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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

krish1152

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Mast update Bhai aakir raaz ko uske janam aur jivan ka lakshay mill gaya dono hi dost bhi hai aur dushman bhi dono khel behad romanhak hoga
 

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Awesome update bro
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF CHAARON WHIZZES AUR WHIZZDERS SAVENTS AUR PARENTS KO NEXT PHASE KE BAARE ME JAANKARI DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS NE APNI CHAAL CHAL DI HAI.


AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




MEGA UPDATE-51




PLACE-THE DARK UNIVERSE



FLASHBACK CONTINUOUS.....






MANUSHYA JAATI KA ANTH...



saathon angels ke mooh se ek saath ye shabd nikle jisse sun...


VIDEOUS-HAHAHAHAHAHA.....

bilkul sahi..aur ab aisa hokar hi rahega....jis BRAMHAAND me VIDEOUS nahi,us bramhaand ke hone naa hone ka kya mol...???

VIKRAM-apne betuke tark apne paas rakho VIDEOUS...agar tumhe aisa karna hi hota toh tum ab tak ye kar chuke hote....

tum aur tumhare zariye tumhare andar chhupi BLACK ENERGY bas mujhe aur ASMODEUS ko chota dikhana chahte ho..

hume harana chahte ho...jab tak tum dono ye nahi kar lete,tum is bramhaand ko koi nuksaan nahi pahunchaoge...

VIDEOUS-adbhudh FATHER.. adbhudh..bina mere mastishk ko padhe bhi aap mere aur mere andar chuppe BLACK ENERGY ki chahat,khawahish ke baare me jaante hain...

isiliye hi toh mujhe garv hai ki mai aapka putr hun...

ASMODEUS-mudde ki baat karo VIDEOUS...chahate kya ho tum..???

VIDEOUS-wahi jo FATHER ne kaha...mai aap dono ko harana chahta hun......


jaise BLACK ENERGY ke aapke andar hone ke baad bhi aapne ek khel racha,aur us khel me jagah jagah apne bhai ke liye hints chodde taaki wo aapko BLACK ENERGY se azaad kara sake,aur fir unhone us asmabhav dikhne waale kaarya ko bhi sambhav kar hi diya..

aur aisa kar aapne apni sammilit buddhi ko pure bramhaand me shreshth saabit kiya,thik waise hi,

ab mai ye saabit karna chahta hun ki BRAMHAAND me sarvshresta aap dono nahi,mai hun....

aur jaise hi ye mai saabit karunga,aap dono ka varchasv, aapka rutba aur sabse mahatvpurn,aapka maan samman,sab apne aap niche gir jaayega...

aur yahi mera aur mere andar vaas kar rahe BLACK ENERGY ka maksad hai...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun saathon angels aur khaas kar RONIT aur ANJALI ka dimag ghum gaya..

kyunki VIKRAM unke liye LORD OF ANGELS baad me tha par sabse pehle wo unka dost tha..unka sabse pyara dost jiske liye wo haste haste apni jaan de sakte the..

sadiyan beet chuki thi unhe apne maanav sharir ko chhode,saari bhaavnaaye waqt ke saath kartavyon ke marg par neeche dab gayi par VIKRAM ke liye unka pyar,unka samman ab bhi utna hi tha yaa fir ye kahun ki ab wo samman aur badh chuka tha aur isiliye VIDEOUS ki baat khatm hote hi wo dono kuch kehne ko hue par VIKRAM ne unhe man hi man shaant kara diya....

wahin apni baat ko aage badhata hua...


VIDEOUS-par mujhe pata hai ki sidhe tour par ye mumkin nahi hai...aur isiliye.....

agar aap dono apne pyare bramhaand ko bachana chahte hain toh aisa hone dene ke liye meri kuch shartein hain...

ASMODEUS-bolte jaao,hum sun rahe hain...

VIDEOUS-meri pehli shart...

mai ek khel rachunga..us khel ka har niyam mere hisaab se hoga aur aap dono ko mere khel me mere niyamo ke hisaab se chalkar mujhe harana hoga...

manzoor hai...???

ASMODEUS/VIKRAM-manzoor hai...

VIDEOUS-aapke(ASMODEUS) BLACK ENERGY ko tyagne ki wajah se bramhand me BLACK ENERGY ko failane waale sabhi DEVIL'S bhi khatm ho gaye...

wo samuh ab fir banega par ek alag andaz me....

sabse pehle aap dono sabhi angels ko white energy ki shakti ko balance me rakhne ke unke daayitv se unhe azaad karenge...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun saathon ANGELS chownke aur kuch kehne ko hue par VIKRAM ne ek baar phir man hi man un sab ko shaant rehne ko kaha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue....


VIDEOUS-toh khel kuch yun hoga ki aap dono ek institution banwayenge..

ek educational institution jahan bramhaand ke har living PLANET me paida hone waale sabse aala dimag ke bacche padhenge...

in baccho ki rachna aap yaa aapke pitah apne hisaab se kar sakte hain....

uske baad.....


(writers note-fir VIDEOUS ne us school me kis tarah se magic ko padhaya jaayega ,uske PHASES aur unme use hone waale niyamon ke baare me bataya....

wahi niyam jo last update me aap padh chuke hain aur baaki ke niyam aur cheezen aap sab baad me padhenge...)


VIDEOUS-us institution ka mool uddeshya hoga bramhaand me BLACK ENERGY aur WHITE ENERGY ke us balance ko kaayam rakhna jo filhal aapke paksh me jhuka hua hai....

RONIT-par jis roop rekha ko tumne taiyar kiya hai,us hisaab se toh iska paksh tumhari taraf jhuk jaayega...

VIDEOUS-maine ye bhi kaha tha ki khel ke niyam mai tay karunga aur aapko mere hisaab se usse khelna hoga aur mujhe harana hoga...


VIDEOUS ki baat ke baad kisike paas bolne ke liye kuch nahi tha...


VIDEOUS-is institution par aap kaam kabse shuru karte hain,ye mai aap par chhodta hun...

par jab bhi ye kaam shuru ho,toh iske saare bhaag mere hisaab se hi hone chahiye...

koi bhi mamuli sa parivartan bhi hamari sandhi ko tod dega....

manzoor hai....???


ASMODEUS/VIKRAM-manzoor hai....


haan bol VIKRAM ne apni talwar ko nikalne ke liye haath aage kiya par tabhi...


VIDEOUS-arre ye kya kar rahe hain aap..???ya fir ye kahun ki ye kyun kar rahe hain aap...???


muskurate hue VIKRAM ko dekhte hue VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi jispar...


VIKRAM-kuch aur bhi chahte ho tum...???


jahan VIKRAM ki baat sun VIDEOUS ki muskurahat aur gehri ho gayi wahin baaki saathon ANGELS ko kuch samajh me nahi aaya aur isiliye....


VIDEOUS-maine sharte kaha tha,shart nahi...

aap kab se baarik shabdon me chuppe arth ko samajhne me asamarth hone lage....

khair, mujhe pata hai ki aap apni talwar ko chunne ki koshish kyun rahe the...???par aisa hoga nahi aur yahi meri dusri shart bhi hai aur is talwar ne jo mujhe haani pahunchayi hai,uska dand bhi...

RONIT-kaisi haani..???zinda toh ho tum...???aur VIKRAM toh apne talwar ko tumhare sharir se nikal tumhe dard se nijaat hi dila raha hai isme tumhara ahit hi kya hai..???


HAHAHAHAHA.....


RONIT ki baat sun VIDEOUS pehle zoron se hasa aur fir...


VIDEOUS-itne sadiyon se mere FATHER ke dost rah chuke ho tum,toh thodi dhurtatha toh tumme bhi aana laazmi hi hain....

puri nahi toh kamsekam aadhi baat toh pata hi hogi tumhe...jis pal ye SWORD mere andar ghussa tha,us pal tak sirf meri aadhi urja hi BLACK ENERGY ke saath milkar pure BRAMHAAND me faili thi par jaise hi mere sharir par is SWORD ka sparsh hua,tab isne meri aadhi urja ko khud me sokh liya...

aur ab jaise hi FATHER is SWORD ko nikalenge,toh ye apne saath saath meri wo aadhi urja jiske sayammit hone me hi itna waqt laga tha, nikal lega aur yahan tak ki usme mili BLACK ENERGY ko bhi khudme kheench kar kaid kar lega jiske baad tumhare pitah jaisa chahenge,waisa us BLACK ENERGY ko maanana hoga aur in sab ke madhya mera astitv khatm ho jaayega....


VIDEOUS ki saari baat sach thi jiske baad kisike bhi paas kuch kehne ko tha nahi aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-par jaante ho sabse mahatvpurn baat kya hai...???

jaise hi FATHER is SWORD ko chhuenge,unhe mere khel ka jiske baare me maine kuch shan pehle bataya tha, uska wo bhaag jo sirf mai jaanta hun,wo pata chal jaayega..

aur aisa mai kaise hone de sakta hun....???

us chuppe hue bhaag ke baare me pata toh inhe chalega hi par sirf tab jab mai chahunga....


aur issi baat ke aadhar par mera dusra shart ye hai ki ab se ye SWORD aapki nahi hai....aapko isse abhi issi waqt azaad karna hoga....


VIDEOUS ke shart ko sunkar ek baar firse saathon ANGELS behad hairan hue...

aur hona bhi laazmi tha..sirf isiliye nahi kyunki VIDEOUS ne VIKRAM ko uski SWORD ko mukt karne ke liye kaha tha balki isiliye kyunki aisa karne ke baad bhi VIDEOUS khud us talwar ka maalik nahi ban sakta tha aur wo isiliye kyunki wo us talwar ke liye deserving nahi tha....

par unhe kahan maalum tha ki VIDEOUS ka plan kuch aisa hai jaisa wo sab kabhi nahi soch sakte the...

khair, VIDEOUS ki shart sun VIKRAM ne apni aankhen band ki aur uske agle hi pal...


AHHHH.....


ek baar firse VIDEOUS ki cheekh se pura mahoul gunj utha....

reason..

aakhen band kar VIKRAM ne khudse SWORD ko detach kiya aur aisa hoti VIKRAM ki wo urja,uska wo AURA jo uski SWORD se hamesha connected rehta tha,wo usse nikalkar VIKRAM me sama gayi aur aisa hote waqt us SWORD me tezi se vibrations paida hue jinke force se VIDEOUS ko bohot zyada taklif hui aur uske mooh se cheekh nikal gayi par cheekhne ke baad ek baar firse uske chehre par vijayi muskaan tair gayi kyunki jo usne chaha,aur jis maksad ke liye aisa chaha,wo ho chuka tha...


VIKRAM-aur kuch.....

VIDEOUS- ek aakhri shart baaki hai...darasal meri aadhi urja saare living PLANETS me chali gayi hai aur aadhi is SWORD me...

waise toh urja kabhi khatm nahi hoti par jin do chizon me (planets, sword) me meri urja kharch hui hai,uske baad meri puri Shakti ke wapas mere paas aane me waqt lagega..

bohot waqt....


DEFENDER-isiliye tumne kaha tha ki institution par kaam karne ka waqt tum hum par chhodte ho...


DEFENDER ki baat sun muskuraya VIDEOUS aur...


VIDEOUS-zahir si baat hai..meri har baat me faayda toh mai sabse pehle apna hi dekhunga naa...

par mere fayde me mere FATHERS ka bhi kam faayda nahi hai..

kyunki ye jo waqt hai,mujhe maalum ki is beech ye dono mujhse chhuttkara paane ka,mujhe samapt karne ka koi na koi tarika toh dhundenge hi..

kyun FATHER'S....


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ko taraf dekh VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi par dono filhal shaant hi rahe isiliye...


VIDEOUS-aur kyunki aap dono meri har shart puri kar rahe hain,toh aap dono ko itni chhut toh mujhe deni hi chahiye....

isiliye aapko jo plan karna hai kijiye par usse pehle meri teesri shart puri kijiye....

waise meri agli shart aapke planning se judi hui hai...

nahi samjhe,samjhata hun...toh meri teesri shart ye hai ki...

is SWORD se kuch waqt pehle tak judi aapki wo urja,wo AURA jo ab aapke paas hai,us urja aur AURA ki shakti se aap mere liye ek BANISHMENT banayenge...



ek aisi chaardiwari jike andar mai rahunga aur jisme koi bhi ghus naa sakeka.....aap dono bhi nahi....

us BANISHMENT me mai apni do bhaago me vibhajit urja ko wapas khudme sametunga...

aur jis din mai puri tarah aisa karne me kaaimiyab ho jaaunga,us din ye talwar mujhse alag hogi aur...


ASMODEUS-tab bhi tum us BANISHMENT se bahar nahi jaa sakoge...

aur wo isiliye kyunki tumhari urja humse hai aur agar hum koi aisa BANISHMENT banayenge,jisme hum bhi nahi ghus sakte toh fir usse tum bhi khudse baahar nahi nikal paaoge...

kyunki jaisa ki tumne kaha ki tumhe wo BANISHMENT us urja aur AURA ki shakti se chahiye jisse ye SWORD mujhse judi hui thi,toh aise me wo SWORD toh us BANISHMENT se baahar aa jayegi par tum usse sirf tab hi nikal paaoge jab us SWORD ka koi dhaarak banega...

kyunki jis kisiko bhi SWORD apna dhaarak chunegi,tumhari BANISHMENT jis urja se banegi, wo urja bhi us dhaarak ke andar chali jaayegi aur aisa hone par hi tumhara BANISHMENT khatm hoga....


ASMODEUS ki baat aun VIDEOUS kuch kehne ko hua par tabhi...


VIKRAM-isiliye hi isne kaha tha ki humari jo counter planning hogi,wo iske third shart se judi hogi....

kyunki isse pata hai ki hum sidhe ispar waar nahi karenge..iske khel ko kaatne ke liye hum iska pratidwandi taiyar karenge aur wahi pratidwandi hi SWORD ko uthane laayak hoga aur jab aisa hoga toh ye bhi azaad ho jaayega..

aur yahi iska asli khel hai..humare taiyar kiye gaye pratidwandi ko harakar humse jeetna...



VIDEOUS-ab ye hui naa mere FATHER wali baat..sach me FATHER,kitna kuch sikha hai maine aapse aur ummid hai ki aage bhi sikhunga...

VIKRAM-jaisa BANISHMENT tum chahte ho,wo yahan nahi ban sakti.. uske liye sirf PECULIAR SPACE hi sahi hoga...


(WRITERS NOTE-kuch yaad aaya doston.. PECULIAR SPACE...VIPERIOUS BANISHMENT...5TH UPDTATE ME IS JAGAH KE BAAREME BATAYA GAYA HAIN JAHAN KOI UPARANDHATI ATTIPRASAGGAYATE UPARANDHATI ATTIPRASAGGAYATE aur CINTAYATI AZRITA
CINTAYATI AZRITA naam ke do spell lagatar bole jaa raha tha..

ye KOI VIDEOUS hi tha jiske pehle spell ka matlab tha COMPLETE CONNECTION aur uske dusre spell ka matlab tha REFINING POWERS jisse wo apne Shakti aur AURA ko lagatar nikharte rehta tha..)



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VIDEOUS-thik hai..wahi sahi....yahi hai meri aakhri shart...isse pura kijiye aur lag jaayiye meri chunouti ke kaat ko taiyar karne me....

waqt ki kaminahi hogi...naa aapke paas aur nahi mere paas....



VIDEOUS ki baat puri hote hi VIKRAM ki aankhen ek baar firse band ho gayi aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal uske sharir se ek roshni nikli jisne wahan moujud sabhi ko apne ghere me le liya aur fir...

wo sabhi gayab ho chuke the..gayab hone ke agle hi pal wo sab pahunche us jagah par jiska zikr VIKRAM ne kuch der pehle kiya tha..

wo jagah jo ab se kaafi samay tak VIDEOUS ka ghar hone waala tha....

PECULIAR SPACE....

bramhaand ka wo hissa jo universe ka bhag hokar bhi nahi tha.. ek cursed jagah thi ye space jahan is waqt wo sabhi khade the...

wahin jaise hi sab is jagah par pahunche toh un sabke saamne ek BANISHMENT CELL pehle hi taiyar ho chuka tha jisse dekh...


VIDEOUS-meri vidayi ki itni bhi kya jaldi thi FATHER ki humare yahan aane se pehle hi meri bandish ka intazam kar chuke the aap...??

VIKRAM-apni haisiyat se zyada waqt le chuke ho tum hamara VIDEOUS... isiliye ye bewajah ke tarkon par samay barbaad kiye bina apne naye ghar me pravesh karo...

VIDEOUS-meri haisiyat...!!iski ek jhalak toh aap meri utpatti hote hi dekh chuke hain,dusri bohot jald dekhenge aur teesri aur aakhri baar meri haisiyat aap dono ke aur pure bramhaand ke saamne us din ke bad se lagatar aayegi jis din mai is BANISHMENT ae baahar niklunga..


ye bolte bolte VIDEOUS aage badha aur is BANISHMENT ke andar bina kisi vyavadhan ke pahunch gaya aur ye hua us SWORD ki wajah se jo is waqt uske sharir me dhasa hua tha...

jaisa ki VIKRAM ne kaha tha,ki us SWORD ko us BANISHMENT ae guzarne me koi takleef nahi hogi aur wahi hua...

wahin BANISHMENT ke andar pahunch VIDEOUS palta aur filhal ke liye apne dono pitah se kahe usne apne kuch aakhri shabd....


VIDEOUS-ye sword jo filhal mere andar hai,ek naa ek din mujhe chhodkar bahar niklega aur uske baad jis din bhi isse iska dharak mila,ye uske haath me aaya toh mai yahan se azaad ho jaunga..

aur us din se shuru hogi spraddha..uske aur mere beech...agar wo jeeta toh aap dono jeete par agar mai jeeta toh aap dono sab kuch haar jaayenge...


isiliye itni hi darkhwasth hai aapse ki jo bhi competition aap mere saamne rakhen,wo wakayi meri takkar ka ho...

VIKRAM/ASMODEUS-aisa hi hoga.....


ye baat bolte hi VIKRAM, ASMODEUS aur saathon angels gayab ho gaye jiske baad


VIDEOUS-par ye aap logon ke liye aasan bhi nahi hoga...

hahahahahahaha....


zoron se hasa VIDEOUS aur fir....



ZAMENTATOSTARI SHAKTIYEM

OBSERVE THE POWER...


SWORD se apni urja ko sokhne ke liye lagatar kayi hazar saalon tak is spell ka uccharan kiya VIDEOUS ne...

aur fir wo pal bhi aaya jab uski urja ka wo pura bhaag jo SWORD me chala gaya tha, usse usne wapas kheench liya aur aisa hote hi...

wo SWORD VIDEOUS ke sharir se aur us BANISHMENT se nikal baahar chali gayi aur sidhe jaakar rooki ZEAL PLANET par...

wahin jaise hi SWORD VIDEOUS ke sharir se bahar nikli toh ek pal ke liye wo chup raha aur fir....



UPARANDHATI ATTIPRASAGGAYATE

UPARANDHATI ATTIPRASAGGAYATE


CINTAYATI AZRITA

CINTAYATI AZRITA


ye do spell uccharit hone lage VIDEOUS ke mooh se jiske baad uski aankhen band ho gayi...

wahan uski aankhen aur scene band hua aur yahan...

meri aankhen khul gayi....

SWORD ke handle ko pakda mai usse dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...

ek current sa douda us SWORD me jiske baad meri aankhen ek baar firse band ho gayi aur is baar meri band aankhon se saamne tha ek naya FLASHBACK jisme mujhe dikha VIKRAM....

ZEAL ka VIKRAM.....

mai dekh raha tha ki kaise VIKRAM ne apni aur ASMODEUS k urja ke mishran se banaya ZEAL waale VIKRAM ko par fir mere saamne ek baar firse wahi scene chalne laga jab us VIKRAM ne is SWORD ko chhua aur aisa hone ke baad uske saamne ek situation aayi jispar usse ek faisla lena tha aur jab usne wo faisla liya toh uske agle hi pal uske saath pura Planet hi nestonaabut ho gaya...

yahi tha apni haisiyat dikhane ka wo dusra mouka jiske baare me VIDEOUS ne VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS se kaha tha...

khair,is flashback ko dekhte waqt hi mere andar mere SOUL ne bhi mujhe ek naya scene dikhaya...

ek naya FLASHBACK back yaa fir ye kahun ki mere liye sabse important flashback....

kyunki ye flashback meri utpatti ka tha...kaise mere chaaron organs ko chaar dead PLANETS par bichaya gaya..

par most importantly,aisa kyun karna pada,ye bhi mujhe pata chal gaya...

in sabke beech ek nayi cheez ho rahi thi aur wo ye ki bhale hi mujhe mera brain,body, blood aur SOUL mil chuke the par fir bhi ab tak mai andar se khaali khaali hi mehsoos karta raha tha par jaise jaise meri utpatti ka kaaran mere ankhon ke saamne aa raha tha,mere chaaron bhaagon ko unke maayne milte jaa rahe the.

meri soch,us soch ka sach aur sabse important,mere hone ki wajah ko jaise mera mind,meri body,mera blood aur mera soul khudme bharte chale jaa rahe the..

aur jaise hi mujhe meri utpatti ka tarika aur kaaran clear hua toh mai bhi jaise pura ho gaya....

bijli si doudi mere haathon me aur aisa hote hi...

meri band aankhon ke saamne ek drishya aa gaya...yaa fir ye kahun ki VIKRAM ki hi tarah mere saamne bhi ek practical sawal tha jisse clear karne ke baad hi mujhe ye SWORD milti aur agar mai aisa nahi kar paata,toh VIKRAM ki hi tarah,mera marna bhi fixed tha..

khair, jaisa ki maine bataya ki ye ek practical scene tha jiska matlab hai ki mai khud is scene ka hissa tha...

DRISHYAM:-


is waqt mai ek sunsaan viran si jagah par khada tha...mere aage wo cave waali SWORD rakhi hui thi jisse mai dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...


KAISE HO RAAZ...!!!!!


mere saamne se ye awaaz aayi jispar jab maine saamne dekha toh
mujhse thodi door khada tha VIDEOUS ka pratibimbh jo mujhe dekh muskura raha tha...

par mai bas usse ek tak dekhe jaa raha tha aur tabhi...


VIDEOUS-SWORD chahiye....le lo..bas ek chota sa kaam karo aur ye SWORD tumhari hai...

isse lo aur inhe maar do...


VIDEOUS ke aisa kehte hi mere saamne kuch chote se bacche aa gaye jo mujhe hi dekh rahe the...

par khaas baat ye thi ki ye bacche mere wo fellowmates the jo mere saath mere hostel me raha karte the..

ye bacche unke baalya kaal ka roop the....


VIDEOUS-inhe maar do aur ye SWORD tumhara....


VIDEOUS jo ki mujhe maalum tha ki bas ek fake resemblance se zyada kuch nahi hai aur jisse sirf is test ke liye rakha gaya hai,uski bat sun maine zamin me gadi SWORD uthayi aur aage badha...

un chand bacchon ke paas pahunch maine apni talwar uthayi hi thi ki..


VIDEOUS-ek baat batana reh gaya...tumhe lag raha hoga ki kyunki ye ek illusion hai,toh isiliye in bacchon ko jo ki ek mithya hi hai,maarna kaun si galat baat hogi par aisa hai nahi...

jab tum in bacchon ko maar rahe hoge,tab us waqt tumhare brain,body, blood aur SOUL..in chaaron ka tumhare is kaarya me swikriti dena zaroori hai...

kehne ka matlab hai ki inhe maarte waqt tumhe aur tumhare har ang ko inhe sach me maarne ki khawahish honi chahiye...

aisa hone par hi ye SWORD is baat par yakin karegi ki tumhare liye iski ehmiyat kisi bekasoor ki jaan se bhi zyada zaroori hai..

aur issi yakin ke adhar par hi tumhe ye SWORD mil sakta hai...

ek line me kahun toh....


MOUT BHALE HI NAKLI HO PAR MAARNE KE JASBAAT ASLI HONE CHAHIYE...


VIDEOUS ke pratibimbh ki baat sunane ke baad ek pal ke liye mai rooka,apni aankhen band ki aur khudke andar jhaanka maano khudse hi jawab maang raha hun aur fir agle hi pal...


SOOOOOBBBBB....


meri aakhen khuli par usse pehle hi meri SWORD chal chuki thi jiske baad mere saamne line me baithe sabhi bacchon ke sir unke dhad se alag ho chuke the....

wahin jab aisa hua toh....

mere DRISHYAM me ek tez roshni fail gayi jiske agle hi pal meri aankhen jo drishyam dekhne ki wajah se band thi,khul gayi aur...

ek jhatke me SWORD ya fir ye kahun ki MERI SWORD mere haath me thi aur aisa hote hi mere lab hile...


MAI-

dhoop nikli hai,par fir bhi
baadal CHAA GAYA HAI...

khouf faili hui hai,
mere naam ka jo HAWA GAYA HAI....

tujhe competition chahiye tha,
dekh mai tere saamne hun....

VIDEOUS ko mitane aakhir,
RAAZ AA GAYA HAI.....




THIK USSI WAQT...




PECULIAR SPACE


PLACE-VIPERIOUS BANISHMENT




BOOM.............



ek tez dhamaka hua us BANISHMENT me jiske baad wo pura BANISHMENT gayab ho gaya...

beech universe me hone ke baawajud bhi us puri jagah me dhuan dhuan ho chuka tha par wo dhuan bohot tezi se chhat bhi gaya yaa fir ye kahun ki gayab ho gaya aur jab aisa hua toh....

paalthi maare aankh band kiye baithe VIDEOUS ki aankh khul gayi...

chehre par ek behtarin muskurat liye uske lab hile aur...

VIDEOUS-


jo ek dhaage ko dusre se baandhe,
mai wo SUTR HUN....

mai tera mitr,mai hi tera shatru,
par sarvpratham, mai tera PUTR hun....



jisse peekar pyas bujhe nahi aur
badhe,MAI WO PAANI HUN...

mai kahani ka koi paatr nahi,
balki khud PURI KAHANI HUN...



buddhi ki shuruat jahan se hui,
mai wo GENIUS HUN...

mai hi ALPHA,mai hi OMEGA
MAI.........VIDEOUS HUN.........








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V...J.....

















Bhai ji kya tha ye speechless
Kya kamal ka hai VIDEOUS
Or
Kya kamal ka hai Raaz
Ab do ese patidwandhi ek dusre ke samne hai
Ab kya hoga inka
Kya karenge ye
Ye to batayega inka Attitude
Do ese jinka Attitude alag alag hai but jiska Attitude pabal hoga dega dusre ke Attitude ko vo ji is kahani ko aapne Attitude se jitega

Lage raho bhai ji
 

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ek numbar bhai

is khani ka sub se best update
Bhai

tarif karne ke liye koy word nai he bhai

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ek bat kahuga
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ap age jake ek bhot acche write bane bhai
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF CHAARON WHIZZES AUR WHIZZDERS SAVENTS AUR PARENTS KO NEXT PHASE KE BAARE ME JAANKARI DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS NE APNI CHAAL CHAL DI HAI.


AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




MEGA UPDATE-51




PLACE-THE DARK UNIVERSE



FLASHBACK CONTINUOUS.....






MANUSHYA JAATI KA ANTH...



saathon angels ke mooh se ek saath ye shabd nikle jisse sun...


VIDEOUS-HAHAHAHAHAHA.....

bilkul sahi..aur ab aisa hokar hi rahega....jis BRAMHAAND me VIDEOUS nahi,us bramhaand ke hone naa hone ka kya mol...???

VIKRAM-apne betuke tark apne paas rakho VIDEOUS...agar tumhe aisa karna hi hota toh tum ab tak ye kar chuke hote....

tum aur tumhare zariye tumhare andar chhupi BLACK ENERGY bas mujhe aur ASMODEUS ko chota dikhana chahte ho..

hume harana chahte ho...jab tak tum dono ye nahi kar lete,tum is bramhaand ko koi nuksaan nahi pahunchaoge...

VIDEOUS-adbhudh FATHER.. adbhudh..bina mere mastishk ko padhe bhi aap mere aur mere andar chuppe BLACK ENERGY ki chahat,khawahish ke baare me jaante hain...

isiliye hi toh mujhe garv hai ki mai aapka putr hun...

ASMODEUS-mudde ki baat karo VIDEOUS...chahate kya ho tum..???

VIDEOUS-wahi jo FATHER ne kaha...mai aap dono ko harana chahta hun......


jaise BLACK ENERGY ke aapke andar hone ke baad bhi aapne ek khel racha,aur us khel me jagah jagah apne bhai ke liye hints chodde taaki wo aapko BLACK ENERGY se azaad kara sake,aur fir unhone us asmabhav dikhne waale kaarya ko bhi sambhav kar hi diya..

aur aisa kar aapne apni sammilit buddhi ko pure bramhaand me shreshth saabit kiya,thik waise hi,

ab mai ye saabit karna chahta hun ki BRAMHAAND me sarvshresta aap dono nahi,mai hun....

aur jaise hi ye mai saabit karunga,aap dono ka varchasv, aapka rutba aur sabse mahatvpurn,aapka maan samman,sab apne aap niche gir jaayega...

aur yahi mera aur mere andar vaas kar rahe BLACK ENERGY ka maksad hai...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun saathon angels aur khaas kar RONIT aur ANJALI ka dimag ghum gaya..

kyunki VIKRAM unke liye LORD OF ANGELS baad me tha par sabse pehle wo unka dost tha..unka sabse pyara dost jiske liye wo haste haste apni jaan de sakte the..

sadiyan beet chuki thi unhe apne maanav sharir ko chhode,saari bhaavnaaye waqt ke saath kartavyon ke marg par neeche dab gayi par VIKRAM ke liye unka pyar,unka samman ab bhi utna hi tha yaa fir ye kahun ki ab wo samman aur badh chuka tha aur isiliye VIDEOUS ki baat khatm hote hi wo dono kuch kehne ko hue par VIKRAM ne unhe man hi man shaant kara diya....

wahin apni baat ko aage badhata hua...


VIDEOUS-par mujhe pata hai ki sidhe tour par ye mumkin nahi hai...aur isiliye.....

agar aap dono apne pyare bramhaand ko bachana chahte hain toh aisa hone dene ke liye meri kuch shartein hain...

ASMODEUS-bolte jaao,hum sun rahe hain...

VIDEOUS-meri pehli shart...

mai ek khel rachunga..us khel ka har niyam mere hisaab se hoga aur aap dono ko mere khel me mere niyamo ke hisaab se chalkar mujhe harana hoga...

manzoor hai...???

ASMODEUS/VIKRAM-manzoor hai...

VIDEOUS-aapke(ASMODEUS) BLACK ENERGY ko tyagne ki wajah se bramhand me BLACK ENERGY ko failane waale sabhi DEVIL'S bhi khatm ho gaye...

wo samuh ab fir banega par ek alag andaz me....

sabse pehle aap dono sabhi angels ko white energy ki shakti ko balance me rakhne ke unke daayitv se unhe azaad karenge...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun saathon ANGELS chownke aur kuch kehne ko hue par VIKRAM ne ek baar phir man hi man un sab ko shaant rehne ko kaha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue....


VIDEOUS-toh khel kuch yun hoga ki aap dono ek institution banwayenge..

ek educational institution jahan bramhaand ke har living PLANET me paida hone waale sabse aala dimag ke bacche padhenge...

in baccho ki rachna aap yaa aapke pitah apne hisaab se kar sakte hain....

uske baad.....


(writers note-fir VIDEOUS ne us school me kis tarah se magic ko padhaya jaayega ,uske PHASES aur unme use hone waale niyamon ke baare me bataya....

wahi niyam jo last update me aap padh chuke hain aur baaki ke niyam aur cheezen aap sab baad me padhenge...)


VIDEOUS-us institution ka mool uddeshya hoga bramhaand me BLACK ENERGY aur WHITE ENERGY ke us balance ko kaayam rakhna jo filhal aapke paksh me jhuka hua hai....

RONIT-par jis roop rekha ko tumne taiyar kiya hai,us hisaab se toh iska paksh tumhari taraf jhuk jaayega...

VIDEOUS-maine ye bhi kaha tha ki khel ke niyam mai tay karunga aur aapko mere hisaab se usse khelna hoga aur mujhe harana hoga...


VIDEOUS ki baat ke baad kisike paas bolne ke liye kuch nahi tha...


VIDEOUS-is institution par aap kaam kabse shuru karte hain,ye mai aap par chhodta hun...

par jab bhi ye kaam shuru ho,toh iske saare bhaag mere hisaab se hi hone chahiye...

koi bhi mamuli sa parivartan bhi hamari sandhi ko tod dega....

manzoor hai....???


ASMODEUS/VIKRAM-manzoor hai....


haan bol VIKRAM ne apni talwar ko nikalne ke liye haath aage kiya par tabhi...


VIDEOUS-arre ye kya kar rahe hain aap..???ya fir ye kahun ki ye kyun kar rahe hain aap...???


muskurate hue VIKRAM ko dekhte hue VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi jispar...


VIKRAM-kuch aur bhi chahte ho tum...???


jahan VIKRAM ki baat sun VIDEOUS ki muskurahat aur gehri ho gayi wahin baaki saathon ANGELS ko kuch samajh me nahi aaya aur isiliye....


VIDEOUS-maine sharte kaha tha,shart nahi...

aap kab se baarik shabdon me chuppe arth ko samajhne me asamarth hone lage....

khair, mujhe pata hai ki aap apni talwar ko chunne ki koshish kyun rahe the...???par aisa hoga nahi aur yahi meri dusri shart bhi hai aur is talwar ne jo mujhe haani pahunchayi hai,uska dand bhi...

RONIT-kaisi haani..???zinda toh ho tum...???aur VIKRAM toh apne talwar ko tumhare sharir se nikal tumhe dard se nijaat hi dila raha hai isme tumhara ahit hi kya hai..???


HAHAHAHAHA.....


RONIT ki baat sun VIDEOUS pehle zoron se hasa aur fir...


VIDEOUS-itne sadiyon se mere FATHER ke dost rah chuke ho tum,toh thodi dhurtatha toh tumme bhi aana laazmi hi hain....

puri nahi toh kamsekam aadhi baat toh pata hi hogi tumhe...jis pal ye SWORD mere andar ghussa tha,us pal tak sirf meri aadhi urja hi BLACK ENERGY ke saath milkar pure BRAMHAAND me faili thi par jaise hi mere sharir par is SWORD ka sparsh hua,tab isne meri aadhi urja ko khud me sokh liya...

aur ab jaise hi FATHER is SWORD ko nikalenge,toh ye apne saath saath meri wo aadhi urja jiske sayammit hone me hi itna waqt laga tha, nikal lega aur yahan tak ki usme mili BLACK ENERGY ko bhi khudme kheench kar kaid kar lega jiske baad tumhare pitah jaisa chahenge,waisa us BLACK ENERGY ko maanana hoga aur in sab ke madhya mera astitv khatm ho jaayega....


VIDEOUS ki saari baat sach thi jiske baad kisike bhi paas kuch kehne ko tha nahi aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-par jaante ho sabse mahatvpurn baat kya hai...???

jaise hi FATHER is SWORD ko chhuenge,unhe mere khel ka jiske baare me maine kuch shan pehle bataya tha, uska wo bhaag jo sirf mai jaanta hun,wo pata chal jaayega..

aur aisa mai kaise hone de sakta hun....???

us chuppe hue bhaag ke baare me pata toh inhe chalega hi par sirf tab jab mai chahunga....


aur issi baat ke aadhar par mera dusra shart ye hai ki ab se ye SWORD aapki nahi hai....aapko isse abhi issi waqt azaad karna hoga....


VIDEOUS ke shart ko sunkar ek baar firse saathon ANGELS behad hairan hue...

aur hona bhi laazmi tha..sirf isiliye nahi kyunki VIDEOUS ne VIKRAM ko uski SWORD ko mukt karne ke liye kaha tha balki isiliye kyunki aisa karne ke baad bhi VIDEOUS khud us talwar ka maalik nahi ban sakta tha aur wo isiliye kyunki wo us talwar ke liye deserving nahi tha....

par unhe kahan maalum tha ki VIDEOUS ka plan kuch aisa hai jaisa wo sab kabhi nahi soch sakte the...

khair, VIDEOUS ki shart sun VIKRAM ne apni aankhen band ki aur uske agle hi pal...


AHHHH.....


ek baar firse VIDEOUS ki cheekh se pura mahoul gunj utha....

reason..

aakhen band kar VIKRAM ne khudse SWORD ko detach kiya aur aisa hoti VIKRAM ki wo urja,uska wo AURA jo uski SWORD se hamesha connected rehta tha,wo usse nikalkar VIKRAM me sama gayi aur aisa hote waqt us SWORD me tezi se vibrations paida hue jinke force se VIDEOUS ko bohot zyada taklif hui aur uske mooh se cheekh nikal gayi par cheekhne ke baad ek baar firse uske chehre par vijayi muskaan tair gayi kyunki jo usne chaha,aur jis maksad ke liye aisa chaha,wo ho chuka tha...


VIKRAM-aur kuch.....

VIDEOUS- ek aakhri shart baaki hai...darasal meri aadhi urja saare living PLANETS me chali gayi hai aur aadhi is SWORD me...

waise toh urja kabhi khatm nahi hoti par jin do chizon me (planets, sword) me meri urja kharch hui hai,uske baad meri puri Shakti ke wapas mere paas aane me waqt lagega..

bohot waqt....


DEFENDER-isiliye tumne kaha tha ki institution par kaam karne ka waqt tum hum par chhodte ho...


DEFENDER ki baat sun muskuraya VIDEOUS aur...


VIDEOUS-zahir si baat hai..meri har baat me faayda toh mai sabse pehle apna hi dekhunga naa...

par mere fayde me mere FATHERS ka bhi kam faayda nahi hai..

kyunki ye jo waqt hai,mujhe maalum ki is beech ye dono mujhse chhuttkara paane ka,mujhe samapt karne ka koi na koi tarika toh dhundenge hi..

kyun FATHER'S....


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ko taraf dekh VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi par dono filhal shaant hi rahe isiliye...


VIDEOUS-aur kyunki aap dono meri har shart puri kar rahe hain,toh aap dono ko itni chhut toh mujhe deni hi chahiye....

isiliye aapko jo plan karna hai kijiye par usse pehle meri teesri shart puri kijiye....

waise meri agli shart aapke planning se judi hui hai...

nahi samjhe,samjhata hun...toh meri teesri shart ye hai ki...

is SWORD se kuch waqt pehle tak judi aapki wo urja,wo AURA jo ab aapke paas hai,us urja aur AURA ki shakti se aap mere liye ek BANISHMENT banayenge...



ek aisi chaardiwari jike andar mai rahunga aur jisme koi bhi ghus naa sakeka.....aap dono bhi nahi....

us BANISHMENT me mai apni do bhaago me vibhajit urja ko wapas khudme sametunga...

aur jis din mai puri tarah aisa karne me kaaimiyab ho jaaunga,us din ye talwar mujhse alag hogi aur...


ASMODEUS-tab bhi tum us BANISHMENT se bahar nahi jaa sakoge...

aur wo isiliye kyunki tumhari urja humse hai aur agar hum koi aisa BANISHMENT banayenge,jisme hum bhi nahi ghus sakte toh fir usse tum bhi khudse baahar nahi nikal paaoge...

kyunki jaisa ki tumne kaha ki tumhe wo BANISHMENT us urja aur AURA ki shakti se chahiye jisse ye SWORD mujhse judi hui thi,toh aise me wo SWORD toh us BANISHMENT se baahar aa jayegi par tum usse sirf tab hi nikal paaoge jab us SWORD ka koi dhaarak banega...

kyunki jis kisiko bhi SWORD apna dhaarak chunegi,tumhari BANISHMENT jis urja se banegi, wo urja bhi us dhaarak ke andar chali jaayegi aur aisa hone par hi tumhara BANISHMENT khatm hoga....


ASMODEUS ki baat aun VIDEOUS kuch kehne ko hua par tabhi...


VIKRAM-isiliye hi isne kaha tha ki humari jo counter planning hogi,wo iske third shart se judi hogi....

kyunki isse pata hai ki hum sidhe ispar waar nahi karenge..iske khel ko kaatne ke liye hum iska pratidwandi taiyar karenge aur wahi pratidwandi hi SWORD ko uthane laayak hoga aur jab aisa hoga toh ye bhi azaad ho jaayega..

aur yahi iska asli khel hai..humare taiyar kiye gaye pratidwandi ko harakar humse jeetna...



VIDEOUS-ab ye hui naa mere FATHER wali baat..sach me FATHER,kitna kuch sikha hai maine aapse aur ummid hai ki aage bhi sikhunga...

VIKRAM-jaisa BANISHMENT tum chahte ho,wo yahan nahi ban sakti.. uske liye sirf PECULIAR SPACE hi sahi hoga...


(WRITERS NOTE-kuch yaad aaya doston.. PECULIAR SPACE...VIPERIOUS BANISHMENT...5TH UPDTATE ME IS JAGAH KE BAAREME BATAYA GAYA HAIN JAHAN KOI UPARANDHATI ATTIPRASAGGAYATE UPARANDHATI ATTIPRASAGGAYATE aur CINTAYATI AZRITA
CINTAYATI AZRITA naam ke do spell lagatar bole jaa raha tha..

ye KOI VIDEOUS hi tha jiske pehle spell ka matlab tha COMPLETE CONNECTION aur uske dusre spell ka matlab tha REFINING POWERS jisse wo apne Shakti aur AURA ko lagatar nikharte rehta tha..)



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VIDEOUS-thik hai..wahi sahi....yahi hai meri aakhri shart...isse pura kijiye aur lag jaayiye meri chunouti ke kaat ko taiyar karne me....

waqt ki kaminahi hogi...naa aapke paas aur nahi mere paas....



VIDEOUS ki baat puri hote hi VIKRAM ki aankhen ek baar firse band ho gayi aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal uske sharir se ek roshni nikli jisne wahan moujud sabhi ko apne ghere me le liya aur fir...

wo sabhi gayab ho chuke the..gayab hone ke agle hi pal wo sab pahunche us jagah par jiska zikr VIKRAM ne kuch der pehle kiya tha..

wo jagah jo ab se kaafi samay tak VIDEOUS ka ghar hone waala tha....

PECULIAR SPACE....

bramhaand ka wo hissa jo universe ka bhag hokar bhi nahi tha.. ek cursed jagah thi ye space jahan is waqt wo sabhi khade the...

wahin jaise hi sab is jagah par pahunche toh un sabke saamne ek BANISHMENT CELL pehle hi taiyar ho chuka tha jisse dekh...


VIDEOUS-meri vidayi ki itni bhi kya jaldi thi FATHER ki humare yahan aane se pehle hi meri bandish ka intazam kar chuke the aap...??

VIKRAM-apni haisiyat se zyada waqt le chuke ho tum hamara VIDEOUS... isiliye ye bewajah ke tarkon par samay barbaad kiye bina apne naye ghar me pravesh karo...

VIDEOUS-meri haisiyat...!!iski ek jhalak toh aap meri utpatti hote hi dekh chuke hain,dusri bohot jald dekhenge aur teesri aur aakhri baar meri haisiyat aap dono ke aur pure bramhaand ke saamne us din ke bad se lagatar aayegi jis din mai is BANISHMENT ae baahar niklunga..


ye bolte bolte VIDEOUS aage badha aur is BANISHMENT ke andar bina kisi vyavadhan ke pahunch gaya aur ye hua us SWORD ki wajah se jo is waqt uske sharir me dhasa hua tha...

jaisa ki VIKRAM ne kaha tha,ki us SWORD ko us BANISHMENT ae guzarne me koi takleef nahi hogi aur wahi hua...

wahin BANISHMENT ke andar pahunch VIDEOUS palta aur filhal ke liye apne dono pitah se kahe usne apne kuch aakhri shabd....


VIDEOUS-ye sword jo filhal mere andar hai,ek naa ek din mujhe chhodkar bahar niklega aur uske baad jis din bhi isse iska dharak mila,ye uske haath me aaya toh mai yahan se azaad ho jaunga..

aur us din se shuru hogi spraddha..uske aur mere beech...agar wo jeeta toh aap dono jeete par agar mai jeeta toh aap dono sab kuch haar jaayenge...


isiliye itni hi darkhwasth hai aapse ki jo bhi competition aap mere saamne rakhen,wo wakayi meri takkar ka ho...

VIKRAM/ASMODEUS-aisa hi hoga.....


ye baat bolte hi VIKRAM, ASMODEUS aur saathon angels gayab ho gaye jiske baad


VIDEOUS-par ye aap logon ke liye aasan bhi nahi hoga...

hahahahahahaha....


zoron se hasa VIDEOUS aur fir....



ZAMENTATOSTARI SHAKTIYEM

OBSERVE THE POWER...


SWORD se apni urja ko sokhne ke liye lagatar kayi hazar saalon tak is spell ka uccharan kiya VIDEOUS ne...

aur fir wo pal bhi aaya jab uski urja ka wo pura bhaag jo SWORD me chala gaya tha, usse usne wapas kheench liya aur aisa hote hi...

wo SWORD VIDEOUS ke sharir se aur us BANISHMENT se nikal baahar chali gayi aur sidhe jaakar rooki ZEAL PLANET par...

wahin jaise hi SWORD VIDEOUS ke sharir se bahar nikli toh ek pal ke liye wo chup raha aur fir....



UPARANDHATI ATTIPRASAGGAYATE

UPARANDHATI ATTIPRASAGGAYATE


CINTAYATI AZRITA

CINTAYATI AZRITA


ye do spell uccharit hone lage VIDEOUS ke mooh se jiske baad uski aankhen band ho gayi...

wahan uski aankhen aur scene band hua aur yahan...

meri aankhen khul gayi....

SWORD ke handle ko pakda mai usse dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...

ek current sa douda us SWORD me jiske baad meri aankhen ek baar firse band ho gayi aur is baar meri band aankhon se saamne tha ek naya FLASHBACK jisme mujhe dikha VIKRAM....

ZEAL ka VIKRAM.....

mai dekh raha tha ki kaise VIKRAM ne apni aur ASMODEUS k urja ke mishran se banaya ZEAL waale VIKRAM ko par fir mere saamne ek baar firse wahi scene chalne laga jab us VIKRAM ne is SWORD ko chhua aur aisa hone ke baad uske saamne ek situation aayi jispar usse ek faisla lena tha aur jab usne wo faisla liya toh uske agle hi pal uske saath pura Planet hi nestonaabut ho gaya...

yahi tha apni haisiyat dikhane ka wo dusra mouka jiske baare me VIDEOUS ne VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS se kaha tha...

khair,is flashback ko dekhte waqt hi mere andar mere SOUL ne bhi mujhe ek naya scene dikhaya...

ek naya FLASHBACK back yaa fir ye kahun ki mere liye sabse important flashback....

kyunki ye flashback meri utpatti ka tha...kaise mere chaaron organs ko chaar dead PLANETS par bichaya gaya..

par most importantly,aisa kyun karna pada,ye bhi mujhe pata chal gaya...

in sabke beech ek nayi cheez ho rahi thi aur wo ye ki bhale hi mujhe mera brain,body, blood aur SOUL mil chuke the par fir bhi ab tak mai andar se khaali khaali hi mehsoos karta raha tha par jaise jaise meri utpatti ka kaaran mere ankhon ke saamne aa raha tha,mere chaaron bhaagon ko unke maayne milte jaa rahe the.

meri soch,us soch ka sach aur sabse important,mere hone ki wajah ko jaise mera mind,meri body,mera blood aur mera soul khudme bharte chale jaa rahe the..

aur jaise hi mujhe meri utpatti ka tarika aur kaaran clear hua toh mai bhi jaise pura ho gaya....

bijli si doudi mere haathon me aur aisa hote hi...

meri band aankhon ke saamne ek drishya aa gaya...yaa fir ye kahun ki VIKRAM ki hi tarah mere saamne bhi ek practical sawal tha jisse clear karne ke baad hi mujhe ye SWORD milti aur agar mai aisa nahi kar paata,toh VIKRAM ki hi tarah,mera marna bhi fixed tha..

khair, jaisa ki maine bataya ki ye ek practical scene tha jiska matlab hai ki mai khud is scene ka hissa tha...

DRISHYAM:-


is waqt mai ek sunsaan viran si jagah par khada tha...mere aage wo cave waali SWORD rakhi hui thi jisse mai dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...


KAISE HO RAAZ...!!!!!


mere saamne se ye awaaz aayi jispar jab maine saamne dekha toh
mujhse thodi door khada tha VIDEOUS ka pratibimbh jo mujhe dekh muskura raha tha...

par mai bas usse ek tak dekhe jaa raha tha aur tabhi...


VIDEOUS-SWORD chahiye....le lo..bas ek chota sa kaam karo aur ye SWORD tumhari hai...

isse lo aur inhe maar do...


VIDEOUS ke aisa kehte hi mere saamne kuch chote se bacche aa gaye jo mujhe hi dekh rahe the...

par khaas baat ye thi ki ye bacche mere wo fellowmates the jo mere saath mere hostel me raha karte the..

ye bacche unke baalya kaal ka roop the....


VIDEOUS-inhe maar do aur ye SWORD tumhara....


VIDEOUS jo ki mujhe maalum tha ki bas ek fake resemblance se zyada kuch nahi hai aur jisse sirf is test ke liye rakha gaya hai,uski bat sun maine zamin me gadi SWORD uthayi aur aage badha...

un chand bacchon ke paas pahunch maine apni talwar uthayi hi thi ki..


VIDEOUS-ek baat batana reh gaya...tumhe lag raha hoga ki kyunki ye ek illusion hai,toh isiliye in bacchon ko jo ki ek mithya hi hai,maarna kaun si galat baat hogi par aisa hai nahi...

jab tum in bacchon ko maar rahe hoge,tab us waqt tumhare brain,body, blood aur SOUL..in chaaron ka tumhare is kaarya me swikriti dena zaroori hai...

kehne ka matlab hai ki inhe maarte waqt tumhe aur tumhare har ang ko inhe sach me maarne ki khawahish honi chahiye...

aisa hone par hi ye SWORD is baat par yakin karegi ki tumhare liye iski ehmiyat kisi bekasoor ki jaan se bhi zyada zaroori hai..

aur issi yakin ke adhar par hi tumhe ye SWORD mil sakta hai...

ek line me kahun toh....


MOUT BHALE HI NAKLI HO PAR MAARNE KE JASBAAT ASLI HONE CHAHIYE...


VIDEOUS ke pratibimbh ki baat sunane ke baad ek pal ke liye mai rooka,apni aankhen band ki aur khudke andar jhaanka maano khudse hi jawab maang raha hun aur fir agle hi pal...


SOOOOOBBBBB....


meri aakhen khuli par usse pehle hi meri SWORD chal chuki thi jiske baad mere saamne line me baithe sabhi bacchon ke sir unke dhad se alag ho chuke the....

wahin jab aisa hua toh....

mere DRISHYAM me ek tez roshni fail gayi jiske agle hi pal meri aankhen jo drishyam dekhne ki wajah se band thi,khul gayi aur...

ek jhatke me SWORD ya fir ye kahun ki MERI SWORD mere haath me thi aur aisa hote hi mere lab hile...


MAI-

dhoop nikli hai,par fir bhi
baadal CHAA GAYA HAI...

khouf faili hui hai,
mere naam ka jo HAWA GAYA HAI....

tujhe competition chahiye tha,
dekh mai tere saamne hun....

VIDEOUS ko mitane aakhir,
RAAZ AA GAYA HAI.....




THIK USSI WAQT...




PECULIAR SPACE


PLACE-VIPERIOUS BANISHMENT




BOOM.............



ek tez dhamaka hua us BANISHMENT me jiske baad wo pura BANISHMENT gayab ho gaya...

beech universe me hone ke baawajud bhi us puri jagah me dhuan dhuan ho chuka tha par wo dhuan bohot tezi se chhat bhi gaya yaa fir ye kahun ki gayab ho gaya aur jab aisa hua toh....

paalthi maare aankh band kiye baithe VIDEOUS ki aankh khul gayi...

chehre par ek behtarin muskurat liye uske lab hile aur...

VIDEOUS-


jo ek dhaage ko dusre se baandhe,
mai wo SUTR HUN....

mai tera mitr,mai hi tera shatru,
par sarvpratham, mai tera PUTR hun....



jisse peekar pyas bujhe nahi aur
badhe,MAI WO PAANI HUN...

mai kahani ka koi paatr nahi,
balki khud PURI KAHANI HUN...



buddhi ki shuruat jahan se hui,
mai wo GENIUS HUN...

mai hi ALPHA,mai hi OMEGA
MAI.........VIDEOUS HUN.........








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V...J.....













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Black water

Vasudhaiv Kutumbakam
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Mind blowing update bhai akhir Raaz sampurn hogaya and videous bhi azaad hogaya ab hoga asli khel Raaz vs Videous
 
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