Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[Avi9545]

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[Jay Sutar]

Bhai wapas ayega ya nahi sbse bada doubt to yahi h. Usse v jyada wo ayega to kya hoga isse kahi bada sawal ye h ki wo reason kya dega ki kyu kab kaise aur kaha gya tha. Acchuta aur slunder ne ab tak kuch v nahi sikha h 12 months already wasted h un dno k to unki baat hi alag hogi.browny v av tak amplify nahi kar paya h uski story v alag chalegi. Votaries jo wait kar raha h usme to av tym h 2aise v raaz jitna jyada sikh raha h soul m to mujhe lagta hai ki wo sab khatam kar k soul gain karega tb tak 18 months already ho jaynge uske baad sav k sav phase 2 me honge. Sawal to brother bahut sare h but jawab ek v nahi just wait n watch.

Yeh story uske safar ki hai toh usse wapas toh aana hi hoga. Institute uske safar ka 1st part hai agar wahi ho adhura chod dega toh uske aage badhne ka koi matalab hi nahi hai........ Achhuta aur Slunder shayad LATE BLOOMER ho jo bakiyon se late start karde par aage chal kar sabhi se aage chale jaaye...... Well yeh writer ko hamse jyada malum hoga ke unhe kya karna hai har ek character ke saath....... after all characters ki development bhi zaroori hai.......sirf powers milne se story mein maza nahi rahega......baaki ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
PEACE.

 

[23n24]

Waiting for next

 

[mk2244]

waiting bhai

 

[vj4u]

Shandar update brother....

mujhe bas us CHIZ se matlab tha..usse haasil kar bas apni jeet se matlab tha...

kyunki yahi mera sach hai...



wo sach jo meri soch ko KAWACH DETA HAI....

ye RAAZ wo RAAZ hai,jisse jaan kar naa maanane waale ki ye RAAZ jaan LE LETA HAI....

yeh lines......

Ab milte hai zeal planet par........

Amazing update Brother
Keep it up

Awesome update

Awesome update

Again Briliant update

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

बेहतरीन अपडेट।
चुनौतयाँ तो वाकई में विशाल होंगी। अब शायद राज को उसके आसपास के लोगो का दर्द डर महसूस हो और वो भावनायें भी समझ पाये।

Marvelous update bhai super fantastic

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Awesome update

Nice update bhai

Awesome update bro
Apki taarif k liye words nhi hai mere pass
Ye story me mai apne aap ko imagine kr rha hu as a RAAZ.

hat's off to you brother.
You have an amazing writing skills.

Wow super fabulous update
Sab apne process main aage bad rhe h
Keep posting

Sandarrrr update bhai

Excellent mindblowing superb fantastic update.....................?
keep posting....................?
waiting for next update...............?

Very nice, fantastic, awesome, fabulous amazing update ..............
keep it up bro ................
Waiting for next update ..............

Mind blowing fantastic update.

Wah bhai fantastic update waiting for next update

Bhai ji

Kamal ka update tha shabad nahi hai mere pass

thanks brothers..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Awesome Mind Blowing Update.
Mahi ki nayi chnauti mil rahi hai jo uski bhawnao ke sath khel raha hai . Mahi ka dohri chunautiyon samna karana kafi kashtdayi hai par uski dridh echhashakti se usne ese bhi paar kar liya aur choosen ke ethihash badal diya . Pahali savets ban gayi jisne first phase me 6% Soul Amplification kiya hai .
Alreen Mahi ko sankat me dekhakr uski madad karna cahahti thi par wizz ne roka kyonki es chuanuti se mahi ko akele nibatna tha .
Raaz ne aakhirkar apnaa Teesra bhag apana apna Blood prapt kar liya . Yah Brain and Body se pane se kafi mushkilo ka samna karana pada par safal raha . Ab sabse badi chanuti uska intzar kar rahi hai uska soul and wo rahashmayi chij jisne pure palanet ko tabah kar diya tha.

thanks brother.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

just woww.. amazing writing skills..

bas kya bolu jitna bolu kam hai...

apne story ko itna real bna diya hai ki bs agle update ka intjar lga rhta hai....

har ik chij ko itna gahrai se explain kiya hai ki aisa lge ki khud experience kar rhe ho...

lv your way of writing....




Bs ab intjar hai ki kese soul amplification pura hota hai...

or kya hoga jab raaz vapis jayega...


uska sarir vagera sb badal gya hai...


or itne tym bad vo vapish jayega to kya kuch alg hoga..

bs itnjar hai...



apse yhi umid karte hai ki jaldi update de...


kyuki sachi me injar nhi hota???...

thanks for appreciating brother.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

THE UPDATE IS SIMPLY WOW BROTHER !!!

Aur bhai bilkul shai kaha ek reader ne ke AAPNE IS STORY KO BILKUL REAL BANA DIYA BRO...

ARRE JAB MAHI WALA SCENE CHAL RHA THA TO USKE 6% COMPLETE HONE PAR AISA LAGA JAISA MENE KOI ACHIEVEMENT POORA KAR LIYA HO

ITS QUITE A ATTACHMENT BROTHER

FABULOUS... FANTASTIC...UPDATE

(i don't have words left to describe the beuty of this masterpiece)
thanks for such an amazing stuff brother

appreciate karne ke liye thanks brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Ohhh bhai...
Mafi bhi tab mango jab main uski ijajat dun kya line hain aur kya attitude hain bhai
Aur sabse majedar bat yeh hain ki raaz ko soul amplification main 1000 times jyada takleef hogi kyo ki normal toh woh hain nahi aur shayad usme to feeling bhi nahi to pata nahi woh kya banega....
Well dekha jayega bhai nice update...

thanks brother... yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Bhai jaldi se naye update dene ki koshish karna bhai aur wait nahi hota bhai...

Update ko padh kar bahut kuch likne ka maan hota hai lakin dimag sath hi nahi deta dimag ka kehna hai ki yha suraj ko diya nahi dikhaya jata hai

Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha

Gazab, ekdam jabardast update bhai.

phase 1 mein 6 months baki hein... agar raaz 3 months pehlay b aa gia phase wnd hone se to mahi k saray records toot janay hein... ab tak raaz ko sab aam samajhtay aaye hein... per phir usne khaas ho jana hai... ?

Superb update ??

thanks brothers..yunhi saath bane rahiye