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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Asif khan

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI GOD NE AAKAR VIKRAM, ASMODEUS, ALESENDRA AUR AVANTIKA KE SAAMNE EK CHHUPAYA HUA RAAZ KHOLA WAHIN FINALLY KAHANI KE HERO RAAZ KA JANM HO CHUKA HAI....


AB AAGE-



UPDATE-2



PLANET-EARTH


PLACE-ALFREEN ORPHANAGE



AAHHHH.....MASTER...IT HURTS..........


apne left arm ko pakadta hua ek ladka piche hathta hua bola.....


subah ka waqt tha...orphanage ke piche ek chota sa maidan tha,jahan FLORIN kuch bacchon ko ancient fighting techniques ke daaw pech sikha rahe the.....

waise toh FLORIN 50 cross kar chuke the but aaj bhi kaafi fit the...ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki wo kisi naujawan ko bhi araam se complex de den.....

aur iska main reason tha unka apni life ko lekar strict discipline...saath hi wo kayi prachin yudh kalaon me bhi parangat the...

aisi kalayen jo ab ya toh vilupt ho chuki hai ya fir unhe aasan kar naye techniques ka ijaad kiya jaa chuka hai....

PANKRATION,KAPU KUIALUA,BOKATOR aur aise hi najaane kitne hi ancient fighting techniques me maahir hain FLORIN....

aur isiliye unka naam kaafi vikhyat bhi hai...kisi waqt FLORIN apne desh ki army me the...apne hunar ,vivek aur housle ki wajah se kaafi kam waqt me hi unhe FIELD MARSHAL ki designation mil chuki thi....

sab kuch sahi tha.....aisi koi jung nahi thi jisme unhone jeet haasil naa ki ho....

par fir aaya wo manhoos din jis din unhone apni pehli jung haari...

aur wo haar bhi aisi thi jisne unki zindagi hi palat di....unki jawan aur unke mutabik unse bhi zyada talented beti ki ek accident me mout....

aur is haadse ne unhe andar tak tod daala...

beintaha taklif se toh unki biwi MARIA bhi guzri thi par wo kehte hain naa,ki ek beti se sabse zyada pyar uske pita karte hain,wahi haal ya ye kahun ki wahi sach yahan bhi tha....

bahar se khudko sakht dikhate hue unhone apni patni ko toh sambhala par aisa koi naa tha jo is andar se tootathe insaan ko sambhal sake...

us haadse ke kuch waqt baad hi unhone army se early retirement le li.....

waise bhi wo khaandaani rahis the...kaafi business the unke jo unki patni sambhalti thi but apni eklouti bacchi ko khone ke baad MARIA ka bhi har chiz se dil uth chuka tha...

power of attorney apne friend ko dene ke baad dono ne yahan CLUJ NAPOCA me ek ORPHANAGE khola aur ab anath baccho ke gum ko khushi me badalkar apne gum ko kam karne ki koshish karte rehte hain....


khair,apne in ancient fight techniques ki knowledge ki wajah se FLORIN kaafi vikhyat hain aur wo bhi sirf CLUJ NAPOCA me hi nahi balki puri ROMANIA me....

kaafi universities se unhe in kalaon ko sikhane ke offers aate rehte the but unhone uske liye saaf mana kar rakha tha...

par phir bhi unke sheher ke kaafi youngsters unse sikhne ki request karte rehte the...

isiliye FLORIN bas shoukiya taur par waqt kaatne ke liye kuch bacchon ko in saare gur ke kuch daav pech sikhate the....

is waqt bhi FLORIN bacchon ko KAPU KUIALUA naam ki technique sikha rahe the.....


KAPU KUIALUA.....ye ek ancient Hawaiian fighting technique hai jisme apne opponent ke pressure points ko manipulate kiya jaata hai..

bone breaking kar knock down karna iska ehem hissa hota hai....

aur issise bachne ke liye fighters apne saare sharir ke baal wax kar uspar tel malte hain taaki opponents ke liye pressure points ko push karne me mushkil ho....

FLORIN ke saamne khade unke student ne bhi apni body par kaafi tel mal liya tha taaki FLORIN sir uske pressure points naa daba paayen par ye sirf uski galat fehmi saabit hui.....

attack karne ke liye jaise hi usne apna haath ghumaya, FLORIN ne badi asani se uske kalayi ko halka sa jhatka diya aur jaise hi uska haath halka sidha hua,unhone uske left arm ke pressure point ko halka daba diya jisse uske sharir me dard aur jhurjhuri ki ek leher daud gayi aur issi wajah se uske mooh se dard bhari karaah nikal gayi.....


FLORIN-what happened son????u didn't anticipated that,right?????


muskurate hue FLORIN ne pucha toh saamne khade kuch bacche jo ye sab dekh rahe the,wo has pade wahin unke saamne khada wo baccha jiske arms ko abhi abhi jhatka laga tha,wo waise hi kuch der tak apne haath ko jhatakta raha,fir jab pain kuch kam hua toh.....


(ROLE NAHI HAI INME SE KISI BHI STUDENT KA ZYADA ISILIYE NAAM NAHI LIKH RAHA)


LADKA-master,jhatka dheere bhi toh de sakte the....that was quite hard.....

FLORIN-hard???really????jis technique ko tum sikhne ki koshish kar rahe ho,usme sidhe haddiyan toothati hai...

tumhe toh bas ek halka sa jhatka hi laga hai....agar tum isse nahi jhel paaye toh aage kuch bhi sikh nahi sakoge...

kyunki fight me maarna sikhne se zyada important hota hai maar sehna sikhna...

jitna zyada sahoge,utna zyada concentrate kar paaoge...aur jitna pakka concentration,utna strong technique...

got it.......

LADKA-got it master........

BACCHON PAR ZOR AAZMANA HO GAYA HO TOH BREAKFAST KAR LEN....


abhi koi aur kuch kehta,usse pehle hi MARIA ki awaaz aayi jo FLORIN ke piche se chalti hui unki taraf aa rahi thi.....


FLORIN- 27 saal ho gaye humari shaadi ko par ab tak tum apna sense of humour tak thik nahi kar paayi...

MARIA-kya karen,sangat ka asar hai.....

FLORIN-darling humare sangat me toh logon ke sangeet nikal jaate hain.

bus ek aap hi hain jinke sur bigde hi rehte hain....

MARIA-ab kiska sense of humour kharab ho raha hai???

FLORIN-kya karen??? sangat ka asar hai.....


FLORIN ki baat par wo aur MARIA has diye...haste hue MARIA ki nazar kuch aage padi toh usne dekha ki saare bache un dono ki bat sun muskura rahe the...

yunhi nazar ghumati hui MARIA ki nazarein ek jagah atki aur.......


MARIA-ye wahan hai...aur mai usse dormitories se lekar pray hall tak dhund aayi....

FLORIN-kiski baat kar rahi ho....????

MARIA-khud hi dekh lo....aapka favourite puzzle.......


maria ne ek taraf ishara karte hue kaha aur jab FLORIN ne us taraf dekha toh wo bhi miskura diye....


FLORIN-RAAZ.........

MARIA-yup....RAAZ......

FLORIN-iska toh naam tak ek puzzle hai....RAAZ.....aisa naam bhi bhala koi rakhta hai....

MARIA-7 saal ho gaye us raat ko jab hume ye mila tha...waqt toh aage badh gaya par ye ab bhi waisa hi hai....


RAAZ ki taraf dekhte hue khoyi hui si MARIA boli....


FLORIN-umr ke saath sirf iska sharir badla hai,aur kuch nahi....

MARIA-wakayi????


MARIA ke sawal me chuppi baat ka jawab FLORIN ke pass nahi tha isiliye wo chup hi rahe...

duniya dekhi thi MARIA aur FLORIN ne...dono hi kaafi sharp mind ke dhani the par fir bhi ek saath saal ka baccha un dono ke samajh se baahar tha...

RAAZ.....ek normal hokar bhi abnormal baccha...aur wo isiliye kyunki normal hone ke koi gun isme nahi the ya fir ye kahun ki ye khud hi apni normal side chhupaye hua tha....

ek dabe rang liye saawnla aur patla sa baccha... par ajeeb ye sab nahi balki iska ATTITUDE tha....

naa hi ye kabhi padhta tha aur naahi khel kud me iski koi ruchi thi...

curricular activities se toh iska door door tak koi naata hi nahi tha....

wo toh uske paas filhal koi option tha nahi isiliye usse school jaana padta tha...

naa hi isse kisi se baat karna pasand tha aur naahi apni problems tak kisi se share karna...

par sabse ajeeb iski aankhen aur iske chere ke bhaav....

iski aankhon me hamesha ek khamoshi dikhti thi maano unhe kisi se koi lena dena hi naa ho aur wahin usme chehre par naa toh kabhi khushi ubharti thi aur naahi kabhi koi gum...

abhi kuch hi mahino pehle ki baat hai...uske hi anath ashram ke bachi ke dil me chhed tha...

waise toh chhed pehle se hi tha but doctors ne ek samay ke baad hi transplant ki salah di thi par wo waqt aata usse pehle hi wo chhed expand ho gaya jisse bacchi ki mout ho gayi....

orphanage ke saare bacche, FLORIN aur MARIA sabhi is haadse se kaafi aahat hue,roye siwaay RAAZ ke...uska chehra tab bhi waisa hi tha..bhaav rahit...

us bachi ki body ko bas kuch pal tak usne dekha aur phir ussi ped ki taraf chal pada jahan wo abhi baitha tha....

do hi thikane the uske.. pehla wo black locust tree jo unke orphanage ke aakhri chhor par tha aur dusra unke orphanage ke baahar base ek lake ka kinara...

normally wo school ke baad hi us ped ke pass jaata tha but aaj subah subah ki chala gaya tha aur isiliye hi MARIA usse andar dhund rahi thi....


FLORIN-ab late nahi ho raha!!!!


MARIA jo ek tak RAAZ ki taraf dekh rahi thi,aur saath hi uske chehre ke expressions change hote jaa rahe the,jo FLORIN ne dekh liya...

wo samajh gaye ki ghum fir kar MARIA unse 2 saal pehle ki baat phirse puchegi jo RAAZ ko dekhkar unke zehen me har baar uththi hai...

waise same sawal toh FLORIN ke man me bhi har baar uththa hai but wo zaahir nahi karte....

but RAAZ ko dekhte hi MARIA wahi sawal jiska jawab unke paas hai hi nahi,puchti ya fir sahi maayne me kaha jaaye toh discuss karne lag jaati hai isiliye FLORIN ne baat shuru hone se pehle hi ghuma diya tha....


MARIA-oh shit....mai bhi naa,is ladke ke chakkar me har baar late ho jaati hun...

baaki bacche already dining hall me baithe hain bus inhi ke chakkar me kisi ka breakfast nahi hua...

lagta hai aaj sabhi bacche school ke liye late ho jaayenge.....


ALFREEN ORPHANAGE ka study aur food rule hostel ki tarah tha...

yahan ek bada sa dining hall hai jahan saare bache saath khate bhi hain aur raat ko study bhi karte hain...


MARIA-beta,aap zara jaakar us bacche ko bula laaoge....


wahan khade ek bacche ko RAAZ ki taraf point karte hue MARIA ne kaha...

ye aur ek baat thi jo MARIA aur RAAZ ke beech thi.... MARIA zyada tar RAAZ se sidhe baat karna avoid karti thi....

ek ajeeb sa dar lagta tha usse raaz ki suni aankhon me dekh kar....

isiliye abhi bhi khud naa jaakar usne ek bachhe ko uske pass bheja tha...

but MARIA aur FLORIN ab bhi wahin khade the...reason....bulane par bhi agar RAAZ MARIA aur FLORIN ko wahan nahi dekhta toh wo wahan se nahi hathta...school jaana jo nahi pasand tha sir ko....

khair,baccha bhaagta hua RAAZ ki taraf gaya aur.....


BACCHA-hey RAAZ....MARIA MA'AM IS CALLING YOU.....


us baache ki baat sun jab RAAZ palta toh dekha ki MARIA aur FLORIN usse hi dekh rahe hain....

bina kuch kahe wo chup chaap utha aur ORPHANAGE ki building ki taraf chal pada.....

wahin apni taraf usse aata dekh MARIA ke mooh se har baar waala sawal ek baar fir se nikal hi gaya....


MARIA-kya wakayi isne wo sab kiya hoga?????


FLORIN jo abhi RAAZ ki taraf dekh rahe the, MARIA ke sawal ko sunkar unhone kuch kaha toh nahi bas ek lambi saans chhodi maano keh rahe ho ki dimag toh haan kehta hai but dil nahi maanta...


RAAZ ki taraf dekh jo ki unki taraf hi aa raha tha,dono hi do saal piche chale gaye....



2 YEARS BACK:-



HI BETA.....HOW ARE YOU????


ek aadmi aur ek aurat jo is samay ALFREEN ORPHANAGE ke office me baithe hue the,unhone RAAZ ko greet kiya but wahi hua jo hona tha...

RAAZ ne un dono ko bas ek pal ke liye dekha,aur fir nazaren hata FLORIN aur MARIA ki taraf dekhne laga....


FLORIN-sorry but wo kya hai naa,ye jaldi se kisi se baat nahi karta....

AADMI-u don't have to say sorry...waise bhi acha hi hai jo ye reserve hai....har kisi se baat karna bhi toh sahi nahi....


us aadmi ki baat sun pehle toh MARIA aur FLORIN muskuraye aur fir....


FLORIN-RAAZ.....they are mr & mrs GLOE. they are your new foster parents...ye tumhe adobt karna chahte hain...!!!

RAAZ-mera bag packed hi hai...mai baahar hun..jab bhi jaana ho,bahar aa jaayiyega....


short but sore.....itna hi nikla RAAZ ke mooh se aur fir bina kisi ka reaction dekhe wo baahar nikal gaya.....


wahi RAAZ ki baat kisi ko samajh me aaye usse pehle hi wo baahar nikal gaya tha....

MARIA-sorry mr and mrs GLOE... he's kinda weird kiddo.....

MRS GLOE-bacche toh thode weird hote hi hain... nothing to be sorry about..and yes we are sure on adopting him...

you guyz dont have ti worry about a thing..hum uska acche se khayal rakhenge....

FLORIN-oh we are quite sure about that...aur waise bhi, RAAZ itne ache ghar me jaa raha hai,ye dekhkar hi hum kaafi khush hain...


FLORIN ki baat sun mr and mrs GLOE ke chehre par ek smile aa gayi....


mr and mrs GLOE.....kaafi malls, shopping complexes hai inke pure ROMANIA me....

donations dene ke liye bhi ye Dono kaafi mashhoor hain..but ek loop hole hai......

donations wagairah ye sirf show off ke liye karte hain...lime light ka nasha hai inhe..jo bhi karte hain,dikhawe ke liye karte hain...

yahan tak ki aaj jo ye adoption ke liye aaye hain,ye bhi ek dikhawa hi hai....

pichle mahine hi inhone local news channel ko kaha tha ki waise toh inka khud ka ek baccha hai,but fir bhi ye ek bacche ko adopt karna chahte hain...

aur issi bich inhe inke apne bacche ne RAAZ ke baare me bataya,jo ussi ke school me 1st standerd me tha but apne weird behaviour ki wajah se usse sab hi jaante the....

jab mr and mrs GLOE ke bacche ne unhe bataya ki RAAZ ek anath hai aur kaise sabko RAAZ ek burden lagta toh is soch ke ulat mr and mrs GLOE ko ye ek opportunity lagi,ek baar fir se khudko mahaan dikhane ki......

dono ne hi RAAZ ko adopt karne ki sochi..ye baat unke bacche ko bilkul achi nahi lagi but Mr and Mrs GLOE ne ispar itna dhyan nahi diya and here they are to adopt RAAZ....

formalities pura kar jab sab baahar aaye toh unhone dekha ki RAAZ apna bag pakde khada hai...


MR GLOE-lao beta,bag mujhe de do....


but RAAZ bina react kiya baahar ki taraf nikal gaye...

is baar uski harkat mr and Mrs GLOE ko khatki but un dono ne show nahi kiya....


MR GLOE-ok then,we will take a leave....


FLORIN aur MARIA se haath mila wo dono bhi RAAZ ke piche piche chal diye...

Mr and Mrs GLOE ne pehle hi apne sources ke through media me ye khabar leak karwa di thi ki apne promise ko pura karte hue unhone ek bacche ko godh le liya hai...

aur jaise hi unki car unke ghar ke gate ke saamne pahunchi toh mr and mrs GLOE car se utar kar baahar aaye aur pehle se wahan moujud kuch media ke bando se interact kiya....


MR GLOE-hey guyzz. what's up???

MEDIA-so as promised,u have adopted....

MRS GLOE- well you know us...we never back down from our words... specially when the cause is so divine...

MEDIA-can we see the kid....

MR GLOE-ofcourse you can... RAAZ son... come out....


RAAZ ji chupchaap aankhen band kiya andar baitha hua tha, mr GLOE ki awaaz sun car se baahar aaya....

aur aisa hote hi....


MEDIA-RAAZ.....unique name...by the way how are you feeling????must be feeling proud to be called the son of such nice people....

what do u say about your new mom and dad???


us media ke bande ne RAAZ pe ek saath kayi sawal daag diye..wahin media waale ke sawal ko sun mr GLOE ko laga ki RAAZ kuch kehne waala nahi isiliye wo kuch kehne waale hi the ki tabhi unhe ek jhatka laga...

sirf unhe hi nahi balk unki patni ko bhi...reason....

media ke us bande ke sawal par RAAZ ke honth hile aur unme se sirf do words nikle...


RAAZ-FAKE MORONS.....


itna bol RAAZ paidal hi gate se hota hua andar ki taraf chal pada...

aur piche chhod gaya shock me khade media waale aur unse bhi zyada shocked aur confused mr and Mrs GLOE......

MR GLOE-will u excuse us???


ye bol bina reactions dekhe wo dono car me baith gaye aur agle hi pal car gate ke andar jaa chuki thi....

wahin ghar andar pahunch RAAZ hall me rakhe sofe par jaakar baith gaya....

kuch der baad mr and Mrs GLOE bhi wahan pahunche..aur jaise hi un dono ne RAAZ ko dekha toh unhe ghussa aa gaya....

MR GLOE ghusse se uski taraf badhe hi the ki


MRS GLOE-araam se..abhi abhi isse adopt kiya hai....so take it easy....

mrs GLOE ki baat sun khudko thoda shaant kar wo RAAZ ke saamne pahunche aur....

MR GLOE-what was that RAAZ???is that u say something about your parents....


RAAZ-SACH KISI BHI RISHTE SE BADA HOTA HAI.........


bas itna hi nikla RAAZ ke mooh se...side corner me ek room khula hua tha,jiske andar ghar ki maid saaf safayi kar rahi thi..

assuming ki ye ussika room hai, RAAZ us taraf chal pada....

wahin Mr and Mrs GLOE toh RAAZ ke jawab ko sunkar ki shocked ho gaye the...

RAAZ kab utha aur kab us room ki taraf chal pada,unhe is baat ka hosh hi nahi raha aur shayad aage bhi naa rehta par achanak....


BHAAADDDDD.............


jis room me RAAZ ghussa tha,us room ka darwaza zor ki awaaz se khula aur RAAZ chitakte hue baahar aakar gira....

awaaz sun Mr and Mrs GLOE apne trance se baahar aaye aur jab unhone awaaz ki taraf dekha toh paaya ki RAAZ niche floor par gira hua hai aur saamne ke room se ghusse me unka beta RAAZ ki taraf aa raha hai....

Mr and Mrs GLOE turant RAAZ ki taraf lapke par usse pehle hi unka beta RAAZ tak pahunch chuka tha aur saath hi usse utha kar.....

CHATAAKKK..CHATAAKK....do thappad bhi wo RAAZ ko laga chuka tha.....


MRS GLOE-stop it RAVEN.....ye kya harkat hai????

RAVEN-mom u know i dont like this scumbag....fir bhi aapne isse adopt kiya...aur saale ki himmat toh dekho..ye mujhse bina puche mere hi room me ghus gaya....

MRS GLOE-arre toh usse pata nahi tha..tum araam se bhi toh usse baahar bhej sakte the....

RAVEN-oh cut the crap mom....i cant stand his ugly face....isse toh mai apna servant bhi naa rakhun aur aap isse mera bhai banana chahte ho....

i will not allow this... aap logon ko jo karna hai karo bas isse mujhse door rakho...

aur tu,dobara mujhe apni shakal mat dikhana...aur school me kisi ko agar tune bataya ki tujhe mere mom dad ne adopt kiya hai toh tere liya accha nahi hoga...


ye bol RAVEN ne RAAZ ko ek ghusse waala look diya aur wapas apne room chala gaya...

is beech Mr GLOE chup hi rahe..reason....kuch der pehle RAAZ ke mooh se nikli baatein..

pehli media waalon ke saamne aur dusri hall me....unhe laga ki jo RAVEN ne kiya wo RAAZ ke liye ek sabak hai aur ab ainda se wo aisa kuch bhi nahi karega....

wahin in sab ke beech abhi abhi hue haadse ka shikar RAAZ ab bhi yunhi shaant khada tha...without expression.....


MRS GLOE-jo hua uske liye sorry RAAZ... par tumhe hi yun humse bina puche us room me nahi ghusna tha..tumhara room upar hai... maid tumhe wo dikha degi...


Mrs GLOE ne ek maid ko bulakar usse RAAZ ko uska room lejaane ke liye kaha...

RAAZ maid ke piche piche first floor ki taraf chal pada..wahin RAAZ ke jaane ke baad.....


MRS GLOE-tumne kuch nahi kaha????

MR GLOE-kya kahun???infact kyun kahun???he deserved what he got...ab kuch utla sidha bolne se pehle hazar baar sochega....

MRS GLOE-u r right.....khair,jo hua so hua..waise tumhe yaad hai naa ki aaj shaam hume ek party me jaana hai...

MR GLOE-yaad hai..laga tha is RAAZ ko saath le chalenge but ab nahi....hum dono hi chalte hain...

MRS GLOE-hmm.yahi thik rahega...chalo.. let's freshen up.....


baat khatm kar dono apne room ki taraf chal pade....



EVENING TIME:-


RAVEN........


party ke liye ready hokar mr and mrs GLOE apne room se nikle aur nikalte hi Mrs GLOE ne apne bete ko awaaz lagayi....


RAVEN-yes mom....

MRS GLOE-beta are you sure tum party me nahi jaaoge....

RAVEN-no mom..mera mood nahi hai...

MRS GLOE-all right then.time se dinner kar lena and most importantly RAAZ pe aur haath mat uthana...

RAVEN-mom,i don't give a shit about him....usse keh do ki mere aas paas dikhayi bhi naa de or else I'll loose my control....

MRS GLOE-dont worry..he will not bother u...but tum khudse usse pinch mat karna... okay???

RAVEN-all right mom...

MRS GLOE-good boy..bye beta...

RAVEN-buy mom..buy dad....


RAVEN apne room ki taraf chal diya wahin uske mom dad party ke liye nikal gaye.....



2 HOURS LATER:-


knock knock.........


RAVEN ke door par knock hua aur jaise hi usne darwaza khola....


RAVEN-tu......................


MRS GLOE-hello...WHATTTT?????we are coming.....


Mrs GLOE jo party me kuch ladies ke saath baat kar rahi thi....achanak unka mobile baja aur jaise hi unhone usse pick kiya....

saamne se kuch kaha gaya jisse sun unke hosh hi ud gaye... phone kaat wo turant apne husband ke pas pahunchi aur unke kaan me kuch kaha jisse sun unki bhi same haalat ho gayi.....

sabko kuch bahana kar wo dono turant party se nikle aur apni car me baith ghar ki taraf nikal pade.....

wahin kuch sochkar Mr GLOE ne raaste me hi FLORIN aur MARIA ko bhi apne ghar par bula liya.....

kuch hi der me mr and Mrs GLOE apne ghar pahunch chuke the....

car se utar dono bhaagte hue se hall me enter hue aur wahan pahunchte hi jo scene tha,usse dekh un dono ki haalat kharab ho gayi....

unse kuch hi door unka beta RAVEN zameen par ulta pada hua tadap raha tha.. dono haath halke ghume hue the jisse pata chal raha tha ki uske dono haath tut chuke hain...

uske saamne paalthi maarkar RAAZ baitha hua tha aur ghar ke naukar chupchaap dusri taraf khade the...

mr and Mrs GLOE ko dekh unme se ek aage aayi aur....

MAID-this boy did it..we didn't see the whole thing but i saw this boy holding RAVEN sir's hand.


unhi me se ek jisne Mrs GLOE ko call kiya tha usne ye kaha.

apne bete ki haalat dekh jahan ek taraf mrs GLOE ke aansu nikal gaye wahin Mr GLOE ghusse se bhar gaye....

wo tezi se RAAZ ki taraf badhe...mr GLOE ko apne paas aata dekh kar RAAZ bhi uth gaya...

pehle toh Mr GLOE ne RAAZ ko maarne ka socha par tabhi unhe yaad aaya ki unhone FLORIN aur MARIA ko bulaya hai isiliye apne ghusse aur jabde ko sakhti se dabate hue wo bas itna bole...

MR GLOE-did u do this???

RAAZ-may be..........

puchna toh mr GLOE ye chahte the ki RAAZ ne akhir ye kiya kaise???umr me aur pysically RAVEN RAAZ se bohot zyada bada aur taakatwar tha...

fir ye sab kaise possible hai???

par unhone apne saare sawaalon ko side rakh bas itna hi pucha..


MR GLOE-KYUN?????

RAAZ-KARM......INSAAN SABSE BHAAG SAKTA HAI PAR APNE KARM SE NAHI.....


jahan ek taraf Mrs GLOE apne bacche jo ki ab tak dard se behosh ho chuka tha,uske paas baithi ro rahi thi,wahi RAAZ ke jawab ko sun Mr GLOE ek baar fir chownke....

abhi wo kuch kehte ki usse pehle hi


FLORIN-what happened here???


MARIA aur FLORIN wahan jaise hi pahunche toh wahan ki haalat dekh chownk gaye....

wahin FLORIN ki awaaz sun Mr GLOE palte aur unhe dekh unke paas gaye aur fir jo kuch unhe bataya gaya tha,wo unhe bataya jisse sun FLORIN aur MARIA ka sar bhi ghum gaya...


FLORIN-hows this even possible???i mean RAAZ can't do it....

MR GLOE-thats what i also thought...but it's true..our maids have seen it...


mr GLOE ki baat sun aakhon me avishwas liye FLORIN aur MARIA ek dusre ko dekhne lage....


MR GLOE-listen...maine aap dono isiliye bulaya hai kyunki we cant keep RAAZ...jo hua hai usse badal toh nahi sakte but ek foster child ke liye we cant risk our own kid...

i hope u both understand.....aap isse apne saath le jaaiye.. paper work hum baad me kar lenge...


FLORIN aur MARIA toh ab bhi jo hua usse samajhne ki koshish me lage the....bina Mr GLOE ko koi jawab diye wo dono sidhe RAAZ ke saamne jaakar khade ho gaye aur...

FLORIN-did u do it????

RAAZ-kya aap mujhe wapas orphanage me lenge ya mai kahin aur chala jaaun..


bina jawab diye RAAZ ne sawal kiya jisse sun wo dono ek baar phirse ek dusre ko dekhne lage...


MRS GLOE-isse yahan se le jaao or else i will kill him...


ghusse se bhari MRS GLOE ne ye baat kahi jisse sun....


FLORIN-chalo RAAZ.....

MR GLOE-mai koi legal action nahi le raha hun...but agar dobara mere bete ko iski wajah se koi taklif hui toh mai isse chhodunga nahi....

MARIA-aisa kuch nahi hoga...aur jo hua we are really sorry about that...


itna bol MARIA, FLORIN aur RAAZ wahan se nikal gaye....aur unke piche piche mr and Mrs GLOE apne behosh bete ko car me daal hospital ki taraf nikal gaye....



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is incident ki sacchayi jaanane ke liye RAAZ se kayi baar MARIA aur FLORIN ne sawal kiya but wo chup hi rehta....

yahi sab khade khade FLORIN aur MARIA soch rahe the aur jab un khayalon se baahar aaye toh unhone dekha ki RAAZ kabka ORPHANAGE ke andar jaa chuka hai....ek dusre ko ek baar dekh wo dono bhi andar ki taraf chal pade....

breakfast ke baad sabhi bacchon ke saath ready hokar RAAZ school ki taraf chal pada.....

school orphanage se kuch 500 mitres ki doori par hi tha isiliye saare bacche orphanage ke do guards ke saath paidal hi chale jaate the....

RAAZ ko kisi ke saath chalna bhi pasand nahi tha isiliye wo piche waale guard ke bhi piche chalta tha.....

guards bhi RAAZ ki aadat jaante the...aur kyunki wo jagah safe thi isiliye guard bhi RAAZ ko yun akele aane par bhi kuch nahi kehte the...

khair,sir niche karkar chalte hue RAAZ ke pair achanak thithke...

usne apne right ki taraf dekha toh paaya ki ek road ke side par barf se ghiri bench par ek aadmi baitha hua hai...

dekhne se hi pata chal raha tha ki uski haalat kuch thik nahi hai aur wo kaafi bhuka hai...

RAAZ ne apna bag utara aur uski andar ki chain ko khol usme haath daala..

aur jab haath baahar aaya toh usme 59 IEU the..(romania currency)

orphanage ke saare baccho ko MARIA aur FLORIN kuch pocket money bhi dete the....

apne hisse ke pure paise RAAZ jama kiya karta tha....

khair,paise pakad wo us aadmi ke paas chala gaya aur...


RAAZ-keep it...


ye bol RAAZ ne uske haath me wo 59 ieu pakdaaye aur aage badh gaya...


AADMI-thank you son...may GOD BLESS YOU....


us aadmi ki baat sun aage badh chuka RAAZ ruka,palta aur.....


RAAZ-this is not my money...aur jinka ye Paisa hai,unki sabse badi blessing,unki beti ab nahi rahi....that means even they aren't blessed...

BLESSING sirf ek shabd hai,aur kuch nahi....


bina koi bhaav ke apni baat keh RAAZ aage badh gaya aur chhod gaya piche us aadmi ko is soch ke saath ki ek 7 saal ka bacha kya kuch keh gaya.....




PLACE- HEAVEN


ADBHUDH......


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ke mooh se ye baat ek saath nikli....

FLORIN aur MARIA 2 saal pehle ghati ghatna ke baare me jab soch rahe the, VIKRAM, ASMODEUS, ALESENDRA aur AVANTIKA bhi us waqt ussi pal ko dobara dekh rahe the...

us waqt bhi VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ke mookh par ek smile thi aur jab RAAZ ne us bhooke aadmi ko paise diye,tab wo muskaan aur gehri ho gayi....

wahin un dono ki patniyon ke chehre par lagatar tanaav hi dikh raha tha...

aur jab un dono ne dekha ki VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ab bhi muskura rahe hain toh.....


AVANTIKA- RAAZ ki ugrata ko ek baar firse dekhne ke baad bhi aap dono muskura rahe hain aur aashirwaad jaise mahatvapurn bhaav ko usne nirarthak kaha,uspar aap dono adbhudh keh rahe hain....!!!!!

VIKRAM-iske alawa hum kar bhi kya sakte hain....!!!!

ALESENDRA-sawal toh ye hai ki aap dono aakhir karna chahte kya hain???

ASMODEUS-hume jo karna tha,hum pehle hi kar chuke hain..ab aap dono ki hi tarah hum bhi sirf darshak maatra hain....

AVANTIKA- RAAZ ke badalte bhaavon se aap dono vichlit nahi hote....

VIKRAM/ASMODEUS-ROSHNI AUR ANDHERA DONO KA HONA ANIVARYA HAI......BINA EK KE DUSRE KA BHI KOI MAHATVA NAHI.....

DAR KABHI KABHI DONO SE HI LAGTA HAI...PAR US DAR KO MITANE KE LIYE YE DONO APNA ROOP KABHI NAHI BADALTE...

SOCHO AGAR INHONE KHUD KO BADLA TOH KYA HOGA....???SARVANASH.....

thik waise hi jo bhi hona hai,wo toh hoga hi...par in sab me RAAZ ka jaisa dil karega,wo waisa hi banega....


KABHI ANGEL,KABHI DEVIL.....








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KYA MAI YAHAN BAITH SAKTA HUN?????

shaam ka waqt tha or hamesha ki tarah mai orphanage ke baahar jheel ke kinare baitha hua tha...

mujhe yahan aaye kuch hi der hua tha ki tabhi mere piche se ek awaaz aayi jo ki FLORIN ki thi,jisse sun maine unhe ek baar palat kar dekha par fir wapas saamne ki taraf dekhne laga.....

aage bina aur kuch kahe FLORIN mere baaju me baith gaye....kuch der tak saamne dekhte rehne ke baad.....


FLORIN-RAAZ....kal se tumhare board exams hain....fir bhi tum yahan ho...!!!!

tumhe toh continuously padhna chahiye naa!!!!

MAI-usse kya hoga????

FLORIN-usse kya hoga matlab????tum paas ho jaaoge....

MAI-sawal toh ab bhi wahi hai...usse kya hoga???

FLORIN-beta hum jis duniya me rehte hain,wahan survive karne ke liye hume kuch na kuch karna padta hai...

aur iske liye sabse aasaan aur sahi tarika education hota hai....

MAI-ye niyam bhi toh insaano ne hi banaye hain....jisse badla bhi jaa sakta hai....

meri baat aun FLORIN muskura uthe aur...


FLORIN-bilkul...but kuch niyam ek waqt ke baad system me convert ho jaate hain...

education bhi ab koi niyam nahi balki ek system ban chuka hai..ek strong system....

aur kisi bhi system ko badalne ya unme changes laane ke liye pehle us system ke top par pahunchna padta hai...

par top me pahunchne ke liye padhna bohot zaroori hai....

RAAZ-kiske liye kya zaroori hai,ye kaun tay karega????


mere sawal par FLORIN ne kuch nahi kaha bas mujhe dekhte rahe...


RAAZ-usse kya hoga???mere is sawal ko aap samajh hi nahi paaye...

education ke faayde....iska answer toh saarvajanik hai....public hai...par maine jo pucha wo personal hai....

sabke saath include kar aapne mujhe salah di,par DNA ki hi tarah soch bhi alag alag hoti hai...

jin faaydon ko aapne ginaya,mujhe wo sab chahiye hi nahi....

FLORIN-toh fir tum life me karoge kya???tum toh koi sports ya fir kisi aur activity me bhi interest nahi dikhate...

aise toh tum apni life waste kar doge...

MAI-ALFREEN........


mere mooh se ye naam sun FLORIN chownke.....


FLORIN-kya kaha???

MAI-aapki beti.. ALFREEN.....aksar aap apne students se kehte rehte hain ki aapki beti aapse bhi talented thi..har chiz me sabse aage thi..

apne age ke sabhi bacchon se wo bohot zyada shaarp thi.....

FLORIN-toh???

MAI-toh ye ki kya haasil hua usse uske talent se....apni jaan tak toh nahi bacha paayi aapki beti....

FLORIN-RAAZZZZZZ..................


ghusse ke maare kaamp se uthe the FLORIN mera naam lete lete...

apni moothi ko zor se bheenche aankhon me dher saara ghussa liye meri taraf dekh rahe the wo....


MAI-daily dhyan me baiththe hai naa aap....isse khudke jasbaaton par,krodh par kaabu rehta hai,yahi shiksha dete hai naa aap apne students ko...

par kya faayda hua....ek simple se sach tak ko toh handle nahi kar paaye aap...


meri baat sun dheere dheere shaant hone lage FLORIN.....


MAI-kisi bhi cheez me interest naa dikhakar mujhe nuksaan ho raha hai ya fir zaroorat se zyada chizon me interest dikhakar aapki beti ka nuksaan hua aur ab aapka ho raha hai...????

FLORIN-18 saal ki umr tak tum yahan ho...uske baad kya???

agar tum acche se padhe,ya fir kisi aur activity me a+ laaye tabhi tumhe scholarship milegi warna tumhe orphanage chhodkar jaana hoga....tab kya karoge???

MAI-orphanage aapka hai...aap abhi bhi bound nahi hain mujhe rakhne ke liye....chaahe toh mai abhi hi usse chhod dunga....

other than that,you dont have to worry about a thing....


apni baat keh mai wapas ektak saamne dekhne laga....

wahi FLORIN bhi kuch der tak ektak mujhe dekhte rahe fir.....

FLORIN-dinner time se pehle aajana...


itna keh chup chaap uthkar FLORIN chale gaye...

pehli baar FLORIN aur mere beech itni der tak baat hui aur wo bhi aisi ki shayad aaj ke baad wo dobara mujhse kuch kahen hi nahi.....


MARIA-itni der kaise lagadi????

FLORIN-haan,kya????


RAAZ se jo baat hui,unhi baaton me gum FLORIN apne ghar jo ki orphanage ke boundry ke andar hi tha,enter hue jahan saamne hi MARIA baithi hui thi aur unhiki awaaz se FLORIN present me wapas aaye.....

wahin MARIA ne bhi FLORIN ke chehre ko jaise padh liya tha isiliye...


MARIA-what happened FLORIN????
kis soch me gum ho....

FLORIN-kuch nahi..wo bas aise hi...

MARIA- FLORIN????


MARIA ne FLORIN ka naam kuch aise liya maano keh rahi ho ki baat ko taalo mat...


ek lambi saans chhodte hue FLORIN MARIA ko RAAZ ke saath hui baat batate chale gaye jisse sun MARIA ke chehre par kayi expressions aane jaane lage...

khaaskar apni beti ke baare me RAAZ ki kahi baat sunkar pehle toh unhe ghussa aaya but fir aage ki baatein sunkar wo bhi FLORIN ki hi tarah shant ho gayi...


MARIA-ye baccha kya hume kabhi samajh aayega bhi yaa nahi....

FLORIN-isse important sawal ye hai ki iske future ka kya hoga???

agar iska ATTITUDE aisa hi raha toh ye life me kuch nahi kar paayega....

MARIA-ab isme hum kar bhi kya sakte hain...!!!ek proper guidence hi thi jo hum usse de sakte the but wo sune tab naa....

FLORIN-sunta wo sab hai,bas karta wahi hai jo usse sahi lagta hai....

khair chhodo,ye ladka ek aisi paheli hai,jiske baare me jitna sochenge,utna uljhenge...

mai jaakar orphanage ka ek chakkar lagakar aata hun....

MARIA-mai bhi chalti hun...


MARIA aur FLORIN orphanage ki taraf chal pade....

orphanage kaafi bada tha...jisme kaafi saare sections the...har umar ke bacchon ke rehne ke liye aur unke class ke hisab se study related materials alag alag the....

nursery se kg two tak ki dormitory alag thi...fir class 1 se class 8th tak ke liye ek alag section tha...9th to 12th tak ke bacchon ke liye thode wide area me rooms bane the....

bacchon ke dekhbhaal ke kiye orphanage me kaafi staaf the..unsab se milkar din bhar ki reports lete hue MARIA aur FLORIN aage badh rahe the....

junior aur sub Junior sections se hote hue high school section ki taraf dono badh chale...

abhi wo dono us section se guzar hi rahe the ki.....


YAAR EK BAAT SAMAJH NAHI AATI...ITNI THANDI JAGAH PAR PAIDA HONE KE BAAD BHI TU ITNA BLACK KYUN HAI????


ye ek bacche ki awaaz thi jo paas ke ek room se aa rahi thi...aur uski baaton ko sunkar MARIA aur FLORIN samajh gaye ki wo ladka RAAZ ki baat kar raha hai kyunki ek RAAZ ki hai jiska complexion dark tha....

MARIA ko ye acha nahi laga aur wo us room me jaane ko hui par FLORIN ne rok diya....

wo RAAZ ka reaction sunana chahte the....

wahin ander pehle waale ladke ki baat ka RAAZ se koi jawab nahi aaya toh....


2nd LADKA-arre yaar tu bhi naa kuch bhi bolta hai...kaale hone naa hone ka thandi jagah se kya lena dena...

ho sakta hai ki iske maa baap nigro ho isiliye ye bhi waisa hi nikla...


4,5 ladkon ka group tha andar jo us ladke ki baat sun has diye wahin mai jo apne bed par baitha tha,ab bhi chup hi tha...

par us dusre ladke ki baat sunane ke baad MARIA ruki nahi aur room me enter hui aur unke piche piche aaye FLORIN....

aur jaise hi un haste hue ladkon ki nazar FLORIN aur MARIA par padi,unki hasi rook gayi par mai waise hi chupchaap baitha hua tha...


MARIA-ye toh guess kar liya tumne ki RAAZ ke mom dad nigro ho sakte hain but khudka kya???

apne mom dad ke baare me kya khayal hai tum sabke????kaise honge wo mom dad jinke genes se tum jaise bacche nikle....


MARIA ki baat sun sabhi ladkon ke sir jhuk gaye...


MARIA-kya hua,bura laga!!!!jaise tumhe bura lagta hai,dusron ko bhi toh lagta hai naa...

yahan par tum sab ek jaise hi ho...tumhe nahi lagta ki tum sabme unity honi chahiye...yun kisika mazak udaakar kya saabit hoga???

dobara aisa kuch kabhi bhi nahi hona chahiye...is that understood????

SAB-yes ma'am....

MARIA-then say sorry to RAAZ...

SAB-sorry RAAZ....

MAI-sorry for what???sach agar negetive ho toh kya wo jhuth me badal jaata hai...

ab mai hun kaala aur tum sabne wahi kaha....isme sorry kisliye....

mere batch mates ke sir toh abhi bhi jhuke hue hi the but meri baat dun MARIA aur FLORIN shocked ho gaye....


FLORIN-but RAAZ,what about the statement on your parents..???kya wo sunkar bhi tumhe bura nahi laga....

RAAZ-jo hain hi nahi,unke liye kya bura lagna....


ye bol mai room se bahar nikal gaya wahin MARIA aur FLORIN bhi kuch der tak ek dusre ko dekh wahan se nikal gaye.....




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HOLY CRAP....... GUYZZZZ...RUN..........




dhadakte dil aur nervous expressions ke saath 4 log tezi se bhaag rahe the....

DHAKKK...DHAKKK...DHAKKK....

ye awaaz un charon ke kuch piche se aa rahi thi jo kisike bhaagne ki thi...un chaaron ke bhaagne se itni awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi,jitni ki unke piche bhaagne waale se aa rahi thi....


GUYZZZ FASTER.......



jo sabse aage tha,usne bina piche mude zor se chillakar kaha....

un chaaron me se 3 ladke the aur ek ladki....aur jo un chaaron ke piche tha wo tha ek full grown GRIZZLY BEAR.....


GRIZZLY BEAR.....considered as the biggest land mammal living today... bohot hi dangerous....

un chaaron me se ek ladka jo thoda chubby tha aur isiliye sabse piche tha,uske kaano me us GRIZZLY BEAR ke panjo ki awaaz thodi tez aane lagi...

dar ke maare usne bhaagte hue hi ek baar palat kar dekha toh uske pran hi sukh gaye...

wo GRIZZLY BEAR usse bas 40 feet
hi door tha...or tabhi...


AHHHH.....


nervousness me uske pair twist hue aur wo niche gir gaya...

uske girte hi uske aage bhaagte saathi bhi palte aur apne friend ko girte dekh uska naam chillate hue rook gaye....

wahi girne ke baad wo ladka turant ghuma aur saamne dekh uska gala hi sukh gaya...

wo GRIZZLY BEAR usse bas 15 feet hi door tha...

us ladke ko apni mout saaf dikhne lagi....upar waale ka naam lekar usne apni aankhen band kar li..

wahin uske doston bhi us GRIZZLY BEAR ko dekhkar jad se ho gaye the..unhe bhi apne friend ki mout dikhne lagi thi....

isse bich wo GRIZZLY BEAR us gire ladke ke sir ke paas pahunch chuka tha...

bhaagte hue hi usne apna bada sa mooh khol liya tha...aur jaise hi us GRIZZLY BEAR ka mooh us ladke ke paas pahuncha....


SWOOPPPPP...SWOOPPPP..........


do arrow tezi se us ladke ke kaano ke baazu se hote hue nikle aur sidhe jaakar us GRIZZLY BEAR ke aankhon me ghus gaye....

un arrows ka force itna zyada tha ki wo daityakaar BEAR piche ki taraf palat gaya....

ek second ke 100 part me hi scene change ho chuka tha....jahan ek pal pehle wo ladka marne waala tha wahin ab uska shikari wo BEAR mar chuka tha...

wo ladka jo niche gira hua tha,jab kuch pal nikalne ke baad bhi usse kuch nahi hua toh usne apni aakhen kholi aur khudko safe dekh usse shock laga par usse bada jhatka usse apne saamne dekh laga jahan wo GRIZZLY BEAR mara pada tha...

us bande se zyada shocked uske wo 3 dost the jo aakhen faade abhi ke situation ko samajhne me lage the...

jab ye sab ho raha tha tab wo teeno sab kuch dekh rahe the but kab arrows aaye,kab us BEAR ko lage aur kab wo mar gaya,unme se kisi ne bhi nahi dekha tha ya fir ye kahun,dekh nahi paaya tha......

wahin wo ladka jo niche zamin par tha,utha aur....


1ladka-guyzzz..... come,see this...its unbelievable........


mare hue GRIZZLY BEAR ke pass jakar usne jab awaaz lagai tab kahin jaakar uske teeno friends apne trance se baahar aaye aur turant unke friend ke taraf lapke....

aur jaise hi wo teeno wahan pahunche....


LADKI-holy shit.....this is insane man.....


baakiyon ka reaction bhi us ladki ki hi tarah tha...reason......jo arrows us BEAR ke aankhon me lage the,wo usse bhed aar paar ho chuke the..

un chaaron ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki itna fiercely koi kaise arrow chala sakta hai...

wo chaaron ye soch hi rahe the ki tabhi.....


U GUYZ ARE SERIOUSLY DUMB...ABHI BHI YAHIN HO....KYA KISI DUSRE JAANWAR KA WAIT KAR RAHE HO KI WO AAYE AUR TUMHARA DINNER KARE....


ye awaaz un chaaron ke piche se aayi jisse sun wo chaaron shocked ho gaye.... shock thoda zyada tha..reason....awaaz ek ladki ki thi jo chalte hue unke paas aa rahi thi....

kandhe me kuch arrows, hath me ek bow tha,jisse pata chal raha tha ki ussine saamne pade us GRIZZLY BEAR ko mara hai....

jaise jaise wo ladki paas aa rahi thi,waise waise unke chehre ke expressions change hote jaa rahe the...

aur jaise hi wo ladki unke saamne aakar ruki,ek taraf un chaaron me jo ladki thi,wo ye dekhkar shocked ho gayi ki ek 15,16 saal ki ladki jo har taraf se maasoom si dikh rahi thi,usne itna khatarnaak arrow chalaya aur wo bhi raat me wahin teeno ladke toh us ladki ki khubsurti me hi kho chuke the...

uski khubsurti shabdon me bayan karne se kahin upar thi....nain naksh itne tikhe ki pathar bhi pighal jaaye....

din lagbhag dhal hi chuka tha..suraj ki aakhri laalima hi bas bachi thi aur ab us ladki ko dekh aisa lag raha tha ki maano bas usse hi aakhri baar dekhne ke kiye roshni bachi hui thi....

doodh sa rang,gol chehra,chehre par ek ajeeb si shanti liye wo un chaaron ko dekh rahi thi....

jungle me use hone waale flexible kapde pehen rakha tha usne...kuch der tak jab unme se kisine kuch nahi kaha toh...

LADKI-ghurna ho gaya ho toh niklo yahan se.... bohot se jaanwar hai is jagah par..mai nahi chahti ki tumhare chakkar me un maasumo ko taklif ho...


bas is awaaz ki hi kami thi....bina maare hi maar diya tha uski awaaz ne un teen ladko ko....


LADKI 1-excuse me....maasum aur ye jaanwar...ye hume maarne aaya tha,hum isse nahi aur tum iske jaiso ko maasum keh rahi ho....


apni friend ki awaaz sun wo teeno ladke sense me wapas aaye...


JUNGLE GIRL- jagah inka ghar hai..jahan tum log ghus aaye ho... apne ghar me zabardasti ghusne waale ko maarna galat nahi hota....


us helping girl kaa un chaaron se aise baat karna unke group ki ladki ko khatka tha isiliye uski baat sun saamne wo kuch kehne hi waali thi ki...


1ST LADKA-woh toh hai...par hum yahan bas ek project ke chalte aaye the... wapas jaane hi waale the ki tabhi isse saamna ho gaya....

1 LADKI-waise tum yahan kya kar rahi ho???

JUNGLE GIRL-ye jagah mera ghar hai...

1 LADKI- par abhi toh tumne kaha ki ye jaanwaro ka ghar hai... kya tum bhi inhime se ek ho....

JUNGLE GIRL-agar hoti toh tumhe bachane ki jagah iske saath milkar tumhara dinner karti....


jahan us ladki ki baat sun teeno ladke has diye wahin unki fellow girl chup ho gayi....


2ND GUY-guyzzz,look at it's teeth man...they look deadly....


unme se ek ne palatkar us GRIZZLY BEAR ke daanth ko jo abhi bhi khule hue the,dekhkar bola....


JUNGLE GIRL-GRIZZLY BEAR me biting muscles bohot strong hote hain....ye 1200 pounds per square inch ke pressure tak inhe band kar sakte hain..

kisi bhi human skull ko powder banane ke liye capable hote hain inke daanth....

aur jo tum log bhaagkar isse bachne ki koshish kar rahe the naa,wo koshish bhi bekar hi thi...

kyunki ye bohot agile hote hai.. short distance run me ye kaafi sashaskh hain....

small sprint me ye 35 se 40 miles per hour ki speed tak doudte hain jo kisi bhi race horse se zyada hai....

1st LADKA-wow yaar.. tumhare paas toh iske baare me kaafi knowledge hai.....

1 LADKI-arre isne bataya naa ki ye yahin se hai.. toh knowledge ke naam par isse yahan ke baare me hi toh bas pata hoga naa....


apni baat keh wo ladki has di


JUNGLE GIRL-tum ECOLOGY ki student ho right!!!

2ND-sirf ye nahi hum sab hi ECOLOGY aur saath hi ZOOLOGY ke bhi students hain tabhi toh yahan project ke liye aaye hain..

1LADKI-tumhe koi idea hai ZOOLOGY aur ECOLOGY ke baare me yaa fir bas yahin ke jaanwaron ka knowledge hai...

2ND LADKA-hey,ye tum kaisi baatein kar rahi ho.. aren't u forgetting ki hum inhi ki wajah se zinda hain...

JUNGLE GIRL-its okay..sawal hi toh pucha hai....

QUANTITATIVE ECOLOGY AND EVOLUTIONARY BIOLOGY....yahi book hai naa tumhare side bag me...


saamne khadi ladki ke kandhe par ek side bag latak raha tha jiska chain halka loose tha aur lagatar doudne ki wajah se dheere dheere khulne laga tha jiski wajah se bag ke andar rakhi book thodi si baahar thi jiska glimpse dekh JUNGLE GIRL ne uska naam guess kiya...

wahin apni book ka naam JUNGLE GIRL ke mooh se sun us ladki ko shock laga aur....


1 LADKI-tumhe iske baare me pata hai!!!


JUNGLE GIRL-thoda bohot....

QUANTITATIVE ECOLOGY AND EVOLUTIONARY BIOLOGY...a book by OTSO OVASKAINEN.. AUTHOR NAME...HENRIK JOHAN DE KNEGT,MARIA DEL MAR DEL NUMBER OF PAGES NUMBERS 285..

this book achieves an integration of empirical data and theory with the aid of mathematical models and statistical methods... each and every chapter starts by describing the concepts and techniques with the help of empirical examples....


JUNGLE GIRL ki baatein sun uske saamne khade un chaaron ka mooh khula ka khula reh gaya tha....


2ND LADKA-you are a genius....

JUNGLE GIRL-say something i dont know...

1ST LADKA-kis institute se padhi ho tum...???

JUNGLE GIRL-kisi bhi tarah ke knowledge ke liye kisi institution ki zaroorat nahi hai...all you need is passion...

YOU ONLY GET WHAT YOU SEEK...

ab ye sab chhodo...agle mod par jo jeep khadi hai,wo tumhari hi hai naa!!!

1LADKA-haan..uske aage ka raasta kaafi kharab tha isiliye hum yahan chalke aaye the...

JUNGLE GIRL-andhera ho raha hai...isse pehle ki ye andhera tum chaaron ko nigle,get out of here...


ye bol wo ladki mudi aur aage nikal gayi...

wo chaaron bhi uske piche piche ho liye...


1ST LADKA-waise i am.....

JUNGLE GIRL-end me intro nahi hota...waise bhi mujhe nahi lagta iske baad hum kabhi milenge...so don't bother....

2ND LADKA-but hume toh apne saviour ka naam pata hona chahiye naa..whats ur good name???


JUNGLE GIRL ke apne naam batate batate wo mod aa gaya jahan un chaaron ki gaadi khadi thi...


JUNGLE GIRL-jitni jaldi ho sake,nikal jaao....


ye bol paas se nikle pedon ke kaafilon ke beech wo ladki kho gayi....

wo chaaron bhi mouke ki nazakat ko samajh turant apni jeep me baith nikal gaye....


1ST LADKA-i haven't seen such a brave and intelligent person in my whole life...

2ND LADKA-tu kya kisi ne bhi nahi dekha hoga..what a girl man..waise uski tarah uska naam bhi bada hi cute tha...


MAHI.............(HEROINE)






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AAPKA APNA V...J....
Wawooooo very good & nice update

Oh heroine bhi a hi gayi ,mahi,awesome
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ AUR FLORIN KE BEECH PEHLI BAAR KHUL KAR BAATEIN HUI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MAHI NE KUCH STUDENTS KI JAAN BACHAYI




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UPDATE-4




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KAISI HO MAHI????



jungle ke beecho beech bani ek gufa ke andar jalti hui roshni ke beech haathon me kitab liye usse padhti MAHI ke kaano me ye awaaz gunj uthi jisse sun uske labon par ek muskurahat aa gayi jisne uske beintaha khubsoorat chehere ko aur haseen bana diya tha....

book ko band kar yunhi muskurate hue hi....

MAHI-kaafi dino baad aapki awaaz sun rahi hun...kya aaj bhi sirf is awaaz se hi mujhe baat karna hoga ya fir wo ghadi aa gayi jab mujhe aapke darshan praapt honge....

AWAAZ-wo samay zyada door nahi hai MAHI jab mai aapke saamne aaunga par....

MAHI-par filhal wo waqt nahi aaya hai...!!!!

us awaaz ki baat ko MAHI ne pura kiya.... MAHI ki baat me ek utawlapan tha jo us AWAAZ ne saaf mehsoos kiya tha...

waise ye jigyasa galat bhi nahi thi.....

pichle 15 saal se MAHI is awaaz ko sun rahi thi...par kabhi bhi us awaaz ke swami ko usne dekha naa tha.....

ajeeb hai par hai sach..waise dekha jaaye toh MAHI ki puri zindagi hi ajeeb hai ya fir ye kahen ki ek RAAZ hai....

(A SMALL BRIEF ON MAHI)

MAHI ki zindagi ki shuruat issi jungle se hui thi...naa maa naa baap aur naahi koi aur saathi...

MAHI ne ab tak ki apni puri zindagi akele hi is jungle me guzari hai....

but usse naahi kisi baat ki kabhi complaint rahi hai aur naahi wo kabhi upset hui...

usse hamesha hi aisa laga maano uska koi apna hamesha uske aas paas hi hai,bas usse nazar nahi aa raha..

itne bade jungle me akele rehte hue bhi usse kabhi dar nahi laga..

aur naahi us jungle ke kisi bhi jaanwar ne usse kabhi koi nuksaan pahunchaya...

MAHI ke 3 saal ke hote hi achanak ek din usse apni gufa me kuch kitaben rakhi mili...

aur tabhi pehli baar MAHI ke kaano me wo AWAAZ gunji jo abhi abhi gunji thi....

par pata nahi kyun ek anjaan awaaz ko sunane par bhi MAHI ko dar nahi laga....

aur naa hi usse is baat se ghabrahat hui ki jo AWAAZ wo sun rahi thi,us AWAAZ ka chehra usse dikh nahi raha tha...

us AWAAZ ne MAHI ko bataya ki ye books uske dimag ko viksit karenge aur usse kaabil banayenge....

MAHI ne toh kabhi kisise baat hi nahi ki thi...language jaisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai wo ye tak nahi jaanti thi but fir bhi MAHI us AWAAZ ki baatein samajh gayi..

aur isse kamal ki baat ye hui ki MAHI ne un books ko pehli baar me hi araam se padh liya...

uske baad usse lagatar kuch waqt ke antaral me continuously books milti rahi jinme alag alag subjects ke saath saath puri duniya ke baare me saamanya gyan tha...

MAHI lagatar aur bohot tezi se samajhte hue un saari kitabon ko padhti chali gayi...

is beech jab bhi wo AWAAZ MAHI ke kaano me gunjti toh AWAAZ ki disha ke hisab se MAHI us AWAAZ ke piche ke chehre ko dhundne ki koshish karti par wo kabhi bhi safal nahi hui...

books ka level aur range bhi dheere dheere badhta gaya...alag alag subjects ke saath hi alag alag curricular activities aur fight teqhniques ki books bhi naa sirf MAHI ne padhe balki unsab me wo practically expert bhi banti chali gayi...

aur aaj ki taarik me MAHI aise aise books padh chuki hai jaisa ek life me ek saath padhna ache achon ki bas ki baat nahi...

is waqt bhi MAHI jo book padh rahi thi wo hai INFINITE JEST.....one of the hardest book to digest properly....

but MAHI ne ek hi din me is book ko lagbhag poora hi padh liya tha...

itna hi nahi,jis gufa me is waqt MAHI hai wo books kisi library se kam nahi lag rahi thi...

War and Peace , atlas Shrugge,Ulysses,Finnegans Wake,Gravity's Rainbow ,
the Brothers Karamazov aur aise hi saikdon rare books ki collections se wo gufa bhari padi thi....

apne theoretical knowledge ko practically sahi proove karna bhi MAHI ko bade ache se aata tha aur iska bhi ek example wo gufa hi tha...

kaise???

roshni se bhari wo gufa jahan is waqt MAHI moujud thi,wahan par roshni prakrutik nahi thi,balki us gufa me electric light jal rahi thi...

aur ye karishma kiya tha MAHI ne hydroelectric cells ke sahare...

actually us gufa ke baahar thodi hi door ek nadi behti hai..MAHI ne ussi nadi se gufa tak 6 feet chouda aur 5 feet gehra gadha gadh kar ek chota sa canal banaya hai...

MAHI ne nanoporous magnisium farite se paani ko hydronium aur hydroxide me toda aur fir chandi aur jesta electrode se isse cell ki tarah use kar 3.5 volt ya fir ye kahun ki 80 mili ampere ki electricity paida ki...

hai na genius ye bandi....!!!

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AWAAZ-kya baat hai MAHI???tum meri awaaz pehli baar toh nahi sun rahi par aaj se pehle tumhe itna utawala nahi dekha....

MAHI-pata nahi kyun par aaj kal aisa lag raha hai jaise kuch chhutne wala...

ek ajeeb feeling aati rahti hai...maine is jagah par ab tak ki apni puri zindagi guzari hai...

but ab aisa lagta hai maano ye life,ye jagah ke saath mera saath khatm hone waala hai....

AWAAZ-aur tumhe ye bhi lagta ki is jagah ke saath saath shayad tum meri awaaz bhi fir kabhi naa sun paao!!!haina????

MAHI-shayad.....

AWAAZ-har cheez me sure hone waali ladki me mooh se shayad sunana ajeeb lagta hai..

khair,ye batao ki agar sach me tumhe ye jagah chhodni padi toh kya tumhe taklif hogi???

MAHI-nahi...bas thoda afsos hoga..is jagah maine apni zindagi ka itna waqt jo bitaya hai...

AWAAZ-bhawnaon ke paas dimag nahi hota kyunki wo dil se janm leti hain...isiliye is cheez par kisi ka zor nahi...

bas itna yaad rakho ki tumhare paas jo dimag hai,wo is jagah ke layak nahi hai...iski manzil kahin aur hai....

MAHI-iska matlab meri feelings sahi hai...waise jis dimag ke baare me aap baat kar rahe hain,uske baare me kuch puchun!!!

AWAAZ-pucho!!!

MAHI-bhale hi ye jungle,ye gufa mera ghar hai but mai is duniya se anjaan nahi hun aur naahi yahan ke logon se....

jitna sikhne ke liye log apni puri zindagi laga dete hain,utna maine kuch hi samay me sikha hai....

har insaan me alag alag khubi hoti hai...koi aisi kala hoti hai jisse wo master karta hai...

but mujhe toh is duniya me hone waali saari cheeze aati hain aur wo bhi kuch is tarah se jaise shayad koi aur naa kar paaye...

kaise???mera dimag itna saara data itni aasani se collect kar unhe mere through kaise process kar leta hai....???

AWAAZ-jo ehsaas tumhe aaj kal aa rahi hai,jis din wo ehsaas sach hogi,tumhe tumhare sawal ka jawab mil jaayega....


INTAZAAR KARNA.....





PLACE- ALFREEN ORPHANAGE




HEY GUYZZZZ....WAKE UP....

SEE WHAT'S HAPPENING TO RAAZ......


mere room me total 4 ladke rehte the jinme se ek ne baaki 2 ko chillakar uthaya...

reason....raat ke 3 baj rahe the..mai soya hua tha but meri body bohot zoron se vibrate ho rahi thi.... vibration itni zyada thi ki pura bed awaz karne laga tha jisse mere paas waale bed me soye ladke ki neend khul gayi...

aur jaise hi usne meri haalat dekhi toh wo chownk bhi gaya aur saath hi behad dar bhi..waise bhi sab mujhe ajeeb samajhte the aise me meri aisi haalat dekh koi bhi darega hi...

wi turant utha,light on ki or chillkar baaki ke do ladko ko uthane laga...

aur jaise hi wo dono uthe,unki haalat bhi pehle waale ladke ke jaisi ho gayi...

teeno ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya karen???


1st LADKA-ek kaam karo..tum dono wardens ko bulao mai jaakar FLORIN sir aur MARIA madam ko inform karta hun...

apni baat keh wo ladka turant FLORIN sir ke ghar ki taraf bhaaga aur baaki ke do warden ke kamre ki taraf....

in sab se bekhabar mera body lagatar hichkole khaa raha tha....

thodi hi der me warden aur uske kuch minutes baad FLORIN aur MARIA doudte hue mere room me aaye...

meri haalat dekh FLORIN aur MARIA ko jhatka laga..unke liye bhi aisa kuch pehli baar ho raha tha...

wahin wardens mere body ko dabakar control karne ki koshish kar rahe the but iska koi asar ho nahi raha tha....

FLORIN apna mobile apne ghar hi bhule the isiliye unhone warden se


FLORIN-call the doctor.....


warden ne apna mobile nikala aur wo doctor ko call karne hi waala tha ki tabhi mere body ka vibrate hona kam hone laga aur kuch hi seconds me mai normal ho gaya aur aisa hote hi meri aankh khul gayi aur mai ek jhatke me uth kar baith gaha...

uththe hi maine dekha ki mere room mates,wardens, MARIA aur FLORIN mujhe ghere khade hue hain..sabke aankhon me is waqt vismay bhara hua tha....


FLORIN-RAAZ abhi tumhe kya hua tha???

MAI- kuch nahi..i am good...

MARIA-but beta your whole body was terribly shaking....i think we should call a doctor..

MAI-no need...i said i am good...now can i sleep???


ye bol mai bina kuch aur sune wapas let gaya aur apni aakhen band kar li...

kuch der tak mujhe yunhi dekhte rehne ke baad...


FLORIN-chalo baccho..now there's nothing to worry...kal se aap sabke papers hain..so jaaiye...


apni baat keh FLORIN palatne hi waale the ki tabhi kuch dekh wo thithak gaye...


FLORIN WARDEN SE-can i have ur phone for a second...

WARDEN-sure sir.....


warden ne FLORIN ko apna mobile diya.FLORIN uske camera ko on kar mere bed ke paas aaye,ek pic click ki,aur us pic ko apne phone par send kar....


FLORIN-thanks...

WARDEN- its my pleasure sir...


mobile warden ko pakda MARIA ke saath FLORIN apne room ki taraf badh gaye....

MARIA jo ye sab dekh rahi.thi,room se nikalte hi....


MARIA-what was that all about???

FLORIN-room chalo,kuch dikhata hun....


chaliye jab tak ye dono apne room pahunchte hain,mai apko batata hun ki FLORIN ne kya dekha aur kiski pic li...

daras jab meri body vibrate ho rahi thi tab mere left hand ki index finger mere bed ke side me bane wooden area ko khured rahi thi...

waise toh mere nails itne sharp nahi hain but fir bhi meri body jitne zor se vibrate ho rahi thi ki mere index finger ka pressure bhi us wooden area par utna hi pad raha tha...

aur ussi pressure se baairik hi sahi par kuch kuch likhane laga jispar FLORIN ki nazar padi...

aur unki military man waali nazar ne us likhawat ko pehchaan liya aur unhe ye bhi pata chal gaya ki wo likhawat ekdum fresh hai matlab abhi abhi likhi gayi hai..

aur jab unhone mere right hand ki taraf dekha jo ki maine apne chest ke upar rakha hua tha toh unka shak sahi saabit hua..

scratch karne ki wajah se bed ke wood ka colour mere naakhun me laga hua tha..

aur isiliye hi unhone us likhawat ki pic le ki...

room pahunch FLORIN ne apna mobile uthaya aur jo pic unhone khud ko send ki thi,usse khol pehle khud dekha,fir mobile MARIA ko de diya...

aur mobile dekhte hi....


MARIA-ye sab kya hai???

FLORIN-ye wahi pic hai jo maine RAAZ ke bed se li thi...aur pic me jo likha hua dikh raha hai wo RAAZ ne likha hai wo bhi tab jab usse jhatke lag rahe the....


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ko tagda shock laga...


MARIA-how can you say that???

FLORIN-aap bhul rahi hain ki mai kabhi army ka ek decorated officer tha... unexpected chizon ka correct andaza lagana mujhe aata hai...

dhyan se dekhiye pic ko..usme jo likha gaya hai,waisa agressive nail rush se hi likha jaa sakta hai aur waise bhi jab hum RAAZ ke room me pahunche tab bhi maine wood scouring ki awaaz suni thi par tab condition aise the ki maine dhyan nahi diya but baadme jab ye likhawat dekhi aur saath hi RAAZ ke finger ko tab samajh me aaya ki wo ghisne ki si awaaz RAAZ ke nails ki thi....

MARIA-but ye sab likha kya hai???kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha......maine toh aisi writing pehle kabhi nahi dekhi hai..

FLORIN- yahi toh pata lagana hai...khair,abhi so haate hain,iske baare me baad me sochenge.....


apni baat keh FLORIN aur MARIA bed par let gaye...

jahan MARIA kuch hi der me so gayi wahin FLORIN ki aankhon se neend gayab thi...

unke man me us likhawat ke matlab ko samajhne ki tivr iccha jagi hui thi..

iska ek aur reason bhi tha...RAAZ...ye likhawat aur inme chhipa matlab RAAZ se juda tha aur isiliye hi FLORIN kuch zyada hi soch rahe the....

aur jab kaafi der tak unki soch ne unhe sone nahi diya toh wo uth baithe...

apna mobile nikal wo wapas us likhawat ko samajhne ki koshish karne lage...

net shuru kar wo duniya me bole jaane waale har language ko us likhawat se match karkar dekhne lage par iska bhi koi faayda nahi hua..

apna mobile liye unhone wo pic open ki aur usse dekhne lage....


FLORIN-aakhir kya ho sakta hai iska matlab!!!!!


kaafi der tak alag alag tarah se koshish karne ke baad bhi unhe us likhawat ya fir ye kahun ki us puzzle ke baare me koi hint nai Mila toh thak haar wo wapas let gaye...

lete lete hi wo kuch der tak ussike baare sochte rahe aur yunhi sochte sochte wo neend ke aagosh me chale gaye...

FLORIN so toh gaye par ab bhi unke dimag me wahi likhawat ghum rahi thi....

likhawat jo kuch aisi thi....


INCEPHDONUN GISGNAGRAPH VANDRRUXORMENDURGAL






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V.J......
Boht hi khoob Surat andaz se update likhi h ap ne sir

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