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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Iron Man

Try and fail. But never give up trying
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ KI SHARTH KI WAJAH SE HIDA BHI BRAWNY KI INSULT KARTI HAI,DUSRI TARAF RAAZ AUR MAHI KE BEECH FIRSE BEHES HO JAATI HAI WAHIN TEESRI TARAF VIDEOUS NE MAHI KE MAN KO CORRUPT KARNE KE LIYE LIBRARY KI BOOKS KO CURSED KARWA DIYA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-78



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S





AB JAANE BHI DO MABBA...TUM BINA WAJAH HYPER HO RAHI HO....

HAAN MABBA...AAJ CLASS ME BHI TUM CONCENTRATE NAHI KAR PAA RAHI THI...

JUST LEAVE IT.....


ye saari baatein kahin thi SAPIUS aur REGIS ne MABBA ko jiske chehre par ghussa saaf dikh raha tha....

aaj ka class off ho chuka hai...class chalne ke pure douran MABBA ke chehre par negetivity saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi...

SAPIUS aur REGIS,dono ko hi is negetivity ka reason maalum tha..RAAZ....

aur isiliye hi ye saari baatien in dono ne kahi jispar..


MABBA-i am not gonna leave anything.. MABBA hun mai,no one talks shit to me and survives...

aisi haalat karungi us RAAZ ki that nobody will ever dare to challenge me again....


apne jabdon ko bheenche ye saari baat gurrayi MABBA ne jisse sun...


SAPIUS-MABBA...challenge usne nahi tumne usse diya tha..aur wo bhi ek nahi do,do..

aur usne un dono challenges me excel kiya..

as a WHIZZ,you should be proud of what he did...

MABBA-ofcourse i am proud..very proud....aur usse uski achievement ka reward bhi milega...

i am going to show him hell without letting him die...


SAPIUS aur REGIS,dono ko hi pata tha ki MABBA apni galti toh maanegi nahi...

wo apni galti ko ghuma sab kuch RAAZ par hi daalegi aur usse bewajah punish karegi.....

par wo dono aisa chahte nahi the isiliye...


REGIS-look MABBA..tum ab koi SAVENT nahi ho jo kisi SAVENT se bhid jaao..you are a WHIZZ...

and that to of STELLARS...you should atleast care about your reputation...

MABBA-mai STELLARS se nahi, STELLARS mujhse hai..

ye mat bhulo ki mai apni batch ki topmost SAVENT thi...

aur jitni shakti mere paas hai,utne me tum dono milkar bhi mujhe takkar nahi de sakte...

aur rahi baat mere ek WHIZZ hokar SAVENT ko punish karne ki toh you both dont have to worry about that...

kyunki us RAAZ ko punish mai nahi karungi,ye sab karenge...


aage ki taraf ishara karte hue kahi ye baat MABBA ne jisse sun jab SAPIUS aur REGIS ne saamne dekha toh wo dono shock bhi hue aur RAAZ ke liye unki fikr badh bhi gayi...

reason...

saamne se aa rahe the ANWIR,MORANA and group...

SAPIUS aur REGIS, dono hi ye jaante the ki ANWIR aur MORANA MABBA ke advanced version hai...

un dono ki soch MABBA se kaafi milti julti hai,khaas kar ANWIR ki...

wo dono samajh gaye ki MABBA ANWIR aur MORANA ke zariye RAAZ ko chot pahunchana chahti hai aur saath hi unhe ye bhi pata tha ki wo dono aisa hone dene se rok nahi paayenge..

aur in saari baaton ko samajh ab SAPIUS aur REGIS ko MABBA par ghussa aa gaya aur...


SAPIUS-you know what MABBA...jaante hain hum ki karogi toh tum apne man ki hi..bhale hi wo karm kitna hi galat kyun naa ho.

par normally ye sab jaan jitna bura mujhe lagna chahiye,utna lag nahi raha..

aur jaanti ho kyun..??ussi SAVENT RAAZ ki wajah se...

jo kal usne kiya,waisa pehle kabhi kisine nahi kiya tha..not even you...

uske jitna focus maine kisibhi SAVENT me pehle nahi dekha hai...

REGIS-bang on SAPIUS..aur kal task pura karne ke baad,last me jab wo hadh se zyada pain me tha, behosh hone waala tha,tab bhi uski aankhon me waisa hi confidence tha jaise task se pehle dikh raha tha...

ek hi baar aamna saamna hua hai mera us SAVENT se,par itna samajh gaya hun mai ki he is the last person anybody should mess with...

abhi jab is metaphisycal duniya me apni journey ki bas shuruat hi ki hai usne,itne kam waqt me usne apni capability ka jo namuna dikhaya hai,one could only imagine ki aage kaisa banega wo...!!!

ho sakta hai ki tum in sabke zariye usse abhi taklif pahuncha do, but wo taklif bas us ball ki tarah hogi jisse diwar par ek force ke saath pheka jaata hai...

aur us diwar se takrane ke baad wo ball double force se wapas bhi aati hai...

isiliye jo bhi karna,us double force ko dhyan me rakh kar karna..jo bhale hi tum turant feel nahi karogi,par kabhi na kabhi karogi zaroor..


SAPIUS aur REGIS ki baat sun inhe ghoor..


MABBA-are you two trying to threaten me...???woh bhi ek GROOMER SAVENT se...

SAPIUS-GROOMER..!!!?yesterday,he was better than every STELLAR....

aur threatening kya hoti hai, time will tell you..tab tak you enjoy..


ANWIR and group ab tak paas aa chuke the in teeno ke isiliye apni baat kehne ke baad SAPIUS aur REGIS rooke nahi aur dusri disha ki taraf badh gaye..

wahin SAPIUS aur REGIS ko jaate dekhte hue ANWIR, MORANA aur un dono ke friends saamne pahunch gaye MABBA ke aur...


ANWIR/MORANA-good afternoon WHIZZ..


ANWIR aur MORANA ke baad uske doston ne bhi MABBA ko greet kiya jiske baad..


MORANA-ye dono WHIZZDERS ko kya hua,chehron me inke rudeness dekhi maine.. fight hui kya aap teeno ki...???

ANWIR-fight barabar waalon me hoti hai MORANA...aur ye dono kahin se bhi hamari WHIZZ MABBA ke aas paas bhi nahi hain...


ANWIR ki baat par muskura uthi MABBA aur...


MABBA-thik waise hi jaise koi bhi SAVENT tumhare match ka nahi hai...

ANWIR-wo toh hai and thanks to your training..aapne out of the box jaakar meri aur MORANA ki capabilities ko badhane ke liye apna kaafi time diya tha last PHASE me...we owe you for that..

MABBA-wo isiliye kyunki mujhe tum dono me mera aks dikha tha.

meri qualities dikhi thi...completely self centered and greed for power....

aur jahan tak baat tumahare owe ki hai toh mera ek kaam karo..the owe thing will vanish...

ANWIR-bataiye....

MABBA-GROOMERS ka ek SAVENT hai...RAAZ....

ANWIR-that looser...kya kya usne...???


jahan RAAZ ka naam sunte hi ANWIR ke mooh se ye nikla wahin MORANA bhi is naam ko sun chownki thi...


MABBA-u know him....

ANWIR-haan,kuch dino pehle achi sutayi ki thi maine uski...

MORANA-what...???


MABBA se pehle MORANA ka reaction aaya jisse dekh pehle toh ANWIR muskuraya aur fir..


ANWIR-you heard me... tumhare new crush ko khub pela tha maine...any problem...???

MORANA-pehle ye batao ki didn't he retaliate...??usne fight back kiya and was he a competition....

ANWIR-competition my ass....sirf peeta hai wo mujhse....wo bhi behosh hote tak... INSTITUTION ki baat naa hoti toh i would have killed him...

MORANA-then why would i care...mujhe toh uski personality dekhkar laga tha ki he is different..strong hai jo is PHASE me bohot kuch achieve karega..

par agar wo ek looser hai then woh jiye yaa mare,i don't give a shit...

MABBA jo ANWIR ki baat bade dhyan se sun rahi thi, MORANA ki baat khatm hote hi...


MABBA-i want you ki jo tumne kiya, repeat that...par is baar with BLACK ENERGY....

uske sharir ke har ang ko todkar usme complete disability trigger karne waale dark spells uccharit karna hai tumhe taaki kisi bhi tarah se uska ilaaj possible naa ho..

wo marega toh nahi par zinda bhi kisi laash ki tarah hi rahega...

ANWIR-pata hai WHIZZ,mai kabse kisi human par wo saare dark spells jo is PHASE me hum sikh rahe hain, istemal karna chahta tha and thanks to you,ab mai ye kar paaunga...

MABBA-par ye kaam open me nahi kar sakte tum...koi aisi jagah dhundni hogi jahan ye kaam asaani se ho jaaye aur koi problem naa ho..

MORANA-pehle problem ho sakti thi par is baar toh correct opportunity khudbakhud mil gay hai..

MABBA-matlab....

ANWIR-matlab is baar PHASE 2 me ek extra syllabus jo juda hai... FORBIDDEN FOREST ka jisme SAVENTS ko 2 din aur 2 raat tak ussi forest me rehna hai..

wahan RAAZ ka kaam araam se without disturbance ho jaayega...

MORANA--aur ab sirf do hafte hi bache hain wahan jaane ke liye...


ANWIR aur MORANA ki baat sunkar muskura uthi MABBA... timing wakayi sahi thi uske kaam ko anjaan dene ke liye....


MABBA-cool..2 weeks then....aur haan, ek baad yaad rakhna..make sure,he suffers...

ANWIR-oh don't u worry about that WHIZZ..dard ko bhi itna dard nahi hota hoga,jitna dard hum denge usse...

right guyzzzzz..

SAB-rightttt......

ANWIR-ok WHIZZ..we will take your leave now...


ye bol ANWIR and party chali gayi aur unke jaane ke baad...


MABBA-you shouldn't have messed with me RAAZ....hasti mita dungi teri mai... kuch din jee le araam se,apni jhuti akad ke saath..

fir toh sharir ke saath tere ghamand ko bhi toot hi jaana hai...






PLACE-GROOMER'S STAY





WELCOME RAAZ...AAO BAITHO....KYA LOGE TUM....???


apne flat me mujhe greet karte hue kahi ye saari baat HIDA ne jispar...


MAI- terrace chalien....


jahan ye bol mai wapas muda aur stairs ki taraf chal pada wahin HIDA bhi turant mere piche ho li....

raat ka waqt hai abhi...

aaj INSTITUTION me class ke waqt maine apne REFINER ki power ko badhane ka proccess bilkul try nahi kiya tha...

waise toh pain aur wounds,dono hi gayab ho chuke the mere par REFINER ki shamata ko badhane ka mera agla padhaw kitna mushkil tha,iske andaza toh aap sabko mere SHAILA se kiye baat chit se pata chal hi gaya hoga...

aur isiliye bina kisi strong support ke mai is proccess ko aage nahi badha sakta tha....

aur wo support thi HIDA...matlab uski wo shakti jispar waise toh mera bhi adhikar tha par kyunki wo shakti bhi ek alag hi GOD GIFT thi aur saath hi uska full potential GOD LEVEL ka tha isiliye ab uska wo bhaag jo maine HIDA se khudke liye liya tha,wo mere ALOUKIK shaktiyon ke saath merge ho chuka tha aur isiliye bina mere aloukik shaktiyon ke baahar nikle mai us shakti ko use me nahi laa sakta tha...

par ek tarika aur tha aur wo tarika thi khud HIDA....uski shakti ka adha bhaag joki uske andar active ho chuka tha,uska AURA ek maatra aisi shakti thi jo meri FIRST REFINER ke complete power ko activate karne me kaam aa sakti thi...

yahi wajah thi ki class ke baad mai HIDA se mila aur usse pucha ki uski training dekhne mai uske ghar aana chahta hun jispar wo khushi khushi maan gayi, result,mera yahan hona....

khair,hum HIDA ki apartment ke terrace par pahunch chuke the aur isiliye....


MAI-practice kaise karti ho tum....????

HIDA-mai apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar jo bhi dil kare us meta physical activity ko apne SHAKTI ke saath jod kar try karti hun...

MAI-result....????

HIDA-sudhar aa raha hai dheere dheere..waise bhi abhi toh 2 din hi hue hain...

MAI-tum bhul rahi ho ki jaise tumhara 4 percent AMPLIFICATION baakiyon ke 8 percent ke barabar hai thik waise hi tumhare 2 din ki practice baakiyon ke 2 mahino ke barabar hai..

aur ye bhi sirf tab jab tum apne potential ke half shakti ko use me laaogi..puri potential kya kar sakti hai,ye tum imagine bhi nahi kar sakti..

apne half potential ke saath apne se double AMPLIFIED bande se takkar le sakti ho tum,par agar tumne apne full potential ko use me laana sikh liya toh abhi jitni AMPLIFIED ho tum,bas itne me hi kisi 15 percent AMPLIFICATION waale bande ko aggressive attacks me hara dogi aur defensive me toh ek 25 percent AMPLIFICATION holder bhi tumhara kuch nahi bidag sakta....

par ye sab tab hoga jab tum apni potential ko naa sirf pehchanogi balki usse use me laaogi..

aur aisa karne ke liye right procedure zaroori hai jo tum kar nahi nahi ho...

tumhe apne CEREBRATION ko pause karne ke baad kisi metaphisycal activity ko trgger karne ke baare me sochne ki zaroorat hai hi nahi,balki bas apne SHAKTI ko apne antarman se jodna hai...

tumhare aisa karte hi tumhare BRAIN me tumhe har wo activity dikhne lagegi jiske baare me tumne kabhi bhi padha hai yaa fir dekha hai..

tum unme se jo chaho,us metaphysical activitiy ko chun sakti ho..aisa karte hi wo activitiy tumhare soul aur shakti ke saath milkar active ho jaayegi...

HIDA-really...itna asaan hai...

MAI-jitni mushkilen jhelni thi,ab tak ki life me jhel chuki ho tum....

fir bhi,asaan activity ko select karna bhar hai..mushkil hai apni Shakti ko apne antaman se attach karna...

isiliye pura focus sirf us kriya par hi rakhna..shuru karo...


mere bolte hi HIDA neeche baith gayi jiske agle hi pal uska CEREBRATION process paused ho chuka tha...

wahin HIDA ke baad mai bhi theek uske saamne baitha aur aisa karne ke baad mera CEREBRATION process bhi paused ho chuka tha...

apne averege REFINER ko yaad kiya maine aur....


RADVAYA AURAVA

RUB OFF THE AURA


saamne waale ke body se nikalne waale AURA ko use me laane wala SPELL tha ye....

library se us din THE TRICKS naam ki book ki tarah THE EXTREME SPELLS naam ki ek aur book bhi li thi maine aur ussi book me tha ye khatarnaak spell jisse abhi abhi maine uccharit kiya tha...

khatarnaak ye mere liye tha aur wo isiliye kyunki isse uccharit kar sahi se bina kisi problem kaam me laane ke liye uske user ka REFINER complete power tak activate ho jaana chahiye aur else iske asar se iske user ke body galni shuru jo jaati hai....

par mera REFINER toh sirf average power tak hi activate tha uske baawjud maine is SPELL ko bola tha..

reason...

aur koi choice nahi thi mere paas....
HIDA ke proccess shuru karte hi uski hidden shakti se bana AURA uske puri body ke outer layer ko cover karta tha aur ussiki zaroorat thi mujhe....

par jab zaroorat aukad se bahar ho toh consequences bhi taiyar rehte hain apna asar dikhane ke liye aur mere saath bhi kuch aisa hi hua..

SPELL bolte hi ek saath dohri maar padi mujhe..andar se bhi aur bahar se bhi...

SPELL bolte hi jahan ek taraf mere andar mera REFINER vibrate hone aur aisa hote hi mere pure anduri bhaag dheere dheere squash hone lage wahin dusri taraf HIDA ke body se nikalne waala uski shakti se bana AURA bhi usse nikal meri body ko touch ho gaya jiski wajah se meri puri body me tez current lagne laga...

mai baithe baithe hi niche ludakh gaya..mere honthon ke side se khoon nikalne laga tha..

puri body aise jhatka khaa rahi thi thi maano jhanjhorte hue mujhse mere is stupidity ka reason puch rahi ho...

wo AURA mere body ke andar ghusna chah raha tha aur mera REFINER apne full potential me naa hone ki wajah se usse aisa karne nahi de raha tha...

push karne ki ek jung si chhidi thi us AURA aur mere REFINER ke beech jisme pis raha tha mai...

aur phir, shuru hua wo proccess jo user ke ineligible hone par shuru hota hai..

meri body parts dheele hone lage jiska matlab tha ki meri body ka galna shuru hone waala hai..

kuch pal aur,fir meri kahani ko khatm ho jaana tha...

taklif ab itne badh chuki thi ki ab aankhen bhi pathrane lagi thi...

wahin in sabse bekhabar HIDA apne kriya me lagi hui thi...

meri pathrili aakhen bojhil ho band hone waali thi aur agar aisa ho jaata toh fir in aankhon ko kabhi khulna nahi tha....

aur shayad aisa ho hi jaana tha par tabhi...

HIDA ki abhi ke liye kriya puri ho gayi aur aisa hote hi usne apni aankhen khol di par jab usne meri haalat dekhi toh hadbada si gayi aur..


HIDA-RAAZZZZ...


mera naam zor se pukar HIDA ka haath jisme ab bhi uski shakti doud rahi thi,wo mujhe chhune ke liye aage badha aur jaise hi usne mujhe chhua toh...


HHHHHH.......


ek aur jhatka laga mujhe..par ye jhatka waisa hi tha jaisa band ho chuke heart ko wapas chalu karne ke liye diya jaata hai....

HIDA me mujhe chhute hi uske haathon ke sparsh aur uski AURA jo meri body me chipki thi,un dono ki power ek ho gayi aur aisa hote hi uska AURA mere andar ghus gaya...

AURA ke andar ghuste hi meri puri body ek baar chamki jiska matlab tha ki js AURA ko meri body ne apna liya hai..

wahin us chamak ko dekh HIDA ne bhi jhat se apna haath hata liya aur fir..

mai jhat se uth kar baith gaya...

saansen toh meri ab bhi tez chal rahi thi par mai ab normal ho raha tha...

wahin mujhe thik dekh HIDA ko bhi chain aaya aur...


HIDA-kya hua tha tumhe RAAZ...???

MAI-nothing..


naa isse aage maine kuch kaha aur naahi HIDA me himmat hui dobara puchne ki...


MAI-jaisa aaj kiya hai,waise hi aage bhi karna...chalta hun mai..


ye bol bina kuch sune mai wahan se nikal gaya....

rookne ka kaaran bhi toh ab nahi tha..jo chahiye tha,wo mil chuka tha mujhe...


HIDA ki shakti se bana AURA..aisa nahi tha ki ab AURA mil gaya hai toh aage ki raah asaan hai..

aisa bilkul nahi tha..pain ab bhi mujhe utna hi hona tha, jitna ab tak hota aaya tha..shayad usse bhi zyada..

aur ab toh waise bhi REFINER trigger karne ka proccess thoda extra lamba ho chuka tha..

jahan pehle 2 minute tha,wahin ab teen minute mujhe is asahaniya dard ko jhena tha...

par positive aur sabse important baat ye thi pain bhale hi kitna bhi zyada kyun naa ho,par pehle meri body is proccess ke pressure ko naa jhel paakar jahan phatne waali thi,wahan ab aisa nahi hoga..

pain kitna bhi zyada kyun naa ho,par at the end meri body intact rehne waali thi aur mere liya itna hi bohot tha...

kyunki maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki,


THE THING THAT DOESN'T KILL ME,WILL ONLY MAKE ME STRONGER....







PLACE-WEAKLINGS STAY






EK BEHTAR ZINDAGI KI KHWAHISH AUR UMMID LIYE AAYA THA MAI YAHAN....

SOCHA THA APNE MOM DAD KO WO SUKOON BHARI AUR ACHI LIFE DUNGA JO WO KABHI BHI JEE NAHI PAAYE THE.....

PAR KUCH BHI NAHI KAR PAAYA MAI....KHUDKO TOH LOOSER SAABIT KIYA HI MAINE,PAR APNE SAATH APNE MOM DAD KO BHI HARA DIYA....

AM I REALLY A GOD GIFT...!!!!!

khudse hi ye sawal pucha BRAWNY ne....

raat ka waqt hai.....apne quater se bahar sukhi ghaans par baitha tha is waqt BRAWNY aur uski ab tak ki puri life yaa fir ye kahun ki us life me uski har naakamiyabi uski aankhon ke saamne kisi film ki tarah chal rahi thi...

kal hi ki tarah aaj bhi HIDA ne kaafi sunaya tha BRAWNY ko uski inefficiency ko lekar jisse uske maansik dard me aur izafa ho gaya tha...


khair,khudse hi puche sawal ka jawab dete hue....


BRAWNY-no..i am no GOD gift..i am GOD'S curse....us RAAZ,aur aaj HIDA ne jo bhi kaha mere baare me,wo sab sach hai....

mai kisi laayak nahi...i am good for nothing....aur mujh jaise curse ko paida kar mere mom dad ka bhi struggle sirf badha hai,aur kuch nahi.....

but not anymore....mai apne mom dad ko meri wajah se aur suffer karne nahi dunga...


ye line bolte waqt aansu nikal gaye the BRAWNY ke jiski ek boond ko apni ek ungli se saaf kar us aansu ki boond ko dekh muskuraya BRAWNY....

reason...

is pure safar me bas ye aansu hi toh the jisne BRAWNY ka saath kabhi nahi chhoda tha...

bhari bheed me bhi jab BRAWNY khud ko akela mehsoos karta tha,tak ek dost ki tarah company dene ke liye ye aansu nikal hi aate the bahar...

yahi wajah thi ki abhi apne is ek loute dost ko dekhte hue ek bohot purani par mashoor shayri yaad aa gayi BRAWNY ko...


BRAWNY-humne in aansuon ko laakh samjhaya,ki tanhayi me aaya karo,yun bhari mehfil me aakar hamara mazak naa banaya karo....

toh aansuon ne chhalak kar kaha,ki bhari mehfil me bhi aapko tanha paate hain,tabhi toh bin bulaye hi chale aate hain....


man hi man is shayri ko bol apni us ungli ki tip par adhikar jamaye us aansu ki boond ko dekh...


BRAWNY-ab tera bhi adhikar khatm mere dost..jitna behna tha,beh liya tune...ab bas ek aakhri baar mulakat hogi hamari..

par usse pehle kuch din apne mom dad ke saath ache se bitalun...un dono ke chehre apne aatma se mila is life ke liye shukriya keh loon...

fir milenge ek aakhri baar hum...kyunki uske baad ek naye dost ko gale lagaunga mai...

ek aisa dost jo pura khayal rakhega mera...naa toh dard dega,naa hi koi aur tarah ki taklif...

jo taklif is zindagi ne di hai..usse puri tarah mita dega mera wo dost jisse MAUT kehte hain....

aur mere future friend,tu bhi sun le ki.....





tere saamne ae MAUT,bilkul nahi DARUNGA MAI...

ye aakhri padhav,bohot ache se paar KARUNGA MAI.....

mere hisse ka sukoon tere paas hi hai,
zindagi bhale hi udaasi me beeti,

par us chain ki khaatir badi khushi se MARUNGA MAI.....











AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....











AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Awesome Super Fantastic Mind Blowing Dhanshu Update.
Raaz ne Hida ki shakti ka shara lena shuru kar diya ab agli class ke baad Staller me entry ho jayegi tab Mabba ki halat dekhne me maza aayega.
Maba pe mujhe pahle hi shak ho gaya tha jab uska pahli baar jikar ho gaya rha ki wo Black power ke sath hai aur ab ye baat samne aa gayi aur usi ke wajah se wikeds ke savets bhi black energy ke sath chale jate hai takarwar banne ke liye par jiske khilaf black energy se hamla karne ki sazish rachi wah khood hi pahle khood me samaye hai ab maza aayega 2 weeks baad tab tak Raaz kafi taiyar ho chuka hoga as a savets.
Browny kayar aur kya kar sakta hai marne ke alawa na lad sakta hai na dard sah sakta hai to kya karega par Maut bhi na milegi use ?
 

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hey guyzzzz....kaise hain aap sab???ummid hai sab acche hi honge.....toh finally apni rachna ka dusra adhyay mai shuru karne waala hun....idea toh ye tha ki kuch updates store karke rakhne ke baad hi post karna shuru karunga but aisa ho nahi paa raha....

jab bhi llikhne baiththa hun,likh hi nahi pata....dil karta hai kuch aur karun???aisa hi chalta rehta toh shayad kabhi start hi nahi kar pata isiliye socha,start kar deta hun,jo hoga dekha jaayega.....

khair,kahani start karne se pehle kuch baatein clear kar dun.....

Pehli- story likhna aur padhna mere liye sirf ek shouk hai.. priorities ke hisaab se dekhe toh ye kaam last me aata hai..

sab kuch kar lene ke baad agar samay bache toh hi mai update likh paunga...

kehne ka matlab hai ki ho sakta hai ki kisi week 3 se 4 update tak aa jaayen aur ye bhi ho sakta hai ki ek bhi na aaye....

dusri-koi bhi har kisi ko khush nahi rakh sakta..ye ek clear truth hai...kehna mai ye chahta hun ki ho sakta hai kahani ke kuch updates ya kuch part ya fir shayad puri kahani aap me se kisi ko buri lage...

aisa lage ki aisa nahi hona chahiye tha...aise waqt me is baat ko yaad rakhiye ki ye sirf ek kahani hai...jo sirf entertainment ke liye likhi aur padhi jaa rahi hai.....isse zyada kuch nahi......

aakhri aur sabse important-jinhone bhi ATTITUDE PART 1 padhi hai wo ye jaante honge ki mai story ko soch soch kar nahi likhta balki puri kahani ka plot,twists & turns,suspense aur unke reasons and most importantly climax mai pehle se hi soch chuka hota hun....

kuch bhi achanak nahi hota jisse mai mood ke hisaab se nahi badalta....har suspense ke hints pehle hi diye jate hain aur jab wo part open hota hai tab mai us hint ko kahan diya gaya tha,uske sath clear karta hun...

kehna mai ye chahta hun ki kahani ka koi bhi part change nahi hoga...jaisa socha gaya hai,waisa hi aap sabke saamne pesh hoga...

aap bas padhiye,enjoy kijiye aur agar dil kare toh reviews dekar bas itna bataiye ki update kaisa laga!!!!

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Abe ye kya pgla gya h....sala frustration me khud ko kabil bnane ki jagha mitane ki soch rha h paggal insaan...koi to aise god gift ka jayaz fayda uthata h koi najayaz...pr ye to fayda to uthana door use khud ko pta tk nhi ki uske andr h kya cheez....
Are koi iska kuchh moral boost kro yrr... :mahboi: chavanprash bgherha khilao isko...buddhi chlegi thodi si...pta nhi deemag me bhusa hi bhra hua h iske sayd ... Wahin duari trf to raaz ko marte marte bcha liya hida ne..pr usko jo chahiye tha wo mil gya use ab refiner ko amplify krne se uski body nhi fategi yani uske mitne ka khatra thoda sa km ho gya h... Iss trha lgta h next class me raaz ka phla refiner fully activate hone wala h kyuki body fategi nhi aur dard se haar wo maan jaaye to wo raaz hi nhi...chliye dekhte h kya kaise kb kahan hota h kuchh...
Wahin lgta h 2 weeks baad anwir peetne wala h raaz se..kyuki raaz koi tabla nhi jo baar baar koi bhi bja ke chla jaaye...
Chaliye dekhte h kya naye kaand lekr aati h nyi subha ki kiran...
Waiting bro........
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ KI SHARTH KI WAJAH SE HIDA BHI BRAWNY KI INSULT KARTI HAI,DUSRI TARAF RAAZ AUR MAHI KE BEECH FIRSE BEHES HO JAATI HAI WAHIN TEESRI TARAF VIDEOUS NE MAHI KE MAN KO CORRUPT KARNE KE LIYE LIBRARY KI BOOKS KO CURSED KARWA DIYA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-78



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S





AB JAANE BHI DO MABBA...TUM BINA WAJAH HYPER HO RAHI HO....

HAAN MABBA...AAJ CLASS ME BHI TUM CONCENTRATE NAHI KAR PAA RAHI THI...

JUST LEAVE IT.....


ye saari baatein kahin thi SAPIUS aur REGIS ne MABBA ko jiske chehre par ghussa saaf dikh raha tha....

aaj ka class off ho chuka hai...class chalne ke pure douran MABBA ke chehre par negetivity saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi...

SAPIUS aur REGIS,dono ko hi is negetivity ka reason maalum tha..RAAZ....

aur isiliye hi ye saari baatien in dono ne kahi jispar..


MABBA-i am not gonna leave anything.. MABBA hun mai,no one talks shit to me and survives...

aisi haalat karungi us RAAZ ki that nobody will ever dare to challenge me again....


apne jabdon ko bheenche ye saari baat gurrayi MABBA ne jisse sun...


SAPIUS-MABBA...challenge usne nahi tumne usse diya tha..aur wo bhi ek nahi do,do..

aur usne un dono challenges me excel kiya..

as a WHIZZ,you should be proud of what he did...

MABBA-ofcourse i am proud..very proud....aur usse uski achievement ka reward bhi milega...

i am going to show him hell without letting him die...


SAPIUS aur REGIS,dono ko hi pata tha ki MABBA apni galti toh maanegi nahi...

wo apni galti ko ghuma sab kuch RAAZ par hi daalegi aur usse bewajah punish karegi.....

par wo dono aisa chahte nahi the isiliye...


REGIS-look MABBA..tum ab koi SAVENT nahi ho jo kisi SAVENT se bhid jaao..you are a WHIZZ...

and that to of STELLARS...you should atleast care about your reputation...

MABBA-mai STELLARS se nahi, STELLARS mujhse hai..

ye mat bhulo ki mai apni batch ki topmost SAVENT thi...

aur jitni shakti mere paas hai,utne me tum dono milkar bhi mujhe takkar nahi de sakte...

aur rahi baat mere ek WHIZZ hokar SAVENT ko punish karne ki toh you both dont have to worry about that...

kyunki us RAAZ ko punish mai nahi karungi,ye sab karenge...


aage ki taraf ishara karte hue kahi ye baat MABBA ne jisse sun jab SAPIUS aur REGIS ne saamne dekha toh wo dono shock bhi hue aur RAAZ ke liye unki fikr badh bhi gayi...

reason...

saamne se aa rahe the ANWIR,MORANA and group...

SAPIUS aur REGIS, dono hi ye jaante the ki ANWIR aur MORANA MABBA ke advanced version hai...

un dono ki soch MABBA se kaafi milti julti hai,khaas kar ANWIR ki...

wo dono samajh gaye ki MABBA ANWIR aur MORANA ke zariye RAAZ ko chot pahunchana chahti hai aur saath hi unhe ye bhi pata tha ki wo dono aisa hone dene se rok nahi paayenge..

aur in saari baaton ko samajh ab SAPIUS aur REGIS ko MABBA par ghussa aa gaya aur...


SAPIUS-you know what MABBA...jaante hain hum ki karogi toh tum apne man ki hi..bhale hi wo karm kitna hi galat kyun naa ho.

par normally ye sab jaan jitna bura mujhe lagna chahiye,utna lag nahi raha..

aur jaanti ho kyun..??ussi SAVENT RAAZ ki wajah se...

jo kal usne kiya,waisa pehle kabhi kisine nahi kiya tha..not even you...

uske jitna focus maine kisibhi SAVENT me pehle nahi dekha hai...

REGIS-bang on SAPIUS..aur kal task pura karne ke baad,last me jab wo hadh se zyada pain me tha, behosh hone waala tha,tab bhi uski aankhon me waisa hi confidence tha jaise task se pehle dikh raha tha...

ek hi baar aamna saamna hua hai mera us SAVENT se,par itna samajh gaya hun mai ki he is the last person anybody should mess with...

abhi jab is metaphisycal duniya me apni journey ki bas shuruat hi ki hai usne,itne kam waqt me usne apni capability ka jo namuna dikhaya hai,one could only imagine ki aage kaisa banega wo...!!!

ho sakta hai ki tum in sabke zariye usse abhi taklif pahuncha do, but wo taklif bas us ball ki tarah hogi jisse diwar par ek force ke saath pheka jaata hai...

aur us diwar se takrane ke baad wo ball double force se wapas bhi aati hai...

isiliye jo bhi karna,us double force ko dhyan me rakh kar karna..jo bhale hi tum turant feel nahi karogi,par kabhi na kabhi karogi zaroor..


SAPIUS aur REGIS ki baat sun inhe ghoor..


MABBA-are you two trying to threaten me...???woh bhi ek GROOMER SAVENT se...

SAPIUS-GROOMER..!!!?yesterday,he was better than every STELLAR....

aur threatening kya hoti hai, time will tell you..tab tak you enjoy..


ANWIR and group ab tak paas aa chuke the in teeno ke isiliye apni baat kehne ke baad SAPIUS aur REGIS rooke nahi aur dusri disha ki taraf badh gaye..

wahin SAPIUS aur REGIS ko jaate dekhte hue ANWIR, MORANA aur un dono ke friends saamne pahunch gaye MABBA ke aur...


ANWIR/MORANA-good afternoon WHIZZ..


ANWIR aur MORANA ke baad uske doston ne bhi MABBA ko greet kiya jiske baad..


MORANA-ye dono WHIZZDERS ko kya hua,chehron me inke rudeness dekhi maine.. fight hui kya aap teeno ki...???

ANWIR-fight barabar waalon me hoti hai MORANA...aur ye dono kahin se bhi hamari WHIZZ MABBA ke aas paas bhi nahi hain...


ANWIR ki baat par muskura uthi MABBA aur...


MABBA-thik waise hi jaise koi bhi SAVENT tumhare match ka nahi hai...

ANWIR-wo toh hai and thanks to your training..aapne out of the box jaakar meri aur MORANA ki capabilities ko badhane ke liye apna kaafi time diya tha last PHASE me...we owe you for that..

MABBA-wo isiliye kyunki mujhe tum dono me mera aks dikha tha.

meri qualities dikhi thi...completely self centered and greed for power....

aur jahan tak baat tumahare owe ki hai toh mera ek kaam karo..the owe thing will vanish...

ANWIR-bataiye....

MABBA-GROOMERS ka ek SAVENT hai...RAAZ....

ANWIR-that looser...kya kya usne...???


jahan RAAZ ka naam sunte hi ANWIR ke mooh se ye nikla wahin MORANA bhi is naam ko sun chownki thi...


MABBA-u know him....

ANWIR-haan,kuch dino pehle achi sutayi ki thi maine uski...

MORANA-what...???


MABBA se pehle MORANA ka reaction aaya jisse dekh pehle toh ANWIR muskuraya aur fir..


ANWIR-you heard me... tumhare new crush ko khub pela tha maine...any problem...???

MORANA-pehle ye batao ki didn't he retaliate...??usne fight back kiya and was he a competition....

ANWIR-competition my ass....sirf peeta hai wo mujhse....wo bhi behosh hote tak... INSTITUTION ki baat naa hoti toh i would have killed him...

MORANA-then why would i care...mujhe toh uski personality dekhkar laga tha ki he is different..strong hai jo is PHASE me bohot kuch achieve karega..

par agar wo ek looser hai then woh jiye yaa mare,i don't give a shit...

MABBA jo ANWIR ki baat bade dhyan se sun rahi thi, MORANA ki baat khatm hote hi...


MABBA-i want you ki jo tumne kiya, repeat that...par is baar with BLACK ENERGY....

uske sharir ke har ang ko todkar usme complete disability trigger karne waale dark spells uccharit karna hai tumhe taaki kisi bhi tarah se uska ilaaj possible naa ho..

wo marega toh nahi par zinda bhi kisi laash ki tarah hi rahega...

ANWIR-pata hai WHIZZ,mai kabse kisi human par wo saare dark spells jo is PHASE me hum sikh rahe hain, istemal karna chahta tha and thanks to you,ab mai ye kar paaunga...

MABBA-par ye kaam open me nahi kar sakte tum...koi aisi jagah dhundni hogi jahan ye kaam asaani se ho jaaye aur koi problem naa ho..

MORANA-pehle problem ho sakti thi par is baar toh correct opportunity khudbakhud mil gay hai..

MABBA-matlab....

ANWIR-matlab is baar PHASE 2 me ek extra syllabus jo juda hai... FORBIDDEN FOREST ka jisme SAVENTS ko 2 din aur 2 raat tak ussi forest me rehna hai..

wahan RAAZ ka kaam araam se without disturbance ho jaayega...

MORANA--aur ab sirf do hafte hi bache hain wahan jaane ke liye...


ANWIR aur MORANA ki baat sunkar muskura uthi MABBA... timing wakayi sahi thi uske kaam ko anjaan dene ke liye....


MABBA-cool..2 weeks then....aur haan, ek baad yaad rakhna..make sure,he suffers...

ANWIR-oh don't u worry about that WHIZZ..dard ko bhi itna dard nahi hota hoga,jitna dard hum denge usse...

right guyzzzzz..

SAB-rightttt......

ANWIR-ok WHIZZ..we will take your leave now...


ye bol ANWIR and party chali gayi aur unke jaane ke baad...


MABBA-you shouldn't have messed with me RAAZ....hasti mita dungi teri mai... kuch din jee le araam se,apni jhuti akad ke saath..

fir toh sharir ke saath tere ghamand ko bhi toot hi jaana hai...






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WELCOME RAAZ...AAO BAITHO....KYA LOGE TUM....???


apne flat me mujhe greet karte hue kahi ye saari baat HIDA ne jispar...


MAI- terrace chalien....


jahan ye bol mai wapas muda aur stairs ki taraf chal pada wahin HIDA bhi turant mere piche ho li....

raat ka waqt hai abhi...

aaj INSTITUTION me class ke waqt maine apne REFINER ki power ko badhane ka proccess bilkul try nahi kiya tha...

waise toh pain aur wounds,dono hi gayab ho chuke the mere par REFINER ki shamata ko badhane ka mera agla padhaw kitna mushkil tha,iske andaza toh aap sabko mere SHAILA se kiye baat chit se pata chal hi gaya hoga...

aur isiliye bina kisi strong support ke mai is proccess ko aage nahi badha sakta tha....

aur wo support thi HIDA...matlab uski wo shakti jispar waise toh mera bhi adhikar tha par kyunki wo shakti bhi ek alag hi GOD GIFT thi aur saath hi uska full potential GOD LEVEL ka tha isiliye ab uska wo bhaag jo maine HIDA se khudke liye liya tha,wo mere ALOUKIK shaktiyon ke saath merge ho chuka tha aur isiliye bina mere aloukik shaktiyon ke baahar nikle mai us shakti ko use me nahi laa sakta tha...

par ek tarika aur tha aur wo tarika thi khud HIDA....uski shakti ka adha bhaag joki uske andar active ho chuka tha,uska AURA ek maatra aisi shakti thi jo meri FIRST REFINER ke complete power ko activate karne me kaam aa sakti thi...

yahi wajah thi ki class ke baad mai HIDA se mila aur usse pucha ki uski training dekhne mai uske ghar aana chahta hun jispar wo khushi khushi maan gayi, result,mera yahan hona....

khair,hum HIDA ki apartment ke terrace par pahunch chuke the aur isiliye....


MAI-practice kaise karti ho tum....????

HIDA-mai apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar jo bhi dil kare us meta physical activity ko apne SHAKTI ke saath jod kar try karti hun...

MAI-result....????

HIDA-sudhar aa raha hai dheere dheere..waise bhi abhi toh 2 din hi hue hain...

MAI-tum bhul rahi ho ki jaise tumhara 4 percent AMPLIFICATION baakiyon ke 8 percent ke barabar hai thik waise hi tumhare 2 din ki practice baakiyon ke 2 mahino ke barabar hai..

aur ye bhi sirf tab jab tum apne potential ke half shakti ko use me laaogi..puri potential kya kar sakti hai,ye tum imagine bhi nahi kar sakti..

apne half potential ke saath apne se double AMPLIFIED bande se takkar le sakti ho tum,par agar tumne apne full potential ko use me laana sikh liya toh abhi jitni AMPLIFIED ho tum,bas itne me hi kisi 15 percent AMPLIFICATION waale bande ko aggressive attacks me hara dogi aur defensive me toh ek 25 percent AMPLIFICATION holder bhi tumhara kuch nahi bidag sakta....

par ye sab tab hoga jab tum apni potential ko naa sirf pehchanogi balki usse use me laaogi..

aur aisa karne ke liye right procedure zaroori hai jo tum kar nahi nahi ho...

tumhe apne CEREBRATION ko pause karne ke baad kisi metaphisycal activity ko trgger karne ke baare me sochne ki zaroorat hai hi nahi,balki bas apne SHAKTI ko apne antarman se jodna hai...

tumhare aisa karte hi tumhare BRAIN me tumhe har wo activity dikhne lagegi jiske baare me tumne kabhi bhi padha hai yaa fir dekha hai..

tum unme se jo chaho,us metaphysical activitiy ko chun sakti ho..aisa karte hi wo activitiy tumhare soul aur shakti ke saath milkar active ho jaayegi...

HIDA-really...itna asaan hai...

MAI-jitni mushkilen jhelni thi,ab tak ki life me jhel chuki ho tum....

fir bhi,asaan activity ko select karna bhar hai..mushkil hai apni Shakti ko apne antaman se attach karna...

isiliye pura focus sirf us kriya par hi rakhna..shuru karo...


mere bolte hi HIDA neeche baith gayi jiske agle hi pal uska CEREBRATION process paused ho chuka tha...

wahin HIDA ke baad mai bhi theek uske saamne baitha aur aisa karne ke baad mera CEREBRATION process bhi paused ho chuka tha...

apne averege REFINER ko yaad kiya maine aur....


RADVAYA AURAVA

RUB OFF THE AURA


saamne waale ke body se nikalne waale AURA ko use me laane wala SPELL tha ye....

library se us din THE TRICKS naam ki book ki tarah THE EXTREME SPELLS naam ki ek aur book bhi li thi maine aur ussi book me tha ye khatarnaak spell jisse abhi abhi maine uccharit kiya tha...

khatarnaak ye mere liye tha aur wo isiliye kyunki isse uccharit kar sahi se bina kisi problem kaam me laane ke liye uske user ka REFINER complete power tak activate ho jaana chahiye aur else iske asar se iske user ke body galni shuru jo jaati hai....

par mera REFINER toh sirf average power tak hi activate tha uske baawjud maine is SPELL ko bola tha..

reason...

aur koi choice nahi thi mere paas....
HIDA ke proccess shuru karte hi uski hidden shakti se bana AURA uske puri body ke outer layer ko cover karta tha aur ussiki zaroorat thi mujhe....

par jab zaroorat aukad se bahar ho toh consequences bhi taiyar rehte hain apna asar dikhane ke liye aur mere saath bhi kuch aisa hi hua..

SPELL bolte hi ek saath dohri maar padi mujhe..andar se bhi aur bahar se bhi...

SPELL bolte hi jahan ek taraf mere andar mera REFINER vibrate hone aur aisa hote hi mere pure anduri bhaag dheere dheere squash hone lage wahin dusri taraf HIDA ke body se nikalne waala uski shakti se bana AURA bhi usse nikal meri body ko touch ho gaya jiski wajah se meri puri body me tez current lagne laga...

mai baithe baithe hi niche ludakh gaya..mere honthon ke side se khoon nikalne laga tha..

puri body aise jhatka khaa rahi thi thi maano jhanjhorte hue mujhse mere is stupidity ka reason puch rahi ho...

wo AURA mere body ke andar ghusna chah raha tha aur mera REFINER apne full potential me naa hone ki wajah se usse aisa karne nahi de raha tha...

push karne ki ek jung si chhidi thi us AURA aur mere REFINER ke beech jisme pis raha tha mai...

aur phir, shuru hua wo proccess jo user ke ineligible hone par shuru hota hai..

meri body parts dheele hone lage jiska matlab tha ki meri body ka galna shuru hone waala hai..

kuch pal aur,fir meri kahani ko khatm ho jaana tha...

taklif ab itne badh chuki thi ki ab aankhen bhi pathrane lagi thi...

wahin in sabse bekhabar HIDA apne kriya me lagi hui thi...

meri pathrili aakhen bojhil ho band hone waali thi aur agar aisa ho jaata toh fir in aankhon ko kabhi khulna nahi tha....

aur shayad aisa ho hi jaana tha par tabhi...

HIDA ki abhi ke liye kriya puri ho gayi aur aisa hote hi usne apni aankhen khol di par jab usne meri haalat dekhi toh hadbada si gayi aur..


HIDA-RAAZZZZ...


mera naam zor se pukar HIDA ka haath jisme ab bhi uski shakti doud rahi thi,wo mujhe chhune ke liye aage badha aur jaise hi usne mujhe chhua toh...


HHHHHH.......


ek aur jhatka laga mujhe..par ye jhatka waisa hi tha jaisa band ho chuke heart ko wapas chalu karne ke liye diya jaata hai....

HIDA me mujhe chhute hi uske haathon ke sparsh aur uski AURA jo meri body me chipki thi,un dono ki power ek ho gayi aur aisa hote hi uska AURA mere andar ghus gaya...

AURA ke andar ghuste hi meri puri body ek baar chamki jiska matlab tha ki js AURA ko meri body ne apna liya hai..

wahin us chamak ko dekh HIDA ne bhi jhat se apna haath hata liya aur fir..

mai jhat se uth kar baith gaya...

saansen toh meri ab bhi tez chal rahi thi par mai ab normal ho raha tha...

wahin mujhe thik dekh HIDA ko bhi chain aaya aur...


HIDA-kya hua tha tumhe RAAZ...???

MAI-nothing..


naa isse aage maine kuch kaha aur naahi HIDA me himmat hui dobara puchne ki...


MAI-jaisa aaj kiya hai,waise hi aage bhi karna...chalta hun mai..


ye bol bina kuch sune mai wahan se nikal gaya....

rookne ka kaaran bhi toh ab nahi tha..jo chahiye tha,wo mil chuka tha mujhe...


HIDA ki shakti se bana AURA..aisa nahi tha ki ab AURA mil gaya hai toh aage ki raah asaan hai..

aisa bilkul nahi tha..pain ab bhi mujhe utna hi hona tha, jitna ab tak hota aaya tha..shayad usse bhi zyada..

aur ab toh waise bhi REFINER trigger karne ka proccess thoda extra lamba ho chuka tha..

jahan pehle 2 minute tha,wahin ab teen minute mujhe is asahaniya dard ko jhena tha...

par positive aur sabse important baat ye thi pain bhale hi kitna bhi zyada kyun naa ho,par pehle meri body is proccess ke pressure ko naa jhel paakar jahan phatne waali thi,wahan ab aisa nahi hoga..

pain kitna bhi zyada kyun naa ho,par at the end meri body intact rehne waali thi aur mere liya itna hi bohot tha...

kyunki maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki,


THE THING THAT DOESN'T KILL ME,WILL ONLY MAKE ME STRONGER....







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EK BEHTAR ZINDAGI KI KHWAHISH AUR UMMID LIYE AAYA THA MAI YAHAN....

SOCHA THA APNE MOM DAD KO WO SUKOON BHARI AUR ACHI LIFE DUNGA JO WO KABHI BHI JEE NAHI PAAYE THE.....

PAR KUCH BHI NAHI KAR PAAYA MAI....KHUDKO TOH LOOSER SAABIT KIYA HI MAINE,PAR APNE SAATH APNE MOM DAD KO BHI HARA DIYA....

AM I REALLY A GOD GIFT...!!!!!

khudse hi ye sawal pucha BRAWNY ne....

raat ka waqt hai.....apne quater se bahar sukhi ghaans par baitha tha is waqt BRAWNY aur uski ab tak ki puri life yaa fir ye kahun ki us life me uski har naakamiyabi uski aankhon ke saamne kisi film ki tarah chal rahi thi...

kal hi ki tarah aaj bhi HIDA ne kaafi sunaya tha BRAWNY ko uski inefficiency ko lekar jisse uske maansik dard me aur izafa ho gaya tha...


khair,khudse hi puche sawal ka jawab dete hue....


BRAWNY-no..i am no GOD gift..i am GOD'S curse....us RAAZ,aur aaj HIDA ne jo bhi kaha mere baare me,wo sab sach hai....

mai kisi laayak nahi...i am good for nothing....aur mujh jaise curse ko paida kar mere mom dad ka bhi struggle sirf badha hai,aur kuch nahi.....

but not anymore....mai apne mom dad ko meri wajah se aur suffer karne nahi dunga...


ye line bolte waqt aansu nikal gaye the BRAWNY ke jiski ek boond ko apni ek ungli se saaf kar us aansu ki boond ko dekh muskuraya BRAWNY....

reason...

is pure safar me bas ye aansu hi toh the jisne BRAWNY ka saath kabhi nahi chhoda tha...

bhari bheed me bhi jab BRAWNY khud ko akela mehsoos karta tha,tak ek dost ki tarah company dene ke liye ye aansu nikal hi aate the bahar...

yahi wajah thi ki abhi apne is ek loute dost ko dekhte hue ek bohot purani par mashoor shayri yaad aa gayi BRAWNY ko...


BRAWNY-humne in aansuon ko laakh samjhaya,ki tanhayi me aaya karo,yun bhari mehfil me aakar hamara mazak naa banaya karo....

toh aansuon ne chhalak kar kaha,ki bhari mehfil me bhi aapko tanha paate hain,tabhi toh bin bulaye hi chale aate hain....


man hi man is shayri ko bol apni us ungli ki tip par adhikar jamaye us aansu ki boond ko dekh...


BRAWNY-ab tera bhi adhikar khatm mere dost..jitna behna tha,beh liya tune...ab bas ek aakhri baar mulakat hogi hamari..

par usse pehle kuch din apne mom dad ke saath ache se bitalun...un dono ke chehre apne aatma se mila is life ke liye shukriya keh loon...

fir milenge ek aakhri baar hum...kyunki uske baad ek naye dost ko gale lagaunga mai...

ek aisa dost jo pura khayal rakhega mera...naa toh dard dega,naa hi koi aur tarah ki taklif...

jo taklif is zindagi ne di hai..usse puri tarah mita dega mera wo dost jisse MAUT kehte hain....

aur mere future friend,tu bhi sun le ki.....





tere saamne ae MAUT,bilkul nahi DARUNGA MAI...

ye aakhri padhav,bohot ache se paar KARUNGA MAI.....

mere hisse ka sukoon tere paas hi hai,
zindagi bhale hi udaasi me beeti,

par us chain ki khaatir badi khushi se MARUNGA MAI.....











AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....











AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Fabulous update bhai
Lagta hai ab Brawny me change aayega aur Anwir morana aur mamba ne jo milkar forbidden forest me Raaz ko marne ki plan kar rahe hai wo usme kitna success hote hain dekhna padega
 
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