Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[John Cena]

Zabardast update yar maza a gya ya akhri scene parh ka mujhe attitude first story ka us scene ki yaad a gai jahan avantika vikram ka attitude torne ka soch rahi thi hhh same situation wah kahen ya alfreen or mahi dono hi raaz ki heroine han yan sirf mahi hi ha?

 

[Yellow Flash]

Nice

 

[Brijesh]

Intresting lagta hai ab 2 heroin ayengi ek mahi dusri alfreen

 

[Iron Man]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI RAAZ,MAHI,ALFREEN AUR SABHI SAVENTS KA NAYA SAFAR SHURU HO CHUKA HAI...

AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1

(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-13




PLANET- ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS




SO SAVENTS...AAP SAB READY HAIN APNE IS NAYE SAFAR KE SHURUAT KE LIYE....

YES WHIZZ.....


is waqt hum apne institution ke bade se green lawn me khade the...aaj bhi kal hi ki tarah hum saare SAVENTS ne do lines banayi hui thi..

ek me hum matlab hostlers khade the aur dusre me discholars...

hamare saamne hamare is PHASE ke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS khade the...

wahin unke beech me khadi OPHILIA WHIZZ ne pure josh aur excitement me apne haathon ko malte hue humse ye sawal pucha???

aaj hamare is naye safar ki asli shuruat honi thi jiski liye saare SAVENTS bohot excited the...

waise toh ye shuruat kal hi ho gayi thi par kal humne kuch sikha nahi tha....

kal pure institution hour me hume is adbhudh jagah ka bas round liya tha...

is beech hamare first phase ke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne hame is institution ke itihas ke baare me bataya...

wo saare extraordinary SAVENTS jinhone yahan par excel kiya tha,humne unki tasveeren dekhi aur kissen bhi chune....

yahan ka education system bhi hamare worlds ke systems se bilkul alag tha...

jahan hamare exams ek band kamre me papers ke through individually hote hain,wahin yahan sab open me sabke saath hota tha...

kehne ka matlab ye hai ki yahan students yaani SAVENTS ko apne hi sabhi PHASEMATES se individually aur group me compete karna padta tha...

aur result bhi anokha tha..paas ya fail wala system hi nahi tha.. jaisa ki kal hi WHIZZ ne bataya tha ki hamare performance ke hisaab se hume khitaab milega aur wahi khitaab next PHASE me hamari pehchaan bhi hoga....

in sab ke beech VOILET WHIZZ se hume ye bhi pata chala ki ye institution teen hisso me divided hai aur teeno hisse teeno PHASE me bate hue hain...

kissi bhi PHASE ke SAVENT ko dusre PHASE me jaane ki,aur us PHASE ke SAVENT se baat karne ki ijazat nahi hai...

par har acadamic calander me ek baar saare PHASES ek jagah ikattha hote hain..

kyun,iska jawab baad ke liye WHIZZ ne taal diya tha....

khair,jaisa ki maine bataya ki ab hamare is naye romanchit safar ki shuruat hone waali thi....

aur iski shuruat karne ke liye OPHILIA WHIZZ aage kuch bolne hi wali thi ki....


MAHI-ma'am, i mean WHIZZ,can i ask a question???


kal hi ki tarah wo ladki jisne kal WHIZZ ke kisi sawal ka jawab diya tha,usne sawal puchne ke liye apna haath upar kiya....

OPHILIA-sure,go ahead...

MAHI- WHIZZ,kya yahan claasrooms nahi hote....aur hum kaun kaun se subjects padhenge...???


MAHI ke sawal ko sun chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS muskuraye aur....

OPHILIA-MAHI,udaa bhale hi aasman me jaata hai par har udaan ki shuruat zamin se hi hoti hai...

abhi toh aap sabko zamin mili hai,dheere dheere udna bhi aa jaayega...

MAHI sawal tab karo jab jawabon ke daur me koi jawab reh jaaye...


OPHILIA ki baat sun MAHI ko bhi laga ki apne excitement me uski timing gadbada gayi hai...

wahin uske baaju me khadi....


ALFREEN-thoda toh sabr kar le maate...hamesha khambe par chadhi rehti hai....

MAHI-haan yaar...baarish ka mousam aane se pehle hi raincoat pehen liya maine...


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI dono hi muskura diye....


OPHILIA-par chaliye,aapke is safar ki shuruat aapke hi sawal se karte hain??? classrooms yahan bhi hote hain but unme bhi sirf practicals hi hote hain...

aur rahi baat subjects ki toh yahan materialistic subjects ki padhayi nahi hoti...

haan aapko books milenge,par wo sirf spells memmorize karne ke liye honge...

aapke is saal ke books aapke aapke obode aur hostel me pahunch chuke hain...

aur unke usage ka tarika aapko kal se bataya jaayega....

aur sabse important baat,yahan par padhaye jaane waale subjects aap khud hain...


OPHILIA ki baat sun sabhi shocked ho gaye jisse hamare chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne bhaamp liya....


VIOLET-chownko mat.. sab samajh jaaoge...but pehle ek sawal ka jawab do...

neend ke waqt sapne me agar hum hawa me ud rahe hain,toh sense me aane ke baad waisa kyun nahi kar paate???


WHIZZ ke sawal par koi jawab de usse pehle hi..


VOILET-kyunki sapne me dekhi gayi cheez toh sirf ek vehem hoti hai...usse real me kaise kiya jaa sakta hai...???right????

SAB-RIGHT???

OMMIN-WRONG....real aur fake ke beech wahi fark hai jo magic aur illusion me hota hai...

hum sabke dimag me ek peripheral system hota hai,tantrika tantra jo hamare dimag ki bahari satah ka abodh hissa hota hai...

issi system ko agar sahi tarah se channelize ya train kiya jaaye toh ye system pure planet ke har energy aur magnetic field se jud sakta hai aur agar aisa ho gaya toh aapki kalpanayen aapki haqiqat ban sakti hain..

bramhaand ke baaki saare logon ke liye is peripheral system ka ek nirdharit daayra hota hai but aap sabhi SAVENTS ki soch aur us soch ki shakti ka koi daayra nahi hai..

har wo chiz jo ab tak aapke liye maatra ek kalpana thi,usse sach banane ke liye bas aapka self confidence,patience aur jaisa ki kal bataya gaya tha focus chahiye...

aur isiliye hi aap sab khudhi subjects hai jisse aapko explore karna hai..jitna zyada khudko explore karoge,utna zyada sikhoge....

NOX-ye toh hui subjects matlab aapki baat..ab karte hain object ki baat...META PHYSICAL CAPABILITY...simple word me kahun toh MAGIC.....

aur aaj hum bas inhi dono chizon par baat karenge.... SUBJECT matlab aap sab aur OBJECT matlab MAGIC.....

OMMIN-par iske liye hume 2 volenteers chahiye honge...so anybody interested????


OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS ne jhat se apne apne haath upar kar liye... siwaye 3 ko chhod kar..


ye teen aur koi nahi mai aur mere dono side khade namune the...namune kyun,ye next update me pata chal jaayega....

khair,haath uthane ke maamle me bhi baazi ALFREEN aur MAHI ne maar liya tha...

kyunki in dono ke haath baaki sabhi se pehle uthe the jisse hamare saamne khade WIZZDERS aur WHIZZES ne dekh liya tha aur isiliye....


OMMIN-aap dono...aage aayiye....


OMMIN ne un dono ke taraf point kar apne paas bulaya jisse dekh wo dono khush ho gaye aur turant OMMIN ke next jaakar khade ho gaye....


OMMIN-aankhen band karo aur apne chitt ko puri tarah shaant karo....

aur jab meri awaaz sunayi de,tab khud ko udta hua mehsoos karo...


apne chitt ko shaant karna kisi bhi SAVENT ke liye piece of cake tha aur isiliye ALFREEN aur MAHI ne jaise hi apni apni aankhen band ki,unke chitt shaant hote chale gaye...

wahin un dono ke aankhen band karne ke baad OMMIN ne un dono ke sar par apna haath rakha aur...


ANUSAGGIKA NIRWESTAYATI....

UNWIND THE PERIPHERAL......


OMMIN ne is spell ko uccharit kiya..aur agle hi pal unke haathon se do safed urja ki kirane nikal MAHI aur ALFREEN ke sir me sama gayi...

wahin jab MAHI aur ALFREEN ko jaise hi OMMIN ki awaaz sunayi di toh unhone khud ko udta hua imagine karna shuru kiya aur unke aisa sochte hi.....

un dono ke pair dheere dheere zamin se upar uthne lage jisse dekh saare SAVENTS ke mooh khul gaye the....

5 feet tak upar uthne ke baad MAHI aur ALFREEN ka sharir aur upar nahi utha aur hawa me rook gaya.....

wahin MAHI aur ALFREEN dono ko hi ye ehsaas ho chuka tha ki wo hawa me uthe hue hain...

is ehsaas ke man me aate hi un dono ne apni apni aakhen khol di aur jab khudko hawa me uthe hue dekha toh un dono ki khushi ka thikana naa raha...

par ye khushi kuch hi palon ki thi kyunki fir dheere dheere un dono ka hi sharir wapas neeche utarne laga...

un dono ne koshish kari ki wo hawa me hi rahe, OMMIN ke kahe mantra ko unhone man hi man repeat bhi kiya par koi faayda nahi hua aur wo dono neeche zamin par aa gaye...

unke man me mantra uccharit karne ki baat ko OMMIN bhaamp gaye the isiliye...


OMMIN-mantra sirf keh dene se kaam me nahi aate...uski bhi apni ek vidhya hai aur wahi tum sabko sikhni hai...

jaao, apni jagah par jaakar khade ho jaao...


MAHI aur ALFREEN is naye anubhav se khush hote hue apni apni jagah par jaakar khade ho gaye....

wahin mere left side me khada banda toh mooh se laar tapkaye ALFREEN aur MAHI ki khubsoorti me hi khoya hua tha...aur issi madhoshi me....


KAASH YE DONO PARIYAN UDTE HUE MERI GODH ME AAKAR GIRTI... MERE LIYE TOH WAHI MAGIC BAN JAATA....


ye bol phute the mere left side khade mahanubhav ke mooh se jisse sun mere right side khade mahapurush ne unhe ghur kar dekha....

ye dono mahapurush mere saath hostel ke hi hain aur ye hi wo dono hain jinhone mere saath haath nahi uthaya tha but as said, inka intro next update me....


wahin MAHI aur ALFREEN ke apni jagah par khade hone ke baad...


OPHILIA-ye toh tha subject check...
ab baat karte hain us chiz ki jisse subject matlab aap sab khudko check karenge ya fir ye kahun ki khud ko nikharenge....

matlab MAGIC....

aap sabne dekha ki WHIZZDER OMMIN ne MAHI aur ALFREEN ke sir par haath rakh kar ek spell bola tha jiske baad hi MAHI aur ALFREEN ka sharir hawa me utha tha...

spell bolna toh aasan hai par usse kaam nikalwana utna hi muskil....

aisa kyun,iski detail aapko kal ke class me bataya jaayega but filhal ke liye short me bas itna jaan lijiye ki MAGIC ko successfully use me laane ke teen modes hai....

1ST- REQUEST MODE

2ND-COMMAND MODE

aur 3RD-ATTACH MODE


ab in teeno modes ko kaise excess kiya jaata hai,ye toh aapko kal ki class me pata chalega but usse pehle kal aap sabko hume ye batana hai ki ye teeno modes me hain kya??

ye aap sab ka aaj ka what to say, homework hai... jaisa ki aapko bataya jaa chuka hai ki aapke books aapke destinations me pahunch chuke hain,toh jaayiye aur answer check out kijiye......

we hope aapko aapke is nayi journey ki first class achi lagi hogi....

class dismiss...


ye bol hamare charon WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS chale gaye aur unke jaate hi humara group jo ki hostlers ka tha,wo bhi hostel ki taraf badh chala...

wahin WHIZZDERS aur WHIZZES ke jaane ke baad...


MAHI-chal,jaldi se mere ghar chalte hain aur OPHILIA WHIZ ke puche question ka answer dhundte hain...

ALFREEN-pehle tu mere ghar chal...mom dad hum dono ka hi wait kar rahe hain...pehle saath me lunch karenge,uske baad answers dhundenge...

MAHI-cool chal fir....


dono hi ALFREEN ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaye.....

ek hi din hua tha in dono ko mile hue par dekh kar aisa lag raha tha maano dono bachpan ke buddies hon...

aaiye inki nayi nayi friendship ki shuruat kaise hui,ispar zara nazar ghuma lete hain...


MAHI aur ALFREEN ki friendship kal hui aur jab MAHI ko pata chala ki ALFREEN EARTH se hai toh ye friendship aur gehri ho gayi thi...

kal pure institution ke safar ke waqt dono alag alag muddon par ek dusre ko apni apni raay dete rahe jisse dono ka bond aur acha ho gaya...

ALFREEN ko jo ABODE allot hua tha, coincidentally wo MAHI ke baaju me hi tha...

jiske baare me jaankar ALFREEN aur MAHI dono ki khushi double ho chuki thi.... shaam ko hi MAHI FLORIN aur MARIA se bhi mili...wo bhi MAHI se milkar kaafi khush hue....

par saath hi unhe ye jaankar dukh aur shock bhi laga ki MAHI orphan hai..

dukh toh normal baat hai.. shock unhe isiliye laga kyunki orphan hone ke baawajud MAHI ko ghar allot hua tha wahin RAAZ hostel me rehta tha....

MAHI ke wapas apne ghar jaane ke baad FLORIN aur MARIA issi mudde par baat kar rahe the jisse sun ALFREEN ke kaano me wahi baatein gunj uthi jo kal raat gunji thi...kya???aayiye,ek din aur piche chal aaj ye bhi jaan lete hain....



SMALL FLASHBACK FROM YESTERDAY'S NIGHT......



AAP DONO TOH WAISE KE WAISE HI HAIN MOM,POPS...BILKUL BHI NAHI BADLE...


hickiyon ke beech apni awaaz ko sayyamit rakhne ki koshish karte hue ALFREEN ne apni baat kahi..

wahin FLORIN aur MARIA ka dil jo unki ek louti beti ke hamesha ke liye kho jaane ke gum me buri tarike se toot gaya tha,wo aaj wapas jud raha tha....

kisi waqt wo toot kar bhikarte hue roye the,wahin aaj wo dono wapas khudse khudko jodne ki khushi me roye jaa rahe the...

MARILIZA ke ALFREEN ko hosh me laane ke baad jab FLORIN aur MARIA ki nazar apni beti par padi,toh unke gale se hote hue ALFREEN ke naam ki cheekh har taraf gunj uthi thi...

par uske baad se abhi tak bas unke rone ki awaaz hi us room me sunayi de rahi thi...

hazaron baar chum chuki thi MARIA apni beti ko,wahin FLORIN toh bas kabhi ALFREEN ke haath pair ko chhukar toh kabhi khud ko chimatkar apne aap ko yakin dilane me lage hue the ki jo wo dekh rahe hain,wo sach hai koi sapna nahi...

haal toh ALFREEN ka bhi zyada alag nahi tha par kuch din pehle behoshi se uthne ke aur sacchayi jaanane ki wajah se usne jaldi hi khudpar kaabu paa liya tha aur abhi abhi jo baat usne boli thi,wo bhi uske mom dad ke mind ko light karne ke liye kahi thi....

par iska kuch khaas asar hua nahi.. FLORIN aur MARIA ke jasbaat itne gehre the ki sayammit hone me waqt toh lagna hi tha aur wo lag raha tha...

wahin in sabse thodi door khade teeno SOVEREIGN aur MARILIZA bhi saamne chal rahe drishya ko dekhkar dukhi bhi the aur Khush bhi...

SOVEREIGN ko khushi thi maa baap aur santan ke punah milap ki aur dukh isiliye ki milap se pehle ke virah ka kaaran kahin naa kahin wo teeno bhi the...

par in sabse alag mai peeche us bedroom ke darwaze ke paas chupchaap khada ye soch raha tha ki ye sab noutanki band hon toh mai hostel jaaun....

kuch der aur laga is bhawnaon ke tufaan ke thamne me par aakhirkaar ye tham hi gaya....

aur jaise hi MARIA aur FLORIN kuch normal hue tab unka dimag chalna shuru kiya jisne sabse pehle un dono ke man me dheron sawal paida kiye aur isiliye ek ek haath se abhi bhi apni beti ke haath ko thaam wo dono piche palte aur aankhon ke wo paani jo ab sukhne lage the,un aansuon ki rekhaon ko sawal ka roop dhara SOVEREIGN ki taraf dekhne lage...

same condition ALFREEN ki bhi thi...uske saath kya hua,ye toh usse pata tha,par kyun hua,ye usse janana tha...

wahin teeno SOVEREIGN bhi FLORIN, MARIA aur ALFREEN ki khamoshi me chuppe sawal samajh gaye aur....


SHAILA-jo hua,aapke nazariye se dekhen toh zyadti hai,par agar niyati ke nazariye se dekhen,toh jo hua, agar wo nahi hua hota,toh aap par zyadati ho jaati....


SHAILA ki baat un teeno me se kisiko bhi samajh me nahi aaya aur ye baat unke chehre ke expressions saaf bata rahe the isiliye....


AKSHAANT-baat lambi nahi hai par gehri hai... shaant man se suniyega...

jo bhi student yahan tak pahunchta hai,wo GOD GIFTED hota hai...uski ek alag hi jeeven urja hoti hai jo uske janm se kayi varsh purv hi paida ho jaati hai...

aur isiliye hume bhi us paida hone wale bachhe ke baare me purv se hi pata rehta hai...

wo jeeven urja us GOD GIFTED bacche ke paida hone tak adrishya roop se rehti hai aur jab us chune hue bache ka janm hota hai,toh uski wahi urja uske mastishk ki urja ke saath mil jaati hai jisse us bacche ka astitv pura hota hai....

har GOD GIFTED baccha apne surroundings ke liye ek blessing ki tarah hota hai but ALFREEN aur RAAZ ke maamle me wahi blessing curse me badal gayi....


RAAZ...is naam ko sun baaki sab toh normal hi rahe but ALFREEN chownki....


ALFREEN-RAAZ!!!!kaun RAAZ??? aur uska mujhse kya lena dena???


ALFREEN ke sawal par FLORIN ne meri taraf ishara kar ALFREEN ko mere baare me aur saath hi orphanage ke baare me bhi bataya....

sab kuch sunane ke baad...


ALFREEN- par iska mujhse kya lena dena???

SHAILA-PLANETS AURA ke baare me kya jaanti ho???

jawab ki jagah SHAILA ne ulta ALFREEN se sawal kiya jisse sun


ALFREEN-AURO living planets ka wo energy field hai jo us planet ke har celestial being se energy leti bhi hai aur unhe energy deti bhi hai...(FACT)

SHAILA-right...par is AURA ka tumse ya fir tumhare jaise har GOD GIFTED se ek alag connection hai...

ek GOD GIFTED bacche ke janm ke waqt uski jeeven aur mastishk urja ka pravah hadh se zyada hota hai..

itna zyada ki ye dono urja khud ko sambhal nahi paati aur iske extra kan apne aas paas ke pure surroundings me faile jaati hai...

aur tab us PLANET ka AURA us uncontrolled energy ko khud me sokh leta hai jiski wajah se us jagah ke area ka har energy field kayi guna zyada strong hojaata hai....

aur isiliye hi ek GOD GIFTED baccha apne surroundings ke liye blessing se kam nahi hota but tum dono ke case me iska ulat hua...

jaisa ki maine bataya ki jeeven urja ki wajah se hume pehle hi ye pata chal jaata hai ki aane waale samay me kaun sa GOD GIFTED baccha kahan paida hone waala hai,toh aise me jab humne ek hi jagah ke aas paas do do jeeven urja ko dekha toh hume shock laga....

aur wo isiliye kyunki sirf tum dono hi aise do GOD GIFTED bacche ho jo aas paas paida hone waale the...

isse pehle aisa kabhi nahi hua tha..iska reason bhi wahi AURA hi hai...

kyunki ek bacche se nikle jeeven aur mastishk urja me hi itni shakti hoti hai jisse mushkil se wahan ki surroundings sokh paati hai..

par us energy ko puri tarah se stabilize hone me 100 se zyada saal lagte hain but RAAZ ka janm tumhare janm ke 22 saal baad hone waala tha jiska matlab tha ek nayi jeeven aur mastishk urja ka tumhare grah ke satah se milna..

aur agar aisa ho jaata toh tumhari dharti ka ek bohot bada bhaag unstable ho jaata...

aur wo bhi kuch is tarah ki saikdon mile tak ki satah ek baar me hi deh jaati aur saath hi laakhon log mrityu ko praapt ho jaate....

aur isiliye hi tumhare 16 varsh ke hote hi tumhara accident kiya gaya jisse tum behosh ho gayi...

tumhare behosh hote hi tumhari jeeven urja ko nikal liya gaya jisse tum ek lambi neend me chali gayi..wo neend jisse tumhare grah me coma kaha jaata hai..

aur jab aisa hua,toh tum se nikli wo jeeven aur mastishk ki urja jo tumhare surroundings ki satah me samayi hui thi,wo bhi khatm ho gayi....

tumhe ussi haalat me yahan le aaya gaya aur wahan prithvi par tumhari jagah tumhare mare hue clone ko rakh diya gaya...


puri kahani sunane ke baad pure hall me sannata sa chaa gaya..FLORIN aur MARIA ka dimag shaant ho gaya tha,kyunki unhe samajh aa gaya tha ki agar aisa nahi hota toh najaane kitne log maare jaate aur uska kaaran anjaane me hi sahi par unki beti hoti...

par ALFREEN ka man ab bhi shaant nahi tha...par kyun????

har SAVENT ki hi tarah ALFREEN ka dimag bhi har tarah se kaafi tez tha...

uski aneko khubiyon me se ek bohot badi khubi thi uske instincts jo ki usse uske dad se virasat me mile the....

aur ek SAVENT hone ki wajah se uski ye khubi kayi guna multipy hokar nikhri hui thi...

har situation ke if and buts ko bohot ache se guess kar leti thi ALFREEN...

itna hi nahi,har tark,har disclosure ke waqt uska subconscious mind active ho jaata tha jo usse sahi aur galat ka sujhaav deta tha...

aur abhi bhi waisa hi hua...jab SHAILA puri kahani sunaa rahi thi tab...


ALFREEN'S MIND-YE SAB PURA SACH NAHI HAI......TERE AUR TERE MOM DAD KE SAATH JO KUCH BHI HUA HAI,USME KISI NAA KISI TARAH IS RAAZ KI INVOLVEMENT HAI...

DIRECTLY AUR INDIRECTLY,BUT THIS GUY IS SOME HOW RESPONSIBLE FOR UR PARENTS SUCH LONG SUFFERING...


ye the wo bol jo ALFREEN ke dimag me lagatar ghumte aa rahe the jisse wo nakarne ki koshish kar rahi thi...

par in sabke beech uski aankhen RAAZ aur uske filhall ke ATTITUDE par tiki thi...wo dekh rahi thi ki jo ladka kahin naa kahin itne bade haadse se direct juda hua hai,saari baatein sunane ke baad bhi uske expressions aise hain maano usse koi fark hi nahi pada hai....


SHAILA-i think aap sab samajh gaye honge ki jo hua,wo kyun hua???but fir bhi aapke itne saal ke pain ke liye we are extremely sorry....

MARIA-aapko sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai....ye toh GOD ki marzi thi...jo baatein aapne batayi,uske hisab se toh jo hua,wo acha hi hua..warna najane kitne begunahon ki jaan chali jaati...

hume toh issi baat ki khushi hai ki hamari beti zinda hai aur aaj hume wapas mil gayi hai....


ye kehkar unhone apni beti ka maatha chum liya...


FLORIN-aur wo bhi ussi haalat me jaise pehle thi...ye toh ab bhi 16 saal ki hi lag rahi hai...

SHAILA- wo isiliye kyunki ye ab bhi 16 saal ki hi hai.... ALFREEN ke andar se jis jeeven chakra ko nikala gaya tha,uski wajah se iski umr bhi rook gayi thi jo ab firse shuru hui hai...

toh ALFREEN ab bhi 16 saal ki hi hai.....

AKSHAANT-ab jab saari baatein open ho chuki hain toh kya ab bhi aap wapas EARTH jaana chahenge???

MARIA-bilkul nahi...hum ab hamesha apni beti ke saath hi rahenge...

AKSHAANT-bohot ache..toh fir aap teeno apne alloted ABODE par chale jaayiye and RAAZ aapko hostel jaana hai...


AKSHAANT ke aisa bolte hi hum sabke beech do MAGIC DOOR khul gaye...

ek FLORIN and family ke liye tha aur dusra mere liye...


FLORIN-kya RAAZ hamare saath nahi reh sakta..wo bhi toh hamare bache ki tarah hi hai....


FLORIN ki baat ka SOVEREIGN kuch jawab dete usse pehle hi...


MAI- bacche ki tarah aur bacche me utna hi fark hota hai jitna nariyal ke andar aur bahar ke bhaag ka hota hai...

mai ek orphan hun...mujhe kisi ke adopted bheek bole jaane se zyada acha orphan bolne me lagta hai...and I'll like to keep it that way...


ye bol bina kuch sune mai hostel waale MAGIC DOOR se hote hue dusri taraf chala gaya....

wahin mere bolne aur jaane ke baad bhi kuch der tak SOVEREIGN office me shanti hi rahi but fir...


FLORIN-wo shuru se aisa hi hai..apne dil ki karta hai...ab hume bhi chalna chahiye...


FLORIN ne mahoul ko light karne ke kiye apni baat kahi jiske baad ALFREEN FLORIN aur MARIA SOVEREIGN se ijazat le unke liye khole MAGIC DOOR se hote hue apne alloted ABODE ki taraf chal diye...

par in sabke beech ALFREEN ka dimag ghum chuka tha.. apne instinct ki wo baatein jo ab tak wo nakarte hue aa rahi thi,ab usse sahi lagne lagi thi...

chehra toh uska shaant tha but dimag me ghussa bhara pada tha jo chikh chikh kar keh raha tha ki...


ALFREEN'S MIND-ek anath hokar bhi itni akad....koi naa,ab toh tu bhi yahi hai aur mai bhi,jaisa unsult tune abhi mere mom dad ka kiya hai,usse kayi guna zyada humiliation interest ke saath tujhe wapas karungi mai....

tutegi teri HIMMAT,jhukega tera EGO,aur khatm ho jaayega tera ye ATTITUDE.......






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....




AAPKA APNA V.J

 

[Chinturocky]

teeno ka attitude aur rishta,
Bahut hi dilchasp rahane wala hai,
Yaar ye to first part se bhi jyada mazedar lag rahi hai.
Love it very much ?

 

[Iron Man]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI RAAZ,MAHI,ALFREEN AUR SABHI SAVENTS KA NAYA SAFAR SHURU HO CHUKA HAI...

AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1

(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-13




PLANET- ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS




SO SAVENTS...AAP SAB READY HAIN APNE IS NAYE SAFAR KE SHURUAT KE LIYE....

YES WHIZZ.....


is waqt hum apne institution ke bade se green lawn me khade the...aaj bhi kal hi ki tarah hum saare SAVENTS ne do lines banayi hui thi..

ek me hum matlab hostlers khade the aur dusre me discholars...

hamare saamne hamare is PHASE ke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS khade the...

wahin unke beech me khadi OPHILIA WHIZZ ne pure josh aur excitement me apne haathon ko malte hue humse ye sawal pucha???

aaj hamare is naye safar ki asli shuruat honi thi jiski liye saare SAVENTS bohot excited the...

waise toh ye shuruat kal hi ho gayi thi par kal humne kuch sikha nahi tha....

kal pure institution hour me hume is adbhudh jagah ka bas round liya tha...

is beech hamare first phase ke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne hame is institution ke itihas ke baare me bataya...

wo saare extraordinary SAVENTS jinhone yahan par excel kiya tha,humne unki tasveeren dekhi aur kissen bhi chune....

yahan ka education system bhi hamare worlds ke systems se bilkul alag tha...

jahan hamare exams ek band kamre me papers ke through individually hote hain,wahin yahan sab open me sabke saath hota tha...

kehne ka matlab ye hai ki yahan students yaani SAVENTS ko apne hi sabhi PHASEMATES se individually aur group me compete karna padta tha...

aur result bhi anokha tha..paas ya fail wala system hi nahi tha.. jaisa ki kal hi WHIZZ ne bataya tha ki hamare performance ke hisaab se hume khitaab milega aur wahi khitaab next PHASE me hamari pehchaan bhi hoga....

in sab ke beech VOILET WHIZZ se hume ye bhi pata chala ki ye institution teen hisso me divided hai aur teeno hisse teeno PHASE me bate hue hain...

kissi bhi PHASE ke SAVENT ko dusre PHASE me jaane ki,aur us PHASE ke SAVENT se baat karne ki ijazat nahi hai...

par har acadamic calander me ek baar saare PHASES ek jagah ikattha hote hain..

kyun,iska jawab baad ke liye WHIZZ ne taal diya tha....

khair,jaisa ki maine bataya ki ab hamare is naye romanchit safar ki shuruat hone waali thi....

aur iski shuruat karne ke liye OPHILIA WHIZZ aage kuch bolne hi wali thi ki....


MAHI-ma'am, i mean WHIZZ,can i ask a question???


kal hi ki tarah wo ladki jisne kal WHIZZ ke kisi sawal ka jawab diya tha,usne sawal puchne ke liye apna haath upar kiya....

OPHILIA-sure,go ahead...

MAHI- WHIZZ,kya yahan claasrooms nahi hote....aur hum kaun kaun se subjects padhenge...???


MAHI ke sawal ko sun chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS muskuraye aur....

OPHILIA-MAHI,udaa bhale hi aasman me jaata hai par har udaan ki shuruat zamin se hi hoti hai...

abhi toh aap sabko zamin mili hai,dheere dheere udna bhi aa jaayega...

MAHI sawal tab karo jab jawabon ke daur me koi jawab reh jaaye...


OPHILIA ki baat sun MAHI ko bhi laga ki apne excitement me uski timing gadbada gayi hai...

wahin uske baaju me khadi....


ALFREEN-thoda toh sabr kar le maate...hamesha khambe par chadhi rehti hai....

MAHI-haan yaar...baarish ka mousam aane se pehle hi raincoat pehen liya maine...


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI dono hi muskura diye....


OPHILIA-par chaliye,aapke is safar ki shuruat aapke hi sawal se karte hain??? classrooms yahan bhi hote hain but unme bhi sirf practicals hi hote hain...

aur rahi baat subjects ki toh yahan materialistic subjects ki padhayi nahi hoti...

haan aapko books milenge,par wo sirf spells memmorize karne ke liye honge...

aapke is saal ke books aapke aapke obode aur hostel me pahunch chuke hain...

aur unke usage ka tarika aapko kal se bataya jaayega....

aur sabse important baat,yahan par padhaye jaane waale subjects aap khud hain...


OPHILIA ki baat sun sabhi shocked ho gaye jisse hamare chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne bhaamp liya....


VIOLET-chownko mat.. sab samajh jaaoge...but pehle ek sawal ka jawab do...

neend ke waqt sapne me agar hum hawa me ud rahe hain,toh sense me aane ke baad waisa kyun nahi kar paate???


WHIZZ ke sawal par koi jawab de usse pehle hi..


VOILET-kyunki sapne me dekhi gayi cheez toh sirf ek vehem hoti hai...usse real me kaise kiya jaa sakta hai...???right????

SAB-RIGHT???

OMMIN-WRONG....real aur fake ke beech wahi fark hai jo magic aur illusion me hota hai...

hum sabke dimag me ek peripheral system hota hai,tantrika tantra jo hamare dimag ki bahari satah ka abodh hissa hota hai...

issi system ko agar sahi tarah se channelize ya train kiya jaaye toh ye system pure planet ke har energy aur magnetic field se jud sakta hai aur agar aisa ho gaya toh aapki kalpanayen aapki haqiqat ban sakti hain..

bramhaand ke baaki saare logon ke liye is peripheral system ka ek nirdharit daayra hota hai but aap sabhi SAVENTS ki soch aur us soch ki shakti ka koi daayra nahi hai..

har wo chiz jo ab tak aapke liye maatra ek kalpana thi,usse sach banane ke liye bas aapka self confidence,patience aur jaisa ki kal bataya gaya tha focus chahiye...

aur isiliye hi aap sab khudhi subjects hai jisse aapko explore karna hai..jitna zyada khudko explore karoge,utna zyada sikhoge....

NOX-ye toh hui subjects matlab aapki baat..ab karte hain object ki baat...META PHYSICAL CAPABILITY...simple word me kahun toh MAGIC.....

aur aaj hum bas inhi dono chizon par baat karenge.... SUBJECT matlab aap sab aur OBJECT matlab MAGIC.....

OMMIN-par iske liye hume 2 volenteers chahiye honge...so anybody interested????


OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS ne jhat se apne apne haath upar kar liye... siwaye 3 ko chhod kar..


ye teen aur koi nahi mai aur mere dono side khade namune the...namune kyun,ye next update me pata chal jaayega....

khair,haath uthane ke maamle me bhi baazi ALFREEN aur MAHI ne maar liya tha...

kyunki in dono ke haath baaki sabhi se pehle uthe the jisse hamare saamne khade WIZZDERS aur WHIZZES ne dekh liya tha aur isiliye....


OMMIN-aap dono...aage aayiye....


OMMIN ne un dono ke taraf point kar apne paas bulaya jisse dekh wo dono khush ho gaye aur turant OMMIN ke next jaakar khade ho gaye....


OMMIN-aankhen band karo aur apne chitt ko puri tarah shaant karo....

aur jab meri awaaz sunayi de,tab khud ko udta hua mehsoos karo...


apne chitt ko shaant karna kisi bhi SAVENT ke liye piece of cake tha aur isiliye ALFREEN aur MAHI ne jaise hi apni apni aankhen band ki,unke chitt shaant hote chale gaye...

wahin un dono ke aankhen band karne ke baad OMMIN ne un dono ke sar par apna haath rakha aur...


ANUSAGGIKA NIRWESTAYATI....

UNWIND THE PERIPHERAL......


OMMIN ne is spell ko uccharit kiya..aur agle hi pal unke haathon se do safed urja ki kirane nikal MAHI aur ALFREEN ke sir me sama gayi...

wahin jab MAHI aur ALFREEN ko jaise hi OMMIN ki awaaz sunayi di toh unhone khud ko udta hua imagine karna shuru kiya aur unke aisa sochte hi.....

un dono ke pair dheere dheere zamin se upar uthne lage jisse dekh saare SAVENTS ke mooh khul gaye the....

5 feet tak upar uthne ke baad MAHI aur ALFREEN ka sharir aur upar nahi utha aur hawa me rook gaya.....

wahin MAHI aur ALFREEN dono ko hi ye ehsaas ho chuka tha ki wo hawa me uthe hue hain...

is ehsaas ke man me aate hi un dono ne apni apni aakhen khol di aur jab khudko hawa me uthe hue dekha toh un dono ki khushi ka thikana naa raha...

par ye khushi kuch hi palon ki thi kyunki fir dheere dheere un dono ka hi sharir wapas neeche utarne laga...

un dono ne koshish kari ki wo hawa me hi rahe, OMMIN ke kahe mantra ko unhone man hi man repeat bhi kiya par koi faayda nahi hua aur wo dono neeche zamin par aa gaye...

unke man me mantra uccharit karne ki baat ko OMMIN bhaamp gaye the isiliye...


OMMIN-mantra sirf keh dene se kaam me nahi aate...uski bhi apni ek vidhya hai aur wahi tum sabko sikhni hai...

jaao, apni jagah par jaakar khade ho jaao...


MAHI aur ALFREEN is naye anubhav se khush hote hue apni apni jagah par jaakar khade ho gaye....

wahin mere left side me khada banda toh mooh se laar tapkaye ALFREEN aur MAHI ki khubsoorti me hi khoya hua tha...aur issi madhoshi me....


KAASH YE DONO PARIYAN UDTE HUE MERI GODH ME AAKAR GIRTI... MERE LIYE TOH WAHI MAGIC BAN JAATA....


ye bol phute the mere left side khade mahanubhav ke mooh se jisse sun mere right side khade mahapurush ne unhe ghur kar dekha....

ye dono mahapurush mere saath hostel ke hi hain aur ye hi wo dono hain jinhone mere saath haath nahi uthaya tha but as said, inka intro next update me....


wahin MAHI aur ALFREEN ke apni jagah par khade hone ke baad...


OPHILIA-ye toh tha subject check...
ab baat karte hain us chiz ki jisse subject matlab aap sab khudko check karenge ya fir ye kahun ki khud ko nikharenge....

matlab MAGIC....

aap sabne dekha ki WHIZZDER OMMIN ne MAHI aur ALFREEN ke sir par haath rakh kar ek spell bola tha jiske baad hi MAHI aur ALFREEN ka sharir hawa me utha tha...

spell bolna toh aasan hai par usse kaam nikalwana utna hi muskil....

aisa kyun,iski detail aapko kal ke class me bataya jaayega but filhal ke liye short me bas itna jaan lijiye ki MAGIC ko successfully use me laane ke teen modes hai....

1ST- REQUEST MODE

2ND-COMMAND MODE

aur 3RD-ATTACH MODE


ab in teeno modes ko kaise excess kiya jaata hai,ye toh aapko kal ki class me pata chalega but usse pehle kal aap sabko hume ye batana hai ki ye teeno modes me hain kya??

ye aap sab ka aaj ka what to say, homework hai... jaisa ki aapko bataya jaa chuka hai ki aapke books aapke destinations me pahunch chuke hain,toh jaayiye aur answer check out kijiye......

we hope aapko aapke is nayi journey ki first class achi lagi hogi....

class dismiss...


ye bol hamare charon WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS chale gaye aur unke jaate hi humara group jo ki hostlers ka tha,wo bhi hostel ki taraf badh chala...

wahin WHIZZDERS aur WHIZZES ke jaane ke baad...


MAHI-chal,jaldi se mere ghar chalte hain aur OPHILIA WHIZ ke puche question ka answer dhundte hain...

ALFREEN-pehle tu mere ghar chal...mom dad hum dono ka hi wait kar rahe hain...pehle saath me lunch karenge,uske baad answers dhundenge...

MAHI-cool chal fir....


dono hi ALFREEN ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaye.....

ek hi din hua tha in dono ko mile hue par dekh kar aisa lag raha tha maano dono bachpan ke buddies hon...

aaiye inki nayi nayi friendship ki shuruat kaise hui,ispar zara nazar ghuma lete hain...


MAHI aur ALFREEN ki friendship kal hui aur jab MAHI ko pata chala ki ALFREEN EARTH se hai toh ye friendship aur gehri ho gayi thi...

kal pure institution ke safar ke waqt dono alag alag muddon par ek dusre ko apni apni raay dete rahe jisse dono ka bond aur acha ho gaya...

ALFREEN ko jo ABODE allot hua tha, coincidentally wo MAHI ke baaju me hi tha...

jiske baare me jaankar ALFREEN aur MAHI dono ki khushi double ho chuki thi.... shaam ko hi MAHI FLORIN aur MARIA se bhi mili...wo bhi MAHI se milkar kaafi khush hue....

par saath hi unhe ye jaankar dukh aur shock bhi laga ki MAHI orphan hai..

dukh toh normal baat hai.. shock unhe isiliye laga kyunki orphan hone ke baawajud MAHI ko ghar allot hua tha wahin RAAZ hostel me rehta tha....

MAHI ke wapas apne ghar jaane ke baad FLORIN aur MARIA issi mudde par baat kar rahe the jisse sun ALFREEN ke kaano me wahi baatein gunj uthi jo kal raat gunji thi...kya???aayiye,ek din aur piche chal aaj ye bhi jaan lete hain....



SMALL FLASHBACK FROM YESTERDAY'S NIGHT......



AAP DONO TOH WAISE KE WAISE HI HAIN MOM,POPS...BILKUL BHI NAHI BADLE...


hickiyon ke beech apni awaaz ko sayyamit rakhne ki koshish karte hue ALFREEN ne apni baat kahi..

wahin FLORIN aur MARIA ka dil jo unki ek louti beti ke hamesha ke liye kho jaane ke gum me buri tarike se toot gaya tha,wo aaj wapas jud raha tha....

kisi waqt wo toot kar bhikarte hue roye the,wahin aaj wo dono wapas khudse khudko jodne ki khushi me roye jaa rahe the...

MARILIZA ke ALFREEN ko hosh me laane ke baad jab FLORIN aur MARIA ki nazar apni beti par padi,toh unke gale se hote hue ALFREEN ke naam ki cheekh har taraf gunj uthi thi...

par uske baad se abhi tak bas unke rone ki awaaz hi us room me sunayi de rahi thi...

hazaron baar chum chuki thi MARIA apni beti ko,wahin FLORIN toh bas kabhi ALFREEN ke haath pair ko chhukar toh kabhi khud ko chimatkar apne aap ko yakin dilane me lage hue the ki jo wo dekh rahe hain,wo sach hai koi sapna nahi...

haal toh ALFREEN ka bhi zyada alag nahi tha par kuch din pehle behoshi se uthne ke aur sacchayi jaanane ki wajah se usne jaldi hi khudpar kaabu paa liya tha aur abhi abhi jo baat usne boli thi,wo bhi uske mom dad ke mind ko light karne ke liye kahi thi....

par iska kuch khaas asar hua nahi.. FLORIN aur MARIA ke jasbaat itne gehre the ki sayammit hone me waqt toh lagna hi tha aur wo lag raha tha...

wahin in sabse thodi door khade teeno SOVEREIGN aur MARILIZA bhi saamne chal rahe drishya ko dekhkar dukhi bhi the aur Khush bhi...

SOVEREIGN ko khushi thi maa baap aur santan ke punah milap ki aur dukh isiliye ki milap se pehle ke virah ka kaaran kahin naa kahin wo teeno bhi the...

par in sabse alag mai peeche us bedroom ke darwaze ke paas chupchaap khada ye soch raha tha ki ye sab noutanki band hon toh mai hostel jaaun....

kuch der aur laga is bhawnaon ke tufaan ke thamne me par aakhirkaar ye tham hi gaya....

aur jaise hi MARIA aur FLORIN kuch normal hue tab unka dimag chalna shuru kiya jisne sabse pehle un dono ke man me dheron sawal paida kiye aur isiliye ek ek haath se abhi bhi apni beti ke haath ko thaam wo dono piche palte aur aankhon ke wo paani jo ab sukhne lage the,un aansuon ki rekhaon ko sawal ka roop dhara SOVEREIGN ki taraf dekhne lage...

same condition ALFREEN ki bhi thi...uske saath kya hua,ye toh usse pata tha,par kyun hua,ye usse janana tha...

wahin teeno SOVEREIGN bhi FLORIN, MARIA aur ALFREEN ki khamoshi me chuppe sawal samajh gaye aur....


SHAILA-jo hua,aapke nazariye se dekhen toh zyadti hai,par agar niyati ke nazariye se dekhen,toh jo hua, agar wo nahi hua hota,toh aap par zyadati ho jaati....


SHAILA ki baat un teeno me se kisiko bhi samajh me nahi aaya aur ye baat unke chehre ke expressions saaf bata rahe the isiliye....


AKSHAANT-baat lambi nahi hai par gehri hai... shaant man se suniyega...

jo bhi student yahan tak pahunchta hai,wo GOD GIFTED hota hai...uski ek alag hi jeeven urja hoti hai jo uske janm se kayi varsh purv hi paida ho jaati hai...

aur isiliye hume bhi us paida hone wale bachhe ke baare me purv se hi pata rehta hai...

wo jeeven urja us GOD GIFTED bacche ke paida hone tak adrishya roop se rehti hai aur jab us chune hue bache ka janm hota hai,toh uski wahi urja uske mastishk ki urja ke saath mil jaati hai jisse us bacche ka astitv pura hota hai....

har GOD GIFTED baccha apne surroundings ke liye ek blessing ki tarah hota hai but ALFREEN aur RAAZ ke maamle me wahi blessing curse me badal gayi....


RAAZ...is naam ko sun baaki sab toh normal hi rahe but ALFREEN chownki....


ALFREEN-RAAZ!!!!kaun RAAZ??? aur uska mujhse kya lena dena???


ALFREEN ke sawal par FLORIN ne meri taraf ishara kar ALFREEN ko mere baare me aur saath hi orphanage ke baare me bhi bataya....

sab kuch sunane ke baad...


ALFREEN- par iska mujhse kya lena dena???

SHAILA-PLANETS AURA ke baare me kya jaanti ho???

jawab ki jagah SHAILA ne ulta ALFREEN se sawal kiya jisse sun


ALFREEN-AURO living planets ka wo energy field hai jo us planet ke har celestial being se energy leti bhi hai aur unhe energy deti bhi hai...(FACT)

SHAILA-right...par is AURA ka tumse ya fir tumhare jaise har GOD GIFTED se ek alag connection hai...

ek GOD GIFTED bacche ke janm ke waqt uski jeeven aur mastishk urja ka pravah hadh se zyada hota hai..

itna zyada ki ye dono urja khud ko sambhal nahi paati aur iske extra kan apne aas paas ke pure surroundings me faile jaati hai...

aur tab us PLANET ka AURA us uncontrolled energy ko khud me sokh leta hai jiski wajah se us jagah ke area ka har energy field kayi guna zyada strong hojaata hai....

aur isiliye hi ek GOD GIFTED baccha apne surroundings ke liye blessing se kam nahi hota but tum dono ke case me iska ulat hua...

jaisa ki maine bataya ki jeeven urja ki wajah se hume pehle hi ye pata chal jaata hai ki aane waale samay me kaun sa GOD GIFTED baccha kahan paida hone waala hai,toh aise me jab humne ek hi jagah ke aas paas do do jeeven urja ko dekha toh hume shock laga....

aur wo isiliye kyunki sirf tum dono hi aise do GOD GIFTED bacche ho jo aas paas paida hone waale the...

isse pehle aisa kabhi nahi hua tha..iska reason bhi wahi AURA hi hai...

kyunki ek bacche se nikle jeeven aur mastishk urja me hi itni shakti hoti hai jisse mushkil se wahan ki surroundings sokh paati hai..

par us energy ko puri tarah se stabilize hone me 100 se zyada saal lagte hain but RAAZ ka janm tumhare janm ke 22 saal baad hone waala tha jiska matlab tha ek nayi jeeven aur mastishk urja ka tumhare grah ke satah se milna..

aur agar aisa ho jaata toh tumhari dharti ka ek bohot bada bhaag unstable ho jaata...

aur wo bhi kuch is tarah ki saikdon mile tak ki satah ek baar me hi deh jaati aur saath hi laakhon log mrityu ko praapt ho jaate....

aur isiliye hi tumhare 16 varsh ke hote hi tumhara accident kiya gaya jisse tum behosh ho gayi...

tumhare behosh hote hi tumhari jeeven urja ko nikal liya gaya jisse tum ek lambi neend me chali gayi..wo neend jisse tumhare grah me coma kaha jaata hai..

aur jab aisa hua,toh tum se nikli wo jeeven aur mastishk ki urja jo tumhare surroundings ki satah me samayi hui thi,wo bhi khatm ho gayi....

tumhe ussi haalat me yahan le aaya gaya aur wahan prithvi par tumhari jagah tumhare mare hue clone ko rakh diya gaya...


puri kahani sunane ke baad pure hall me sannata sa chaa gaya..FLORIN aur MARIA ka dimag shaant ho gaya tha,kyunki unhe samajh aa gaya tha ki agar aisa nahi hota toh najaane kitne log maare jaate aur uska kaaran anjaane me hi sahi par unki beti hoti...

par ALFREEN ka man ab bhi shaant nahi tha...par kyun????

har SAVENT ki hi tarah ALFREEN ka dimag bhi har tarah se kaafi tez tha...

uski aneko khubiyon me se ek bohot badi khubi thi uske instincts jo ki usse uske dad se virasat me mile the....

aur ek SAVENT hone ki wajah se uski ye khubi kayi guna multipy hokar nikhri hui thi...

har situation ke if and buts ko bohot ache se guess kar leti thi ALFREEN...

itna hi nahi,har tark,har disclosure ke waqt uska subconscious mind active ho jaata tha jo usse sahi aur galat ka sujhaav deta tha...

aur abhi bhi waisa hi hua...jab SHAILA puri kahani sunaa rahi thi tab...


ALFREEN'S MIND-YE SAB PURA SACH NAHI HAI......TERE AUR TERE MOM DAD KE SAATH JO KUCH BHI HUA HAI,USME KISI NAA KISI TARAH IS RAAZ KI INVOLVEMENT HAI...

DIRECTLY AUR INDIRECTLY,BUT THIS GUY IS SOME HOW RESPONSIBLE FOR UR PARENTS SUCH LONG SUFFERING...


ye the wo bol jo ALFREEN ke dimag me lagatar ghumte aa rahe the jisse wo nakarne ki koshish kar rahi thi...

par in sabke beech uski aankhen RAAZ aur uske filhall ke ATTITUDE par tiki thi...wo dekh rahi thi ki jo ladka kahin naa kahin itne bade haadse se direct juda hua hai,saari baatein sunane ke baad bhi uske expressions aise hain maano usse koi fark hi nahi pada hai....


SHAILA-i think aap sab samajh gaye honge ki jo hua,wo kyun hua???but fir bhi aapke itne saal ke pain ke liye we are extremely sorry....

MARIA-aapko sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai....ye toh GOD ki marzi thi...jo baatein aapne batayi,uske hisab se toh jo hua,wo acha hi hua..warna najane kitne begunahon ki jaan chali jaati...

hume toh issi baat ki khushi hai ki hamari beti zinda hai aur aaj hume wapas mil gayi hai....


ye kehkar unhone apni beti ka maatha chum liya...


FLORIN-aur wo bhi ussi haalat me jaise pehle thi...ye toh ab bhi 16 saal ki hi lag rahi hai...

SHAILA- wo isiliye kyunki ye ab bhi 16 saal ki hi hai.... ALFREEN ke andar se jis jeeven chakra ko nikala gaya tha,uski wajah se iski umr bhi rook gayi thi jo ab firse shuru hui hai...

toh ALFREEN ab bhi 16 saal ki hi hai.....

AKSHAANT-ab jab saari baatein open ho chuki hain toh kya ab bhi aap wapas EARTH jaana chahenge???

MARIA-bilkul nahi...hum ab hamesha apni beti ke saath hi rahenge...

AKSHAANT-bohot ache..toh fir aap teeno apne alloted ABODE par chale jaayiye and RAAZ aapko hostel jaana hai...


AKSHAANT ke aisa bolte hi hum sabke beech do MAGIC DOOR khul gaye...

ek FLORIN and family ke liye tha aur dusra mere liye...


FLORIN-kya RAAZ hamare saath nahi reh sakta..wo bhi toh hamare bache ki tarah hi hai....


FLORIN ki baat ka SOVEREIGN kuch jawab dete usse pehle hi...


MAI- bacche ki tarah aur bacche me utna hi fark hota hai jitna nariyal ke andar aur bahar ke bhaag ka hota hai...

mai ek orphan hun...mujhe kisi ke adopted bheek bole jaane se zyada acha orphan bolne me lagta hai...and I'll like to keep it that way...


ye bol bina kuch sune mai hostel waale MAGIC DOOR se hote hue dusri taraf chala gaya....

wahin mere bolne aur jaane ke baad bhi kuch der tak SOVEREIGN office me shanti hi rahi but fir...


FLORIN-wo shuru se aisa hi hai..apne dil ki karta hai...ab hume bhi chalna chahiye...


FLORIN ne mahoul ko light karne ke kiye apni baat kahi jiske baad ALFREEN FLORIN aur MARIA SOVEREIGN se ijazat le unke liye khole MAGIC DOOR se hote hue apne alloted ABODE ki taraf chal diye...

par in sabke beech ALFREEN ka dimag ghum chuka tha.. apne instinct ki wo baatein jo ab tak wo nakarte hue aa rahi thi,ab usse sahi lagne lagi thi...

chehra toh uska shaant tha but dimag me ghussa bhara pada tha jo chikh chikh kar keh raha tha ki...


ALFREEN'S MIND-ek anath hokar bhi itni akad....koi naa,ab toh tu bhi yahi hai aur mai bhi,jaisa unsult tune abhi mere mom dad ka kiya hai,usse kayi guna zyada humiliation interest ke saath tujhe wapas karungi mai....

tutegi teri HIMMAT,jhukega tera EGO,aur khatm ho jaayega tera ye ATTITUDE.......






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....




AAPKA APNA V.J

Awesome update.
Pahle part me jo Vikram ka Attitude tha wah aahi tha par yaha Raaz ka Attitude se sahmat hona mushkil hai .
Alfreen ka nafrat hona jayaz hai . Koi bhi apne mata pita ki bejjti bardasht nahi karega jabki uske mata pita ne us shaksh ke liye sab kuchh kiya aur badle wah hamesha unhe ignore kiya ho .
Dekhte hai yah Attitude ki ladai kya rang lati hai

 

[Asif khan]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ AUR MAHI EK NAYE PLANET ME BANE METAPHYSICAL SCHOOL ME PAHUNCHTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF FLORIN AUR MARIA KO USSI INSTITUTION ME APNI MARI HUI BETI ZINDA MILTI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1

(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-12




PLANET-ELYSIAN



PLACE-THE CHOSENS





GOOD MORNING......

GOOD MORNING MA'AM......


hamare saamne khadi ek lady jinhone ek pure white robe pehna hua tha,aur jiski wajah se ye pata chal raha tha ki wo hamari teacher hain,humare saamne aakar khadi hui aur hume morning greet kiya....


subah ka waqt hai....aur aaj hamara is nayi aur adbhudh duniya me bane is achambhit vidhyalaya THE CHOSENS me pehla din hai....

aage badhne se pehle kal raat se lekar ab tak jo jo baatein huin,uska maamuli aur aadha hissa pehle jaan lete hain...

baaki ka addha next update me.....


kal raat saari baaatein aur revalations hone ke baad mai hostel chala gaya tha....

aur jaisa ki SOVES SHAILA ne kaha tha,ye hostel sach ne kaafi acha tha...

6 manzila badi hai ye imarat numa hostel.yahan par dormitories nahi the balki sabhi students ke liye alag alag rooms bane the...

sabse kamal ki baat ye thi ki hamare kapdon se lekar saari zarooraton ka saaman yahan automatically ya fir sahi shabdon me kahun toh MAGIC se aa jaata tha...

aur toh aur hostel ka koi incharge bhi nahi tha par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki wahan rehne waale bache kuch bhi kar sakte the...

institution ka ek department issi hostel ka incharge tha..ye wahi log the jo yahan rehne waale students ki zarooraton ka khayal rakhte the aur magic se us zaroorat ko pura karte the....

hostel in out se SANDESHA UDANTAKA naam ke SPELL se sprayed tha jiski wajah se wahan hone waali har activity par authorities ki nazar rehti thi....

khair, office me SOVES SHAILA ne mujhe mere naam likhi ek parchi di thi aur fir ek magical door se mai us office se apne naye thikane,hostel ke baahar pahuncha...

hostel ke bade se gate ke saamne pahunchte hi mujhe gate ke beecho beech ek letter box jaisa kuch tanga dikha aur jaise hi maine apne naam ki parchi us box me daali,gate ke beecho beech ek magic door ban gaya jiske dusri taraf mera allotted room tha...

waise ek baat bata dun ki yahan ELYSIAN me bhi us waqt raat ka dusra pahar hi chal raha tha isiliye pura hostel khamosh tha....

room me aakar me so gaya..subah jab mai utha,fresh hua toh institution me pehene jaane waala dress jo ki white shirt,black pants,red sweater ya fir red jacket hain,in sab ki ek ek jodi saamne bed par rakhi hui thi..aur theek yahi teen extra pairs mere room ke cubbords me the...

footwear me black shoes yahan par pehne jaate hain....iski bhi ek jodi mere bed ke neeche aur do extra pairs cubbord me rakhe the...

ready hokar mai baahar nikla toh dekha ki school faculty ke do bande baahar lawn me khade hain aur unke saamne kuch students line me khade hue hain...

mai bhi unhike saath jaakar khada ho gaya aur fir hum sab hostel se baahar nikal institution ki taraf badh chale aur kuch hi der me hum institution ke andar the jahan pahunch un faculty members ne hume ek jagah khade rehne ko kaha aur chale gaye...

humme se kisine bhi abhi tak ek dusre se koi baat nahi ki thi...

reason..ab mera toh common reason tha aur wo ye ki mujhe kisise baat karni hi nahi thi but baaki sab isiliye chup the kyunki hum sabhi different planets se the, that means language barrier....

jahan hum hum khade the,uske right me ek dusra student group bhi khada tha jisse dekh kar lag raha tha ki wo bhi hamari tarah hi fresher's hain..

un sabhi ki nazar saamne ki hi taraf thi sivaay ek ke jo jab se mai yahan pahuncha tha,tab se mujhe hi dekh rahi thi....

ye aankhen aur kisiki nahi balki ALFREEN ki thi jo lagatar mujhe hi dekhe ya fir ye kahun mujhe hi ghuri jaa rahi thi....

khair,un faculty members ke jaane ke kuch hi der baad jo abhi hamare saamne khadi hain,wo ma'am aayin...


MA'AM-ADHERENT,DAB,MAVEN,BOFFIN,DILLENTE, SOLOMON, ARBITER....

aisa hi aur bhi bohot se words hai jo alag alag hokar bhi same hain..
ye saare words,language alag alag Planets ki hain but in same ye isiliye hain kyunki inka matlab ek hi hai...

GENIUS......

jo ki mujhe bataya gaya hai ki aap sab hain....but yahan students ko SAVENTS kaha jaata hai jo ki aaj se aap sab bhi hain...

waise mera naam OPHILIA hai..aur jaise students ko yahan SAVENTS kehkar bulaya jaata hai thik waise hi jo un students ko padhate hain,matlab hum,hume WIZZ aur WIZZDER keh kar bulaya jaata hai...

female instructor ko WIZZ aur male instructor ko WIZZDER...

ye toh hua aapka aur hamara common intro....ab mai aapko is mahan institution aur yahan par aap kya kya sikhenge,uske baare me batati hun but usse pehle aapko ek aur baat jaan leni chahiye aur wo ye ki....

jis tez dimag ki wajah se jo ki asal me GOD GIFT hai,aap sab yahan tak pahunche hain,sirf wo ab aapke kaam nahi aane waali hai....

is institution me naam kamane ke liye aap sab ko bohot zyada hard work,determination,aur sabse important focus ki zaroorat padegi....

jitna simple aap sab ke liye aaj tak ka safar raha hai,utna hi muskil aage ka raasta hone waala hai....

but i am sure ki aap sab mujhe,baaki WIZZES aur WIZZDERS ko and most importantly khud ko nirash nahi karenge...


& now about this PHENOMENAL INSTITUTION THE CHOSEN....


is institution ki sthapana aaj se 25 thousand saal pehle hui thi...aur tabhi se WIZZ SHAILA,WIZZDER MOKALSAR AUR WIZZDER AKSHAANT YAHAN KE SOVEREIGN HAIN....


aur ye laga hume aaj ka pehla jhatka...25 hazar saal se zyade umar ke hain AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR.... unbelievable.....

OPHILIA WIZZ ki baat sun unke saame khade sabhi students or as OPHILIA said SAVENTS ek dusre ko dekhne lage the...


OPHILIA-ye shock feel karna ab chhod dijiye...mat bhuliye ki ab aap sab ek extraordinary safar ka hissa banane jaa rahe hain jahan impossible hi ek aisa shabd hai jo impossible hai...

so as i was saying,25 thousands purana hai ye institution....is istitution ke kul 3 PHASES hain...

PHASES...isse aap classes bhi keh sakte hain, semesters bhi keh sakte hain ya fir degrees bhi bol sakte hain....har PHASE 18 months ka hota hai....

in teen PHASES ke naam hain..


1ST-NEW BORNS jo ki aap sab hain...

2ND PHASE kehlata hai GROOMERS....

ye PHASE toh ek hai but isme teen catogories hai jinme aap sabko aapke is NEW BORNS PHASE me kiye gaye performance ke base par select kiya jaata hai..

in teeno catogories ka naam hai


1ST-WEAKLINGS....

ye wo catagory hai jisme is saal ke kamzor SAVENTS ko entry milti hai...


2ND-MEDIANS....

is catagory me is saal ke average SAVENTS shaamil hote hain....


3RD-STELLARS

ye wo prestigious catogory hai jisme is saal ke exceptional SAVENTS khudko register kar paate hain...

and mind u,ye catagories naa sirf aapka caliber justify karti hain balki aapke self respect aur life style bhi in catagories par dependent hain....

kaise,ye aapko is saal ke end hote hote pata chal jaayega....

but for now you are NEW BORNS.....

aage badhne se pehle let me introduce you to the rest of ur this year's faculty...

WHIZZ &WHIZZDERS...TIME TO SHOW YOUR SELF....


OPHILIA WIZZ ke itna kehte hi unke dono taraf ek dhuan sa utha aur dheere dheere us dhuen ne insaani akruti ka roop lena shuru kiya aur kuch hi palon me wo akrutiyan human form me hamare saamne thi jisse dekh SAVENTS ke mooh se ek saath apne apne bhasha me WOWWW nikal gaya...

wahin hum sabke saamne khade hamare is PHASE "NEW BORNS"ke WHIZZES aur WIZZDERS ke chehron par smile thi....


1ST-hello SAVENTS...mera naam OMMIN hai....

2ND-hello SAVENTS...myself NOX......

3RD-hello SAVENTS....i am VIOLET


OPHILIA-hum chaar is saal aapke is first PHASE ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS hain....

OMMIN-so SAVENTS,aaj koi class nahi hogi...aaj hum aapko is mahan institution ka ek round karayenge...

or saath hi aapke wo seniors jinhone unke first PHASE me extraordinary performances di thi,unke baare me batayenge...

OPHILIA-waise aapke knowledge ke liye ye bata dun ki jahan is waqt aap sab khade the,kabhi wahan se hum chaaron ne bhi shuruat ki thi and with God's grace,aaj hume yahin apni wo knowledge jo hume yahin se mili thi,usse paas on karne ka mouka mila...


ye baat sunkar ki hamare saamne khade hamare teachers jinhe yahan WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS kehkar bulate hain,wo bhi kabhi hamari hi tarah yahan ke students the, SAVENTS kaafi excited ho gaye the...


NOX-par round par jaane se pehle aap sab ki abhi ki sabse badi problem ko door kiya jaayega....

koi bata sakta hai kya???


NOX ke is sawal par baakiyon ke toh haath niche rahe siwaye ek ke..aur uske haath uthathe hi....


NOX-yes,tell me???

SAVENT-COMMUNICATION SKILL....


us SAVENT ki baat sun chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke chehre par smile aa gayi....


NOX-whats your name???

SAVENT-MAHI......

NOX-you are right MAHI....good....

aap sabhi alag alag planets se hain...aur har planet ki apni apni language hoti hai jo ki ek dusre se alag hoti hai...

aur yahi differentiation hume khatm karna hai...aap sab jo bhi language bolen,aapke class mates,fellowmates usse apni bhasha me automatically samajhen ye zaroori hai thik waise hi jaise hamari kahi baatein aapko apni apni language jaisi lag rahi hai...

aur isiliye......


BHASHIKA VIGRAHA KAROTI....

LANGUAGE DECODER......


NOX ke spell uccharit karte hi unke sharir me ek urja utpann hui jo unse hote hue hum sabki taraf badh chali aur dekhte hi dekhte wo urja hum sabke mastishk me sama gayi....


NOX-MAHI,aap kahan se hain???

MAHI-mai Earth se hun...


MAHI ke aisa bolte hi sabhi shocked hokar uski taraf dekhne lage jiska matlab tha ki sabhi ko uski language samajh me aayi thi wahin koi aur bhi tha jiske shock hone ka kaaran dusra tha....

ye aur koi nahi ALFREEN thi,jo ye jaankar shocked ho gayi ki aur bhi koi hai jo Earth se hai.....

waise kaayde se shocked toh mujhe bhi hona tha,but iske ulat maine toh abhi tak palat kar MAHI ki taraf ek baar dekha tak nahi tha...

naa tab jab usne NOX ke puche sawal ka jawab diya tha aur naahi ab....

khair, MAHI ke jawab dene ke baad....


NOX-ab se aap sab ek hi language me communicate kar paayenge...

OPHILIA-yahan ka kaam khatm hua,ab hum is institution ke rounds par chalenge...so SAVENTS,jis tarah ki line me aap abhi hai, waise hi hamare piche piche aayiye....

ye bol wo chaaron aage badh gaye wahin hum sab hostlers jo ki pehle hi ek line me the, unke piche ho liye wahin hamare piche dusri line jo discholars (jo hostlers naa ho) ki thi,
wo hamari side se hote hue saath saath chalne lage...

is beech ALFREEN jo shuru se hi mujhe ghure jaa rahi thi,ab uski aankhon me mere liye nafrat thi,jo har pal badhte hi jaa rahi thi....

par kyun??????




PLACE-HEAVEN




KYA BAAT HAI,WAISE TOH HAMESHA MUSKURATE REHTE HAIN,AUR AAJ JAB KAHANI US MOD PAR AA CHUKI HAI JAHAN SE IS ADHBHUDH RACHNA KA ASLI ADHYAYA SHURU HOGA,AAP KA CHEHRA SHAANT HAI????


ye baat AVANTIKA ne VIKRAM ko dekh kar kahi thi jiski aankhon ke aage wahi scene chal raha tha jo THE CHOSENS me ho raha tha...

AVANTIKA ki baat sun VIKRAM kuch kahe,usse pehle hi.....


ALESENDRA-sirf aapke pati hi nahi,samaan halat inke bhi hain...

inke chehre par aaye aise theherav bohot kam dekhe hain maine...


ALESENDRA ne ye baat ASMODEUS ko dekh kar kahi jo VIKRAM ki hi tarah shaant mukh se saare drishya dekh raha tha....

par un dono ki baat sun kar bhi VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS shaant hi rahe...


ALESENDRA-acha VIKRAM ek baat toh batao,us din tumne kaha tha ki ye kahani, iske saare paatr bhale hi tum dono ne rache hain par unhe kya karna hai,ye wahi tay karenge...

par yahan toh jaisa tum dono ne tay kiya tha,thik waisa hi ho raha hai...kisine bhi tum dono ki khwahish ke atirikt aur kuch bhi nahi kiya aur haalaton ko dekhkar lag nahi raha ki aage bhi kuch alag hoga toh fir inme un paatron ki khud ki bhumika rahi hi kahan???

AVANTIKA-ALESENDRA,in dono ka racha har khel,us khel ka har khiladi inki hi chaal par chalta hai....

bhale hi usse jitna bhi lage jo ho raha hai,wo uski wajah se hai,par uske har karm path ke piche ye dono hi hote hain...

dekhna,aage bhi aisa hi hoga...bas ek baar RAAZ ki rachna ko Saar mil jaaye toh is kahani ko uska sahi anjaam mil jaayega....



HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA......

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA......



ye zordar hasi dono VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ke mooh se nikli thi....

waise toh kisiko hasta dekh khudko bhi acha feel hota hai but yahan maamla pura Ulta tha....

VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ki is achanak aayi hasi ko sun aur dekh ALESENDRA aur AVANTIKA shocked toh hui par saath me behad ghabra bhi gayi....

reason.....

ALESENDRA aur AVANTIKA jaante the ki is universe me chuppe anginat rahasyon se bhi gehra rahasya chhupa tha is HASI me....

dono ko hi ye pata tha ki ye puri kahani anginat bhul bhulayiyon se hokar guzarne waali hai,bohot si aisi chizen hongi jiski unhone kalpana bhi nahi ki hogi,par in saare anbujhe paheliyon me agar koi aisi paheli thi jo unhe pareshan kar sakti thi toh wo ye do hasi thi..

kyunki ye wo hasi thi jisse is kahani ke har sambhav taar jude hue the aur saath hi chuppe hue the saare

.......RAAZ.........






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....




AAPKA APNA V.J.....

Excellent birrilant fantastic good update

Behad shandar lajawab Kia baat h very awesome

 

[Anky@123]

Pahle part me jo Vikram ka attitude tha wo kafi positive tha iski vajah wo white energy thi . Magar jese ki pehle bataya gaya h ki raaz sikke ke 2 pehlu ki tarah h to usme negative energy bhi mojud hai shayed isliye uska attitude thoda negetive lagta h ...dekhte hai aage kya hota h

 

[Sharad97]

Nice update

Raaz yaha bhi vaise hi rahega ya kuch badlav bhi aayenge

 

[Black water]

Awesome fabulous update bro