Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI ALFREEN KO EK RAAT PEHLE USSE FEEL HUE EK AJEEB EHSAAS KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNI PEHLI CHUNOUTI PURI KAR LI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



MEGA UPDATE-47



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S





3 MONTHS LATER



KYA HAAL HAI LOOSERS...????


ALFREEN aur MABEL jo ki ek dusre se baat kar rahi thi,unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jispar jab unhone palat kar dekha toh dono hi thoda chownk gayi....

reason....

unke saamne ANWIR aur MORANA khade muskura rahe the...

subah ka waqt hai...classes shuru hone me thoda sa waqt hai but sabhi SAVENTS class me aa chuke hain aur apne apne groups bana kar khade hain..

filhal MABEL aur ALFREEN ke saath MAHI nahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki kuch SAVENTS jinhe apne SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION me kuch zyada hi dikkat aa rahi hai,wo sab MAHI se apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ke ideas le rahe the aur MAHI bhi badi khushi aur man se un sabhi SAVENTS ko unke will power ko aur strong karne ke tips bata rahi thi...

aur issi beech hui entry MORANA aur ANWIR ki jinhe dekh sirf MABEL aur ALFREEN hi nahi balki MAHI aur uske saath khade sabhi SAVENTS bhi chownk gaye the....

MABEL aur ALFREEN ki hi tarah MAHI ne bhi un dono me ke mooh se looser shabd suna tha aur wo jaanti thi ki ye word un dono ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ke liye bola hai par filhal wo shaant hi rahi....

par un dono ko dekh ALFREEN ka acha khaasa mood bigad gaya aur unke taunt ko sun uska dimag bhi ghum gaya aur isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar MABEL ek baat bata..looser hona zyada galat hai yaa fir bhikari hona...

MABEL-mere hisaab se bhikari hona...

ALFREEN-haina..chalo fir,hum looser hi thik hain..kamsekam in dono ki tarah bhikari toh nahi hain jo baar baar apne ghar matlab apne PHASE ko chhodkar hamare PHASE me aakar kuch naa kuch mangte rehte hain...


jahan ALFREEN ki baat sun us class me moujud PHASE 1 ke sabhi
SAVENTS has diye wahin MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghussa aa gaya aur...


MORANA-apni zuban ko apni aukaad ke hadh me rakh kar mooh khola kar ladki....hum jinhe tu bhikari keh rahi hai,wo PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain...

wo SAVENTS jinke saamne teri koi haisiyat nahi...

ALFREEN-haan wo toh dikh raha hai....tabhi baar baar apni sadi hui shakal liye is PHASE me ghusse chale aate ho...

ANWIR-sirf isiliye kyunki filhal tu first PHASE me hai,teri zubaan hamare saamne chal rahi hai...

par koi baat nahi..sirf 3 mahino ki hi baat hai..uske baad teri azaadi ka,tere bolne ka yahan tak ki tere sir uthane ka waqt khatm....

kyunki PHASE 2 me sabhi SAVENTS, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saamne teri akad nichod di jaayegi aur koi kuch nahi kar paayega....

MAHI-self obsession ki hadh ho yaar tum dono...ek free advice deti hun,tum dono bola kam aur kiya zyada karo...

warna tumme aur ek kutte me kya fark reh jaayega....


MAHI jo ab tak chup chaap saari baaton ko sun rahi thi, ANWIR ki aakhri baat sun usne apni chuppi todte hue baat ko aage badhaya jisse sun ek baar firse ANWIR aur MORANA ka dimag ghuma..

wo dono fir kuch kehne hi waale the ki tabhi....


VIOLET-GOOD MORNING SAVENTS...


un dono ke piche se VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz aayi jo NOX aur OMMIN ke saath class me enter kar rahi thi...

wahin VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz ko sun MORANA aur ANWIR ne apne aap ko control kiya aur WHIZZ ki taraf mud gaye aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS ke saath un donko ne bhi VIOLET WHIZZ aur dono WHIZZDERS ko wish kiya...


VIOLET-arre MORANA, ANWIR..tum dono morning me hi aa gaye..mujhe laga tha ki class ke baad aaoge...

ANWIR-actually WHIZZ, pichli khch classes itni hectic rahi hain ki aaj hum dono ne hi class se off liya hai aur aapko toh pata hi hai ki hum hamare PHASE ke best SAVENTS hain aur hume off lene se koi rokta nahi....


pure ghamand se ANWIR ne apni baat kahi aur is baat ko karte waqt uski gardan ghumte hue ALFREEN aur MAHI par tiki rahi...

wahin ANWIR ki baat sun VIOLET WHIZZ toh bas muskurayi par NOX ko ANWIR ki baat achi nahi lagi aur isiliye...


NOX-toh apne PHASE ke best SAVENT...ek baat batao ki apne is off time me tum yahan kyun aaye....???

VIOLET-ye dono MAHI ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ko dekhne aaye hain...


ANWIR kuch jawab de,usse pehle hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne apni baat kahi jisse sun MAHI pehle toh shock hui par fir usse maajra samajh me aa gaya aur isiliye wo muskura di...

toh jo MAHI ne samjha aur jo asal me kaaran tha jiski wajah se ANWIR aur MORANA yahan the wo ye tha ki MAHI ne jo karnama kiya tha,6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ka wo bhi first PHASE me hokar,wo pehle kabhi bhi nahi hua tha aur isiliye ye baat pure CHOSENS me fail gayi thi..

ANWIR aur MORANA bhi is khabar se acchute nahi the..waise toh is khabar ko sun unhe bilkul bhi acha nahi laga par fir unhone socha ki bhale hi ye baat unke liye negetive thi par saath hi important bhi thi..

wo jaanana chahte the ki MAHI kis tarah pain aur emotions ke bahav ke beech khud ko shaant rakhti hui apne SOUL ko lagatar itna zyada AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab ho rahi hai..???

wo aana toh bohot pehle se chahte the par khud ke PHASE ke task se ho rahe vyastata ke kaaran dono aa nahi paa rahe the but aaj finally dono yahan the....

par yahan aate hi MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko dekh dono apni aadat se majbur bully karne se baaz nahi aaye par aisa karna unhe khud par hi bhaari padh gaya.....

khar,jaise hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne un dono ke yahan aane ka kaaran bataya toh...


NOX-arre par PHASE 2 ke best SAVENT ko bhala PHASE 1 ki MAHI se kya kaam ho sakta hai...???

OMMIN-bilkul ho sakta hai.. kyunki ye dono sirf is saal ke liye PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain....

par MAHI PHASE 1 me sirf is saal ki hi nahi balki CHOSENS ke itihaas ke 25 thousand years ki best SAVENT hai..

aur aise SAVENT ke paas kaun nahi aana chahega...???


OMMIN ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR ko andar hi andar behad ghussa aaya par dono ke chehre shaant hi rahe..


ANWIR-WHIZZDER OMMIN, WHIZZDER NOX...sikhna toh hume har kisi se hi chahiye naa...

aur ye baat issi PHASE me aur issi class me aap dono ne hi humse kahi thi...

ab dekhiye naa, sirf 2 PHASE me aur usme bhi hamara second PHASE abhi khatm hua nahi hai,itne kam waqt me hum dono hi 8 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke dhaarak ban chuke hain...

MORANA-aur shayad itna hi percent aap pure life me AMPLIFY kar paaye hain, haina WHIZZDER OMMIN aur WHIZZDER NOX....


ek khilli udane waali smile ke saath MORANA ne is baat ko kaha jisse sun ANWIR toh muskura diya par OMMIN aur NOX,dono ko behad bura laga...

waise bura toh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko bhi laga tha..

ALFREEN toh kuch bolne waali bhi thi par MAHI ne ishare se usse chup rehne ko kaha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MORANA-aur waise bhi is class me agar MAHI ko alag kar den,toh hum pure confidence se keh sakte hain ki aur koi bhi hum dono ke takkar ka nahi hai...

first PHASE me hum dono ne hi 4 percent tak apne SOUL ko kar liya tha jo i am sure ki is class me MAHI ke alawa ye karnama aur koi karne me capable nahi hai....

VIOLET-tum galat ho MORANA... MAHI ke baaju me jo do ladkiyan khadi hain, MABEL aur ALFREEN,in dono ne hi abhi tak apne SOUL ko 3 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai..

ye dono tum dono se bas 1 percent hi piche hain and i am sure ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono tumhari barabari kar lenge....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR chownke...unhe is baat ki bilkul bhi ummid nahi thi ki MABEL aur ALFREEN itne aage badh chuke honge...


aur jaisa ki VIOLET WHIZZ ne kaha ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar lenge,jiska matlab tha ki ALFREEN aur MABEL un dono ke barabar ho jaayenge aur ye baat dono ko hazam nahi ho paa rahi thi...

isiliye ANWIR ka dimag tezi se doudne laga aur fir usse kuch click hua.


ANWIR-haan,ye ho sakta hai WHIZZ ki ye dono is PHASE ke khatm hote hote tak 4 percent tak pahunch jaayen par fir bhi ye dono humse piche hi rahengi aur wo isiliye kyunki humne apne SOUL ka 4 th percent first PHASE ke khatm hone se 3 mahine pehle kar liya tha matlab abhi jo waqt hai,is time tak hamara SOUL 4 percent AMPLIFY ho chuka tha..

par ye dono toh abhi 3 percent par hain matlab ye humse piche hain aur humesha piche hi rahenge...


ALFREEN-ye waqt abhi khatm nahi hua hai aur jab tak ye hoga,hum apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar chuke honge...


MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghurte hue ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jispar...


MORANA-really..??par kaise karogi tum ye...???kyunki aaj hi wo din hai,wo waqt hai jab humne apne soul ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya tha..

jiska matlab hai ki tumhe bhi aaj hi ye achievement haasil karma hoga...

ALFREEN-aisa hi hoga..hum aaj hi ye kar ke dikhayenge...

ANWIR-aur agar naa kar paaye toh...!!!


MAHI jaanti thi ki MORANA aur ANWIR ALFREEN ko bhadka rahe hain,aur isiliye wo kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi..


ALFREEN-toh tum jo bolo,mai wo maan lungi.....and that's my promise....

MABEL-my nahi our.... that's our promise...agar hum unsuccessful hue toh tum dono jo bolo hum dono wo maan lenge...


MAHI ke interfere karne se pehle hi ALFREEN aur MABEL ne promise kar diya tha jiska matlab tha ki ab MAHI kuch bhi kar nahi sakti thi...

wahin in saari baaton ko sun VIOLET, NOX aur OMMIN bhi thode pareshan ho gaye the kyunki ek toh wo jaante the ki SOUL ko asaani se AMPLIFY nahi kiya jaa sakta aur saath hi unhe ye bhi maalum tha ki agar MABEL aur ALFREEN unsuccessful rahe toh MORANA aur ANWIR zaroor un dono se kuch ulta sidha demand karenge....

par in sabhi pareshaniyon ke beech wo teeno ye bhi jaante the ki MABEL aur ALFREEN ko agar wo bacha bhi len toh wo sirf abhi ke kiye hoga..

par aisa karne se next PHASE me unke problems aur badhengi..saath hi wo teeno soch rahe the ki next PHASE ka ek halka sa swaad MABEL aur ALFREEN ko abhi hi chakh lena chahiye kyunki us PHASE me jo hota hai,jo zindagi jee jaati hai,wo chunouti, ghamand,sangharsh and most importantly shakti pradarshan ke beech hi jee jaati hai....

kamzoron ke liye wo PHASE hell se kam nahi...aur yahi sab sochte hue wo teeno chup hi rahe...

wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ke promise karte hi....


ANWIR-thik hai fir...toh agar tum dono aaj ki class me apne soul ko ek baar firse AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab hue toh hum maan lenge ke tum dono humare equals ho,humse kam nahi ho par agar aisa nahi hua toh....

MORANA-3 percent AMPLIFICATION me ho tum dono..iska matlab hai ki tum dono hi next PHASE me STELLARS group ka hissa ban chuke ho...

toh hum ye chahte hain ki agar tum dono aaj fail hui toh next PHASE me STELLARS group me nahi balki WEAKLINGS group me enter karogi...


MORANA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS including WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hairan ho gaye..

wahin MAHI ek baar firse kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi...


MABEL/ALFREEN-HUME MANZOOR HAI....







PLANET-ZEAL-THE SOUL



PLACE-THE RED SURFACE





TOH DER KIS BAAT KI....???SHURU KAREN!!!



meri agli aur aakhri chunouti ka waqt aa chuka tha aur isiliye ye baat maine WOOGER se kahi jispar....


WOOGER-ek baat hai jo aapko is chunouti ke shuru hone se pehle jaanani zaroori hai...

ye chunouti aapki pichli chunouti se thodi alag hone waali hai....

kaise,iske baare me aapko aapki chunouti ke douran pata chal jaayega...

bas ek hi chiz hogi aapke paas..aapka focus..usse mat khone mat dijiyega....


WOOGER ki baat sunane ke baad bhi mai chup hi raha aur isiliye...

wo dusri roshni ka gola tezi se aage badha aur agle hi pal....


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YE KAISI JAGAH HAI....HAR TARAF SIRF ROSHNI...AUR IS ROSHNI SE ITNI ZYADA URJA KYUN NIKAL RAHI HAI...

BUT MOST IMPORTANTLY,MAI YAHAN KYA KAR RAHA HUN....

MUJHE TOH KUCH PAL PEHLE US ROSHNI NE CHHUA THA,USKE BAAD KYA HUA...???


us beintahan roshni ke samandar ke beech fasa mai ye sab apne aap se bol hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe laga jhatka...


reason...



SAMAY SACHALAKON...ISHWAR NE AAP SABKI PRARTHANA SUN LI...AAP SABKE DUKH AUR TAKLIF KI GHADI SAMAPT HUI...AAKHEN KHOLIYE....


ek tez awaaz gunj uthi mere kaano me par jhatka mujhe us awaaz ko sunkar nahi laga tha....

jhatka mujhe is baat par laga ki jaise hi is awaaz se aankhen kholne ki baat kahi,toh mere saamne dikh raha tez prakash ek dum se gayab ho gaya aur aisa hone par maine dekha ki mai kisi badi si jagah par khada hun...

mere saamne bohot se log khade hain par filhal wo human form me nahi balki SHADOW FORM me hain..

aur mere aaju baaju kul chaar log khade the jinme ek ladki thi aur teen ladke...

ab ye sab ho kya raha tha,iska toh mujhe koi idea tha nahi..mai bas apne dimag ko douda kar situation ko samajhne ki koshish kar hi raha tha ki tabhi...


AHHH,AHHHH,AHHHH.....


mere saamne khade un spirit form ke logon ke mooh se dard bhari karah nikal gayi jisse sun...


MAI-ab saala inhe kya ho raha hai...??aur ye inke pair ke niche aag kyun jal uthi???

ye sawal maine man me nahi,balki apni mooh se bola tha par aisa karte hi mujhe ek naya shock laga aur wo isiliye kyunki bhale hi maine in baaton ko apne mooh se bola tha par ye baatein bahar nikli hi nahi balki mere andar hi gunj uthi...

par jaise hi maine ye sawal kiya,toh uske agle hi pal mere brain me is scene ka data jaise store hone laga..

aur is scene ka hi nahi,balki is scene se ghata pehle ka scene aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,wo scene bhi mere dimag me clearly ghum gaya...

saath hi jo filhal mai tha,uska naam aur saath hi mere aaju baaki jo paanch log khade the,wo kaun the aur is character ke saath jo fihal kai tha,VIKRAM,use unsab ka rishta bhi mujhe pata chal chuka tha..

aur aisa hote hi mujhe aadhi baat aur half situation bhi samajh me aa gayi...

toh chaliye, jitna mai samjha tha,utna aap bhi samajh lijiye par usse pehle....


(WRITER'S NOTE-RAAZ ko toh scene samajh me aa gaya..ummid hai ki aap sabko bhi samajh aa gaya hoga...

ye scene hai SHADOW WORLD ka jahan ASMODEUS ne YELUPTUS planet me basne waale SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko kaid karke rakha hua tha...

detail me dobara yaad karne ke liye update 110 padh len..)


back to the story:-


toh jo aadhi baat mujhe samajh me aayi thi,wo ye thi ki bhale hi mai abhi is VIKRAM ke sharir me tha,ya fir ye kahun ki filhal mai hi VIKRAM tha,par tab bhi mai apne hisaab se chizen nahi kar sakta tha...

mere har sawal ke mere dimag me uththe hi mujhe uska jawab mil jaayega jo ki mujhe is sharir ke maalik ka brain dega...

aur isiliye hi WOOGER ne kaha tha ki meri ye chunouti meri pehli chunouti se alag hone waali hai..

kyunki us chunouti me toh mera wajud hi gayab ho gaya tha par jab mujhe mere hone ka ehsas hua tab maine ASMODEUS ke body par apna control le liya but yahan toh maamla hi ulta hai...

yahan mera astitv shuru se hi mere paas hai par fir bhi mai is scene me is VIKRAM ke jiske pal mujhe jeene hain,uske aadhin hun...

and this is bloody scary for me...

kyunki yahi toh wo chiz thi,aadhinta,samarpan,kisi aur ke chaaye me jeena yaa saans lena jisse mujhe sakht nafrat hai..

yahi bas ek aisa condition hai jisme mera dimag sthir nahi reh sakta...i bloody hate to be someone,live like that someone and most importantly, depend upon that someone or anyone dammit...

is aadhe sach ko jaankar mera dimag hi ghum gaya....mera uddeshya,mera target,sab bhulne laga tha mai...

mujhe bas kisi tarah is human choge ko,jisse mujhe zabardasti pehna diya gaya tha,utaarna tha par saala ye bhi hone se raha...

ek ajeeb mental state me fasa mai bas chupchaap honth sile saamne chal rahe scene ko dekh raha tha jisme bas chutiyaapa ho raha tha..

akhand chutiyaapa...arre,kare koi bhare koi....fase saale ye nikamme the,par nikalna is saale VIKRAM ko padega..

arre kyun bhai...dusri ke fadde me padhna kaayko... marne de,tadapne de saalon ko..

mera matlab is VIKRAM ke baaju me ek bandi khadi thi,jiske baare me mujhe pata chala tha ki ye iski maal hai..

abbe lekar ghum isse.enjoy kar...chota sa lounda dikh raha hai shakal se par saale ki chul badon waali hai..

sabki madad karenge ye....aur us madad me apni mahanta mujhe bhi dikhayenge...

ek aise bande ko jo is scene ke actual date ke najaane kitne decades ke baad paida hua hai...

par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain...apne aap me badbadata hua mai bhi sabki tarah scene ko dekhne me lag gaya jahan is waqt dialogue dialogue khela jaa raha tha...


MAI-najaane kitni sadiyon tak aapne pure bramhaand ke samay chakra ko sahi tarike se ghumane ka daayitv nibhaya hai..

aur aaj bhi aap jis aag se tap rahe hain,wo bhi ussi samay chakra ki nirantarta ko banaye rakhne ke liye sah rahe hain...

aap sab ne pehle hi bina kisi galti ke itne varshon tak saza bhugti hai....

mujhe aapko bachane ke liye pehle hi aa jaana chahiye tha par mai aisa kar nahi paaya...mere aage jhuk kar mujhe aur sharminda nahi kijiye....


un SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke jhukne ki wajah se ye gratefulness bhare shabd nikle the VIKRAM ke mooh se jisse sun mera dimag aur ghumne laga...


abbe jhuk rahe hain toh jhukne de....har kriya par pratikriya dena zaroori hai kya...????


maine apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar khudko is scene se nikalne ki koshish ki par naa toh mera CEREBRATION process ruka aur naahi mai kahin jaa paaya...

mai samajh gaya tha ki chupchaap is scene ko dekhne ke alawa mai aur kuch nahi kar sakta....

par sawal tha kyun...????is ajeeb si situation ka mai hissa aakhir hun hi kyun..????

mere dimag ye khayal,ye sawal utha aur aisa hote hi....


BAS EK HI CHIZ HOGI AAPKE PAAS..AAPKA FOCUS..USSE MAT KHONE MAT DIJIYEGA....


yahan aane se pehle WOOGER ke dwara kahe gaye ye aakhri shabd mere dimag me gunj uthe aur tab...


MAI-FOCUS.....toh isiliye WOOGER ne wo sab kaha tha...


sirf ek hi chiz hogi mere paas yahan...mera focus... WOOGER ko ye achi tarah pata tha ki aisi situations mujhe pasand nahi hai..

aise haalaton par mujhe behad ghussa aata hai aur isiliye usne mujhe focus karne ko kaha...

par sawal tha ki kis chiz par focus...???

aur is sawal ke mere dimah me aate hi mere dimag me ek aur vichar aaya...

aur wo vichar related tha is scene se,is scene se pehle hue scene se aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,us scene se...

aur wo vichar tha INTERCONNECTION....

in sabhi scenes ke beech ka interconnection.....

yahan aane ke baad mere brain ke paas jo bhi ho raha hai,us situation aur uske kaaran ke baare me bata diya tha jispar maine abhi tak dhyan nahi diya tha par ab jab ye interconnection waala thought mere dimag me ghuma toh....

maine sthithi ko samajhna shuru kiya...


SHADOW WORLD....jahan par ki is waqt mai hun aur ye scene chal raha hai....

par is jagah ka main base hai YELUPTUS.... YELUPTUS ke phase log jinhe SAMAY SANCHALAK kaha jaata hai,ye VIKRAM unhe bachane ke liye yahan aaya hai....

saath hi iske ek dost RONIT ki bandi bhi yahin par hai...usse bhi ye bachayega...

wo bandi jiske SOUL ko yahan rakha gaya hai par uski body YELUPTUS me hai...

toh VIKRAM in samay SANCHALAKON ko aur us ANJALI ko wahan YELUPTUS lekar jaayega...

is beech usse ek banda (ASMODEUS)rokne ke liye jaal pehle hi bicha chuka hai par is VIKRAM ke paas uska bhi kaat hai...

jitne scenes aur unme chuppi baatein mere brain me feed hui thi,un sab scenes ke baare me mera dimag sochne laga tha....

aur jab ye bichaye hue jaal ko kaatne ke baare me maine socha toh ek aur baat mujhe click hui par tabhi maine saamne dekha jahan filhal scene badla hua tha...

filhal mere saamne wahi chutiyaapa ho raha tha jisse mujhe sakht chidh thi...

wo RONIT aur ANJALI ek dusre se chipke ro rahe the...

ajeeb hote hai ye insaan,par inke aankhon se nikalne waale aansu toh saale inse bhi zyada ajeeb hote hain....

khushi me bhi tap tap...
aur gam me bhi tap tap....

ye sab dekh mera FOCUS ek baar firse dagmagane laga tha...

kisi tarah khud ko shaant rakh maine badhte hue scene ko dekha jisme is waqt VIKRAM sabko us ANJALI ke baare me bata raha tha jisse sun....


MAI-yahan aane se pehle hi VIKRAM ko yahan hone waali ghatnaon ke baare me pehle se pata tha...


ye SAMAY SANCHALAK toh yahan pehle se fase the,par ANJALI baad me aayi...

toh iska matlab is ANJALI ke liye hi VIKRAM ne ye sab plan kiya tha...???


khudse maine is sawal ko pucha tha jiske baad jo jawab mujhe mila, usse sun mujhe behad hairani hui...

darasal mere sawal ka jawab ye tha ki ANJALI ke chakkar me VIKRAM ne in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko nahi bachaya tha balki SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko bachane ke liye hi ANJALI ek bate ki tarah yahan fasayi gayi thi...

ANJALI ke rooh ka yahan fasna,fir SAMAY SANCHALAKON aur usse bachana,uske liye jo jaal is planet ke baahar bichaya gaya hai,usse todna,in sab chizon ki planning is VIKRAM ne pehle hi kar li thi...

GAZAB.....

zindagi me pehli baar mai kisise impressed hua tha...itni doordarshita,itni gehri soch aur har soch ko sach karne ki itni perfect timing ke hisaab se ki gayi planning....

ye banda haarta bhi tab tha jab wo haar uski permanent jeet ke liye zaroori ho.... brilliant...

aisi soch,maine pehle naa kabhi suni thi aur naa dekhi thi...

aur is bande ke ganit ko samajhne ke baad WOOGER ki kahi gayi us baat ka matlab bhi clear ho gaya tha jisme usne kaha tha ki ye chunouti meri pehli ki chunouti se alag hai...

mai us alag shabd ka matlab samajh gaya tha...darasal mujhe in chal rahe scenes me VIKRAM ke dwara kiye gaye kisi loop hole ko nahi dhundna hai aur wo isiliye kyunki is bande ka jiski doordarshita itni adhik ho,uske faislon me koi loop hole ho hi nahi sakta....

no chance....mujhe bas chal rahe scenes me kuch aisa dhoodna hai jisse meri kahani aage badh sake...

mujhe koi faayda ho...aur ye thi pate ki baat .

kyunki baat jab mere faayde ki ho toh mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun..kuch bhi......

aur isiliye bilkul shaant dimag se maine ek baar firse ho chuke scenes,chal rahe scenes aur aage hone waale scenes ke baare me sochne laga...

itna toh mai samajh chuka tha ki mere hisse me bas ye 5 hi scenes hain..

jinme se do khatm ho chuke the.. ANJALI ke saath VIKRAM and party wapas SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke paas jaa rahe the jo ki third scene tha...

fourth tha sabko yahan se lekar YELUPTUS jaana aur paanchva scene....

jahan VIKRAM in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haath me unki khoyi hui chiz,wo PARIVARTAK....

ek second....

paanchva scene...wo PARIVARTAK....


in saare scenes ke hone ka maine reason..in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke yahan fasne ka main reason...

PARIVARTAK...

jaise hi maine us cheez ka naam liya...ek ke baad ek 2 chizen hui...


pehli...mere dimag me us chiz ki saari qualities ghoom gayi...

jisse jaan pata nahi kyun par mujhe aisa laga ki ye chiz mere kaam ki hai...

dusri...jaise hi mujhe ye laga ki wo PARIVARTAK mere kaam ka hai toh...

scene achanak se badal gaya..aur ab jo scene mere saamne tha, usse dekh mera doubt clear ho chuka tha..

mai jaan gaya tha ki maine jo socha hai,woh sahi hai aur ussi soch ko sach karna hi meri chunouti hai...

toh baat ye hai ki filhal mai YELUPTUS me tha....the last scene...aur mere saamne wahi scene chal raha tha jab VIKRAM SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko unki amanat wo PARIVARTAK dene waala tha...


MAI-maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi....aur haan,ye rakhiye...


SAMAY SANCHALAK jo abhi VIKRAM ke samman me jhuke hue the,isiliye VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi aur aisa kehne ke baad usne apna haath aage kar diya jisme is waqt PARIVARTAK tha...


uske aisa karte hi ek SAMAY SANCHALAK jo VIKRAM ke paas khada tha,usne PARIVARTAK ko lene ke liye haath aage badhaya par tabhi...


MAI-meri ek choti si shart hai...


haath ko band karte hue maine ye baat kahi....


MAINE....VIKRAM nahi, RAAZ....


ji haan doston,jaise hi is chunouti ka,is PARIVARTAK ka ganit mere samajh me aaya toh uske agle hi pal mera lock khul gaya jiski wajah se mai aur VIKRAM ab ek ho gaye the..

jiska matlab tha ki ab bhale hi sabke saamne VIKRAM tha, par bol mai raha tha...

wahin mere moothi band kar lene aur shart waali baat sunkar sabhi SAMAY SANCHALAK thode hairan hue par phir...


SAMAY SANCHALAK-hamari zindagi aapki rini hai...aapko humse kisi bhi shart ko rakhne ki aawashyakta nahi hai..

aap bas aadesh karen...

MAI-is PARIVARTAK ki wo urja jisse ye kaam karti hai,bhavishya me agar mujhse jude kisi shaksh ko uski zaroorat pade,toh aap usse wo de denge....

SAMAY SANCHALAK-jaisi aapki iccha...


SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haan kehte hi maine apni band moothi khol di jiske baad us SAMAY SANCHALAK ne mere hatheli se us PARIVARTAK ko le liya aur aisa hote hi....


CHANNNN.....


jo pichli baar hua tha,wo ek baar fir hua...

ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir back to ground zero....

mai wapas ZEAL me tha par filhal mai kuch bhi dekhne ko haalat me nahi tha aur wo isiliye kyunki filhal mere sir pichle baar ke mukable 10 times zyada tezi se ghoom raha tha...

mujhe kuch zyada hi chakkar aa rahe the aur isiliye hi mai aakhen band kiye neeche zamin par baitha raha....

kuch time tak aisa hi raha par fir dheere dheere mai normal hone laga aur jab puri tarah control me aane ke baad maine saamne dekha toh halka hadbada gaya...

reason.....

mere just chehre ke saamne wo gola tha..mera SOUL jo lagatar hawa me rotate ho raha tha...

WOOGER gayab tha par fir bhi mai usse mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

us gole me....

kuch der tak us chamakte hue gole ki taraf dekhte rehne ke baad....


MAI-MAI TUMHE APNATA HUN...

KADKADKADKAD.........


bura bramhaand jaise ek akeli bijli ke kadkadane se kaamp gaya tha...

har planet ke mausam ka rookh jaise badal sa gaya..dead aur living...dono hi catagories me aane waale planets halke halke shake kar gaye the...

aur ye sab hua kyunki meri ijazat milne par wo gola aage badha aur mujhme sama gaya....aisa hote hi meri aankhen band ho gayi...

par mai mehsoos kar raha tha..zindagi me pehli baar mai feel kar raha tha..

apne sharir, apne khoon,apni dhamniyon ke andar ke khaali jagah ko bharta hua, mai mehsoos kar raha tha....

mujhe aisa mehsoos ho raha tha maano saalon ke banzar tapte hue zamin par kisine ek saath hazaron laakhon litres paani chhod diya ho...

wo sukoon jisse ab tak mehroom tha mai,wo jagah banati chali jaa rahi thi mere andar...

ye saare changes the internal..par in internal changes ke saath saath kuch external changes bhi hui thi mujhme..

aur wo ye ki jaise hi meri SOUL mujhme samayi aur meri aankhen band hui toh uske agle hi pal mera sharir hawa me uthne laga...

dekhte ho dekhte mere sharir ke upar ka kapda bhi change hone laga...

sabse pehle mere sharir ke chaaron taraf ek White AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere sharir ke andar sama gayi...

aisa hote hi mere sharir par lenin ka ek white robe aa gaya...uske baad us robe ke theek upar white AURA ki hi tarah ek Black AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere white robe se hote hui mere sharir ke andar sama gayi..

par aisa karne ke dauran jab us black aura ne mere white robe ko chhua toh us robe ka colour light grey ho gaya jo ki white aur black ke mixture se banta hai....

aisa hone je baad dheere dheere mera sharir neeche aane laga aur fir jaise hi maine neeche zamin ko chhua toh...

meei aankhen khul gayi....

gehri kaali aankhen jinke side ke white layers kuch zyada hi white lag rahe the...

khair,jaise hi meri aankhen khuli toh ek aur cheez hui jo aaj se pehle tak kabhi nahi hui thi....

aur wo thi mere chehre par aayi smile....

ek aisi smile jisse agar koi dekhe toh khush ho jaaye par agar us smile ka matlab woh samajh len toh khade khade hi mar jaaye...

waise mere chehre par muskurahat bewajah nahi aayi thi..ye aayi thi saamne ke drishya ko dekh kar....

kyunki mere saamne is waqt ZEAL ka wahi CAVE tha jo ki mere yahan is planet ka aakhri padhav bhi tha.....

wo cave jiske andar rakhi thi wo chiz jisse paane ke chakkar me ek living planet dead planet me badal gaya tha....

jisse haasil karne ki chaah liye hue hi VIKRAM ki aatma is duniya se kooch kar gayi thi...

wo chiz jisse maine ab tak toh dekha nahi hai par wo hai meri..

aur jab maine ye kaha hai ki wo hai meri toh iska matlab hai ki wo hai meri...

khwahish meri us chiz ko paane ki isiliye nahi hai kyunki usse mere liye rakha gaya hai...

balki wo chiz meri isiliye honi chahiye kyunki uspar ek pure planet ka khoon chadha hai...

aur har wo chiz jisse jaan ka souda ho,wo meri milkiyat hai...mera possession hai...

kadam aage badhaye maine aur mere aisa karte hi us cave ke dwar par lage kawach ne ek second ke liye roka mujhe jaise meri ability ko check kar rahe hon...

par mere sharir ke layers ko chhune ke baad wo kawach,wo SHIELD hath gaye...

jaise ijazat de di hon mujhe andar jaane ki par mai aage nahi badha..

wahin khada raha...

reason....

ijazat nahi di thi maine us shield ko mujhe chhune ki,mujhe check karne ki...

mai saamne tha uske..usse mujhe mehsoos karte hi hat jaana chahiye tha par usne aisa kiya nahi...

aur ye MUJHE ACCHA NAHI LAGA...

meri aankhon ki putliyon ne us pure cave ke saamne ke hisse ko ghura aur unke aisa karte hi meri aankhon se ek tez beam nikal us gufe par padi aur aisa hoti hi...

BOOM........

ek behad tez dhamaka hua jisse har taraf dhuan dhuan ho gaya par jab kuch der baad dhuan halka sa chatta aur nazara thoda clear hua toh....

mere saamne ab koi gufa nahi thi...

wo GUFA jisme kisi shaktishali cheez ko rakha gaya tha,wo puri gufa baarik kankad me badal chuki thi...

meri nazar saamne hi tiki thi jahan kuch door par abhi bhi gehra dhuan tha par wo bhi dheere dheere chhat raha tha..

wo jagah us gufe ka aakhri chhor tha jahan wo CHIZ thi jisse mujhe lena tha...

mai us chiz ki shakti ko,usse uth rahe vibrations ko bohot ache mehsoos kar raha tha...

par filhal us dhuen ki wajah se maine us chiz ko ab tak dekha nahi tha..

par ye bas kuch seconds ki hi baat thi...aur wo seconds bhi aakhirkaar beet gaye....

dhuan chhatthe chhatthe chhat hi gaya aur jab aisa hua toh zindagi me dusri baar mere chehre par smile aa gayi...

reason....

meri yahan hone ki wajah,meri milkiyat,mera prized possession meri aankhon ke saamne chamak raha tha..


beintihan shakti sa labalab bhara hua LORD OF ANGEL KA........



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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI ALFREEN KO EK RAAT PEHLE USSE FEEL HUE EK AJEEB EHSAAS KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNI PEHLI CHUNOUTI PURI KAR LI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




MEGA UPDATE-47



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S





3 MONTHS LATER



KYA HAAL HAI LOOSERS...????


ALFREEN aur MABEL jo ki ek dusre se baat kar rahi thi,unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jispar jab unhone palat kar dekha toh dono hi thoda chownk gayi....

reason....

unke saamne ANWIR aur MORANA khade muskura rahe the...

subah ka waqt hai...classes shuru hone me thoda sa waqt hai but sabhi SAVENTS class me aa chuke hain aur apne apne groups bana kar khade hain..

filhal MABEL aur ALFREEN ke saath MAHI nahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki kuch SAVENTS jinhe apne SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION me kuch zyada hi dikkat aa rahi hai,wo sab MAHI se apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ke ideas le rahe the aur MAHI bhi badi khushi aur man se un sabhi SAVENTS ko unke will power ko aur strong karne ke tips bata rahi thi...

aur issi beech hui entry MORANA aur ANWIR ki jinhe dekh sirf MABEL aur ALFREEN hi nahi balki MAHI aur uske saath khade sabhi SAVENTS bhi chownk gaye the....

MABEL aur ALFREEN ki hi tarah MAHI ne bhi un dono me ke mooh se looser shabd suna tha aur wo jaanti thi ki ye word un dono ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ke liye bola hai par filhal wo shaant hi rahi....

par un dono ko dekh ALFREEN ka acha khaasa mood bigad gaya aur unke taunt ko sun uska dimag bhi ghum gaya aur isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar MABEL ek baat bata..looser hona zyada galat hai yaa fir bhikari hona...

MABEL-mere hisaab se bhikari hona...

ALFREEN-haina..chalo fir,hum looser hi thik hain..kamsekam in dono ki tarah bhikari toh nahi hain jo baar baar apne ghar matlab apne PHASE ko chhodkar hamare PHASE me aakar kuch naa kuch mangte rehte hain...


jahan ALFREEN ki baat sun us class me moujud PHASE 1 ke sabhi
SAVENTS has diye wahin MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghussa aa gaya aur...


MORANA-apni zuban ko apni aukaad ke hadh me rakh kar mooh khola kar ladki....hum jinhe tu bhikari keh rahi hai,wo PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain...

wo SAVENTS jinke saamne teri koi haisiyat nahi...

ALFREEN-haan wo toh dikh raha hai....tabhi baar baar apni sadi hui shakal liye is PHASE me ghusse chale aate ho...

ANWIR-sirf isiliye kyunki filhal tu first PHASE me hai,teri zubaan hamare saamne chal rahi hai...

par koi baat nahi..sirf 3 mahino ki hi baat hai..uske baad teri azaadi ka,tere bolne ka yahan tak ki tere sir uthane ka waqt khatm....

kyunki PHASE 2 me sabhi SAVENTS, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saamne teri akad nichod di jaayegi aur koi kuch nahi kar paayega....

MAHI-self obsession ki hadh ho yaar tum dono...ek free advice deti hun,tum dono bola kam aur kiya zyada karo...

warna tumme aur ek kutte me kya fark reh jaayega....


MAHI jo ab tak chup chaap saari baaton ko sun rahi thi, ANWIR ki aakhri baat sun usne apni chuppi todte hue baat ko aage badhaya jisse sun ek baar firse ANWIR aur MORANA ka dimag ghuma..

wo dono fir kuch kehne hi waale the ki tabhi....


VIOLET-GOOD MORNING SAVENTS...


un dono ke piche se VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz aayi jo NOX aur OMMIN ke saath class me enter kar rahi thi...

wahin VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz ko sun MORANA aur ANWIR ne apne aap ko control kiya aur WHIZZ ki taraf mud gaye aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS ke saath un donko ne bhi VIOLET WHIZZ aur dono WHIZZDERS ko wish kiya...


VIOLET-arre MORANA, ANWIR..tum dono morning me hi aa gaye..mujhe laga tha ki class ke baad aaoge...

ANWIR-actually WHIZZ, pichli khch classes itni hectic rahi hain ki aaj hum dono ne hi class se off liya hai aur aapko toh pata hi hai ki hum hamare PHASE ke best SAVENTS hain aur hume off lene se koi rokta nahi....


pure ghamand se ANWIR ne apni baat kahi aur is baat ko karte waqt uski gardan ghumte hue ALFREEN aur MAHI par tiki rahi...

wahin ANWIR ki baat sun VIOLET WHIZZ toh bas muskurayi par NOX ko ANWIR ki baat achi nahi lagi aur isiliye...


NOX-toh apne PHASE ke best SAVENT...ek baat batao ki apne is off time me tum yahan kyun aaye....???

VIOLET-ye dono MAHI ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ko dekhne aaye hain...


ANWIR kuch jawab de,usse pehle hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne apni baat kahi jisse sun MAHI pehle toh shock hui par fir usse maajra samajh me aa gaya aur isiliye wo muskura di...

toh jo MAHI ne samjha aur jo asal me kaaran tha jiski wajah se ANWIR aur MORANA yahan the wo ye tha ki MAHI ne jo karnama kiya tha,6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ka wo bhi first PHASE me hokar,wo pehle kabhi bhi nahi hua tha aur isiliye ye baat pure CHOSENS me fail gayi thi..

ANWIR aur MORANA bhi is khabar se acchute nahi the..waise toh is khabar ko sun unhe bilkul bhi acha nahi laga par fir unhone socha ki bhale hi ye baat unke liye negetive thi par saath hi important bhi thi..

wo jaanana chahte the ki MAHI kis tarah pain aur emotions ke bahav ke beech khud ko shaant rakhti hui apne SOUL ko lagatar itna zyada AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab ho rahi hai..???

wo aana toh bohot pehle se chahte the par khud ke PHASE ke task se ho rahe vyastata ke kaaran dono aa nahi paa rahe the but aaj finally dono yahan the....

par yahan aate hi MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko dekh dono apni aadat se majbur bully karne se baaz nahi aaye par aisa karna unhe khud par hi bhaari padh gaya.....

khar,jaise hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne un dono ke yahan aane ka kaaran bataya toh...


NOX-arre par PHASE 2 ke best SAVENT ko bhala PHASE 1 ki MAHI se kya kaam ho sakta hai...???

OMMIN-bilkul ho sakta hai.. kyunki ye dono sirf is saal ke liye PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain....

par MAHI PHASE 1 me sirf is saal ki hi nahi balki CHOSENS ke itihaas ke 25 thousand years ki best SAVENT hai..

aur aise SAVENT ke paas kaun nahi aana chahega...???


OMMIN ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR ko andar hi andar behad ghussa aaya par dono ke chehre shaant hi rahe..


ANWIR-WHIZZDER OMMIN, WHIZZDER NOX...sikhna toh hume har kisi se hi chahiye naa...

aur ye baat issi PHASE me aur issi class me aap dono ne hi humse kahi thi...

ab dekhiye naa, sirf 2 PHASE me aur usme bhi hamara second PHASE abhi khatm hua nahi hai,itne kam waqt me hum dono hi 8 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke dhaarak ban chuke hain...

MORANA-aur shayad itna hi percent aap pure life me AMPLIFY kar paaye hain, haina WHIZZDER OMMIN aur WHIZZDER NOX....


ek khilli udane waali smile ke saath MORANA ne is baat ko kaha jisse sun ANWIR toh muskura diya par OMMIN aur NOX,dono ko behad bura laga...

waise bura toh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko bhi laga tha..

ALFREEN toh kuch bolne waali bhi thi par MAHI ne ishare se usse chup rehne ko kaha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MORANA-aur waise bhi is class me agar MAHI ko alag kar den,toh hum pure confidence se keh sakte hain ki aur koi bhi hum dono ke takkar ka nahi hai...

first PHASE me hum dono ne hi 4 percent tak apne SOUL ko kar liya tha jo i am sure ki is class me MAHI ke alawa ye karnama aur koi karne me capable nahi hai....

VIOLET-tum galat ho MORANA... MAHI ke baaju me jo do ladkiyan khadi hain, MABEL aur ALFREEN,in dono ne hi abhi tak apne SOUL ko 3 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai..

ye dono tum dono se bas 1 percent hi piche hain and i am sure ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono tumhari barabari kar lenge....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR chownke...unhe is baat ki bilkul bhi ummid nahi thi ki MABEL aur ALFREEN itne aage badh chuke honge...


aur jaisa ki VIOLET WHIZZ ne kaha ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar lenge,jiska matlab tha ki ALFREEN aur MABEL un dono ke barabar ho jaayenge aur ye baat dono ko hazam nahi ho paa rahi thi...

isiliye ANWIR ka dimag tezi se doudne laga aur fir usse kuch click hua.


ANWIR-haan,ye ho sakta hai WHIZZ ki ye dono is PHASE ke khatm hote hote tak 4 percent tak pahunch jaayen par fir bhi ye dono humse piche hi rahengi aur wo isiliye kyunki humne apne SOUL ka 4 th percent first PHASE ke khatm hone se 3 mahine pehle kar liya tha matlab abhi jo waqt hai,is time tak hamara SOUL 4 percent AMPLIFY ho chuka tha..

par ye dono toh abhi 3 percent par hain matlab ye humse piche hain aur humesha piche hi rahenge...


ALFREEN-ye waqt abhi khatm nahi hua hai aur jab tak ye hoga,hum apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar chuke honge...


MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghurte hue ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jispar...


MORANA-really..??par kaise karogi tum ye...???kyunki aaj hi wo din hai,wo waqt hai jab humne apne soul ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya tha..

jiska matlab hai ki tumhe bhi aaj hi ye achievement haasil karma hoga...

ALFREEN-aisa hi hoga..hum aaj hi ye kar ke dikhayenge...

ANWIR-aur agar naa kar paaye toh...!!!


MAHI jaanti thi ki MORANA aur ANWIR ALFREEN ko bhadka rahe hain,aur isiliye wo kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi..


ALFREEN-toh tum jo bolo,mai wo maan lungi.....and that's my promise....

MABEL-my nahi our.... that's our promise...agar hum unsuccessful hue toh tum dono jo bolo hum dono wo maan lenge...


MAHI ke interfere karne se pehle hi ALFREEN aur MABEL ne promise kar diya tha jiska matlab tha ki ab MAHI kuch bhi kar nahi sakti thi...

wahin in saari baaton ko sun VIOLET, NOX aur OMMIN bhi thode pareshan ho gaye the kyunki ek toh wo jaante the ki SOUL ko asaani se AMPLIFY nahi kiya jaa sakta aur saath hi unhe ye bhi maalum tha ki agar MABEL aur ALFREEN unsuccessful rahe toh MORANA aur ANWIR zaroor un dono se kuch ulta sidha demand karenge....

par in sabhi pareshaniyon ke beech wo teeno ye bhi jaante the ki MABEL aur ALFREEN ko agar wo bacha bhi len toh wo sirf abhi ke kiye hoga..

par aisa karne se next PHASE me unke problems aur badhengi..saath hi wo teeno soch rahe the ki next PHASE ka ek halka sa swaad MABEL aur ALFREEN ko abhi hi chakh lena chahiye kyunki us PHASE me jo hota hai,jo zindagi jee jaati hai,wo chunouti, ghamand,sangharsh and most importantly shakti pradarshan ke beech hi jee jaati hai....

kamzoron ke liye wo PHASE hell se kam nahi...aur yahi sab sochte hue wo teeno chup hi rahe...

wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ke promise karte hi....


ANWIR-thik hai fir...toh agar tum dono aaj ki class me apne soul ko ek baar firse AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab hue toh hum maan lenge ke tum dono humare equals ho,humse kam nahi ho par agar aisa nahi hua toh....

MORANA-3 percent AMPLIFICATION me ho tum dono..iska matlab hai ki tum dono hi next PHASE me STELLARS group ka hissa ban chuke ho...

toh hum ye chahte hain ki agar tum dono aaj fail hui toh next PHASE me STELLARS group me nahi balki WEAKLINGS group me enter karogi...


MORANA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS including WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hairan ho gaye..

wahin MAHI ek baar firse kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi...


MABEL/ALFREEN-HUME MANZOOR HAI....







PLANET-ZEAL-THE SOUL



PLACE-THE RED SURFACE





TOH DER KIS BAAT KI....???SHURU KAREN!!!



meri agli aur aakhri chunouti ka waqt aa chuka tha aur isiliye ye baat maine WOOGER se kahi jispar....


WOOGER-ek baat hai jo aapko is chunouti ke shuru hone se pehle jaanani zaroori hai...

ye chunouti aapki pichli chunouti se thodi alag hone waali hai....

kaise,iske baare me aapko aapki chunouti ke douran pata chal jaayega...

bas ek hi chiz hogi aapke paas..aapka focus..usse mat khone mat dijiyega....


WOOGER ki baat sunane ke baad bhi mai chup hi raha aur isiliye...

wo dusri roshni ka gola tezi se aage badha aur agle hi pal....


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YE KAISI JAGAH HAI....HAR TARAF SIRF ROSHNI...AUR IS ROSHNI SE ITNI ZYADA URJA KYUN NIKAL RAHI HAI...

BUT MOST IMPORTANTLY,MAI YAHAN KYA KAR RAHA HUN....

MUJHE TOH KUCH PAL PEHLE US ROSHNI NE CHHUA THA,USKE BAAD KYA HUA...???


us beintahan roshni ke samandar ke beech fasa mai ye sab apne aap se bol hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe laga jhatka...


reason...



SAMAY SACHALAKON...ISHWAR NE AAP SABKI PRARTHANA SUN LI...AAP SABKE DUKH AUR TAKLIF KI GHADI SAMAPT HUI...AAKHEN KHOLIYE....


ek tez awaaz gunj uthi mere kaano me par jhatka mujhe us awaaz ko sunkar nahi laga tha....

jhatka mujhe is baat par laga ki jaise hi is awaaz se aankhen kholne ki baat kahi,toh mere saamne dikh raha tez prakash ek dum se gayab ho gaya aur aisa hone par maine dekha ki mai kisi badi si jagah par khada hun...

mere saamne bohot se log khade hain par filhal wo human form me nahi balki SHADOW FORM me hain..

aur mere aaju baaju kul chaar log khade the jinme ek ladki thi aur teen ladke...

ab ye sab ho kya raha tha,iska toh mujhe koi idea tha nahi..mai bas apne dimag ko douda kar situation ko samajhne ki koshish kar hi raha tha ki tabhi...


AHHH,AHHHH,AHHHH.....


mere saamne khade un spirit form ke logon ke mooh se dard bhari karah nikal gayi jisse sun...


MAI-ab saala inhe kya ho raha hai...??aur ye inke pair ke niche aag kyun jal uthi???

ye sawal maine man me nahi,balki apni mooh se bola tha par aisa karte hi mujhe ek naya shock laga aur wo isiliye kyunki bhale hi maine in baaton ko apne mooh se bola tha par ye baatein bahar nikli hi nahi balki mere andar hi gunj uthi...

par jaise hi maine ye sawal kiya,toh uske agle hi pal mere brain me is scene ka data jaise store hone laga..

aur is scene ka hi nahi,balki is scene se ghata pehle ka scene aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,wo scene bhi mere dimag me clearly ghum gaya...

saath hi jo filhal mai tha,uska naam aur saath hi mere aaju baaki jo paanch log khade the,wo kaun the aur is character ke saath jo fihal kai tha,VIKRAM,use unsab ka rishta bhi mujhe pata chal chuka tha..

aur aisa hote hi mujhe aadhi baat aur half situation bhi samajh me aa gayi...

toh chaliye, jitna mai samjha tha,utna aap bhi samajh lijiye par usse pehle....


(WRITER'S NOTE-RAAZ ko toh scene samajh me aa gaya..ummid hai ki aap sabko bhi samajh aa gaya hoga...

ye scene hai SHADOW WORLD ka jahan ASMODEUS ne YELUPTUS planet me basne waale SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko kaid karke rakha hua tha...

detail me dobara yaad karne ke liye update 110 padh len..)


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toh jo aadhi baat mujhe samajh me aayi thi,wo ye thi ki bhale hi mai abhi is VIKRAM ke sharir me tha,ya fir ye kahun ki filhal mai hi VIKRAM tha,par tab bhi mai apne hisaab se chizen nahi kar sakta tha...

mere har sawal ke mere dimag me uththe hi mujhe uska jawab mil jaayega jo ki mujhe is sharir ke maalik ka brain dega...

aur isiliye hi WOOGER ne kaha tha ki meri ye chunouti meri pehli chunouti se alag hone waali hai..

kyunki us chunouti me toh mera wajud hi gayab ho gaya tha par jab mujhe mere hone ka ehsas hua tab maine ASMODEUS ke body par apna control le liya but yahan toh maamla hi ulta hai...

yahan mera astitv shuru se hi mere paas hai par fir bhi mai is scene me is VIKRAM ke jiske pal mujhe jeene hain,uske aadhin hun...

and this is bloody scary for me...

kyunki yahi toh wo chiz thi,aadhinta,samarpan,kisi aur ke chaaye me jeena yaa saans lena jisse mujhe sakht nafrat hai..

yahi bas ek aisa condition hai jisme mera dimag sthir nahi reh sakta...i bloody hate to be someone,live like that someone and most importantly, depend upon that someone or anyone dammit...

is aadhe sach ko jaankar mera dimag hi ghum gaya....mera uddeshya,mera target,sab bhulne laga tha mai...

mujhe bas kisi tarah is human choge ko,jisse mujhe zabardasti pehna diya gaya tha,utaarna tha par saala ye bhi hone se raha...

ek ajeeb mental state me fasa mai bas chupchaap honth sile saamne chal rahe scene ko dekh raha tha jisme bas chutiyaapa ho raha tha..

akhand chutiyaapa...arre,kare koi bhare koi....fase saale ye nikamme the,par nikalna is saale VIKRAM ko padega..

arre kyun bhai...dusri ke fadde me padhna kaayko... marne de,tadapne de saalon ko..

mera matlab is VIKRAM ke baaju me ek bandi khadi thi,jiske baare me mujhe pata chala tha ki ye iski maal hai..

abbe lekar ghum isse.enjoy kar...chota sa lounda dikh raha hai shakal se par saale ki chul badon waali hai..

sabki madad karenge ye....aur us madad me apni mahanta mujhe bhi dikhayenge...

ek aise bande ko jo is scene ke actual date ke najaane kitne decades ke baad paida hua hai...

par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain...apne aap me badbadata hua mai bhi sabki tarah scene ko dekhne me lag gaya jahan is waqt dialogue dialogue khela jaa raha tha...


MAI-najaane kitni sadiyon tak aapne pure bramhaand ke samay chakra ko sahi tarike se ghumane ka daayitv nibhaya hai..

aur aaj bhi aap jis aag se tap rahe hain,wo bhi ussi samay chakra ki nirantarta ko banaye rakhne ke liye sah rahe hain...

aap sab ne pehle hi bina kisi galti ke itne varshon tak saza bhugti hai....

mujhe aapko bachane ke liye pehle hi aa jaana chahiye tha par mai aisa kar nahi paaya...mere aage jhuk kar mujhe aur sharminda nahi kijiye....


un SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke jhukne ki wajah se ye gratefulness bhare shabd nikle the VIKRAM ke mooh se jisse sun mera dimag aur ghumne laga...


abbe jhuk rahe hain toh jhukne de....har kriya par pratikriya dena zaroori hai kya...????


maine apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar khudko is scene se nikalne ki koshish ki par naa toh mera CEREBRATION process ruka aur naahi mai kahin jaa paaya...

mai samajh gaya tha ki chupchaap is scene ko dekhne ke alawa mai aur kuch nahi kar sakta....

par sawal tha kyun...????is ajeeb si situation ka mai hissa aakhir hun hi kyun..????

mere dimag ye khayal,ye sawal utha aur aisa hote hi....


BAS EK HI CHIZ HOGI AAPKE PAAS..AAPKA FOCUS..USSE MAT KHONE MAT DIJIYEGA....


yahan aane se pehle WOOGER ke dwara kahe gaye ye aakhri shabd mere dimag me gunj uthe aur tab...


MAI-FOCUS.....toh isiliye WOOGER ne wo sab kaha tha...


sirf ek hi chiz hogi mere paas yahan...mera focus... WOOGER ko ye achi tarah pata tha ki aisi situations mujhe pasand nahi hai..

aise haalaton par mujhe behad ghussa aata hai aur isiliye usne mujhe focus karne ko kaha...

par sawal tha ki kis chiz par focus...???

aur is sawal ke mere dimah me aate hi mere dimag me ek aur vichar aaya...

aur wo vichar related tha is scene se,is scene se pehle hue scene se aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,us scene se...

aur wo vichar tha INTERCONNECTION....

in sabhi scenes ke beech ka interconnection.....

yahan aane ke baad mere brain ke paas jo bhi ho raha hai,us situation aur uske kaaran ke baare me bata diya tha jispar maine abhi tak dhyan nahi diya tha par ab jab ye interconnection waala thought mere dimag me ghuma toh....

maine sthithi ko samajhna shuru kiya...


SHADOW WORLD....jahan par ki is waqt mai hun aur ye scene chal raha hai....

par is jagah ka main base hai YELUPTUS.... YELUPTUS ke phase log jinhe SAMAY SANCHALAK kaha jaata hai,ye VIKRAM unhe bachane ke liye yahan aaya hai....

saath hi iske ek dost RONIT ki bandi bhi yahin par hai...usse bhi ye bachayega...

wo bandi jiske SOUL ko yahan rakha gaya hai par uski body YELUPTUS me hai...

toh VIKRAM in samay SANCHALAKON ko aur us ANJALI ko wahan YELUPTUS lekar jaayega...

is beech usse ek banda (ASMODEUS)rokne ke liye jaal pehle hi bicha chuka hai par is VIKRAM ke paas uska bhi kaat hai...

jitne scenes aur unme chuppi baatein mere brain me feed hui thi,un sab scenes ke baare me mera dimag sochne laga tha....

aur jab ye bichaye hue jaal ko kaatne ke baare me maine socha toh ek aur baat mujhe click hui par tabhi maine saamne dekha jahan filhal scene badla hua tha...

filhal mere saamne wahi chutiyaapa ho raha tha jisse mujhe sakht chidh thi...

wo RONIT aur ANJALI ek dusre se chipke ro rahe the...

ajeeb hote hai ye insaan,par inke aankhon se nikalne waale aansu toh saale inse bhi zyada ajeeb hote hain....

khushi me bhi tap tap...
aur gam me bhi tap tap....

ye sab dekh mera FOCUS ek baar firse dagmagane laga tha...

kisi tarah khud ko shaant rakh maine badhte hue scene ko dekha jisme is waqt VIKRAM sabko us ANJALI ke baare me bata raha tha jisse sun....


MAI-yahan aane se pehle hi VIKRAM ko yahan hone waali ghatnaon ke baare me pehle se pata tha...


ye SAMAY SANCHALAK toh yahan pehle se fase the,par ANJALI baad me aayi...

toh iska matlab is ANJALI ke liye hi VIKRAM ne ye sab plan kiya tha...???


khudse maine is sawal ko pucha tha jiske baad jo jawab mujhe mila, usse sun mujhe behad hairani hui...

darasal mere sawal ka jawab ye tha ki ANJALI ke chakkar me VIKRAM ne in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko nahi bachaya tha balki SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko bachane ke liye hi ANJALI ek bate ki tarah yahan fasayi gayi thi...

ANJALI ke rooh ka yahan fasna,fir SAMAY SANCHALAKON aur usse bachana,uske liye jo jaal is planet ke baahar bichaya gaya hai,usse todna,in sab chizon ki planning is VIKRAM ne pehle hi kar li thi...

GAZAB.....

zindagi me pehli baar mai kisise impressed hua tha...itni doordarshita,itni gehri soch aur har soch ko sach karne ki itni perfect timing ke hisaab se ki gayi planning....

ye banda haarta bhi tab tha jab wo haar uski permanent jeet ke liye zaroori ho.... brilliant...

aisi soch,maine pehle naa kabhi suni thi aur naa dekhi thi...

aur is bande ke ganit ko samajhne ke baad WOOGER ki kahi gayi us baat ka matlab bhi clear ho gaya tha jisme usne kaha tha ki ye chunouti meri pehli ki chunouti se alag hai...

mai us alag shabd ka matlab samajh gaya tha...darasal mujhe in chal rahe scenes me VIKRAM ke dwara kiye gaye kisi loop hole ko nahi dhundna hai aur wo isiliye kyunki is bande ka jiski doordarshita itni adhik ho,uske faislon me koi loop hole ho hi nahi sakta....

no chance....mujhe bas chal rahe scenes me kuch aisa dhoodna hai jisse meri kahani aage badh sake...

mujhe koi faayda ho...aur ye thi pate ki baat .

kyunki baat jab mere faayde ki ho toh mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun..kuch bhi......

aur isiliye bilkul shaant dimag se maine ek baar firse ho chuke scenes,chal rahe scenes aur aage hone waale scenes ke baare me sochne laga...

itna toh mai samajh chuka tha ki mere hisse me bas ye 5 hi scenes hain..

jinme se do khatm ho chuke the.. ANJALI ke saath VIKRAM and party wapas SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke paas jaa rahe the jo ki third scene tha...

fourth tha sabko yahan se lekar YELUPTUS jaana aur paanchva scene....

jahan VIKRAM in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haath me unki khoyi hui chiz,wo PARIVARTAK....

ek second....

paanchva scene...wo PARIVARTAK....


in saare scenes ke hone ka maine reason..in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke yahan fasne ka main reason...

PARIVARTAK...

jaise hi maine us cheez ka naam liya...ek ke baad ek 2 chizen hui...


pehli...mere dimag me us chiz ki saari qualities ghoom gayi...

jisse jaan pata nahi kyun par mujhe aisa laga ki ye chiz mere kaam ki hai...

dusri...jaise hi mujhe ye laga ki wo PARIVARTAK mere kaam ka hai toh...

scene achanak se badal gaya..aur ab jo scene mere saamne tha, usse dekh mera doubt clear ho chuka tha..

mai jaan gaya tha ki maine jo socha hai,woh sahi hai aur ussi soch ko sach karna hi meri chunouti hai...

toh baat ye hai ki filhal mai YELUPTUS me tha....the last scene...aur mere saamne wahi scene chal raha tha jab VIKRAM SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko unki amanat wo PARIVARTAK dene waala tha...


MAI-maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi....aur haan,ye rakhiye...


SAMAY SANCHALAK jo abhi VIKRAM ke samman me jhuke hue the,isiliye VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi aur aisa kehne ke baad usne apna haath aage kar diya jisme is waqt PARIVARTAK tha...


uske aisa karte hi ek SAMAY SANCHALAK jo VIKRAM ke paas khada tha,usne PARIVARTAK ko lene ke liye haath aage badhaya par tabhi...


MAI-meri ek choti si shart hai...


haath ko band karte hue maine ye baat kahi....


MAINE....VIKRAM nahi, RAAZ....


ji haan doston,jaise hi is chunouti ka,is PARIVARTAK ka ganit mere samajh me aaya toh uske agle hi pal mera lock khul gaya jiski wajah se mai aur VIKRAM ab ek ho gaye the..

jiska matlab tha ki ab bhale hi sabke saamne VIKRAM tha, par bol mai raha tha...

wahin mere moothi band kar lene aur shart waali baat sunkar sabhi SAMAY SANCHALAK thode hairan hue par phir...


SAMAY SANCHALAK-hamari zindagi aapki rini hai...aapko humse kisi bhi shart ko rakhne ki aawashyakta nahi hai..

aap bas aadesh karen...

MAI-is PARIVARTAK ki wo urja jisse ye kaam karti hai,bhavishya me agar mujhse jude kisi shaksh ko uski zaroorat pade,toh aap usse wo de denge....

SAMAY SANCHALAK-jaisi aapki iccha...


SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haan kehte hi maine apni band moothi khol di jiske baad us SAMAY SANCHALAK ne mere hatheli se us PARIVARTAK ko le liya aur aisa hote hi....


CHANNNN.....


jo pichli baar hua tha,wo ek baar fir hua...

ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir back to ground zero....

mai wapas ZEAL me tha par filhal mai kuch bhi dekhne ko haalat me nahi tha aur wo isiliye kyunki filhal mere sir pichle baar ke mukable 10 times zyada tezi se ghoom raha tha...

mujhe kuch zyada hi chakkar aa rahe the aur isiliye hi mai aakhen band kiye neeche zamin par baitha raha....

kuch time tak aisa hi raha par fir dheere dheere mai normal hone laga aur jab puri tarah control me aane ke baad maine saamne dekha toh halka hadbada gaya...

reason.....

mere just chehre ke saamne wo gola tha..mera SOUL jo lagatar hawa me rotate ho raha tha...

WOOGER gayab tha par fir bhi mai usse mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

us gole me....

kuch der tak us chamakte hue gole ki taraf dekhte rehne ke baad....


MAI-MAI TUMHE APNATA HUN...

KADKADKADKAD.........


bura bramhaand jaise ek akeli bijli ke kadkadane se kaamp gaya tha...

har planet ke mausam ka rookh jaise badal sa gaya..dead aur living...dono hi catagories me aane waale planets halke halke shake kar gaye the...

aur ye sab hua kyunki meri ijazat milne par wo gola aage badha aur mujhme sama gaya....aisa hote hi meri aankhen band ho gayi...

par mai mehsoos kar raha tha..zindagi me pehli baar mai feel kar raha tha..

apne sharir, apne khoon,apni dhamniyon ke andar ke khaali jagah ko bharta hua, mai mehsoos kar raha tha....

mujhe aisa mehsoos ho raha tha maano saalon ke banzar tapte hue zamin par kisine ek saath hazaron laakhon litres paani chhod diya ho...

wo sukoon jisse ab tak mehroom tha mai,wo jagah banati chali jaa rahi thi mere andar...

ye saare changes the internal..par in internal changes ke saath saath kuch external changes bhi hui thi mujhme..

aur wo ye ki jaise hi meri SOUL mujhme samayi aur meri aankhen band hui toh uske agle hi pal mera sharir hawa me uthne laga...

dekhte ho dekhte mere sharir ke upar ka kapda bhi change hone laga...

sabse pehle mere sharir ke chaaron taraf ek White AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere sharir ke andar sama gayi...

aisa hote hi mere sharir par lenin ka ek white robe aa gaya...uske baad us robe ke theek upar white AURA ki hi tarah ek Black AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere white robe se hote hui mere sharir ke andar sama gayi..

par aisa karne ke dauran jab us black aura ne mere white robe ko chhua toh us robe ka colour light grey ho gaya jo ki white aur black ke mixture se banta hai....

aisa hone je baad dheere dheere mera sharir neeche aane laga aur fir jaise hi maine neeche zamin ko chhua toh...

meei aankhen khul gayi....

gehri kaali aankhen jinke side ke white layers kuch zyada hi white lag rahe the...

khair,jaise hi meri aankhen khuli toh ek aur cheez hui jo aaj se pehle tak kabhi nahi hui thi....

aur wo thi mere chehre par aayi smile....

ek aisi smile jisse agar koi dekhe toh khush ho jaaye par agar us smile ka matlab woh samajh len toh khade khade hi mar jaaye...

waise mere chehre par muskurahat bewajah nahi aayi thi..ye aayi thi saamne ke drishya ko dekh kar....

kyunki mere saamne is waqt ZEAL ka wahi CAVE tha jo ki mere yahan is planet ka aakhri padhav bhi tha.....

wo cave jiske andar rakhi thi wo chiz jisse paane ke chakkar me ek living planet dead planet me badal gaya tha....

jisse haasil karne ki chaah liye hue hi VIKRAM ki aatma is duniya se kooch kar gayi thi...

wo chiz jisse maine ab tak toh dekha nahi hai par wo hai meri..

aur jab maine ye kaha hai ki wo hai meri toh iska matlab hai ki wo hai meri...

khwahish meri us chiz ko paane ki isiliye nahi hai kyunki usse mere liye rakha gaya hai...

balki wo chiz meri isiliye honi chahiye kyunki uspar ek pure planet ka khoon chadha hai...

aur har wo chiz jisse jaan ka souda ho,wo meri milkiyat hai...mera possession hai...

kadam aage badhaye maine aur mere aisa karte hi us cave ke dwar par lage kawach ne ek second ke liye roka mujhe jaise meri ability ko check kar rahe hon...

par mere sharir ke layers ko chhune ke baad wo kawach,wo SHIELD hath gaye...

jaise ijazat de di hon mujhe andar jaane ki par mai aage nahi badha..

wahin khada raha...

reason....

ijazat nahi di thi maine us shield ko mujhe chhune ki,mujhe check karne ki...

mai saamne tha uske..usse mujhe mehsoos karte hi hat jaana chahiye tha par usne aisa kiya nahi...

aur ye MUJHE ACCHA NAHI LAGA...

meri aankhon ki putliyon ne us pure cave ke saamne ke hisse ko ghura aur unke aisa karte hi meri aankhon se ek tez beam nikal us gufe par padi aur aisa hoti hi...

BOOM........

ek behad tez dhamaka hua jisse har taraf dhuan dhuan ho gaya par jab kuch der baad dhuan halka sa chatta aur nazara thoda clear hua toh....

mere saamne ab koi gufa nahi thi...

wo GUFA jisme kisi shaktishali cheez ko rakha gaya tha,wo puri gufa baarik kankad me badal chuki thi...

meri nazar saamne hi tiki thi jahan kuch door par abhi bhi gehra dhuan tha par wo bhi dheere dheere chhat raha tha..

wo jagah us gufe ka aakhri chhor tha jahan wo CHIZ thi jisse mujhe lena tha...

mai us chiz ki shakti ko,usse uth rahe vibrations ko bohot ache mehsoos kar raha tha...

par filhal us dhuen ki wajah se maine us chiz ko ab tak dekha nahi tha..

par ye bas kuch seconds ki hi baat thi...aur wo seconds bhi aakhirkaar beet gaye....

dhuan chhatthe chhatthe chhat hi gaya aur jab aisa hua toh zindagi me dusri baar mere chehre par smile aa gayi...

reason....

meri yahan hone ki wajah,meri milkiyat,mera prized possession meri aankhon ke saamne chamak raha tha..


beintihan shakti sa labalab bhara hua LORD OF ANGEL KA........



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AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......








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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI ALFREEN KO EK RAAT PEHLE USSE FEEL HUE EK AJEEB EHSAAS KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNI PEHLI CHUNOUTI PURI KAR LI HAI.


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CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



MEGA UPDATE-47



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S





3 MONTHS LATER



KYA HAAL HAI LOOSERS...????


ALFREEN aur MABEL jo ki ek dusre se baat kar rahi thi,unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jispar jab unhone palat kar dekha toh dono hi thoda chownk gayi....

reason....

unke saamne ANWIR aur MORANA khade muskura rahe the...

subah ka waqt hai...classes shuru hone me thoda sa waqt hai but sabhi SAVENTS class me aa chuke hain aur apne apne groups bana kar khade hain..

filhal MABEL aur ALFREEN ke saath MAHI nahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki kuch SAVENTS jinhe apne SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION me kuch zyada hi dikkat aa rahi hai,wo sab MAHI se apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ke ideas le rahe the aur MAHI bhi badi khushi aur man se un sabhi SAVENTS ko unke will power ko aur strong karne ke tips bata rahi thi...

aur issi beech hui entry MORANA aur ANWIR ki jinhe dekh sirf MABEL aur ALFREEN hi nahi balki MAHI aur uske saath khade sabhi SAVENTS bhi chownk gaye the....

MABEL aur ALFREEN ki hi tarah MAHI ne bhi un dono me ke mooh se looser shabd suna tha aur wo jaanti thi ki ye word un dono ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ke liye bola hai par filhal wo shaant hi rahi....

par un dono ko dekh ALFREEN ka acha khaasa mood bigad gaya aur unke taunt ko sun uska dimag bhi ghum gaya aur isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar MABEL ek baat bata..looser hona zyada galat hai yaa fir bhikari hona...

MABEL-mere hisaab se bhikari hona...

ALFREEN-haina..chalo fir,hum looser hi thik hain..kamsekam in dono ki tarah bhikari toh nahi hain jo baar baar apne ghar matlab apne PHASE ko chhodkar hamare PHASE me aakar kuch naa kuch mangte rehte hain...


jahan ALFREEN ki baat sun us class me moujud PHASE 1 ke sabhi
SAVENTS has diye wahin MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghussa aa gaya aur...


MORANA-apni zuban ko apni aukaad ke hadh me rakh kar mooh khola kar ladki....hum jinhe tu bhikari keh rahi hai,wo PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain...

wo SAVENTS jinke saamne teri koi haisiyat nahi...

ALFREEN-haan wo toh dikh raha hai....tabhi baar baar apni sadi hui shakal liye is PHASE me ghusse chale aate ho...

ANWIR-sirf isiliye kyunki filhal tu first PHASE me hai,teri zubaan hamare saamne chal rahi hai...

par koi baat nahi..sirf 3 mahino ki hi baat hai..uske baad teri azaadi ka,tere bolne ka yahan tak ki tere sir uthane ka waqt khatm....

kyunki PHASE 2 me sabhi SAVENTS, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saamne teri akad nichod di jaayegi aur koi kuch nahi kar paayega....

MAHI-self obsession ki hadh ho yaar tum dono...ek free advice deti hun,tum dono bola kam aur kiya zyada karo...

warna tumme aur ek kutte me kya fark reh jaayega....


MAHI jo ab tak chup chaap saari baaton ko sun rahi thi, ANWIR ki aakhri baat sun usne apni chuppi todte hue baat ko aage badhaya jisse sun ek baar firse ANWIR aur MORANA ka dimag ghuma..

wo dono fir kuch kehne hi waale the ki tabhi....


VIOLET-GOOD MORNING SAVENTS...


un dono ke piche se VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz aayi jo NOX aur OMMIN ke saath class me enter kar rahi thi...

wahin VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz ko sun MORANA aur ANWIR ne apne aap ko control kiya aur WHIZZ ki taraf mud gaye aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS ke saath un donko ne bhi VIOLET WHIZZ aur dono WHIZZDERS ko wish kiya...


VIOLET-arre MORANA, ANWIR..tum dono morning me hi aa gaye..mujhe laga tha ki class ke baad aaoge...

ANWIR-actually WHIZZ, pichli khch classes itni hectic rahi hain ki aaj hum dono ne hi class se off liya hai aur aapko toh pata hi hai ki hum hamare PHASE ke best SAVENTS hain aur hume off lene se koi rokta nahi....


pure ghamand se ANWIR ne apni baat kahi aur is baat ko karte waqt uski gardan ghumte hue ALFREEN aur MAHI par tiki rahi...

wahin ANWIR ki baat sun VIOLET WHIZZ toh bas muskurayi par NOX ko ANWIR ki baat achi nahi lagi aur isiliye...


NOX-toh apne PHASE ke best SAVENT...ek baat batao ki apne is off time me tum yahan kyun aaye....???

VIOLET-ye dono MAHI ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ko dekhne aaye hain...


ANWIR kuch jawab de,usse pehle hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne apni baat kahi jisse sun MAHI pehle toh shock hui par fir usse maajra samajh me aa gaya aur isiliye wo muskura di...

toh jo MAHI ne samjha aur jo asal me kaaran tha jiski wajah se ANWIR aur MORANA yahan the wo ye tha ki MAHI ne jo karnama kiya tha,6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ka wo bhi first PHASE me hokar,wo pehle kabhi bhi nahi hua tha aur isiliye ye baat pure CHOSENS me fail gayi thi..

ANWIR aur MORANA bhi is khabar se acchute nahi the..waise toh is khabar ko sun unhe bilkul bhi acha nahi laga par fir unhone socha ki bhale hi ye baat unke liye negetive thi par saath hi important bhi thi..

wo jaanana chahte the ki MAHI kis tarah pain aur emotions ke bahav ke beech khud ko shaant rakhti hui apne SOUL ko lagatar itna zyada AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab ho rahi hai..???

wo aana toh bohot pehle se chahte the par khud ke PHASE ke task se ho rahe vyastata ke kaaran dono aa nahi paa rahe the but aaj finally dono yahan the....

par yahan aate hi MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko dekh dono apni aadat se majbur bully karne se baaz nahi aaye par aisa karna unhe khud par hi bhaari padh gaya.....

khar,jaise hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne un dono ke yahan aane ka kaaran bataya toh...


NOX-arre par PHASE 2 ke best SAVENT ko bhala PHASE 1 ki MAHI se kya kaam ho sakta hai...???

OMMIN-bilkul ho sakta hai.. kyunki ye dono sirf is saal ke liye PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain....

par MAHI PHASE 1 me sirf is saal ki hi nahi balki CHOSENS ke itihaas ke 25 thousand years ki best SAVENT hai..

aur aise SAVENT ke paas kaun nahi aana chahega...???


OMMIN ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR ko andar hi andar behad ghussa aaya par dono ke chehre shaant hi rahe..


ANWIR-WHIZZDER OMMIN, WHIZZDER NOX...sikhna toh hume har kisi se hi chahiye naa...

aur ye baat issi PHASE me aur issi class me aap dono ne hi humse kahi thi...

ab dekhiye naa, sirf 2 PHASE me aur usme bhi hamara second PHASE abhi khatm hua nahi hai,itne kam waqt me hum dono hi 8 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke dhaarak ban chuke hain...

MORANA-aur shayad itna hi percent aap pure life me AMPLIFY kar paaye hain, haina WHIZZDER OMMIN aur WHIZZDER NOX....


ek khilli udane waali smile ke saath MORANA ne is baat ko kaha jisse sun ANWIR toh muskura diya par OMMIN aur NOX,dono ko behad bura laga...

waise bura toh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko bhi laga tha..

ALFREEN toh kuch bolne waali bhi thi par MAHI ne ishare se usse chup rehne ko kaha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MORANA-aur waise bhi is class me agar MAHI ko alag kar den,toh hum pure confidence se keh sakte hain ki aur koi bhi hum dono ke takkar ka nahi hai...

first PHASE me hum dono ne hi 4 percent tak apne SOUL ko kar liya tha jo i am sure ki is class me MAHI ke alawa ye karnama aur koi karne me capable nahi hai....

VIOLET-tum galat ho MORANA... MAHI ke baaju me jo do ladkiyan khadi hain, MABEL aur ALFREEN,in dono ne hi abhi tak apne SOUL ko 3 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai..

ye dono tum dono se bas 1 percent hi piche hain and i am sure ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono tumhari barabari kar lenge....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR chownke...unhe is baat ki bilkul bhi ummid nahi thi ki MABEL aur ALFREEN itne aage badh chuke honge...


aur jaisa ki VIOLET WHIZZ ne kaha ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar lenge,jiska matlab tha ki ALFREEN aur MABEL un dono ke barabar ho jaayenge aur ye baat dono ko hazam nahi ho paa rahi thi...

isiliye ANWIR ka dimag tezi se doudne laga aur fir usse kuch click hua.


ANWIR-haan,ye ho sakta hai WHIZZ ki ye dono is PHASE ke khatm hote hote tak 4 percent tak pahunch jaayen par fir bhi ye dono humse piche hi rahengi aur wo isiliye kyunki humne apne SOUL ka 4 th percent first PHASE ke khatm hone se 3 mahine pehle kar liya tha matlab abhi jo waqt hai,is time tak hamara SOUL 4 percent AMPLIFY ho chuka tha..

par ye dono toh abhi 3 percent par hain matlab ye humse piche hain aur humesha piche hi rahenge...


ALFREEN-ye waqt abhi khatm nahi hua hai aur jab tak ye hoga,hum apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar chuke honge...


MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghurte hue ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jispar...


MORANA-really..??par kaise karogi tum ye...???kyunki aaj hi wo din hai,wo waqt hai jab humne apne soul ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya tha..

jiska matlab hai ki tumhe bhi aaj hi ye achievement haasil karma hoga...

ALFREEN-aisa hi hoga..hum aaj hi ye kar ke dikhayenge...

ANWIR-aur agar naa kar paaye toh...!!!


MAHI jaanti thi ki MORANA aur ANWIR ALFREEN ko bhadka rahe hain,aur isiliye wo kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi..


ALFREEN-toh tum jo bolo,mai wo maan lungi.....and that's my promise....

MABEL-my nahi our.... that's our promise...agar hum unsuccessful hue toh tum dono jo bolo hum dono wo maan lenge...


MAHI ke interfere karne se pehle hi ALFREEN aur MABEL ne promise kar diya tha jiska matlab tha ki ab MAHI kuch bhi kar nahi sakti thi...

wahin in saari baaton ko sun VIOLET, NOX aur OMMIN bhi thode pareshan ho gaye the kyunki ek toh wo jaante the ki SOUL ko asaani se AMPLIFY nahi kiya jaa sakta aur saath hi unhe ye bhi maalum tha ki agar MABEL aur ALFREEN unsuccessful rahe toh MORANA aur ANWIR zaroor un dono se kuch ulta sidha demand karenge....

par in sabhi pareshaniyon ke beech wo teeno ye bhi jaante the ki MABEL aur ALFREEN ko agar wo bacha bhi len toh wo sirf abhi ke kiye hoga..

par aisa karne se next PHASE me unke problems aur badhengi..saath hi wo teeno soch rahe the ki next PHASE ka ek halka sa swaad MABEL aur ALFREEN ko abhi hi chakh lena chahiye kyunki us PHASE me jo hota hai,jo zindagi jee jaati hai,wo chunouti, ghamand,sangharsh and most importantly shakti pradarshan ke beech hi jee jaati hai....

kamzoron ke liye wo PHASE hell se kam nahi...aur yahi sab sochte hue wo teeno chup hi rahe...

wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ke promise karte hi....


ANWIR-thik hai fir...toh agar tum dono aaj ki class me apne soul ko ek baar firse AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab hue toh hum maan lenge ke tum dono humare equals ho,humse kam nahi ho par agar aisa nahi hua toh....

MORANA-3 percent AMPLIFICATION me ho tum dono..iska matlab hai ki tum dono hi next PHASE me STELLARS group ka hissa ban chuke ho...

toh hum ye chahte hain ki agar tum dono aaj fail hui toh next PHASE me STELLARS group me nahi balki WEAKLINGS group me enter karogi...


MORANA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS including WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hairan ho gaye..

wahin MAHI ek baar firse kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi...


MABEL/ALFREEN-HUME MANZOOR HAI....







PLANET-ZEAL-THE SOUL



PLACE-THE RED SURFACE





TOH DER KIS BAAT KI....???SHURU KAREN!!!



meri agli aur aakhri chunouti ka waqt aa chuka tha aur isiliye ye baat maine WOOGER se kahi jispar....


WOOGER-ek baat hai jo aapko is chunouti ke shuru hone se pehle jaanani zaroori hai...

ye chunouti aapki pichli chunouti se thodi alag hone waali hai....

kaise,iske baare me aapko aapki chunouti ke douran pata chal jaayega...

bas ek hi chiz hogi aapke paas..aapka focus..usse mat khone mat dijiyega....


WOOGER ki baat sunane ke baad bhi mai chup hi raha aur isiliye...

wo dusri roshni ka gola tezi se aage badha aur agle hi pal....


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YE KAISI JAGAH HAI....HAR TARAF SIRF ROSHNI...AUR IS ROSHNI SE ITNI ZYADA URJA KYUN NIKAL RAHI HAI...

BUT MOST IMPORTANTLY,MAI YAHAN KYA KAR RAHA HUN....

MUJHE TOH KUCH PAL PEHLE US ROSHNI NE CHHUA THA,USKE BAAD KYA HUA...???


us beintahan roshni ke samandar ke beech fasa mai ye sab apne aap se bol hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe laga jhatka...


reason...



SAMAY SACHALAKON...ISHWAR NE AAP SABKI PRARTHANA SUN LI...AAP SABKE DUKH AUR TAKLIF KI GHADI SAMAPT HUI...AAKHEN KHOLIYE....


ek tez awaaz gunj uthi mere kaano me par jhatka mujhe us awaaz ko sunkar nahi laga tha....

jhatka mujhe is baat par laga ki jaise hi is awaaz se aankhen kholne ki baat kahi,toh mere saamne dikh raha tez prakash ek dum se gayab ho gaya aur aisa hone par maine dekha ki mai kisi badi si jagah par khada hun...

mere saamne bohot se log khade hain par filhal wo human form me nahi balki SHADOW FORM me hain..

aur mere aaju baaju kul chaar log khade the jinme ek ladki thi aur teen ladke...

ab ye sab ho kya raha tha,iska toh mujhe koi idea tha nahi..mai bas apne dimag ko douda kar situation ko samajhne ki koshish kar hi raha tha ki tabhi...


AHHH,AHHHH,AHHHH.....


mere saamne khade un spirit form ke logon ke mooh se dard bhari karah nikal gayi jisse sun...


MAI-ab saala inhe kya ho raha hai...??aur ye inke pair ke niche aag kyun jal uthi???

ye sawal maine man me nahi,balki apni mooh se bola tha par aisa karte hi mujhe ek naya shock laga aur wo isiliye kyunki bhale hi maine in baaton ko apne mooh se bola tha par ye baatein bahar nikli hi nahi balki mere andar hi gunj uthi...

par jaise hi maine ye sawal kiya,toh uske agle hi pal mere brain me is scene ka data jaise store hone laga..

aur is scene ka hi nahi,balki is scene se ghata pehle ka scene aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,wo scene bhi mere dimag me clearly ghum gaya...

saath hi jo filhal mai tha,uska naam aur saath hi mere aaju baaki jo paanch log khade the,wo kaun the aur is character ke saath jo fihal kai tha,VIKRAM,use unsab ka rishta bhi mujhe pata chal chuka tha..

aur aisa hote hi mujhe aadhi baat aur half situation bhi samajh me aa gayi...

toh chaliye, jitna mai samjha tha,utna aap bhi samajh lijiye par usse pehle....


(WRITER'S NOTE-RAAZ ko toh scene samajh me aa gaya..ummid hai ki aap sabko bhi samajh aa gaya hoga...

ye scene hai SHADOW WORLD ka jahan ASMODEUS ne YELUPTUS planet me basne waale SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko kaid karke rakha hua tha...

detail me dobara yaad karne ke liye update 110 padh len..)


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toh jo aadhi baat mujhe samajh me aayi thi,wo ye thi ki bhale hi mai abhi is VIKRAM ke sharir me tha,ya fir ye kahun ki filhal mai hi VIKRAM tha,par tab bhi mai apne hisaab se chizen nahi kar sakta tha...

mere har sawal ke mere dimag me uththe hi mujhe uska jawab mil jaayega jo ki mujhe is sharir ke maalik ka brain dega...

aur isiliye hi WOOGER ne kaha tha ki meri ye chunouti meri pehli chunouti se alag hone waali hai..

kyunki us chunouti me toh mera wajud hi gayab ho gaya tha par jab mujhe mere hone ka ehsas hua tab maine ASMODEUS ke body par apna control le liya but yahan toh maamla hi ulta hai...

yahan mera astitv shuru se hi mere paas hai par fir bhi mai is scene me is VIKRAM ke jiske pal mujhe jeene hain,uske aadhin hun...

and this is bloody scary for me...

kyunki yahi toh wo chiz thi,aadhinta,samarpan,kisi aur ke chaaye me jeena yaa saans lena jisse mujhe sakht nafrat hai..

yahi bas ek aisa condition hai jisme mera dimag sthir nahi reh sakta...i bloody hate to be someone,live like that someone and most importantly, depend upon that someone or anyone dammit...

is aadhe sach ko jaankar mera dimag hi ghum gaya....mera uddeshya,mera target,sab bhulne laga tha mai...

mujhe bas kisi tarah is human choge ko,jisse mujhe zabardasti pehna diya gaya tha,utaarna tha par saala ye bhi hone se raha...

ek ajeeb mental state me fasa mai bas chupchaap honth sile saamne chal rahe scene ko dekh raha tha jisme bas chutiyaapa ho raha tha..

akhand chutiyaapa...arre,kare koi bhare koi....fase saale ye nikamme the,par nikalna is saale VIKRAM ko padega..

arre kyun bhai...dusri ke fadde me padhna kaayko... marne de,tadapne de saalon ko..

mera matlab is VIKRAM ke baaju me ek bandi khadi thi,jiske baare me mujhe pata chala tha ki ye iski maal hai..

abbe lekar ghum isse.enjoy kar...chota sa lounda dikh raha hai shakal se par saale ki chul badon waali hai..

sabki madad karenge ye....aur us madad me apni mahanta mujhe bhi dikhayenge...

ek aise bande ko jo is scene ke actual date ke najaane kitne decades ke baad paida hua hai...

par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain...apne aap me badbadata hua mai bhi sabki tarah scene ko dekhne me lag gaya jahan is waqt dialogue dialogue khela jaa raha tha...


MAI-najaane kitni sadiyon tak aapne pure bramhaand ke samay chakra ko sahi tarike se ghumane ka daayitv nibhaya hai..

aur aaj bhi aap jis aag se tap rahe hain,wo bhi ussi samay chakra ki nirantarta ko banaye rakhne ke liye sah rahe hain...

aap sab ne pehle hi bina kisi galti ke itne varshon tak saza bhugti hai....

mujhe aapko bachane ke liye pehle hi aa jaana chahiye tha par mai aisa kar nahi paaya...mere aage jhuk kar mujhe aur sharminda nahi kijiye....


un SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke jhukne ki wajah se ye gratefulness bhare shabd nikle the VIKRAM ke mooh se jisse sun mera dimag aur ghumne laga...


abbe jhuk rahe hain toh jhukne de....har kriya par pratikriya dena zaroori hai kya...????


maine apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar khudko is scene se nikalne ki koshish ki par naa toh mera CEREBRATION process ruka aur naahi mai kahin jaa paaya...

mai samajh gaya tha ki chupchaap is scene ko dekhne ke alawa mai aur kuch nahi kar sakta....

par sawal tha kyun...????is ajeeb si situation ka mai hissa aakhir hun hi kyun..????

mere dimag ye khayal,ye sawal utha aur aisa hote hi....


BAS EK HI CHIZ HOGI AAPKE PAAS..AAPKA FOCUS..USSE MAT KHONE MAT DIJIYEGA....


yahan aane se pehle WOOGER ke dwara kahe gaye ye aakhri shabd mere dimag me gunj uthe aur tab...


MAI-FOCUS.....toh isiliye WOOGER ne wo sab kaha tha...


sirf ek hi chiz hogi mere paas yahan...mera focus... WOOGER ko ye achi tarah pata tha ki aisi situations mujhe pasand nahi hai..

aise haalaton par mujhe behad ghussa aata hai aur isiliye usne mujhe focus karne ko kaha...

par sawal tha ki kis chiz par focus...???

aur is sawal ke mere dimah me aate hi mere dimag me ek aur vichar aaya...

aur wo vichar related tha is scene se,is scene se pehle hue scene se aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,us scene se...

aur wo vichar tha INTERCONNECTION....

in sabhi scenes ke beech ka interconnection.....

yahan aane ke baad mere brain ke paas jo bhi ho raha hai,us situation aur uske kaaran ke baare me bata diya tha jispar maine abhi tak dhyan nahi diya tha par ab jab ye interconnection waala thought mere dimag me ghuma toh....

maine sthithi ko samajhna shuru kiya...


SHADOW WORLD....jahan par ki is waqt mai hun aur ye scene chal raha hai....

par is jagah ka main base hai YELUPTUS.... YELUPTUS ke phase log jinhe SAMAY SANCHALAK kaha jaata hai,ye VIKRAM unhe bachane ke liye yahan aaya hai....

saath hi iske ek dost RONIT ki bandi bhi yahin par hai...usse bhi ye bachayega...

wo bandi jiske SOUL ko yahan rakha gaya hai par uski body YELUPTUS me hai...

toh VIKRAM in samay SANCHALAKON ko aur us ANJALI ko wahan YELUPTUS lekar jaayega...

is beech usse ek banda (ASMODEUS)rokne ke liye jaal pehle hi bicha chuka hai par is VIKRAM ke paas uska bhi kaat hai...

jitne scenes aur unme chuppi baatein mere brain me feed hui thi,un sab scenes ke baare me mera dimag sochne laga tha....

aur jab ye bichaye hue jaal ko kaatne ke baare me maine socha toh ek aur baat mujhe click hui par tabhi maine saamne dekha jahan filhal scene badla hua tha...

filhal mere saamne wahi chutiyaapa ho raha tha jisse mujhe sakht chidh thi...

wo RONIT aur ANJALI ek dusre se chipke ro rahe the...

ajeeb hote hai ye insaan,par inke aankhon se nikalne waale aansu toh saale inse bhi zyada ajeeb hote hain....

khushi me bhi tap tap...
aur gam me bhi tap tap....

ye sab dekh mera FOCUS ek baar firse dagmagane laga tha...

kisi tarah khud ko shaant rakh maine badhte hue scene ko dekha jisme is waqt VIKRAM sabko us ANJALI ke baare me bata raha tha jisse sun....


MAI-yahan aane se pehle hi VIKRAM ko yahan hone waali ghatnaon ke baare me pehle se pata tha...


ye SAMAY SANCHALAK toh yahan pehle se fase the,par ANJALI baad me aayi...

toh iska matlab is ANJALI ke liye hi VIKRAM ne ye sab plan kiya tha...???


khudse maine is sawal ko pucha tha jiske baad jo jawab mujhe mila, usse sun mujhe behad hairani hui...

darasal mere sawal ka jawab ye tha ki ANJALI ke chakkar me VIKRAM ne in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko nahi bachaya tha balki SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko bachane ke liye hi ANJALI ek bate ki tarah yahan fasayi gayi thi...

ANJALI ke rooh ka yahan fasna,fir SAMAY SANCHALAKON aur usse bachana,uske liye jo jaal is planet ke baahar bichaya gaya hai,usse todna,in sab chizon ki planning is VIKRAM ne pehle hi kar li thi...

GAZAB.....

zindagi me pehli baar mai kisise impressed hua tha...itni doordarshita,itni gehri soch aur har soch ko sach karne ki itni perfect timing ke hisaab se ki gayi planning....

ye banda haarta bhi tab tha jab wo haar uski permanent jeet ke liye zaroori ho.... brilliant...

aisi soch,maine pehle naa kabhi suni thi aur naa dekhi thi...

aur is bande ke ganit ko samajhne ke baad WOOGER ki kahi gayi us baat ka matlab bhi clear ho gaya tha jisme usne kaha tha ki ye chunouti meri pehli ki chunouti se alag hai...

mai us alag shabd ka matlab samajh gaya tha...darasal mujhe in chal rahe scenes me VIKRAM ke dwara kiye gaye kisi loop hole ko nahi dhundna hai aur wo isiliye kyunki is bande ka jiski doordarshita itni adhik ho,uske faislon me koi loop hole ho hi nahi sakta....

no chance....mujhe bas chal rahe scenes me kuch aisa dhoodna hai jisse meri kahani aage badh sake...

mujhe koi faayda ho...aur ye thi pate ki baat .

kyunki baat jab mere faayde ki ho toh mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun..kuch bhi......

aur isiliye bilkul shaant dimag se maine ek baar firse ho chuke scenes,chal rahe scenes aur aage hone waale scenes ke baare me sochne laga...

itna toh mai samajh chuka tha ki mere hisse me bas ye 5 hi scenes hain..

jinme se do khatm ho chuke the.. ANJALI ke saath VIKRAM and party wapas SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke paas jaa rahe the jo ki third scene tha...

fourth tha sabko yahan se lekar YELUPTUS jaana aur paanchva scene....

jahan VIKRAM in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haath me unki khoyi hui chiz,wo PARIVARTAK....

ek second....

paanchva scene...wo PARIVARTAK....


in saare scenes ke hone ka maine reason..in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke yahan fasne ka main reason...

PARIVARTAK...

jaise hi maine us cheez ka naam liya...ek ke baad ek 2 chizen hui...


pehli...mere dimag me us chiz ki saari qualities ghoom gayi...

jisse jaan pata nahi kyun par mujhe aisa laga ki ye chiz mere kaam ki hai...

dusri...jaise hi mujhe ye laga ki wo PARIVARTAK mere kaam ka hai toh...

scene achanak se badal gaya..aur ab jo scene mere saamne tha, usse dekh mera doubt clear ho chuka tha..

mai jaan gaya tha ki maine jo socha hai,woh sahi hai aur ussi soch ko sach karna hi meri chunouti hai...

toh baat ye hai ki filhal mai YELUPTUS me tha....the last scene...aur mere saamne wahi scene chal raha tha jab VIKRAM SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko unki amanat wo PARIVARTAK dene waala tha...


MAI-maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi....aur haan,ye rakhiye...


SAMAY SANCHALAK jo abhi VIKRAM ke samman me jhuke hue the,isiliye VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi aur aisa kehne ke baad usne apna haath aage kar diya jisme is waqt PARIVARTAK tha...


uske aisa karte hi ek SAMAY SANCHALAK jo VIKRAM ke paas khada tha,usne PARIVARTAK ko lene ke liye haath aage badhaya par tabhi...


MAI-meri ek choti si shart hai...


haath ko band karte hue maine ye baat kahi....


MAINE....VIKRAM nahi, RAAZ....


ji haan doston,jaise hi is chunouti ka,is PARIVARTAK ka ganit mere samajh me aaya toh uske agle hi pal mera lock khul gaya jiski wajah se mai aur VIKRAM ab ek ho gaye the..

jiska matlab tha ki ab bhale hi sabke saamne VIKRAM tha, par bol mai raha tha...

wahin mere moothi band kar lene aur shart waali baat sunkar sabhi SAMAY SANCHALAK thode hairan hue par phir...


SAMAY SANCHALAK-hamari zindagi aapki rini hai...aapko humse kisi bhi shart ko rakhne ki aawashyakta nahi hai..

aap bas aadesh karen...

MAI-is PARIVARTAK ki wo urja jisse ye kaam karti hai,bhavishya me agar mujhse jude kisi shaksh ko uski zaroorat pade,toh aap usse wo de denge....

SAMAY SANCHALAK-jaisi aapki iccha...


SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haan kehte hi maine apni band moothi khol di jiske baad us SAMAY SANCHALAK ne mere hatheli se us PARIVARTAK ko le liya aur aisa hote hi....


CHANNNN.....


jo pichli baar hua tha,wo ek baar fir hua...

ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir back to ground zero....

mai wapas ZEAL me tha par filhal mai kuch bhi dekhne ko haalat me nahi tha aur wo isiliye kyunki filhal mere sir pichle baar ke mukable 10 times zyada tezi se ghoom raha tha...

mujhe kuch zyada hi chakkar aa rahe the aur isiliye hi mai aakhen band kiye neeche zamin par baitha raha....

kuch time tak aisa hi raha par fir dheere dheere mai normal hone laga aur jab puri tarah control me aane ke baad maine saamne dekha toh halka hadbada gaya...

reason.....

mere just chehre ke saamne wo gola tha..mera SOUL jo lagatar hawa me rotate ho raha tha...

WOOGER gayab tha par fir bhi mai usse mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

us gole me....

kuch der tak us chamakte hue gole ki taraf dekhte rehne ke baad....


MAI-MAI TUMHE APNATA HUN...

KADKADKADKAD.........


bura bramhaand jaise ek akeli bijli ke kadkadane se kaamp gaya tha...

har planet ke mausam ka rookh jaise badal sa gaya..dead aur living...dono hi catagories me aane waale planets halke halke shake kar gaye the...

aur ye sab hua kyunki meri ijazat milne par wo gola aage badha aur mujhme sama gaya....aisa hote hi meri aankhen band ho gayi...

par mai mehsoos kar raha tha..zindagi me pehli baar mai feel kar raha tha..

apne sharir, apne khoon,apni dhamniyon ke andar ke khaali jagah ko bharta hua, mai mehsoos kar raha tha....

mujhe aisa mehsoos ho raha tha maano saalon ke banzar tapte hue zamin par kisine ek saath hazaron laakhon litres paani chhod diya ho...

wo sukoon jisse ab tak mehroom tha mai,wo jagah banati chali jaa rahi thi mere andar...

ye saare changes the internal..par in internal changes ke saath saath kuch external changes bhi hui thi mujhme..

aur wo ye ki jaise hi meri SOUL mujhme samayi aur meri aankhen band hui toh uske agle hi pal mera sharir hawa me uthne laga...

dekhte ho dekhte mere sharir ke upar ka kapda bhi change hone laga...

sabse pehle mere sharir ke chaaron taraf ek White AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere sharir ke andar sama gayi...

aisa hote hi mere sharir par lenin ka ek white robe aa gaya...uske baad us robe ke theek upar white AURA ki hi tarah ek Black AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere white robe se hote hui mere sharir ke andar sama gayi..

par aisa karne ke dauran jab us black aura ne mere white robe ko chhua toh us robe ka colour light grey ho gaya jo ki white aur black ke mixture se banta hai....

aisa hone je baad dheere dheere mera sharir neeche aane laga aur fir jaise hi maine neeche zamin ko chhua toh...

meei aankhen khul gayi....

gehri kaali aankhen jinke side ke white layers kuch zyada hi white lag rahe the...

khair,jaise hi meri aankhen khuli toh ek aur cheez hui jo aaj se pehle tak kabhi nahi hui thi....

aur wo thi mere chehre par aayi smile....

ek aisi smile jisse agar koi dekhe toh khush ho jaaye par agar us smile ka matlab woh samajh len toh khade khade hi mar jaaye...

waise mere chehre par muskurahat bewajah nahi aayi thi..ye aayi thi saamne ke drishya ko dekh kar....

kyunki mere saamne is waqt ZEAL ka wahi CAVE tha jo ki mere yahan is planet ka aakhri padhav bhi tha.....

wo cave jiske andar rakhi thi wo chiz jisse paane ke chakkar me ek living planet dead planet me badal gaya tha....

jisse haasil karne ki chaah liye hue hi VIKRAM ki aatma is duniya se kooch kar gayi thi...

wo chiz jisse maine ab tak toh dekha nahi hai par wo hai meri..

aur jab maine ye kaha hai ki wo hai meri toh iska matlab hai ki wo hai meri...

khwahish meri us chiz ko paane ki isiliye nahi hai kyunki usse mere liye rakha gaya hai...

balki wo chiz meri isiliye honi chahiye kyunki uspar ek pure planet ka khoon chadha hai...

aur har wo chiz jisse jaan ka souda ho,wo meri milkiyat hai...mera possession hai...

kadam aage badhaye maine aur mere aisa karte hi us cave ke dwar par lage kawach ne ek second ke liye roka mujhe jaise meri ability ko check kar rahe hon...

par mere sharir ke layers ko chhune ke baad wo kawach,wo SHIELD hath gaye...

jaise ijazat de di hon mujhe andar jaane ki par mai aage nahi badha..

wahin khada raha...

reason....

ijazat nahi di thi maine us shield ko mujhe chhune ki,mujhe check karne ki...

mai saamne tha uske..usse mujhe mehsoos karte hi hat jaana chahiye tha par usne aisa kiya nahi...

aur ye MUJHE ACCHA NAHI LAGA...

meri aankhon ki putliyon ne us pure cave ke saamne ke hisse ko ghura aur unke aisa karte hi meri aankhon se ek tez beam nikal us gufe par padi aur aisa hoti hi...

BOOM........

ek behad tez dhamaka hua jisse har taraf dhuan dhuan ho gaya par jab kuch der baad dhuan halka sa chatta aur nazara thoda clear hua toh....

mere saamne ab koi gufa nahi thi...

wo GUFA jisme kisi shaktishali cheez ko rakha gaya tha,wo puri gufa baarik kankad me badal chuki thi...

meri nazar saamne hi tiki thi jahan kuch door par abhi bhi gehra dhuan tha par wo bhi dheere dheere chhat raha tha..

wo jagah us gufe ka aakhri chhor tha jahan wo CHIZ thi jisse mujhe lena tha...

mai us chiz ki shakti ko,usse uth rahe vibrations ko bohot ache mehsoos kar raha tha...

par filhal us dhuen ki wajah se maine us chiz ko ab tak dekha nahi tha..

par ye bas kuch seconds ki hi baat thi...aur wo seconds bhi aakhirkaar beet gaye....

dhuan chhatthe chhatthe chhat hi gaya aur jab aisa hua toh zindagi me dusri baar mere chehre par smile aa gayi...

reason....

meri yahan hone ki wajah,meri milkiyat,mera prized possession meri aankhon ke saamne chamak raha tha..


beintihan shakti sa labalab bhara hua LORD OF ANGEL KA........



..............SWORD.................




Wonderful update bhaiii......

Lord of judgement ki life
Lord of angel ki life
Ab lord of angel ki sword RAAZ ka hei.....

Marvellous story human mukhiya source ko khud hi explore karna behat maza aah raha hei.......
No.1 story in my life



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Wonderful update bhaiii......

Lord of judgement ki life
Lord of angel ki life
Ab lord of angel ki sword RAAZ ka hei.....

Marvellous story human mukhiya source ko khud hi explore karna behat maza aah raha hei.......
No.1 story in my life
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI ALFREEN KO EK RAAT PEHLE USSE FEEL HUE EK AJEEB EHSAAS KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNI PEHLI CHUNOUTI PURI KAR LI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




MEGA UPDATE-47



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S





3 MONTHS LATER



KYA HAAL HAI LOOSERS...????


ALFREEN aur MABEL jo ki ek dusre se baat kar rahi thi,unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jispar jab unhone palat kar dekha toh dono hi thoda chownk gayi....

reason....

unke saamne ANWIR aur MORANA khade muskura rahe the...

subah ka waqt hai...classes shuru hone me thoda sa waqt hai but sabhi SAVENTS class me aa chuke hain aur apne apne groups bana kar khade hain..

filhal MABEL aur ALFREEN ke saath MAHI nahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki kuch SAVENTS jinhe apne SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION me kuch zyada hi dikkat aa rahi hai,wo sab MAHI se apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ke ideas le rahe the aur MAHI bhi badi khushi aur man se un sabhi SAVENTS ko unke will power ko aur strong karne ke tips bata rahi thi...

aur issi beech hui entry MORANA aur ANWIR ki jinhe dekh sirf MABEL aur ALFREEN hi nahi balki MAHI aur uske saath khade sabhi SAVENTS bhi chownk gaye the....

MABEL aur ALFREEN ki hi tarah MAHI ne bhi un dono me ke mooh se looser shabd suna tha aur wo jaanti thi ki ye word un dono ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ke liye bola hai par filhal wo shaant hi rahi....

par un dono ko dekh ALFREEN ka acha khaasa mood bigad gaya aur unke taunt ko sun uska dimag bhi ghum gaya aur isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar MABEL ek baat bata..looser hona zyada galat hai yaa fir bhikari hona...

MABEL-mere hisaab se bhikari hona...

ALFREEN-haina..chalo fir,hum looser hi thik hain..kamsekam in dono ki tarah bhikari toh nahi hain jo baar baar apne ghar matlab apne PHASE ko chhodkar hamare PHASE me aakar kuch naa kuch mangte rehte hain...


jahan ALFREEN ki baat sun us class me moujud PHASE 1 ke sabhi
SAVENTS has diye wahin MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghussa aa gaya aur...


MORANA-apni zuban ko apni aukaad ke hadh me rakh kar mooh khola kar ladki....hum jinhe tu bhikari keh rahi hai,wo PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain...

wo SAVENTS jinke saamne teri koi haisiyat nahi...

ALFREEN-haan wo toh dikh raha hai....tabhi baar baar apni sadi hui shakal liye is PHASE me ghusse chale aate ho...

ANWIR-sirf isiliye kyunki filhal tu first PHASE me hai,teri zubaan hamare saamne chal rahi hai...

par koi baat nahi..sirf 3 mahino ki hi baat hai..uske baad teri azaadi ka,tere bolne ka yahan tak ki tere sir uthane ka waqt khatm....

kyunki PHASE 2 me sabhi SAVENTS, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saamne teri akad nichod di jaayegi aur koi kuch nahi kar paayega....

MAHI-self obsession ki hadh ho yaar tum dono...ek free advice deti hun,tum dono bola kam aur kiya zyada karo...

warna tumme aur ek kutte me kya fark reh jaayega....


MAHI jo ab tak chup chaap saari baaton ko sun rahi thi, ANWIR ki aakhri baat sun usne apni chuppi todte hue baat ko aage badhaya jisse sun ek baar firse ANWIR aur MORANA ka dimag ghuma..

wo dono fir kuch kehne hi waale the ki tabhi....


VIOLET-GOOD MORNING SAVENTS...


un dono ke piche se VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz aayi jo NOX aur OMMIN ke saath class me enter kar rahi thi...

wahin VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz ko sun MORANA aur ANWIR ne apne aap ko control kiya aur WHIZZ ki taraf mud gaye aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS ke saath un donko ne bhi VIOLET WHIZZ aur dono WHIZZDERS ko wish kiya...


VIOLET-arre MORANA, ANWIR..tum dono morning me hi aa gaye..mujhe laga tha ki class ke baad aaoge...

ANWIR-actually WHIZZ, pichli khch classes itni hectic rahi hain ki aaj hum dono ne hi class se off liya hai aur aapko toh pata hi hai ki hum hamare PHASE ke best SAVENTS hain aur hume off lene se koi rokta nahi....


pure ghamand se ANWIR ne apni baat kahi aur is baat ko karte waqt uski gardan ghumte hue ALFREEN aur MAHI par tiki rahi...

wahin ANWIR ki baat sun VIOLET WHIZZ toh bas muskurayi par NOX ko ANWIR ki baat achi nahi lagi aur isiliye...


NOX-toh apne PHASE ke best SAVENT...ek baat batao ki apne is off time me tum yahan kyun aaye....???

VIOLET-ye dono MAHI ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ko dekhne aaye hain...


ANWIR kuch jawab de,usse pehle hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne apni baat kahi jisse sun MAHI pehle toh shock hui par fir usse maajra samajh me aa gaya aur isiliye wo muskura di...

toh jo MAHI ne samjha aur jo asal me kaaran tha jiski wajah se ANWIR aur MORANA yahan the wo ye tha ki MAHI ne jo karnama kiya tha,6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ka wo bhi first PHASE me hokar,wo pehle kabhi bhi nahi hua tha aur isiliye ye baat pure CHOSENS me fail gayi thi..

ANWIR aur MORANA bhi is khabar se acchute nahi the..waise toh is khabar ko sun unhe bilkul bhi acha nahi laga par fir unhone socha ki bhale hi ye baat unke liye negetive thi par saath hi important bhi thi..

wo jaanana chahte the ki MAHI kis tarah pain aur emotions ke bahav ke beech khud ko shaant rakhti hui apne SOUL ko lagatar itna zyada AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab ho rahi hai..???

wo aana toh bohot pehle se chahte the par khud ke PHASE ke task se ho rahe vyastata ke kaaran dono aa nahi paa rahe the but aaj finally dono yahan the....

par yahan aate hi MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko dekh dono apni aadat se majbur bully karne se baaz nahi aaye par aisa karna unhe khud par hi bhaari padh gaya.....

khar,jaise hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne un dono ke yahan aane ka kaaran bataya toh...


NOX-arre par PHASE 2 ke best SAVENT ko bhala PHASE 1 ki MAHI se kya kaam ho sakta hai...???

OMMIN-bilkul ho sakta hai.. kyunki ye dono sirf is saal ke liye PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain....

par MAHI PHASE 1 me sirf is saal ki hi nahi balki CHOSENS ke itihaas ke 25 thousand years ki best SAVENT hai..

aur aise SAVENT ke paas kaun nahi aana chahega...???


OMMIN ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR ko andar hi andar behad ghussa aaya par dono ke chehre shaant hi rahe..


ANWIR-WHIZZDER OMMIN, WHIZZDER NOX...sikhna toh hume har kisi se hi chahiye naa...

aur ye baat issi PHASE me aur issi class me aap dono ne hi humse kahi thi...

ab dekhiye naa, sirf 2 PHASE me aur usme bhi hamara second PHASE abhi khatm hua nahi hai,itne kam waqt me hum dono hi 8 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke dhaarak ban chuke hain...

MORANA-aur shayad itna hi percent aap pure life me AMPLIFY kar paaye hain, haina WHIZZDER OMMIN aur WHIZZDER NOX....


ek khilli udane waali smile ke saath MORANA ne is baat ko kaha jisse sun ANWIR toh muskura diya par OMMIN aur NOX,dono ko behad bura laga...

waise bura toh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko bhi laga tha..

ALFREEN toh kuch bolne waali bhi thi par MAHI ne ishare se usse chup rehne ko kaha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MORANA-aur waise bhi is class me agar MAHI ko alag kar den,toh hum pure confidence se keh sakte hain ki aur koi bhi hum dono ke takkar ka nahi hai...

first PHASE me hum dono ne hi 4 percent tak apne SOUL ko kar liya tha jo i am sure ki is class me MAHI ke alawa ye karnama aur koi karne me capable nahi hai....

VIOLET-tum galat ho MORANA... MAHI ke baaju me jo do ladkiyan khadi hain, MABEL aur ALFREEN,in dono ne hi abhi tak apne SOUL ko 3 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai..

ye dono tum dono se bas 1 percent hi piche hain and i am sure ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono tumhari barabari kar lenge....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR chownke...unhe is baat ki bilkul bhi ummid nahi thi ki MABEL aur ALFREEN itne aage badh chuke honge...


aur jaisa ki VIOLET WHIZZ ne kaha ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar lenge,jiska matlab tha ki ALFREEN aur MABEL un dono ke barabar ho jaayenge aur ye baat dono ko hazam nahi ho paa rahi thi...

isiliye ANWIR ka dimag tezi se doudne laga aur fir usse kuch click hua.


ANWIR-haan,ye ho sakta hai WHIZZ ki ye dono is PHASE ke khatm hote hote tak 4 percent tak pahunch jaayen par fir bhi ye dono humse piche hi rahengi aur wo isiliye kyunki humne apne SOUL ka 4 th percent first PHASE ke khatm hone se 3 mahine pehle kar liya tha matlab abhi jo waqt hai,is time tak hamara SOUL 4 percent AMPLIFY ho chuka tha..

par ye dono toh abhi 3 percent par hain matlab ye humse piche hain aur humesha piche hi rahenge...


ALFREEN-ye waqt abhi khatm nahi hua hai aur jab tak ye hoga,hum apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar chuke honge...


MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghurte hue ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jispar...


MORANA-really..??par kaise karogi tum ye...???kyunki aaj hi wo din hai,wo waqt hai jab humne apne soul ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya tha..

jiska matlab hai ki tumhe bhi aaj hi ye achievement haasil karma hoga...

ALFREEN-aisa hi hoga..hum aaj hi ye kar ke dikhayenge...

ANWIR-aur agar naa kar paaye toh...!!!


MAHI jaanti thi ki MORANA aur ANWIR ALFREEN ko bhadka rahe hain,aur isiliye wo kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi..


ALFREEN-toh tum jo bolo,mai wo maan lungi.....and that's my promise....

MABEL-my nahi our.... that's our promise...agar hum unsuccessful hue toh tum dono jo bolo hum dono wo maan lenge...


MAHI ke interfere karne se pehle hi ALFREEN aur MABEL ne promise kar diya tha jiska matlab tha ki ab MAHI kuch bhi kar nahi sakti thi...

wahin in saari baaton ko sun VIOLET, NOX aur OMMIN bhi thode pareshan ho gaye the kyunki ek toh wo jaante the ki SOUL ko asaani se AMPLIFY nahi kiya jaa sakta aur saath hi unhe ye bhi maalum tha ki agar MABEL aur ALFREEN unsuccessful rahe toh MORANA aur ANWIR zaroor un dono se kuch ulta sidha demand karenge....

par in sabhi pareshaniyon ke beech wo teeno ye bhi jaante the ki MABEL aur ALFREEN ko agar wo bacha bhi len toh wo sirf abhi ke kiye hoga..

par aisa karne se next PHASE me unke problems aur badhengi..saath hi wo teeno soch rahe the ki next PHASE ka ek halka sa swaad MABEL aur ALFREEN ko abhi hi chakh lena chahiye kyunki us PHASE me jo hota hai,jo zindagi jee jaati hai,wo chunouti, ghamand,sangharsh and most importantly shakti pradarshan ke beech hi jee jaati hai....

kamzoron ke liye wo PHASE hell se kam nahi...aur yahi sab sochte hue wo teeno chup hi rahe...

wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ke promise karte hi....


ANWIR-thik hai fir...toh agar tum dono aaj ki class me apne soul ko ek baar firse AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab hue toh hum maan lenge ke tum dono humare equals ho,humse kam nahi ho par agar aisa nahi hua toh....

MORANA-3 percent AMPLIFICATION me ho tum dono..iska matlab hai ki tum dono hi next PHASE me STELLARS group ka hissa ban chuke ho...

toh hum ye chahte hain ki agar tum dono aaj fail hui toh next PHASE me STELLARS group me nahi balki WEAKLINGS group me enter karogi...


MORANA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS including WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hairan ho gaye..

wahin MAHI ek baar firse kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi...


MABEL/ALFREEN-HUME MANZOOR HAI....







PLANET-ZEAL-THE SOUL



PLACE-THE RED SURFACE





TOH DER KIS BAAT KI....???SHURU KAREN!!!



meri agli aur aakhri chunouti ka waqt aa chuka tha aur isiliye ye baat maine WOOGER se kahi jispar....


WOOGER-ek baat hai jo aapko is chunouti ke shuru hone se pehle jaanani zaroori hai...

ye chunouti aapki pichli chunouti se thodi alag hone waali hai....

kaise,iske baare me aapko aapki chunouti ke douran pata chal jaayega...

bas ek hi chiz hogi aapke paas..aapka focus..usse mat khone mat dijiyega....


WOOGER ki baat sunane ke baad bhi mai chup hi raha aur isiliye...

wo dusri roshni ka gola tezi se aage badha aur agle hi pal....


SCENE-2


YE KAISI JAGAH HAI....HAR TARAF SIRF ROSHNI...AUR IS ROSHNI SE ITNI ZYADA URJA KYUN NIKAL RAHI HAI...

BUT MOST IMPORTANTLY,MAI YAHAN KYA KAR RAHA HUN....

MUJHE TOH KUCH PAL PEHLE US ROSHNI NE CHHUA THA,USKE BAAD KYA HUA...???


us beintahan roshni ke samandar ke beech fasa mai ye sab apne aap se bol hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe laga jhatka...


reason...



SAMAY SACHALAKON...ISHWAR NE AAP SABKI PRARTHANA SUN LI...AAP SABKE DUKH AUR TAKLIF KI GHADI SAMAPT HUI...AAKHEN KHOLIYE....


ek tez awaaz gunj uthi mere kaano me par jhatka mujhe us awaaz ko sunkar nahi laga tha....

jhatka mujhe is baat par laga ki jaise hi is awaaz se aankhen kholne ki baat kahi,toh mere saamne dikh raha tez prakash ek dum se gayab ho gaya aur aisa hone par maine dekha ki mai kisi badi si jagah par khada hun...

mere saamne bohot se log khade hain par filhal wo human form me nahi balki SHADOW FORM me hain..

aur mere aaju baaju kul chaar log khade the jinme ek ladki thi aur teen ladke...

ab ye sab ho kya raha tha,iska toh mujhe koi idea tha nahi..mai bas apne dimag ko douda kar situation ko samajhne ki koshish kar hi raha tha ki tabhi...


AHHH,AHHHH,AHHHH.....


mere saamne khade un spirit form ke logon ke mooh se dard bhari karah nikal gayi jisse sun...


MAI-ab saala inhe kya ho raha hai...??aur ye inke pair ke niche aag kyun jal uthi???

ye sawal maine man me nahi,balki apni mooh se bola tha par aisa karte hi mujhe ek naya shock laga aur wo isiliye kyunki bhale hi maine in baaton ko apne mooh se bola tha par ye baatein bahar nikli hi nahi balki mere andar hi gunj uthi...

par jaise hi maine ye sawal kiya,toh uske agle hi pal mere brain me is scene ka data jaise store hone laga..

aur is scene ka hi nahi,balki is scene se ghata pehle ka scene aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,wo scene bhi mere dimag me clearly ghum gaya...

saath hi jo filhal mai tha,uska naam aur saath hi mere aaju baaki jo paanch log khade the,wo kaun the aur is character ke saath jo fihal kai tha,VIKRAM,use unsab ka rishta bhi mujhe pata chal chuka tha..

aur aisa hote hi mujhe aadhi baat aur half situation bhi samajh me aa gayi...

toh chaliye, jitna mai samjha tha,utna aap bhi samajh lijiye par usse pehle....


(WRITER'S NOTE-RAAZ ko toh scene samajh me aa gaya..ummid hai ki aap sabko bhi samajh aa gaya hoga...

ye scene hai SHADOW WORLD ka jahan ASMODEUS ne YELUPTUS planet me basne waale SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko kaid karke rakha hua tha...

detail me dobara yaad karne ke liye update 110 padh len..)


back to the story:-


toh jo aadhi baat mujhe samajh me aayi thi,wo ye thi ki bhale hi mai abhi is VIKRAM ke sharir me tha,ya fir ye kahun ki filhal mai hi VIKRAM tha,par tab bhi mai apne hisaab se chizen nahi kar sakta tha...

mere har sawal ke mere dimag me uththe hi mujhe uska jawab mil jaayega jo ki mujhe is sharir ke maalik ka brain dega...

aur isiliye hi WOOGER ne kaha tha ki meri ye chunouti meri pehli chunouti se alag hone waali hai..

kyunki us chunouti me toh mera wajud hi gayab ho gaya tha par jab mujhe mere hone ka ehsas hua tab maine ASMODEUS ke body par apna control le liya but yahan toh maamla hi ulta hai...

yahan mera astitv shuru se hi mere paas hai par fir bhi mai is scene me is VIKRAM ke jiske pal mujhe jeene hain,uske aadhin hun...

and this is bloody scary for me...

kyunki yahi toh wo chiz thi,aadhinta,samarpan,kisi aur ke chaaye me jeena yaa saans lena jisse mujhe sakht nafrat hai..

yahi bas ek aisa condition hai jisme mera dimag sthir nahi reh sakta...i bloody hate to be someone,live like that someone and most importantly, depend upon that someone or anyone dammit...

is aadhe sach ko jaankar mera dimag hi ghum gaya....mera uddeshya,mera target,sab bhulne laga tha mai...

mujhe bas kisi tarah is human choge ko,jisse mujhe zabardasti pehna diya gaya tha,utaarna tha par saala ye bhi hone se raha...

ek ajeeb mental state me fasa mai bas chupchaap honth sile saamne chal rahe scene ko dekh raha tha jisme bas chutiyaapa ho raha tha..

akhand chutiyaapa...arre,kare koi bhare koi....fase saale ye nikamme the,par nikalna is saale VIKRAM ko padega..

arre kyun bhai...dusri ke fadde me padhna kaayko... marne de,tadapne de saalon ko..

mera matlab is VIKRAM ke baaju me ek bandi khadi thi,jiske baare me mujhe pata chala tha ki ye iski maal hai..

abbe lekar ghum isse.enjoy kar...chota sa lounda dikh raha hai shakal se par saale ki chul badon waali hai..

sabki madad karenge ye....aur us madad me apni mahanta mujhe bhi dikhayenge...

ek aise bande ko jo is scene ke actual date ke najaane kitne decades ke baad paida hua hai...

par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain...apne aap me badbadata hua mai bhi sabki tarah scene ko dekhne me lag gaya jahan is waqt dialogue dialogue khela jaa raha tha...


MAI-najaane kitni sadiyon tak aapne pure bramhaand ke samay chakra ko sahi tarike se ghumane ka daayitv nibhaya hai..

aur aaj bhi aap jis aag se tap rahe hain,wo bhi ussi samay chakra ki nirantarta ko banaye rakhne ke liye sah rahe hain...

aap sab ne pehle hi bina kisi galti ke itne varshon tak saza bhugti hai....

mujhe aapko bachane ke liye pehle hi aa jaana chahiye tha par mai aisa kar nahi paaya...mere aage jhuk kar mujhe aur sharminda nahi kijiye....


un SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke jhukne ki wajah se ye gratefulness bhare shabd nikle the VIKRAM ke mooh se jisse sun mera dimag aur ghumne laga...


abbe jhuk rahe hain toh jhukne de....har kriya par pratikriya dena zaroori hai kya...????


maine apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar khudko is scene se nikalne ki koshish ki par naa toh mera CEREBRATION process ruka aur naahi mai kahin jaa paaya...

mai samajh gaya tha ki chupchaap is scene ko dekhne ke alawa mai aur kuch nahi kar sakta....

par sawal tha kyun...????is ajeeb si situation ka mai hissa aakhir hun hi kyun..????

mere dimag ye khayal,ye sawal utha aur aisa hote hi....


BAS EK HI CHIZ HOGI AAPKE PAAS..AAPKA FOCUS..USSE MAT KHONE MAT DIJIYEGA....


yahan aane se pehle WOOGER ke dwara kahe gaye ye aakhri shabd mere dimag me gunj uthe aur tab...


MAI-FOCUS.....toh isiliye WOOGER ne wo sab kaha tha...


sirf ek hi chiz hogi mere paas yahan...mera focus... WOOGER ko ye achi tarah pata tha ki aisi situations mujhe pasand nahi hai..

aise haalaton par mujhe behad ghussa aata hai aur isiliye usne mujhe focus karne ko kaha...

par sawal tha ki kis chiz par focus...???

aur is sawal ke mere dimah me aate hi mere dimag me ek aur vichar aaya...

aur wo vichar related tha is scene se,is scene se pehle hue scene se aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,us scene se...

aur wo vichar tha INTERCONNECTION....

in sabhi scenes ke beech ka interconnection.....

yahan aane ke baad mere brain ke paas jo bhi ho raha hai,us situation aur uske kaaran ke baare me bata diya tha jispar maine abhi tak dhyan nahi diya tha par ab jab ye interconnection waala thought mere dimag me ghuma toh....

maine sthithi ko samajhna shuru kiya...


SHADOW WORLD....jahan par ki is waqt mai hun aur ye scene chal raha hai....

par is jagah ka main base hai YELUPTUS.... YELUPTUS ke phase log jinhe SAMAY SANCHALAK kaha jaata hai,ye VIKRAM unhe bachane ke liye yahan aaya hai....

saath hi iske ek dost RONIT ki bandi bhi yahin par hai...usse bhi ye bachayega...

wo bandi jiske SOUL ko yahan rakha gaya hai par uski body YELUPTUS me hai...

toh VIKRAM in samay SANCHALAKON ko aur us ANJALI ko wahan YELUPTUS lekar jaayega...

is beech usse ek banda (ASMODEUS)rokne ke liye jaal pehle hi bicha chuka hai par is VIKRAM ke paas uska bhi kaat hai...

jitne scenes aur unme chuppi baatein mere brain me feed hui thi,un sab scenes ke baare me mera dimag sochne laga tha....

aur jab ye bichaye hue jaal ko kaatne ke baare me maine socha toh ek aur baat mujhe click hui par tabhi maine saamne dekha jahan filhal scene badla hua tha...

filhal mere saamne wahi chutiyaapa ho raha tha jisse mujhe sakht chidh thi...

wo RONIT aur ANJALI ek dusre se chipke ro rahe the...

ajeeb hote hai ye insaan,par inke aankhon se nikalne waale aansu toh saale inse bhi zyada ajeeb hote hain....

khushi me bhi tap tap...
aur gam me bhi tap tap....

ye sab dekh mera FOCUS ek baar firse dagmagane laga tha...

kisi tarah khud ko shaant rakh maine badhte hue scene ko dekha jisme is waqt VIKRAM sabko us ANJALI ke baare me bata raha tha jisse sun....


MAI-yahan aane se pehle hi VIKRAM ko yahan hone waali ghatnaon ke baare me pehle se pata tha...


ye SAMAY SANCHALAK toh yahan pehle se fase the,par ANJALI baad me aayi...

toh iska matlab is ANJALI ke liye hi VIKRAM ne ye sab plan kiya tha...???


khudse maine is sawal ko pucha tha jiske baad jo jawab mujhe mila, usse sun mujhe behad hairani hui...

darasal mere sawal ka jawab ye tha ki ANJALI ke chakkar me VIKRAM ne in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko nahi bachaya tha balki SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko bachane ke liye hi ANJALI ek bate ki tarah yahan fasayi gayi thi...

ANJALI ke rooh ka yahan fasna,fir SAMAY SANCHALAKON aur usse bachana,uske liye jo jaal is planet ke baahar bichaya gaya hai,usse todna,in sab chizon ki planning is VIKRAM ne pehle hi kar li thi...

GAZAB.....

zindagi me pehli baar mai kisise impressed hua tha...itni doordarshita,itni gehri soch aur har soch ko sach karne ki itni perfect timing ke hisaab se ki gayi planning....

ye banda haarta bhi tab tha jab wo haar uski permanent jeet ke liye zaroori ho.... brilliant...

aisi soch,maine pehle naa kabhi suni thi aur naa dekhi thi...

aur is bande ke ganit ko samajhne ke baad WOOGER ki kahi gayi us baat ka matlab bhi clear ho gaya tha jisme usne kaha tha ki ye chunouti meri pehli ki chunouti se alag hai...

mai us alag shabd ka matlab samajh gaya tha...darasal mujhe in chal rahe scenes me VIKRAM ke dwara kiye gaye kisi loop hole ko nahi dhundna hai aur wo isiliye kyunki is bande ka jiski doordarshita itni adhik ho,uske faislon me koi loop hole ho hi nahi sakta....

no chance....mujhe bas chal rahe scenes me kuch aisa dhoodna hai jisse meri kahani aage badh sake...

mujhe koi faayda ho...aur ye thi pate ki baat .

kyunki baat jab mere faayde ki ho toh mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun..kuch bhi......

aur isiliye bilkul shaant dimag se maine ek baar firse ho chuke scenes,chal rahe scenes aur aage hone waale scenes ke baare me sochne laga...

itna toh mai samajh chuka tha ki mere hisse me bas ye 5 hi scenes hain..

jinme se do khatm ho chuke the.. ANJALI ke saath VIKRAM and party wapas SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke paas jaa rahe the jo ki third scene tha...

fourth tha sabko yahan se lekar YELUPTUS jaana aur paanchva scene....

jahan VIKRAM in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haath me unki khoyi hui chiz,wo PARIVARTAK....

ek second....

paanchva scene...wo PARIVARTAK....


in saare scenes ke hone ka maine reason..in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke yahan fasne ka main reason...

PARIVARTAK...

jaise hi maine us cheez ka naam liya...ek ke baad ek 2 chizen hui...


pehli...mere dimag me us chiz ki saari qualities ghoom gayi...

jisse jaan pata nahi kyun par mujhe aisa laga ki ye chiz mere kaam ki hai...

dusri...jaise hi mujhe ye laga ki wo PARIVARTAK mere kaam ka hai toh...

scene achanak se badal gaya..aur ab jo scene mere saamne tha, usse dekh mera doubt clear ho chuka tha..

mai jaan gaya tha ki maine jo socha hai,woh sahi hai aur ussi soch ko sach karna hi meri chunouti hai...

toh baat ye hai ki filhal mai YELUPTUS me tha....the last scene...aur mere saamne wahi scene chal raha tha jab VIKRAM SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko unki amanat wo PARIVARTAK dene waala tha...


MAI-maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi....aur haan,ye rakhiye...


SAMAY SANCHALAK jo abhi VIKRAM ke samman me jhuke hue the,isiliye VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi aur aisa kehne ke baad usne apna haath aage kar diya jisme is waqt PARIVARTAK tha...


uske aisa karte hi ek SAMAY SANCHALAK jo VIKRAM ke paas khada tha,usne PARIVARTAK ko lene ke liye haath aage badhaya par tabhi...


MAI-meri ek choti si shart hai...


haath ko band karte hue maine ye baat kahi....


MAINE....VIKRAM nahi, RAAZ....


ji haan doston,jaise hi is chunouti ka,is PARIVARTAK ka ganit mere samajh me aaya toh uske agle hi pal mera lock khul gaya jiski wajah se mai aur VIKRAM ab ek ho gaye the..

jiska matlab tha ki ab bhale hi sabke saamne VIKRAM tha, par bol mai raha tha...

wahin mere moothi band kar lene aur shart waali baat sunkar sabhi SAMAY SANCHALAK thode hairan hue par phir...


SAMAY SANCHALAK-hamari zindagi aapki rini hai...aapko humse kisi bhi shart ko rakhne ki aawashyakta nahi hai..

aap bas aadesh karen...

MAI-is PARIVARTAK ki wo urja jisse ye kaam karti hai,bhavishya me agar mujhse jude kisi shaksh ko uski zaroorat pade,toh aap usse wo de denge....

SAMAY SANCHALAK-jaisi aapki iccha...


SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haan kehte hi maine apni band moothi khol di jiske baad us SAMAY SANCHALAK ne mere hatheli se us PARIVARTAK ko le liya aur aisa hote hi....


CHANNNN.....


jo pichli baar hua tha,wo ek baar fir hua...

ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir back to ground zero....

mai wapas ZEAL me tha par filhal mai kuch bhi dekhne ko haalat me nahi tha aur wo isiliye kyunki filhal mere sir pichle baar ke mukable 10 times zyada tezi se ghoom raha tha...

mujhe kuch zyada hi chakkar aa rahe the aur isiliye hi mai aakhen band kiye neeche zamin par baitha raha....

kuch time tak aisa hi raha par fir dheere dheere mai normal hone laga aur jab puri tarah control me aane ke baad maine saamne dekha toh halka hadbada gaya...

reason.....

mere just chehre ke saamne wo gola tha..mera SOUL jo lagatar hawa me rotate ho raha tha...

WOOGER gayab tha par fir bhi mai usse mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

us gole me....

kuch der tak us chamakte hue gole ki taraf dekhte rehne ke baad....


MAI-MAI TUMHE APNATA HUN...

KADKADKADKAD.........


bura bramhaand jaise ek akeli bijli ke kadkadane se kaamp gaya tha...

har planet ke mausam ka rookh jaise badal sa gaya..dead aur living...dono hi catagories me aane waale planets halke halke shake kar gaye the...

aur ye sab hua kyunki meri ijazat milne par wo gola aage badha aur mujhme sama gaya....aisa hote hi meri aankhen band ho gayi...

par mai mehsoos kar raha tha..zindagi me pehli baar mai feel kar raha tha..

apne sharir, apne khoon,apni dhamniyon ke andar ke khaali jagah ko bharta hua, mai mehsoos kar raha tha....

mujhe aisa mehsoos ho raha tha maano saalon ke banzar tapte hue zamin par kisine ek saath hazaron laakhon litres paani chhod diya ho...

wo sukoon jisse ab tak mehroom tha mai,wo jagah banati chali jaa rahi thi mere andar...

ye saare changes the internal..par in internal changes ke saath saath kuch external changes bhi hui thi mujhme..

aur wo ye ki jaise hi meri SOUL mujhme samayi aur meri aankhen band hui toh uske agle hi pal mera sharir hawa me uthne laga...

dekhte ho dekhte mere sharir ke upar ka kapda bhi change hone laga...

sabse pehle mere sharir ke chaaron taraf ek White AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere sharir ke andar sama gayi...

aisa hote hi mere sharir par lenin ka ek white robe aa gaya...uske baad us robe ke theek upar white AURA ki hi tarah ek Black AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere white robe se hote hui mere sharir ke andar sama gayi..

par aisa karne ke dauran jab us black aura ne mere white robe ko chhua toh us robe ka colour light grey ho gaya jo ki white aur black ke mixture se banta hai....

aisa hone je baad dheere dheere mera sharir neeche aane laga aur fir jaise hi maine neeche zamin ko chhua toh...

meei aankhen khul gayi....

gehri kaali aankhen jinke side ke white layers kuch zyada hi white lag rahe the...

khair,jaise hi meri aankhen khuli toh ek aur cheez hui jo aaj se pehle tak kabhi nahi hui thi....

aur wo thi mere chehre par aayi smile....

ek aisi smile jisse agar koi dekhe toh khush ho jaaye par agar us smile ka matlab woh samajh len toh khade khade hi mar jaaye...

waise mere chehre par muskurahat bewajah nahi aayi thi..ye aayi thi saamne ke drishya ko dekh kar....

kyunki mere saamne is waqt ZEAL ka wahi CAVE tha jo ki mere yahan is planet ka aakhri padhav bhi tha.....

wo cave jiske andar rakhi thi wo chiz jisse paane ke chakkar me ek living planet dead planet me badal gaya tha....

jisse haasil karne ki chaah liye hue hi VIKRAM ki aatma is duniya se kooch kar gayi thi...

wo chiz jisse maine ab tak toh dekha nahi hai par wo hai meri..

aur jab maine ye kaha hai ki wo hai meri toh iska matlab hai ki wo hai meri...

khwahish meri us chiz ko paane ki isiliye nahi hai kyunki usse mere liye rakha gaya hai...

balki wo chiz meri isiliye honi chahiye kyunki uspar ek pure planet ka khoon chadha hai...

aur har wo chiz jisse jaan ka souda ho,wo meri milkiyat hai...mera possession hai...

kadam aage badhaye maine aur mere aisa karte hi us cave ke dwar par lage kawach ne ek second ke liye roka mujhe jaise meri ability ko check kar rahe hon...

par mere sharir ke layers ko chhune ke baad wo kawach,wo SHIELD hath gaye...

jaise ijazat de di hon mujhe andar jaane ki par mai aage nahi badha..

wahin khada raha...

reason....

ijazat nahi di thi maine us shield ko mujhe chhune ki,mujhe check karne ki...

mai saamne tha uske..usse mujhe mehsoos karte hi hat jaana chahiye tha par usne aisa kiya nahi...

aur ye MUJHE ACCHA NAHI LAGA...

meri aankhon ki putliyon ne us pure cave ke saamne ke hisse ko ghura aur unke aisa karte hi meri aankhon se ek tez beam nikal us gufe par padi aur aisa hoti hi...

BOOM........

ek behad tez dhamaka hua jisse har taraf dhuan dhuan ho gaya par jab kuch der baad dhuan halka sa chatta aur nazara thoda clear hua toh....

mere saamne ab koi gufa nahi thi...

wo GUFA jisme kisi shaktishali cheez ko rakha gaya tha,wo puri gufa baarik kankad me badal chuki thi...

meri nazar saamne hi tiki thi jahan kuch door par abhi bhi gehra dhuan tha par wo bhi dheere dheere chhat raha tha..

wo jagah us gufe ka aakhri chhor tha jahan wo CHIZ thi jisse mujhe lena tha...

mai us chiz ki shakti ko,usse uth rahe vibrations ko bohot ache mehsoos kar raha tha...

par filhal us dhuen ki wajah se maine us chiz ko ab tak dekha nahi tha..

par ye bas kuch seconds ki hi baat thi...aur wo seconds bhi aakhirkaar beet gaye....

dhuan chhatthe chhatthe chhat hi gaya aur jab aisa hua toh zindagi me dusri baar mere chehre par smile aa gayi...

reason....

meri yahan hone ki wajah,meri milkiyat,mera prized possession meri aankhon ke saamne chamak raha tha..


beintihan shakti sa labalab bhara hua LORD OF ANGEL KA........



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AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......








AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Yar mega UPDATE bol k normal size ka update dedia. Sahi popat kiya humara bhai. Finally Raaz complete hua aur Situation mai thrill bhi behisaab tha maza aagya pdhke. Sword shayad vahi hai jo VIKRAM mili thi AGRASEN ko maarke jan Uske dost pariksha De rahe the Angel ki shakti haasil krne k liye.. Ye sword bhi God k ansuon se bani thi.. Kya chalaki dikhai VIKRAM AUR ASMODEOUS ne. Asmodeous ne apni ki hui galti bhi sudhar di black energy vali and VIKRAM ne RAAZ ko apne jivaankaal ka vo hisaa dikhakar usko samay sanchalkon se vo taqat bhi dilwa di jo ki RAAZ ki pariksha ka ek hissa thi.. Aur end Main usko VIKRAM (LORD OF ANGELS) ki sword bhi milne ka raasta bhi mila diya bhale hi isake liye unhone kitane experiment kiye kitane hi bnde create kiye par RAAZ safal hua isme . Ab aage dekhna hai ki kya hota hai.. Waiting for next update filed with suspense, thriller and fun..Intezar rahega
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI ALFREEN KO EK RAAT PEHLE USSE FEEL HUE EK AJEEB EHSAAS KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNI PEHLI CHUNOUTI PURI KAR LI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




MEGA UPDATE-47



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S





3 MONTHS LATER



KYA HAAL HAI LOOSERS...????


ALFREEN aur MABEL jo ki ek dusre se baat kar rahi thi,unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jispar jab unhone palat kar dekha toh dono hi thoda chownk gayi....

reason....

unke saamne ANWIR aur MORANA khade muskura rahe the...

subah ka waqt hai...classes shuru hone me thoda sa waqt hai but sabhi SAVENTS class me aa chuke hain aur apne apne groups bana kar khade hain..

filhal MABEL aur ALFREEN ke saath MAHI nahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki kuch SAVENTS jinhe apne SOUL ke AMPLIFICATION me kuch zyada hi dikkat aa rahi hai,wo sab MAHI se apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ke ideas le rahe the aur MAHI bhi badi khushi aur man se un sabhi SAVENTS ko unke will power ko aur strong karne ke tips bata rahi thi...

aur issi beech hui entry MORANA aur ANWIR ki jinhe dekh sirf MABEL aur ALFREEN hi nahi balki MAHI aur uske saath khade sabhi SAVENTS bhi chownk gaye the....

MABEL aur ALFREEN ki hi tarah MAHI ne bhi un dono me ke mooh se looser shabd suna tha aur wo jaanti thi ki ye word un dono ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ke liye bola hai par filhal wo shaant hi rahi....

par un dono ko dekh ALFREEN ka acha khaasa mood bigad gaya aur unke taunt ko sun uska dimag bhi ghum gaya aur isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar MABEL ek baat bata..looser hona zyada galat hai yaa fir bhikari hona...

MABEL-mere hisaab se bhikari hona...

ALFREEN-haina..chalo fir,hum looser hi thik hain..kamsekam in dono ki tarah bhikari toh nahi hain jo baar baar apne ghar matlab apne PHASE ko chhodkar hamare PHASE me aakar kuch naa kuch mangte rehte hain...


jahan ALFREEN ki baat sun us class me moujud PHASE 1 ke sabhi
SAVENTS has diye wahin MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghussa aa gaya aur...


MORANA-apni zuban ko apni aukaad ke hadh me rakh kar mooh khola kar ladki....hum jinhe tu bhikari keh rahi hai,wo PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain...

wo SAVENTS jinke saamne teri koi haisiyat nahi...

ALFREEN-haan wo toh dikh raha hai....tabhi baar baar apni sadi hui shakal liye is PHASE me ghusse chale aate ho...

ANWIR-sirf isiliye kyunki filhal tu first PHASE me hai,teri zubaan hamare saamne chal rahi hai...

par koi baat nahi..sirf 3 mahino ki hi baat hai..uske baad teri azaadi ka,tere bolne ka yahan tak ki tere sir uthane ka waqt khatm....

kyunki PHASE 2 me sabhi SAVENTS, WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saamne teri akad nichod di jaayegi aur koi kuch nahi kar paayega....

MAHI-self obsession ki hadh ho yaar tum dono...ek free advice deti hun,tum dono bola kam aur kiya zyada karo...

warna tumme aur ek kutte me kya fark reh jaayega....


MAHI jo ab tak chup chaap saari baaton ko sun rahi thi, ANWIR ki aakhri baat sun usne apni chuppi todte hue baat ko aage badhaya jisse sun ek baar firse ANWIR aur MORANA ka dimag ghuma..

wo dono fir kuch kehne hi waale the ki tabhi....


VIOLET-GOOD MORNING SAVENTS...


un dono ke piche se VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz aayi jo NOX aur OMMIN ke saath class me enter kar rahi thi...

wahin VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz ko sun MORANA aur ANWIR ne apne aap ko control kiya aur WHIZZ ki taraf mud gaye aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS ke saath un donko ne bhi VIOLET WHIZZ aur dono WHIZZDERS ko wish kiya...


VIOLET-arre MORANA, ANWIR..tum dono morning me hi aa gaye..mujhe laga tha ki class ke baad aaoge...

ANWIR-actually WHIZZ, pichli khch classes itni hectic rahi hain ki aaj hum dono ne hi class se off liya hai aur aapko toh pata hi hai ki hum hamare PHASE ke best SAVENTS hain aur hume off lene se koi rokta nahi....


pure ghamand se ANWIR ne apni baat kahi aur is baat ko karte waqt uski gardan ghumte hue ALFREEN aur MAHI par tiki rahi...

wahin ANWIR ki baat sun VIOLET WHIZZ toh bas muskurayi par NOX ko ANWIR ki baat achi nahi lagi aur isiliye...


NOX-toh apne PHASE ke best SAVENT...ek baat batao ki apne is off time me tum yahan kyun aaye....???

VIOLET-ye dono MAHI ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ko dekhne aaye hain...


ANWIR kuch jawab de,usse pehle hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne apni baat kahi jisse sun MAHI pehle toh shock hui par fir usse maajra samajh me aa gaya aur isiliye wo muskura di...

toh jo MAHI ne samjha aur jo asal me kaaran tha jiski wajah se ANWIR aur MORANA yahan the wo ye tha ki MAHI ne jo karnama kiya tha,6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ka wo bhi first PHASE me hokar,wo pehle kabhi bhi nahi hua tha aur isiliye ye baat pure CHOSENS me fail gayi thi..

ANWIR aur MORANA bhi is khabar se acchute nahi the..waise toh is khabar ko sun unhe bilkul bhi acha nahi laga par fir unhone socha ki bhale hi ye baat unke liye negetive thi par saath hi important bhi thi..

wo jaanana chahte the ki MAHI kis tarah pain aur emotions ke bahav ke beech khud ko shaant rakhti hui apne SOUL ko lagatar itna zyada AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab ho rahi hai..???

wo aana toh bohot pehle se chahte the par khud ke PHASE ke task se ho rahe vyastata ke kaaran dono aa nahi paa rahe the but aaj finally dono yahan the....

par yahan aate hi MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko dekh dono apni aadat se majbur bully karne se baaz nahi aaye par aisa karna unhe khud par hi bhaari padh gaya.....

khar,jaise hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne un dono ke yahan aane ka kaaran bataya toh...


NOX-arre par PHASE 2 ke best SAVENT ko bhala PHASE 1 ki MAHI se kya kaam ho sakta hai...???

OMMIN-bilkul ho sakta hai.. kyunki ye dono sirf is saal ke liye PHASE 2 ke best SAVENTS hain....

par MAHI PHASE 1 me sirf is saal ki hi nahi balki CHOSENS ke itihaas ke 25 thousand years ki best SAVENT hai..

aur aise SAVENT ke paas kaun nahi aana chahega...???


OMMIN ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR ko andar hi andar behad ghussa aaya par dono ke chehre shaant hi rahe..


ANWIR-WHIZZDER OMMIN, WHIZZDER NOX...sikhna toh hume har kisi se hi chahiye naa...

aur ye baat issi PHASE me aur issi class me aap dono ne hi humse kahi thi...

ab dekhiye naa, sirf 2 PHASE me aur usme bhi hamara second PHASE abhi khatm hua nahi hai,itne kam waqt me hum dono hi 8 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke dhaarak ban chuke hain...

MORANA-aur shayad itna hi percent aap pure life me AMPLIFY kar paaye hain, haina WHIZZDER OMMIN aur WHIZZDER NOX....


ek khilli udane waali smile ke saath MORANA ne is baat ko kaha jisse sun ANWIR toh muskura diya par OMMIN aur NOX,dono ko behad bura laga...

waise bura toh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko bhi laga tha..

ALFREEN toh kuch bolne waali bhi thi par MAHI ne ishare se usse chup rehne ko kaha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MORANA-aur waise bhi is class me agar MAHI ko alag kar den,toh hum pure confidence se keh sakte hain ki aur koi bhi hum dono ke takkar ka nahi hai...

first PHASE me hum dono ne hi 4 percent tak apne SOUL ko kar liya tha jo i am sure ki is class me MAHI ke alawa ye karnama aur koi karne me capable nahi hai....

VIOLET-tum galat ho MORANA... MAHI ke baaju me jo do ladkiyan khadi hain, MABEL aur ALFREEN,in dono ne hi abhi tak apne SOUL ko 3 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai..

ye dono tum dono se bas 1 percent hi piche hain and i am sure ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono tumhari barabari kar lenge....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun MORANA aur ANWIR chownke...unhe is baat ki bilkul bhi ummid nahi thi ki MABEL aur ALFREEN itne aage badh chuke honge...


aur jaisa ki VIOLET WHIZZ ne kaha ki is PHASE ke khatm hone se pehle hi ye dono apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar lenge,jiska matlab tha ki ALFREEN aur MABEL un dono ke barabar ho jaayenge aur ye baat dono ko hazam nahi ho paa rahi thi...

isiliye ANWIR ka dimag tezi se doudne laga aur fir usse kuch click hua.


ANWIR-haan,ye ho sakta hai WHIZZ ki ye dono is PHASE ke khatm hote hote tak 4 percent tak pahunch jaayen par fir bhi ye dono humse piche hi rahengi aur wo isiliye kyunki humne apne SOUL ka 4 th percent first PHASE ke khatm hone se 3 mahine pehle kar liya tha matlab abhi jo waqt hai,is time tak hamara SOUL 4 percent AMPLIFY ho chuka tha..

par ye dono toh abhi 3 percent par hain matlab ye humse piche hain aur humesha piche hi rahenge...


ALFREEN-ye waqt abhi khatm nahi hua hai aur jab tak ye hoga,hum apne SOUL ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kar chuke honge...


MORANA aur ANWIR ko ghurte hue ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jispar...


MORANA-really..??par kaise karogi tum ye...???kyunki aaj hi wo din hai,wo waqt hai jab humne apne soul ko 4 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya tha..

jiska matlab hai ki tumhe bhi aaj hi ye achievement haasil karma hoga...

ALFREEN-aisa hi hoga..hum aaj hi ye kar ke dikhayenge...

ANWIR-aur agar naa kar paaye toh...!!!


MAHI jaanti thi ki MORANA aur ANWIR ALFREEN ko bhadka rahe hain,aur isiliye wo kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi..


ALFREEN-toh tum jo bolo,mai wo maan lungi.....and that's my promise....

MABEL-my nahi our.... that's our promise...agar hum unsuccessful hue toh tum dono jo bolo hum dono wo maan lenge...


MAHI ke interfere karne se pehle hi ALFREEN aur MABEL ne promise kar diya tha jiska matlab tha ki ab MAHI kuch bhi kar nahi sakti thi...

wahin in saari baaton ko sun VIOLET, NOX aur OMMIN bhi thode pareshan ho gaye the kyunki ek toh wo jaante the ki SOUL ko asaani se AMPLIFY nahi kiya jaa sakta aur saath hi unhe ye bhi maalum tha ki agar MABEL aur ALFREEN unsuccessful rahe toh MORANA aur ANWIR zaroor un dono se kuch ulta sidha demand karenge....

par in sabhi pareshaniyon ke beech wo teeno ye bhi jaante the ki MABEL aur ALFREEN ko agar wo bacha bhi len toh wo sirf abhi ke kiye hoga..

par aisa karne se next PHASE me unke problems aur badhengi..saath hi wo teeno soch rahe the ki next PHASE ka ek halka sa swaad MABEL aur ALFREEN ko abhi hi chakh lena chahiye kyunki us PHASE me jo hota hai,jo zindagi jee jaati hai,wo chunouti, ghamand,sangharsh and most importantly shakti pradarshan ke beech hi jee jaati hai....

kamzoron ke liye wo PHASE hell se kam nahi...aur yahi sab sochte hue wo teeno chup hi rahe...

wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ke promise karte hi....


ANWIR-thik hai fir...toh agar tum dono aaj ki class me apne soul ko ek baar firse AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab hue toh hum maan lenge ke tum dono humare equals ho,humse kam nahi ho par agar aisa nahi hua toh....

MORANA-3 percent AMPLIFICATION me ho tum dono..iska matlab hai ki tum dono hi next PHASE me STELLARS group ka hissa ban chuke ho...

toh hum ye chahte hain ki agar tum dono aaj fail hui toh next PHASE me STELLARS group me nahi balki WEAKLINGS group me enter karogi...


MORANA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS including WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS hairan ho gaye..

wahin MAHI ek baar firse kuch bolne ko hui par tabhi...


MABEL/ALFREEN-HUME MANZOOR HAI....







PLANET-ZEAL-THE SOUL



PLACE-THE RED SURFACE





TOH DER KIS BAAT KI....???SHURU KAREN!!!



meri agli aur aakhri chunouti ka waqt aa chuka tha aur isiliye ye baat maine WOOGER se kahi jispar....


WOOGER-ek baat hai jo aapko is chunouti ke shuru hone se pehle jaanani zaroori hai...

ye chunouti aapki pichli chunouti se thodi alag hone waali hai....

kaise,iske baare me aapko aapki chunouti ke douran pata chal jaayega...

bas ek hi chiz hogi aapke paas..aapka focus..usse mat khone mat dijiyega....


WOOGER ki baat sunane ke baad bhi mai chup hi raha aur isiliye...

wo dusri roshni ka gola tezi se aage badha aur agle hi pal....


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YE KAISI JAGAH HAI....HAR TARAF SIRF ROSHNI...AUR IS ROSHNI SE ITNI ZYADA URJA KYUN NIKAL RAHI HAI...

BUT MOST IMPORTANTLY,MAI YAHAN KYA KAR RAHA HUN....

MUJHE TOH KUCH PAL PEHLE US ROSHNI NE CHHUA THA,USKE BAAD KYA HUA...???


us beintahan roshni ke samandar ke beech fasa mai ye sab apne aap se bol hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe laga jhatka...


reason...



SAMAY SACHALAKON...ISHWAR NE AAP SABKI PRARTHANA SUN LI...AAP SABKE DUKH AUR TAKLIF KI GHADI SAMAPT HUI...AAKHEN KHOLIYE....


ek tez awaaz gunj uthi mere kaano me par jhatka mujhe us awaaz ko sunkar nahi laga tha....

jhatka mujhe is baat par laga ki jaise hi is awaaz se aankhen kholne ki baat kahi,toh mere saamne dikh raha tez prakash ek dum se gayab ho gaya aur aisa hone par maine dekha ki mai kisi badi si jagah par khada hun...

mere saamne bohot se log khade hain par filhal wo human form me nahi balki SHADOW FORM me hain..

aur mere aaju baaju kul chaar log khade the jinme ek ladki thi aur teen ladke...

ab ye sab ho kya raha tha,iska toh mujhe koi idea tha nahi..mai bas apne dimag ko douda kar situation ko samajhne ki koshish kar hi raha tha ki tabhi...


AHHH,AHHHH,AHHHH.....


mere saamne khade un spirit form ke logon ke mooh se dard bhari karah nikal gayi jisse sun...


MAI-ab saala inhe kya ho raha hai...??aur ye inke pair ke niche aag kyun jal uthi???

ye sawal maine man me nahi,balki apni mooh se bola tha par aisa karte hi mujhe ek naya shock laga aur wo isiliye kyunki bhale hi maine in baaton ko apne mooh se bola tha par ye baatein bahar nikli hi nahi balki mere andar hi gunj uthi...

par jaise hi maine ye sawal kiya,toh uske agle hi pal mere brain me is scene ka data jaise store hone laga..

aur is scene ka hi nahi,balki is scene se ghata pehle ka scene aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,wo scene bhi mere dimag me clearly ghum gaya...

saath hi jo filhal mai tha,uska naam aur saath hi mere aaju baaki jo paanch log khade the,wo kaun the aur is character ke saath jo fihal kai tha,VIKRAM,use unsab ka rishta bhi mujhe pata chal chuka tha..

aur aisa hote hi mujhe aadhi baat aur half situation bhi samajh me aa gayi...

toh chaliye, jitna mai samjha tha,utna aap bhi samajh lijiye par usse pehle....


(WRITER'S NOTE-RAAZ ko toh scene samajh me aa gaya..ummid hai ki aap sabko bhi samajh aa gaya hoga...

ye scene hai SHADOW WORLD ka jahan ASMODEUS ne YELUPTUS planet me basne waale SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko kaid karke rakha hua tha...

detail me dobara yaad karne ke liye update 110 padh len..)


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toh jo aadhi baat mujhe samajh me aayi thi,wo ye thi ki bhale hi mai abhi is VIKRAM ke sharir me tha,ya fir ye kahun ki filhal mai hi VIKRAM tha,par tab bhi mai apne hisaab se chizen nahi kar sakta tha...

mere har sawal ke mere dimag me uththe hi mujhe uska jawab mil jaayega jo ki mujhe is sharir ke maalik ka brain dega...

aur isiliye hi WOOGER ne kaha tha ki meri ye chunouti meri pehli chunouti se alag hone waali hai..

kyunki us chunouti me toh mera wajud hi gayab ho gaya tha par jab mujhe mere hone ka ehsas hua tab maine ASMODEUS ke body par apna control le liya but yahan toh maamla hi ulta hai...

yahan mera astitv shuru se hi mere paas hai par fir bhi mai is scene me is VIKRAM ke jiske pal mujhe jeene hain,uske aadhin hun...

and this is bloody scary for me...

kyunki yahi toh wo chiz thi,aadhinta,samarpan,kisi aur ke chaaye me jeena yaa saans lena jisse mujhe sakht nafrat hai..

yahi bas ek aisa condition hai jisme mera dimag sthir nahi reh sakta...i bloody hate to be someone,live like that someone and most importantly, depend upon that someone or anyone dammit...

is aadhe sach ko jaankar mera dimag hi ghum gaya....mera uddeshya,mera target,sab bhulne laga tha mai...

mujhe bas kisi tarah is human choge ko,jisse mujhe zabardasti pehna diya gaya tha,utaarna tha par saala ye bhi hone se raha...

ek ajeeb mental state me fasa mai bas chupchaap honth sile saamne chal rahe scene ko dekh raha tha jisme bas chutiyaapa ho raha tha..

akhand chutiyaapa...arre,kare koi bhare koi....fase saale ye nikamme the,par nikalna is saale VIKRAM ko padega..

arre kyun bhai...dusri ke fadde me padhna kaayko... marne de,tadapne de saalon ko..

mera matlab is VIKRAM ke baaju me ek bandi khadi thi,jiske baare me mujhe pata chala tha ki ye iski maal hai..

abbe lekar ghum isse.enjoy kar...chota sa lounda dikh raha hai shakal se par saale ki chul badon waali hai..

sabki madad karenge ye....aur us madad me apni mahanta mujhe bhi dikhayenge...

ek aise bande ko jo is scene ke actual date ke najaane kitne decades ke baad paida hua hai...

par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain...apne aap me badbadata hua mai bhi sabki tarah scene ko dekhne me lag gaya jahan is waqt dialogue dialogue khela jaa raha tha...


MAI-najaane kitni sadiyon tak aapne pure bramhaand ke samay chakra ko sahi tarike se ghumane ka daayitv nibhaya hai..

aur aaj bhi aap jis aag se tap rahe hain,wo bhi ussi samay chakra ki nirantarta ko banaye rakhne ke liye sah rahe hain...

aap sab ne pehle hi bina kisi galti ke itne varshon tak saza bhugti hai....

mujhe aapko bachane ke liye pehle hi aa jaana chahiye tha par mai aisa kar nahi paaya...mere aage jhuk kar mujhe aur sharminda nahi kijiye....


un SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke jhukne ki wajah se ye gratefulness bhare shabd nikle the VIKRAM ke mooh se jisse sun mera dimag aur ghumne laga...


abbe jhuk rahe hain toh jhukne de....har kriya par pratikriya dena zaroori hai kya...????


maine apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar khudko is scene se nikalne ki koshish ki par naa toh mera CEREBRATION process ruka aur naahi mai kahin jaa paaya...

mai samajh gaya tha ki chupchaap is scene ko dekhne ke alawa mai aur kuch nahi kar sakta....

par sawal tha kyun...????is ajeeb si situation ka mai hissa aakhir hun hi kyun..????

mere dimag ye khayal,ye sawal utha aur aisa hote hi....


BAS EK HI CHIZ HOGI AAPKE PAAS..AAPKA FOCUS..USSE MAT KHONE MAT DIJIYEGA....


yahan aane se pehle WOOGER ke dwara kahe gaye ye aakhri shabd mere dimag me gunj uthe aur tab...


MAI-FOCUS.....toh isiliye WOOGER ne wo sab kaha tha...


sirf ek hi chiz hogi mere paas yahan...mera focus... WOOGER ko ye achi tarah pata tha ki aisi situations mujhe pasand nahi hai..

aise haalaton par mujhe behad ghussa aata hai aur isiliye usne mujhe focus karne ko kaha...

par sawal tha ki kis chiz par focus...???

aur is sawal ke mere dimah me aate hi mere dimag me ek aur vichar aaya...

aur wo vichar related tha is scene se,is scene se pehle hue scene se aur is scene ke baad jo hone waala tha,us scene se...

aur wo vichar tha INTERCONNECTION....

in sabhi scenes ke beech ka interconnection.....

yahan aane ke baad mere brain ke paas jo bhi ho raha hai,us situation aur uske kaaran ke baare me bata diya tha jispar maine abhi tak dhyan nahi diya tha par ab jab ye interconnection waala thought mere dimag me ghuma toh....

maine sthithi ko samajhna shuru kiya...


SHADOW WORLD....jahan par ki is waqt mai hun aur ye scene chal raha hai....

par is jagah ka main base hai YELUPTUS.... YELUPTUS ke phase log jinhe SAMAY SANCHALAK kaha jaata hai,ye VIKRAM unhe bachane ke liye yahan aaya hai....

saath hi iske ek dost RONIT ki bandi bhi yahin par hai...usse bhi ye bachayega...

wo bandi jiske SOUL ko yahan rakha gaya hai par uski body YELUPTUS me hai...

toh VIKRAM in samay SANCHALAKON ko aur us ANJALI ko wahan YELUPTUS lekar jaayega...

is beech usse ek banda (ASMODEUS)rokne ke liye jaal pehle hi bicha chuka hai par is VIKRAM ke paas uska bhi kaat hai...

jitne scenes aur unme chuppi baatein mere brain me feed hui thi,un sab scenes ke baare me mera dimag sochne laga tha....

aur jab ye bichaye hue jaal ko kaatne ke baare me maine socha toh ek aur baat mujhe click hui par tabhi maine saamne dekha jahan filhal scene badla hua tha...

filhal mere saamne wahi chutiyaapa ho raha tha jisse mujhe sakht chidh thi...

wo RONIT aur ANJALI ek dusre se chipke ro rahe the...

ajeeb hote hai ye insaan,par inke aankhon se nikalne waale aansu toh saale inse bhi zyada ajeeb hote hain....

khushi me bhi tap tap...
aur gam me bhi tap tap....

ye sab dekh mera FOCUS ek baar firse dagmagane laga tha...

kisi tarah khud ko shaant rakh maine badhte hue scene ko dekha jisme is waqt VIKRAM sabko us ANJALI ke baare me bata raha tha jisse sun....


MAI-yahan aane se pehle hi VIKRAM ko yahan hone waali ghatnaon ke baare me pehle se pata tha...


ye SAMAY SANCHALAK toh yahan pehle se fase the,par ANJALI baad me aayi...

toh iska matlab is ANJALI ke liye hi VIKRAM ne ye sab plan kiya tha...???


khudse maine is sawal ko pucha tha jiske baad jo jawab mujhe mila, usse sun mujhe behad hairani hui...

darasal mere sawal ka jawab ye tha ki ANJALI ke chakkar me VIKRAM ne in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko nahi bachaya tha balki SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko bachane ke liye hi ANJALI ek bate ki tarah yahan fasayi gayi thi...

ANJALI ke rooh ka yahan fasna,fir SAMAY SANCHALAKON aur usse bachana,uske liye jo jaal is planet ke baahar bichaya gaya hai,usse todna,in sab chizon ki planning is VIKRAM ne pehle hi kar li thi...

GAZAB.....

zindagi me pehli baar mai kisise impressed hua tha...itni doordarshita,itni gehri soch aur har soch ko sach karne ki itni perfect timing ke hisaab se ki gayi planning....

ye banda haarta bhi tab tha jab wo haar uski permanent jeet ke liye zaroori ho.... brilliant...

aisi soch,maine pehle naa kabhi suni thi aur naa dekhi thi...

aur is bande ke ganit ko samajhne ke baad WOOGER ki kahi gayi us baat ka matlab bhi clear ho gaya tha jisme usne kaha tha ki ye chunouti meri pehli ki chunouti se alag hai...

mai us alag shabd ka matlab samajh gaya tha...darasal mujhe in chal rahe scenes me VIKRAM ke dwara kiye gaye kisi loop hole ko nahi dhundna hai aur wo isiliye kyunki is bande ka jiski doordarshita itni adhik ho,uske faislon me koi loop hole ho hi nahi sakta....

no chance....mujhe bas chal rahe scenes me kuch aisa dhoodna hai jisse meri kahani aage badh sake...

mujhe koi faayda ho...aur ye thi pate ki baat .

kyunki baat jab mere faayde ki ho toh mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun..kuch bhi......

aur isiliye bilkul shaant dimag se maine ek baar firse ho chuke scenes,chal rahe scenes aur aage hone waale scenes ke baare me sochne laga...

itna toh mai samajh chuka tha ki mere hisse me bas ye 5 hi scenes hain..

jinme se do khatm ho chuke the.. ANJALI ke saath VIKRAM and party wapas SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke paas jaa rahe the jo ki third scene tha...

fourth tha sabko yahan se lekar YELUPTUS jaana aur paanchva scene....

jahan VIKRAM in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haath me unki khoyi hui chiz,wo PARIVARTAK....

ek second....

paanchva scene...wo PARIVARTAK....


in saare scenes ke hone ka maine reason..in SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke yahan fasne ka main reason...

PARIVARTAK...

jaise hi maine us cheez ka naam liya...ek ke baad ek 2 chizen hui...


pehli...mere dimag me us chiz ki saari qualities ghoom gayi...

jisse jaan pata nahi kyun par mujhe aisa laga ki ye chiz mere kaam ki hai...

dusri...jaise hi mujhe ye laga ki wo PARIVARTAK mere kaam ka hai toh...

scene achanak se badal gaya..aur ab jo scene mere saamne tha, usse dekh mera doubt clear ho chuka tha..

mai jaan gaya tha ki maine jo socha hai,woh sahi hai aur ussi soch ko sach karna hi meri chunouti hai...

toh baat ye hai ki filhal mai YELUPTUS me tha....the last scene...aur mere saamne wahi scene chal raha tha jab VIKRAM SAMAY SANCHALAKON ko unki amanat wo PARIVARTAK dene waala tha...


MAI-maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi....aur haan,ye rakhiye...


SAMAY SANCHALAK jo abhi VIKRAM ke samman me jhuke hue the,isiliye VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi aur aisa kehne ke baad usne apna haath aage kar diya jisme is waqt PARIVARTAK tha...


uske aisa karte hi ek SAMAY SANCHALAK jo VIKRAM ke paas khada tha,usne PARIVARTAK ko lene ke liye haath aage badhaya par tabhi...


MAI-meri ek choti si shart hai...


haath ko band karte hue maine ye baat kahi....


MAINE....VIKRAM nahi, RAAZ....


ji haan doston,jaise hi is chunouti ka,is PARIVARTAK ka ganit mere samajh me aaya toh uske agle hi pal mera lock khul gaya jiski wajah se mai aur VIKRAM ab ek ho gaye the..

jiska matlab tha ki ab bhale hi sabke saamne VIKRAM tha, par bol mai raha tha...

wahin mere moothi band kar lene aur shart waali baat sunkar sabhi SAMAY SANCHALAK thode hairan hue par phir...


SAMAY SANCHALAK-hamari zindagi aapki rini hai...aapko humse kisi bhi shart ko rakhne ki aawashyakta nahi hai..

aap bas aadesh karen...

MAI-is PARIVARTAK ki wo urja jisse ye kaam karti hai,bhavishya me agar mujhse jude kisi shaksh ko uski zaroorat pade,toh aap usse wo de denge....

SAMAY SANCHALAK-jaisi aapki iccha...


SAMAY SANCHALAKON ke haan kehte hi maine apni band moothi khol di jiske baad us SAMAY SANCHALAK ne mere hatheli se us PARIVARTAK ko le liya aur aisa hote hi....


CHANNNN.....


jo pichli baar hua tha,wo ek baar fir hua...

ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir back to ground zero....

mai wapas ZEAL me tha par filhal mai kuch bhi dekhne ko haalat me nahi tha aur wo isiliye kyunki filhal mere sir pichle baar ke mukable 10 times zyada tezi se ghoom raha tha...

mujhe kuch zyada hi chakkar aa rahe the aur isiliye hi mai aakhen band kiye neeche zamin par baitha raha....

kuch time tak aisa hi raha par fir dheere dheere mai normal hone laga aur jab puri tarah control me aane ke baad maine saamne dekha toh halka hadbada gaya...

reason.....

mere just chehre ke saamne wo gola tha..mera SOUL jo lagatar hawa me rotate ho raha tha...

WOOGER gayab tha par fir bhi mai usse mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

us gole me....

kuch der tak us chamakte hue gole ki taraf dekhte rehne ke baad....


MAI-MAI TUMHE APNATA HUN...

KADKADKADKAD.........


bura bramhaand jaise ek akeli bijli ke kadkadane se kaamp gaya tha...

har planet ke mausam ka rookh jaise badal sa gaya..dead aur living...dono hi catagories me aane waale planets halke halke shake kar gaye the...

aur ye sab hua kyunki meri ijazat milne par wo gola aage badha aur mujhme sama gaya....aisa hote hi meri aankhen band ho gayi...

par mai mehsoos kar raha tha..zindagi me pehli baar mai feel kar raha tha..

apne sharir, apne khoon,apni dhamniyon ke andar ke khaali jagah ko bharta hua, mai mehsoos kar raha tha....

mujhe aisa mehsoos ho raha tha maano saalon ke banzar tapte hue zamin par kisine ek saath hazaron laakhon litres paani chhod diya ho...

wo sukoon jisse ab tak mehroom tha mai,wo jagah banati chali jaa rahi thi mere andar...

ye saare changes the internal..par in internal changes ke saath saath kuch external changes bhi hui thi mujhme..

aur wo ye ki jaise hi meri SOUL mujhme samayi aur meri aankhen band hui toh uske agle hi pal mera sharir hawa me uthne laga...

dekhte ho dekhte mere sharir ke upar ka kapda bhi change hone laga...

sabse pehle mere sharir ke chaaron taraf ek White AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere sharir ke andar sama gayi...

aisa hote hi mere sharir par lenin ka ek white robe aa gaya...uske baad us robe ke theek upar white AURA ki hi tarah ek Black AURA ne ghera banaya aur fir wo AURA mere white robe se hote hui mere sharir ke andar sama gayi..

par aisa karne ke dauran jab us black aura ne mere white robe ko chhua toh us robe ka colour light grey ho gaya jo ki white aur black ke mixture se banta hai....

aisa hone je baad dheere dheere mera sharir neeche aane laga aur fir jaise hi maine neeche zamin ko chhua toh...

meei aankhen khul gayi....

gehri kaali aankhen jinke side ke white layers kuch zyada hi white lag rahe the...

khair,jaise hi meri aankhen khuli toh ek aur cheez hui jo aaj se pehle tak kabhi nahi hui thi....

aur wo thi mere chehre par aayi smile....

ek aisi smile jisse agar koi dekhe toh khush ho jaaye par agar us smile ka matlab woh samajh len toh khade khade hi mar jaaye...

waise mere chehre par muskurahat bewajah nahi aayi thi..ye aayi thi saamne ke drishya ko dekh kar....

kyunki mere saamne is waqt ZEAL ka wahi CAVE tha jo ki mere yahan is planet ka aakhri padhav bhi tha.....

wo cave jiske andar rakhi thi wo chiz jisse paane ke chakkar me ek living planet dead planet me badal gaya tha....

jisse haasil karne ki chaah liye hue hi VIKRAM ki aatma is duniya se kooch kar gayi thi...

wo chiz jisse maine ab tak toh dekha nahi hai par wo hai meri..

aur jab maine ye kaha hai ki wo hai meri toh iska matlab hai ki wo hai meri...

khwahish meri us chiz ko paane ki isiliye nahi hai kyunki usse mere liye rakha gaya hai...

balki wo chiz meri isiliye honi chahiye kyunki uspar ek pure planet ka khoon chadha hai...

aur har wo chiz jisse jaan ka souda ho,wo meri milkiyat hai...mera possession hai...

kadam aage badhaye maine aur mere aisa karte hi us cave ke dwar par lage kawach ne ek second ke liye roka mujhe jaise meri ability ko check kar rahe hon...

par mere sharir ke layers ko chhune ke baad wo kawach,wo SHIELD hath gaye...

jaise ijazat de di hon mujhe andar jaane ki par mai aage nahi badha..

wahin khada raha...

reason....

ijazat nahi di thi maine us shield ko mujhe chhune ki,mujhe check karne ki...

mai saamne tha uske..usse mujhe mehsoos karte hi hat jaana chahiye tha par usne aisa kiya nahi...

aur ye MUJHE ACCHA NAHI LAGA...

meri aankhon ki putliyon ne us pure cave ke saamne ke hisse ko ghura aur unke aisa karte hi meri aankhon se ek tez beam nikal us gufe par padi aur aisa hoti hi...

BOOM........

ek behad tez dhamaka hua jisse har taraf dhuan dhuan ho gaya par jab kuch der baad dhuan halka sa chatta aur nazara thoda clear hua toh....

mere saamne ab koi gufa nahi thi...

wo GUFA jisme kisi shaktishali cheez ko rakha gaya tha,wo puri gufa baarik kankad me badal chuki thi...

meri nazar saamne hi tiki thi jahan kuch door par abhi bhi gehra dhuan tha par wo bhi dheere dheere chhat raha tha..

wo jagah us gufe ka aakhri chhor tha jahan wo CHIZ thi jisse mujhe lena tha...

mai us chiz ki shakti ko,usse uth rahe vibrations ko bohot ache mehsoos kar raha tha...

par filhal us dhuen ki wajah se maine us chiz ko ab tak dekha nahi tha..

par ye bas kuch seconds ki hi baat thi...aur wo seconds bhi aakhirkaar beet gaye....

dhuan chhatthe chhatthe chhat hi gaya aur jab aisa hua toh zindagi me dusri baar mere chehre par smile aa gayi...

reason....

meri yahan hone ki wajah,meri milkiyat,mera prized possession meri aankhon ke saamne chamak raha tha..


beintihan shakti sa labalab bhara hua LORD OF ANGEL KA........



..............SWORD.................









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......








AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Super fantastic update bhai
 
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