Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WICKEDS SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION KO JEET JAATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF WOOGER RAAZ KO VIKRAM KE BAALYA KAAL KI JHALKIYAN DIKHATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-38



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE




HUM ALREADY LATE HO CHUKE HAIN AUR TU ABHI TAK BREAKFAST HI KAR RAHI HAI....


hall me kadam rakhte hi MAHI ne ALFREEN ko jo ki abhi breakfast kar rahi thi,dekhte hue ye baat kahi jispar....


ALFREEN-tu toh INSTITUTION jaane ke liye aise excited ho rahi hai jaise aaj yahan par hamara pehla din ho....!!!

MAHI-first day me bhi itni excitement nahi hui thi jitni mujhe aaj feel ho rahi hai...

ALFREEN-aur aisa kyun???

MAHI-jaise tujhe pata nahi hai...???ye excitement SWEEP-STAKE ki wajah se hai...

kal SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION ko dekh mujhe feel hua ki maine toh abhi kuch seekha hi nahi hai....

kal MORALS aur WICKEDS ki team jis tarah metaphisycal activities ko anjaam de rahe the,usse dekh mujhe toh Goosebumps aa gaye the...

infact ab bhi jab mai kal ke baare me sochti hun toh mere andar ek adrenaline rush doud uththa hai....


MAHI baat karte waqt bhi kaafi energetic dikh rahi thi jisse dekh....


ALFREEN-wo toh dikh hi raha hai.aisa lag raha hai jaise next SWEEP-STAKE kal hi hone wala hai aur tu dono teams se kisi ek ki captain hai....

MAHI-kal nahi,par dekhna,ek din ye hoga zaroor.....aur haan,teams me koi choice nahi hai,mai sirf MORALS ki team me rahungi,lead karungi aur jeetaungi bhi....


AUR US DIN SABSE ZYADA KHUSHI HUME HOGI....


FLORIN apni wife MARIA ke saath ye bolte hue apne room se hall ki taraf aa rahe the...

MAHI ke paas aakar dono ne hi usse side se hug kiya aur uske sir par apne blessings dete hue haath rakhe....


MAHI-aur jab mujhe trophy milegi toh mai usse aap dono ko dedicate karungi....


kal ANWIR aur MORANA se bahas ke baad jab MAHI baaki MORALS supporters ke saath STADIUM se baahar jaane ko hui toh jaate jaate uski nazar ek baar ground par padi thi jahan MARILIZA WHIZZ SWEEP-STAKE ke winners WICKEDS ko trophy de rahi thi,ussi trophy ko yaad kar MAHI ne ye baat kahi thi....

wahin MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA bhi behad khush aur bhaawuk ho gaye..

itne kam waqt me hi unhe MAHI apni beti si lagne lagi thi aur aaj MAHI ki baat sun unhe ye ehsaas hua tha ki MAHI ke dil me bhi unke liye same feelings hai....


FLORIN-hum intazar karenge us din ka beti....


ek baar firse MAHI ke sir me pyar bhara haath ferte hue FLORIN ne ye baat kahi...

wahin ALFREEN apne mom dad aur MAHI ki bonding,unka pyar dekhkar behad khush ho rahi thi...


MAHI-tu kya daanth dikha rahi hai....ab chalegi bhi ki lunch bhi abhi hi karna hai tujhe....

ALFREEN-ek minute chain nahi rehta tujhe...chal....


paani peekar ALFREEN khadi hui aur apne mom dad ko side hug karkar bye kehte hue MAHI ke saath aage badhne ko hui par tabhi....


FLORIN-ek second baccho.... INSTITUTION se pehle hostel jaakar RAAZ ko birthday wish kar dena.....


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI chownke....


MAHI-aaj uska birthday hai!!!!

FLORIN-haan..yahan aakar itna kuch dekha hai ki ab lagta hai ki ab koi bhi baat par surprise nahi lagega...

ab issi baat ko dekhlo,6 mahine pehle jis din hum yahan aaye the,us din RAAZ ka birthday tha aur time loop ko wajah sirf 6 mahino me RAAZ do saal bada ho gaya hai...

aur aaj uska 18th birthday hai.....


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI ko fir se shock laga...unhe FLORIN ki baat samajh me nahi aayi aur isiliye....


ALFREEN-ye aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain...???6 mahine me 2 saal ka time loop....!!!!


ALFREEN ki baat sun FLORIN ne kal SWEEP-STAKE ke douran hui us PEACE MAKER ki baatein batayi jisse sun MAHI aur ALFREEN shocked ho gaye....


ALFREEN-man,this place is insane.....pata nahi kya kya RAAZ chuppe hain yahan....


jahan ALFREEN bas is karishmayi duniya ke baare me soch rahi thi wahin...


MAHI-6 mahine pehle jis raat aap dono yahan aaye the,us din RAAZ ka birthday tha....

thats strange.. kyunki us din toh mera bhi birthday tha....

ALFREEN-what.....!!!matlab aaj tera bhi birthday hai....


MAHI ki baat sun khushi se uchalte hue ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi aur turant MAHI ke gale lag gayi....

ALFREEN ke baad FLORIN aur MARIA ne bhi MAHI ke gale lag usse blessings di...

aaj pehli baar tha jab jeete jaagte log MAHI ko uske birthday par wish bhi kar rahe the aur behad khush bhi dikh rahe the aur ye sab dekh MAHI bhi behad khush dikhne lagi thi....


FLORIN-aaj hamari beti ka birthday hai aur hume hi pata nahi tha...

MARIA-par ab toh pata hai naa.... toh kyun naa,ek party rakhi jaaye aur sabse achi baat ye hai ki arrangements ki bhi koi tention nahi hai...

yahan toh bas jo chahiye,usse bolna hota hai aur har chiz aa jaati hai....

tum sab ek kaam karo, INSTITUTION me apne PHASE ke sabhi hostlers aur discholars SAVENTS ko aaj shaam yahan hamare ghar par invite karo....

ALFREEN-fantastic idea....

FLORIN-ek kaam karte hain, RAAZ ka birthday bhi MAHI ke saath hi celebrate kar lete hain...


FLORIN ki baat sun jahan baaki dono normal hi the wahin ALFREEN ka mood bigadne laga tha...


ALFREEN-iski kya zaroorat hai dad....let him be naa....i don't like him...

FLORIN-beta kitni baar kaha hai ki aisa bolna aur sochna is not good....

MARIA-yes AL...tumhe is tarah kisike bhi baare me negetive bilkul bhi sochna nahi chahiye...

par FLORIN...ek baat toh hai,ki RAAZ kabhi bhi party me nahi aayega aur agar hum kisi tarah usse kuch aur bahana bana kar bhi yahan le aaye tab bhi koi faayda toh nahi hoga ulta nuksaan ho jaayega....

tumhe toh pata hai ki usse apna birthday celebrate karna pasand nahi aur isiliye wo kuch aisa bol ya kar dega jisse puri party ka maza hi kharab ho jaayega....

ALFREEN-exactly..aur isiliye mai mana kar rahi thi..uske liye MAHI ka birthday spoil ho,ye mai bardasht nahi karungi....


ghusse me ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jisse sun....


MAHI-shaant maate shaant..thik hai nahi bulaayenge usse....

FLORIN-haan par usse milkar usse wish zaroor kar dena...

ALFREEN-par pops wo ispar bhi ulta jawab hi dega.....

FLORIN-nahi dega..hostel me bhi jab uske birthday me hum usse wish karte the toh wo thanks toh nahi kehta tha par kuch galat bhi nahi bolta tha..

usse bas celebrations wagarah me interest nahi hota....

MAHI-cool uncle..par abhi toh hum already late ho chuke hain isiliye INSTITUTION se aate waqt usse wish kar denge....

FLORIN/MARIA-thik hai...


baaton baaton me wakayi late ho chuka tha aur isiliye FLORIN aur MARIA ko bye bol MAHI aur ALFREEN turant INSTITUTION ke liye nikal gaye...




PLACE-CHOSEN'S




GUYZZZ.WAHAN CLASS ME NAHI,SABHI SAVENTS GROUND ME HAIN....TUM BHI WAHIN AA JAAO....


VALDIS ki baat sun MAHI aur ALFREEN jo apni class ki taraf jaa rahi thi,wapas palat gayi aur ground ki taraf jaane lagi....


ALFREEN-ye sab SAVENTS aaj ground me kya kar rahe hain???koi naya task milne hai kya aaj!!!

MAHI-agar aisa hua toh maza aa jaayega....


excitement se bhar MAHI aur ALFREEN ground ki taraf badh chali...

ground pahunchte hue dono ne dekha ki unke pure PHASEMATES wahan maujud hain par saamne apne chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saath MARILIZA WHIZZ ko dekh dono zara sa chownk bhi gayi thi...

turant aage badh wo dono MABEL ke baaju me jaakar khadi ho gayi....


MAHI-kya ho raha hai yahan...????

MABEL-no idea babes...class me udta hua ek bolne waala circular aaya jisme bataya gaya ki sabhi SAVENTS ko yahan ground pahunchna hai...


MABEL ki baat sunane ke baad puchne ke liye MAHI aur MABEL ke paas kuch bhi nahi bacha tha aur isiliye wo dono bhi baakiyon ki tarah saamne apne WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki taraf dekhne lagi...

wahin jab MARILIZA ne jab dekha ki first PHASE ke saare SAVENTS aa gaye hain toh....


MARILIZA- aap sab soch rahe honge ki aap sabko yahan kyun gather kiya gaya hai...???

baat darasal ye hai ki CHOSENS ke pichle 25 thousand ke itihas me pehli baar kuch anhoni hui hai...

kyunki wo anhoni aap ke PHASE se related hai toh isiliye aap sabka hakh banta hai ki aap sab us baat ko jaane....


MARILIZA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS chownke..kuch anhoni hui hai wo bhi unke PHASE me ye jaankar sabhi ke man me ek anjaane dar ne ghar kar liya tha....


MARILIZA-darasal aapke PHASE ke teen SAVENTS, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur RAAZ kal se missing hain....

un teeno ko is planet ke har jagah par talash kiya jaa chuka hai par unfortunately unka koi pata nahi chala....

pure CHOSENS me har SAVENT ke AURA ka ansh hamare paas stored rehta tha jisse us SAVENT ki location trace ki jaa sakti hai but unfortunately in teen SAVENTS ka AURA bhi inhe trace nahi kar paaya hai....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sun pure ground me khamoshi chhaa gayi...kisi ko bhi samajh me nahi aaraha tha ki kaise react kiya jaaye....

MAHI jisse RAAZ ki har baar behes hi hui thi,wo bhi uske yun laapata hone par bohot bura feel kar rahi thi...

aur khaas kar aaj kyunki abhi kuch der pehle hi toh usse pata chala tha ki aaj uske saath saath RAAZ ka bhi birthday hai...

itne khushi ke din yun manhoos khabar sunanane se wo kaafi dukhi ho gayi thi...

MAHI hi kya sabhi SAVENTS hi dukhi the aur dukhi ke saath saath thode dare hue bhi the...

sab ye sochne lag gaye the ki jab teen SAVENTS ke saath ye ho sakta hai toh kal ko unke saah bhi ye ho sakta hai...


WHIZZ MARILIZA se SAVENTS ke man ka ye bhaav chuppa nahi reh saka aur isiliye....


MARILIZA-fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi hai...aisa koi haadsa dobara naa ho iska intazam hum har chuke hain....

CHOSENS ki har PHASE ke entrace aur exit par ek NIYANTRAK ek CENSOR laga diya gaya hai jo kisi bhi sangin gatividhi me naa sirf active ho jaayega balki agar us activity me kisi SAVENT par koi khatra raha toh usse handle bhi kar lega...

itna hi nahi,is pure planet ke chaaron taraf ek REVEAL SHIELD laga diya gaya hai jisse bahar se yahan aane waale har shaksh ko naa sirf identify kar liya jaayega balki usse us shield me lage magical door ki madad se sidhe CHOSENS ke testing facility me bhej diya jaayega jahan se us shaksh ke yahan aane ki mansha ki puri jaanch hogi....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sunane ke baad sabhi SAVENTS thode nishchit dikhne lage the par in sabme ek SAVENT aisi bhi thi jo ab bhi halki dari hui thi...

ye aur koi nahi ALFREEN thi jo kal uske aur RAAZ ke beech jo hua,uske baare me soch kar halki dari hui thi par fir usne khud par kaabu paa apne face ko normal kar liya is baat se anjaan ki MAHI ne uske chehre ke lagatar badalte hue expressions dekh liye the...




PLANET-ZEAL



PLACE-DRISYAM



SCENE-4




ARRE DEKHO YAHAN KAUN HAI....????GARIBON KE RAJA, ZAROORAT MANDON KE BHAGWAAN HAMARE PUJNIYA BHRATA,VIKRAM......

apne ghode par sawar ek kutiya ke saamne haath ko jodte hue VIKRAM ke chote bhai ne ye baat kahi thi....

ye DRISHYAM tha VIKRAM ke jawani ka...bachpan me hi mahal se nikalne ke baad VIKRAM wahan ke praja ke beech rehne laga tha...

raajshi logon me ek bas VIKRAM hi tha jo garibon se pyar karta tha aur issi wajah se ZEAL ka wo nagar jahan is waqt VIKRAM tha,uska bada samman karte the...

choti si umar se hi VIKRAM bohot tejaswi tha...har kaam,har chunouti ko wo bohot asaani se pura kar deta tha...mahal ke aisho aaram ko chhodne ke baad VIKRAM ne khudhi apne liye ek kutiya banayi aur wahan nagar ke logon ke beech rehne laga...

wahan ke logon ki hi tarah har din jungle me jaa lakdi,phal aur vibhin upyogi vanaspatiyon ko wahan se laakar VIKRAM bech apna guzara karta tha..

usse ye sangharsh purn zindagi apne mahal ki zindagi se zyadi achi lagti thi..

apne hunar ki wajah se baaki logon ke mukabke jungle jaakar wahan se zaroorat ki chizen sangrah karne me VIKRAM ko bohot kam waqt lagta tha...

aur isiliye baaki ka waqt wo wahin jungle ke madhya bane jharne ke kareeb reh alag alag vidyaaon ke adhyan me lagata tha...

kabhi kabhi jab jungle me koi jaanwar aadamkhor ho jaaya karta tha,tab VIKRAM hi usse maara karta tha...

iski ek jhalak RAAZ ke yahan aate hi dikhayi gayi thi....

jungle se lout shaam ke waqt roz VIKRAM wahan ke bacchon aur yuvaon ko alag alag vishay me gyan diya karta tha...

aaj bhi wo wahi kar raha tha ki tabhi uska BHAI apne kuch logon aur sipahiyon ke saath wahan se guzra aur apne BHAI ko logon ke beech baitha dekh usne ye taunt kiya tha....

jahan VIKRAM ke chote bhai ko dekh wahan baithe log dar gaye the aur sabne apna sir neeche jhuka liya tha wahin uski baat sun VIKRAM bas muskura diya aur....


VIKRAM-taarif ke shukriya mere bhai....

RAJKUMAR-mai tumhara koi bhai nahi hun.....aur ab tum bhi in logon ki hi tarah hamare aadhin ho..hum hi tumhare bhagwaan hain...

isiliye khudko bhagwan banana chhodo aur agli baar jahan bhi tumhe hum dikhe,toh sabki tarah apna sir hamare saamne jhuka liya karo....

VIKRAM-is puri shrishti ka sirf ek hi bhagwaan hai aur mera sir sirf ussi ke aage jhukta hai...aur rahi baat tumhari toh maine tumhe bhai isiliye nahi kaha kyunki hum dono ek hi maa ke kokh se janme hain...

jis din maine tumhare mahal ko chhoda tha,ussi din maine bhi tum sabse naata tod liya tha...

ab tum mere liye begaane ho aur bhai bhi maine isiliye bola kyunki har begaane se bhale ho amir ho,gareeb ho ya koi bhikshuk,mai sabko bhai hi kehkar sambhodhit karta hun....


Rajkumar jaanta tha ki indirectly VIKRAM ne usse ek bhikari ke saath compare kiya hai aur isiliye


RAJKUMAR-tumhari itni himmat ki humse zuban ladao....

sipahi.... jao,aur ghasithe hue isse hamare kadmo me laakar feko....

Rajkumar ke aadesh ko sun ek sipahi apni talwar ke saath aage badha aur us talwar ko VIKRAM ke gardan par laga diya par tabhi....


Dhabb......

ye kya...????


ek second bhi nahi tik paayi wo talwar VIKRAM ke gardan par..kisiko dikha tak nahi ki kab VIKRAM halka sa right ki taraf tilt hua,us sipahi ke haath ko jisme talwar thi, halka jhatka diya jisse talwar uske haath se jhitki aur aisa hote hi ab wo talwar VIKRAM ke haathon me thi....

aisa kar VIKRAM ne ussi haath se jisme talwar thi,ek low jaw punch us sipahi ko maara jiske pressure se wo sipahi udta hua rajkumar ke upar se hota hua dusri taraf gira...

wahan moujud sabhi bhouchakke se ye sab hota dekh rahe the...

Rajkumar ki bhi ye haalat kharab ho gayi thi....

uski aankhon me bhi halka halka dar dikhne laga tha...


VIKRAM-arre ye kya??ye kaise bhagwaan hai jiski aankhon me dar dikhne laga????

abhi toh sirf dar dikha hai,chupchaap yahan se nahi gaya toh bhagwaan ke sharir se khoon bhi nikalne lagega...


Rajkumar ke behad kareeb jaa uski aankhon me jhaankte hue VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi jiske baad rajkumar apne saathiyon aur sipahiyon ke saath wahan se nikal gaya....


SCENE ENDS:-



WOOGER-kuch alag dikha is drishyam me aapko???

MAI-haan...us sipahi se bhidte waqt aur aakhri baat bolte waqt VIKRAM ke sharir se ek AURA nikal raha tha...

waise ye same chiz jab usne us cheeteh ko maara tha,tab bhi hua tha....jab wo us jharne ke paas abhyas kar raha hota tha,tab bhi ye AURA uske chaaron taraf tha...

but baaki waqt ye AURA gayab ho jaata hai...

WOOGER-bohot ache....


ab baari hai aakhri DRISHYAM ki....dhyan se dekhiyega isse...


WOOGER ki baat khatm hote hi scene change hi chuka tha....



FINAL SCENE:-



beta,hamari bacchi ko bachalo.... tumhara bhai usse utha kar mahal ki taraf le gaya hai...


shaam ka waqt hai... VIKRAM abhi jungle se lout hi raha tha ki tabhi usse uske kutiya ke paas rehne waala ek buddha mila jisne rote hue apni baat batayi...

darasal us buddhe ki ek beti thi jo behad khubsoorat thi aur rajkumar ko bohot pasand thi par us ladki ke dil me VIKRAM tha....

Rajkumar ne kayi baar us ladki ko apne rutbe aur apni fake taakat se rijhaane ki koshish ki par wo ladki kabhi rajkumar ko bhaaw nahi deti thi.....

par aaj subah ek guptchar ne jisse rajkumar ne ussi ladki par jaasusi karne ke liye rakha tha,aakar usse bataya ki wo ladki uske bade bhai VIKRAM se pyar karti hai toh rajkumar is sach ko bardaasht nahi kar paaya...

ek second nahi laga rajkumar ke man me us ladki ke prati prachand krodh jaagne me...

jo soft corner uske man me us ladki ke liye tha,wo khatm ho chuka tha aur ab uski jagah badle ne le ki thi...

Rajkumar ek teer se do shikar karna chahta tha..us ladki ko sabak sikhate hue apne bhai se apne kuch samay pehle hue apmaan ka badla lekar...

aur isiliye apni sena ki ek tukdi lekar rajkumar nagar me gaya aur us ladki ko beech bazar se uthakar mahal le gaya....

in saari ghatna ke baare me sun VIKRAM ki aankhen laal ho gayi..us ladki ke prati aakarshan VIKRAM ke andar bhi the aur isiliye jab usne ye sab suna toh apne ghode ko tezi se mahal ki taraf douda diya...

Rajkumar bhali bhaati jaanta tha ki us ladki ke liye VIKRAM mahal zaroor aayega aur isiliye usne mahal ki suraksha kadi kar di thi....

karib 1000 se zyada sainik mahal ko guard kar rahe the....

wahin VIKRAM behad tezi se apne ghode ko daudate hue mahal ke mukhya dwar ke paas pahuncha jahan 30 se zyada sainik tainat the par unhe kaatne me VIKRAM ko 1 minute se zyada ka samay nahi laga....

sainikon ko kaat VIKRAM aage badhta chala jaa raha tha..is waqt bhi uske sharir se wo adhbhudh AURA baahar nikal rahi thi....

mahal ke andar pravesh kar VIKRAM apne ghode se utra aur doudte hue aage badha...

age badhte hue VIKRAM har sainik ko kaaththa chala jaa raha tha....dekhte hi dekhte wahan khade har sainik ki laash bichti chali gayi....

kuch hi minutes me mahal ke lagbhag sabhi sainikon ke haath, pair ya gardan kat chuke the...

VIKRAM tezi se badhta hua mahal ke andar ghus gaya aur sidhe rajkumar ke shayan kaksh ki taraf doud pada...

shayan kaksh ka darwaza band tha jisse VIKRAM ne ek zor ki laat maari aur aisa hote hi wo bada sa darwaza ek jhatke me toot gaya...

darwaza tootne ke baad jaise hi VIKRAM ne andar ka nazara dekha toh.....

uski aankhen pathra gayi...wo jad sa hokar khada ho gaya...

reason...


jis ladki ko bachane VIKRAM yahan laashon ke dher bichata hua pahuncha tha,wo ladki neeche zamin par padi hui thi aur uski aankhe palat chuki thi jiska arth tha ki uske gale ko ghot diya gaya tha...

us ladki ke sharir me lesh maatra ka kapda bhi nahi tha jiska arth tha ki usse maarne se pehle uski izzat,uski azmat ko loot liya gaya tha....

wahin darwaze ke yun tootne se rajkumar jo abhi nanga hi tha,wo hadbada gaya tha aur jab usne apne saamne khoon se lathpath jo ki wahan ke sainikon ka tha,apne bhai ko dekha toh uski haalat aur kharab ho gayi...

wo soch hi raha tha ki kaise yahan se bachke nikla jaaye ki tabhi....


KHACHHHH.....

AAHHHH.......

ye dard bhari aah VIKRAM ki thi....

reason...

us ladki ki haalat ko dekh VIKRAM sab kuch bhul sa gaya tha jiska faayda uthathe hue ek sainik ne piche se uske peeth me talwar ghussa di jo sidhe uske pet se hote hue baahar nikal gayi....

wahin is scene ko dekh....


RAJKUMAR-shaabash sainik......ab iski gardan udda do....

khushi se khil utha tha rajkumar ka chehra jisse dekh VIKRAM ki aankhen ek baar firse ghusse se laal ho gayi....

is beech us sainik ne apni talwar wapas kheenchi aur VIKRAM ke gardan par chala di par tabhi....

VIKRAM tezi se jhuka aur turant palat gaya aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....

us sainik ki gardan piche ghum chuki thi....

gardan todne ke baad VIKRAM ne uski talwar uske haathon se li aur ek ke baad ek uske sharir ke ang kaaththa chala gaya....

peeche se ye sab rajkumar dekh raha tha aur uski buri tarah se fath gayi thi...

VIKRAM ki peeth uske taraf thi par usse pata tha ki uske paas itna samay nahi tha aur isiliye usne ek badi si chaadar ko apne body me lapeta aur bhaagta hua room se nikalne laga..

VIKRAM ke paas pahunch usne usse zor ka dhakka diya aur bhaagte hue apne pitah ke shayan kaksh ki taraf lapka....

par dhakka khaane ke baad jab VIKRAM aage girne laga toh ussi talwar ko aage rakh usne khud ko sambhala aur sidhe khade ho tezi se talwar Rajkumar ki taraf feka jo sidhe uske right hand ko faadta hua nikal gaya...

ek dardnaakh cheekh ke saath Rajkumar wahin gir gaya....

ab tak KING aur unki patni bhi baahar aa chuke the..apne bete ki ye haalat dekh unhe behad shock laga....

wo aage badhte usse pehle hi VIKRAM rajkumar tak pahunch chuka tha aur....

ek jhatke me usne wo talwar rajkumar ke haath se khinchi,usse ghumaya aur pehle,gardan, fir left aur right haath,fir pet aur fir rajkumar ke dono pair baari baari kaat diye.....

rajkumar ke khoon se naha gaya VIKRAM.....

is scene ko dekh jahan KING stabdh se rah gaye wahi queen toh behosh hi ho gayi.....

aur in sab se alag apne chote bhai ko maarne ke baad VIKRAM bhi apne ghutno par baith apne bhai ke kate hue ango ko ektak dekhne laga...

najane aisa kab tak hota rehta par tabhi....

khaachhhh..khachhh.....


do baar chali KING ki talwar VIKRAM ke peeth par jisse cheekhte hue wo hosh me aaya....

aur jaise hi KING ne firse talwar chalayi jiska isbaar nishana VIKRAM ka sir tha, VIKRAM neech jhuk gaya....

neech jhukte hue VIKRAM ne haath aage kar KING ke haathon se talwar ko jhatka diya aur agle hi pal wo talwar VIKRAM ke haathon me thi....


VIKRAM-jaise bachpan me us nirdosh vyakti ki mout ka zimmedar mai tha ussi prakar aaj aapke putra ki hatya ke zimmedar aap hain....

jee toh karta hai ki mai aapko yahi maar dun par kya karun!!!bhulane par bhi mai ye baat nahi bhul sakta ki badkismati se aap mere pitah hain...


apni baat bol VIKRAM tezi se mahal ke bahar ki taraf lapka..

usse pata tha ki bhale hi usne apni pitah ko kuch nahi kiya par uske pitah ussse nahi chhodne waale...

waise toh kitne bhi sainik kyun naa aa jaayen, VIKRAM ko pata tha ki koi uska saamna nahi kar paayega kintu abhi wo bohot ghayal tha....

uski aankhen reh reh kar band ho rahi thi aur is haalat me wo zyada logon se ladh kar nahi jeet sakta tha...

isiliye VIKRAM apne ghode me baith mahal se nikal gaya aur jaisa usne socha tha,waisa hi hua...

uske mahal se nikalte nikalte KING ne apne kayi sipahiyon ko VIKRAM ko maar dene ka hukm diya jiske baad wo sabhi sainik VIKRAM ke peeche ho liye....

wahin VIKRAM jo ki atyadhik khoon nikal jaane ki wajah se kaafi kamzor ho gaya tha,ghode par baithe baithe hi uski chetna jaane lagi aur wo ghode par lete lete hi behosh ho gaya....

wo ghoda tezi se aage badhta chala gaya aur ek jagah par jaakar rook gaya.....

kuch der baad VIKRAM ki aankhen khuli..usse behad dard ho raha tha...ussi haalat me usne un sainikon ki awaaz suni jo uske baare me hi baat karte hue usse dhund rahe the...

bojhil aankhon se VIKRAM ne dekha ki is waqt wo ek bade ae ghane ped ke piche hai aur jab uski nazar aage ki taraf gayi toh usne dekha ki wahan wahi chamatkari GUFA hai jisse ye PLANET bana...

us GUFA ko dekh VIKRAM ko aisa feel hua jaise wo GUFA usse pukar raha hai....

badhhawasi me ladhkhadate hue VIKRAM aage badha aur us GUFA ki taraf chal pada aur kuch hi palon me wo us gufa ke saamne tha...

usse us GUFA ke muhaane se behad tez urja feel ho rahi thi...par filhal VIKRAM ki haalat zyada sochne samajhne waali nahi thi aur isiliye...

VIKRAM ne GUFA ke andar jaane ke liye apne pair badhaye aur.....

uske sharir ko jhatka laga par wo baahar nahi fekaya balki gufa ke andar kheenchata hua chala gaya...

GUFA baahar se jitni badi dikh rahi thi,andar se usse bhi badi thi...par sabse kamal ki baat ye thi ki VIKRAM ke sharir ka saara khoon is GUFA ke andar aane se gayab ho chuka tha....

uske sharir me lage ghaaw toh ab bhi the par uska dimag ab kaam kar raha tha....

gufa ke andar pahunch VIKRAM ko kisi ek disha se behad strong energy feel hui aur uske kadam ussi taraf badh gaye...

us disha me aage badhta VIKRAM ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan behad tez roshni chamak rahi thi...

dhadakte dil se VIKRAM aage badha..par jaise jaise VIKRAM aage badh raha tha,usse uski zindagi me ghati ab tak ki saari ghatnaayen yaad aa rahi thi..

un saari ghatnaon ko ek film ki tarah dobara jeeta hua VIKRAM us roshni ke behad paas aa gaya....

aisa hone par usne apna haath aage badhaya aur tabhi....

uske man ke bheetar ek saath do films chalne lagi..ek toh ussiki zindagi ki thi aur dusri ek dusri kahani thi.....

par un do films ke chalne ke baad aakhir me uska dimag blank ho gaya aur aisa hone ke kuch der baad VIKRAM ki mooh se kuch nikla aur......

ek ray nikal VIKRAM par pada jiske agle hi second wo jal kar raakh ho gaya....

VIKRAM ke marte hi wo GUFA kaampne lagi..sirf wo GUFA hi nahi,balki pura ZEAL PLANET hi kaampne laga tha...

planet ke saare baashinde is kampan ko feel kar apne bachav me alag alag jagah chuppne lage par mout se hide and seek khelna kisike bas me nahi hota aur wahi yahan hua....

dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi minutes me pura ZEAL PLANET zamin ke andar dafan ho gaya....khatm ho gayi saari riyasaten,ujad gayi saari bastiyan aur naamoshinan mit gaya pure Planet se zindagi ka....

kuch minutes me hi ek living planet ek dead planet me badal chuka tha.....

bachi thi sirf wo CAVERN aur us CAVERN ke AURA se nikalta dhuan...



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WOOGER-ummid karta hun ki aapne saare drishyon ko dhyan se dekha hoga...agar koi sawal hai toh aap puch sakte hain...

MAI-ye aakhri me VIKRAM ke dimag me jo dusra scene chal raha tha,wo clear kyun nahi dikh raha tha...

WOOGER-question paper exams ke waqt hi milte hain,usse pehle nahi....

agar aapka waqt aaya,toh wo drishya aapko dikh jaayega....

aur koi sawal....???

MAI-RENAISS chalen...???


meri baat sun WOOGER se ek urja nikal mujhpar padi aur aisa hote hi mai gayab ho chuka tha...

gayab ho mai ek baar firse antariksh me tha par is baar mere saamne ek planet tha...meri manzil ki pehli sidhi


....RENAISS......

jiska shape normal planet ki tarah naa hokar ek BRAIN ki tarah tha....

mai thik RENAISS ke atmosphere ke baahar chupchaap khada tha ki tabhi....


RENAISS-agar jawab galat hua toh VIKRAM ki hi tarah tum bhi raakh hi jaaoge....isiliye agar chaaho toh lout sakte ho.....

MAI-sawal puch.....


meri baat sun kuch der tak khamoshi rahi par fir pucha kiya mujhse mera sawal......


RENAISS-VIKRAM ki mout kyun hui....???


MAI-hunar se,hunar se mili taakat se,manzilen haasil nahi hoti.... FAISLE......CHUNAW.....DECISION....

inhi ke sahi chayan se hi ek raahgir ko raasta,aur us raaste ko uski manzil milti hai....

VIKRAM ne sab kuch sahi kiya,bas FAISLA galat le liya......



mere jawab ke baad ek baar firse khaamoshi chhaa gayi par ye sirf ek second ke liye hi tha kyunki agle hi pal....

RENAISS planet se ek ray nikal jo ki ek rope thi,mujhpar padi aur aisa hote hi mai RENAISS ke atmosphere ke andar kheenchata chala gaya....

aur in sabka samooh arth tha ki finally, its time to.....


........UNFOLD THE RAAZ..........







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V....J......
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WICKEDS SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION KO JEET JAATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF WOOGER RAAZ KO VIKRAM KE BAALYA KAAL KI JHALKIYAN DIKHATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-38



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE




HUM ALREADY LATE HO CHUKE HAIN AUR TU ABHI TAK BREAKFAST HI KAR RAHI HAI....


hall me kadam rakhte hi MAHI ne ALFREEN ko jo ki abhi breakfast kar rahi thi,dekhte hue ye baat kahi jispar....


ALFREEN-tu toh INSTITUTION jaane ke liye aise excited ho rahi hai jaise aaj yahan par hamara pehla din ho....!!!

MAHI-first day me bhi itni excitement nahi hui thi jitni mujhe aaj feel ho rahi hai...

ALFREEN-aur aisa kyun???

MAHI-jaise tujhe pata nahi hai...???ye excitement SWEEP-STAKE ki wajah se hai...

kal SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION ko dekh mujhe feel hua ki maine toh abhi kuch seekha hi nahi hai....

kal MORALS aur WICKEDS ki team jis tarah metaphisycal activities ko anjaam de rahe the,usse dekh mujhe toh Goosebumps aa gaye the...

infact ab bhi jab mai kal ke baare me sochti hun toh mere andar ek adrenaline rush doud uththa hai....


MAHI baat karte waqt bhi kaafi energetic dikh rahi thi jisse dekh....


ALFREEN-wo toh dikh hi raha hai.aisa lag raha hai jaise next SWEEP-STAKE kal hi hone wala hai aur tu dono teams se kisi ek ki captain hai....

MAHI-kal nahi,par dekhna,ek din ye hoga zaroor.....aur haan,teams me koi choice nahi hai,mai sirf MORALS ki team me rahungi,lead karungi aur jeetaungi bhi....


AUR US DIN SABSE ZYADA KHUSHI HUME HOGI....


FLORIN apni wife MARIA ke saath ye bolte hue apne room se hall ki taraf aa rahe the...

MAHI ke paas aakar dono ne hi usse side se hug kiya aur uske sir par apne blessings dete hue haath rakhe....


MAHI-aur jab mujhe trophy milegi toh mai usse aap dono ko dedicate karungi....


kal ANWIR aur MORANA se bahas ke baad jab MAHI baaki MORALS supporters ke saath STADIUM se baahar jaane ko hui toh jaate jaate uski nazar ek baar ground par padi thi jahan MARILIZA WHIZZ SWEEP-STAKE ke winners WICKEDS ko trophy de rahi thi,ussi trophy ko yaad kar MAHI ne ye baat kahi thi....

wahin MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA bhi behad khush aur bhaawuk ho gaye..

itne kam waqt me hi unhe MAHI apni beti si lagne lagi thi aur aaj MAHI ki baat sun unhe ye ehsaas hua tha ki MAHI ke dil me bhi unke liye same feelings hai....


FLORIN-hum intazar karenge us din ka beti....


ek baar firse MAHI ke sir me pyar bhara haath ferte hue FLORIN ne ye baat kahi...

wahin ALFREEN apne mom dad aur MAHI ki bonding,unka pyar dekhkar behad khush ho rahi thi...


MAHI-tu kya daanth dikha rahi hai....ab chalegi bhi ki lunch bhi abhi hi karna hai tujhe....

ALFREEN-ek minute chain nahi rehta tujhe...chal....


paani peekar ALFREEN khadi hui aur apne mom dad ko side hug karkar bye kehte hue MAHI ke saath aage badhne ko hui par tabhi....


FLORIN-ek second baccho.... INSTITUTION se pehle hostel jaakar RAAZ ko birthday wish kar dena.....


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI chownke....


MAHI-aaj uska birthday hai!!!!

FLORIN-haan..yahan aakar itna kuch dekha hai ki ab lagta hai ki ab koi bhi baat par surprise nahi lagega...

ab issi baat ko dekhlo,6 mahine pehle jis din hum yahan aaye the,us din RAAZ ka birthday tha aur time loop ko wajah sirf 6 mahino me RAAZ do saal bada ho gaya hai...

aur aaj uska 18th birthday hai.....


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI ko fir se shock laga...unhe FLORIN ki baat samajh me nahi aayi aur isiliye....


ALFREEN-ye aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain...???6 mahine me 2 saal ka time loop....!!!!


ALFREEN ki baat sun FLORIN ne kal SWEEP-STAKE ke douran hui us PEACE MAKER ki baatein batayi jisse sun MAHI aur ALFREEN shocked ho gaye....


ALFREEN-man,this place is insane.....pata nahi kya kya RAAZ chuppe hain yahan....


jahan ALFREEN bas is karishmayi duniya ke baare me soch rahi thi wahin...


MAHI-6 mahine pehle jis raat aap dono yahan aaye the,us din RAAZ ka birthday tha....

thats strange.. kyunki us din toh mera bhi birthday tha....

ALFREEN-what.....!!!matlab aaj tera bhi birthday hai....


MAHI ki baat sun khushi se uchalte hue ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi aur turant MAHI ke gale lag gayi....

ALFREEN ke baad FLORIN aur MARIA ne bhi MAHI ke gale lag usse blessings di...

aaj pehli baar tha jab jeete jaagte log MAHI ko uske birthday par wish bhi kar rahe the aur behad khush bhi dikh rahe the aur ye sab dekh MAHI bhi behad khush dikhne lagi thi....


FLORIN-aaj hamari beti ka birthday hai aur hume hi pata nahi tha...

MARIA-par ab toh pata hai naa.... toh kyun naa,ek party rakhi jaaye aur sabse achi baat ye hai ki arrangements ki bhi koi tention nahi hai...

yahan toh bas jo chahiye,usse bolna hota hai aur har chiz aa jaati hai....

tum sab ek kaam karo, INSTITUTION me apne PHASE ke sabhi hostlers aur discholars SAVENTS ko aaj shaam yahan hamare ghar par invite karo....

ALFREEN-fantastic idea....

FLORIN-ek kaam karte hain, RAAZ ka birthday bhi MAHI ke saath hi celebrate kar lete hain...


FLORIN ki baat sun jahan baaki dono normal hi the wahin ALFREEN ka mood bigadne laga tha...


ALFREEN-iski kya zaroorat hai dad....let him be naa....i don't like him...

FLORIN-beta kitni baar kaha hai ki aisa bolna aur sochna is not good....

MARIA-yes AL...tumhe is tarah kisike bhi baare me negetive bilkul bhi sochna nahi chahiye...

par FLORIN...ek baat toh hai,ki RAAZ kabhi bhi party me nahi aayega aur agar hum kisi tarah usse kuch aur bahana bana kar bhi yahan le aaye tab bhi koi faayda toh nahi hoga ulta nuksaan ho jaayega....

tumhe toh pata hai ki usse apna birthday celebrate karna pasand nahi aur isiliye wo kuch aisa bol ya kar dega jisse puri party ka maza hi kharab ho jaayega....

ALFREEN-exactly..aur isiliye mai mana kar rahi thi..uske liye MAHI ka birthday spoil ho,ye mai bardasht nahi karungi....


ghusse me ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi jisse sun....


MAHI-shaant maate shaant..thik hai nahi bulaayenge usse....

FLORIN-haan par usse milkar usse wish zaroor kar dena...

ALFREEN-par pops wo ispar bhi ulta jawab hi dega.....

FLORIN-nahi dega..hostel me bhi jab uske birthday me hum usse wish karte the toh wo thanks toh nahi kehta tha par kuch galat bhi nahi bolta tha..

usse bas celebrations wagarah me interest nahi hota....

MAHI-cool uncle..par abhi toh hum already late ho chuke hain isiliye INSTITUTION se aate waqt usse wish kar denge....

FLORIN/MARIA-thik hai...


baaton baaton me wakayi late ho chuka tha aur isiliye FLORIN aur MARIA ko bye bol MAHI aur ALFREEN turant INSTITUTION ke liye nikal gaye...




PLACE-CHOSEN'S




GUYZZZ.WAHAN CLASS ME NAHI,SABHI SAVENTS GROUND ME HAIN....TUM BHI WAHIN AA JAAO....


VALDIS ki baat sun MAHI aur ALFREEN jo apni class ki taraf jaa rahi thi,wapas palat gayi aur ground ki taraf jaane lagi....


ALFREEN-ye sab SAVENTS aaj ground me kya kar rahe hain???koi naya task milne hai kya aaj!!!

MAHI-agar aisa hua toh maza aa jaayega....


excitement se bhar MAHI aur ALFREEN ground ki taraf badh chali...

ground pahunchte hue dono ne dekha ki unke pure PHASEMATES wahan maujud hain par saamne apne chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saath MARILIZA WHIZZ ko dekh dono zara sa chownk bhi gayi thi...

turant aage badh wo dono MABEL ke baaju me jaakar khadi ho gayi....


MAHI-kya ho raha hai yahan...????

MABEL-no idea babes...class me udta hua ek bolne waala circular aaya jisme bataya gaya ki sabhi SAVENTS ko yahan ground pahunchna hai...


MABEL ki baat sunane ke baad puchne ke liye MAHI aur MABEL ke paas kuch bhi nahi bacha tha aur isiliye wo dono bhi baakiyon ki tarah saamne apne WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki taraf dekhne lagi...

wahin jab MARILIZA ne jab dekha ki first PHASE ke saare SAVENTS aa gaye hain toh....


MARILIZA- aap sab soch rahe honge ki aap sabko yahan kyun gather kiya gaya hai...???

baat darasal ye hai ki CHOSENS ke pichle 25 thousand ke itihas me pehli baar kuch anhoni hui hai...

kyunki wo anhoni aap ke PHASE se related hai toh isiliye aap sabka hakh banta hai ki aap sab us baat ko jaane....


MARILIZA ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS chownke..kuch anhoni hui hai wo bhi unke PHASE me ye jaankar sabhi ke man me ek anjaane dar ne ghar kar liya tha....


MARILIZA-darasal aapke PHASE ke teen SAVENTS, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur RAAZ kal se missing hain....

un teeno ko is planet ke har jagah par talash kiya jaa chuka hai par unfortunately unka koi pata nahi chala....

pure CHOSENS me har SAVENT ke AURA ka ansh hamare paas stored rehta tha jisse us SAVENT ki location trace ki jaa sakti hai but unfortunately in teen SAVENTS ka AURA bhi inhe trace nahi kar paaya hai....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sun pure ground me khamoshi chhaa gayi...kisi ko bhi samajh me nahi aaraha tha ki kaise react kiya jaaye....

MAHI jisse RAAZ ki har baar behes hi hui thi,wo bhi uske yun laapata hone par bohot bura feel kar rahi thi...

aur khaas kar aaj kyunki abhi kuch der pehle hi toh usse pata chala tha ki aaj uske saath saath RAAZ ka bhi birthday hai...

itne khushi ke din yun manhoos khabar sunanane se wo kaafi dukhi ho gayi thi...

MAHI hi kya sabhi SAVENTS hi dukhi the aur dukhi ke saath saath thode dare hue bhi the...

sab ye sochne lag gaye the ki jab teen SAVENTS ke saath ye ho sakta hai toh kal ko unke saah bhi ye ho sakta hai...


WHIZZ MARILIZA se SAVENTS ke man ka ye bhaav chuppa nahi reh saka aur isiliye....


MARILIZA-fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi hai...aisa koi haadsa dobara naa ho iska intazam hum har chuke hain....

CHOSENS ki har PHASE ke entrace aur exit par ek NIYANTRAK ek CENSOR laga diya gaya hai jo kisi bhi sangin gatividhi me naa sirf active ho jaayega balki agar us activity me kisi SAVENT par koi khatra raha toh usse handle bhi kar lega...

itna hi nahi,is pure planet ke chaaron taraf ek REVEAL SHIELD laga diya gaya hai jisse bahar se yahan aane waale har shaksh ko naa sirf identify kar liya jaayega balki usse us shield me lage magical door ki madad se sidhe CHOSENS ke testing facility me bhej diya jaayega jahan se us shaksh ke yahan aane ki mansha ki puri jaanch hogi....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sunane ke baad sabhi SAVENTS thode nishchit dikhne lage the par in sabme ek SAVENT aisi bhi thi jo ab bhi halki dari hui thi...

ye aur koi nahi ALFREEN thi jo kal uske aur RAAZ ke beech jo hua,uske baare me soch kar halki dari hui thi par fir usne khud par kaabu paa apne face ko normal kar liya is baat se anjaan ki MAHI ne uske chehre ke lagatar badalte hue expressions dekh liye the...




PLANET-ZEAL



PLACE-DRISYAM



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ARRE DEKHO YAHAN KAUN HAI....????GARIBON KE RAJA, ZAROORAT MANDON KE BHAGWAAN HAMARE PUJNIYA BHRATA,VIKRAM......

apne ghode par sawar ek kutiya ke saamne haath ko jodte hue VIKRAM ke chote bhai ne ye baat kahi thi....

ye DRISHYAM tha VIKRAM ke jawani ka...bachpan me hi mahal se nikalne ke baad VIKRAM wahan ke praja ke beech rehne laga tha...

raajshi logon me ek bas VIKRAM hi tha jo garibon se pyar karta tha aur issi wajah se ZEAL ka wo nagar jahan is waqt VIKRAM tha,uska bada samman karte the...

choti si umar se hi VIKRAM bohot tejaswi tha...har kaam,har chunouti ko wo bohot asaani se pura kar deta tha...mahal ke aisho aaram ko chhodne ke baad VIKRAM ne khudhi apne liye ek kutiya banayi aur wahan nagar ke logon ke beech rehne laga...

wahan ke logon ki hi tarah har din jungle me jaa lakdi,phal aur vibhin upyogi vanaspatiyon ko wahan se laakar VIKRAM bech apna guzara karta tha..

usse ye sangharsh purn zindagi apne mahal ki zindagi se zyadi achi lagti thi..

apne hunar ki wajah se baaki logon ke mukabke jungle jaakar wahan se zaroorat ki chizen sangrah karne me VIKRAM ko bohot kam waqt lagta tha...

aur isiliye baaki ka waqt wo wahin jungle ke madhya bane jharne ke kareeb reh alag alag vidyaaon ke adhyan me lagata tha...

kabhi kabhi jab jungle me koi jaanwar aadamkhor ho jaaya karta tha,tab VIKRAM hi usse maara karta tha...

iski ek jhalak RAAZ ke yahan aate hi dikhayi gayi thi....

jungle se lout shaam ke waqt roz VIKRAM wahan ke bacchon aur yuvaon ko alag alag vishay me gyan diya karta tha...

aaj bhi wo wahi kar raha tha ki tabhi uska BHAI apne kuch logon aur sipahiyon ke saath wahan se guzra aur apne BHAI ko logon ke beech baitha dekh usne ye taunt kiya tha....

jahan VIKRAM ke chote bhai ko dekh wahan baithe log dar gaye the aur sabne apna sir neeche jhuka liya tha wahin uski baat sun VIKRAM bas muskura diya aur....


VIKRAM-taarif ke shukriya mere bhai....

RAJKUMAR-mai tumhara koi bhai nahi hun.....aur ab tum bhi in logon ki hi tarah hamare aadhin ho..hum hi tumhare bhagwaan hain...

isiliye khudko bhagwan banana chhodo aur agli baar jahan bhi tumhe hum dikhe,toh sabki tarah apna sir hamare saamne jhuka liya karo....

VIKRAM-is puri shrishti ka sirf ek hi bhagwaan hai aur mera sir sirf ussi ke aage jhukta hai...aur rahi baat tumhari toh maine tumhe bhai isiliye nahi kaha kyunki hum dono ek hi maa ke kokh se janme hain...

jis din maine tumhare mahal ko chhoda tha,ussi din maine bhi tum sabse naata tod liya tha...

ab tum mere liye begaane ho aur bhai bhi maine isiliye bola kyunki har begaane se bhale ho amir ho,gareeb ho ya koi bhikshuk,mai sabko bhai hi kehkar sambhodhit karta hun....


Rajkumar jaanta tha ki indirectly VIKRAM ne usse ek bhikari ke saath compare kiya hai aur isiliye


RAJKUMAR-tumhari itni himmat ki humse zuban ladao....

sipahi.... jao,aur ghasithe hue isse hamare kadmo me laakar feko....

Rajkumar ke aadesh ko sun ek sipahi apni talwar ke saath aage badha aur us talwar ko VIKRAM ke gardan par laga diya par tabhi....


Dhabb......

ye kya...????


ek second bhi nahi tik paayi wo talwar VIKRAM ke gardan par..kisiko dikha tak nahi ki kab VIKRAM halka sa right ki taraf tilt hua,us sipahi ke haath ko jisme talwar thi, halka jhatka diya jisse talwar uske haath se jhitki aur aisa hote hi ab wo talwar VIKRAM ke haathon me thi....

aisa kar VIKRAM ne ussi haath se jisme talwar thi,ek low jaw punch us sipahi ko maara jiske pressure se wo sipahi udta hua rajkumar ke upar se hota hua dusri taraf gira...

wahan moujud sabhi bhouchakke se ye sab hota dekh rahe the...

Rajkumar ki bhi ye haalat kharab ho gayi thi....

uski aankhon me bhi halka halka dar dikhne laga tha...


VIKRAM-arre ye kya??ye kaise bhagwaan hai jiski aankhon me dar dikhne laga????

abhi toh sirf dar dikha hai,chupchaap yahan se nahi gaya toh bhagwaan ke sharir se khoon bhi nikalne lagega...


Rajkumar ke behad kareeb jaa uski aankhon me jhaankte hue VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi jiske baad rajkumar apne saathiyon aur sipahiyon ke saath wahan se nikal gaya....


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WOOGER-kuch alag dikha is drishyam me aapko???

MAI-haan...us sipahi se bhidte waqt aur aakhri baat bolte waqt VIKRAM ke sharir se ek AURA nikal raha tha...

waise ye same chiz jab usne us cheeteh ko maara tha,tab bhi hua tha....jab wo us jharne ke paas abhyas kar raha hota tha,tab bhi ye AURA uske chaaron taraf tha...

but baaki waqt ye AURA gayab ho jaata hai...

WOOGER-bohot ache....


ab baari hai aakhri DRISHYAM ki....dhyan se dekhiyega isse...


WOOGER ki baat khatm hote hi scene change hi chuka tha....



FINAL SCENE:-



beta,hamari bacchi ko bachalo.... tumhara bhai usse utha kar mahal ki taraf le gaya hai...


shaam ka waqt hai... VIKRAM abhi jungle se lout hi raha tha ki tabhi usse uske kutiya ke paas rehne waala ek buddha mila jisne rote hue apni baat batayi...

darasal us buddhe ki ek beti thi jo behad khubsoorat thi aur rajkumar ko bohot pasand thi par us ladki ke dil me VIKRAM tha....

Rajkumar ne kayi baar us ladki ko apne rutbe aur apni fake taakat se rijhaane ki koshish ki par wo ladki kabhi rajkumar ko bhaaw nahi deti thi.....

par aaj subah ek guptchar ne jisse rajkumar ne ussi ladki par jaasusi karne ke liye rakha tha,aakar usse bataya ki wo ladki uske bade bhai VIKRAM se pyar karti hai toh rajkumar is sach ko bardaasht nahi kar paaya...

ek second nahi laga rajkumar ke man me us ladki ke prati prachand krodh jaagne me...

jo soft corner uske man me us ladki ke liye tha,wo khatm ho chuka tha aur ab uski jagah badle ne le ki thi...

Rajkumar ek teer se do shikar karna chahta tha..us ladki ko sabak sikhate hue apne bhai se apne kuch samay pehle hue apmaan ka badla lekar...

aur isiliye apni sena ki ek tukdi lekar rajkumar nagar me gaya aur us ladki ko beech bazar se uthakar mahal le gaya....

in saari ghatna ke baare me sun VIKRAM ki aankhen laal ho gayi..us ladki ke prati aakarshan VIKRAM ke andar bhi the aur isiliye jab usne ye sab suna toh apne ghode ko tezi se mahal ki taraf douda diya...

Rajkumar bhali bhaati jaanta tha ki us ladki ke liye VIKRAM mahal zaroor aayega aur isiliye usne mahal ki suraksha kadi kar di thi....

karib 1000 se zyada sainik mahal ko guard kar rahe the....

wahin VIKRAM behad tezi se apne ghode ko daudate hue mahal ke mukhya dwar ke paas pahuncha jahan 30 se zyada sainik tainat the par unhe kaatne me VIKRAM ko 1 minute se zyada ka samay nahi laga....

sainikon ko kaat VIKRAM aage badhta chala jaa raha tha..is waqt bhi uske sharir se wo adhbhudh AURA baahar nikal rahi thi....

mahal ke andar pravesh kar VIKRAM apne ghode se utra aur doudte hue aage badha...

age badhte hue VIKRAM har sainik ko kaaththa chala jaa raha tha....dekhte hi dekhte wahan khade har sainik ki laash bichti chali gayi....

kuch hi minutes me mahal ke lagbhag sabhi sainikon ke haath, pair ya gardan kat chuke the...

VIKRAM tezi se badhta hua mahal ke andar ghus gaya aur sidhe rajkumar ke shayan kaksh ki taraf doud pada...

shayan kaksh ka darwaza band tha jisse VIKRAM ne ek zor ki laat maari aur aisa hote hi wo bada sa darwaza ek jhatke me toot gaya...

darwaza tootne ke baad jaise hi VIKRAM ne andar ka nazara dekha toh.....

uski aankhen pathra gayi...wo jad sa hokar khada ho gaya...

reason...


jis ladki ko bachane VIKRAM yahan laashon ke dher bichata hua pahuncha tha,wo ladki neeche zamin par padi hui thi aur uski aankhe palat chuki thi jiska arth tha ki uske gale ko ghot diya gaya tha...

us ladki ke sharir me lesh maatra ka kapda bhi nahi tha jiska arth tha ki usse maarne se pehle uski izzat,uski azmat ko loot liya gaya tha....

wahin darwaze ke yun tootne se rajkumar jo abhi nanga hi tha,wo hadbada gaya tha aur jab usne apne saamne khoon se lathpath jo ki wahan ke sainikon ka tha,apne bhai ko dekha toh uski haalat aur kharab ho gayi...

wo soch hi raha tha ki kaise yahan se bachke nikla jaaye ki tabhi....


KHACHHHH.....

AAHHHH.......

ye dard bhari aah VIKRAM ki thi....

reason...

us ladki ki haalat ko dekh VIKRAM sab kuch bhul sa gaya tha jiska faayda uthathe hue ek sainik ne piche se uske peeth me talwar ghussa di jo sidhe uske pet se hote hue baahar nikal gayi....

wahin is scene ko dekh....


RAJKUMAR-shaabash sainik......ab iski gardan udda do....

khushi se khil utha tha rajkumar ka chehra jisse dekh VIKRAM ki aankhen ek baar firse ghusse se laal ho gayi....

is beech us sainik ne apni talwar wapas kheenchi aur VIKRAM ke gardan par chala di par tabhi....

VIKRAM tezi se jhuka aur turant palat gaya aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....

us sainik ki gardan piche ghum chuki thi....

gardan todne ke baad VIKRAM ne uski talwar uske haathon se li aur ek ke baad ek uske sharir ke ang kaaththa chala gaya....

peeche se ye sab rajkumar dekh raha tha aur uski buri tarah se fath gayi thi...

VIKRAM ki peeth uske taraf thi par usse pata tha ki uske paas itna samay nahi tha aur isiliye usne ek badi si chaadar ko apne body me lapeta aur bhaagta hua room se nikalne laga..

VIKRAM ke paas pahunch usne usse zor ka dhakka diya aur bhaagte hue apne pitah ke shayan kaksh ki taraf lapka....

par dhakka khaane ke baad jab VIKRAM aage girne laga toh ussi talwar ko aage rakh usne khud ko sambhala aur sidhe khade ho tezi se talwar Rajkumar ki taraf feka jo sidhe uske right hand ko faadta hua nikal gaya...

ek dardnaakh cheekh ke saath Rajkumar wahin gir gaya....

ab tak KING aur unki patni bhi baahar aa chuke the..apne bete ki ye haalat dekh unhe behad shock laga....

wo aage badhte usse pehle hi VIKRAM rajkumar tak pahunch chuka tha aur....

ek jhatke me usne wo talwar rajkumar ke haath se khinchi,usse ghumaya aur pehle,gardan, fir left aur right haath,fir pet aur fir rajkumar ke dono pair baari baari kaat diye.....

rajkumar ke khoon se naha gaya VIKRAM.....

is scene ko dekh jahan KING stabdh se rah gaye wahi queen toh behosh hi ho gayi.....

aur in sab se alag apne chote bhai ko maarne ke baad VIKRAM bhi apne ghutno par baith apne bhai ke kate hue ango ko ektak dekhne laga...

najane aisa kab tak hota rehta par tabhi....

khaachhhh..khachhh.....


do baar chali KING ki talwar VIKRAM ke peeth par jisse cheekhte hue wo hosh me aaya....

aur jaise hi KING ne firse talwar chalayi jiska isbaar nishana VIKRAM ka sir tha, VIKRAM neech jhuk gaya....

neech jhukte hue VIKRAM ne haath aage kar KING ke haathon se talwar ko jhatka diya aur agle hi pal wo talwar VIKRAM ke haathon me thi....


VIKRAM-jaise bachpan me us nirdosh vyakti ki mout ka zimmedar mai tha ussi prakar aaj aapke putra ki hatya ke zimmedar aap hain....

jee toh karta hai ki mai aapko yahi maar dun par kya karun!!!bhulane par bhi mai ye baat nahi bhul sakta ki badkismati se aap mere pitah hain...


apni baat bol VIKRAM tezi se mahal ke bahar ki taraf lapka..

usse pata tha ki bhale hi usne apni pitah ko kuch nahi kiya par uske pitah ussse nahi chhodne waale...

waise toh kitne bhi sainik kyun naa aa jaayen, VIKRAM ko pata tha ki koi uska saamna nahi kar paayega kintu abhi wo bohot ghayal tha....

uski aankhen reh reh kar band ho rahi thi aur is haalat me wo zyada logon se ladh kar nahi jeet sakta tha...

isiliye VIKRAM apne ghode me baith mahal se nikal gaya aur jaisa usne socha tha,waisa hi hua...

uske mahal se nikalte nikalte KING ne apne kayi sipahiyon ko VIKRAM ko maar dene ka hukm diya jiske baad wo sabhi sainik VIKRAM ke peeche ho liye....

wahin VIKRAM jo ki atyadhik khoon nikal jaane ki wajah se kaafi kamzor ho gaya tha,ghode par baithe baithe hi uski chetna jaane lagi aur wo ghode par lete lete hi behosh ho gaya....

wo ghoda tezi se aage badhta chala gaya aur ek jagah par jaakar rook gaya.....

kuch der baad VIKRAM ki aankhen khuli..usse behad dard ho raha tha...ussi haalat me usne un sainikon ki awaaz suni jo uske baare me hi baat karte hue usse dhund rahe the...

bojhil aankhon se VIKRAM ne dekha ki is waqt wo ek bade ae ghane ped ke piche hai aur jab uski nazar aage ki taraf gayi toh usne dekha ki wahan wahi chamatkari GUFA hai jisse ye PLANET bana...

us GUFA ko dekh VIKRAM ko aisa feel hua jaise wo GUFA usse pukar raha hai....

badhhawasi me ladhkhadate hue VIKRAM aage badha aur us GUFA ki taraf chal pada aur kuch hi palon me wo us gufa ke saamne tha...

usse us GUFA ke muhaane se behad tez urja feel ho rahi thi...par filhal VIKRAM ki haalat zyada sochne samajhne waali nahi thi aur isiliye...

VIKRAM ne GUFA ke andar jaane ke liye apne pair badhaye aur.....

uske sharir ko jhatka laga par wo baahar nahi fekaya balki gufa ke andar kheenchata hua chala gaya...

GUFA baahar se jitni badi dikh rahi thi,andar se usse bhi badi thi...par sabse kamal ki baat ye thi ki VIKRAM ke sharir ka saara khoon is GUFA ke andar aane se gayab ho chuka tha....

uske sharir me lage ghaaw toh ab bhi the par uska dimag ab kaam kar raha tha....

gufa ke andar pahunch VIKRAM ko kisi ek disha se behad strong energy feel hui aur uske kadam ussi taraf badh gaye...

us disha me aage badhta VIKRAM ek aisi jagah par pahuncha jahan behad tez roshni chamak rahi thi...

dhadakte dil se VIKRAM aage badha..par jaise jaise VIKRAM aage badh raha tha,usse uski zindagi me ghati ab tak ki saari ghatnaayen yaad aa rahi thi..

un saari ghatnaon ko ek film ki tarah dobara jeeta hua VIKRAM us roshni ke behad paas aa gaya....

aisa hone par usne apna haath aage badhaya aur tabhi....

uske man ke bheetar ek saath do films chalne lagi..ek toh ussiki zindagi ki thi aur dusri ek dusri kahani thi.....

par un do films ke chalne ke baad aakhir me uska dimag blank ho gaya aur aisa hone ke kuch der baad VIKRAM ki mooh se kuch nikla aur......

ek ray nikal VIKRAM par pada jiske agle hi second wo jal kar raakh ho gaya....

VIKRAM ke marte hi wo GUFA kaampne lagi..sirf wo GUFA hi nahi,balki pura ZEAL PLANET hi kaampne laga tha...

planet ke saare baashinde is kampan ko feel kar apne bachav me alag alag jagah chuppne lage par mout se hide and seek khelna kisike bas me nahi hota aur wahi yahan hua....

dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi minutes me pura ZEAL PLANET zamin ke andar dafan ho gaya....khatm ho gayi saari riyasaten,ujad gayi saari bastiyan aur naamoshinan mit gaya pure Planet se zindagi ka....

kuch minutes me hi ek living planet ek dead planet me badal chuka tha.....

bachi thi sirf wo CAVERN aur us CAVERN ke AURA se nikalta dhuan...



SCENE ENDS:-



WOOGER-ummid karta hun ki aapne saare drishyon ko dhyan se dekha hoga...agar koi sawal hai toh aap puch sakte hain...

MAI-ye aakhri me VIKRAM ke dimag me jo dusra scene chal raha tha,wo clear kyun nahi dikh raha tha...

WOOGER-question paper exams ke waqt hi milte hain,usse pehle nahi....

agar aapka waqt aaya,toh wo drishya aapko dikh jaayega....

aur koi sawal....???

MAI-RENAISS chalen...???


meri baat sun WOOGER se ek urja nikal mujhpar padi aur aisa hote hi mai gayab ho chuka tha...

gayab ho mai ek baar firse antariksh me tha par is baar mere saamne ek planet tha...meri manzil ki pehli sidhi


....RENAISS......

jiska shape normal planet ki tarah naa hokar ek BRAIN ki tarah tha....

mai thik RENAISS ke atmosphere ke baahar chupchaap khada tha ki tabhi....


RENAISS-agar jawab galat hua toh VIKRAM ki hi tarah tum bhi raakh hi jaaoge....isiliye agar chaaho toh lout sakte ho.....

MAI-sawal puch.....


meri baat sun kuch der tak khamoshi rahi par fir pucha kiya mujhse mera sawal......


RENAISS-VIKRAM ki mout kyun hui....???



MAI-hunar se,hunar se mili taakat se,manzilen haasil nahi hoti.... FAISLE......CHUNAW.....DECISION....

inhi ke sahi chayan se hi ek raahgir ko raasta,aur us raaste ko uski manzil milti hai....

VIKRAM ne sab kuch sahi kiya,bas FAISLA galat le liya......



mere jawab ke baad ek baar firse khaamoshi chhaa gayi par ye sirf ek second ke liye hi tha kyunki agle hi pal....

RENAISS planet se ek ray nikal jo ki ek rope thi,mujhpar padi aur aisa hote hi mai RENAISS ke atmosphere ke andar kheenchata chala gaya....

aur in sabka samooh arth tha ki finally, its time to.....


........UNFOLD THE RAAZ..........







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....







AAPKA APNA V....J......
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dead man143

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Wah bhai wah nice update Vikram mar gya lekin kaise as per raaz Vikram ne galat faisla liye konsa dicission galat tha uska bhai ??


Raaz ke raaz bohot khatarnak raaz

Nice and new concept of story superb thinking

Waiting for next update
 
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