Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Jaha videous apni image ko achha bna rha h wahin RAAZ ki image badman ki hoti ja rhi h...aaj browny ko bahut chot lgi h dekhte h uska impact aage kya rang lata h... Aur wahi dekhte h mahi raaz ko kaise counter krti h ab uske iss harkat pr...ye dekhna bhi intrstng hoga ....
Bahut hi behtrin update ...
Waitng for next brother
thanks brother..saath bane rahiye
 

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ek saying hai ki, it's not about the advice... it's about the person who is giving that advice ...
Insane update bhai jaga videous achha ban raha hain wahi raaz jaisa tha waisa hi dikha raha hain khudko aur kya hain yeh khel yahi samaj nahi aa raha kyoki nahi koi kuchh karta hain nahi koi fark padta hai kisiko
thanks for appreciating brother..saath bane rahiye
 

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Awesome Super Fantastic Mind Blowing Dhanshu Update.
Es Update me Raaz ka Dark side puri trah se samne aa gaya to kya ab Videous achha dikhane ki Raaz evil character bild up me laga hua hai . Yaha jo hua uske bare me janne ke baad mahi ki fight ho sakti hai kya raaz se ? Videous Alreen ke mata pita pe etna samay kyon spend kar raha hai ?
Raaz aur Videous dono ke last ke Dailog shandar the aur Mariya and Florin ki Nokjhonk bhi Jabardast thi .
thanks for appreciating brother..saath bane rahiye
 

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Ise kah sakte hain.... Apni taqat ka bina matlab istemal karna... Matlb itna bhi kya akadna.... Bhai maa baap ko baksh dena chahiye tha... Khair ummid or kuchh kiya bhi nhi ja sakta tha... Jab koi bekashoor logo ko marwa sakta hai to ye to bahut chhoti baat hai... Or yaha brawny ko insult karke... Shayad gussa dila
...apne prati nafrat badha ke... Kuchh brawny me change hi aa jaye... Wo kahte hain naa ki gusse or naffrat me badi taqat hoti hai kuchh bhi karwa sakti hai kisi se.... Dekhe.. Ye kya kar pate hai apne maa baap ke liye... Kyoki raz ne to bol diya ki tu maar jaa... Ab marte hain yaa marne ke liye taqat badhate hai...... Or yaha ye videous chasni me lapet lapet ke shabdo ki mithas ghol raha hai... Florin or mariya ko raaz se alag karna yaa nafrat karana chahta hai... Lekin mujhe nhi lagta ki raaz ko nafrat yaa pyaar se kuchh bhi fark padega... .... Ab mahi kya karegi... Raaz ke aise behaviour ko dekh ke... Or jab pata chalega ki brawny ke maa baap ko bhi usne aisa kuchh kiya hai tab kya hoga... Dekhte hai... Waiting
AB TAK DEVIL DEKHA HAI AAPNE..AB ANGEL KI BAARI AANE WAALI HAI..SAATH BANE RAHIYE...
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VIDEOUS FLORIN AUR MARIA SE PEHLI BAAR MILTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ BRAWNY AUR USKE SAATH USKE PARENTS KO BHI MAARTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-68




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



GROOMERS CLASS:-





KNOCK.... KNOCK.... KNOCK.....


subah ka waqt hai..GROOMERS class ke door par knock hua tha jisse sun class ke andar moujud teeno WHIZZ,WHIZZDER aur unke saath sabhi SAVENTS ki nazar bhi door par gayi jahan is waqt mai khada tha...

mujhe GROOMERS ke kapdo me khade ya fir ye kahun ki mujhe dekh jahan ek jhatke me ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade ho gaye wahin class ke baaki SAVENTS ki nazar bhi mujh par theher si gayi thi..

WEAKLINGS ki muddy shirt me bhi meri personality kam nahi dikhti thi toh fir aise me is waqt jo robe maine pehna tha,usme mai baakiyon se kayi guna zyada aakarshak lag raha tha aur ye appreciation mujhe wahan moujud har female SAVENTS ki aankhon me bakhubi dikh raha tha...

khair,mujhe dekh....


EDWINA-aao RAAZ...congrats for the upgradation...waise tum deserve karte the ye promotion...

SAVENTS,aapko jaankar hairani hogi ki RAAZ aisa pehla SAVENT hai jisne ek hi din me apne SOUL ko do baar AMPLIFY kiya hai...

in a way ye keh sakte hain ki isne ek hi din me khudko upgrade kiya hai....


meri achievement ko sun jahan baaki sabhi SAVENTS hairan ho rahe the wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko toh ye sab normal hi laga tha..

wo dono toh issi baat se khush the ki unke according unka friend unki class me aa gaya tha...

WHIZZ EDWINA ke baad WHIZZDER ROVEL aur WHIZZ PETRA ne bhi mujhe congratulate kiya aur fir baithne ko kaha..

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER toh jaise issi baat ka intazar kar rahe the...

jaise hi mai aage badha,un dono ne hi mujhe unke saath baithne ka ishara kiya jiske baad mai un dono ke beech jaakar baith gaya...


EDWINA-RAAZ... WHIZZ HIDA ne tumhe SPELLAR aur REFINER ke baare me toh bataya hi hoga...

MAI-haan...

EDWINA-WEAKLINGS aur GROOMER'S ke SPELLARS aur REFINERS me fark hota hai...

hamari catagory me SPELLARS me
kul teen pipes hote hain jinki SPELLS ko jhelne ki shamata zyada hoti hai...

aur saath hi REFINERS ki sankhya bhi zyada hoti hai...jahan WEAKLINGS class me aap sirf ek hi REFINER ko trigger karne ki koshish kar rahe the wahin is class me aap kul teen REFINERS ko trigger karenge....

HAPPY SAD AND ANGRY....

jinke spells hain....

SAMPURN AANANDITAM...

SAMPURN ANTARDUKHAM

SAMPURN KRODHAM....

in teeno RIFINER SPELLS ko aapko use me laana sikhna hai...


PETRA-ye bohot achi baat hai ki aapne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki tarah session ke shuruat me hi khudko upgrade kar liya hai kyunki abhi tak kisi bhi SAVENT ne kisi bhi REFINER ko trigger nahi kiya hai...

REFINER ko maamuli darje tak refine karne ke liye aapko kul 2 minute tak paused CEREBRATION me rehkar apne REFINER ko man hi man uccharit karna hoga..

agar aapne aisa kar diya toh aapke SPELLS ka level low se average pahunch jaayega....

complete power ke liye yahi process 5 minutes tak karna padta hai...

toh shuru karen....???

SAB-yes WHIZZ....

ACCHUTA-arre yaar..fir g***d fatne waali hai....saala is AANANDITAM REFINER ki toh...saala ek baar jaan aa jaaye is REFINER me...

itna bajaunga iski ga***d me ki fir kabhi pareshan nahi karega...

pichle 2 din se has has kar atdi sukhne ko aa gayi hai....

SLUNDER -abbe chup.. WHIZZ ne sun liya toh teri ga***d sooj jaani hai...

ACCHUTA-bhai jab ga***d faththi hai naa,toh uska ek side reaction ga***d ko suja bhi deta hai..aur kitna sujayegi ye...

SLUNDER-apni bakwas band kar aur concertration pura task me laga...


SLUNDER ki baat par ACCHUTA kuch kehta ki tabhi...


MAI-issi class me chipke reh second hand ka tag lagaye rehna toh focus mat kar...

par agar khudko strong bana VALDIS aur uske jaiso se takkar lena hai toh fir atdi sukhe yaa fir saans ki nali...har obstacle ko paar karna hi padega...

ACCHUTA-yahi toh baat hai...kam bolta hai par zabardast bolta hai...yaar,kuch bhi bol...teri har baat kaan se hokar dil me utarti hai....

aur logic bhi to the point hota hai..kaun si nabs kab dabani hai,ache se maalum hota hai tujhe...

ROVEL-SAVENTS...personal talks baad me bhi ho sakti hain,filhal class me concentrate karen...???


koi kuch kehta ki usse pehle hi ROVEL ki awaaz humare kaano me padi jiske baad baatein khatm aur kaam chalu ho gaya...

jahan baaki sabhi SAVENTS apni apni aankhen band kar REFINER ko man me uccharit kar uske effect se zor zor se hasne lag gaye the wahin has mai bhi raha tha par ye hasi fake thi..

reason...

filhal toh mujhe SPELL ko power dene ke liye kisi REFINER ki zaroorat thi nahi par kal ke baad aisa hone wala nahi tha...

parso se mai bhi ek normal SAVENT tha jisse un sabhi taklifon we guzarna tha jisse hokar ek SAVENT apne mukaam haasil karta hai...

par isme mere liye ek bohot badi problem thi... EMOTIONS...

wahi emotions jinse REFINERS bane the...jab wo EMOTIONS ek shakti ray me badal SOUL se connect hote the,tab SOUL ke through un emotions ke SPELL ko shakti milti thi...

par mujhme toh unme se koi bhi EMOTIONS the nahi....fir aise me bina meri aloukik shaktiyon ke kaise karunga mai apne SPELLS ko refine....

sawal mushkil tha par jawab maine already khoj liya tha..

par us jawab ko filhal mai khudme try nahi kar sakta tha....

aur wo isiliye kyunki ek toh mera vyaktiv,mera ATTITUDE mujhe aisa karne ki ijazat nahi deta tha par agar fir bhi,ek temporary base par in emotions ko try bhar karne ke liye mai inka istamal kar bhi leta toh parso se,jab mere paas wo authority nahi hogi jisse mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun,meri ye harkat ek alag hi shakti ka roop le backfire kar mujhe ek mout jaisi neend me sula degi....

waise same condition VIDEOUS ke saath bhi hai but mujhe pata hai ki jab ye normal hone ka plan uska hai toh aisa hone ke baad aani waali pareshani ka solution usne bohot pehle hi nikaal liya hoga...

khair,yahi wajah thi meri fake hasi ki aur aisa mai ye tab tak karta raha jab tak saare SAVENTS ne lagatar hasne se pet me uth rahe marod ki wajah se give nahi kar diya..

class khatm ho chuki thi aur isiliye teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER class se nikal gaye aur jab aisa hua toh...


ACCHUTA-pata nahi bhai,kab hoga merge ye pehla REFINER SOUL se aur mukti milegi is dard se...

MAI-hota kuch nahi hai ACCHUTA...
karna padta hai...


meri baat par ACCHUTA kuch kahe usse pehle...


SLUNDER-arre chhodo naa yaar..jab hoga tab hoga..filhal toh i am very happy ki hum teeno wapas ek hi class me aa gaye hain...

pata hai RAAZ,hum bhale hi apartment me shift ho chuke the, life style sahi ho chuki thi par jab us din tune hume apne dost ka darja diya toh quater se nikalne ke baad bhi ek khaalipan lagta tha...

par ab tu aa gaya hai toh ab fullon dhamal karenge...


apne aadat ke ulat bilkul ACCHUTA ki tarah apni excitement dikha raha tha SLUNDER jiski baat sun...


ACCHUTA-satyavachan....aur pata hai RAAZ,do din ho gaye hume GROOMERS bane...

chaaron LUXURY GATEWAYS mile hain hume jinse hum pura PHASE explore kar sakte hain par abhi tak humne kiya nahi hai...

aaj shaam ka plan bana tha aur ab jab tu bhi saath hai toh fullon dhaamal karenge...

MAI-dhamal baad me karna..pehle ghar chalte hain....


ye bol jahan mai aage badh gaya wahin mere baad wo dono bhi mere piche ho liye aur raaste bhar dono ki patar patar on mode me hi rahi...






PLACE-HEAVEN





YE PARESHANI BHI CHIZ AJEEB HAI...

JAB BHI TERE CHEHRE PAR AATI HAI,TUJHE AUR KHUBSOORAT BANA JAATI HAI...


AVANTIKA ke chehre par dikh rahi pareshani ki silwaton ko dekh kahi thi ye baat VIKRAM ne jispar AVANTIKA ne turant khudko normal kar liya par wo ye bhul gayi thi uske saamne khade shaksh se kuch bhi chuppana mumkin nahi...


VIKRAM-kya baat hai..humari jaan humse hi RAAZ rakhne lagi....!!!

jaanbujh kar RAAZ shabd ka istemal kiya tha VIKRAM ne aur uske aisa karte hi ek baar firse AVANTIKA ke chehre par tanaav dikhne laga tha jisse dekh VIKRAM muskura diya...


AVANTIKA-aapko toh sab pata hai toh fir ye sawal kyun..???

VIKRAM-pata toh aapko bhi sabkuch hai toh fir ye tanaav kyun...???

AVANTIKA-theory aur practical me fark hota hai V.J...jo RAAZ kar raha hai uska bhale hi mujhe andaza tha par ab jab wo saari chizen wakayi ho rahi hain aur mai unhe dekh rahi hun toh khud ko pareshan hone se rok nahi paa rahi...

aur uske upar VIDEOUS... RAAZ ko harane ke chakkar me wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai....aur sabse badi baat toh ye hai ki RAAZ uski chaalon ko pehle se counter nahi karne waala....

VIKRAM-VIDEOUS toh shuru se hi upar hai AV..acha ek sawal ka jawab do...ANSH aur URJA me kya fark hai...???

AVANTIKA-ye kaise sawal hai..???

ansh matlab PART hota hai, khud ka ek PORTION aur URJA matlab ENERGY....

VIKRAM-elaborate aur differentiate karo dono ko with example...

AVANTIKA-ansh inheritance jaisa hota hai jo ki ek compulsion hai..

isme zor nahi chalta... example ke taur par aap aur ASMODEUS jo ki GOD ke ansh hai...aap dono hi unke inheritance hain jisse aap khudbhi chaahen toh deny nahi kar sakte...

wahin URJA ek POWER OF ATTORNEY ki tarah hai jisse yaa toh ek waqt ke baad artificially apne man se kisiko diya jata hai aur fir kisi aur reason ki wajah se ye POWER kisi bahar waale ke haath lag jaati hai..

aur iska best example hai RAAZ aur VIDEOUS...

jahan ek taraf VIDEOUS ko aapki aur aapke bhai ki shaktiyan ek lottery ki tarah mil gayi wahin dusri taraf RAAZ ko wo shaktiyan aapne aur ASMODEUS ne apni marzi se di...

VIKRAM-not bad AV... example acha tha... difference toh tumne bata diya ab similarity batao..???

AVANTIKA-similarity....!!!wo mujhe nahi pata par ek baat batao...ye saari baatein abhi kyun...???

VIKRAM-batata hun..par pehle similarity jaan lo....

ANSH ho yaa fir URJA,dono ke hi growth ne waqt lagta hai...jab mera janm hua tha,tabse hi mere andar har wo aloukik shakti thi jo mere father GOD ne pradan ki thi..

wahi shakti jo ASMODEUS ko bhi GOD ne apne bete ki haisiyat se di thi...

par kya mai us waqt ASMODEUS se takkar le sakta tha...kya mai usse jeet sakta tha....

bilkul nahi... ASMODEUS mujhe asaani se hara deta...aur ye isiliye tha kyunki ASMODEUS ki utappati mere janm se karodon saal pehle ki thi..

wo shaktiyan jo GOD ne usse di thi, ASMODEUS ne un shaktiyon ko waqt ke saath AMPLIFY kiya tha..nurture kiya tha..

AV,karm ache ho yaa bure,ye nishchit hai ki agar mehnat ki jaaye toh uska fal milne se GOD bhi rok nahi sakte...

bhale hi fir us fal ka natija negetive hi kyun naa ho...

ASMODEUS ne mehnet ki thi, bohot mehnat ki thi aur yahi kaaran tha ki us waqt wo mujhse kayi guna zyada shaktishaali tha...

thik ussi tarah jab RAAZ ko uski puri shakti mili jo ki hum dono bhaiyon ki urja hai,tab uski taakat utni hi thi jitni VIDEOUS ki utappati ke waqt uski thi...

par us waqt me aur abhi ke waqt me bohot lambe samay ka antaral hai...

itne waqt me BANISHMENT me rehne ke baawjud VIDEOUS ne apni shaktiyon ko AMPLIFY kiya hai,badhaya hai aur us shakti ke AURA ko RAAZ ne tabhi mehsoos kar liya tha jab wo pehli baar VIDEOUS ke saamne aaya tha...

ANSH ho ya fir URJA..shakti ko badhane me waqt lagta hi hai par jitna waqt VIDEOUS ne khudko nurture karne ke liye liya hai,utna RAAZ nahi le sakta....

aur issi kaaran usse support chahiye..aisa support jo bhale hi aankhon ko naa dikh raha ho,par uski moujudgi mehsoos ki jaa sakti ho...

achi baat ye hai ki RAAZ ko us support ke baare me dheere dheere hi sahi pata chal raha hai par jo baat RAAZ ke liye acchi hai, unfortunately kaho,ya kismat,wo baat kisi aur ke liye achi nahi ho sakti..

par yahi is kahani ki niyati hai...isse badla nahi jaa sakta...kyunki RAAZ ke saamne VIDEOUS hai..

aur VIDEOUS us LOHE ki tarah hai jisse sirf dusra LOHA hi kaat sakta hai..

aur wo LOHA RAAZ nahi hai,wo ATTITUDE hai jo RAAZ me hai...wo ATTITUDE jo VIDEOUS ke aayne ke samaan hai...

ACCHAYI,REHEMDILI,MAAFI,APNAPAN,TYAG...agar inme se ek bhi emotion ne RAAZ ke andar permanent ghar kiya,toh uske agle hi pal
wo bhi khatm ho jaayega aur uske saath ye kahani bhi..

isiliye chinta mukt hokar kahani ka maza lijiye..aur ye mat bhuliye ki jab bhi koi chiz apni hadh paar karti hai,toh us chiz ko lagam dene ke liye koi naa koi bedi taiyar rehti hi hai...

VIKRAM ki is aakhri baat ko sun AVANTIKA ka murjaya chehra achanak hi chamak utha aur...

AVANTIKA-ye main mudde ki baat aap aakhir me hi kyun karte hain...???chaliye,bataiye,kaun si lagam taiyar kar rakhi hai aapne...???

VIKRAM-lagaam taiyar toh bohot pehle hi kar li thi...bas usse kheenchne ka,lagane ka waqt ab aaya hai....ab wo lagam kya aur kaise lagega,ye khud dekh lo.....






PLACE-SOME WHERE IN UNIVERSE




PEHLE PATA HOTA KI TUM YUNHI SAAMNE AA JAAOGI TOH TUMHE DHUNDNE ME WAQT ZAAYA NAHI KARTA MAI.....


ye baat kahi thi WOOGER ne....

reason....

ek urja me badal badi tezi se WOOGER bramhanad ke beecho beech chala jaa raha tha ki tabhi usne apne saamne ek badi si shield ko mehsoos kiya aur aisa mehsoos karte hi wo turant rook gaya..

WOOGER ke rookne ke agle hi pal wo SHIELD gayab ho gayi aur jahan wo SHIELD thi,wahan ek naya aakar banane laga jo kisi jaanwar ka tha aur us jaanwar ke apne pure form me aate hi WOOGER ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


ANIMAL-kabse jaante ho mere baare me....??

WOOGER-jabse tum jaanti ho apne baare me GRIFFIN.....


GRIFFIN...wo behad badi aur vishalkaay janwar thi jo is waqt WOOGER ke saamne khadi thi....

GRIFFIN ka structure behad alag,ajeeb aur darawana tha...jahan uski puri body ek LIONESS ki tarah thi wahin uska mooh ek CHEEL,ek EAGLE ki tarah tha par chowda tha aur saath hi kisi eagle ki hi tarah uske pankh bhi the....

(NOTE:-doston,apne man se GRIFFIN ko describe nahi kiya hai maine, ancient greek mythology ke mutabik issi naam ka jaanwar inhi features ke saath kabhi hua karta tha)

khair, WOOGER ki baat sun...


GRIFFIN-par kaise jaante ho tum mere baare me aur kyun dhund rahe the tum mujhe...???

WOOGER-kamal karti ho GRIFFIN....mere MASTER ki shakti se utpatti hui thi meri aur tumhari mistress MAHI se tumhari....

(JI HAAN DOSTON,GRIFFIN HI HAI WO ANIMAL JISNE BACHPAN SE HI MAHI KA TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST ME KHAYAL RAKHA THA)


interlinked hai hum fir kaise nahi jaaunga mai tumhare baare me....???

najaane kab se dhundte aa raha hun mai tumhe....aur dekho, finally aaj tum khud mere saamne ho...

GRIFFIN-bataya nahi tumne ki kyun dhoond rahe the tum mujhe...???

WOOGER-jawab tumhe pata hai GRIFFIN....mujhe naam aur pata chahiye us shaksh ka jiski utpatti mere MASTER aur tumhari MISTRESS ke saath hui thi...

jisse mere us tak pahunchne se pehle hi gayab kar diya gaya tha....

GRIFFIN-usse gayab isiliye kar diya gaya tha kyunki agar tum us tak pahunchte toh apni zaroorat haasil kar maar dete tum usse...

WOOGER-marna toh usse hai hi..agar us waqt hi mar jaati toh kya fark pad jaata...

GRIFFIN-fal khaane ke liye ped nahi kaata jaata...par afsos itni simple si baat tum kabhi nahi samajh paaoge....

WOOGER-mujhe wo ped khana hai jisne meri matlab ke fal ko khudme ugane ki himmat ki....

baat ko kheencho mat GRIFFIN...agar kuch aur waqt tak saans leti rehna chahti ho toh naam aur pata batao uska...

ek baat aur,tum aa toh gayi ho mere saamne ,par jaa tab tak nahi sakti jab tak mai naa chahun...


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi GRIFFIN ke chaaron taraf ek invisible cage ban gaya tha jisse naa sirf GRIFFIN ne mehsoos kar liya tha balki wo ye bhi jaan gayi thi ki wo us cage ko tod nahi paayegi...

GRIFFIN-WOOGER...apne MASTER ki wajah se taakat toh bohot hai tumme par akal kahan bech aaye tum...???

kya mujhe ye baat pata nahi hai ki filhal mai tumhara mukabala nahi kar sakti...aur ye janane ke baad bhi agar mai tumhare saamne khud aayi hun toh maine aisa kuch soch kar hi kiya hoga naa...

ye mat bhoolo ki sirf mai hun jo tumhe kuch bhi bata sakti hun...agar mai khatm hui,toh tumhe kuch pata nahi chalega.....


GRIFFIN ki baat khatm hote hi uske chaaron taraf laga cage bhi khatm ho gaya....


WOOGER-kya chahti ho...???

GRIFFIN-kaaran jaanana chahti hun....wo kaaran jiski wajah se tumne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke bekasoor MAATA PITAH ko maar diya...

WOOGER-correction dear....maine nahi maara unhe..unhone khud apni jaan li thi...

GRIFFIN-bandookh chalane waala haath bhale koi bhi ho,par us bandhook ko un haathon me pahunchane waala hi asli kasoorwaar hota hai..

aur tumne toh shart hi aisi rakhi thi ki us waqt unhe apni zindagi mout se choti hi lagi thi...ab bina baat ghumaye kaaran bataoge yaa fir mai jaaun...???


ek lambi saans chhodi WOOGER ne aur fir wo bohot si baatein jo ho chuki hain aur jinhe hona hai,with reason batata chala gaya GRIFFIN ko jisse sun....


GRIFFIN-tumhare MASTER ab kisi bhi SAVENT ko aur unse related kisi bhi vyakti ko nahi maarenge....

agar unhone maara toh unki wo shakti jiske balbute wo VIDEOUS ko takkar de sakte hain,khatm ho jaayegi...

agar ye waada karo toh mai tumhe us shaksh ka naam bataungi aur uska chehra dikhaungi jiski talash tumhe hai...

WOOGER-apni aukad se zyada demand nahi kar rahi ho tum...

GRIFFIN-meri aukaad kya hai,ye sahi waqt aane par pata chal jaayega tumhe....filhal maine jo shart rakhi hai,kya tum raazi ho usse....!!!


GRIFFIN ki baat par kuch seconds dekhta raha WOOGER usse aur fir...


WOOGER-tumne kaha sirf naam bataogi aur chehra dikhaogi....itni badi kurbaani sirf ek naam aur chehre ke badle,kuch zyada nahi ho gaya....

itne bade bramhand me sirf ek naam aur chehre ke dum par kisiko dhundna reth ke dher me sui dhundne jaisa hai...

GRIFFIN-naam aur chehra,kisi raah chalte ko nahi,mai tumhe bata rahi hun..aur sirf naam aur chehre ke zariye kisiko kaise dhunda jaata hai,itna hunar toh hai hi tumme...

haan,usme waqt toh lagega hi,par itni mehnat toh kar hi loge tum...

WOOGER-mere MASTER ke paas ALOUKIK shaktiyan hain..aur aisi shaktiyan khatm nahi hoti GRIFFIN...

haan, mai tumse ye waada kar sakta hun ki agar mere MASTER ne kisi SAVENT yaa usse jude kisi shaksh ko maara toh wo shaktiyan mere MASTER ka tyag kar dengi...


WOOGER ki baat sun GRIFFIN ki aankhen sochne ke andaz me choti ho gayi...

usse maalum tha ki WOOGER jhut nahi bol raha hai.. ALOUKIK shaktiyan wakayi khatm nahi hoti bas unka thikana badal jaata hai toh aise me RAAZ ki shaktiyon ko bas usse alag hi kiya jaa sakta hai...

uske dimag me ye baat bhi aayi ki RAAZ waada tod kisiko maarkar aisa risk lega nahi kyunki ek baar aisi shaktiyan alag hui toh unhe wapas paana next to impossible hai aur agar aisa kisi tarah ho bhi jaaye toh usse pehle hi VIDEOUS apne ek maatr dushman ko khatm kar dega jiska matlab tha game over....

saare ganit lagane ke baad....


GRIFFIN-manzoor hai....par iski kya guarantee ki RAAZ apne waade se nahi mukrega...!!!

WOOGER-hadh me raho GRIFFIN..mat bhulo ki tumhare saamne WOOGER khada hai...

is bramhaand ka sabse khatarnaak CREATURE....

mujhe ya mere MASTER ko kuch bhi karne ke liye jhuthi aad lene ki zaroorat nahi hai...

agar MASTER ka dil kare toh tumhari MISTRESS ko ek pal nahi lagega apni aakhri saans ke safar tak pahunchne ke liye... isiliye dont tempt me....


gurrate hue kahi thi ye saari baat WOOGER ne jisse sun andar hi andar hil gayi thi GRIFFIN...


GRIFFIN-thik hai...mai jaa rahi hun..aur mere gayab hoti hi tumhe naam aur chehra,dono pata chal jaayega...


aisa bolne ke agle hi pal gayab ho gayi GRIFFIN aur uske gayab hote hi jahan wo khadi thi,wahan dhuen se ek chehra banane laga tha aur us chehre ke thik neeche ek naam aane laga tha jiske pure hote hi...


WOOGER-


tera naam mere kaano me ab
GUNJTA RAHEGA.....

ye WOOGER tere chehre ko ab har jagah DHUNDTA RAHEGA....

baazi chaalu hai,
GAME ON HAI...

mai aa raha hun wahan,
jahan chuppi hui tu......FALLON hai......










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....









AAPKA APNA V...J....
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VIDEOUS FLORIN AUR MARIA SE PEHLI BAAR MILTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ BRAWNY AUR USKE SAATH USKE PARENTS KO BHI MAARTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-68




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



GROOMERS CLASS:-





KNOCK.... KNOCK.... KNOCK.....


subah ka waqt hai..GROOMERS class ke door par knock hua tha jisse sun class ke andar moujud teeno WHIZZ,WHIZZDER aur unke saath sabhi SAVENTS ki nazar bhi door par gayi jahan is waqt mai khada tha...

mujhe GROOMERS ke kapdo me khade ya fir ye kahun ki mujhe dekh jahan ek jhatke me ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade ho gaye wahin class ke baaki SAVENTS ki nazar bhi mujh par theher si gayi thi..

WEAKLINGS ki muddy shirt me bhi meri personality kam nahi dikhti thi toh fir aise me is waqt jo robe maine pehna tha,usme mai baakiyon se kayi guna zyada aakarshak lag raha tha aur ye appreciation mujhe wahan moujud har female SAVENTS ki aankhon me bakhubi dikh raha tha...

khair,mujhe dekh....


EDWINA-aao RAAZ...congrats for the upgradation...waise tum deserve karte the ye promotion...

SAVENTS,aapko jaankar hairani hogi ki RAAZ aisa pehla SAVENT hai jisne ek hi din me apne SOUL ko do baar AMPLIFY kiya hai...

in a way ye keh sakte hain ki isne ek hi din me khudko upgrade kiya hai....


meri achievement ko sun jahan baaki sabhi SAVENTS hairan ho rahe the wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko toh ye sab normal hi laga tha..

wo dono toh issi baat se khush the ki unke according unka friend unki class me aa gaya tha...

WHIZZ EDWINA ke baad WHIZZDER ROVEL aur WHIZZ PETRA ne bhi mujhe congratulate kiya aur fir baithne ko kaha..

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER toh jaise issi baat ka intazar kar rahe the...

jaise hi mai aage badha,un dono ne hi mujhe unke saath baithne ka ishara kiya jiske baad mai un dono ke beech jaakar baith gaya...


EDWINA-RAAZ... WHIZZ HIDA ne tumhe SPELLAR aur REFINER ke baare me toh bataya hi hoga...

MAI-haan...

EDWINA-WEAKLINGS aur GROOMER'S ke SPELLARS aur REFINERS me fark hota hai...

hamari catagory me SPELLARS me
kul teen pipes hote hain jinki SPELLS ko jhelne ki shamata zyada hoti hai...

aur saath hi REFINERS ki sankhya bhi zyada hoti hai...jahan WEAKLINGS class me aap sirf ek hi REFINER ko trigger karne ki koshish kar rahe the wahin is class me aap kul teen REFINERS ko trigger karenge....

HAPPY SAD AND ANGRY....

jinke spells hain....

SAMPURN AANANDITAM...

SAMPURN ANTARDUKHAM

SAMPURN KRODHAM....

in teeno RIFINER SPELLS ko aapko use me laana sikhna hai...


PETRA-ye bohot achi baat hai ki aapne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki tarah session ke shuruat me hi khudko upgrade kar liya hai kyunki abhi tak kisi bhi SAVENT ne kisi bhi REFINER ko trigger nahi kiya hai...

REFINER ko maamuli darje tak refine karne ke liye aapko kul 2 minute tak paused CEREBRATION me rehkar apne REFINER ko man hi man uccharit karna hoga..

agar aapne aisa kar diya toh aapke SPELLS ka level low se average pahunch jaayega....

complete power ke liye yahi process 5 minutes tak karna padta hai...

toh shuru karen....???

SAB-yes WHIZZ....

ACCHUTA-arre yaar..fir g***d fatne waali hai....saala is AANANDITAM REFINER ki toh...saala ek baar jaan aa jaaye is REFINER me...

itna bajaunga iski ga***d me ki fir kabhi pareshan nahi karega...

pichle 2 din se has has kar atdi sukhne ko aa gayi hai....

SLUNDER -abbe chup.. WHIZZ ne sun liya toh teri ga***d sooj jaani hai...

ACCHUTA-bhai jab ga***d faththi hai naa,toh uska ek side reaction ga***d ko suja bhi deta hai..aur kitna sujayegi ye...

SLUNDER-apni bakwas band kar aur concertration pura task me laga...


SLUNDER ki baat par ACCHUTA kuch kehta ki tabhi...


MAI-issi class me chipke reh second hand ka tag lagaye rehna toh focus mat kar...

par agar khudko strong bana VALDIS aur uske jaiso se takkar lena hai toh fir atdi sukhe yaa fir saans ki nali...har obstacle ko paar karna hi padega...

ACCHUTA-yahi toh baat hai...kam bolta hai par zabardast bolta hai...yaar,kuch bhi bol...teri har baat kaan se hokar dil me utarti hai....

aur logic bhi to the point hota hai..kaun si nabs kab dabani hai,ache se maalum hota hai tujhe...

ROVEL-SAVENTS...personal talks baad me bhi ho sakti hain,filhal class me concentrate karen...???


koi kuch kehta ki usse pehle hi ROVEL ki awaaz humare kaano me padi jiske baad baatein khatm aur kaam chalu ho gaya...

jahan baaki sabhi SAVENTS apni apni aankhen band kar REFINER ko man me uccharit kar uske effect se zor zor se hasne lag gaye the wahin has mai bhi raha tha par ye hasi fake thi..

reason...

filhal toh mujhe SPELL ko power dene ke liye kisi REFINER ki zaroorat thi nahi par kal ke baad aisa hone wala nahi tha...

parso se mai bhi ek normal SAVENT tha jisse un sabhi taklifon we guzarna tha jisse hokar ek SAVENT apne mukaam haasil karta hai...

par isme mere liye ek bohot badi problem thi... EMOTIONS...

wahi emotions jinse REFINERS bane the...jab wo EMOTIONS ek shakti ray me badal SOUL se connect hote the,tab SOUL ke through un emotions ke SPELL ko shakti milti thi...

par mujhme toh unme se koi bhi EMOTIONS the nahi....fir aise me bina meri aloukik shaktiyon ke kaise karunga mai apne SPELLS ko refine....

sawal mushkil tha par jawab maine already khoj liya tha..

par us jawab ko filhal mai khudme try nahi kar sakta tha....

aur wo isiliye kyunki ek toh mera vyaktiv,mera ATTITUDE mujhe aisa karne ki ijazat nahi deta tha par agar fir bhi,ek temporary base par in emotions ko try bhar karne ke liye mai inka istamal kar bhi leta toh parso se,jab mere paas wo authority nahi hogi jisse mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun,meri ye harkat ek alag hi shakti ka roop le backfire kar mujhe ek mout jaisi neend me sula degi....

waise same condition VIDEOUS ke saath bhi hai but mujhe pata hai ki jab ye normal hone ka plan uska hai toh aisa hone ke baad aani waali pareshani ka solution usne bohot pehle hi nikaal liya hoga...

khair,yahi wajah thi meri fake hasi ki aur aisa mai ye tab tak karta raha jab tak saare SAVENTS ne lagatar hasne se pet me uth rahe marod ki wajah se give nahi kar diya..

class khatm ho chuki thi aur isiliye teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER class se nikal gaye aur jab aisa hua toh...


ACCHUTA-pata nahi bhai,kab hoga merge ye pehla REFINER SOUL se aur mukti milegi is dard se...

MAI-hota kuch nahi hai ACCHUTA...
karna padta hai...


meri baat par ACCHUTA kuch kahe usse pehle...


SLUNDER-arre chhodo naa yaar..jab hoga tab hoga..filhal toh i am very happy ki hum teeno wapas ek hi class me aa gaye hain...

pata hai RAAZ,hum bhale hi apartment me shift ho chuke the, life style sahi ho chuki thi par jab us din tune hume apne dost ka darja diya toh quater se nikalne ke baad bhi ek khaalipan lagta tha...

par ab tu aa gaya hai toh ab fullon dhamal karenge...


apne aadat ke ulat bilkul ACCHUTA ki tarah apni excitement dikha raha tha SLUNDER jiski baat sun...


ACCHUTA-satyavachan....aur pata hai RAAZ,do din ho gaye hume GROOMERS bane...

chaaron LUXURY GATEWAYS mile hain hume jinse hum pura PHASE explore kar sakte hain par abhi tak humne kiya nahi hai...

aaj shaam ka plan bana tha aur ab jab tu bhi saath hai toh fullon dhaamal karenge...

MAI-dhamal baad me karna..pehle ghar chalte hain....


ye bol jahan mai aage badh gaya wahin mere baad wo dono bhi mere piche ho liye aur raaste bhar dono ki patar patar on mode me hi rahi...






PLACE-HEAVEN





YE PARESHANI BHI CHIZ AJEEB HAI...

JAB BHI TERE CHEHRE PAR AATI HAI,TUJHE AUR KHUBSOORAT BANA JAATI HAI...


AVANTIKA ke chehre par dikh rahi pareshani ki silwaton ko dekh kahi thi ye baat VIKRAM ne jispar AVANTIKA ne turant khudko normal kar liya par wo ye bhul gayi thi uske saamne khade shaksh se kuch bhi chuppana mumkin nahi...


VIKRAM-kya baat hai..humari jaan humse hi RAAZ rakhne lagi....!!!

jaanbujh kar RAAZ shabd ka istemal kiya tha VIKRAM ne aur uske aisa karte hi ek baar firse AVANTIKA ke chehre par tanaav dikhne laga tha jisse dekh VIKRAM muskura diya...


AVANTIKA-aapko toh sab pata hai toh fir ye sawal kyun..???

VIKRAM-pata toh aapko bhi sabkuch hai toh fir ye tanaav kyun...???

AVANTIKA-theory aur practical me fark hota hai V.J...jo RAAZ kar raha hai uska bhale hi mujhe andaza tha par ab jab wo saari chizen wakayi ho rahi hain aur mai unhe dekh rahi hun toh khud ko pareshan hone se rok nahi paa rahi...

aur uske upar VIDEOUS... RAAZ ko harane ke chakkar me wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai....aur sabse badi baat toh ye hai ki RAAZ uski chaalon ko pehle se counter nahi karne waala....

VIKRAM-VIDEOUS toh shuru se hi upar hai AV..acha ek sawal ka jawab do...ANSH aur URJA me kya fark hai...???

AVANTIKA-ye kaise sawal hai..???

ansh matlab PART hota hai, khud ka ek PORTION aur URJA matlab ENERGY....

VIKRAM-elaborate aur differentiate karo dono ko with example...

AVANTIKA-ansh inheritance jaisa hota hai jo ki ek compulsion hai..

isme zor nahi chalta... example ke taur par aap aur ASMODEUS jo ki GOD ke ansh hai...aap dono hi unke inheritance hain jisse aap khudbhi chaahen toh deny nahi kar sakte...

wahin URJA ek POWER OF ATTORNEY ki tarah hai jisse yaa toh ek waqt ke baad artificially apne man se kisiko diya jata hai aur fir kisi aur reason ki wajah se ye POWER kisi bahar waale ke haath lag jaati hai..

aur iska best example hai RAAZ aur VIDEOUS...

jahan ek taraf VIDEOUS ko aapki aur aapke bhai ki shaktiyan ek lottery ki tarah mil gayi wahin dusri taraf RAAZ ko wo shaktiyan aapne aur ASMODEUS ne apni marzi se di...

VIKRAM-not bad AV... example acha tha... difference toh tumne bata diya ab similarity batao..???

AVANTIKA-similarity....!!!wo mujhe nahi pata par ek baat batao...ye saari baatein abhi kyun...???

VIKRAM-batata hun..par pehle similarity jaan lo....

ANSH ho yaa fir URJA,dono ke hi growth ne waqt lagta hai...jab mera janm hua tha,tabse hi mere andar har wo aloukik shakti thi jo mere father GOD ne pradan ki thi..

wahi shakti jo ASMODEUS ko bhi GOD ne apne bete ki haisiyat se di thi...

par kya mai us waqt ASMODEUS se takkar le sakta tha...kya mai usse jeet sakta tha....

bilkul nahi... ASMODEUS mujhe asaani se hara deta...aur ye isiliye tha kyunki ASMODEUS ki utappati mere janm se karodon saal pehle ki thi..

wo shaktiyan jo GOD ne usse di thi, ASMODEUS ne un shaktiyon ko waqt ke saath AMPLIFY kiya tha..nurture kiya tha..

AV,karm ache ho yaa bure,ye nishchit hai ki agar mehnat ki jaaye toh uska fal milne se GOD bhi rok nahi sakte...

bhale hi fir us fal ka natija negetive hi kyun naa ho...

ASMODEUS ne mehnet ki thi, bohot mehnat ki thi aur yahi kaaran tha ki us waqt wo mujhse kayi guna zyada shaktishaali tha...

thik ussi tarah jab RAAZ ko uski puri shakti mili jo ki hum dono bhaiyon ki urja hai,tab uski taakat utni hi thi jitni VIDEOUS ki utappati ke waqt uski thi...

par us waqt me aur abhi ke waqt me bohot lambe samay ka antaral hai...

itne waqt me BANISHMENT me rehne ke baawjud VIDEOUS ne apni shaktiyon ko AMPLIFY kiya hai,badhaya hai aur us shakti ke AURA ko RAAZ ne tabhi mehsoos kar liya tha jab wo pehli baar VIDEOUS ke saamne aaya tha...

ANSH ho ya fir URJA..shakti ko badhane me waqt lagta hi hai par jitna waqt VIDEOUS ne khudko nurture karne ke liye liya hai,utna RAAZ nahi le sakta....

aur issi kaaran usse support chahiye..aisa support jo bhale hi aankhon ko naa dikh raha ho,par uski moujudgi mehsoos ki jaa sakti ho...

achi baat ye hai ki RAAZ ko us support ke baare me dheere dheere hi sahi pata chal raha hai par jo baat RAAZ ke liye acchi hai, unfortunately kaho,ya kismat,wo baat kisi aur ke liye achi nahi ho sakti..

par yahi is kahani ki niyati hai...isse badla nahi jaa sakta...kyunki RAAZ ke saamne VIDEOUS hai..

aur VIDEOUS us LOHE ki tarah hai jisse sirf dusra LOHA hi kaat sakta hai..

aur wo LOHA RAAZ nahi hai,wo ATTITUDE hai jo RAAZ me hai...wo ATTITUDE jo VIDEOUS ke aayne ke samaan hai...

ACCHAYI,REHEMDILI,MAAFI,APNAPAN,TYAG...agar inme se ek bhi emotion ne RAAZ ke andar permanent ghar kiya,toh uske agle hi pal
wo bhi khatm ho jaayega aur uske saath ye kahani bhi..

isiliye chinta mukt hokar kahani ka maza lijiye..aur ye mat bhuliye ki jab bhi koi chiz apni hadh paar karti hai,toh us chiz ko lagam dene ke liye koi naa koi bedi taiyar rehti hi hai...

VIKRAM ki is aakhri baat ko sun AVANTIKA ka murjaya chehra achanak hi chamak utha aur...

AVANTIKA-ye main mudde ki baat aap aakhir me hi kyun karte hain...???chaliye,bataiye,kaun si lagam taiyar kar rakhi hai aapne...???

VIKRAM-lagaam taiyar toh bohot pehle hi kar li thi...bas usse kheenchne ka,lagane ka waqt ab aaya hai....ab wo lagam kya aur kaise lagega,ye khud dekh lo.....






PLACE-SOME WHERE IN UNIVERSE




PEHLE PATA HOTA KI TUM YUNHI SAAMNE AA JAAOGI TOH TUMHE DHUNDNE ME WAQT ZAAYA NAHI KARTA MAI.....


ye baat kahi thi WOOGER ne....

reason....

ek urja me badal badi tezi se WOOGER bramhanad ke beecho beech chala jaa raha tha ki tabhi usne apne saamne ek badi si shield ko mehsoos kiya aur aisa mehsoos karte hi wo turant rook gaya..

WOOGER ke rookne ke agle hi pal wo SHIELD gayab ho gayi aur jahan wo SHIELD thi,wahan ek naya aakar banane laga jo kisi jaanwar ka tha aur us jaanwar ke apne pure form me aate hi WOOGER ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


ANIMAL-kabse jaante ho mere baare me....??

WOOGER-jabse tum jaanti ho apne baare me GRIFFIN.....


GRIFFIN...wo behad badi aur vishalkaay janwar thi jo is waqt WOOGER ke saamne khadi thi....

GRIFFIN ka structure behad alag,ajeeb aur darawana tha...jahan uski puri body ek LIONESS ki tarah thi wahin uska mooh ek CHEEL,ek EAGLE ki tarah tha par chowda tha aur saath hi kisi eagle ki hi tarah uske pankh bhi the....

(NOTE:-doston,apne man se GRIFFIN ko describe nahi kiya hai maine, ancient greek mythology ke mutabik issi naam ka jaanwar inhi features ke saath kabhi hua karta tha)

khair, WOOGER ki baat sun...


GRIFFIN-par kaise jaante ho tum mere baare me aur kyun dhund rahe the tum mujhe...???

WOOGER-kamal karti ho GRIFFIN....mere MASTER ki shakti se utpatti hui thi meri aur tumhari mistress MAHI se tumhari....

(JI HAAN DOSTON,GRIFFIN HI HAI WO ANIMAL JISNE BACHPAN SE HI MAHI KA TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST ME KHAYAL RAKHA THA)


interlinked hai hum fir kaise nahi jaaunga mai tumhare baare me....???

najaane kab se dhundte aa raha hun mai tumhe....aur dekho, finally aaj tum khud mere saamne ho...

GRIFFIN-bataya nahi tumne ki kyun dhoond rahe the tum mujhe...???

WOOGER-jawab tumhe pata hai GRIFFIN....mujhe naam aur pata chahiye us shaksh ka jiski utpatti mere MASTER aur tumhari MISTRESS ke saath hui thi...

jisse mere us tak pahunchne se pehle hi gayab kar diya gaya tha....

GRIFFIN-usse gayab isiliye kar diya gaya tha kyunki agar tum us tak pahunchte toh apni zaroorat haasil kar maar dete tum usse...

WOOGER-marna toh usse hai hi..agar us waqt hi mar jaati toh kya fark pad jaata...

GRIFFIN-fal khaane ke liye ped nahi kaata jaata...par afsos itni simple si baat tum kabhi nahi samajh paaoge....

WOOGER-mujhe wo ped khana hai jisne meri matlab ke fal ko khudme ugane ki himmat ki....

baat ko kheencho mat GRIFFIN...agar kuch aur waqt tak saans leti rehna chahti ho toh naam aur pata batao uska...

ek baat aur,tum aa toh gayi ho mere saamne ,par jaa tab tak nahi sakti jab tak mai naa chahun...


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi GRIFFIN ke chaaron taraf ek invisible cage ban gaya tha jisse naa sirf GRIFFIN ne mehsoos kar liya tha balki wo ye bhi jaan gayi thi ki wo us cage ko tod nahi paayegi...

GRIFFIN-WOOGER...apne MASTER ki wajah se taakat toh bohot hai tumme par akal kahan bech aaye tum...???

kya mujhe ye baat pata nahi hai ki filhal mai tumhara mukabala nahi kar sakti...aur ye janane ke baad bhi agar mai tumhare saamne khud aayi hun toh maine aisa kuch soch kar hi kiya hoga naa...

ye mat bhoolo ki sirf mai hun jo tumhe kuch bhi bata sakti hun...agar mai khatm hui,toh tumhe kuch pata nahi chalega.....


GRIFFIN ki baat khatm hote hi uske chaaron taraf laga cage bhi khatm ho gaya....


WOOGER-kya chahti ho...???

GRIFFIN-kaaran jaanana chahti hun....wo kaaran jiski wajah se tumne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke bekasoor MAATA PITAH ko maar diya...

WOOGER-correction dear....maine nahi maara unhe..unhone khud apni jaan li thi...

GRIFFIN-bandookh chalane waala haath bhale koi bhi ho,par us bandhook ko un haathon me pahunchane waala hi asli kasoorwaar hota hai..

aur tumne toh shart hi aisi rakhi thi ki us waqt unhe apni zindagi mout se choti hi lagi thi...ab bina baat ghumaye kaaran bataoge yaa fir mai jaaun...???


ek lambi saans chhodi WOOGER ne aur fir wo bohot si baatein jo ho chuki hain aur jinhe hona hai,with reason batata chala gaya GRIFFIN ko jisse sun....


GRIFFIN-tumhare MASTER ab kisi bhi SAVENT ko aur unse related kisi bhi vyakti ko nahi maarenge....

agar unhone maara toh unki wo shakti jiske balbute wo VIDEOUS ko takkar de sakte hain,khatm ho jaayegi...

agar ye waada karo toh mai tumhe us shaksh ka naam bataungi aur uska chehra dikhaungi jiski talash tumhe hai...

WOOGER-apni aukad se zyada demand nahi kar rahi ho tum...

GRIFFIN-meri aukaad kya hai,ye sahi waqt aane par pata chal jaayega tumhe....filhal maine jo shart rakhi hai,kya tum raazi ho usse....!!!


GRIFFIN ki baat par kuch seconds dekhta raha WOOGER usse aur fir...


WOOGER-tumne kaha sirf naam bataogi aur chehra dikhaogi....itni badi kurbaani sirf ek naam aur chehre ke badle,kuch zyada nahi ho gaya....

itne bade bramhand me sirf ek naam aur chehre ke dum par kisiko dhundna reth ke dher me sui dhundne jaisa hai...

GRIFFIN-naam aur chehra,kisi raah chalte ko nahi,mai tumhe bata rahi hun..aur sirf naam aur chehre ke zariye kisiko kaise dhunda jaata hai,itna hunar toh hai hi tumme...

haan,usme waqt toh lagega hi,par itni mehnat toh kar hi loge tum...

WOOGER-mere MASTER ke paas ALOUKIK shaktiyan hain..aur aisi shaktiyan khatm nahi hoti GRIFFIN...

haan, mai tumse ye waada kar sakta hun ki agar mere MASTER ne kisi SAVENT yaa usse jude kisi shaksh ko maara toh wo shaktiyan mere MASTER ka tyag kar dengi...


WOOGER ki baat sun GRIFFIN ki aankhen sochne ke andaz me choti ho gayi...

usse maalum tha ki WOOGER jhut nahi bol raha hai.. ALOUKIK shaktiyan wakayi khatm nahi hoti bas unka thikana badal jaata hai toh aise me RAAZ ki shaktiyon ko bas usse alag hi kiya jaa sakta hai...

uske dimag me ye baat bhi aayi ki RAAZ waada tod kisiko maarkar aisa risk lega nahi kyunki ek baar aisi shaktiyan alag hui toh unhe wapas paana next to impossible hai aur agar aisa kisi tarah ho bhi jaaye toh usse pehle hi VIDEOUS apne ek maatr dushman ko khatm kar dega jiska matlab tha game over....

saare ganit lagane ke baad....


GRIFFIN-manzoor hai....par iski kya guarantee ki RAAZ apne waade se nahi mukrega...!!!

WOOGER-hadh me raho GRIFFIN..mat bhulo ki tumhare saamne WOOGER khada hai...

is bramhaand ka sabse khatarnaak CREATURE....

mujhe ya mere MASTER ko kuch bhi karne ke liye jhuthi aad lene ki zaroorat nahi hai...

agar MASTER ka dil kare toh tumhari MISTRESS ko ek pal nahi lagega apni aakhri saans ke safar tak pahunchne ke liye... isiliye dont tempt me....


gurrate hue kahi thi ye saari baat WOOGER ne jisse sun andar hi andar hil gayi thi GRIFFIN...


GRIFFIN-thik hai...mai jaa rahi hun..aur mere gayab hoti hi tumhe naam aur chehra,dono pata chal jaayega...


aisa bolne ke agle hi pal gayab ho gayi GRIFFIN aur uske gayab hote hi jahan wo khadi thi,wahan dhuen se ek chehra banane laga tha aur us chehre ke thik neeche ek naam aane laga tha jiske pure hote hi...


WOOGER-


tera naam mere kaano me ab
GUNJTA RAHEGA.....

ye WOOGER tere chehre ko ab har jagah DHUNDTA RAHEGA....

baazi chaalu hai,
GAME ON HAI...

mai aa raha hun wahan,
jahan chuppi hui tu......FALLON hai......










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....










AAPKA APNA V...J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VIDEOUS FLORIN AUR MARIA SE PEHLI BAAR MILTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ BRAWNY AUR USKE SAATH USKE PARENTS KO BHI MAARTA HAI.


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CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-68




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



GROOMERS CLASS:-





KNOCK.... KNOCK.... KNOCK.....


subah ka waqt hai..GROOMERS class ke door par knock hua tha jisse sun class ke andar moujud teeno WHIZZ,WHIZZDER aur unke saath sabhi SAVENTS ki nazar bhi door par gayi jahan is waqt mai khada tha...

mujhe GROOMERS ke kapdo me khade ya fir ye kahun ki mujhe dekh jahan ek jhatke me ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade ho gaye wahin class ke baaki SAVENTS ki nazar bhi mujh par theher si gayi thi..

WEAKLINGS ki muddy shirt me bhi meri personality kam nahi dikhti thi toh fir aise me is waqt jo robe maine pehna tha,usme mai baakiyon se kayi guna zyada aakarshak lag raha tha aur ye appreciation mujhe wahan moujud har female SAVENTS ki aankhon me bakhubi dikh raha tha...

khair,mujhe dekh....


EDWINA-aao RAAZ...congrats for the upgradation...waise tum deserve karte the ye promotion...

SAVENTS,aapko jaankar hairani hogi ki RAAZ aisa pehla SAVENT hai jisne ek hi din me apne SOUL ko do baar AMPLIFY kiya hai...

in a way ye keh sakte hain ki isne ek hi din me khudko upgrade kiya hai....


meri achievement ko sun jahan baaki sabhi SAVENTS hairan ho rahe the wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko toh ye sab normal hi laga tha..

wo dono toh issi baat se khush the ki unke according unka friend unki class me aa gaya tha...

WHIZZ EDWINA ke baad WHIZZDER ROVEL aur WHIZZ PETRA ne bhi mujhe congratulate kiya aur fir baithne ko kaha..

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER toh jaise issi baat ka intazar kar rahe the...

jaise hi mai aage badha,un dono ne hi mujhe unke saath baithne ka ishara kiya jiske baad mai un dono ke beech jaakar baith gaya...


EDWINA-RAAZ... WHIZZ HIDA ne tumhe SPELLAR aur REFINER ke baare me toh bataya hi hoga...

MAI-haan...

EDWINA-WEAKLINGS aur GROOMER'S ke SPELLARS aur REFINERS me fark hota hai...

hamari catagory me SPELLARS me
kul teen pipes hote hain jinki SPELLS ko jhelne ki shamata zyada hoti hai...

aur saath hi REFINERS ki sankhya bhi zyada hoti hai...jahan WEAKLINGS class me aap sirf ek hi REFINER ko trigger karne ki koshish kar rahe the wahin is class me aap kul teen REFINERS ko trigger karenge....

HAPPY SAD AND ANGRY....

jinke spells hain....

SAMPURN AANANDITAM...

SAMPURN ANTARDUKHAM

SAMPURN KRODHAM....

in teeno RIFINER SPELLS ko aapko use me laana sikhna hai...


PETRA-ye bohot achi baat hai ki aapne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki tarah session ke shuruat me hi khudko upgrade kar liya hai kyunki abhi tak kisi bhi SAVENT ne kisi bhi REFINER ko trigger nahi kiya hai...

REFINER ko maamuli darje tak refine karne ke liye aapko kul 2 minute tak paused CEREBRATION me rehkar apne REFINER ko man hi man uccharit karna hoga..

agar aapne aisa kar diya toh aapke SPELLS ka level low se average pahunch jaayega....

complete power ke liye yahi process 5 minutes tak karna padta hai...

toh shuru karen....???

SAB-yes WHIZZ....

ACCHUTA-arre yaar..fir g***d fatne waali hai....saala is AANANDITAM REFINER ki toh...saala ek baar jaan aa jaaye is REFINER me...

itna bajaunga iski ga***d me ki fir kabhi pareshan nahi karega...

pichle 2 din se has has kar atdi sukhne ko aa gayi hai....

SLUNDER -abbe chup.. WHIZZ ne sun liya toh teri ga***d sooj jaani hai...

ACCHUTA-bhai jab ga***d faththi hai naa,toh uska ek side reaction ga***d ko suja bhi deta hai..aur kitna sujayegi ye...

SLUNDER-apni bakwas band kar aur concertration pura task me laga...


SLUNDER ki baat par ACCHUTA kuch kehta ki tabhi...


MAI-issi class me chipke reh second hand ka tag lagaye rehna toh focus mat kar...

par agar khudko strong bana VALDIS aur uske jaiso se takkar lena hai toh fir atdi sukhe yaa fir saans ki nali...har obstacle ko paar karna hi padega...

ACCHUTA-yahi toh baat hai...kam bolta hai par zabardast bolta hai...yaar,kuch bhi bol...teri har baat kaan se hokar dil me utarti hai....

aur logic bhi to the point hota hai..kaun si nabs kab dabani hai,ache se maalum hota hai tujhe...

ROVEL-SAVENTS...personal talks baad me bhi ho sakti hain,filhal class me concentrate karen...???


koi kuch kehta ki usse pehle hi ROVEL ki awaaz humare kaano me padi jiske baad baatein khatm aur kaam chalu ho gaya...

jahan baaki sabhi SAVENTS apni apni aankhen band kar REFINER ko man me uccharit kar uske effect se zor zor se hasne lag gaye the wahin has mai bhi raha tha par ye hasi fake thi..

reason...

filhal toh mujhe SPELL ko power dene ke liye kisi REFINER ki zaroorat thi nahi par kal ke baad aisa hone wala nahi tha...

parso se mai bhi ek normal SAVENT tha jisse un sabhi taklifon we guzarna tha jisse hokar ek SAVENT apne mukaam haasil karta hai...

par isme mere liye ek bohot badi problem thi... EMOTIONS...

wahi emotions jinse REFINERS bane the...jab wo EMOTIONS ek shakti ray me badal SOUL se connect hote the,tab SOUL ke through un emotions ke SPELL ko shakti milti thi...

par mujhme toh unme se koi bhi EMOTIONS the nahi....fir aise me bina meri aloukik shaktiyon ke kaise karunga mai apne SPELLS ko refine....

sawal mushkil tha par jawab maine already khoj liya tha..

par us jawab ko filhal mai khudme try nahi kar sakta tha....

aur wo isiliye kyunki ek toh mera vyaktiv,mera ATTITUDE mujhe aisa karne ki ijazat nahi deta tha par agar fir bhi,ek temporary base par in emotions ko try bhar karne ke liye mai inka istamal kar bhi leta toh parso se,jab mere paas wo authority nahi hogi jisse mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun,meri ye harkat ek alag hi shakti ka roop le backfire kar mujhe ek mout jaisi neend me sula degi....

waise same condition VIDEOUS ke saath bhi hai but mujhe pata hai ki jab ye normal hone ka plan uska hai toh aisa hone ke baad aani waali pareshani ka solution usne bohot pehle hi nikaal liya hoga...

khair,yahi wajah thi meri fake hasi ki aur aisa mai ye tab tak karta raha jab tak saare SAVENTS ne lagatar hasne se pet me uth rahe marod ki wajah se give nahi kar diya..

class khatm ho chuki thi aur isiliye teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER class se nikal gaye aur jab aisa hua toh...


ACCHUTA-pata nahi bhai,kab hoga merge ye pehla REFINER SOUL se aur mukti milegi is dard se...

MAI-hota kuch nahi hai ACCHUTA...
karna padta hai...


meri baat par ACCHUTA kuch kahe usse pehle...


SLUNDER-arre chhodo naa yaar..jab hoga tab hoga..filhal toh i am very happy ki hum teeno wapas ek hi class me aa gaye hain...

pata hai RAAZ,hum bhale hi apartment me shift ho chuke the, life style sahi ho chuki thi par jab us din tune hume apne dost ka darja diya toh quater se nikalne ke baad bhi ek khaalipan lagta tha...

par ab tu aa gaya hai toh ab fullon dhamal karenge...


apne aadat ke ulat bilkul ACCHUTA ki tarah apni excitement dikha raha tha SLUNDER jiski baat sun...


ACCHUTA-satyavachan....aur pata hai RAAZ,do din ho gaye hume GROOMERS bane...

chaaron LUXURY GATEWAYS mile hain hume jinse hum pura PHASE explore kar sakte hain par abhi tak humne kiya nahi hai...

aaj shaam ka plan bana tha aur ab jab tu bhi saath hai toh fullon dhaamal karenge...

MAI-dhamal baad me karna..pehle ghar chalte hain....


ye bol jahan mai aage badh gaya wahin mere baad wo dono bhi mere piche ho liye aur raaste bhar dono ki patar patar on mode me hi rahi...






PLACE-HEAVEN





YE PARESHANI BHI CHIZ AJEEB HAI...

JAB BHI TERE CHEHRE PAR AATI HAI,TUJHE AUR KHUBSOORAT BANA JAATI HAI...


AVANTIKA ke chehre par dikh rahi pareshani ki silwaton ko dekh kahi thi ye baat VIKRAM ne jispar AVANTIKA ne turant khudko normal kar liya par wo ye bhul gayi thi uske saamne khade shaksh se kuch bhi chuppana mumkin nahi...


VIKRAM-kya baat hai..humari jaan humse hi RAAZ rakhne lagi....!!!

jaanbujh kar RAAZ shabd ka istemal kiya tha VIKRAM ne aur uske aisa karte hi ek baar firse AVANTIKA ke chehre par tanaav dikhne laga tha jisse dekh VIKRAM muskura diya...


AVANTIKA-aapko toh sab pata hai toh fir ye sawal kyun..???

VIKRAM-pata toh aapko bhi sabkuch hai toh fir ye tanaav kyun...???

AVANTIKA-theory aur practical me fark hota hai V.J...jo RAAZ kar raha hai uska bhale hi mujhe andaza tha par ab jab wo saari chizen wakayi ho rahi hain aur mai unhe dekh rahi hun toh khud ko pareshan hone se rok nahi paa rahi...

aur uske upar VIDEOUS... RAAZ ko harane ke chakkar me wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai....aur sabse badi baat toh ye hai ki RAAZ uski chaalon ko pehle se counter nahi karne waala....

VIKRAM-VIDEOUS toh shuru se hi upar hai AV..acha ek sawal ka jawab do...ANSH aur URJA me kya fark hai...???

AVANTIKA-ye kaise sawal hai..???

ansh matlab PART hota hai, khud ka ek PORTION aur URJA matlab ENERGY....

VIKRAM-elaborate aur differentiate karo dono ko with example...

AVANTIKA-ansh inheritance jaisa hota hai jo ki ek compulsion hai..

isme zor nahi chalta... example ke taur par aap aur ASMODEUS jo ki GOD ke ansh hai...aap dono hi unke inheritance hain jisse aap khudbhi chaahen toh deny nahi kar sakte...

wahin URJA ek POWER OF ATTORNEY ki tarah hai jisse yaa toh ek waqt ke baad artificially apne man se kisiko diya jata hai aur fir kisi aur reason ki wajah se ye POWER kisi bahar waale ke haath lag jaati hai..

aur iska best example hai RAAZ aur VIDEOUS...

jahan ek taraf VIDEOUS ko aapki aur aapke bhai ki shaktiyan ek lottery ki tarah mil gayi wahin dusri taraf RAAZ ko wo shaktiyan aapne aur ASMODEUS ne apni marzi se di...

VIKRAM-not bad AV... example acha tha... difference toh tumne bata diya ab similarity batao..???

AVANTIKA-similarity....!!!wo mujhe nahi pata par ek baat batao...ye saari baatein abhi kyun...???

VIKRAM-batata hun..par pehle similarity jaan lo....

ANSH ho yaa fir URJA,dono ke hi growth ne waqt lagta hai...jab mera janm hua tha,tabse hi mere andar har wo aloukik shakti thi jo mere father GOD ne pradan ki thi..

wahi shakti jo ASMODEUS ko bhi GOD ne apne bete ki haisiyat se di thi...

par kya mai us waqt ASMODEUS se takkar le sakta tha...kya mai usse jeet sakta tha....

bilkul nahi... ASMODEUS mujhe asaani se hara deta...aur ye isiliye tha kyunki ASMODEUS ki utappati mere janm se karodon saal pehle ki thi..

wo shaktiyan jo GOD ne usse di thi, ASMODEUS ne un shaktiyon ko waqt ke saath AMPLIFY kiya tha..nurture kiya tha..

AV,karm ache ho yaa bure,ye nishchit hai ki agar mehnat ki jaaye toh uska fal milne se GOD bhi rok nahi sakte...

bhale hi fir us fal ka natija negetive hi kyun naa ho...

ASMODEUS ne mehnet ki thi, bohot mehnat ki thi aur yahi kaaran tha ki us waqt wo mujhse kayi guna zyada shaktishaali tha...

thik ussi tarah jab RAAZ ko uski puri shakti mili jo ki hum dono bhaiyon ki urja hai,tab uski taakat utni hi thi jitni VIDEOUS ki utappati ke waqt uski thi...

par us waqt me aur abhi ke waqt me bohot lambe samay ka antaral hai...

itne waqt me BANISHMENT me rehne ke baawjud VIDEOUS ne apni shaktiyon ko AMPLIFY kiya hai,badhaya hai aur us shakti ke AURA ko RAAZ ne tabhi mehsoos kar liya tha jab wo pehli baar VIDEOUS ke saamne aaya tha...

ANSH ho ya fir URJA..shakti ko badhane me waqt lagta hi hai par jitna waqt VIDEOUS ne khudko nurture karne ke liye liya hai,utna RAAZ nahi le sakta....

aur issi kaaran usse support chahiye..aisa support jo bhale hi aankhon ko naa dikh raha ho,par uski moujudgi mehsoos ki jaa sakti ho...

achi baat ye hai ki RAAZ ko us support ke baare me dheere dheere hi sahi pata chal raha hai par jo baat RAAZ ke liye acchi hai, unfortunately kaho,ya kismat,wo baat kisi aur ke liye achi nahi ho sakti..

par yahi is kahani ki niyati hai...isse badla nahi jaa sakta...kyunki RAAZ ke saamne VIDEOUS hai..

aur VIDEOUS us LOHE ki tarah hai jisse sirf dusra LOHA hi kaat sakta hai..

aur wo LOHA RAAZ nahi hai,wo ATTITUDE hai jo RAAZ me hai...wo ATTITUDE jo VIDEOUS ke aayne ke samaan hai...

ACCHAYI,REHEMDILI,MAAFI,APNAPAN,TYAG...agar inme se ek bhi emotion ne RAAZ ke andar permanent ghar kiya,toh uske agle hi pal
wo bhi khatm ho jaayega aur uske saath ye kahani bhi..

isiliye chinta mukt hokar kahani ka maza lijiye..aur ye mat bhuliye ki jab bhi koi chiz apni hadh paar karti hai,toh us chiz ko lagam dene ke liye koi naa koi bedi taiyar rehti hi hai...

VIKRAM ki is aakhri baat ko sun AVANTIKA ka murjaya chehra achanak hi chamak utha aur...

AVANTIKA-ye main mudde ki baat aap aakhir me hi kyun karte hain...???chaliye,bataiye,kaun si lagam taiyar kar rakhi hai aapne...???

VIKRAM-lagaam taiyar toh bohot pehle hi kar li thi...bas usse kheenchne ka,lagane ka waqt ab aaya hai....ab wo lagam kya aur kaise lagega,ye khud dekh lo.....






PLACE-SOME WHERE IN UNIVERSE




PEHLE PATA HOTA KI TUM YUNHI SAAMNE AA JAAOGI TOH TUMHE DHUNDNE ME WAQT ZAAYA NAHI KARTA MAI.....


ye baat kahi thi WOOGER ne....

reason....

ek urja me badal badi tezi se WOOGER bramhanad ke beecho beech chala jaa raha tha ki tabhi usne apne saamne ek badi si shield ko mehsoos kiya aur aisa mehsoos karte hi wo turant rook gaya..

WOOGER ke rookne ke agle hi pal wo SHIELD gayab ho gayi aur jahan wo SHIELD thi,wahan ek naya aakar banane laga jo kisi jaanwar ka tha aur us jaanwar ke apne pure form me aate hi WOOGER ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


ANIMAL-kabse jaante ho mere baare me....??

WOOGER-jabse tum jaanti ho apne baare me GRIFFIN.....


GRIFFIN...wo behad badi aur vishalkaay janwar thi jo is waqt WOOGER ke saamne khadi thi....

GRIFFIN ka structure behad alag,ajeeb aur darawana tha...jahan uski puri body ek LIONESS ki tarah thi wahin uska mooh ek CHEEL,ek EAGLE ki tarah tha par chowda tha aur saath hi kisi eagle ki hi tarah uske pankh bhi the....

(NOTE:-doston,apne man se GRIFFIN ko describe nahi kiya hai maine, ancient greek mythology ke mutabik issi naam ka jaanwar inhi features ke saath kabhi hua karta tha)

khair, WOOGER ki baat sun...


GRIFFIN-par kaise jaante ho tum mere baare me aur kyun dhund rahe the tum mujhe...???

WOOGER-kamal karti ho GRIFFIN....mere MASTER ki shakti se utpatti hui thi meri aur tumhari mistress MAHI se tumhari....

(JI HAAN DOSTON,GRIFFIN HI HAI WO ANIMAL JISNE BACHPAN SE HI MAHI KA TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST ME KHAYAL RAKHA THA)


interlinked hai hum fir kaise nahi jaaunga mai tumhare baare me....???

najaane kab se dhundte aa raha hun mai tumhe....aur dekho, finally aaj tum khud mere saamne ho...

GRIFFIN-bataya nahi tumne ki kyun dhoond rahe the tum mujhe...???

WOOGER-jawab tumhe pata hai GRIFFIN....mujhe naam aur pata chahiye us shaksh ka jiski utpatti mere MASTER aur tumhari MISTRESS ke saath hui thi...

jisse mere us tak pahunchne se pehle hi gayab kar diya gaya tha....

GRIFFIN-usse gayab isiliye kar diya gaya tha kyunki agar tum us tak pahunchte toh apni zaroorat haasil kar maar dete tum usse...

WOOGER-marna toh usse hai hi..agar us waqt hi mar jaati toh kya fark pad jaata...

GRIFFIN-fal khaane ke liye ped nahi kaata jaata...par afsos itni simple si baat tum kabhi nahi samajh paaoge....

WOOGER-mujhe wo ped khana hai jisne meri matlab ke fal ko khudme ugane ki himmat ki....

baat ko kheencho mat GRIFFIN...agar kuch aur waqt tak saans leti rehna chahti ho toh naam aur pata batao uska...

ek baat aur,tum aa toh gayi ho mere saamne ,par jaa tab tak nahi sakti jab tak mai naa chahun...


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi GRIFFIN ke chaaron taraf ek invisible cage ban gaya tha jisse naa sirf GRIFFIN ne mehsoos kar liya tha balki wo ye bhi jaan gayi thi ki wo us cage ko tod nahi paayegi...

GRIFFIN-WOOGER...apne MASTER ki wajah se taakat toh bohot hai tumme par akal kahan bech aaye tum...???

kya mujhe ye baat pata nahi hai ki filhal mai tumhara mukabala nahi kar sakti...aur ye janane ke baad bhi agar mai tumhare saamne khud aayi hun toh maine aisa kuch soch kar hi kiya hoga naa...

ye mat bhoolo ki sirf mai hun jo tumhe kuch bhi bata sakti hun...agar mai khatm hui,toh tumhe kuch pata nahi chalega.....


GRIFFIN ki baat khatm hote hi uske chaaron taraf laga cage bhi khatm ho gaya....


WOOGER-kya chahti ho...???

GRIFFIN-kaaran jaanana chahti hun....wo kaaran jiski wajah se tumne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke bekasoor MAATA PITAH ko maar diya...

WOOGER-correction dear....maine nahi maara unhe..unhone khud apni jaan li thi...

GRIFFIN-bandookh chalane waala haath bhale koi bhi ho,par us bandhook ko un haathon me pahunchane waala hi asli kasoorwaar hota hai..

aur tumne toh shart hi aisi rakhi thi ki us waqt unhe apni zindagi mout se choti hi lagi thi...ab bina baat ghumaye kaaran bataoge yaa fir mai jaaun...???


ek lambi saans chhodi WOOGER ne aur fir wo bohot si baatein jo ho chuki hain aur jinhe hona hai,with reason batata chala gaya GRIFFIN ko jisse sun....


GRIFFIN-tumhare MASTER ab kisi bhi SAVENT ko aur unse related kisi bhi vyakti ko nahi maarenge....

agar unhone maara toh unki wo shakti jiske balbute wo VIDEOUS ko takkar de sakte hain,khatm ho jaayegi...

agar ye waada karo toh mai tumhe us shaksh ka naam bataungi aur uska chehra dikhaungi jiski talash tumhe hai...

WOOGER-apni aukad se zyada demand nahi kar rahi ho tum...

GRIFFIN-meri aukaad kya hai,ye sahi waqt aane par pata chal jaayega tumhe....filhal maine jo shart rakhi hai,kya tum raazi ho usse....!!!


GRIFFIN ki baat par kuch seconds dekhta raha WOOGER usse aur fir...


WOOGER-tumne kaha sirf naam bataogi aur chehra dikhaogi....itni badi kurbaani sirf ek naam aur chehre ke badle,kuch zyada nahi ho gaya....

itne bade bramhand me sirf ek naam aur chehre ke dum par kisiko dhundna reth ke dher me sui dhundne jaisa hai...

GRIFFIN-naam aur chehra,kisi raah chalte ko nahi,mai tumhe bata rahi hun..aur sirf naam aur chehre ke zariye kisiko kaise dhunda jaata hai,itna hunar toh hai hi tumme...

haan,usme waqt toh lagega hi,par itni mehnat toh kar hi loge tum...

WOOGER-mere MASTER ke paas ALOUKIK shaktiyan hain..aur aisi shaktiyan khatm nahi hoti GRIFFIN...

haan, mai tumse ye waada kar sakta hun ki agar mere MASTER ne kisi SAVENT yaa usse jude kisi shaksh ko maara toh wo shaktiyan mere MASTER ka tyag kar dengi...


WOOGER ki baat sun GRIFFIN ki aankhen sochne ke andaz me choti ho gayi...

usse maalum tha ki WOOGER jhut nahi bol raha hai.. ALOUKIK shaktiyan wakayi khatm nahi hoti bas unka thikana badal jaata hai toh aise me RAAZ ki shaktiyon ko bas usse alag hi kiya jaa sakta hai...

uske dimag me ye baat bhi aayi ki RAAZ waada tod kisiko maarkar aisa risk lega nahi kyunki ek baar aisi shaktiyan alag hui toh unhe wapas paana next to impossible hai aur agar aisa kisi tarah ho bhi jaaye toh usse pehle hi VIDEOUS apne ek maatr dushman ko khatm kar dega jiska matlab tha game over....

saare ganit lagane ke baad....


GRIFFIN-manzoor hai....par iski kya guarantee ki RAAZ apne waade se nahi mukrega...!!!

WOOGER-hadh me raho GRIFFIN..mat bhulo ki tumhare saamne WOOGER khada hai...

is bramhaand ka sabse khatarnaak CREATURE....

mujhe ya mere MASTER ko kuch bhi karne ke liye jhuthi aad lene ki zaroorat nahi hai...

agar MASTER ka dil kare toh tumhari MISTRESS ko ek pal nahi lagega apni aakhri saans ke safar tak pahunchne ke liye... isiliye dont tempt me....


gurrate hue kahi thi ye saari baat WOOGER ne jisse sun andar hi andar hil gayi thi GRIFFIN...


GRIFFIN-thik hai...mai jaa rahi hun..aur mere gayab hoti hi tumhe naam aur chehra,dono pata chal jaayega...


aisa bolne ke agle hi pal gayab ho gayi GRIFFIN aur uske gayab hote hi jahan wo khadi thi,wahan dhuen se ek chehra banane laga tha aur us chehre ke thik neeche ek naam aane laga tha jiske pure hote hi...


WOOGER-


tera naam mere kaano me ab
GUNJTA RAHEGA.....

ye WOOGER tere chehre ko ab har jagah DHUNDTA RAHEGA....

baazi chaalu hai,
GAME ON HAI...

mai aa raha hun wahan,
jahan chuppi hui tu......FALLON hai......










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....










AAPKA APNA V...J....
Fabulous update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VIDEOUS FLORIN AUR MARIA SE PEHLI BAAR MILTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ BRAWNY AUR USKE SAATH USKE PARENTS KO BHI MAARTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-68




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



GROOMERS CLASS:-





KNOCK.... KNOCK.... KNOCK.....


subah ka waqt hai..GROOMERS class ke door par knock hua tha jisse sun class ke andar moujud teeno WHIZZ,WHIZZDER aur unke saath sabhi SAVENTS ki nazar bhi door par gayi jahan is waqt mai khada tha...

mujhe GROOMERS ke kapdo me khade ya fir ye kahun ki mujhe dekh jahan ek jhatke me ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade ho gaye wahin class ke baaki SAVENTS ki nazar bhi mujh par theher si gayi thi..

WEAKLINGS ki muddy shirt me bhi meri personality kam nahi dikhti thi toh fir aise me is waqt jo robe maine pehna tha,usme mai baakiyon se kayi guna zyada aakarshak lag raha tha aur ye appreciation mujhe wahan moujud har female SAVENTS ki aankhon me bakhubi dikh raha tha...

khair,mujhe dekh....


EDWINA-aao RAAZ...congrats for the upgradation...waise tum deserve karte the ye promotion...

SAVENTS,aapko jaankar hairani hogi ki RAAZ aisa pehla SAVENT hai jisne ek hi din me apne SOUL ko do baar AMPLIFY kiya hai...

in a way ye keh sakte hain ki isne ek hi din me khudko upgrade kiya hai....


meri achievement ko sun jahan baaki sabhi SAVENTS hairan ho rahe the wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko toh ye sab normal hi laga tha..

wo dono toh issi baat se khush the ki unke according unka friend unki class me aa gaya tha...

WHIZZ EDWINA ke baad WHIZZDER ROVEL aur WHIZZ PETRA ne bhi mujhe congratulate kiya aur fir baithne ko kaha..

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER toh jaise issi baat ka intazar kar rahe the...

jaise hi mai aage badha,un dono ne hi mujhe unke saath baithne ka ishara kiya jiske baad mai un dono ke beech jaakar baith gaya...


EDWINA-RAAZ... WHIZZ HIDA ne tumhe SPELLAR aur REFINER ke baare me toh bataya hi hoga...

MAI-haan...

EDWINA-WEAKLINGS aur GROOMER'S ke SPELLARS aur REFINERS me fark hota hai...

hamari catagory me SPELLARS me
kul teen pipes hote hain jinki SPELLS ko jhelne ki shamata zyada hoti hai...

aur saath hi REFINERS ki sankhya bhi zyada hoti hai...jahan WEAKLINGS class me aap sirf ek hi REFINER ko trigger karne ki koshish kar rahe the wahin is class me aap kul teen REFINERS ko trigger karenge....

HAPPY SAD AND ANGRY....

jinke spells hain....

SAMPURN AANANDITAM...

SAMPURN ANTARDUKHAM

SAMPURN KRODHAM....

in teeno RIFINER SPELLS ko aapko use me laana sikhna hai...


PETRA-ye bohot achi baat hai ki aapne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki tarah session ke shuruat me hi khudko upgrade kar liya hai kyunki abhi tak kisi bhi SAVENT ne kisi bhi REFINER ko trigger nahi kiya hai...

REFINER ko maamuli darje tak refine karne ke liye aapko kul 2 minute tak paused CEREBRATION me rehkar apne REFINER ko man hi man uccharit karna hoga..

agar aapne aisa kar diya toh aapke SPELLS ka level low se average pahunch jaayega....

complete power ke liye yahi process 5 minutes tak karna padta hai...

toh shuru karen....???

SAB-yes WHIZZ....

ACCHUTA-arre yaar..fir g***d fatne waali hai....saala is AANANDITAM REFINER ki toh...saala ek baar jaan aa jaaye is REFINER me...

itna bajaunga iski ga***d me ki fir kabhi pareshan nahi karega...

pichle 2 din se has has kar atdi sukhne ko aa gayi hai....

SLUNDER -abbe chup.. WHIZZ ne sun liya toh teri ga***d sooj jaani hai...

ACCHUTA-bhai jab ga***d faththi hai naa,toh uska ek side reaction ga***d ko suja bhi deta hai..aur kitna sujayegi ye...

SLUNDER-apni bakwas band kar aur concertration pura task me laga...


SLUNDER ki baat par ACCHUTA kuch kehta ki tabhi...


MAI-issi class me chipke reh second hand ka tag lagaye rehna toh focus mat kar...

par agar khudko strong bana VALDIS aur uske jaiso se takkar lena hai toh fir atdi sukhe yaa fir saans ki nali...har obstacle ko paar karna hi padega...

ACCHUTA-yahi toh baat hai...kam bolta hai par zabardast bolta hai...yaar,kuch bhi bol...teri har baat kaan se hokar dil me utarti hai....

aur logic bhi to the point hota hai..kaun si nabs kab dabani hai,ache se maalum hota hai tujhe...

ROVEL-SAVENTS...personal talks baad me bhi ho sakti hain,filhal class me concentrate karen...???


koi kuch kehta ki usse pehle hi ROVEL ki awaaz humare kaano me padi jiske baad baatein khatm aur kaam chalu ho gaya...

jahan baaki sabhi SAVENTS apni apni aankhen band kar REFINER ko man me uccharit kar uske effect se zor zor se hasne lag gaye the wahin has mai bhi raha tha par ye hasi fake thi..

reason...

filhal toh mujhe SPELL ko power dene ke liye kisi REFINER ki zaroorat thi nahi par kal ke baad aisa hone wala nahi tha...

parso se mai bhi ek normal SAVENT tha jisse un sabhi taklifon we guzarna tha jisse hokar ek SAVENT apne mukaam haasil karta hai...

par isme mere liye ek bohot badi problem thi... EMOTIONS...

wahi emotions jinse REFINERS bane the...jab wo EMOTIONS ek shakti ray me badal SOUL se connect hote the,tab SOUL ke through un emotions ke SPELL ko shakti milti thi...

par mujhme toh unme se koi bhi EMOTIONS the nahi....fir aise me bina meri aloukik shaktiyon ke kaise karunga mai apne SPELLS ko refine....

sawal mushkil tha par jawab maine already khoj liya tha..

par us jawab ko filhal mai khudme try nahi kar sakta tha....

aur wo isiliye kyunki ek toh mera vyaktiv,mera ATTITUDE mujhe aisa karne ki ijazat nahi deta tha par agar fir bhi,ek temporary base par in emotions ko try bhar karne ke liye mai inka istamal kar bhi leta toh parso se,jab mere paas wo authority nahi hogi jisse mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun,meri ye harkat ek alag hi shakti ka roop le backfire kar mujhe ek mout jaisi neend me sula degi....

waise same condition VIDEOUS ke saath bhi hai but mujhe pata hai ki jab ye normal hone ka plan uska hai toh aisa hone ke baad aani waali pareshani ka solution usne bohot pehle hi nikaal liya hoga...

khair,yahi wajah thi meri fake hasi ki aur aisa mai ye tab tak karta raha jab tak saare SAVENTS ne lagatar hasne se pet me uth rahe marod ki wajah se give nahi kar diya..

class khatm ho chuki thi aur isiliye teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER class se nikal gaye aur jab aisa hua toh...


ACCHUTA-pata nahi bhai,kab hoga merge ye pehla REFINER SOUL se aur mukti milegi is dard se...

MAI-hota kuch nahi hai ACCHUTA...
karna padta hai...


meri baat par ACCHUTA kuch kahe usse pehle...


SLUNDER-arre chhodo naa yaar..jab hoga tab hoga..filhal toh i am very happy ki hum teeno wapas ek hi class me aa gaye hain...

pata hai RAAZ,hum bhale hi apartment me shift ho chuke the, life style sahi ho chuki thi par jab us din tune hume apne dost ka darja diya toh quater se nikalne ke baad bhi ek khaalipan lagta tha...

par ab tu aa gaya hai toh ab fullon dhamal karenge...


apne aadat ke ulat bilkul ACCHUTA ki tarah apni excitement dikha raha tha SLUNDER jiski baat sun...


ACCHUTA-satyavachan....aur pata hai RAAZ,do din ho gaye hume GROOMERS bane...

chaaron LUXURY GATEWAYS mile hain hume jinse hum pura PHASE explore kar sakte hain par abhi tak humne kiya nahi hai...

aaj shaam ka plan bana tha aur ab jab tu bhi saath hai toh fullon dhaamal karenge...

MAI-dhamal baad me karna..pehle ghar chalte hain....


ye bol jahan mai aage badh gaya wahin mere baad wo dono bhi mere piche ho liye aur raaste bhar dono ki patar patar on mode me hi rahi...






PLACE-HEAVEN





YE PARESHANI BHI CHIZ AJEEB HAI...

JAB BHI TERE CHEHRE PAR AATI HAI,TUJHE AUR KHUBSOORAT BANA JAATI HAI...


AVANTIKA ke chehre par dikh rahi pareshani ki silwaton ko dekh kahi thi ye baat VIKRAM ne jispar AVANTIKA ne turant khudko normal kar liya par wo ye bhul gayi thi uske saamne khade shaksh se kuch bhi chuppana mumkin nahi...


VIKRAM-kya baat hai..humari jaan humse hi RAAZ rakhne lagi....!!!

jaanbujh kar RAAZ shabd ka istemal kiya tha VIKRAM ne aur uske aisa karte hi ek baar firse AVANTIKA ke chehre par tanaav dikhne laga tha jisse dekh VIKRAM muskura diya...


AVANTIKA-aapko toh sab pata hai toh fir ye sawal kyun..???

VIKRAM-pata toh aapko bhi sabkuch hai toh fir ye tanaav kyun...???

AVANTIKA-theory aur practical me fark hota hai V.J...jo RAAZ kar raha hai uska bhale hi mujhe andaza tha par ab jab wo saari chizen wakayi ho rahi hain aur mai unhe dekh rahi hun toh khud ko pareshan hone se rok nahi paa rahi...

aur uske upar VIDEOUS... RAAZ ko harane ke chakkar me wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai....aur sabse badi baat toh ye hai ki RAAZ uski chaalon ko pehle se counter nahi karne waala....

VIKRAM-VIDEOUS toh shuru se hi upar hai AV..acha ek sawal ka jawab do...ANSH aur URJA me kya fark hai...???

AVANTIKA-ye kaise sawal hai..???

ansh matlab PART hota hai, khud ka ek PORTION aur URJA matlab ENERGY....

VIKRAM-elaborate aur differentiate karo dono ko with example...

AVANTIKA-ansh inheritance jaisa hota hai jo ki ek compulsion hai..

isme zor nahi chalta... example ke taur par aap aur ASMODEUS jo ki GOD ke ansh hai...aap dono hi unke inheritance hain jisse aap khudbhi chaahen toh deny nahi kar sakte...

wahin URJA ek POWER OF ATTORNEY ki tarah hai jisse yaa toh ek waqt ke baad artificially apne man se kisiko diya jata hai aur fir kisi aur reason ki wajah se ye POWER kisi bahar waale ke haath lag jaati hai..

aur iska best example hai RAAZ aur VIDEOUS...

jahan ek taraf VIDEOUS ko aapki aur aapke bhai ki shaktiyan ek lottery ki tarah mil gayi wahin dusri taraf RAAZ ko wo shaktiyan aapne aur ASMODEUS ne apni marzi se di...

VIKRAM-not bad AV... example acha tha... difference toh tumne bata diya ab similarity batao..???

AVANTIKA-similarity....!!!wo mujhe nahi pata par ek baat batao...ye saari baatein abhi kyun...???

VIKRAM-batata hun..par pehle similarity jaan lo....

ANSH ho yaa fir URJA,dono ke hi growth ne waqt lagta hai...jab mera janm hua tha,tabse hi mere andar har wo aloukik shakti thi jo mere father GOD ne pradan ki thi..

wahi shakti jo ASMODEUS ko bhi GOD ne apne bete ki haisiyat se di thi...

par kya mai us waqt ASMODEUS se takkar le sakta tha...kya mai usse jeet sakta tha....

bilkul nahi... ASMODEUS mujhe asaani se hara deta...aur ye isiliye tha kyunki ASMODEUS ki utappati mere janm se karodon saal pehle ki thi..

wo shaktiyan jo GOD ne usse di thi, ASMODEUS ne un shaktiyon ko waqt ke saath AMPLIFY kiya tha..nurture kiya tha..

AV,karm ache ho yaa bure,ye nishchit hai ki agar mehnat ki jaaye toh uska fal milne se GOD bhi rok nahi sakte...

bhale hi fir us fal ka natija negetive hi kyun naa ho...

ASMODEUS ne mehnet ki thi, bohot mehnat ki thi aur yahi kaaran tha ki us waqt wo mujhse kayi guna zyada shaktishaali tha...

thik ussi tarah jab RAAZ ko uski puri shakti mili jo ki hum dono bhaiyon ki urja hai,tab uski taakat utni hi thi jitni VIDEOUS ki utappati ke waqt uski thi...

par us waqt me aur abhi ke waqt me bohot lambe samay ka antaral hai...

itne waqt me BANISHMENT me rehne ke baawjud VIDEOUS ne apni shaktiyon ko AMPLIFY kiya hai,badhaya hai aur us shakti ke AURA ko RAAZ ne tabhi mehsoos kar liya tha jab wo pehli baar VIDEOUS ke saamne aaya tha...

ANSH ho ya fir URJA..shakti ko badhane me waqt lagta hi hai par jitna waqt VIDEOUS ne khudko nurture karne ke liye liya hai,utna RAAZ nahi le sakta....

aur issi kaaran usse support chahiye..aisa support jo bhale hi aankhon ko naa dikh raha ho,par uski moujudgi mehsoos ki jaa sakti ho...

achi baat ye hai ki RAAZ ko us support ke baare me dheere dheere hi sahi pata chal raha hai par jo baat RAAZ ke liye acchi hai, unfortunately kaho,ya kismat,wo baat kisi aur ke liye achi nahi ho sakti..

par yahi is kahani ki niyati hai...isse badla nahi jaa sakta...kyunki RAAZ ke saamne VIDEOUS hai..

aur VIDEOUS us LOHE ki tarah hai jisse sirf dusra LOHA hi kaat sakta hai..

aur wo LOHA RAAZ nahi hai,wo ATTITUDE hai jo RAAZ me hai...wo ATTITUDE jo VIDEOUS ke aayne ke samaan hai...

ACCHAYI,REHEMDILI,MAAFI,APNAPAN,TYAG...agar inme se ek bhi emotion ne RAAZ ke andar permanent ghar kiya,toh uske agle hi pal
wo bhi khatm ho jaayega aur uske saath ye kahani bhi..

isiliye chinta mukt hokar kahani ka maza lijiye..aur ye mat bhuliye ki jab bhi koi chiz apni hadh paar karti hai,toh us chiz ko lagam dene ke liye koi naa koi bedi taiyar rehti hi hai...

VIKRAM ki is aakhri baat ko sun AVANTIKA ka murjaya chehra achanak hi chamak utha aur...

AVANTIKA-ye main mudde ki baat aap aakhir me hi kyun karte hain...???chaliye,bataiye,kaun si lagam taiyar kar rakhi hai aapne...???

VIKRAM-lagaam taiyar toh bohot pehle hi kar li thi...bas usse kheenchne ka,lagane ka waqt ab aaya hai....ab wo lagam kya aur kaise lagega,ye khud dekh lo.....






PLACE-SOME WHERE IN UNIVERSE




PEHLE PATA HOTA KI TUM YUNHI SAAMNE AA JAAOGI TOH TUMHE DHUNDNE ME WAQT ZAAYA NAHI KARTA MAI.....


ye baat kahi thi WOOGER ne....

reason....

ek urja me badal badi tezi se WOOGER bramhanad ke beecho beech chala jaa raha tha ki tabhi usne apne saamne ek badi si shield ko mehsoos kiya aur aisa mehsoos karte hi wo turant rook gaya..

WOOGER ke rookne ke agle hi pal wo SHIELD gayab ho gayi aur jahan wo SHIELD thi,wahan ek naya aakar banane laga jo kisi jaanwar ka tha aur us jaanwar ke apne pure form me aate hi WOOGER ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


ANIMAL-kabse jaante ho mere baare me....??

WOOGER-jabse tum jaanti ho apne baare me GRIFFIN.....


GRIFFIN...wo behad badi aur vishalkaay janwar thi jo is waqt WOOGER ke saamne khadi thi....

GRIFFIN ka structure behad alag,ajeeb aur darawana tha...jahan uski puri body ek LIONESS ki tarah thi wahin uska mooh ek CHEEL,ek EAGLE ki tarah tha par chowda tha aur saath hi kisi eagle ki hi tarah uske pankh bhi the....

(NOTE:-doston,apne man se GRIFFIN ko describe nahi kiya hai maine, ancient greek mythology ke mutabik issi naam ka jaanwar inhi features ke saath kabhi hua karta tha)

khair, WOOGER ki baat sun...


GRIFFIN-par kaise jaante ho tum mere baare me aur kyun dhund rahe the tum mujhe...???

WOOGER-kamal karti ho GRIFFIN....mere MASTER ki shakti se utpatti hui thi meri aur tumhari mistress MAHI se tumhari....

(JI HAAN DOSTON,GRIFFIN HI HAI WO ANIMAL JISNE BACHPAN SE HI MAHI KA TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST ME KHAYAL RAKHA THA)


interlinked hai hum fir kaise nahi jaaunga mai tumhare baare me....???

najaane kab se dhundte aa raha hun mai tumhe....aur dekho, finally aaj tum khud mere saamne ho...

GRIFFIN-bataya nahi tumne ki kyun dhoond rahe the tum mujhe...???

WOOGER-jawab tumhe pata hai GRIFFIN....mujhe naam aur pata chahiye us shaksh ka jiski utpatti mere MASTER aur tumhari MISTRESS ke saath hui thi...

jisse mere us tak pahunchne se pehle hi gayab kar diya gaya tha....

GRIFFIN-usse gayab isiliye kar diya gaya tha kyunki agar tum us tak pahunchte toh apni zaroorat haasil kar maar dete tum usse...

WOOGER-marna toh usse hai hi..agar us waqt hi mar jaati toh kya fark pad jaata...

GRIFFIN-fal khaane ke liye ped nahi kaata jaata...par afsos itni simple si baat tum kabhi nahi samajh paaoge....

WOOGER-mujhe wo ped khana hai jisne meri matlab ke fal ko khudme ugane ki himmat ki....

baat ko kheencho mat GRIFFIN...agar kuch aur waqt tak saans leti rehna chahti ho toh naam aur pata batao uska...

ek baat aur,tum aa toh gayi ho mere saamne ,par jaa tab tak nahi sakti jab tak mai naa chahun...


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi GRIFFIN ke chaaron taraf ek invisible cage ban gaya tha jisse naa sirf GRIFFIN ne mehsoos kar liya tha balki wo ye bhi jaan gayi thi ki wo us cage ko tod nahi paayegi...

GRIFFIN-WOOGER...apne MASTER ki wajah se taakat toh bohot hai tumme par akal kahan bech aaye tum...???

kya mujhe ye baat pata nahi hai ki filhal mai tumhara mukabala nahi kar sakti...aur ye janane ke baad bhi agar mai tumhare saamne khud aayi hun toh maine aisa kuch soch kar hi kiya hoga naa...

ye mat bhoolo ki sirf mai hun jo tumhe kuch bhi bata sakti hun...agar mai khatm hui,toh tumhe kuch pata nahi chalega.....


GRIFFIN ki baat khatm hote hi uske chaaron taraf laga cage bhi khatm ho gaya....


WOOGER-kya chahti ho...???

GRIFFIN-kaaran jaanana chahti hun....wo kaaran jiski wajah se tumne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke bekasoor MAATA PITAH ko maar diya...

WOOGER-correction dear....maine nahi maara unhe..unhone khud apni jaan li thi...

GRIFFIN-bandookh chalane waala haath bhale koi bhi ho,par us bandhook ko un haathon me pahunchane waala hi asli kasoorwaar hota hai..

aur tumne toh shart hi aisi rakhi thi ki us waqt unhe apni zindagi mout se choti hi lagi thi...ab bina baat ghumaye kaaran bataoge yaa fir mai jaaun...???


ek lambi saans chhodi WOOGER ne aur fir wo bohot si baatein jo ho chuki hain aur jinhe hona hai,with reason batata chala gaya GRIFFIN ko jisse sun....


GRIFFIN-tumhare MASTER ab kisi bhi SAVENT ko aur unse related kisi bhi vyakti ko nahi maarenge....

agar unhone maara toh unki wo shakti jiske balbute wo VIDEOUS ko takkar de sakte hain,khatm ho jaayegi...

agar ye waada karo toh mai tumhe us shaksh ka naam bataungi aur uska chehra dikhaungi jiski talash tumhe hai...

WOOGER-apni aukad se zyada demand nahi kar rahi ho tum...

GRIFFIN-meri aukaad kya hai,ye sahi waqt aane par pata chal jaayega tumhe....filhal maine jo shart rakhi hai,kya tum raazi ho usse....!!!


GRIFFIN ki baat par kuch seconds dekhta raha WOOGER usse aur fir...


WOOGER-tumne kaha sirf naam bataogi aur chehra dikhaogi....itni badi kurbaani sirf ek naam aur chehre ke badle,kuch zyada nahi ho gaya....

itne bade bramhand me sirf ek naam aur chehre ke dum par kisiko dhundna reth ke dher me sui dhundne jaisa hai...

GRIFFIN-naam aur chehra,kisi raah chalte ko nahi,mai tumhe bata rahi hun..aur sirf naam aur chehre ke zariye kisiko kaise dhunda jaata hai,itna hunar toh hai hi tumme...

haan,usme waqt toh lagega hi,par itni mehnat toh kar hi loge tum...

WOOGER-mere MASTER ke paas ALOUKIK shaktiyan hain..aur aisi shaktiyan khatm nahi hoti GRIFFIN...

haan, mai tumse ye waada kar sakta hun ki agar mere MASTER ne kisi SAVENT yaa usse jude kisi shaksh ko maara toh wo shaktiyan mere MASTER ka tyag kar dengi...


WOOGER ki baat sun GRIFFIN ki aankhen sochne ke andaz me choti ho gayi...

usse maalum tha ki WOOGER jhut nahi bol raha hai.. ALOUKIK shaktiyan wakayi khatm nahi hoti bas unka thikana badal jaata hai toh aise me RAAZ ki shaktiyon ko bas usse alag hi kiya jaa sakta hai...

uske dimag me ye baat bhi aayi ki RAAZ waada tod kisiko maarkar aisa risk lega nahi kyunki ek baar aisi shaktiyan alag hui toh unhe wapas paana next to impossible hai aur agar aisa kisi tarah ho bhi jaaye toh usse pehle hi VIDEOUS apne ek maatr dushman ko khatm kar dega jiska matlab tha game over....

saare ganit lagane ke baad....


GRIFFIN-manzoor hai....par iski kya guarantee ki RAAZ apne waade se nahi mukrega...!!!

WOOGER-hadh me raho GRIFFIN..mat bhulo ki tumhare saamne WOOGER khada hai...

is bramhaand ka sabse khatarnaak CREATURE....

mujhe ya mere MASTER ko kuch bhi karne ke liye jhuthi aad lene ki zaroorat nahi hai...

agar MASTER ka dil kare toh tumhari MISTRESS ko ek pal nahi lagega apni aakhri saans ke safar tak pahunchne ke liye... isiliye dont tempt me....


gurrate hue kahi thi ye saari baat WOOGER ne jisse sun andar hi andar hil gayi thi GRIFFIN...


GRIFFIN-thik hai...mai jaa rahi hun..aur mere gayab hoti hi tumhe naam aur chehra,dono pata chal jaayega...


aisa bolne ke agle hi pal gayab ho gayi GRIFFIN aur uske gayab hote hi jahan wo khadi thi,wahan dhuen se ek chehra banane laga tha aur us chehre ke thik neeche ek naam aane laga tha jiske pure hote hi...


WOOGER-


tera naam mere kaano me ab
GUNJTA RAHEGA.....

ye WOOGER tere chehre ko ab har jagah DHUNDTA RAHEGA....

baazi chaalu hai,
GAME ON HAI...

mai aa raha hun wahan,
jahan chuppi hui tu......FALLON hai......










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....










AAPKA APNA V...J....
Awesome Super Fantastic Mind Blowing Dhanshu Update
To Fallon hai Raaz pe kasi jane wali lagam . Es story me Raaz Videous ke Baad Mahi aur Fallon ka Sabse important role honewala hai shayad . Fallon ko dhudhne me shaayad Choosen me padhai puri hone ka waqt lag jaye ya phir ye bhi ek chal ho sakta hai ki Mahi hi Raaz ke liye lagam ho .
Halaki Achhuta and Slunder ke parents ko marne ka reason abhi tak Raaz hi hai aur Achhuta and Slunder se unke parents ki maut ka bhi wo apne pariwar ke hi nashak ko apna doat banaye prashann ho rahe hai .
Raaz aur Videous bhi normal savets banne wale hai aur Raaz bhi Groomers me aa chuka hai to ab hida aur Browny ka kya role hoga ? Browny ne jis trah se us din wizz voilet ko bachaya tha to usme bahut khash hone ka paraman hai to uska asli roop kab aayega ?
 
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