Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Well kafi interesting UPADTE tha saath hi sabhi ne kafi achhi progress ki hai......waise kafi bada time jump jaa raha hai.......agar RAAZ ko apne aap ko 75% complete karne mein itna waqt laga hai matlab usse thoda zyada waqt usse apni soul paane mein lagega........coz soul toh energy ka purest form hai......saath hi yeh RAAZ ko soul hai matlab usse jo chunotiya milengi vo bhi akfi hard hogi....well ab almost RAAZ complete ho gaya hai.......Wahi Mahi aur Alfreen bhi kafi aage badh gaye hai........well ab dekhna yeh hai ke RAAZ aane ke baad sabhi ke kya reactions honge.....kyo ki uske aane se pehle toh vo forbidden forest ke upar jo shield nahi hatne wali saath uske bahar ek VOTARIES uska wait bhi kar raha hai.....unhe toh bakiyon se bada jhatka lagne wala hai ke unhone isse toh kab ka maar diya tha toh usse zinda dekh kar zaroor shock ho jaayenge.......waise kya RAAZ Achhuta aur Slunder ko aone neend se uthayega jab vo wapas aayega........well let's see what happens next.
PEACE.
thanks brother..bas padhte jaaiye...aage bohot maza aane waala hai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE SOUL KO EK BAAR FIRSE AMPLIFY KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ APNE BLOOD KO BHI HAASIL KAR LETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-45



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS





YE ABHI KYA HUA THA MERE SAATH....???? MUJHE AISA KYUN LAGA JAISE KUCH THA YAHAN....

AUR WO BHI BOHOT POWERFUL...

MUJHE AISA KYUN LAGA JAISE KISI NE MERE DIMAG ME PRAVESH KARNE KI KOSHISH KI THI....

MUJHE ITNA NEGETIVE,ITNA GHUTAN KYUN FEEL HO RAHA HAI....


lambi lambi saans leti hui MAHI,chehre par bechaini liye idhar udhar yun dekh rahi thi maano kisi ko talash kar rahi ho...


midnight ka waqt hai.... MAHI jo kuch der pehle gehri neend me thi,usse achanak aisa feel hua maano koi uske pure sharir ko scan kar raha hai...

par kyunki MAHI neend me thi,toh uske dimag ne is ehsaas ko sirf sapne ka ek bhaag samjha....

par tabhi....

MAHI ke brain ko aisa laga jaise koi usme ghusne ki koshish kar raha hai...

maano koi messege hai jo wo uske through MAHI ko dena chahta ho...

itna hi nahi,jaise hi us KOI ne MAHI ke brain me ghusne ki kohish ki toh soyi hui MAHI ko khudme ek ajeeb si ghutan mehsoos hui...

usse aisa laga jaise kisi ne uske astitv ko,uski personality ko,uske ATTITUDE ko change karne ki koshish ki ho...

aur is ajeeb ehsaas ke feel hote hi MAHI ki aankhen khul gayi....

feel hue chizon ko yaad kar ye saare sawal khud se hi puch rahi thi MAHI....

par in saare chizon me sabse ajeeb baat ye thi ki MAHI ki aankh khulte hi baaki saari feelings jo usse feel ho rahi thi,wo toh gayab ho gayi thi par jaate jaate bhi ek aisa ehsaas tha jo ab bhi usse halka sa chipka hua tha...

wahi ehsaas jisse ye puri kahani hai aur jisse MAHI ke andar badalne ki koshish abhi abhi hui thi...

ATTITUDE CHANGE.....

MAHI ko ab bhi thoda thoda aisa feel ho raha tha maano uska chizon ko dekhne ka nazariya, situations ko handle karne ke tarike ko koi change karne ki koshish kar raha ho....


MAHI-par ye kaise mumkin hai...!!!!!


khudse hi is sawal ko pucha MAHI ne aur uske aisa karne ke agle hi pal uske dimag me VIOLET WHIZZ ki kahi gayi baat gunj si uthi...


JUST DONT CHANGE YOUR ATTITUDE AND NOTHING WILL CHANGE YOU....


VIOLET WHIZZ ke ye shabd gunj se uthe MAHI ke dimag me jiske baad MAHI ke dimag me uske ab tak ke jeeven ke saare important drishya dikhne lage....

uska har faisla,uske har shabd jo kisi situation ke final moments ko define karte the,wo sab usse jaise live dikhne lage the..

itna hi nahi, MAHI ne ye bhi feel kiya ki dikhne waala har scene apne mukaam par aakar MAHI se jaise puch raha tha ki kya aapka liya decision sahi tha,aur is sawal ke baad jab MAHI ka brain apne liye faislon par swikriti dikhata tha toh aisa hote hi scene change ho jaata tha....

kaafi der tak ye sab hota raha aur fir ek dum se sab kuch shaant ho gaya...

sirf scenes hi dikhne band nahi hue the,balki uske saath saath jo ATTITUDE CHANGE waali feeling bhi MAHI ke andar rooki hui thi,wo bhi khatm ho chuki thi...


MAHI-kya us din VIOLET WHIZZ issi situation ke baare me baat kar rahi thi...!!!???

par unhone toh woh baatein PHASE 2 ke liye kahi thi jisme abhi kaafi waqt bacha hai...

fir tha kya ye sab...????

kaafi der tak MAHI apne dimag ke ghode ko daudate hue is 2 plus 2 equals 5 waale naye theory ke baare me sochti rahi par jab kaafi der baad bhi wo kisi natije par pahunch nahi paayi toh apne dimag ko jhatak wo wapas so gayi...






PLANET-ZEAL-THE SOUL


PLACE-ABOVE THE AURA





SHURUAT YAHIN SI HUI THI,
ANJAAM BHI YAHIN SE HOGA...

BADNAAM BHI YAHI SE HUE THE,
DOBARA NAAM BHI YAHIN SE HOGA...



ZEAL PLANET ke atmosphere se ek meter upar khade hokar maine neeche dekhte hue is baat ko kaha tha....

kyunki yahi wo jagah thi jahan se maine drishyam dekhte hue apne safar ki shuruat ki thi...

yahi wo jagah thi jahan mujhse pehle VIKRAM ne us CHIZ ko haasil karne ki koshish me apne saath saath yahan base har bande ki jaan gawa di thi....

aur yahi wo jagah thi jahan ab mai us badnaami ko mitate hue is jagah ke upar ek naya naam likhne waala tha...

RAAZ......


khair,mere thik neeche se shuru hoti thi ZEAL ki wo khatarnaak saltanat jahan har taraf wahi gehra dhuan faila hua tha aur isiliye hi mai is planet ke us dhuen ke daayre ke just upar khada tha kyunki bina is dhuen ke AURA ka intezam kiye mai aage nahi badh sakta tha...


MAI-dushman hadh se zyada taakatwar bhi ho toh khud ke pure wajud ke bharose usse lada jaa sakta hai,ek perfect planning aur ran neeti ke tehet usse haraya jaa sakta hai par agar ladayi khudke hi wajud ko pura karne ki ho toh fir bharosa aur ran neeti,dono bhi aadhe adhure hi bante hain....


RENAISS, ANGIS aur ANNJAYA me mera har pehla prayas, koshish naakamiyab hui thi par wo naakiamiyabi mai yahan afford nahi kar sakta tha kyunki baat yahan mere SOUL ki thi....

wo SOUL jiski shakti brain body aur blood ki joint shakti se bhi zyada hoti hai...

aur wo AURA jo mere pairon ke neeche se hota hua is pure PLANET me faila hua tha,mai usse bin chhue bhi mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

mai mehsoos kar raha tha ki beintihan shakti thi us AURA me...

itni shakti ki mera poora brain aur LONSDALEITE hexagon diamond jitna shaktishaali sharir bhi us AURA ki shakti ko jhelne ke kaabil nahi tha...

jahan kisi bhi natije par pahunchne ke liye mere dimag ko 1 second se bhi kam samay lagta tha,wahin mere is naye challenge se nipatne ke liye mere brain ko saare guna bhaag ke ganit ko lagate hue kaafi samay ho chuka tha...

aur aakhir me mere dimag ne mujhe bas itna bataya ki is aane waali chunouti ka solution sirf tabhi mil sakta hai jab iski taakat ko aur isse milne waale challanges ko ek baar parkha jaaye..

par ab is choti si yukti ko kaam me laane ke liye bhi ek yukti sochni thi aur wo isiliye kyunki agar is AURA ki taakat ko aur isse milne waale challange ko parakhna tha,toh uske liye sabse pehle usse apni existence dikhani thi aur agar mai ye directly karta toh iske pure pure chances the ki meri existence aakhri baar hi exist kar paati...

mujhe yahin nipat jaana tha...

mai ye sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi mere dimag me ek yukti,ek idea koundhi aur isiliye...

maine apni shirt ki pocket me apni ungli fasayi aur....

CHRRRRR.....

ek jhatke ke mere shirt ka woh hissa fath chuka tha...

kapde ke us fate bhaag ko pakde maine ek baar fir aage ke baare me socha aur...

maine us kapde ke bhaag ko neeche chhod diya...

tezi se lehrata hua wo kapde ka hissa niche ki taraf gaya aur.....

usne us dhuen numa AURA ko chhu liya aur aisa hote hi.....

second ke sauwe hisse ke andar hi wo kapde ka hissa jal gaya....

mai is scene ko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...

jis point par wo kapda jala tha,thik ussi point par maine kuch nikalta hua sa mehsoos kiya....

aur tabhi....

SWOOBBBBB.....


us point se ek teer ki shakal liye us hisse ka AURA upar utha aur meri taraf badha...

uske aisa karte hi maine turant apni body ek taraf kar di jisse wo teer mere just baju se hota hua upar chala gaya...

ye sab behad jaldi hua tha par fir bhi jab wo teer mere side se nikal raha tab maine us teer ki energy mehsoos ki thi jisse feel kar mujhe behad hairani hui aur wo isiliye kyunki us teer ki energy itni zyadi thi ki agar uska nishana niche ki taraf hota toh wo teer ek pure planet ko cheerti hui dusri taraf nikal jaati..

ye toh acha hua ki mai bade dhyan se us point ko dekh raha tha jisse mere kapde ne chhua tha aur isiliye hi uske baad hue hamle se khud ko bacha paaya kyunki agar galti se bhi AURA se bana hua wo teer mujhe chhu bhi jaata toh fir pata nahi kya hota....

successfully side hatne ki wajah se maine socha ki mai bach gaya par tabhi...

BOOMM......

mujhe thodi upar ek tez dhamaka hua jisse sun jab maine upar dekha toh...


MAI-lag gayi....


lambi saans chhodte hue maine ye baat kahi...

reason...


jis teer ke bina mujhe chhue upar ki taraf nikalne ki baat par mai relax ho raha tha wo teer upar uththa hua ek point par jaakar fath gaya aur aisa hote hi...

dhamake se hua dhuan...waisa hi dhuan jaise mere pairon ke neeche pure PLANET me bicha hua tha...

par ye upar waala dhuan bas kuch seconds ke liye hi tha...

kyunki kuch der baad us dhuen ne apna roop badla aur is baar usne ek bohot hi bade chaadar ka roop le liya...

itne bade chaadar ka jisse pura aasman hi dhak chuka tha...

is naye roop ko dhar wo dhuan,wo AURA neeche aane laga...speed us chaadar ki zyada nahi thi par kyunki hatne ya bachne ka koi rasta mere paas tha nahi isiliye ab mujhe is jagah ki AURA se bhidna hi tha aur isiliye maine khudko taiyar kar liya...

par tabhi....

mere dimag me ek naye vichar ne janm liya....

maine socha ki chaadar hi kyun...aakhir is AURA ne yahi roop kyun liya...ye sawal mere dinag me ghumte hi mujhe iska jawab bhi mil gaya aur wo ye tha ki is chaadar ka maksad mujhe direct haani pahunchana nahi tha balki mujhe ek machli ki taraf fasakar neeche dhakelte hue yahan ki asli AURA ko touch karana tha...

kyunki isse pata tha ki wo mujhe nuksaan toh pahuncha sakti hai par mera khatma karne ki shakti usme nahi balki mere neeche biche AURA me hai...

jaise hi is chadar numa AURA ki planning mere dimag me gunji toh iska ek temporary jawab bhi mere dimag me aa gaya jo tha ek famous quote ki attack is the best defence...

mujhe filhal jitna zyada waqt mil jaaye,utna acha tha aur iske liye is chadar ke mujhe lapetne se pehle mujhe isse takrana tha aur isiliye...

maine apne sharir ko puri takat se upar ki taraf jhakta diya aur mere aisa karte hi...

SOOBHHH...


mera sharir bhi behad tezi se ek teer ki hi tarah tezi se upar ki taraf utha aur agle hi pal....

mai us chadar se takra chuka tha aur jab aisa hua tab maine ek saath do chizen mehsoos ki....

pehli ye ki bhale hi wo chaadar dhuen ki bani hui thi,par uski parat lachili thi aur saath hi itni strong bhi ki jisse dhakka toh diya jaa sakta hai par us bhedte hue uske paar nikalna impossible hai....

aur dusri chiz mehsoos ki thi mere sharir ne...actually sharir ke andruni bhaag ne...

chadar se takrate hi maine aisa feel kiya jaise mere body ke andar behata khun mere body se chipak gaya hai aur aisa kar mere anduri sharir ka bohot sa hissa khaali ho gaya hai aur un khaali husson me maine ek behad tez jakdan mehsoos ki..

mujhe aisa lagne laga maano mujhe kisine andar se jakad liya hai...

mera sharir pura tan kar akad sa gaya tha aur ussi position me mai us chadar se chipka hua neeche ki taraf girne laga...

in sab negetive chizon me mere liye bas ek achi chiz hui thi aur wo ye ki us chadar ke mujhse chipakne ki wajah se mai bhi uske saath dheere dheere neeche ki taraf aa raha tha jiska matlab tha ki mere paas thoda extra time tha is situation ko handle karne ke liye...

par mujhe situation ko sirf handle hi nahi karna tha balki is PLANET ke pure AURA ko yaa toh khatm karna tha ya apne control me laana tha...

behad tez jakadan ke beech mera diamg tezi se daud raha tha....har beetathe second me mere dimag me hazar se zyada idea aa bhi rahe the aur unme dum naa hone ki wajah se wo sab cancel bhi hote chale jaa rahe the....

daudte daudte mere dimag ka dhyan mere body ki jakdan ki taraf gaya aur tabhi...

meri aankhen khul gayi.....

solution mujhe mil chuka tha aur wo solution is waqt mere body ke andar daud raha tha..

mera BLOOD.....

the purest creation of universe...

aur yahi wajah thi ki mera pura body jakda hua tha par mera blood is body se chipak jaane ke baawjud bhi lagatar mere dhamniyon me bina kisi rookawat ke beh raha tha...

is PLANET ka AURA mera tha par fir bhi ye mujhe khatm karna chah raha tha aur wo isiliye kyunki is waqt mai human form me tha..

the most corrupted form of life... wo form jisse yahan ka AURA bardasht nahi kar sakta tha par wahin ussi form ke andar behte khun ko is AURA ne mehsoos kar liya tha..

sirf mehsoos kiya tha..isne ye nahi pehchaanana tha ki ye khoon bhi issi body ka hissa hai aur ye body us AURA aur uske maalik matlab SOUL kaa bhi maalik hai...

aur yahi tha solution.. AURA ne jisse mehsoos kiya tha,mujhe usse uski pehchaan karani thi...matlab mere blood se aur iska sirf ek hi tarika tha...

aur wo ye ki isse pehle ki mera body neeche faile AURA ko chhue,mere BLOOD ko us AURA aur is planet ke zamin ki satah ko chhuna tha...

sharir ke jakde hone ki wajah se mai hil toh paa raha tha nahi aur isiliye maine apni aankhen band kar apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kiya...

aisa kar maine apne brain ko apne body se joda aur ek baar firse ussi spell ko uccharit kiya jiska istemaal maine ANNJAYA me kiya tha....

KHANDITA...

CUT.....


apne pair ke anguthe ko dhyan me rakh maine is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske baad mere anguthe ke bhaag me ek cut pad gaya aur aisa hote hi usse khoon ko kuch katre nikal neeche ki taraf tapak gaye...

khoon ke tapakte hi mai us kati jagah ko seal karne ke liye spell bolne ko hua par tabhi...

mera wo cut apne aap bhar gaya aur aisa hote mujhe pata chal gaya ki mera socha solution sahi hai..

reason..

jaise hi mere pair ke anguthe se khoon nikla toh mere sir ko dhaka us AURA ne mere khoon ko mehsoos kiya jiske baad uske nikalne waali jagah ko usne khud hi heal kar diya...

wahin jo khoon ki bunde already tapak chuki thi,wo tezi se niche ki taraf girne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte us AURA numa dhuen me gayab ho gayi...

wahin iske agle hi second mera neeche girta hua sharir bhi us AURA ki chapet me aa gaya....

maine khudko is waqt ke liye taiyar kiya hua tha...

jaise hi mai us AURA ki chapet me aaya...meri jakdan 1000 guna aur badh gayi...

mujhe aisa lagne laga maano wo dhuan mujhe squash kar dena chahta ho...

mera pura sharir dabne laga....beintehan dard ke beech mai aankh band kiye apne sharir ki jakdan ko sehne laga...

waise toh is AURA me itni shakti thi ki iske sparsh waale second me hi mujhe ye pichka kar maar dene ki capability rakhta tha par kyunki mujhse ek second pehle mera blood isse hokar niche ki taraf gaya tha isiliye iski shakti mujhpar dheere dheere dabaw bana rahi thi...

wahin in ssabse alag mera blood us dhuen numa AURA ke beech se hota hua neeche ki taraf girta chala gaya aur fir....

mere blood ne is ZEAL PLANET ke satah ko chhua aur aisa hote hi....

ek saath do chizen hui...


pehli ye ki mere sharir ki jakdan kam hone lagi...

dusri ye ki is pure PLANET ke AURA ne khudko sametna shuru kar diya...


aur jaise hi tezi se neeche girte hue mera sharir ne is planet ki satah ko chhua toh....

meri jakdan puri tarah se khatm ho chuki thi aur wo dhuan,wo AURA jo is pure planet par faila hua tha, usne bhi khudko puri tarah se sameth liya tha aur ab wo AURA ek football jitne chote se dhuen ki shakal me mere saamne khadi thi...

mujhe pata tha ki baat wahi shuru karegi aur hua bhi aisa....


AURA-ZEAL ME SWAGAT HAI AAPKA RAAZ...


is awaaz ko sun mai man hi man halka chownka tha aur wo isiliye kyunki mai is awaaz ko jaanta tha...


MAI-WOOGER....tum ho yahan ke AURA..tumne mujhe jakda hua tha....

WOOGER-nahi..mai yahan ka AURA nahi hun...yahan ke AURA ko sametne ke baad usse contain karna zaroori tha aur mai bas wahi kar raha hun....

kyunki iski shakti sirf aapse yaa aapke hisse se hi control ho sakti hai...

MAI-aage kya karna hai...????

WOOGER-piche dekhiye...


WOOGER ke aisa bolte hi mai palta aur dekha ki meri sidh me hi mujhse kuch door par ek nahi balki do do roshni ke gole line me lage chamak rahe the.....

par meri nazar aur mera dhyan un do roshni ke golon par sirf ek pal ke liye hi tik paaya kyunki maine un do roshniyan se thoda piche ek aur roshni ka gola dekha par dekhne se zyada mai us roshni ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha..

mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise wo roshni ka gola mujhse juda hua hai.....

mai us roshni ke gole ko ek tak dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi....


WOOGER-jis roshni ke gole par aapki nazar tiki hai wo roshni ka gola hi aapka SOUL hai....


aage badh un do roshniyon ke baaju me khada dhuen numa WOOGER ne is baat ko kaha jispar..


MAI-aur ye do gole kaise...???

WOOGER-ye do roshni ke gole aapke wo do chunoutiyan hain jinhe paar karne ke baad hi aap apne SOUL ko paa sakte hain..

MAI- chunouti kya hai...???

WOOGER- ye do gole asal me do logon ke jeeven ke,unke karm path ke chune hue kuch aise pal hain jinhe aapko jeena hai...

sirf jeena hi nahi hai balki un palon me jo paristithi aapke saamne aayegi,yaa fir utpann hogi,usse aapko apne hisab se sanchalit karna hai...

aur wahi sanchalan aapki chunouti hai... aapka sanchalan, apke faisle,yahi tay karenge ki jis kaarya ko uske anjaam tak pahunchane ke liye aapki utpatti hui hai,aap uske yogya hain yaa nahi...

agar aap uttirn hue,toh apka SOUL aapka hua.....


MAI-thik hai....waise ye do log hain kaun jinke jeeven aur karmpath ke pal mujhe jeene hain...

WOOGER-ASMODEUS AUR VIKRAM.......








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......






AAPKA APNA V.....J......
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE SOUL KO EK BAAR FIRSE AMPLIFY KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ APNE BLOOD KO BHI HAASIL KAR LETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-45



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS





YE ABHI KYA HUA THA MERE SAATH....???? MUJHE AISA KYUN LAGA JAISE KUCH THA YAHAN....

AUR WO BHI BOHOT POWERFUL...

MUJHE AISA KYUN LAGA JAISE KISI NE MERE DIMAG ME PRAVESH KARNE KI KOSHISH KI THI....

MUJHE ITNA NEGETIVE,ITNA GHUTAN KYUN FEEL HO RAHA HAI....


lambi lambi saans leti hui MAHI,chehre par bechaini liye idhar udhar yun dekh rahi thi maano kisi ko talash kar rahi ho...


midnight ka waqt hai.... MAHI jo kuch der pehle gehri neend me thi,usse achanak aisa feel hua maano koi uske pure sharir ko scan kar raha hai...

par kyunki MAHI neend me thi,toh uske dimag ne is ehsaas ko sirf sapne ka ek bhaag samjha....

par tabhi....

MAHI ke brain ko aisa laga jaise koi usme ghusne ki koshish kar raha hai...

maano koi messege hai jo wo uske through MAHI ko dena chahta ho...

itna hi nahi,jaise hi us KOI ne MAHI ke brain me ghusne ki kohish ki toh soyi hui MAHI ko khudme ek ajeeb si ghutan mehsoos hui...

usse aisa laga jaise kisi ne uske astitv ko,uski personality ko,uske ATTITUDE ko change karne ki koshish ki ho...

aur is ajeeb ehsaas ke feel hote hi MAHI ki aankhen khul gayi....

feel hue chizon ko yaad kar ye saare sawal khud se hi puch rahi thi MAHI....

par in saare chizon me sabse ajeeb baat ye thi ki MAHI ki aankh khulte hi baaki saari feelings jo usse feel ho rahi thi,wo toh gayab ho gayi thi par jaate jaate bhi ek aisa ehsaas tha jo ab bhi usse halka sa chipka hua tha...

wahi ehsaas jisse ye puri kahani hai aur jisse MAHI ke andar badalne ki koshish abhi abhi hui thi...

ATTITUDE CHANGE.....

MAHI ko ab bhi thoda thoda aisa feel ho raha tha maano uska chizon ko dekhne ka nazariya, situations ko handle karne ke tarike ko koi change karne ki koshish kar raha ho....


MAHI-par ye kaise mumkin hai...!!!!!


khudse hi is sawal ko pucha MAHI ne aur uske aisa karne ke agle hi pal uske dimag me VIOLET WHIZZ ki kahi gayi baat gunj si uthi...


JUST DONT CHANGE YOUR ATTITUDE AND NOTHING WILL CHANGE YOU....


VIOLET WHIZZ ke ye shabd gunj se uthe MAHI ke dimag me jiske baad MAHI ke dimag me uske ab tak ke jeeven ke saare important drishya dikhne lage....

uska har faisla,uske har shabd jo kisi situation ke final moments ko define karte the,wo sab usse jaise live dikhne lage the..

itna hi nahi, MAHI ne ye bhi feel kiya ki dikhne waala har scene apne mukaam par aakar MAHI se jaise puch raha tha ki kya aapka liya decision sahi tha,aur is sawal ke baad jab MAHI ka brain apne liye faislon par swikriti dikhata tha toh aisa hote hi scene change ho jaata tha....

kaafi der tak ye sab hota raha aur fir ek dum se sab kuch shaant ho gaya...

sirf scenes hi dikhne band nahi hue the,balki uske saath saath jo ATTITUDE CHANGE waali feeling bhi MAHI ke andar rooki hui thi,wo bhi khatm ho chuki thi...


MAHI-kya us din VIOLET WHIZZ issi situation ke baare me baat kar rahi thi...!!!???

par unhone toh woh baatein PHASE 2 ke liye kahi thi jisme abhi kaafi waqt bacha hai...

fir tha kya ye sab...????

kaafi der tak MAHI apne dimag ke ghode ko daudate hue is 2 plus 2 equals 5 waale naye theory ke baare me sochti rahi par jab kaafi der baad bhi wo kisi natije par pahunch nahi paayi toh apne dimag ko jhatak wo wapas so gayi...






PLANET-ZEAL-THE SOUL


PLACE-ABOVE THE AURA





SHURUAT YAHIN SI HUI THI,
ANJAAM BHI YAHIN SE HOGA...

BADNAAM BHI YAHI SE HUE THE,
DOBARA NAAM BHI YAHIN SE HOGA...



ZEAL PLANET ke atmosphere se ek meter upar khade hokar maine neeche dekhte hue is baat ko kaha tha....

kyunki yahi wo jagah thi jahan se maine drishyam dekhte hue apne safar ki shuruat ki thi...

yahi wo jagah thi jahan mujhse pehle VIKRAM ne us CHIZ ko haasil karne ki koshish me apne saath saath yahan base har bande ki jaan gawa di thi....

aur yahi wo jagah thi jahan ab mai us badnaami ko mitate hue is jagah ke upar ek naya naam likhne waala tha...

RAAZ......


khair,mere thik neeche se shuru hoti thi ZEAL ki wo khatarnaak saltanat jahan har taraf wahi gehra dhuan faila hua tha aur isiliye hi mai is planet ke us dhuen ke daayre ke just upar khada tha kyunki bina is dhuen ke AURA ka intezam kiye mai aage nahi badh sakta tha...


MAI-dushman hadh se zyada taakatwar bhi ho toh khud ke pure wajud ke bharose usse lada jaa sakta hai,ek perfect planning aur ran neeti ke tehet usse haraya jaa sakta hai par agar ladayi khudke hi wajud ko pura karne ki ho toh fir bharosa aur ran neeti,dono bhi aadhe adhure hi bante hain....


RENAISS, ANGIS aur ANNJAYA me mera har pehla prayas, koshish naakamiyab hui thi par wo naakiamiyabi mai yahan afford nahi kar sakta tha kyunki baat yahan mere SOUL ki thi....

wo SOUL jiski shakti brain body aur blood ki joint shakti se bhi zyada hoti hai...

aur wo AURA jo mere pairon ke neeche se hota hua is pure PLANET me faila hua tha,mai usse bin chhue bhi mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

mai mehsoos kar raha tha ki beintihan shakti thi us AURA me...

itni shakti ki mera poora brain aur LONSDALEITE hexagon diamond jitna shaktishaali sharir bhi us AURA ki shakti ko jhelne ke kaabil nahi tha...

jahan kisi bhi natije par pahunchne ke liye mere dimag ko 1 second se bhi kam samay lagta tha,wahin mere is naye challenge se nipatne ke liye mere brain ko saare guna bhaag ke ganit ko lagate hue kaafi samay ho chuka tha...

aur aakhir me mere dimag ne mujhe bas itna bataya ki is aane waali chunouti ka solution sirf tabhi mil sakta hai jab iski taakat ko aur isse milne waale challanges ko ek baar parkha jaaye..

par ab is choti si yukti ko kaam me laane ke liye bhi ek yukti sochni thi aur wo isiliye kyunki agar is AURA ki taakat ko aur isse milne waale challange ko parakhna tha,toh uske liye sabse pehle usse apni existence dikhani thi aur agar mai ye directly karta toh iske pure pure chances the ki meri existence aakhri baar hi exist kar paati...

mujhe yahin nipat jaana tha...

mai ye sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi mere dimag me ek yukti,ek idea koundhi aur isiliye...

maine apni shirt ki pocket me apni ungli fasayi aur....

CHRRRRR.....

ek jhatke ke mere shirt ka woh hissa fath chuka tha...

kapde ke us fate bhaag ko pakde maine ek baar fir aage ke baare me socha aur...

maine us kapde ke bhaag ko neeche chhod diya...

tezi se lehrata hua wo kapde ka hissa niche ki taraf gaya aur.....

usne us dhuen numa AURA ko chhu liya aur aisa hote hi.....

second ke sauwe hisse ke andar hi wo kapde ka hissa jal gaya....

mai is scene ko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...

jis point par wo kapda jala tha,thik ussi point par maine kuch nikalta hua sa mehsoos kiya....

aur tabhi....

SWOOBBBBB.....


us point se ek teer ki shakal liye us hisse ka AURA upar utha aur meri taraf badha...

uske aisa karte hi maine turant apni body ek taraf kar di jisse wo teer mere just baju se hota hua upar chala gaya...

ye sab behad jaldi hua tha par fir bhi jab wo teer mere side se nikal raha tab maine us teer ki energy mehsoos ki thi jisse feel kar mujhe behad hairani hui aur wo isiliye kyunki us teer ki energy itni zyadi thi ki agar uska nishana niche ki taraf hota toh wo teer ek pure planet ko cheerti hui dusri taraf nikal jaati..

ye toh acha hua ki mai bade dhyan se us point ko dekh raha tha jisse mere kapde ne chhua tha aur isiliye hi uske baad hue hamle se khud ko bacha paaya kyunki agar galti se bhi AURA se bana hua wo teer mujhe chhu bhi jaata toh fir pata nahi kya hota....

successfully side hatne ki wajah se maine socha ki mai bach gaya par tabhi...

BOOMM......

mujhe thodi upar ek tez dhamaka hua jisse sun jab maine upar dekha toh...


MAI-lag gayi....


lambi saans chhodte hue maine ye baat kahi...

reason...


jis teer ke bina mujhe chhue upar ki taraf nikalne ki baat par mai relax ho raha tha wo teer upar uththa hua ek point par jaakar fath gaya aur aisa hote hi...

dhamake se hua dhuan...waisa hi dhuan jaise mere pairon ke neeche pure PLANET me bicha hua tha...

par ye upar waala dhuan bas kuch seconds ke liye hi tha...

kyunki kuch der baad us dhuen ne apna roop badla aur is baar usne ek bohot hi bade chaadar ka roop le liya...

itne bade chaadar ka jisse pura aasman hi dhak chuka tha...

is naye roop ko dhar wo dhuan,wo AURA neeche aane laga...speed us chaadar ki zyada nahi thi par kyunki hatne ya bachne ka koi rasta mere paas tha nahi isiliye ab mujhe is jagah ki AURA se bhidna hi tha aur isiliye maine khudko taiyar kar liya...

par tabhi....

mere dimag me ek naye vichar ne janm liya....

maine socha ki chaadar hi kyun...aakhir is AURA ne yahi roop kyun liya...ye sawal mere dinag me ghumte hi mujhe iska jawab bhi mil gaya aur wo ye tha ki is chaadar ka maksad mujhe direct haani pahunchana nahi tha balki mujhe ek machli ki taraf fasakar neeche dhakelte hue yahan ki asli AURA ko touch karana tha...

kyunki isse pata tha ki wo mujhe nuksaan toh pahuncha sakti hai par mera khatma karne ki shakti usme nahi balki mere neeche biche AURA me hai...

jaise hi is chadar numa AURA ki planning mere dimag me gunji toh iska ek temporary jawab bhi mere dimag me aa gaya jo tha ek famous quote ki attack is the best defence...

mujhe filhal jitna zyada waqt mil jaaye,utna acha tha aur iske liye is chadar ke mujhe lapetne se pehle mujhe isse takrana tha aur isiliye...

maine apne sharir ko puri takat se upar ki taraf jhakta diya aur mere aisa karte hi...

SOOBHHH...


mera sharir bhi behad tezi se ek teer ki hi tarah tezi se upar ki taraf utha aur agle hi pal....

mai us chadar se takra chuka tha aur jab aisa hua tab maine ek saath do chizen mehsoos ki....

pehli ye ki bhale hi wo chaadar dhuen ki bani hui thi,par uski parat lachili thi aur saath hi itni strong bhi ki jisse dhakka toh diya jaa sakta hai par us bhedte hue uske paar nikalna impossible hai....

aur dusri chiz mehsoos ki thi mere sharir ne...actually sharir ke andruni bhaag ne...

chadar se takrate hi maine aisa feel kiya jaise mere body ke andar behata khun mere body se chipak gaya hai aur aisa kar mere anduri sharir ka bohot sa hissa khaali ho gaya hai aur un khaali husson me maine ek behad tez jakdan mehsoos ki..

mujhe aisa lagne laga maano mujhe kisine andar se jakad liya hai...

mera sharir pura tan kar akad sa gaya tha aur ussi position me mai us chadar se chipka hua neeche ki taraf girne laga...

in sab negetive chizon me mere liye bas ek achi chiz hui thi aur wo ye ki us chadar ke mujhse chipakne ki wajah se mai bhi uske saath dheere dheere neeche ki taraf aa raha tha jiska matlab tha ki mere paas thoda extra time tha is situation ko handle karne ke liye...

par mujhe situation ko sirf handle hi nahi karna tha balki is PLANET ke pure AURA ko yaa toh khatm karna tha ya apne control me laana tha...

behad tez jakadan ke beech mera diamg tezi se daud raha tha....har beetathe second me mere dimag me hazar se zyada idea aa bhi rahe the aur unme dum naa hone ki wajah se wo sab cancel bhi hote chale jaa rahe the....

daudte daudte mere dimag ka dhyan mere body ki jakdan ki taraf gaya aur tabhi...

meri aankhen khul gayi.....

solution mujhe mil chuka tha aur wo solution is waqt mere body ke andar daud raha tha..

mera BLOOD.....

the purest creation of universe...

aur yahi wajah thi ki mera pura body jakda hua tha par mera blood is body se chipak jaane ke baawjud bhi lagatar mere dhamniyon me bina kisi rookawat ke beh raha tha...

is PLANET ka AURA mera tha par fir bhi ye mujhe khatm karna chah raha tha aur wo isiliye kyunki is waqt mai human form me tha..

the most corrupted form of life... wo form jisse yahan ka AURA bardasht nahi kar sakta tha par wahin ussi form ke andar behte khun ko is AURA ne mehsoos kar liya tha..

sirf mehsoos kiya tha..isne ye nahi pehchaanana tha ki ye khoon bhi issi body ka hissa hai aur ye body us AURA aur uske maalik matlab SOUL kaa bhi maalik hai...

aur yahi tha solution.. AURA ne jisse mehsoos kiya tha,mujhe usse uski pehchaan karani thi...matlab mere blood se aur iska sirf ek hi tarika tha...

aur wo ye ki isse pehle ki mera body neeche faile AURA ko chhue,mere BLOOD ko us AURA aur is planet ke zamin ki satah ko chhuna tha...

sharir ke jakde hone ki wajah se mai hil toh paa raha tha nahi aur isiliye maine apni aankhen band kar apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kiya...

aisa kar maine apne brain ko apne body se joda aur ek baar firse ussi spell ko uccharit kiya jiska istemaal maine ANNJAYA me kiya tha....

KHANDITA...

CUT.....


apne pair ke anguthe ko dhyan me rakh maine is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske baad mere anguthe ke bhaag me ek cut pad gaya aur aisa hote hi usse khoon ko kuch katre nikal neeche ki taraf tapak gaye...

khoon ke tapakte hi mai us kati jagah ko seal karne ke liye spell bolne ko hua par tabhi...

mera wo cut apne aap bhar gaya aur aisa hote mujhe pata chal gaya ki mera socha solution sahi hai..

reason..

jaise hi mere pair ke anguthe se khoon nikla toh mere sir ko dhaka us AURA ne mere khoon ko mehsoos kiya jiske baad uske nikalne waali jagah ko usne khud hi heal kar diya...

wahin jo khoon ki bunde already tapak chuki thi,wo tezi se niche ki taraf girne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte us AURA numa dhuen me gayab ho gayi...

wahin iske agle hi second mera neeche girta hua sharir bhi us AURA ki chapet me aa gaya....

maine khudko is waqt ke liye taiyar kiya hua tha...

jaise hi mai us AURA ki chapet me aaya...meri jakdan 1000 guna aur badh gayi...

mujhe aisa lagne laga maano wo dhuan mujhe squash kar dena chahta ho...

mera pura sharir dabne laga....beintehan dard ke beech mai aankh band kiye apne sharir ki jakdan ko sehne laga...

waise toh is AURA me itni shakti thi ki iske sparsh waale second me hi mujhe ye pichka kar maar dene ki capability rakhta tha par kyunki mujhse ek second pehle mera blood isse hokar niche ki taraf gaya tha isiliye iski shakti mujhpar dheere dheere dabaw bana rahi thi...

wahin in ssabse alag mera blood us dhuen numa AURA ke beech se hota hua neeche ki taraf girta chala gaya aur fir....

mere blood ne is ZEAL PLANET ke satah ko chhua aur aisa hote hi....

ek saath do chizen hui...


pehli ye ki mere sharir ki jakdan kam hone lagi...

dusri ye ki is pure PLANET ke AURA ne khudko sametna shuru kar diya...


aur jaise hi tezi se neeche girte hue mera sharir ne is planet ki satah ko chhua toh....

meri jakdan puri tarah se khatm ho chuki thi aur wo dhuan,wo AURA jo is pure planet par faila hua tha, usne bhi khudko puri tarah se sameth liya tha aur ab wo AURA ek football jitne chote se dhuen ki shakal me mere saamne khadi thi...

mujhe pata tha ki baat wahi shuru karegi aur hua bhi aisa....


AURA-ZEAL ME SWAGAT HAI AAPKA RAAZ...


is awaaz ko sun mai man hi man halka chownka tha aur wo isiliye kyunki mai is awaaz ko jaanta tha...


MAI-WOOGER....tum ho yahan ke AURA..tumne mujhe jakda hua tha....

WOOGER-nahi..mai yahan ka AURA nahi hun...yahan ke AURA ko sametne ke baad usse contain karna zaroori tha aur mai bas wahi kar raha hun....

kyunki iski shakti sirf aapse yaa aapke hisse se hi control ho sakti hai...

MAI-aage kya karna hai...????

WOOGER-piche dekhiye...


WOOGER ke aisa bolte hi mai palta aur dekha ki meri sidh me hi mujhse kuch door par ek nahi balki do do roshni ke gole line me lage chamak rahe the.....

par meri nazar aur mera dhyan un do roshni ke golon par sirf ek pal ke liye hi tik paaya kyunki maine un do roshniyan se thoda piche ek aur roshni ka gola dekha par dekhne se zyada mai us roshni ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha..

mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise wo roshni ka gola mujhse juda hua hai.....

mai us roshni ke gole ko ek tak dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi....


WOOGER-jis roshni ke gole par aapki nazar tiki hai wo roshni ka gola hi aapka SOUL hai....


aage badh un do roshniyon ke baaju me khada dhuen numa WOOGER ne is baat ko kaha jispar..


MAI-aur ye do gole kaise...???

WOOGER-ye do roshni ke gole aapke wo do chunoutiyan hain jinhe paar karne ke baad hi aap apne SOUL ko paa sakte hain..

MAI- chunouti kya hai...???

WOOGER- ye do gole asal me do logon ke jeeven ke,unke karm path ke chune hue kuch aise pal hain jinhe aapko jeena hai...

sirf jeena hi nahi hai balki un palon me jo paristithi aapke saamne aayegi,yaa fir utpann hogi,usse aapko apne hisab se sanchalit karna hai...

aur wahi sanchalan aapki chunouti hai... aapka sanchalan, apke faisle,yahi tay karenge ki jis kaarya ko uske anjaam tak pahunchane ke liye aapki utpatti hui hai,aap uske yogya hain yaa nahi...

agar aap uttirn hue,toh apka SOUL aapka hua.....


MAI-thik hai....waise ye do log hain kaun jinke jeeven aur karmpath ke pal mujhe jeene hain...

WOOGER-ASMODEUS AUR VIKRAM.......








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......







AAPKA APNA V.....J......
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