Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Awesome Super Fantastic Mind Blowing Dhanshu Update.
Mahi Mabel Alreen jaise students jo puri mehnat kar rahe the apne class me par ab situation aisi ban gayi thi ki saflata pane ke do iase pratidwndi aa gaye the jinke hote bakiyon ke liye shirsh pe aane ke raste hi band ho gaye the wo ab khul gaya hai to ab asli maza aanewala hai aur Jab Raaz aur Videous Ek dum Noraml savets hote hai to kya Mahi Alreen & Mabel pahle ki trah jhande gaad pati hai .
Halaki Videous ka asli plan kuchh aur hai par Raaz bhi uske paln se hi use harana chahta hai yah bhi apna daw chal raha hai ab dekhte hai kaun esme safal hota hai ? Videous ne jis trah se Vikram ko mara tha to kuchh Raaz ke liye bhi waisi hi taiyari kar raha hai .
To VJ ne apana ek alag daw bhi chal rakha hai choosen ko Videous ne apne anukul banwaya tha par ye jagah uski hi kaat hai shayad . Par Flona se Dorain and Gaston ki bhidant ke baad unhe bhi eska andaja ho gaya hoga ? Ab dekhte hai Flona ka kya Raaz hai . Yah yaha ki sabse special hai .

thanks for the review brother.. saath bane rahiye

 

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Ye koun saa master ji hai or ye koun si shishya hai.... Or vikram ne isse kyo bnaya hai... Kya ye videus or raaz ki madhyastha karne ki kadi hai... Ye master kahi rohit to nhi.... Or waha to hazaron or log ye sab sikh rahe hain... Yaha to sena ban rahi hai... Dekh ye kisliye hain... Or vikram ne khud fallon ki bnaya hai to usme kuchh adbhut hi hoga.... Or yaha sala sab info nikal liya AL se... Kahi isme koi chal to nhi... Kya pata inko kabze me kar... Raaz se koi demand kare... Kahi issi wajah se to nhi maar dega unko raaz... Dekhte hai ab kya khichadi paka rahe hain dono apne maan me... Sab kuchh baki sab ki tarah karege to kiun aage hoga ye bhi dekhna dilchasp hoga... Waiting

bohot maza aane wala hai.saath bane rahiye...

 

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bhai geeta kapoor choriographer (dance ki reality show me judge hai)ko jaante jo sab ki maa samaan hai

unki bhasha me....


stupendo fentabule...........................

age ka pata nahi or haan wo perfomance bahut ache hone per kya kya comment deti hai wo sub unki copy karke me tume complement de raha hun


or kya kare bhai is update ki tareef karne ke liye mere paas shabd hi nahi hai isliye un logonka asra lena pada

ab tho halat aise hogaye hai ki jo jo reality show me jo jo judge comment dete hai us sabko likhke rakhna padega

hamara tho bas yahi hai wow yaar super

thanks for appreciating brother...aage aur maza aayega,aap bas padhte jaaiye

 

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Superb update

Wah kya baat hai bhi lajabab

Bohat he zabardast Behtareen update tha waiting for next update on

Nice update

thanks brothers..saath bane rahiye

 

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Dono hi apne apne davo ko bakhubi chl rhe h...jahan agr dono ki power seal ho gyi to videous apne stallers hone ka fayda utha kr raaz ko torcher krne ki puri koshish kr skta h through florin aur maria ko dukh dekr.. Pr lgta nhi RAAZ KO usse fark pdne wala h kyuki use bnaya hi gya h videous ko khtm krne ke liye fir chahe samne kitne hi dukh drd ya apne hi kyu na ho wo apne mission ke liye unko bhi taak pr lga skta h...to dekhna hoga ki videous RAAZ ko fasata h iss chaal me ya videoua ka paitra ulta pdne wala h usi pr...
Waitng bro

jo bhi hoga full on ATTITUDE se hoga.saath bane rahiye...

 

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W
Wow bhai sino bande hi kamal ke hain matalab jaha videous ne plan banaya hain use trigger bhi kar diya hain raaz ne and I'm damn sure ki raaz ne backup plan ke bhi backup rakha hoga jaise VJ rakhta tha akhir bete to unke hi hain aur paheli line raad ne jab boli videous aaya tha aur jo bat raaz ne kahi thi ki tuze apane tanhayi ose dar lagta hain ya mere akalepan se ghabarata hai yeh line to raaz ki kamal ki hai
Aur dhaari line videous ki jo usane boli thi

mujhe pata hai ki tujhe
meri baaton par YAKEEN NAHI...

par VIDEOUS ko samjhe,
itna zyada tu ZAHEEN NAHI...

jab tak tu samjhega,
baazi palat chuki hogi...

tu wo namak ban jaayega,
jiska zayka NAMKEEN NAHI....
Yeh line to insane thi bhai...

thanks for appreciating brother..many more to come..saath bane rahiye...

 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF FALLON KE MASTER FALLON SE AUR KADA ABHYAS KARNE KO KEHTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ AUR VIDEOUS KE BEECH EK PACT HOTA HAI.

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-67



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-STELLAR'S PARK





GOOD MORNING UNCLE...GOOD MORNING AUNTY.....


subah ka waqt hai....FLORIN aur MARIA,dono hi har morning ki tarah colony me bane jogger's park me aaj bhi walk ke liye aaye the...

dono halki streching kar hi rahe the ki tabhi unke piche se ye awaaz aati thi jisse sun jab wo dono palte toh apne saamne ek khubsoorat par anjaan ladke ko khada paaya jisne abhi abhi unhe greet kiya tha aur filhal un dono ko hi dekh kar muskura raha tha....


MARIA-good morning beta...but have we met before..???maaf karna humne aapko pehchana nahi...

LADKA-dont say sorry aunty..jab hum isse pehle mile hi nahi hain toh fir aap dono mujhe kaise pehchante..??

aap dono ne bhale hi mujhe nahi dekha hai par maine aap dono ko ek do baar ALFREEN ke saath dekha jisse mujhe andaza ho gaya tha ki aap uske parents hain....


waise myself VIDEOUS...mai aapki beti ALFREEN ka PHASEMATE bhi hun aur friend bhi...


dhyan se sun rahe the FLORIN aur MARIA VIDEOUS ko yaa fir ye kahin ki uske haav bhaav,baat karne ke tarike ko aur ye sab notice kar unhe VIDEOUS bilkul RAAZ ki tarah lag raha tha aur yahi wajah thi ki pehli baar VIDEOUS se milkar bhi wo unhe apna laga....

aur upar se jab VIDEOUS ne ye kaha ki wo ALFREEN ka friend hai toh unki khushi badh gayi....


FLORIN-nice to meet you young man....


puri garm joshi se haath milaya FLORIN ne VIDEOUS ka aur...


FLORIN-par beta humne tumhe pehle yahan nahi dekha...

VIDEOUS-actually uncle mai normally park ke dusri taraf exercise karta hun...

ab ye park itna bada hai ki ek side waalon ko dusri side ka pata hi nahi chalta...

MARIA-haan,ye toh hai...humare planet me bhi hum morning walk ke liye wahan ke ek park me jaate the par jahan us park ke hum 10 rounds araam se maar lete the wahin is park ke 3 lagana bhi mushkil hota hai...

FLORIN-apni baat karo..mai toh yahan bhi 10 rounds laga leta hun....

MARIA-acha..aur ye kab kiya aapne...??maine toh 5 rounds se zyada aapko lagate nahi dekha...

FLORIN-tumne nahi dekha matlab maine rounds nahi lagaye..

ye kya baat hui bhala...???

aur waise bhi, tum thakan ki wajah se dhyan nahi de paati ho...ab umar bhi toh ho gayi hai naa tumhari....


FLORIN aksar MARIA ko chidhane ke liye unki umar ki baat karte the jisse wo chidh bhi jaaya karti thi...

abhi bhi yahi hua tha.. FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA kuch kehne hi waali thi ki tabhi...


VIDEOUS-this is not fare uncle...aunty bhala kis angle se old dikhti hain...

wo jo saying hai naa,ki age is just a number...aunty ko dekhkar mujhe lagta hai jisne bhi wo saying kahi hai,aunty ko dekhkar hi kahi hogi...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun jahan FLORIN halka muskura diye wahin MARIA khush ho gayi aur...


MARIA-charming!!!i like it...infact most of the girls like guys like you...

aur aap,sikhiye kuch is bacche se...

FLORIN-ab sikh kar bhi kya faayda..??aise lines bol toh lun par try karne ke liye bhi toh koi chahiye naa...!!!

MARIA-kya kaha...??budhape me jawani chaddne lagi hai kya...????

FLORIN-budhapa....!!!!bhaagne ka stamina khudka gir gaya hai aur old mujhe keh rahi ho...

MARIA-aisi baat hai...toh fir chalo,ho jaaye mukabla...maarte hain chakkar...dekhte hain ki kaun pehle thak kar rukta hai...????

FLORIN-challenge accepted....


jahan pure josh ke saath FLORIN ne ye baat kahi wahin VIDEOUS,jo kaafi der se in dono ki nok jhonk dekh raha tha,wo FLORIN ki baat sun..

VIDEOUS-kya mai bhi aap dono ke saath join kar sakta hun...??waise bhi meri morning jog abhi baaki hai...

MARIA-sure son...the more,the merrier.... let's go..


ye bol MARIA aur FLORIN ne halki streching ki aur fir shuru hui un teeno ki jog....

jog karte waqt baat karne se saans jaldi foolti hai isiliye FLORIN aur MARIA mooh band kar doud rahe the...

VIDEOUS ne bhi jog ke beech kuch nahi kaha aur un dono ke saath doudta raha....

5,10,15,20,25 aur fir 30 minutes ho gaye the in teeno ko daudte hue...

FLORIN aur MARIA,dono ke chehre par hi kaafi thakan dikhne laga tha par fir bhi dono me se koi haar maanane ke liye taiyar nahi tha...

ye dono shuru se hi aise the..waise toh dono hi do jism ek jaan the par jab baat competition ki aati thi toh compromise karna nahi aata tha dono ko...

aur is tarah kuch 10 minute aur nikal gaye jiske baad in dono ke chere par accessive thakan dikhne lagi thi jisse dekh VIDEOUS turant dono ke aage aaya aur...


VIDEOUS-time out guyzzz...yaar aap dono bhale hi naa thake hon,par mai thak gaya isiliye kamsekam mere liye ab ye challenge khatm kijiye.....

no body wins.. it's a draw....


dono ke aage aa ulta doudte hue kahi thi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jisse sun dono hi rook gaye....

thakan ki wajah se kuch der laga un dono ko normal hone me par jab un dono ki saans normal hui toh dono ne ek dusre ko dekha aur....

HAHAHAHA......


ek zordar hasi nikal gayi FLORIN aur MARIA ki apni hi bachkani harkat aur zidh par...

ek dusre ko side hug kar dono hi apne saamne VIDEOUS ki taraf palte aur...


DONO-thanks beta...

VIDEOUS-thanks!!!!!wo kisliye...???

FLORIN-hum dono ko hi winner bana khudko harane ke liye...

tum ek SAVENT ho...thik waise jaise meri beti hai aur ek SAVENT ko agar 2,3 ghante tez bhi douda diya jaaye tab bhi wo nahi thakta..

fir tum toh hamari hi tarah dheere dheere doud rahe the....

MARIA-exactly..tumne apni haar, hume jo thakan lag rahi thi,usse khatm karne ke liye maani....so thank you for that...

VIDEOUS-ye baat toh sach hai uncle,aunty ki ek SAVENT aise bohot se kaam kar sakta hai jo normal log nahi kar sakte...

but ye sirf usse diya ek gift hai...par aap dono ne jo ki completely normal hain,is umar me bhi itna stamina rakhna,its commendable..

apni taarif sun MARIA aur FLORIN,dono bas muskura diye...


MARIA-waise aaj thoda late ho gaya hai... AL ke institute jaane ka time bhi ho chuka hai..

hume chalna chahiye warna wo khudse toh breakfast karne se rahi...

FLORIN-thik hai..beta VIDEOUS,aap bhi chalo hamare saath...aaj breakfast hamare yahan karna,hume accha lagega...

VIDEOUS-i would love to uncle but aap bhul rahe hain ki ALFREEN ki tarah mujhe bhi institute jana hota hai aur mai bhi late ho chuka hun..

toh isiliye aaj nahi aa paaunga..but next time,pakka...

FLORIN-alright than....hum chalte hain..u take care of yourself son...


apni baat keh FLORIN aur unke saath MARIA, dono palatne hi waale the ki...


VIDEOUS-uncle...i am really honoured to meet you guyzz..can i give you a hug...???


jahan VIDEOUS ki baat sun FLORIN ke chehre par ek muskaan tair gayi wahin MARIA....???


MARIA-ab ye toh galat baat hai..hug sirf uncle ko,aunty ko nahi..???

VIDEOUS-honoured me aap dono se milkar hua hun...toh hug bhi dono se hi chahunga naa...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun pehle FLORIN aage badhe aur usse gale se laga liya aur aisa karte waqt unhe wahi feeling aayi jo RAAZ ko gale lagate hue aati thi....

wahin FLORIN ke baad MARIA ne bhi VIDEOUS ko hug kiya aur unhe bhi FLORIN ki hi tarah VIDEOUS se RAAZ ki vibes aayi thi...

yahi wajah thi ki dono hi pure dil se gale lage the VIDEOUS ke....

gale lagne ke baad ek baar firse bye bol apne ABODE ke liye nikal gaye FLORIN aur MARIA....

aur jaate waqt....


FLORIN-chehra alag,banda alag..par pata nahi kyun par ye ladka mujhe RAAZ jaisa lag raha tha...

MARIA-arre waah..what a coincidence..mujhe bhi same feeling aayi thi...


jahan apne raaste nikle FLORIN aur MARIA ye saari baatein kar rahe the wahin apni jagah khada VIDEOUS jisse sab sunayi de raha tha,wo....


VIDEOUS-RAAZ toh nahi hun mai par mujhme RAAZ zaroor hai...dekhte hain,kya gool khilate hain ye RAAZ....!!!






PLACE-WEAKLING CLASS






RAAZ.... BAS EK PERCENT AMPLIFICATION AUR...USKE BAAD TUM BHI ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KI HI TARAH GROOMERS CATAGORY KE LIYE QUALIFY KAR LOGE....



aaj class shuru karne ke thodi der baad meri CHOSENS ke hisaab se first percent AMPLIFICATION puri ho gayi thi...

mere sharir se nikle tez prakash ne is baat par mohor lagayi thi jisse dekh HIDA ne ye saari baatein kahin thi....

wahin mere baaju me baithe BRAWNY ki koshish hamesha ki tarah naakam ho gayi thi jiski wajah se uske chehre par maayusi saaf dikh rahi thi....

aur uske expressions HIDA se bhi chuppe nahi the aur isiliye.....


HIDA-nirash mat ho BRAWNY...success har kisko turant mil jaaye,ye zaroori nahi...koi turant aage badh jaata hai toh kisiki raftaar slow hoti hai...

tum bas apne focus ko aur strong karo.....aaj nahi toh kal tumhara SOUL trigger ho hi jaayega....


BRAWNY ko housla dete hue kahi ye baat HIDA ne jispar na toh uske chehre ke bhaav badle aur naahi man ke...

reason...

ek saying hai ki, it's not about the advice... it's about the person who is giving that advice ...

important sirf advice nahi hoti..us advice ko de kaun raha hai,ye baat advice se zyada maayne rakhti hai...

agar saamne ek champion khada ho,toh uske bina bole hi sirf uske ATTITUDE ko,andaz ko, performance ko dekh kar log motivate ho jaate hain wahin agar saamne khada banda khudki personal life me ek looser ho toh fir fark nahi padta ki apna gala faad wo kitni hi positive baatein kyun naa kare,sunane waale ke liye woh saari baatein mahaz baatein hi rehti hai....

aisa hi kuch abhi BRAWNY ke maamle me bhi tha...wo khud ek WEAKLING tha...uske aas paas ka saara mahoul negetive aur hopeless tha...

uske baaju me khada SAVENT usse koi matlab nahi rakhta tha...saamne khadi WHIZZ khud kaafi underconfident rehti thi...

unka khud ka experience bohot negetive tha toh fir aise me BRAWNY bhala kaise khudko motivate karta....

isiliye jo WHIZZ ne kaha,usse usne ek kaan se sunkar dusre se nikal diya...

par try toh dobara karna hi tha isiliye ek lambi saans chhod BRAWNY dobara apne SOUL ko trigger karne ke process me lag gaya...

wahin kyunki class shuru hue zyada waqt hua nahi tha, isiliye maine bhi SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ko repeat karne ke liye dobara apni aankhen band kar li thi...

waise toh ek baar soul AMPLIFY hone ke baad sharir me itni jaan bachti nahi thi ki same day dobara is process ko dohraya jaaye par mere aisa karne ke baad bhi HIDA ko naa toh zyada aascharya hua aur naahi usne mujhe roka kyunki bhale hi wo meri asliyat nahi jaanti thi par itna toh unhe andaza ho gaya tha ki mai sadharan ya fir baaki SAVENTS ki tarah bilkul nahi hun...

kuch aisa hai mujhme jo baakiyon se alag hai aur isiliye hi wo shaant hokar mujhe dekhti rahi...

par bhale hi mujhe dobara AMPLIFICATION try karne par HIDA hairan nahi hui thi,par jab mere AMPLIFICATION process me baithne ke kuch der baad ek baar firse mera sharir roshni se naha gaya,aisa hote dekh unki aankhen hairat se badi ho gayi...

ab hairani ki baat toh thi hi...aisa CHOSENS me pehli baar ho raha tha ki kisi SAVENT ne ek hi din me do baar apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY kiya tha....

aur sabse badi baat ye thi ki wo SAVENT STELLAR yaa fir GROOMER bhi nahi balki ek WEAKLING tha...


MAI-kya hua WHIZZ???itni hairan kyun dikh rahi hain aap...???


aankh khulne ke baad jab maine apne saamne HIDA ko mujhe aankh faade ghurte paaya toh maine ye baat kahi jispar...


HIDA-unbelievable....aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua hai ki kisi SAVENT ne ek hi din me do baar apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY kar liya ho....

par tumne,jo ko ek WEAKLING hai,ye kar dikhaya...tumhe andaza bhi nahi hai ki ye kitni badi baat hai....

ab kal se tum bhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki tarah GROOMER kehlaoge...


ye saari baatein HIDA ke zuban se nikal rahi thi but at the same time unke man me bhi kuch baatein ho rahi thi...

aur wo baatein thi ye...


HIDA man me-ab mujhe pura yakin ho gaya hai ki jo us din tumne mujhse kaha tha,agar mai uska matlab samajh jaaun toh meri ghutan bhari zindagi khatm ho jaayegi...

tum ek ANGEL ho jo mujhe mile us LOOSER tag se azaad karayega.....

aur ab kuch bhi ho jaaye,mai tumhari baat ka matlab
pata karke hi rahungi...


wahan unki man aur zuban ki baat khatm hui aur yahan....


MAI-andaza accuracy nahi darshata..aur jis kaam me accuracy naa ho,wo mai karta bhi nahi.....


jahan meri baat sun HIDA bas halki si muskura di wahin BRAWNY jo ki mere do baar SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne se hairan tha,par saath hi uske man ke ek hisse me apne aap wahi chiz aane lagi thi jiske baare me maine thodi der pehle bataya tha..

motivation...wo motivation jo HIDA ke lagatar cheer up karne par bhi nahi jaaga tha,wo bas mere achievement ko dekhkar jaagne laga tha..

BRAWNY jo itne dino se lagatar ek frustrated mentality ke saath jee raha tha,achanak uske andar ek nayi sfurti aur positiveness ghar karne laga tha....

khair,mere do baar SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ko repeat karne aur result dene se hamare class ka waqt kuch der pehle hi khatm ho chuka tha aur isiliye...


HIDA-aaj ki class khatm hoti hai...kal mlite hai..


ye bol HIDA aage badh gayi aur unke nikalne ke kuch seconds baad mai bhi muda aur hall se nikalne laga...

wahin nayi sfutri se bhara BRAWNY mujhse baat karna chahta tha par usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo ye kaise kare kyunki usse pata tha ki naa toh mujhe zyada baat karna pasand hai aur naahi mai uske saath friendly hun...

par baat toh usse karni hi thi aur isiliye jab usne mujhse baat karne ke liye saamne dekha toh paaya ki mai kaafi aage nikal chuka hun..

ye dekh wo bhi tezi se meri taraf badha aur thik mere piche pahunch....


BRAWNY-RAAZ.....ek minute...can i have a word with you...???


maine THE GREAT HALL ke gate ko cross kiya hi tha ki tabhi mujhe apne piche se BRAWNY ki awaaz aayi jisse sun mai piche palta...


BRAWNY-hey RAAZ.. what's up..???


halke uncomfortable tarike se gesture kiya tha BRAWNY ne mujhse...


MAI-matlab ki baat kar....


mera rawaiya aur tone dono hi thode harsh the jisse sun aur samajh wo halka hadbada gaya par fir..


BRAWNY-nahi wo aise hi.... actually kuch puchna tha mujhe tumse....

MAI-puri baat ek baar me bolna sikh BRAWNY...??aadhi adhuri baatein sehen nahi hoti mujhse...


halke gurrate hue kahi thi maine ye baat jisse sun naa sirf BRAWNY sehem gaya balki jo usne mujhse puchna tha,wo bhi bhul gaya...


BRAWNY-nahi wo,acha jaane do...fir kabhi baat karenge...

MAI-toh kya sirf whats up bolne ke liye roka tha tune mujhe....saale,kis level ka looser hai tu....naa toh class me thik,naahi bahar...

shakal hamesha aisi banayi hoti hai jaise abhi abhi bheek maanga ho par bheek mila nahi ho...

itni hi faththi hai teri toh hamesha apne maa baap ke ga***d me hi ghuse raha kar...

yahan bahar duniya me tujh jaise chutiye ki koi zaroorat nahi...

hath.....

THAPPP....



apni baat keh maine hakka dhakka diya BRAWNY ko jiski wajah se wo piche gir gaya par tabhi....


RAAZ......YE KAISI WAAHIYAD AUR NEGETIVE BAATEIN KAR RAHE HO TUM....???


mere right taraf se aayi thi ye awaaz jo ki kisi aur ki nahi balki MAHI ki thi....

darasal day off hone ke baad jab STELLARS class se bahar nikle toh MAHI ne ALFREEN aur MABEL se washroom jaane ki baat kahi...

jahan MAHI wash room chali gayi wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL institution ke bahar gate par uska intazar kar rahe the....

washroom class ke aage hi tha jahan se ho jab wahan se nikal MAHI hall se bahar aayi toh uski nazar mujhpar aur BRAWNY par padi aur saath hi usne sunli wo saari baatein jo maine abhi abhi BRAWNY se kahi thi...

meri baatein sun usse bohot bura kag raha tha aur jab aakhir me maine BRAWNY ko dhakka maarkar gira diya toh usse bardasht nahi hua aur wo turant apni baat chillate hue hamari taraf badhi...

paas aa usne BRAWNY ko sahara dekar uthaya aur....


MAHI-ye kya ghatiya baatein kar rahe the tum isse...???jaante hue bhi ki ye thoda underconfident hai,halka dara hua sa rehta hak,isse motivate karne ki jagah tum isse itni negetive aur gandi baatein kar rahe ho...

maine toh socha tha ki tum waise nahi ho jaisa pehle khudko dikhate the par mai galat thi..tumhari soch toh hadh se zyada giri hui hai....


ek saans me bolti chali gayi thi MAHI ye saari baatein jisse sun..


MAI-filhal toh gira hua ye tha..par uthne ke liye bhi isse tumhari zaroorat padi...aur aisa kar isne meri har kahi baat par sach ki muhar laga di....

MAHI-muhar sirf ek sach par laga hai aur wo ye ki tum ek ghatiya insaan ho....

aur jo baatein tumne isse kahi hain,uske liye tum abhi issi waqt isse maafi maangoge aur agar tumne aisa nahi kiya toh jaise tumne isse humiliate kiya hai,waisa hi kuch mai tumhare saath karungi....


ghusse se halke halke kaampte hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar....


MAI-mai dar gaya...khair,maafi toh mai maang lun par soch lo.. meri maafi aksar logon ko hazam nahi hoti...

MAHI-apni bakwas oneliner apne paas rakho aur maango maafi BRAWNY se...


MAHI ki baat sun mai BRAWNY ki taraf badh aur thik uske saamne khada hua aur...


CHATAAKH......

MAI-ye tha mera SORRY....



mera haath thappad ka roop liye pada BRAWNY par aur aisa hote hi...

BRAWNY toh BRAWNY,mere thappad ke impact se uske baaju me khadi MAHI bhi hadbada gayi thi..

toh hua ye ki jaise hi maine BRAWNY ko thappad maara toh uske chehre ke saath puri body hil gayi....

uske body ko ek tez jhatka laga aur wo sidha apne baaju me khadi MAHI se takraya...

MAHI asavadhan thi aur isiliye wo us takkar se bach nahi paayi aur us tez takkar ki wajah se neeche gir gayi...

wahin mere thappad padte hi BRAWNY ka sense gayab hone lag gaya tha..usse apne kaan ke paas kuch gila gila laga tha par isse pehle ki wo us gilepan ko samajhta,wo niche gir behosh ho chuka tha...

in sabke beech BRAWNY ke takkar se niche giri MAHI ko pehle toh jo hua,usse samajh me hi nahi aaya par fir kuch seconds baad wo ek jhatke se uthi...

par ab thodi der ho chuki thi...jahan ek taraf mai wapas mood nikal gaya tha wahin dusri taraf BRAWNY behosh ho chuka tha...

meri harkat par behad ghussa aaya MAHI ko aur wo meri taraf badhne hi waali thi ki tabhi uski nazar side me gire hue BRAWNY par gayi aur uski haalat dekh MAHI ko uspar taras aa gaya...

BRAWNY ke left kaan ke niche se khoon ki ek moti si dhaar nikal rahi thi aur saath hi uske ussi taraf ka gaal bhi fat gaya tha aur wahan se bhi khoon rees raha tha...

BRAWNY completely senseless tha aur usse aisi haalat me ek pal ke liye bhi chhodna MAHI ne sahi nahi samjha..

ek baar mujhe piche se ghusse me ghur MAHI ne turant BRAWNY ko sahara dekar uthaya liya...

MAHI ek top SAVENT thi jiske liye ek male bande ko uthana bhi maamuli baat thi..

BRAWNY ko utha saamne gate ke badle side me bane ek sanakre par short cut raaste se jisse chariot parking me jaldi pahuncha jaa sakta tha, MAHI aage badh gayi aur kuch hi der me wo apne CHARIOT ke saamne thi....


institution ke gate me ALFREEN aur MABEL uska wait kar rahi thi,but filhal uske paas unhe inform karne ka waqt tha nahi aur isiliye MAHI ne turant BRAWNY ko apne chariot ke piche seat me daala aur turant apne ABODE ke liye nikal gayi.....




PLACE-WEAKLINGS STAY





RAAAAAAAZZZZZZZ......


shaam ka waqt hai...mai apne quater me baitha hi hua tha ki tabhi koi mere quater ke entrace me aate hue zor se mera naam lekar chikha jisse sun mere chehre par ek halki smile aa gayi...

ye koi aur koi nahi balki SHALTON tha, BRAWNY ka baap jo mere saamne khada tha...

nathune fuli hui thi uski...ghusse ke maare zor zor se saans le ghur raha tha wo mujhe..

aur tabhi uske piche se prakat si hui uski wife NAOMI jiske aankhon me mere liye ghussa,nafrat aur saath hi nami bhi thi....

khair,abhi SHALTON meri taraf aage badhta ki tabhi..


BRAWNY-dad,leave it..maine kaha naa ki i am fine...please chaliye yahan se...


apne dad ke haath ko kheenchne ki naakamiyab koshish karte hue kahi ye baat BRAWNY ne...

is waqt uske left side ke pure chehre par transparent pattiyan chadhi hui thi...

scene aage badhane se pehle aayiye jaan lijiye ki ab tak kya kya ho chuka hai...


darasal MAHI BRAWNY ko apne ABODE isiliye le gayi thi kyunki har STELLAR ke ABODE me ek self healing room bhi hota tha jisme agar yahan institution me metaphysical activities ko try karte waqt chot lag jaaye,toh uska us room ke magical healing rays se turant ilaaj ho jaata tha par kyunki is kriya me instant ilaaj ho jaata tha isiliye isme pain bhi hota tha aur wo pain sirf ek STELLAR hi jhel sakta tha...

aur BRAWNY ka sharir kamzor tha isiliye MAHI ne usse apne ELUSORY ki madad se us room me lejaakar manual healing ways se jo ki ek ELUSORY ko ache se aati thi, BRAWNY ka ilaaj kar diya tha...

jo pattiyan abhi BRAWNY ke chehre par lagi thi,unse uske saare zakhm kuch ghanton me hi ninty percent tak kam ho jaane the..

ilaaj karwakar bina kuch kahe BRAWNY chup chaap MAHI ke ghar se apne quater ke liye nikal gaya tha...

MAHI ne usse apne CHARIOT me chhodne ki baat bohot baar kahi par wo maana nahi..

par jab wo ghar aaya aur SHALTON aur NAOMI ne uski haalat dekhi toh unhe laga jhatka....

kaafi baar uski us haalat ke baare me puchne ke baad bhi jab BRAWNY ne kuch nahi kaha toh NAOMI ne usse apni kasam de di aur aisa hone par jaise jaise BRAWNY aaj ki saari baat batata gaya,uske parents ka mere prati ghussa badhta gaya aur BRAWNY ki puri baat sunte hi SHALTON aur NAOMI,dono turant mujhe confront karne ke liye mere quater ki taraf badh chale...

raaste bhar BRAWNY unhe aisa karne ke liye mana karta raha par bhala parents apne bacche ke kasoorwaar ko yunhi jaane den,aisa kaise ho sakta hai...???

toh ye thi ab tak ki daastan..ab aage...


BRAWNY-dad,mom please chaliye yahan se...???


apne bete ki baat ko nazarandaaz kar SHALTON turant aage badhe aur...


SHALTON-teri himmat kaise hui mere bete par haath uthane ki...bata mujhe...kya galti ki thi isne jo tune is maasoom ko itni buri tarah maara...


meri shirt ke girebaan ko pakad ye baat kahi SHALTON ne jispar...


MAI-mere bina ijazat koi mujhe awaaz de,mujhe roke,ye meri nazar me bohot bada gunah hai...

aur tune toh mere girehbaan par haath daal diya...ACHA NAHI LAGA MUJHE.....

SHALTON-toh,kya karega tu..???mujhe bhi maarega...

KADAKKK.....


AHHHHHHHHHHHHH....


SHALTON ke dono haath jinse usne mera girehbaan pakda hua tha,maine unhe pakda aur uske agle hi pal un dono haathon ke joint bone toot chuke the...

aur aisa hote hi gala phaad kar chillaya SHALTON...


haath uske mood chuke the aur ussi haalat me apne ghutno par aa gaya tha SHALTON..


jahan apne pati ki haalat dekh kar jadh si ho gayi thi NAOMI wahin BRAWNY jo ab tak bas request mode par tha,uska apne pitah ki haalat dekh khoon ubal gaya aur...


BRAWNY- RAAAAAZZZZ...mai nahi chhodunga tujhe....

ye bol aage badha BRAWNY par tabhi....


DHAKK......


meri ek laat padi uske seene ke beech jiske impact se piche ki taraf udta hua quater se bahar jaa gira BRAWNY....

itna hi nahi,hard satah par ek jhatke se gira tha wo jiski wajah se uske sir ke pichla bhaag zameen se takraya tha aur aisa hone par ek baar firse uske senses jaane lage...


wahin apne bete ka haal dekh NAOMI jaise neend se jaagi aur gurrate hue meri taraf palti hi thi ki..


AHHHH.......


maine uske piche ke baal pakad hawa me utha diya usse aur apne dusre haath se SHALTON,jo ki zamin par baitha dard se karah tha,uske gale ko dusre haath se pakad usko bhi hawa me utha dono ko le apne quater se bahar nikla aur NAOMI ke baal aur SHALTON ke gale ko jhatak unke bacche ke paas fek diya maine...

NAOMI ko uske baalon ko zor se pakad jo maine usse uthaya tha,uski wajah se usse beintahan dard hua tha aur jab maine usse zamin par feka toh uske left shoulder me moch aa gayi jisse uski haalat aur kharab ho gayi....

WAHIN dard ki adhikta se SHALTON toh behosh hi ho gaya tha...

aur in dono ke beech pada tha BRAWNY jiski aankhen bhi bhaari hone lagi thi jiska matlab tha ki wo bhi behosh hone ke kagaar par tha...

ek nazar apne saamne daal jahan is waqt meri bike jo mere GROOMERS ki entry ki wajah se mujhe mili thi,usse dekh mai BRAWNY ke thik saamne baitha aur...


MAI-

jahan natija mile,
zor wahin LAGANA CHAHIYE....

kismat bohot kutti chiz hai,soch samajh kar AAZMANA CHAHIYE...

khudko bacha naa saka,koi baat nahi,


par maa baap bhi pit gaye,
tujhe toh MAR JAANA CHAHIYE...











AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......








AAPKA APNA V...J......

 

[A.B.KING]

Superb update bro

But itna hate

Bahut bada jhol kar raha ra bhai ye ...?

 

[K S Lover]

Very nice update waiting for next update

 

[Rohit1988]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF FALLON KE MASTER FALLON SE AUR KADA ABHYAS KARNE KO KEHTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ AUR VIDEOUS KE BEECH EK PACT HOTA HAI.

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-67



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-STELLAR'S PARK





GOOD MORNING UNCLE...GOOD MORNING AUNTY.....


subah ka waqt hai....FLORIN aur MARIA,dono hi har morning ki tarah colony me bane jogger's park me aaj bhi walk ke liye aaye the...

dono halki streching kar hi rahe the ki tabhi unke piche se ye awaaz aati thi jisse sun jab wo dono palte toh apne saamne ek khubsoorat par anjaan ladke ko khada paaya jisne abhi abhi unhe greet kiya tha aur filhal un dono ko hi dekh kar muskura raha tha....


MARIA-good morning beta...but have we met before..???maaf karna humne aapko pehchana nahi...

LADKA-dont say sorry aunty..jab hum isse pehle mile hi nahi hain toh fir aap dono mujhe kaise pehchante..??

aap dono ne bhale hi mujhe nahi dekha hai par maine aap dono ko ek do baar ALFREEN ke saath dekha jisse mujhe andaza ho gaya tha ki aap uske parents hain....


waise myself VIDEOUS...mai aapki beti ALFREEN ka PHASEMATE bhi hun aur friend bhi...


dhyan se sun rahe the FLORIN aur MARIA VIDEOUS ko yaa fir ye kahin ki uske haav bhaav,baat karne ke tarike ko aur ye sab notice kar unhe VIDEOUS bilkul RAAZ ki tarah lag raha tha aur yahi wajah thi ki pehli baar VIDEOUS se milkar bhi wo unhe apna laga....

aur upar se jab VIDEOUS ne ye kaha ki wo ALFREEN ka friend hai toh unki khushi badh gayi....


FLORIN-nice to meet you young man....


puri garm joshi se haath milaya FLORIN ne VIDEOUS ka aur...


FLORIN-par beta humne tumhe pehle yahan nahi dekha...

VIDEOUS-actually uncle mai normally park ke dusri taraf exercise karta hun...

ab ye park itna bada hai ki ek side waalon ko dusri side ka pata hi nahi chalta...

MARIA-haan,ye toh hai...humare planet me bhi hum morning walk ke liye wahan ke ek park me jaate the par jahan us park ke hum 10 rounds araam se maar lete the wahin is park ke 3 lagana bhi mushkil hota hai...

FLORIN-apni baat karo..mai toh yahan bhi 10 rounds laga leta hun....

MARIA-acha..aur ye kab kiya aapne...??maine toh 5 rounds se zyada aapko lagate nahi dekha...

FLORIN-tumne nahi dekha matlab maine rounds nahi lagaye..

ye kya baat hui bhala...???

aur waise bhi, tum thakan ki wajah se dhyan nahi de paati ho...ab umar bhi toh ho gayi hai naa tumhari....


FLORIN aksar MARIA ko chidhane ke liye unki umar ki baat karte the jisse wo chidh bhi jaaya karti thi...

abhi bhi yahi hua tha.. FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA kuch kehne hi waali thi ki tabhi...


VIDEOUS-this is not fare uncle...aunty bhala kis angle se old dikhti hain...

wo jo saying hai naa,ki age is just a number...aunty ko dekhkar mujhe lagta hai jisne bhi wo saying kahi hai,aunty ko dekhkar hi kahi hogi...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun jahan FLORIN halka muskura diye wahin MARIA khush ho gayi aur...


MARIA-charming!!!i like it...infact most of the girls like guys like you...

aur aap,sikhiye kuch is bacche se...

FLORIN-ab sikh kar bhi kya faayda..??aise lines bol toh lun par try karne ke liye bhi toh koi chahiye naa...!!!

MARIA-kya kaha...??budhape me jawani chaddne lagi hai kya...????

FLORIN-budhapa....!!!!bhaagne ka stamina khudka gir gaya hai aur old mujhe keh rahi ho...

MARIA-aisi baat hai...toh fir chalo,ho jaaye mukabla...maarte hain chakkar...dekhte hain ki kaun pehle thak kar rukta hai...????

FLORIN-challenge accepted....


jahan pure josh ke saath FLORIN ne ye baat kahi wahin VIDEOUS,jo kaafi der se in dono ki nok jhonk dekh raha tha,wo FLORIN ki baat sun..

VIDEOUS-kya mai bhi aap dono ke saath join kar sakta hun...??waise bhi meri morning jog abhi baaki hai...

MARIA-sure son...the more,the merrier.... let's go..


ye bol MARIA aur FLORIN ne halki streching ki aur fir shuru hui un teeno ki jog....

jog karte waqt baat karne se saans jaldi foolti hai isiliye FLORIN aur MARIA mooh band kar doud rahe the...

VIDEOUS ne bhi jog ke beech kuch nahi kaha aur un dono ke saath doudta raha....

5,10,15,20,25 aur fir 30 minutes ho gaye the in teeno ko daudte hue...

FLORIN aur MARIA,dono ke chehre par hi kaafi thakan dikhne laga tha par fir bhi dono me se koi haar maanane ke liye taiyar nahi tha...

ye dono shuru se hi aise the..waise toh dono hi do jism ek jaan the par jab baat competition ki aati thi toh compromise karna nahi aata tha dono ko...

aur is tarah kuch 10 minute aur nikal gaye jiske baad in dono ke chere par accessive thakan dikhne lagi thi jisse dekh VIDEOUS turant dono ke aage aaya aur...


VIDEOUS-time out guyzzz...yaar aap dono bhale hi naa thake hon,par mai thak gaya isiliye kamsekam mere liye ab ye challenge khatm kijiye.....

no body wins.. it's a draw....


dono ke aage aa ulta doudte hue kahi thi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jisse sun dono hi rook gaye....

thakan ki wajah se kuch der laga un dono ko normal hone me par jab un dono ki saans normal hui toh dono ne ek dusre ko dekha aur....

HAHAHAHA......


ek zordar hasi nikal gayi FLORIN aur MARIA ki apni hi bachkani harkat aur zidh par...

ek dusre ko side hug kar dono hi apne saamne VIDEOUS ki taraf palte aur...


DONO-thanks beta...

VIDEOUS-thanks!!!!!wo kisliye...???

FLORIN-hum dono ko hi winner bana khudko harane ke liye...

tum ek SAVENT ho...thik waise jaise meri beti hai aur ek SAVENT ko agar 2,3 ghante tez bhi douda diya jaaye tab bhi wo nahi thakta..

fir tum toh hamari hi tarah dheere dheere doud rahe the....

MARIA-exactly..tumne apni haar, hume jo thakan lag rahi thi,usse khatm karne ke liye maani....so thank you for that...

VIDEOUS-ye baat toh sach hai uncle,aunty ki ek SAVENT aise bohot se kaam kar sakta hai jo normal log nahi kar sakte...

but ye sirf usse diya ek gift hai...par aap dono ne jo ki completely normal hain,is umar me bhi itna stamina rakhna,its commendable..

apni taarif sun MARIA aur FLORIN,dono bas muskura diye...


MARIA-waise aaj thoda late ho gaya hai... AL ke institute jaane ka time bhi ho chuka hai..

hume chalna chahiye warna wo khudse toh breakfast karne se rahi...

FLORIN-thik hai..beta VIDEOUS,aap bhi chalo hamare saath...aaj breakfast hamare yahan karna,hume accha lagega...

VIDEOUS-i would love to uncle but aap bhul rahe hain ki ALFREEN ki tarah mujhe bhi institute jana hota hai aur mai bhi late ho chuka hun..

toh isiliye aaj nahi aa paaunga..but next time,pakka...

FLORIN-alright than....hum chalte hain..u take care of yourself son...


apni baat keh FLORIN aur unke saath MARIA, dono palatne hi waale the ki...


VIDEOUS-uncle...i am really honoured to meet you guyzz..can i give you a hug...???


jahan VIDEOUS ki baat sun FLORIN ke chehre par ek muskaan tair gayi wahin MARIA....???


MARIA-ab ye toh galat baat hai..hug sirf uncle ko,aunty ko nahi..???

VIDEOUS-honoured me aap dono se milkar hua hun...toh hug bhi dono se hi chahunga naa...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun pehle FLORIN aage badhe aur usse gale se laga liya aur aisa karte waqt unhe wahi feeling aayi jo RAAZ ko gale lagate hue aati thi....

wahin FLORIN ke baad MARIA ne bhi VIDEOUS ko hug kiya aur unhe bhi FLORIN ki hi tarah VIDEOUS se RAAZ ki vibes aayi thi...

yahi wajah thi ki dono hi pure dil se gale lage the VIDEOUS ke....

gale lagne ke baad ek baar firse bye bol apne ABODE ke liye nikal gaye FLORIN aur MARIA....

aur jaate waqt....


FLORIN-chehra alag,banda alag..par pata nahi kyun par ye ladka mujhe RAAZ jaisa lag raha tha...

MARIA-arre waah..what a coincidence..mujhe bhi same feeling aayi thi...


jahan apne raaste nikle FLORIN aur MARIA ye saari baatein kar rahe the wahin apni jagah khada VIDEOUS jisse sab sunayi de raha tha,wo....


VIDEOUS-RAAZ toh nahi hun mai par mujhme RAAZ zaroor hai...dekhte hain,kya gool khilate hain ye RAAZ....!!!






PLACE-WEAKLING CLASS






RAAZ.... BAS EK PERCENT AMPLIFICATION AUR...USKE BAAD TUM BHI ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KI HI TARAH GROOMERS CATAGORY KE LIYE QUALIFY KAR LOGE....



aaj class shuru karne ke thodi der baad meri CHOSENS ke hisaab se first percent AMPLIFICATION puri ho gayi thi...

mere sharir se nikle tez prakash ne is baat par mohor lagayi thi jisse dekh HIDA ne ye saari baatein kahin thi....

wahin mere baaju me baithe BRAWNY ki koshish hamesha ki tarah naakam ho gayi thi jiski wajah se uske chehre par maayusi saaf dikh rahi thi....

aur uske expressions HIDA se bhi chuppe nahi the aur isiliye.....


HIDA-nirash mat ho BRAWNY...success har kisko turant mil jaaye,ye zaroori nahi...koi turant aage badh jaata hai toh kisiki raftaar slow hoti hai...

tum bas apne focus ko aur strong karo.....aaj nahi toh kal tumhara SOUL trigger ho hi jaayega....


BRAWNY ko housla dete hue kahi ye baat HIDA ne jispar na toh uske chehre ke bhaav badle aur naahi man ke...

reason...

ek saying hai ki, it's not about the advice... it's about the person who is giving that advice ...

important sirf advice nahi hoti..us advice ko de kaun raha hai,ye baat advice se zyada maayne rakhti hai...

agar saamne ek champion khada ho,toh uske bina bole hi sirf uske ATTITUDE ko,andaz ko, performance ko dekh kar log motivate ho jaate hain wahin agar saamne khada banda khudki personal life me ek looser ho toh fir fark nahi padta ki apna gala faad wo kitni hi positive baatein kyun naa kare,sunane waale ke liye woh saari baatein mahaz baatein hi rehti hai....

aisa hi kuch abhi BRAWNY ke maamle me bhi tha...wo khud ek WEAKLING tha...uske aas paas ka saara mahoul negetive aur hopeless tha...

uske baaju me khada SAVENT usse koi matlab nahi rakhta tha...saamne khadi WHIZZ khud kaafi underconfident rehti thi...

unka khud ka experience bohot negetive tha toh fir aise me BRAWNY bhala kaise khudko motivate karta....

isiliye jo WHIZZ ne kaha,usse usne ek kaan se sunkar dusre se nikal diya...

par try toh dobara karna hi tha isiliye ek lambi saans chhod BRAWNY dobara apne SOUL ko trigger karne ke process me lag gaya...

wahin kyunki class shuru hue zyada waqt hua nahi tha, isiliye maine bhi SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ko repeat karne ke liye dobara apni aankhen band kar li thi...

waise toh ek baar soul AMPLIFY hone ke baad sharir me itni jaan bachti nahi thi ki same day dobara is process ko dohraya jaaye par mere aisa karne ke baad bhi HIDA ko naa toh zyada aascharya hua aur naahi usne mujhe roka kyunki bhale hi wo meri asliyat nahi jaanti thi par itna toh unhe andaza ho gaya tha ki mai sadharan ya fir baaki SAVENTS ki tarah bilkul nahi hun...

kuch aisa hai mujhme jo baakiyon se alag hai aur isiliye hi wo shaant hokar mujhe dekhti rahi...

par bhale hi mujhe dobara AMPLIFICATION try karne par HIDA hairan nahi hui thi,par jab mere AMPLIFICATION process me baithne ke kuch der baad ek baar firse mera sharir roshni se naha gaya,aisa hote dekh unki aankhen hairat se badi ho gayi...

ab hairani ki baat toh thi hi...aisa CHOSENS me pehli baar ho raha tha ki kisi SAVENT ne ek hi din me do baar apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY kiya tha....

aur sabse badi baat ye thi ki wo SAVENT STELLAR yaa fir GROOMER bhi nahi balki ek WEAKLING tha...


MAI-kya hua WHIZZ???itni hairan kyun dikh rahi hain aap...???


aankh khulne ke baad jab maine apne saamne HIDA ko mujhe aankh faade ghurte paaya toh maine ye baat kahi jispar...


HIDA-unbelievable....aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua hai ki kisi SAVENT ne ek hi din me do baar apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY kar liya ho....

par tumne,jo ko ek WEAKLING hai,ye kar dikhaya...tumhe andaza bhi nahi hai ki ye kitni badi baat hai....

ab kal se tum bhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki tarah GROOMER kehlaoge...


ye saari baatein HIDA ke zuban se nikal rahi thi but at the same time unke man me bhi kuch baatein ho rahi thi...

aur wo baatein thi ye...


HIDA man me-ab mujhe pura yakin ho gaya hai ki jo us din tumne mujhse kaha tha,agar mai uska matlab samajh jaaun toh meri ghutan bhari zindagi khatm ho jaayegi...

tum ek ANGEL ho jo mujhe mile us LOOSER tag se azaad karayega.....

aur ab kuch bhi ho jaaye,mai tumhari baat ka matlab
pata karke hi rahungi...


wahan unki man aur zuban ki baat khatm hui aur yahan....


MAI-andaza accuracy nahi darshata..aur jis kaam me accuracy naa ho,wo mai karta bhi nahi.....


jahan meri baat sun HIDA bas halki si muskura di wahin BRAWNY jo ki mere do baar SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne se hairan tha,par saath hi uske man ke ek hisse me apne aap wahi chiz aane lagi thi jiske baare me maine thodi der pehle bataya tha..

motivation...wo motivation jo HIDA ke lagatar cheer up karne par bhi nahi jaaga tha,wo bas mere achievement ko dekhkar jaagne laga tha..

BRAWNY jo itne dino se lagatar ek frustrated mentality ke saath jee raha tha,achanak uske andar ek nayi sfurti aur positiveness ghar karne laga tha....

khair,mere do baar SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ko repeat karne aur result dene se hamare class ka waqt kuch der pehle hi khatm ho chuka tha aur isiliye...


HIDA-aaj ki class khatm hoti hai...kal mlite hai..


ye bol HIDA aage badh gayi aur unke nikalne ke kuch seconds baad mai bhi muda aur hall se nikalne laga...

wahin nayi sfutri se bhara BRAWNY mujhse baat karna chahta tha par usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo ye kaise kare kyunki usse pata tha ki naa toh mujhe zyada baat karna pasand hai aur naahi mai uske saath friendly hun...

par baat toh usse karni hi thi aur isiliye jab usne mujhse baat karne ke liye saamne dekha toh paaya ki mai kaafi aage nikal chuka hun..

ye dekh wo bhi tezi se meri taraf badha aur thik mere piche pahunch....


BRAWNY-RAAZ.....ek minute...can i have a word with you...???


maine THE GREAT HALL ke gate ko cross kiya hi tha ki tabhi mujhe apne piche se BRAWNY ki awaaz aayi jisse sun mai piche palta...


BRAWNY-hey RAAZ.. what's up..???


halke uncomfortable tarike se gesture kiya tha BRAWNY ne mujhse...


MAI-matlab ki baat kar....


mera rawaiya aur tone dono hi thode harsh the jisse sun aur samajh wo halka hadbada gaya par fir..


BRAWNY-nahi wo aise hi.... actually kuch puchna tha mujhe tumse....

MAI-puri baat ek baar me bolna sikh BRAWNY...??aadhi adhuri baatein sehen nahi hoti mujhse...


halke gurrate hue kahi thi maine ye baat jisse sun naa sirf BRAWNY sehem gaya balki jo usne mujhse puchna tha,wo bhi bhul gaya...


BRAWNY-nahi wo,acha jaane do...fir kabhi baat karenge...

MAI-toh kya sirf whats up bolne ke liye roka tha tune mujhe....saale,kis level ka looser hai tu....naa toh class me thik,naahi bahar...

shakal hamesha aisi banayi hoti hai jaise abhi abhi bheek maanga ho par bheek mila nahi ho...

itni hi faththi hai teri toh hamesha apne maa baap ke ga***d me hi ghuse raha kar...

yahan bahar duniya me tujh jaise chutiye ki koi zaroorat nahi...

hath.....

THAPPP....



apni baat keh maine hakka dhakka diya BRAWNY ko jiski wajah se wo piche gir gaya par tabhi....


RAAZ......YE KAISI WAAHIYAD AUR NEGETIVE BAATEIN KAR RAHE HO TUM....???


mere right taraf se aayi thi ye awaaz jo ki kisi aur ki nahi balki MAHI ki thi....

darasal day off hone ke baad jab STELLARS class se bahar nikle toh MAHI ne ALFREEN aur MABEL se washroom jaane ki baat kahi...

jahan MAHI wash room chali gayi wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL institution ke bahar gate par uska intazar kar rahe the....

washroom class ke aage hi tha jahan se ho jab wahan se nikal MAHI hall se bahar aayi toh uski nazar mujhpar aur BRAWNY par padi aur saath hi usne sunli wo saari baatein jo maine abhi abhi BRAWNY se kahi thi...

meri baatein sun usse bohot bura kag raha tha aur jab aakhir me maine BRAWNY ko dhakka maarkar gira diya toh usse bardasht nahi hua aur wo turant apni baat chillate hue hamari taraf badhi...

paas aa usne BRAWNY ko sahara dekar uthaya aur....


MAHI-ye kya ghatiya baatein kar rahe the tum isse...???jaante hue bhi ki ye thoda underconfident hai,halka dara hua sa rehta hak,isse motivate karne ki jagah tum isse itni negetive aur gandi baatein kar rahe ho...

maine toh socha tha ki tum waise nahi ho jaisa pehle khudko dikhate the par mai galat thi..tumhari soch toh hadh se zyada giri hui hai....


ek saans me bolti chali gayi thi MAHI ye saari baatein jisse sun..


MAI-filhal toh gira hua ye tha..par uthne ke liye bhi isse tumhari zaroorat padi...aur aisa kar isne meri har kahi baat par sach ki muhar laga di....

MAHI-muhar sirf ek sach par laga hai aur wo ye ki tum ek ghatiya insaan ho....

aur jo baatein tumne isse kahi hain,uske liye tum abhi issi waqt isse maafi maangoge aur agar tumne aisa nahi kiya toh jaise tumne isse humiliate kiya hai,waisa hi kuch mai tumhare saath karungi....


ghusse se halke halke kaampte hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar....


MAI-mai dar gaya...khair,maafi toh mai maang lun par soch lo.. meri maafi aksar logon ko hazam nahi hoti...

MAHI-apni bakwas oneliner apne paas rakho aur maango maafi BRAWNY se...


MAHI ki baat sun mai BRAWNY ki taraf badh aur thik uske saamne khada hua aur...


CHATAAKH......

MAI-ye tha mera SORRY....



mera haath thappad ka roop liye pada BRAWNY par aur aisa hote hi...

BRAWNY toh BRAWNY,mere thappad ke impact se uske baaju me khadi MAHI bhi hadbada gayi thi..

toh hua ye ki jaise hi maine BRAWNY ko thappad maara toh uske chehre ke saath puri body hil gayi....

uske body ko ek tez jhatka laga aur wo sidha apne baaju me khadi MAHI se takraya...

MAHI asavadhan thi aur isiliye wo us takkar se bach nahi paayi aur us tez takkar ki wajah se neeche gir gayi...

wahin mere thappad padte hi BRAWNY ka sense gayab hone lag gaya tha..usse apne kaan ke paas kuch gila gila laga tha par isse pehle ki wo us gilepan ko samajhta,wo niche gir behosh ho chuka tha...

in sabke beech BRAWNY ke takkar se niche giri MAHI ko pehle toh jo hua,usse samajh me hi nahi aaya par fir kuch seconds baad wo ek jhatke se uthi...

par ab thodi der ho chuki thi...jahan ek taraf mai wapas mood nikal gaya tha wahin dusri taraf BRAWNY behosh ho chuka tha...

meri harkat par behad ghussa aaya MAHI ko aur wo meri taraf badhne hi waali thi ki tabhi uski nazar side me gire hue BRAWNY par gayi aur uski haalat dekh MAHI ko uspar taras aa gaya...

BRAWNY ke left kaan ke niche se khoon ki ek moti si dhaar nikal rahi thi aur saath hi uske ussi taraf ka gaal bhi fat gaya tha aur wahan se bhi khoon rees raha tha...

BRAWNY completely senseless tha aur usse aisi haalat me ek pal ke liye bhi chhodna MAHI ne sahi nahi samjha..

ek baar mujhe piche se ghusse me ghur MAHI ne turant BRAWNY ko sahara dekar uthaya liya...

MAHI ek top SAVENT thi jiske liye ek male bande ko uthana bhi maamuli baat thi..

BRAWNY ko utha saamne gate ke badle side me bane ek sanakre par short cut raaste se jisse chariot parking me jaldi pahuncha jaa sakta tha, MAHI aage badh gayi aur kuch hi der me wo apne CHARIOT ke saamne thi....


institution ke gate me ALFREEN aur MABEL uska wait kar rahi thi,but filhal uske paas unhe inform karne ka waqt tha nahi aur isiliye MAHI ne turant BRAWNY ko apne chariot ke piche seat me daala aur turant apne ABODE ke liye nikal gayi.....




PLACE-WEAKLINGS STAY





RAAAAAAAZZZZZZZ......


shaam ka waqt hai...mai apne quater me baitha hi hua tha ki tabhi koi mere quater ke entrace me aate hue zor se mera naam lekar chikha jisse sun mere chehre par ek halki smile aa gayi...

ye koi aur koi nahi balki SHALTON tha, BRAWNY ka baap jo mere saamne khada tha...

nathune fuli hui thi uski...ghusse ke maare zor zor se saans le ghur raha tha wo mujhe..

aur tabhi uske piche se prakat si hui uski wife NAOMI jiske aankhon me mere liye ghussa,nafrat aur saath hi nami bhi thi....

khair,abhi SHALTON meri taraf aage badhta ki tabhi..


BRAWNY-dad,leave it..maine kaha naa ki i am fine...please chaliye yahan se...


apne dad ke haath ko kheenchne ki naakamiyab koshish karte hue kahi ye baat BRAWNY ne...

is waqt uske left side ke pure chehre par transparent pattiyan chadhi hui thi...

scene aage badhane se pehle aayiye jaan lijiye ki ab tak kya kya ho chuka hai...


darasal MAHI BRAWNY ko apne ABODE isiliye le gayi thi kyunki har STELLAR ke ABODE me ek self healing room bhi hota tha jisme agar yahan institution me metaphysical activities ko try karte waqt chot lag jaaye,toh uska us room ke magical healing rays se turant ilaaj ho jaata tha par kyunki is kriya me instant ilaaj ho jaata tha isiliye isme pain bhi hota tha aur wo pain sirf ek STELLAR hi jhel sakta tha...

aur BRAWNY ka sharir kamzor tha isiliye MAHI ne usse apne ELUSORY ki madad se us room me lejaakar manual healing ways se jo ki ek ELUSORY ko ache se aati thi, BRAWNY ka ilaaj kar diya tha...

jo pattiyan abhi BRAWNY ke chehre par lagi thi,unse uske saare zakhm kuch ghanton me hi ninty percent tak kam ho jaane the..

ilaaj karwakar bina kuch kahe BRAWNY chup chaap MAHI ke ghar se apne quater ke liye nikal gaya tha...

MAHI ne usse apne CHARIOT me chhodne ki baat bohot baar kahi par wo maana nahi..

par jab wo ghar aaya aur SHALTON aur NAOMI ne uski haalat dekhi toh unhe laga jhatka....

kaafi baar uski us haalat ke baare me puchne ke baad bhi jab BRAWNY ne kuch nahi kaha toh NAOMI ne usse apni kasam de di aur aisa hone par jaise jaise BRAWNY aaj ki saari baat batata gaya,uske parents ka mere prati ghussa badhta gaya aur BRAWNY ki puri baat sunte hi SHALTON aur NAOMI,dono turant mujhe confront karne ke liye mere quater ki taraf badh chale...

raaste bhar BRAWNY unhe aisa karne ke liye mana karta raha par bhala parents apne bacche ke kasoorwaar ko yunhi jaane den,aisa kaise ho sakta hai...???

toh ye thi ab tak ki daastan..ab aage...


BRAWNY-dad,mom please chaliye yahan se...???


apne bete ki baat ko nazarandaaz kar SHALTON turant aage badhe aur...


SHALTON-teri himmat kaise hui mere bete par haath uthane ki...bata mujhe...kya galti ki thi isne jo tune is maasoom ko itni buri tarah maara...


meri shirt ke girebaan ko pakad ye baat kahi SHALTON ne jispar...


MAI-mere bina ijazat koi mujhe awaaz de,mujhe roke,ye meri nazar me bohot bada gunah hai...

aur tune toh mere girehbaan par haath daal diya...ACHA NAHI LAGA MUJHE.....

SHALTON-toh,kya karega tu..???mujhe bhi maarega...

KADAKKK.....


AHHHHHHHHHHHHH....


SHALTON ke dono haath jinse usne mera girehbaan pakda hua tha,maine unhe pakda aur uske agle hi pal un dono haathon ke joint bone toot chuke the...

aur aisa hote hi gala phaad kar chillaya SHALTON...


haath uske mood chuke the aur ussi haalat me apne ghutno par aa gaya tha SHALTON..


jahan apne pati ki haalat dekh kar jadh si ho gayi thi NAOMI wahin BRAWNY jo ab tak bas request mode par tha,uska apne pitah ki haalat dekh khoon ubal gaya aur...


BRAWNY- RAAAAAZZZZ...mai nahi chhodunga tujhe....

ye bol aage badha BRAWNY par tabhi....


DHAKK......


meri ek laat padi uske seene ke beech jiske impact se piche ki taraf udta hua quater se bahar jaa gira BRAWNY....

itna hi nahi,hard satah par ek jhatke se gira tha wo jiski wajah se uske sir ke pichla bhaag zameen se takraya tha aur aisa hone par ek baar firse uske senses jaane lage...


wahin apne bete ka haal dekh NAOMI jaise neend se jaagi aur gurrate hue meri taraf palti hi thi ki..


AHHHH.......


maine uske piche ke baal pakad hawa me utha diya usse aur apne dusre haath se SHALTON,jo ki zamin par baitha dard se karah tha,uske gale ko dusre haath se pakad usko bhi hawa me utha dono ko le apne quater se bahar nikla aur NAOMI ke baal aur SHALTON ke gale ko jhatak unke bacche ke paas fek diya maine...

NAOMI ko uske baalon ko zor se pakad jo maine usse uthaya tha,uski wajah se usse beintahan dard hua tha aur jab maine usse zamin par feka toh uske left shoulder me moch aa gayi jisse uski haalat aur kharab ho gayi....

WAHIN dard ki adhikta se SHALTON toh behosh hi ho gaya tha...

aur in dono ke beech pada tha BRAWNY jiski aankhen bhi bhaari hone lagi thi jiska matlab tha ki wo bhi behosh hone ke kagaar par tha...

ek nazar apne saamne daal jahan is waqt meri bike jo mere GROOMERS ki entry ki wajah se mujhe mili thi,usse dekh mai BRAWNY ke thik saamne baitha aur...


MAI-

jahan natija mile,
zor wahin LAGANA CHAHIYE....

kismat bohot kutti chiz hai,soch samajh kar AAZMANA CHAHIYE...

khudko bacha naa saka,koi baat nahi,


par maa baap bhi pit gaye,
tujhe toh MAR JAANA CHAHIYE...











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