Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Jay Sutar

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Damm kaafi exciting cheeze hui hai yaha toh....Raaz ka past mein jana.........apne emotions ko paana........MAHI ka attitude change hona(well sab ko pata hai uske attitude change hone ka reason) Alfreen aur Mabel ke bich bhi misunderstanding ho gayi hai.....but uska attitude change nahi hua hai.....RAAZ ne Brawny ke powers ko bhi activate kar diya aur Hida ko usse train karne ke liye de diya......waise VASULI achhi tarah se kar leta hai RAAZ..... compitition bhi achha khada chal raha hai sabhi mein........well let's see what happens next.
PEACE ✌️.
 

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Damm kaafi exciting cheeze hui hai yaha toh....Raaz ka past mein jana.........apne emotions ko paana........MAHI ka attitude change hona(well sab ko pata hai uske attitude change hone ka reason) Alfreen aur Mabel ke bich bhi misunderstanding ho gayi hai.....but uska attitude change nahi hua hai.....RAAZ ne Brawny ke powers ko bhi activate kar diya aur Hida ko usse train karne ke liye de diya......waise VASULI achhi tarah se kar leta hai RAAZ..... compitition bhi achha khada chal raha hai sabhi mein........well let's see what happens next.
PEACE ✌.
thanks brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF HIDA BRAWNY KI TRAINING KARWA RAHI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MAHI THIRD TASK ME WINNER BAN JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


( UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-87



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST



THE DAY CONTINOUS





IS JAGAH KE BAARE ME TOH AAP SAB JAANTE HI HONGE....????


apne next stop par pahunchne ke baad REGIS ne kahi ye baat jispar bohot excitement se bhar ek saath sabhi SAVENTS ke mooh se nikla...


THE MAGICAL FOUNTAIN...


THE MAGICAL FOUNTAIN...jab first time SAVENTS ko pata chala tha ki unki do din ki training yahan FORBIDDEN FOREST me honi hai,tab ye wahi jagah thi jiske baare me MAHI ne class ke waqt apne WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ke saamne zikr kiya tha...

bohot hi kamal ki hai ye jagah jiske baare me with pics,sabhi SAVENTS jaante the aur yahi wajah thi ki is spot ko dekhte hi iska naam sabke zuban par aa gaya tha...

khair, SAVENTS ki baat sun...


SAPIUS-absolutely right...ye wahi MAGICAL FOUNTAIN hi hai jiske baare me kaafi kuch padha hai aapne...

iske is behte paani se apne human form ko spirit form me badla jaa sakta hai,aur saath hi in paani ke kano ko istemal kar uda bhi jaa sakta hai....

EDWINA-itna hi nahi, spirit form me pahunchne ke baad aap khudko kuch palon ke liye gayab bhi kar sakte hain....

aur in saari cheezon ko karne ke liye aapko kisi metaphysical capability ki zaroorat nahi hai...

jo jo cheezen abhi humne batayi hai,iske paani ko sparsh karne ke baad un bataye gaye chamatkaron ke baare me aapke sochne maatr se woh sab ho jaayenge...

but haan,ek baar yaad rakhiyega.jin jin magics ke baare me humne bataya hai,ye is jharne ke paani ki wajah se activate hote hain..

jiska matab hai ki aap uden, spirit form me aayen yaa fir gayab ho jaayen,ye sab aap sirf tab tak hi kar paayenge jab tak aapka sharir is jharne ke paani se bheega hua ho..

aur haan,kyunki is jharne ka paani normal paani ki tarah nahi hai,isme metaphisycal capabilities hain,isiliye iske use hone par iske dry hone ko speed bhi kaafi tez ho jaati hai...

toh isiliye spirit form me aana yaa fir gayab hona toh thik hai,para agar aap is paani ko use me laa udne waale hain,toh naa sirf ek nishchit doori tak uden par saath hi jaldi se wapas neeche bhi utar jaayen..

kyunki agar aapke aasman me rehte hue aapke body par laga paani sukh gaya,toh aap neeche gir jaayenge....


is precaution waali baat ke baawjud excitement double ho chuki thi sabki EDWINA ki baat sun aur ab sab bas intezar kar rahe the ki kab unhe us jharne ke neech behte paani me kudne ki permission mile....

wahin in sabke beech ACCHUTA toh double excited dikhne laga tha jisse notice kar...


SLUNDER-tu kuch zyada hi excited nahi lag raha...???

ACCHUTA-abbe baat hi itni sahi batayi hai WHIZZ ne...

yahan itni hot bandiyan hai jinke 5 metre tak paas nahi jaa paaye hai hum kabhi..

par ab zara soch,gayab hone ke baad yahan par in saari pariyon ke ek dum kareeb jaa unhe nihaar paayenge hum..

SLUNDER-hum nahi sirf tu tharki.... mujhe aisi wahiyad plans ka hissa nahi banana...

ACCHUTA-sidhe bol naa ki tere sirf naam me hi L***D hai,baaki originally tere neeche koi sarsarahat nahi hoti...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun usse ek baar ghur kuch kehne hi waala tha SLUNDER par tabhi...


EDWINA-toh,what are you guyz waiting for...jump....


isse pehle ki SLUNDER kuch kehta, EDWINA WHIZZ ki taraf se permission mil gayi thi aur aisa hote hi sabse pehle paani ki taraf bhaag ACCHUTA aur..

CHAPPPPAK.........

kood chuka tha ACCHUTA us jharne ke neeche ikattha hone waale paani par..

wahin ACCHUTA ko yun kudata dekh baaki saare ladke bhi ek ke baad ek paani me kudana lage aur ladkon ko yun enjoy karta dekh ladkiyan bhi dheere dheere paani ki taraf badh gayi...

is douran MABEL ne ek baar palat kar ALFREEN ki taraf dekha par fir baaki ladkiyon ke saath woh bhi aage badh gayi...

par ladkiyan paani me utarne se thoda hichkicha rahi thi aur shayad is hichkichahat ke jaane me waqt lagta par tabhi...


SOOBHHH...CHAPPAKKKK......

ACCHUTA jo sabse pehle paani me kooda tha,usne man hi man udne ke baare me socha aur uske aisa karte hi uski body se chipke paani ke kano ne usse upar hawa me utha liya aur kuch upar jaakar ek dolphin ki tarah wapas ACCHUTA ne neeche aane ka socha aur aisa sochte hi wo aa bhi gaya....

ACCHUTA ke is kartab ko dekh ladkiyon ki jhijhak jaise chhu mantar hi ho gayi aur woh sab bhi turant paani me kood gayin...

wahin ACCHUTA ko udte dekh jaise achanak is paani ke khubiyan yaad aayi baaki sabko aur fir sabhi iska faayda lene me lag gaye...

koyi ACCHUTA ki hi tarah hawa me uth gaya tha toh koyi wahin neeche paani me hi tha par spirit form me..

aur kuch SAVENTS gayab ho ek dusre ko push kar dara rahe the...

mahoul kaafi positive lag raha tha jisse dekh SLUNDER mere paas aaya aur...


SLUNDER-chalen RAAZ.....!!!!

MAI-tu chal,mai aa raha hun....

jahan meri baat sun SLUNDER us prakrutik pool ki taraf badh gaya wahin mai bhi ek disha ki taraf badha aur...


MAI-jo waqt beet gaya,woh loutega nahi,jo waqt aane waala hai,usme hamara bas nahi,bacha present,ek yahi waqt hai jisse control kiya jaa sakta hai,agar isse bhi yunhi sochon me gawa diya toh kya faayda...!!!


ALFREEN ke paas jo ki saamne MABEL aur baaki ladkiyon ko enjoy karte dekh, chupchaap khadi thi,mai uske paas pahuncha tha aur ye saari baatein kahi thi jispar ek baar muskurayi ALFREEN aur...


ALFREEN-jis RAAZ ko mai jaanti thi woh sirf apne aap se matlab rakhta tha...fir achanak ye drastic change...!!!!koi khaas wajah...

MAI-correction...tumne RAAZ ko sirf dekha hai aur apni soch se samjha hai,par jaana kabhi nahi....

aur meri baaton ke piche ka maksad samajhna chhod us baat ke maayne par dhyan dogi toh faayde me rahogi....

ALFREEN-wo maayne rishton ki taraf dhakelte hain..

aur faayda nuksaan business me dekha jaata hai RAAZ,rishton me nahi....

MAI-dekho yaa naa dekho,chaaho yaa naa chaaho,faayda aur nuksaan dono hi har rishte me hote hi hain....

ab is baat ko hi lelo..jab tumne dosti ki thi toh ek faayda hua tha tumhe,dil-e-sukoon ka faayda aur jab is dosti me darar aayi toh dil-e-dard ka nuksaan jhelne lagi tum....

ALFREEN-aap se nahi jeet sakti prabhu....


ye bol haste hue apne haath jod liye mere aage ALFREEN ne jispar mai bhi muskuraya aur...


MAI-chalen ab,yaa fir aur logics clear karne hain....


mere sawal par firse haste hue naa me sir hilaya ALFREEN ne aur fir hum dono hi jharne ki taraf chal diye....


ALFREEN-siiii......paani toh kaafi thanda hai yaar...


pair ko paani me daal ye baat kai ALFREEN ne jispar..

CHAPAAKKK........


maine bina kuch kahe piche se dhakka de diya ALFREEN ko jispar wo aage paani me gir gayi..

aur usko paani me fekne ke baad mai bhi paani me utar gaya...

wahin jaise hi ALFREEN paani me giri toh uske agle hi pal usne usne apna sir upar uthaya aur....


ALFREEN-shit,its cold...RAAZZZ......you.....i will kill you....


ye bol usne apni nazar saamne ki aur uske baad chaaon taraf ghumayi par mai usse kahin nahi dikha...

woh idhar udhar dekh hi rahi thi ki mai,jisne paani me koodte hi uske power se khudko gayab kar liya tha,uske piche visible hua aur uske hair ko pull kar diya maine...

mere aisa karte hi tezi se palti ALFREEN piche aur mujhe apne saamne dekh usne mujhe push karne ke liye apne haath aage kiye par woh aisa kar nahi paayi...

reason....

maine khudko spirit form me badal liya tha jiski wajah se uske haath mere aar paar ho gaye...

jahan aisa hote dekh halki chidh gayi ALFREEN wahin humse thodi door khade ACHHUTA ne jab hamari harkatein dekhi toh...


ACCHUTA-ALFREEN,woh RAAZ hai...itni asaani se haath nahi aayega....


haste hue ye baat kahi ACCHUTA ne jisse sun meri aur ALFREEN ki nazar mili aur uske agle hi pal maine khudko gayab kar liya...

mujhe yun achanak gayab hota aur ALFREEN ke chehre par shaharat dekh ACHHUTA chowkanna ho gaya...

woh samajh gaya tha ki zaroor mere aur ALFREEN ke beech uske saath masti karne ki isharebaazi hui hai..

is thought ke dimag me aate hi pehle ACCHUTA ne socha ki upar aakash me ud jaaye par fir socha ki agar maine usse akash me pakad liya toh lag jaani hai uski..

par phir usne socha ki kyun naa spirit form me convert ho jaaya jaaye aur woh aisa kar bhi leta par tabhi...

paani ke andar tairta hua mai uske paas pahunch chuka tha aur jab aisa hua toh maine usse uske pairon se pakda aur upar ucchal diya...

ab baat ye thi ki ACCHUTA ki dono hi shaktiyon ka AURA mere body me ghumte rehte the aur yahi wajah thi ki mere ucchalne me itni power thi ki BRAWNY ka sharir hawa me kareeb 15 feet upar uth gaya..

achanak aisa hone ki wajah se ACCHUTA hadbada gaya aur khudko spirit form me convert karna bhul sa gaya aur tabhi...

DHOOBH.......

ALFREEN jo issi moment ka wait kar rahi thi, ACCHUTA ko hawa me uththe dekh wo uski taraf udi aur ek bina taakat ka spear maara usne ACCHUTA ko jispar ulta udta hua piche paani ki taraf gira ACCHUTA..

ye sab itne sci-fi tarah se hua tha ki
jin jin ki nazar is drishya par padi, sabhi has pade aisa hote dekh aur fir hamari hi tarah woh sabhi bhi apne apne group ke saath aisi hi masti karne lage....

hum sab paani me masti kar rahe the aur paani se bahar alag alag disha me khade the VIDEOUS aur MAHI..

jahan ek taraf VIDEOUS ko in sabme koi interest nahi tha aur woh bina bhaav ke khada tha wahin
MAHI ka antarman do bhaagon me bata hua tha...

uska ek bhaag usse baaki SAVENTS ki tarah aur khaas kar hamari tarah masti karne ko keh raha tha aur uska dusra bhaag jisse BLACK ENERGY ke kan effect kar rahe the,woh usse kisi bhi positive activity ka part lene se rok raha tha...

khair,saanu ki...

in saare calculations se pare hum apne me hi lage hue the..paani me ulta girne ke baad ACCHUTA turant utha aur...


ACCHUTA-RAAZ, ALFREEN,soye hue sher ko jaga diya hai tum dono ne....ab tum dono...

AAAAAAAAA.....

ACCHUTA aage kuch kehta ki tabhi SLUNDER ne uske pair me chimat diya jisse hadbada halka sa chilla utha ACCHUTA jisse dekh....


SLUNDER-arre,jaagta hua sher bhi dar gaya yaar...ab koi aur jaanwar try kar...

ACCHUTA-teri toh mai,rook saale,bhaagta kahan hai...??


ACCHUTA ke aage badhte hi SLUNDER hawa me uth ud gaya jiske baad ACCHUTA bhi usse pakadne ke liye uske piche ud gaya...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki masti dekh ALFREEN has hi rahi thi ki tabhi..

CHAPAAKKKHHH...

ek baar firse dhakka laga ALFREEN ko jiske asar se paani me aage ki taraf gir gayi aur jab woh wapas uth piche mudi toh mujhe khade paaya...

MAI-kya yaar, SAVENT hokar tum itni laaparwah kaise hi sakti ho...??dhyan rahe,humla kahin se bhi ho sakta hai...

ALFREEN-jaise abhi saamne se hoga..


ye bol lapki meri taraf ALFREEN par isse pehle ki woh mujhe pakadti,mai bhi ud chuka tha aur mujhe bhaagta dekh ALFREEN bhi mere piche holi....

waise hum dono ke upar akash me uthne ke kuch pal baad hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER wapas neech aa chuke the..

anyways,mai kaafi normal speed me akash me upar uth raha tha wahin ALFREEN ki speed bhi shuru me meri hi tarah normal thi par jab us raftar ke saath woh mujhe nahi pakad paayi toh usne apni speed badha di...

is nayi aur tez speed ki wajah se uski aur mere beech ki doori kam hone lagi...

mai is waqt upar ki taraf dekh raha tha par fir achanak jaise hi DANGER SENSING shakti ke AURA ne kisi ka mere kareeb aane ka sanket diya toh maine turant apni disha badal di..

wahin mujhe disha badalta dekh ALFREEN ne bhi yahi kiya...mazak mazak ke is khel me ALFREEN EDWINA ki woh warning bhul chuki thi jisme usne kaha tha ki us MAGICAL water jiski wajah se hum ud paa rahe the,uske sookhte hi hamara udna bhi band ho jaayega,aur saath hi EDWINA ne ye bhi kaha tha ki ye paani normal paani se bohot jaldi sookhta hai..

aur kyunki is waqt mai aur ALFREEN kaafi tezi se ud rahe the, isiliye hawa ka pressure bhi zyada pad raha tha hum par..

yahi reason tha ki bas kuch pal aur hi ALFREEN yun araam se udi rahi par is dauran uske kapde jinpar paani tha,dheere dheere sukhte sukhte gayab ho gaya aur jab aisa hua toh..


ALFREEN-oh shit...acahanak hawa me rookne aur fir neeche girte jaane par ye baat nikli ALFREEN ke mooh se...

waise toh kapde mere bhi sookh gaye the par mai neeche nahi gira tha aur wo isiliye kyunki ab mai apne metaphisycal power se ud raha tha...

khair, jaise hi ALFREEN neeche girne lagi toh...


ALFREEN-RAAZZZZ...


halke zor se cheekhi ALFREEN par jab meri nazar neehe nahi gayi aur mai upar ki taraf udta hi raha toh ALFREEN samjhi ki hawa ka tez bahav ki wajah se uski awaaz mujhtak nahi pahunch paayi...

is waqt akash me bohot upar thi ALFREEN jiska matkab tha ki agar woh neeche zamin se takrayi toh uska marna tay tha par woh kuch kar bhi nahi sakti thi...

halka dar,bechaini aur ghabrahat ke beech apne hone waale anjaam ko nahi dekhne ke liye apni aankhen band kar li ALFREEN ne..

usse apna marna tay lag raha tha..aankhen band kiye woh bas zamin se uske dardnaak connection ka wait hi kar rahi thi ki tabhi...

do mazboot haathon ka ehsaas hua usse apne ird gird jisse mehsoos kar jab usne apni aankhen kholi toh...


ALFREEN-RAAZ tum....


hairani aur khushi ke mile jule combination ke saath kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne jispar..


MAI-haan mai..woh abhi aasman me sirf mai hi available tha nahi toh zaroor options milte tumhe...


jab tak mera mazak pura hua,tab tak hum neeche zamin par aa chuke the...

is waqt hum fountain se thodi door khade the...

ek baar khudko yakin dila ki woh zinda hai, ALFREEN ne mujhe dekha aur...


ALFREEN-thanks RAAZ..i owe you one... chalen...


ye bol muskurate hue ALFREEN palti aur aage badh gayi aur tabhi...


MAI-ofcourse ALFREEN..you do owe me...and you dont worry at all...

ab jab bina maange service de di hai,toh ab tum chaaho naa chaaho, keemat bhi wasool hi lunga....







SOME WHERE IN FORBIDDEN FOREST






ACHA SUNO ANWIR....RAAZ PAR WAAR MAI NAHI KARUNGI....


MORANA ki is baat par jahan baaki ke panchon WICKEDS shocked hue wahin ANWIR bas halke se muskuraya aur...


ANWIR-kya baat hai.....pyar toh nahi ho gaya usse....???

MORANA-pyar,love loosers ke liye hota hai darling....i lust him,and too badly...

uske chehra,uski body,usse nikalta manly aroma, it's like an addition to me....

aur is addiction ke saath i cant punish him..

ANWIR-par tumhari is addiction se uska future badlega nahi...he is going to suffer....

MORANA-i know that..aur isiliye mai chahti hun ki when you guyz punish him,beat the shit out of him,
toh make sure ki uski woh lusty body,uske face ka woh catchy look,sab bigad jaaye taaki meri addiction khatm so sake...

ANWIR-ye wish tumhari zaroor puri hogi...

1st WICKED-ANWIR yaar ek wish humari bhi puri kar de...last baar us parking area me sirf tune hi us RAAZ ko maara tha isiliye is baar ye mouka hume chahiye...

is baar we want to punish him....

ANWIR-all right then...kal raat STELLARS ki stay se usse bahar nikaal uski khatirdaari tum sab karoge par wo tormentation sirf physical hoga...

BLACK ENERGY ka woh waar jisse uske senses hamesha ke liye chale jaayenge,uske anduri sharir ke saare bhaagon par us energy ka aisa impact padega ki wo saare part dikhne me bhar sahi lagenge par asal me uske sabhi ang gal chuke honge,wo aakhri waar sirf mai karunga....

PAANCHON-done...







PLACE-NEAR THE MAGICAL FOUNTAIN...





SO NOW IS THE TIME WHEN WE GET OUR SAVENT OF THE DAY...


apne haathon ko rub karte hue bohot hi excitement se kahi ye baat PETRA ne...

raat ka waqt hai...ussi MAGICAL FOUNTAIN ke paas ek open area tha jahan aaj camping ki thi humne aur filhal saare camps ke beech ki ek jagah par born fire jala sabhi WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur hum sabhi SAVENTS ek round shape bana baithe the...

khair, PETRA ki baat sun jahan sabhi excited ho gaye the wahin MAHI ne ek baar mujhe ghoor tak dekha...

PETRA ne competition start karne ka initiative le liya tha jisse aage badhate hue,


REGIS-MAHI,RAAZ.....ap dono yahan humare paas aayiye...


REGIS ki baat sun hum dono hi apni apni jagah se uth unke saamne pahunch gaye jiske baad...


REGIS-ek dusre kaa haath pakad apne antarman me us jagah par jhaank jahan se tumhe apne emotions ki energy mehsoos hoti hai,tum dono ko UDBHARATE EKASMIN SHAKTIYEM,is spell ko uccharit karna hai...

is spell ke prabhav se tum dono ke man me hi ek golakar chakra ban jaayga jisme tumhare REFINER ke paanchon part,HAPPY,SAD,ANGRY,LOVE,HATE,sabke sab us ubhre chakra me aa jaayenge jiske baad un paanchon shaktiyon me se kisi ek ko tumhara EMOTION select karega aur aisa hote hi tum dono ke mooh se is REFINER power ka naam apne aap bahar nikal aayega..

aur jo bhi naam yaa fir ye kahun ki shakti tum dono ki emotion chunegi,ussi ke base par tum dono ke beech competition hoga...


ab ye competition aur uska ye neev rakhne ka tarika wakayi interesting tha jisse sun sabki excitement aur badh gayi thi...

khair, WHIZZDER ke kahe anusar MAHI ne apna haath aage kiya jisse maine pakad liya aur aisa hone ke baad hum dono ne hi apni apni aankhen band kar ki aur....


UDBHARATE EKASMIN SHAKTIYEM....


apne antarman me jhaank apne emotion ko mehsoos kar is spell ko uccharit kiya hum dono ne jiske baad...

hum dono ke hi sharir ki joint urja hamare haathon se hote hue hamare andar pravesh kar gayi jiske baad wahi hua jaisa REGIS ne kaha tha..

hum dono ke andar hi ek golakar chakra bana jiske sabhi ends me ek ek kar 5 prakash ne janm liya joki hamare REFINER power the...

aisa hone ke baad wo sabhi powers halke halke chamakte rahe par fir unme se wo chakra jisse humare emotions ne chuna tha,woh tez chamakne laga jiske baad hum dono ke hi mooh se ek saath nikla...

LOVE...


jee haan doston,hum dono ke hi emotions ki shakti ne humare liye LOVE REFINER ko chuna jisse uccharit karte hi hum dono ki aankh jhat se khul gayi aur hum dono ne ek dusre ka haath chhod diya...

jahan hamare competition ka base LOVE sun WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS khush ho gaye the wahin mere aur MAHI ki maansik sthithi usse puri ulti thi aur woh isiliye kyunki jaise har woh kaam jo kisi normal human ke liye next to impossible hota hai,wo ek SAVENT ke kiye easy hota hai thik ussi tarah LOVE jaisi feeling jo har human ke liye easy aur normal hoti hai,woh apne focus aur dedication ki wajah se ek SAVENT ke liye utni hi mushkil hoti hai..

aur uspar jis tarah ki life maine aur MAHI ne beetayi thi,without the love and affection of parents,uski wajah se is chune gaye competition me excell karna hamare liye next to impossible tha..

hamare facial expressions ko dekh hamari manosththi samajh gaye the sabhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS aur isiliye...


ROVEL-ghabraane ki zaroorat nahi hai MAHI, RAAZ....

jitna mushkil tum soch rahe ho,utna mushkil nahi hone waala hai ye competition tum dono ke liye...

ek baar apne antar man me firse jhaakon...dekho,kya tumhe bhi wahan koi prakash dikh raha hai...???


ROVEL ki baat maan jab humne apne andar dekha toh paaya ki LOVE REFINER ka prakash humare andar ab bhi jal raha hai aur ye dekh humne haan me apna sir hilaya jispar...


ROVEL-us SPELL ke prabhav se tumahare emotions dwara china gaya REFINER kuch der aise hi chamakta rahega..

ab un teeno INTRIGUED FRUITS ko nikalo jo tumne subah toda tha..

ROVEL ki baat sun jab humne un teeno fruits ko nikala toh...


SAPIUS-inhe INTRIGUED FRUITS isiliye kaha jaata hai kyunki inke ras me ek alag tarah ki shakti hoti hai..

us shakti ke prabhav se chune gaye REFINER par uske asal swabhav ka prabhav hota hai...

tum dono ko in teeno hi fruits ko nichod isse nikalne waale ras ko peena hai..

tumhare aisa karte hi jab tumhare andar pravesh kar in rason ka chhuvan tumhare man me prakashit shakti se hoga toh tumhe LOVE se related har ehsaas ki temporary knowledge milegi jiski madad se tum is competition me apne vivek anusar perform kar paaoge....


SAPIUS ki baat sun humne baari baari teeno fruits ko apne mooh ke upar rakh nichoda aur aisa hone par jab wo saare ras humare andar pahunch LOVE REFINER ki ujagar hui urja se takraye toh ek jhatka laga hum dono ke sharir ko aur humari aankhen band hone lagi..

band aankhon ke beech humare brain me LOVE se related kaafi kuch chalne laga jisse hum ek trance ki haalat me dekhne lage..

wahin is beech WHIZZDERS aur WHIZZES ne ye tay kiya ki kyunki ye competition LOVE par hai toh aise me isse handle EDWINA karegi aur woh isiliye kyunki uski kuch waqt pehle hi love marriage hui thi aur saath hi REFINERS me LOVE REFINER par EDWINA ka control baakiyon se zyada raha hai..

is discussion ke beech jo bhi hum dekh sakte the,dekh chuke the aur isiliye jaise hi hamari aankhen khuli toh...


EDWINA-ye competition best of three me hoga jiske task moukhik honge aur short honge...

jiska jawab mujhe zyada pasand aayega,point usse milega....

aur is tarah 3 me se jisne 2 part ko jeet liye,wo banega SAVENT OF THE DAY..

ready..????

MAHI/MAI-READY...

EDWINA-great...toh competition ka pehla bhaag kuch yun hoga ki mai LOVE se related ek ek sawal puchungi tum dono se jiska behad short way me jawab dena hai tumhe...

toh shuru karte hain,THE COMPETITION OF LOVE.....

MAHI.... pehla sawal tumse,aur sawal ye hai ki,


LOVE,PYAR,DIL se hota hai ya DIMAG se....


EDWINA ki baat sun ek baar MAHI ne apne brain ke us bhaag me jisme kuch der pehle LOVE se related kaafi infos feed ho rahe the,usme jhaanka aur....


MAHI-

naa DIL se hota hai,
aur naa DIMAG se hota hai...

ISHQ wo hunar hai,
jo ek khubsoorat ITTEFAQ se hota hai....


kaafi impressed hui thi EDWINA MAHI ke answer se..khair, MAHI ke jawab ko sun...


EDWINA-brilliant MAHI.....

ok,now your turn RAAZ.....

ISHQ me tadap ko with an example sirf ek line me discribe karkar batao....????


MAI-

RETH par laakar MACHLIYAN rakh do,PYAR ki tadap jaan jaaoge....


simple par to the point example jisse sun hairan bhi hue saare WHIZZ , WHIZZDER aur saath hi kaafi impress bhi...

khair,first round ho chuka tha aur isiliye....


REGIS-toh is round me kaun jeeta EDWINA....???

EDWINA-dono ke hi jawab to the point aur best the isiliye ye round draw hota hai....


EDWINA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS hooting karne lage the...

khair,first round ke baad ab baari thi second round ki aur isiliye...


EDWINA-toh ab baari hai second round ki jisme LOVE se related ek word jo mai abhi bolungi,usse base banakar ek two line poetry bolegi MAHI aur us poetry ke beech se ek word select kar bina time gap ke ek dusri poetry bolni hai RAAZ ko...

ye silsala kul teen poetries ka hoga... dono me jo bhi aisa nahi kar paaya,woh ye round loose kar dega....

so MAHI,ab tum start karogi and RAAZ,tumhe turant aage line banani hai....MAHI,your word is ASHK....


MAHI-uske yaad me behne waala ASHQ,
zameen par boh diya JAAYE toh AANKHEN ug AAYE...



MAI-JHEEL acha,KANWAL acha,ki JAAM ACHA HAI...

uske AANKHON ke liye ye teeno hi NAAM acha hai....



MAHI-rangeen duniye ke rangin logon me NAAM na likh mera...

touba kar lungi,marne se pehle ANJAAM na likh mera....



MAI-bujhe chirag ko ishq hua tha tez hawaon se,

ab ANJAAME-ISHQ toh kamaal ka hi hona tha...



MAHI-ISHQ ko bhi ISHQ ho toh phir dekhun mai ISHQ ko bhi...

kaise roye,kaise tadpe,ISHQ apne ISHQ me....



MAI-manzur hai woh TADAP,jis TADAP se uska DEEDAAR ho,

jisse dekh dil naa TADPE,ho hi nahi sakta ki woh PYAAR ho....


issike saath second round khatm ho chuka tha aur result,mahoul ek dum shaant ho chuka tha..hum dono ke jawab ko sun SAVENTS aur WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS dono hi shocked the..

INTRIGUED FRUITS ke sewan se humare andar ka LOVE QUOTENT bahar aayega,ye toh woh sab jaante the,par uske baahar aane se jawab aise niklenge,iski kisiko ummid nahi thi..

is hairangi ka sabse zyada quota EDWINA WHIZZ ke khaate me tha aur woh isiliye kyunki unke mutabik ye second round bhi tie par tha..

khair,ab kar bhi kya sakti thi woh siway is competition ko aage badhane ke isiliye


EDWINA-ye round bhi draw par khatm hota hai aur ab baari hai third aur last round ki....

kehte hain ki BUDDHI BAL ho,yaa fir SHARIRIK BAL,in dono hi balon se upar hota hai PREM ka BAL....

kaise,ye batana hai aap dono ko...????

MAHI,tum shuru karo...



MAHI-buddhi se lagi bal khudke dimag ko hi NICHODTI HAI...

sharir ki lagayi taakat apne hi angon ko bhi TODTI HAI....

bina khudko yaa kisi aur taklif pahunchayen,

ek PREM hi hai jo insaan ko ISWAR ke saath JODTI HAI...


MAHI ka ye example wakayi kaafi acha tha,yahi kaaran tha ki naa sirf SAVENTS balki WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne bhi iski taarif bhi ki aur halki clapping bhi...

saath hi saath MAHI ke jawab ko sun sabko ye laga ki isse behtar jawab shayad mai nahi de paaunga,natija MAHI ki jeet..

khair, competition toh pura karna hi tha aur isiliye...


EDWINA-your turn RAAZ....

MAI-mere jawab ko sunane se pehle us jawab ke dono paatron ke baare me janana zaroori hai warna jawab ki ehmiyat samajh nahi paayengi aap..

isiliye,mere dimag se in dono paatron aur unki kahani ko pehle jaaniye aur samjhiye aap....


meri baat sun EDWINA ne baaki WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki taraf dekha jispar..


SAPIUS-agar aisa hai toh fir un paatron,kirdaron ke baare me yahan moujud har kisko janana chahiye..

mai khudko aur yahan moujud sabhike brain ko tumhare brain se jodta hun..

iske baad tum apne brain me jo batana chahte ho,usse related chizen sochna shuru karna,jisse hum bhi uske baare me jaan jaayenge...


SAPIUS ki baat sun haan me sir hilaya maine jiske baad unhone apna ek haath mere sir par rakha..

unke aisa karne ke baad unke haathon se ek ray nikal mere brain me sama gayi..

iske baad SAPIUS ke brain se bohot se rays nikal sabhi WHIZZES WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS ke sir ki taraf badh gaye jiske baad hum sabke brains interconnect ho chuke the..

aur ab shuru kiya maine un do kirdaron ke baare me jaankari transmit karna joki the RADHA KRISHNA jinke baare me maine VIKRAM ki di book me padha tha.

mere aisa karte hi sabhi ke BRAINS me in dono ke baare me sab kuch transmit hone laga aur jisse jaan woh sab surprised bhi hue aur impressed bhi...

par in sabke beech jab ek ray VIDEOUS ke sir par bhi padi aur jaise hi is ray ke through uske brain me RADHA KRISHNA ki chavvi dikhi,usse laga ek jhatka..

ek aisa jhatka jiski wajah se woh behosh hote hote bacha tha.. jiske baad usne turant apna connection us ray se hata liya tha..

khair,ab tak transmission pura ho chuka tha jiske baad SAPIUS ne apna aur baakiyon ka connection mere BRAIN se hata liya..


EDWINA-wow.. that was beautiful..haan toh RAAZ,ab hume tumhare kirdaaron ke baare me pata hai,toh ab apna jawab do...


MAI-


SUDARSHAN CHAKRA DHAARI SHREE KRISHNA se saare paapi DARTE HAIN....


BUDDHIMAAN HON,YA SHAKTIVAAN,inse takra woh sab buri mout MARTE hain...


phir bhi logon ko DWARKADHISH par nahi,balki prem waale KANHA par bharosa hai,


tabhi toh jis RADHA ka GEETA me door door tak naam tak nahi,

uske samapan par log,RADHE RADHE KARTE HAIN....




out of the box answer jiska result sirf ek hi ho sakta tha,aur woh tha..


EDWINA-genius....you win RAAZ.... & you truly and deservingly are the SAVENT OF THE DAY....


RADHA KRISHNA ki kahani se waise hi kaafi touched hui thi EDWINA aur rahi sahi kasar mere jawab ne puri kar di thi..

maine jo baat kahi thi,usse sun kaafi emotional ho gayi thi EDWINA
aur yahi wajah thi ki mujhe winner anounce kar woh dusri taraf badh gayi...

wahin baaki WHIZZDERS bhi khush aur emotional dono hi ho gaye the isiliye mujhe congratulate kar woh sab bhi nikal gaye...

saare SAVENTS ne bhi kaafi tarif ki mere jawab ki excluding VIDEOUS...

aur in sabke beech khadi thi MAHI jo shayad aaj first time tha,jab woh meri jeet par joki uske khilaaf hi hui thi,ghussa nahi thi..

iska ek reason tha RADHA KRISHNA ki woh kahani jo mere through jaani thi usne aur dusra reason tha woh INTRIGUED FRUITS ka ras jiske prabhaav abhi bhi bacha hua tha,aur yahi wajah thi ki uske brain me kaabiz BLACK ENERGY thodi shaant thi..

khair,sabke mujhe congratulate karne ke baad jab mai palat kar jaane ko hua toh..


MAHI-congrats RAAZ..you deserved to win...

MAHI ki baat sun mai palta aur..


MAI-i know MAHI....i am born to win....


MAHI mujhse thanks expect kar rahi thi but jo jawab maine diya usse sun...


MAHI-wait what....???oh common RAAZ... sportsmanship, courtesy,iske bina koi jeet jeet nahi hoti....

is ATTITUDE ke ilawa aur kuch hai bhi tumme....???

MAI-


SPORTSMANSHIP, COURTESY,ye wo shabd hain jinme chhupi DHOKEBAAZI HAI...

aur haan,RAAZ bana hi ATTITUDE se hai,

aur mere liye,ye ATTITUDE hi KAAFI HAI.....













AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI........













AAPKA APNA V....J.....
 
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waaaah kya baat hai

Chha gaye bhai keep it up bro

Videous ko jhatkaa to mast lagaa hai Krishna ki chhavi dekhte hi...... shayad Raaz ne yeh koi daanv khela tha.......
 

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Speechless update bhai super
Raaz ne apne aukaat par aagaya alfreen ko bachane ke badle usse jarur kuchh power lega. Savent ke bich magical fountain me masti achha tha . Wicked ne Raaz ko marne ka sare prabandh kar chuke hain . Raaz aur Mahi ka love war competition achha tha ....
Fabulous update bhai
 
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