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Nice update
Mind blowing update bhai super
Behtareen update,
Sab kuchh behat khatarnak aur rahasyamayi hote jaa raha hai.
Awesome update bro
Mast bhai
Bahut hi khubshoorat update hai bhai ji

Ab kya pata chala hai or kya hone vala hai
Dekhte aage kya aane vala hai ab kya Raaz khulega or kya Raaz use kese kholega .....
Super update
Nice update bro
Super update hai bhai
Mind blowing update
Superb
Videous ne har aur behtreen mayajaal falaya hai. Khubsurat vayvasthit trike se likhi gai rachnakriti hai.
Superb update
Mind blowing update Bhai
Pehle suspense clear hue to aapne Nye bnane shuru Kar diye
Superb
Vai raaz kaha hay???
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Jabardast awesome fantastic update.


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raaste aapke hain,aapke hi rahenge,

mai toh bas un raaston me
PHOOL BICHAUNGA.....
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Behtarin update ek baar fir se brother....
Kehne ko kchh nhi b update ke liye raaz ka rasta saaf h ab chosens me aane ke liye koi ques nhi krega unse ki kaha gye kaise gye kyu gye... Bss 1 ques h. Ki unearth the immortals ka meaning kya h kyuki mujhe lgta h ki ye asmodeus ki immortality ko daav pr lgane wale karname se related hoga:):writing:


Ar baki bcha spirit Crystal to ye to pta chl hi gya h ki iske pichhe ronit ar anjali the pr kis plan ke tahat ye tum jalad hi bta hi doge to uska raaz khulne ka hmare samne besabri se intzaar h...ar dekhte h baki ke 4ro prime kis kaam ko pura krne gye h ab... Waitng for next brother:ban::drunk::cowboy2:
thanks for appreciating brother
.yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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Awesome Update.
Shild hatte hi Dorain ko apna kaam karne ka mauka mil gaya jiske liye wah yaha aaya tha . Usne Cupola ke nichhe chhupe ASPRIT CRYSTAL ko hasil kar liya aur apne sathiyon ke paas pahucha to Videous ke aane par use saunp diya .
Yah ASPRIT CRYSTAL Ronit & Anjali ke power se bana ab Videous eske baare me zaan gaya hai . Kya esme raaz ke bhawishy ka zikar jisme kaante bichhane ki baat Videous kar raha hai .
Teeno Servogin wapapsh aa gaye jab wizz Mariliza shild hatne se pateshan thi . Par Servogin ne sachhai chhupate huye alaag batakr shantust kar diya . Ab dekhte hai teeno missing savets ke choosen aane ka kya paln banaya jata hai ? Shila ne last me kya aisi baat kahi jisse wizz Mariliza chaunk gayi
thanks for the review brother.. saath bane rahiye
 

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Raaz ke chosens me wapas aane ka besabri se intazar hai
Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha
Very nice fantastic update waiting for next update
Kia baat h behad shandar dhmakedar update
Boht hi khubsurat andaz se update likha h ap ne sir

Excellent brilliant fantastic good update
Zabardast update
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SOVEREIGN'S MARILIZA KO RAAZ, ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE GAYAB HONE KI EK JHUTI KAHANI BATATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS KO ASPRIT CRYSTAL KE BAARE ME AADHI HI JAANKARI MILTI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-55



PLANET-ARROW


PLACE-THE KING'S BEDROOM





AAHHHH........


ek halki si karah ke saath aankh khuli ACCHUTA ki...

par sir me uth rahe bhaaripan ki wajah se usne turant apni aankh band kar li aur us bhaaripan aur pain ko zabt karne laga....

wahin in sab ke beech ek shaksh ACCHUTA ke thik saamne khada usse hi dekh raha tha...

ye shaksh aur koi nahi MAI tha....

apni shaktiyon ko apne SWORD ke andar daal mai apne agle padhav ki pehli sidhi ARROW planet pahuncha tha aur CHETNA BUTI ki madad se maine ACCHUTA ke senses usse wapas louta di thi...

par itne waqt tak us VEGITATIVE STATE ne rehne ki wajah se uske dimag ko thik se kaam karne me thoda waqt lagna tha aur filhal wahi lag raha tha...

aankhen band kiye ACCHUTA ka dimag filhal toh khaali tha par ye khaalipan bhi bas kuch pal ka hi mehmaan tha aur hua bhi wahi...

aaankhen band kiye ACCHUTA ke dimag me achanak uske saath hue aakhri drishya ghum gaye....

wahi drishya jisme ek shaksh ke haath se ek badi gaadhi ray nikal uske dimag me padi thi jiske baad uska sir bhaari hone laga tha aur fir wo chakkar khaate hue gir gaya tha...

is scene ke yaad aate hi ACCHUTA ko apne sir ke bhaaripan ka kaaran pata chal gaya par tabhi....

ACCHUTA ke dimag me wo drishya bhi ghum gaya jisme ussi shaksh ne usse pehle uske maata pitah ko bhi VEGITATIVE STATE me bheja tha aur ye yaad aate hi jhat se ACCHUTA ki aankhen khul gayi par aisa hote hi wo ekdum se hadbada bhi gaya...

reason....

apni gehri kaali aankho se jhaankta hua mai uske thik saamne khada usse hi dekh raha tha...

chehra mera sthir tha par us sthir chehre par bhi ek ajeeb si kathorta aur dridhta thi jisse dekh ACCHUTA chah kar bhi bol nahi paa raha tha par bolna toh tha hi aur isiliye...

ACHHUTA-kaun ho tum???aur yahan ROYAL CHAMBER me kya kar rahe ho...???

MAI-RAAZ naam hai mera....apne left dekho...


pehla sawal hi appropriate tha uska isiliye maine bas uska hi jawab diya...

wahin mere kehne par jaise hi ACCHUTA ne apne left ki taraf dekha toh uske agle hi pal wo hairan aur pareshan dono ho gaya....

reason...

uske baaju me uske mom aur dad ussi VEGITATIVE STATE me pade hue the jisme kuch der pehle tak wo bhi tha...

apne mom dad ko yun besudh pada dekh ACCHUTA ki aankhon me aansu aa gaye....

MOM,DAD kehte hue wo un dono se lipat kar rone laga....

kuch der tak yunhi rote rehne ke baad usse yaad aaya ki ek aur shaksh bhi is kamre me moujud hai...

usse lagne laga tha ki mai un do logon ka saathi hun jinhone uske mom dad ko us haal me pahunchaya tha...

is khayal ke uske man me uththe hi usse mujhpar behad krodh aaya par fir usse wo scene yaad aaya jab bina kisi prahar kiye un do logon ne uske mom dad ko is condition me pahuncha diya tha aur aise me agar mai unka saathi tha toh wo yaa fir uski sena bhi mera kuch bigad nahi paayegi...

is soch ke uske dimag me ubharte hi pehle usne khud ko shaant kiya aur wo wapas meri taraf palta....


ACCHUTA-kya tum bhi un dono ke saathi ho jisne mere MAATA PITAH ko is haal me pahunchaya tha...???

MAI-dusri taraf dekho....


meri baat ko sun pehle toh usne mujhe hi ajeeb nazar se dekha par fir jaise hi uski gardan uske right taraf mudi,usse laga jhatka....

reason...

uske right ki taraf jahan us bade se CHAMBER ka diwar hona chahiye tha,wahan is waqt ek bade se sqaure shape me khaali space bani hui thi jiski dusri taraf ek alag CHAMBER dikh raha tha par us CHAMBER ki banawat ACCHUTA ke mahal me bane CHAMBERS se bilkul alag thi...

wahin apni baat keh mai us diwar waali jagah jahan is waqt maine WORLD DOOR banaya hua tha,uski taraf badha aur...


MAI-mere piche aao....


apni baat keh mai aage badha aur us DOOR ke beech pahunch gaya...

wahin ACCHUTA ab bhi apni jagah par hi baitha mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha aur isiliye mai palta aur...


MAI-mujhe baatein dohrane ki aadat nahi hai ACCHUTA....


meri awaaz ko sun andar tak sihar sa utha ACHHUTA aur aisa hote hi uski body apne aap hi harkat me aayi jiski wajah se wo turant khada hua aur meri taraf badhne laga...

wahin mai bhi wapas palta aur WORLD DOOR se hota hua dusri taraf pahunch gaya jahan thik ACHHUTA ke hi parents ki tarah teen log besudh ek bed par pade hue the...

wahin mere piche piche world DOOR se hota hua jab ACCHUTA us room me enter hua toh saamne ka scene yaa fir ye kahun ki bed par lete logon ko dekhkar wo chownk pada....

reason....

SLUNDER aur uske mom dad jo ki is waqt saamne bed par lete hue the, ACHHUTA jaanta tha unhe...

(DORIAN AUR GASTON NE JAB WO ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE BHESH ME THE,TAB UNHONE APNI KAHANI BATATE WAQT IS BAARE ME BATAYA THA KI ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER UNKE SOLAR SYSTEM KE VARSHIK VYAPAR SAMMELAN KE DAURAN MILE THE)


SLUNDER aur uske mom dad ko dekhna ACCHUTA ne bilkil bhi expect nahi kiya tha aur isiliye....


ACCHUTA-ye teeno toh CARAPACE PLANET ki royal family se hain...ye yahan ARROW me kya kar rahe hain...???

MAI-ye teeno ARROW me nahi,tum is waqt CARAPACE me ho..


meri baat aun ACCHUTA behad chownka par isse pehle ki wo kuch kehta...


MAI-ye jo beech me ek nayi jagah si bani hui hai,ye ek WORLD DOOR hai jiske ek taraf tumhara PLANET aur tumhara CHAMBER hai aur dusri taraf hai ye jagah jo ki CARAPACE PLANET hai aur is waqt tum yahan ke ROYAL CHAMBER me ho....

jahan meri baat sun ACCHUTA ki aankhen hairani se badi ho gayi wahin apni baat keh maine apna haath aage kiya jiske baad mere haath se 1 Jyoti jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI thi, bahar nikli aur aage badhte hue bed lar lete SLUNDER ke dimag me ghus gayi aur aisa hone ke kuch pal baad hi dheere dheere SLUNDER ki aankhen khulne lagi...

ACCHUTA ko toh kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha isiliye aakhon me aascharya aur dher saare sawal liye wo bas mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha...

wahin jaisa aankh khulne ke baad ACCHUTA ke saath hua tha,wahi SLUNDER ke saath bhi hua...

sir ke behad bhaari lagne ki wajah se wo kuch der tak apni aakhen band kar baitha raha par fir jab uski aankhen khuli aur usne apne saamne ek anjaan shaksh yaani ki mujhe dekha toh wo behad haran hua par sabse zyada hairani usse tab hui jab usne mujhse thodi door khade ACCHUTA ko dekha aur isiliye...


SLUNDER-tum toh PLANET ARROW
ke prince ho naa...!!!tum yahan kaise...???

kahin tumne hi toh us shaksh ko nahi bheja tha jisne hamare saath hamare MAATA PITAH ko....


aage ki baat SLUNDER ke mooh ke andar hi reh gayi kyunki baaton baaton me jab uske mooh se MAATA PITAH nikla toh usse wo beeta hua scene yaad aa gaya jo uske aur uske parents ke saath ghata tha aur isiliye usne jhat se pehle apne right aur fir left ki tarar jahan uske mom dad behosh pade hue the,apni nazar ghumayi..

apne mom dad ko us haalat me dekh uski aankhon me bhi aansu aa gaye....

kuch der tak yunhi rote rehne ke baad...


SLUNDER-tumne karwaya hai naa PRINCE OF ARROW ye sab???


SLUNDER ki baat ka ACCHUTA koi jawab de,usse pehle hi....


MAI-tum aur tumhare mom dad ke saath jo hua tha wahi cheez is ACCHUTA par aur iske mom dad ke saath bhi hui thi...

aur ye kiya tha DORIAN aur GASTON naam ke do logon ne...

SLUNDER-par kyun...???kyun kiya un dono ne aisa humare saath...???

MAI-kuch chahiye tha unhe jisse sirf tum dono ki families ke through hi wo haasil kar sakte the..

unhe laga ki tum sab ko us PERSITANT VEGITATIVE STATE ki haalat me pahuncha kar unka kaam ho jaayega...


meri baat suanane ke baad SLUNDER toh khamosh hi raha par ACCHUTA jo khud toh usse di gayi mout si neend se jaag hi chuka tha par saath hi jisne mujhe SLUNDER ko bhi thik karte hue dekha tha,uski aankhen chamak gayi...

usse yakin ho chala tha ki uske aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah mai un dono ke mom dad ko bhi thik kar sakta hun aur isiliye....


ACCHUTA-tumne hum dono ko us mout ki neend se jagaya hai...iska arth hai ki tum hamare mom dad ko bhi thik kar sakte ho, haina..???


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ki ankhen bhi chamak uthi aur wo bhi mujhe ummid bhari nazaron se dekhne laga..

wahin un dono ki baat sun maine kuch kaha nahi bas apna right hand aage kar diya jiske baad mere hatheli ke upar chaar roshniyan chamakne lagi jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI hi thi...


MAI-ye chaar jyot,roshniyan tum dono ke mom dad ko jaga dengi...


meri baat sun un dono ki aankhon ki chamak aur badh gayi thi...


SLUNDER-toh der kis baat ki..mere mom dad ko jaldi se thik kar do...mai tumhara ye ehsaan kabhi nahi bhulunga...

ACCHUTA-haan...mere MAATA PITAH ke ilaaj ki roshniyan mujhe de do.. mai turant usse apne MAATA PITAH ko hosh me le aaunga...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER hairan bhi hua aur saath hi ACCHUTA ke piche ka scene matlab WORLD DOOR dekhkar usse jo pehle se hi hairani hi rahi thi,wo bhi badh gayi aur isiliye..


SLUNDER-turant kaise hosh me laaoge...???aur ye tumhare piche khaali sthaan jaisa kya hai..??wahan toh is room ki deewar thi naa...???

ACCHUTA-ye khali sthan nahi hai..ye ek PLANET DOOR jaisi koi chiz hai jiske dusri taraf mera PLANET hai jahan mere mom dad bhi tere mom dad ki sthithi me pade hue hain..


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ki hairani aur badhi jiske baad wo kuch kehne ko hua par in dono ki aukaad se zyada mai inhe explain kar chuka tha aur isiliye mere chest se jahan meri SWORD aur uske saath meri chuppi hui shakti thi,wahan se do rays nikal tezi se aage badhi aur sidhe un dono ke dimag me sama gayi aur jab aisa hua toh....

un dono ki aankhen ek baar firse band ho gayi....

aur uske baad un dono ke dimag me unke PERSISTENT VEGITATIVE STATE me jaane ke baad kya kya hua,wo sab unhe dikhne laga....

DORIAN aur GASTON ka unka roop lena, AKSHAANT aur SHAILA ka un dono ke PLANETS me aana aur unka roop dhare GASTON aur DORIAN ko unke mom dad ke saath kya hua hai,uske baare me batana, CHOSENS ke baare me janana,wahan un dono ke behroopiyon ka padhna,sab kuch jo un dono behroopiyon ne unka bhesh dhar sikhne ki acting ki,wo unhe dikhne laga...

saath hi yahan unke PLANETS me unke SAMRAT,unki wife aur bacche ko us marne jaisi haalat me dekh yahan ke logon ne unhe thik karne ke liye kiye gaye prayas bhi unhe dikhe...

itna hi nahi,is drishyam ke dauran un dono ka dimag ek baar firse bhaari ho gaya tha aur saath hi un dono ko apne sharirik aur aantarik jagahon par behad tez dard feel hone laga tha par in sabke beech un dono par is waqt ek sammohan tha...

mera sammohan jiski wajah se us tez dard ke bawjud un dono ki naa toh aankhen khuli aur naahi unhe dikhne waala drishyam gayab hua...

mai kaun hun aur mere saath DORIAN aur GASTON ne kya kiya tha,is cheez ko chhod un dono se related drishya un dono ko dikhne lage....

saare drishya aur unse judi baatein jaanane ke baad ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki aankhen khul gayi jisme is waqt dard aur hairani dono hi dikh rahi thi par waqt ke saath dard toh chala hi gaya par unki harani ab bhi wahin thi aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-hum pichle 18 mahino se behosh the aur is dauran itna kuch ho chuka hai...

SLUNDER-par ek baat samajh me nahi aayi ki wo dono jinhone hume aur hamare mom dad ko behosh kiya tha,wo dono hamara bhesh dhar CHOSENS me kyun gaye...???

MAI-kya is baare me drishyam me kuch dikhaya gaya tha...???

SLUNDER-nahi...

MAI-iska matlab hai ki wo baat tumhare kaam ki nahi hai...aur matlab unhi chizon se rakhna chahiye jo tumhare kaam ki ho..

isse zinda rehne ke chances bane rehte hain..


SLUNDER ki aankhon me dekh maine ye baat kahi jisse uske puri body me ek sihran si doud gayi...

usse aisa laga jaise mout uski aankhon se jhaankti hui uski rooh ko dekh rahi hai aur wo feeling dar ki aakhri hadh thi jisse SLUNDER aur uske saath hi is waqt ACCHUTA bhi feel karne laga tha...


MAI-is waqt tum dono ke hi kaam ki do chizen hain...

pehli....jo dard tum dono ke BRAIN BODY aur BLOOD ne feel kiya tha,wo dard asal me tum dono liye ek gift thi...

ACCHUTA-gift wo bhi dard...!!!hum samjhe nahi...???

MAI-CHOSENS ke first PHASE me BRAIN,BODY aur BLOOD ko AMPLIFY karne ke liye har din jis dard se guzarna padta hai,ye wahi dard tha..

aur ab tum dono ke hi brain, BODY aur BLOOD AMPLIFY ho chuke hain...


DRISHYAM me dikhaye scenes ki wajah se ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi CHOSENS ke first PHASE ke saare classes aur unme sikhane waali chizen aur vidhi,in sabhi ke baare me jaan chuke the aur ab jab unhe ye pata chala ki 4 me se 3 classes me hone waali AMPLIFICATION me ab wo dono bhi paarangat ho chuke hain toh woh dono kaafi khush ho gaye the...


MAI-dusri kaam ki chiz hai ye RAYS jinme tumhare mom dad ke senses hain....


apna wo haath jisme wo do roshniyan chamak rahi thi,unhe aage karte hue maine ye baat kahi jisse sun un dono ki aankhon me ek baar firse chamak aa gayi aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-please inhe jaldi se istemal kar hamare mom dad ko hosh me laa do...

MAI-bilkul...par ek choti si problem hai...!!!

SLUNDER-problem...???kaisi problem..???hume batao,shayad hum kuch madad kar paayen...


aakhri baat bolte waqt SLUNDER ki zuban ladhkhada si gayi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki usne mujhe madad karne ki baat kahi thi jo usse lagne laga tha ki uske haisiyat se baahar ki chiz hai par...


MAI-shayad nahi, sirf tum dono hi ho jo meri madad kar sakte ho...

ACCHUTA-agar aisa hai toh bolo..apne mom dad ke liye mai apni jaan bhi de sakta hun...

SLUNDER-mai bhi..

MAI-wahi toh chahiye....


meri baat sun hadbada se gaye wo dono aur...


SLUNDER-hum samjhe nahi...kya hume marna hoga...????

MAI-maut bohot sasti chiz hai..keemat zindagi ki hoti hai...

ACCHUTA-matlab???

MAI-jaise ek insaan me,jaanwar me,ped poudhon me zindagi hoti hai thik waisi hi zindagi us PLANET me bhi hoti hai,jahan ye sab rehte hain...

mujhe wahi zindagi chahiye...mujhe ARROW aur CARAPACE,ye dono hi PLANETS chahiye...


aankhen hi fat gayi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki meri baat sunkar....unhe samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki wo kaise react karen...???


ACCHUTA-tumhe hamare PLANETS chahiye....ye PLANETS hain,koi chiz nahi jo hum utha kar tumhe de denge...

MAI-mere liye ye PLANETS chiz hi hain...agar chahun toh inhe zabardasti le sakta hun... aur yakin maano,agar maine aisa karna chaha toh aisa koi nahi hai jo mujhe rok sakta hai...


ye bol maine ek baar fir jhaanka un dono ki ankhon me aur mere aisa karte hi meri taakat ka ek chota sa ansh un dono ko feel hua par itna kaafi tha unki haalat kharab karne ke liye...

mooh me jaise lakwa maar gaya un dono ka... aur isiliye maine apni baat ko age badhaya....


MAI-par mai aisa karna nahi chahta...tum dono apne apne planets ke heir ho,yuvraj ho, isiliye mai chahta hun ki ye faisla tum dono ki razamandi se ho.....


ACCHUTA-hum yuvraj hain,SAMRAT nahi..wo padh hamare PITAJI ka hai...toh faisle bhi wahi karenge naa...!!!

MAI-faisla mai karta hun ACCHUTA aur log us faisle ko follow karte hain....

aur jo nahi karte, unka patan nishchit hai...

rahi baat tum dono ke yuvraj hone ki toh mere liye itna hi kaafi hai...jis tarah se mai chahun,tum dono mujhe us tarah se vachan doge aur jab aisa hoga,toh yakin maano,apne mata pitah ko convince karna tum dono ke liye asaan ho jaayega...


meri baat sun dono hi gehri soch me padh gaye aur...


SLUNDER-ek baat batao...tumhe hamare PLANETS chahiye...iska kya matlab hai...???

kya tum hamare PLANETS ke naye SAMRAT banana chahte ho...???

MAI-nahi...mai chahta hun ki tum dono apne apne planets ko evacuate karwa lo....mujhe ye dono PLANETS khaali chahiye...

SLUNDER-par fir humare log kahan jaayenge...???

MAI-ye bhi mai hi bataun...??11 living PLANETS hain tumhare aur ACCHUTA ke PLANETS ko chhod kar is SOLAR SYSTEM me..

unme se kisi bhi planet me reh sakte hain tumhare log..waise bhi, ARROW aur CARAPACE is SOLAR SYSTEM ke sabse powerful PLANETS hain...

sadiyon se baaki ke 11 PLANETS in dono PLANETS par hi dependent rahe hain..toh ab ek return favour ke tahat itna toh wo sab kar hi sakte hain...


meri baaton ko sun SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA,dono hi tention me a gaye the...


MAI-zyada sochne se bhi koi faayda hoga nahi...agar mai chahun toh yahan rehne waale har shaksh ko maar kar in PLANETS ko khaali kara sakta hun par mai aisa chahta nahi...

toh ho sake toh mujhe aisa chahne par majboor mat karo...


meri baat sun un dono ne ek dusre ko dekha...bebasi aur dar..ye dono hi bhaav un dono ke chehron par saaf dikh rahe the...

par wo jaante the ki wo kuch nahi kar sakte the aur isiliye un dono ne kuch der tak dimagi manthan kiya aur fir....


ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-hum taiyar hain...

MAI-moukhik manzoori nahi chahiye mujhe...aantarik razamandi chahiye...

SLUNDER-aantarik razamandi..!!!iska kya arth hai....???

MAI-mere saamne aakar khade ho jaao....


meri baat sun kuch pal toh wo dono hichkichaye par fir wo mere saamne aakar khade ho gaye...

aisa hone par maine dono ke chest par haath rakha aur....


MAI-apni aakhen band karo aur man hi man dil se jo maine chaha hun,usse razamandi do....


jahan meri baat sun dono ne apni aankhen band ki aur meri khwahish par razamandi dene lage wahin un dono ke aisa karte waqt..


ANNJAVI SAMUDEYA BINJAVATI


maine ek DARK SPELL bola jiske uccharit hote hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki soul ka ek bhaag unke rakht ke saath milkar bahar nikla aur mere andar sama gaya...

is kriya ke douran un dono ne apne andar halka sa pain aur saath hi ek ajeeb sa khaalipan mehsoos kiya tha...

unhe lag raha tha jaise unka kisi chiz se wireless connection tha par ab wo connection toot raha tha...

wahin kuch hi palon me meri kriya samapt ho chuki thi aur isiliye maine apna haath un dono ke chest se hata liya aur mere aisa karte hi un dono ko aisa laga jaise unke andar se koi bohot hi ehem aur keemti cheez baahar nikal gayi thi...

is ehsaas ne ek baar phirse unke sir me bhaaripan paida kiya jiske asar se wo dono niche girte hue phir se behosh ho gaye....



MAI-jahan HADH ki SARHAD hai,
mai uske bhi paar JAA RAHA HUN..

tera KHEL tere saath KHELNE,
mai tere paas AA RAHA HUN....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V...j....
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SOVEREIGN'S MARILIZA KO RAAZ, ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE GAYAB HONE KI EK JHUTI KAHANI BATATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS KO ASPRIT CRYSTAL KE BAARE ME AADHI HI JAANKARI MILTI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-55



PLANET-ARROW


PLACE-THE KING'S BEDROOM





AAHHHH........


ek halki si karah ke saath aankh khuli ACCHUTA ki...

par sir me uth rahe bhaaripan ki wajah se usne turant apni aankh band kar li aur us bhaaripan aur pain ko zabt karne laga....

wahin in sab ke beech ek shaksh ACCHUTA ke thik saamne khada usse hi dekh raha tha...

ye shaksh aur koi nahi MAI tha....

apni shaktiyon ko apne SWORD ke andar daal mai apne agle padhav ki pehli sidhi ARROW planet pahuncha tha aur CHETNA BUTI ki madad se maine ACCHUTA ke senses usse wapas louta di thi...

par itne waqt tak us VEGITATIVE STATE ne rehne ki wajah se uske dimag ko thik se kaam karne me thoda waqt lagna tha aur filhal wahi lag raha tha...

aankhen band kiye ACCHUTA ka dimag filhal toh khaali tha par ye khaalipan bhi bas kuch pal ka hi mehmaan tha aur hua bhi wahi...

aaankhen band kiye ACCHUTA ke dimag me achanak uske saath hue aakhri drishya ghum gaye....

wahi drishya jisme ek shaksh ke haath se ek badi gaadhi ray nikal uske dimag me padi thi jiske baad uska sir bhaari hone laga tha aur fir wo chakkar khaate hue gir gaya tha...

is scene ke yaad aate hi ACCHUTA ko apne sir ke bhaaripan ka kaaran pata chal gaya par tabhi....

ACCHUTA ke dimag me wo drishya bhi ghum gaya jisme ussi shaksh ne usse pehle uske maata pitah ko bhi VEGITATIVE STATE me bheja tha aur ye yaad aate hi jhat se ACCHUTA ki aankhen khul gayi par aisa hote hi wo ekdum se hadbada bhi gaya...

reason....

apni gehri kaali aankho se jhaankta hua mai uske thik saamne khada usse hi dekh raha tha...

chehra mera sthir tha par us sthir chehre par bhi ek ajeeb si kathorta aur dridhta thi jisse dekh ACCHUTA chah kar bhi bol nahi paa raha tha par bolna toh tha hi aur isiliye...

ACHHUTA-kaun ho tum???aur yahan ROYAL CHAMBER me kya kar rahe ho...???

MAI-RAAZ naam hai mera....apne left dekho...


pehla sawal hi appropriate tha uska isiliye maine bas uska hi jawab diya...

wahin mere kehne par jaise hi ACCHUTA ne apne left ki taraf dekha toh uske agle hi pal wo hairan aur pareshan dono ho gaya....

reason...

uske baaju me uske mom aur dad ussi VEGITATIVE STATE me pade hue the jisme kuch der pehle tak wo bhi tha...

apne mom dad ko yun besudh pada dekh ACCHUTA ki aankhon me aansu aa gaye....

MOM,DAD kehte hue wo un dono se lipat kar rone laga....

kuch der tak yunhi rote rehne ke baad usse yaad aaya ki ek aur shaksh bhi is kamre me moujud hai...

usse lagne laga tha ki mai un do logon ka saathi hun jinhone uske mom dad ko us haal me pahunchaya tha...

is khayal ke uske man me uththe hi usse mujhpar behad krodh aaya par fir usse wo scene yaad aaya jab bina kisi prahar kiye un do logon ne uske mom dad ko is condition me pahuncha diya tha aur aise me agar mai unka saathi tha toh wo yaa fir uski sena bhi mera kuch bigad nahi paayegi...

is soch ke uske dimag me ubharte hi pehle usne khud ko shaant kiya aur wo wapas meri taraf palta....


ACCHUTA-kya tum bhi un dono ke saathi ho jisne mere MAATA PITAH ko is haal me pahunchaya tha...???

MAI-dusri taraf dekho....


meri baat ko sun pehle toh usne mujhe hi ajeeb nazar se dekha par fir jaise hi uski gardan uske right taraf mudi,usse laga jhatka....

reason...

uske right ki taraf jahan us bade se CHAMBER ka diwar hona chahiye tha,wahan is waqt ek bade se sqaure shape me khaali space bani hui thi jiski dusri taraf ek alag CHAMBER dikh raha tha par us CHAMBER ki banawat ACCHUTA ke mahal me bane CHAMBERS se bilkul alag thi...

wahin apni baat keh mai us diwar waali jagah jahan is waqt maine WORLD DOOR banaya hua tha,uski taraf badha aur...


MAI-mere piche aao....


apni baat keh mai aage badha aur us DOOR ke beech pahunch gaya...

wahin ACCHUTA ab bhi apni jagah par hi baitha mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha aur isiliye mai palta aur...


MAI-mujhe baatein dohrane ki aadat nahi hai ACCHUTA....


meri awaaz ko sun andar tak sihar sa utha ACHHUTA aur aisa hote hi uski body apne aap hi harkat me aayi jiski wajah se wo turant khada hua aur meri taraf badhne laga...

wahin mai bhi wapas palta aur WORLD DOOR se hota hua dusri taraf pahunch gaya jahan thik ACHHUTA ke hi parents ki tarah teen log besudh ek bed par pade hue the...

wahin mere piche piche world DOOR se hota hua jab ACCHUTA us room me enter hua toh saamne ka scene yaa fir ye kahun ki bed par lete logon ko dekhkar wo chownk pada....

reason....

SLUNDER aur uske mom dad jo ki is waqt saamne bed par lete hue the, ACHHUTA jaanta tha unhe...

(DORIAN AUR GASTON NE JAB WO ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE BHESH ME THE,TAB UNHONE APNI KAHANI BATATE WAQT IS BAARE ME BATAYA THA KI ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER UNKE SOLAR SYSTEM KE VARSHIK VYAPAR SAMMELAN KE DAURAN MILE THE)


SLUNDER aur uske mom dad ko dekhna ACCHUTA ne bilkil bhi expect nahi kiya tha aur isiliye....


ACCHUTA-ye teeno toh CARAPACE PLANET ki royal family se hain...ye yahan ARROW me kya kar rahe hain...???

MAI-ye teeno ARROW me nahi,tum is waqt CARAPACE me ho..


meri baat aun ACCHUTA behad chownka par isse pehle ki wo kuch kehta...


MAI-ye jo beech me ek nayi jagah si bani hui hai,ye ek WORLD DOOR hai jiske ek taraf tumhara PLANET aur tumhara CHAMBER hai aur dusri taraf hai ye jagah jo ki CARAPACE PLANET hai aur is waqt tum yahan ke ROYAL CHAMBER me ho....

jahan meri baat sun ACCHUTA ki aankhen hairani se badi ho gayi wahin apni baat keh maine apna haath aage kiya jiske baad mere haath se 1 Jyoti jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI thi, bahar nikli aur aage badhte hue bed lar lete SLUNDER ke dimag me ghus gayi aur aisa hone ke kuch pal baad hi dheere dheere SLUNDER ki aankhen khulne lagi...

ACCHUTA ko toh kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha isiliye aakhon me aascharya aur dher saare sawal liye wo bas mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha...

wahin jaisa aankh khulne ke baad ACCHUTA ke saath hua tha,wahi SLUNDER ke saath bhi hua...

sir ke behad bhaari lagne ki wajah se wo kuch der tak apni aakhen band kar baitha raha par fir jab uski aankhen khuli aur usne apne saamne ek anjaan shaksh yaani ki mujhe dekha toh wo behad haran hua par sabse zyada hairani usse tab hui jab usne mujhse thodi door khade ACCHUTA ko dekha aur isiliye...


SLUNDER-tum toh PLANET ARROW
ke prince ho naa...!!!tum yahan kaise...???

kahin tumne hi toh us shaksh ko nahi bheja tha jisne hamare saath hamare MAATA PITAH ko....


aage ki baat SLUNDER ke mooh ke andar hi reh gayi kyunki baaton baaton me jab uske mooh se MAATA PITAH nikla toh usse wo beeta hua scene yaad aa gaya jo uske aur uske parents ke saath ghata tha aur isiliye usne jhat se pehle apne right aur fir left ki tarar jahan uske mom dad behosh pade hue the,apni nazar ghumayi..

apne mom dad ko us haalat me dekh uski aankhon me bhi aansu aa gaye....

kuch der tak yunhi rote rehne ke baad...


SLUNDER-tumne karwaya hai naa PRINCE OF ARROW ye sab???


SLUNDER ki baat ka ACCHUTA koi jawab de,usse pehle hi....


MAI-tum aur tumhare mom dad ke saath jo hua tha wahi cheez is ACCHUTA par aur iske mom dad ke saath bhi hui thi...

aur ye kiya tha DORIAN aur GASTON naam ke do logon ne...

SLUNDER-par kyun...???kyun kiya un dono ne aisa humare saath...???

MAI-kuch chahiye tha unhe jisse sirf tum dono ki families ke through hi wo haasil kar sakte the..

unhe laga ki tum sab ko us PERSITANT VEGITATIVE STATE ki haalat me pahuncha kar unka kaam ho jaayega...


meri baat suanane ke baad SLUNDER toh khamosh hi raha par ACCHUTA jo khud toh usse di gayi mout si neend se jaag hi chuka tha par saath hi jisne mujhe SLUNDER ko bhi thik karte hue dekha tha,uski aankhen chamak gayi...

usse yakin ho chala tha ki uske aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah mai un dono ke mom dad ko bhi thik kar sakta hun aur isiliye....


ACCHUTA-tumne hum dono ko us mout ki neend se jagaya hai...iska arth hai ki tum hamare mom dad ko bhi thik kar sakte ho, haina..???


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ki ankhen bhi chamak uthi aur wo bhi mujhe ummid bhari nazaron se dekhne laga..

wahin un dono ki baat sun maine kuch kaha nahi bas apna right hand aage kar diya jiske baad mere hatheli ke upar chaar roshniyan chamakne lagi jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI hi thi...


MAI-ye chaar jyot,roshniyan tum dono ke mom dad ko jaga dengi...


meri baat sun un dono ki aankhon ki chamak aur badh gayi thi...


SLUNDER-toh der kis baat ki..mere mom dad ko jaldi se thik kar do...mai tumhara ye ehsaan kabhi nahi bhulunga...

ACCHUTA-haan...mere MAATA PITAH ke ilaaj ki roshniyan mujhe de do.. mai turant usse apne MAATA PITAH ko hosh me le aaunga...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER hairan bhi hua aur saath hi ACCHUTA ke piche ka scene matlab WORLD DOOR dekhkar usse jo pehle se hi hairani hi rahi thi,wo bhi badh gayi aur isiliye..


SLUNDER-turant kaise hosh me laaoge...???aur ye tumhare piche khaali sthaan jaisa kya hai..??wahan toh is room ki deewar thi naa...???

ACCHUTA-ye khali sthan nahi hai..ye ek PLANET DOOR jaisi koi chiz hai jiske dusri taraf mera PLANET hai jahan mere mom dad bhi tere mom dad ki sthithi me pade hue hain..


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ki hairani aur badhi jiske baad wo kuch kehne ko hua par in dono ki aukaad se zyada mai inhe explain kar chuka tha aur isiliye mere chest se jahan meri SWORD aur uske saath meri chuppi hui shakti thi,wahan se do rays nikal tezi se aage badhi aur sidhe un dono ke dimag me sama gayi aur jab aisa hua toh....

un dono ki aankhen ek baar firse band ho gayi....

aur uske baad un dono ke dimag me unke PERSISTENT VEGITATIVE STATE me jaane ke baad kya kya hua,wo sab unhe dikhne laga....

DORIAN aur GASTON ka unka roop lena, AKSHAANT aur SHAILA ka un dono ke PLANETS me aana aur unka roop dhare GASTON aur DORIAN ko unke mom dad ke saath kya hua hai,uske baare me batana, CHOSENS ke baare me janana,wahan un dono ke behroopiyon ka padhna,sab kuch jo un dono behroopiyon ne unka bhesh dhar sikhne ki acting ki,wo unhe dikhne laga...

saath hi yahan unke PLANETS me unke SAMRAT,unki wife aur bacche ko us marne jaisi haalat me dekh yahan ke logon ne unhe thik karne ke liye kiye gaye prayas bhi unhe dikhe...

itna hi nahi,is drishyam ke dauran un dono ka dimag ek baar firse bhaari ho gaya tha aur saath hi un dono ko apne sharirik aur aantarik jagahon par behad tez dard feel hone laga tha par in sabke beech un dono par is waqt ek sammohan tha...

mera sammohan jiski wajah se us tez dard ke bawjud un dono ki naa toh aankhen khuli aur naahi unhe dikhne waala drishyam gayab hua...

mai kaun hun aur mere saath DORIAN aur GASTON ne kya kiya tha,is cheez ko chhod un dono se related drishya un dono ko dikhne lage....

saare drishya aur unse judi baatein jaanane ke baad ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki aankhen khul gayi jisme is waqt dard aur hairani dono hi dikh rahi thi par waqt ke saath dard toh chala hi gaya par unki harani ab bhi wahin thi aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-hum pichle 18 mahino se behosh the aur is dauran itna kuch ho chuka hai...

SLUNDER-par ek baat samajh me nahi aayi ki wo dono jinhone hume aur hamare mom dad ko behosh kiya tha,wo dono hamara bhesh dhar CHOSENS me kyun gaye...???

MAI-kya is baare me drishyam me kuch dikhaya gaya tha...???

SLUNDER-nahi...

MAI-iska matlab hai ki wo baat tumhare kaam ki nahi hai...aur matlab unhi chizon se rakhna chahiye jo tumhare kaam ki ho..

isse zinda rehne ke chances bane rehte hain..


SLUNDER ki aankhon me dekh maine ye baat kahi jisse uske puri body me ek sihran si doud gayi...

usse aisa laga jaise mout uski aankhon se jhaankti hui uski rooh ko dekh rahi hai aur wo feeling dar ki aakhri hadh thi jisse SLUNDER aur uske saath hi is waqt ACCHUTA bhi feel karne laga tha...


MAI-is waqt tum dono ke hi kaam ki do chizen hain...

pehli....jo dard tum dono ke BRAIN BODY aur BLOOD ne feel kiya tha,wo dard asal me tum dono liye ek gift thi...

ACCHUTA-gift wo bhi dard...!!!hum samjhe nahi...???

MAI-CHOSENS ke first PHASE me BRAIN,BODY aur BLOOD ko AMPLIFY karne ke liye har din jis dard se guzarna padta hai,ye wahi dard tha..

aur ab tum dono ke hi brain, BODY aur BLOOD AMPLIFY ho chuke hain...


DRISHYAM me dikhaye scenes ki wajah se ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi CHOSENS ke first PHASE ke saare classes aur unme sikhane waali chizen aur vidhi,in sabhi ke baare me jaan chuke the aur ab jab unhe ye pata chala ki 4 me se 3 classes me hone waali AMPLIFICATION me ab wo dono bhi paarangat ho chuke hain toh woh dono kaafi khush ho gaye the...


MAI-dusri kaam ki chiz hai ye RAYS jinme tumhare mom dad ke senses hain....


apna wo haath jisme wo do roshniyan chamak rahi thi,unhe aage karte hue maine ye baat kahi jisse sun un dono ki aankhon me ek baar firse chamak aa gayi aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-please inhe jaldi se istemal kar hamare mom dad ko hosh me laa do...

MAI-bilkul...par ek choti si problem hai...!!!

SLUNDER-problem...???kaisi problem..???hume batao,shayad hum kuch madad kar paayen...


aakhri baat bolte waqt SLUNDER ki zuban ladhkhada si gayi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki usne mujhe madad karne ki baat kahi thi jo usse lagne laga tha ki uske haisiyat se baahar ki chiz hai par...


MAI-shayad nahi, sirf tum dono hi ho jo meri madad kar sakte ho...

ACCHUTA-agar aisa hai toh bolo..apne mom dad ke liye mai apni jaan bhi de sakta hun...

SLUNDER-mai bhi..

MAI-wahi toh chahiye....


meri baat sun hadbada se gaye wo dono aur...


SLUNDER-hum samjhe nahi...kya hume marna hoga...????

MAI-maut bohot sasti chiz hai..keemat zindagi ki hoti hai...

ACCHUTA-matlab???

MAI-jaise ek insaan me,jaanwar me,ped poudhon me zindagi hoti hai thik waisi hi zindagi us PLANET me bhi hoti hai,jahan ye sab rehte hain...

mujhe wahi zindagi chahiye...mujhe ARROW aur CARAPACE,ye dono hi PLANETS chahiye...


aankhen hi fat gayi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki meri baat sunkar....unhe samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki wo kaise react karen...???


ACCHUTA-tumhe hamare PLANETS chahiye....ye PLANETS hain,koi chiz nahi jo hum utha kar tumhe de denge...

MAI-mere liye ye PLANETS chiz hi hain...agar chahun toh inhe zabardasti le sakta hun... aur yakin maano,agar maine aisa karna chaha toh aisa koi nahi hai jo mujhe rok sakta hai...


ye bol maine ek baar fir jhaanka un dono ki ankhon me aur mere aisa karte hi meri taakat ka ek chota sa ansh un dono ko feel hua par itna kaafi tha unki haalat kharab karne ke liye...

mooh me jaise lakwa maar gaya un dono ka... aur isiliye maine apni baat ko age badhaya....


MAI-par mai aisa karna nahi chahta...tum dono apne apne planets ke heir ho,yuvraj ho, isiliye mai chahta hun ki ye faisla tum dono ki razamandi se ho.....


ACCHUTA-hum yuvraj hain,SAMRAT nahi..wo padh hamare PITAJI ka hai...toh faisle bhi wahi karenge naa...!!!

MAI-faisla mai karta hun ACCHUTA aur log us faisle ko follow karte hain....

aur jo nahi karte, unka patan nishchit hai...

rahi baat tum dono ke yuvraj hone ki toh mere liye itna hi kaafi hai...jis tarah se mai chahun,tum dono mujhe us tarah se vachan doge aur jab aisa hoga,toh yakin maano,apne mata pitah ko convince karna tum dono ke liye asaan ho jaayega...


meri baat sun dono hi gehri soch me padh gaye aur...


SLUNDER-ek baat batao...tumhe hamare PLANETS chahiye...iska kya matlab hai...???

kya tum hamare PLANETS ke naye SAMRAT banana chahte ho...???

MAI-nahi...mai chahta hun ki tum dono apne apne planets ko evacuate karwa lo....mujhe ye dono PLANETS khaali chahiye...

SLUNDER-par fir humare log kahan jaayenge...???

MAI-ye bhi mai hi bataun...??11 living PLANETS hain tumhare aur ACCHUTA ke PLANETS ko chhod kar is SOLAR SYSTEM me..

unme se kisi bhi planet me reh sakte hain tumhare log..waise bhi, ARROW aur CARAPACE is SOLAR SYSTEM ke sabse powerful PLANETS hain...

sadiyon se baaki ke 11 PLANETS in dono PLANETS par hi dependent rahe hain..toh ab ek return favour ke tahat itna toh wo sab kar hi sakte hain...


meri baaton ko sun SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA,dono hi tention me a gaye the...


MAI-zyada sochne se bhi koi faayda hoga nahi...agar mai chahun toh yahan rehne waale har shaksh ko maar kar in PLANETS ko khaali kara sakta hun par mai aisa chahta nahi...

toh ho sake toh mujhe aisa chahne par majboor mat karo...


meri baat sun un dono ne ek dusre ko dekha...bebasi aur dar..ye dono hi bhaav un dono ke chehron par saaf dikh rahe the...

par wo jaante the ki wo kuch nahi kar sakte the aur isiliye un dono ne kuch der tak dimagi manthan kiya aur fir....


ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-hum taiyar hain...

MAI-moukhik manzoori nahi chahiye mujhe...aantarik razamandi chahiye...

SLUNDER-aantarik razamandi..!!!iska kya arth hai....???

MAI-mere saamne aakar khade ho jaao....


meri baat sun kuch pal toh wo dono hichkichaye par fir wo mere saamne aakar khade ho gaye...

aisa hone par maine dono ke chest par haath rakha aur....


MAI-apni aakhen band karo aur man hi man dil se jo maine chaha hun,usse razamandi do....


jahan meri baat sun dono ne apni aankhen band ki aur meri khwahish par razamandi dene lage wahin un dono ke aisa karte waqt..


ANNJAVI SAMUDEYA BINJAVATI


maine ek DARK SPELL bola jiske uccharit hote hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki soul ka ek bhaag unke rakht ke saath milkar bahar nikla aur mere andar sama gaya...

is kriya ke douran un dono ne apne andar halka sa pain aur saath hi ek ajeeb sa khaalipan mehsoos kiya tha...

unhe lag raha tha jaise unka kisi chiz se wireless connection tha par ab wo connection toot raha tha...

wahin kuch hi palon me meri kriya samapt ho chuki thi aur isiliye maine apna haath un dono ke chest se hata liya aur mere aisa karte hi un dono ko aisa laga jaise unke andar se koi bohot hi ehem aur keemti cheez baahar nikal gayi thi...

is ehsaas ne ek baar phirse unke sir me bhaaripan paida kiya jiske asar se wo dono niche girte hue phir se behosh ho gaye....



MAI-jahan HADH ki SARHAD hai,
mai uske bhi paar JAA RAHA HUN..

tera KHEL tere saath KHELNE,
mai tere paas AA RAHA HUN....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....








AAPKA APNA V...j....
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