Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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vj4u

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waah bhai yeh last wali line hi hamesha kamal ki thi ki uska raichaita hi use milega aur ise thik karega sabse bada sawal yahi hain kaise milega vikram Raaz se matalab raaz ko ab 1 refiner aur 4% soul amplification karna hoga tab hi kuchh ho sakta hain aur ab to brawny ki power ka bhi thoda sa andaza ho chuka hain aur raaz isiliye hi uske ghar gaya tha maybe usase nikalane wali energy ko shayad sense kar liya tha raaz ne isiliye woh waha gaya tha shayad
thanks for appreciating brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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Hida jes par raaz nai keval thoda dhyaan diya mtlb keval 1% base keval use ek shayri bataee

And phire use uski haal par chode diya

And Jabe hida ko apne power ka pata chala jo normal savent se do juna hai

Vahi Brawny par to raaz nai har pal nazare gadae hue hai
To soch lo brawny kya chizz hai
padhte jaaiye brother..bohot maza aane waala hai..saath bane rahiye
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ EK BAAR PHIR BRAWNY KO HARRASS KARTA HAI,DUSRI TARAF FALLON APNE MASTER KE DIYE TASK KO KARNE ME BAAR BAAR FAIL HOTI HAI WAHIN TEESRI TARAF SHAILA RAAZ KO BATATI HAI KI USKE PAIN KA PERMENANT ILAAJ VIKRAM HI KAR SAKTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER-2

(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-76



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



PLACE- THE GROUND






GOOD MORNING SAVENTS.....AAP SAB SOCH RAHE HONGE KI WHY ARE WE ALL OUT HERE....???


bohot josh aur excitement ke saath SAPIUS ne ye baat kahi thi saamne khade sabhi SAVENTS se jisse badi excitement se bhar sun rahe the sab...

par saath hi saare STELLARS aaj thode hairan bhi the aur wo isiliye kyunki aaj unke dusri side par GROOMERS catagory bhi apne teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ke saath khadi thi....

unhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki bhala GROOMERS ka unke beech kya kaam...???

khair, SAPIUS ki baat ko aage badhte hue...


REGIS-aur wo isiliye kyunki aaj ki class yahin hogi...par ye class kam aap sabka is PHASE me first magic demonstration zyada hoga...

aur ye demonstration aap sabko denge aap sabke hi beech ke teen SAVENTS...

hamari catagory matlab STELLARS se VIDEOUS aur MAHI aur inke saath ye demonstration denge GROOMERS se RAAZ.....

VIDEOUS, MAHI, RAAZ....yahan aayiye aap teeno....


REGIS ke pukarte hi mai unki taraf badh gaya wahin meri hi tarah STELLARS se MAHI aur VIDEOUS bhi aage badh gaye the...

aage badhte hue hum teeno hi REGIS ke side me khade ho gaye..

last corner me VIDEOUS,beech me MAHI aur uske baaju me mai khada tha...

aage badhte waqt aur fir saath khade hone ke time MAHI ki nazar jisme ghussa tha,usne 2,3 baar meri taraf dekha tha par maine usse ignore hi kiya hua tha...

khair, aisa pehli baar ho raha tha jab koi GROOMER is tarah PHASE 2 ke first magic demonstration class me participate kar raha tha..

us demonstration me jisme aaj se pehle tak sirf STELLARS hi part lete aaye the...

yahi reason tha ki mere catagory ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER behad khush aur proud feel kar rahe the..

par wahin in sab ke beech khadi thi MABBA jisse kisi GROOMER ka aur khaas kar mera unke SAVENTS ki barabari me khada hona raas nahi aa raha tha....

unhe ye ek insult ki tarah lag raha tha par wo kuch kar bhi nahi sakti thi...

reason....

SOVEREIGN'S....mera is demonstration me participate karna, SOVEREIGN'S ka order tha aur wo jaanti thi ki ye order jaayaz bhi hai...

ek 2 percent AMPLIFICATION holder hone ke baawjud maine apne REFINER ko average power tak trigger kar liya tha aur aisa aaj se pehle kabhi hua nahi tha..

ye sach naa toh MABBA pacha paa rahi thi aur naahi apne andar se bahar nikal paa rahi thi.

khair,hamare khade hote hi...


SAPIUS-sabse pehle RAAZ,congrats...you are the very first SAVENT ever of GROOMERS who has triggered his REFINERS average power....

aur tumhari issi uplabdhi ki wajah se aisa pehli baar hua hai jab koi GROOMER is PHASE ke first magic demonstration me STELLARS ke saath participate kar raha hai...


jahan SAPIUS ko laga tha ki mujhe unki baat sun khushi hogi as ye taarif ek STELLAR WHIZZDER ke mooh se nikli thi,wahin MAHI jo bhale hi mujhe pasand nahi karti thi,par meri achievement ke baare me jaan wo bhi man hi man mujhe appreciate kar rahi thi..

par SAPIUS ki baat khatm hote hi....


MAI-can we start the demonstration.......


to the point baat nikli mere mooh se jisse sun jahan ek taraf mere WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS has diye wahin SAPIUS, REGIS aur unke saath MAHI bhi hairan ho gayi....

wahin MABBA ka ghussa jo pehle se hi chaddha hua tha,wo aur badh gaya tha aur isiliye....


MABBA-ATTITUDE haan.....beta ATTITUDE unhiko dikhana chahiye jo uske laayak hon....

ek GROOMER ko ye ATTITUDE suit nahi karta....

MAI-WHIZZ EDWINA..kya aapko pata hai ki is demonstration ka proccess kya hai...???isme karna kya hota hai...???


MABBA ki baat ko nazar andaaz kar maine ye baat kahi jispar....

EDWINA-haan pata hai....

MAI-so can we not waste time and get on with it...yahan faaltu ki baatein suanane nahi aaya hun mai....


meri baatein sun jahan EDWINA, ROVEL aur PETRA,teeno hi has diye the wahin unke saath meri puri catagory bhi hasne lagi thi..


STELLAR'S me bhi kuch chehre the jaise ALFREEN aur MABEL jinke chehre par meri baat sun muskurahat dikhne lagi thi par apne WHIZZ ki wajah se unhone apne expressions control kar liye..

par MABBA...!!!uska toh sab kuch sulag chuka tha meri baat sunkar.....

aur ye baat uske saath khade REGIS aur SAPIUS bhi samajh gaye the aur isiliye hi MABBA kuch react kare,usse pehle...


REGIS- sirf STELLARS catagory ke WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hi demonstration proccess ko define karte hai RAAZ...

MAI-ye purani baat hai..aur ye isiliye hota aaya hai kyunki aaj se pehle koi GROOMER is demonstration ka part bana hi nahi....

par ab jab aisa nahi hai toh ye rule bhi nahi hai...yahan mujhe kya karna padega,ye meri catagory ki WHIZZ hi mujhe batayegi...

aur koi nahi..aur agar aisa nahi hua then i am not interested in this demonstration...


meri baat sun yaa fir ye kahun ki demand sun jahan baaki sab hairan the wahin SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA behad khush...

unhe ye dekhkar accha laga ki jis institution me STELLARS ko chhod aur kisiko kuch bhi nahi samjha jaata hai wahan mai unhi STELLARS se apni baat manwa raha tha aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS...ye STELLARS, GROOMERS....inki ehmiyat baakiyon ke liye hai, RAAZ ke liye nahi...

ye wahi karta hai jo iska dil karta hai...and trust me,koi isse apne hisaab se kuch bhi nahi kara sakta...

baaki, STELLARS ke WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS hain aap teeno..samajhdaar toh honge hi...


ek taana sa tha ACCHUTA ki baat par jisse paara aur high ho gaya MABBA ka par isse pehle ki wo kuch keh paati...


MAI-toh shuru karna hai yaa fir mai jaaun...???i dont like waiting....


meri baat sun ek baar ghura MABBA ne mujhe....par fir kuch aaya uske dimag me aur aisa hote hi uske chehre par muskaan aa gayi aur...


MABBA-sahi kaha tumne.. pehle toh aisa kabhi hua nahi ki kisi GROOMER ne second PHASE ke first magic demonstration me participate kiya ho but you have made it...

aur mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tum hamare dono top SAVENTS, VIDEOUS aur MAHI se bhi strong ho...

aur jo itna strong ho,uska demonstration bhi thoda zyada tough aur strong hona chahiye,right....!!!


MABBA ki baat sun sabhi samajh gaye the ki wo zaroor kuch aisa karegi jisse mujhe nuksaan ho...

aur isiliye EDWINA kuch kehne hi waali thi ki tabhi...


MAI-bring it on...i am ready...


pehli baat MABBA ko dekh aur fir dusri line apni WHIZZ EDWINA ko dekh kahi maine jiske baad unhone kuch kehna sahi nahi samjha...

reason......

meri zidh dekh chuki thi wo aur itna toh wo ab tak samajh hi chuki thi ki jab maine faisla le liya,so le liya.. there's no backing out...

wahin meri baat sun MABBA ke chehre ki muskaan aur badh gayi aur...


MABBA-great then...toh shuru karte hain....is magical demonstration me aap teeno ke saamne do options hain...


pehli-FLY.....

dusri-INVISIBLE.....


flying option me hum aapko gurutwakarshan force ko kaat hawa me uth ek jagah se dusri jagah jaane ka tarika batayenge jiske baad aap teeno iska ek live demonstration sabko dikhaoge aur invisible option me aap hum aapko antardhyan ho ek dusre se dusri jagah teleport hone ka spell aur tarika batayenge jisse aap teeno demonstrate karoge..

waise knowledge ke liye bata dun ki ye dono hi options zyada alag nahi hain..

dono hi me ek jagah se dusri jagah par jaaya jaa sakta hai bas invisible waale option me speed roshni ke speed se bhi bohot zyada hoti hai aur initial stage me ye khatarnaak bhi ho sakti hai...

kaise,ye baad ki baat hai....

filhal yaa toh aaj aap teeno pehli baar ud kar dikhayenge yaa fir gayab hokar ek jagah se dusri jagah pahunch kar dikhayenge...

choose kijiye,kya karna chahte hain aap teeno...???


MABBA ki baat khatm hi hui thi ki..


HUM TEENO-FLY.....


first option ek saath nikla hum teeno ke mooh se jiske baad humne ek baar ek dusre ko dekha par fir saamne dekhne lage...

wahin hamare options choose karte hi....


MABBA-fantastic.... toh ab suniye ki fly aap kaise karenge...???


MABBA ki baat sunte hi mai EDWINA ki taraf chal pada jisse dekh...


MABBA-hey you..where are you going..???

MAI-maine kaha tha ki mere demonstration ka tarika WHIZZ EDWINA batayegi....


ye bol mai EDWINA ke saamne jakar khada hi gaya jispar ek pal toh unhone mujhe dekha par fir mujhe le wo ek side chali gayi...


wahin meri baat sun MABBA ne kuch pal mujhe ghoora par fir..


MABBA-

MAKSIKA.....

VIYAKARA....


in dono hi SPELLS ka arth hai FLY par inse hone waale moovement alag alag hain...

toh ab suno ki kya karna hai tumhe...???ab jab tum apne SOUL me jhaankoge, toh SOUL me mix ho chuka tumhara first REFINER bhi active ho jaayega...

apne SOUL me jhaank apne REFINER ko yaad kar tumhe man hi man MAKSIKA spell uccharit karna hai....

aisa karte hi tumhari body gurutwakarshan force ke niyam ko kaathe hue hawa me uthne lagegi jisse tum apni soch ke hisaab se utha ya gira sakoge....

par isme practice lagti hai..jab tak tumhara SOUL aur usme basa REFINER sayyamit tarike se body ki udaan ko control nahi karega,tab tak tumhari body hawa me unstable rahegi....

anyways,hawa me uth thoda sa hi sahi,balance karne ke baad tumhe dusra SPELL VIYAKARA apne man me uccharit karna hai..

is spell se hawa me thehri tumhari body jahan bhi tum chahoge,us taraf badh jaayegi....

par ye bhi filhal disbalanced hoga...aage badhne ki gati ko tumhe apne SOUL power se control karna hai but mai bata dun ki its tough...

speed zyada bhi ho sakti hai aur ek dum kam bhi...usse niyantrit karna tumhe khud sikhna hoga....

aage badhti hui tumhari body tumhare sochne maatr se rook bhi jaayegi aur neeche bhi utar jaayegi par focus strong hona chahiye....

so,this is the way how flying is done...samajh gaye....


VIDEOUS/MAHI-yes WHIZZ....


VIDEOUS toh normal hi tha par MAHI apni pehli udaan ke liye bohot zyada excited thi...

wahin in sab se thodi door EDWINA ne bhi mujhe udne ko lekar same chizen batayi aur fir...


EDWINA-so,samajh gaye...!!!

MAI-hmm...acha ye invisible hone ka kya tarika hai....???

EDWINA-invisible hone ka....???uske baare me kyun janana hai tumhe...????tumne toh FLY demonstration chuna hai naa..!!!

MAI-so..kya iska ye matlab hai ki dusre demonstration mode ke baare me mujhe nahi pata hona chahiye....!!!

WHIZZ MABBA mera ye demonstration tough karne waali hai....toh aise me i need backup....

EDWINA-jisse tum backup keh rahe ho,wo ulta bhi ho sakta hai.... starting stage me directly invisible hona hi tough hota hai toh fir aise me jab tumhari body flying mode me hogi,toh us waqt ek naya magic karna wo bhi invisible hone ka joki flying ka hi ek advanced version hai, khatarnaak ho sakta hai...

MAI-agar khatarnaak nahi hota,toh mai puchta bhi nahi...i only seek stuffs that either will kill me or else,will make me stronger...

third option chahiye hi nahi mujhe....


meri baat sun kuch pal dekhti rahi EDWINA mujhe aur fir...


EDWINA-fine..agar yahi chahte ho toh theek hai fir...


ye bol wo mujhe invisible hone ke baare me batane lagi...puri baat batane ke baad...


EDWINA-all the best..and take care of yourself.. pata nahi wo MABBA kya karne waali hai...???


EDWINA ki baat sun mai rooka nahi aur MABBA ki taraf chal pada aur jab mai uske paas pahuncha toh...


MABBA-oho...so the champ is here...shuru karen...???


chehre par khilli udane waali hasi ke saath kahi EDWINA ne ye baat jisse sun...


MAI-haan....

MABBA-great.....toh VIDEOUS,tum ground ke left end me jaoge...aur MAHI tum right end me...

and the great RAAZ...aapki udaan yahin se shuru hogi....

apni position me pahunchne ke baad mere ishare par tum teeno apna apna demonstration shuru kar sakte ho...

tum teeno ko hawa me uth apne position se ekdum sidhe direction me udte hue jaana hai..

us direction me yahan se 20 kms door FORBIDDEN FOREST ki sarhad shuru hoti hai..

tum teeno ko wahan pahunch jo bhi pehla tree dikhe,uska ek leaf lekar yahan wapas aana hai...

as simple as that...now move....


ground bohot bada tha..jin do ends ki baat HIDA ne ki thi,wo mujhse 500 metres door the...

MABBA ki bat sun VIDEOUS left ki taraf badha aur MAHI right ki taraf....

MAHI aur VIDEOUS ke jaate waqt ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS ne unhe all the best bola tha.....

aur kuch der jab wo dono apni apni jagah pahunche toh...


MABBA-yaad toh hai naa ki kya tay hua tha...tumhara ye demonstration thoda hatke hoga..

aur jaante ho ki ye hatke kya hai....???

saamne upar ki taraf dekho...


ye bol MABBA ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske aisa karte hi...


SAB-HOLY SHIT....

ye baat sabke mooh se nikli thi...

reason....

upar aasman me jis sidhe direction me mujhe jaana tha,us direction par hawa me teen teen ke pair liye line se bade bade khambe float ho rahe the....

aur un khambo ka koi anth dikh nahi raha tha jiska matlab tha ki wo khambe last tak matlab FORBIDDEN FOREST tak bichaye gaye hain.....

mujhe un float hote khambo ke beech se bachte hue aage badhte hue FORBIDDEN FOREST tak jaakar wapas aana tha aur ye wakayi tough tha, bohot tough..

ye meri as a normal SAVENT,first self flight thi jisme mera udna meri shakti jo ki filhal bohot kam thi,uske hisaab se hona tha...

toh aise me ye floating khambe numa hurdles ko cross karna,it was damn tough....

khair,ab kar toh kuch sakte the nahi isiliye maine bhi khudko mentally prepare kar liya...

wahin jahan is hurdle ko dekh mere catagory ke SAVENTS aur teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER pareshan the wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko mujhpar bohot bharosa tha aur isiliye...


ACHHUTA-koi naa bhai...hume pata hai,tu faad dega....

SLUNDER-yes RAAZ....you are the best....

MABBA-best,my foot....


SLUNDER ki baat sun MABBA halke se gurrayi jisse waise sun toh liya tha maine par react nahi kiya aur...


MAI-lets start then....


MABBA ne apne dono haath failaye aur uske aisa karte hi uske dono haathon me ek ek rumal aa gaya aur aisa hote hi do baar in rumalon ko lehra MABBA ne usse chhod diya jiska matlab tha ki the game is on....


MAKSIKA......


apni apni jagahon par khade apne SOUL aur usme merge ho chuke REFINER ko yaad kar hum teeno ke mooh se ek saath ye SPELL uccharit hua jiske agle hi pal...

hum teeno hi dagmagane lage...

par jahan complete power ke ACTIVATE hone ki wajah se VIDEOUS ki dagmati body jaldi hi halki balace hote hue upar uthne lagi wahin usse ulat mai aur MAHI hawa me uthe toh zaroor par aisa hone ke agle hi pal hamari body puri ulti ho gayi...

hum dono hi hawa me ulte latke hue aur upar uthne lage the...

aur aisa hota dekh saare SAVENTS excited bhi ho gaye the aur hamari haalat dekh wo sab hasne bhi lag gaye the....

apne dimag ko sayyamit kar maine khudko sidha karne ki koshis karni shuru kar di par ek baar me ye aisa karna sambhav nahi tha..

mere aisa sochne se meri body sidhi toh hui par fir turant baad wo 360 degree me gol gol ghumne lagi.same chiz MAHI ke saath bhi ho rahi thi...

wahin VIDEOUS ki body bhi unstable hone ki wajah se idhar udhar ho rahi thi par apne REFINER power ki wajah se wo gol nahi ghum raha tha aur isiliye uske paas ek extra advantage bhi tha aaur wo tha focus karna...

jahan gol gol ghumne ki wajah se mujhe aur MAHI hum dono ko hi apne concentration level ko maintain karne me hi taklifen aa rahi thi wahin VIDEOUS ke saath aisa nahi tha..

hilte hue hi sahi,par sidhe rehne ki wajah se uska concentration level solid tha aur yahi wajah thi ki zameen se kuch 200 feet upar uthne ke baad usne khudko hawa me rok bhi liya aur jab aisa hua toh wo wahin khade ho khud ke hilte dulte body ko stable karne ki koshish me lag gaya aur aisa karne me usse kuch hi der me kaamiyabi bhi haasil ho gayi...

aur jaise hi uski body stable hui toh...

VIYAKARA...

hawa me aage badhne ka SPELL uccharit kiya VIDEOUS ne jiske baad uski body tezi se aage badh gayi...

par ab VIDEOUS ke saamne ek nayi chunouti thi...aur wo ye ki hawa me ek hi direction me ek sidh par udna asaan nahi tha..

ye waisa hi tha jaise bina scale ki madad se straight line kheenchna....tough....

aisa karne ke liye brain ko train karni ki zaroorat thi aur isiliye idhar udhar hawa me udta VIDEOUS apne mind ko set karne meag gaya...

wahin yahan mai aur MAHI dono hi hawa me gol gol ghume jaa rahe the par ab dheere dheere hi sahi, hamare gol ghumne ki gati kam hoti jaa rahi thi aur VIDEOUS ki hi tarah,200 feet upar pahunchte pahunchte humara gol ghumna band ho chuka tha....

ab baari thi khudko stable karne ki par isme MAHI ko ek advantage tha...

aur wo ye ki usse apne REFINER se
jo ki emotions se bana tha, koi takleef nahi ho rahi thi par isse ulat meri haalat kharab hone lagi thi...

happy REFINER ke through hi mai ye activity kar raha tha aur PERMENANT ILAAJ naa hone ki wajah se ye REFINER numa emotion mujhe pain de raha tha...

par ab mere BRAIN, BODY, BLOOD aur SOUL ko maine is pain se dosti karne ko keh diya tha air yahi wajah thi ki itne pain me bhi mera focus strong tha...

khair, MAHI ne pehle kiya khudko stable aur aisa hote hi wo bhi hilte dulte aage badh gayi aur uske kuch palon baad maine bhi kaafi hadh tak khudko stable kar aage badh liya..

par ab thi main problem...wo floating khambe aur uske upar mai khudbhi float hi toh ho raha tha...

jahan MAHI idha udhar dhulte hue thodi tezi se aage badh chuki thi wahin mai kaafi dheere dheere aage badh raha tha par fir bhi jaise hi un floating khambo ka daayra shuru hua toh..

DHAKKK..DHAKKK...DHAKKK.....

ek ke baad ek 2 lines ke teen khambo se takraya mai jiske baad mera focus hila aur aisa hote hi mai girne laga niche..

mujhe neeche girte dekh jahan ek taraf MABBA ke chehre par smile aa gayi wahin baaki WHIZZES,WHIZZDERS aur unke saath SAVENTS dar se gaye...


EDWINA toh mere fall ko rokne ke liye SPELL bolne hi waali thi par tabhi....


kareeb 100 feet tak neeche girte hue jaane ke baad maine apne focus ko restore sa kiya aur aisa hote hi mera girna rook gaya....

hawa me sthir rehna toh sikh hi liya tha maine isiliye jahan par mai tha,wahin par apni aankh band kar mai sochne laga..

meri band aankhon ke aage wo saare floating khambe the aur unki moovement jisse deekh aur unke float hone ki chaal ko samajh maine apni aankhen kholi aur turant upar hawa me utha...

hawa me uth VIYAKARA spell ko uccharit kar mai turant aage badha aur ab dheere nahi balki normal speed se un khambo se bachte hue aage badhne laga...

wahin meri body ke yun rookne,phir upar uthkar ek point par pahunch araam se aage badhne ko dekh sabhi hairan hi gaye...

meri learning speed se taajjub hue the sab aur sabse zyada hui thi MABBA.

usse yakin nahi tha ki itni jaldi mai itna sab catch bhi kar lunga aur situation ke according khud ko adapt bhi...

in sab sochon ke beech mai,aur mere se pehle nikle VIDEOUS aur MAHI,hum teeno hi ab tak sabki nazar se ojhal ho chuke the aur yahi reason tha ki hamare door jaate hi REGIS ne sabke saamne teen chalchitra bana diye..

har chalchitra me hum me se ek dikh raha tha....

sab dekh rahe the ki ab tak jahan ek taraf VIDEOUS stable hokar aadhe se bhi zyada raasta cross kar chuka tha wahin MAHI bhi ab kaafi hadh tak stable ho chuki thi...

aur in dono ke baad jab sabki nazar mere chalchitra par gayi toh sab ek baar fir hairan reh gaye..

aur wo isiliye kyunki meri raah bohot mushkil thi..mere aage lagatar floating khambe the jinhe mai dodge deta hua ek achi speed se aage badh raha tha..

dodge dete waqt kabhi kabhi meri body un khambo ki side se ragad khaa rahi thi par baawjud is ragad ke bina reducing my speed,mai aage badh raha tha....

jahan ye sab dekh baaki sabhi khush bhi the aur mujhse impressed bhi wahin MABBA ka toh khun hi jal chuka tha ab tak par fir...

achanak uske dimag me ek nahi chaal ne ghar kiya jiske baad usi khoyi muskaan lout aayi aur ab wo bas us waqt ka wait kar rahi thi..

kis waqt ka..???khud jaan lijiye...

aadhe se zyada safa pura kar chuka tha mai aur tabhi maine un floating khambo ke beech se dekha
VIDEOUS ko jiske haathon me leaf thi aur wo wapas CHOSENS ki taraf jaa raha tha..
nazar uski bhi mere taraf hi thi aur mujhe dekh ek smile de aage badh chuka tha wo par uski us smile ne mujhe jaise challenge kar diya..

aur isiliye, agle hi second ek saath do cheezen hui..

pehli...mera focus aur strong ho gaya aur mai dugni raftar ke saath aage badhne lage...

is process me un khambo se ragad bhi badh gayi meri aur isse meri body bhi chhillane lagi par is baat se ab naa mujhe fark padh raha tha aur naahi meri speed ko..

dusri..jitna zyada focus strong hua,mere REFINER numa emotion par utna pressure pada jiska natija tha meri anduri pain me izafa..

woh bhi unbearable....jabde bheenche dard ko sehte mai aage badhne laga aur finally mai FORBIDDEN FOREST ke sarhad par tha....

VIDEOUS ke kuch der baad maine MAHI ko bhi return hote dekha tha isiliye saamne dikh rahe leaf ko tod waapsi ke liye mai turant palta par tabhi..

palaththe hi jo scene mere saamne tha,wo wakayi surprising tha..sirf mere liye hi nahi balki ground par khade sabhi SAVENTS aur unke saath WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke liye bhi siway ek ke...

MABBA...kyunki jo surprise sabko mila tha,wo uska hi kiya dhara tha...

darasal jahan ab tak mere saamne floating hote hue khambe the wahin ab waapsi mere mere aage jo khambe the,wo float nahi ho rahe the,balki behad tezi se ghum rahe the...

unki speed itna zyada thi ki agar mai unke beech se niklu aur ek nano second ki bhi der ho jaaye toh wo khambe mujhse takrakar meri aisi ki taisi kar denge...

wahin is scene ko dekh EDWINA ko samajh aa chuka tha ki ye MABBA ki karamat hai aur isiliye wo turant uake paas pahunchi aur...


EDWINA-you just can't except your defeat, right MABBA....!!!jab tumne dekha ki RAAZ tumhare challenge ko araam se complete kar lega tog tumne ye cheap tactic apnayi, haina....!!!!


EDWINA ki baat sun ek pal ke liye usse ghoorne ke baad..


MABBA-get one thing straight.. MABBA never looses... bhale hi uske liye kuch bhi kyun naa karna pade...


ye bol MABBA ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske aisa karte hi mere aage bhi ek chalchitra ban gaya jisme mujhe dikhi MABBA...


MABBA-so RAAZ... here's the deal...yaa toh in circulate hote khambo se hote hue yahan pahunchon jo ki impossible hai yaa fir except your defeat...

and one more thing.. VIDEOUS toh kuch hi der me yahan hoga aur uske baad MAHI bhi yahan pahunch jaayegi..

aur ek baar MAHI yahan pahunch gayi that means tum waise bhi haar gaye...

bhale hi ye koi competition nahi hai par last toh last hi hota hai...

bottom line,time nahi hai tumhare paas.. isiliye jut except your defeat..


MAI-MAHI abhi pahunchi nahi hai MABBA...aur jab tak aisa nahi hota, just shut your fucking filthy dirty mouth...


MABBA WHIZZ thi aur wo bhi STELLARS ki...aur ek STELLAR ki top WHIZZ ko jo kaha tha maine,usse sun sulag gayi wo par wo kuch kehti usse pehle hi...


EDWINA-you give respect..u take respect..u talk shit,u get shit...


EDWINA ki baat sun usse ghusse se ek baar ghur mere chalchitra ki taraf dekhne lagi MABBA aur wait karne lagi mere haarne ka...

wahin soch toh mai bhi raha tha ki kaise paar kiya jaaye is tough hurdle ko.. waise tarika toh mujhe pata tha par wo tarika risky bhi tha aur unused bhi..

isiliye pehle maine udkar jaane ki hi sochi aur dhyan se un tez ghumte khambo ko ek bar dekh aur unke movements ka aaklan kar...

mai full focus ke saath tezi se aage badha aur tabhi..

DHAAKKKHHH.....

do lines hi cross kar paaya mai..third tak pahunchte hi wahan ke khambe ki nok lagi mujhe aur mai wapas jahan se shuru kiya tha,wahan pahunch gaya..

is daaw se andruni aur baahri,dono hi tarahon se taklif hui thi mujhe par us dard ki parwah naa kar mai ek baar fir aage badha par is baar bhi same natija nikla...

ek ghumte hue khambe se takrakar walas back to zero...

ab mere body se bleading bhi shuru hi chuki thi....

jahan un sabhi odds ke saath mai laga hua tha wahin mujhe aur demoralize karne ke liye MABBA ne mere saamne ek aur chalchitra khol diya jisme dikh raha tha ki VIDEOUS toh already ground par pahunch chuka tha,saath hi MAHI abhi kuch der me pahunchne hi waali thi..

in saari cheezon ko dekh maine do teen baar aur un khambo se hote hue nikalne ka try kiya par all in vain...

koi faayda nahi hua aur isiliye ab baari thi us tarike ko apnaane ki jisse mera yahan se nikalna possible tha..

THE INVISIBLE OPTION...


wo option jiske baare me maine EDWINA se pucha tha aur ab usse try karne ke alawa mere paas aur koi option nahi tha..

par ye karna tough tha..bohot tough..

pehle toh mouka mere paas bas ek hi tha..kyunki invisible hone ke baad bhi meri body light se bhi zyada tezi se aage nikalne waali thi par aisa bhi wo un rotation khambo ke beech se hi karne waali thi jiska matlab tha ki agar mere invisible jump me ek nano second ki bhi galti hui,that means meri body fath jaani thi..

saath hi kyunki ye mera first attempt hone wala tha, aur isse pehle udkar maine pehle hi kaafi energy loss kar di thi,isiliye iske use karte hi mere REFINER numa emotion ne mujhe mere jadh tak hila dena tha..

in saare odds ke saath try karna tha mujhe ye jump..mai ye soch kar calculation kar hi raha tha ki tabhi..


MABBA-see RAAZ..tum haarne hi waale ho.. MAHI sirf khch seconds me hogi yahan...


chehre par ghamand ke saath kahi ye baat MABBA ne jiske baad maine ek baar saamne dekh apne aankhen band ki aur apne SOUL ke core tak jhaankna shuru kiya maine..

aisa karte hi ek dard ki ek tez leher doud gayi mere andar jisse feel karte hue maine apni aankhen kholi...

meri puri body pain se vibrate hone lagi thi...pain ke pressure se mere naak se khoon nikalne laga tha..

saansen tez chal rahi thi meri..in sab ke baawjud meri palke ek baar side ki taraf palti jahan chal rahe chalchitra me maine dekha ki MAHI kuch 10 seconds me ground par hone wali thi...

wahan nazar ghuma maine saamne dekha jahan woh tezi se gol ghum rahe khambe mujhe jaise chidha se rahe the..

but i saw through it..unke aar paar dekha maine aur aisa hote hi..


DURJAYA.....

man hi man bola nahi balki gurraya maine ye SPELL aur aisa hote hi...

soobhhhh.....

DHAKKKHHHH.....


un saare khambo ke beech se hota hua mera sharir pratyaksh roop se gayab ho light se bhi zyada speed se aage badha aur agle hi pal mai ground me tha...

mai theek MABBA ke saamne aakar gira tha aur mere aate yaa fir ye kahun ki girne ke agle hi second pahunchi MAHI...


RAAAZZZZZZ......

khoon se latpath ho chuka tha mai aur isiliye mera naam pukarte hue jahan ek taraf bhaage meri taraf ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER wahin dusri taraf MABBA ka toh mooh hi khul chuka tha...

wo kabhi mujhe dekhti toh kabhi us
chalchitra ki taraf jahan mai ek second pehle tha...

hairan toh EDWINA aur unke saath sabhi WHIZZES,WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS bhi the kyunki sabhi ko pata chal chuka tha ki mai invisible
hokar yahan pahuncha hun aur ye baat un sabke liye kisi miracle jaisi thi....

MAHI jo yahan jab pahunchi aur meri haalat dekh shocked hui,jab ALFREEN aur MABEL ne usse saari baat batayi toh uski bhi hairani ka thikana nahi raha..

yahan tak ki VIDEOUS bhi maine jo kiya tha,usse dekh bina kisi chhal ke aaj muskuraya tha jaise keh raha ho ki chalo,takkar do dega ye mujhe...

wahin in sab ke beech neeche pada mai ab bhi lambi lambi saansein le raha tha...

taklif toh mujhe hadh se zyada ho rahi thi...itni ki mujhe pata tha ki kuch seconds me behosh ho jaana hai maine par bina MABBA ki aankhkon me apni jeet ki jalan dekhe,us jalan ko bina aur badhaye mai behosh kaise ho sakta tha...???

aur isiliye, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ka sahara le mai khada hua aur dheere dheere aage badh theek MABBA ke saamne khada hua jo mujhe abhi bhi awishwas bhari nazaron se dekh rahi thi..

ek pal side me dekh,khoon ko thuk mai wapas MABBA ki taraf palta aur...



MAI-


ab bataiye,kaun BADA HAI....????

aapka guroor toh mere pairon ke
neeche GADA HAI.....

zubaan sirf apne jaiso ke saamne chalaaiye,

mooh band rakhiye agar saamne
RAAZ KHADA HAI.........










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....










AAPKA APNA V...J.....
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ EK BAAR PHIR BRAWNY KO HARRASS KARTA HAI,DUSRI TARAF FALLON APNE MASTER KE DIYE TASK KO KARNE ME BAAR BAAR FAIL HOTI HAI WAHIN TEESRI TARAF SHAILA RAAZ KO BATATI HAI KI USKE PAIN KA PERMENANT ILAAJ VIKRAM HI KAR SAKTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER-2

(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-76



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



PLACE- THE GROUND






GOOD MORNING SAVENTS.....AAP SAB SOCH RAHE HONGE KI WHY ARE WE ALL OUT HERE....???


bohot josh aur excitement ke saath SAPIUS ne ye baat kahi thi saamne khade sabhi SAVENTS se jisse badi excitement se bhar sun rahe the sab...

par saath hi saare STELLARS aaj thode hairan bhi the aur wo isiliye kyunki aaj unke dusri side par GROOMERS catagory bhi apne teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ke saath khadi thi....

unhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki bhala GROOMERS ka unke beech kya kaam...???

khair, SAPIUS ki baat ko aage badhte hue...


REGIS-aur wo isiliye kyunki aaj ki class yahin hogi...par ye class kam aap sabka is PHASE me first magic demonstration zyada hoga...

aur ye demonstration aap sabko denge aap sabke hi beech ke teen SAVENTS...

hamari catagory matlab STELLARS se VIDEOUS aur MAHI aur inke saath ye demonstration denge GROOMERS se RAAZ.....

VIDEOUS, MAHI, RAAZ....yahan aayiye aap teeno....


REGIS ke pukarte hi mai unki taraf badh gaya wahin meri hi tarah STELLARS se MAHI aur VIDEOUS bhi aage badh gaye the...

aage badhte hue hum teeno hi REGIS ke side me khade ho gaye..

last corner me VIDEOUS,beech me MAHI aur uske baaju me mai khada tha...

aage badhte waqt aur fir saath khade hone ke time MAHI ki nazar jisme ghussa tha,usne 2,3 baar meri taraf dekha tha par maine usse ignore hi kiya hua tha...

khair, aisa pehli baar ho raha tha jab koi GROOMER is tarah PHASE 2 ke first magic demonstration class me participate kar raha tha..

us demonstration me jisme aaj se pehle tak sirf STELLARS hi part lete aaye the...

yahi reason tha ki mere catagory ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER behad khush aur proud feel kar rahe the..

par wahin in sab ke beech khadi thi MABBA jisse kisi GROOMER ka aur khaas kar mera unke SAVENTS ki barabari me khada hona raas nahi aa raha tha....

unhe ye ek insult ki tarah lag raha tha par wo kuch kar bhi nahi sakti thi...

reason....

SOVEREIGN'S....mera is demonstration me participate karna, SOVEREIGN'S ka order tha aur wo jaanti thi ki ye order jaayaz bhi hai...

ek 2 percent AMPLIFICATION holder hone ke baawjud maine apne REFINER ko average power tak trigger kar liya tha aur aisa aaj se pehle kabhi hua nahi tha..

ye sach naa toh MABBA pacha paa rahi thi aur naahi apne andar se bahar nikal paa rahi thi.

khair,hamare khade hote hi...


SAPIUS-sabse pehle RAAZ,congrats...you are the very first SAVENT ever of GROOMERS who has triggered his REFINERS average power....

aur tumhari issi uplabdhi ki wajah se aisa pehli baar hua hai jab koi GROOMER is PHASE ke first magic demonstration me STELLARS ke saath participate kar raha hai...


jahan SAPIUS ko laga tha ki mujhe unki baat sun khushi hogi as ye taarif ek STELLAR WHIZZDER ke mooh se nikli thi,wahin MAHI jo bhale hi mujhe pasand nahi karti thi,par meri achievement ke baare me jaan wo bhi man hi man mujhe appreciate kar rahi thi..

par SAPIUS ki baat khatm hote hi....


MAI-can we start the demonstration.......


to the point baat nikli mere mooh se jisse sun jahan ek taraf mere WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS has diye wahin SAPIUS, REGIS aur unke saath MAHI bhi hairan ho gayi....

wahin MABBA ka ghussa jo pehle se hi chaddha hua tha,wo aur badh gaya tha aur isiliye....


MABBA-ATTITUDE haan.....beta ATTITUDE unhiko dikhana chahiye jo uske laayak hon....

ek GROOMER ko ye ATTITUDE suit nahi karta....

MAI-WHIZZ EDWINA..kya aapko pata hai ki is demonstration ka proccess kya hai...???isme karna kya hota hai...???


MABBA ki baat ko nazar andaaz kar maine ye baat kahi jispar....

EDWINA-haan pata hai....

MAI-so can we not waste time and get on with it...yahan faaltu ki baatein suanane nahi aaya hun mai....


meri baatein sun jahan EDWINA, ROVEL aur PETRA,teeno hi has diye the wahin unke saath meri puri catagory bhi hasne lagi thi..


STELLAR'S me bhi kuch chehre the jaise ALFREEN aur MABEL jinke chehre par meri baat sun muskurahat dikhne lagi thi par apne WHIZZ ki wajah se unhone apne expressions control kar liye..

par MABBA...!!!uska toh sab kuch sulag chuka tha meri baat sunkar.....

aur ye baat uske saath khade REGIS aur SAPIUS bhi samajh gaye the aur isiliye hi MABBA kuch react kare,usse pehle...


REGIS- sirf STELLARS catagory ke WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hi demonstration proccess ko define karte hai RAAZ...

MAI-ye purani baat hai..aur ye isiliye hota aaya hai kyunki aaj se pehle koi GROOMER is demonstration ka part bana hi nahi....

par ab jab aisa nahi hai toh ye rule bhi nahi hai...yahan mujhe kya karna padega,ye meri catagory ki WHIZZ hi mujhe batayegi...

aur koi nahi..aur agar aisa nahi hua then i am not interested in this demonstration...


meri baat sun yaa fir ye kahun ki demand sun jahan baaki sab hairan the wahin SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA behad khush...

unhe ye dekhkar accha laga ki jis institution me STELLARS ko chhod aur kisiko kuch bhi nahi samjha jaata hai wahan mai unhi STELLARS se apni baat manwa raha tha aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS...ye STELLARS, GROOMERS....inki ehmiyat baakiyon ke liye hai, RAAZ ke liye nahi...

ye wahi karta hai jo iska dil karta hai...and trust me,koi isse apne hisaab se kuch bhi nahi kara sakta...

baaki, STELLARS ke WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS hain aap teeno..samajhdaar toh honge hi...


ek taana sa tha ACCHUTA ki baat par jisse paara aur high ho gaya MABBA ka par isse pehle ki wo kuch keh paati...


MAI-toh shuru karna hai yaa fir mai jaaun...???i dont like waiting....


meri baat sun ek baar ghura MABBA ne mujhe....par fir kuch aaya uske dimag me aur aisa hote hi uske chehre par muskaan aa gayi aur...


MABBA-sahi kaha tumne.. pehle toh aisa kabhi hua nahi ki kisi GROOMER ne second PHASE ke first magic demonstration me participate kiya ho but you have made it...

aur mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tum hamare dono top SAVENTS, VIDEOUS aur MAHI se bhi strong ho...

aur jo itna strong ho,uska demonstration bhi thoda zyada tough aur strong hona chahiye,right....!!!


MABBA ki baat sun sabhi samajh gaye the ki wo zaroor kuch aisa karegi jisse mujhe nuksaan ho...

aur isiliye EDWINA kuch kehne hi waali thi ki tabhi...


MAI-bring it on...i am ready...


pehli baat MABBA ko dekh aur fir dusri line apni WHIZZ EDWINA ko dekh kahi maine jiske baad unhone kuch kehna sahi nahi samjha...

reason......

meri zidh dekh chuki thi wo aur itna toh wo ab tak samajh hi chuki thi ki jab maine faisla le liya,so le liya.. there's no backing out...

wahin meri baat sun MABBA ke chehre ki muskaan aur badh gayi aur...


MABBA-great then...toh shuru karte hain....is magical demonstration me aap teeno ke saamne do options hain...


pehli-FLY.....

dusri-INVISIBLE.....


flying option me hum aapko gurutwakarshan force ko kaat hawa me uth ek jagah se dusri jagah jaane ka tarika batayenge jiske baad aap teeno iska ek live demonstration sabko dikhaoge aur invisible option me aap hum aapko antardhyan ho ek dusre se dusri jagah teleport hone ka spell aur tarika batayenge jisse aap teeno demonstrate karoge..

waise knowledge ke liye bata dun ki ye dono hi options zyada alag nahi hain..

dono hi me ek jagah se dusri jagah par jaaya jaa sakta hai bas invisible waale option me speed roshni ke speed se bhi bohot zyada hoti hai aur initial stage me ye khatarnaak bhi ho sakti hai...

kaise,ye baad ki baat hai....

filhal yaa toh aaj aap teeno pehli baar ud kar dikhayenge yaa fir gayab hokar ek jagah se dusri jagah pahunch kar dikhayenge...

choose kijiye,kya karna chahte hain aap teeno...???


MABBA ki baat khatm hi hui thi ki..


HUM TEENO-FLY.....


first option ek saath nikla hum teeno ke mooh se jiske baad humne ek baar ek dusre ko dekha par fir saamne dekhne lage...

wahin hamare options choose karte hi....


MABBA-fantastic.... toh ab suniye ki fly aap kaise karenge...???


MABBA ki baat sunte hi mai EDWINA ki taraf chal pada jisse dekh...


MABBA-hey you..where are you going..???

MAI-maine kaha tha ki mere demonstration ka tarika WHIZZ EDWINA batayegi....


ye bol mai EDWINA ke saamne jakar khada hi gaya jispar ek pal toh unhone mujhe dekha par fir mujhe le wo ek side chali gayi...


wahin meri baat sun MABBA ne kuch pal mujhe ghoora par fir..


MABBA-

MAKSIKA.....

VIYAKARA....


in dono hi SPELLS ka arth hai FLY par inse hone waale moovement alag alag hain...

toh ab suno ki kya karna hai tumhe...???ab jab tum apne SOUL me jhaankoge, toh SOUL me mix ho chuka tumhara first REFINER bhi active ho jaayega...

apne SOUL me jhaank apne REFINER ko yaad kar tumhe man hi man MAKSIKA spell uccharit karna hai....

aisa karte hi tumhari body gurutwakarshan force ke niyam ko kaathe hue hawa me uthne lagegi jisse tum apni soch ke hisaab se utha ya gira sakoge....

par isme practice lagti hai..jab tak tumhara SOUL aur usme basa REFINER sayyamit tarike se body ki udaan ko control nahi karega,tab tak tumhari body hawa me unstable rahegi....

anyways,hawa me uth thoda sa hi sahi,balance karne ke baad tumhe dusra SPELL VIYAKARA apne man me uccharit karna hai..

is spell se hawa me thehri tumhari body jahan bhi tum chahoge,us taraf badh jaayegi....

par ye bhi filhal disbalanced hoga...aage badhne ki gati ko tumhe apne SOUL power se control karna hai but mai bata dun ki its tough...

speed zyada bhi ho sakti hai aur ek dum kam bhi...usse niyantrit karna tumhe khud sikhna hoga....

aage badhti hui tumhari body tumhare sochne maatr se rook bhi jaayegi aur neeche bhi utar jaayegi par focus strong hona chahiye....

so,this is the way how flying is done...samajh gaye....


VIDEOUS/MAHI-yes WHIZZ....


VIDEOUS toh normal hi tha par MAHI apni pehli udaan ke liye bohot zyada excited thi...

wahin in sab se thodi door EDWINA ne bhi mujhe udne ko lekar same chizen batayi aur fir...


EDWINA-so,samajh gaye...!!!

MAI-hmm...acha ye invisible hone ka kya tarika hai....???

EDWINA-invisible hone ka....???uske baare me kyun janana hai tumhe...????tumne toh FLY demonstration chuna hai naa..!!!

MAI-so..kya iska ye matlab hai ki dusre demonstration mode ke baare me mujhe nahi pata hona chahiye....!!!

WHIZZ MABBA mera ye demonstration tough karne waali hai....toh aise me i need backup....

EDWINA-jisse tum backup keh rahe ho,wo ulta bhi ho sakta hai.... starting stage me directly invisible hona hi tough hota hai toh fir aise me jab tumhari body flying mode me hogi,toh us waqt ek naya magic karna wo bhi invisible hone ka joki flying ka hi ek advanced version hai, khatarnaak ho sakta hai...

MAI-agar khatarnaak nahi hota,toh mai puchta bhi nahi...i only seek stuffs that either will kill me or else,will make me stronger...

third option chahiye hi nahi mujhe....


meri baat sun kuch pal dekhti rahi EDWINA mujhe aur fir...


EDWINA-fine..agar yahi chahte ho toh theek hai fir...


ye bol wo mujhe invisible hone ke baare me batane lagi...puri baat batane ke baad...


EDWINA-all the best..and take care of yourself.. pata nahi wo MABBA kya karne waali hai...???


EDWINA ki baat sun mai rooka nahi aur MABBA ki taraf chal pada aur jab mai uske paas pahuncha toh...


MABBA-oho...so the champ is here...shuru karen...???


chehre par khilli udane waali hasi ke saath kahi EDWINA ne ye baat jisse sun...


MAI-haan....

MABBA-great.....toh VIDEOUS,tum ground ke left end me jaoge...aur MAHI tum right end me...

and the great RAAZ...aapki udaan yahin se shuru hogi....

apni position me pahunchne ke baad mere ishare par tum teeno apna apna demonstration shuru kar sakte ho...

tum teeno ko hawa me uth apne position se ekdum sidhe direction me udte hue jaana hai..

us direction me yahan se 20 kms door FORBIDDEN FOREST ki sarhad shuru hoti hai..

tum teeno ko wahan pahunch jo bhi pehla tree dikhe,uska ek leaf lekar yahan wapas aana hai...

as simple as that...now move....


ground bohot bada tha..jin do ends ki baat HIDA ne ki thi,wo mujhse 500 metres door the...

MABBA ki bat sun VIDEOUS left ki taraf badha aur MAHI right ki taraf....

MAHI aur VIDEOUS ke jaate waqt ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS ne unhe all the best bola tha.....

aur kuch der jab wo dono apni apni jagah pahunche toh...


MABBA-yaad toh hai naa ki kya tay hua tha...tumhara ye demonstration thoda hatke hoga..

aur jaante ho ki ye hatke kya hai....???

saamne upar ki taraf dekho...


ye bol MABBA ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske aisa karte hi...


SAB-HOLY SHIT....

ye baat sabke mooh se nikli thi...

reason....

upar aasman me jis sidhe direction me mujhe jaana tha,us direction par hawa me teen teen ke pair liye line se bade bade khambe float ho rahe the....

aur un khambo ka koi anth dikh nahi raha tha jiska matlab tha ki wo khambe last tak matlab FORBIDDEN FOREST tak bichaye gaye hain.....

mujhe un float hote khambo ke beech se bachte hue aage badhte hue FORBIDDEN FOREST tak jaakar wapas aana tha aur ye wakayi tough tha, bohot tough..

ye meri as a normal SAVENT,first self flight thi jisme mera udna meri shakti jo ki filhal bohot kam thi,uske hisaab se hona tha...

toh aise me ye floating khambe numa hurdles ko cross karna,it was damn tough....

khair,ab kar toh kuch sakte the nahi isiliye maine bhi khudko mentally prepare kar liya...

wahin jahan is hurdle ko dekh mere catagory ke SAVENTS aur teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER pareshan the wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko mujhpar bohot bharosa tha aur isiliye...


ACHHUTA-koi naa bhai...hume pata hai,tu faad dega....

SLUNDER-yes RAAZ....you are the best....

MABBA-best,my foot....


SLUNDER ki baat sun MABBA halke se gurrayi jisse waise sun toh liya tha maine par react nahi kiya aur...


MAI-lets start then....


MABBA ne apne dono haath failaye aur uske aisa karte hi uske dono haathon me ek ek rumal aa gaya aur aisa hote hi do baar in rumalon ko lehra MABBA ne usse chhod diya jiska matlab tha ki the game is on....


MAKSIKA......


apni apni jagahon par khade apne SOUL aur usme merge ho chuke REFINER ko yaad kar hum teeno ke mooh se ek saath ye SPELL uccharit hua jiske agle hi pal...

hum teeno hi dagmagane lage...

par jahan complete power ke ACTIVATE hone ki wajah se VIDEOUS ki dagmati body jaldi hi halki balace hote hue upar uthne lagi wahin usse ulat mai aur MAHI hawa me uthe toh zaroor par aisa hone ke agle hi pal hamari body puri ulti ho gayi...

hum dono hi hawa me ulte latke hue aur upar uthne lage the...

aur aisa hota dekh saare SAVENTS excited bhi ho gaye the aur hamari haalat dekh wo sab hasne bhi lag gaye the....

apne dimag ko sayyamit kar maine khudko sidha karne ki koshis karni shuru kar di par ek baar me ye aisa karna sambhav nahi tha..

mere aisa sochne se meri body sidhi toh hui par fir turant baad wo 360 degree me gol gol ghumne lagi.same chiz MAHI ke saath bhi ho rahi thi...

wahin VIDEOUS ki body bhi unstable hone ki wajah se idhar udhar ho rahi thi par apne REFINER power ki wajah se wo gol nahi ghum raha tha aur isiliye uske paas ek extra advantage bhi tha aaur wo tha focus karna...

jahan gol gol ghumne ki wajah se mujhe aur MAHI hum dono ko hi apne concentration level ko maintain karne me hi taklifen aa rahi thi wahin VIDEOUS ke saath aisa nahi tha..

hilte hue hi sahi,par sidhe rehne ki wajah se uska concentration level solid tha aur yahi wajah thi ki zameen se kuch 200 feet upar uthne ke baad usne khudko hawa me rok bhi liya aur jab aisa hua toh wo wahin khade ho khud ke hilte dulte body ko stable karne ki koshish me lag gaya aur aisa karne me usse kuch hi der me kaamiyabi bhi haasil ho gayi...

aur jaise hi uski body stable hui toh...

VIYAKARA...

hawa me aage badhne ka SPELL uccharit kiya VIDEOUS ne jiske baad uski body tezi se aage badh gayi...

par ab VIDEOUS ke saamne ek nayi chunouti thi...aur wo ye ki hawa me ek hi direction me ek sidh par udna asaan nahi tha..

ye waisa hi tha jaise bina scale ki madad se straight line kheenchna....tough....

aisa karne ke liye brain ko train karni ki zaroorat thi aur isiliye idhar udhar hawa me udta VIDEOUS apne mind ko set karne meag gaya...

wahin yahan mai aur MAHI dono hi hawa me gol gol ghume jaa rahe the par ab dheere dheere hi sahi, hamare gol ghumne ki gati kam hoti jaa rahi thi aur VIDEOUS ki hi tarah,200 feet upar pahunchte pahunchte humara gol ghumna band ho chuka tha....

ab baari thi khudko stable karne ki par isme MAHI ko ek advantage tha...

aur wo ye ki usse apne REFINER se
jo ki emotions se bana tha, koi takleef nahi ho rahi thi par isse ulat meri haalat kharab hone lagi thi...

happy REFINER ke through hi mai ye activity kar raha tha aur PERMENANT ILAAJ naa hone ki wajah se ye REFINER numa emotion mujhe pain de raha tha...

par ab mere BRAIN, BODY, BLOOD aur SOUL ko maine is pain se dosti karne ko keh diya tha air yahi wajah thi ki itne pain me bhi mera focus strong tha...

khair, MAHI ne pehle kiya khudko stable aur aisa hote hi wo bhi hilte dulte aage badh gayi aur uske kuch palon baad maine bhi kaafi hadh tak khudko stable kar aage badh liya..

par ab thi main problem...wo floating khambe aur uske upar mai khudbhi float hi toh ho raha tha...

jahan MAHI idha udhar dhulte hue thodi tezi se aage badh chuki thi wahin mai kaafi dheere dheere aage badh raha tha par fir bhi jaise hi un floating khambo ka daayra shuru hua toh..

DHAKKK..DHAKKK...DHAKKK.....

ek ke baad ek 2 lines ke teen khambo se takraya mai jiske baad mera focus hila aur aisa hote hi mai girne laga niche..

mujhe neeche girte dekh jahan ek taraf MABBA ke chehre par smile aa gayi wahin baaki WHIZZES,WHIZZDERS aur unke saath SAVENTS dar se gaye...


EDWINA toh mere fall ko rokne ke liye SPELL bolne hi waali thi par tabhi....


kareeb 100 feet tak neeche girte hue jaane ke baad maine apne focus ko restore sa kiya aur aisa hote hi mera girna rook gaya....

hawa me sthir rehna toh sikh hi liya tha maine isiliye jahan par mai tha,wahin par apni aankh band kar mai sochne laga..

meri band aankhon ke aage wo saare floating khambe the aur unki moovement jisse deekh aur unke float hone ki chaal ko samajh maine apni aankhen kholi aur turant upar hawa me utha...

hawa me uth VIYAKARA spell ko uccharit kar mai turant aage badha aur ab dheere nahi balki normal speed se un khambo se bachte hue aage badhne laga...

wahin meri body ke yun rookne,phir upar uthkar ek point par pahunch araam se aage badhne ko dekh sabhi hairan hi gaye...

meri learning speed se taajjub hue the sab aur sabse zyada hui thi MABBA.

usse yakin nahi tha ki itni jaldi mai itna sab catch bhi kar lunga aur situation ke according khud ko adapt bhi...

in sab sochon ke beech mai,aur mere se pehle nikle VIDEOUS aur MAHI,hum teeno hi ab tak sabki nazar se ojhal ho chuke the aur yahi reason tha ki hamare door jaate hi REGIS ne sabke saamne teen chalchitra bana diye..

har chalchitra me hum me se ek dikh raha tha....

sab dekh rahe the ki ab tak jahan ek taraf VIDEOUS stable hokar aadhe se bhi zyada raasta cross kar chuka tha wahin MAHI bhi ab kaafi hadh tak stable ho chuki thi...

aur in dono ke baad jab sabki nazar mere chalchitra par gayi toh sab ek baar fir hairan reh gaye..

aur wo isiliye kyunki meri raah bohot mushkil thi..mere aage lagatar floating khambe the jinhe mai dodge deta hua ek achi speed se aage badh raha tha..

dodge dete waqt kabhi kabhi meri body un khambo ki side se ragad khaa rahi thi par baawjud is ragad ke bina reducing my speed,mai aage badh raha tha....

jahan ye sab dekh baaki sabhi khush bhi the aur mujhse impressed bhi wahin MABBA ka toh khun hi jal chuka tha ab tak par fir...

achanak uske dimag me ek nahi chaal ne ghar kiya jiske baad usi khoyi muskaan lout aayi aur ab wo bas us waqt ka wait kar rahi thi..

kis waqt ka..???khud jaan lijiye...

aadhe se zyada safa pura kar chuka tha mai aur tabhi maine un floating khambo ke beech se dekha
VIDEOUS ko jiske haathon me leaf thi aur wo wapas CHOSENS ki taraf jaa raha tha..
nazar uski bhi mere taraf hi thi aur mujhe dekh ek smile de aage badh chuka tha wo par uski us smile ne mujhe jaise challenge kar diya..

aur isiliye, agle hi second ek saath do cheezen hui..

pehli...mera focus aur strong ho gaya aur mai dugni raftar ke saath aage badhne lage...

is process me un khambo se ragad bhi badh gayi meri aur isse meri body bhi chhillane lagi par is baat se ab naa mujhe fark padh raha tha aur naahi meri speed ko..

dusri..jitna zyada focus strong hua,mere REFINER numa emotion par utna pressure pada jiska natija tha meri anduri pain me izafa..

woh bhi unbearable....jabde bheenche dard ko sehte mai aage badhne laga aur finally mai FORBIDDEN FOREST ke sarhad par tha....

VIDEOUS ke kuch der baad maine MAHI ko bhi return hote dekha tha isiliye saamne dikh rahe leaf ko tod waapsi ke liye mai turant palta par tabhi..

palaththe hi jo scene mere saamne tha,wo wakayi surprising tha..sirf mere liye hi nahi balki ground par khade sabhi SAVENTS aur unke saath WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke liye bhi siway ek ke...

MABBA...kyunki jo surprise sabko mila tha,wo uska hi kiya dhara tha...

darasal jahan ab tak mere saamne floating hote hue khambe the wahin ab waapsi mere mere aage jo khambe the,wo float nahi ho rahe the,balki behad tezi se ghum rahe the...

unki speed itna zyada thi ki agar mai unke beech se niklu aur ek nano second ki bhi der ho jaaye toh wo khambe mujhse takrakar meri aisi ki taisi kar denge...

wahin is scene ko dekh EDWINA ko samajh aa chuka tha ki ye MABBA ki karamat hai aur isiliye wo turant uake paas pahunchi aur...


EDWINA-you just can't except your defeat, right MABBA....!!!jab tumne dekha ki RAAZ tumhare challenge ko araam se complete kar lega tog tumne ye cheap tactic apnayi, haina....!!!!


EDWINA ki baat sun ek pal ke liye usse ghoorne ke baad..


MABBA-get one thing straight.. MABBA never looses... bhale hi uske liye kuch bhi kyun naa karna pade...


ye bol MABBA ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske aisa karte hi mere aage bhi ek chalchitra ban gaya jisme mujhe dikhi MABBA...


MABBA-so RAAZ... here's the deal...yaa toh in circulate hote khambo se hote hue yahan pahunchon jo ki impossible hai yaa fir except your defeat...

and one more thing.. VIDEOUS toh kuch hi der me yahan hoga aur uske baad MAHI bhi yahan pahunch jaayegi..

aur ek baar MAHI yahan pahunch gayi that means tum waise bhi haar gaye...

bhale hi ye koi competition nahi hai par last toh last hi hota hai...

bottom line,time nahi hai tumhare paas.. isiliye jut except your defeat..


MAI-MAHI abhi pahunchi nahi hai MABBA...aur jab tak aisa nahi hota, just shut your fucking filthy dirty mouth...


MABBA WHIZZ thi aur wo bhi STELLARS ki...aur ek STELLAR ki top WHIZZ ko jo kaha tha maine,usse sun sulag gayi wo par wo kuch kehti usse pehle hi...


EDWINA-you give respect..u take respect..u talk shit,u get shit...


EDWINA ki baat sun usse ghusse se ek baar ghur mere chalchitra ki taraf dekhne lagi MABBA aur wait karne lagi mere haarne ka...

wahin soch toh mai bhi raha tha ki kaise paar kiya jaaye is tough hurdle ko.. waise tarika toh mujhe pata tha par wo tarika risky bhi tha aur unused bhi..

isiliye pehle maine udkar jaane ki hi sochi aur dhyan se un tez ghumte khambo ko ek bar dekh aur unke movements ka aaklan kar...

mai full focus ke saath tezi se aage badha aur tabhi..

DHAAKKKHHH.....

do lines hi cross kar paaya mai..third tak pahunchte hi wahan ke khambe ki nok lagi mujhe aur mai wapas jahan se shuru kiya tha,wahan pahunch gaya..

is daaw se andruni aur baahri,dono hi tarahon se taklif hui thi mujhe par us dard ki parwah naa kar mai ek baar fir aage badha par is baar bhi same natija nikla...

ek ghumte hue khambe se takrakar walas back to zero...

ab mere body se bleading bhi shuru hi chuki thi....

jahan un sabhi odds ke saath mai laga hua tha wahin mujhe aur demoralize karne ke liye MABBA ne mere saamne ek aur chalchitra khol diya jisme dikh raha tha ki VIDEOUS toh already ground par pahunch chuka tha,saath hi MAHI abhi kuch der me pahunchne hi waali thi..

in saari cheezon ko dekh maine do teen baar aur un khambo se hote hue nikalne ka try kiya par all in vain...

koi faayda nahi hua aur isiliye ab baari thi us tarike ko apnaane ki jisse mera yahan se nikalna possible tha..

THE INVISIBLE OPTION...


wo option jiske baare me maine EDWINA se pucha tha aur ab usse try karne ke alawa mere paas aur koi option nahi tha..

par ye karna tough tha..bohot tough..

pehle toh mouka mere paas bas ek hi tha..kyunki invisible hone ke baad bhi meri body light se bhi zyada tezi se aage nikalne waali thi par aisa bhi wo un rotation khambo ke beech se hi karne waali thi jiska matlab tha ki agar mere invisible jump me ek nano second ki bhi galti hui,that means meri body fath jaani thi..

saath hi kyunki ye mera first attempt hone wala tha, aur isse pehle udkar maine pehle hi kaafi energy loss kar di thi,isiliye iske use karte hi mere REFINER numa emotion ne mujhe mere jadh tak hila dena tha..

in saare odds ke saath try karna tha mujhe ye jump..mai ye soch kar calculation kar hi raha tha ki tabhi..


MABBA-see RAAZ..tum haarne hi waale ho.. MAHI sirf khch seconds me hogi yahan...


chehre par ghamand ke saath kahi ye baat MABBA ne jiske baad maine ek baar saamne dekh apne aankhen band ki aur apne SOUL ke core tak jhaankna shuru kiya maine..

aisa karte hi ek dard ki ek tez leher doud gayi mere andar jisse feel karte hue maine apni aankhen kholi...

meri puri body pain se vibrate hone lagi thi...pain ke pressure se mere naak se khoon nikalne laga tha..

saansen tez chal rahi thi meri..in sab ke baawjud meri palke ek baar side ki taraf palti jahan chal rahe chalchitra me maine dekha ki MAHI kuch 10 seconds me ground par hone wali thi...

wahan nazar ghuma maine saamne dekha jahan woh tezi se gol ghum rahe khambe mujhe jaise chidha se rahe the..

but i saw through it..unke aar paar dekha maine aur aisa hote hi..


DURJAYA.....

man hi man bola nahi balki gurraya maine ye SPELL aur aisa hote hi...

soobhhhh.....

DHAKKKHHHH.....


un saare khambo ke beech se hota hua mera sharir pratyaksh roop se gayab ho light se bhi zyada speed se aage badha aur agle hi pal mai ground me tha...

mai theek MABBA ke saamne aakar gira tha aur mere aate yaa fir ye kahun ki girne ke agle hi second pahunchi MAHI...


RAAAZZZZZZ......

khoon se latpath ho chuka tha mai aur isiliye mera naam pukarte hue jahan ek taraf bhaage meri taraf ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER wahin dusri taraf MABBA ka toh mooh hi khul chuka tha...

wo kabhi mujhe dekhti toh kabhi us
chalchitra ki taraf jahan mai ek second pehle tha...

hairan toh EDWINA aur unke saath sabhi WHIZZES,WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS bhi the kyunki sabhi ko pata chal chuka tha ki mai invisible
hokar yahan pahuncha hun aur ye baat un sabke liye kisi miracle jaisi thi....

MAHI jo yahan jab pahunchi aur meri haalat dekh shocked hui,jab ALFREEN aur MABEL ne usse saari baat batayi toh uski bhi hairani ka thikana nahi raha..

yahan tak ki VIDEOUS bhi maine jo kiya tha,usse dekh bina kisi chhal ke aaj muskuraya tha jaise keh raha ho ki chalo,takkar do dega ye mujhe...

wahin in sab ke beech neeche pada mai ab bhi lambi lambi saansein le raha tha...

taklif toh mujhe hadh se zyada ho rahi thi...itni ki mujhe pata tha ki kuch seconds me behosh ho jaana hai maine par bina MABBA ki aankhkon me apni jeet ki jalan dekhe,us jalan ko bina aur badhaye mai behosh kaise ho sakta tha...???

aur isiliye, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ka sahara le mai khada hua aur dheere dheere aage badh theek MABBA ke saamne khada hua jo mujhe abhi bhi awishwas bhari nazaron se dekh rahi thi..

ek pal side me dekh,khoon ko thuk mai wapas MABBA ki taraf palta aur...



MAI-


ab bataiye,kaun BADA HAI....????

aapka guroor toh mere pairon ke
neeche GADA HAI.....

zubaan sirf apne jaiso ke saamne chalaaiye,

mooh band rakhiye agar saamne
RAAZ KHADA HAI.........










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....











AAPKA APNA V...J.....
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Bina padhe ab na need aayegi na chain .
Vo jab yaad aaye bahut yaad aaye.
Partiksha ho rahi hai mitr nayi update ki joh late chal rahi 15 minut apne gantvay sthan se kuchh techniqul problem se. Musafiro ko ho rahi suvidha ke liye khed hai. Sayanm banaye rakhiye.
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