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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Bhai kahani me sex nhi h tbhi to iss kahani ki trf jhukav kchh jyada h...kyuki agr isme b sex ko ghused diya gya hota to ye bhi bakiyo ki trha hi ho jaati...lekin iss kahani me aisa kchh nhi h srf story h wo b ekdm bheja fry kr dene wali...isi wajha se main apne bahut sare dosto ko ye kahani with link suggest kiya hu read krne ke liye...ar isi liye mujhe ye story psnd h...keep it up bro
You are suprb in this category keep itup
thanks brother....
 

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Ye to Aapki utkristh Lekhni ka natiza hai jo aap sabko apne shabdo ke mayazal me phasha rakhe hai .
Mostly Fantasy Story Brother Sister love and Faimly Revange pe hi hoti hai . Ye aapki sabse unique story hai .

Thanks for Sharing a Great story.
that was the idea brother....thanks
 

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Bhai this story is far way better than all sex Stories.
And brother u don't know we are addicted to the story.
Ur writing skill is outstanding the way u always surprise us in every update.
Ur knowledge about the things that u include in this story is ? feature of ur writing skill.
Ur that person that make silent readers to comment.
Reading an update is like watching an episode of webseries.
Every update make us speechless.
That's why we eagerly wait for update and just write waiting for update brother.
This story is like a drug I can't wait for update.
What we thought would happen never happens u always surprise us.
Thankyou brother for giving us such a wonderful story.
thanks 4 appreciating brother...
 

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That's not matter it's Sex story or not.
mainly story line pe depend karta hai ke woh kesi hai warna bas Sex Sex se hi story hit nahi hoti...


And I think jo neat and clean Story hoti hai uski Tulna ye bhaddi sex wali nahi or isse padhen wale ka dimagh or man dono shant rehte Sex wali ke comparison me.
thanks
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI AUR ALFREEN MAN HI MAN RAAZ KO SABAK SIKHANE KI BAAT SOCH RAHE THE WAHIN RAAZ KE PAHELI NUMA SAWALON SE ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER THODE BECHAIN HO GAYE THE.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-18



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE - SOVEREIGN OFFICE




COME IN MR & MRS FLORIN.....


ye SHAILA ki awaaz thi jisse sun SOVEREIGN OFFICE ke darwaze ke baahar khade FLORIN aur MARIA andar aaye...


subah ka waqt hai...kal shaam MAHI aur ALFREEN se jo baatein hui thi,usse sun FLORIN aur MARIA dono ka dil kiya ek baar institution jaane ka aur isiliye hi dono yahan hain....


SHAILA-baithiye....

FLORIN/MARIA-thank you.....

SHAILA-toh mr and Mrs FLORIN...kya lenge aap dono....???

FLORIN-nothing ma'am..hum breakfast karke aaye hain....

SHAILA-waise yahan aapko acha toh lag raha hai naa!!!!

facilities to the mark hain yaa fir koi kami hain..agar aapko kuch bhi upgrade chahiye toh jaise aap normally wish kar rahe hain,waise hi jaisa aap change chahen waise hone ke liye bol dijiyega...

aapke man mutabik upgrade ho jaayega.....

FLORIN-nahi ma'am..sab kuch already bohot zyada upgraded hai....and we are completely fine here.....

itbi adbhudh duniya aur rachna ke part banane ka hume mouka mila hai,ye toh humari khushkismati hai....

MARIA-bas ek hi chiz ki kami hai...logon ki....earth me toh hum apne hi orphanage ne rehte the jo baccho se bhara hua rehta tha....

but yahan hum bas teen hi hain..haan, MAHI ke roop me ek aur beti zaroor mil gayi hai par wo aur ALFREEN aadhe se zyada waqt ya toh yahan institution me ya fir room me baith spells sikhne me laga dete hain...

hum dono akele reh jaate hain..aas paas log bhi nahi hai jinse mila jaaye....


MARIA ki baat sun AKSHAANT muskuraye...


AKSHAANT-actually first PHASE me jisme abhi aapki daughter hai,is saal usme total 32 savents hi hain...

jisme se 15 SAVENTS hostlers hain....

ELYSIAN me har PHASE ke students aur unke parents ka thikana alag alag hota hai...

first PHASE ke students ke liye jo ABODE allot hue hain, wo ek dusre se kaafi door hain jiski wajah se PHASE 1 ke parents normally ek dusre se interact nahi kar paate hain....


AKSHAANT ke hostlers waali baat sun FLORIN ko kuch yaad aaya aur....


FLORIN-sir, RAAZ ke orphan hai isiliye usse hostel bheja gaya hai..but MAHI,uske bhi toh parents nahi hain,fir usse ABODE kyun allot hua???

AKSHAANT-is saal MAGIC ke jo base modes hain,jinse MAGIC use me laaya jaata hai,uske baare me ALFREEN ne aapko bataya hai...???

FLORIN-ji,usne kuch teen modes ke baare me bataya tha jisse MAGIC kiya jaa sakta hai...

AKSHAANT-un teen MODES me sabse hard aur efficient mode hota hai ATTACH MODE....

CHOSENS ke pichle 25 years ke itihaas me sirf do aise students hue hain jinhone is mode ko sabse zyada use me laaya hai...

MARIA-par iska MAHI se kya connection....????

AKSHAANT-connection hai...aap sab ko yaad hoga,humari first meeting me aapko bataya gaya tha ki har SAVENT ke paida hone se pehle hi uske jeeven kan paida ho jaate hain aur jab ek SAVENT ka janm hota hai,toh wo kan uski urja shakti se mil jaate hain....

jin do students ki mai baat kar raha hun,un dono ke brain se nikli urja shakti baaki SAVENTS se thodi zyada thi aur same cheez MAHI ke janm ke waqt bhi hui thi....

uske brain ki urja shakti bhi un do students ki hi tarah thodi zyada thi....

issi ka kaaran hai ki MAHI ki jigyasa baakiyon se zyada hai.

aur isiliye hi MAHI ek special case hai jiski wajah se usse ABODE allot hua hai...

FLORIN-matlab MAHI baaki SAVENTS se bohot aage niklegi...

AKSHAANT-zaroori nahi hai...GOD GIFTS kahiye ya fir born talent,bina hard work ke in shabdon ka koi mol nahi...

aur sabse important hai ek positive ATTITUDE.....

for example RAAZ ko hi dekh lijiye....wo bhi toh ek SAVENT hi hai,but kyunki uska ATTITUDE itna questionable hai,ya ye kahun,negetive hai isiliye uska wo god gift,wo talent jisse wo excel kar sakta tha,waste jaa raha hai...


AKSHAANT ki baat sun samajhne waale andaz se MARIA aur FLORIN ne apna sir hilaya....


FLORIN-sir,kya hum ek baar bacchon ke classes,unki training dekh sakte hain???

normal classes toh humne as a student khud bhi attend ki hai,and as parants dekhi bhi hai,but aisi adhbhudh duniya ki padhyai, classes me hone waali practicals,hum ek baar dekhna chahte hain....

AKSHAANT-dekhiye,aap dono institution ke premises me toh nahi jaa sakte kyunki classes ke waqt aisa karna kisi hi parent ko allowed nahi hai,but haan,wo jo room dikh raha hai,wo ek tarah ka lounge hai....

wahan chale jaayiye....sofa ke saamne jo screen hai,usse dekh 1st PHASE,bus itna kahiyega,us screen par aapki beti ki current live class dikhne lagegi....

waise bhi first phase ki class shuru hone hi waali hogi..aap jaaiye,kuch der me mai bhi aata hun...


AKSHAANT ki baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN dono us lounge numa room ki taraf badh gaye...

jaisa ki AKSHAANT ne bataya tha,wahan ek bada sa sofa rakha hua tha jiske saamne ek badi si screen thi...

dono ne sofa ne baith jaise hi 1st PHASE bola,saamne rakhi screen par live 1st PHASE ki class dikhne lagi jo abhi shuru hone hi waali thi....

wahin un dono ke jaane ke baad AKSHAANT ne man hi man SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ko yaad kiya aur agle hi pal wo teeno hi ek dusre se dimag ke zariye jud chuke the...


AKSHAANT-kuch pata chala????

MOKALSAR-nahi....

AKSHAANT-SHAILA!!!!

SHAILA-nahi...URJA ARTHAGATI(energy sensors) ke kuch kan mujhe mujhe mile the...par unka koi saar nahi hai...

saare raaste,unki urja ko mita diya gaya hai.....

aur filhal hamara daayra bhi simit hai....hum us dhake urja ko saamne bhi nahi laa sakte...agar pehle waali baat hoti toh....

AKSHAANT-tum dono wapas aa jaao...

MOKALSAR-par hum yun haar nahi maan sakte....hume us raaste ko dhundna hi hoga...

AKSHAANT-toh maine kab mana kiya hai...par filhal ke liye wapas aa jaao...ek nayi neeti ke saath kuch din baad fir apni khoj me nikalna....

MOKALSAR/SHAILA-thik hai....hum aa rahe hain....

issike saath teeno ka sampark ek dusre se toot gaya..kuch der tak kuch sochte rehne ke baad AKSHAANT bhi uthkar us lounge ki taraf chal diye jahan MARIA aur FLORIN baithe PHASE 1 ki class dekh rahe the....

wahin jaise hi FLORIN aur MARIA ke saamne screen par PHASE 1 ki class dikhne lagi toh unhone dekha ki.....




PLACE-CHOSEN'S LAWN




SO,HOW IS EVERY SAVENT FEELING TODAY....????FRESH YA FIR THAKAN AB BHI HAI...!!!!


OPHILIA WHIZZ ke is sawal par sabhi SAVENTS ke chehron par smile aa gayi...

par is smile me ek nervousness thi jo hamare saamne khade WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se chuupi na thi....


OMMIN-arre bataiye,abhi bhi thakan toh nahi hai naa....???

SAVENTS-no WHIZZDER...we are fine...


SAVENTS ke jawab ko sun ek baar phirse un chaaron me chehron par smile aa gayi...

reason....

SAVENTS ka jawab pura sach nahi tha...kal unke dimag ko mile jhatke aur usse aaye thakan ka dar sabhi SAVENTS ke chehron par abhi bhi tha par koi bhi ye nervousness show nahi karna chahta tha isiliye kisine bhi apne dar ka zikr nahi kiya tha...


OPHILIA-toh chahiye fir....kal ki chhodi prakriya fir se shuru karte hain....

baith jaaiye aur kal ki hi tarah fir se koshish kijiye....


OPHILIA WHIZZ ki baat sun ek dusre ko dekhte hue sabhi SAVENTS apni apni jagah baith gaye....

neeche baith sabhi SAVENTS ne apni apni aakhne band ki aur kal hi ki tarah apna apna PAUSE CEREBRATION process shuru kiya.....

but......


aaj wahi process jo ki saare SAVENTS ke liye ek god gift thi,jo wo sabhi bachpan se hi badi asaani se karte aa rahe the,nahi ho paa raha tha....

sabhi ki bas aankhen band thi,but dimag ab bhi shaant nahi hua tha jiski wajah se CEREBRATION process shuru hi tha.

aur rahi RAAZ ki baat toh woh toh waise bhi kal hi ki tarah bas aakhen band kiye baitha tha....

wahin saare SAVENTS se alag ALFREEN aur MAHI ka CEREBRATION process thoda thoda pause mode ki taraf badh chala tha...

jahan ek taraf MAHI kuch 50 percent tak apne dimag ko pause kar paa rahi thi wahin uske baaju me baithi ALFREEN lagbhag 25 percent tak pahunchi thi....

nervousness in dono ko bhi tha,par determination nervousness se zyada tha jis wajah se ye dono kuch hadh tak safal ho rahi thi...

wahin saamne khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS jo sabhi SAVENTS ko dekh rahe the,jab unki nazar MAHI aur ALFREEN par padi toh unhe behad khushi hui...

unhe ye bhi andaza ho gaya ki ye dono is PHASE ke best SAVENTS hain....

par saath hi ek sach ye bhi tha ki PAUSE CEREBRATION process brain ke completely 100 percent shaant hone par hi aage ka kaam karta hai aur isiliye hi MAHI aur ALFREEN ki koshish filhal kaam nahi aane waali aur isiliye....


OPHILIA-STOP.....


OPHILIA ka ye stop shabd SAVENTS ke kaano me hi nahi balki un sab ke dimag me bhi gunja tha jiski wajah se sabhi ki aankhen ek baar me hi khul gayi....


OPHILIA- MAHI, ALFREEN...very good...dar ke samandar me himmat ki kashti utarna asaan nahi hai par aap dono ne ye kar dikhaya.....

kuch hadh tak aap dono hi PAUSE CEREBRATION process me kamiyab hue the but unfortunately filhal itna kaafi nahi tha...

and SAVENTS,aap sabko udaas ya maayus hone ki zaroorat nahi hai....

jo aaj aapke saath ho raha hai,wo hum sabke saath hua hai...dimag me lagne waala mamuli se mamuli jhatka achi khaasi chhap chhod jaata hai....

but aap sab fikr na karen,humare paas aap sab ke dar ko kam karne ka tarika hai....

aur ab aap sab wahi tarika aazmaane waale hain....


ye bol chaarom WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ne apne apne haath failaye aur...


PRAVAHAM GUNAKARA

CURRENT MULTIPLIER


chaaron ke mooh se is spell ke uccharit hote hi un sabhi ke dono haathon me ek ek urja roopi ball dikhne lagi....


OMMIN-ye jo urja se bani ball aap sab hamare haathon me dekh rahe hain,ye CURRENT MULTIPLIERS ball hain....

inki khaasitat ye hai ki ye jisse bhi chhute hain,uske feelings ke hisaab se khud ki energy levels ko change karte hain....

agar ye kisike haathon me hain aur uske man me jhatke ka dar hai toh inki energy level itni badhegi ki us shaksh ko aur tagde jhatke lagenge...

par agar wo skaksh inhe haathon me lene ke baad bhi confident hain,toh fir ye energy balls jaisa wo shaksh chaahega,waise react karenge....

aayi baat samajh....

SAVENTS-yes WHIZZDER....


sabne yes toh bol diya tha par koi ab tak ye nahi samajh paaya tha ki in current balls ka filhal use kya hai???


VIOLET-ab aap sab ek zig zig line banakar (tedha medha jaise ki saanp) apne baaju waale ke opposite face khade honge....

ek dusre ke beech 6,6 metres ka distance hona chahiye...

hum chaaron ke haathon me jo ye 8 current balls hain,ye hum aap me se 8 SAVENTS ki taraf fekenge jisse wo 8 catch karenge....

par jaise hi wo 8 SAVENTS in balls ko catch karenge,unke andar ki feelings ke hisaab se ye balls react karenge...

jo bhi darega ta nervous hoga,ye ball usse aur jhatke denge...

ek baat aur,ye balls sticky hain
.matlab jhatka lagne par aap inhe yunhi fek nahi paayenge..

apne mind ko control kar jab tak aap khud ko kamsekam 1 percent hi sahi,sayyamit nahi kar lete,ye balls aapke haathon me chipke rahenge....

sayyamit hote hi jiske haathon ke ball hai,wo apne paas khade SAVENT ki taraf ball ko fekega....

ball fekte waqt agar aapka man pura 100 percent tak shaant raha,toh aap in balls ke volts ko kam ya fir badha bhi sakte hain...

so are you guyzzz ready.....????

SAVENTS-YES WHIZZ...


chehre par halka dar, confidence aur excitement liye sabne haan bola tha..

wahin in sab se door lounge me baithe FLORIN aur MARIA ye sab dekhkar kaafi excited ho gaye the aur unke piche khade AKSHAANT ke chehre par smile thi...

reason...wo jaante the ki WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ye sab kyun kar rahe the...

darasal jo dar har SAVENT ke man me chhaya hua tha,usse mitane ka yahi tarika tha...

har SAVENT ke sharir par ab jo jhatke lagne waale the,un jhatkon se un sabko current consume karne ki naa sirf aadat padhegi but saath hi un jhatkon ko control karne ki wajah se unka confidence level jo filhal kam ho gaya hai,wo wapas aayega...

par FLORIN, MARIA ki excitement aur AKSHAANT ke chehre ki muskaan tab hairani me badli jab unhone dekha ki jahan ek taraf saare SAVENTS WHIZZ ke kahe anusar ek zigzag line formation me lag gaye the wahin in sabse alag RAAZ akela un sab se thodi door jaakar khada ho gaya tha jiska matlab tha ki wo is naye activity me part nahi lene waala tha....

is baat ko chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne bhi dekha aur saath hi MAHI, ALFREEN aur unke saath saath ACCHUTA, SLUNDER ne bhi....

But WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur unke saath baakiyon ne bhi is baat ko avoid kar diya tha....

yahan tak ki ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne bhi....dono hi jaante the ki agar unhone RAAZ se kuch kaha toh jo jawab milega,wo unhe abhi lagne waale jhatkon se bhi zyada jhatka dega...

khair,zigzag formation ho chuki thi aur aisa hote hi...


CATCH.....


sabhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne ye kaha aur agle hi pal unke haathon ke aathon balls SAVENTS ki taraf lapke aur....


AHHHH......


un aanth balls me se 2 balls MAHI aur ALFREEN ne catch kiye the aur baaki ke 6,dusre SAVENTS ne aur un current balls ko pakadte hi sabhi ke mooh se ek dard bhari aah nikal gayi....

aur jab un aathon SAVENTS ne us ball ko jhatakne ki koshish ki toh jaisa WHIZZ ne kaha tha, wo balls unke haathon me chipak se gaye jisse un aathon ko aur taklif hone lagi....


NOX- SAVENTS...haath ko jhatakna chhodo..iska koi faayda hoga nahi...jab tak aap sab apne apne dimag ko sayyamit nahi kar lete,balls aapke haathon se chipki rahengi....


NOX ki baat par sabse pehle amal MAHI ne hi kiya...jahan baaki sab NOX ki baat sunkar bhi apne apne haathon ko jhatakne me hi lage the,wahi MAHI ne sidhe khade ho khudko sayyamit karna shuru kiya...

jhatke toh usse lag hi rahe the,par wo un jhatkon se hone waale dard ko zabt karte hue apne chitt se apne body ko shant karne me lagi hui thi..

wahin kuch der baad jab ALFREEN ki nazar apne opposite line me khadi MAHI par padi toh usne bhi same pattern apnaya...

sidhi khadi ho usne bhi jhatko ko sehen karna shuru kar diya aur ALFREEN ki dekha dekhi baaki ke 6 SAVENTS bhi same karne me lag gaye...

in aathon ko baaki ke 23 SAVENTS bhi dekh rahe the aur sikh bhi rahe the...

kuch waqt laga but sabse pehle MAHI ne hi khud par kuch hadh tak kaabu paaya aur aisa hote hi uske haath ki wo current ball jo ki ab tak chipki hui thi,wo loose honi shuru ho gayi aur aisa hote hi...


AHHHH....


MAHI ne wo ball khudse 6 metre door khade SAVENT ki taraf fenki aur jaise hi us SAVENT ne ball pakdi,uske mooh se bhi ek dard bhari karah nikal gayi.....

wahin MAHI ke baad ALFREEN aur ALFREEN ke kuch waqt baad baaki ke 6 SAVENTS jinke haathon me balls thi,unke dimag ke sayyamit hoti hi unke haathon me chipki balls loose hui aur aisa hote hi un sabne bhi balls fekte hue paas kar di....


VOILET-very good MAHI...sabse pehle tumne hi khudko sayyamit kiya hai..baaki sab bhi same pattern follow karenge....

aur ek baar jab aap sab sayammit rehne lage, fir aap sabko apne confidence level ko badhakar in current balls par kaabu paana hai..

jitna zyada aapka confidence level hoga,utni energy aap sab balls se create kar sakte hai...


wahin MAHI aur baaki ke 7 SAVENTS ki hi tarah abhi ke wo 8 SAVENTS jinke haath me wo current ball thi,un sabne khudko kuch hadh tak sayyamit kar liya tha aur aisa hote hi unke haathon me chipki ball jo loose ho chuki thi,usse un sabne next 8 ki taraf pass kar diya....

aur fir ye silsila zigzag wise yuhi chalne laga...sabhi SAVENTS dheere dheere khud ke sayyam ko badha ball pass karte chale jaa rahe the.....

par in sabke beech sabse poor performance ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ka tha...jahan SLUNDER chup chaap khudko behtar karne ki naakamiyab koshish kiye jaa raha tha wahin ACCHUTA toh har lagne waale jhatke ke baad andar hi andar WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko gaali bake ja raha tha....

aur in sabse alag mai us zigzag formation ke aakhri SAVENT se kuch door khada ye sab dekh raha tha....

wahin ab tak MAHI aur ALFREEN ne khudko lagbhag puri tarah se sayyamit kar liya tha aur apne confidence level ko badhate hue ball ki energy level bhi apne mutabik thodi thodi badhate jaa rahe the...

dono ke hi chehron par smile.thi aur yunhi ball pass karte hue dono ki nazar SAVENTS ki line se thodi door khade mujhpar gayi....

mujhe dekh dono ki smile gayab ho gayi aur uski jagah ghusse ne le liya....

ek aur baar mujhe dekh ya fir ye kahun mujhe ghoor dono ne ek dusre ko dekha maano aankhon hi aankhon me ek dusre ko kuch bata rahi ho....

aur fir,jaise aankhon hi aankhon me kuch faisla kiya un dono ne jisse karte hi dono ke chehre par ek smile aa gayi aur....


ek aisa waqt aaya jab ALFREEN aur MAHI jo ki ek dusre ke thik opposite khade the,un dono ke hi paas ek hi waqt me balls aaye aur aisa hote hi...

apni puri concentration aur confidence level ko ek kar dono ne hi ball ki energy level ko 10,10 guna badhaya aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....


SUBBHHHH...


dono ne bohot zor se wo energy balls ek disha me feki...

ye disha aur koi nahi meri hi thi...energy balls ke level itne zyada badhne ki wajah se unki raftar bhi bohot badh chuki thi aur isse pehle ki mai kuch dekh bhi paaun....


DHAMMM.......


wo dono balls kaafi zor se aakar mujhse takraye jisse mai udte hue piche ki taraf gira....

asahaniya dard jo mujhe ho raha tha aur jiski wajah se mera pura sharir kisi mirgi ke mariz ki tarah chhatpata raha tha,ussi haalat me mai sunya ko ghurta hua neeche zamin par tadap raha tha....

wahin jo hua usse aur meri haalat dekh saare SAVENTS meri taraf badhe..

par jahan sabhi SAVENTS ko meri haalat dekh tention ho rahi thi,wahin MAHI aur ALFREEN muskurate hue meri taraf badh rahe the...

chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS bhi araam se chalte hue meri taraf badhne lage the...

wo meri haalat dekh khush toh nahi the but unhe bura bhi nahi laga tha...

jis tarah se maine unse baat ki thi,unhe lag raha tha ki mai abhi jis haalat me hun,usse deserve karta hun...

ye scene lounge me baithe FLORIN aur MARIA bhi dekh rahe the..un dono ko hi MAHI aut unki beti se aisi kisi harkat ki ummid nahi thi....

aur isiliye hi wo uthe aur chupchaap wahan se chale gaye....wahin AKSHAANT ko bhi thoda ghussa aaya tha...

MAHI aur ALFREEN par nahi balki chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS par...kyunki wo jaante the ki agar wo chaaron chahte toh jo hua,usse hone se rok sakte the.

khair,mera sharir halka halka jhatka ab bhi khaa raha tha par mai chup chaap is dard ko zabt karne me laga hua tha..


ALFREEN-sorry RAAZ.wo actually excitement me maine aur MAHI ne kuch zyada zor se balls fek diye the....

tumhe zyada zor se lagi toh nahi....


chehre par maasumiyat laate hue ALFREEN ne kaha....


ACCHUTA-chutiya samjha hai kya????koi galti se nahi,jaanbujh kar kiya hai ye sab tum dono ne....

RAAZ ne sunaya jo tha kal tum dono ko...ussi ka badla liya hai naa tum dono ne???


ye bol ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne sahara dekar uthaya mujhe....


MAHI-arre hum aisa jaanbujh kar kyun karenge... galti se ho gaya yaar...sorry....

OPHILIA-RAAZ ,are you ok...???MAHI,ALFREEN...you should be careful of what you do...


OPHILIA WHIZZ ne aate hi apni baat kahi....


MAHI/ALFREEN-sorry WHIZZ....

OPHILIA-ye tumhe RAAZ se kehna chahiye....

MAHI/ALFREEN-we already did..ok ek baar firse bol dete hain....

sorry RAAZ.....


ab tak mujhe kaafi hadh tak thik lag chuka tha....sidha khada ho ek lambi saans chhod...


MAI-sorry kisliye...???jo mere saath hua,wo mai deserve karta hun....


meri baat dun pehle toh chaaron WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur MAHI, ALFREEN chownke but fir unhe laga mujhe lage jhatke se mera dimag bhi thikane par aa gaya hai jisse mujhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai aur isiliye hi maine jo kaha wo kaha but....


MAI-sahi aur galat....is duniya me yaa fir kisi bhi duniya me sabse jhoote maayno ke shabd yahi dono hain...

taakatwar aur kamzor.....ye hain wo do shabd jo sahi aur galat ko unke asli maayne dete hain...

jo taakatwar hai,wo hamesha sahi hota hai aur jo kamzor hota hai,wo hamesha galat hota hai...

naa koi uski sunta hai aur naa koi usse kuch puchta hai...

tum dono hi filhal taakatwar ho,aur mai kamzor... aur is lihaz se tumne mere saath abhi jo kiya aur agar aage kuch bhi karne ka dil kare,wo sab sahi hai aur aage bhi hoga....

agar mere saath kuch bhi galat ho,kuch bhi,toh kisiko bhi iska zimmedar nahi maana jaayega...


ye baat maine chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko dekh kahi thi jo mujhe aascharya se dekh rahe the aur abhi jo maine kaha,usse sun toh unki aankhen aur badi ho gayi thi...


wahin mai SAVENTS ke side se hota hua dheere dheere aage badh gaya....

par kuch door jaakar mai dobara palta aur....


MAI-band ghadi bhi din me do baar sahi waqt batati hai...

kehne ka matlab hai ki har waqt ka ek waqt aata hai....isiliye agar dobara aisa kuch karne ka dil kare,toh bada karna..

itna bada ki meri aankhen kuch aisi band hon ki dobara naa kabhi naa khulen kyunki agar aisa nahi hua toh....



aankhen band hon,
yaa khuli

sirf mai DIKHUNGA...


ek taqdir tumhari
KHUDA ne likhi hai,


dusri.......mai LIKHUNGA........






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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WICKEDS SWEEP-STAKE KE PEHLE TASK KO JEET JAATE HAIN WAHIN WOOGER KI URJA RAAZ KO USKI ASLIYAT SE WAQIF KARWATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-36



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-SWEEP-STAKE




UNBELIEVABLE........


MAHI ke mooh se nikla tha ue shabd....

reason....


saamne ka drishya hi aisa tha...jahan ek taraf WICKEDS ki puri teams ne khudko ek bade se DHAAL ke roop me badal liya tha wahin dusri taraf MORALS ki puri team ne khud ke form ko transparent kar diya tha...

reason....

SWEEP-STAKE competition ka dusra charan,second task shuru ho chuka tha jisme ek nayi chunouti dono teams ke saamne thi....

aur ye chunouti thi wo anginat baan jo lagatar hazaron ki sankhya me unke upar baras rahe the aur wo bhi non stop....

un teeron ko sankhya aur speed itni zyada thi ki unhe dodge nahi diya jaa sakta tha aur isiliye hi WICKEDS aur MORALS ki team ne in baano se bachne ke liye alag alag yukti nikali...

jahan ek taraf WICKEDS ne khudko ek bade se dhaal me badal liya tha wahin MORALS ne khudke form ko transparent kar liya tha...

par jahan aisa karna in do teams ke liye faaydemand tha wahin iska ek bohot bada nuksaan bhi tha aur wo ye ki bhale hi in yuktiyon se dono hi teams un baano se bach paa rahe the,par bachna is samasya ka sirf ek temporary hal tha, permanent nahi...

un dono hi teams ka task tha,un baano ki varsha ko rokna...aur ye wo dhaal bankar aur khudko transparent banakar nahi kar sakte the....

par filhal wo kuch aur bhi nahi kar sakte the kyunki agar dono teams me se kisi ne bhi apne form ko change kiya,toh uske agle hi pal wo teer unke aar paar ho jaane the aur aisa hone se wo khudko bacha bhi nahi paate.......

dhadakte dil se MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN baaki ke darshakon ke saath jigyasa purv ye sab dekh rahe the aur soch rahe the ki ab kaise ghumega ye khel,par anjaan the wo sab is baat se ki asli khel toh kabka ghum chuka hai aur saath hi ghum chuki hai ye puri KAHANI.....





PLACE-INFRONT OF FORBIDDEN FOREST SHIELD



ASAMBHAV.......YE KAISE HO SAKTA HAI......????


aakhne chowdi ho gayi thi WHIZZ MARILIZA ki....behad hairani se wo apne saamne ke nazare ko dekhte hue uspar yakin karne ki koshish kar rahi thi.....

wahin unki baat sun apni apni aakhon me naasamjhi ke bhaav liye chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS unke peeche khade the....

unhe toh ab tak ye bhi samajh me nahi aaya tha ki wo yahan FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne aakhir kar kya rahen hain...???

uske upar WHIZZ MARILIZA ki abhi kahi baaton ko sun unke dimag me naye sawalon ne janm le liya tha aur isiliye....


VIOLET-kya hua WHIZZ MARILIZA...????kya asambhav ghatith hua hai...???aur hum yahan FORBIDDEN FOREST kyun aaye hain....????


WHIZZ MARILIZA jo khud bohot zyada confused thi,unhone VIOLET WHIZZ ke sawalon par kuch kaha nahi,bas apne left hand ko ek taraf kar diya jiske baad unke haath se ek ray nikal aage badhi aur neech zamin par jaa lagi...

ye zamin wahi jagah thi jahan kaafi der pehle RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER teeno gire pade the....

jaise hi WHIZZ MARILIZA ki ray us zamin par padi toh....

us ray ne bhi RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke gire hue bodies ka aakar dhar ek digital ray se sketch bana diya...

har sketch par usse jiske liye banaya gaya tha,uska naam ujagar ho gaya tha jisse dekh chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS samajh toh gaye ki ye sketches RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke hain par ye jaankar unki hairani aur badh gayi thi....

unhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki wo teeno aakhir yahan kar kya rahe the..???


OPHILIA- RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan????par kyun....????wo teeno yahan kyun aaye the???

OMMIN-usse bhi bada prashn ye hai ki wo warning bell aakhir baja kiske liye tha....????

MARILIZA-kiske liye wo warning bell baja,ye baat bhale hi chhuppi hui ho kintu kyun nahi baja,iska jawab toh saamne hai....

NOX-saamne hai matlab!!!

MARILIZA-FORBIDDEN FOREST....

iske chaaron taraf lage abhedya SHIELD apne andar ke saath saath aas paas ghati saari ghatna ke asar ko chupaane me saksham hain...

inhi ki wajah se aas paas ghati badi se badi ghatna ki khabar bhi CHOSENS tak nahi pahunch sakti..

VIOLET-iska matlab un teen SAVENTS ke saath kya hua tha,wo is waqt kahan hain,kis haal me hain, kya iske baare me kabhi pata nahi chal paayega...????

MARILIZA- jo dikh raha hai, samajh me aa raha hai,baat sirf utni hi nahi hai...kuch bohot hi bada hua hai yahan...!!!!aur jo bhi hua hai,wo koi akasmat ghatne waali ghatna nahi hai....

itna sab hona wo bhi ek saath koi ittefak nahi ho sakta....

aur jaise ye ghatna sadharan nahi hai, waise hi isse rachne waala bhi maamuli nahi hai....

kyunki baat agar sirf un teen SAVENTS ki hoti toh fir bhi is gutthi ko kisi naa kisi tarah suljhaya jaa sakta tha,par 25 hazar saalon baad aaj achanak FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ka badalna,ye toh hamare soch ki hadh se baahar ki ghatna hai....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sun chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS chownke...jo MARILIZA ne abhi kaha tha,wo toh wakayi kisi maha chamatkar se kam nahi tha...


VIOLET-SHIELD ka badalna!!! FORBIDDEN FOREST ki shield badal gayi....!!!par ye kaise sambhav hai...????aur aap ye kis aadhar par keh rahi hain...

MARILIZA-har WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ke sikhane ka apna ek tarika hota hai...

jab mai yahan SAVENT thi,toh apne sharir ko ek shaktishali hathiyar aur kawach,dono me badalne ki practice ke liye hamare WHIZZDER hume yahin laaya karte the...

issi FORBIDDEN FOREST ki shield par hum abhyas kiya karte the...yahan biche SHIELD aur uski urja se bhali bhaali parichit hun mai....

aur is waqt jo shakti aur urja mai mehsoos kar rahi hun,wo us shield ki nahi hai jo pichle 25 thousand saal se is FOREST ko guard kar rahi thi....

ye ek nahi shield hai par sabse zyada aascharya ki baat ye hai ki is SHIELD ki urja pehle waali shield se bhi zyada hai....

wo SHIELD SOVEREIGN'S ki shakti ke ek bohot bade bhaag se bani thi,aur ye nayi shield usse bhi zyada taakatwar hai,toh zara socho ki isse lagane waala kitna shaktishaali hoga!!!

aur ho naa ho,jisne ye shield lagayi hai,ussine un teeno SAVENTS ko bhi gayab kiya hai....

VIOLET-par sawal hai kyun??? SAVENTS ko gayab karna, FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ko hatana nahi apitu usse badal dena,itna sab aakhir kyun????

MARILIZA-jo hona tha,wo ho chuka hai...usse badla nahi jaa sakta...ab dekhna ye hai,ki aage kya hoga...???

kyunki jaise jo ho chuka hai,usse socha ya predict nahi kiya jaa sakta tha,waise hi jo hoga,usse bhi predict karna kaafi mushkil hone waala hai....

ye puri gutthi un teen gumshuda SAVENTS me se ek SAVENT ke naam ki tarah hi hai...RAAZ.......





BACK TO RAAZ:-




WO CHAAR DHABBE DIKH RAHE HAIN....WAHI HAIN WO CHAAR PLANETS AUR AAPKI MANZIL....


FORBIDDEN FOREST se gayab hokar mai aur WOOGER ki wo urja roopi ray antariksh ke kisi andheri jagah par pahunchte the...

yahan pahunchte hi khud ki roshni ke daayre ko badhate hue WOOGER ki urja ne ek patli par behad strong ray aage ki taraf chhodi...

wo ray aage badhti hui sidhe jaakar ek bade se dhabbe se jo ki planet tha, usse takrayi aur aisa hote hi us dhabbe numa planet se bhi ek ray nikli jo ek disha me badh chali aur kuch hi seconds me hume us ray se nikalte tez ujale ki chamak me kul chaar dhabbe dikhayi diye...

ye dhabbe hi the wo chaar PLANETS......RENAISS,ANGIS, ANNJAYA,ZEAL....wo chaar planets jinse mera adhura wajood pura hone waala tha...

ye chaaron planets ek dusre se kayi light years door the par fir bhi in chaaron ke beech ek alignment thi,ek connection tha...

ye chaaron planets ek dusre ke bilkul seedh me the...hum in chaaron planets se hi kaafi door the par bade bade dhabbe ke roop me inke hone ka abhaas mujhe ho raha tha....

un chaaron planets ke position ko dekh....


MAI-ye left side jo first planet hai,yahi RENAISS hai naa matlab BRAIN....

WOOGER-haan....uske baad ANGIS planet hai,fir ANNJAYA hai aur aakhir me ZEAL....

MAI-ye planets kaale dhabbon ki tarah kyun dikh rahe hain...aur ye PLANETS jis system ka hissa hain,uska star matlab suraj kahan hai..???

yahan se dekhne par toh in chaaron hi PLANETS ke kisi bhi bhaag par surya ki roshni nahi dikh rahi hai...????

WOOGER-wo isiliye kyunki in planets ka koi star ya suraj hai hi nahi....aur yeh chaaron planets DEAD PLANETS hain....

yahan jeeven ka waas nahi hai....

MAI-jeeven ka waas nahi hai!!!par tumne toh kaha tha naa ki ye mera paanchwa janm hai...

aur in planets par hi toh mere pichle chaar janm beete hain....toh fir ye dead planets kaise ho gaye????

WOOGER-ye aapka paanchwa janm hi hai par human form me aapne pehli baar saans li hai...

isse pehle ke aapke chaaron janm unhi cheezon ko roop me the jo is waqt aapke andar nahi hain...

BRAIN,BODY,BLOOD aur SOUL.....


ab ye ek nayi aur ajeebo garib baat thi....janm toh hua par bas mere alag alag body parts ka....gazab....

is naye khulase se sawal toh bohot ubhre mere andar par maine kuch pucha nahi kyunki mai jaanta tha ki abhi jo jawab mujhe milenge,unhe sirf mai sun paaunga,par puri tarah se samajhne ka waqt abhi aaya nahi tha...

ye sirf tabhi ho sakta tha jab mai apne missing parts ko in chaaron planets se haasil karun....

aur isiliye.....


MAI-toh hume pehle RENAISS jaana hoga naa...!!!!

WOOGER-nahi..pehle hume ZEAL jaana hoga....

MAI-ZEAL....!!!matlab soul...mujhe pehle apna SOUL haasil karna hoga...???

WOOGER-nahi...haasil toh aapko pehle apna subconscious brain hi karna hai par....

usse bhi pehle kuch hai,jo dekhna aapko zaroori hai.....


apni baat puri kar WOOGER ki urja ne mujhe apni chapet me liya jiske baad mai aur wo gayab ho gaye....





ZEAL....THE SOUL:-



YE DHUAN KAISA....????


gayab ho hum sidhe ZEAL ke atmosphere ke andar prakat hue...

prakat hote hi jab maine niche dekha toh mujhe kahin bhi zamin nahi dikhi...dikha toh sirf gaadha dhuan.....

jo pure planet me faila hua tha...bhale hi dhuan gas ke form me hota hai par ye jo dhuan hamare niche dikh raha tha,usse ek behad strong solid force mujhe feel ho rahi thi...

ek aisa force jisse dekh lag raha tha ki agar isse chhu bhar lo toh sharir ko nichodte hue ye dhuan usse raakh me badal dega....

maine us dhuen ko dekh apna sawal pucha tha jiske baad....


WOOGER-ye aapke SOUL ka AURA hai jo pure planet me faila hua hai...

MAI-tumne kaha tha ki pehle mujhe kuch dekhna hai...par yahan hum kya dekh paayenge...yahan toh pura Planet hi is dhuen numa AURA ki chapet me hain....

WOOGER-zyada der tak nahi....


WOOGER ki urja ke aisa kehte hi us urja ke andar se ek badi si transparent sheeshi nikli jiske andar ek neela drav dikh raha tha...

ye sab dekh maine kuch kaha nahi kyunki mai jaanta tha ki jab aagaz hua hai toh anjaam bhi hona hi hai....

WOOGER ki urja se wo neele drav se bhari sheeshi nikli aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal us sheeshi ke upar jo knob laga tha,wo khul gaya...

knob ke khulte hi wo sheeshi apne aap ulti ho gayi aur aisa hone par us sheeshi me jo neela drav tha,wo neeche gir gaya....

neeche girta hua wo neela drav is planet ke upar tairte dhuen me samata chala gaya...

ye sab kya hai,mai ye soch hi raha tha ki tabhi kuch aisa hua ki....


MAI-AMMMAAAZZZIIINNNGGGG....


mere mooh se taarif ka ye shabd nikla...

reason....

dhuen me vilin hone waala wo neela drav us dhuen ke beech se hokar neeche zamin par chala gaya tha aur jaise hi us drav ne zamin ki satah ko chhua......

uske agle hi pal pura drishya hi badal gaya...jahan abhi tak wo jagah, wo planet jahan hum the,wo dead thi,har taraf bas dhuan hi dhuan tha,us jagah ka pura nazara change ho chuka tha...

dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi seconds me wo dead planet ek living planet me badal gaya....

pura dhuan chhat chuka tha aur ab humare neeche hare bhare pedon se dhaka ek jungle dikha raha tha....

maine apni nazar har taraf ghumayi toh maine dekha ki ye jagah kisi vintage riyasat ki tarah thi...

humare neeche ek jungle tha wahin humse kuch hi kms door right side par wo jungle khatm ho raha tha aur shuru ho raha tha koi kingdom....

us kingdom ki banawat ko dekh maine andaza lagaya tha ki ye ek vintage jagah hai..

mai ye sab dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi mera sharir neeche zamin ki taraf jaane laga...

mere saath saath WOOGER ki urja bhi neeche aa rahi thi.

kuch hi palon me hum neeche hari hari ghaas se bhari zamin par the....

kuch der yahan wahan dekhne ke baad is naye chamatkar ke baare me WOOGER se mai puchne hi waala tha ki tabhi.....



TUGDUG...TUGDUG....TUGDUG...TUGDUG....


kisi ke behad tezi se hamari taraf badhne ki aahat mere kaano me pahunchi jisse sun maine aa rahi awaaz ki disha me dekha toh....

sweth rang ke bohot hi khubsoorat ghode par ek usse bhi aakarshak vyaktitv ka yuvak baitha humari taraf aa raha tha...

khule hue lambe baal aur baalisht sharir se dhani us yuvak ke netra hamari taraf hi tike hue the...

par hairani mujhe tab hui jab ek haath me baan aur dusre haath se ussi baan par pratyancha chadha usne hamari taraf nishana saadha....

aur meri hairani tab aur badh gayi jab hamare behad kareeb aane ke baad bhi uske ghode ne apni disha nahi badli...

aisa lag raha tha maano yaa toh wo yuvak hume apne baano se maar girayega yaa fir uska ghoda hume kuchal dega....

ye sab dekh mai ek taraf hone ko hua par tabhi.....


WOOGER-aapko hatne ya chhupne ki koi awashyakta nahi hai....bas khade rahiye,kuch nahi hoga...


WOOGER ke urja ki baat sun jab maine uski taraf dekha toh...


WOOGER-vishwas rakhiye....


WOOGER ki baat ke baad maine bhi sochna chhodna aur saamne dekhne laga....

ab tak wo ghode par baitha yuvak hamare behad kareeb aa gaya tha..ghode se halka upar uth hamari hi taraf apni pratyancha ko taan usne teer chhod diya...

wo teer tezi se hamari taraf badha..us teer ka nishana theek mere sir ka madhya bhaag tha....

sansanate hue aage badhta hua wo teer mere karib aata gaya aur fir...


SOOBH.....

ye awaaz nikalta hua wo teer mere sir ko bina chhue,uske beech me se hote hue paar nikal gaya aur fir....


QNNNNQNNNNNQNNNN.....


ek tadapti hui si awaaz aayi mere piche se... jab maine palat kar dekha toh paaya ki mujhse thodi door par ek cheetah gira pada hai aur us teer ne usse hi bheda hai....

ye scene dekh jab maine wapas saamne dekha toh paaya ki ab tak wo ghoda thik mere kareeb pahunch chuka tha aur agle hi pal....

us teer ki hi tarah wo ghoda bhi mujhe bina chhue mere beech mese hote hue nikal gaya...

mujhe paar kar wo yuvak us ghode par baitha aage badhta chala gaya aur us cheeteh ke paas pahunch usme dhase teer ko usne ghode par baithe baithe hi kheencha jisse wo teer us cheeteh ke saath uske ghode par aa gaya....

apne ghode me us mrit cheeteh ko liye wo yuvak aage badh chuka tha.....

ye sab dekhne ke baad jab maine WOOGER roopi urja ki taraf dekha toh....


WOOGER-ye sab ek DRISHYAM hai....aaj se 50 hazar saal pehle ghati ghatna ka DRISHYAM....

MAI-par mera isse kya lena dena...???

WOOGER-pehle aap mujhe ek baat bataiye..???ab tak jitna bhi aapko khudke baare me pata chala hai,usse aap apne nirman ka kya nishkarsh nikalte hain...???

MAI-maksad...kisi khaas maksad ko pura karne ke liye hi mera wajud hai...

WOOGER-bilkul sahi...kintu jis maksad ke liye aapko chuna gaya hai,uske liye aapse pehle us yuvak ko chuna gaya tha jisse abhi abhi humne yahan ghode par sawar dekha tha...

kintu wo prayas asafal raha tha...aur isiliye aapka nirman hua...???aur wo bhi bohot hi alag tarah se....

taaki jo galti pehle ki gayi thi,
us galti ko dobara dohrana naa pade....

MAI-matlab mai bhi bas ek prayas hun..jo pehle ki hi tarah galat bhi ho sakta hai...

WOOGER-bilkul..aur isiliye hi is grah ke vinash ke baad bhi yahan ke DRISHYAM ko sambhal kar rakha gaya tha....

taaki aap isse dekh sako...aur samajh sako ki chuk kahan hui....????

aap abhi yahan ek ke baad ek us yuvak ki kayi jhalkiyan dekhenge jisme uska vyaktiv,aur uska hunar nazar aayega aur aakhir me wo drishya dikhega jab is grah aur yahan rehne waale laakhon bekasoor logon ka samuh vinash ho gaya tha....

yahan se jaane ke baad jab aap apne pehle padhav RENAISS ke saamne pahunchenge,tab aapko apne hi subconscious brain ko jisse lene aap wahan jaane waale hain,usse ek line me batana hoga ki kyun asafal raha tha ye yuvak...

agar aapka jawab sahi hua,sirf tabhi aap RENAISS planet me enter kar paayenge warna is yuvak ki hi tarah aapka bhi anth ho jaayega.....

MAI-jo yuvak abhi yahan se gaya,jisse mujhse pehle chuna gaya tha,uska naam kya tha....???



WOOGER-..........VIKRAM..........








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AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Fantabulous update bro
har baar ki tarah is baar b aapne hme dhadkte Dil ke sath chod diya aur ye Vikram kahi hmare Lord's of Angels to nahi
 
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WICKEDS SWEEP-STAKE KE PEHLE TASK KO JEET JAATE HAIN WAHIN WOOGER KI URJA RAAZ KO USKI ASLIYAT SE WAQIF KARWATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-36



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-SWEEP-STAKE




UNBELIEVABLE........


MAHI ke mooh se nikla tha ue shabd....

reason....


saamne ka drishya hi aisa tha...jahan ek taraf WICKEDS ki puri teams ne khudko ek bade se DHAAL ke roop me badal liya tha wahin dusri taraf MORALS ki puri team ne khud ke form ko transparent kar diya tha...

reason....

SWEEP-STAKE competition ka dusra charan,second task shuru ho chuka tha jisme ek nayi chunouti dono teams ke saamne thi....

aur ye chunouti thi wo anginat baan jo lagatar hazaron ki sankhya me unke upar baras rahe the aur wo bhi non stop....

un teeron ko sankhya aur speed itni zyada thi ki unhe dodge nahi diya jaa sakta tha aur isiliye hi WICKEDS aur MORALS ki team ne in baano se bachne ke liye alag alag yukti nikali...

jahan ek taraf WICKEDS ne khudko ek bade se dhaal me badal liya tha wahin MORALS ne khudke form ko transparent kar liya tha...

par jahan aisa karna in do teams ke liye faaydemand tha wahin iska ek bohot bada nuksaan bhi tha aur wo ye ki bhale hi in yuktiyon se dono hi teams un baano se bach paa rahe the,par bachna is samasya ka sirf ek temporary hal tha, permanent nahi...

un dono hi teams ka task tha,un baano ki varsha ko rokna...aur ye wo dhaal bankar aur khudko transparent banakar nahi kar sakte the....

par filhal wo kuch aur bhi nahi kar sakte the kyunki agar dono teams me se kisi ne bhi apne form ko change kiya,toh uske agle hi pal wo teer unke aar paar ho jaane the aur aisa hone se wo khudko bacha bhi nahi paate.......

dhadakte dil se MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN baaki ke darshakon ke saath jigyasa purv ye sab dekh rahe the aur soch rahe the ki ab kaise ghumega ye khel,par anjaan the wo sab is baat se ki asli khel toh kabka ghum chuka hai aur saath hi ghum chuki hai ye puri KAHANI.....





PLACE-INFRONT OF FORBIDDEN FOREST SHIELD



ASAMBHAV.......YE KAISE HO SAKTA HAI......????


aakhne chowdi ho gayi thi WHIZZ MARILIZA ki....behad hairani se wo apne saamne ke nazare ko dekhte hue uspar yakin karne ki koshish kar rahi thi.....

wahin unki baat sun apni apni aakhon me naasamjhi ke bhaav liye chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS unke peeche khade the....

unhe toh ab tak ye bhi samajh me nahi aaya tha ki wo yahan FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne aakhir kar kya rahen hain...???

uske upar WHIZZ MARILIZA ki abhi kahi baaton ko sun unke dimag me naye sawalon ne janm le liya tha aur isiliye....


VIOLET-kya hua WHIZZ MARILIZA...????kya asambhav ghatith hua hai...???aur hum yahan FORBIDDEN FOREST kyun aaye hain....????


WHIZZ MARILIZA jo khud bohot zyada confused thi,unhone VIOLET WHIZZ ke sawalon par kuch kaha nahi,bas apne left hand ko ek taraf kar diya jiske baad unke haath se ek ray nikal aage badhi aur neech zamin par jaa lagi...

ye zamin wahi jagah thi jahan kaafi der pehle RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER teeno gire pade the....

jaise hi WHIZZ MARILIZA ki ray us zamin par padi toh....

us ray ne bhi RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke gire hue bodies ka aakar dhar ek digital ray se sketch bana diya...

har sketch par usse jiske liye banaya gaya tha,uska naam ujagar ho gaya tha jisse dekh chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS samajh toh gaye ki ye sketches RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke hain par ye jaankar unki hairani aur badh gayi thi....

unhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki wo teeno aakhir yahan kar kya rahe the..???


OPHILIA- RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan????par kyun....????wo teeno yahan kyun aaye the???

OMMIN-usse bhi bada prashn ye hai ki wo warning bell aakhir baja kiske liye tha....????

MARILIZA-kiske liye wo warning bell baja,ye baat bhale hi chhuppi hui ho kintu kyun nahi baja,iska jawab toh saamne hai....

NOX-saamne hai matlab!!!

MARILIZA-FORBIDDEN FOREST....

iske chaaron taraf lage abhedya SHIELD apne andar ke saath saath aas paas ghati saari ghatna ke asar ko chupaane me saksham hain...

inhi ki wajah se aas paas ghati badi se badi ghatna ki khabar bhi CHOSENS tak nahi pahunch sakti..

VIOLET-iska matlab un teen SAVENTS ke saath kya hua tha,wo is waqt kahan hain,kis haal me hain, kya iske baare me kabhi pata nahi chal paayega...????

MARILIZA- jo dikh raha hai, samajh me aa raha hai,baat sirf utni hi nahi hai...kuch bohot hi bada hua hai yahan...!!!!aur jo bhi hua hai,wo koi akasmat ghatne waali ghatna nahi hai....

itna sab hona wo bhi ek saath koi ittefak nahi ho sakta....

aur jaise ye ghatna sadharan nahi hai, waise hi isse rachne waala bhi maamuli nahi hai....

kyunki baat agar sirf un teen SAVENTS ki hoti toh fir bhi is gutthi ko kisi naa kisi tarah suljhaya jaa sakta tha,par 25 hazar saalon baad aaj achanak FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ka badalna,ye toh hamare soch ki hadh se baahar ki ghatna hai....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ki baat sun chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS chownke...jo MARILIZA ne abhi kaha tha,wo toh wakayi kisi maha chamatkar se kam nahi tha...


VIOLET-SHIELD ka badalna!!! FORBIDDEN FOREST ki shield badal gayi....!!!par ye kaise sambhav hai...????aur aap ye kis aadhar par keh rahi hain...

MARILIZA-har WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ke sikhane ka apna ek tarika hota hai...

jab mai yahan SAVENT thi,toh apne sharir ko ek shaktishali hathiyar aur kawach,dono me badalne ki practice ke liye hamare WHIZZDER hume yahin laaya karte the...

issi FORBIDDEN FOREST ki shield par hum abhyas kiya karte the...yahan biche SHIELD aur uski urja se bhali bhaali parichit hun mai....

aur is waqt jo shakti aur urja mai mehsoos kar rahi hun,wo us shield ki nahi hai jo pichle 25 thousand saal se is FOREST ko guard kar rahi thi....

ye ek nahi shield hai par sabse zyada aascharya ki baat ye hai ki is SHIELD ki urja pehle waali shield se bhi zyada hai....

wo SHIELD SOVEREIGN'S ki shakti ke ek bohot bade bhaag se bani thi,aur ye nayi shield usse bhi zyada taakatwar hai,toh zara socho ki isse lagane waala kitna shaktishaali hoga!!!

aur ho naa ho,jisne ye shield lagayi hai,ussine un teeno SAVENTS ko bhi gayab kiya hai....

VIOLET-par sawal hai kyun??? SAVENTS ko gayab karna, FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ko hatana nahi apitu usse badal dena,itna sab aakhir kyun????

MARILIZA-jo hona tha,wo ho chuka hai...usse badla nahi jaa sakta...ab dekhna ye hai,ki aage kya hoga...???

kyunki jaise jo ho chuka hai,usse socha ya predict nahi kiya jaa sakta tha,waise hi jo hoga,usse bhi predict karna kaafi mushkil hone waala hai....

ye puri gutthi un teen gumshuda SAVENTS me se ek SAVENT ke naam ki tarah hi hai...RAAZ.......





BACK TO RAAZ:-




WO CHAAR DHABBE DIKH RAHE HAIN....WAHI HAIN WO CHAAR PLANETS AUR AAPKI MANZIL....


FORBIDDEN FOREST se gayab hokar mai aur WOOGER ki wo urja roopi ray antariksh ke kisi andheri jagah par pahunchte the...

yahan pahunchte hi khud ki roshni ke daayre ko badhate hue WOOGER ki urja ne ek patli par behad strong ray aage ki taraf chhodi...

wo ray aage badhti hui sidhe jaakar ek bade se dhabbe se jo ki planet tha, usse takrayi aur aisa hote hi us dhabbe numa planet se bhi ek ray nikli jo ek disha me badh chali aur kuch hi seconds me hume us ray se nikalte tez ujale ki chamak me kul chaar dhabbe dikhayi diye...

ye dhabbe hi the wo chaar PLANETS......RENAISS,ANGIS, ANNJAYA,ZEAL....wo chaar planets jinse mera adhura wajood pura hone waala tha...

ye chaaron planets ek dusre se kayi light years door the par fir bhi in chaaron ke beech ek alignment thi,ek connection tha...

ye chaaron planets ek dusre ke bilkul seedh me the...hum in chaaron planets se hi kaafi door the par bade bade dhabbe ke roop me inke hone ka abhaas mujhe ho raha tha....

un chaaron planets ke position ko dekh....


MAI-ye left side jo first planet hai,yahi RENAISS hai naa matlab BRAIN....

WOOGER-haan....uske baad ANGIS planet hai,fir ANNJAYA hai aur aakhir me ZEAL....

MAI-ye planets kaale dhabbon ki tarah kyun dikh rahe hain...aur ye PLANETS jis system ka hissa hain,uska star matlab suraj kahan hai..???

yahan se dekhne par toh in chaaron hi PLANETS ke kisi bhi bhaag par surya ki roshni nahi dikh rahi hai...????

WOOGER-wo isiliye kyunki in planets ka koi star ya suraj hai hi nahi....aur yeh chaaron planets DEAD PLANETS hain....

yahan jeeven ka waas nahi hai....

MAI-jeeven ka waas nahi hai!!!par tumne toh kaha tha naa ki ye mera paanchwa janm hai...

aur in planets par hi toh mere pichle chaar janm beete hain....toh fir ye dead planets kaise ho gaye????

WOOGER-ye aapka paanchwa janm hi hai par human form me aapne pehli baar saans li hai...

isse pehle ke aapke chaaron janm unhi cheezon ko roop me the jo is waqt aapke andar nahi hain...

BRAIN,BODY,BLOOD aur SOUL.....


ab ye ek nayi aur ajeebo garib baat thi....janm toh hua par bas mere alag alag body parts ka....gazab....

is naye khulase se sawal toh bohot ubhre mere andar par maine kuch pucha nahi kyunki mai jaanta tha ki abhi jo jawab mujhe milenge,unhe sirf mai sun paaunga,par puri tarah se samajhne ka waqt abhi aaya nahi tha...

ye sirf tabhi ho sakta tha jab mai apne missing parts ko in chaaron planets se haasil karun....

aur isiliye.....


MAI-toh hume pehle RENAISS jaana hoga naa...!!!!

WOOGER-nahi..pehle hume ZEAL jaana hoga....

MAI-ZEAL....!!!matlab soul...mujhe pehle apna SOUL haasil karna hoga...???

WOOGER-nahi...haasil toh aapko pehle apna subconscious brain hi karna hai par....

usse bhi pehle kuch hai,jo dekhna aapko zaroori hai.....


apni baat puri kar WOOGER ki urja ne mujhe apni chapet me liya jiske baad mai aur wo gayab ho gaye....





ZEAL....THE SOUL:-



YE DHUAN KAISA....????


gayab ho hum sidhe ZEAL ke atmosphere ke andar prakat hue...

prakat hote hi jab maine niche dekha toh mujhe kahin bhi zamin nahi dikhi...dikha toh sirf gaadha dhuan.....

jo pure planet me faila hua tha...bhale hi dhuan gas ke form me hota hai par ye jo dhuan hamare niche dikh raha tha,usse ek behad strong solid force mujhe feel ho rahi thi...

ek aisa force jisse dekh lag raha tha ki agar isse chhu bhar lo toh sharir ko nichodte hue ye dhuan usse raakh me badal dega....

maine us dhuen ko dekh apna sawal pucha tha jiske baad....


WOOGER-ye aapke SOUL ka AURA hai jo pure planet me faila hua hai...

MAI-tumne kaha tha ki pehle mujhe kuch dekhna hai...par yahan hum kya dekh paayenge...yahan toh pura Planet hi is dhuen numa AURA ki chapet me hain....

WOOGER-zyada der tak nahi....


WOOGER ki urja ke aisa kehte hi us urja ke andar se ek badi si transparent sheeshi nikli jiske andar ek neela drav dikh raha tha...

ye sab dekh maine kuch kaha nahi kyunki mai jaanta tha ki jab aagaz hua hai toh anjaam bhi hona hi hai....

WOOGER ki urja se wo neele drav se bhari sheeshi nikli aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal us sheeshi ke upar jo knob laga tha,wo khul gaya...

knob ke khulte hi wo sheeshi apne aap ulti ho gayi aur aisa hone par us sheeshi me jo neela drav tha,wo neeche gir gaya....

neeche girta hua wo neela drav is planet ke upar tairte dhuen me samata chala gaya...

ye sab kya hai,mai ye soch hi raha tha ki tabhi kuch aisa hua ki....


MAI-AMMMAAAZZZIIINNNGGGG....


mere mooh se taarif ka ye shabd nikla...

reason....

dhuen me vilin hone waala wo neela drav us dhuen ke beech se hokar neeche zamin par chala gaya tha aur jaise hi us drav ne zamin ki satah ko chhua......

uske agle hi pal pura drishya hi badal gaya...jahan abhi tak wo jagah, wo planet jahan hum the,wo dead thi,har taraf bas dhuan hi dhuan tha,us jagah ka pura nazara change ho chuka tha...

dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi seconds me wo dead planet ek living planet me badal gaya....

pura dhuan chhat chuka tha aur ab humare neeche hare bhare pedon se dhaka ek jungle dikha raha tha....

maine apni nazar har taraf ghumayi toh maine dekha ki ye jagah kisi vintage riyasat ki tarah thi...

humare neeche ek jungle tha wahin humse kuch hi kms door right side par wo jungle khatm ho raha tha aur shuru ho raha tha koi kingdom....

us kingdom ki banawat ko dekh maine andaza lagaya tha ki ye ek vintage jagah hai..

mai ye sab dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi mera sharir neeche zamin ki taraf jaane laga...

mere saath saath WOOGER ki urja bhi neeche aa rahi thi.

kuch hi palon me hum neeche hari hari ghaas se bhari zamin par the....

kuch der yahan wahan dekhne ke baad is naye chamatkar ke baare me WOOGER se mai puchne hi waala tha ki tabhi.....



TUGDUG...TUGDUG....TUGDUG...TUGDUG....


kisi ke behad tezi se hamari taraf badhne ki aahat mere kaano me pahunchi jisse sun maine aa rahi awaaz ki disha me dekha toh....

sweth rang ke bohot hi khubsoorat ghode par ek usse bhi aakarshak vyaktitv ka yuvak baitha humari taraf aa raha tha...

khule hue lambe baal aur baalisht sharir se dhani us yuvak ke netra hamari taraf hi tike hue the...

par hairani mujhe tab hui jab ek haath me baan aur dusre haath se ussi baan par pratyancha chadha usne hamari taraf nishana saadha....

aur meri hairani tab aur badh gayi jab hamare behad kareeb aane ke baad bhi uske ghode ne apni disha nahi badli...

aisa lag raha tha maano yaa toh wo yuvak hume apne baano se maar girayega yaa fir uska ghoda hume kuchal dega....

ye sab dekh mai ek taraf hone ko hua par tabhi.....


WOOGER-aapko hatne ya chhupne ki koi awashyakta nahi hai....bas khade rahiye,kuch nahi hoga...


WOOGER ke urja ki baat sun jab maine uski taraf dekha toh...


WOOGER-vishwas rakhiye....


WOOGER ki baat ke baad maine bhi sochna chhodna aur saamne dekhne laga....

ab tak wo ghode par baitha yuvak hamare behad kareeb aa gaya tha..ghode se halka upar uth hamari hi taraf apni pratyancha ko taan usne teer chhod diya...

wo teer tezi se hamari taraf badha..us teer ka nishana theek mere sir ka madhya bhaag tha....

sansanate hue aage badhta hua wo teer mere karib aata gaya aur fir...


SOOBH.....

ye awaaz nikalta hua wo teer mere sir ko bina chhue,uske beech me se hote hue paar nikal gaya aur fir....


QNNNNQNNNNNQNNNN.....


ek tadapti hui si awaaz aayi mere piche se... jab maine palat kar dekha toh paaya ki mujhse thodi door par ek cheetah gira pada hai aur us teer ne usse hi bheda hai....

ye scene dekh jab maine wapas saamne dekha toh paaya ki ab tak wo ghoda thik mere kareeb pahunch chuka tha aur agle hi pal....

us teer ki hi tarah wo ghoda bhi mujhe bina chhue mere beech mese hote hue nikal gaya...

mujhe paar kar wo yuvak us ghode par baitha aage badhta chala gaya aur us cheeteh ke paas pahunch usme dhase teer ko usne ghode par baithe baithe hi kheencha jisse wo teer us cheeteh ke saath uske ghode par aa gaya....

apne ghode me us mrit cheeteh ko liye wo yuvak aage badh chuka tha.....

ye sab dekhne ke baad jab maine WOOGER roopi urja ki taraf dekha toh....


WOOGER-ye sab ek DRISHYAM hai....aaj se 50 hazar saal pehle ghati ghatna ka DRISHYAM....

MAI-par mera isse kya lena dena...???

WOOGER-pehle aap mujhe ek baat bataiye..???ab tak jitna bhi aapko khudke baare me pata chala hai,usse aap apne nirman ka kya nishkarsh nikalte hain...???

MAI-maksad...kisi khaas maksad ko pura karne ke liye hi mera wajud hai...

WOOGER-bilkul sahi...kintu jis maksad ke liye aapko chuna gaya hai,uske liye aapse pehle us yuvak ko chuna gaya tha jisse abhi abhi humne yahan ghode par sawar dekha tha...

kintu wo prayas asafal raha tha...aur isiliye aapka nirman hua...???aur wo bhi bohot hi alag tarah se....

taaki jo galti pehle ki gayi thi,
us galti ko dobara dohrana naa pade....

MAI-matlab mai bhi bas ek prayas hun..jo pehle ki hi tarah galat bhi ho sakta hai...

WOOGER-bilkul..aur isiliye hi is grah ke vinash ke baad bhi yahan ke DRISHYAM ko sambhal kar rakha gaya tha....

taaki aap isse dekh sako...aur samajh sako ki chuk kahan hui....????

aap abhi yahan ek ke baad ek us yuvak ki kayi jhalkiyan dekhenge jisme uska vyaktiv,aur uska hunar nazar aayega aur aakhir me wo drishya dikhega jab is grah aur yahan rehne waale laakhon bekasoor logon ka samuh vinash ho gaya tha....

yahan se jaane ke baad jab aap apne pehle padhav RENAISS ke saamne pahunchenge,tab aapko apne hi subconscious brain ko jisse lene aap wahan jaane waale hain,usse ek line me batana hoga ki kyun asafal raha tha ye yuvak...

agar aapka jawab sahi hua,sirf tabhi aap RENAISS planet me enter kar paayenge warna is yuvak ki hi tarah aapka bhi anth ho jaayega.....

MAI-jo yuvak abhi yahan se gaya,jisse mujhse pehle chuna gaya tha,uska naam kya tha....???



WOOGER-..........VIKRAM..........








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AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Amazing update brother
Mind blowing
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