Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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SuperB update

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जाओ आज तुम्हरे बाप को उसके बाप ने माफ किया........
छा गए गुरु क्या बजाई है हिदा ने माब्बा की और राज ने वीडियो भाई की
Nice sandar update bhai
Shandaar update bhai maja aagaya
Awesome update
Suprrb mindblowing fantastic update sir ji waiting for next update
Super hit


Kya shandar update diya hai bro

Now
Raaz - 1

Videous - 0
Fabulous update bhai super
Fabulous update.........
keep posting Vj bhai............
waiting for next update...........
Nice update
Beautiful 🥰 update bhai ji
Awesome fabulous update
Dialog action jabardast h
Keep posting
Vj4u bhai bhot hi jada faddu, khatarnaak, fantastic, zaher, etc........ update tha ye, dil aur dimag dono hila kr rakh diya is final exertion update ne, ab to sabar hi nai ho rha next update ka, eagerly waiting to see the reaction of entire CHOSENS students, parents and teacher's, at the end of the day RAAZ ne ye sabit kr hi diya ki "BAAP BAAP HOTA HAI"
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Ek dammm zakkas
Update

Behtarin dil ko chu lene
vala Update he vj4u Bhaiya
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🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸

BOHOT HI SATIK .....BOLETO BILKUL
PERFECT UPDATE SIR JI

ABHI TOH RAAZ KE PASS SHOCK JYADA THE VIDEOUS KE LIYE ..
AB YE DHEKNE WAALI BAAT HOGI KE
VIDEOUS AAGE KI JOURNEY MEIN KAISE RESPOND KARTA HAI

AUR EK AUR BAAT MAHI KE MENTAL STATE KE BAARE MEIN JANNE KI BOHOT CUROSITY HAI MERE MIND MEIN..... AGLE UPDATE MEIN
YE BHI BOHOT INTERESTING PHASE HOGA JISKA MUJHE INTEJAAR RAHEGA

I'M WAITING !!!!!!!😊
Bahi tum kya chiz ho yar itna zaberdast update diya ka dill khush ho gaya yar asa hi kahni ma jan bani rek na our next update ka shidet sa intazer ha
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Dhhasu update bro
Brilliant Excellent 👌👌👌👍👍👍
Awesome update

Bro
waah dost dar bhi bahut kutti cheeje hoti hai
behtreen alfaj bhai ji
tumhare baap ko ushke baap ne maaf kiya
chha gaye bhai ji
superhit update hai
block buster
AWESOME SUPER FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING DHANSHU UPDATE.
maine toh bas dikh rahi gandagi ko SAAF KIYA....

chuppi kamzori ko be-pardaaye LIHAAF KIYA.....

tumhari dhamki me chhupa dar acha laga mujhe, isiliye.....

jao,aaj tumhare BAAP ko uske BAAP ne MAAF KIYA.....
mout ko bhi mout ka dar
yahi dar toh mout ko bhi lagega dojakh me
jo mout darati har kishi ko
bahut badi saza di hai bhai
bemishaal update mitr
Wow bhai kamal ka update tha aur update main jo first line use ki woh god level ki thi waiting for new update
वाह VJ भाई क्या अपडेट है रोमांचक, बेमिसाल, जबरदस्त
आज इतने सालों बाद divotees को उनके दादा जी मिले, हैरतअंगेज
और जहां तक मुझे लगता है कि माही के अंदर निहित ब्लैक एनर्जी ने अपनी कंपलीट पावर के साथ राज पर अटैक किया था, और videus की अटैक रे आपस मे टकराई तो माही के अंदर ब्लैक एनर्जी खत्म हो गयी थी। अब माही ठीक हो जाएगी ये मेरा अनुमान है फिर अगले अपडेट में तो पता चल ही जाना है
Thank you VJ bhai इतना लाजवाब अपडेट के लिए🙏
Super update hai Bhai
Khatarnak update
Boht zabardast update
Superb fantastic update.
😍😍🥰🤩
पढ़ना और आनंद उठाना
आप उपन्यास लिखिए


बहुत ही खुबसूरत अपडेट भाई
super fantastic update bhai
wonderfull update sab attitude walon ka attitude raaz ke attitude ke aage jhuk gawa..badhiya update bhai ji mabba story ka ek strong hissa thi kash wo sudhar jati to achcha hota
Speechless update bro..
Shaandaar update beheterin hai shabdon ka bahuth behkubhi sey istamaal kiya aap ko yun bhi bola shabdon key ghani hai aap rahi baat kahani ki toh lajawab hai abb dekhna hai ki videous kya karta hai. Aaj sunday hai toh I hope aaj update aayega sunday ka.
Bahut hi shandaar update bhai..

Samay aane pe hisaab bhi hua.. aur ehsas v kraya gya..
Jisko v jis cheez ka ghamand tha wo tut hi gya..

Raaz ka attitude aisa dikha h ki jo soch se pare tha..
Kuchh alg tha.. jiske wajah se usko alag banata h sbse..
Aur to uske power ko v dekh liya h Videous ne.. dekhte ab kitna aur taiyar krta h khud ko..
Raaz is baar v jeet gya.. aur saath hi extraction bhi..
Super duper hit bhai pura EXERTION, kya likha hey bhai har scene, dialog, action kabiley tarrif hey. ab dekhtey hey ki Mamba ki behen Sabil kya karti hey jo ki purey institute mey SOVES k baad powerful hey, wo to yesey hi behti nahi rahey gi, lagta hey Mahi ki dimag mey jo black energy hey wo sayed khatam ho jayegi, dekhtey hey ab agey kya kya hota hey aur Vidous ki kya action ki reaction atahey lekin aap ki pehley story sey itna to malum hogeya ki koi faltugiri to nahi kareyga, koi khatarnak rasta hi dhundeyga
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR
Extraordinary fantastic Mindblowing speechless amazing update
Behtareen update,
Kya maahi us black energy ke pinjare se aazad hui ya nahi?
Ab Videous Raaz se haarne ke baad kya karega?
Kya ye chapter complete Ho gaya ya bacha hai.
Speech less update
Gaand hi faad di hai hida ne mabba ki. Jo khayal(apni life me kiye huye paap) marte wakt logon ko man mein aate hain wo sab hida ne mabba ko dikha diye. Mabba to ab bas jinda lass hi bachi hai.
Super Duper Hit & Mind blowing & Fantastic & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah wah kya super kamaal ki fight h sach m full enjoy

Mabba ki kahani the end ho gyi hahaha

Wah raaz vs videous ki power ka kamaal ki thi chhal se b nhi jeet paya

Kya raaz ne apna god power use kiya ya apne friends ka kiya h ?




Waiting
All updates are mind blowing bro..
And sorry last thora tym review n de paaya
Excellent update bhai

Waiting for next update
superr update bro
kya mahi black energy se free hui ya nhi bhai????
next update ka intzar rahega bhai ji
Superb update
Waiting for next update
Nice update💯💯
Waiting for next update
thanks brothers...be along
 

vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI EXERTION KE FINAL SEGMENT ME JAHAN EK TARAF BRAWNY, SLUNDER,ANWIR AUR MORANA KO HARA DETE HAIN,DUSRI TARAF HIDA MABBA KO HARA DETI HAI, TEESRI TARAF MAHI ALFREEN KO HARANE KE BAAD EK ANJAAN RAY KE LAGNE SE KHUD BHI BEHOSH HOKAR COMPETITION SE BAHAR HO JAATI HAI WAHIN CHOWTHI TARAF RAAZ AUR VIDEOUS KE FIRST FACE OFF ME RAAZ VIDEOUS KO HARA DETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-104



PLANET- ELYSIAN


PLACE-STADIUM





UNBELIEVABLE.... ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT......CHOSENS KE 25 THOUSAND YEARS KE ITIHAS KA YE BEST EXERTION RAHA HAI...


kaafi der tak pin drop silence rehne ke baad ye pehli baat thi joki EXERTION ke sutradhaar matlab REGIS ke mooh se nikli thi...

chaliye,aage badhne se pehle is pin drop silence ka RAAZ jaan lete hain..

waise reason kaafi normal aur jaayaz hai...

VIDEOUS ke behosh hote hi woh bhi gayab ho competition se bahar ho chuka tha aur ussike saath RAAZ and company ke liye ye competition bhi khtam ho chuka tha jiske baad...

MIDDLE GROUND....ek saath uccharit kiya tha ye shabd maine aur mere doston ne jiske baad hum sabhi wapas stadium me pahunch chuke the par jab hum as winners pahunche,toh normally aise mouke par jo taaliyan aur hooting bajti hai,woh nahi baji..

reason...

baaki sabhi SAVENTS joki EXERTION se behosh hokar out hue the,woh sab toh hosh me aakar normally khade hue the par un sab participants me 6 logon ab bhi behosh the...

VALDIS,MAHI,MABBA ANWIR MORANA AUR VIDEOUS...

par jahan VALDIS MAHI aur MORANA bas behosh hi lag rahe the,wahin VIDEOUS ki haalat thodi kharab thi...

uske kapde bohot jagah se phat gaye the aur uske sharir se mere SPELLS ke asar se ab bhi dhuan nikal raha tha...

haan uski healing process on thi par mere GOD GIFT powers ke release aur usse touch hone ki wajah se naa sirf woh process kaafi slow ho chuki thi balki saath hi VIDEOUS ke behosh chehre par bhi dard ki lakeeren saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi...

aur ANWIR ki haalat bhi dekhne layak thi..

woh tha toh behosh par dekhne se aisa lag raha tha maano mar chuka ho...

aankhen puri band nahi hui thi aur jo aankhon ka halka hissa khula hua tha,woh kisi murde ki tarah palta hua tha....

wahin sabse buri haalat thi MABBA ki... skeleton ke bahar nikal wapas jism ke andar jaane ki wajah se uske dono haath piche ki taraf ghume hue the..

neeche zamin par pade hone ke baad bhi uski kamar upar ki taraf uthi hui thi maano neeche koi adrishya takiya rakha gaya ho...

gardan bhi aise thedhi hui thi jaise kisine uski gardan tod di ho...

pure sharir ke alag alag bhaagon se khun rees raha tha jaa jo iske kapdon se hote hue khule bhaagon se bahar nika raha tha..

honth ke side se mirgi patient ki tarah jhaag nikal rahi thi aur behosh hone ke baawjud uska sharir halka halka kaamp raha tha...

uski waisi haalat dekh wahan khade sab naa sirf dar gaye the balki unhe andaza ho gaya tha ki usse kis level ka pain jhela hoga...

kuch WICKEDS bhi the wahan moujud the jo ANWIR aur unki favourite WHIZZ MABBA ki haalat dekh dar gaye the...

aur yahi sab dekh WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur stands me baithe sabhi parents shocked aur dar se gaye the...

wahin teeno SOVES jaante the ki jab tak ye behosh SAVENTS aur MABBA yunhi stadium me rahenge tab tak parents normal nahi ho paayenge aur isiliye...

MAHI, VIDEOUS, ANWIR aur MORANA ki bodies ko unhone unke ABODES me gayab kar pahuncha diya aur MABBA ki body apne aap gayab ho gayi jisse dekh woh teeno samajh gaye the ki ye kaam uski behen ne kiya hai...

khair,un 6 logon ke gayab hone ke baad us chhayi hui khamoshi ko ab REGIS tod chuke the aur isiliye apni baat ko aage badhate hue

REGIS-jo results aaye hain,waisa kuch kabhi hoga,woh kisine kabhi bhi nahi socha tha...

aisa pehli baar hua hai ki STELLARS kisi competition me first toh door ki baat hai, second tak nahi aa paaye hain wahin WEAKLINGS PHASE 2 ke sabse bade competition EXERTION me first aaye hain aur woh bhi ek lambe margin se...

brilliant....

aur ab mai chahunga ki hamare teeno SOVEREIGN'S WEAKLINGS ko is competition ke CHAMPIONS declare kar unhe winners TROPHY apne haathon se den...


jahan REGIS ki baat sun teeno SOVES stage par aakar khade ho gaye jiske beech abhi ek bohot badi si chamchamati trophy rakhi hui thi wahin REGIS ne jo bhi kaha,usse sun stands me sabhi parents aur yahan ground me khade saare SAVENTS clap karne lage the.

in SAVENTS me ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi shaamil the joki aaj second position me the par phir bhi bohot khush nazar aa rahe the..

khair,us TROPHY ke paas pahunch....


SHAILA-WEAKLINGS...aapke performance ki taarif me jitne shabd kahe jaa sakte the, REGIS pehle hi keh chuke hain..

waise bhi EXERTION jaise deadly competition me naa sirf survive karna balki itne strong opponents ko harate hue bina kisi pyscical damage ke saath yahan khada hona bohot badi baat hai...

you really are CHAMPIONS...aur jab mai champion keh rahi hun toh ye shabd sirf WEAKLINGS ke liye hi nahi balki GROOMERS se bhaag liye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke liye bhi hai kyunki in dono ne bhi naa sirf pure competition me behatarin perform kiya hai par saath hi KNOCK OUT challenge ko apne catagory me bas in dono ne hi successfully paar kiya hai...

aur isiliye prize ke hakhdaar ye dono bhi hain...

so all the members of WEAKLINGS and with them ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, come on stage....


jahan SHAILA ki baat sun baaki sab behadh khush dikh rahe the wahin ALFREEN halka sharminda feel kar rahi thi kyunki hamare catagory me bas ek wahi thi jiska performance baaki members jitna strong nahi tha...

yahi reason tha ki SHAILA ke bulane par baaki sab toh stage ki taraf badh gaye par ALFREEN apni iagah par hi sir jhukaye khadi rahi jisse dekh mai uske paas gaya aur...


MAI-ALFREEN....haar ho yaa jeet...ye matter nahi karta ki kaise hui hai...matter bas result karta hai..

aur result yahi hai ki tum winner ho...that sit...admit it,feel it & own it...

chalen..!!!


haath uski taraf badhate hue kahi maine ye baat jisse sun muskurate hue dekha usne mujhe aur mera haath pakad stage ki taraf badh chali..

ye sab stands par baithe FLORIN aur MARIA bhi dekh rahe the aur is waqt unke face par garv aur aankhon me khushi ke aansu the..

waise khushi ke aansuon ka stock un dono ke baaju mai baithe BRAWNY ke parents NAOMI aur SHALTON ke paas bhi tha jo is waqt behadh garv ke saath apne bete ko stage me ek winner ki tarah khade hote dekh rahe the aur ye khushi aur garv us waqt chaar guna aur badh gayi jab mere aur ALFREEN ke stage me chadhne ke baad hum sabne us TROPHY ko lift kiya...

jahan mai trophy ko hold kar normally hi khada raha wahin kuch der baad jab ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ko unki khushi bardasht nahi hui toh un teeno ne trophy ko thaame hue idhar udhar zoron se hilte hue ek tarah ka dance hi shuru kar diya tha jisse dekh sabki hasi nikal gayi thi....

khair, taaliyon aur hooting ke beech kuch der wahin stage me khade rehne ke baad hum sab neeche utarne hi waale the ki tabhi...


AKSHAANT-one minute SAVENTS...aap sabka performance sirf ek TROPHY deserve nahi karta balki aap sabki hi tarah kuch extra ordinary gifts bhi deserve karta hai jo ab aapko milega isiliye fall in line....


AKSHAANT ki baat aur gift ke baare me sun sabhi behadh excitement ke saath ek dusre ke left right me khade hote hue ek line alignment kar chuke the aur aisa hone ke baad teeno SOVES right end ki taraf jahan BRAWNY, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade the, unke saamne jaakar khade ho gaye aur apne apne haath unke aage kar diya aur unke aisa karte hi unke hatheliyon par ek ek DECANTER aa gaya jisse unhone un teeno ki taraf kar diya...

(DECANTAR-3 inchi perfume ki transparent shishi.is DECANTER me fark bas itna tha ki iske upari bhaag me sprayer ki jagah knob tha)


khair,DECANTAR ko apne haathon me thaam woh teeno aakhon me sawal liye teeno SOVES ko dekhne late jispar...


SHAILA-is DECANTAR ke andar ka perfume sirf ek baar hi bahar nikal sakta hai...

saath hi iske andar ek ek note hai jo tum teeno se related hai...


SHAILA ki baat sun woh teeno us DECANTAR ke knob ko kholne lage par aisa karte waqt unhe aascharya hua..

reason...

woh knob ghuma hi nahi..unhone taakat bhi lagayi par natija same raha jisse dekh jab unhone teeno SOVES ko dekha toh...


MOKALSAR-is DECANTAR ka knob sirf tabhi khulega jab iske khulne ka sahi waqt aayega...


ye bol MOKALSAR baaju me taraf gaye jahan HIDA khadi thi...


MOKALSAR-aaj aapne jo performance di hai,usse aapne saabit kar diya ki PHASE 2 me tumse behtar koi WHIZZ nahi hai..

isiliye like your SAVENT BRAWNY,aap ab se WEAKLINGS ki nahi balki STELLARS ki WHIZZ hain...

ye baat MOKALSAR ne zor se kahi thi jo ground me khade sabhi SAVENTS ne bhi suni aur anouncement ko sun woh sabhi kaafi khush hokar HIDA ke naam ki chanting karne lage..

pehle MOKALSAR ki anouncement aur ab apne naam ka chant sun HIDA kaafi emotional hone lagi thi par kisi tarah woh khud ko sambhaale hue thi...

khair, MOKALSAR jab HIDA ke saamne khade the tab AKSHAANT unhe cross karte hue ALFREEN ke paas jaakar khade ho chuke the aur jaise hi MOKALSAR ki baat khatm hui toh unhone ALFREEN ke aage apna haath kar kar diya jisme is waqt ek average size ka FLASK tha jiske andar paani jaisa hi liquid bhara hua tha jisse thaam jab ALFREEN ne AKSHAANT ki taraf dekha toh...


AKSHAANT- jab paani bhi tumhari pyaas naa bujha paaye tab iske andar ka paani tumhe rahat pahunchayega...

isse sambhal kar rakhna...


AKSHAANT ki baat ka matlab toh ALFREEN nahi samajh paayi par phir bhi usne haan me apna sir hila diya..


issi beech SHAILA mere saamne khadi ho mujhe muskurate hue dekh rahi thi aur fir jaise hi AKSHAANT ki baat khatm hui toh unhone apna haath saamne ki taraf lehraya aur unke aisa karte hi unke aur mere beech hawa me hi ek 3 inch ka red metal box aa gaya jisse garm bhaamp sa nikal raha tha..

us bhaamp ko mehsoos kar hi hum sab samajh gaye the ki ye metal box kitna garam hoga...

khair,jaise hi box hawa me prakat hua toh..


SHAILA-tumhare sarvshrestha performance ke liye inaam hai ye RAAZ...

hold karo isse...


jahan SHAILA ki baat sun hairan ho gaye sabhi wahin maine bina kuch soche us box ko pakad liya...

par shocking baat ye thi ki mujhe woh boz bas maamuli sa hi garam lag raha tha..

khair,mere box ko pakadte hi...


SHAILA-is box ko tumhare alawa koi nahi chhu sakta..

agar koi kosish kare toh uska haath jal kar raakh ho jaayega...

anyways, is box ke andar jo bhi chiz hai,usse akele me dekhna par woh kis kaam aa sakti hai,woh tumhe figure out karna hai....

SHAILA ki baat par haan me sir hilaya maine jiske baad ek baar phirse hum sab ko badhayi dete hue SOVES ne aaj ka day off ghoshit kar diya...

aisa hote hi hum sab stage se neeche utre..

jahan stage se utar haathon me TROPHY ko pakad BRAWNY sidhe apne parents ki taraf badh gaya wahin ALFREEN bhi apne mom dad ke paas chali gayi....

usne mujhe bhi chalne ko kaha tha par maine baad me milne ka bol usse jaane diya....

aur is beech BRAWNY apne mom dad ke paas pahunch gaya jispar...


SHALTON-proud of you son....


apne bete ko gale se lagate hue kahi ye baat SHALTON ne..

SHALTON ke baad NAOMI ne bhi pehle apne bete ka maatha chuma aur phir usse apne seene se laga liya...

aaj najaane kitne arse ke baad dil se khush the SHALTON aur NAOMI aur woh khushi unke chehre par saaf dikh rahi thi aur us khushi ko unka beta BRAWNY bhi mehsoos kar behadh khush ho gaya tha..

khair,kuch pal baad jab BRAWNY apni mom dad se alag hua toh usne apne haathon me pakdi trophy un dono ke aage kar di jisse behadh garv ke saath un dono ne thaam liya...


GARV...yahi toh woh expressions the jo najaane kab se BRAWNY apne liye apne mom dad ke face par dekhna chahta tha aur aaj jab uski ye khwahish puri hui toh usne nazar ghumate hue meri taraf dekha..

is waqt uski aankhon me mere liye bohot zyada samman tha aur ye feeling SHALTON aur NAOMI se bhi chhupi naa reh paayi aur isiliye...


NAOMI-beta ek baat puchun...???


NAOMI ki awaaz sun BRAWNY apne mom dad ki taraf palta aur apni mom ko dekh woh unke sawal ko bhi samajh gaya...


BRAWNY-RAAZ ke baare me puchna chahte hain naa aap dono...???


BRAWNY ke sawal par haan me sir hilaya un dono ne jiske baad...


BRAWNY- mom dad..i know ki jo kuch bhi usne aap dono ke saath kiya,uske liye aap dono ke hi man me uske liye bohot kadwahat hai aur aisa hi kuch kuch waqt pehle tak mere man me bhi tha..

par ajeeb baat ye hai ki RAAZ bhi yahi chahta tha ki mera man uske liye ghusse ki aakhri hadh tak bhar jaaye aur isiliye hi usne aap dono ke saath bura vyavahar kiya tha...


BRAWNY ki baat sun uske mom dad chownke aur..


SHALTON-matlab...!!!!

BRAWNY-details toh mujhe bhi nahi pata par jitna jaanta hun,bata deta hun..

darasal kuch SAVENTS me special talent hota hai jisse bahar laane ka tarika bhi kaafi unique hota hai..

mere maamle me mere chuppe kaabiliyat ko bahar nikalne ka tarika anger aur frustration tha..

aisa frustration jiske aage life bhi choti lage..

RAAZ ye baat jaanta tha...aur mere pichle PHASE se is PHASE ke safar ko dekh usse is baat ka bhi andaza ho gaya tha ki life and death level ka frustration mujhe meri insult hone se nahi niklega..

waisa karne ke liye bas ek hi tarika tha aur woh tarika tha aap dono ki insult..

ek aisi insult jo mere bardasht ke bahar ho aur aisa hua bhi...

aap dono ke insult se mere andar ka rage mere hidden talent ko saath dhakelte hue bahar aa gaya...

aur phir RAAZ ne hi us talent ko nurture karne me meri madad ki jiska result aaj aapke saamne hai...


RAAZ ko unke bete ke andar chuppe talent aur us talent ko bahar nikalne ka tarika kaise pata chala,ye sawal SHALTON aur NAOMI,dono ke hi man me aaya tha par phir jiska naam hi RAAZ ho,uske baare me RAAZ janana asaan toh tha nahi...

aur saath hi jo baat sabse important thi,woh thi BRAWNY ki tarakki isiliye saare sawalon ko dimag se jhatak SHALTON aur NAOMI apne bete ki kaamiyabi par uske saath milkar khush hone lage....

wahin same waqt par jab ALFREEN aur BRAWNY apne apne parents ke paas gaye, toh mai apne ABODE ke liye nikalne hi waala tha ki tabhi....


RAAZZZZ....????


mere naam ko ek unsure sawal ki tarah pukara mere piche se kisi ne jisse sun jab mai piche palta toh mere saamne first PHASE ke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS OPHILIA, VIOLET,NOX aur OMMIN khade the..

darasal PHASE 2 ki activities aur life style PHASE 1 ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko pata nahi chalta hai..

pichle PHASE me mere gayab hone aur phir PHASE khatm hone ke baad mera zikr tak unme se kisike saamne nahi hua tha...

par EXERTION se pehle in chaaron ki mulakat EDWINA se hui thi jinhone PHASE ke baare me batate waqt baaton
hi baaton me mere zikr kar diya jisse sun woh chaaron hairan ho gaye..

aur uske upar mere is PHASE ke achievements ko sun toh unhe yakin hi nahi hua tha aur isiliye aaj woh chaaron yahan mujhse milne aaye hue the..

PHASE 2 me bhale hi aaj EXERTION tha par PHASE 1 me toh regular classes chaalu the isiliye apni classes khatm karne ke baad woh chaaron yahan aaye the aur us waqt hamara knock out challenge on tha...

competition ke baad stage me jab unhone mujhe dekha yaa phir ye kahun ki mere badle hue swaroop se rubaroo hue toh unhe laga jhatka..

aur phir jab mujhe trophy mila aur SHAILA ne mere performance ki taarif ki toh un chaaron ke ek baar phirse bohot zyada shock laga..

aankhon se sab dekhne ke baad bhi woh unsure se the aur isiliye mere paas aane ke baad bhi ek unsure awaaz ke saath mera naam pukara tha OPHILIA ne...

jisse sun jab mai unki taraf palta toh unke sawal ki hairani unke aur baaki teeno ke face par bhi dikhne lagi..

reason...

ab hairan toh hona hi tha...kahan pichle PHASE ka woh dubla patla saawla dabbu sa ladka aur kahan woh ladka jo is waqt un sabke saamne tha joki us purane RAAZ ka complete contrast tha...

khair,un chaaron ko dekh ek smile aa gayi mere chehre par aur...


MAI-mujhe mera naam bata rahi hain yaa phir puch rahi hain...???


pehle mera badla hua roop,uske baad mera smile karna,joki last PHASE me maine kabhi nahi kiya tha,ye sab dekh unka doubt aur gehra hone laga tha par meri awaaz sun aur usse pehchaan jaise unke mere RAAZ hone ka 90 percent doubt chala gaya tha...

aur isiliye....


OPHILIA-tum batao..itna change toh sirf magic se hi ho sakta hai koi toh aise me doubt toh hoga hi naa...

dimag toh maan bhi le par dil nahi maan raha ki tum wahi RAAZ ko jisse hum jaante the...!!!!

MAI-hahaha...ek kaam kijiye...apni aankhon se meri taswir kheench uske reel ko dil me utaar lijiye...

jo dhadkan khudke ehsaas ko chhupane lage toh dil ko yakin ho hi jaayega ki taswir ka maalik RAAZ hi hai...


ek baar phirse meri baat sun aankhen badi aur mooh khul gaya tha un chaaron ka...

jahan aaj se pehle jab bhi un chaaron ne mere mooh se kuch suna tha toh woh katu vaani hi hua karti thi wahin aaj bol mere shayraana the aur lehza ashiqana...

itna mitha bhi bolunga mai kabhi,ye socha nahi tha un chaaron ne..

haan par tab me aur ab me ek baat common bhi thi aur woh ye ki tab meri kahi kadwi baaton ka bhi jawab un sabke paas nahi hota tha aur ab mere diye mithe tark ka bhi tod nahi tha unke dimag me..

khair,hum paanchon me se koi baat ko aage badhata ki tabhi...


RAAZ....!!!!!


ek baar phirse mere piche se kisine pukara mujhe par is baar is awaaz me narmi yaa hairani nahi balki ek guraahat thi jisse maine toh sirf suna tha par mere saamne khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne jab mere piche khade shaksh ko dekha toh naa sirf woh sab hairan hua balki un chaaron ki haalat bhi kharab ho chuki thi..

wahin un sabke facial expressions dekh mere face par phirse ek smile naach uthi aur mai dheere se palta piche aur dekha ki mere saamne kuch door par kaale labaade me dhaki ek behadh white skin ki milkiyat liye lady khadi hai...

kareeb 5.10 inch lambi behadh khubsoorat lady jiske chehre par ghamand aur rubaabh saaf jhalak raha tha...

aur apne teekhe nain naksh aur badi kaali gehri aankhon ke saath woh mujhe hi ghoor rahi thi..

khair,jaise hi mai us lady ki taraf palta toh ek pal aur unhone mujhe ghoora par phir unki nazar mere piche khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS par gayi joki ek ishara tha jisse un chaaron ne turant samajh liya aur agle hi pal woh sab wahan se gayab ho chuke the aur jab aisa ho gaya toh us lady ki anzar wapas mujhpar aakar tik gayi aur tabhi...


MAI-chehre par naarazgi par aankhon me dard, har pal badalte bhaavon ke beech ek thehri hui fikrmandi...

aisa toh tab hi hota hai jab koi apna yaa toh mar gaya ho yaa phir mout jaisi haalat me ho aur saamne woh banda khada ho jisne us apne ko us haalat me pahunchaya hai..

aur agar mera ye calculation sahi hai jo hamesha hota hi hai toh aap SEBIL hain, MABBA ki SISTER....


meri baaton ko sun ek pal us lady ke aankhon me zalzala sa aaya par phir khudko normal kar woh chalte hue mere paas aayi aur thik mere saamne aakar khadi ho gayi...

shaant aankhon ke piche se uski mere liye umad rahi nafrat jhaank rahi thi jisse dekh meri smile aur gehri ho gayi..

wahin kuch der mujhe dekhne ke baad...


SEBIL- tumhara calculation toh wakayi sahi hai par life me pehli baar SEBIL se kisiki taakat ko toulne me galti hui hai jiska natija uski behen ne bhugta hai...

par haan,mai ye bhi nahi maan sakti ki ek PHASE 2 ka SAVENT MABBA jaisi strong sorcerer ko naa sirf maat de de par saath hi usse us condition me pahuncha de jisme woh abhi hai...

EARTH PLANET se aaya ek anath ladka jo achanak se hi PHASE 1 me gayab ho gaya tha aur phir jab louta toh uski puri kaaya hi badal gayi...

is kaaya palat ke piche chuppe RAAZ yaa phir background ko bina jaane MABBA bhid gayi tujhse aur yahi uski galti thi...

par uski hi tarah tune bhi same galti kar di... MABBA se bhidne se pehle tujhe uske piche kaun khada hai,ye ache se jaan aur samajh lena chahiye tha...

woh rishte me behen thi meri par rakha maine usse apni bacchi ki tarah tha jiske jism par halki si kharoch bhi bardasht nahi thi mujhe aur tune toh usse ek tadapti mout si zindagi de di...

uske sharir ke baahri ghaav ke saath usse hamesha ke liye tadapne waale andruni zakhm bhi diye hain tune....

aur ye kar tune apne liye jeeteji HELL chun liya hai ladke...

tere sharir aur aatma ke har hisse ka khandan kar dungi mai...aisi haalat ho jaayegi teri ki taklif shabd ko bhi bepanaha taklif mehsoos hone lagegi....

kuch waqt jee le tu DHANG se,phir toh sukoon ko nikal jaana hi hai tere ANG ANG se....


apni baat keh us baat ke asar se meri aankhon me dikhne waale khouf ko dhundne lagi SEBIL par jo bhaav mujhme hai hi nahi woh bhala nazar kahan se aaye..

khair, SEBIL ki baat sun ab maine uski aankhon me jhaanka aur...


MAI-RAAZ...is naam ke piche ka ek RAAZ ye bhi hai ki tu jis HELL ki baat kar rahi hai,woh bhi is naam ko sun apna thikana badal leti hai...


mujhse takrakar hi teri behen ne apni bigdi HAALAT kar li...

aur sikhne ki jagah tune bhi uski tarah mujhse BAGAWAT kar li...


par isme teri bhi kya galti...ab kutte ki tedhi dum ke baare me duniya jaanti hai aur misaal deti hai,bas kutta hi hai jo apni is bewakufi se anjaan hai....

aur jis waqt ki tu baat kar rahi hai, woh mere liye nahi balki tere liye ek vardan ki tarah hai...

apne mastishk ke chakshayu ko khol man ki aankhon se apni behen ki haalat ko dekh aur tay kar apni niyati...

agar is dauran buddhi brasht karne waala sarp naa dase tujhe toh apni raah par chalte rehna par agar chutiyape ki goli hazam kar li tune toh aa jaana hamari gali...

vaada hai RAAZ ka,swagat me koi kami nahi rahegi...

par haan,mera raasta kaatne se pehle apni shakti ka aakhri kan tak ikattha kar lena kyunki...



tera kade se kada waar bhi RAAZ ke liye NARAM HI HOGA.....

par mera waar jhelne ka DUM tujhme KAM HI HOGA......

aage badhe pair piche hath sakte hain.....

par jo meri taraf chali tu,toh woh teri zindagi ka AAKHRI KADAM HI HOGA.....














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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI EXERTION KE FINAL SEGMENT ME JAHAN EK TARAF BRAWNY, SLUNDER,ANWIR AUR MORANA KO HARA DETE HAIN,DUSRI TARAF HIDA MABBA KO HARA DETI HAI, TEESRI TARAF MAHI ALFREEN KO HARANE KE BAAD EK ANJAAN RAY KE LAGNE SE KHUD BHI BEHOSH HOKAR COMPETITION SE BAHAR HO JAATI HAI WAHIN CHOWTHI TARAF RAAZ AUR VIDEOUS KE FIRST FACE OFF ME RAAZ VIDEOUS KO HARA DETA HAI.


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CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-104



PLANET- ELYSIAN


PLACE-STADIUM





UNBELIEVABLE.... ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT......CHOSENS KE 25 THOUSAND YEARS KE ITIHAS KA YE BEST EXERTION RAHA HAI...


kaafi der tak pin drop silence rehne ke baad ye pehli baat thi joki EXERTION ke sutradhaar matlab REGIS ke mooh se nikli thi...

chaliye,aage badhne se pehle is pin drop silence ka RAAZ jaan lete hain..

waise reason kaafi normal aur jaayaz hai...

VIDEOUS ke behosh hote hi woh bhi gayab ho competition se bahar ho chuka tha aur ussike saath RAAZ and company ke liye ye competition bhi khtam ho chuka tha jiske baad...

MIDDLE GROUND....ek saath uccharit kiya tha ye shabd maine aur mere doston ne jiske baad hum sabhi wapas stadium me pahunch chuke the par jab hum as winners pahunche,toh normally aise mouke par jo taaliyan aur hooting bajti hai,woh nahi baji..

reason...

baaki sabhi SAVENTS joki EXERTION se behosh hokar out hue the,woh sab toh hosh me aakar normally khade hue the par un sab participants me 6 logon ab bhi behosh the...

VALDIS,MAHI,MABBA ANWIR MORANA AUR VIDEOUS...

par jahan VALDIS MAHI aur MORANA bas behosh hi lag rahe the,wahin VIDEOUS ki haalat thodi kharab thi...

uske kapde bohot jagah se phat gaye the aur uske sharir se mere SPELLS ke asar se ab bhi dhuan nikal raha tha...

haan uski healing process on thi par mere GOD GIFT powers ke release aur usse touch hone ki wajah se naa sirf woh process kaafi slow ho chuki thi balki saath hi VIDEOUS ke behosh chehre par bhi dard ki lakeeren saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi...

aur ANWIR ki haalat bhi dekhne layak thi..

woh tha toh behosh par dekhne se aisa lag raha tha maano mar chuka ho...

aankhen puri band nahi hui thi aur jo aankhon ka halka hissa khula hua tha,woh kisi murde ki tarah palta hua tha....

wahin sabse buri haalat thi MABBA ki... skeleton ke bahar nikal wapas jism ke andar jaane ki wajah se uske dono haath piche ki taraf ghume hue the..

neeche zamin par pade hone ke baad bhi uski kamar upar ki taraf uthi hui thi maano neeche koi adrishya takiya rakha gaya ho...

gardan bhi aise thedhi hui thi jaise kisine uski gardan tod di ho...

pure sharir ke alag alag bhaagon se khun rees raha tha jaa jo iske kapdon se hote hue khule bhaagon se bahar nika raha tha..

honth ke side se mirgi patient ki tarah jhaag nikal rahi thi aur behosh hone ke baawjud uska sharir halka halka kaamp raha tha...

uski waisi haalat dekh wahan khade sab naa sirf dar gaye the balki unhe andaza ho gaya tha ki usse kis level ka pain jhela hoga...

kuch WICKEDS bhi the wahan moujud the jo ANWIR aur unki favourite WHIZZ MABBA ki haalat dekh dar gaye the...

aur yahi sab dekh WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur stands me baithe sabhi parents shocked aur dar se gaye the...

wahin teeno SOVES jaante the ki jab tak ye behosh SAVENTS aur MABBA yunhi stadium me rahenge tab tak parents normal nahi ho paayenge aur isiliye...

MAHI, VIDEOUS, ANWIR aur MORANA ki bodies ko unhone unke ABODES me gayab kar pahuncha diya aur MABBA ki body apne aap gayab ho gayi jisse dekh woh teeno samajh gaye the ki ye kaam uski behen ne kiya hai...

khair,un 6 logon ke gayab hone ke baad us chhayi hui khamoshi ko ab REGIS tod chuke the aur isiliye apni baat ko aage badhate hue

REGIS-jo results aaye hain,waisa kuch kabhi hoga,woh kisine kabhi bhi nahi socha tha...

aisa pehli baar hua hai ki STELLARS kisi competition me first toh door ki baat hai, second tak nahi aa paaye hain wahin WEAKLINGS PHASE 2 ke sabse bade competition EXERTION me first aaye hain aur woh bhi ek lambe margin se...

brilliant....

aur ab mai chahunga ki hamare teeno SOVEREIGN'S WEAKLINGS ko is competition ke CHAMPIONS declare kar unhe winners TROPHY apne haathon se den...


jahan REGIS ki baat sun teeno SOVES stage par aakar khade ho gaye jiske beech abhi ek bohot badi si chamchamati trophy rakhi hui thi wahin REGIS ne jo bhi kaha,usse sun stands me sabhi parents aur yahan ground me khade saare SAVENTS clap karne lage the.

in SAVENTS me ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi shaamil the joki aaj second position me the par phir bhi bohot khush nazar aa rahe the..

khair,us TROPHY ke paas pahunch....


SHAILA-WEAKLINGS...aapke performance ki taarif me jitne shabd kahe jaa sakte the, REGIS pehle hi keh chuke hain..

waise bhi EXERTION jaise deadly competition me naa sirf survive karna balki itne strong opponents ko harate hue bina kisi pyscical damage ke saath yahan khada hona bohot badi baat hai...

you really are CHAMPIONS...aur jab mai champion keh rahi hun toh ye shabd sirf WEAKLINGS ke liye hi nahi balki GROOMERS se bhaag liye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke liye bhi hai kyunki in dono ne bhi naa sirf pure competition me behatarin perform kiya hai par saath hi KNOCK OUT challenge ko apne catagory me bas in dono ne hi successfully paar kiya hai...

aur isiliye prize ke hakhdaar ye dono bhi hain...

so all the members of WEAKLINGS and with them ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, come on stage....


jahan SHAILA ki baat sun baaki sab behadh khush dikh rahe the wahin ALFREEN halka sharminda feel kar rahi thi kyunki hamare catagory me bas ek wahi thi jiska performance baaki members jitna strong nahi tha...

yahi reason tha ki SHAILA ke bulane par baaki sab toh stage ki taraf badh gaye par ALFREEN apni iagah par hi sir jhukaye khadi rahi jisse dekh mai uske paas gaya aur...


MAI-ALFREEN....haar ho yaa jeet...ye matter nahi karta ki kaise hui hai...matter bas result karta hai..

aur result yahi hai ki tum winner ho...that sit...admit it,feel it & own it...

chalen..!!!


haath uski taraf badhate hue kahi maine ye baat jisse sun muskurate hue dekha usne mujhe aur mera haath pakad stage ki taraf badh chali..

ye sab stands par baithe FLORIN aur MARIA bhi dekh rahe the aur is waqt unke face par garv aur aankhon me khushi ke aansu the..

waise khushi ke aansuon ka stock un dono ke baaju mai baithe BRAWNY ke parents NAOMI aur SHALTON ke paas bhi tha jo is waqt behadh garv ke saath apne bete ko stage me ek winner ki tarah khade hote dekh rahe the aur ye khushi aur garv us waqt chaar guna aur badh gayi jab mere aur ALFREEN ke stage me chadhne ke baad hum sabne us TROPHY ko lift kiya...

jahan mai trophy ko hold kar normally hi khada raha wahin kuch der baad jab ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ko unki khushi bardasht nahi hui toh un teeno ne trophy ko thaame hue idhar udhar zoron se hilte hue ek tarah ka dance hi shuru kar diya tha jisse dekh sabki hasi nikal gayi thi....

khair, taaliyon aur hooting ke beech kuch der wahin stage me khade rehne ke baad hum sab neeche utarne hi waale the ki tabhi...


AKSHAANT-one minute SAVENTS...aap sabka performance sirf ek TROPHY deserve nahi karta balki aap sabki hi tarah kuch extra ordinary gifts bhi deserve karta hai jo ab aapko milega isiliye fall in line....


AKSHAANT ki baat aur gift ke baare me sun sabhi behadh excitement ke saath ek dusre ke left right me khade hote hue ek line alignment kar chuke the aur aisa hone ke baad teeno SOVES right end ki taraf jahan BRAWNY, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade the, unke saamne jaakar khade ho gaye aur apne apne haath unke aage kar diya aur unke aisa karte hi unke hatheliyon par ek ek DECANTER aa gaya jisse unhone un teeno ki taraf kar diya...

(DECANTAR-3 inchi perfume ki transparent shishi.is DECANTER me fark bas itna tha ki iske upari bhaag me sprayer ki jagah knob tha)


khair,DECANTAR ko apne haathon me thaam woh teeno aakhon me sawal liye teeno SOVES ko dekhne late jispar...


SHAILA-is DECANTAR ke andar ka perfume sirf ek baar hi bahar nikal sakta hai...

saath hi iske andar ek ek note hai jo tum teeno se related hai...


SHAILA ki baat sun woh teeno us DECANTAR ke knob ko kholne lage par aisa karte waqt unhe aascharya hua..

reason...

woh knob ghuma hi nahi..unhone taakat bhi lagayi par natija same raha jisse dekh jab unhone teeno SOVES ko dekha toh...


MOKALSAR-is DECANTAR ka knob sirf tabhi khulega jab iske khulne ka sahi waqt aayega...


ye bol MOKALSAR baaju me taraf gaye jahan HIDA khadi thi...


MOKALSAR-aaj aapne jo performance di hai,usse aapne saabit kar diya ki PHASE 2 me tumse behtar koi WHIZZ nahi hai..

isiliye like your SAVENT BRAWNY,aap ab se WEAKLINGS ki nahi balki STELLARS ki WHIZZ hain...

ye baat MOKALSAR ne zor se kahi thi jo ground me khade sabhi SAVENTS ne bhi suni aur anouncement ko sun woh sabhi kaafi khush hokar HIDA ke naam ki chanting karne lage..

pehle MOKALSAR ki anouncement aur ab apne naam ka chant sun HIDA kaafi emotional hone lagi thi par kisi tarah woh khud ko sambhaale hue thi...

khair, MOKALSAR jab HIDA ke saamne khade the tab AKSHAANT unhe cross karte hue ALFREEN ke paas jaakar khade ho chuke the aur jaise hi MOKALSAR ki baat khatm hui toh unhone ALFREEN ke aage apna haath kar kar diya jisme is waqt ek average size ka FLASK tha jiske andar paani jaisa hi liquid bhara hua tha jisse thaam jab ALFREEN ne AKSHAANT ki taraf dekha toh...


AKSHAANT- jab paani bhi tumhari pyaas naa bujha paaye tab iske andar ka paani tumhe rahat pahunchayega...

isse sambhal kar rakhna...


AKSHAANT ki baat ka matlab toh ALFREEN nahi samajh paayi par phir bhi usne haan me apna sir hila diya..


issi beech SHAILA mere saamne khadi ho mujhe muskurate hue dekh rahi thi aur fir jaise hi AKSHAANT ki baat khatm hui toh unhone apna haath saamne ki taraf lehraya aur unke aisa karte hi unke aur mere beech hawa me hi ek 3 inch ka red metal box aa gaya jisse garm bhaamp sa nikal raha tha..

us bhaamp ko mehsoos kar hi hum sab samajh gaye the ki ye metal box kitna garam hoga...

khair,jaise hi box hawa me prakat hua toh..


SHAILA-tumhare sarvshrestha performance ke liye inaam hai ye RAAZ...

hold karo isse...


jahan SHAILA ki baat sun hairan ho gaye sabhi wahin maine bina kuch soche us box ko pakad liya...

par shocking baat ye thi ki mujhe woh boz bas maamuli sa hi garam lag raha tha..

khair,mere box ko pakadte hi...


SHAILA-is box ko tumhare alawa koi nahi chhu sakta..

agar koi kosish kare toh uska haath jal kar raakh ho jaayega...

anyways, is box ke andar jo bhi chiz hai,usse akele me dekhna par woh kis kaam aa sakti hai,woh tumhe figure out karna hai....

SHAILA ki baat par haan me sir hilaya maine jiske baad ek baar phirse hum sab ko badhayi dete hue SOVES ne aaj ka day off ghoshit kar diya...

aisa hote hi hum sab stage se neeche utre..

jahan stage se utar haathon me TROPHY ko pakad BRAWNY sidhe apne parents ki taraf badh gaya wahin ALFREEN bhi apne mom dad ke paas chali gayi....

usne mujhe bhi chalne ko kaha tha par maine baad me milne ka bol usse jaane diya....

aur is beech BRAWNY apne mom dad ke paas pahunch gaya jispar...


SHALTON-proud of you son....


apne bete ko gale se lagate hue kahi ye baat SHALTON ne..

SHALTON ke baad NAOMI ne bhi pehle apne bete ka maatha chuma aur phir usse apne seene se laga liya...

aaj najaane kitne arse ke baad dil se khush the SHALTON aur NAOMI aur woh khushi unke chehre par saaf dikh rahi thi aur us khushi ko unka beta BRAWNY bhi mehsoos kar behadh khush ho gaya tha..

khair,kuch pal baad jab BRAWNY apni mom dad se alag hua toh usne apne haathon me pakdi trophy un dono ke aage kar di jisse behadh garv ke saath un dono ne thaam liya...


GARV...yahi toh woh expressions the jo najaane kab se BRAWNY apne liye apne mom dad ke face par dekhna chahta tha aur aaj jab uski ye khwahish puri hui toh usne nazar ghumate hue meri taraf dekha..

is waqt uski aankhon me mere liye bohot zyada samman tha aur ye feeling SHALTON aur NAOMI se bhi chhupi naa reh paayi aur isiliye...


NAOMI-beta ek baat puchun...???


NAOMI ki awaaz sun BRAWNY apne mom dad ki taraf palta aur apni mom ko dekh woh unke sawal ko bhi samajh gaya...


BRAWNY-RAAZ ke baare me puchna chahte hain naa aap dono...???


BRAWNY ke sawal par haan me sir hilaya un dono ne jiske baad...


BRAWNY- mom dad..i know ki jo kuch bhi usne aap dono ke saath kiya,uske liye aap dono ke hi man me uske liye bohot kadwahat hai aur aisa hi kuch kuch waqt pehle tak mere man me bhi tha..

par ajeeb baat ye hai ki RAAZ bhi yahi chahta tha ki mera man uske liye ghusse ki aakhri hadh tak bhar jaaye aur isiliye hi usne aap dono ke saath bura vyavahar kiya tha...


BRAWNY ki baat sun uske mom dad chownke aur..


SHALTON-matlab...!!!!

BRAWNY-details toh mujhe bhi nahi pata par jitna jaanta hun,bata deta hun..

darasal kuch SAVENTS me special talent hota hai jisse bahar laane ka tarika bhi kaafi unique hota hai..

mere maamle me mere chuppe kaabiliyat ko bahar nikalne ka tarika anger aur frustration tha..

aisa frustration jiske aage life bhi choti lage..

RAAZ ye baat jaanta tha...aur mere pichle PHASE se is PHASE ke safar ko dekh usse is baat ka bhi andaza ho gaya tha ki life and death level ka frustration mujhe meri insult hone se nahi niklega..

waisa karne ke liye bas ek hi tarika tha aur woh tarika tha aap dono ki insult..

ek aisi insult jo mere bardasht ke bahar ho aur aisa hua bhi...

aap dono ke insult se mere andar ka rage mere hidden talent ko saath dhakelte hue bahar aa gaya...

aur phir RAAZ ne hi us talent ko nurture karne me meri madad ki jiska result aaj aapke saamne hai...


RAAZ ko unke bete ke andar chuppe talent aur us talent ko bahar nikalne ka tarika kaise pata chala,ye sawal SHALTON aur NAOMI,dono ke hi man me aaya tha par phir jiska naam hi RAAZ ho,uske baare me RAAZ janana asaan toh tha nahi...

aur saath hi jo baat sabse important thi,woh thi BRAWNY ki tarakki isiliye saare sawalon ko dimag se jhatak SHALTON aur NAOMI apne bete ki kaamiyabi par uske saath milkar khush hone lage....

wahin same waqt par jab ALFREEN aur BRAWNY apne apne parents ke paas gaye, toh mai apne ABODE ke liye nikalne hi waala tha ki tabhi....


RAAZZZZ....????


mere naam ko ek unsure sawal ki tarah pukara mere piche se kisi ne jisse sun jab mai piche palta toh mere saamne first PHASE ke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS OPHILIA, VIOLET,NOX aur OMMIN khade the..

darasal PHASE 2 ki activities aur life style PHASE 1 ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko pata nahi chalta hai..

pichle PHASE me mere gayab hone aur phir PHASE khatm hone ke baad mera zikr tak unme se kisike saamne nahi hua tha...

par EXERTION se pehle in chaaron ki mulakat EDWINA se hui thi jinhone PHASE ke baare me batate waqt baaton
hi baaton me mere zikr kar diya jisse sun woh chaaron hairan ho gaye..

aur uske upar mere is PHASE ke achievements ko sun toh unhe yakin hi nahi hua tha aur isiliye aaj woh chaaron yahan mujhse milne aaye hue the..

PHASE 2 me bhale hi aaj EXERTION tha par PHASE 1 me toh regular classes chaalu the isiliye apni classes khatm karne ke baad woh chaaron yahan aaye the aur us waqt hamara knock out challenge on tha...

competition ke baad stage me jab unhone mujhe dekha yaa phir ye kahun ki mere badle hue swaroop se rubaroo hue toh unhe laga jhatka..

aur phir jab mujhe trophy mila aur SHAILA ne mere performance ki taarif ki toh un chaaron ke ek baar phirse bohot zyada shock laga..

aankhon se sab dekhne ke baad bhi woh unsure se the aur isiliye mere paas aane ke baad bhi ek unsure awaaz ke saath mera naam pukara tha OPHILIA ne...

jisse sun jab mai unki taraf palta toh unke sawal ki hairani unke aur baaki teeno ke face par bhi dikhne lagi..

reason...

ab hairan toh hona hi tha...kahan pichle PHASE ka woh dubla patla saawla dabbu sa ladka aur kahan woh ladka jo is waqt un sabke saamne tha joki us purane RAAZ ka complete contrast tha...

khair,un chaaron ko dekh ek smile aa gayi mere chehre par aur...


MAI-mujhe mera naam bata rahi hain yaa phir puch rahi hain...???


pehle mera badla hua roop,uske baad mera smile karna,joki last PHASE me maine kabhi nahi kiya tha,ye sab dekh unka doubt aur gehra hone laga tha par meri awaaz sun aur usse pehchaan jaise unke mere RAAZ hone ka 90 percent doubt chala gaya tha...

aur isiliye....


OPHILIA-tum batao..itna change toh sirf magic se hi ho sakta hai koi toh aise me doubt toh hoga hi naa...

dimag toh maan bhi le par dil nahi maan raha ki tum wahi RAAZ ko jisse hum jaante the...!!!!

MAI-hahaha...ek kaam kijiye...apni aankhon se meri taswir kheench uske reel ko dil me utaar lijiye...

jo dhadkan khudke ehsaas ko chhupane lage toh dil ko yakin ho hi jaayega ki taswir ka maalik RAAZ hi hai...


ek baar phirse meri baat sun aankhen badi aur mooh khul gaya tha un chaaron ka...

jahan aaj se pehle jab bhi un chaaron ne mere mooh se kuch suna tha toh woh katu vaani hi hua karti thi wahin aaj bol mere shayraana the aur lehza ashiqana...

itna mitha bhi bolunga mai kabhi,ye socha nahi tha un chaaron ne..

haan par tab me aur ab me ek baat common bhi thi aur woh ye ki tab meri kahi kadwi baaton ka bhi jawab un sabke paas nahi hota tha aur ab mere diye mithe tark ka bhi tod nahi tha unke dimag me..

khair,hum paanchon me se koi baat ko aage badhata ki tabhi...


RAAZ....!!!!!


ek baar phirse mere piche se kisine pukara mujhe par is baar is awaaz me narmi yaa hairani nahi balki ek guraahat thi jisse maine toh sirf suna tha par mere saamne khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne jab mere piche khade shaksh ko dekha toh naa sirf woh sab hairan hua balki un chaaron ki haalat bhi kharab ho chuki thi..

wahin un sabke facial expressions dekh mere face par phirse ek smile naach uthi aur mai dheere se palta piche aur dekha ki mere saamne kuch door par kaale labaade me dhaki ek behadh white skin ki milkiyat liye lady khadi hai...

kareeb 5.10 inch lambi behadh khubsoorat lady jiske chehre par ghamand aur rubaabh saaf jhalak raha tha...

aur apne teekhe nain naksh aur badi kaali gehri aankhon ke saath woh mujhe hi ghoor rahi thi..

khair,jaise hi mai us lady ki taraf palta toh ek pal aur unhone mujhe ghoora par phir unki nazar mere piche khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS par gayi joki ek ishara tha jisse un chaaron ne turant samajh liya aur agle hi pal woh sab wahan se gayab ho chuke the aur jab aisa ho gaya toh us lady ki anzar wapas mujhpar aakar tik gayi aur tabhi...


MAI-chehre par naarazgi par aankhon me dard, har pal badalte bhaavon ke beech ek thehri hui fikrmandi...

aisa toh tab hi hota hai jab koi apna yaa toh mar gaya ho yaa phir mout jaisi haalat me ho aur saamne woh banda khada ho jisne us apne ko us haalat me pahunchaya hai..

aur agar mera ye calculation sahi hai jo hamesha hota hi hai toh aap SEBIL hain, MABBA ki SISTER....


meri baaton ko sun ek pal us lady ke aankhon me zalzala sa aaya par phir khudko normal kar woh chalte hue mere paas aayi aur thik mere saamne aakar khadi ho gayi...

shaant aankhon ke piche se uski mere liye umad rahi nafrat jhaank rahi thi jisse dekh meri smile aur gehri ho gayi..

wahin kuch der mujhe dekhne ke baad...


SEBIL- tumhara calculation toh wakayi sahi hai par life me pehli baar SEBIL se kisiki taakat ko toulne me galti hui hai jiska natija uski behen ne bhugta hai...

par haan,mai ye bhi nahi maan sakti ki ek PHASE 2 ka SAVENT MABBA jaisi strong sorcerer ko naa sirf maat de de par saath hi usse us condition me pahuncha de jisme woh abhi hai...

EARTH PLANET se aaya ek anath ladka jo achanak se hi PHASE 1 me gayab ho gaya tha aur phir jab louta toh uski puri kaaya hi badal gayi...

is kaaya palat ke piche chuppe RAAZ yaa phir background ko bina jaane MABBA bhid gayi tujhse aur yahi uski galti thi...

par uski hi tarah tune bhi same galti kar di... MABBA se bhidne se pehle tujhe uske piche kaun khada hai,ye ache se jaan aur samajh lena chahiye tha...

woh rishte me behen thi meri par rakha maine usse apni bacchi ki tarah tha jiske jism par halki si kharoch bhi bardasht nahi thi mujhe aur tune toh usse ek tadapti mout si zindagi de di...

uske sharir ke baahri ghaav ke saath usse hamesha ke liye tadapne waale andruni zakhm bhi diye hain tune....

aur ye kar tune apne liye jeeteji HELL chun liya hai ladke...

tere sharir aur aatma ke har hisse ka khandan kar dungi mai...aisi haalat ho jaayegi teri ki taklif shabd ko bhi bepanaha taklif mehsoos hone lagegi....

kuch waqt jee le tu DHANG se,phir toh sukoon ko nikal jaana hi hai tere ANG ANG se....


apni baat keh us baat ke asar se meri aankhon me dikhne waale khouf ko dhundne lagi SEBIL par jo bhaav mujhme hai hi nahi woh bhala nazar kahan se aaye..

khair, SEBIL ki baat sun ab maine uski aankhon me jhaanka aur...


MAI-RAAZ...is naam ke piche ka ek RAAZ ye bhi hai ki tu jis HELL ki baat kar rahi hai,woh bhi is naam ko sun apna thikana badal leti hai...


mujhse takrakar hi teri behen ne apni bigdi HAALAT kar li...

aur sikhne ki jagah tune bhi uski tarah mujhse BAGAWAT kar li...


par isme teri bhi kya galti...ab kutte ki tedhi dum ke baare me duniya jaanti hai aur misaal deti hai,bas kutta hi hai jo apni is bewakufi se anjaan hai....

aur jis waqt ki tu baat kar rahi hai, woh mere liye nahi balki tere liye ek vardan ki tarah hai...

apne mastishk ke chakshayu ko khol man ki aankhon se apni behen ki haalat ko dekh aur tay kar apni niyati...

agar is dauran buddhi brasht karne waala sarp naa dase tujhe toh apni raah par chalte rehna par agar chutiyape ki goli hazam kar li tune toh aa jaana hamari gali...

vaada hai RAAZ ka,swagat me koi kami nahi rahegi...

par haan,mera raasta kaatne se pehle apni shakti ka aakhri kan tak ikattha kar lena kyunki...



tera kade se kada waar bhi RAAZ ke liye NARAM HI HOGA.....

par mera waar jhelne ka DUM tujhme KAM HI HOGA......

aage badhe pair piche hath sakte hain.....

par jo meri taraf chali tu,toh woh teri zindagi ka AAKHRI KADAM HI HOGA.....














AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......














AAPKA APNA V....J......
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI EXERTION KE FINAL SEGMENT ME JAHAN EK TARAF BRAWNY, SLUNDER,ANWIR AUR MORANA KO HARA DETE HAIN,DUSRI TARAF HIDA MABBA KO HARA DETI HAI, TEESRI TARAF MAHI ALFREEN KO HARANE KE BAAD EK ANJAAN RAY KE LAGNE SE KHUD BHI BEHOSH HOKAR COMPETITION SE BAHAR HO JAATI HAI WAHIN CHOWTHI TARAF RAAZ AUR VIDEOUS KE FIRST FACE OFF ME RAAZ VIDEOUS KO HARA DETA HAI.


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CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-104



PLANET- ELYSIAN


PLACE-STADIUM





UNBELIEVABLE.... ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT......CHOSENS KE 25 THOUSAND YEARS KE ITIHAS KA YE BEST EXERTION RAHA HAI...


kaafi der tak pin drop silence rehne ke baad ye pehli baat thi joki EXERTION ke sutradhaar matlab REGIS ke mooh se nikli thi...

chaliye,aage badhne se pehle is pin drop silence ka RAAZ jaan lete hain..

waise reason kaafi normal aur jaayaz hai...

VIDEOUS ke behosh hote hi woh bhi gayab ho competition se bahar ho chuka tha aur ussike saath RAAZ and company ke liye ye competition bhi khtam ho chuka tha jiske baad...

MIDDLE GROUND....ek saath uccharit kiya tha ye shabd maine aur mere doston ne jiske baad hum sabhi wapas stadium me pahunch chuke the par jab hum as winners pahunche,toh normally aise mouke par jo taaliyan aur hooting bajti hai,woh nahi baji..

reason...

baaki sabhi SAVENTS joki EXERTION se behosh hokar out hue the,woh sab toh hosh me aakar normally khade hue the par un sab participants me 6 logon ab bhi behosh the...

VALDIS,MAHI,MABBA ANWIR MORANA AUR VIDEOUS...

par jahan VALDIS MAHI aur MORANA bas behosh hi lag rahe the,wahin VIDEOUS ki haalat thodi kharab thi...

uske kapde bohot jagah se phat gaye the aur uske sharir se mere SPELLS ke asar se ab bhi dhuan nikal raha tha...

haan uski healing process on thi par mere GOD GIFT powers ke release aur usse touch hone ki wajah se naa sirf woh process kaafi slow ho chuki thi balki saath hi VIDEOUS ke behosh chehre par bhi dard ki lakeeren saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi...

aur ANWIR ki haalat bhi dekhne layak thi..

woh tha toh behosh par dekhne se aisa lag raha tha maano mar chuka ho...

aankhen puri band nahi hui thi aur jo aankhon ka halka hissa khula hua tha,woh kisi murde ki tarah palta hua tha....

wahin sabse buri haalat thi MABBA ki... skeleton ke bahar nikal wapas jism ke andar jaane ki wajah se uske dono haath piche ki taraf ghume hue the..

neeche zamin par pade hone ke baad bhi uski kamar upar ki taraf uthi hui thi maano neeche koi adrishya takiya rakha gaya ho...

gardan bhi aise thedhi hui thi jaise kisine uski gardan tod di ho...

pure sharir ke alag alag bhaagon se khun rees raha tha jaa jo iske kapdon se hote hue khule bhaagon se bahar nika raha tha..

honth ke side se mirgi patient ki tarah jhaag nikal rahi thi aur behosh hone ke baawjud uska sharir halka halka kaamp raha tha...

uski waisi haalat dekh wahan khade sab naa sirf dar gaye the balki unhe andaza ho gaya tha ki usse kis level ka pain jhela hoga...

kuch WICKEDS bhi the wahan moujud the jo ANWIR aur unki favourite WHIZZ MABBA ki haalat dekh dar gaye the...

aur yahi sab dekh WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur stands me baithe sabhi parents shocked aur dar se gaye the...

wahin teeno SOVES jaante the ki jab tak ye behosh SAVENTS aur MABBA yunhi stadium me rahenge tab tak parents normal nahi ho paayenge aur isiliye...

MAHI, VIDEOUS, ANWIR aur MORANA ki bodies ko unhone unke ABODES me gayab kar pahuncha diya aur MABBA ki body apne aap gayab ho gayi jisse dekh woh teeno samajh gaye the ki ye kaam uski behen ne kiya hai...

khair,un 6 logon ke gayab hone ke baad us chhayi hui khamoshi ko ab REGIS tod chuke the aur isiliye apni baat ko aage badhate hue

REGIS-jo results aaye hain,waisa kuch kabhi hoga,woh kisine kabhi bhi nahi socha tha...

aisa pehli baar hua hai ki STELLARS kisi competition me first toh door ki baat hai, second tak nahi aa paaye hain wahin WEAKLINGS PHASE 2 ke sabse bade competition EXERTION me first aaye hain aur woh bhi ek lambe margin se...

brilliant....

aur ab mai chahunga ki hamare teeno SOVEREIGN'S WEAKLINGS ko is competition ke CHAMPIONS declare kar unhe winners TROPHY apne haathon se den...


jahan REGIS ki baat sun teeno SOVES stage par aakar khade ho gaye jiske beech abhi ek bohot badi si chamchamati trophy rakhi hui thi wahin REGIS ne jo bhi kaha,usse sun stands me sabhi parents aur yahan ground me khade saare SAVENTS clap karne lage the.

in SAVENTS me ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi shaamil the joki aaj second position me the par phir bhi bohot khush nazar aa rahe the..

khair,us TROPHY ke paas pahunch....


SHAILA-WEAKLINGS...aapke performance ki taarif me jitne shabd kahe jaa sakte the, REGIS pehle hi keh chuke hain..

waise bhi EXERTION jaise deadly competition me naa sirf survive karna balki itne strong opponents ko harate hue bina kisi pyscical damage ke saath yahan khada hona bohot badi baat hai...

you really are CHAMPIONS...aur jab mai champion keh rahi hun toh ye shabd sirf WEAKLINGS ke liye hi nahi balki GROOMERS se bhaag liye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke liye bhi hai kyunki in dono ne bhi naa sirf pure competition me behatarin perform kiya hai par saath hi KNOCK OUT challenge ko apne catagory me bas in dono ne hi successfully paar kiya hai...

aur isiliye prize ke hakhdaar ye dono bhi hain...

so all the members of WEAKLINGS and with them ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, come on stage....


jahan SHAILA ki baat sun baaki sab behadh khush dikh rahe the wahin ALFREEN halka sharminda feel kar rahi thi kyunki hamare catagory me bas ek wahi thi jiska performance baaki members jitna strong nahi tha...

yahi reason tha ki SHAILA ke bulane par baaki sab toh stage ki taraf badh gaye par ALFREEN apni iagah par hi sir jhukaye khadi rahi jisse dekh mai uske paas gaya aur...


MAI-ALFREEN....haar ho yaa jeet...ye matter nahi karta ki kaise hui hai...matter bas result karta hai..

aur result yahi hai ki tum winner ho...that sit...admit it,feel it & own it...

chalen..!!!


haath uski taraf badhate hue kahi maine ye baat jisse sun muskurate hue dekha usne mujhe aur mera haath pakad stage ki taraf badh chali..

ye sab stands par baithe FLORIN aur MARIA bhi dekh rahe the aur is waqt unke face par garv aur aankhon me khushi ke aansu the..

waise khushi ke aansuon ka stock un dono ke baaju mai baithe BRAWNY ke parents NAOMI aur SHALTON ke paas bhi tha jo is waqt behadh garv ke saath apne bete ko stage me ek winner ki tarah khade hote dekh rahe the aur ye khushi aur garv us waqt chaar guna aur badh gayi jab mere aur ALFREEN ke stage me chadhne ke baad hum sabne us TROPHY ko lift kiya...

jahan mai trophy ko hold kar normally hi khada raha wahin kuch der baad jab ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ko unki khushi bardasht nahi hui toh un teeno ne trophy ko thaame hue idhar udhar zoron se hilte hue ek tarah ka dance hi shuru kar diya tha jisse dekh sabki hasi nikal gayi thi....

khair, taaliyon aur hooting ke beech kuch der wahin stage me khade rehne ke baad hum sab neeche utarne hi waale the ki tabhi...


AKSHAANT-one minute SAVENTS...aap sabka performance sirf ek TROPHY deserve nahi karta balki aap sabki hi tarah kuch extra ordinary gifts bhi deserve karta hai jo ab aapko milega isiliye fall in line....


AKSHAANT ki baat aur gift ke baare me sun sabhi behadh excitement ke saath ek dusre ke left right me khade hote hue ek line alignment kar chuke the aur aisa hone ke baad teeno SOVES right end ki taraf jahan BRAWNY, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade the, unke saamne jaakar khade ho gaye aur apne apne haath unke aage kar diya aur unke aisa karte hi unke hatheliyon par ek ek DECANTER aa gaya jisse unhone un teeno ki taraf kar diya...

(DECANTAR-3 inchi perfume ki transparent shishi.is DECANTER me fark bas itna tha ki iske upari bhaag me sprayer ki jagah knob tha)


khair,DECANTAR ko apne haathon me thaam woh teeno aakhon me sawal liye teeno SOVES ko dekhne late jispar...


SHAILA-is DECANTAR ke andar ka perfume sirf ek baar hi bahar nikal sakta hai...

saath hi iske andar ek ek note hai jo tum teeno se related hai...


SHAILA ki baat sun woh teeno us DECANTAR ke knob ko kholne lage par aisa karte waqt unhe aascharya hua..

reason...

woh knob ghuma hi nahi..unhone taakat bhi lagayi par natija same raha jisse dekh jab unhone teeno SOVES ko dekha toh...


MOKALSAR-is DECANTAR ka knob sirf tabhi khulega jab iske khulne ka sahi waqt aayega...


ye bol MOKALSAR baaju me taraf gaye jahan HIDA khadi thi...


MOKALSAR-aaj aapne jo performance di hai,usse aapne saabit kar diya ki PHASE 2 me tumse behtar koi WHIZZ nahi hai..

isiliye like your SAVENT BRAWNY,aap ab se WEAKLINGS ki nahi balki STELLARS ki WHIZZ hain...

ye baat MOKALSAR ne zor se kahi thi jo ground me khade sabhi SAVENTS ne bhi suni aur anouncement ko sun woh sabhi kaafi khush hokar HIDA ke naam ki chanting karne lage..

pehle MOKALSAR ki anouncement aur ab apne naam ka chant sun HIDA kaafi emotional hone lagi thi par kisi tarah woh khud ko sambhaale hue thi...

khair, MOKALSAR jab HIDA ke saamne khade the tab AKSHAANT unhe cross karte hue ALFREEN ke paas jaakar khade ho chuke the aur jaise hi MOKALSAR ki baat khatm hui toh unhone ALFREEN ke aage apna haath kar kar diya jisme is waqt ek average size ka FLASK tha jiske andar paani jaisa hi liquid bhara hua tha jisse thaam jab ALFREEN ne AKSHAANT ki taraf dekha toh...


AKSHAANT- jab paani bhi tumhari pyaas naa bujha paaye tab iske andar ka paani tumhe rahat pahunchayega...

isse sambhal kar rakhna...


AKSHAANT ki baat ka matlab toh ALFREEN nahi samajh paayi par phir bhi usne haan me apna sir hila diya..


issi beech SHAILA mere saamne khadi ho mujhe muskurate hue dekh rahi thi aur fir jaise hi AKSHAANT ki baat khatm hui toh unhone apna haath saamne ki taraf lehraya aur unke aisa karte hi unke aur mere beech hawa me hi ek 3 inch ka red metal box aa gaya jisse garm bhaamp sa nikal raha tha..

us bhaamp ko mehsoos kar hi hum sab samajh gaye the ki ye metal box kitna garam hoga...

khair,jaise hi box hawa me prakat hua toh..


SHAILA-tumhare sarvshrestha performance ke liye inaam hai ye RAAZ...

hold karo isse...


jahan SHAILA ki baat sun hairan ho gaye sabhi wahin maine bina kuch soche us box ko pakad liya...

par shocking baat ye thi ki mujhe woh boz bas maamuli sa hi garam lag raha tha..

khair,mere box ko pakadte hi...


SHAILA-is box ko tumhare alawa koi nahi chhu sakta..

agar koi kosish kare toh uska haath jal kar raakh ho jaayega...

anyways, is box ke andar jo bhi chiz hai,usse akele me dekhna par woh kis kaam aa sakti hai,woh tumhe figure out karna hai....

SHAILA ki baat par haan me sir hilaya maine jiske baad ek baar phirse hum sab ko badhayi dete hue SOVES ne aaj ka day off ghoshit kar diya...

aisa hote hi hum sab stage se neeche utre..

jahan stage se utar haathon me TROPHY ko pakad BRAWNY sidhe apne parents ki taraf badh gaya wahin ALFREEN bhi apne mom dad ke paas chali gayi....

usne mujhe bhi chalne ko kaha tha par maine baad me milne ka bol usse jaane diya....

aur is beech BRAWNY apne mom dad ke paas pahunch gaya jispar...


SHALTON-proud of you son....


apne bete ko gale se lagate hue kahi ye baat SHALTON ne..

SHALTON ke baad NAOMI ne bhi pehle apne bete ka maatha chuma aur phir usse apne seene se laga liya...

aaj najaane kitne arse ke baad dil se khush the SHALTON aur NAOMI aur woh khushi unke chehre par saaf dikh rahi thi aur us khushi ko unka beta BRAWNY bhi mehsoos kar behadh khush ho gaya tha..

khair,kuch pal baad jab BRAWNY apni mom dad se alag hua toh usne apne haathon me pakdi trophy un dono ke aage kar di jisse behadh garv ke saath un dono ne thaam liya...


GARV...yahi toh woh expressions the jo najaane kab se BRAWNY apne liye apne mom dad ke face par dekhna chahta tha aur aaj jab uski ye khwahish puri hui toh usne nazar ghumate hue meri taraf dekha..

is waqt uski aankhon me mere liye bohot zyada samman tha aur ye feeling SHALTON aur NAOMI se bhi chhupi naa reh paayi aur isiliye...


NAOMI-beta ek baat puchun...???


NAOMI ki awaaz sun BRAWNY apne mom dad ki taraf palta aur apni mom ko dekh woh unke sawal ko bhi samajh gaya...


BRAWNY-RAAZ ke baare me puchna chahte hain naa aap dono...???


BRAWNY ke sawal par haan me sir hilaya un dono ne jiske baad...


BRAWNY- mom dad..i know ki jo kuch bhi usne aap dono ke saath kiya,uske liye aap dono ke hi man me uske liye bohot kadwahat hai aur aisa hi kuch kuch waqt pehle tak mere man me bhi tha..

par ajeeb baat ye hai ki RAAZ bhi yahi chahta tha ki mera man uske liye ghusse ki aakhri hadh tak bhar jaaye aur isiliye hi usne aap dono ke saath bura vyavahar kiya tha...


BRAWNY ki baat sun uske mom dad chownke aur..


SHALTON-matlab...!!!!

BRAWNY-details toh mujhe bhi nahi pata par jitna jaanta hun,bata deta hun..

darasal kuch SAVENTS me special talent hota hai jisse bahar laane ka tarika bhi kaafi unique hota hai..

mere maamle me mere chuppe kaabiliyat ko bahar nikalne ka tarika anger aur frustration tha..

aisa frustration jiske aage life bhi choti lage..

RAAZ ye baat jaanta tha...aur mere pichle PHASE se is PHASE ke safar ko dekh usse is baat ka bhi andaza ho gaya tha ki life and death level ka frustration mujhe meri insult hone se nahi niklega..

waisa karne ke liye bas ek hi tarika tha aur woh tarika tha aap dono ki insult..

ek aisi insult jo mere bardasht ke bahar ho aur aisa hua bhi...

aap dono ke insult se mere andar ka rage mere hidden talent ko saath dhakelte hue bahar aa gaya...

aur phir RAAZ ne hi us talent ko nurture karne me meri madad ki jiska result aaj aapke saamne hai...


RAAZ ko unke bete ke andar chuppe talent aur us talent ko bahar nikalne ka tarika kaise pata chala,ye sawal SHALTON aur NAOMI,dono ke hi man me aaya tha par phir jiska naam hi RAAZ ho,uske baare me RAAZ janana asaan toh tha nahi...

aur saath hi jo baat sabse important thi,woh thi BRAWNY ki tarakki isiliye saare sawalon ko dimag se jhatak SHALTON aur NAOMI apne bete ki kaamiyabi par uske saath milkar khush hone lage....

wahin same waqt par jab ALFREEN aur BRAWNY apne apne parents ke paas gaye, toh mai apne ABODE ke liye nikalne hi waala tha ki tabhi....


RAAZZZZ....????


mere naam ko ek unsure sawal ki tarah pukara mere piche se kisi ne jisse sun jab mai piche palta toh mere saamne first PHASE ke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS OPHILIA, VIOLET,NOX aur OMMIN khade the..

darasal PHASE 2 ki activities aur life style PHASE 1 ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko pata nahi chalta hai..

pichle PHASE me mere gayab hone aur phir PHASE khatm hone ke baad mera zikr tak unme se kisike saamne nahi hua tha...

par EXERTION se pehle in chaaron ki mulakat EDWINA se hui thi jinhone PHASE ke baare me batate waqt baaton
hi baaton me mere zikr kar diya jisse sun woh chaaron hairan ho gaye..

aur uske upar mere is PHASE ke achievements ko sun toh unhe yakin hi nahi hua tha aur isiliye aaj woh chaaron yahan mujhse milne aaye hue the..

PHASE 2 me bhale hi aaj EXERTION tha par PHASE 1 me toh regular classes chaalu the isiliye apni classes khatm karne ke baad woh chaaron yahan aaye the aur us waqt hamara knock out challenge on tha...

competition ke baad stage me jab unhone mujhe dekha yaa phir ye kahun ki mere badle hue swaroop se rubaroo hue toh unhe laga jhatka..

aur phir jab mujhe trophy mila aur SHAILA ne mere performance ki taarif ki toh un chaaron ke ek baar phirse bohot zyada shock laga..

aankhon se sab dekhne ke baad bhi woh unsure se the aur isiliye mere paas aane ke baad bhi ek unsure awaaz ke saath mera naam pukara tha OPHILIA ne...

jisse sun jab mai unki taraf palta toh unke sawal ki hairani unke aur baaki teeno ke face par bhi dikhne lagi..

reason...

ab hairan toh hona hi tha...kahan pichle PHASE ka woh dubla patla saawla dabbu sa ladka aur kahan woh ladka jo is waqt un sabke saamne tha joki us purane RAAZ ka complete contrast tha...

khair,un chaaron ko dekh ek smile aa gayi mere chehre par aur...


MAI-mujhe mera naam bata rahi hain yaa phir puch rahi hain...???


pehle mera badla hua roop,uske baad mera smile karna,joki last PHASE me maine kabhi nahi kiya tha,ye sab dekh unka doubt aur gehra hone laga tha par meri awaaz sun aur usse pehchaan jaise unke mere RAAZ hone ka 90 percent doubt chala gaya tha...

aur isiliye....


OPHILIA-tum batao..itna change toh sirf magic se hi ho sakta hai koi toh aise me doubt toh hoga hi naa...

dimag toh maan bhi le par dil nahi maan raha ki tum wahi RAAZ ko jisse hum jaante the...!!!!

MAI-hahaha...ek kaam kijiye...apni aankhon se meri taswir kheench uske reel ko dil me utaar lijiye...

jo dhadkan khudke ehsaas ko chhupane lage toh dil ko yakin ho hi jaayega ki taswir ka maalik RAAZ hi hai...


ek baar phirse meri baat sun aankhen badi aur mooh khul gaya tha un chaaron ka...

jahan aaj se pehle jab bhi un chaaron ne mere mooh se kuch suna tha toh woh katu vaani hi hua karti thi wahin aaj bol mere shayraana the aur lehza ashiqana...

itna mitha bhi bolunga mai kabhi,ye socha nahi tha un chaaron ne..

haan par tab me aur ab me ek baat common bhi thi aur woh ye ki tab meri kahi kadwi baaton ka bhi jawab un sabke paas nahi hota tha aur ab mere diye mithe tark ka bhi tod nahi tha unke dimag me..

khair,hum paanchon me se koi baat ko aage badhata ki tabhi...


RAAZ....!!!!!


ek baar phirse mere piche se kisine pukara mujhe par is baar is awaaz me narmi yaa hairani nahi balki ek guraahat thi jisse maine toh sirf suna tha par mere saamne khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne jab mere piche khade shaksh ko dekha toh naa sirf woh sab hairan hua balki un chaaron ki haalat bhi kharab ho chuki thi..

wahin un sabke facial expressions dekh mere face par phirse ek smile naach uthi aur mai dheere se palta piche aur dekha ki mere saamne kuch door par kaale labaade me dhaki ek behadh white skin ki milkiyat liye lady khadi hai...

kareeb 5.10 inch lambi behadh khubsoorat lady jiske chehre par ghamand aur rubaabh saaf jhalak raha tha...

aur apne teekhe nain naksh aur badi kaali gehri aankhon ke saath woh mujhe hi ghoor rahi thi..

khair,jaise hi mai us lady ki taraf palta toh ek pal aur unhone mujhe ghoora par phir unki nazar mere piche khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS par gayi joki ek ishara tha jisse un chaaron ne turant samajh liya aur agle hi pal woh sab wahan se gayab ho chuke the aur jab aisa ho gaya toh us lady ki anzar wapas mujhpar aakar tik gayi aur tabhi...


MAI-chehre par naarazgi par aankhon me dard, har pal badalte bhaavon ke beech ek thehri hui fikrmandi...

aisa toh tab hi hota hai jab koi apna yaa toh mar gaya ho yaa phir mout jaisi haalat me ho aur saamne woh banda khada ho jisne us apne ko us haalat me pahunchaya hai..

aur agar mera ye calculation sahi hai jo hamesha hota hi hai toh aap SEBIL hain, MABBA ki SISTER....


meri baaton ko sun ek pal us lady ke aankhon me zalzala sa aaya par phir khudko normal kar woh chalte hue mere paas aayi aur thik mere saamne aakar khadi ho gayi...

shaant aankhon ke piche se uski mere liye umad rahi nafrat jhaank rahi thi jisse dekh meri smile aur gehri ho gayi..

wahin kuch der mujhe dekhne ke baad...


SEBIL- tumhara calculation toh wakayi sahi hai par life me pehli baar SEBIL se kisiki taakat ko toulne me galti hui hai jiska natija uski behen ne bhugta hai...

par haan,mai ye bhi nahi maan sakti ki ek PHASE 2 ka SAVENT MABBA jaisi strong sorcerer ko naa sirf maat de de par saath hi usse us condition me pahuncha de jisme woh abhi hai...

EARTH PLANET se aaya ek anath ladka jo achanak se hi PHASE 1 me gayab ho gaya tha aur phir jab louta toh uski puri kaaya hi badal gayi...

is kaaya palat ke piche chuppe RAAZ yaa phir background ko bina jaane MABBA bhid gayi tujhse aur yahi uski galti thi...

par uski hi tarah tune bhi same galti kar di... MABBA se bhidne se pehle tujhe uske piche kaun khada hai,ye ache se jaan aur samajh lena chahiye tha...

woh rishte me behen thi meri par rakha maine usse apni bacchi ki tarah tha jiske jism par halki si kharoch bhi bardasht nahi thi mujhe aur tune toh usse ek tadapti mout si zindagi de di...

uske sharir ke baahri ghaav ke saath usse hamesha ke liye tadapne waale andruni zakhm bhi diye hain tune....

aur ye kar tune apne liye jeeteji HELL chun liya hai ladke...

tere sharir aur aatma ke har hisse ka khandan kar dungi mai...aisi haalat ho jaayegi teri ki taklif shabd ko bhi bepanaha taklif mehsoos hone lagegi....

kuch waqt jee le tu DHANG se,phir toh sukoon ko nikal jaana hi hai tere ANG ANG se....


apni baat keh us baat ke asar se meri aankhon me dikhne waale khouf ko dhundne lagi SEBIL par jo bhaav mujhme hai hi nahi woh bhala nazar kahan se aaye..

khair, SEBIL ki baat sun ab maine uski aankhon me jhaanka aur...


MAI-RAAZ...is naam ke piche ka ek RAAZ ye bhi hai ki tu jis HELL ki baat kar rahi hai,woh bhi is naam ko sun apna thikana badal leti hai...


mujhse takrakar hi teri behen ne apni bigdi HAALAT kar li...

aur sikhne ki jagah tune bhi uski tarah mujhse BAGAWAT kar li...


par isme teri bhi kya galti...ab kutte ki tedhi dum ke baare me duniya jaanti hai aur misaal deti hai,bas kutta hi hai jo apni is bewakufi se anjaan hai....

aur jis waqt ki tu baat kar rahi hai, woh mere liye nahi balki tere liye ek vardan ki tarah hai...

apne mastishk ke chakshayu ko khol man ki aankhon se apni behen ki haalat ko dekh aur tay kar apni niyati...

agar is dauran buddhi brasht karne waala sarp naa dase tujhe toh apni raah par chalte rehna par agar chutiyape ki goli hazam kar li tune toh aa jaana hamari gali...

vaada hai RAAZ ka,swagat me koi kami nahi rahegi...

par haan,mera raasta kaatne se pehle apni shakti ka aakhri kan tak ikattha kar lena kyunki...



tera kade se kada waar bhi RAAZ ke liye NARAM HI HOGA.....

par mera waar jhelne ka DUM tujhme KAM HI HOGA......

aage badhe pair piche hath sakte hain.....

par jo meri taraf chali tu,toh woh teri zindagi ka AAKHRI KADAM HI HOGA.....














AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......














AAPKA APNA V....J......
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Iron Man

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BAHUT HU SHAANDAAR AWESOME FANTASTIC LOVELY EXCELLENT MARVELLOUS AND INTERESTING UPDATE
 

Said ismail

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Superb fantastic update bro, to akhirkar RAAZ aur Sebil ki mulakat ho hi geya, dekhtey hey agey ye kaha tak chalta hey, soves no jo gift diya kahi ye sab LA aur LJ taraf sey to nahi tha,jo inlogko agey chalkey kam aneywala hey,kuki ATTITUDE mey bhi VJ ney yesa kuch kiya tha.
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR
 
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