Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update
Lagbhag ab phase 2 samapt honewala hai aur sab jald hi phase 3 me jayenge . Par kafi chijhe badal gayi . Jaha pahse 1 me jo top pe the wo es baar na rahe aur unki jagah phase 1 looser savets ne le li . Mahi jo khash charecter hai Raaz auf Videous ke baad usme phase me ummid ke mutabik improvement nahi hua ab dekhte hai hai phase 3 me kya hoga ?
Raaz aur Videous ke beech Tom & Jerry ka khel chal raha hai . Achuta aur mabel ka rishta ab aage badh sakta hai aisa lag raha hai . Ye naya charecter shyad Videous ka hi aadmi hai jo Videous ke choosen me hone ke karan uski jimmedari nibha raha hai shayad .
Waiting for next update

thanks for the review brother...saath bane rahiye

 

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Achhuta the deewana...aaj to gaana gaayega achhuta...deewane hm deewane... mabel ke hm deewane

Mja aagya to videous ka raaz ke friends ko andr se todne ka kaam shuru ho chuka h...aur usne apne devotees ko bhi yhi order paas kiye honge ki issi trha ke vighan daalte rho taki raaz uljha rhe...waise ab ye GAFFER kon aa gya... Kahin videous bhi to iss game me mohra to nhi bn jaayega ho bhi skta h ...VJ bhai ke hote hue sab kuchh sambhav h... chliye dekhte h ki devotees ko kya order mile h next aur achhuta mabel ko kaise paayega..wahi raaz kaise aur kb mahi ki help krega kyuki abhi to wo nhi chahta hoga ki abhi mahi ke baare me videous agr pura sach nhi janta h to abhi aur nahi jaan paaye...wahi mabel se nhi raaz ko kuchh hasil krna h to dekhte h usme bhi kitna waqt lgega ..
Over all pyaar ke badal baras rhe h aaj kal chosens me ..
Mst update...waiting for next brother

thanks for appreciating brother...yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

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Superb update bhai....

Badhiya update bhai ji bahut bada game tha lekin sab bach gaye prem kahani bhi chal rahi kewal mahi udash hai uski bhi kuch soncho mahi raaz ke baad sabse powerful thi teem me lekin abhi lagta sabse piche hai wo

Very nice fantastic update waiting for next update

kya baat hai londa (ACHHUTA) to chha gaya pura
ye side hero heroine logon ki love story dekhne me bhi ek alag maza rehta hai
khaas karke love story jab triangular ho to excitement aur bhi badh jati hai
Ab dekhna ye hai ki MABEL ka dil bhi ACHHUTA ke liye kab dhadakta hai
waiting for next update vj bhai

vese MEBEL ke sath sath ALFREEN ko bhi aramse save karsakta tha humara superhero ACHHUTA
fir bhi hamare RAAZ bhai kud gaye AL ko bachane
samajh sakte bhai thoda Heropanti dikhana bhi mangta hai
kya karen, sabko ati nehi aur RAAZ ki jati nehi

Awesome update bro
Kya Shayari likhi hai mja aa gya

Fabulous mind blowing update bhai

VJ bhai saayar kamal ke ho aap.....matlab on the spot kavitayein likh dali hai aapne...waah bhai waah

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Fantastic update bhai

Super Diwali dhamaaka Bhai aaj to aapne imagination ke level ko aur uper utha Diya Bhai Superb update

Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai


आप व आपके परिवार को सुख,समृद्धि,खुशहाली की मंगलकामनाओं के साथ दीपावली की ढेरों बधाइयाँ व शुभकामनाएं..!!

Super duper diwali dhamakedar update

Aaj to Sab dialogue pe dialogue maar rahe hai.
Kya baat
Kya baat
kya baat

lazwab bro
ekdm mind blowing or aapka logic uske to kya khne
sochte kuch or h or hota kuch or h....
acchuta or mabel ki love story ka kya anzam hota h or raz kb apni devilgiri kb dikhata h iska wait rahega bro

Super update hai bhai

Awesome update bro

Happy diwali

Awesome update bro

Nice update

hm hmmm romace haan....


you noughty boy

dhanshu update hai bhai
acchuta toh chha gaya bhai

Awesome fabulous update
Keep posting

fantastic update bhai maza aa gya

Great bro
Vidous ne Acchuta ko jlaane aur Valdis ko uncha dilaane k liye ye sb kiya
Lekin hua iska ulta
Khair
Gaffer aur ACCHUTA ki nili aakho ka raaz kya h
WAITING to be revealed

बहुत ही रोमांचक और जबरदस्त अपडेट है मित्र,

excellent update bhai maza aa gya

ROMANCH SA BHAR GYA YE UPDATE PADH KE KHUSI SE OT PROT HO GYE SIR HUM TO
HAR PEHLU DIKHANE KI APKI AOCH SACH MEIN LAJAWAB HAI SIR JI.

BHOT HI SHAANDAAR ISHQ SE BHARPOOR UPDATE

MAST BOLETO

Raaz ke sath reh kar dono ko hi apane samane wale ki bolti bandh karne ki kala aa gayi hain aur valdis kuchh jyada hi bol raha hain lesson de do thoda
Waiting for new updates

Superb Mindblowing Fabulous update.........
keep posting Vj bhai............
waiting for next update...........

Zabardast update

Awesome Mindblowing fantastic update

thanks brothers...be along

 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF TEENO DEVOTEES APNE UNKNOWN GAFFER SE ORDER LETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF REAL DECEPTION TASK ME ACCHUTA MABEL KO GIRNE SE BACHATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-111



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS


THE GREAT HALL






STELLARS, GROOMERS...


AAP SAB SOCH RAHE HONGE KI AAJ AAPKO APNE APNE CATAGORIES KE ACCORDING RESPECTIVE CLASSES JAANE KE BAJAYE YAHAN THE GREAT HALL ME KYUN ASSEMBLE KIYA GAYA HAI...???

TOH ISKA REASON HAI KI AAJ AAP DONO HI CATAGORIES KE CLASS NAHI LAGENGE PAR HAAN,AAP SABKO SAATH ME EK TASK ZAROOR KARNA HAI....


EDWINA ki is baat par jahan ek taraf uske baaju me khade dono hi catagories ke saare WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS muskura uthe wahin uske ulat saare SAVENTS chehre par sawal liye EDWINA ki taraf dekhne lage jispar...


EDWINA-saath task karne ka reason aapko task batane par apne aap pata chal jaayega..

waise task behadh simple hai jisse aap sabhi execute karne par bas kuch hi palon me successfully complete bhi kar lenge...


EDWINA ki is baat ke baad HIDA ne apna haath aage ki taraf lehraya aur uske aisa karte hi un sabke aur SAVENTS ke beech ek bada sa SMOKE pragat hua..


par ye smoke thoda alag tarah ka tha..aur woh aise ki ye smoke do hisso me bata hua tha aur uske beech ka bhaag khaali tha...

chehre par ab bhi sawal liye saare SAVENTS us ajeebogarib SMOKE ko jiske dono bhaag halka halka lehra rahe the,dekh rahe the jispar...


HIDA-ye ek DUAD hai...ek couple maker....

PROM GALA..ye naam toh suna hi hoga aapne... pichle 25 thousand years se ye delightful event CHOSENS ki pratha rahi hai...

ye DUAD ussi PROM GALA ka trigger point hai...


PROM GALA ka naam sunkar SAVENTS ke face par dikh rahe question waale expressions jaise gayab hi ho gaye the aur ab wahan khushi dikhne lagi thi..

LIBRARY me THE TRADITION naam ki book me sabhi is event ke baare me padh chuke the aur isiliye hi un sake face par khushi dikh rahi thi...

PROM GALA...ek bohot hi khubsoorat shaam ki gawahi hai ye naam..

is GALA me saare SAVENTS apne apne chosen couple ke saath is event me participate karte hain aur phir kisi ek bande aur bandi ko MR & MRS CHOSENS ke khitab se nawaza jaata hai...

khair,PROM GALA ka naam lene ke baad HIDA ki baat ko aage badhate hue...


REGIS-PROM GALA me har SAVENT ko apne pair ke saath aana padta hai..bina is qualification ke koi bhi SAVENT MR aur MRS CHOSENS ke khitab ko nahi paa sakta..

aur jo DUAD aap sab apne saamne dekh rahe hain,ye aapko apne PROM GALA ke partner ko talashne me madad karta hai...

aur yahi process aaj aap sabka task bhi hai....kaise,ye apko SAPIUS batayenge....

SAPIUS-aaj se thik 1 mahine baad is session ka PROM GALA HAI...

PROM GALA me aane ke do tarike hain hain..pehla tarika hai ki aap khud apne partner ko approch karen aur uski sehmati milne ke baad as partners us event me shirkat len..

aur dusra tarike is DUAD ke through hai...toh karna ye hai ki GIRLS,BOYS...gender wise aap sab is DUAD ke dono taraf khade honge
aur ek ek kar iske paas aakar apni taraf ke smoke ke beech haath rakhenge...

aisa kar aapko man hi man SAMPURN SNEHAM joki aapka LOVE REFINER hai,usse uccharit karna hain....

aapke aisa karte hi aapke taraf ka smoke compatibility ke according aapke liye partner chunega aur is DUAD ke beech ke khaali bhaag me match ke hisaab se aapke aur aapke match ka naam prakat hoga..

GOT IT....


SAPIUS ki baat sun double excitement bhar uthi thi saare SAVENTS me...

aur reason bhi obvious tha..baat ye thi ki CHOSENS ki padhayi,yahan ke task itne tough hote hain ki SAVENTS ka pura concentration har waqt ussi par focused rehta hai..

aisa nahi hai ki SAVENTS hain toh attraction ka ganit yahan kaam nahi karta..

attraction toh in sabko bhi hota hai par waqt ki kami aur task ke level itne hard hote hain ki love game khelne ka waqt hi nahi milta kisiko..

toh aise me khudke dum par partners ready karna PROM GALA ke liye in sabke liye EXERTION challenge se kam badi baat nahi thi jisse unke saamne dikh rahe DUAD task ne asaan kar diya tha..

wahin sabke beech ek aisa banda bhi tha jo is DUAD ke through partner dhundne waale task se khush nahi tha aur woh tha VALDIS...

usse is baat ka andaza tha ki agar usne aur MABEL ne DUAD par haath rakha toh iske chances bohot kam hain ki woh aur MABEL partners select hon..

par dusri taraf SAPIUS ke bataye first option ko sun jisme apne partners khud se chunane ki baat batayi gayi thi,usse jaan woh khush bhi tha..

is beech usne ye bhi gour kiya ki ACCHUTA ki nazar MABEL par hi tiki hui hai aur uske baaju me khada SLUNDER usse kuch bol raha hai aur uske batane ke haav bhaav ko dekh VALDIS ko laga ki zaroor SLUNDER ACCHUTA se MABEL ko GALA partner ke liye puchne ke liye motivate kar raha hai ..

waise toh VALDIS ko pata tha ki MABEL ACCHUTA jaise below average look waale bande me kabhi bhi interest nahi legi par woh ye bhi jaanta tha ki prom gala me jaane ke liye pyar aur attraction hone ki zaroorat nahi hai..

ACCHUTA ke puchne par ek friend ke haisiyat se bhi MABEL usse haan keh sakti hai aur issi baat se woh halka nervous bhi dikhne laga tha...

wahin ACCHUTA ki taraf chalen toh SLUNDER wakayi me usse MABEL ko approch karne ke liye motivate kar raha tha jisse sun ACCHUTA ne bhi decide kar liye tha ki woh abhi hi jab saare WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS disperse honge,toh MABEL ko approch karega...

khair,yahan alag alag speculations aur mathematics chal rahe the aur wahan SAPIUS ki baat ko aage badhate hue yaa phir ye kahun ki saari baaton ko khatm karte hue...


HIDA-toh boys and girls...DUAD ke is task ko pura karne ke liye aaj ka pura din hai aap sabke paas...

pura din isiliye taaki is pure din ke beech jo bhi apne wish ke according apna partner chunana chahta hai toh woh ye kar sake.

aur baaki sab is DUAD par haath rakh jaise bataya gaya hai,us procedure ko follow karte hue partner choosing ke liye apni compatibility submit kar sakte hain...

all the best...


jahan HIDA ki baat ke baad sabhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ek ek kar THE GREAT HALL se bahar ki taraf nikal gaye wahin unke jaane ke baad woh sabhi bande aur bandiyan jo DUAD ke through hi apna partner chunana chaahte the,woh line bana ek ek kar DUAD ke paas aakar apna haath us DUAD se touch kar SAMPURN SNEHAM spell ko man hi man uccharit karne lage...

wahin is dauran jahan ek taraf mai ek kona pakadkar baith gaya tha wahin dusri taraf MAHI ki nazar mujhpar hi thi...

woh mujhe apna partner banane ke liye approch karna chahti thi par ek baat thi,jiski wajah se woh aisa nahi kar rahi thi..

ab woh baat kya thi,woh issi scene me clear ho jaana hai...

khair,jab saare ladke aur ladkiyon alag alag line form kar DUAD ke paas aa rahe the,tab ACCHUTA ne khudko MABEL ke paas jaane ke liye taiyar kar liya tha aur halke nervousness ke saath woh uski taraf badh bhi gaya aur MABEL ke kareeb pahunch joki MAHI aur ALFREEN ke saath hi khadi thi,jaise hi ACCHUTA uska naam pukarne ko hua ki tabhi...


MABEL....

ye naam ACCHUTA ne nahi balki VALDIS ne pukara tha jisse sun aur situation dekh ACCHUTA ka dil dhak karkar hi reh gaya...

reason...

is waqt VALDIS MABEL ke saamne khada nahi,balki apne ghutno par baitha hua tha jisse halki sharm aur dher saari khushi ke saath dekh rahi thi MABEL...

khair,abhi toh bas ACCHUTA ka dil dhak hua tha,tootna toh abhi baaki tha..


VALDIS-MABEL..will you be my PARTNER.. sirf PROM GALA ke liye nahi,balki puri zindagi ke liye...

I LOVE YOU MABEL...


apna haath uski taraf badhate hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jisse dekh aur uski baat ko sun ek saath bohot se reactions hue..

jahan ek taraf DUAD ke paas jaa rahe saare SAVENTS ek dum se rook gaye aur VALDIS ki taraf dekhne lage,dusri taraf MABEL ke baaju me khade MAHI aur ALFREEN thode shocked ho gaye,teesri taraf SLUNDER ko bura lag raha tha,chowthi taraf mujhe ye sab pakaau lag raha tha,wahin paanchwi taraf ACCHUTA ka dil aadha toot gaya tha aur aage jo hua,usse baaki ka bacha dil bhi toot gaya...


MABEL-I LOVE YOU TOO VALDIS....


VALDIS ke haath ko thaamte hue usse khada kar kahi ye baat MABEL ne jisse sun jispar saare SAVENTS clapping aur hooting karne lage aur VALDIS,woh toh khushi se bhar utha aur jhat se aage badhte hue usne MABEL ko hug kar liya...

par jahan VALDIS ki baahon me sama MABEL ko roohani sukoon mil raha tha wahin dusri taraf VALDIS bas uske jism ko feel karta hua ACCHUTA ko,jo MABEL ke piche hi khada tha aur jiski is waqt aankhen bhar aayi thi,usse ek devil smile dete hue dekhne laga..

smile ke saath uske ACCHUTA ko dekh apni aankhen wink kar di jisse SLUNDER ne bhi dekh liye aur ghusse se bhar woh VALDIS ki bajane aage badha par jaise hi woh ACCHUTA ko cross karne laga toh ACCHUTA ne uska haath pakad apna sir naa me hilaya...

is waqt saare SAVENTS joki line formation me khade the,woh MABEL aur VALDIS ke paas pahunch un dono ko congratulate kar rahe the aur ye sab dekh ACCHUTA wapas ghuma aur apne rooke hue aansuon ko jhalkaate hue the GREAT HALL se bahar nikal gaya aur uske saath hi SLUNDER bhi bahar chala gaya tha...

wahin mai jo apni jagah par shaant baitha hua tha ki tabhi mere kaano par padi woh awaaz jisse mai expect hi kar raha tha...


EK TARAF CELEBRATION,DUSRI TARAF MAATAM....

KISI TARAF TOH SHAAMIL HO JAA, AAKHIR DONO HI GROUPS TERE JIGRI DOSTON KE HAIN....


mere paas aakar khade hote hue VIDEOUS ne ek baar saamne MABEL and group aur dusri taraf HALL se bahar jaate ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki taraf dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat jispar mai muskura bhar diya..

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


VIDEOUS-waise HUMAN toh hun nahi mai par maine jaana hai ki HUMANS ka dil tootna mout se zyada dardnaak hota hai unke liye..

aur is tark ke hisaab se toh tujhe ACCHUTA ke paas jaana chahiye..

bechara,VALDIS ke haathon jeete jee mar gaya aaj....

MAI-sahi kaha tune..kyunki tu HUMAN nahi hai, isiliye tune sirf jaana hai,human hota toh jaanane ki jagah samajhta ki

"ishq ki baazi jisse bhi KHELNI HAI,mohobbat se pehle dard bhi milega,jo usse JHELNI HAI..."


aur ACCHUTA ki fikr mat kar tu,

"uske aanuson se zyada garam uska RAKHT hai...

taklif me beshak hai,par tutega nahi,lounda apna SAKHT hai...


ye bol mai bhi apni jagah se utha aur hall ke bahar chal pada....

wahin dusri taraf MABEL aur VALDIS ki khushi me khush hone ke baad jahan ek taraf baaki saare SAVENTS wapas DUAD ki taraf chal pade, VALDIS bhi apne friends ke saath ek taraf khada hokar baat karne laga wahin MAHI aur ALFREEN ki nazar har taraf daudne lagi jisse MABEL ne bhi dekh liya aur..


MABEL-tum dono kisse dhund rahe ho..??

ALFREEN/MAHI-RAAZ ko....


ek saath nikla RAAZ ka naam un dono ke mooh se jisse sun jahan ek taraf ALFREEN shock hote hue MAHI ki taraf dekhne lagi,dusri taraf MAHI jisne flow flow me RAAZ naam le liya tha,uske face par halka dar dikhne laga wahin teesri taraf MABEL ne apne sir par haath maar liya..

khair, MABEL aur MAHI toh chup hi rahe par ALFREEN,jiske face par abhi tak shocking expressions hi the,uske labh hile aur...


ALFREEN-tu kyun RAAZ ko dhund rahi hai...???

MABEL-jis liye tu dhund rahi hai..

ALFREEN-mai toh usse prom gala me partner banane ke liye puchungi, isiliye dhund rahi hun...

MABEL-aur MAHI bhi...


MABEL ki baat par ALFREEN kuch react karti ki tabhi..


MAHI-i am sorry ALFREEN.. mujhe RAAZ ka naam nahi lena chahiye tha...aur tu fikr mat kar,naa mai usse gala me jaane ke liye puchungi aur naahi tum dono ke beech aaungi...

ALFREEN-hum dono ke beech nahi aaungi matlab..!!!hang on a sec, tujhe aisa toh nahi lagta ki i like RAAZ...???

MAHI-dont u...???

ALFREEN-no...hell no..i mean i do,but just as a good friend..like buddies...

koi pyar yaa attraction waali feeling nahi hai,but ek minute...do you have feelings for RAAZ...!!!

MABEL-tujhe pata nahi hai..jaise ye RAAZ ki taraf dekhti hai naa,iska bas chale toh apne aankhon ke through hi usse hamesha ke liye kaid kar le...

ALFREEN-really,phir tu wait kiska kar rahi hai...!!you should propose him naa..!!

agar tu uske pehel karne ka wait kar rahi hai,toh bhul jaa..woh khadus kuch nahi bolega..


ALFREEN ki baat sun aur ye jaan ki uske man me RAAZ ke liye feelings nahi hai,MAHI bohot khush ho gayi thi..

usne toh ab tak bas isiliye hi khudko rok kar rakha tha kyunki usse lagta tha ki ALFREEN ke man me RAAZ ke liye feelings hain aur woh apni best friend ko hurt nahi karna chahti thi par aisa kuch nahi tha,ye jaankar uski khushi ka thikana naa raha..

usne kas kar ALFREEN ko hug kiya hua tha.. ALFREEN bhi MAHI ki khushi ka reason samajh rahi thi aur isiliye usne bhi apni friend ko hug kiya par phir jab woh dono alag hue toh..


MABEL-MAHI,ab toh line clear hai tera..jaa,aur jaldi se RAAZ ko propose kar de...

MAHI-aise kaise yaar..aur mujhe toh ye bhi nahi pata ki uske man me mere liye koi feeling hai bhi yaa nahi...

har waqt toh straight face hi rakhta hai woh,kuch hint hi nahi deta..

ALFREEN-haan toh propose mat kar par kamsekam GALA ke liye toh puch usse...

MABEL-haan yaar,iske liye delay mat kar...waise bhi tere RAAZ ke piche aadhe se zyada CHOSENS ki ladkiyan padi hui hain..

PHASE 3 ki bandiyan bhi usse dekhne ke liye idhar hamare PHASE me chakkar lagate rehti hain..

aur uske upar woh MORANA...saali jab dekho, RAAZ se chipki rehti hai...

ALFREEN-haan aur pata nahi woh duffer RAAZ bhi usse kyun jhelta hai..??mujhe toh usse dekhte hi ulti aati hai...

MAHI-maybe RAAZ likes her...

ALFREEN-aisa..!!fir toh equation easy ho gaya naa.tu bhul jaa RAAZ ko...

MAHI-never...


achanak halke zor se kahi ye baat MAHI ne aur phir bina ruke,woh bhi hall se bahar jaane lagi aur uske desperation ko dekh muskurate hue uske piche ALFREEN aur MABEL bhi ho liye...





OUT SIDE THE GREAT HALL...




NAHI YAAR...JO HUA ACHA HI HUA..WAISE BHI,.MAI KAHAN ZE MABEL KE LAAYAK HUN..

SHAKAL DEKH MERI...MUJHSE TOH KOI AVERAGE BANDI NAA PATE,PHIR MABEL TOH ANGEL HAI YAAR....

BHALE HI STRONG HUN MAI PAR MABEL KE BAAJU ME USKA SAATHI,USKA PYAR BANKAR KHADE REHNE KE LAAYAK NAHI HUN MAI...


kaafi der tak aansu bahate hue man hi man tadapte rehne ke baad kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar SLUNDER kuch kehte ki tabhi...


REAL DECEPTION TASK KE BAAD KHUDME KUCH FARK FEEL NAHI KIYA TUNE...!!!!


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke piche se aayi ye awaaz joki meri thi jisse sun ACCHUTA ne jhat se apne aansu poche aur SLUNDER ke saath piche jahan mai khada tha,palat gaya aur..


ACCHUTA-fark matlab...!!!

MAI-apni aankhon par gour nahi kiya tune...

ACCHUTA-haan,colour change hua hai meri aankhon ka..

SLUNDER-abbe sirf colour hi change nahi hua,balki pehle jahan teri dono aankhen left right thi,wahin ab sahi ho gayi hai...

MAI-50 percent tak apne GOD GIFT power ko trigger karne ke baad tum sabki woh trigger growth bohot zyada kam ho gayi thi...

par REAL DECEPTION task me MABEL ko saath jo hua,usse tera adrenaline rush bohot badh gaya jisse anjaane me hi sahi,par tere GOD GIFT power ka 10 percent ek saath trigger ho gaya aur teri aankhon me aaya change ussi wajah se hua hai....

tere aur SLUNDER tere bhi us power ki ek khaasiyat ye bhi hai ki 50 percent power tak pahunchne ke baad jaise jaise tumhare powers aur aage trigger honge,waise waise tum dono ke face aur body me changes aane lagenge...

aur 75 percent power trigger hote hi tum dono ke face aur body ka pura geography change ho jaayega....

saare face aur body features behadh sharp ho jaayenge tum dono ke...

bottom line,in future,MABEL teri hogi ACCHUTA...


itne der se jo maayusi aur dard ACCHUTA ke face par dikh rahi thi,mere is naye revelation ko sun woh sab jaise gayab hi ho gaya tha...

woh jhat se meri aur badha aur mere gale lag gaya jispar kuch der baad maine usse khud se alag kiya aur...


MAI-ab ek sawal mera hai...!!!is it worthy...???

ACCHUTA-matlab....!!!

MAI-"husn ka kya kaam mohobbat me,ishq me rang saawla bhi ho toh yaar kaatil lagta hai"....


ye bol mai rooka nahi aur ek disha ki taraf badh gaya...wahin mujhe jaate dekhte hue ACCHUTA kisi soch me goom hi tha ki tabhi...


HEY GUYZ,WHERES RAAZ...???


MAHI ki awaaz ko sun ACCHUTA apni soch se bahar aaya wahin MAHI ke sawal par...


SLUNDER-just abhi abhi us taraf gaya hai..by the way MABEL,congrats yaar...aaj officially committed ho gayi tum...


MABEL bhi SLUNDER ki friend thi aur isiliye hi usne MABEL ki khushi ke liye usse congrats kiya par man hi man SLUNDER tab hairan hua jab....


ACCHUTA-haan yaar MABEL.. congrats.. hum sabme sabse pehle tu hi committed hui hai...

MABEL-thanks guyz...


thanks toh dono ko hi kaha tha MABEL ne par ACCHUTA ki aankhon me dekhte waqt usse un aankhon me ek sunaapan aur pain dikha jisse dekh uske andar ek ajeeb si feeling aayi jisse woh samajh nahi paayi...

khair, MABEL ki baat sun....


ACCHUTA-waise tum sabne DUAD me apna haath rakh liya yaa MABEL ki tarah khudse hi apna partners chun rahi ho...???

ALFREEN-isiliye hi toh RAAZ ko dhund rahe hain...

ACCHUTA-matlab..!!!

ALFREEN-arre MAHI madam RAAZ se GALA me partner banane ke liye
puchna chahti hain...

ACCHUTA-sirf GALA ke liye..!!!!


ACCHUTA ke is sawal par MAHI chownki jispar ACCHUTA muskuraya aur...


ACCHUTA-i know MAHI,you have feelings for RAAZ...

ALFREEN-hain,tujhe kaise maalum...!!!

ACCHUTA-mohobbat ka izhar zubaan baad me karti hain,aankhen dil ka haal pehle hi bata deti hai...


ek second ke liye MABEL ko dekh wapas MAHI aur ALFREEN ko dekhte hue kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar...


ALFREEN-kamal hai..sab samajh gaye the,bas mai hi nahi samajh paayi...

anyways,tu kaise jaayega GALA me...kisiko puchega yaa phir DUAD option lega...!!!???

ACCHUTA-pehle socha tha puchunga,par ab toh DUAD try karne ka man hai...

ALFREEN-aur tu SLUNDER.???

SLUNDER-socha nahi hai abhi tak...

ALFREEN-great..phir hum dono saath chalte hain,what say...!!!

MABEL-wow,like dates...!!!

ALFREEN-waah, date bankar hi jaaya jaa sakta hai kya..???friends nahi jaa sakte ek saath...!!aur waise bhi,mujhe ye dating shaiting pasand nahi hai...

apan single hi sahi hain..

SLUNDER-kahan thi tu pagli ab tak...tere jaise hi kisiki talash thi mujhe gala me jaane ke liye...

warna toh kahani me agar banda hai aur bandi hai toh sabko lagta hai ki love angle hona must hai...

true,pure friendship ki toh saala koi value hi nahi hai..

ALFREEN-exactly....ye sab faaltu ke pachde hain jisse hum door hi ache... toh phir apna set...

SLUNDER-done...

ACCHUTA-badhiya...tum dono apni friendship nibhao,chalo MAHI hum tumhari love ki gaadi sambhalte hain..


RAAZ ka bharosa nahi,kab institution se gayab ho jaaye,aisa ho,isse pehle usse dhund kar puch lo gala ke liye...

waise bhi,jab WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS gala ke baare me bata rahe the,toh kaafi ladkiyan RAAZ ko hi dekh rahi thi..

isse pehle ki unme se koi chance par dance kar le,tum puch lo usse...

ALFREEN-arre,hum yahan kya karenge..hum bhi saath chalte hain..


ALFREEN ki baat khatm hote hi woh sab jis direction me RAAZ gaya tha,us taraf chal pade par abhi woh sab kuch door hi gaye the ki tabhi unhe ladkiyon ki ek bheed dikhi jisse dekh..


MABEL-yaar,ye toh PHASE 3 ki WICKEDS aur MORALS,dono ki ladkiyan hain naa,ye yahan kya kar rahi hain...??

ALFREEN-arre jo bhi kar rahi hain,hume kya...!!hum RAAZ ko dhundte hain naa...

SLUNDER-i think hume wahan jaana chahiye...pata nahi kyun par mujhe lag raha hai ki RAAZ wahin hai,us bheed ki dusri taraf...


SLUNDER apni baat kehte hue hi us disha ki taraf jahan PHASE 3 ki ladkiyon ka hujum khada tha,badh gaya,aur baaki sab bhi uske piche ho liye...

kareeb 15 ladkiyan circle kiye khadi thi us jagah par aur ek jagah halki khaali thi jahan se dusri taraf ka nazara saaf dekha jaa sakta tha aur jaise hi us point par pahunch SLUNDER aur baaki sabki nazar un ladkiyon ke banaye circle ke andar padi toh un sabki aankhen badi ho gayi..

reason...

MORANA aur RAAZ ek dusre ko hug kiye hue khade the par phir MORANA RAAZ se alag hui aur..


MORANA-mai jaanti thi ki tum mere saath GALA me jaane ke liye mana nahi karoge..I LOVE YOU so much..


ye bol sabke saamne hi ALFREEN ne RAAZ ko uske hontho par halka aa kiss kar liya..

aur ye dekh aansu ke kuch bund chhalak gaye MAHI ke aankhon se..

woh wahan rook nahi paayi aur turant moodte hue ek direction ki taraf chal padi aur baaki sab bhi uske dil ka haal samajhte hue chupchaap uske piche ho liye...

kuch der chalne ke baad ek khaali spot lar jahan koi nahi tha,rooki MAHI aur bin awaaz sunya ko ghurte hue aansu bahati rahi..

wahin kuch der tak usse yunhi akela chhodne ke baad baaki sab uske paas pahunche...

sab ek dusre ko dekh rahe the maano puch rahe hon ki aage kya karen...!!!

aur phir un sabme ALFREEN aage badhi aur usne MAHI ke kandhe par haath rakha jispar MAHI turant palti aur ALFREEN ke gale lag subakne lagi..


kuch der tak ALFREEN ne MAHI ko yunhi rone diya par phir...


ALFREEN-tu fikr mat kar MAHI..mai baat karungi us duffer RAAZ se...uski himmat kaise hui meri friend ko chhod kisi aur ko chunane ki..


ALFREEN ki baat sun usse alag hui
MAHI aur apne aansuon ko poch usne ALFREEN ko dekha aur..


MAHI-pyar me fariyaad zaroor hota hai,par sifarish nahi...jitna sach ye hai ki mai usse pyar karti hun, utna hi sach ye bhi hai ki RAAZ ke man me mere liye koi feelings nahi hai..

aur feelings syllabus ka part nahi jo samjhaya jaaye..ye saans lene jaise natural hai,aa gaya toh aa gaya..

SLUNDER-i think you should forget RAAZ MAHI...bhul jaao usse,tumhare sukoon ke liye acha hoga...

MAHI-bhul jaaun....!!!!jo mujhme mujhse zyada bas gaya hai,usse khudse nikalun kaise,aur bin nikale usse bhul jaaun kaise...!!!

MABEL-par aise me teri taklif badhti chali jaayegi MAHI....just look around,may be RAAZ se better option mil jaaye tujhe...

MAHI-option...!!!!



dard de sakti hun khudko,apne ehsaas ke saath kar sakti DAGABAAZI NAHI...

ek naa mila toh dusra sahi,mai itni bhi PYAASI NAHI....

haan dard hai, par jhel lenge....

aakhir MOHOBBAT ki hai,koi AIYAASHI NAHI....















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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF TEENO DEVOTEES APNE UNKNOWN GAFFER SE ORDER LETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF REAL DECEPTION TASK ME ACCHUTA MABEL KO GIRNE SE BACHATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-111



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS


THE GREAT HALL






STELLARS, GROOMERS...


AAP SAB SOCH RAHE HONGE KI AAJ AAPKO APNE APNE CATAGORIES KE ACCORDING RESPECTIVE CLASSES JAANE KE BAJAYE YAHAN THE GREAT HALL ME KYUN ASSEMBLE KIYA GAYA HAI...???

TOH ISKA REASON HAI KI AAJ AAP DONO HI CATAGORIES KE CLASS NAHI LAGENGE PAR HAAN,AAP SABKO SAATH ME EK TASK ZAROOR KARNA HAI....


EDWINA ki is baat par jahan ek taraf uske baaju me khade dono hi catagories ke saare WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS muskura uthe wahin uske ulat saare SAVENTS chehre par sawal liye EDWINA ki taraf dekhne lage jispar...


EDWINA-saath task karne ka reason aapko task batane par apne aap pata chal jaayega..

waise task behadh simple hai jisse aap sabhi execute karne par bas kuch hi palon me successfully complete bhi kar lenge...


EDWINA ki is baat ke baad HIDA ne apna haath aage ki taraf lehraya aur uske aisa karte hi un sabke aur SAVENTS ke beech ek bada sa SMOKE pragat hua..


par ye smoke thoda alag tarah ka tha..aur woh aise ki ye smoke do hisso me bata hua tha aur uske beech ka bhaag khaali tha...

chehre par ab bhi sawal liye saare SAVENTS us ajeebogarib SMOKE ko jiske dono bhaag halka halka lehra rahe the,dekh rahe the jispar...


HIDA-ye ek DUAD hai...ek couple maker....

PROM GALA..ye naam toh suna hi hoga aapne... pichle 25 thousand years se ye delightful event CHOSENS ki pratha rahi hai...

ye DUAD ussi PROM GALA ka trigger point hai...


PROM GALA ka naam sunkar SAVENTS ke face par dikh rahe question waale expressions jaise gayab hi ho gaye the aur ab wahan khushi dikhne lagi thi..

LIBRARY me THE TRADITION naam ki book me sabhi is event ke baare me padh chuke the aur isiliye hi un sake face par khushi dikh rahi thi...

PROM GALA...ek bohot hi khubsoorat shaam ki gawahi hai ye naam..

is GALA me saare SAVENTS apne apne chosen couple ke saath is event me participate karte hain aur phir kisi ek bande aur bandi ko MR & MRS CHOSENS ke khitab se nawaza jaata hai...

khair,PROM GALA ka naam lene ke baad HIDA ki baat ko aage badhate hue...


REGIS-PROM GALA me har SAVENT ko apne pair ke saath aana padta hai..bina is qualification ke koi bhi SAVENT MR aur MRS CHOSENS ke khitab ko nahi paa sakta..

aur jo DUAD aap sab apne saamne dekh rahe hain,ye aapko apne PROM GALA ke partner ko talashne me madad karta hai...

aur yahi process aaj aap sabka task bhi hai....kaise,ye apko SAPIUS batayenge....

SAPIUS-aaj se thik 1 mahine baad is session ka PROM GALA HAI...

PROM GALA me aane ke do tarike hain hain..pehla tarika hai ki aap khud apne partner ko approch karen aur uski sehmati milne ke baad as partners us event me shirkat len..

aur dusra tarike is DUAD ke through hai...toh karna ye hai ki GIRLS,BOYS...gender wise aap sab is DUAD ke dono taraf khade honge
aur ek ek kar iske paas aakar apni taraf ke smoke ke beech haath rakhenge...

aisa kar aapko man hi man SAMPURN SNEHAM joki aapka LOVE REFINER hai,usse uccharit karna hain....

aapke aisa karte hi aapke taraf ka smoke compatibility ke according aapke liye partner chunega aur is DUAD ke beech ke khaali bhaag me match ke hisaab se aapke aur aapke match ka naam prakat hoga..

GOT IT....


SAPIUS ki baat sun double excitement bhar uthi thi saare SAVENTS me...

aur reason bhi obvious tha..baat ye thi ki CHOSENS ki padhayi,yahan ke task itne tough hote hain ki SAVENTS ka pura concentration har waqt ussi par focused rehta hai..

aisa nahi hai ki SAVENTS hain toh attraction ka ganit yahan kaam nahi karta..

attraction toh in sabko bhi hota hai par waqt ki kami aur task ke level itne hard hote hain ki love game khelne ka waqt hi nahi milta kisiko..

toh aise me khudke dum par partners ready karna PROM GALA ke liye in sabke liye EXERTION challenge se kam badi baat nahi thi jisse unke saamne dikh rahe DUAD task ne asaan kar diya tha..

wahin sabke beech ek aisa banda bhi tha jo is DUAD ke through partner dhundne waale task se khush nahi tha aur woh tha VALDIS...

usse is baat ka andaza tha ki agar usne aur MABEL ne DUAD par haath rakha toh iske chances bohot kam hain ki woh aur MABEL partners select hon..

par dusri taraf SAPIUS ke bataye first option ko sun jisme apne partners khud se chunane ki baat batayi gayi thi,usse jaan woh khush bhi tha..

is beech usne ye bhi gour kiya ki ACCHUTA ki nazar MABEL par hi tiki hui hai aur uske baaju me khada SLUNDER usse kuch bol raha hai aur uske batane ke haav bhaav ko dekh VALDIS ko laga ki zaroor SLUNDER ACCHUTA se MABEL ko GALA partner ke liye puchne ke liye motivate kar raha hai ..

waise toh VALDIS ko pata tha ki MABEL ACCHUTA jaise below average look waale bande me kabhi bhi interest nahi legi par woh ye bhi jaanta tha ki prom gala me jaane ke liye pyar aur attraction hone ki zaroorat nahi hai..

ACCHUTA ke puchne par ek friend ke haisiyat se bhi MABEL usse haan keh sakti hai aur issi baat se woh halka nervous bhi dikhne laga tha...

wahin ACCHUTA ki taraf chalen toh SLUNDER wakayi me usse MABEL ko approch karne ke liye motivate kar raha tha jisse sun ACCHUTA ne bhi decide kar liye tha ki woh abhi hi jab saare WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS disperse honge,toh MABEL ko approch karega...

khair,yahan alag alag speculations aur mathematics chal rahe the aur wahan SAPIUS ki baat ko aage badhate hue yaa phir ye kahun ki saari baaton ko khatm karte hue...


HIDA-toh boys and girls...DUAD ke is task ko pura karne ke liye aaj ka pura din hai aap sabke paas...

pura din isiliye taaki is pure din ke beech jo bhi apne wish ke according apna partner chunana chahta hai toh woh ye kar sake.

aur baaki sab is DUAD par haath rakh jaise bataya gaya hai,us procedure ko follow karte hue partner choosing ke liye apni compatibility submit kar sakte hain...

all the best...


jahan HIDA ki baat ke baad sabhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ek ek kar THE GREAT HALL se bahar ki taraf nikal gaye wahin unke jaane ke baad woh sabhi bande aur bandiyan jo DUAD ke through hi apna partner chunana chaahte the,woh line bana ek ek kar DUAD ke paas aakar apna haath us DUAD se touch kar SAMPURN SNEHAM spell ko man hi man uccharit karne lage...

wahin is dauran jahan ek taraf mai ek kona pakadkar baith gaya tha wahin dusri taraf MAHI ki nazar mujhpar hi thi...

woh mujhe apna partner banane ke liye approch karna chahti thi par ek baat thi,jiski wajah se woh aisa nahi kar rahi thi..

ab woh baat kya thi,woh issi scene me clear ho jaana hai...

khair,jab saare ladke aur ladkiyon alag alag line form kar DUAD ke paas aa rahe the,tab ACCHUTA ne khudko MABEL ke paas jaane ke liye taiyar kar liya tha aur halke nervousness ke saath woh uski taraf badh bhi gaya aur MABEL ke kareeb pahunch joki MAHI aur ALFREEN ke saath hi khadi thi,jaise hi ACCHUTA uska naam pukarne ko hua ki tabhi...


MABEL....

ye naam ACCHUTA ne nahi balki VALDIS ne pukara tha jisse sun aur situation dekh ACCHUTA ka dil dhak karkar hi reh gaya...

reason...

is waqt VALDIS MABEL ke saamne khada nahi,balki apne ghutno par baitha hua tha jisse halki sharm aur dher saari khushi ke saath dekh rahi thi MABEL...

khair,abhi toh bas ACCHUTA ka dil dhak hua tha,tootna toh abhi baaki tha..


VALDIS-MABEL..will you be my PARTNER.. sirf PROM GALA ke liye nahi,balki puri zindagi ke liye...

I LOVE YOU MABEL...


apna haath uski taraf badhate hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jisse dekh aur uski baat ko sun ek saath bohot se reactions hue..

jahan ek taraf DUAD ke paas jaa rahe saare SAVENTS ek dum se rook gaye aur VALDIS ki taraf dekhne lage,dusri taraf MABEL ke baaju me khade MAHI aur ALFREEN thode shocked ho gaye,teesri taraf SLUNDER ko bura lag raha tha,chowthi taraf mujhe ye sab pakaau lag raha tha,wahin paanchwi taraf ACCHUTA ka dil aadha toot gaya tha aur aage jo hua,usse baaki ka bacha dil bhi toot gaya...


MABEL-I LOVE YOU TOO VALDIS....


VALDIS ke haath ko thaamte hue usse khada kar kahi ye baat MABEL ne jisse sun jispar saare SAVENTS clapping aur hooting karne lage aur VALDIS,woh toh khushi se bhar utha aur jhat se aage badhte hue usne MABEL ko hug kar liya...

par jahan VALDIS ki baahon me sama MABEL ko roohani sukoon mil raha tha wahin dusri taraf VALDIS bas uske jism ko feel karta hua ACCHUTA ko,jo MABEL ke piche hi khada tha aur jiski is waqt aankhen bhar aayi thi,usse ek devil smile dete hue dekhne laga..

smile ke saath uske ACCHUTA ko dekh apni aankhen wink kar di jisse SLUNDER ne bhi dekh liye aur ghusse se bhar woh VALDIS ki bajane aage badha par jaise hi woh ACCHUTA ko cross karne laga toh ACCHUTA ne uska haath pakad apna sir naa me hilaya...

is waqt saare SAVENTS joki line formation me khade the,woh MABEL aur VALDIS ke paas pahunch un dono ko congratulate kar rahe the aur ye sab dekh ACCHUTA wapas ghuma aur apne rooke hue aansuon ko jhalkaate hue the GREAT HALL se bahar nikal gaya aur uske saath hi SLUNDER bhi bahar chala gaya tha...

wahin mai jo apni jagah par shaant baitha hua tha ki tabhi mere kaano par padi woh awaaz jisse mai expect hi kar raha tha...


EK TARAF CELEBRATION,DUSRI TARAF MAATAM....

KISI TARAF TOH SHAAMIL HO JAA, AAKHIR DONO HI GROUPS TERE JIGRI DOSTON KE HAIN....


mere paas aakar khade hote hue VIDEOUS ne ek baar saamne MABEL and group aur dusri taraf HALL se bahar jaate ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki taraf dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat jispar mai muskura bhar diya..

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


VIDEOUS-waise HUMAN toh hun nahi mai par maine jaana hai ki HUMANS ka dil tootna mout se zyada dardnaak hota hai unke liye..

aur is tark ke hisaab se toh tujhe ACCHUTA ke paas jaana chahiye..

bechara,VALDIS ke haathon jeete jee mar gaya aaj....

MAI-sahi kaha tune..kyunki tu HUMAN nahi hai, isiliye tune sirf jaana hai,human hota toh jaanane ki jagah samajhta ki

"ishq ki baazi jisse bhi KHELNI HAI,mohobbat se pehle dard bhi milega,jo usse JHELNI HAI..."


aur ACCHUTA ki fikr mat kar tu,

"uske aanuson se zyada garam uska RAKHT hai...

taklif me beshak hai,par tutega nahi,lounda apna SAKHT hai...


ye bol mai bhi apni jagah se utha aur hall ke bahar chal pada....

wahin dusri taraf MABEL aur VALDIS ki khushi me khush hone ke baad jahan ek taraf baaki saare SAVENTS wapas DUAD ki taraf chal pade, VALDIS bhi apne friends ke saath ek taraf khada hokar baat karne laga wahin MAHI aur ALFREEN ki nazar har taraf daudne lagi jisse MABEL ne bhi dekh liya aur..


MABEL-tum dono kisse dhund rahe ho..??

ALFREEN/MAHI-RAAZ ko....


ek saath nikla RAAZ ka naam un dono ke mooh se jisse sun jahan ek taraf ALFREEN shock hote hue MAHI ki taraf dekhne lagi,dusri taraf MAHI jisne flow flow me RAAZ naam le liya tha,uske face par halka dar dikhne laga wahin teesri taraf MABEL ne apne sir par haath maar liya..

khair, MABEL aur MAHI toh chup hi rahe par ALFREEN,jiske face par abhi tak shocking expressions hi the,uske labh hile aur...


ALFREEN-tu kyun RAAZ ko dhund rahi hai...???

MABEL-jis liye tu dhund rahi hai..

ALFREEN-mai toh usse prom gala me partner banane ke liye puchungi, isiliye dhund rahi hun...

MABEL-aur MAHI bhi...


MABEL ki baat par ALFREEN kuch react karti ki tabhi..


MAHI-i am sorry ALFREEN.. mujhe RAAZ ka naam nahi lena chahiye tha...aur tu fikr mat kar,naa mai usse gala me jaane ke liye puchungi aur naahi tum dono ke beech aaungi...

ALFREEN-hum dono ke beech nahi aaungi matlab..!!!hang on a sec, tujhe aisa toh nahi lagta ki i like RAAZ...???

MAHI-dont u...???

ALFREEN-no...hell no..i mean i do,but just as a good friend..like buddies...

koi pyar yaa attraction waali feeling nahi hai,but ek minute...do you have feelings for RAAZ...!!!

MABEL-tujhe pata nahi hai..jaise ye RAAZ ki taraf dekhti hai naa,iska bas chale toh apne aankhon ke through hi usse hamesha ke liye kaid kar le...

ALFREEN-really,phir tu wait kiska kar rahi hai...!!you should propose him naa..!!

agar tu uske pehel karne ka wait kar rahi hai,toh bhul jaa..woh khadus kuch nahi bolega..


ALFREEN ki baat sun aur ye jaan ki uske man me RAAZ ke liye feelings nahi hai,MAHI bohot khush ho gayi thi..

usne toh ab tak bas isiliye hi khudko rok kar rakha tha kyunki usse lagta tha ki ALFREEN ke man me RAAZ ke liye feelings hain aur woh apni best friend ko hurt nahi karna chahti thi par aisa kuch nahi tha,ye jaankar uski khushi ka thikana naa raha..

usne kas kar ALFREEN ko hug kiya hua tha.. ALFREEN bhi MAHI ki khushi ka reason samajh rahi thi aur isiliye usne bhi apni friend ko hug kiya par phir jab woh dono alag hue toh..


MABEL-MAHI,ab toh line clear hai tera..jaa,aur jaldi se RAAZ ko propose kar de...

MAHI-aise kaise yaar..aur mujhe toh ye bhi nahi pata ki uske man me mere liye koi feeling hai bhi yaa nahi...

har waqt toh straight face hi rakhta hai woh,kuch hint hi nahi deta..

ALFREEN-haan toh propose mat kar par kamsekam GALA ke liye toh puch usse...

MABEL-haan yaar,iske liye delay mat kar...waise bhi tere RAAZ ke piche aadhe se zyada CHOSENS ki ladkiyan padi hui hain..

PHASE 3 ki bandiyan bhi usse dekhne ke liye idhar hamare PHASE me chakkar lagate rehti hain..

aur uske upar woh MORANA...saali jab dekho, RAAZ se chipki rehti hai...

ALFREEN-haan aur pata nahi woh duffer RAAZ bhi usse kyun jhelta hai..??mujhe toh usse dekhte hi ulti aati hai...

MAHI-maybe RAAZ likes her...

ALFREEN-aisa..!!fir toh equation easy ho gaya naa.tu bhul jaa RAAZ ko...

MAHI-never...


achanak halke zor se kahi ye baat MAHI ne aur phir bina ruke,woh bhi hall se bahar jaane lagi aur uske desperation ko dekh muskurate hue uske piche ALFREEN aur MABEL bhi ho liye...





OUT SIDE THE GREAT HALL...




NAHI YAAR...JO HUA ACHA HI HUA..WAISE BHI,.MAI KAHAN ZE MABEL KE LAAYAK HUN..

SHAKAL DEKH MERI...MUJHSE TOH KOI AVERAGE BANDI NAA PATE,PHIR MABEL TOH ANGEL HAI YAAR....

BHALE HI STRONG HUN MAI PAR MABEL KE BAAJU ME USKA SAATHI,USKA PYAR BANKAR KHADE REHNE KE LAAYAK NAHI HUN MAI...


kaafi der tak aansu bahate hue man hi man tadapte rehne ke baad kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar SLUNDER kuch kehte ki tabhi...


REAL DECEPTION TASK KE BAAD KHUDME KUCH FARK FEEL NAHI KIYA TUNE...!!!!


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke piche se aayi ye awaaz joki meri thi jisse sun ACCHUTA ne jhat se apne aansu poche aur SLUNDER ke saath piche jahan mai khada tha,palat gaya aur..


ACCHUTA-fark matlab...!!!

MAI-apni aankhon par gour nahi kiya tune...

ACCHUTA-haan,colour change hua hai meri aankhon ka..

SLUNDER-abbe sirf colour hi change nahi hua,balki pehle jahan teri dono aankhen left right thi,wahin ab sahi ho gayi hai...

MAI-50 percent tak apne GOD GIFT power ko trigger karne ke baad tum sabki woh trigger growth bohot zyada kam ho gayi thi...

par REAL DECEPTION task me MABEL ko saath jo hua,usse tera adrenaline rush bohot badh gaya jisse anjaane me hi sahi,par tere GOD GIFT power ka 10 percent ek saath trigger ho gaya aur teri aankhon me aaya change ussi wajah se hua hai....

tere aur SLUNDER tere bhi us power ki ek khaasiyat ye bhi hai ki 50 percent power tak pahunchne ke baad jaise jaise tumhare powers aur aage trigger honge,waise waise tum dono ke face aur body me changes aane lagenge...

aur 75 percent power trigger hote hi tum dono ke face aur body ka pura geography change ho jaayega....

saare face aur body features behadh sharp ho jaayenge tum dono ke...

bottom line,in future,MABEL teri hogi ACCHUTA...


itne der se jo maayusi aur dard ACCHUTA ke face par dikh rahi thi,mere is naye revelation ko sun woh sab jaise gayab hi ho gaya tha...

woh jhat se meri aur badha aur mere gale lag gaya jispar kuch der baad maine usse khud se alag kiya aur...


MAI-ab ek sawal mera hai...!!!is it worthy...???

ACCHUTA-matlab....!!!

MAI-"husn ka kya kaam mohobbat me,ishq me rang saawla bhi ho toh yaar kaatil lagta hai"....


ye bol mai rooka nahi aur ek disha ki taraf badh gaya...wahin mujhe jaate dekhte hue ACCHUTA kisi soch me goom hi tha ki tabhi...


HEY GUYZ,WHERES RAAZ...???


MAHI ki awaaz ko sun ACCHUTA apni soch se bahar aaya wahin MAHI ke sawal par...


SLUNDER-just abhi abhi us taraf gaya hai..by the way MABEL,congrats yaar...aaj officially committed ho gayi tum...


MABEL bhi SLUNDER ki friend thi aur isiliye hi usne MABEL ki khushi ke liye usse congrats kiya par man hi man SLUNDER tab hairan hua jab....


ACCHUTA-haan yaar MABEL.. congrats.. hum sabme sabse pehle tu hi committed hui hai...

MABEL-thanks guyz...


thanks toh dono ko hi kaha tha MABEL ne par ACCHUTA ki aankhon me dekhte waqt usse un aankhon me ek sunaapan aur pain dikha jisse dekh uske andar ek ajeeb si feeling aayi jisse woh samajh nahi paayi...

khair, MABEL ki baat sun....


ACCHUTA-waise tum sabne DUAD me apna haath rakh liya yaa MABEL ki tarah khudse hi apna partners chun rahi ho...???

ALFREEN-isiliye hi toh RAAZ ko dhund rahe hain...

ACCHUTA-matlab..!!!

ALFREEN-arre MAHI madam RAAZ se GALA me partner banane ke liye
puchna chahti hain...

ACCHUTA-sirf GALA ke liye..!!!!


ACCHUTA ke is sawal par MAHI chownki jispar ACCHUTA muskuraya aur...


ACCHUTA-i know MAHI,you have feelings for RAAZ...

ALFREEN-hain,tujhe kaise maalum...!!!

ACCHUTA-mohobbat ka izhar zubaan baad me karti hain,aankhen dil ka haal pehle hi bata deti hai...


ek second ke liye MABEL ko dekh wapas MAHI aur ALFREEN ko dekhte hue kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar...


ALFREEN-kamal hai..sab samajh gaye the,bas mai hi nahi samajh paayi...

anyways,tu kaise jaayega GALA me...kisiko puchega yaa phir DUAD option lega...!!!???

ACCHUTA-pehle socha tha puchunga,par ab toh DUAD try karne ka man hai...

ALFREEN-aur tu SLUNDER.???

SLUNDER-socha nahi hai abhi tak...

ALFREEN-great..phir hum dono saath chalte hain,what say...!!!

MABEL-wow,like dates...!!!

ALFREEN-waah, date bankar hi jaaya jaa sakta hai kya..???friends nahi jaa sakte ek saath...!!aur waise bhi,mujhe ye dating shaiting pasand nahi hai...

apan single hi sahi hain..

SLUNDER-kahan thi tu pagli ab tak...tere jaise hi kisiki talash thi mujhe gala me jaane ke liye...

warna toh kahani me agar banda hai aur bandi hai toh sabko lagta hai ki love angle hona must hai...

true,pure friendship ki toh saala koi value hi nahi hai..

ALFREEN-exactly....ye sab faaltu ke pachde hain jisse hum door hi ache... toh phir apna set...

SLUNDER-done...

ACCHUTA-badhiya...tum dono apni friendship nibhao,chalo MAHI hum tumhari love ki gaadi sambhalte hain..


RAAZ ka bharosa nahi,kab institution se gayab ho jaaye,aisa ho,isse pehle usse dhund kar puch lo gala ke liye...

waise bhi,jab WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS gala ke baare me bata rahe the,toh kaafi ladkiyan RAAZ ko hi dekh rahi thi..

isse pehle ki unme se koi chance par dance kar le,tum puch lo usse...

ALFREEN-arre,hum yahan kya karenge..hum bhi saath chalte hain..


ALFREEN ki baat khatm hote hi woh sab jis direction me RAAZ gaya tha,us taraf chal pade par abhi woh sab kuch door hi gaye the ki tabhi unhe ladkiyon ki ek bheed dikhi jisse dekh..


MABEL-yaar,ye toh PHASE 3 ki WICKEDS aur MORALS,dono ki ladkiyan hain naa,ye yahan kya kar rahi hain...??

ALFREEN-arre jo bhi kar rahi hain,hume kya...!!hum RAAZ ko dhundte hain naa...

SLUNDER-i think hume wahan jaana chahiye...pata nahi kyun par mujhe lag raha hai ki RAAZ wahin hai,us bheed ki dusri taraf...


SLUNDER apni baat kehte hue hi us disha ki taraf jahan PHASE 3 ki ladkiyon ka hujum khada tha,badh gaya,aur baaki sab bhi uske piche ho liye...

kareeb 15 ladkiyan circle kiye khadi thi us jagah par aur ek jagah halki khaali thi jahan se dusri taraf ka nazara saaf dekha jaa sakta tha aur jaise hi us point par pahunch SLUNDER aur baaki sabki nazar un ladkiyon ke banaye circle ke andar padi toh un sabki aankhen badi ho gayi..

reason...

MORANA aur RAAZ ek dusre ko hug kiye hue khade the par phir MORANA RAAZ se alag hui aur..


MORANA-mai jaanti thi ki tum mere saath GALA me jaane ke liye mana nahi karoge..I LOVE YOU so much..


ye bol sabke saamne hi ALFREEN ne RAAZ ko uske hontho par halka aa kiss kar liya..

aur ye dekh aansu ke kuch bund chhalak gaye MAHI ke aankhon se..

woh wahan rook nahi paayi aur turant moodte hue ek direction ki taraf chal padi aur baaki sab bhi uske dil ka haal samajhte hue chupchaap uske piche ho liye...

kuch der chalne ke baad ek khaali spot lar jahan koi nahi tha,rooki MAHI aur bin awaaz sunya ko ghurte hue aansu bahati rahi..

wahin kuch der tak usse yunhi akela chhodne ke baad baaki sab uske paas pahunche...

sab ek dusre ko dekh rahe the maano puch rahe hon ki aage kya karen...!!!

aur phir un sabme ALFREEN aage badhi aur usne MAHI ke kandhe par haath rakha jispar MAHI turant palti aur ALFREEN ke gale lag subakne lagi..


kuch der tak ALFREEN ne MAHI ko yunhi rone diya par phir...


ALFREEN-tu fikr mat kar MAHI..mai baat karungi us duffer RAAZ se...uski himmat kaise hui meri friend ko chhod kisi aur ko chunane ki..


ALFREEN ki baat sun usse alag hui
MAHI aur apne aansuon ko poch usne ALFREEN ko dekha aur..


MAHI-pyar me fariyaad zaroor hota hai,par sifarish nahi...jitna sach ye hai ki mai usse pyar karti hun, utna hi sach ye bhi hai ki RAAZ ke man me mere liye koi feelings nahi hai..

aur feelings syllabus ka part nahi jo samjhaya jaaye..ye saans lene jaise natural hai,aa gaya toh aa gaya..

SLUNDER-i think you should forget RAAZ MAHI...bhul jaao usse,tumhare sukoon ke liye acha hoga...

MAHI-bhul jaaun....!!!!jo mujhme mujhse zyada bas gaya hai,usse khudse nikalun kaise,aur bin nikale usse bhul jaaun kaise...!!!

MABEL-par aise me teri taklif badhti chali jaayegi MAHI....just look around,may be RAAZ se better option mil jaaye tujhe...

MAHI-option...!!!!



dard de sakti hun khudko,apne ehsaas ke saath kar sakti DAGABAAZI NAHI...

ek naa mila toh dusra sahi,mai itni bhi PYAASI NAHI....

haan dard hai, par jhel lenge....

aakhir MOHOBBAT ki hai,koi AIYAASHI NAHI....















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