Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ALFREEN AUR MABEL ANWIR AUR MORANA KE DIYE HUE CHALLENGE KO PURA KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ SWORD KE HANDLE KO PAKAD LETA HAI JISKE BAAD USSE EK SCENE DIKHNE LAGTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



MEGA UPDATE-49



PLANET-EYLSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



1 MONTH LATER:-





PRATIBANDHANA



is spell ke prabhaav me aate hi sabhi SAVENTS ko jo taklif hoti hai,wo hone lagi par phir bhi sabhi puri dedication ke saath lage rahe...

pichle mahine aaj ke hi din ALFREEN aur MABEL ne ko kiya tha,uska prabhaav is class ke lagbhag sabhi SAVENTS par pada tha aur shayad yahi kaaran tha ki 4 SAVENTS ko chhod baaki sabhi ne apne SOUL ko 1 percent tak aakhir AMPLIFY kar diya tha...

wahin VALDIS filhal 3 percent par tha, MABEL aur ALFREEN 4 par jo unhone pichle month hi haasil kar liya tha aur in sabse aage thi MAHI..

jo abhi 6 percent par thi aur 7 percent AMPLIFICATION ke bhi baar baar behad kareeb pahuch rahi thi..

bas kuch minutes ka control hi tha jo filhal MAHI nahi kar paa rahi thi par aaj usne tay kar liya tha ki un kuch minutes ke faasle ko wo kisi bhi tarah fill kar kar hi rahegi..

chaliye jab tak inka CEREBRATION process paused hai,tab tak mai aapko inke NEXT PHASE ke teeno catagories ki qualification strength ke baare me vata dun...

toh ganit kuch aisa hai ki STELLARS group me shaamil hone ke liye ek SAVENT ka kamsekam 2 percent apne SOUL ke amplify karna zaroori hai...

wahin GROOMERS catagory me 1 percent AMPLIFICATION yaa fir apne SOUL ko AMPLIFICATION process ke liye trigger karne waale SAVENT aate hain....

aur last catagory jisse WEAKLINGS kaha jaata hai,inme un SAVENTS ko entry milti hai yaa fir ye kahun ki SAVENTS ko feka jaata hai jo first PHASE me apne SOUL process ko AMPLIFY karne ke liye trigger tak nahi kar paayen hain...

toh ye hain teeno catagories aur unme qualify karne ke liye hone waale AMPLIFICATION...

aur in qualification ke hissab se baaki sabhi SAVENTS yaa toh STELLARS ya fir GROOMERS ki catagory me already qualify kar chuke hain siwaye ek ke...

aur issi wajah se....



INSIDE NEXT CLASSROOM:-


common BRAWNY...you can di it son...bas apne focus aur focus karo...

tum bohot jaldi haar maan le rahe ho....dont give up so soon...

apne will power ko strong karo,apni sehensheelta ke daayre ko badhao taaki tumhara soul bhi AMPLIFICATION ke liye trigger ho jaaye..

common,you can do it...


lagatar BRAWNY ka housla badha rahi thi WHIZZ OPHILIA wahin is waqt unki kahi baaton ko dimag me feed kar BRAWNY laga hua tha apne CEREBRATION process ko pause me rakh apne SOUL ko trigger karne me par fir kuch der baad wahi hua,jo aaj tak hota aaya hai....

dard ki atyadhikta ka sahan naa kar paane ki wajah se uska CEREBRATION process firse shuru ho gaya jiski wajah se uski aankhen khul gayi...


OPHILIA-aise kaam nahi chalega BRAWNY.... sirf 2 mahine hi bache hain tumhare first PHASE ko khatm hone ke liye..

tumhare sabhi PHASEMATES ne apne apne soul ko trigger bhi kar liya hai aur unke AMPLIFICATION percentage bhi shuru ho chuke hain..

par tumne abhi tak apne soul ko trigger bhi nahi kiya hai...agar aisa hi chalta raha toh tumhe next PHASE me WEAKLINGS catagory me jaana hoga and trust me...

jis sharirik dard ko tum filhal jhel nahi paa rahe ho,us PHASE me
isse kayi guna zyada tumhe maansik dard sehna hoga...

aur tum uske liye kuch kar bhi nahi paaoge... isiliye jitna bhi waqt bacha hai,usme kamsekam apne SOUL ko toh trigger kar hi lo taaki kamsekam tum GROOMERS catagory ke laayak ho jaao....


WHIZZ OPHILIA ki baat sir neeche kar chupchaap BRAWNY sunta raha...

aur bhala wo kar bhi kya sakta tha....inte waqt se wo koshish kar raha tha..

aur aisa karne ke dauran jis dard se usse guzarna padta tha, usne uski body ko toh koi nuksaan nahi pahunchaya,par uske confidence level ki jo pehle se hi kam thi,uski dhajjiya ud chuki thi..

aur shayad yahi reason tha ki ab wo WHIZZ ki baaton ko ek kaan se aunkar dusre se nikal deta tha..

usne next PHASE me khudko pehle hi as a WEAKLING dekhna shuru kar diya tha...

is class me tha BRAWNY,jo apne soul ko AMPLIFY karna toh door, trigger tak nahi par paaya tha aur wahin dusri class me....


ek ke baad ek kul chaar baar puri class roshni se naha gayi..

reason...

pehle VALDIS,fir, MABEL,uske baad ALFREEN ar aakhir me MAHI ne ek baar firse apne apne soul ko AMPLIFY kar liya tha....

aur jaise hi aakhri roshni kam hui aur nazara normal hua toh...

puri class taaliyon ki gadgadahat se gunj uthi...

is clapping me VIOLET, OMMIN aur NOX bhi shaamil the aur saath hi behad khush bhi the...

reason...

shayad CHOSENS ke 25 thousand saal ke itihaas me ye batch best batch tha aur wo isiliye kyunki is PHASE me ek saath 4,4 SAVENTS ne apne soul ko itna zyada AMPLIFY kiya tha...

ab aise batch ke WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hona gaurav ki baat toh thi hi..


VIOLET-VALDIS... congrats..aaj tumne apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai and we are very proud of that...

VALDIS-thank you WHIZZ...

NOX-MABEL, ALFREEN.... congrats to the both of you..aaj tumne apne SOUL ko 5 percent AMPLIFY kar liya hai and thats a big,big achievement...

OMMIN-pure CHOSENS ke history me you both have become only the fourth and fifth SAVENT to achieve this milestone...
and by achieving that,you have made us very proud....

MABEL/ALFREEN-thank you WHIZZDERS....

VIOLET-and last but definitely not the least, actually the best..MAHI...

ab kya kahen tumhare baare me...tum pehli aisi SAVENT ho jisne hume pure PHASE me lagatar hairan kiya hai...

aaj tumne apne SOUL ko 7 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai aur ye batane ki zaroorat toh hai nahi ki you are the very first to do it....

aur iske liye agar hum ye kahen ki we are proud of you toh ye ek understatement hoga....

isiliye bas itna kahenge ki are waiting ki tum hame aur surprise karo...

MAHI-thank you WHIZZ and yes,i will try my level best...

VIOLET-aur issike saath aaj ko class yahin khatm hoti hai...


taarif ke pool bandhne ke baad VIOLET WHIZZ NOX aur OMMIN ke saath class se nikal gayi wahin unke jaate hi sabhi SAVENTS ne wk baar firse MAHI, ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS lo gher liya aur unhe congrats karne lage..




THE ORIGIN,THE FLASHBACK BEGINS:-


PLACE-THE DARK UNIVERSE





AAJ PAANCH HAZAR SAALON SE MAI BINA KISI ROOP KE GHUM RAHA HUN AUR YE SAB SIRF USKE KAARAN....


(ATTITUDE,PART-1,LAST UPDATE,LAST PARAGRAPH WITH LINES THAT WERE MISSING IN THAT PART)


wo kaali chaadar jo ki asal me BLACK ENERGY thi,wo filhal ek nirjeev satellite ke upar ghoom rahi thi....

uske movements ki thirkan se uski bechaini aur ghussa saaf jhalak raha tha...

aur ussi ghusse ke saath wo apne aap se baatein kar rahi thi ki....aur fir usne apne ghusse ka kaaran bataya ye fir ya kehna zyada sahi hoga ki us ghusse ke neev ka naam lekar cheekh pada...


BLACK ENERGY-VIKRAM...wo dhurth VIKRAM....


vikram ye tune acha nahi kiya mere saath......aur ASMODEUS,tu.......maine tujhe devils king ke naam se nawaza..

tujhe behisaab shaktiyan di aur tune mujhe hi dhoka diya....aur wo bhi us GOD ke liye.........

jisne tujhe tere hi ghar se nikal diya tha....jisne tere ohde ke saath teri shakti ka sabse bada bhaag bhi tujhse chhin liya tha...

tune us matlab parast ke liye mujhe thukraya,mujhe dhoka diya tune....


ye bolte waqt ek tez thirkan hui us BLACK ENERGY ke beech jaise wo khud par control kho raha ho par fir wo thirkan dheere dheere kam hone lagi maano BLACK ENERGY khudko kaabu me kar rahi ho...

aur fir jab wo ENERGY puri tarah shaant hui toh....


BLACK ENERGY-par koi baat nahi.haar jeet toh lagi rehti hai...beeta kal tumhara tha,aane waala kal mera hoga......

mere saath shadyantra karte waqt tum dono bhaiyon ko pata bhi nahi chala ki tum dono ki shakti se kaun si nayi musibat janm le rahi hai.....

ISLA me tumhara wo jhutta dwand, PARALLEL WORLD me mujhse chhuttkara paane se pehle tumhara wo mithya se bhara shakti pradarshan...

wo saari ladhayi bhale hi jhutti thi,par us yudh me nikalne waali tum dono se energy bilkul asli thi...

aur wo shakti kitni ghaatak thi,iska tum dono ko hi andaza nahi raha...

us waqt ASMODEUS me MAI tha,aur VIKRAM me khud GOD....

ek taraf BLACK ENERGY aur dusri taraf GOD...THE MAKER OF WHITE ENERGY....

wo do shaktiyan jinme samaya hua hai ye pura bramhaand aur tum ne inhi do shaktiyon ki dhaar ko,unke pravah ko yunhi khule me chhod diya...

hahahahaha...

itne vidwan hokar koi itna murkh kaise ho sakta hai....

tum dono ne socha ki PARMESHWAR PUTR ka dwand hai,toh parinaam bhi dono ke beech hi hoga kintu tum dono hi saamanya vigyaan bhul gaye..

jab do tez dhaar pathar aapas me ragdate hai toh unke beech teesri chiz baahar nikalti hai...

agni...wo agni jisme ek pure grah ko jhulsa dene ki shakti hoti hai..

wo agni jo bhale hi maatra me kam ho par fir bhi uisse suraj ke taap se bhi fark nahi padta...

tum dono ne ussi agni ko utpann bhi kar diya aur usse khule me chhod usse hawa bhi de di...

tum dono bhale hi sarvshaktimaan ho,ek surya ki tarah ho par jo urja tum dono se nikli hai,wo aisi agni hai jisse koi surya mita nahi sakta ulta wo us agni ke taap ko aur badhayega...

us anant shakti ke shroth par tum dono ki nazar pade,usse pehle hi maine usse khudme samet liya tha....

itne varsho tak uske taap ko,uski urja ko is anant bramhaand me sambhalkar rakha maine sirf aaj ke din ki pratiksha me...

kyunki aaj us shakti ne aur uske andar ki anant urja ne khudko sayyamit kar liya hai...

aur isiliye uske janm ka samay ho gaya hai....

ab dekhna,tum dono ki hi shakti ko mai uska astitv dunga....aisa pehli baar hoga jab pitah koi aur hoga par janm daata koi aur........


ye bol BLACK ENERGY ki ray jo ki uski nirman shakti thi,wo aage badhi aur uske saamne rakhi ek bohot prakashwaan urja par wo ray padi aur jaise hi ye hua,kaale aur safed urja ke mishran se ek aakar banane laga...

kuch hi samay me us urja ne ek manushya ka aakar dhaaran karna shuru kiya aur dekhte hi dekhte us urja ne ek INSAANI ROOP le liya....

ek behad hi khubsoorat insaani roop....par filhal uski aankhen band thi....

kaale aur safed labade ke mishran se bane robe ke andar dhaka ek gora maanav sa dikhne waala prani jiski filhal saansein kaafi zoron se chal rahi maano wo bohot lambi race daudkar aaya ho...

aur chale bhi kyun naa,aakhri pehli baar wo saans jo le raha tha....

wahin apni rachna ko behad dhyan aur garv se dekh raha tha BLACK ENERGY....


BLACK ENERGY-hmm....adhbhudhhhhh....shakal toh apne dono pitah par hi gayi hai tumhari...

aadhi VIKRAM par aur aadhi ASMODEUS par.....

jab surat pitaon par gayi hai toh naam bhi unpar hi hona chahiye,haina????

par kya????

VIKRAM.......ASMODEUS....

VI...........................DEUS....


arre waah,itni jaldi naam bhi mil gaya.....


tera naam hoga ''VIDEUS''........

ek aisa naam jo badal dega puri kahani aur saath hi badal jaayega sabka

ATTITUDE..............


jaise hi BLACK ENERGY ne VIDEOUS kaha,toh uske agle hi pal us praani jiska ab naam VIDEOUS tha,uski aankhen khul gayi...

halki bhuri aankhen jinme ek aisa kheenchav tha jo kisi PLANET ke gurutwakarshan force se bhi zyada strong tha...

aur unhi halki bhuri aankhon se wo ek tak apne saamne ghum rahe BLACK ENERGY ko dekh raha tha..

uske chehre par koi expressions nahi the..chamakti aankhon ki putliyon se wo bas saamne BLACK energy ko dekh raha tha...

aur jab kaafi der tak wo chup hi raha toh..


BLACK ENERGY-swagat hai tumhara VI....

VIDEOUS-SHHHSHHHHHHHHH...


apne ek ungli ko apne honthon par lagakar black energy se chup rehne ko kaha VIDEOUS ne....


uske SHHH se nikalne waali hawa me itni taakat thi ki jaise hi us hawa ne aage badhte hue BLACK ENERGY ko chhua,toh BLACK ENERGY ki wo chaadar halki piche ki taraf ud si gayi....

wahin VIDEOUS ke dwara khudko chup karaye jaane se BLACK ENERGY thodi hairan bhi ho gayi thi...

par usne kuch kaha nahi,wo chup hi rahi par tabhi pehli baar hile VIDEOUS ke honth aur....


VIDEOUS-jitna bolna tha,mere jaagne se pehle bol chuke ho tum..ab aur koi baat nahi...

mujhe wahi awaaz sunana pasand hai,jinme dard ho,tadap ho, taklif ho....

aur tumhara dard,tumhari tadap, tumhari taklif toh ussi din khatm ho gayi thi jis din tumne mujhe paa liya tha...


ye sab bol VIDEOUS ne ek baar apni gardan chaaron taraf ghumayi maano pure universe ko wahin khade khade dekh raha ho aur baat bhi wahi thi..

VIDEOUS ki nazar jis jis disha ki taraf ghumi,us disha ki anant doori tak ka drishya dekh paa raha tha VIDEOUS...

sab taraf nazar ghumane ke baad uski nazar wapas BLACK ENERGY par aakar rooki aur.....


VIDEOUS-waise main khush hun tumse...kaaran jaante ho meri khushi kaa.???

BLACK ENERGY-maine tumhe itne waqt tak sambhal kar rakha, isiliye....

VIDEOUS-galat jawab...naam tumne mera bada acha rakha hai, isiliye...

VIDEOUS.....VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS,mere dono pitah ke naam ko ek kar bana naam, VIDEOUS....


VIKRAM, ASMODEUS...jab VIDEOUS ne ye do naam liye toh uski aankhon me ek chamak thi maano wo un dono naamo ko badi izzat de raha ho jisse mehsoos kar BLACK ENERGY ko bura laga aur isiliye...


BLACK ENERGY-jin do naamo ka zikr tumne kiya hai,unhise badla lene ke liye hi maine tumhe itne varshon tak sambhal kar rakha hai aur aaj tumhe ye roop diya hai..

VIDEOUS-jawab thoda sa galat hai tumhara..tumne mujhe isiliye ye roop diya hai kyunki jin naamo ka zikr maine kiya,unse ladhne aur jeetne ke tum yogya nahi ho...

sahi kaha naa..!!!!


fadfadahat si hui VIDEOUS ke jawab ko sunkar BLACK ENERGY ki chaadar me jisse dekh

VIDEOUS-hahahahahaaaaaa....


bohot zoron se hasa VIDEOUS par fir ek dum se chup hokar usne BLACK ENERGY ko dekha aur...


VIDEOUS-khel aarambh kare...mujhe behad talab ho rahi hai apne dono pitah se milne ki....


VIDEOUS ne apni baat kehte kehte hi apne dono haath faila diye the jiski baad wo Black energy ki chaadar ek baar zor se fadfadayi aur fir agle hi pal....

wo tezi se aage badhi aur VIDEOUS ko chaaron taraf se khudme lapet liya...

lapetne ke baad wo chaadar tezi se VIDEOUS ke chaaron taraf ghumne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte wo kaali chaadar khudko sokhta hue VIDEOUS ke sharir me vilin ho gayi...

aur jab aisa hua toh VIDEOUS jo ki 6 feet ka tha, uski height kuch inch aur zyada ho gayi..uska rang aur gora ho gaya aur uski bhuri aankhon ke side layers halke kaale ho gaye...

par ye saare changes internal the par wahin jab BLACK ENERGY VIDEOUS ke andar samayi toh...pura bramhaand halka halka shake kar gaya..

bramhaand ke ek behad hi andhere bhaag me tha is waqt VIDEOUS par
black ENERGY ke usme samate hi uske andar ki white energy halki chhatpatayi aur aisa hone par VIDEOUS se hota hua ek behad tez prakash har taraf fail gaya...

is tez prakash me itni shakti thi ki iske daayre ke beech aaye kayi saare dead planets puri tarah toot kar bikhar gaye...

par fir VIDEOUS ne apne andar ke black energy aur white energy ke beech par ek saath control paana shuru kiya aur aisa hote hi wo universe ka shake aur us white urja ka chhatpatana band hota chala gaya...

par jo reactions already ho chuke yhe,unka toh kuch kiya jaa sakta tha nahi yaa fir ye kahun ki VIDEOUS aisa chahta hi nahi tha aur shayad isiliye...


KADKADKADKAD.....

KADKADKADKAD.....

KADKADKADKAD......


VIDEOUS ke saamne ek ke baad ek teen baar zoron se bijli kadki aur us bijli ke beech se baahar aaye teen log yaa fir ye kahun ki teen ANGELS....


MOKALSAR.....

SHAILA.....

AKSHAANT......


aur un dono ke prakat hote hi VIDEOUS ki aankhen khul gayi...


VIDEOUS-CHERUBIM ANGELS.....


AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ki urja ko mehsoos karte hi VIDEOUS ko unki rank ka andaza ho gaya tha...


AKSHAANT-tumhare andar se beintehan negetive vibes nikal rahi hai...kaun ho tum...???

kyun tumhare shakti se is bramhaand par asar hua tha....???


VIDEOUS-negetive vibes...???dobara mehsoos karo...


VIDEOUS ki baat ko sun AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR teeno chownke...

reason..

jo negetive vibes unhe VIDEOUS se feel ho rahi thi,wo vibe gayab ho chuki thi...


SHAILA-ye kaise sambhav hai..??iski nakaratmak urja achanak kahan vilupt ho gayi...???

MOKALSAR-iska jawab toh yahi dega...

parichay do apna....

VIDEOUS-tum teeno iske laayak nahi ho.aur waise bhi,jinhe pata hona chahiye,unhe mere baare me ab tak pata chal hi gaya hoga...

SHAILA-kisse pata chal gaya hoga...???

VIDEOUS-mere dono pitah ko..???

MOKALSAR-tumhare do pitah hain..!!!kaun hain wo..???

VIDEOUS-aapke dono LORDS...VIKRAM, ASMODEUS....


yahan VIDEOUS ka mooh band hua aur wahan SHAILA, MOKALSAR aur AKSHAANT ke mooh khul gaye....


SHAILA-tum jaante bhi ho ki tum kya bol rahe ho...???

VIDEOUS-kya tum jaanti ho ki tum aur ye dono abhi tak kaise mere saamne sir uthakar baat kar paa rahe ho....??

sirf VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ki wajah se...un dono ne tum teeno ko ek samman yogya pad diya hai jisme tum teeno ke hisaab se beintahan taakat hai..

mai bas tumhari is galat fehmi ko todna nahi chahta...

isiliye jaao aur mere dono pitah se kaho ki VIDEOUS unka intezar kar raha hai....


VIDEOUS ki baaton me un teeno ne apne liye tuch hone ko bhaavna ko mehsoos kar liya tha jiske baad un teeno ko hi behad krodh aa gaya aur isiliye...


SHAILA-baaton ka waqt khatm hua bacche...ab tumhe tumhari uddandata ka dand milega...


ye bol SHAILA ne VIDEOUS ko jakadne aur sabak sikhane ke liye ek bijli se bane rope ka awahan kiya jisse wo VIDEOUS ko baandh bhi sake aur us rope se usse jhatke bhi lag sake...

SHAILA ke awahan karte hi uske haathon ke upar ek tez bijli chamki aur aisa hote hi SHAILA ne us bijli ke rope ko VIDEOUS ki taraf kar diya aur tabhi...

AHHHH....

ek tez cheekh nikli SHAILA ke mooh se..

reason....

us bijli se bana rope aage toh badha par aadhe raste se hi usne apna raasta badla aur wapas ghumte hue SHAILA ki taraf mood gaya aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal us rope ne SHAILA ko hi jakad liya tha..

itna hi nahi,us bijli ke rope ki shakti bhi SHAILA dwara utpaan kiye gaye power se kayi guna zyada thi jiski wajah se SHAILA ki haalat kuch hi seconds me kharab hone lagi thi..

wahin SHAILA ke baju me khade AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR ki toh hairani ek alag hi level par chali gayi thi..

reason..

un dono ko ye toh pata chal hi gaya tha ki SHAILA ke prahar ko VIDEOUS ne hi moda hai par ye karne ke liye VIDEOUS ko naa toh koi spell bolna pada yaa fir man me kuch sochna pada tha..

uske sharir ne apne aap khatre ko sense kar us khatre ko usse create karne waale ke upar mod diya tha aur ye bohot hi badi baat thi kyunki aisa karte hue unhone sirf do logon
ko dekha tha..

VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS...

wo ye soch hi rahe the ki...


VIDEOUS-jinka naam tumhare andar gunja hai,mai baat sirf unse hi karunga...

isiliye tum teeno jaa sakte ho...


VIDEOUS ke aisa bolte hi SHAILA ko lapeta hua wo bijli ka rope gayab ho gaya jiske baad wo neeche baith gayi.

jahan AKSHAANT ne usse sahara dekar uthaya wahin MOKALSAR ne do man hi man do naam pukare jiske baad...


KADKADKADKAD....

KADKADKADKAD......


ek ke baad ek do baar bijliyan kadki aur fir un bijliyon ke beech se nikle DEFENDER....PROTECTOR.OF THE UNIVERSE...

aur BEELZEBUB.....THE HEIR OF WHITE ENERGY.....


prakat hone ke saath hi un dono ko yahan jo kuch bhi hua tha,wo pata chal gaya jiske baad wo dono bhi

kaafi hairan ho gaye....

wahin BEELZEBUB ko dekh VIDEOUS ke chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi....


BEELZEBUB-is baat se fark nahi padta ki tumhara satya kya hai???tumne ek ANGEL ko taklif pahunchayi hai aur iske liye tumhe dand milega...

VIDEOUS-ye kya tarika hua apne BHAI se milne ka..???


ye bol VIDEOUS BEELZEBUB ki taraf badha jisse dekh...


BEELZEBUB-apni jagah par khade raho ladke...agar aur aage badhe toh mrityu ko prapt kar jaaoge..


BEELZEBUB ki baat ko sunane ke baad bhi muskurate hue aage badhta chala gaya VIDEOUS jiske baad BEELZEBUB ne ek force ray uspar chhod diya..

is force ray me itni taakat thi ki ek mountain ko bhi beech se tod de...

wo force ray tezi se aage badhta hua VIDEOUS ke paas pahuncha aur...

wahin rook gaya.....aur aisa hote dekh BEELZEBUB ne ek ke baad ek kayi waar kiya VIDEOUS ki direction ki taraf par sabka wahi haal hua jo us force ray ka hua tha...

wahin DEFENDER bas ektak VIDEOUS ko dekhe jaa rahe the...

VIDEOUS chalta hua BEELZEBUB ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya aur...


VIDEOUS-gale milo mujhse mere BHAI....


VIDEOUS ke aisa bolte hi jitne bhi waar BEELZEBUB ne kiye the,unke rays BEELZEBUB ke dono haathon par pade jiske baad BEELZEBUB apne aap aage badha aur VIDEOUS ke gale lag gaya...

usne bohot koshish ki khudko alag karne ki par wo kaamiyab nahi ho paaya..

kuch der tak gale lagne ke baad VIDEOUS BEELZEBUB se alag hua...

aisa hone ke bad BEELZEBUB ke haath toh neeche ho gaye par uski body waisi hi akdi hui thi jiski wajah se wo hil bhi nahi paa raha tha...

wahin jaise hi VIDEOUS BEELZEBUB se alag hua toh...


DEFENDER-sach batao,kaun ho tum...???


ye bolte hue DEFENDER ne apne ek haath se VIDEOUS ka kandha pakad liya aur wahan dabaw banane laga...

VIDEOUS-tumhe mujhe mujhse bina puche chhuna nahi chahiye tha...


VIDEOUS ke aisa bolte hi ek ajeeb baat hui..toh hua ye ki jo pressure DEFENDER VIDEOUS ke kandhe par bana rahe the,ab wahi pressure unhe apne kandhe par mehsoos hone laga aur wo bhi dogune force ke saath..

unhone apne haath ko VIDEOUS ke kandhe se hatane ki koshish ki par wo aisa kar nahi sake..

unhe aisa laga jaise unke haath uske kandhe par chipak gaye hain...

dekhte hi dekhte dard ki adhikta ki wajah se DEFENDER apne ghutno par aa gaye aur aisa hote dekh...

SHAILA, AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR, teeno hi VIDEOUS ki taraf badhe par tabhi...

BOOM.....


jahan un teeno ke pair the,uske neeche tez dhamake hue jiski wajah se wo teeno udte hue piche ki taraf jaakar gire...

girte hi un teeno ne uthne ki koshish ki par tabhi,zamin ke andar se black energy ke bane ropes nikle aur unhone un teeno ko jakad liya..

itna hi nahi,black energy ke direct impact ki wajah se un teeno ko chetna bhi jaane lagi par tabhi....


KADKADKADKAD...

KADKADKADKAD....


firse do baar bijli kadki aur un bijliyon ke beech se prakat hue RONIT aur ANJALI.....


prakat hote hi ANJALI ke haath se ek energy beam nikli aur sidhe DEFENDER ke haath aur VIDEOUS ke kandhe par jaakar lagi jisse VIDEOUS ko kuch hua toh nahi par DEFENDER ka haath zaroor uske kandhe se detach ho gaya...

wahin RONIT ke aankhon se teen rays nikal un black energy se bane ropes par padi jinhone AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ko jakda hua tha aur aisa hote hi wo ropes gayab ho gayi...

RONIT aur ANJALI ke us jagah par kadam rakhte hi VIDEOUS ko unke ohde ke baare me pata chal gaya tha aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-SEREPHIM ANGELS....acha laga aap dono ko dekh kar....ummid hai ki aapko bhi apne best friend ke bete se milkar khushi hui hogi...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun RONIT aur ANJALI man hi man chownke par unhone apne chehre se apni hairani zaahir nahi hone di...


RONIT-khushi tab hoti agar tum jaayaz hote...najayaz chizon se milkar khushi mehsoos nahi hoti...

VIDEOUS-ye nahi kehna chahiye tha aapko...dil par lag gayi aapki baat....

khair, ek taklif aapne mujhe di hai,toh ab ek taklif mai aapko dunga...


VIDEOUS ke aisa kehte hi uske kapdon se saanp ki shakal liye kayi saare layers RONIT aur ANJALI ki taraf aage badh chale...

wahin ANJALI jisse pehle se hi aisa kuch hone ka andesha tha, uske haath me bhi ek chote size ka BULLWHIP chamak utha...

(ek kism ka chabuk)

ye BULL WHIP usse VIKRAM ne gift ki thi aur isme uski shakti ke kuch ansh moujud the....

un layers ke paas aate hi ANJALI ne apne BULL WHIP ko zor se lehraya aur uske aisa karti hi BULL WHIP se energy waves nikle..

ye waves itne strong the ki jaise hi inhone VIDEOUS ke layers ko chhua,toh wo layers piche hatne lage...

aisa hote dekh ANJALI ne aur zor se apne BULL WHIP ko ghumana shuru kiya..aisa hone par uske beech se tez kirane nikal VIDEOUS ki taraf badhi..ye kirane ek pure suraj ki urja se bhi zyada taakatwar thi...

par jaise hi wo kirane VIDEOUS ke kareeb pahunchi toh VIDEOUS ne apni ek ungli tezi se gol gol ghumana shuru kiya..

aur uske aisa karte hi uske ungliyon ke beech se bhi waves nikli par inki shakti ANJALI ke BULL WHIP se paida hui wave se zyada thi..

un waves ke beech ek hole paida hua jiske andar ANJALI ke chhodi hui kirane samakar gayab ho gayi..

apne itne ghaatak prahar ko yunhi waste jaata dekh ANJALI hairan hui par uske agle hi pal usne apne BULL WHIP ko ek baar zor se lehraya aur chhod diya...

ek neeli rang ki tarang jo ki asal me ek bohot hi deadly poison tha,wo us tarang me banana shuru ho gaya tha..

us poiaon ki khubi ye thi ki wo environment ke hisaab se failkar apne aap hi apne target ki body me ghus jaata tha...

ANJALI ke us tarang ko banate hi ek aur cheez hui... aur wo ye ki RONIT ko ab tak shaant hi khada tha,uske haath me ek BLUNT STAVE aa gaya...

(ek kism ka staff jo RONIT ko ASMODEUS ne gift kiya tha)

is staff me ek galaxy jitni urja thi... ANJALI ke tarangon ke beech RONIT ne apne BLUNT STAVE ko ghussa diya jiske baad un tarangon me jo vish tha,uski power 10 times aur badh gayi....

saath hi unke flow ka speed bhi badh gaya tha..ab wo poison lightning speed ke saath travel kar sakte the...

apne STAVE ko us tarang me ghussa RONIT ne ek jhatka diya jiske baad un tarangon ke beech se nikalta poison chaaron taraf se VIDEOUS ko gherta hua uski taraf badha..

wahin aisa hote dekh VIDEOUS apni jagah par tezi se ghum gaya jisse uske sharir se bhi behad shaktishali tarang nikle aur un tarangon ne paas aa rahe poison ke asar ko khatm karna shuru kar diya aur kuch der baad jab VIDEOUS ne ghumna band kiya,toh wo saara poison khatm ho chuka tha...

par in sabke beech VIDEOUS ANJALI aur RONIT se behad prabhavit hua aur isiliye ghumna rookte hi..


VIDEOUS-impressive...maine toh socha tha ki aap dono ki aatma ko nigal jaaunga par aap mere ummidon se zyada kaabil nikle...

jaaiye,maine aap dono ko jeeven daan diya....


haath ko jhatakte hue VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi jispar ghusse se bhar ANJALI apne BULL WHIP ki puri Shakti ka istemal VIDEOUS par karne hi waali thi ki par tabhi...

VIDEOUS ne is baat ko sense kar liya tha aur isiliye uske mookh se pehli baar ek spell nikla...


SOUMEVIZATA DUTIYE SHAKITIYEM....

SEIZE WITH BOTH THE POWERS.....


VIDEOUS ke spell ke bolte hi uske sharir se ek moti kaali ray nikal ANJALI aur RONIT ki taraf badh chali..

kyunki ye ray kaali thi,matlab black energy ki thi, isiliye RONIT aur ANJALI thode relaxed the kyunki wo dono hi SERAPHIM ANGELS the jinpar black energy kaam nahi karti thi par jaise hi wo ray un dono ke kareeb pahunchi tab un dono ko laga jhatka..

reason...

kyunki ray ke paas aate hi un dono ko hi us ray ke andar chuppe WHITE ENERGY ke kan bhi sense ho gaye jisse feel kar dono ka dimag thanka par ab thodi der ho chuki thi kyunki isse pehle ki dono react karen,un rays ne apni speed ko double kar un dono ko jakad liya tha...

aur aisa hote hi un dono k shashtr unke andar chale gaye...

par jakde jaate hi apni shakti ko release kar un dono ne chhutne ki koshish ki...

par jab wo kaamiyab nahi hue toh unhone apni shakti ka daayra badhana aarambh kiya jisse dekh VIDEOUS ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi...

reason..

kyunki wo jaanta tha ki jo RONIT aur ANJALI kar rahe hain,usse wo dono azaad toh ho jayenge,par is chakkar me wo is universe ka acha khaas band baja denge aur is universe ke karta dharta LORD OF ANGELS aur THE CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT aisa kaise hone de sakte the jiska matlab tha ki jis ghadi ka usse intazar tha,wo aane waali thi...

aur hua bhi waisa hi jaisa VIDEOUS soch raha tha...

khudko chhudaane ke liye dono ne apni shaktiyon ka ek bohot bada bhaag release kar diya tha jiski wajah se aas paas ke kayi light years ki doori par bane Planets, astroids barbaad ho gaye...

ye toh acha tha ki is waqt wo jahan the, wahan se 1000 light years tak koi living planet nahi tha par ab dheere dheere un dono ki access shakti ke release hone ki wajah se ye doori bhi bohot jald khatm ho jaane waali thi...

wahin in sabse alag BEELZEBUB toh bas bina hile dule ye sab hote dekhne ke siwaye kuch kar sakta tha nahi, DEFENDER bhale hi VIDEOUS ke grip se aazad ho chuke the,par uska asar ab bhi unpar tha aur isiliye hi wo zamin par gire lambi lambi saansen le rahe the..

zamin par sirf DEFENDER hi nahi balki AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR bhi pade hue the jinke ANGEL forms black energy ke rays ki chapet me aane ki wajah se bohot kamzor ho gaye the aur issi wajah se wo teeno bhi is waqt khud ko thik kar rahe the..

aur in sab baaton ke pare ANJALI aur RONIT apne aap ko 50 percent tak chhudane me kaamiyab bhi ho gaye the aur isiliye baaki ke 50 percent ko kaam me laane ke liye un dono ne apni bachi shakti ko release karne ki sochi bina is baat par dhyan diye ki unke aisa karte hi unke power ki chapet me kuch living planets bhi aa jaayenge...

apne aap ko shaant kar apni puri shakti ko release karne ke liye dono spell bolne hi waale the ki tabhi.....


BOHOT HUA......


ek zordar awaaz se pura mahoul gunj utha jisse sunte hi ek taraf ANJALI aur RONIT azaad ho gaye, dusri taraf DEFENDER ka dard jaata raha aur BEELZEBUB ki body bhi release ho gayi,teesri taraf AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ki thakan bhi puri tarah gayab ho gayi aur wo apne pairon par khade ho gaye par in sabse alag chowthi taraf tha hamara VIDEOUS jiske chehre par ek vijayi muskaan tair rahi thi..

ussi muskaan ko liye wo piche palta aur pehli baar usne dekha apne hone ke do sabse mahatvpurn kaaran ko...apne dono pitah ko....


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS.....








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V...J....
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ALFREEN AUR MABEL ANWIR AUR MORANA KE DIYE HUE CHALLENGE KO PURA KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ SWORD KE HANDLE KO PAKAD LETA HAI JISKE BAAD USSE EK SCENE DIKHNE LAGTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




MEGA UPDATE-49



PLANET-EYLSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



1 MONTH LATER:-





PRATIBANDHANA



is spell ke prabhaav me aate hi sabhi SAVENTS ko jo taklif hoti hai,wo hone lagi par phir bhi sabhi puri dedication ke saath lage rahe...

pichle mahine aaj ke hi din ALFREEN aur MABEL ne ko kiya tha,uska prabhaav is class ke lagbhag sabhi SAVENTS par pada tha aur shayad yahi kaaran tha ki 4 SAVENTS ko chhod baaki sabhi ne apne SOUL ko 1 percent tak aakhir AMPLIFY kar diya tha...

wahin VALDIS filhal 3 percent par tha, MABEL aur ALFREEN 4 par jo unhone pichle month hi haasil kar liya tha aur in sabse aage thi MAHI..

jo abhi 6 percent par thi aur 7 percent AMPLIFICATION ke bhi baar baar behad kareeb pahuch rahi thi..

bas kuch minutes ka control hi tha jo filhal MAHI nahi kar paa rahi thi par aaj usne tay kar liya tha ki un kuch minutes ke faasle ko wo kisi bhi tarah fill kar kar hi rahegi..

chaliye jab tak inka CEREBRATION process paused hai,tab tak mai aapko inke NEXT PHASE ke teeno catagories ki qualification strength ke baare me vata dun...

toh ganit kuch aisa hai ki STELLARS group me shaamil hone ke liye ek SAVENT ka kamsekam 2 percent apne SOUL ke amplify karna zaroori hai...

wahin GROOMERS catagory me 1 percent AMPLIFICATION yaa fir apne SOUL ko AMPLIFICATION process ke liye trigger karne waale SAVENT aate hain....

aur last catagory jisse WEAKLINGS kaha jaata hai,inme un SAVENTS ko entry milti hai yaa fir ye kahun ki SAVENTS ko feka jaata hai jo first PHASE me apne SOUL process ko AMPLIFY karne ke liye trigger tak nahi kar paayen hain...

toh ye hain teeno catagories aur unme qualify karne ke liye hone waale AMPLIFICATION...

aur in qualification ke hissab se baaki sabhi SAVENTS yaa toh STELLARS ya fir GROOMERS ki catagory me already qualify kar chuke hain siwaye ek ke...

aur issi wajah se....



INSIDE NEXT CLASSROOM:-


common BRAWNY...you can di it son...bas apne focus aur focus karo...

tum bohot jaldi haar maan le rahe ho....dont give up so soon...

apne will power ko strong karo,apni sehensheelta ke daayre ko badhao taaki tumhara soul bhi AMPLIFICATION ke liye trigger ho jaaye..

common,you can do it...


lagatar BRAWNY ka housla badha rahi thi WHIZZ OPHILIA wahin is waqt unki kahi baaton ko dimag me feed kar BRAWNY laga hua tha apne CEREBRATION process ko pause me rakh apne SOUL ko trigger karne me par fir kuch der baad wahi hua,jo aaj tak hota aaya hai....

dard ki atyadhikta ka sahan naa kar paane ki wajah se uska CEREBRATION process firse shuru ho gaya jiski wajah se uski aankhen khul gayi...


OPHILIA-aise kaam nahi chalega BRAWNY.... sirf 2 mahine hi bache hain tumhare first PHASE ko khatm hone ke liye..

tumhare sabhi PHASEMATES ne apne apne soul ko trigger bhi kar liya hai aur unke AMPLIFICATION percentage bhi shuru ho chuke hain..

par tumne abhi tak apne soul ko trigger bhi nahi kiya hai...agar aisa hi chalta raha toh tumhe next PHASE me WEAKLINGS catagory me jaana hoga and trust me...

jis sharirik dard ko tum filhal jhel nahi paa rahe ho,us PHASE me
isse kayi guna zyada tumhe maansik dard sehna hoga...

aur tum uske liye kuch kar bhi nahi paaoge... isiliye jitna bhi waqt bacha hai,usme kamsekam apne SOUL ko toh trigger kar hi lo taaki kamsekam tum GROOMERS catagory ke laayak ho jaao....


WHIZZ OPHILIA ki baat sir neeche kar chupchaap BRAWNY sunta raha...

aur bhala wo kar bhi kya sakta tha....inte waqt se wo koshish kar raha tha..

aur aisa karne ke dauran jis dard se usse guzarna padta tha, usne uski body ko toh koi nuksaan nahi pahunchaya,par uske confidence level ki jo pehle se hi kam thi,uski dhajjiya ud chuki thi..

aur shayad yahi reason tha ki ab wo WHIZZ ki baaton ko ek kaan se aunkar dusre se nikal deta tha..

usne next PHASE me khudko pehle hi as a WEAKLING dekhna shuru kar diya tha...

is class me tha BRAWNY,jo apne soul ko AMPLIFY karna toh door, trigger tak nahi par paaya tha aur wahin dusri class me....


ek ke baad ek kul chaar baar puri class roshni se naha gayi..

reason...

pehle VALDIS,fir, MABEL,uske baad ALFREEN ar aakhir me MAHI ne ek baar firse apne apne soul ko AMPLIFY kar liya tha....

aur jaise hi aakhri roshni kam hui aur nazara normal hua toh...

puri class taaliyon ki gadgadahat se gunj uthi...

is clapping me VIOLET, OMMIN aur NOX bhi shaamil the aur saath hi behad khush bhi the...

reason...

shayad CHOSENS ke 25 thousand saal ke itihaas me ye batch best batch tha aur wo isiliye kyunki is PHASE me ek saath 4,4 SAVENTS ne apne soul ko itna zyada AMPLIFY kiya tha...

ab aise batch ke WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hona gaurav ki baat toh thi hi..


VIOLET-VALDIS... congrats..aaj tumne apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai and we are very proud of that...

VALDIS-thank you WHIZZ...

NOX-MABEL, ALFREEN.... congrats to the both of you..aaj tumne apne SOUL ko 5 percent AMPLIFY kar liya hai and thats a big,big achievement...

OMMIN-pure CHOSENS ke history me you both have become only the fourth and fifth SAVENT to achieve this milestone...
and by achieving that,you have made us very proud....

MABEL/ALFREEN-thank you WHIZZDERS....

VIOLET-and last but definitely not the least, actually the best..MAHI...

ab kya kahen tumhare baare me...tum pehli aisi SAVENT ho jisne hume pure PHASE me lagatar hairan kiya hai...

aaj tumne apne SOUL ko 7 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai aur ye batane ki zaroorat toh hai nahi ki you are the very first to do it....

aur iske liye agar hum ye kahen ki we are proud of you toh ye ek understatement hoga....

isiliye bas itna kahenge ki are waiting ki tum hame aur surprise karo...

MAHI-thank you WHIZZ and yes,i will try my level best...

VIOLET-aur issike saath aaj ko class yahin khatm hoti hai...


taarif ke pool bandhne ke baad VIOLET WHIZZ NOX aur OMMIN ke saath class se nikal gayi wahin unke jaate hi sabhi SAVENTS ne wk baar firse MAHI, ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS lo gher liya aur unhe congrats karne lage..




THE ORIGIN,THE FLASHBACK BEGINS:-


PLACE-THE DARK UNIVERSE





AAJ PAANCH HAZAR SAALON SE MAI BINA KISI ROOP KE GHUM RAHA HUN AUR YE SAB SIRF USKE KAARAN....


(ATTITUDE,PART-1,LAST UPDATE,LAST PARAGRAPH WITH LINES THAT WERE MISSING IN THAT PART)


wo kaali chaadar jo ki asal me BLACK ENERGY thi,wo filhal ek nirjeev satellite ke upar ghoom rahi thi....

uske movements ki thirkan se uski bechaini aur ghussa saaf jhalak raha tha...

aur ussi ghusse ke saath wo apne aap se baatein kar rahi thi ki....aur fir usne apne ghusse ka kaaran bataya ye fir ya kehna zyada sahi hoga ki us ghusse ke neev ka naam lekar cheekh pada...


BLACK ENERGY-VIKRAM...wo dhurth VIKRAM....


vikram ye tune acha nahi kiya mere saath......aur ASMODEUS,tu.......maine tujhe devils king ke naam se nawaza..

tujhe behisaab shaktiyan di aur tune mujhe hi dhoka diya....aur wo bhi us GOD ke liye.........

jisne tujhe tere hi ghar se nikal diya tha....jisne tere ohde ke saath teri shakti ka sabse bada bhaag bhi tujhse chhin liya tha...

tune us matlab parast ke liye mujhe thukraya,mujhe dhoka diya tune....


ye bolte waqt ek tez thirkan hui us BLACK ENERGY ke beech jaise wo khud par control kho raha ho par fir wo thirkan dheere dheere kam hone lagi maano BLACK ENERGY khudko kaabu me kar rahi ho...

aur fir jab wo ENERGY puri tarah shaant hui toh....


BLACK ENERGY-par koi baat nahi.haar jeet toh lagi rehti hai...beeta kal tumhara tha,aane waala kal mera hoga......

mere saath shadyantra karte waqt tum dono bhaiyon ko pata bhi nahi chala ki tum dono ki shakti se kaun si nayi musibat janm le rahi hai.....

ISLA me tumhara wo jhutta dwand, PARALLEL WORLD me mujhse chhuttkara paane se pehle tumhara wo mithya se bhara shakti pradarshan...

wo saari ladhayi bhale hi jhutti thi,par us yudh me nikalne waali tum dono se energy bilkul asli thi...

aur wo shakti kitni ghaatak thi,iska tum dono ko hi andaza nahi raha...

us waqt ASMODEUS me MAI tha,aur VIKRAM me khud GOD....

ek taraf BLACK ENERGY aur dusri taraf GOD...THE MAKER OF WHITE ENERGY....

wo do shaktiyan jinme samaya hua hai ye pura bramhaand aur tum ne inhi do shaktiyon ki dhaar ko,unke pravah ko yunhi khule me chhod diya...

hahahahaha...

itne vidwan hokar koi itna murkh kaise ho sakta hai....

tum dono ne socha ki PARMESHWAR PUTR ka dwand hai,toh parinaam bhi dono ke beech hi hoga kintu tum dono hi saamanya vigyaan bhul gaye..

jab do tez dhaar pathar aapas me ragdate hai toh unke beech teesri chiz baahar nikalti hai...

agni...wo agni jisme ek pure grah ko jhulsa dene ki shakti hoti hai..

wo agni jo bhale hi maatra me kam ho par fir bhi uisse suraj ke taap se bhi fark nahi padta...

tum dono ne ussi agni ko utpann bhi kar diya aur usse khule me chhod usse hawa bhi de di...

tum dono bhale hi sarvshaktimaan ho,ek surya ki tarah ho par jo urja tum dono se nikli hai,wo aisi agni hai jisse koi surya mita nahi sakta ulta wo us agni ke taap ko aur badhayega...

us anant shakti ke shroth par tum dono ki nazar pade,usse pehle hi maine usse khudme samet liya tha....

itne varsho tak uske taap ko,uski urja ko is anant bramhaand me sambhalkar rakha maine sirf aaj ke din ki pratiksha me...

kyunki aaj us shakti ne aur uske andar ki anant urja ne khudko sayyamit kar liya hai...

aur isiliye uske janm ka samay ho gaya hai....

ab dekhna,tum dono ki hi shakti ko mai uska astitv dunga....aisa pehli baar hoga jab pitah koi aur hoga par janm daata koi aur........


ye bol BLACK ENERGY ki ray jo ki uski nirman shakti thi,wo aage badhi aur uske saamne rakhi ek bohot prakashwaan urja par wo ray padi aur jaise hi ye hua,kaale aur safed urja ke mishran se ek aakar banane laga...

kuch hi samay me us urja ne ek manushya ka aakar dhaaran karna shuru kiya aur dekhte hi dekhte us urja ne ek INSAANI ROOP le liya....

ek behad hi khubsoorat insaani roop....par filhal uski aankhen band thi....

kaale aur safed labade ke mishran se bane robe ke andar dhaka ek gora maanav sa dikhne waala prani jiski filhal saansein kaafi zoron se chal rahi maano wo bohot lambi race daudkar aaya ho...

aur chale bhi kyun naa,aakhri pehli baar wo saans jo le raha tha....

wahin apni rachna ko behad dhyan aur garv se dekh raha tha BLACK ENERGY....


BLACK ENERGY-hmm....adhbhudhhhhh....shakal toh apne dono pitah par hi gayi hai tumhari...

aadhi VIKRAM par aur aadhi ASMODEUS par.....

jab surat pitaon par gayi hai toh naam bhi unpar hi hona chahiye,haina????

par kya????

VIKRAM.......ASMODEUS....

VI...........................DEUS....


arre waah,itni jaldi naam bhi mil gaya.....


tera naam hoga ''VIDEUS''........

ek aisa naam jo badal dega puri kahani aur saath hi badal jaayega sabka

ATTITUDE..............


jaise hi BLACK ENERGY ne VIDEOUS kaha,toh uske agle hi pal us praani jiska ab naam VIDEOUS tha,uski aankhen khul gayi...

halki bhuri aankhen jinme ek aisa kheenchav tha jo kisi PLANET ke gurutwakarshan force se bhi zyada strong tha...

aur unhi halki bhuri aankhon se wo ek tak apne saamne ghum rahe BLACK ENERGY ko dekh raha tha..

uske chehre par koi expressions nahi the..chamakti aankhon ki putliyon se wo bas saamne BLACK energy ko dekh raha tha...

aur jab kaafi der tak wo chup hi raha toh..


BLACK ENERGY-swagat hai tumhara VI....

VIDEOUS-SHHHSHHHHHHHHH...


apne ek ungli ko apne honthon par lagakar black energy se chup rehne ko kaha VIDEOUS ne....


uske SHHH se nikalne waali hawa me itni taakat thi ki jaise hi us hawa ne aage badhte hue BLACK ENERGY ko chhua,toh BLACK ENERGY ki wo chaadar halki piche ki taraf ud si gayi....

wahin VIDEOUS ke dwara khudko chup karaye jaane se BLACK ENERGY thodi hairan bhi ho gayi thi...

par usne kuch kaha nahi,wo chup hi rahi par tabhi pehli baar hile VIDEOUS ke honth aur....


VIDEOUS-jitna bolna tha,mere jaagne se pehle bol chuke ho tum..ab aur koi baat nahi...

mujhe wahi awaaz sunana pasand hai,jinme dard ho,tadap ho, taklif ho....

aur tumhara dard,tumhari tadap, tumhari taklif toh ussi din khatm ho gayi thi jis din tumne mujhe paa liya tha...


ye sab bol VIDEOUS ne ek baar apni gardan chaaron taraf ghumayi maano pure universe ko wahin khade khade dekh raha ho aur baat bhi wahi thi..

VIDEOUS ki nazar jis jis disha ki taraf ghumi,us disha ki anant doori tak ka drishya dekh paa raha tha VIDEOUS...

sab taraf nazar ghumane ke baad uski nazar wapas BLACK ENERGY par aakar rooki aur.....


VIDEOUS-waise main khush hun tumse...kaaran jaante ho meri khushi kaa.???

BLACK ENERGY-maine tumhe itne waqt tak sambhal kar rakha, isiliye....

VIDEOUS-galat jawab...naam tumne mera bada acha rakha hai, isiliye...

VIDEOUS.....VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS,mere dono pitah ke naam ko ek kar bana naam, VIDEOUS....


VIKRAM, ASMODEUS...jab VIDEOUS ne ye do naam liye toh uski aankhon me ek chamak thi maano wo un dono naamo ko badi izzat de raha ho jisse mehsoos kar BLACK ENERGY ko bura laga aur isiliye...


BLACK ENERGY-jin do naamo ka zikr tumne kiya hai,unhise badla lene ke liye hi maine tumhe itne varshon tak sambhal kar rakha hai aur aaj tumhe ye roop diya hai..

VIDEOUS-jawab thoda sa galat hai tumhara..tumne mujhe isiliye ye roop diya hai kyunki jin naamo ka zikr maine kiya,unse ladhne aur jeetne ke tum yogya nahi ho...

sahi kaha naa..!!!!


fadfadahat si hui VIDEOUS ke jawab ko sunkar BLACK ENERGY ki chaadar me jisse dekh

VIDEOUS-hahahahahaaaaaa....


bohot zoron se hasa VIDEOUS par fir ek dum se chup hokar usne BLACK ENERGY ko dekha aur...


VIDEOUS-khel aarambh kare...mujhe behad talab ho rahi hai apne dono pitah se milne ki....


VIDEOUS ne apni baat kehte kehte hi apne dono haath faila diye the jiski baad wo Black energy ki chaadar ek baar zor se fadfadayi aur fir agle hi pal....

wo tezi se aage badhi aur VIDEOUS ko chaaron taraf se khudme lapet liya...

lapetne ke baad wo chaadar tezi se VIDEOUS ke chaaron taraf ghumne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte wo kaali chaadar khudko sokhta hue VIDEOUS ke sharir me vilin ho gayi...

aur jab aisa hua toh VIDEOUS jo ki 6 feet ka tha, uski height kuch inch aur zyada ho gayi..uska rang aur gora ho gaya aur uski bhuri aankhon ke side layers halke kaale ho gaye...

par ye saare changes internal the par wahin jab BLACK ENERGY VIDEOUS ke andar samayi toh...pura bramhaand halka halka shake kar gaya..

bramhaand ke ek behad hi andhere bhaag me tha is waqt VIDEOUS par
black ENERGY ke usme samate hi uske andar ki white energy halki chhatpatayi aur aisa hone par VIDEOUS se hota hua ek behad tez prakash har taraf fail gaya...

is tez prakash me itni shakti thi ki iske daayre ke beech aaye kayi saare dead planets puri tarah toot kar bikhar gaye...

par fir VIDEOUS ne apne andar ke black energy aur white energy ke beech par ek saath control paana shuru kiya aur aisa hote hi wo universe ka shake aur us white urja ka chhatpatana band hota chala gaya...

par jo reactions already ho chuke yhe,unka toh kuch kiya jaa sakta tha nahi yaa fir ye kahun ki VIDEOUS aisa chahta hi nahi tha aur shayad isiliye...


KADKADKADKAD.....

KADKADKADKAD.....

KADKADKADKAD......


VIDEOUS ke saamne ek ke baad ek teen baar zoron se bijli kadki aur us bijli ke beech se baahar aaye teen log yaa fir ye kahun ki teen ANGELS....


MOKALSAR.....

SHAILA.....

AKSHAANT......


aur un dono ke prakat hote hi VIDEOUS ki aankhen khul gayi...


VIDEOUS-CHERUBIM ANGELS.....


AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ki urja ko mehsoos karte hi VIDEOUS ko unki rank ka andaza ho gaya tha...


AKSHAANT-tumhare andar se beintehan negetive vibes nikal rahi hai...kaun ho tum...???

kyun tumhare shakti se is bramhaand par asar hua tha....???


VIDEOUS-negetive vibes...???dobara mehsoos karo...


VIDEOUS ki baat ko sun AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR teeno chownke...

reason..

jo negetive vibes unhe VIDEOUS se feel ho rahi thi,wo vibe gayab ho chuki thi...


SHAILA-ye kaise sambhav hai..??iski nakaratmak urja achanak kahan vilupt ho gayi...???

MOKALSAR-iska jawab toh yahi dega...

parichay do apna....

VIDEOUS-tum teeno iske laayak nahi ho.aur waise bhi,jinhe pata hona chahiye,unhe mere baare me ab tak pata chal hi gaya hoga...

SHAILA-kisse pata chal gaya hoga...???

VIDEOUS-mere dono pitah ko..???

MOKALSAR-tumhare do pitah hain..!!!kaun hain wo..???

VIDEOUS-aapke dono LORDS...VIKRAM, ASMODEUS....


yahan VIDEOUS ka mooh band hua aur wahan SHAILA, MOKALSAR aur AKSHAANT ke mooh khul gaye....


SHAILA-tum jaante bhi ho ki tum kya bol rahe ho...???

VIDEOUS-kya tum jaanti ho ki tum aur ye dono abhi tak kaise mere saamne sir uthakar baat kar paa rahe ho....??

sirf VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ki wajah se...un dono ne tum teeno ko ek samman yogya pad diya hai jisme tum teeno ke hisaab se beintahan taakat hai..

mai bas tumhari is galat fehmi ko todna nahi chahta...

isiliye jaao aur mere dono pitah se kaho ki VIDEOUS unka intezar kar raha hai....


VIDEOUS ki baaton me un teeno ne apne liye tuch hone ko bhaavna ko mehsoos kar liya tha jiske baad un teeno ko hi behad krodh aa gaya aur isiliye...


SHAILA-baaton ka waqt khatm hua bacche...ab tumhe tumhari uddandata ka dand milega...


ye bol SHAILA ne VIDEOUS ko jakadne aur sabak sikhane ke liye ek bijli se bane rope ka awahan kiya jisse wo VIDEOUS ko baandh bhi sake aur us rope se usse jhatke bhi lag sake...

SHAILA ke awahan karte hi uske haathon ke upar ek tez bijli chamki aur aisa hote hi SHAILA ne us bijli ke rope ko VIDEOUS ki taraf kar diya aur tabhi...

AHHHH....

ek tez cheekh nikli SHAILA ke mooh se..

reason....

us bijli se bana rope aage toh badha par aadhe raste se hi usne apna raasta badla aur wapas ghumte hue SHAILA ki taraf mood gaya aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal us rope ne SHAILA ko hi jakad liya tha..

itna hi nahi,us bijli ke rope ki shakti bhi SHAILA dwara utpaan kiye gaye power se kayi guna zyada thi jiski wajah se SHAILA ki haalat kuch hi seconds me kharab hone lagi thi..

wahin SHAILA ke baju me khade AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR ki toh hairani ek alag hi level par chali gayi thi..

reason..

un dono ko ye toh pata chal hi gaya tha ki SHAILA ke prahar ko VIDEOUS ne hi moda hai par ye karne ke liye VIDEOUS ko naa toh koi spell bolna pada yaa fir man me kuch sochna pada tha..

uske sharir ne apne aap khatre ko sense kar us khatre ko usse create karne waale ke upar mod diya tha aur ye bohot hi badi baat thi kyunki aisa karte hue unhone sirf do logon
ko dekha tha..

VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS...

wo ye soch hi rahe the ki...


VIDEOUS-jinka naam tumhare andar gunja hai,mai baat sirf unse hi karunga...

isiliye tum teeno jaa sakte ho...


VIDEOUS ke aisa bolte hi SHAILA ko lapeta hua wo bijli ka rope gayab ho gaya jiske baad wo neeche baith gayi.

jahan AKSHAANT ne usse sahara dekar uthaya wahin MOKALSAR ne do man hi man do naam pukare jiske baad...


KADKADKADKAD....

KADKADKADKAD......


ek ke baad ek do baar bijliyan kadki aur fir un bijliyon ke beech se nikle DEFENDER....PROTECTOR.OF THE UNIVERSE...

aur BEELZEBUB.....THE HEIR OF WHITE ENERGY.....


prakat hone ke saath hi un dono ko yahan jo kuch bhi hua tha,wo pata chal gaya jiske baad wo dono bhi

kaafi hairan ho gaye....

wahin BEELZEBUB ko dekh VIDEOUS ke chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi....


BEELZEBUB-is baat se fark nahi padta ki tumhara satya kya hai???tumne ek ANGEL ko taklif pahunchayi hai aur iske liye tumhe dand milega...

VIDEOUS-ye kya tarika hua apne BHAI se milne ka..???


ye bol VIDEOUS BEELZEBUB ki taraf badha jisse dekh...


BEELZEBUB-apni jagah par khade raho ladke...agar aur aage badhe toh mrityu ko prapt kar jaaoge..


BEELZEBUB ki baat ko sunane ke baad bhi muskurate hue aage badhta chala gaya VIDEOUS jiske baad BEELZEBUB ne ek force ray uspar chhod diya..

is force ray me itni taakat thi ki ek mountain ko bhi beech se tod de...

wo force ray tezi se aage badhta hua VIDEOUS ke paas pahuncha aur...

wahin rook gaya.....aur aisa hote dekh BEELZEBUB ne ek ke baad ek kayi waar kiya VIDEOUS ki direction ki taraf par sabka wahi haal hua jo us force ray ka hua tha...

wahin DEFENDER bas ektak VIDEOUS ko dekhe jaa rahe the...

VIDEOUS chalta hua BEELZEBUB ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya aur...


VIDEOUS-gale milo mujhse mere BHAI....


VIDEOUS ke aisa bolte hi jitne bhi waar BEELZEBUB ne kiye the,unke rays BEELZEBUB ke dono haathon par pade jiske baad BEELZEBUB apne aap aage badha aur VIDEOUS ke gale lag gaya...

usne bohot koshish ki khudko alag karne ki par wo kaamiyab nahi ho paaya..

kuch der tak gale lagne ke baad VIDEOUS BEELZEBUB se alag hua...

aisa hone ke bad BEELZEBUB ke haath toh neeche ho gaye par uski body waisi hi akdi hui thi jiski wajah se wo hil bhi nahi paa raha tha...

wahin jaise hi VIDEOUS BEELZEBUB se alag hua toh...


DEFENDER-sach batao,kaun ho tum...???


ye bolte hue DEFENDER ne apne ek haath se VIDEOUS ka kandha pakad liya aur wahan dabaw banane laga...

VIDEOUS-tumhe mujhe mujhse bina puche chhuna nahi chahiye tha...


VIDEOUS ke aisa bolte hi ek ajeeb baat hui..toh hua ye ki jo pressure DEFENDER VIDEOUS ke kandhe par bana rahe the,ab wahi pressure unhe apne kandhe par mehsoos hone laga aur wo bhi dogune force ke saath..

unhone apne haath ko VIDEOUS ke kandhe se hatane ki koshish ki par wo aisa kar nahi sake..

unhe aisa laga jaise unke haath uske kandhe par chipak gaye hain...

dekhte hi dekhte dard ki adhikta ki wajah se DEFENDER apne ghutno par aa gaye aur aisa hote dekh...

SHAILA, AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR, teeno hi VIDEOUS ki taraf badhe par tabhi...

BOOM.....


jahan un teeno ke pair the,uske neeche tez dhamake hue jiski wajah se wo teeno udte hue piche ki taraf jaakar gire...

girte hi un teeno ne uthne ki koshish ki par tabhi,zamin ke andar se black energy ke bane ropes nikle aur unhone un teeno ko jakad liya..

itna hi nahi,black energy ke direct impact ki wajah se un teeno ko chetna bhi jaane lagi par tabhi....


KADKADKADKAD...

KADKADKADKAD....


firse do baar bijli kadki aur un bijliyon ke beech se prakat hue RONIT aur ANJALI.....


prakat hote hi ANJALI ke haath se ek energy beam nikli aur sidhe DEFENDER ke haath aur VIDEOUS ke kandhe par jaakar lagi jisse VIDEOUS ko kuch hua toh nahi par DEFENDER ka haath zaroor uske kandhe se detach ho gaya...

wahin RONIT ke aankhon se teen rays nikal un black energy se bane ropes par padi jinhone AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ko jakda hua tha aur aisa hote hi wo ropes gayab ho gayi...

RONIT aur ANJALI ke us jagah par kadam rakhte hi VIDEOUS ko unke ohde ke baare me pata chal gaya tha aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-SEREPHIM ANGELS....acha laga aap dono ko dekh kar....ummid hai ki aapko bhi apne best friend ke bete se milkar khushi hui hogi...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun RONIT aur ANJALI man hi man chownke par unhone apne chehre se apni hairani zaahir nahi hone di...


RONIT-khushi tab hoti agar tum jaayaz hote...najayaz chizon se milkar khushi mehsoos nahi hoti...

VIDEOUS-ye nahi kehna chahiye tha aapko...dil par lag gayi aapki baat....

khair, ek taklif aapne mujhe di hai,toh ab ek taklif mai aapko dunga...


VIDEOUS ke aisa kehte hi uske kapdon se saanp ki shakal liye kayi saare layers RONIT aur ANJALI ki taraf aage badh chale...

wahin ANJALI jisse pehle se hi aisa kuch hone ka andesha tha, uske haath me bhi ek chote size ka BULLWHIP chamak utha...

(ek kism ka chabuk)

ye BULL WHIP usse VIKRAM ne gift ki thi aur isme uski shakti ke kuch ansh moujud the....

un layers ke paas aate hi ANJALI ne apne BULL WHIP ko zor se lehraya aur uske aisa karti hi BULL WHIP se energy waves nikle..

ye waves itne strong the ki jaise hi inhone VIDEOUS ke layers ko chhua,toh wo layers piche hatne lage...

aisa hote dekh ANJALI ne aur zor se apne BULL WHIP ko ghumana shuru kiya..aisa hone par uske beech se tez kirane nikal VIDEOUS ki taraf badhi..ye kirane ek pure suraj ki urja se bhi zyada taakatwar thi...

par jaise hi wo kirane VIDEOUS ke kareeb pahunchi toh VIDEOUS ne apni ek ungli tezi se gol gol ghumana shuru kiya..

aur uske aisa karte hi uske ungliyon ke beech se bhi waves nikli par inki shakti ANJALI ke BULL WHIP se paida hui wave se zyada thi..

un waves ke beech ek hole paida hua jiske andar ANJALI ke chhodi hui kirane samakar gayab ho gayi..

apne itne ghaatak prahar ko yunhi waste jaata dekh ANJALI hairan hui par uske agle hi pal usne apne BULL WHIP ko ek baar zor se lehraya aur chhod diya...

ek neeli rang ki tarang jo ki asal me ek bohot hi deadly poison tha,wo us tarang me banana shuru ho gaya tha..

us poiaon ki khubi ye thi ki wo environment ke hisaab se failkar apne aap hi apne target ki body me ghus jaata tha...

ANJALI ke us tarang ko banate hi ek aur cheez hui... aur wo ye ki RONIT ko ab tak shaant hi khada tha,uske haath me ek BLUNT STAVE aa gaya...

(ek kism ka staff jo RONIT ko ASMODEUS ne gift kiya tha)

is staff me ek galaxy jitni urja thi... ANJALI ke tarangon ke beech RONIT ne apne BLUNT STAVE ko ghussa diya jiske baad un tarangon me jo vish tha,uski power 10 times aur badh gayi....

saath hi unke flow ka speed bhi badh gaya tha..ab wo poison lightning speed ke saath travel kar sakte the...

apne STAVE ko us tarang me ghussa RONIT ne ek jhatka diya jiske baad un tarangon ke beech se nikalta poison chaaron taraf se VIDEOUS ko gherta hua uski taraf badha..

wahin aisa hote dekh VIDEOUS apni jagah par tezi se ghum gaya jisse uske sharir se bhi behad shaktishali tarang nikle aur un tarangon ne paas aa rahe poison ke asar ko khatm karna shuru kar diya aur kuch der baad jab VIDEOUS ne ghumna band kiya,toh wo saara poison khatm ho chuka tha...

par in sabke beech VIDEOUS ANJALI aur RONIT se behad prabhavit hua aur isiliye ghumna rookte hi..


VIDEOUS-impressive...maine toh socha tha ki aap dono ki aatma ko nigal jaaunga par aap mere ummidon se zyada kaabil nikle...

jaaiye,maine aap dono ko jeeven daan diya....


haath ko jhatakte hue VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi jispar ghusse se bhar ANJALI apne BULL WHIP ki puri Shakti ka istemal VIDEOUS par karne hi waali thi ki par tabhi...

VIDEOUS ne is baat ko sense kar liya tha aur isiliye uske mookh se pehli baar ek spell nikla...


SOUMEVIZATA DUTIYE SHAKITIYEM....

SEIZE WITH BOTH THE POWERS.....


VIDEOUS ke spell ke bolte hi uske sharir se ek moti kaali ray nikal ANJALI aur RONIT ki taraf badh chali..

kyunki ye ray kaali thi,matlab black energy ki thi, isiliye RONIT aur ANJALI thode relaxed the kyunki wo dono hi SERAPHIM ANGELS the jinpar black energy kaam nahi karti thi par jaise hi wo ray un dono ke kareeb pahunchi tab un dono ko laga jhatka..

reason...

kyunki ray ke paas aate hi un dono ko hi us ray ke andar chuppe WHITE ENERGY ke kan bhi sense ho gaye jisse feel kar dono ka dimag thanka par ab thodi der ho chuki thi kyunki isse pehle ki dono react karen,un rays ne apni speed ko double kar un dono ko jakad liya tha...

aur aisa hote hi un dono k shashtr unke andar chale gaye...

par jakde jaate hi apni shakti ko release kar un dono ne chhutne ki koshish ki...

par jab wo kaamiyab nahi hue toh unhone apni shakti ka daayra badhana aarambh kiya jisse dekh VIDEOUS ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi...

reason..

kyunki wo jaanta tha ki jo RONIT aur ANJALI kar rahe hain,usse wo dono azaad toh ho jayenge,par is chakkar me wo is universe ka acha khaas band baja denge aur is universe ke karta dharta LORD OF ANGELS aur THE CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT aisa kaise hone de sakte the jiska matlab tha ki jis ghadi ka usse intazar tha,wo aane waali thi...

aur hua bhi waisa hi jaisa VIDEOUS soch raha tha...

khudko chhudaane ke liye dono ne apni shaktiyon ka ek bohot bada bhaag release kar diya tha jiski wajah se aas paas ke kayi light years ki doori par bane Planets, astroids barbaad ho gaye...

ye toh acha tha ki is waqt wo jahan the, wahan se 1000 light years tak koi living planet nahi tha par ab dheere dheere un dono ki access shakti ke release hone ki wajah se ye doori bhi bohot jald khatm ho jaane waali thi...

wahin in sabse alag BEELZEBUB toh bas bina hile dule ye sab hote dekhne ke siwaye kuch kar sakta tha nahi, DEFENDER bhale hi VIDEOUS ke grip se aazad ho chuke the,par uska asar ab bhi unpar tha aur isiliye hi wo zamin par gire lambi lambi saansen le rahe the..

zamin par sirf DEFENDER hi nahi balki AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR bhi pade hue the jinke ANGEL forms black energy ke rays ki chapet me aane ki wajah se bohot kamzor ho gaye the aur issi wajah se wo teeno bhi is waqt khud ko thik kar rahe the..

aur in sab baaton ke pare ANJALI aur RONIT apne aap ko 50 percent tak chhudane me kaamiyab bhi ho gaye the aur isiliye baaki ke 50 percent ko kaam me laane ke liye un dono ne apni bachi shakti ko release karne ki sochi bina is baat par dhyan diye ki unke aisa karte hi unke power ki chapet me kuch living planets bhi aa jaayenge...

apne aap ko shaant kar apni puri shakti ko release karne ke liye dono spell bolne hi waale the ki tabhi.....


BOHOT HUA......


ek zordar awaaz se pura mahoul gunj utha jisse sunte hi ek taraf ANJALI aur RONIT azaad ho gaye, dusri taraf DEFENDER ka dard jaata raha aur BEELZEBUB ki body bhi release ho gayi,teesri taraf AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ki thakan bhi puri tarah gayab ho gayi aur wo apne pairon par khade ho gaye par in sabse alag chowthi taraf tha hamara VIDEOUS jiske chehre par ek vijayi muskaan tair rahi thi..

ussi muskaan ko liye wo piche palta aur pehli baar usne dekha apne hone ke do sabse mahatvpurn kaaran ko...apne dono pitah ko....


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS.....








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....








AAPKA APNA V...J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ALFREEN AUR MABEL ANWIR AUR MORANA KE DIYE HUE CHALLENGE KO PURA KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ SWORD KE HANDLE KO PAKAD LETA HAI JISKE BAAD USSE EK SCENE DIKHNE LAGTA HAI.


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CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




MEGA UPDATE-49



PLANET-EYLSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



1 MONTH LATER:-





PRATIBANDHANA



is spell ke prabhaav me aate hi sabhi SAVENTS ko jo taklif hoti hai,wo hone lagi par phir bhi sabhi puri dedication ke saath lage rahe...

pichle mahine aaj ke hi din ALFREEN aur MABEL ne ko kiya tha,uska prabhaav is class ke lagbhag sabhi SAVENTS par pada tha aur shayad yahi kaaran tha ki 4 SAVENTS ko chhod baaki sabhi ne apne SOUL ko 1 percent tak aakhir AMPLIFY kar diya tha...

wahin VALDIS filhal 3 percent par tha, MABEL aur ALFREEN 4 par jo unhone pichle month hi haasil kar liya tha aur in sabse aage thi MAHI..

jo abhi 6 percent par thi aur 7 percent AMPLIFICATION ke bhi baar baar behad kareeb pahuch rahi thi..

bas kuch minutes ka control hi tha jo filhal MAHI nahi kar paa rahi thi par aaj usne tay kar liya tha ki un kuch minutes ke faasle ko wo kisi bhi tarah fill kar kar hi rahegi..

chaliye jab tak inka CEREBRATION process paused hai,tab tak mai aapko inke NEXT PHASE ke teeno catagories ki qualification strength ke baare me vata dun...

toh ganit kuch aisa hai ki STELLARS group me shaamil hone ke liye ek SAVENT ka kamsekam 2 percent apne SOUL ke amplify karna zaroori hai...

wahin GROOMERS catagory me 1 percent AMPLIFICATION yaa fir apne SOUL ko AMPLIFICATION process ke liye trigger karne waale SAVENT aate hain....

aur last catagory jisse WEAKLINGS kaha jaata hai,inme un SAVENTS ko entry milti hai yaa fir ye kahun ki SAVENTS ko feka jaata hai jo first PHASE me apne SOUL process ko AMPLIFY karne ke liye trigger tak nahi kar paayen hain...

toh ye hain teeno catagories aur unme qualify karne ke liye hone waale AMPLIFICATION...

aur in qualification ke hissab se baaki sabhi SAVENTS yaa toh STELLARS ya fir GROOMERS ki catagory me already qualify kar chuke hain siwaye ek ke...

aur issi wajah se....



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common BRAWNY...you can di it son...bas apne focus aur focus karo...

tum bohot jaldi haar maan le rahe ho....dont give up so soon...

apne will power ko strong karo,apni sehensheelta ke daayre ko badhao taaki tumhara soul bhi AMPLIFICATION ke liye trigger ho jaaye..

common,you can do it...


lagatar BRAWNY ka housla badha rahi thi WHIZZ OPHILIA wahin is waqt unki kahi baaton ko dimag me feed kar BRAWNY laga hua tha apne CEREBRATION process ko pause me rakh apne SOUL ko trigger karne me par fir kuch der baad wahi hua,jo aaj tak hota aaya hai....

dard ki atyadhikta ka sahan naa kar paane ki wajah se uska CEREBRATION process firse shuru ho gaya jiski wajah se uski aankhen khul gayi...


OPHILIA-aise kaam nahi chalega BRAWNY.... sirf 2 mahine hi bache hain tumhare first PHASE ko khatm hone ke liye..

tumhare sabhi PHASEMATES ne apne apne soul ko trigger bhi kar liya hai aur unke AMPLIFICATION percentage bhi shuru ho chuke hain..

par tumne abhi tak apne soul ko trigger bhi nahi kiya hai...agar aisa hi chalta raha toh tumhe next PHASE me WEAKLINGS catagory me jaana hoga and trust me...

jis sharirik dard ko tum filhal jhel nahi paa rahe ho,us PHASE me
isse kayi guna zyada tumhe maansik dard sehna hoga...

aur tum uske liye kuch kar bhi nahi paaoge... isiliye jitna bhi waqt bacha hai,usme kamsekam apne SOUL ko toh trigger kar hi lo taaki kamsekam tum GROOMERS catagory ke laayak ho jaao....


WHIZZ OPHILIA ki baat sir neeche kar chupchaap BRAWNY sunta raha...

aur bhala wo kar bhi kya sakta tha....inte waqt se wo koshish kar raha tha..

aur aisa karne ke dauran jis dard se usse guzarna padta tha, usne uski body ko toh koi nuksaan nahi pahunchaya,par uske confidence level ki jo pehle se hi kam thi,uski dhajjiya ud chuki thi..

aur shayad yahi reason tha ki ab wo WHIZZ ki baaton ko ek kaan se aunkar dusre se nikal deta tha..

usne next PHASE me khudko pehle hi as a WEAKLING dekhna shuru kar diya tha...

is class me tha BRAWNY,jo apne soul ko AMPLIFY karna toh door, trigger tak nahi par paaya tha aur wahin dusri class me....


ek ke baad ek kul chaar baar puri class roshni se naha gayi..

reason...

pehle VALDIS,fir, MABEL,uske baad ALFREEN ar aakhir me MAHI ne ek baar firse apne apne soul ko AMPLIFY kar liya tha....

aur jaise hi aakhri roshni kam hui aur nazara normal hua toh...

puri class taaliyon ki gadgadahat se gunj uthi...

is clapping me VIOLET, OMMIN aur NOX bhi shaamil the aur saath hi behad khush bhi the...

reason...

shayad CHOSENS ke 25 thousand saal ke itihaas me ye batch best batch tha aur wo isiliye kyunki is PHASE me ek saath 4,4 SAVENTS ne apne soul ko itna zyada AMPLIFY kiya tha...

ab aise batch ke WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hona gaurav ki baat toh thi hi..


VIOLET-VALDIS... congrats..aaj tumne apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai and we are very proud of that...

VALDIS-thank you WHIZZ...

NOX-MABEL, ALFREEN.... congrats to the both of you..aaj tumne apne SOUL ko 5 percent AMPLIFY kar liya hai and thats a big,big achievement...

OMMIN-pure CHOSENS ke history me you both have become only the fourth and fifth SAVENT to achieve this milestone...
and by achieving that,you have made us very proud....

MABEL/ALFREEN-thank you WHIZZDERS....

VIOLET-and last but definitely not the least, actually the best..MAHI...

ab kya kahen tumhare baare me...tum pehli aisi SAVENT ho jisne hume pure PHASE me lagatar hairan kiya hai...

aaj tumne apne SOUL ko 7 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai aur ye batane ki zaroorat toh hai nahi ki you are the very first to do it....

aur iske liye agar hum ye kahen ki we are proud of you toh ye ek understatement hoga....

isiliye bas itna kahenge ki are waiting ki tum hame aur surprise karo...

MAHI-thank you WHIZZ and yes,i will try my level best...

VIOLET-aur issike saath aaj ko class yahin khatm hoti hai...


taarif ke pool bandhne ke baad VIOLET WHIZZ NOX aur OMMIN ke saath class se nikal gayi wahin unke jaate hi sabhi SAVENTS ne wk baar firse MAHI, ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS lo gher liya aur unhe congrats karne lage..




THE ORIGIN,THE FLASHBACK BEGINS:-


PLACE-THE DARK UNIVERSE





AAJ PAANCH HAZAR SAALON SE MAI BINA KISI ROOP KE GHUM RAHA HUN AUR YE SAB SIRF USKE KAARAN....


(ATTITUDE,PART-1,LAST UPDATE,LAST PARAGRAPH WITH LINES THAT WERE MISSING IN THAT PART)


wo kaali chaadar jo ki asal me BLACK ENERGY thi,wo filhal ek nirjeev satellite ke upar ghoom rahi thi....

uske movements ki thirkan se uski bechaini aur ghussa saaf jhalak raha tha...

aur ussi ghusse ke saath wo apne aap se baatein kar rahi thi ki....aur fir usne apne ghusse ka kaaran bataya ye fir ya kehna zyada sahi hoga ki us ghusse ke neev ka naam lekar cheekh pada...


BLACK ENERGY-VIKRAM...wo dhurth VIKRAM....


vikram ye tune acha nahi kiya mere saath......aur ASMODEUS,tu.......maine tujhe devils king ke naam se nawaza..

tujhe behisaab shaktiyan di aur tune mujhe hi dhoka diya....aur wo bhi us GOD ke liye.........

jisne tujhe tere hi ghar se nikal diya tha....jisne tere ohde ke saath teri shakti ka sabse bada bhaag bhi tujhse chhin liya tha...

tune us matlab parast ke liye mujhe thukraya,mujhe dhoka diya tune....


ye bolte waqt ek tez thirkan hui us BLACK ENERGY ke beech jaise wo khud par control kho raha ho par fir wo thirkan dheere dheere kam hone lagi maano BLACK ENERGY khudko kaabu me kar rahi ho...

aur fir jab wo ENERGY puri tarah shaant hui toh....


BLACK ENERGY-par koi baat nahi.haar jeet toh lagi rehti hai...beeta kal tumhara tha,aane waala kal mera hoga......

mere saath shadyantra karte waqt tum dono bhaiyon ko pata bhi nahi chala ki tum dono ki shakti se kaun si nayi musibat janm le rahi hai.....

ISLA me tumhara wo jhutta dwand, PARALLEL WORLD me mujhse chhuttkara paane se pehle tumhara wo mithya se bhara shakti pradarshan...

wo saari ladhayi bhale hi jhutti thi,par us yudh me nikalne waali tum dono se energy bilkul asli thi...

aur wo shakti kitni ghaatak thi,iska tum dono ko hi andaza nahi raha...

us waqt ASMODEUS me MAI tha,aur VIKRAM me khud GOD....

ek taraf BLACK ENERGY aur dusri taraf GOD...THE MAKER OF WHITE ENERGY....

wo do shaktiyan jinme samaya hua hai ye pura bramhaand aur tum ne inhi do shaktiyon ki dhaar ko,unke pravah ko yunhi khule me chhod diya...

hahahahaha...

itne vidwan hokar koi itna murkh kaise ho sakta hai....

tum dono ne socha ki PARMESHWAR PUTR ka dwand hai,toh parinaam bhi dono ke beech hi hoga kintu tum dono hi saamanya vigyaan bhul gaye..

jab do tez dhaar pathar aapas me ragdate hai toh unke beech teesri chiz baahar nikalti hai...

agni...wo agni jisme ek pure grah ko jhulsa dene ki shakti hoti hai..

wo agni jo bhale hi maatra me kam ho par fir bhi uisse suraj ke taap se bhi fark nahi padta...

tum dono ne ussi agni ko utpann bhi kar diya aur usse khule me chhod usse hawa bhi de di...

tum dono bhale hi sarvshaktimaan ho,ek surya ki tarah ho par jo urja tum dono se nikli hai,wo aisi agni hai jisse koi surya mita nahi sakta ulta wo us agni ke taap ko aur badhayega...

us anant shakti ke shroth par tum dono ki nazar pade,usse pehle hi maine usse khudme samet liya tha....

itne varsho tak uske taap ko,uski urja ko is anant bramhaand me sambhalkar rakha maine sirf aaj ke din ki pratiksha me...

kyunki aaj us shakti ne aur uske andar ki anant urja ne khudko sayyamit kar liya hai...

aur isiliye uske janm ka samay ho gaya hai....

ab dekhna,tum dono ki hi shakti ko mai uska astitv dunga....aisa pehli baar hoga jab pitah koi aur hoga par janm daata koi aur........


ye bol BLACK ENERGY ki ray jo ki uski nirman shakti thi,wo aage badhi aur uske saamne rakhi ek bohot prakashwaan urja par wo ray padi aur jaise hi ye hua,kaale aur safed urja ke mishran se ek aakar banane laga...

kuch hi samay me us urja ne ek manushya ka aakar dhaaran karna shuru kiya aur dekhte hi dekhte us urja ne ek INSAANI ROOP le liya....

ek behad hi khubsoorat insaani roop....par filhal uski aankhen band thi....

kaale aur safed labade ke mishran se bane robe ke andar dhaka ek gora maanav sa dikhne waala prani jiski filhal saansein kaafi zoron se chal rahi maano wo bohot lambi race daudkar aaya ho...

aur chale bhi kyun naa,aakhri pehli baar wo saans jo le raha tha....

wahin apni rachna ko behad dhyan aur garv se dekh raha tha BLACK ENERGY....


BLACK ENERGY-hmm....adhbhudhhhhh....shakal toh apne dono pitah par hi gayi hai tumhari...

aadhi VIKRAM par aur aadhi ASMODEUS par.....

jab surat pitaon par gayi hai toh naam bhi unpar hi hona chahiye,haina????

par kya????

VIKRAM.......ASMODEUS....

VI...........................DEUS....


arre waah,itni jaldi naam bhi mil gaya.....


tera naam hoga ''VIDEUS''........

ek aisa naam jo badal dega puri kahani aur saath hi badal jaayega sabka

ATTITUDE..............


jaise hi BLACK ENERGY ne VIDEOUS kaha,toh uske agle hi pal us praani jiska ab naam VIDEOUS tha,uski aankhen khul gayi...

halki bhuri aankhen jinme ek aisa kheenchav tha jo kisi PLANET ke gurutwakarshan force se bhi zyada strong tha...

aur unhi halki bhuri aankhon se wo ek tak apne saamne ghum rahe BLACK ENERGY ko dekh raha tha..

uske chehre par koi expressions nahi the..chamakti aankhon ki putliyon se wo bas saamne BLACK energy ko dekh raha tha...

aur jab kaafi der tak wo chup hi raha toh..


BLACK ENERGY-swagat hai tumhara VI....

VIDEOUS-SHHHSHHHHHHHHH...


apne ek ungli ko apne honthon par lagakar black energy se chup rehne ko kaha VIDEOUS ne....


uske SHHH se nikalne waali hawa me itni taakat thi ki jaise hi us hawa ne aage badhte hue BLACK ENERGY ko chhua,toh BLACK ENERGY ki wo chaadar halki piche ki taraf ud si gayi....

wahin VIDEOUS ke dwara khudko chup karaye jaane se BLACK ENERGY thodi hairan bhi ho gayi thi...

par usne kuch kaha nahi,wo chup hi rahi par tabhi pehli baar hile VIDEOUS ke honth aur....


VIDEOUS-jitna bolna tha,mere jaagne se pehle bol chuke ho tum..ab aur koi baat nahi...

mujhe wahi awaaz sunana pasand hai,jinme dard ho,tadap ho, taklif ho....

aur tumhara dard,tumhari tadap, tumhari taklif toh ussi din khatm ho gayi thi jis din tumne mujhe paa liya tha...


ye sab bol VIDEOUS ne ek baar apni gardan chaaron taraf ghumayi maano pure universe ko wahin khade khade dekh raha ho aur baat bhi wahi thi..

VIDEOUS ki nazar jis jis disha ki taraf ghumi,us disha ki anant doori tak ka drishya dekh paa raha tha VIDEOUS...

sab taraf nazar ghumane ke baad uski nazar wapas BLACK ENERGY par aakar rooki aur.....


VIDEOUS-waise main khush hun tumse...kaaran jaante ho meri khushi kaa.???

BLACK ENERGY-maine tumhe itne waqt tak sambhal kar rakha, isiliye....

VIDEOUS-galat jawab...naam tumne mera bada acha rakha hai, isiliye...

VIDEOUS.....VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS,mere dono pitah ke naam ko ek kar bana naam, VIDEOUS....


VIKRAM, ASMODEUS...jab VIDEOUS ne ye do naam liye toh uski aankhon me ek chamak thi maano wo un dono naamo ko badi izzat de raha ho jisse mehsoos kar BLACK ENERGY ko bura laga aur isiliye...


BLACK ENERGY-jin do naamo ka zikr tumne kiya hai,unhise badla lene ke liye hi maine tumhe itne varshon tak sambhal kar rakha hai aur aaj tumhe ye roop diya hai..

VIDEOUS-jawab thoda sa galat hai tumhara..tumne mujhe isiliye ye roop diya hai kyunki jin naamo ka zikr maine kiya,unse ladhne aur jeetne ke tum yogya nahi ho...

sahi kaha naa..!!!!


fadfadahat si hui VIDEOUS ke jawab ko sunkar BLACK ENERGY ki chaadar me jisse dekh

VIDEOUS-hahahahahaaaaaa....


bohot zoron se hasa VIDEOUS par fir ek dum se chup hokar usne BLACK ENERGY ko dekha aur...


VIDEOUS-khel aarambh kare...mujhe behad talab ho rahi hai apne dono pitah se milne ki....


VIDEOUS ne apni baat kehte kehte hi apne dono haath faila diye the jiski baad wo Black energy ki chaadar ek baar zor se fadfadayi aur fir agle hi pal....

wo tezi se aage badhi aur VIDEOUS ko chaaron taraf se khudme lapet liya...

lapetne ke baad wo chaadar tezi se VIDEOUS ke chaaron taraf ghumne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte wo kaali chaadar khudko sokhta hue VIDEOUS ke sharir me vilin ho gayi...

aur jab aisa hua toh VIDEOUS jo ki 6 feet ka tha, uski height kuch inch aur zyada ho gayi..uska rang aur gora ho gaya aur uski bhuri aankhon ke side layers halke kaale ho gaye...

par ye saare changes internal the par wahin jab BLACK ENERGY VIDEOUS ke andar samayi toh...pura bramhaand halka halka shake kar gaya..

bramhaand ke ek behad hi andhere bhaag me tha is waqt VIDEOUS par
black ENERGY ke usme samate hi uske andar ki white energy halki chhatpatayi aur aisa hone par VIDEOUS se hota hua ek behad tez prakash har taraf fail gaya...

is tez prakash me itni shakti thi ki iske daayre ke beech aaye kayi saare dead planets puri tarah toot kar bikhar gaye...

par fir VIDEOUS ne apne andar ke black energy aur white energy ke beech par ek saath control paana shuru kiya aur aisa hote hi wo universe ka shake aur us white urja ka chhatpatana band hota chala gaya...

par jo reactions already ho chuke yhe,unka toh kuch kiya jaa sakta tha nahi yaa fir ye kahun ki VIDEOUS aisa chahta hi nahi tha aur shayad isiliye...


KADKADKADKAD.....

KADKADKADKAD.....

KADKADKADKAD......


VIDEOUS ke saamne ek ke baad ek teen baar zoron se bijli kadki aur us bijli ke beech se baahar aaye teen log yaa fir ye kahun ki teen ANGELS....


MOKALSAR.....

SHAILA.....

AKSHAANT......


aur un dono ke prakat hote hi VIDEOUS ki aankhen khul gayi...


VIDEOUS-CHERUBIM ANGELS.....


AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ki urja ko mehsoos karte hi VIDEOUS ko unki rank ka andaza ho gaya tha...


AKSHAANT-tumhare andar se beintehan negetive vibes nikal rahi hai...kaun ho tum...???

kyun tumhare shakti se is bramhaand par asar hua tha....???


VIDEOUS-negetive vibes...???dobara mehsoos karo...


VIDEOUS ki baat ko sun AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR teeno chownke...

reason..

jo negetive vibes unhe VIDEOUS se feel ho rahi thi,wo vibe gayab ho chuki thi...


SHAILA-ye kaise sambhav hai..??iski nakaratmak urja achanak kahan vilupt ho gayi...???

MOKALSAR-iska jawab toh yahi dega...

parichay do apna....

VIDEOUS-tum teeno iske laayak nahi ho.aur waise bhi,jinhe pata hona chahiye,unhe mere baare me ab tak pata chal hi gaya hoga...

SHAILA-kisse pata chal gaya hoga...???

VIDEOUS-mere dono pitah ko..???

MOKALSAR-tumhare do pitah hain..!!!kaun hain wo..???

VIDEOUS-aapke dono LORDS...VIKRAM, ASMODEUS....


yahan VIDEOUS ka mooh band hua aur wahan SHAILA, MOKALSAR aur AKSHAANT ke mooh khul gaye....


SHAILA-tum jaante bhi ho ki tum kya bol rahe ho...???

VIDEOUS-kya tum jaanti ho ki tum aur ye dono abhi tak kaise mere saamne sir uthakar baat kar paa rahe ho....??

sirf VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ki wajah se...un dono ne tum teeno ko ek samman yogya pad diya hai jisme tum teeno ke hisaab se beintahan taakat hai..

mai bas tumhari is galat fehmi ko todna nahi chahta...

isiliye jaao aur mere dono pitah se kaho ki VIDEOUS unka intezar kar raha hai....


VIDEOUS ki baaton me un teeno ne apne liye tuch hone ko bhaavna ko mehsoos kar liya tha jiske baad un teeno ko hi behad krodh aa gaya aur isiliye...


SHAILA-baaton ka waqt khatm hua bacche...ab tumhe tumhari uddandata ka dand milega...


ye bol SHAILA ne VIDEOUS ko jakadne aur sabak sikhane ke liye ek bijli se bane rope ka awahan kiya jisse wo VIDEOUS ko baandh bhi sake aur us rope se usse jhatke bhi lag sake...

SHAILA ke awahan karte hi uske haathon ke upar ek tez bijli chamki aur aisa hote hi SHAILA ne us bijli ke rope ko VIDEOUS ki taraf kar diya aur tabhi...

AHHHH....

ek tez cheekh nikli SHAILA ke mooh se..

reason....

us bijli se bana rope aage toh badha par aadhe raste se hi usne apna raasta badla aur wapas ghumte hue SHAILA ki taraf mood gaya aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal us rope ne SHAILA ko hi jakad liya tha..

itna hi nahi,us bijli ke rope ki shakti bhi SHAILA dwara utpaan kiye gaye power se kayi guna zyada thi jiski wajah se SHAILA ki haalat kuch hi seconds me kharab hone lagi thi..

wahin SHAILA ke baju me khade AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR ki toh hairani ek alag hi level par chali gayi thi..

reason..

un dono ko ye toh pata chal hi gaya tha ki SHAILA ke prahar ko VIDEOUS ne hi moda hai par ye karne ke liye VIDEOUS ko naa toh koi spell bolna pada yaa fir man me kuch sochna pada tha..

uske sharir ne apne aap khatre ko sense kar us khatre ko usse create karne waale ke upar mod diya tha aur ye bohot hi badi baat thi kyunki aisa karte hue unhone sirf do logon
ko dekha tha..

VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS...

wo ye soch hi rahe the ki...


VIDEOUS-jinka naam tumhare andar gunja hai,mai baat sirf unse hi karunga...

isiliye tum teeno jaa sakte ho...


VIDEOUS ke aisa bolte hi SHAILA ko lapeta hua wo bijli ka rope gayab ho gaya jiske baad wo neeche baith gayi.

jahan AKSHAANT ne usse sahara dekar uthaya wahin MOKALSAR ne do man hi man do naam pukare jiske baad...


KADKADKADKAD....

KADKADKADKAD......


ek ke baad ek do baar bijliyan kadki aur fir un bijliyon ke beech se nikle DEFENDER....PROTECTOR.OF THE UNIVERSE...

aur BEELZEBUB.....THE HEIR OF WHITE ENERGY.....


prakat hone ke saath hi un dono ko yahan jo kuch bhi hua tha,wo pata chal gaya jiske baad wo dono bhi

kaafi hairan ho gaye....

wahin BEELZEBUB ko dekh VIDEOUS ke chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi....


BEELZEBUB-is baat se fark nahi padta ki tumhara satya kya hai???tumne ek ANGEL ko taklif pahunchayi hai aur iske liye tumhe dand milega...

VIDEOUS-ye kya tarika hua apne BHAI se milne ka..???


ye bol VIDEOUS BEELZEBUB ki taraf badha jisse dekh...


BEELZEBUB-apni jagah par khade raho ladke...agar aur aage badhe toh mrityu ko prapt kar jaaoge..


BEELZEBUB ki baat ko sunane ke baad bhi muskurate hue aage badhta chala gaya VIDEOUS jiske baad BEELZEBUB ne ek force ray uspar chhod diya..

is force ray me itni taakat thi ki ek mountain ko bhi beech se tod de...

wo force ray tezi se aage badhta hua VIDEOUS ke paas pahuncha aur...

wahin rook gaya.....aur aisa hote dekh BEELZEBUB ne ek ke baad ek kayi waar kiya VIDEOUS ki direction ki taraf par sabka wahi haal hua jo us force ray ka hua tha...

wahin DEFENDER bas ektak VIDEOUS ko dekhe jaa rahe the...

VIDEOUS chalta hua BEELZEBUB ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya aur...


VIDEOUS-gale milo mujhse mere BHAI....


VIDEOUS ke aisa bolte hi jitne bhi waar BEELZEBUB ne kiye the,unke rays BEELZEBUB ke dono haathon par pade jiske baad BEELZEBUB apne aap aage badha aur VIDEOUS ke gale lag gaya...

usne bohot koshish ki khudko alag karne ki par wo kaamiyab nahi ho paaya..

kuch der tak gale lagne ke baad VIDEOUS BEELZEBUB se alag hua...

aisa hone ke bad BEELZEBUB ke haath toh neeche ho gaye par uski body waisi hi akdi hui thi jiski wajah se wo hil bhi nahi paa raha tha...

wahin jaise hi VIDEOUS BEELZEBUB se alag hua toh...


DEFENDER-sach batao,kaun ho tum...???


ye bolte hue DEFENDER ne apne ek haath se VIDEOUS ka kandha pakad liya aur wahan dabaw banane laga...

VIDEOUS-tumhe mujhe mujhse bina puche chhuna nahi chahiye tha...


VIDEOUS ke aisa bolte hi ek ajeeb baat hui..toh hua ye ki jo pressure DEFENDER VIDEOUS ke kandhe par bana rahe the,ab wahi pressure unhe apne kandhe par mehsoos hone laga aur wo bhi dogune force ke saath..

unhone apne haath ko VIDEOUS ke kandhe se hatane ki koshish ki par wo aisa kar nahi sake..

unhe aisa laga jaise unke haath uske kandhe par chipak gaye hain...

dekhte hi dekhte dard ki adhikta ki wajah se DEFENDER apne ghutno par aa gaye aur aisa hote dekh...

SHAILA, AKSHAANT aur MOKALSAR, teeno hi VIDEOUS ki taraf badhe par tabhi...

BOOM.....


jahan un teeno ke pair the,uske neeche tez dhamake hue jiski wajah se wo teeno udte hue piche ki taraf jaakar gire...

girte hi un teeno ne uthne ki koshish ki par tabhi,zamin ke andar se black energy ke bane ropes nikle aur unhone un teeno ko jakad liya..

itna hi nahi,black energy ke direct impact ki wajah se un teeno ko chetna bhi jaane lagi par tabhi....


KADKADKADKAD...

KADKADKADKAD....


firse do baar bijli kadki aur un bijliyon ke beech se prakat hue RONIT aur ANJALI.....


prakat hote hi ANJALI ke haath se ek energy beam nikli aur sidhe DEFENDER ke haath aur VIDEOUS ke kandhe par jaakar lagi jisse VIDEOUS ko kuch hua toh nahi par DEFENDER ka haath zaroor uske kandhe se detach ho gaya...

wahin RONIT ke aankhon se teen rays nikal un black energy se bane ropes par padi jinhone AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ko jakda hua tha aur aisa hote hi wo ropes gayab ho gayi...

RONIT aur ANJALI ke us jagah par kadam rakhte hi VIDEOUS ko unke ohde ke baare me pata chal gaya tha aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-SEREPHIM ANGELS....acha laga aap dono ko dekh kar....ummid hai ki aapko bhi apne best friend ke bete se milkar khushi hui hogi...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun RONIT aur ANJALI man hi man chownke par unhone apne chehre se apni hairani zaahir nahi hone di...


RONIT-khushi tab hoti agar tum jaayaz hote...najayaz chizon se milkar khushi mehsoos nahi hoti...

VIDEOUS-ye nahi kehna chahiye tha aapko...dil par lag gayi aapki baat....

khair, ek taklif aapne mujhe di hai,toh ab ek taklif mai aapko dunga...


VIDEOUS ke aisa kehte hi uske kapdon se saanp ki shakal liye kayi saare layers RONIT aur ANJALI ki taraf aage badh chale...

wahin ANJALI jisse pehle se hi aisa kuch hone ka andesha tha, uske haath me bhi ek chote size ka BULLWHIP chamak utha...

(ek kism ka chabuk)

ye BULL WHIP usse VIKRAM ne gift ki thi aur isme uski shakti ke kuch ansh moujud the....

un layers ke paas aate hi ANJALI ne apne BULL WHIP ko zor se lehraya aur uske aisa karti hi BULL WHIP se energy waves nikle..

ye waves itne strong the ki jaise hi inhone VIDEOUS ke layers ko chhua,toh wo layers piche hatne lage...

aisa hote dekh ANJALI ne aur zor se apne BULL WHIP ko ghumana shuru kiya..aisa hone par uske beech se tez kirane nikal VIDEOUS ki taraf badhi..ye kirane ek pure suraj ki urja se bhi zyada taakatwar thi...

par jaise hi wo kirane VIDEOUS ke kareeb pahunchi toh VIDEOUS ne apni ek ungli tezi se gol gol ghumana shuru kiya..

aur uske aisa karte hi uske ungliyon ke beech se bhi waves nikli par inki shakti ANJALI ke BULL WHIP se paida hui wave se zyada thi..

un waves ke beech ek hole paida hua jiske andar ANJALI ke chhodi hui kirane samakar gayab ho gayi..

apne itne ghaatak prahar ko yunhi waste jaata dekh ANJALI hairan hui par uske agle hi pal usne apne BULL WHIP ko ek baar zor se lehraya aur chhod diya...

ek neeli rang ki tarang jo ki asal me ek bohot hi deadly poison tha,wo us tarang me banana shuru ho gaya tha..

us poiaon ki khubi ye thi ki wo environment ke hisaab se failkar apne aap hi apne target ki body me ghus jaata tha...

ANJALI ke us tarang ko banate hi ek aur cheez hui... aur wo ye ki RONIT ko ab tak shaant hi khada tha,uske haath me ek BLUNT STAVE aa gaya...

(ek kism ka staff jo RONIT ko ASMODEUS ne gift kiya tha)

is staff me ek galaxy jitni urja thi... ANJALI ke tarangon ke beech RONIT ne apne BLUNT STAVE ko ghussa diya jiske baad un tarangon me jo vish tha,uski power 10 times aur badh gayi....

saath hi unke flow ka speed bhi badh gaya tha..ab wo poison lightning speed ke saath travel kar sakte the...

apne STAVE ko us tarang me ghussa RONIT ne ek jhatka diya jiske baad un tarangon ke beech se nikalta poison chaaron taraf se VIDEOUS ko gherta hua uski taraf badha..

wahin aisa hote dekh VIDEOUS apni jagah par tezi se ghum gaya jisse uske sharir se bhi behad shaktishali tarang nikle aur un tarangon ne paas aa rahe poison ke asar ko khatm karna shuru kar diya aur kuch der baad jab VIDEOUS ne ghumna band kiya,toh wo saara poison khatm ho chuka tha...

par in sabke beech VIDEOUS ANJALI aur RONIT se behad prabhavit hua aur isiliye ghumna rookte hi..


VIDEOUS-impressive...maine toh socha tha ki aap dono ki aatma ko nigal jaaunga par aap mere ummidon se zyada kaabil nikle...

jaaiye,maine aap dono ko jeeven daan diya....


haath ko jhatakte hue VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi jispar ghusse se bhar ANJALI apne BULL WHIP ki puri Shakti ka istemal VIDEOUS par karne hi waali thi ki par tabhi...

VIDEOUS ne is baat ko sense kar liya tha aur isiliye uske mookh se pehli baar ek spell nikla...


SOUMEVIZATA DUTIYE SHAKITIYEM....

SEIZE WITH BOTH THE POWERS.....


VIDEOUS ke spell ke bolte hi uske sharir se ek moti kaali ray nikal ANJALI aur RONIT ki taraf badh chali..

kyunki ye ray kaali thi,matlab black energy ki thi, isiliye RONIT aur ANJALI thode relaxed the kyunki wo dono hi SERAPHIM ANGELS the jinpar black energy kaam nahi karti thi par jaise hi wo ray un dono ke kareeb pahunchi tab un dono ko laga jhatka..

reason...

kyunki ray ke paas aate hi un dono ko hi us ray ke andar chuppe WHITE ENERGY ke kan bhi sense ho gaye jisse feel kar dono ka dimag thanka par ab thodi der ho chuki thi kyunki isse pehle ki dono react karen,un rays ne apni speed ko double kar un dono ko jakad liya tha...

aur aisa hote hi un dono k shashtr unke andar chale gaye...

par jakde jaate hi apni shakti ko release kar un dono ne chhutne ki koshish ki...

par jab wo kaamiyab nahi hue toh unhone apni shakti ka daayra badhana aarambh kiya jisse dekh VIDEOUS ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi...

reason..

kyunki wo jaanta tha ki jo RONIT aur ANJALI kar rahe hain,usse wo dono azaad toh ho jayenge,par is chakkar me wo is universe ka acha khaas band baja denge aur is universe ke karta dharta LORD OF ANGELS aur THE CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT aisa kaise hone de sakte the jiska matlab tha ki jis ghadi ka usse intazar tha,wo aane waali thi...

aur hua bhi waisa hi jaisa VIDEOUS soch raha tha...

khudko chhudaane ke liye dono ne apni shaktiyon ka ek bohot bada bhaag release kar diya tha jiski wajah se aas paas ke kayi light years ki doori par bane Planets, astroids barbaad ho gaye...

ye toh acha tha ki is waqt wo jahan the, wahan se 1000 light years tak koi living planet nahi tha par ab dheere dheere un dono ki access shakti ke release hone ki wajah se ye doori bhi bohot jald khatm ho jaane waali thi...

wahin in sabse alag BEELZEBUB toh bas bina hile dule ye sab hote dekhne ke siwaye kuch kar sakta tha nahi, DEFENDER bhale hi VIDEOUS ke grip se aazad ho chuke the,par uska asar ab bhi unpar tha aur isiliye hi wo zamin par gire lambi lambi saansen le rahe the..

zamin par sirf DEFENDER hi nahi balki AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR bhi pade hue the jinke ANGEL forms black energy ke rays ki chapet me aane ki wajah se bohot kamzor ho gaye the aur issi wajah se wo teeno bhi is waqt khud ko thik kar rahe the..

aur in sab baaton ke pare ANJALI aur RONIT apne aap ko 50 percent tak chhudane me kaamiyab bhi ho gaye the aur isiliye baaki ke 50 percent ko kaam me laane ke liye un dono ne apni bachi shakti ko release karne ki sochi bina is baat par dhyan diye ki unke aisa karte hi unke power ki chapet me kuch living planets bhi aa jaayenge...

apne aap ko shaant kar apni puri shakti ko release karne ke liye dono spell bolne hi waale the ki tabhi.....


BOHOT HUA......


ek zordar awaaz se pura mahoul gunj utha jisse sunte hi ek taraf ANJALI aur RONIT azaad ho gaye, dusri taraf DEFENDER ka dard jaata raha aur BEELZEBUB ki body bhi release ho gayi,teesri taraf AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ki thakan bhi puri tarah gayab ho gayi aur wo apne pairon par khade ho gaye par in sabse alag chowthi taraf tha hamara VIDEOUS jiske chehre par ek vijayi muskaan tair rahi thi..

ussi muskaan ko liye wo piche palta aur pehli baar usne dekha apne hone ke do sabse mahatvpurn kaaran ko...apne dono pitah ko....


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS.....








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....








AAPKA APNA V...J....
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