Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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vj4u

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Brother ye kya adhe adhuri update post kar k apne suspense m daal diya. Ab ye to fix h ki ab se acchuta aur slunder v aisi jagah pe dubara nahi jana chahenge aur kadi mehnat karenge. Alfreen jis tarah gusse me waha se nikli h raaz ka to kuch bigad to nahi hi payegi but kuch na kuch locha jarur karegi. Mujhe to lagta h jaise alfreen VIDEUS ki sathi banegi. Uska gussa and bina sacchayi jane faisla karna use bahut badi musibat m dalne wala h ya fr kahi raaz hi sudhar jaye kya hoga ye dekhne m badaa mazaa aane wala h. Maria ne bilkul thik kaha ki raaz ko ye sb pasand nahi lekin kya pata kya hoga... Ek aur baat h sala ye kya tarika hua non deserving candidates k lie na khana na pani nahi koii aur vyavastha aisa thodi hota h upar se na koii saaf safai kadi beizzati hoti h yaar lekin dekhna h isse 3no pe kya aur kaisa asar padta h kyunki raaz babu to kiis v paristhiti se upar uth chuke h halaat chahe jaise v ho unhe koii fark nahi padta.
Let's see aage kya hota hai.

Eagerly waiting for next update brother
thanks brother..adha isiliye lag raha hai brother kyunki jo hone waala hai,uski detailing bohot zaroori hai...

is update me hi lagbhag 3850 words use hue hai..aise me agar aage hone waali chizon ko jisse puri kahani ghumegi, uske aadhe part ko bhi main is update me likhta toh 8000 se zyada words use ho jaate aur is chakkar me bohot si chizen readers ke upar se nikal jaati...

khair,jab bhi next update aayega,wo ek tufaan laayega jisse jo bhi ho raha hai,uska ganit hi badal jaayega...saath bane rahiye....
 
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thanks brother..adha isiliye lag raha hai brother kyunki jo hone waala hai,uski detailing bohot zaroori hai...

is update me hi lagbhag 3850 words use hue hai..aise me agar aage hone waali chizon ko jisse puri kahani ghumegi, uske aadhe part ko bhi main is update me likhta toh 8000 se zyada words use ho jaate aur is chakkar me bohot si chizen readers ke upar se nikal jaati...

khair,jab bhi next update aayega,wo ek tufaan laayega jisse jo bhi ho raha hai,uska ganit hi badal jaayega...saath bane rahiye....
Bilkul brother apke update ka to besabri se intezar rehta h. Ab dekhna h ki kon sa naya dhamaka karte ho aap
 

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Hello VJ bro.. I was a regular reader of your first epic story.. I read all the update of this story within one day.. Your writing skill is amazingand we all know that.. You make readers to comment on your sotry.. You always make us shoked... What we imagine that might happen in next update but that won't happen..I think this storyis based on Razz and Videous but in all those 33 update they are looking like a side character and you don't even mention Videous. Your main focus was Mahi.. You named the first chapter name Unfold The Razz.. But all those update there was only few things about razz.. I think it might be your way of creating suspense. You gav the hint in last mega update that story will change now.. I am looking forward to it...If I say something wrong don't mind..
Regards
 

Jay Sutar

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Well last ke dono updates bohot hi awesome the. Specially ho rahe program ka opening bhi kafi zabardast tha. Waise toh Raaz ko isse kuch bhi pharak nahi pad raha hai ke uske samne kya ho raha hai but uske saath jo hai unko ho raha hai. Yaha zaroor kuch bada hone wala hai kyo ki Alfreen ko jo dreams aa rahe hai vo aisa hi kuch batate hai. Well let's see what happens next.
PEACE.
 

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Alfreen in sab me villain na ban jaaye.
Usaka action Raaz ke Saath hi usaki maa baap ke mrityu ka karan banega.
Besabari se intzaar hai Naye update ka
 

vj4u

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Hello VJ bro.. I was a regular reader of your first epic story.. I read all the update of this story within one day.. Your writing skill is amazingand we all know that.. You make readers to comment on your sotry.. You always make us shoked... What we imagine that might happen in next update but that won't happen..I think this storyis based on Razz and Videous but in all those 33 update they are looking like a side character and you don't even mention Videous. Your main focus was Mahi.. You named the first chapter name Unfold The Razz.. But all those update there was only few things about razz.. I think it might be your way of creating suspense. You gav the hint in last mega update that story will change now.. I am looking forward to it...If I say something wrong don't mind..
Regards
thanks brother.... readers only read,see, visualize what a writer makes them to...

the point is,everything is happening because of a reason...& its all gonna make sense once the title starts to explain its presence...

just keep on reading..every character, every scene,even every absense has a meaning...and its gonna start unfolding from the next update....cheers...
 

vj4u

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Hello VJ bro.. I was a regular reader of your first epic story.. I read all the update of this story within one day.. Your writing skill is amazingand we all know that.. You make readers to comment on your sotry.. You always make us shoked... What we imagine that might happen in next update but that won't happen..I think this storyis based on Razz and Videous but in all those 33 update they are looking like a side character and you don't even mention Videous. Your main focus was Mahi.. You named the first chapter name Unfold The Razz.. But all those update there was only few things about razz.. I think it might be your way of creating suspense. You gav the hint in last mega update that story will change now.. I am looking forward to it...If I say something wrong don't mind..
Regards
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