Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Ek Villain jise na to kisi se matlab ho or na hi kisi ki parwah ek esa Villain jo aapni sune or aapni kare
Jo mahatvakashi ho jo Villain ka bhi Villain ho vahi hai

Is kahani ka Villain ......


Ek esa Villain jiska kaam bhi Ek Raaz ho or karam bhi ek Raaz or jiska udeshya bhi ek Raaz or jiska Attitude bhi ek Raaaz ho Vahi kahlata hai Villain ka Villain RAAJ..............



No words update ko justified karne ke liye speechless

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thanks for appreciating brother.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

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Behatareen jabardast update Brother......
Padh kar maza aa gya....
To phase 2 akhir kar chalu ho hi gya alfreen Mabel or Mahi ko phase 2 ke posh ilake mein abode alot hua sath mein ELUSORIES slave bhi....
Phase 2 bahut hi zyada shandar dikhaya mujhe lgta hai jald hi Anwar or morana tang adane aa hi jayenge.....
To Vikram ke marne ka yeh karan tha Videous bahut hi zyada shatir or durdrishti wala hai usne talwar ko bhi apne fayde ke liye istemal kr hi liya.....
To raaz ke attitude ke piche ka raaz yeh hai is karan yeh Aisa hai woh asmodeus or Vikram ka ansh hote hue bhi unke jaisa nhi hai.....


is kahani ko kisi aise ki zaroorat hai jiske liye uske lakshya se zyada aur kuch bhi important naa ho...
bhale hi us lakshya ko haasil karne ke liye usse maasumo aur begunaahon ki bali hi kyun naa deni pade,usse us baat se koi fark naa pade..
rehemdili,pyar jaise shabdon aur inke bhaavon se usse koi matlab naa ho...
bhale hi wo chalaki ke maamle me VIDEOUS jitna hi shaatir ho,par matlabparasti aur kaminepan me wo VIDEOUS ka bhi baap ho....
aur isiliye aisa pehli baar hoga jab kisi kahani ko uske ANJAAM tak pahunchane waala banda koi HERO nahi hoga,wo hoga....
EK VILLAIN......
(RAAZ)
Bas ab raaz ke choosen mein lotne ka intezar hai...
Keep writing....
Keep posting......

thanks for the review brother..be aalong

 

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Gazab, Dhamakedar Update bhai

Mujhe nahi lagta hai ki raj villon hai is story ka.
Kyuki is update me ek spell keep bare me vikram new bataya hai jiske use se attitude change kar sakte hai. Baki to age limit story me parade chalega.
Bahut hinch lajabab story.I have never read story like this thanks for writing a story like this.

Zabardast fantastic update waiting for next update

bhai kasam se update ne dimag ghuma diya 2 baar padna pada hai

great update

Bhai mein to bas Raaz ke chosen mein pahucne ka intjaar kar raha hu or waha ke romanch ka
ab dekhna ye hai ki Raaz konse phase mein jayega or agar wo 2nd mein jata hai to konse group mein jata hai

Zabardast update

thanks brothers..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

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Raaz ko finally aapne position de hi de
Vo bhi villan ki
Aur abe lagta hai
Raaz aur videous ka khel chalega
Aur raaz videous ko marega
Aur agar videous ko marka raaz uske jagah lena chahega
To uska backup plan mahi alfreen mabel aur browny hai
Par maire khayal se y videous etne aasani se marnai wala nahi he
Kyuki jo banda janam lene ke khuch der mai he
25 hazar salo se aage ki planning kar le
Usnai khuch to socha hoga
Aur agar raaz direct videous ko maar de
To y kaam to vikram aur asemodus kar sakte the to phire unhone kise ka srijan kyu kiya
Raaz ko videous k khel mai videous k niyamo se khelte huvai videous ko hi harana hai aur use usek khel se bahar karna hai
Aur mujhe nahi lagta y raaz sayade choosens mai wapas na jae
Aur agar gaya bhi to raaz bane kr to nahi jaega
Aur ha molskar nai jo raaz k brain mai dekha tha vo kya tha
And y videous ki durdrasta hai jo usnai ese duniya k best persons ko choosens mai ekhata kiya taki use kahi dhunedana na pade
Aur saath hi second phase mai aate hi
Zayadatar savents power k nashe mai chur hogae aur y slave ese liye ke unke man y bjaav aajae ki jo powerful hote hai unske duniya slave hote hai aur jo rah gae vo bse powerful bane jae
Sayade ese liye phase 2 or 3 k log keval power ki crave karte hai

thanks for the review brother.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

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KYAA MAST DIALOGUE THA SIR "" MATLABPARASTI
AUR KAMINEPAN MEIN VIDEOUS KA BHI BAAP HO ""

SUBERB SIR.... FANTASTIC UPDATE

SORRY ITS NOT AN UPDATE IT IS A MASTERPIECE!!!!

AND MOST IMPORTANTLY PHASE 2 IS ON !!!!!YAHOOOOOO!!!!!!

thanks brother..be along

 

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Jabardasttt update bhai

Suparb update bhai

thanks brothers..be along

 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN AUR UNKE PARENTS PHASE 2 KE APNE NAYE GHAR NE ENTER KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIKRAM AUR ASMODEUS HEAVEN ME SABKO VIDEOUS KI PLANNING KE BAARE ME BATATE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)





UPDATE-53



PLACE-HEAVEN





TOH AAKHIR WO WAQT AA HI GAYA JAB IS KAHANI KE VILLAIN KE BANAYE KHEL ME AAP DONO KA BANAYA VILLAIN UTARNE WAALA HAI....


muskurate hue AVANTIKA ne ye baat kahi jisse sun VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ke chehre par bhi muskaan aa gayi....


VIKRAM-is khel me RAAZ utar toh bohot pehle hi gaya tha par haan,uske khelne ki baari ab aayi hai...

ASMODEUS-waise hamare waale villain ko villain banane ka pura shray mujhe jaata hai...

kyunki ye janab us WAQT darshak hi the....


VIKRAM ko dekhte hue ASMODEUS ne ye baat kahi jispar...


VIKRAM-bilkul BHAI...jo bhi ho paaya hai,ye aapki wajah se hi ho paaya hai....

us kriya ko karte waqt aapne apni immortality daav par lagayi thi...aise me mai koi shray le bhi kaise sakta hun...!!!!????


VIKRAM ne ASMODEUS ki baat par puri tarah sehmati dikhayi jispar...


ASMODEUS-yaar kabhi toh aisa vyavahar dikha jaise ek PARMESHWAR PUTR ko dikhana chahiye....

mujhse bhi bohot upar hai tu mere BHAI...teri pratispraddha,tera COMPETITION kisi se ho hi nahi sakta bhai aur iska ek jeevant udaharan wahi kriya hai jisse hum apni yojna ko anjaam de paaye hain...

log apni galtiyon se sikhte hain,par tu dusron tak ki jeet ko unke zariye apni jeet me badalne ki nazar aur hunar rakhta hai...

maana maine apni immortality daaw par lagayi thi,par tune naa sirf us daaw ka kaaran dhund nikala tha balki meri immorality par koi aanch naa aaye,iske liye bhi tu ready tha....

aur mujhe maalum hai ki humne jaisa socha tha,agar us planning me halki si aur gadbad hui hoti toh tu mujhe bachane ke liye khudko daaw par laga deta...

par sabse mahatvpurn baat...tu ye kaise bhul jaata ki hum dono jude hue hain...

teri har soch se mai bhali bhaati parichit rehta hun..aur mujhe maalum hai ki tune meri badhayi isiliye ki taaki mai khudse tujhe sarvshresta maanu....haina..!!???


ASMODEUS ki baat par VIKRAM ke saath saath AVANTIKA aur ALESENDRA bhi has pade par fir...


ALESENDRA-atahas bohot hua...ab aap dono ke us kaam ka waqt ho gaya hai jisse KAHANI ke agle padaw ka raasta banega...

ASMODEUS-acha..!!!kya hum jaan sakte hain ki aap kis kaam ko baat kar rahi hain...???

AVANTIKA-aapke mitra aur CHOSENS ke teeno SOVEREIGN'S ko unki neend se jagane ka aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ki wajah se unki bhuli yuhi yaadasht unhe wapas dene ka kaam....

VIKRAM-wakayi waqt ke saath aap dono kaafi akalmand ho gayi hain...


VIKRAM ki baat par wo dono bas muskura di jiske baad....

VIKRAM ne apna right hand aage kiya aur uske aisa karte hi teeno SOVEREIGN'S ki behosh body hawa me prakat hui aur wahin rook gayi.....

aisa hone ke baad VIKRAM ke left hand se teen CHETNA URJA nikal aage badhe aur AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ke sir me sama gaye jiske kuch pal baad teeno ki hi aankhen dheere dheere khul gayi aur jab aisa hua toh unki body sidhi hoti hui zamin par aa gayi...

kaafi samay ke baad teeno SOVEREIGN'S ek mout jaisi neend se jaage the jiski wajah se unhe normal hone me kuch waqt laga par jab wo normal hue toh apne saamne LORD OF ANGELS aur CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ko dekh turant apne ghutno par aa gaye....

ghutno par aate hi unke dimag me wo saare drishya ghum gaye jiski wajah se wo teeno behosh hue the aur wo sab yaad kar unke man me ek baar fir RAAZ ko lekar jigyasa ne janm liya par wo teeno chup hi rahe...


VIKRAM-khade ho jaaiye....


VIKRAM ke aisa bolte hi teeno khade ho gaye jiske baad...


VIKRAM-kuch sawal chal rahe hain ap teeno ke man me...!!!!puchna nahi chahenge unhe...!!!

AKSHAANT-LORD...aapse kya chuppa hua hai...???aapko toh sab pata hai....


waise toh AKSHAANT ya fir baaki ke dono VIKRAM ko normally naam se hi bulate the par jab bhi ASMODEUS saamne hota tha,tab ye teeno VIKRAM ko bhi as a friend nahi balki uske ohde ke hisaab se hi baat karte the...


SHAILA-kya aaj aap hume RAAZ ke baare me batayenge....??

VIKRAM-nahi....


VIKRAM ki naa sun teeno man hi man nirash ho gaye par tabhi...


VIKRAM-ab hume tum teeno ko kuch bhi batane ki zaroorat nahi hai...kyunki apni jis shakti ke bhaag ko aur ussi tyag ke saath apni yaadasht ke jis bhaag ko dekar tum teeno ne FORBIDDEN FOREST ke kawach ko banaya tha,ab tumhari wo shakti tumhe wapas milne waali hai....

aur jab aisa hoga,tab tum teeno ko sirf RAAZ ke baare me hi nahi,balki puri kahani hi yaad aa jaayegi...


VIKRAM ki baat sun teeno SOVEREIGN'S hairan ho gaye.. kyunki bhale hi unhe apni Shakti ke sabse bade bhaag ke tyag ki wajah se hi jo kuch bhi ho raha hai,uski jaankari nahi thi par unhe ye zaroor bata diya gaya tha ki kisi bohot hi mahatvpurn CHEEZ ki raksha ke liye hi unki shakti roopi kawach ki rachna hui thi aur ab jab VIKRAM keh raha hai ki unki wo shakti unhe wapas milne waali hai toh iska matlab tha ki wo khaas CHEEZ ab beparda ho sakti hai....

(writers note:-toh baat ye hai ki jab AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR CHOSENS ke SOVEREIGN'S bane tab VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ne unki shakti ko ek shield ne badla aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagaya par iske saath un dono ne in teeno ki yaadasht bhi le li aur wo isiliye kyunki agar wo aisa nahi karte toh RAAZ ko banane ki planning VIDEOUS ko pata chal jaati,saath hi FORBIDDEN FOREST me SHIELD lagte waqt ek aur chiz hui thi,uske baare me bhi usse pata chal jaata par ab jab RAAZ saamne aa chuka hai toh aise me SHIELD shakti ke through yaadasht ko lautane me koi harz nahi hai)



SOVEREIGN'S ki soch ko VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS dono hi samajh rahe the aur isiliye....


ASMODEUS-zyada mat socho.. jaise hi tum teeno ko tumhari shakti wapas milegi tab tumhe apne aap hi tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil jaayenge....


jaise hi ASMODEUS ki baat khatm hui,VIKRAM ne apna haath aage kiya jiske baad uske haathon se ek saath teen rays nikli...

ye teen rays FORBIDDEN FOREST ki wahi kawach thi jo RAAZ ke BARRIER lagane se pehle pichle 25 thousand years se us FOREST ka kawach bani hui thi....

dekhte hi dekhte wo shakti numa rays apne asli maalik THE THREE SOVEREIGN'S ke body me samati chali gayi jisse feel kar un teeno ki aankhen band ho gayi....

is prakriya ke douran naa sirf un teeno ko apni khoyi hui shakti wapas mil rahi thi,balki saath hi unki bhul chuki yaadasht bhi unhe wapas milti jaa rahi thi...


VIDEOUS ka janm,uski demands,ZEAL ke VIKRAM ki utpatti,uska aur pure ZEAL ka vinash aur uske baad RAAZ ki utpatti ka idea, CHOSENS ka banana aur uske baad wo khaas CHIZ jiski suraksha ke liye unhe apni shakti ka 75 pratishat bhaag aur apni yaadasht ko kurbaan karna pada,wo sab yaad aa gaya...

itna hi nahi,unke behosh hone ke baad CHOSENS me kya kya hua tha,wo sab bhi unhe pata chal gaya aur aise unhe ASMODEUS ki baat ka matlab samajh aaya jisme usne kaha tha ki unke saare sawalon ke jawab unhe unki shakti milne par apne aap pata chal jaayenge....

kuch waqt laga,is shakti ke adaan pradaan ki kriya ko pura hone me par jab aisa hua toh AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ke sharir me ek baar firse ANGELS ke kapde aa gaye...

aur aisa hote hi wo teeno ek baar firse ASMODEUS aur VIKRAM ke saamne jhukne ko hue par...


VIKRAM-jhukne ki zaroorat nahi hai doston...aapko bas wahi mila hai jo pehle se aapka tha...

aur ab jab aapko saari kahani dobara yaad aa gayi hai toh ye batane ki zaroorat nahi hai ki aapko apne diye padh aur kartavya par wapas loutna hai aur is khel ke agle padhav ka raasta banana hai...

AKSHAANT-aisa hi hoga LORD....

ASMODEUS-hume pata hai ki aap teeno apni bhaawnao ko sayyamit rakhenge par is khel ka wo chuppa hua bhaag,jo ab apko yaad aa chuka hai,usse VIDEOUS se chupana atti aawashyak hai aur isiliye....


ASMODEUS ke haathon se ek GODS BARRIER ray nikli aur aage badhte hue teeno SOVEREIGN'S ke dimag ke us hisse me fit ho gayi jisme wo jaankari thi jisse VIDEOUS se chuppana tha...

aur jab ASMODEUS ne apna kaam kar diya toh...


ASMODEUS-ab aap teeno jaa sakte hain...


ek baar un dono ke saamne jhuk aur fir ALESENDRA aur AVANTIKA ko smile dekar wo teeno gayab ho gaye....


ALESENDRA-abhi tak kisi naa kisi tarah aap dono ka is kahani me hastakshep raha hai par ab aakhir wo waqt aa hi gaya jab aap dono bhi sirf ek darshak banane waale ho....

ASMODEUS-iska bhi apna ek maza hai.....

AVANTIKA-par kya aapko ye soch kar dar nahi lagta, ghabrahat nahi hoti ki jaisa RAAZ hai,usse kahin puri baazi ulti naa padh jaaye....

aur uske upar VIDEOUS jisne itne varshon me apni shakti aur badha bhi li hai aur sthir bhi kar liya hai...

VIKRAM-dar,ghabrahat soch ke hi hisse hote hain...aur soch faisla lene se pehle li gayi cheez hai,baad ki nahi...

aur faisla toh hum pehle hi le chuke hain... toh ab darne ya ghabrane ka koi arth nahi...

VIDEOUS ne jo chaha,wo usne kar diya hai...RAAZ jo chahega,wo karega...

laskhya uska fixed hai,dekhna ye hai ki us lakshya tak pahunchne ke liye uska raasta kya hota hai..???

waise shuruat toh achi hai...


neeche ZEAL ki taraf dekhte hue VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi jiske baad sabhi ki nazar wahan chali gayi jahan is waqt paalthi maarkar baitha hua tha RAAZ....

KYUN???aayiye khud jaan lijiye...





PLANET-ZEAL


PLACE-THE CAVERN





AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA


is waqt paalthi maar baitha hua tha mai aur mere saamne hawa me rooki hui thi meri talwar...

aur lagatar baar baar ye SPELL nikal raha tha mere mooh se jiski wajah se mere sir se lekar pair tak,har jagah se ek gaadhi ray nikalkar mere SWORD me sama rahi thi....

par hai kya ye SPELL aur mere iske uccharan karne ki wajah kya hai!!!


toh baat ye hai ki mera jo pehla padaaw tha aur jo ki mera agla padhav bhi tha,THE CHOSEN'S,wahan jaane ke liye is spell ko kaam me laana zaroori tha...


AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA...


jiska matlab hai SUBMERGE MY POWERS...


aur iske asar se is waqt mere BRAIN,BLOOD, BODY ke aur khaas kar SOUL ki lagbhag puri shakti nikalkar mere SWORD me sama rahi thi....

mere aisa karne ka kaaran ye tha ki mai apni shaktiyon ke saath CHOSENS me as a SAVENT nahi ghus sakta tha...

aur wo isiliye kyunki CHOSENS me SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke jis kriya ke dwara shakti ko naapa jaata hai,mera SOUL is AMPLIFICATION ke daayre se baahar tha....

meri shakti ko naapa nahi jaa sakta tha...par fir bhi agar jigyasa purv isse measure kiya bhi jaaye toh meri SOUL ki shakti ka 1 percent bhi kisi 20 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION waale SAVENT se zyada powerful tha....

aise me apni SOUL ki power ko chuppana hi sahi tha warna agar ye halka sa bhi kaam me aa jaata toh pura hi CHOSENS hil jaane tha...

ye toh hui SOUL ki baat.....ab agar baat karen baaki teen power sources ki matlab BRAIN, BODY, aur BLOOD ki toh mere sharir ka ye bhaag bhi kuch zyada hi shaktishaali tha...

sidhi bhaasha me kahun toh mera BRAIN,meri BODY aur mera BLOOD itne AMPLIFIED the ki wo kisi bhi COMPLETE 100 % SOUL AMPLIFIED SAVENT ko bhi araam se hara sakta tha....

aur isiliye hi mai apni shaktiyon ke bohot bade bhaag ko ek ghere me,ek kawach me bhar kar apne SWORD ke andar daal raha tha kyunki ek meri sword hi aisi chiz thi jo naa sirf mere shaktiyon ke kendron ko sambhal sakti thi,balki unhe khudme chuppakar khudko aur un shaktiyon ko invisible bhi kar sakti thi....

kyunki mai iska DHAARAK tha, isiliye mujhe chhod isse koi detect bhi nahi kar sakta tha....VIDEOUS bhi nahi....

par ye kriya time taking thi aur isiliye....


AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA....


yahan mera spell uccharit karna chalu hi raha aur wahan....





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST




AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA....


RAAZ dwara ki jaa rahi enchantment ki awaaz FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar bhi gunj rahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki yahan 2 behosh nirjeev se pade shariron ke saamne khada tha WOOGER....

aur ussike dimag me gunj rahi thi ye enchantment jisse sun...


WOOGER-MASTER ne apni kriya shuru kar di jiska arth hai ki mere kaam ka waqt aa gaya....

apni baat bol WOOGER ne ek disha me dekha aur uske aisa karte hi kuch door par bane ek poudhe me halki hulchul hui aur fir....

tezi se kuch phool jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI the,wo us poudhe se toot kar udte hue aaye aur WOOGER me sama gaye aur kyunki WOOGER RAAZ ka hi hissa tha, isiliye usme samate hi wo buti RAAZ ke paas pahunch chuke the....

jab ye kaam pura hua toh WOOGER wapas un do behosh logon ki taraf jo ki ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER the,palta aur....


WOOGER-bohot khushnaseeb ho tum dono kyunki tum dono mere MASTER ke kaam aane waale ho...

kuch din ki neend aur le lo,fir aankh toh khul hi jaayegi...

haan,par kitne waqt ke liye khuli reh paayengi tum dono ki aankhen,kitna jeeven shesh bacha hai tumhara,ye toh MASTER hi decide karenge...

filhal toh ghar waapsi ka waqt ho chala hai tum dono ka...


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi uske right aur left,dono side ek ek WORLD DOOR khul gaye...

ek taraf tha CARAPACE matlab SLUNDER ka world aur dusri taraf tha ARROW jo ki ACCHUTA ki duniya thi...

aisa hone ke baad ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ka sharir hawa me uth gaya aur agle hi pal dono ka sharir apne apne WORLD ke DOOR se hota hua dusri taraf chala gaya...

dono hi doors ke dusri taraf tha wahi room jiske aalishan beds par dono Planets ke rulers jo ko ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ke parents the,unke VEGITATIVE STATE waale bodies ko rakha gaya tha...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke bodies bhi unke PARENTS ke side me jaakar sthir ho gaye aur aisa hone par WORLD DOOR band ho gaya...

wahin yahan ka apna kaam khtam hote hi WOOGER bhi gaayab ho gaya par akele nahi,apne saath le gaya WOOGER wo SHIELD jo ki FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagi hui thi.....

jiska matlab tha ki ab FORBIDDEN FOREST me bina rok tok sabhi ka swagat hai....






PLACE-INSIDE THE CONCEAL




TUMHE AISA KYUN LAGTA HAI VIDEOUS KI TUM HUME UN DONO KI NAZRON SE CHHUPA SAKTE HO....!!!!


ye baat do logon ne ek saath kahi thi jisse sun....


VIDEOUS-mujhe lagta nahi hai..mai jaanta hun ki mere FATHERS VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS tumhe tab tak nahi dekh sakte jab tak tum yahan par ho...

ye jagah meri hai..sirf meri jo ki meri shaktiyon ke kawach se bani hai...isse bheda nahi jaa sakta...

haan,agar tum chaaho tob yahan se nikalkar apne aakaon se meri shikayat kar sakte ho...

mai rokunga nahi tumhe..bas jo maine pucha hai,mere us sawal ka jawab de do...


UNKNOWN-arre,tum toh hamare LORDS ki urja se bane ho..mind read karna toh tumhare gifts me se ek hai...

padh lo dimag aur jaan lo sach....

VIDEOUS-sarcastic,haan...!!!!


tumhare dimag ke information wala bhaag blocked hai jisse filhal mai bhed nahi paa raha hun...

ye blockage tabhi hatega jab tum dono dil se aisa chahoge par mai jaanta hun ki tum dono aisa karoge nahi.

koi naa, alternative toh har kisi ka hota hai....is problem ka bhi hai....


VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi hi thi ki tabhi usse FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ke hatne ka sense hua jisse mehsoos kar uske chehre par smile aa gayi aur....


VIDEOUS-ab tum dono ki mujhe zaroorat nahi...

afsos ki IMMORTAL ho tum dono..maar mai tum dono ko sakta nahi par.....

mout se milti julti haalat me toh pahuncha hi sakta hun naa...


SARVATOMUKHA UPPARUNADHI

LOCK THE SOUL


ye spell bhi ABANDON tha.iska prayag nishedh tha...


reason...is spell ko asar me sirf isse bolne waale ki SOUL hi laa sakti hai...aur isiliye isse bolne waale ke SOUL ko bohot powerful aur negetive hona hi chahiye...

jispar bhi ye SPELL uccharit hota hai,uska SOUL uski body ke andar ek jail me kaid ho jaata hai..

ek aisi jail jisme SOUL ke saath saath us SOUL ke maalik ka sharir bhi bhale hi wo kisi bhi form me ho,nirjeev sa ho jaata hai aur abhi yahi hua....

VIDEOUS ke spell uccharit karte hi uske SOUL se hota hua ek ray saamne baithe un dono shaksh ke body se takraya aur us body ko bhedte hue wo ray unke andar gaya jiske agle hi pal un dono ka sharir dheela padh gaya aur neeche gir pade...

BEELZEBUB aur DEFENDER....










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V..J...

 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN AUR UNKE PARENTS PHASE 2 KE APNE NAYE GHAR NE ENTER KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIKRAM AUR ASMODEUS HEAVEN ME SABKO VIDEOUS KI PLANNING KE BAARE ME BATATE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)





UPDATE-53



PLACE-HEAVEN





TOH AAKHIR WO WAQT AA HI GAYA JAB IS KAHANI KE VILLAIN KE BANAYE KHEL ME AAP DONO KA BANAYA VILLAIN UTARNE WAALA HAI....


muskurate hue AVANTIKA ne ye baat kahi jisse sun VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ke chehre par bhi muskaan aa gayi....


VIKRAM-is khel me RAAZ utar toh bohot pehle hi gaya tha par haan,uske khelne ki baari ab aayi hai...

ASMODEUS-waise hamare waale villain ko villain banane ka pura shray mujhe jaata hai...

kyunki ye janab us WAQT darshak hi the....


VIKRAM ko dekhte hue ASMODEUS ne ye baat kahi jispar...


VIKRAM-bilkul BHAI...jo bhi ho paaya hai,ye aapki wajah se hi ho paaya hai....

us kriya ko karte waqt aapne apni immortality daav par lagayi thi...aise me mai koi shray le bhi kaise sakta hun...!!!!????


VIKRAM ne ASMODEUS ki baat par puri tarah sehmati dikhayi jispar...


ASMODEUS-yaar kabhi toh aisa vyavahar dikha jaise ek PARMESHWAR PUTR ko dikhana chahiye....

mujhse bhi bohot upar hai tu mere BHAI...teri pratispraddha,tera COMPETITION kisi se ho hi nahi sakta bhai aur iska ek jeevant udaharan wahi kriya hai jisse hum apni yojna ko anjaam de paaye hain...

log apni galtiyon se sikhte hain,par tu dusron tak ki jeet ko unke zariye apni jeet me badalne ki nazar aur hunar rakhta hai...

maana maine apni immortality daaw par lagayi thi,par tune naa sirf us daaw ka kaaran dhund nikala tha balki meri immorality par koi aanch naa aaye,iske liye bhi tu ready tha....

aur mujhe maalum hai ki humne jaisa socha tha,agar us planning me halki si aur gadbad hui hoti toh tu mujhe bachane ke liye khudko daaw par laga deta...

par sabse mahatvpurn baat...tu ye kaise bhul jaata ki hum dono jude hue hain...

teri har soch se mai bhali bhaati parichit rehta hun..aur mujhe maalum hai ki tune meri badhayi isiliye ki taaki mai khudse tujhe sarvshresta maanu....haina..!!???


ASMODEUS ki baat par VIKRAM ke saath saath AVANTIKA aur ALESENDRA bhi has pade par fir...


ALESENDRA-atahas bohot hua...ab aap dono ke us kaam ka waqt ho gaya hai jisse KAHANI ke agle padaw ka raasta banega...

ASMODEUS-acha..!!!kya hum jaan sakte hain ki aap kis kaam ko baat kar rahi hain...???

AVANTIKA-aapke mitra aur CHOSENS ke teeno SOVEREIGN'S ko unki neend se jagane ka aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ki wajah se unki bhuli yuhi yaadasht unhe wapas dene ka kaam....

VIKRAM-wakayi waqt ke saath aap dono kaafi akalmand ho gayi hain...


VIKRAM ki baat par wo dono bas muskura di jiske baad....

VIKRAM ne apna right hand aage kiya aur uske aisa karte hi teeno SOVEREIGN'S ki behosh body hawa me prakat hui aur wahin rook gayi.....

aisa hone ke baad VIKRAM ke left hand se teen CHETNA URJA nikal aage badhe aur AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ke sir me sama gaye jiske kuch pal baad teeno ki hi aankhen dheere dheere khul gayi aur jab aisa hua toh unki body sidhi hoti hui zamin par aa gayi...

kaafi samay ke baad teeno SOVEREIGN'S ek mout jaisi neend se jaage the jiski wajah se unhe normal hone me kuch waqt laga par jab wo normal hue toh apne saamne LORD OF ANGELS aur CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ko dekh turant apne ghutno par aa gaye....

ghutno par aate hi unke dimag me wo saare drishya ghum gaye jiski wajah se wo teeno behosh hue the aur wo sab yaad kar unke man me ek baar fir RAAZ ko lekar jigyasa ne janm liya par wo teeno chup hi rahe...


VIKRAM-khade ho jaaiye....


VIKRAM ke aisa bolte hi teeno khade ho gaye jiske baad...


VIKRAM-kuch sawal chal rahe hain ap teeno ke man me...!!!!puchna nahi chahenge unhe...!!!

AKSHAANT-LORD...aapse kya chuppa hua hai...???aapko toh sab pata hai....


waise toh AKSHAANT ya fir baaki ke dono VIKRAM ko normally naam se hi bulate the par jab bhi ASMODEUS saamne hota tha,tab ye teeno VIKRAM ko bhi as a friend nahi balki uske ohde ke hisaab se hi baat karte the...


SHAILA-kya aaj aap hume RAAZ ke baare me batayenge....??

VIKRAM-nahi....


VIKRAM ki naa sun teeno man hi man nirash ho gaye par tabhi...


VIKRAM-ab hume tum teeno ko kuch bhi batane ki zaroorat nahi hai...kyunki apni jis shakti ke bhaag ko aur ussi tyag ke saath apni yaadasht ke jis bhaag ko dekar tum teeno ne FORBIDDEN FOREST ke kawach ko banaya tha,ab tumhari wo shakti tumhe wapas milne waali hai....

aur jab aisa hoga,tab tum teeno ko sirf RAAZ ke baare me hi nahi,balki puri kahani hi yaad aa jaayegi...


VIKRAM ki baat sun teeno SOVEREIGN'S hairan ho gaye.. kyunki bhale hi unhe apni Shakti ke sabse bade bhaag ke tyag ki wajah se hi jo kuch bhi ho raha hai,uski jaankari nahi thi par unhe ye zaroor bata diya gaya tha ki kisi bohot hi mahatvpurn CHEEZ ki raksha ke liye hi unki shakti roopi kawach ki rachna hui thi aur ab jab VIKRAM keh raha hai ki unki wo shakti unhe wapas milne waali hai toh iska matlab tha ki wo khaas CHEEZ ab beparda ho sakti hai....

(writers note:-toh baat ye hai ki jab AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR CHOSENS ke SOVEREIGN'S bane tab VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ne unki shakti ko ek shield ne badla aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagaya par iske saath un dono ne in teeno ki yaadasht bhi le li aur wo isiliye kyunki agar wo aisa nahi karte toh RAAZ ko banane ki planning VIDEOUS ko pata chal jaati,saath hi FORBIDDEN FOREST me SHIELD lagte waqt ek aur chiz hui thi,uske baare me bhi usse pata chal jaata par ab jab RAAZ saamne aa chuka hai toh aise me SHIELD shakti ke through yaadasht ko lautane me koi harz nahi hai)



SOVEREIGN'S ki soch ko VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS dono hi samajh rahe the aur isiliye....


ASMODEUS-zyada mat socho.. jaise hi tum teeno ko tumhari shakti wapas milegi tab tumhe apne aap hi tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil jaayenge....


jaise hi ASMODEUS ki baat khatm hui,VIKRAM ne apna haath aage kiya jiske baad uske haathon se ek saath teen rays nikli...

ye teen rays FORBIDDEN FOREST ki wahi kawach thi jo RAAZ ke BARRIER lagane se pehle pichle 25 thousand years se us FOREST ka kawach bani hui thi....

dekhte hi dekhte wo shakti numa rays apne asli maalik THE THREE SOVEREIGN'S ke body me samati chali gayi jisse feel kar un teeno ki aankhen band ho gayi....

is prakriya ke douran naa sirf un teeno ko apni khoyi hui shakti wapas mil rahi thi,balki saath hi unki bhul chuki yaadasht bhi unhe wapas milti jaa rahi thi...


VIDEOUS ka janm,uski demands,ZEAL ke VIKRAM ki utpatti,uska aur pure ZEAL ka vinash aur uske baad RAAZ ki utpatti ka idea, CHOSENS ka banana aur uske baad wo khaas CHIZ jiski suraksha ke liye unhe apni shakti ka 75 pratishat bhaag aur apni yaadasht ko kurbaan karna pada,wo sab yaad aa gaya...

itna hi nahi,unke behosh hone ke baad CHOSENS me kya kya hua tha,wo sab bhi unhe pata chal gaya aur aise unhe ASMODEUS ki baat ka matlab samajh aaya jisme usne kaha tha ki unke saare sawalon ke jawab unhe unki shakti milne par apne aap pata chal jaayenge....

kuch waqt laga,is shakti ke adaan pradaan ki kriya ko pura hone me par jab aisa hua toh AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ke sharir me ek baar firse ANGELS ke kapde aa gaye...

aur aisa hote hi wo teeno ek baar firse ASMODEUS aur VIKRAM ke saamne jhukne ko hue par...


VIKRAM-jhukne ki zaroorat nahi hai doston...aapko bas wahi mila hai jo pehle se aapka tha...

aur ab jab aapko saari kahani dobara yaad aa gayi hai toh ye batane ki zaroorat nahi hai ki aapko apne diye padh aur kartavya par wapas loutna hai aur is khel ke agle padhav ka raasta banana hai...

AKSHAANT-aisa hi hoga LORD....

ASMODEUS-hume pata hai ki aap teeno apni bhaawnao ko sayyamit rakhenge par is khel ka wo chuppa hua bhaag,jo ab apko yaad aa chuka hai,usse VIDEOUS se chupana atti aawashyak hai aur isiliye....


ASMODEUS ke haathon se ek GODS BARRIER ray nikli aur aage badhte hue teeno SOVEREIGN'S ke dimag ke us hisse me fit ho gayi jisme wo jaankari thi jisse VIDEOUS se chuppana tha...

aur jab ASMODEUS ne apna kaam kar diya toh...


ASMODEUS-ab aap teeno jaa sakte hain...


ek baar un dono ke saamne jhuk aur fir ALESENDRA aur AVANTIKA ko smile dekar wo teeno gayab ho gaye....


ALESENDRA-abhi tak kisi naa kisi tarah aap dono ka is kahani me hastakshep raha hai par ab aakhir wo waqt aa hi gaya jab aap dono bhi sirf ek darshak banane waale ho....

ASMODEUS-iska bhi apna ek maza hai.....

AVANTIKA-par kya aapko ye soch kar dar nahi lagta, ghabrahat nahi hoti ki jaisa RAAZ hai,usse kahin puri baazi ulti naa padh jaaye....

aur uske upar VIDEOUS jisne itne varshon me apni shakti aur badha bhi li hai aur sthir bhi kar liya hai...

VIKRAM-dar,ghabrahat soch ke hi hisse hote hain...aur soch faisla lene se pehle li gayi cheez hai,baad ki nahi...

aur faisla toh hum pehle hi le chuke hain... toh ab darne ya ghabrane ka koi arth nahi...

VIDEOUS ne jo chaha,wo usne kar diya hai...RAAZ jo chahega,wo karega...

laskhya uska fixed hai,dekhna ye hai ki us lakshya tak pahunchne ke liye uska raasta kya hota hai..???

waise shuruat toh achi hai...


neeche ZEAL ki taraf dekhte hue VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi jiske baad sabhi ki nazar wahan chali gayi jahan is waqt paalthi maarkar baitha hua tha RAAZ....

KYUN???aayiye khud jaan lijiye...





PLANET-ZEAL


PLACE-THE CAVERN





AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA


is waqt paalthi maar baitha hua tha mai aur mere saamne hawa me rooki hui thi meri talwar...

aur lagatar baar baar ye SPELL nikal raha tha mere mooh se jiski wajah se mere sir se lekar pair tak,har jagah se ek gaadhi ray nikalkar mere SWORD me sama rahi thi....

par hai kya ye SPELL aur mere iske uccharan karne ki wajah kya hai!!!


toh baat ye hai ki mera jo pehla padaaw tha aur jo ki mera agla padhav bhi tha,THE CHOSEN'S,wahan jaane ke liye is spell ko kaam me laana zaroori tha...


AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA...


jiska matlab hai SUBMERGE MY POWERS...


aur iske asar se is waqt mere BRAIN,BLOOD, BODY ke aur khaas kar SOUL ki lagbhag puri shakti nikalkar mere SWORD me sama rahi thi....

mere aisa karne ka kaaran ye tha ki mai apni shaktiyon ke saath CHOSENS me as a SAVENT nahi ghus sakta tha...

aur wo isiliye kyunki CHOSENS me SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke jis kriya ke dwara shakti ko naapa jaata hai,mera SOUL is AMPLIFICATION ke daayre se baahar tha....

meri shakti ko naapa nahi jaa sakta tha...par fir bhi agar jigyasa purv isse measure kiya bhi jaaye toh meri SOUL ki shakti ka 1 percent bhi kisi 20 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION waale SAVENT se zyada powerful tha....

aise me apni SOUL ki power ko chuppana hi sahi tha warna agar ye halka sa bhi kaam me aa jaata toh pura hi CHOSENS hil jaane tha...

ye toh hui SOUL ki baat.....ab agar baat karen baaki teen power sources ki matlab BRAIN, BODY, aur BLOOD ki toh mere sharir ka ye bhaag bhi kuch zyada hi shaktishaali tha...

sidhi bhaasha me kahun toh mera BRAIN,meri BODY aur mera BLOOD itne AMPLIFIED the ki wo kisi bhi COMPLETE 100 % SOUL AMPLIFIED SAVENT ko bhi araam se hara sakta tha....

aur isiliye hi mai apni shaktiyon ke bohot bade bhaag ko ek ghere me,ek kawach me bhar kar apne SWORD ke andar daal raha tha kyunki ek meri sword hi aisi chiz thi jo naa sirf mere shaktiyon ke kendron ko sambhal sakti thi,balki unhe khudme chuppakar khudko aur un shaktiyon ko invisible bhi kar sakti thi....

kyunki mai iska DHAARAK tha, isiliye mujhe chhod isse koi detect bhi nahi kar sakta tha....VIDEOUS bhi nahi....

par ye kriya time taking thi aur isiliye....


AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA....


yahan mera spell uccharit karna chalu hi raha aur wahan....





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST




AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA....


RAAZ dwara ki jaa rahi enchantment ki awaaz FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar bhi gunj rahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki yahan 2 behosh nirjeev se pade shariron ke saamne khada tha WOOGER....

aur ussike dimag me gunj rahi thi ye enchantment jisse sun...


WOOGER-MASTER ne apni kriya shuru kar di jiska arth hai ki mere kaam ka waqt aa gaya....

apni baat bol WOOGER ne ek disha me dekha aur uske aisa karte hi kuch door par bane ek poudhe me halki hulchul hui aur fir....

tezi se kuch phool jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI the,wo us poudhe se toot kar udte hue aaye aur WOOGER me sama gaye aur kyunki WOOGER RAAZ ka hi hissa tha, isiliye usme samate hi wo buti RAAZ ke paas pahunch chuke the....

jab ye kaam pura hua toh WOOGER wapas un do behosh logon ki taraf jo ki ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER the,palta aur....


WOOGER-bohot khushnaseeb ho tum dono kyunki tum dono mere MASTER ke kaam aane waale ho...

kuch din ki neend aur le lo,fir aankh toh khul hi jaayegi...

haan,par kitne waqt ke liye khuli reh paayengi tum dono ki aankhen,kitna jeeven shesh bacha hai tumhara,ye toh MASTER hi decide karenge...

filhal toh ghar waapsi ka waqt ho chala hai tum dono ka...


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi uske right aur left,dono side ek ek WORLD DOOR khul gaye...

ek taraf tha CARAPACE matlab SLUNDER ka world aur dusri taraf tha ARROW jo ki ACCHUTA ki duniya thi...

aisa hone ke baad ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ka sharir hawa me uth gaya aur agle hi pal dono ka sharir apne apne WORLD ke DOOR se hota hua dusri taraf chala gaya...

dono hi doors ke dusri taraf tha wahi room jiske aalishan beds par dono Planets ke rulers jo ko ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ke parents the,unke VEGITATIVE STATE waale bodies ko rakha gaya tha...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke bodies bhi unke PARENTS ke side me jaakar sthir ho gaye aur aisa hone par WORLD DOOR band ho gaya...

wahin yahan ka apna kaam khtam hote hi WOOGER bhi gaayab ho gaya par akele nahi,apne saath le gaya WOOGER wo SHIELD jo ki FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagi hui thi.....

jiska matlab tha ki ab FORBIDDEN FOREST me bina rok tok sabhi ka swagat hai....






PLACE-INSIDE THE CONCEAL




TUMHE AISA KYUN LAGTA HAI VIDEOUS KI TUM HUME UN DONO KI NAZRON SE CHHUPA SAKTE HO....!!!!


ye baat do logon ne ek saath kahi thi jisse sun....


VIDEOUS-mujhe lagta nahi hai..mai jaanta hun ki mere FATHERS VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS tumhe tab tak nahi dekh sakte jab tak tum yahan par ho...

ye jagah meri hai..sirf meri jo ki meri shaktiyon ke kawach se bani hai...isse bheda nahi jaa sakta...

haan,agar tum chaaho tob yahan se nikalkar apne aakaon se meri shikayat kar sakte ho...

mai rokunga nahi tumhe..bas jo maine pucha hai,mere us sawal ka jawab de do...


UNKNOWN-arre,tum toh hamare LORDS ki urja se bane ho..mind read karna toh tumhare gifts me se ek hai...

padh lo dimag aur jaan lo sach....

VIDEOUS-sarcastic,haan...!!!!


tumhare dimag ke information wala bhaag blocked hai jisse filhal mai bhed nahi paa raha hun...

ye blockage tabhi hatega jab tum dono dil se aisa chahoge par mai jaanta hun ki tum dono aisa karoge nahi.

koi naa, alternative toh har kisi ka hota hai....is problem ka bhi hai....


VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi hi thi ki tabhi usse FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ke hatne ka sense hua jisse mehsoos kar uske chehre par smile aa gayi aur....


VIDEOUS-ab tum dono ki mujhe zaroorat nahi...

afsos ki IMMORTAL ho tum dono..maar mai tum dono ko sakta nahi par.....

mout se milti julti haalat me toh pahuncha hi sakta hun naa...


SARVATOMUKHA UPPARUNADHI

LOCK THE SOUL


ye spell bhi ABANDON tha.iska prayag nishedh tha...


reason...is spell ko asar me sirf isse bolne waale ki SOUL hi laa sakti hai...aur isiliye isse bolne waale ke SOUL ko bohot powerful aur negetive hona hi chahiye...

jispar bhi ye SPELL uccharit hota hai,uska SOUL uski body ke andar ek jail me kaid ho jaata hai..

ek aisi jail jisme SOUL ke saath saath us SOUL ke maalik ka sharir bhi bhale hi wo kisi bhi form me ho,nirjeev sa ho jaata hai aur abhi yahi hua....

VIDEOUS ke spell uccharit karte hi uske SOUL se hota hua ek ray saamne baithe un dono shaksh ke body se takraya aur us body ko bhedte hue wo ray unke andar gaya jiske agle hi pal un dono ka sharir dheela padh gaya aur neeche gir pade...

BEELZEBUB aur DEFENDER....










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V..J...

Osm update Brother ??

 

[Iron Man]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN AUR UNKE PARENTS PHASE 2 KE APNE NAYE GHAR NE ENTER KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIKRAM AUR ASMODEUS HEAVEN ME SABKO VIDEOUS KI PLANNING KE BAARE ME BATATE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)





UPDATE-53



PLACE-HEAVEN





TOH AAKHIR WO WAQT AA HI GAYA JAB IS KAHANI KE VILLAIN KE BANAYE KHEL ME AAP DONO KA BANAYA VILLAIN UTARNE WAALA HAI....


muskurate hue AVANTIKA ne ye baat kahi jisse sun VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ke chehre par bhi muskaan aa gayi....


VIKRAM-is khel me RAAZ utar toh bohot pehle hi gaya tha par haan,uske khelne ki baari ab aayi hai...

ASMODEUS-waise hamare waale villain ko villain banane ka pura shray mujhe jaata hai...

kyunki ye janab us WAQT darshak hi the....


VIKRAM ko dekhte hue ASMODEUS ne ye baat kahi jispar...


VIKRAM-bilkul BHAI...jo bhi ho paaya hai,ye aapki wajah se hi ho paaya hai....

us kriya ko karte waqt aapne apni immortality daav par lagayi thi...aise me mai koi shray le bhi kaise sakta hun...!!!!????


VIKRAM ne ASMODEUS ki baat par puri tarah sehmati dikhayi jispar...


ASMODEUS-yaar kabhi toh aisa vyavahar dikha jaise ek PARMESHWAR PUTR ko dikhana chahiye....

mujhse bhi bohot upar hai tu mere BHAI...teri pratispraddha,tera COMPETITION kisi se ho hi nahi sakta bhai aur iska ek jeevant udaharan wahi kriya hai jisse hum apni yojna ko anjaam de paaye hain...

log apni galtiyon se sikhte hain,par tu dusron tak ki jeet ko unke zariye apni jeet me badalne ki nazar aur hunar rakhta hai...

maana maine apni immortality daaw par lagayi thi,par tune naa sirf us daaw ka kaaran dhund nikala tha balki meri immorality par koi aanch naa aaye,iske liye bhi tu ready tha....

aur mujhe maalum hai ki humne jaisa socha tha,agar us planning me halki si aur gadbad hui hoti toh tu mujhe bachane ke liye khudko daaw par laga deta...

par sabse mahatvpurn baat...tu ye kaise bhul jaata ki hum dono jude hue hain...

teri har soch se mai bhali bhaati parichit rehta hun..aur mujhe maalum hai ki tune meri badhayi isiliye ki taaki mai khudse tujhe sarvshresta maanu....haina..!!???


ASMODEUS ki baat par VIKRAM ke saath saath AVANTIKA aur ALESENDRA bhi has pade par fir...


ALESENDRA-atahas bohot hua...ab aap dono ke us kaam ka waqt ho gaya hai jisse KAHANI ke agle padaw ka raasta banega...

ASMODEUS-acha..!!!kya hum jaan sakte hain ki aap kis kaam ko baat kar rahi hain...???

AVANTIKA-aapke mitra aur CHOSENS ke teeno SOVEREIGN'S ko unki neend se jagane ka aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ki wajah se unki bhuli yuhi yaadasht unhe wapas dene ka kaam....

VIKRAM-wakayi waqt ke saath aap dono kaafi akalmand ho gayi hain...


VIKRAM ki baat par wo dono bas muskura di jiske baad....

VIKRAM ne apna right hand aage kiya aur uske aisa karte hi teeno SOVEREIGN'S ki behosh body hawa me prakat hui aur wahin rook gayi.....

aisa hone ke baad VIKRAM ke left hand se teen CHETNA URJA nikal aage badhe aur AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ke sir me sama gaye jiske kuch pal baad teeno ki hi aankhen dheere dheere khul gayi aur jab aisa hua toh unki body sidhi hoti hui zamin par aa gayi...

kaafi samay ke baad teeno SOVEREIGN'S ek mout jaisi neend se jaage the jiski wajah se unhe normal hone me kuch waqt laga par jab wo normal hue toh apne saamne LORD OF ANGELS aur CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ko dekh turant apne ghutno par aa gaye....

ghutno par aate hi unke dimag me wo saare drishya ghum gaye jiski wajah se wo teeno behosh hue the aur wo sab yaad kar unke man me ek baar fir RAAZ ko lekar jigyasa ne janm liya par wo teeno chup hi rahe...


VIKRAM-khade ho jaaiye....


VIKRAM ke aisa bolte hi teeno khade ho gaye jiske baad...


VIKRAM-kuch sawal chal rahe hain ap teeno ke man me...!!!!puchna nahi chahenge unhe...!!!

AKSHAANT-LORD...aapse kya chuppa hua hai...???aapko toh sab pata hai....


waise toh AKSHAANT ya fir baaki ke dono VIKRAM ko normally naam se hi bulate the par jab bhi ASMODEUS saamne hota tha,tab ye teeno VIKRAM ko bhi as a friend nahi balki uske ohde ke hisaab se hi baat karte the...


SHAILA-kya aaj aap hume RAAZ ke baare me batayenge....??

VIKRAM-nahi....


VIKRAM ki naa sun teeno man hi man nirash ho gaye par tabhi...


VIKRAM-ab hume tum teeno ko kuch bhi batane ki zaroorat nahi hai...kyunki apni jis shakti ke bhaag ko aur ussi tyag ke saath apni yaadasht ke jis bhaag ko dekar tum teeno ne FORBIDDEN FOREST ke kawach ko banaya tha,ab tumhari wo shakti tumhe wapas milne waali hai....

aur jab aisa hoga,tab tum teeno ko sirf RAAZ ke baare me hi nahi,balki puri kahani hi yaad aa jaayegi...


VIKRAM ki baat sun teeno SOVEREIGN'S hairan ho gaye.. kyunki bhale hi unhe apni Shakti ke sabse bade bhaag ke tyag ki wajah se hi jo kuch bhi ho raha hai,uski jaankari nahi thi par unhe ye zaroor bata diya gaya tha ki kisi bohot hi mahatvpurn CHEEZ ki raksha ke liye hi unki shakti roopi kawach ki rachna hui thi aur ab jab VIKRAM keh raha hai ki unki wo shakti unhe wapas milne waali hai toh iska matlab tha ki wo khaas CHEEZ ab beparda ho sakti hai....

(writers note:-toh baat ye hai ki jab AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR CHOSENS ke SOVEREIGN'S bane tab VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ne unki shakti ko ek shield ne badla aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagaya par iske saath un dono ne in teeno ki yaadasht bhi le li aur wo isiliye kyunki agar wo aisa nahi karte toh RAAZ ko banane ki planning VIDEOUS ko pata chal jaati,saath hi FORBIDDEN FOREST me SHIELD lagte waqt ek aur chiz hui thi,uske baare me bhi usse pata chal jaata par ab jab RAAZ saamne aa chuka hai toh aise me SHIELD shakti ke through yaadasht ko lautane me koi harz nahi hai)



SOVEREIGN'S ki soch ko VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS dono hi samajh rahe the aur isiliye....


ASMODEUS-zyada mat socho.. jaise hi tum teeno ko tumhari shakti wapas milegi tab tumhe apne aap hi tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil jaayenge....


jaise hi ASMODEUS ki baat khatm hui,VIKRAM ne apna haath aage kiya jiske baad uske haathon se ek saath teen rays nikli...

ye teen rays FORBIDDEN FOREST ki wahi kawach thi jo RAAZ ke BARRIER lagane se pehle pichle 25 thousand years se us FOREST ka kawach bani hui thi....

dekhte hi dekhte wo shakti numa rays apne asli maalik THE THREE SOVEREIGN'S ke body me samati chali gayi jisse feel kar un teeno ki aankhen band ho gayi....

is prakriya ke douran naa sirf un teeno ko apni khoyi hui shakti wapas mil rahi thi,balki saath hi unki bhul chuki yaadasht bhi unhe wapas milti jaa rahi thi...


VIDEOUS ka janm,uski demands,ZEAL ke VIKRAM ki utpatti,uska aur pure ZEAL ka vinash aur uske baad RAAZ ki utpatti ka idea, CHOSENS ka banana aur uske baad wo khaas CHIZ jiski suraksha ke liye unhe apni shakti ka 75 pratishat bhaag aur apni yaadasht ko kurbaan karna pada,wo sab yaad aa gaya...

itna hi nahi,unke behosh hone ke baad CHOSENS me kya kya hua tha,wo sab bhi unhe pata chal gaya aur aise unhe ASMODEUS ki baat ka matlab samajh aaya jisme usne kaha tha ki unke saare sawalon ke jawab unhe unki shakti milne par apne aap pata chal jaayenge....

kuch waqt laga,is shakti ke adaan pradaan ki kriya ko pura hone me par jab aisa hua toh AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ke sharir me ek baar firse ANGELS ke kapde aa gaye...

aur aisa hote hi wo teeno ek baar firse ASMODEUS aur VIKRAM ke saamne jhukne ko hue par...


VIKRAM-jhukne ki zaroorat nahi hai doston...aapko bas wahi mila hai jo pehle se aapka tha...

aur ab jab aapko saari kahani dobara yaad aa gayi hai toh ye batane ki zaroorat nahi hai ki aapko apne diye padh aur kartavya par wapas loutna hai aur is khel ke agle padhav ka raasta banana hai...

AKSHAANT-aisa hi hoga LORD....

ASMODEUS-hume pata hai ki aap teeno apni bhaawnao ko sayyamit rakhenge par is khel ka wo chuppa hua bhaag,jo ab apko yaad aa chuka hai,usse VIDEOUS se chupana atti aawashyak hai aur isiliye....


ASMODEUS ke haathon se ek GODS BARRIER ray nikli aur aage badhte hue teeno SOVEREIGN'S ke dimag ke us hisse me fit ho gayi jisme wo jaankari thi jisse VIDEOUS se chuppana tha...

aur jab ASMODEUS ne apna kaam kar diya toh...


ASMODEUS-ab aap teeno jaa sakte hain...


ek baar un dono ke saamne jhuk aur fir ALESENDRA aur AVANTIKA ko smile dekar wo teeno gayab ho gaye....


ALESENDRA-abhi tak kisi naa kisi tarah aap dono ka is kahani me hastakshep raha hai par ab aakhir wo waqt aa hi gaya jab aap dono bhi sirf ek darshak banane waale ho....

ASMODEUS-iska bhi apna ek maza hai.....

AVANTIKA-par kya aapko ye soch kar dar nahi lagta, ghabrahat nahi hoti ki jaisa RAAZ hai,usse kahin puri baazi ulti naa padh jaaye....

aur uske upar VIDEOUS jisne itne varshon me apni shakti aur badha bhi li hai aur sthir bhi kar liya hai...

VIKRAM-dar,ghabrahat soch ke hi hisse hote hain...aur soch faisla lene se pehle li gayi cheez hai,baad ki nahi...

aur faisla toh hum pehle hi le chuke hain... toh ab darne ya ghabrane ka koi arth nahi...

VIDEOUS ne jo chaha,wo usne kar diya hai...RAAZ jo chahega,wo karega...

laskhya uska fixed hai,dekhna ye hai ki us lakshya tak pahunchne ke liye uska raasta kya hota hai..???

waise shuruat toh achi hai...


neeche ZEAL ki taraf dekhte hue VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi jiske baad sabhi ki nazar wahan chali gayi jahan is waqt paalthi maarkar baitha hua tha RAAZ....

KYUN???aayiye khud jaan lijiye...





PLANET-ZEAL


PLACE-THE CAVERN





AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA


is waqt paalthi maar baitha hua tha mai aur mere saamne hawa me rooki hui thi meri talwar...

aur lagatar baar baar ye SPELL nikal raha tha mere mooh se jiski wajah se mere sir se lekar pair tak,har jagah se ek gaadhi ray nikalkar mere SWORD me sama rahi thi....

par hai kya ye SPELL aur mere iske uccharan karne ki wajah kya hai!!!


toh baat ye hai ki mera jo pehla padaaw tha aur jo ki mera agla padhav bhi tha,THE CHOSEN'S,wahan jaane ke liye is spell ko kaam me laana zaroori tha...


AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA...


jiska matlab hai SUBMERGE MY POWERS...


aur iske asar se is waqt mere BRAIN,BLOOD, BODY ke aur khaas kar SOUL ki lagbhag puri shakti nikalkar mere SWORD me sama rahi thi....

mere aisa karne ka kaaran ye tha ki mai apni shaktiyon ke saath CHOSENS me as a SAVENT nahi ghus sakta tha...

aur wo isiliye kyunki CHOSENS me SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke jis kriya ke dwara shakti ko naapa jaata hai,mera SOUL is AMPLIFICATION ke daayre se baahar tha....

meri shakti ko naapa nahi jaa sakta tha...par fir bhi agar jigyasa purv isse measure kiya bhi jaaye toh meri SOUL ki shakti ka 1 percent bhi kisi 20 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION waale SAVENT se zyada powerful tha....

aise me apni SOUL ki power ko chuppana hi sahi tha warna agar ye halka sa bhi kaam me aa jaata toh pura hi CHOSENS hil jaane tha...

ye toh hui SOUL ki baat.....ab agar baat karen baaki teen power sources ki matlab BRAIN, BODY, aur BLOOD ki toh mere sharir ka ye bhaag bhi kuch zyada hi shaktishaali tha...

sidhi bhaasha me kahun toh mera BRAIN,meri BODY aur mera BLOOD itne AMPLIFIED the ki wo kisi bhi COMPLETE 100 % SOUL AMPLIFIED SAVENT ko bhi araam se hara sakta tha....

aur isiliye hi mai apni shaktiyon ke bohot bade bhaag ko ek ghere me,ek kawach me bhar kar apne SWORD ke andar daal raha tha kyunki ek meri sword hi aisi chiz thi jo naa sirf mere shaktiyon ke kendron ko sambhal sakti thi,balki unhe khudme chuppakar khudko aur un shaktiyon ko invisible bhi kar sakti thi....

kyunki mai iska DHAARAK tha, isiliye mujhe chhod isse koi detect bhi nahi kar sakta tha....VIDEOUS bhi nahi....

par ye kriya time taking thi aur isiliye....


AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA....


yahan mera spell uccharit karna chalu hi raha aur wahan....





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST




AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA....


RAAZ dwara ki jaa rahi enchantment ki awaaz FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar bhi gunj rahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki yahan 2 behosh nirjeev se pade shariron ke saamne khada tha WOOGER....

aur ussike dimag me gunj rahi thi ye enchantment jisse sun...


WOOGER-MASTER ne apni kriya shuru kar di jiska arth hai ki mere kaam ka waqt aa gaya....

apni baat bol WOOGER ne ek disha me dekha aur uske aisa karte hi kuch door par bane ek poudhe me halki hulchul hui aur fir....

tezi se kuch phool jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI the,wo us poudhe se toot kar udte hue aaye aur WOOGER me sama gaye aur kyunki WOOGER RAAZ ka hi hissa tha, isiliye usme samate hi wo buti RAAZ ke paas pahunch chuke the....

jab ye kaam pura hua toh WOOGER wapas un do behosh logon ki taraf jo ki ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER the,palta aur....


WOOGER-bohot khushnaseeb ho tum dono kyunki tum dono mere MASTER ke kaam aane waale ho...

kuch din ki neend aur le lo,fir aankh toh khul hi jaayegi...

haan,par kitne waqt ke liye khuli reh paayengi tum dono ki aankhen,kitna jeeven shesh bacha hai tumhara,ye toh MASTER hi decide karenge...

filhal toh ghar waapsi ka waqt ho chala hai tum dono ka...


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi uske right aur left,dono side ek ek WORLD DOOR khul gaye...

ek taraf tha CARAPACE matlab SLUNDER ka world aur dusri taraf tha ARROW jo ki ACCHUTA ki duniya thi...

aisa hone ke baad ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ka sharir hawa me uth gaya aur agle hi pal dono ka sharir apne apne WORLD ke DOOR se hota hua dusri taraf chala gaya...

dono hi doors ke dusri taraf tha wahi room jiske aalishan beds par dono Planets ke rulers jo ko ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ke parents the,unke VEGITATIVE STATE waale bodies ko rakha gaya tha...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke bodies bhi unke PARENTS ke side me jaakar sthir ho gaye aur aisa hone par WORLD DOOR band ho gaya...

wahin yahan ka apna kaam khtam hote hi WOOGER bhi gaayab ho gaya par akele nahi,apne saath le gaya WOOGER wo SHIELD jo ki FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagi hui thi.....

jiska matlab tha ki ab FORBIDDEN FOREST me bina rok tok sabhi ka swagat hai....






PLACE-INSIDE THE CONCEAL




TUMHE AISA KYUN LAGTA HAI VIDEOUS KI TUM HUME UN DONO KI NAZRON SE CHHUPA SAKTE HO....!!!!


ye baat do logon ne ek saath kahi thi jisse sun....


VIDEOUS-mujhe lagta nahi hai..mai jaanta hun ki mere FATHERS VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS tumhe tab tak nahi dekh sakte jab tak tum yahan par ho...

ye jagah meri hai..sirf meri jo ki meri shaktiyon ke kawach se bani hai...isse bheda nahi jaa sakta...

haan,agar tum chaaho tob yahan se nikalkar apne aakaon se meri shikayat kar sakte ho...

mai rokunga nahi tumhe..bas jo maine pucha hai,mere us sawal ka jawab de do...


UNKNOWN-arre,tum toh hamare LORDS ki urja se bane ho..mind read karna toh tumhare gifts me se ek hai...

padh lo dimag aur jaan lo sach....

VIDEOUS-sarcastic,haan...!!!!


tumhare dimag ke information wala bhaag blocked hai jisse filhal mai bhed nahi paa raha hun...

ye blockage tabhi hatega jab tum dono dil se aisa chahoge par mai jaanta hun ki tum dono aisa karoge nahi.

koi naa, alternative toh har kisi ka hota hai....is problem ka bhi hai....


VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi hi thi ki tabhi usse FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ke hatne ka sense hua jisse mehsoos kar uske chehre par smile aa gayi aur....


VIDEOUS-ab tum dono ki mujhe zaroorat nahi...

afsos ki IMMORTAL ho tum dono..maar mai tum dono ko sakta nahi par.....

mout se milti julti haalat me toh pahuncha hi sakta hun naa...


SARVATOMUKHA UPPARUNADHI

LOCK THE SOUL


ye spell bhi ABANDON tha.iska prayag nishedh tha...


reason...is spell ko asar me sirf isse bolne waale ki SOUL hi laa sakti hai...aur isiliye isse bolne waale ke SOUL ko bohot powerful aur negetive hona hi chahiye...

jispar bhi ye SPELL uccharit hota hai,uska SOUL uski body ke andar ek jail me kaid ho jaata hai..

ek aisi jail jisme SOUL ke saath saath us SOUL ke maalik ka sharir bhi bhale hi wo kisi bhi form me ho,nirjeev sa ho jaata hai aur abhi yahi hua....

VIDEOUS ke spell uccharit karte hi uske SOUL se hota hua ek ray saamne baithe un dono shaksh ke body se takraya aur us body ko bhedte hue wo ray unke andar gaya jiske agle hi pal un dono ka sharir dheela padh gaya aur neeche gir pade...

BEELZEBUB aur DEFENDER....










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