Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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Awesome upadate brother ab mujhe ye lagta competition mai kuch(garbar) bhout bada hoga
Nice update
wahh bhai maza aa gia update parh k... har update ek suspense k sath end hoti hai... aur ab lag laga hai k next update me kuch dhamakay wala hone wala hai...
Excellent update brother great going keep posting
Thanks for lovely update
Osm ... Bhai
shandar update bhai
Awesome fabulous update
Yaha sab aage bad rhe h bas raaz jaha tha wahi h ye aage kab badna start karega mahi ne bhi 2% Kar liya h
Keep posting
Jabardasttt update bhai :yourock:
Super update hai bhai
Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha
bhaii mara khayal sa ap ko ak dafa Anjali&Rohit ki taraf be nazar dal doo baki ap ki marzii ap jasa bhatar samjoo





Ab dako ap raz ka raz kb kholta ho us updatr ka intazar ha jb raz ka raz khola gaa
Bahut hi shanadar update hai bhai wakai mja aa gya
SWEEP-STAKE competition me kuch bahut bada hone wala hai. Agle update ka ab intzaar hai??
thanks brothers.... saath bane rahiye
 

vj4u

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Awesome update.
Mahi 2 % soul Amplification ke sath 25000 years ka rercord tod dala aur Mabel aur Alreen bhi 1% trigger karne me safal rahe .
Mahi ne Alreen ko sahi raah dikhayi ki hum future ka soch kar present ko barbad karenge future definitely barbad ho jayega.
Achhuta and Slunder ke sath ek aur mahashay jud gaye last bencher me aur Raaz ko to kaha. Nahi ja sakta .
Lagata Ab Raaz ka raaz unfold hoga aur Vikram ne ye panktiyan Raaz ke liye kahi hai .
WO WAQT JIS WAQT KA HAR WAQT KO INTAZAR THA,WO WAQT AA GAYA HAI...

WO WAQT JAB KARWAT LEGA YE ADHYAY.........

GHUMEGI PURI KAHANI AUR...........

EK BAAR FIR SE BADAL JAAYEGA PURA

.............ATTITUDE................
thanks brother..bas padhte jaaiye...
 

vj4u

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI NE APNE SOUL KO 2 PERCENT TAK AMPLIFY KAR LIYA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MABEL AUR ALFREEN NE BHI APNE SOUL KA FIRST PERCENT AMPLIFICATION KAR LIYA HAI...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



MEGA UPDATE-33



PLANET-EYLSIAN


PLACE-ALFREENS ABODE




NAHI..............


ek tez cheekh ke saath ALFREEN uth gayi thi....

reason.....aaj usse fir wahi sapna aaya tha jisme RAAZ ne uske mom dad ko maar diya tha....

kuch der tak apne chadhe hue saanson ko kaabu me laane ke baad wo turant apne bed se utri aur apne mom dad ke room ki taraf chal padi....

aaj bhi FLORIN aur MARIA araam se so rahe the jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-ye sab kya ho raha hai mere saath...wahi sapna dobara kyun aaya mujhe???

aur aaj toh pichle baar se zyada realistic lag raha tha sab.....kahi ye sab mere INSTINCTS dwara catch kiye gaye pre intuitions toh nahi hai...!!!

nahi nahi..ye mai kya soch rahi hun.. aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta..mai aisa hone hi nahi dungi....

kuch hone ka intazar karne se acha toh ye hai ki kuch hone hi naa diya jaaye....

& i am gonna make sure about it...i will turn each and every stone around...


aakhri baat bolte waqt ALFREEN ki aankhon me ghussa saaf dikhne laga tha....

jaise har road ka koi na koi dead end hota hai,har aaghas ka ek anjaam hota hai,waise hi har soch se ek faisla janm leta hai aur har faisle ka ek natija hota hai...

ab dekhna ye hai ki kya faisla liya hai ALFREEN ne aur us faisle ka kya niklega natija...!!!!?????



NEXT DAY AT CHOSEN'S....



SWEEP-STAKE:-



GATHER AROUND SAVENTS.....


apne apne groups banaye khade SAVENTS ke kaano me VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz padi jisse sun sabhi apne regualar line formation me khade ho gaye...

subah ka waqt hai...as decided,sabhi SAVENTS apne regular waqt par CHOSENS ke PHASE 1 block ke ground me jama ho chuke hain aur unke saamne unke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS moujud hain...

kal shaam ko ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne mujhe bataya tha ki aaj mujhe bhi INSTITUTION me aane ke liye kaha gaya hai aur isiliye aaj kaafi waqt ke baad mai bhi yahan sabhi SAVENTS ke saath khada hun...

sabko dekhne ke baad ek nazar chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne meri taraf bhi ghumaya aur fir...


OPHILIA-so finally,its SWEEP-STAKE time SAVENTS.... excited..!!!!

SAVENTS- yes WHIZZ....

OPHILIA-hona bhi chahiye...aaj jis competition ko dekhne aap sab jaane waale hain,yakin maaniye,aap sab ke future performance ke liye ye competition kisi moral boost se kam nahi hoga...

kaafi inspired hone waale hai aaj aap sab....


OMMIN-abhi thodi hi der me hum PHASE 3 block ke liye niklenge par usse pehle 2 important baatein jo aaj ke din se hi related hain,uske baare me jaan lijiye....

pehli.....

jaisa ki aap sabko humne bataya tha,aap sabke apne abhi tak ke performance ke according hi aaj aap sab SWEEP-STAKE witness karenge aur isiliye....


MAHI, ALFREEN,MABEL....aap teenon ek taraf ho jaaiye....aaj ka competition aap teeno PHASE 2 ke sabse respected group STELLARS ke saath baith kar dekhenge...


OMMIN ki baat sun khush hote hue MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ek taraf hokar khadi hi gayi....

iske baad jinhone bhi apne soul ko trigger kar liya tha, OMMIN ne un sabka naam ek ek kar liya aur unhe bhi ek group banakar khada kar diya....


OMMIN-aap sabne bhi aaj ke competition ko witness karne liye ek respected jagah own kar li hai....

and now ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BROWNY and RAAZ....kyunki aap sab baaki SAVENTS se piche hain, isiliye aap sabko sabse door khade hokar ye competition dekhna hoga....

itna hi nahi,wahan ke saare spectators, competition ke dauran wahan moujud sabhi PHASE 1 aur 2 ke SAVENTS ke liye snacks & beverages ka arrangment bhi rahega,siwaay aap chaaron ke...

aaj pure din aap chaaron kuch khaa ya pee nahi sakenge....

ACCHUTA dheere se-din bhar bhuka rehna padega....
saala koi apne ghar ki baayi ke saath bhi aisa nahi karta yaar...


OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sun ACCHUTA dheere dheere sabhi ko gaali de raha tha, SLUNDER aur BROWNY ka sir jhuka hua tha, mujhe koi fark nahi pad raha tha,aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS humare liye pity feel kar rahe the but in sabke beech ALFREEN bas mujhe ghusse se ghur ghur kar dekh rahi thi...


NOX-ye toh hui pehli baat.. aur dusri baat hai khud SWEEP-STAKE....

is competition ko dekhne se pehle mai aapko iske baare me bata deta hun kyunki ek baar aap SWEEP-STAKE combat jahan hone waala hai,wahan pahunch gaye toh uske baad humara aapse intaraction nahi ho paayega...

aap hi ki tarah hum WHIZZDERS aur WHIZZES ke liye bhi alag se baithne ke arrangements hote hain..

jaisa ki aap sabko pata hai ki SWEEP-STAKE ka matlab hota hai khudki saamne waale par superiority dikhana...

bas issi defination ko ek roop deta hai ye competition....

ye competition do teams ke beech hota hai..ye teams aur koi nahi balki wo do groups hain jinse third PHASE divide hota hai....

WICKEDS.....

MORALS.......

ye wo do groups ke naam jinme se koi ek GROUP final PHASE me aapka ghar hoga....aapka parivaar hoga....

ab baat karen is competition ki toh WICKEDS aur MORALS ke beech ka ye competition ZUNYATA aur SATYATATI ko aadhar banakar khela,lada aur jeeta jaata hai...

ZUNYATA matlab unreal
aur SATYATATI matlab real....

ek bade se stadium me jo ki maayavi hota hai,wahan hota hai ye competition jisme samay ke saath ascending order me alag alag real aur unreal metaphysical aur magical chunoutiyan milti hai jinhe as a group dono hi teams ko handle kar jeetna padta hai....

samajh gaye aap sab????

SAVENTS- yes WHIZZDER...


utsah aur khushi,dono hi bhaav jhalke the SAVENTS ki awaaz me.. competition kaisa hoga,iske baare me jaankar sabhi ka excitement level ek alag hi mukaam par pahunch gaya tha...

MAHI ne toh abhi se hi khudko ek din us competition me part leta hua dekhna shuru kar diya tha...

MABEL ka bhi same haal tha..waise ALFREEN bhi ye sab sun kaafi excited thi par uska aadha dhyan kahin aur tha....


OPHILIA-its time SAVENTS...lets go aur haan,aap sab ke parents pehle hi battle ground me pahunch chuke hain...

so let's move....


ye bol chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS aage badhe aur jis tarah hume khada kiya gaya tha,ussi formation me hum bhi unke piche ho liye...



BATTLE GROUND.......


YES MAHI....any problem???


PHASE 1 block cross karke PHASE 2 block se nikalte hue hum PHASE 3 block ke beech bane ek bohot bade ground ke baahar khade the......

ye ground darasal ek bohot hi bada stadium tha,jisme alag alag entrace the aur unhi entrance me se ek ke baahar the hum sab is waqt...

yahan pahunch OPHILIA WHIZZ kuch kehne hi waali thi ki tabhi MAHI ne apna haath upar kiya...

wahin WHIZZ ke kehte hi....


MAHI- WHIZZ, PHASE 1,PHASE 2 ke end me do bade bade gigantic bells lage hue the...wo kis liye hain...???


aate waqt MAHI ne un do bade bells ko dekh liya tha but kyunki aaj tak wo bell kisi bhi reason se baje nahi the, isiliye uske man me ye sawal aaya tha jo usne puch liya...


OPHILIA-wo bells is INSTITUTION ke danger alarms hain...ek invisible information force se jude hain wo bells..

waise do nahi kul teen bells hain..third PHASE ka bell is block ke aakhri chhor me hain...

agar kabhi kisi PHASE me kuch anhoni hui,toh us PHASE ka bell baj uththa hai...

par har PHASE ka bell sirf wahan ke incharges,matlab us PHASE ke liye appoint kiye gaye WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se hi juda hota hai,aur isiliye sirf unhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko un bells ki awaaz sunayi deti hai jis PHASE me kuch bohot galat hua hota hai....


OPHILIA WHIZZ ki bat sun ek baar fir sabhi SAVENTS hairan hue...kya kya chizen possible ho sakti hai magic se,ye ab dheere dheere un sabko samajh me aa raha tha...


wahin OPHILIA WHIZZ apni baat aage badhane hi waali thi ki....


WELL,LOOK WHO'S HERE...!!!!!THE WISE FOURGIES....


ek awaaz aayi stadium ke entrance ki taraf se jisse sun WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS palte aur saath hi hum sabki nazar bhi us taraf gayi toh humne dekha ki 3 log humari hi taraf aa rahe the...

jinme se 2 male the aur ek female aur jo baat abhi kahi gayi thi,wo us female ne kahi thi jo muskurate hue hamare paas aayi aur apne waist par apne dono haath rakh khadi ho gayi...

wahin uske saath jo do males aaye the,wo aage badhe aur baari baari hamare chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se gale mil unhe greet kiya...

gale milne ke baad...


VIOLET-kaisi ho MABBA.....???


apne waist par haath rakh khadi lady se VIOLET WHIZZ ne ye kaha jisse sun...???


MABBA-taklifen zameen ko hoti hain..aasman toh hamesha mast hi rehta hai....


MABBA ki baat sun uske saath aaye dono bando ne apne sir ko shake kiya aur VIOLET WHIZZ bas muskura di wahin hamare baaki ke teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS normally hi khade rahe aur wo shayad isiliye kyunki wo jaante the ki MABBA aisi hi hai...

a troubling bitch.....


VIOLET-SAVENTS....apne next PHASE ke teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS se miliye...

SAPIUS,REGIS aur ye hain MABBA.....


VIOLET WHIZZ ne un teeno ki taraf ek ek kar point karte hue hume unke naam bataye...


SAVENTS-GOOD MORNING WHIZZ...GOOD MORNING WHIZZDERS......

SAPIUS/REGIS-GOOD MORNING SAVENTS....toh aap hain hamare agle batch...its really nice to meet you all...


SAPIUS aur REGIS, dono hi hamare WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki tarah kaafi milansaar the,aur ussi tarah unhone sabhi SAVENTS se baat ki.....


MABBA- aapme se MAHI kaun hain....???


SAPIUS aur REGIS ki baat khatm hote hi MABBA ne ye sawal kiya jiske baad VIOLET WHIZZ ne MAHI ko aage aane ke liye kaha...

aur MAHI ke aage aate hi MABBA uske saamne khadi hui aur uske kandhe par apna ek haath rakh diya..


MABBA-khushi sirf deserving logon se milkar honi chahiye thik waise jaise mujhe tumse milkar ho rahi hai...

ummid karti hun ki jo galti dusron ne ki,wo tum nahi karogi...bas ek baat yaad rakhna, acchayi,burayi sirf shabd hain aur kuch nahi..

important hai TAAKAT...SHAKTI...jiske paas ye hai,wahi accha hai aur sirf wahi saccha hai...


aadhi baat VIOLET WHIZZ ki taraf aur aadhi baat MAHI ko dekhte hue unhone kahi thi...

wahin unki baat MAHI ko sahi toh nahi lagi par kyunki MABBA uski next PHASE ki WHIZZ thi,isiliye wo chup hi rahi...

wahin apni baat kehne ke baad....


MABBA-chalo...tumhe aaj humare PHASE ke best SAVENTS ke saath baithna hai...

MAHI ko pakde pakde unhone ye kaha aur usse apne saath lejaane ke liye mudne hi waali thi ki....


VIOLET- ek second MABBA... MAHI ke saath saath MABEL aur ALFREEN ne bhi tumhare STELLARS group me baithne ke liye qualify kiya hai.. unhe bhi saath le jaao...


apni baat keh WHIZZ ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ko jaane ka ishara kiya jiske baad wo dono bhi MABBA ke paas jaakar khade ho gaye...


MABBA-impressive....jo baat maine MAHI se kahi,wahi tum dono ke liye bhi hai...baakiyon se aage ho tum teeno,par agar future me bhi aisa hi chahte ho toh sirf POWER par focus rakhna...

uske shroth par nahi.....


ye bol teeno ko lekar MABBA aage badh gayi wahin unke jaane ke baad SAPIUS aur REGIS kuch der tak hamare chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se baat kar ek taraf chal diye...

OPHILIA- mere piche aayiye SAVENTS...


ye bol OPHILIA WHIZZ ek taraf ko aage badhi aur unke piche sabhi SAVENTS ho liye...


OMMIN- ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BROWNY, RAAZ...aap chaaron mere piche aayiye...


OMMIN ke aisa kehte hi hum chaaron unke piche ho liye..

ye teeno toh behad sad dikh rahe the par mai hamesha ki tarah normal tha...

aage badhte hue hum ek jagah pahunche jahan pahunchte hi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BROWNY ka face aur sukh gaya..

reason...

hum stadium ke ek entrance gate par khade the jiske baahar UNDERSERVING likha tha...

ab mooh sukhao ya bhale hi ro lo,jaana toh yahin par tha aur isiliye ek ek kar hum us entrance se hote hue andar chale gaye...

andar pahunch humne dekha ki pura stadium audience se bhara hua tha...ye audience aur koi nahi balki purane passed out SAVENTS aur unki families the...

sabhi audience zoron shoron se awaazein nikal rahe the,gaane ga rahe the jisse mahoul kaafi sahi lag raha tha...

kaafi saare blocks bane the stadium me aur har block ke side me wahan baithe logon ke liye food aur beverages ka intazam kiya gaya tha...

par jahan hum chaaron the,wo jagah pure stadium se alag thi....

baithne le liye seats toh the nahi par saath hi behad garmi aur humidity bhi thi yahan....

floor pura ganda tha...aur ek ajeeb si badbu bhi aa rahi thi,jo ki saalon se safayi naa karne par aati hai...

hume wahan chhod OMMIN WHIZZDER jaa chuke the...mai ek jagah chup chaap khada ho gaya tha...


ACCHUTA-ga**d maarne aur marwane ke liye badhiya jagah hai ye bhai....

SLUNDER- tu chup rahega..yaar kitni garmi hai yahan....pure din bina khaaye aur bina piye kaise rahenge hum yahan....???

ACCHUTA-mooth piyega...waise lag toh nahi raha hai,par teri dosti ki khaatir mai koshish karta hun nikaalne ki...

tu bas niche mooh khol kar baith jaa....


issi tarah SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA hamesha ki tarah apni bakwas karne me lag gaye wahin mai aur BROWNY chup chaap khade the...



PHASE 2 STAND:-


WOW.....AMAZING....BAAHAR SE PATA HI NAHI CHAL RAHA THA KI ANDAR KA NAZARA AISA HOGA....


MAHI ne excitement me ye baat kahi thi jisse stadium ke shor ki wajah se MABEL aur ALFREEN aadhi hi sun paayi thi.....

MABBA in teeno ko yahan second PHASE ke STELLARS group ke beech laayi thi aur fir group ke sabhi SAVENTS se unka intro karwaya tha...

sabhi in teeno ko dekhkar kaafi khush the siway do logon ke...

ANWIR aur MORANA...

dono hi ghusse se in teeno ko dekh rahe the,khaaskar MAHI ko....

khair,intro ke baad teeno apni apni seats par baith gayi...har taraf nazaren ghumate hue MAHI ki nazar ek jagah rooki aur...


MAHI-wo dekh AL,uncle aunty....


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN ki nazar stadium ke dusre bhaag me gayi jahan par stand ke upar PARENTS likha hua tha...

unke stand ke pure ulat side tha wo stand jahan is waqt baaki current aur ex SAVENTS ke parents baithe hue the....

wo stand kaafi door tha but MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN clearly wahan baithe FLORIN aur MARIA ko dekh paa rahe the aur iski wajah thi un teeno ki SOUL...

apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY kar lene ki wajah se ab unki drishti bhi pehle se 10 guna tak tez ho gayi thi...

apne mom dad ko baaki parents ke saath milkar hooting karta dekh ALFREEN ke chehre par smile aa gayi...

par ye smile kuch seconds ki hi thi kyunki apne mom dad ko dekhne ke baad uski nazar thodi aur aage gayi jahan stadium ka last stand bana hua tha aur wahan is waqt RAAZ ek jagah tik kar khada tha....

RAAZ ko apne mom dad ke stand ke paas dekh ALFREEN ke man me ek ajeeb se dar ne ghar kar liya tha....

par tabhi.....


MABEL-arre wahan side me kya dekh rahi hai...???saamne dekh....


ALFREEN ke kandhe se hilate hue MABEL ne ye kaha aur jab ALFREEN ne saamne dekha toh...


SWINNNNNNN........


maidan ke ek taraf KAALE aur BHURE rang ke gaadhe colour se bane dhuen ko neeche chhodte hue ek saath das aakriti upar hawa me uththe chale gaye aur ek point par aakar ruk gaye....

unke upar hawa me rookte hi unse just upar bade bade KAALE aksharon me kuch akshar ubharne lage aur jab un aksharon ne khudko likhna pura kiya toh....

....WICKEDS......


is naam ki dhwani se aadhe se zyada stadium goonj utha...yahi likha tha un aakritiyon ke upar aur aisa hone ke baad un aakritiyon me bhi badlaaw aane laga aur dekhte hi dekhte wo 10 aakritiyon human forms me badal gayi....

complete black stretchable outfit pehne ye 10 PHASE 3 ke pehle group WICKEDS ke SAVENTS the jo hawa me uthe hue sabhi audience ko haath hilate hue abhivaadan de rahe the.....

sab unhe dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi.....

maidan ke dusre chhor me kuch same nazara banane laga...

maidan ke us dusri taraf WHITE aur PINK rang ke gaadhe colour se bane dhuen ko neeche chhodte hue ek saath das aakriti upar hawa me uththe chale gaye aur WICKEDS ki point par aakar ruk gaye....

unke upar hawa me rookte hi unse just upar bade bade WHITE aksharon me kuch akshar ubharne lage aur jab un aksharon ne khudko likhna pura kiya toh....


MORALS......


ab is naam se aadha stadium goonj utha...


yahi likha tha un aakritiyon ke upar aur aisa hone ke baad un aakritiyon me bhi badlaaw aane laga aur dekhte hi dehte wo 10 aakritiyon human forms me badal gayi....

complete white stretchable outfit pehne ye dus SAVENTS PHASE 3 ke MORALS the jo haath hawa me lehra sabhi ka abhivaadan kar rahe the....

wahin ye sab dekh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ka excitement level bhi kaafi badh gaya tha...

aakhon me attha utsah liye wo teeno is nazare ko dekh rahi thi...

kuch der tak WICKEDS aur MORALS ke naam ki gunj pure stadium me hoti rahi aur fir....


BOOM........

MORALS aur WICKEDS ke beech ek dhamaka sa hua aur us dhamake ke beech prakat hue MABBA aur VIOLET....

apne WHIZZ ko competition ke beech dekh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL khushi se ucchal padi....

MABBA aur VIOLET is competition ki ARBITER (REFEREE) thi...

WICKEDS ke dress colour ki hi tarah ek black robe me thi MABBA wahin VIOLET MORALS ke dress colour ko match karte hue white robe pehna hua tha VIOLET WHIZZ ne....


MABBA/VIOLET-MORALS,WICKEDS...GATHER AROUND....


dono WHIZZ ke aisa kehte hi hawa me tairte hue WICKEDS aur MORALS unke dono side me aakar rook gaye...

dono hi teams ek dusre ko ghhuse de dekh rahe the...


MABBA-ummid karti hun ki aap dono hi teams fair play khelenge....

ZUNYATA AUR SATYATATI ke challange me aap sirf apne performance ko better karne me dhyan denge naaki dusri team ke performance me dakhal dene ki koshish karenge....

aisa karna foul play hai jisse aap disqualify ho jaayenge....

understood.....


MORALS/WICKEDS-yes WHIZZ...

VIOLET/MABBA-so let the show begin.....


apne haath ko failate hue dono WHIZZES ne ye baat kahi jiske baad....


PRATYARTHTHAYATI SAMOGAMA

CHALLENGE APPEAR..


SPELL bolte hi dono WHIZZES hawa me upar uthi aur ek nirdharit uchayi par pahunch rook gayi...

wahin unke spell bolne ke agle hi second stadium ka pura nazara hi badal gaya....

kuch der pehle jahan WICKEDS khade the,ab wahan aag ki ek diwal ban gayi jiski gravitational force itni zyada thi ki wo 10 WICKEDS uski taraf kheechane lage....

wahin dusri taraf jahan kuch der pehle MORALS khade the,wahan is waqt ek paani ki diwal ban chuki thi...

us paani me ek tez chakrawat aaya hua tha jiske gravitational pull ki wajah se MORALS uski taraf kheenchte chale jaa rahe the....

behatarin drishya tha jisse mantramugdh se hue sabhi audience dekh rahe the...



PARENT'S STAND:-


WO RAAZ HAI NAA....!!!!


FLORIN ne apni gardan me halki akdan mehsoos ki jiski wajah se usne apne sir ko daayen baayen jhatka diya aur issi dauran usse apne stand se kuch door ek bada par ujda sa stand dikha jiske ek chhor par khada hua tha RAAZ...

usse dekh FLORIN ne ye baat kahi jiske baad MARIA ki nazar bhi udhar ghumi aur....


MARIA-arre haan..ye toh RAAZ hi hai...


RAAZ ko is tarah ek ujdi si jagah me khada dekh FLORIN ko acha toh nahi lag raha tha but MAHI ne kal unhe bataya tha ki kaun sa SAVENT kahan baithega aur kyun usse wo jagah di gayi thi....

is situation ke liye wo kuch kar toh nahi sakte the but unhe RAAZ se baat karne ka man hua aur....


FLORIN-mai aata hun uske paas se...


ye bol FLORIN uthe aur baahar ki taraf chal pade...



PHASE 2 STAND:-



YE MOM AUR POPS KAHAN JAA RAHE HAIN...???


apne stand me baithi ALFREEN jo competition dekh rahi thi,wo bhi beech beech me apne mom dad ke stand ki taraf dekh leti thi aur is baar jab usne aisa kiya toh dekha ki uske dad RAAZ ki taraf dekh rahe the aur fir wo uthe aur baahar ki taraf chal pade aur unke piche MARIA bhi chal padi jisse dekh ALFREEN ko ek jhatka laga...

usse shak hua ki kahin uske mon dad RAAZ ke paas toh nahi jaa rahe aur ye khayal aate hi ek ajeeb si bechaini paida hui ALFREEN ke man me..

usne ek baar MAHI aur MABEL ki taraf dekha jo is waqt competition dekhne me khoye hue the...

wo chupchaap uthi aur apne stand se baahar nikal gayi is baat se anjaan ki wahan do log the jinhone usse baahar jaata dekh liya tha....



PARENT'S STAND:-


STOP FLORIN.....


FLORIN jo apne stand ke gate se baahar nikalne hi waale the,unhe piche se MARIA ne rookne ke liye kaha jisse sun wo rook gaye...


MARIA-mujhe nahi lagta ki tumhe RAAZ ke paas jaana chahiye....


MARIA ki baat par FLORIN kuch kehne hi waale the ki...


MARIA-i know ki tumhe uski chinta hai..aur itne din baad usse dekhne ki wajah se tum usse milna chahte ho, usse baat karna chahte ho but don't u think ki wo aisa nahi chahta hoga...

i mean,koi bhi usse kisi bhi matter par baat kare,ye RAAZ ko acha nahi lagta...

tum bhale hi usse kitni hi positive ya normal baat kyun naa karo,par wo usse negetive hi lega aur negetive hi bolega...

i think we should just leave him alone...jab tak usme logon ke lekar badlaaw nahi aata,hume bhi usse door hi rehna chahiye...

ye uske liye bhi acha hi hai kyunki usse akela rehna,kisise bhi baat naa karna acha lagta hai....


MARIA ki baat sahi thi..kuch der tak uski baaton par sochne ke baad...


FLORIN-i think u are right...usse space chahiye aur hume usse wo dena chahiye...


apni wife ko side se thaamte hue FLORIN wapas palte aur apne seat par jaakar baith gaye is baat se anjaan ke unke bas RAAZ ko milne ke khayal bhar se uth kar jaane ki wajah se ye...

PURI KAHANI BADALNE WAALI HAI.....






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V.J......
 
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Bahut hi lajawab story likh rhe ho mgr ye smjh nhi aarha ki Jo hero hai vo devil q BN rha hai
And sbse confusion ye hai RAaz asal main RAaz hai hi nhi just a puppet then ye character Aaya q hai
Starting main RAaz hero LGA mgr ab Asomodeous ki baat SE pta LG rha ki koi hai hi nhi RAaz and ye ANJALI nd Rohit bhi honge kya story main inka kya character Hoga too much confusion
AB RAAz ne Jo quote Kaha tha
Agar Kisi ko Spna Aaye to theek mgr usme RAAZ. aaya to vo such Hoga
To ISS baat SE RAAZ alfreen ke mom dad ko mardega
And ye Mahi sote sote RAaz ke pass kese gyi
Bahut jda confusion hogya Bhai ab
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI NE APNE SOUL KO 2 PERCENT TAK AMPLIFY KAR LIYA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MABEL AUR ALFREEN NE BHI APNE SOUL KA FIRST PERCENT AMPLIFICATION KAR LIYA HAI...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



MEGA UPDATE-33



PLANET-EYLSIAN


PLACE-ALFREENS ABODE




NAHI..............


ek tez cheekh ke saath ALFREEN uth gayi thi....

reason.....aaj usse fir wahi sapna aaya tha jisme RAAZ ne uske mom dad ko maar diya tha....

kuch der tak apne chadhe hue saanson ko kaabu me laane ke baad wo turant apne bed se utri aur apne mom dad ke room ki taraf chal padi....

aaj bhi FLORIN aur MARIA araam se so rahe the jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-ye sab kya ho raha hai mere saath...wahi sapna dobara kyun aaya mujhe???

aur aaj toh pichle baar se zyada realistic lag raha tha sab.....kahi ye sab mere INSTINCTS dwara catch kiye gaye pre intuitions toh nahi hai...!!!

nahi nahi..ye mai kya soch rahi hun.. aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta..mai aisa hone hi nahi dungi....

kuch hone ka intazar karne se acha toh ye hai ki kuch hone hi naa diya jaaye....

& i am gonna make sure about it...i will turn each and every stone around...


aakhri baat bolte waqt ALFREEN ki aankhon me ghussa saaf dikhne laga tha....

jaise har road ka koi na koi dead end hota hai,har aaghas ka ek anjaam hota hai,waise hi har soch se ek faisla janm leta hai aur har faisle ka ek natija hota hai...

ab dekhna ye hai ki kya faisla liya hai ALFREEN ne aur us faisle ka kya niklega natija...!!!!?????



NEXT DAY AT CHOSEN'S....



SWEEP-STAKE:-



GATHER AROUND SAVENTS.....


apne apne groups banaye khade SAVENTS ke kaano me VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz padi jisse sun sabhi apne regualar line formation me khade ho gaye...

subah ka waqt hai...as decided,sabhi SAVENTS apne regular waqt par CHOSENS ke PHASE 1 block ke ground me jama ho chuke hain aur unke saamne unke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS moujud hain...

kal shaam ko ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne mujhe bataya tha ki aaj mujhe bhi INSTITUTION me aane ke liye kaha gaya hai aur isiliye aaj kaafi waqt ke baad mai bhi yahan sabhi SAVENTS ke saath khada hun...

sabko dekhne ke baad ek nazar chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne meri taraf bhi ghumaya aur fir...


OPHILIA-so finally,its SWEEP-STAKE time SAVENTS.... excited..!!!!

SAVENTS- yes WHIZZ....

OPHILIA-hona bhi chahiye...aaj jis competition ko dekhne aap sab jaane waale hain,yakin maaniye,aap sab ke future performance ke liye ye competition kisi moral boost se kam nahi hoga...

kaafi inspired hone waale hai aaj aap sab....


OMMIN-abhi thodi hi der me hum PHASE 3 block ke liye niklenge par usse pehle 2 important baatein jo aaj ke din se hi related hain,uske baare me jaan lijiye....

pehli.....

jaisa ki aap sabko humne bataya tha,aap sabke apne abhi tak ke performance ke according hi aaj aap sab SWEEP-STAKE witness karenge aur isiliye....


MAHI, ALFREEN,MABEL....aap teenon ek taraf ho jaaiye....aaj ka competition aap teeno PHASE 2 ke sabse respected group STELLARS ke saath baith kar dekhenge...


OMMIN ki baat sun khush hote hue MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ek taraf hokar khadi hi gayi....

iske baad jinhone bhi apne soul ko trigger kar liya tha, OMMIN ne un sabka naam ek ek kar liya aur unhe bhi ek group banakar khada kar diya....


OMMIN-aap sabne bhi aaj ke competition ko witness karne liye ek respected jagah own kar li hai....

and now ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BROWNY and RAAZ....kyunki aap sab baaki SAVENTS se piche hain, isiliye aap sabko sabse door khade hokar ye competition dekhna hoga....

itna hi nahi,wahan ke saare spectators, competition ke dauran wahan moujud sabhi PHASE 1 aur 2 ke SAVENTS ke liye snacks & beverages ka arrangment bhi rahega,siwaay aap chaaron ke...

aaj pure din aap chaaron kuch khaa ya pee nahi sakenge....

ACCHUTA dheere se-din bhar bhuka rehna padega....
saala koi apne ghar ki baayi ke saath bhi aisa nahi karta yaar...


OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sun ACCHUTA dheere dheere sabhi ko gaali de raha tha, SLUNDER aur BROWNY ka sir jhuka hua tha, mujhe koi fark nahi pad raha tha,aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS humare liye pity feel kar rahe the but in sabke beech ALFREEN bas mujhe ghusse se ghur ghur kar dekh rahi thi...


NOX-ye toh hui pehli baat.. aur dusri baat hai khud SWEEP-STAKE....

is competition ko dekhne se pehle mai aapko iske baare me bata deta hun kyunki ek baar aap SWEEP-STAKE combat jahan hone waala hai,wahan pahunch gaye toh uske baad humara aapse intaraction nahi ho paayega...

aap hi ki tarah hum WHIZZDERS aur WHIZZES ke liye bhi alag se baithne ke arrangements hote hain..

jaisa ki aap sabko pata hai ki SWEEP-STAKE ka matlab hota hai khudki saamne waale par superiority dikhana...

bas issi defination ko ek roop deta hai ye competition....

ye competition do teams ke beech hota hai..ye teams aur koi nahi balki wo do groups hain jinse third PHASE divide hota hai....

WICKEDS.....

MORALS.......

ye wo do groups ke naam jinme se koi ek GROUP final PHASE me aapka ghar hoga....aapka parivaar hoga....

ab baat karen is competition ki toh WICKEDS aur MORALS ke beech ka ye competition ZUNYATA aur SATYATATI ko aadhar banakar khela,lada aur jeeta jaata hai...

ZUNYATA matlab unreal
aur SATYATATI matlab real....

ek bade se stadium me jo ki maayavi hota hai,wahan hota hai ye competition jisme samay ke saath ascending order me alag alag real aur unreal metaphysical aur magical chunoutiyan milti hai jinhe as a group dono hi teams ko handle kar jeetna padta hai....

samajh gaye aap sab????

SAVENTS- yes WHIZZDER...


utsah aur khushi,dono hi bhaav jhalke the SAVENTS ki awaaz me.. competition kaisa hoga,iske baare me jaankar sabhi ka excitement level ek alag hi mukaam par pahunch gaya tha...

MAHI ne toh abhi se hi khudko ek din us competition me part leta hua dekhna shuru kar diya tha...

MABEL ka bhi same haal tha..waise ALFREEN bhi ye sab sun kaafi excited thi par uska aadha dhyan kahin aur tha....


OPHILIA-its time SAVENTS...lets go aur haan,aap sab ke parents pehle hi battle ground me pahunch chuke hain...

so let's move....


ye bol chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS aage badhe aur jis tarah hume khada kiya gaya tha,ussi formation me hum bhi unke piche ho liye...



BATTLE GROUND.......


YES MAHI....any problem???


PHASE 1 block cross karke PHASE 2 block se nikalte hue hum PHASE 3 block ke beech bane ek bohot bade ground ke baahar khade the......

ye ground darasal ek bohot hi bada stadium tha,jisme alag alag entrace the aur unhi entrance me se ek ke baahar the hum sab is waqt...

yahan pahunch OPHILIA WHIZZ kuch kehne hi waali thi ki tabhi MAHI ne apna haath upar kiya...

wahin WHIZZ ke kehte hi....


MAHI- WHIZZ, PHASE 1,PHASE 2 ke end me do bade bade gigantic bells lage hue the...wo kis liye hain...???


aate waqt MAHI ne un do bade bells ko dekh liya tha but kyunki aaj tak wo bell kisi bhi reason se baje nahi the, isiliye uske man me ye sawal aaya tha jo usne puch liya...


OPHILIA-wo bells is INSTITUTION ke danger alarms hain...ek invisible information force se jude hain wo bells..

waise do nahi kul teen bells hain..third PHASE ka bell is block ke aakhri chhor me hain...

agar kabhi kisi PHASE me kuch anhoni hui,toh us PHASE ka bell baj uththa hai...

par har PHASE ka bell sirf wahan ke incharges,matlab us PHASE ke liye appoint kiye gaye WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se hi juda hota hai,aur isiliye sirf unhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko un bells ki awaaz sunayi deti hai jis PHASE me kuch bohot galat hua hota hai....


OPHILIA WHIZZ ki bat sun ek baar fir sabhi SAVENTS hairan hue...kya kya chizen possible ho sakti hai magic se,ye ab dheere dheere un sabko samajh me aa raha tha...


wahin OPHILIA WHIZZ apni baat aage badhane hi waali thi ki....


WELL,LOOK WHO'S HERE...!!!!!THE WISE FOURGIES....


ek awaaz aayi stadium ke entrance ki taraf se jisse sun WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS palte aur saath hi hum sabki nazar bhi us taraf gayi toh humne dekha ki 3 log humari hi taraf aa rahe the...

jinme se 2 male the aur ek female aur jo baat abhi kahi gayi thi,wo us female ne kahi thi jo muskurate hue hamare paas aayi aur apne waist par apne dono haath rakh khadi ho gayi...

wahin uske saath jo do males aaye the,wo aage badhe aur baari baari hamare chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se gale mil unhe greet kiya...

gale milne ke baad...


VIOLET-kaisi ho MABBA.....???


apne waist par haath rakh khadi lady se VIOLET WHIZZ ne ye kaha jisse sun...???


MABBA-taklifen zameen ko hoti hain..aasman toh hamesha mast hi rehta hai....


MABBA ki baat sun uske saath aaye dono bando ne apne sir ko shake kiya aur VIOLET WHIZZ bas muskura di wahin hamare baaki ke teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS normally hi khade rahe aur wo shayad isiliye kyunki wo jaante the ki MABBA aisi hi hai...

a troubling bitch.....


VIOLET-SAVENTS....apne next PHASE ke teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS se miliye...

SAPIUS,REGIS aur ye hain MABBA.....


VIOLET WHIZZ ne un teeno ki taraf ek ek kar point karte hue hume unke naam bataye...


SAVENTS-GOOD MORNING WHIZZ...GOOD MORNING WHIZZDERS......

SAPIUS/REGIS-GOOD MORNING SAVENTS....toh aap hain hamare agle batch...its really nice to meet you all...


SAPIUS aur REGIS, dono hi hamare WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki tarah kaafi milansaar the,aur ussi tarah unhone sabhi SAVENTS se baat ki.....


MABBA- aapme se MAHI kaun hain....???


SAPIUS aur REGIS ki baat khatm hote hi MABBA ne ye sawal kiya jiske baad VIOLET WHIZZ ne MAHI ko aage aane ke liye kaha...

aur MAHI ke aage aate hi MABBA uske saamne khadi hui aur uske kandhe par apna ek haath rakh diya..


MABBA-khushi sirf deserving logon se milkar honi chahiye thik waise jaise mujhe tumse milkar ho rahi hai...

ummid karti hun ki jo galti dusron ne ki,wo tum nahi karogi...bas ek baat yaad rakhna, acchayi,burayi sirf shabd hain aur kuch nahi..

important hai TAAKAT...SHAKTI...jiske paas ye hai,wahi accha hai aur sirf wahi saccha hai...


aadhi baat VIOLET WHIZZ ki taraf aur aadhi baat MAHI ko dekhte hue unhone kahi thi...

wahin unki baat MAHI ko sahi toh nahi lagi par kyunki MABBA uski next PHASE ki WHIZZ thi,isiliye wo chup hi rahi...

wahin apni baat kehne ke baad....


MABBA-chalo...tumhe aaj humare PHASE ke best SAVENTS ke saath baithna hai...

MAHI ko pakde pakde unhone ye kaha aur usse apne saath lejaane ke liye mudne hi waali thi ki....


VIOLET- ek second MABBA... MAHI ke saath saath MABEL aur ALFREEN ne bhi tumhare STELLARS group me baithne ke liye qualify kiya hai.. unhe bhi saath le jaao...


apni baat keh WHIZZ ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ko jaane ka ishara kiya jiske baad wo dono bhi MABBA ke paas jaakar khade ho gaye...


MABBA-impressive....jo baat maine MAHI se kahi,wahi tum dono ke liye bhi hai...baakiyon se aage ho tum teeno,par agar future me bhi aisa hi chahte ho toh sirf POWER par focus rakhna...

uske shroth par nahi.....


ye bol teeno ko lekar MABBA aage badh gayi wahin unke jaane ke baad SAPIUS aur REGIS kuch der tak hamare chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se baat kar ek taraf chal diye...

OPHILIA- mere piche aayiye SAVENTS...


ye bol OPHILIA WHIZZ ek taraf ko aage badhi aur unke piche sabhi SAVENTS ho liye...


OMMIN- ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BROWNY, RAAZ...aap chaaron mere piche aayiye...


OMMIN ke aisa kehte hi hum chaaron unke piche ho liye..

ye teeno toh behad sad dikh rahe the par mai hamesha ki tarah normal tha...

aage badhte hue hum ek jagah pahunche jahan pahunchte hi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BROWNY ka face aur sukh gaya..

reason...

hum stadium ke ek entrance gate par khade the jiske baahar UNDERSERVING likha tha...

ab mooh sukhao ya bhale hi ro lo,jaana toh yahin par tha aur isiliye ek ek kar hum us entrance se hote hue andar chale gaye...

andar pahunch humne dekha ki pura stadium audience se bhara hua tha...ye audience aur koi nahi balki purane passed out SAVENTS aur unki families the...

sabhi audience zoron shoron se awaazein nikal rahe the,gaane ga rahe the jisse mahoul kaafi sahi lag raha tha...

kaafi saare blocks bane the stadium me aur har block ke side me wahan baithe logon ke liye food aur beverages ka intazam kiya gaya tha...

par jahan hum chaaron the,wo jagah pure stadium se alag thi....

baithne le liye seats toh the nahi par saath hi behad garmi aur humidity bhi thi yahan....

floor pura ganda tha...aur ek ajeeb si badbu bhi aa rahi thi,jo ki saalon se safayi naa karne par aati hai...

hume wahan chhod OMMIN WHIZZDER jaa chuke the...mai ek jagah chup chaap khada ho gaya tha...


ACCHUTA-ga**d maarne aur marwane ke liye badhiya jagah hai ye bhai....

SLUNDER- tu chup rahega..yaar kitni garmi hai yahan....pure din bina khaaye aur bina piye kaise rahenge hum yahan....???

ACCHUTA-mooth piyega...waise lag toh nahi raha hai,par teri dosti ki khaatir mai koshish karta hun nikaalne ki...

tu bas niche mooh khol kar baith jaa....


issi tarah SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA hamesha ki tarah apni bakwas karne me lag gaye wahin mai aur BROWNY chup chaap khade the...



PHASE 2 STAND:-


WOW.....AMAZING....BAAHAR SE PATA HI NAHI CHAL RAHA THA KI ANDAR KA NAZARA AISA HOGA....


MAHI ne excitement me ye baat kahi thi jisse stadium ke shor ki wajah se MABEL aur ALFREEN aadhi hi sun paayi thi.....

MABBA in teeno ko yahan second PHASE ke STELLARS group ke beech laayi thi aur fir group ke sabhi SAVENTS se unka intro karwaya tha...

sabhi in teeno ko dekhkar kaafi khush the siway do logon ke...

ANWIR aur MORANA...

dono hi ghusse se in teeno ko dekh rahe the,khaaskar MAHI ko....

khair,intro ke baad teeno apni apni seats par baith gayi...har taraf nazaren ghumate hue MAHI ki nazar ek jagah rooki aur...


MAHI-wo dekh AL,uncle aunty....


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN ki nazar stadium ke dusre bhaag me gayi jahan par stand ke upar PARENTS likha hua tha...

unke stand ke pure ulat side tha wo stand jahan is waqt baaki current aur ex SAVENTS ke parents baithe hue the....

wo stand kaafi door tha but MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN clearly wahan baithe FLORIN aur MARIA ko dekh paa rahe the aur iski wajah thi un teeno ki SOUL...

apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY kar lene ki wajah se ab unki drishti bhi pehle se 10 guna tak tez ho gayi thi...

apne mom dad ko baaki parents ke saath milkar hooting karta dekh ALFREEN ke chehre par smile aa gayi...

par ye smile kuch seconds ki hi thi kyunki apne mom dad ko dekhne ke baad uski nazar thodi aur aage gayi jahan stadium ka last stand bana hua tha aur wahan is waqt RAAZ ek jagah tik kar khada tha....

RAAZ ko apne mom dad ke stand ke paas dekh ALFREEN ke man me ek ajeeb se dar ne ghar kar liya tha....

par tabhi.....


MABEL-arre wahan side me kya dekh rahi hai...???saamne dekh....


ALFREEN ke kandhe se hilate hue MABEL ne ye kaha aur jab ALFREEN ne saamne dekha toh...


SWINNNNNNN........


maidan ke ek taraf KAALE aur BHURE rang ke gaadhe colour se bane dhuen ko neeche chhodte hue ek saath das aakriti upar hawa me uththe chale gaye aur ek point par aakar ruk gaye....

unke upar hawa me rookte hi unse just upar bade bade KAALE aksharon me kuch akshar ubharne lage aur jab un aksharon ne khudko likhna pura kiya toh....

....WICKEDS......


is naam ki dhwani se aadhe se zyada stadium goonj utha...yahi likha tha un aakritiyon ke upar aur aisa hone ke baad un aakritiyon me bhi badlaaw aane laga aur dekhte hi dekhte wo 10 aakritiyon human forms me badal gayi....

complete black stretchable outfit pehne ye 10 PHASE 3 ke pehle group WICKEDS ke SAVENTS the jo hawa me uthe hue sabhi audience ko haath hilate hue abhivaadan de rahe the.....

sab unhe dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi.....

maidan ke dusre chhor me kuch same nazara banane laga...

maidan ke us dusri taraf WHITE aur PINK rang ke gaadhe colour se bane dhuen ko neeche chhodte hue ek saath das aakriti upar hawa me uththe chale gaye aur WICKEDS ki point par aakar ruk gaye....

unke upar hawa me rookte hi unse just upar bade bade WHITE aksharon me kuch akshar ubharne lage aur jab un aksharon ne khudko likhna pura kiya toh....


MORALS......


ab is naam se aadha stadium goonj utha...


yahi likha tha un aakritiyon ke upar aur aisa hone ke baad un aakritiyon me bhi badlaaw aane laga aur dekhte hi dehte wo 10 aakritiyon human forms me badal gayi....

complete white stretchable outfit pehne ye dus SAVENTS PHASE 3 ke MORALS the jo haath hawa me lehra sabhi ka abhivaadan kar rahe the....

wahin ye sab dekh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ka excitement level bhi kaafi badh gaya tha...

aakhon me attha utsah liye wo teeno is nazare ko dekh rahi thi...

kuch der tak WICKEDS aur MORALS ke naam ki gunj pure stadium me hoti rahi aur fir....


BOOM........

MORALS aur WICKEDS ke beech ek dhamaka sa hua aur us dhamake ke beech prakat hue MABBA aur VIOLET....

apne WHIZZ ko competition ke beech dekh MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL khushi se ucchal padi....

MABBA aur VIOLET is competition ki ARBITER (REFEREE) thi...

WICKEDS ke dress colour ki hi tarah ek black robe me thi MABBA wahin VIOLET MORALS ke dress colour ko match karte hue white robe pehna hua tha VIOLET WHIZZ ne....


MABBA/VIOLET-MORALS,WICKEDS...GATHER AROUND....


dono WHIZZ ke aisa kehte hi hawa me tairte hue WICKEDS aur MORALS unke dono side me aakar rook gaye...

dono hi teams ek dusre ko ghhuse de dekh rahe the...


MABBA-ummid karti hun ki aap dono hi teams fair play khelenge....

ZUNYATA AUR SATYATATI ke challange me aap sirf apne performance ko better karne me dhyan denge naaki dusri team ke performance me dakhal dene ki koshish karenge....

aisa karna foul play hai jisse aap disqualify ho jaayenge....

understood.....


MORALS/WICKEDS-yes WHIZZ...

VIOLET/MABBA-so let the show begin.....


apne haath ko failate hue dono WHIZZES ne ye baat kahi jiske baad....


PRATYARTHTHAYATI SAMOGAMA

CHALLENGE APPEAR..


SPELL bolte hi dono WHIZZES hawa me upar uthi aur ek nirdharit uchayi par pahunch rook gayi...

wahin unke spell bolne ke agle hi second stadium ka pura nazara hi badal gaya....

kuch der pehle jahan WICKEDS khade the,ab wahan aag ki ek diwal ban gayi jiski gravitational force itni zyada thi ki wo 10 WICKEDS uski taraf kheechane lage....

wahin dusri taraf jahan kuch der pehle MORALS khade the,wahan is waqt ek paani ki diwal ban chuki thi...

us paani me ek tez chakrawat aaya hua tha jiske gravitational pull ki wajah se MORALS uski taraf kheenchte chale jaa rahe the....

behatarin drishya tha jisse mantramugdh se hue sabhi audience dekh rahe the...



PARENT'S STAND:-


WO RAAZ HAI NAA....!!!!


FLORIN ne apni gardan me halki akdan mehsoos ki jiski wajah se usne apne sir ko daayen baayen jhatka diya aur issi dauran usse apne stand se kuch door ek bada par ujda sa stand dikha jiske ek chhor par khada hua tha RAAZ...

usse dekh FLORIN ne ye baat kahi jiske baad MARIA ki nazar bhi udhar ghumi aur....


MARIA-arre haan..ye toh RAAZ hi hai...


RAAZ ko is tarah ek ujdi si jagah me khada dekh FLORIN ko acha toh nahi lag raha tha but MAHI ne kal unhe bataya tha ki kaun sa SAVENT kahan baithega aur kyun usse wo jagah di gayi thi....

is situation ke liye wo kuch kar toh nahi sakte the but unhe RAAZ se baat karne ka man hua aur....


FLORIN-mai aata hun uske paas se...


ye bol FLORIN uthe aur baahar ki taraf chal pade...



PHASE 2 STAND:-



YE MOM AUR POPS KAHAN JAA RAHE HAIN...???


apne stand me baithi ALFREEN jo competition dekh rahi thi,wo bhi beech beech me apne mom dad ke stand ki taraf dekh leti thi aur is baar jab usne aisa kiya toh dekha ki uske dad RAAZ ki taraf dekh rahe the aur fir wo uthe aur baahar ki taraf chal pade aur unke piche MARIA bhi chal padi jisse dekh ALFREEN ko ek jhatka laga...

usse shak hua ki kahin uske mon dad RAAZ ke paas toh nahi jaa rahe aur ye khayal aate hi ek ajeeb si bechaini paida hui ALFREEN ke man me..

usne ek baar MAHI aur MABEL ki taraf dekha jo is waqt competition dekhne me khoye hue the...

wo chupchaap uthi aur apne stand se baahar nikal gayi is baat se anjaan ki wahan do log the jinhone usse baahar jaata dekh liya tha....



PARENT'S STAND:-


STOP FLORIN.....


FLORIN jo apne stand ke gate se baahar nikalne hi waale the,unhe piche se MARIA ne rookne ke liye kaha jisse sun wo rook gaye...


MARIA-mujhe nahi lagta ki tumhe RAAZ ke paas jaana chahiye....


MARIA ki baat par FLORIN kuch kehne hi waale the ki...


MARIA-i know ki tumhe uski chinta hai..aur itne din baad usse dekhne ki wajah se tum usse milna chahte ho, usse baat karna chahte ho but don't u think ki wo aisa nahi chahta hoga...

i mean,koi bhi usse kisi bhi matter par baat kare,ye RAAZ ko acha nahi lagta...

tum bhale hi usse kitni hi positive ya normal baat kyun naa karo,par wo usse negetive hi lega aur negetive hi bolega...

i think we should just leave him alone...jab tak usme logon ke lekar badlaaw nahi aata,hume bhi usse door hi rehna chahiye...

ye uske liye bhi acha hi hai kyunki usse akela rehna,kisise bhi baat naa karna acha lagta hai....


MARIA ki baat sahi thi..kuch der tak uski baaton par sochne ke baad...


FLORIN-i think u are right...usse space chahiye aur hume usse wo dena chahiye...


apni wife ko side se thaamte hue FLORIN wapas palte aur apne seat par jaakar baith gaye is baat se anjaan ke unke bas RAAZ ko milne ke khayal bhar se uth kar jaane ki wajah se ye...

PURI KAHANI BADALNE WAALI HAI.....






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V.J......
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Superb update.
Al jaane k liye nikli hai lekin jin do logo ne use dekha hai wo shayad raaste mein kuch karenge uske sath aur naam Raaz ka aayega jabki wo bachaane aayega AL ko I guess.

waiting

waise bhi VJ ki story mein always expect the unexpected
 
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