Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KE DIMAG ME KOI GHUSNE KO KOSHISH KARTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO ZEAL ME DO NAYI CHUNOUTIYAN MILTI HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-46



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS





KYA HUA MAHI...???TU ITNI KHOYI KHOYI KYUN LAG RAHI HAI....????


subah ka waqt hai..INSTITUTION jaa rahe hain MAHI aur ALFREEN...

jahan ALFREEN lagatar kisi naa kisi topic par kuch naa kuch bole jaa rahi thi wahin MAHI kuch puchne par bas hun,hmm,is tarah ke jawab hi de rahi thi woh bhi kabhi kabhi...

zyadatar toh wo bas saamne dekhte hue khudme khoyi hui aage badh rahi thi aur issi baat ko notice kar ALFREEN ne MAHI ke kandhe ko hilate hue ye sawal kiya tha jispar MAHI jaise kisi tandra se jaaagi aur...


MAHI-haan,kya hua???


ek dum se hosh me aate hue MAHI ne ye sawal kiya jispar...???


ALFREEN-tu bata ki tujhe kya hua hai...??mai kitni der se dekh rahi hun ki kahin khoyi hui si hai...???

MAHI-aisi toh koi baat nahi hai...??mai toh teri baatein hi sun rahi thi...

ALFREEN- MAHI,tu SAVENT bhale hi best haj par jhooth bolne ke maamle me tu worst hai...

isiliye bina baaton ko ghumaye chupchaap bata ki problem kya hai???

MAHI-chupchaap rahungi toh baat kaise karungi....????


ALFREEN ki baat sun mazak me MAHI ne ye kaha jispar...


ALFREEN-very funny..par funny hone ke aur bhi mouke milenge, isiliye filhal tu bas itna bata ki what's fishing..???

kis khayal me khoyi hui thi tu...??? what's disturbing you..???


MAHI ko maalum tha ki ALFREEN maanane waali toh thi nahi isiliye ek lambi saans chhod usne ALFREEN ko kal raat uske saath kya hua tha wo bata diya jisse sun ALFREEN bhi hairan ho gayi....


ALFREEN-you know agar aisa kuch hamare saath yahan aane se pehle hua hota toh mai bas isse ek brain illusion maanti..

ek dream dissorder jo kisike bhi saath ho sakta hai but this place is fucking insane...

yahan anything is possible...aur isiliye mujhe lagta hai ki hume tere kal raat aayi feelings ke base ko dhundna chahiye...

MAHI-aur ye hum karenge kaise.???

ALFREEN-sabse pehle toh hume is baat ke baare me VIOLET WHIZZ ko batana chahiye..i think wo hume proper guide karengi....

MAHI-ye khayal kar raat hi mere mind me aaya tha par somehow i feel ki isse koi faayda nahi hoga..

kyunki jo bhi hua,wo bas ek khayal tha jo mere dimag me aaya aur fir chala gaya...


WHIZZ ko batane ka faada tab hota jab wo situation unki aankhon ke saamne occour ho taaki wo usse sahi se samajh paayen...

ALFREEN-Yhmm..ye bhi hai...

MAHI-and you know what, actually mai WHIZZ ki help lena chahti hi nahi hun...

i want to face every problem all by myself...

mujhe khud apne problems ko handle bhi karna hai,unhe tackle bhi karna hai aur unhe harana bhi hai....


full confidence se kahi thi ye baa MAHI ne jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-wo toh thik hai MAHI par agar koi problem hamare bas ke baahar ki baat ho toh aise situation me help toh leni hi padti hai naa...

MAHI-agar situation,problem hadh se baahar ki hai toh sabse pehle hume usse apni hadh ke andar karna hai yaa fir apni hadh ko badhana hai...

aur issike liye hi toh hum hain yahan..is INSTITUTION me...to achieve the impossible...

ALFREEN-teri aaj ki baatein aisi hain jaise tu kisi competition me participate karne waali hai aur uske liye khud ko motivate kar rahi hai...


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI muskurayi aur...


MAHI-pata nahi yaar par kal mere 6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke baad ek alag hi energy doud rahi hai mere andar..

aur kal raat jab wo weird feeling mere brain ko ghere hue thi,tab bhi mujhe aisa laga jaise wo feeling mujhe challenge kar rahi hai aur fir jab us feeling ne mere brain ko chhoda toh aisa laga maano mai usse jeet gayi hun..

aur jab aisa hua toh mai bata nahi sakti ki mujhe kitna acha feel hua.....

ALFREEN-jab tujhe kal raat hue haadse ki koi chinta nahi hai toh fir thodi der pehle itni gehri soch me kyun khoyi hui thi tu...???

MAHI-arre mai toh bas kal ke pure wakiye ko analyze kar rahi thi..

soch rahi thi ki agar aisa kuch kabhi aur firse hua toh mujhe us situation ko kaise handle karna chahiye...???

ALFREEN-waah re teri soch.....maana tu hum sabse abhi aage hai par abhi hamara first PHASE khatm nahi hua hai..

toh agar sochna hi hai naa,toh apne next SOUL percentage ke AMPLIFICATION ke baare me soch...

aur usse bhi pehle ye soch ki hum aaj ki class ke liye late ho chuke hain..


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI ko bhi realize hua ki baaton baaton me wo dono late ho chuke hain..

aur ye realize karte hi shuru hua dono ka blame game jo karte hue wo dono CHOSEN'S ki taraf badh gaye....




PLANET-SEAL- THE SOUL


PLACE-THE DEAD SURFACE





KYA AAP JAANANA CHAHENGE KI YE DO NAAM KINKE HAIN...???INKE SWAMI ASAL ME HAIN KAUN...???


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS..wo do naam jinke life ke palon ko mujhe jeena tha aur un palon ko apne hisaab se mould karna tha,unke baare me pucha mujhse WOOGER ne jispar....


MAI-kya un dono ke baare me jaankar mujhe unke life ke palon ko jeene me kuch madad milegi...???

WOOGER-nahi...

MAI-toh kyun jaanu mai un dono ke baare me..???

WOOGER-jinke zindagi ke palon ko aapko jeena hai,kya unke baare me jaanane ki jigyasa nahi hai aapko..???

MAI-zindagi unki toh jigyasa meri kyun...??mujhe sirf unhi cheezon ki jigyasa rehti hai jisme mera faayda rehta hai...

isiliye ye faaltu ki baat chhodo aur mudde par aakar ye batao ki what's the catch...???is chunouti ka wo kaun sa hissa hai jo tumne abhi tak mujhe nahi bataya..???

WOOGER-bohot ache...mujhe bas aapki doordarshita dekhni thi..dekhna tha ki jo saamne hai usse toh aap dekh hi rahe hain,par jo chhupa hua hai,uspar aapka dhyan hai yaa nahi...

MAI-mudde par aa WOOGER.....


thodi kadak awaaz me maine ye baat kahi thi jisse sun us dhuen me jisse WOOGER ki awaaz aa rahi thi,usme halchal hui maano usse mere bolne ke tarike ko sun dar laga ho aur isiliye....


WOOGER-is chunouti ka asli pench,sabse badi rookawat hai EHSAAS....

ye wo bhaag jo aapki chunouti ko behad kathin banayega....

aur wo isiliye kyunki inme se jo bhi gola aapke andar samayega,aapka astitv us gole ke maalik ke adhin ho jaayega....

kehne ka matlab ye hai ki gole ke aapke andar samate hi aap aap nahi rahenge balki wo ho jaayenge jinki urja se ye gole bane hain...

aur aise me aapko jis bhi pal ko jeene hai aur saath me apne hisaab se sanchalit bhi karna hai,us pal me aap aap rahenge hi nahi....

aap wo ho jaayenge jinke wo pal honge..aapke brain,aapke body aur aapke blood par us kirdaar ka raaj hoga jisne originally wo pal jiye the..

yahan tak ki aapka wo bhaag jo filhaal aapke paas nahi hai,aapka SOUL,us bhaag me bhi us kirdaar ka ek temporary SOUL fit ho jaayega jisse aapki bhaavna bhi uske hisaab se chalegi....

aap puri tarah se us kirdaar ke ATTITUDE me DHAK jaayenge....

aur aapko ussi condition me us kirdaar ke palon ko yaa fir ye kahun ki kisi ek khaas pal ko apne hisaab se mould karna hai...

ab wo pal kya hai aur usse kaise mould karna hai,yahi aapki asli chunouti hai.....


ye chunouti kam suicide zyada lag rahi thi..jab mai mai hi nahi rahunga toh sanchalit kya ghanta karunga....

uske upar mere SOUL ka bhaag jo filhal khaali hai,uspar bhi kisi aur ka kabza hone waala tha...

aise negetive waqt par jahan haath aur pair baandhe nahi gaye hain balki kaat diye gaye hain,mujhe tairna tha...

par aage badhne ke alawa option nahi tha mere paas.. actually tha,par mujhe koi option chahiye hi nahi tha..

aur wo isiliye kyunki maine aaj tak kisi competition me bhaag nahi liya tha,kisi race me douda nahi tha par sirf isiliye kyunki mujhe koi competition,koi race apne standard ke barabar ka laga nahi tha par aaj jo chunouti mere saamne thi,wo thi mere takkar ki..

ek aisi chunouti jo mere INSTINCTS ko, mere confidence ko yahan tak ke mere existence tak ko challange kar rahi thi...

and i,like it....

MUJHE YE ACHA LAGA.....

aur isiliye...


MAI-shuru karen....????

WOOGER-aap bataiye,kisse..????

MAI-ASMODEUS


mere is naam ko chunte hi us naam ka gola tezi se meri taraf badha aur agle hi pal....


AHHHHH...AHHHH...AHHHH....AHHHH...AHHH.......AHHHHH...AHHHHHH.....

kaale andhere bramhand ke madhya float sa karta hua niche gir raha tha mai...

ASMODEUS....

PARMESHWAR PUTR....THE CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT....

par ab ye designation meri nahi thi....

kyunki abhi abhi is bramhaand ke raichaita,par usse pehle mere father GOD ne mujhe mere hi ghar HEAVEN se baahar fekh diya tha...

aur kaaran....

us gande,ghinoune,maamuli keede ki haisiyat rakhne waale manushya jaati ke liye...

ankhon me beintehaan krodh,tadap,bebasi liye HEAVEN ke darwaze se hota hua is kaale universe ke beech girta chala raha tha mai aur mere saath mere wo saath humsaaye jinhone har waqt,hat lamhe me mera saath diya tha...

mere SEVEN OPOSTLES...

jo karah bhari awaaz abhi abhi nikli thi,wo un saathon ki hi thi....

reason....

GODS THUNDER....wo jhatka jisse GOD ne mujhe aur mujhe support karne waale mere in SEVEN OPOSTLES ke upar chhoda tha...

ye koi maamuli thunder nahi tha...is thunder ke mujhe aur mere OPOSTLES ko lagte hi hamari designations humse chhin chuki thi...

naa mai ab CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT raha tha aur naahi mere OPOSTLES ANGELS....

is waqt mera dard aur mera ghussa itna zyada tha ki mujhe us THUNDER ke mere IMMORTAL sharir ko lagne ke baad jo taklif uthi,usse mai apne jabde bheeche zabt kar gaya par jaise hi us thunder ne mere SEVEN OPOSTLES ko chhua,toh unke mooh se cheekh nikal gayi.....

itna hi nahi,un sabke senses bhi kho gaye aur wo saathon behosh ho chuke the..

wahin mai us sharirik, maansik aur roohani dard ko jhelte hue kuch aur der tak shunya ko ghurta raha aur fir..


MAI-FATHER.....ek taraf tha mai...wo shakti jisse aapne apni urja se banaya,apni shakti se seencha aur apne saamrajya me bada kiya aur dusri taraf thi wo maanav jaati...

ek aisi prajati jisse banane ke liye aapki sirf ek soch hi kaafi thi...

ek taraf aapke hi kano se bana aapka IMMORTAL putr aur dusri taraf wo MORTAL manushya jinke astitv ke hone naa hone se koi fark nahi padta....

chunaaw kitna asaan tha..kitna saral...kitne ek paksh....

par aapne kya kiya,apne putr ki jagah manushya jaati ko chuna.... roshni ki jagah andhere ko chuna...

mai jaanta hun ki har pitah ko apne putr se ummiden hoti hain par ek putr ki bhi toh apne pitah se kuch aashayen hoti hain...

manushya jaati ki najane kitni hi galtiyan,apraadh aapne maine dekhe...

unke vinash ke mere har tark ko aap bas itna kehkar taalte gaye ki punya ke panapne ke liye paap ka hona bhi zaroori hai...

purnatah nirarthak vachan....

par koi baat nahi father....jo hua,acha hi hua...ye acha hi hai ki ab mai CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT nahi hun...

kyunki ab mai aapke aadhin nahi hun.... mujhe kuch bhi karne ke liye ab aapke ijaazat ko zaroorat nahi hai....

isiliye ab apni pyari maanav jaati ke sangrakshan hetu kawach bicha lijiye...

kyunki ab unpar waar ASMODEUS khulkar karega....

haan,shart ke mutaabik sidhe sidhe toh us jaati ka samuh naash mai nahi kar sakta par koi baat nahi...

hun toh aap hi ka putra..har sawal ka jawab,har pareshani ka hal nikal hi lunga...

aur sirf utna hi waqt hai aapke priya manushya jaati ke paas.....


behad zoron se chillate hue maine ye saari baatein kahi thi...mai jaanta tha ki bhale hi FATHER ne mujhe cast out kar diya hai par unki nazar har waqt mujhpar hai...

mujhe ye bhi pata tha ki meri soch aur mere faisle se wo achi taraf waakif hain aur zaroor uska hal bhi unhone nikal liya hoga par mai apne faisle par adig tha...

ye sab sochte hue kaafi der ho chuka tha.. mere saathon OPOSTLES bhi ab tak behosh the aur kyunki unhe GODS THUNDER ka jhatka laga tha, isiliye wo tab tak hosh me aane waale bhi nahi the,jab tak mai unki chetna nahi loutatha...

is waqt mere krodh aur meri bebasi ke beech ek aur chiz ho rahi thi jo mere liye thodi aascharyajanak thi aur wo ye ki GOD'S THUNDER se jo dard mujhe hua tha,wo ab tak kaayam tha...

aur ye koi sadharan baat nahi thi kyunki kitna bhi bada prahar mujhe ASMODEUS ko zyada der tak dard de nahi sakta tha...

par fir mujhe laga ki shayad CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ki meri upadhi ke chhin jaane ki wajah se mere self heal ka koi ansh kamzor padh gaya hai aur isiliye hi mujhe dard ho raha hai aur isiliye...


KAMURADHAWE

SELF HEAL


apne chaati ke madhya haath rakh maine is spell ko bola jiske baad mujhe ek halka sa jhatka laga par fir dheere dheere mera dard jaata raha...

dard ke jaaneke baad meri nazar ek disha me ghumi jahan ek tairta hua kaafi bada sa asteroid ghum raha tha...

us jagah ko dekhte hi mere sharir se 7 kirane nikal mere saathon OPOSTLES ko jaakar lagi aur aisa hote hi mai aur mere 7 OPOSTLES gayab hokar sidhe us asteroid par prakat hue....

asteroid par pair rakhte hi mere sharir se ek baar firse saath kirane nikli aur jaakar sidhe OPOSTLES se takrayi jiske kuch hi der baad un sabko hosh aa gaya...

hosh me aate hi kuch seconds lage un sabko pura maamla samajhne me par fir jab unhe yaad aaya ki unhe heaven se cast out kar diya gaya hai aur ab wo angels nahi rahe toh unhe bohot bura lagne laga...

un sabke sir jhuke hue the aur wo saathon chup the...mere OPOSTLES kabhi bhi mere saamne khudse baat nahi karte the...

unke mookh tabhi khulte the jab mai unse kuch puchta ya fir aadesh deta tha..

aur filhal mujhe un sabki manosthithi ke baare me pata tha isiliye....


MAI-agar tum saathon chaaho toh mujhe chhod kar jaa sakte ho....mujhe bura nahi lagega...


meri baat ko sun un sabke jhuke hue sir ek jhatke me upar uthe aur....


OPOSTLES-aap hamare aaradhya hai...aapke bina hamara astitv hi nahi hai...

ASMODEUS-ek baar firse soch lo..kyunki abtak tum sab Angels the...

mere saath saath GOD bhi tumhare taraf the par ab aisa nahi hoga...

ab wo mere saath nahi mere saamne khade honge ek pratidwandi ki tarah..

aise me tum sabka ye immortal state bhi khatre me padh sakta hai....

OPOSTLES-hum taiyar hain....aap aadesh karen ki hume kya karna hai???

MAI-hmm.... HEAVEN se cast out karne ke baad meri shakti ka ek hissa jo CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ki upadhi ki wajah se mujhe mila tha,wo ab chhin chuka hai aur isiliye sabse pehle mujhe apni shakti me izafa karna hai...

shakti ke us rikht sthaaan ko bharna hai.....aur isiliye mai chahta hun ki tum sab bramhaand ke har power source ki talash karo...

aisi shaktiyan dhundo jo mere dhaaran karne ke yogya ho...


USKI KOI ZAROOAT NAHI HAI....AGAR TUM CHAAHO TOH BRAMHAAND ME BASI SHAKTI KA SABSE BADA SHROTH TUMHE ABHI YAHIN MIL JAAYEGA....


mere aadesh par OPOSTLES kuch kehte,usse pehle hi mere piche se ye awaaz aayi jisse sun mai palta aur dekha ki mere saamne ek badi si kaali dhuen ki chaadar thi...

ek aisi chaadar jisse beintihan shakti ka sanchar ho raha tha...

mai jaanta tha ki ye kya hai aur isiliye...


MAI-BLACK ENERGY......


bramhaand ka wo kaala sach jisse naa chahte hue khud bramhaand ne banaya tha yaa fir ye kahun ki mere shatruon ne, manushyon ne....

maamuli se manushya jinki utpatti ke baad unke dwara kiye gaye paap se panpi ek aisi shakti jo waqt ke saath behad shaktishali ho chuki hai...

mere baad wo dusri aisi chiz jisse god khatm nahi kar sakte kyunki aisa karne ke liye unhe apni priya manushya jaati ki bhi kurbaani deni hogi....


wahi BLACK ENERGY jiska koi form nahi,mere saamne khadi thi....

wahin us black energy ko dekh mere saathon OPOSTLES bhi kaafi hairan ho gaye the aur saath hi wo ye baat samajh gaye the ki abhi utpann hui paristithi me BLACK ENERGY ka mere saamne prakat hona kisi anhoni ke hone ka sanket hai aur isiliye un saath OPOSTLES me se ek kuch bolne ko hua par maine usse feel kar liya tha aur isiliye maine apna haath upar kiya jiske baad wo OPOSTLE chup hi reh gaya..


(ATTITUDE PART ONE KE LAST UPDATE ME BLACK ENERGY KE AANE SE OPOSTLES KI NAAPASANDAGI KE BAARE ME BATAYA GAYA HAI)


MAI-kuch keh rahe the tum....???

BLACK ENERGY-ASMODEUS, GOD'S SON ko baatein samajhne ke liye un baaton ko sunana kabse zaroori ho gaya...

tum achi tarah jaante ho ki mai kya keh raha hun aur meri baaton ke fal se tum kya kuch haasil kar sakte ho..

tumhe tumhare apne hi pitah ne bedakhal kar diya hai....tumhari shakti ka ek bada hissa filhal tumhare paas nahi hai...

tum kamzor ho.. tumhe shakti ki zaroorat hai...par ek sach bhi hai ki bhale hi tum kitne hi shaktiyon ko prapt kyun naa kar lo,kintu tumhari shakti ka jo bhaag GOD ne tumse chhin liya hai,us shakti ke barabar ki shakti tum khudse haasil nahi kar sakte...

par meri madad se naa sirf tum us shakti ke barabar shakti prapt kar sakoge,balki pehle se kayi guna zyada shaktishaali bhi ban jaaoge...

itne shaktishaali ki fir tum jo chaho,kar sakoge...

MAI-sawal ye hai ki tum meri madad karna kyun chahte ho...??

kyunki mai toh manushya jaati ka anth chahta hun...wahi manushya jaati jinki wajah se tumme shakti aayi hai...tumhara ye adhura astitv bana hai...

aur agar maine aisa kar diya,toh inke saath saath tum bhi khatm ho jaaoge...

BLACK ENERGY-khatm toh mai waise bhi kisi naa kisi din ho hi jaaunga aur wo isiliye kyunki mera apna koi sampurn astitv nahi hai....

mai immortal bhi manushya jaati ke sahare hi hun...

agar manushya jaati khatm nahi bhi hui toh mujhe yakin hai GOD kisi naa kisi tarah mere astitv ko mitane ka tarika khoj hi lenge...

aur isiliye hi mujhe hamesha se kisi aise ki talash rahi hai jo naa sirf itna shaktishaali ho ki mujhe apna sake,balki wo IMMORTAL bhi ho...

aur tum me ye dono goon hain....agar tum mujhe apna lete ho toh mujhe ek sthayi astitv mil jaayega aur tumhe apaar shakti....


BLACK ENERGY ki baat sun maine uski baat ke baare me sochna shuru kiya wahin is waqt OPOSTLES ke man ki baat bhi mujhe sunayi de rahi thi jo ki BLACK ENERGY ke khilaaf thi...

par kuch der pehke mere apne father se mujhe jo dard mila tha wo itna zyada tha ki OPOSTLES ki soch filhal mere liye matter nahi karti thi....

wahin mujhe sochta dekh....


BLACK ENERGY-jis saude me har taraf se faayda ho uske baare me zyada socha nahi karte....

bina vilamb kiye mujhe apna lo..mera dhaaran karte hi tumhari shakti ka wo bhaag jo filhal khaali ho gaya hai,wo wapas bhar jaayega..

itna hi nahi, mujhe apnaate hi mai tumhe is bramhaand me chhupe aisi shakti ke baare me bataunga jiske baare me tum khud se kabhi nahi jaan paaoge...

aur ek baar tumne us shakti ko haasil kar liya toh tum pehle se bhi zyada shaktishaali ho jaaoge...

(black energy warriors world ke odridge mountain me chhupi shakti ke baare me baat kar raha hai...zyada jaanane ke liye part 1 ka wo part fir se padh len)


MAI-thik hai....mai tumhe dhaaran karne ke liye taiyar hun...

BLACK ENERGY-atti uttam...toh fir apne shairir aur apni aatma ko jodkar kaho ki..

MAI ASMODEUS APNE SHARIR AUR APNI AATMA KI HI TARAH BLACK ENERGY KO BHI APNA ATOOT ANG MAANTE HUE USSE APNATA HUN....

MAI-MAI ASMODEUS APNE SHARIR AUR APNI AATMA KI HI TARAH....

EK SECOND......


bolte bolte mai achanak rook gaya yaa fir ye kahun ki maine ASMODEUS ko aage bolne se rok diya...

mai matlab RAAZ....

jee haan doston....mai RAAZ jo kuch der pehle tak ASMODEUS ke rang me kuch aisa rang gaya tha ki mai bhul hi gaya tha ki mai ASMODEUS nahi RAAZ hun...

aur shayad mai is pure scene me,pal me ASMODEUS hi bana rehta par anjaane me hi sahi par ASMODEUS ne us parat ko khol diya jisme mai chhup gaya tha...

nahi samjhe,samjhata hun par uske liye thoda piche chalte hain...

aapko yaad hoga ki GODS THUNDER lagne ki wajah se THE SEVEN OPOSTLES ko dard hua tha aur wahi dard ASMODEUS ko bhi hua tha..

darasal wo dard ASMODEUS ko nahi balki uske andar chuppe mere astitv ko hua tha..

wo astitv jo us gole ke jo ASMODEUS ke jeeven ka pal tha,mujhme samate hi vilupt ho gaya tha par us jhakte ke lagte hi mera astitv ASMODEUS ke andar jaag gaya..

itna hi nahi,us GOD'S THUNDER ke lagne se mujhe hadh se zyada taklif bhi mehsoos hone lagi...

aisi taklif jiski wajah se mujhe yaad hi nahi raha ki mai filhal ek scene ka hissa hun...

par ek sach ye bhi tha ki filhal meri taklif ASMODEUS ki taklif thi aur isiliye jab usne us taklif se nijaat paane ke liye spell bola toh uske saath saath mujhe bhi dard se chhutkara mil gaya..

aur aisa hote hi meri buddhi jo ab tak ASMODEUS ke adhin thi,uspar thoda thoda hi sahi par mera control aane laga...

aur jab aisa hua toh maine apne chitt ko shant kar khudke dimag ke un bhaagon ko jo ab bhi ASMODEUS ke control me thi,unhe apni control me laane ko koshish karne laga...

is beech aage ka scene chalta raha...par fir jab BLACK ENERGY ASMODEUS ke saamne prakat hui aur usse khudko apnaane ke liye convince karne lagi tab mai badi dhyan se uski baat sun raha tha..

aur kyunki mai aur ASMODEUS filhal ek hi the isiliye apne pitah ke faisle ki wajah se uske dil me lagatar uth raha dard aur saath hi SEVEN OPOSTLES ke dimag ki soch jo ki BLACK ENERGY ke khilaaf thi, usse bhi mai mehsoos kar raha tha...

par aakhir me jab ASMODEUS ke raazi hone par BLACK ENERGY se usse ek specific sentence ko dohraane ke liye bola aur ASMODEUS ne bhi usse repeat karna shuru kiya toh maine ASMODEUS par control lete hue usse chup kara diya....


ab baari thi is ASMODEUS ke khamosh hone ki kyunki BLACK ENERGY ke saath deal bhale hi usne shuru ki thi par isse khatm mujhe karna tha aur isiliye...


MAI-mai tumhe aur tumhari shakiyon ko apne hith ke liye apnata hun....


BLACK ENERGY ko baat ko repeat naa karte hue maine apne hisaab se baat ki jispar.....


BLACK ENERGY-aise nahi..tumhe ye kehna ki MAI ASMODEUS APNE...

MAI-wo sun chuka hun mai....par wo baatein mai kahunga nahi....jo maine kaha hai,wahi sahi hai...


BLACK ENERGY ki baat ko kaat maine apni baat kahi jisse sun BLACK ENERGY chownka par fir baat ko sambhalne ke liye..


BLACK ENERGY-par jo maine kaha hai,usse dohrane se hi tumhe mera pura laabh mil sakta hai...

MAI-laabh toh milega par mujhe nahi tumhe...

BLACK ENERGY-mai samjha nahi...

MAI-itne nasamajh toh nahi ho sakte tum...khair samjhata hun...

meri body aur meri aatma,inki utpatti se hi meri utpatti hui thi...kehne ka matlab hai ki ye dono hi mera atoot hissa hain...

par tum nahi ho..aur jo tum mujhse bulwana chahte ho usse tum bhi in dono ki tarah hi mujhse jud jaaoge..

ek tarah se mai tumme badal jaaunga...mere body aur soul ke saath milkar tum mere swami ban jaaoge..

aur ye mai hone nahi de sakta..tum mere saathi ho sakte hi,mere maalik nahi...

agar tumhe mera sharir chahiye,toh tum isme....

EK KIRAYDAAR KI TARAH REH SAKTE HO,PAR ISS KHARID NAHI SAKTE....


CHAANNNN......


akhri line bolte hi ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir....


back to ground zero....

maine dekha ki mai wapas ZEAL me tha....

meri chunoutiyon waale dono golon me se ek gola gayab ho chuka tha aur ab mere saamne sirf ek gola tha...

mera dimag ghum raha tha aur issi wajah se maine kuch palon ke liye apni aakhen band ki aur fir jab mujhe kuch thik laga toh...

maine apni aakhen kholi aur mere aisa karte hi mere kaano me WOOGER ki awaaz gunj gayi....

WOOGER-pehli chunouti puri hui...ab baari hai dusri chunouti ki..


taiyar ho jaayiye apne agle safar ke liye jisme aap honge....VIKRAM......







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....






AAPKA APNA V...J......
 

Iron Man

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KE DIMAG ME KOI GHUSNE KO KOSHISH KARTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO ZEAL ME DO NAYI CHUNOUTIYAN MILTI HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-46



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS





KYA HUA MAHI...???TU ITNI KHOYI KHOYI KYUN LAG RAHI HAI....????


subah ka waqt hai..INSTITUTION jaa rahe hain MAHI aur ALFREEN...

jahan ALFREEN lagatar kisi naa kisi topic par kuch naa kuch bole jaa rahi thi wahin MAHI kuch puchne par bas hun,hmm,is tarah ke jawab hi de rahi thi woh bhi kabhi kabhi...

zyadatar toh wo bas saamne dekhte hue khudme khoyi hui aage badh rahi thi aur issi baat ko notice kar ALFREEN ne MAHI ke kandhe ko hilate hue ye sawal kiya tha jispar MAHI jaise kisi tandra se jaaagi aur...


MAHI-haan,kya hua???


ek dum se hosh me aate hue MAHI ne ye sawal kiya jispar...???


ALFREEN-tu bata ki tujhe kya hua hai...??mai kitni der se dekh rahi hun ki kahin khoyi hui si hai...???

MAHI-aisi toh koi baat nahi hai...??mai toh teri baatein hi sun rahi thi...

ALFREEN- MAHI,tu SAVENT bhale hi best haj par jhooth bolne ke maamle me tu worst hai...

isiliye bina baaton ko ghumaye chupchaap bata ki problem kya hai???

MAHI-chupchaap rahungi toh baat kaise karungi....????


ALFREEN ki baat sun mazak me MAHI ne ye kaha jispar...


ALFREEN-very funny..par funny hone ke aur bhi mouke milenge, isiliye filhal tu bas itna bata ki what's fishing..???

kis khayal me khoyi hui thi tu...??? what's disturbing you..???


MAHI ko maalum tha ki ALFREEN maanane waali toh thi nahi isiliye ek lambi saans chhod usne ALFREEN ko kal raat uske saath kya hua tha wo bata diya jisse sun ALFREEN bhi hairan ho gayi....


ALFREEN-you know agar aisa kuch hamare saath yahan aane se pehle hua hota toh mai bas isse ek brain illusion maanti..

ek dream dissorder jo kisike bhi saath ho sakta hai but this place is fucking insane...

yahan anything is possible...aur isiliye mujhe lagta hai ki hume tere kal raat aayi feelings ke base ko dhundna chahiye...

MAHI-aur ye hum karenge kaise.???

ALFREEN-sabse pehle toh hume is baat ke baare me VIOLET WHIZZ ko batana chahiye..i think wo hume proper guide karengi....

MAHI-ye khayal kar raat hi mere mind me aaya tha par somehow i feel ki isse koi faayda nahi hoga..

kyunki jo bhi hua,wo bas ek khayal tha jo mere dimag me aaya aur fir chala gaya...


WHIZZ ko batane ka faada tab hota jab wo situation unki aankhon ke saamne occour ho taaki wo usse sahi se samajh paayen...

ALFREEN-Yhmm..ye bhi hai...

MAHI-and you know what, actually mai WHIZZ ki help lena chahti hi nahi hun...

i want to face every problem all by myself...

mujhe khud apne problems ko handle bhi karna hai,unhe tackle bhi karna hai aur unhe harana bhi hai....


full confidence se kahi thi ye baa MAHI ne jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-wo toh thik hai MAHI par agar koi problem hamare bas ke baahar ki baat ho toh aise situation me help toh leni hi padti hai naa...

MAHI-agar situation,problem hadh se baahar ki hai toh sabse pehle hume usse apni hadh ke andar karna hai yaa fir apni hadh ko badhana hai...

aur issike liye hi toh hum hain yahan..is INSTITUTION me...to achieve the impossible...

ALFREEN-teri aaj ki baatein aisi hain jaise tu kisi competition me participate karne waali hai aur uske liye khud ko motivate kar rahi hai...


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI muskurayi aur...


MAHI-pata nahi yaar par kal mere 6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke baad ek alag hi energy doud rahi hai mere andar..

aur kal raat jab wo weird feeling mere brain ko ghere hue thi,tab bhi mujhe aisa laga jaise wo feeling mujhe challenge kar rahi hai aur fir jab us feeling ne mere brain ko chhoda toh aisa laga maano mai usse jeet gayi hun..

aur jab aisa hua toh mai bata nahi sakti ki mujhe kitna acha feel hua.....

ALFREEN-jab tujhe kal raat hue haadse ki koi chinta nahi hai toh fir thodi der pehle itni gehri soch me kyun khoyi hui thi tu...???

MAHI-arre mai toh bas kal ke pure wakiye ko analyze kar rahi thi..

soch rahi thi ki agar aisa kuch kabhi aur firse hua toh mujhe us situation ko kaise handle karna chahiye...???

ALFREEN-waah re teri soch.....maana tu hum sabse abhi aage hai par abhi hamara first PHASE khatm nahi hua hai..

toh agar sochna hi hai naa,toh apne next SOUL percentage ke AMPLIFICATION ke baare me soch...

aur usse bhi pehle ye soch ki hum aaj ki class ke liye late ho chuke hain..


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI ko bhi realize hua ki baaton baaton me wo dono late ho chuke hain..

aur ye realize karte hi shuru hua dono ka blame game jo karte hue wo dono CHOSEN'S ki taraf badh gaye....




PLANET-SEAL- THE SOUL


PLACE-THE DEAD SURFACE





KYA AAP JAANANA CHAHENGE KI YE DO NAAM KINKE HAIN...???INKE SWAMI ASAL ME HAIN KAUN...???


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS..wo do naam jinke life ke palon ko mujhe jeena tha aur un palon ko apne hisaab se mould karna tha,unke baare me pucha mujhse WOOGER ne jispar....


MAI-kya un dono ke baare me jaankar mujhe unke life ke palon ko jeene me kuch madad milegi...???

WOOGER-nahi...

MAI-toh kyun jaanu mai un dono ke baare me..???

WOOGER-jinke zindagi ke palon ko aapko jeena hai,kya unke baare me jaanane ki jigyasa nahi hai aapko..???

MAI-zindagi unki toh jigyasa meri kyun...??mujhe sirf unhi cheezon ki jigyasa rehti hai jisme mera faayda rehta hai...

isiliye ye faaltu ki baat chhodo aur mudde par aakar ye batao ki what's the catch...???is chunouti ka wo kaun sa hissa hai jo tumne abhi tak mujhe nahi bataya..???

WOOGER-bohot ache...mujhe bas aapki doordarshita dekhni thi..dekhna tha ki jo saamne hai usse toh aap dekh hi rahe hain,par jo chhupa hua hai,uspar aapka dhyan hai yaa nahi...

MAI-mudde par aa WOOGER.....


thodi kadak awaaz me maine ye baat kahi thi jisse sun us dhuen me jisse WOOGER ki awaaz aa rahi thi,usme halchal hui maano usse mere bolne ke tarike ko sun dar laga ho aur isiliye....


WOOGER-is chunouti ka asli pench,sabse badi rookawat hai EHSAAS....

ye wo bhaag jo aapki chunouti ko behad kathin banayega....

aur wo isiliye kyunki inme se jo bhi gola aapke andar samayega,aapka astitv us gole ke maalik ke adhin ho jaayega....

kehne ka matlab ye hai ki gole ke aapke andar samate hi aap aap nahi rahenge balki wo ho jaayenge jinki urja se ye gole bane hain...

aur aise me aapko jis bhi pal ko jeene hai aur saath me apne hisaab se sanchalit bhi karna hai,us pal me aap aap rahenge hi nahi....

aap wo ho jaayenge jinke wo pal honge..aapke brain,aapke body aur aapke blood par us kirdaar ka raaj hoga jisne originally wo pal jiye the..

yahan tak ki aapka wo bhaag jo filhaal aapke paas nahi hai,aapka SOUL,us bhaag me bhi us kirdaar ka ek temporary SOUL fit ho jaayega jisse aapki bhaavna bhi uske hisaab se chalegi....

aap puri tarah se us kirdaar ke ATTITUDE me DHAK jaayenge....

aur aapko ussi condition me us kirdaar ke palon ko yaa fir ye kahun ki kisi ek khaas pal ko apne hisaab se mould karna hai...

ab wo pal kya hai aur usse kaise mould karna hai,yahi aapki asli chunouti hai.....


ye chunouti kam suicide zyada lag rahi thi..jab mai mai hi nahi rahunga toh sanchalit kya ghanta karunga....

uske upar mere SOUL ka bhaag jo filhal khaali hai,uspar bhi kisi aur ka kabza hone waala tha...

aise negetive waqt par jahan haath aur pair baandhe nahi gaye hain balki kaat diye gaye hain,mujhe tairna tha...

par aage badhne ke alawa option nahi tha mere paas.. actually tha,par mujhe koi option chahiye hi nahi tha..

aur wo isiliye kyunki maine aaj tak kisi competition me bhaag nahi liya tha,kisi race me douda nahi tha par sirf isiliye kyunki mujhe koi competition,koi race apne standard ke barabar ka laga nahi tha par aaj jo chunouti mere saamne thi,wo thi mere takkar ki..

ek aisi chunouti jo mere INSTINCTS ko, mere confidence ko yahan tak ke mere existence tak ko challange kar rahi thi...

and i,like it....

MUJHE YE ACHA LAGA.....

aur isiliye...


MAI-shuru karen....????

WOOGER-aap bataiye,kisse..????

MAI-ASMODEUS


mere is naam ko chunte hi us naam ka gola tezi se meri taraf badha aur agle hi pal....


AHHHHH...AHHHH...AHHHH....AHHHH...AHHH.......AHHHHH...AHHHHHH.....

kaale andhere bramhand ke madhya float sa karta hua niche gir raha tha mai...

ASMODEUS....

PARMESHWAR PUTR....THE CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT....

par ab ye designation meri nahi thi....

kyunki abhi abhi is bramhaand ke raichaita,par usse pehle mere father GOD ne mujhe mere hi ghar HEAVEN se baahar fekh diya tha...

aur kaaran....

us gande,ghinoune,maamuli keede ki haisiyat rakhne waale manushya jaati ke liye...

ankhon me beintehaan krodh,tadap,bebasi liye HEAVEN ke darwaze se hota hua is kaale universe ke beech girta chala raha tha mai aur mere saath mere wo saath humsaaye jinhone har waqt,hat lamhe me mera saath diya tha...

mere SEVEN OPOSTLES...

jo karah bhari awaaz abhi abhi nikli thi,wo un saathon ki hi thi....

reason....

GODS THUNDER....wo jhatka jisse GOD ne mujhe aur mujhe support karne waale mere in SEVEN OPOSTLES ke upar chhoda tha...

ye koi maamuli thunder nahi tha...is thunder ke mujhe aur mere OPOSTLES ko lagte hi hamari designations humse chhin chuki thi...

naa mai ab CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT raha tha aur naahi mere OPOSTLES ANGELS....

is waqt mera dard aur mera ghussa itna zyada tha ki mujhe us THUNDER ke mere IMMORTAL sharir ko lagne ke baad jo taklif uthi,usse mai apne jabde bheeche zabt kar gaya par jaise hi us thunder ne mere SEVEN OPOSTLES ko chhua,toh unke mooh se cheekh nikal gayi.....

itna hi nahi,un sabke senses bhi kho gaye aur wo saathon behosh ho chuke the..

wahin mai us sharirik, maansik aur roohani dard ko jhelte hue kuch aur der tak shunya ko ghurta raha aur fir..


MAI-FATHER.....ek taraf tha mai...wo shakti jisse aapne apni urja se banaya,apni shakti se seencha aur apne saamrajya me bada kiya aur dusri taraf thi wo maanav jaati...

ek aisi prajati jisse banane ke liye aapki sirf ek soch hi kaafi thi...

ek taraf aapke hi kano se bana aapka IMMORTAL putr aur dusri taraf wo MORTAL manushya jinke astitv ke hone naa hone se koi fark nahi padta....

chunaaw kitna asaan tha..kitna saral...kitne ek paksh....

par aapne kya kiya,apne putr ki jagah manushya jaati ko chuna.... roshni ki jagah andhere ko chuna...

mai jaanta hun ki har pitah ko apne putr se ummiden hoti hain par ek putr ki bhi toh apne pitah se kuch aashayen hoti hain...

manushya jaati ki najane kitni hi galtiyan,apraadh aapne maine dekhe...

unke vinash ke mere har tark ko aap bas itna kehkar taalte gaye ki punya ke panapne ke liye paap ka hona bhi zaroori hai...

purnatah nirarthak vachan....

par koi baat nahi father....jo hua,acha hi hua...ye acha hi hai ki ab mai CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT nahi hun...

kyunki ab mai aapke aadhin nahi hun.... mujhe kuch bhi karne ke liye ab aapke ijaazat ko zaroorat nahi hai....

isiliye ab apni pyari maanav jaati ke sangrakshan hetu kawach bicha lijiye...

kyunki ab unpar waar ASMODEUS khulkar karega....

haan,shart ke mutaabik sidhe sidhe toh us jaati ka samuh naash mai nahi kar sakta par koi baat nahi...

hun toh aap hi ka putra..har sawal ka jawab,har pareshani ka hal nikal hi lunga...

aur sirf utna hi waqt hai aapke priya manushya jaati ke paas.....


behad zoron se chillate hue maine ye saari baatein kahi thi...mai jaanta tha ki bhale hi FATHER ne mujhe cast out kar diya hai par unki nazar har waqt mujhpar hai...

mujhe ye bhi pata tha ki meri soch aur mere faisle se wo achi taraf waakif hain aur zaroor uska hal bhi unhone nikal liya hoga par mai apne faisle par adig tha...

ye sab sochte hue kaafi der ho chuka tha.. mere saathon OPOSTLES bhi ab tak behosh the aur kyunki unhe GODS THUNDER ka jhatka laga tha, isiliye wo tab tak hosh me aane waale bhi nahi the,jab tak mai unki chetna nahi loutatha...

is waqt mere krodh aur meri bebasi ke beech ek aur chiz ho rahi thi jo mere liye thodi aascharyajanak thi aur wo ye ki GOD'S THUNDER se jo dard mujhe hua tha,wo ab tak kaayam tha...

aur ye koi sadharan baat nahi thi kyunki kitna bhi bada prahar mujhe ASMODEUS ko zyada der tak dard de nahi sakta tha...

par fir mujhe laga ki shayad CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ki meri upadhi ke chhin jaane ki wajah se mere self heal ka koi ansh kamzor padh gaya hai aur isiliye hi mujhe dard ho raha hai aur isiliye...


KAMURADHAWE

SELF HEAL


apne chaati ke madhya haath rakh maine is spell ko bola jiske baad mujhe ek halka sa jhatka laga par fir dheere dheere mera dard jaata raha...

dard ke jaaneke baad meri nazar ek disha me ghumi jahan ek tairta hua kaafi bada sa asteroid ghum raha tha...

us jagah ko dekhte hi mere sharir se 7 kirane nikal mere saathon OPOSTLES ko jaakar lagi aur aisa hote hi mai aur mere 7 OPOSTLES gayab hokar sidhe us asteroid par prakat hue....

asteroid par pair rakhte hi mere sharir se ek baar firse saath kirane nikli aur jaakar sidhe OPOSTLES se takrayi jiske kuch hi der baad un sabko hosh aa gaya...

hosh me aate hi kuch seconds lage un sabko pura maamla samajhne me par fir jab unhe yaad aaya ki unhe heaven se cast out kar diya gaya hai aur ab wo angels nahi rahe toh unhe bohot bura lagne laga...

un sabke sir jhuke hue the aur wo saathon chup the...mere OPOSTLES kabhi bhi mere saamne khudse baat nahi karte the...

unke mookh tabhi khulte the jab mai unse kuch puchta ya fir aadesh deta tha..

aur filhal mujhe un sabki manosthithi ke baare me pata tha isiliye....


MAI-agar tum saathon chaaho toh mujhe chhod kar jaa sakte ho....mujhe bura nahi lagega...


meri baat ko sun un sabke jhuke hue sir ek jhatke me upar uthe aur....


OPOSTLES-aap hamare aaradhya hai...aapke bina hamara astitv hi nahi hai...

ASMODEUS-ek baar firse soch lo..kyunki abtak tum sab Angels the...

mere saath saath GOD bhi tumhare taraf the par ab aisa nahi hoga...

ab wo mere saath nahi mere saamne khade honge ek pratidwandi ki tarah..

aise me tum sabka ye immortal state bhi khatre me padh sakta hai....

OPOSTLES-hum taiyar hain....aap aadesh karen ki hume kya karna hai???

MAI-hmm.... HEAVEN se cast out karne ke baad meri shakti ka ek hissa jo CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ki upadhi ki wajah se mujhe mila tha,wo ab chhin chuka hai aur isiliye sabse pehle mujhe apni shakti me izafa karna hai...

shakti ke us rikht sthaaan ko bharna hai.....aur isiliye mai chahta hun ki tum sab bramhaand ke har power source ki talash karo...

aisi shaktiyan dhundo jo mere dhaaran karne ke yogya ho...


USKI KOI ZAROOAT NAHI HAI....AGAR TUM CHAAHO TOH BRAMHAAND ME BASI SHAKTI KA SABSE BADA SHROTH TUMHE ABHI YAHIN MIL JAAYEGA....


mere aadesh par OPOSTLES kuch kehte,usse pehle hi mere piche se ye awaaz aayi jisse sun mai palta aur dekha ki mere saamne ek badi si kaali dhuen ki chaadar thi...

ek aisi chaadar jisse beintihan shakti ka sanchar ho raha tha...

mai jaanta tha ki ye kya hai aur isiliye...


MAI-BLACK ENERGY......


bramhaand ka wo kaala sach jisse naa chahte hue khud bramhaand ne banaya tha yaa fir ye kahun ki mere shatruon ne, manushyon ne....

maamuli se manushya jinki utpatti ke baad unke dwara kiye gaye paap se panpi ek aisi shakti jo waqt ke saath behad shaktishali ho chuki hai...

mere baad wo dusri aisi chiz jisse god khatm nahi kar sakte kyunki aisa karne ke liye unhe apni priya manushya jaati ki bhi kurbaani deni hogi....


wahi BLACK ENERGY jiska koi form nahi,mere saamne khadi thi....

wahin us black energy ko dekh mere saathon OPOSTLES bhi kaafi hairan ho gaye the aur saath hi wo ye baat samajh gaye the ki abhi utpann hui paristithi me BLACK ENERGY ka mere saamne prakat hona kisi anhoni ke hone ka sanket hai aur isiliye un saath OPOSTLES me se ek kuch bolne ko hua par maine usse feel kar liya tha aur isiliye maine apna haath upar kiya jiske baad wo OPOSTLE chup hi reh gaya..


(ATTITUDE PART ONE KE LAST UPDATE ME BLACK ENERGY KE AANE SE OPOSTLES KI NAAPASANDAGI KE BAARE ME BATAYA GAYA HAI)


MAI-kuch keh rahe the tum....???

BLACK ENERGY-ASMODEUS, GOD'S SON ko baatein samajhne ke liye un baaton ko sunana kabse zaroori ho gaya...

tum achi tarah jaante ho ki mai kya keh raha hun aur meri baaton ke fal se tum kya kuch haasil kar sakte ho..

tumhe tumhare apne hi pitah ne bedakhal kar diya hai....tumhari shakti ka ek bada hissa filhal tumhare paas nahi hai...

tum kamzor ho.. tumhe shakti ki zaroorat hai...par ek sach bhi hai ki bhale hi tum kitne hi shaktiyon ko prapt kyun naa kar lo,kintu tumhari shakti ka jo bhaag GOD ne tumse chhin liya hai,us shakti ke barabar ki shakti tum khudse haasil nahi kar sakte...

par meri madad se naa sirf tum us shakti ke barabar shakti prapt kar sakoge,balki pehle se kayi guna zyada shaktishaali bhi ban jaaoge...

itne shaktishaali ki fir tum jo chaho,kar sakoge...

MAI-sawal ye hai ki tum meri madad karna kyun chahte ho...??

kyunki mai toh manushya jaati ka anth chahta hun...wahi manushya jaati jinki wajah se tumme shakti aayi hai...tumhara ye adhura astitv bana hai...

aur agar maine aisa kar diya,toh inke saath saath tum bhi khatm ho jaaoge...

BLACK ENERGY-khatm toh mai waise bhi kisi naa kisi din ho hi jaaunga aur wo isiliye kyunki mera apna koi sampurn astitv nahi hai....

mai immortal bhi manushya jaati ke sahare hi hun...

agar manushya jaati khatm nahi bhi hui toh mujhe yakin hai GOD kisi naa kisi tarah mere astitv ko mitane ka tarika khoj hi lenge...

aur isiliye hi mujhe hamesha se kisi aise ki talash rahi hai jo naa sirf itna shaktishaali ho ki mujhe apna sake,balki wo IMMORTAL bhi ho...

aur tum me ye dono goon hain....agar tum mujhe apna lete ho toh mujhe ek sthayi astitv mil jaayega aur tumhe apaar shakti....


BLACK ENERGY ki baat sun maine uski baat ke baare me sochna shuru kiya wahin is waqt OPOSTLES ke man ki baat bhi mujhe sunayi de rahi thi jo ki BLACK ENERGY ke khilaaf thi...

par kuch der pehke mere apne father se mujhe jo dard mila tha wo itna zyada tha ki OPOSTLES ki soch filhal mere liye matter nahi karti thi....

wahin mujhe sochta dekh....


BLACK ENERGY-jis saude me har taraf se faayda ho uske baare me zyada socha nahi karte....

bina vilamb kiye mujhe apna lo..mera dhaaran karte hi tumhari shakti ka wo bhaag jo filhal khaali ho gaya hai,wo wapas bhar jaayega..

itna hi nahi, mujhe apnaate hi mai tumhe is bramhaand me chhupe aisi shakti ke baare me bataunga jiske baare me tum khud se kabhi nahi jaan paaoge...

aur ek baar tumne us shakti ko haasil kar liya toh tum pehle se bhi zyada shaktishaali ho jaaoge...

(black energy warriors world ke odridge mountain me chhupi shakti ke baare me baat kar raha hai...zyada jaanane ke liye part 1 ka wo part fir se padh len)


MAI-thik hai....mai tumhe dhaaran karne ke liye taiyar hun...

BLACK ENERGY-atti uttam...toh fir apne shairir aur apni aatma ko jodkar kaho ki..

MAI ASMODEUS APNE SHARIR AUR APNI AATMA KI HI TARAH BLACK ENERGY KO BHI APNA ATOOT ANG MAANTE HUE USSE APNATA HUN....

MAI-MAI ASMODEUS APNE SHARIR AUR APNI AATMA KI HI TARAH....

EK SECOND......


bolte bolte mai achanak rook gaya yaa fir ye kahun ki maine ASMODEUS ko aage bolne se rok diya...

mai matlab RAAZ....

jee haan doston....mai RAAZ jo kuch der pehle tak ASMODEUS ke rang me kuch aisa rang gaya tha ki mai bhul hi gaya tha ki mai ASMODEUS nahi RAAZ hun...

aur shayad mai is pure scene me,pal me ASMODEUS hi bana rehta par anjaane me hi sahi par ASMODEUS ne us parat ko khol diya jisme mai chhup gaya tha...

nahi samjhe,samjhata hun par uske liye thoda piche chalte hain...

aapko yaad hoga ki GODS THUNDER lagne ki wajah se THE SEVEN OPOSTLES ko dard hua tha aur wahi dard ASMODEUS ko bhi hua tha..

darasal wo dard ASMODEUS ko nahi balki uske andar chuppe mere astitv ko hua tha..

wo astitv jo us gole ke jo ASMODEUS ke jeeven ka pal tha,mujhme samate hi vilupt ho gaya tha par us jhakte ke lagte hi mera astitv ASMODEUS ke andar jaag gaya..

itna hi nahi,us GOD'S THUNDER ke lagne se mujhe hadh se zyada taklif bhi mehsoos hone lagi...

aisi taklif jiski wajah se mujhe yaad hi nahi raha ki mai filhal ek scene ka hissa hun...

par ek sach ye bhi tha ki filhal meri taklif ASMODEUS ki taklif thi aur isiliye jab usne us taklif se nijaat paane ke liye spell bola toh uske saath saath mujhe bhi dard se chhutkara mil gaya..

aur aisa hote hi meri buddhi jo ab tak ASMODEUS ke adhin thi,uspar thoda thoda hi sahi par mera control aane laga...

aur jab aisa hua toh maine apne chitt ko shant kar khudke dimag ke un bhaagon ko jo ab bhi ASMODEUS ke control me thi,unhe apni control me laane ko koshish karne laga...

is beech aage ka scene chalta raha...par fir jab BLACK ENERGY ASMODEUS ke saamne prakat hui aur usse khudko apnaane ke liye convince karne lagi tab mai badi dhyan se uski baat sun raha tha..

aur kyunki mai aur ASMODEUS filhal ek hi the isiliye apne pitah ke faisle ki wajah se uske dil me lagatar uth raha dard aur saath hi SEVEN OPOSTLES ke dimag ki soch jo ki BLACK ENERGY ke khilaaf thi, usse bhi mai mehsoos kar raha tha...

par aakhir me jab ASMODEUS ke raazi hone par BLACK ENERGY se usse ek specific sentence ko dohraane ke liye bola aur ASMODEUS ne bhi usse repeat karna shuru kiya toh maine ASMODEUS par control lete hue usse chup kara diya....


ab baari thi is ASMODEUS ke khamosh hone ki kyunki BLACK ENERGY ke saath deal bhale hi usne shuru ki thi par isse khatm mujhe karna tha aur isiliye...


MAI-mai tumhe aur tumhari shakiyon ko apne hith ke liye apnata hun....


BLACK ENERGY ko baat ko repeat naa karte hue maine apne hisaab se baat ki jispar.....


BLACK ENERGY-aise nahi..tumhe ye kehna ki MAI ASMODEUS APNE...

MAI-wo sun chuka hun mai....par wo baatein mai kahunga nahi....jo maine kaha hai,wahi sahi hai...


BLACK ENERGY ki baat ko kaat maine apni baat kahi jisse sun BLACK ENERGY chownka par fir baat ko sambhalne ke liye..


BLACK ENERGY-par jo maine kaha hai,usse dohrane se hi tumhe mera pura laabh mil sakta hai...

MAI-laabh toh milega par mujhe nahi tumhe...

BLACK ENERGY-mai samjha nahi...

MAI-itne nasamajh toh nahi ho sakte tum...khair samjhata hun...

meri body aur meri aatma,inki utpatti se hi meri utpatti hui thi...kehne ka matlab hai ki ye dono hi mera atoot hissa hain...

par tum nahi ho..aur jo tum mujhse bulwana chahte ho usse tum bhi in dono ki tarah hi mujhse jud jaaoge..

ek tarah se mai tumme badal jaaunga...mere body aur soul ke saath milkar tum mere swami ban jaaoge..

aur ye mai hone nahi de sakta..tum mere saathi ho sakte hi,mere maalik nahi...

agar tumhe mera sharir chahiye,toh tum isme....

EK KIRAYDAAR KI TARAH REH SAKTE HO,PAR ISS KHARID NAHI SAKTE....


CHAANNNN......


akhri line bolte hi ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir....


back to ground zero....

maine dekha ki mai wapas ZEAL me tha....

meri chunoutiyon waale dono golon me se ek gola gayab ho chuka tha aur ab mere saamne sirf ek gola tha...

mera dimag ghum raha tha aur issi wajah se maine kuch palon ke liye apni aakhen band ki aur fir jab mujhe kuch thik laga toh...

maine apni aakhen kholi aur mere aisa karte hi mere kaano me WOOGER ki awaaz gunj gayi....

WOOGER-pehli chunouti puri hui...ab baari hai dusri chunouti ki..


taiyar ho jaayiye apne agle safar ke liye jisme aap honge....VIKRAM......







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V...J......
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Superb update brother. Kaha se shuru karu kuch smjh nahi aa raha h story n kuch to aisa choro ki uske baare n kucv likha jaye. Din prati din story itni kamal hoti ja rahi h ki tareef k lie shabd hi nahi milte. Ek baar apse jarur milunga janna h mujhe ki akhir kis tarah se ye pura plot ready karte ho kaha se aata h aisa soch aur drishtikon. Maine sapne me v nahi socha tha ki ASMODEUS ki iss galti ko raaz ujagar karega. Maine socha tha ki manushya jati se prem wala matter saltayega. Hint to apne 1st part k diya j but smjh nahi paya. Sahi bhi hai 7on k mana karne k bawjud ASMODEUS ne black energy ko apna sab kucg saup diya yahi uski pehli galti thi aur aage ki sari story usi ko sudharne k lie likhi gayi. Ek chota sa sawal h aur usse apki story ko fark v nahi padega to pls ans de dena. Av clear hua h ki wo line bol k ASMODEUS ne apni aatma tak girvi rakh di matlav black energy maalik ban gya ASMODEUS ka fr usne Black energy ko harane k lie VJ ko jagah jagah pe madad yani wo sab kaise chore uski apni buddhi ya dimag kab kaise kyu...... Mahi ka attitude v kamal ka h bachpan se chunauti se khelte khelte sab kuch khud h dum pe sambhal rahi h pkka wo bahut aage jayegi...... Dekhna h ab VIKRAM ki life m kya change karta h mujhe to wo jis scene m curious pe uske upar humla hua tha usi scene pe doubt h but still dekhte h aage kya hota h. Pls post asap.

Eagerly waiting for next update brother ????
 

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bahut hi Gajab updates are bhai apna Raj Bataun Kitna deeply Samajhta Hai Lekin vah to Ek kirdar Hi Hai Bus asali Kahani likhane wale aap Hai yani Ki vah Raj Jo is Kahani Mein Ek kirdar hai vah aap khud Hain isliye main yah Kahana chahta hun ki aapki banae hue is Kahani mein aap Kitni gehri aur Kitni Jyada research Karke yah story aap likhe Ho uske liye aapke pass Ko Jitna Bhi sarahah Jaaye utna hi kam hai aur Kitni acchi Kahani likhane ke liye aapko Ek thanks to Banta hi hai thanks bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KE DIMAG ME KOI GHUSNE KO KOSHISH KARTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO ZEAL ME DO NAYI CHUNOUTIYAN MILTI HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-46



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS





KYA HUA MAHI...???TU ITNI KHOYI KHOYI KYUN LAG RAHI HAI....????


subah ka waqt hai..INSTITUTION jaa rahe hain MAHI aur ALFREEN...

jahan ALFREEN lagatar kisi naa kisi topic par kuch naa kuch bole jaa rahi thi wahin MAHI kuch puchne par bas hun,hmm,is tarah ke jawab hi de rahi thi woh bhi kabhi kabhi...

zyadatar toh wo bas saamne dekhte hue khudme khoyi hui aage badh rahi thi aur issi baat ko notice kar ALFREEN ne MAHI ke kandhe ko hilate hue ye sawal kiya tha jispar MAHI jaise kisi tandra se jaaagi aur...


MAHI-haan,kya hua???


ek dum se hosh me aate hue MAHI ne ye sawal kiya jispar...???


ALFREEN-tu bata ki tujhe kya hua hai...??mai kitni der se dekh rahi hun ki kahin khoyi hui si hai...???

MAHI-aisi toh koi baat nahi hai...??mai toh teri baatein hi sun rahi thi...

ALFREEN- MAHI,tu SAVENT bhale hi best haj par jhooth bolne ke maamle me tu worst hai...

isiliye bina baaton ko ghumaye chupchaap bata ki problem kya hai???

MAHI-chupchaap rahungi toh baat kaise karungi....????


ALFREEN ki baat sun mazak me MAHI ne ye kaha jispar...


ALFREEN-very funny..par funny hone ke aur bhi mouke milenge, isiliye filhal tu bas itna bata ki what's fishing..???

kis khayal me khoyi hui thi tu...??? what's disturbing you..???


MAHI ko maalum tha ki ALFREEN maanane waali toh thi nahi isiliye ek lambi saans chhod usne ALFREEN ko kal raat uske saath kya hua tha wo bata diya jisse sun ALFREEN bhi hairan ho gayi....


ALFREEN-you know agar aisa kuch hamare saath yahan aane se pehle hua hota toh mai bas isse ek brain illusion maanti..

ek dream dissorder jo kisike bhi saath ho sakta hai but this place is fucking insane...

yahan anything is possible...aur isiliye mujhe lagta hai ki hume tere kal raat aayi feelings ke base ko dhundna chahiye...

MAHI-aur ye hum karenge kaise.???

ALFREEN-sabse pehle toh hume is baat ke baare me VIOLET WHIZZ ko batana chahiye..i think wo hume proper guide karengi....

MAHI-ye khayal kar raat hi mere mind me aaya tha par somehow i feel ki isse koi faayda nahi hoga..

kyunki jo bhi hua,wo bas ek khayal tha jo mere dimag me aaya aur fir chala gaya...


WHIZZ ko batane ka faada tab hota jab wo situation unki aankhon ke saamne occour ho taaki wo usse sahi se samajh paayen...

ALFREEN-Yhmm..ye bhi hai...

MAHI-and you know what, actually mai WHIZZ ki help lena chahti hi nahi hun...

i want to face every problem all by myself...

mujhe khud apne problems ko handle bhi karna hai,unhe tackle bhi karna hai aur unhe harana bhi hai....


full confidence se kahi thi ye baa MAHI ne jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-wo toh thik hai MAHI par agar koi problem hamare bas ke baahar ki baat ho toh aise situation me help toh leni hi padti hai naa...

MAHI-agar situation,problem hadh se baahar ki hai toh sabse pehle hume usse apni hadh ke andar karna hai yaa fir apni hadh ko badhana hai...

aur issike liye hi toh hum hain yahan..is INSTITUTION me...to achieve the impossible...

ALFREEN-teri aaj ki baatein aisi hain jaise tu kisi competition me participate karne waali hai aur uske liye khud ko motivate kar rahi hai...


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI muskurayi aur...


MAHI-pata nahi yaar par kal mere 6 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke baad ek alag hi energy doud rahi hai mere andar..

aur kal raat jab wo weird feeling mere brain ko ghere hue thi,tab bhi mujhe aisa laga jaise wo feeling mujhe challenge kar rahi hai aur fir jab us feeling ne mere brain ko chhoda toh aisa laga maano mai usse jeet gayi hun..

aur jab aisa hua toh mai bata nahi sakti ki mujhe kitna acha feel hua.....

ALFREEN-jab tujhe kal raat hue haadse ki koi chinta nahi hai toh fir thodi der pehle itni gehri soch me kyun khoyi hui thi tu...???

MAHI-arre mai toh bas kal ke pure wakiye ko analyze kar rahi thi..

soch rahi thi ki agar aisa kuch kabhi aur firse hua toh mujhe us situation ko kaise handle karna chahiye...???

ALFREEN-waah re teri soch.....maana tu hum sabse abhi aage hai par abhi hamara first PHASE khatm nahi hua hai..

toh agar sochna hi hai naa,toh apne next SOUL percentage ke AMPLIFICATION ke baare me soch...

aur usse bhi pehle ye soch ki hum aaj ki class ke liye late ho chuke hain..


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI ko bhi realize hua ki baaton baaton me wo dono late ho chuke hain..

aur ye realize karte hi shuru hua dono ka blame game jo karte hue wo dono CHOSEN'S ki taraf badh gaye....




PLANET-SEAL- THE SOUL


PLACE-THE DEAD SURFACE





KYA AAP JAANANA CHAHENGE KI YE DO NAAM KINKE HAIN...???INKE SWAMI ASAL ME HAIN KAUN...???


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS..wo do naam jinke life ke palon ko mujhe jeena tha aur un palon ko apne hisaab se mould karna tha,unke baare me pucha mujhse WOOGER ne jispar....


MAI-kya un dono ke baare me jaankar mujhe unke life ke palon ko jeene me kuch madad milegi...???

WOOGER-nahi...

MAI-toh kyun jaanu mai un dono ke baare me..???

WOOGER-jinke zindagi ke palon ko aapko jeena hai,kya unke baare me jaanane ki jigyasa nahi hai aapko..???

MAI-zindagi unki toh jigyasa meri kyun...??mujhe sirf unhi cheezon ki jigyasa rehti hai jisme mera faayda rehta hai...

isiliye ye faaltu ki baat chhodo aur mudde par aakar ye batao ki what's the catch...???is chunouti ka wo kaun sa hissa hai jo tumne abhi tak mujhe nahi bataya..???

WOOGER-bohot ache...mujhe bas aapki doordarshita dekhni thi..dekhna tha ki jo saamne hai usse toh aap dekh hi rahe hain,par jo chhupa hua hai,uspar aapka dhyan hai yaa nahi...

MAI-mudde par aa WOOGER.....


thodi kadak awaaz me maine ye baat kahi thi jisse sun us dhuen me jisse WOOGER ki awaaz aa rahi thi,usme halchal hui maano usse mere bolne ke tarike ko sun dar laga ho aur isiliye....


WOOGER-is chunouti ka asli pench,sabse badi rookawat hai EHSAAS....

ye wo bhaag jo aapki chunouti ko behad kathin banayega....

aur wo isiliye kyunki inme se jo bhi gola aapke andar samayega,aapka astitv us gole ke maalik ke adhin ho jaayega....

kehne ka matlab ye hai ki gole ke aapke andar samate hi aap aap nahi rahenge balki wo ho jaayenge jinki urja se ye gole bane hain...

aur aise me aapko jis bhi pal ko jeene hai aur saath me apne hisaab se sanchalit bhi karna hai,us pal me aap aap rahenge hi nahi....

aap wo ho jaayenge jinke wo pal honge..aapke brain,aapke body aur aapke blood par us kirdaar ka raaj hoga jisne originally wo pal jiye the..

yahan tak ki aapka wo bhaag jo filhaal aapke paas nahi hai,aapka SOUL,us bhaag me bhi us kirdaar ka ek temporary SOUL fit ho jaayega jisse aapki bhaavna bhi uske hisaab se chalegi....

aap puri tarah se us kirdaar ke ATTITUDE me DHAK jaayenge....

aur aapko ussi condition me us kirdaar ke palon ko yaa fir ye kahun ki kisi ek khaas pal ko apne hisaab se mould karna hai...

ab wo pal kya hai aur usse kaise mould karna hai,yahi aapki asli chunouti hai.....


ye chunouti kam suicide zyada lag rahi thi..jab mai mai hi nahi rahunga toh sanchalit kya ghanta karunga....

uske upar mere SOUL ka bhaag jo filhal khaali hai,uspar bhi kisi aur ka kabza hone waala tha...

aise negetive waqt par jahan haath aur pair baandhe nahi gaye hain balki kaat diye gaye hain,mujhe tairna tha...

par aage badhne ke alawa option nahi tha mere paas.. actually tha,par mujhe koi option chahiye hi nahi tha..

aur wo isiliye kyunki maine aaj tak kisi competition me bhaag nahi liya tha,kisi race me douda nahi tha par sirf isiliye kyunki mujhe koi competition,koi race apne standard ke barabar ka laga nahi tha par aaj jo chunouti mere saamne thi,wo thi mere takkar ki..

ek aisi chunouti jo mere INSTINCTS ko, mere confidence ko yahan tak ke mere existence tak ko challange kar rahi thi...

and i,like it....

MUJHE YE ACHA LAGA.....

aur isiliye...


MAI-shuru karen....????

WOOGER-aap bataiye,kisse..????

MAI-ASMODEUS


mere is naam ko chunte hi us naam ka gola tezi se meri taraf badha aur agle hi pal....


AHHHHH...AHHHH...AHHHH....AHHHH...AHHH.......AHHHHH...AHHHHHH.....

kaale andhere bramhand ke madhya float sa karta hua niche gir raha tha mai...

ASMODEUS....

PARMESHWAR PUTR....THE CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT....

par ab ye designation meri nahi thi....

kyunki abhi abhi is bramhaand ke raichaita,par usse pehle mere father GOD ne mujhe mere hi ghar HEAVEN se baahar fekh diya tha...

aur kaaran....

us gande,ghinoune,maamuli keede ki haisiyat rakhne waale manushya jaati ke liye...

ankhon me beintehaan krodh,tadap,bebasi liye HEAVEN ke darwaze se hota hua is kaale universe ke beech girta chala raha tha mai aur mere saath mere wo saath humsaaye jinhone har waqt,hat lamhe me mera saath diya tha...

mere SEVEN OPOSTLES...

jo karah bhari awaaz abhi abhi nikli thi,wo un saathon ki hi thi....

reason....

GODS THUNDER....wo jhatka jisse GOD ne mujhe aur mujhe support karne waale mere in SEVEN OPOSTLES ke upar chhoda tha...

ye koi maamuli thunder nahi tha...is thunder ke mujhe aur mere OPOSTLES ko lagte hi hamari designations humse chhin chuki thi...

naa mai ab CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT raha tha aur naahi mere OPOSTLES ANGELS....

is waqt mera dard aur mera ghussa itna zyada tha ki mujhe us THUNDER ke mere IMMORTAL sharir ko lagne ke baad jo taklif uthi,usse mai apne jabde bheeche zabt kar gaya par jaise hi us thunder ne mere SEVEN OPOSTLES ko chhua,toh unke mooh se cheekh nikal gayi.....

itna hi nahi,un sabke senses bhi kho gaye aur wo saathon behosh ho chuke the..

wahin mai us sharirik, maansik aur roohani dard ko jhelte hue kuch aur der tak shunya ko ghurta raha aur fir..


MAI-FATHER.....ek taraf tha mai...wo shakti jisse aapne apni urja se banaya,apni shakti se seencha aur apne saamrajya me bada kiya aur dusri taraf thi wo maanav jaati...

ek aisi prajati jisse banane ke liye aapki sirf ek soch hi kaafi thi...

ek taraf aapke hi kano se bana aapka IMMORTAL putr aur dusri taraf wo MORTAL manushya jinke astitv ke hone naa hone se koi fark nahi padta....

chunaaw kitna asaan tha..kitna saral...kitne ek paksh....

par aapne kya kiya,apne putr ki jagah manushya jaati ko chuna.... roshni ki jagah andhere ko chuna...

mai jaanta hun ki har pitah ko apne putr se ummiden hoti hain par ek putr ki bhi toh apne pitah se kuch aashayen hoti hain...

manushya jaati ki najane kitni hi galtiyan,apraadh aapne maine dekhe...

unke vinash ke mere har tark ko aap bas itna kehkar taalte gaye ki punya ke panapne ke liye paap ka hona bhi zaroori hai...

purnatah nirarthak vachan....

par koi baat nahi father....jo hua,acha hi hua...ye acha hi hai ki ab mai CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT nahi hun...

kyunki ab mai aapke aadhin nahi hun.... mujhe kuch bhi karne ke liye ab aapke ijaazat ko zaroorat nahi hai....

isiliye ab apni pyari maanav jaati ke sangrakshan hetu kawach bicha lijiye...

kyunki ab unpar waar ASMODEUS khulkar karega....

haan,shart ke mutaabik sidhe sidhe toh us jaati ka samuh naash mai nahi kar sakta par koi baat nahi...

hun toh aap hi ka putra..har sawal ka jawab,har pareshani ka hal nikal hi lunga...

aur sirf utna hi waqt hai aapke priya manushya jaati ke paas.....


behad zoron se chillate hue maine ye saari baatein kahi thi...mai jaanta tha ki bhale hi FATHER ne mujhe cast out kar diya hai par unki nazar har waqt mujhpar hai...

mujhe ye bhi pata tha ki meri soch aur mere faisle se wo achi taraf waakif hain aur zaroor uska hal bhi unhone nikal liya hoga par mai apne faisle par adig tha...

ye sab sochte hue kaafi der ho chuka tha.. mere saathon OPOSTLES bhi ab tak behosh the aur kyunki unhe GODS THUNDER ka jhatka laga tha, isiliye wo tab tak hosh me aane waale bhi nahi the,jab tak mai unki chetna nahi loutatha...

is waqt mere krodh aur meri bebasi ke beech ek aur chiz ho rahi thi jo mere liye thodi aascharyajanak thi aur wo ye ki GOD'S THUNDER se jo dard mujhe hua tha,wo ab tak kaayam tha...

aur ye koi sadharan baat nahi thi kyunki kitna bhi bada prahar mujhe ASMODEUS ko zyada der tak dard de nahi sakta tha...

par fir mujhe laga ki shayad CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ki meri upadhi ke chhin jaane ki wajah se mere self heal ka koi ansh kamzor padh gaya hai aur isiliye hi mujhe dard ho raha hai aur isiliye...


KAMURADHAWE

SELF HEAL


apne chaati ke madhya haath rakh maine is spell ko bola jiske baad mujhe ek halka sa jhatka laga par fir dheere dheere mera dard jaata raha...

dard ke jaaneke baad meri nazar ek disha me ghumi jahan ek tairta hua kaafi bada sa asteroid ghum raha tha...

us jagah ko dekhte hi mere sharir se 7 kirane nikal mere saathon OPOSTLES ko jaakar lagi aur aisa hote hi mai aur mere 7 OPOSTLES gayab hokar sidhe us asteroid par prakat hue....

asteroid par pair rakhte hi mere sharir se ek baar firse saath kirane nikli aur jaakar sidhe OPOSTLES se takrayi jiske kuch hi der baad un sabko hosh aa gaya...

hosh me aate hi kuch seconds lage un sabko pura maamla samajhne me par fir jab unhe yaad aaya ki unhe heaven se cast out kar diya gaya hai aur ab wo angels nahi rahe toh unhe bohot bura lagne laga...

un sabke sir jhuke hue the aur wo saathon chup the...mere OPOSTLES kabhi bhi mere saamne khudse baat nahi karte the...

unke mookh tabhi khulte the jab mai unse kuch puchta ya fir aadesh deta tha..

aur filhal mujhe un sabki manosthithi ke baare me pata tha isiliye....


MAI-agar tum saathon chaaho toh mujhe chhod kar jaa sakte ho....mujhe bura nahi lagega...


meri baat ko sun un sabke jhuke hue sir ek jhatke me upar uthe aur....


OPOSTLES-aap hamare aaradhya hai...aapke bina hamara astitv hi nahi hai...

ASMODEUS-ek baar firse soch lo..kyunki abtak tum sab Angels the...

mere saath saath GOD bhi tumhare taraf the par ab aisa nahi hoga...

ab wo mere saath nahi mere saamne khade honge ek pratidwandi ki tarah..

aise me tum sabka ye immortal state bhi khatre me padh sakta hai....

OPOSTLES-hum taiyar hain....aap aadesh karen ki hume kya karna hai???

MAI-hmm.... HEAVEN se cast out karne ke baad meri shakti ka ek hissa jo CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ki upadhi ki wajah se mujhe mila tha,wo ab chhin chuka hai aur isiliye sabse pehle mujhe apni shakti me izafa karna hai...

shakti ke us rikht sthaaan ko bharna hai.....aur isiliye mai chahta hun ki tum sab bramhaand ke har power source ki talash karo...

aisi shaktiyan dhundo jo mere dhaaran karne ke yogya ho...


USKI KOI ZAROOAT NAHI HAI....AGAR TUM CHAAHO TOH BRAMHAAND ME BASI SHAKTI KA SABSE BADA SHROTH TUMHE ABHI YAHIN MIL JAAYEGA....


mere aadesh par OPOSTLES kuch kehte,usse pehle hi mere piche se ye awaaz aayi jisse sun mai palta aur dekha ki mere saamne ek badi si kaali dhuen ki chaadar thi...

ek aisi chaadar jisse beintihan shakti ka sanchar ho raha tha...

mai jaanta tha ki ye kya hai aur isiliye...


MAI-BLACK ENERGY......


bramhaand ka wo kaala sach jisse naa chahte hue khud bramhaand ne banaya tha yaa fir ye kahun ki mere shatruon ne, manushyon ne....

maamuli se manushya jinki utpatti ke baad unke dwara kiye gaye paap se panpi ek aisi shakti jo waqt ke saath behad shaktishali ho chuki hai...

mere baad wo dusri aisi chiz jisse god khatm nahi kar sakte kyunki aisa karne ke liye unhe apni priya manushya jaati ki bhi kurbaani deni hogi....


wahi BLACK ENERGY jiska koi form nahi,mere saamne khadi thi....

wahin us black energy ko dekh mere saathon OPOSTLES bhi kaafi hairan ho gaye the aur saath hi wo ye baat samajh gaye the ki abhi utpann hui paristithi me BLACK ENERGY ka mere saamne prakat hona kisi anhoni ke hone ka sanket hai aur isiliye un saath OPOSTLES me se ek kuch bolne ko hua par maine usse feel kar liya tha aur isiliye maine apna haath upar kiya jiske baad wo OPOSTLE chup hi reh gaya..


(ATTITUDE PART ONE KE LAST UPDATE ME BLACK ENERGY KE AANE SE OPOSTLES KI NAAPASANDAGI KE BAARE ME BATAYA GAYA HAI)


MAI-kuch keh rahe the tum....???

BLACK ENERGY-ASMODEUS, GOD'S SON ko baatein samajhne ke liye un baaton ko sunana kabse zaroori ho gaya...

tum achi tarah jaante ho ki mai kya keh raha hun aur meri baaton ke fal se tum kya kuch haasil kar sakte ho..

tumhe tumhare apne hi pitah ne bedakhal kar diya hai....tumhari shakti ka ek bada hissa filhal tumhare paas nahi hai...

tum kamzor ho.. tumhe shakti ki zaroorat hai...par ek sach bhi hai ki bhale hi tum kitne hi shaktiyon ko prapt kyun naa kar lo,kintu tumhari shakti ka jo bhaag GOD ne tumse chhin liya hai,us shakti ke barabar ki shakti tum khudse haasil nahi kar sakte...

par meri madad se naa sirf tum us shakti ke barabar shakti prapt kar sakoge,balki pehle se kayi guna zyada shaktishaali bhi ban jaaoge...

itne shaktishaali ki fir tum jo chaho,kar sakoge...

MAI-sawal ye hai ki tum meri madad karna kyun chahte ho...??

kyunki mai toh manushya jaati ka anth chahta hun...wahi manushya jaati jinki wajah se tumme shakti aayi hai...tumhara ye adhura astitv bana hai...

aur agar maine aisa kar diya,toh inke saath saath tum bhi khatm ho jaaoge...

BLACK ENERGY-khatm toh mai waise bhi kisi naa kisi din ho hi jaaunga aur wo isiliye kyunki mera apna koi sampurn astitv nahi hai....

mai immortal bhi manushya jaati ke sahare hi hun...

agar manushya jaati khatm nahi bhi hui toh mujhe yakin hai GOD kisi naa kisi tarah mere astitv ko mitane ka tarika khoj hi lenge...

aur isiliye hi mujhe hamesha se kisi aise ki talash rahi hai jo naa sirf itna shaktishaali ho ki mujhe apna sake,balki wo IMMORTAL bhi ho...

aur tum me ye dono goon hain....agar tum mujhe apna lete ho toh mujhe ek sthayi astitv mil jaayega aur tumhe apaar shakti....


BLACK ENERGY ki baat sun maine uski baat ke baare me sochna shuru kiya wahin is waqt OPOSTLES ke man ki baat bhi mujhe sunayi de rahi thi jo ki BLACK ENERGY ke khilaaf thi...

par kuch der pehke mere apne father se mujhe jo dard mila tha wo itna zyada tha ki OPOSTLES ki soch filhal mere liye matter nahi karti thi....

wahin mujhe sochta dekh....


BLACK ENERGY-jis saude me har taraf se faayda ho uske baare me zyada socha nahi karte....

bina vilamb kiye mujhe apna lo..mera dhaaran karte hi tumhari shakti ka wo bhaag jo filhal khaali ho gaya hai,wo wapas bhar jaayega..

itna hi nahi, mujhe apnaate hi mai tumhe is bramhaand me chhupe aisi shakti ke baare me bataunga jiske baare me tum khud se kabhi nahi jaan paaoge...

aur ek baar tumne us shakti ko haasil kar liya toh tum pehle se bhi zyada shaktishaali ho jaaoge...

(black energy warriors world ke odridge mountain me chhupi shakti ke baare me baat kar raha hai...zyada jaanane ke liye part 1 ka wo part fir se padh len)


MAI-thik hai....mai tumhe dhaaran karne ke liye taiyar hun...

BLACK ENERGY-atti uttam...toh fir apne shairir aur apni aatma ko jodkar kaho ki..

MAI ASMODEUS APNE SHARIR AUR APNI AATMA KI HI TARAH BLACK ENERGY KO BHI APNA ATOOT ANG MAANTE HUE USSE APNATA HUN....

MAI-MAI ASMODEUS APNE SHARIR AUR APNI AATMA KI HI TARAH....

EK SECOND......


bolte bolte mai achanak rook gaya yaa fir ye kahun ki maine ASMODEUS ko aage bolne se rok diya...

mai matlab RAAZ....

jee haan doston....mai RAAZ jo kuch der pehle tak ASMODEUS ke rang me kuch aisa rang gaya tha ki mai bhul hi gaya tha ki mai ASMODEUS nahi RAAZ hun...

aur shayad mai is pure scene me,pal me ASMODEUS hi bana rehta par anjaane me hi sahi par ASMODEUS ne us parat ko khol diya jisme mai chhup gaya tha...

nahi samjhe,samjhata hun par uske liye thoda piche chalte hain...

aapko yaad hoga ki GODS THUNDER lagne ki wajah se THE SEVEN OPOSTLES ko dard hua tha aur wahi dard ASMODEUS ko bhi hua tha..

darasal wo dard ASMODEUS ko nahi balki uske andar chuppe mere astitv ko hua tha..

wo astitv jo us gole ke jo ASMODEUS ke jeeven ka pal tha,mujhme samate hi vilupt ho gaya tha par us jhakte ke lagte hi mera astitv ASMODEUS ke andar jaag gaya..

itna hi nahi,us GOD'S THUNDER ke lagne se mujhe hadh se zyada taklif bhi mehsoos hone lagi...

aisi taklif jiski wajah se mujhe yaad hi nahi raha ki mai filhal ek scene ka hissa hun...

par ek sach ye bhi tha ki filhal meri taklif ASMODEUS ki taklif thi aur isiliye jab usne us taklif se nijaat paane ke liye spell bola toh uske saath saath mujhe bhi dard se chhutkara mil gaya..

aur aisa hote hi meri buddhi jo ab tak ASMODEUS ke adhin thi,uspar thoda thoda hi sahi par mera control aane laga...

aur jab aisa hua toh maine apne chitt ko shant kar khudke dimag ke un bhaagon ko jo ab bhi ASMODEUS ke control me thi,unhe apni control me laane ko koshish karne laga...

is beech aage ka scene chalta raha...par fir jab BLACK ENERGY ASMODEUS ke saamne prakat hui aur usse khudko apnaane ke liye convince karne lagi tab mai badi dhyan se uski baat sun raha tha..

aur kyunki mai aur ASMODEUS filhal ek hi the isiliye apne pitah ke faisle ki wajah se uske dil me lagatar uth raha dard aur saath hi SEVEN OPOSTLES ke dimag ki soch jo ki BLACK ENERGY ke khilaaf thi, usse bhi mai mehsoos kar raha tha...

par aakhir me jab ASMODEUS ke raazi hone par BLACK ENERGY se usse ek specific sentence ko dohraane ke liye bola aur ASMODEUS ne bhi usse repeat karna shuru kiya toh maine ASMODEUS par control lete hue usse chup kara diya....


ab baari thi is ASMODEUS ke khamosh hone ki kyunki BLACK ENERGY ke saath deal bhale hi usne shuru ki thi par isse khatm mujhe karna tha aur isiliye...


MAI-mai tumhe aur tumhari shakiyon ko apne hith ke liye apnata hun....


BLACK ENERGY ko baat ko repeat naa karte hue maine apne hisaab se baat ki jispar.....


BLACK ENERGY-aise nahi..tumhe ye kehna ki MAI ASMODEUS APNE...

MAI-wo sun chuka hun mai....par wo baatein mai kahunga nahi....jo maine kaha hai,wahi sahi hai...


BLACK ENERGY ki baat ko kaat maine apni baat kahi jisse sun BLACK ENERGY chownka par fir baat ko sambhalne ke liye..


BLACK ENERGY-par jo maine kaha hai,usse dohrane se hi tumhe mera pura laabh mil sakta hai...

MAI-laabh toh milega par mujhe nahi tumhe...

BLACK ENERGY-mai samjha nahi...

MAI-itne nasamajh toh nahi ho sakte tum...khair samjhata hun...

meri body aur meri aatma,inki utpatti se hi meri utpatti hui thi...kehne ka matlab hai ki ye dono hi mera atoot hissa hain...

par tum nahi ho..aur jo tum mujhse bulwana chahte ho usse tum bhi in dono ki tarah hi mujhse jud jaaoge..

ek tarah se mai tumme badal jaaunga...mere body aur soul ke saath milkar tum mere swami ban jaaoge..

aur ye mai hone nahi de sakta..tum mere saathi ho sakte hi,mere maalik nahi...

agar tumhe mera sharir chahiye,toh tum isme....

EK KIRAYDAAR KI TARAH REH SAKTE HO,PAR ISS KHARID NAHI SAKTE....


CHAANNNN......


akhri line bolte hi ek jhatka sa laga mere dimag ko aur fir....


back to ground zero....

maine dekha ki mai wapas ZEAL me tha....

meri chunoutiyon waale dono golon me se ek gola gayab ho chuka tha aur ab mere saamne sirf ek gola tha...

mera dimag ghum raha tha aur issi wajah se maine kuch palon ke liye apni aakhen band ki aur fir jab mujhe kuch thik laga toh...

maine apni aakhen kholi aur mere aisa karte hi mere kaano me WOOGER ki awaaz gunj gayi....

WOOGER-pehli chunouti puri hui...ab baari hai dusri chunouti ki..


taiyar ho jaayiye apne agle safar ke liye jisme aap honge....VIKRAM......







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V...J......
Super fantastic update bhai
 

Black water

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Superb update brother. Kaha se shuru karu kuch smjh nahi aa raha h story n kuch to aisa choro ki uske baare n kucv likha jaye. Din prati din story itni kamal hoti ja rahi h ki tareef k lie shabd hi nahi milte. Ek baar apse jarur milunga janna h mujhe ki akhir kis tarah se ye pura plot ready karte ho kaha se aata h aisa soch aur drishtikon. Maine sapne me v nahi socha tha ki ASMODEUS ki iss galti ko raaz ujagar karega. Maine socha tha ki manushya jati se prem wala matter saltayega. Hint to apne 1st part k diya j but smjh nahi paya. Sahi bhi hai 7on k mana karne k bawjud ASMODEUS ne black energy ko apna sab kucg saup diya yahi uski pehli galti thi aur aage ki sari story usi ko sudharne k lie likhi gayi. Ek chota sa sawal h aur usse apki story ko fark v nahi padega to pls ans de dena. Av clear hua h ki wo line bol k ASMODEUS ne apni aatma tak girvi rakh di matlav black energy maalik ban gya ASMODEUS ka fr usne Black energy ko harane k lie VJ ko jagah jagah pe madad yani wo sab kaise chore uski apni buddhi ya dimag kab kaise kyu...... Mahi ka attitude v kamal ka h bachpan se chunauti se khelte khelte sab kuch khud h dum pe sambhal rahi h pkka wo bahut aage jayegi...... Dekhna h ab VIKRAM ki life m kya change karta h mujhe to wo jis scene m curious pe uske upar humla hua tha usi scene pe doubt h but still dekhte h aage kya hota h. Pls post asap.

Eagerly waiting for next update brother ????
Bhai apke question ka answer part-1 ke last update me miljayega jisme Asmodeus ne pura kahani ke saransa bataya hai
 
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