREEN-meherbaani ma'am...ab toh mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai..


yunhi ek dusre se baat karte hue woh sab RAAZ ke ghar se nikal pade..

MAHI toh andar hi andar us page me likhi baaton ko padhne ke liye kuch zyada hi excited thi is baat we anjaan ki SHAILA ne usse sach hi kaha tha ki kuch baatein sahi waqt par hi pata chale toh thik rehta hai..

apni curiousity me us waqt ko nazdeek le aayi thi MAHI...

khair, kuch hi der me apne ABODE me thi MAHI jiske baad woh jaldi se apne room me gayi aur apne bed par baiththe hue usne turant apne pocket se woh page nikala aur usse unfold kar padhne lagi..

kuch lines likhi thi us page par RAAZ ne jisse jaise jaise MAHI padhti gayi, uski aankhen badi hoti gayi aur jab usne aakhri line padhi toh woh paper uske haathon se chhut gaya...

haath kaamp rahe the uske,aankhen pathra gayi thi,dimag blank ho chuka tha par us blank brain me bhi us paper par likhi woh baat,woh reason jiski wajah se RAAZ uske saath berukhi se behave karta tha,woh gunj raha tha....

woh baat,woh RAAZ jo MAHI ke rakht ranjit churn ne RAAZ se likhwaya tha,jisse padh MAHI ek jeeti jaagti booth me tabdil ho gayi thi,woh kuch yun tha......




jitna ho sakega,MAHI ke andar khudke liye NAFRAT BHAREGA.....

usse khudse door karne ke liye ye ladka kuch bhi KAREGA.....

aakhir kaise sahegi MAHI is safar ke anjaam ko jaan,

kyunki kuch bhi ho jaaye,ye tay hai ki is kahani me, RAAZ ZAROOR MAREGA.....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......















AAPKA APNA V....J....
 

Iron Man

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MARIA, FLORIN AUR ALFREEN RAAZ KE ATTITUDE KE BAARE ME BAAT KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER VALDIS KE MANSUBO PAR PAANI FER DETE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



MEGA UPDATE-115



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS

PLACE-STADIUM



SWEEP-STAKE






IS SAAL EK BAAR PHIRSE WICKEDS NE MORALS KO HARA DIYA HAI...

PAR IS JEET KA PURA SHREY WICKEDS KI SIRF EK SAVENT KO JAATA HAI..

AUR WOH HAI THE BEST SAVENT OF PHASE 3,MORANA.....

MORANA NE AAJ SINGLE HANDEDLY PEHLE DONO HI TASK ME APNE TEAM KO JEET DILWAYI HAI...

BRILLIANT MORANA.. ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT....


WHIZZ VIOLET joki is baar bhi last year ki hi tarah SWEEP-STAKE ki referee thi, unhone WICKEDS ke jeet ke baad kahi ye saari baat jispar pura stadium taaliyon se gunj utha...

wahin apne stand par baithe PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS bhi MORANA ke aaj ke performance se kaafi impressed the aur isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar ek baat toh maanani padegi...is MORANA me dum toh hai..

is bandi ne akele hi saare challenges me apne catagory ko jeet dilwayi hai...

maanana padega RAAZ...bandi apne takkar ki chuni hai tune...

mere kandhe ko thapthapate hua kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne jispar ek baar usse ghur kar dekh uske haath ko apne kandhe se hatate hue...


MAI-RAAZ ko takkar maut ka chakkar hai... aur koi ye chakkar nahi lagana chaahega...

SLUNDER-bhai woh teri g.f ki badhayi kar rahi hai..aur g.f ki badhayi par...

MAI-par kya..??g.f ki badhayi ke waqt jhooth allowed hota hai kya...???

rishta koi bhi ho, sach ko badla nahi jaa sakta..par mai bata kisko raha hun,gadhon ke jhund me gyaan baatne se milega bhi kya..???


jahan ye sab bol mai turant utha aur bahar ki taraf nikal pada wahin meri baat par ALFREEN aur MABEL bhi kuch bolne ko hue par unke bolne se pehle hi mai jaa chuka tha. jispar..


MABEL-ye kaisa vichitra maanus hai yaar....???hume gadha bolta hai aur khud gadhe ki tarah apna dhenchu dhenchu badbadakar bhaag jaata hai...

aur tum kyun smile kar rahe ho...???


apni baat kehte waqt jab MABEL ki nazar ACCHUTA par gayi,joki smile kar raha tha,toh pucha ye sawal usne jispar...


ACCHUTA-RAAZ ki harkat par hasi aa gayi...

MABEL-matlab..!!!

ACCHUTA-MORANA se comparison par bhadka woh par phir usse milne hi nikal bhi gaya...

ALFREEN/MABEL-WHAT...?????

ALFREEN-RAAZ MORANA se milne gaya hai...!!!

MABEL-aur tumhe kaise pata ye baat...???

ACCHUTA-pure WICKEDS me bas ek MORANA hi thi jo naa sirf injured hui thi balki hadh se zyada thak bhi gayi thi..

aur aakhir me ALFREEN jab baat kar rahi thi aur RAAZ reply kar raha tha tab uski nazar bas ek baar humari taraf gayi thi,baaki saari baatein usne saamne ground par MORANA ko dekhkar kahi thi..

aur phir jab MORANA ko uske friends sahara dete hue ground se bahar le gaye tabhi RAAZ utha tha aur bahar nikal gaya tha..

ALFREEN-oh teri..ye toh wakayi gazab ka hi banda hai yaar..kab kya karega,koi nahi jaanta...!!

par yaar ACCHUTA,manana padega tujhe bhi...

teri nazar bhi badi tagdi hai..itna lamba aur door ka connection bhi taad gaya tu..gazab....

MABEL-bas door ka hi thik se dikhta hai isse,paas ka nahi...

ALFREEN-paas ka nahi matlab...!!! ACCHUTA,tujhe short sightedness ki problem ho gayi hai kya...!!!

MABEL-arre yaar,tu chup hi raha kar..jab bhi bolti hai, ulta hi bolti hai...

ALFREEN-le,ghuma phirakar baat tum log karo aur ulta mai bolti hun....khair chhodo ye sab,chalo chalkar dekhte hain ki RAAZ kya kar raha hai MORANA ke saath...

agar pamper kar raha hoga toh chidayenge usse...

ACCHUTA-RAAZ ko chidhayenge...!!!!bhadak gaya naa woh,toh hum apni hi mout ka maatam manayenge...

ALFREEN-haan,ye risk toh hai..koi naa,bas taaka jhaanki karenge...

chalo naa yaar..waise bhi ye competition toh khatm ho hi gaya,ab yahan baith kar karenge bhi kya..!!


ye bol ALFREEN aage badh gayi jiske piche MABEL, ACCHUTA,SLUNDER aur MAHI bhi ho liye...

MAHI.... jispar in puri baaton ke dauran kisi ka bhi dhyan nahi gaya tha..

behadh hatash aur maayus dikh rahi thi woh is waqt..

reason....

jab se ACCHUTA ne MORANA ki condition par RAAZ ka concern bataya tha,tab se MAHI ka dil aur face,dono hi murjha chuke the..

par is murjhaye dil aur face ka reason sirf RAAZ aur MORANA ki closeness hi nahi thi...

balki asal baat thi RAAZ ki MAHI ke liye rudeness jo pichle ek mahine se kaafi badh gayi thi...

waise toh dono hi zyada aamne saamne nahi aate the aur naahi baat karte the,par jab bhi aisa kuch hota tha toh RAAZ ka MAHI ke liye reaction aisa hota tha jaise woh uski dushman ho...

ek do task ke dauran bhi jab MAHI injured hui toh bas RAAZ hi tha,jiske face par uske liye thodi si bhi fikr nahi aayi thi...

aur aaj ACCHUTA ki baat sun jab usse RAAZ ka MORANA ke liye fikr ka andaza hua toh aise me taklif toh honi hi thi..

khair, apne friends se apne dilli-haal ko chhupate hue woh bhi un sabke peeche peeche us jagah ke liye nikal gayi jahan usse ek baar phirse taklif hone waali thi...





PLACE-WICKEDS GREEN ROOM




WELL,WELL,WELL,DEKHO GUYZZ,KAUN AAYA HAI HAMARE GREEN ROOM ME...!!!

PHASE 2 KA SABSE TALENTED SAVENT AUR CHAMPION,RAAZ...


mere WICKEDS ke green room me ghuste hi wahan moujud sabhi WICKEDS ki nazar mujhpar padi..

jahan mujhe dekh MORANA ke thake aur pain se bhare face me smile aa gayi thi, ANWIR ke kuch friends halke dar gaye the wahin wahan kuch aise akhand chutiye bhi the jinhone mere baare baare me suna toh tha par vishwas nahi kiya tha..

saath hi meri taarif sun mujhse khaar bhi khaaye hue the..unme se hi ek bande ne kahi thi ye baat jispar uske saath khade uske kuch friends hasne lage aur ye dekh..


MAI-mai bhi teri taarif me zaroor kuch naa kuch kehta par uske kiye taarif ke laayak tujhme kuch hona bhi toh chahiye...

aur jis chaman chutiye ki tarah aaj tu SWEEP-STAKE me khel raha tha,usse dekh lagta nahi hai ki kabhi bhi tere baare me koi jaanana aur sunana chaahega...


meri baat sun bhadak gaya woh ladka par isse pehle ki woh kuch kehta...


MORANA-ek bhi shabd nikalna nahi chahiye mooh se warna dobara kuch bolne ke liye mooh bachega hi nahi tera..


MORANA ki ye gurrahat se bhari dhamki padi us ladke ke kaano me jisse sun naa sirf uska khul raha mooh band ho gaya balki saath hi MORANA ke facial expressions jisme ghussa bhara hua tha,woh dekh uski haalat bhi kharab ho gayi...

MORANA WICKEDS ki sabse khatarnaak SAVENT thi,aaj ka competition bhi usne akele hi apne dum par jitaya tha,ye us green room me moujud har koi jaanta tha aur aise me usse panga lena yaa uski baat kaatne ki himmat karna kisike bas ki baat nahi thi...

yahi wajah thi ki woh banda jisse MORANA ne dhamkaya tha,woh apne doston ke saath chupchaap green room se bahar nikal gaya aur jab aisa hua toh mai MORANA ke saamne pahunch gaya jispar...


MORANA-kya baat hai janab....!!!aaj
aap khud hamare paas aaye hain....??

MAI-haan, competition me kuch zyada hi injured ho gayi ho tum, isiliye tumhe dekhne aa gaya..


MORANA ke haath aur neeche edi ke paas bruises ko dekh kahi maine ye baat kahi jispar pehle toh MORANA hasi aur phir..


MORANA-kameene..kamsekam mujhse toh sach bola karo...

tum bhale hi mera haal dekhne aaye ho par mere liye nahi,apne liye....

MAI-har baat har jagah par nahi ki jaati MORANA...

MORANA-ye bhi hai...par ab jab tum wakayi yahan ho aur agar tum sach me mere liye concerned ho, saabit karne ke liye tumhe ek kaam karna hoga..

MAI-bolti jaao,sun raha hun mai...

MORANA-hmm.. actually mere pair me bhi swelling aa gayi hai..

waise healing spray laga liya hai..saare bruises ek ghante me thik ho jaayenge par tab tak mai yahan baithe baithe bor ho jaaungi...

toh tumhara kaam simple hai...tumhe mujhe abhi is waqt apni godh me uthakar mere ABODE tak lejaana hoga..



MORANA ka bas itna kehna tha ki maine bina time waste kiye usse apni godh me utha liya aur palat kar aage badh gaya...

mujhe yun MORANA ko uthakar jaate dekh wahan saare WICKEDS hairan ho gaye the par woh sab kuch bol nahi paaye...

khair, MORANA ko yunhi godh me uthaye hue hi mai green room se nikalte hue aage badhta chala gaya...

wahin green room se thodi door par khade the mere saare dost jinki nazar jaise hi mujhpar aur meri godh me chadhi hui MORANA par gayi toh un sabki aankhen badi jo gayi..

kuch der tak yunhi aankhen faade mujhe dekhte rahe woh sab..is beech mai un sabki aankhon se ojhil ho chuka tha aur mere jaate hi..


MABEL-waah,kya scene tha yaar... MORANA madam ko toh v.i.p treatment de raha hai RAAZ...


MABEL ki baat par jahan baaki sab has diye wahin apne aankhon me aaye aansuon ko poch MAHI bhi jhuth mooth ka muskura uthi...

MAHI apne doston ke saamne kamzor nahi dikhna chahti thi par usse maalum nahi tha ki uske aansu bhale hi uske doston ne nahi dekhe,par paas hi mai moujud ek shaksh se woh aansu nahi chhup paaye hain...

waise MAHI ke dilli haal se uske sabhi dost bhi waakif the par ye MAHI ka hi faisla tha ki naa toh RAAZ aur uske equation ke baare me koi kuch baat karega aur naahi uski fikr karega..

woh sab jaante the ki MAHI upset hai par concerned behaviour dikha woh uspar pity show nahi karte the kyunki MAHI aisa hi chahti thi...

khair,ab rookne ka koi faayda toh tha nahi isiliye woh sab wahan se chalne ko hue par tabhi...


MAHI,CAN O HAVE A WORD....


wahi shaksh jisne MAHI ke aansu dekh liye the,usne hi kahi ye baat jisse sun MAHI aur baaki sabhi us awaaz ki taraf joki unke left se aayi thi palte aur aisa karte hi un sabko bodies aur ATTITUDE turant badal gaya...

reason...

unke saamne SOVES SHAILA khadi thi jinhe dekh..


SAB-afternoon SOVES...

SOVES-afternoon...aap sab jaaiye, mujhe MAHI se kuch kaam hai,she will join u later...


SHAILA ki baat sunte hi woh sab turant MAHI ko wahin chhod nou do gyarah ho gaye jiske baad...


SHAILA-come MAHI....

ye bol SHAILA palti aur ek disha ki taraf jahan MARILIZA ka office tha,us taraf badh gayi..

wahin man me sawal liye MAHI bhi chupchaap SHAILA ke piche ho li....



MARILIZA'S OFFICE:-


SHAILA-baitho...


office pahunch jo filhal khaali hi tha,sofe ki taraf ishara karte hue kahi ye baat SHAILA ne jiske baad MAHI wahan baith gayi..

SHAILA bhi MAHI ke paas hi baith gayi thi aur ek tak MAHI ko dekh rahi thi..

MAHI is waqt thoda uneasy feel kar rahi thi.

reason..

ek toh woh kisi WHIZZ ya WHIZZDER ke saamne nahi balki institution ke ek SOVEREIGN ke saamne baithi thi aur uspar ye pehli baat tha jab SHAILA usse yun informal hokar mil rahi thi...

khair,apni saari uneasyness ke saath sofe par baithi rahi chupchaap MAHI..

wahin kuch der MAHI ko dekhne ke baad...


SHAILA-you love RAAZ, don't you.....!!!


is sidhe sawal par hadbada si gayi MAHI..usse aise kisi sawal ki ummid bilkul nahi thi..

usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhala SHAILA ko ye baat kaise pata chali & most importantly,agar pata chal bhi gayi toh bhi woh usse is baare me kyun sawal kar rahi thi..!!!???

usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki woh kahe bhi toh kya par SHAILA ko toh jaise MAHI ke man me chal rahe saare sawalon ke baare me pata tha aur isiliye...


SHAILA-first of all relax MAHI..aur man me uth rahe is sawal ko ki mujhe tumhari feelings ke baare me kaise pata,ye toh nikal hi do...

tum jahan padh rahi ho,maine is jagah ko banaya hai..aisa kuch nahi jo yahan hota hai aur mujhe nahi pata..

haan,tumhari ye soch ki mai tumhare personal life me kyun interest le rahi hun,ye soch jayaz hai..

par iska jawab ye hai ki tumme aur baaki kisi bhi SAVENT me bohot fark hai...

tum CHOSENS me rehne waale un chand logon me se ek ho,jo mujhse personally jude hue hain...


SHAILA ke is baat par chownki MAHI...woh bhala kaise SHAILA se personally judi hui hai,ye samajh nahi aaya usse..

wahin MAHI ke baaki thoughts ki tarah is thought aur sawal ko bhi jaise samajh gayi thi SHAILA isiliye...


SHAILA-zyada mat socho..tum kaise personally judi ho mujhse,iska jawab tumhe sahi waqt par mil jaayega..

but filhal kyunki woh waqt aaya nahi hai isiliye apni saari sochon ko side me rakh mujhe apne ek guardian ke hisaab se,ek aisa guardian jiske paas tumhare problems ka solution hai,baat karo..

waise sahi word share hoga...toh itne lambe chowde opening speech ke baad mai apna pucha sawal firse dohrati hun...

u love RAAZ.... right..!!!!

MAHI-jee...


sir jhukakar kahi te baat MAHI ne jispar..


SHAILA-toh problem kya hai..???

MAHI-woh mujhse pyar nahi karta..

SHAILA-common MAHI...pyar ke badle pyar milna hi chahiye,aisa toh hota nahi aur tum jaisi suljhi hui ladki is baat se pareshan aur dukhi ho jaaye,ye ho nahi sakta..

tum mujhe asal problem batao..woh problem jisse tumhare keemti aansu nikalte hain..

MAHI-RAAZ hates me...pyar nahi karta woh mujhse,koi baat nahi,par uski nafrat bardasht nahi hoti mujhse...

SHAILA-RAAZ tumse nafrat nahi karta MAHI..infact,tum ek louti aisi shaksh ho jisse woh nafrat kar hi nahi sakta...

MAHI-mai samjhi nahi...

SHAILA-pehle tum mujhe batao ki ab tak ke safar me,jitna bhi RAAZ ko observe kiya hai tumne,usse uske baare me kya guess kiya hai tumne??

MAHI-he is too cold..thoda emotionless bhi hai woh...

SHAILA-arre,jab woh emotionless hai toh woh bhala tumse nafrat kaise kar sakta hai..!!! aakhir nafrat bhi toh ek emotion hi hai naa...


SHAILA ki is baat par MAHI ko kuch kehte nahi bana,wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


SHAILA-acha explain the word emotionless...

MAHI-emotions ka absense...

SHAILA-ye adhura explaination hai..

emotionless hona nastik hone jaisa hai...nastik kaun hota hai..??

woh insaan jo har cheez dekhe,samjhe,parkhe aur phir apne tajurbe se is natije par pahunche ki GOD jaisa kuch nahi hota..

emotionless bande ka process bhi kuch aisa hi hota hai...

emotionless banda har feeling ke trigger point ko,uske pure safar ko aur manzil ko ache se jaanchta hai,evaluate karta hai,aur phir jab usse lagta hai ki us emotion ka end result yaa phir beech safar me pain se guzarna guaranteed hai,toh woh khudko us emotion aur us jaise har emotion se door rakhta hai...

bottom line,ek emotionless banda har bande ke emotion ko sabse pehle aur sabse zyada achi tarah se samajhta hai,bas he doesn't give a damn about it...

RAAZ bhi aisa hi hai,haan par tumhare maamle me uska track thoda alag ho gaya hai...

MAHI-alag ho gaya hai,kaise..???

SHAILA-arre,jab ek emotionless banda kisike liye nafrat jaisi strong bhaavna dikhaye,toh track toh badla hi hai naa usne...

MAHI-aap kya bol rahi hain,mujhe toh kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai..

SHAILA-woh isiliye kyunki hamari baatein RAAZ ke baare me..aur RAAZ ko samajhna tedhi kheer hai...

acha mai direct way mai samjhati hun...jaisa ki maine bola ki RAAZ specially tumse nafrat nahi kar sakta..

aur woh isiliye kyunki RAAZ ye jaanta hai ki you love him..

aur koi bhi banda bhale hi woh kitna bhi ajeeb kyun naa,us insaan se kabhi hate nahi kar sakta jo usse beinteha pyar karta hai aur woh bhi unconditional...

MAHI-but i haven't proposed him yet....phir woh kaise jaanega meri feelings...!!!???

SHAILA-propose..!!!MAHI RAAZ un logon me se hai jinhe jawab dene ke liye sawal ki zaroorat nahi padti...

ek shock hone waali baat bataun,tumhe baad me pata chala hai ki tum RAAZ se pyar karti ho,but RAAZ ko is baat ka andaza bohot pehle se ho chuka tha..

tab se jab woh abhi ki tarah hadsome hunk nahi tha,balki ek averege looking dabbu sa banda tha..

us waqt jab tumhari aur uski first time mulakat hui,phir jab tumhe uspar energy balls se humla kiya tha,us pure douran bhale hi dikhaane ke liye tum uske liye negetive thi,par andar hi andar tumhe uske liye ek khichaav feel hota tha...

class me tum usse tirchi aankhon se dekha karti thi..

ALFREEN ke mom dad ke through uske baare me zyada se zyada jaanane ki koshish karti thi..

aur phir jab RAAZ achanak se gayab ho gaya tha,toh apne ABODE me baithe baithe uske baare me sochte hue tumhari aankhon se apne aap aansu nikalne lage the...

yahi raha hai naa tumhara RAAZ ke prati attraction se love tak ka safar..am i right or am i right...!!!


SHAILA ki baatein joki completely sahi thi,unhe sun aankhen faade dekhne lagi unhe MAHI jispar bade pyar se uske maathe par haath fera SHAILA ne aur..


SHAILA-itna hairan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai baccha..bhulo mat ki tum meri hi banayi duniya me ho..

mujhse yahan kuch nahi chhupta, but yahan important baat ye hai ki RAAZ se bhi tumhari feelings yaa phir ye kahun ki future me joki ab tumhara present hai,aane waali feelings nahi chhupi thi aur isiliye hi woh tumse odd behave karta hai...

MAHI-but kyun..!!!kyun kar raha hai woh aisa...!!!

SHAILA-now thats the main question..aur isiliye hi hum yahan hain...

reason tumhe sirf RAAZ hi bata sakta hai,mai tumhe RAAZ ka tumhe avoid karna,yaa fir ye kahen ki tumse jude RAAZ ko jaanane ka tarika bata sakti hun...

wanna know..!!!

MAHI-please...

SHAILA-soch lo MAHI..kuch jawab waqt ke saath hi mile toh hi thik rehta hai...

MAHI-pata nahi kab aayega woh waqt..tab tak jaan hi naa nikal jaaye meri...

SHAILA-thik hai phir...ye lo..


apni baat kehte hue haath aage kiya SHAILA ne aur uske aisa karte hi uske haathon me mitti ke kan aa gaye jinhe apne aankhon me sawal liye dekhne lagi MAHI jispar...


SHAILA-tumhe in mitti ke kano me apne khoon ka ek katra milana hai phir in kano ko gol shape dekar ek polithin paper me wrap karke rakh dena hai..

RAAZ se milkar uske drink me tumhe in kano ko daal dena hai..

ye kan us drink me puri tarah dissolve ho jaayega..taste me bhi bilkul fark nahi aayega..

kehne ka matlab hai ki RAAZ ko shak nahi hoga..aisa hone ke baad jaise hi RAAZ us drink ko piyega,uske kareeb aadhe se ek ghante ke beech uske senses dull ho jaayenge...

woh ek antoxicating neend me chala jaayega..us waqt woh kisi naa kisi tarike se apne aap tumse juda RAAZ disclose karega.

tumhe bas woh tarika samajhna hai..aisa kar liya toh tumhe tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil jaayenge...


SHAILA ki baat sun bohot khush ho gayi MAHI..usne un mitti ke kano ko SHAILA se liya aur sambhal kar apne paas rakh liya..


MAHI-thanks SOVES...


ye bol MAHI apne aap aage badhi aur SHAILA ke gale lag gayi aur aisa hone par SHAILA bhi kaafi emotional ho gayi thi par MAHI ke alag hone se pehle hi usne khudko normal kar liya tha...

khair,kuch der baad jab SHAILA se alag hui MAHI toh..


MAHI-mai aaj hi try karungi RAAZ se sach nikalwane ki...

SHAILA-sambhalke...he is very sharp...

MAHI-jaanti hun..par hum bhi kam nahi..


pure confidence se kahi ye baat MAHI ne aur phir uthkar bahar nikal gayi aur uske jaate hi..


SHAILA-tum wakayi kisise kam nahi ho MAHI..bas sahi waqt aane ki der hai...uske baad jitni hi ye kahani RAAZ aur VIDEOUS ki hai,utni tumhari bhi hogi,infact un dono se zyada tumhari hogi ye kahani,ye ATTITUDE...





PLACE-RAAZ ABODE



KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK....



RAAZ KO DEKHNA HAI..!!!TU BHI NAA MAHI,RAAZ KO TERE DEKHNE KE CHAKKAR ME KAHIN WOH HAMARE GAAL NE SEKH DE....


RAAZ ke ABODE ke front door ko knock karte hue kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne...

raat ka waqt hai...

kuch der pehle hi MAHI ALFREEN ke ghar gayi aur usse yahan RAAZ ke ghar jaane ke liye force kiya jispar ALFREEN ne MABEL ko bhi lapet liya aur is tarah woh teeno is waqt RAAZ ke ghar ke main door ke saamne khade the..

khair, ALFREEN ki baat par MAHI kuch kehti ki tabhi door open hua aur darwaza kholne waale shaksh ko dekh MAHI, ALFREEN aur sabse zyada MABEL shocked hui aur..


MABEL-ACCHUTA,tum RAAZ ke ABODE me kya kar rahe ho....???

ACCHUTA-hum toh hamesha yahin pade rehte hain..sawal toh ye hai ki itni raat ko tum teeno yahan kya kar rahi ho...???

ALFREEN-arre in madam ko RAAZ ko dekhne ka man hua aur inhone apne is didaare talab me hume bhi lapet liya..

ACCHUTA-hahaha...sahi hai,sahi hai...aao,andar aao...


ye bol ACCHUTA door se haththe hue andar ki taraf badh gaya aur uske piche teeno girls bhi ho liye...


ALFREEN-waise RAAZ sir ka mood toh sahi hai naa...!!!

ACCHUTA-arre first class..aur waise bhi,tere saath bhi toh woh hamesha cool hi rehta hai..

infact sabse zyada woh tujhe hi chhedta rehta hai..

MABEL-woh sabke saath ache se rehta hai,siway hamari MAHI ke.. pata nahi usse MAHI se kya problem hai...??

MAHI-chhod naa..mujhe toh usse dekhna acha lagta hai naa....


MAHI ki is baat ke khatm hote hote woh sab hall me pahunch chuke the jahan is waqt mai aur SLUNDER baithe kuch baat kar rahe the..

wahin baat karte hue jab meri nazar MAHI par gayi toh mere jabde bheench gaye the par uske saath ALFREEN aur MABEL ko dekh mai shaant hi raha..


ALFREEN-hey guyzzz...kya discussion kar rahe ho tum dono...??aur ek baat bata,jab tum teeno raat ko yahan jam karte ho,toh hume kyun nahi bulate..!!!

aaj bhi hum achanak aa gaye toh hume pata chala warna hume toh pata hi nahi chalta ki tum teeno ki mehfil yahan jamti hai..

MAI-woh kya hai naa ki raat ko teri shakal dekh kar sounga toh sapne bhayanak aayenge..bas isiliye avoid kar deta hun tujhe bulana..


meri baat sun jahan ek taraf ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, MABEL aur MAHI has diye wahi ALFREEN ne ghur kar dekha mujhe aur..


ALFREEN-meri shakal ki baat karne se pehle kabhi apni surat dekhi hai...

MAI-dekhi hai,bohot achi hai.. khubsoorat se khubsoorat ladkiyan marti hai mujhpar...

ALFEEN-achi surat aur teri..!!kahan se...aur mai toh nahi mari tujhpar...

MAI-maine khubsoorat ladkiyan bola..

HAHAHAHA...


zoron se has diye sab meri baat sun aur ALFREEN,woh ghusse se mujhe ghurti hui meri taraf badhi aur mujhe maarne ke liye apna haath ghumaya meri taraf par tabhi....

maine uska woh haath beech me hi pakad liya aur usse kheenchte hue apne hi bean bag me apne side baitha liya aur ek buddy ki tarah uske kandhe par apna haath rakhte hue usse khudse sata liya..

ye sab dekh jahan baaki sab muskura uthe wahin MAHI ne ek thandi saans bhari....

MAHI jaanti thi ki ALFREEN ko mai as a buddy treat karta hun,par taklif usse mere uski taraf nazarandaazi se thi jo mai is waqt bhi kar raha tha..

par aaj ye nazarandaazi uske liye benificial thi..

wahin mere baaju mai baiththe hi..


ALFREEN-arre,teri ELUSORY kahan hai...??? usse kuch drink toh manga...

MAI-ACCHUTA,dekh usse,bol sabke liye drink le aaye..

ACCHUTA-tu tera regular hi piyega naa...!!

MAI-haan..

ALFREEN-regular..kaun sa,wahi KAFFIR COLLINS...yuk...kitna kadwa taste hota hai us drink ka..

pata nahi kaise peeta hai tu usse...

MABEL-haan yaar,mocktail hai par taste cocktail jaisa hai, infact usse bhi bitter...

MAI-it energizes the whole body..par tum jaise ledaron aur sweeth tooth waalon ko samajh nahi aayega...


meri baaton par koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


MAHI-mai wash room se aati hun...


ye bol MAHI ek direction me badh gayi..ab har ABODE ka design ek jaisa hi hota tha, isiliye MAHI ko directions ki zaroorat nahi thi..

par jaate waqt uske face par ek smile thi...

reason...

kul do reasons the....

pehla toh ye ki ABODE me ek general washroom bhi tha jahan se straight raasta kitchen ki taraf jaata tha jahan abhi abhi ACCHUTA ke batane par ELUSORY gaya tha...

dusra..

RAAZ ne MAHI ka kaam khud hi asaan kar diya tha..aur woh aise ki kyunki sirf RAAZ hi tha jo sabse alag drink peene waala tha,toh isiliye uske drink me MAHI ko uske rakht ranjit mitti ke kano ko milana badi baat nahi reh gayi thi..

aur rahi sahi obstacle khud ELUSORY ne door kar di....

aur woh aise ki jab washroom se hote hue MAHI chupke chupke kitchen pahunchi toh usne dekha ki ELUSORY ne RAAZ ka drink alag se banakar rakh diya hai aur filhal woh ek saath baaki sabka drink bana rahi hai aur ye dekh MAHI dabe paanv aage badhti chali gayi aur agle kuch hi seconds me usne us mitti ke churn ko jisme ab uska khoon bhi mixed tha,RAAZ ke drink me mila diya tha aur wapas dabe paanv lout bhi chuki thi...

is baar sach me wash room use kar woh apne friends ke paas pahunch gayi jahan abhi bhi mai lagatar ALFREEN ko tang kiye jaa raha tha jispar woh chidhe jaa rahi thi aur baaki sab hamari nok jhonk enjoy kar rahe the...

khair,kuch der me ELUSORY sabke drinks lekar aa gayi thi jiske baad apni apni choice ke hisaab se sabhi ne apni drinks utha li...

RAAZ ke haathon me uska KAFFIR COLLINS tha jisse dekh MAHI ka dil zoron se dhadak raha tha par usne badi saawdhaani baraththe hue khudko normal rakha hua tha..

MAHI jaanti thi ki uska halka sa bhi alag action ya ravvaiya usse RAAZ ke shak ke ghere me laa khada karega..

woh ye bhi jaanti thi ki RAAZ bhale usse nahi dekh raha tha,par nazar uski har taraf rehti hai aur isiliye woh normal behave karti hui MABEL aur SLUNDER se baat kar rahi thi..

is beech maine apna drink peena shuru kar diya tha aur kuch hi der baad woh drink khatm bhi ho gaya...

kareeb aadhe ghante hum sab gossip me lage rahe par uske baad achanak mere senses dull hone lage...

dikhne me toh mai normal lag raha tha,par dekhne aur samajhne ki shakti meri kam hone lagi...

aur isiliye...


MAI-guyzz..neend aa rahi hai mujhe..mai sone jaa raha hun...


ye bol mai bina kuch sune utha aur sidhe apne bedroom ki taraf badh gaya...

wahin mujhe yun achanak se uthkar jaate dekh..


MABEL-ab ye kya tha..naa good night kiya naa hume darwaaze tak chhoda..

neend aa rahi hai bolkar sidha kat liya...


ALFREEN-arre woh toh aisa hi hai...but guyzz,i think hume bhi chalna chahiye..waise bhi kaafi late ho gaya hai...


ALFREEN ki baat par sabhi sehmat the aur sabhi jaane ko bhi hue par tabhi...


MAHI-guyzz,mai ek baar RAAZ ko dekhkar aa jaaun....!!!


sabhi MAHI ke dil ka haal jaante the,isiliye uski baat sun sab halka sa muskura diya aur..


SLUNDER-jaa dekh le.. par door se hi dekhiyo,paas gayi toh kahin bhadak naa jaaye...


SLUNDER ki baat par smile dete hue MAHI RAAZ ke kamre ki taraf badh gayi aur door par pahunch usne andar dekha jahan is waqt RAAZ ne door ko open hi chhod diya tha aur is waqt bed par leta hua tha..

aankhen uski khuli hui thi par bina palke jhapkaaye woh upar ceiling ki taraf dekh raha tha..

uski condition ko theek se samajhne ke liye MAHI room ke andar gayi aur uske paas pahunch RAAZ ke face ke aage usne apna haath lehraya par jab RAAZ ne koi reaction nahi diya toh woh samajh gayi ki RAAZ behoshi ki haalat me jiske baare me SHAILA ne bataya tha,jaa chuka hai..

khair,kuch pal RAAZ ko ektak dekhne ke baad acahanak se MAHI ki nazar RAAZ ke right hand par padi jisse dekh pehle toh usse ajeeb laga par phir uske mind ki baati jali aur uske face par smile aa gayi..

darasal is waqt RAAZ ke haathon me kuch bhi nahi tha,par phir bhi woh apne haath ko aise ghuma raha tha jaise usne pen pakda hua hai aur kuch likh raha ho aur ye dekh MAHI samajh gayi ki ye wahi TARIKA hai jiske baare me SHAILA ne usse bataya tha jisse usse pata lagana tha aur usne pata laga liya tha..

ab bas result ki,apne liye us RAAZ ko janane ki baari thi jisse RAAZ apne dil ke gehraiyon me dabaye hue tha..

aur isiliye MAHI ne apna haath aage kiya aur..


LEKHANPRATHI

PATRAM


ek ke baad ek so SPELLS bole MAHI ne jiske baad uske haath me ek pen aur ek page aa gaya jiske baad woh aage badhi aur usne woh pen kisi tarah RAAZ ke ungliyon ke beech fasa diya..

aisa kar usne woh page jo uske haathon me tha,usse RAAZ ke haathon me jo pen usne fasaya tha,uski nok ke paas rakh diya aur jab aisa hua toh..

RAAZ jo ab tak khaali haathon se kuch likhe jaa raha tha,woh ab us pen ke through us kagaz me kuch likhta chala gaya aur yunhi likhte likhte kuch der baad RAAZ ke haathon se woh pen neeche gir gaya...

aisa hote dekh MAHI wapas pen uthane ko hui par tabhi uski nazar RAAZ ke haathon par gayi jo ab chal nahi rahi thi,balki shaant ho chuki thi..

ye dekh MAHI samajh gayi ki jo bhi RAAZ,RAAZ ke dil me tha,woh us kaagaz ke through bahar aa chuka hai aur isiliye ab uske haath rook chuke hain..

phir bhi apne pen ko uthaya MAHI ne aur aisa karte hue uska face RAAZ ke chehre ke paas aa gaya jisse dekh halki madhosh ho gayi MAHI..

uske honth khudbakhud RAAZ ke face ki taraf chal pada aur theek uske honthon ke paas aakar rook gaye MAHI ke honth..

kuch seconds RAAZ ke honthon ko dekhne ke baad...


MAHI-dil toh kar raha hai ki in honthon par apne honthon se apna naam hamesha ke liye likh dun,par aisa karna meri sacchi mohobbat ke liye tohmat hogi..

isiliye filhal issi se kaam chala lete hain..


ye bol MAHI aage badhi aur usne RAAZ ke pehle maathe aur phir gaal ko chum liya aur aisa kar woh piche hati aur us page ko apne ABODE me padhne ka soch usse apni jeans ki pocket me daal room se bahar nikal gayi..

wahin kaafi der se MAHI ka wait kar rahe uske saare friends ne jab usse finally aate hue dekha toh..


MABEL-oye tu itni der tak kar kya rahi thi..???

ALFREEN-kahin RAAZ ki izzat toh nahi loot li tune...

MAHI-shut up guyzz..woh toh so chuka tha..ab maine socha,waise toh usse thik se dekh paati hun nahi, isiliye uske paas baith usse dekh rahi thi...

MABEL-waah..itni der didaar-e-saajan me hi nikaal diya..sahi hai...

ab chalen,yaa aur dekhna hai usse..

MAHI-dekh toh mai usse saadi zindagi lun..par filhal chalte hain..

ALFREEN-meherbaani ma'am...ab toh mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai..


yunhi ek dusre se baat karte hue woh sab RAAZ ke ghar se nikal pade..

MAHI toh andar hi andar us page me likhi baaton ko padhne ke liye kuch zyada hi excited thi is baat we anjaan ki SHAILA ne usse sach hi kaha tha ki kuch baatein sahi waqt par hi pata chale toh thik rehta hai..

apni curiousity me us waqt ko nazdeek le aayi thi MAHI...

khair, kuch hi der me apne ABODE me thi MAHI jiske baad woh jaldi se apne room me gayi aur apne bed par baiththe hue usne turant apne pocket se woh page nikala aur usse unfold kar padhne lagi..

kuch lines likhi thi us page par RAAZ ne jisse jaise jaise MAHI padhti gayi, uski aankhen badi hoti gayi aur jab usne aakhri line padhi toh woh paper uske haathon se chhut gaya...

haath kaamp rahe the uske,aankhen pathra gayi thi,dimag blank ho chuka tha par us blank brain me bhi us paper par likhi woh baat,woh reason jiski wajah se RAAZ uske saath berukhi se behave karta tha,woh gunj raha tha....

woh baat,woh RAAZ jo MAHI ke rakht ranjit churn ne RAAZ se likhwaya tha,jisse padh MAHI ek jeeti jaagti booth me tabdil ho gayi thi,woh kuch yun tha......




jitna ho sakega,MAHI ke andar khudke liye NAFRAT BHAREGA.....

usse khudse door karne ke liye ye ladka kuch bhi KAREGA.....

aakhir kaise sahegi MAHI is safar ke anjaam ko jaan,

kyunki kuch bhi ho jaaye,ye tay hai ki is kahani me, RAAZ ZAROOR MAREGA.....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......
















AAPKA APNA V....J....
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𝐁𝐡𝐚𝐢 𝐡𝐚𝐦𝐫𝐢 𝐛𝐢 𝐤𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐟𝐞𝐞𝐥𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐣𝐮𝐝𝐢 𝐡𝐮𝐰𝐢 𝐡𝐞 𝐢𝐬 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐤𝐞 𝐬𝐚𝐭𝐡

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that's why raaz hates mahi....ab dekhna ye h ki mahi is pr kese react krti h kya wo ab bhi phle ki trh raaz se pyar krti rahegi....nd bro raaz ki mout agr hogi to kya videous jeet jayega ......ya phir koi esa tarika mahi dundh legi jisse raaz ki jaan bachayi ja ske.....phir isme phallon ka kya seen rahega raaz k sath....or kya acchuta slundar browny nd alfreen last tk raaz k sath rahenge ya phir conflict aa jayega....jese AL ki sense se dekha dream kya such hoga.....or videous kya acchuta slunder ko raaz ke against kr dega.....or us jadi-buti wali heroin ka kya seen rahega is sb m .........overall secrets open ho rhe h or nye secrets create ho rhe h.....let's see what happend in next.....it's an awesome update bro.......
 

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𝐛𝐡𝐚𝐥𝐞 𝐤𝐨𝐢 𝐛𝐢 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐦𝐞 𝐦𝐚𝐫 𝐣𝐚𝐲𝐞 𝐲𝐚 𝐥𝐮𝐝𝐚𝐤 𝐣𝐚𝐲𝐞
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𝐁𝐡𝐚𝐢 𝐡𝐚𝐦𝐫𝐢 𝐛𝐢 𝐤𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐟𝐞𝐞𝐥𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐣𝐮𝐝𝐢 𝐡𝐮𝐰𝐢 𝐡𝐞 𝐢𝐬 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐤𝐞 𝐬𝐚𝐭𝐡

❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎
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hahaha..

IRON MAN..avengers me best kirdaar tha mera..kab woh endgame me mara toh bura laga tha mujhe nut saath hi stort ke hisaab se uska marna worthy tha...

kahani bhi life ki tarah hai mere bhai..isme har chiz hamare pasand ki ho,aisa ho nahi sakta..

anyways,brother,story ki script pehle hi sochi jaa chuki hai..usme change nahi kar sakta..

aur agar aapko yaad ho toh maine bohot pehle hi kaha tha is kahani me bohot log marenge.. shuruat bohot jald hone waala hai...

aur rahi baat aaj ke khulase ki toh agar RAAZ ne khud apna bhavishya bataya hai toh iska matlab hai ki aisa hokar hi rahega...

focus kahani par rakhiye brother, kirdaaron se rakhenge toh taklif zaroor hogi..ye baat bhi pehle hi kahi thi maine..

anyways,bohot maza aane waala hai..saath bane rahiye..
 

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𝐛𝐡𝐚𝐥𝐞 𝐤𝐨𝐢 𝐛𝐢 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐦𝐞 𝐦𝐚𝐫 𝐣𝐚𝐲𝐞 𝐲𝐚 𝐥𝐮𝐝𝐚𝐤 𝐣𝐚𝐲𝐞
𝐁𝐡𝐚𝐢 𝐌𝐀𝐇𝐈 𝐨𝐫 𝐑𝐀𝐀𝐙 𝐤𝐢 𝐣𝐢𝐧𝐝𝐚 𝐫𝐚𝐤𝐡𝐧𝐚 𝐛𝐡𝐚𝐢

𝐁𝐡𝐚𝐢 𝐡𝐚𝐦𝐫𝐢 𝐛𝐢 𝐤𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐟𝐞𝐞𝐥𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐣𝐮𝐝𝐢 𝐡𝐮𝐰𝐢 𝐡𝐞 𝐢𝐬 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐤𝐞 𝐬𝐚𝐭𝐡

❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎❦︎
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hahaha..

IRON MAN..avengers me best kirdaar tha mera..kab woh endgame me mara toh bura laga tha mujhe nut saath hi stort ke hisaab se uska marna worthy tha...

kahani bhi life ki tarah hai mere bhai..isme har chiz hamare pasand ki ho,aisa ho nahi sakta..

anyways,brother,story ki script pehle hi sochi jaa chuki hai..usme change nahi kar sakta..

aur agar aapko yaad ho toh maine bohot pehle hi kaha tha is kahani me bohot log marenge.. shuruat bohot jald hone waala hai...

aur rahi baat aaj ke khulase ki toh agar RAAZ ne khud apna bhavishya bataya hai toh iska matlab hai ki aisa hokar hi rahega...

focus kahani par rakhiye brother, kirdaaron se rakhenge toh taklif zaroor hogi..ye baat bhi pehle hi kahi thi maine..

anyways,bohot maza aane waala hai..saath bane rahiye..
VJ bhai jb itne log marne hi wale h to ye bhi bta do ki is kahani ka wo ahm kirdar konsa h jo lst tk bacha rahega ... like hero type....or kya hero ko heroine bhi milegi ya ese hi uska ant ho jayega.........
 
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