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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Shekhawat __Raj

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Bohot hi wadiya update bhai .... RAAZ ka essence jo aap har update mein daalte ho ye
bohot sahi lagta hai


Aur iss update ki speed forward wali soch bhi ek bohot sahi step pakda hai bhai



Kulmila kar update ko shandaar bana diya !!!!!!??????


Very. Nice Update brother !!!
ALWAYS AND EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE OF YOUR MASTERPIECE !!!!
 

Vaibhav

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Tagda update tha brother. Bilkul mazaa aa gya. Shuru m Mabel nahi alfreen hoga check it kyunki wo sapna alfreen ko aaya tha but apne Mabel use kiya h. 3 log av v bach gye soul trigger karne se achhuta aur slunder v ek h pata nahi kyu mujhe to laga tha ki maa baap ka sun k ye log har keemat pe haasil karnge apni takat ko but ye dno nahi hi sudhre. Browny kon h ye to pata nahi but uspe itna focus kiya gya h matlab kuch na kuch special hi hoga usme. Raaz ka v aana jaruri h us pratiyogita m. Yaha ya to alfreen kuch karegi ya fr koii aur matlab kuch na kuch aisa jrur hoga ki raaz ka attitude badle. VJ aur AV ji baaton se to aisa hi lagta h.
Attitude badla v to kya karega raaz aur kya hoga aage ye sochne ki baat h. Let's see aage kya hota h.
Eagerly waiting for next update brother
AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE SOUL KO EK PERCENT AMPLIFY KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HO JAATI HAI, AUR ALFREEN,MABEL APNE SOUL AMPLIFICATION KO TRIGGER KAR LETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ALFREEN KO EK BHAYANAK SAPNA AATA HAI JISME WO DEKHTI HAI KI RAAZ USKE MAATA PITAH KO MAAR DETA HAI


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-32




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE CHOSEN'S





1 WEEK LATER:-



ALFREEN,MABEL....U BOTH CAN DO IT....BAS HIMMAT MAT HAARO AUR APNE FOCUS AUR DETERMINATION KO AUR ZYADA STRONG BANAO.....

I KNOW KI YE PROCESS PAINFUL HAI BUT AS THEY SAY,NO PAIN,NO GAIN....

FOR THAT 1 PERCENT,U HAVE TO GIVE YOUR 200 PERCENT....SO COMMON ON,LETS TRY AGAIN.....


MABEL aur ALFREEN ka josh badhati hui boli VIOLET..

infact jab se in dono ne MAHI ke saath alag class join kar apne soul ko AMPLIFY karne ki shuruat ki hai,ussi waqt se VIOLET WHIZZ lagatar in dono ki housla afzayi karte hue aa rahi hai....

waqt se yaad aaya...subah ka waqt hai...apne apne soul ko trigger karne ke ek hafte baad bhi AMPLIFICATION process ko MABEL aur MAHI dono hi 10 second bhi cross nahi kar paa rahe the...

VIOLET WHIZZ ko pata tha ki ALFREEN aur MABEL dono hi kaafi talented hain,par wo MAHI ki tarah exceptional case nahi hain aur isiliye wo bhi in dono ke liye extra efforts laga rahi thi...

lagatar dono ko moral boost dete hue protsahit karti aa rahi thi VIOLET WHIZZ.....

MABEL toh lagatar apne pure concentration ke saath koshish kar rahi thi par ALFREEN ka focus do hisso me bata hua tha....

ek hafte pehle jo sapna usne dekha tha,wo sapna,wo drishya uske dimag se hatne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha...

apne mom dad ke saamne toh wo normal rehti aur dikhti thi,par baaki har jagah aur khaas kar institution me uske chehre par bechaini,ghussa dard ye saare bhaav aate jaate rehte the....

sapna dekhne ke agle hi din usne uske baare me MAHI ko bataya tha..

MABEL ki baat sun ek pal ke liye toh MAHI bhi tention me aa gayi thi par fir usne khudko shaantkar MABEL se isse mehez ek sapna kehkar bhulne ki salah di....

par is baat ka MABEL par kuch khasas asar hua nahi aur yahi wajah thi ki is PHASE ke sabse important class me jahan uska concentration level hadh se zyada strong hona chahiye,uske ulat wahi concentration aadha reh gaya tha....


VIOLET-MABEL,ALFREEN...common.... start again....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki awaaz ek baar fir un dono ke kaano me gunji jisse sun MABEL ne apni aakhen band kar li wahin kuch seconds me khudke saare emotions ko dabane ke baad ALFREEN ne bhi apni aankhen band kar li....

aur in dono se alag hamari MAHI jiski aaankhen pehle se hi band thi,wo apne SOUL ko 2 percent AMPLIFY karne ki koshish me lagi hui thi..

par uski raah MABEL aur ALFREEN se kayi guna zyada mushkil thi...

reason....

SOUL AMPLIFICATION adding order me nahi balki multiplication order me trigger hone waala MODE tha....

kehne ka matlab hai ki 2 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ka holder 1 percent holder se 2 guna nahi balki 10 guna strong hota hai...

aur isiliye hi VIOLET WHIZZ ne kaha tha ki 30 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ko use me laane waala shaksh pure CHOSENS ke har SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke holder se bhi zyada strong hai...

aur jab power itna fluctuate hota hai,toh usse use me laana bhi utna hi mushkil hota hai...

soul ke pehle percent ko use me laane ke liye jahan MAHI ko 1 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna pada tha,wahin ab 2 percent tak pahunchne ke liye usse 10 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko
hold me rakhna tha jo bohot zyada mushkil tha...

but ek advantage MAHI ko zaroor mila tha aur wo ye ki uske soul ke 1st percent amplification ke baad uski inner aur outer body,aur saath hi uska brain aur blood bhi pehle se 10 times zyada strong ho gaye the jiski wajah se uski sehen shakti bhi kaafi badh gayi thi...

yahi wajah thi ki wo 2 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakh paa rahi thi...waqt ka daayra toh badh gaya tha par jo uska target tha,uske liye filhal dilli door thi....


REST OF THE CLASS:-


FOCUS GUYZZZ.FOCUS.....aap sabhi capable hain,apne SOUL ko trigger karne ke liye....

bhale kitni hi baar aap fail kyun naa hon,bas apne himmat, confidence aur focus ko fail hone mat dijiyega....


OPHILIA WHIZZ ne sabhi SAVENTS ke housla badhate hue apni baat kahi jiske baad wo sabhi ek baar firse aakhen band kar apne apne SOUL ko trigger karne me lag gaye....



BACK TO MAHI, ALFREEN &MABEL



AAHHH.....AHHHHH....


10 seconds hote hote MABEL aur ALFREEN dono ki hi cheekh nikli aur ussi chikh ke saath unka CEREBRATION process bhi start ho gaya....

wahin 2 minutes aur kuch seconds ke baad MAHI bhi apne process se baahar aa chuki thi....

teeno hi apne performance se khush nahi the but filhal wo kuch kar nahi sakte the kyunki...


VIOLET-koi baat nahi SAVENTS...ye ek time taking task hai...kal fir try karenge....aaj ki class khatm...


ye bol WHIZZ class se baahar nikal gayi aur unke piche piche ye teeno bhi aaj ke unke performance ko discuss karte hue apne ABODES ki taraf nikal pade...



1 MONTH LATER:-



well done MAHI....is baar tumne pure 5 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakha tha...thats really impressive.....


khush hote hue VIOLET WHIZZ ne ye baat kahi jisse sun MABEL aur ALFREEN bhi apni friend ke achievements ke liye khush hue....


MAHI-but WHIZZ..thats not the deal...mai abhi bhi apne next target se pure paanch minute piche hun...

udaas si hote hue MAHI ne kaha jisse sun VIOLET WHIZZ muskura uthi aur...


VIOLET-roof tak ek jhatke me nahi pahuncha jaa sakta mahi...

lage hue stairs par apne apne ek ek kadam jama upar uthna padta hai aur abhi tum wahi kar rahi ho..

bas jab tak us chhat tak pahunch naa jaao,lagatar chadhti jaao aur agar aisa kiya toh manzil milni hi hai...

so theres nothing to be sad of.....


haan me apna sir hilate hue MAHI wapas paalthi maar kar baith gayi....

wahin uske aisa karne ke baad MABEL aur ALFREEN bhi same position me baith shuru ho gaye apne task ko pura karne ki koshish me jisme abtak wo zara bhi kaamiyab nahi ho paaye the....

aur apni is nayi koshish me bhi dono ka performance down hi raha jiske baad un dono ko hi thoda sa motivate kar VIOLET WHIZZ ne class off kar di....



REST OF THE CLASS:-


well done VALDIS.....we are really proud of you.... now you officially become only the fourth SAVENT among NEW BORNS of this year,jisne successfully apne SOUL ko trigger kiya hai...

aur isiliye kalse aapki class bhi aapse pehle jin teen SAVENTS ne apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya hai,unke saath lagegi....

aaj ki class khatm hoti hai.....



2 MONTHS LATER:-



MAHI- kya naam tha unka...???haan, MORANA, ANWIR.....


INSTITUTION ki taraf nikalte waqt MAHI ne un dono SAVENTS ka naam dohraaya jisse uski 2 mahine pehle behes hui thi aur jisse sun ALFREEN jo apne hi khayalon me khoyi thi,usse bhi jhatka laga aur....


ALFREEN-ye tu achanak un dono loosers ka naam kyun le rahi hai...???

MAHI-wakayi???kya wakayi wo loosers hain yaa fir ye tag jaisa unhe lagta hai,tujh par hi suit karta hai....


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN ko shock bhi laga aur bura bhi...

uska khubsoorat sa chehra achanak utar sa gaya jisse dekh...


MAHI-yahan akele me maine tujhe ye baat boli toh tujhe bura laga...

par ek mahine baad jab wo dono sabke saamne tera mazak udayenge,tab kya karegi...???

yunhi sir jhukakar khadi rahegi...kyunki us waqt iske alawa tere paas aur koi option hoga nahi....

baatein,tark,behes bhi tabhi achi lahti hain jab humare actions un tarkon ko backup den...

par pichle 2 mahino me jaisa tera ATTITUDE raha hai naa,usse naa tu kahin pahunchne waali hai aur naahi khud ko proove karke dikhane waali hai...

i know ALFREEN ki us sapne ne tujhe andar tak jhanjhor diya hai but tu mujhe bata ki kya koi bhi sapna hum jis reality me reh rahe hain,usse zyada important ho sakta hai kya???

chal ek pal ke liye maan bhi len ki tujhe aaye sapne me 1 percent tak ki bhi sacchayi hai,toh usse tackle karne ka kya plan hai tera..???

yunhi apni sochon me gum apne focus ko unfocus kar tu bas apna present and most importantly apna future kharab kar rahi hai...

apne dar ko apni kamzori nahi,apni taakat ka zariya bana..proove your worth ALFREEN...

taaki future me bhale hi kitni bhi negetive situation kyun naa khadi ho,tu ready reh paaye unhe handle karne ke liye...

MAHI ki baaton ne ek aag si jala di thi ALFREEN ke andar.wo jhat se aage badhi aur MAHI ke gale lag gayi...


ALFREEN-i promise you MAHI...i will proove my worth....kya hoga,kya ho sakta hai,bohot hua ye sab sochna,ab chaahe jo ho future me,i will make myself ready for every battle.....


ALFREEN ki baaton me aur uski aankhon me is waqt uska purana confidence dikhne laga tha jisse dekh MAHI khush ho gayi...

ek dusre ka haath thaam ek naye josh ke saath dono friends INSTITUTION ki taraf chal pade....



SOUL AMPLIFICATION CLASS:-



PRATIBANDHANA

BIND THE POWERS



brain body aur blood ko SOUL ke saath jodne ke liye ye spell bola gaya jiske 1 second baad hi....

AAAHHHH......

ek tez chikh ke saath VALDIS ki aankhen khul gayi thi jisse dekh...


VIOLET-is pain ki aadat daal lo VALDIS....jitni jaldi isse dosti kar loge,tumhare isse sehne ki shamata bhi utni jaldi badh jaayegi...


muskurate hue VIOLET WHIZZ ne ye baat kahi par apni baat kehne ke baad unhe thoda shock laga par saath hi wo khush bhi hui...

reason.....

MABEL aur ALFREEN,jinhone ab tak apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke process ke 15 seconds ko bhi cross nahi kiya tha,wo dono aaj 25 seconds guzarne ke baad bhi aone CEREBRATION process ko hault pe rakhe hue the...

wo is baare me soch hi rahi thi ki....


AHHHH....

AHHHHH.....


kuch seconds ke antaral me ek ek cheekh ke saath MABEL aur ALFREEN ki aankhen khul gayi jisse dekh...


VIOLET-ab ye hua naa focus aur determination ka asli combo... MABEL,aaj tumne 28 seconds tak apne CEREBRATION process ko paused rakha and ALFREEN,tumne toh aadhi jung hi jeet li....

pure 30 seconds...bas itne hi aur add karwa do apne process me aur tumhara soul amplification shuru ho jaayega....


WHIZZ ki baat sun wo dono hi khush ho gayi aur saath hi dono ne man hi man aur mehnet karne ki thaan bhi li thi..

wahin in sabke beech MAHI ki performance me 1 second ka hi sahi par fark har din aa raha tha jisse dekh VIOLET WHIZZ bohot hi zyada khush thi.....



REST OF THE CLASS:-



NOX-SAVENTS...aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai but class khatm karne ae pehle hum aap sabse bas yahi kahenge ki....

it's high time u pull up your socks... sirf ek month bacha hai SWEEP-STAKE competition me...

aur wahan aap kis tarah jaate hain,ye aapke is ek mahine ke performance par depend karta hai....

aap sab ke planets me unity ke baare me sikhaya jaata hai but yahan CHOSENS me sabse bada lesson hi POWER hai...

jo khudko jitna zyada powerful banayega,uski jagah,uski izzat baakiyon ke mukable utni hi zyada hogi...

and most importantly...next PHASE me aapki life kaisi hogi,wo aapke is bache ek month ke performance se aap sabko pata chal jaayega...

jisne bhi apne soul ke percentage ko AMPLIFY karna shuru kar diya,wo wahan us competition me ek STELLAR ki tarah jaayega,wahin jisne bhi apne soul ko trigger kar liya,wo wahan ek MEDIAN ki tarah treat kiya jaayega but jo ye dono hi chizen nahi kar paayega,usse us competition ko dekhte waqt ek WEAKLING ki tarah treat kiya jaayega...

so as i said,pull up your socks....


WHIZZDER ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS me confidence bhi jagne laga aur saath hi future ke baare me soch kar sabhi thode nervous bhi dikhne lage....

class khatm ho chuki thi.apni baat keh teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS class se nikal gaye....



ONE DAY BEFORE SWEEP-STAKE



PRATIBANDHANA

BIND THE POWERS



EK SAATH 29 SAVENTS ne is spell ko uccharit kiya tha....

jee haan doston, PHASE 1 me total 32 SAVENTS hain jinme se 29 SAVENTS ne apne apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya hai....

sirf trigger.. amplify ab tak sirf MAHI hi kar paayi hai....

SPELL bolte hi jo hota hai,wo hua....brain,body,blood aur soul ke bind hote hi sabhi SAVENTS ke sharir ke har ang me ek khichaav aaya jiski wajah se unhe aisa laga maano unhe koi andar se beech me se kheenchte hue faadne ki koshish kar raha ho....

aur ye wajah kaafi thi 26 SAVENTS ke aankh kholne ke liye jo unhone khol di...

aur bache 3 SAVENTS, MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL jinhone ab tak dard ko sehen karte hue apne CEREBRATION process ko pause hi rakha tha....

ab tak MABEL aur ALFREEN 50 seconds tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakh paaye the...

sirf dus seconds door the wo dono us magical 1 minute se...

aur aaj toh jaise dono thaan ke hi aaye the ki bhale chaahe jo ho jaaye,wo apne soul ko 1 percent tak AMPLIFY kar ke hi rahenge aur khud se kiye us waade ko nibhate hue wo apne task ko pura karne me lage rahe....

jahan is waqt ALFREEN apne pain ko zabt karne ke liye lagatar apne mom dad ke haste hue chehre ko yaad kar rahi thi thi wahin MABEL lagatar ek energy source par apna dhyan kendrit kiye hue thi...

aur yunhi karte karte jaise hi 50 seconds cross hua, VIOLET WHIZZ ke chehre par khushi dikhne lagi....

dhadakte dil se pray karti hui wo MABEL aur ALFREEN ke kaamiyab hone ka wait karne lagi aur tabhi.....

1 minute pura ho chuka tha aur ab tak MABEL aur ALFREEN ka CEREBRATION process paused hi tha jiski wajah se ek tez urja jaisi MAHI ke waqt nikli thi,thik waisi hi us pure room me fail gayi aur sidhe jaakar VIOLET WHIZZ ke bichaye shield se takrayi ...

us urja ke prabhaav se sabhi ki aankhen band ho gayi par kuch hi der par jab wo saari urja wapas MABEL aur ALFREEN me samayi,toh sab kuch saamanya ho gaya aur aisa hote hi ALFREEN aur MABEL ki aankhen khul gayi...


VIOLET-finally... MABEL, ALFREEN,you did it...u both have successfully amplified the first percent of ur soul....


jahan VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS khush hue wahin MABEL aur ALFREEN ki khushi ka toh thikana hi nahi raha....

dono ne turant ek dusre ko hug kiya aur fir ALFREEN jo beech me baithi thi, MAHI ko hug karne ke liye palti par....

MAHI ab bhi CEREBRATION process ke beech hi thi jisse dekh ALFREEN toh chup chaap uske taraf dekhne lagi par uske saath saath baaki sab aur VIOLET WHIZZ ka dhyan bhi MAHI ki taraf gaya...

MAHI ne baakiyon se bohot pehle apne process ko pause kar liya tha...

VIOLET WHIZZ ne gaur kiya ki MAHI ke CEREBRATION process ko paused hue ab tak 8 minute se upar ho chuke hain...

im teen mahino me MAHI ne 9 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna sikh liya tha jo sabhi jaante the aur isiliye filhal normal the par jaise hi wo waqt 9 minute se upar nikalne laga toh....

VIOLET WHIZZ ki ankhen hairat se badi hone lagi....unhe bhi nahi laga tha ki MAHI itni jaldi 2 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki holder banane ke kareeb pahunchegi kyunki isse pehle itni jaldi aisa kabhi nahi hua tha...

dhadakte dil se wo MAHI ki taraf dekhne lagi aur tabhi....

SNNNNN...SNNNNN.......

ek behad strong magnetic force rupi urja se pura room bhar gaya jiski wajah se wahan moujud sabko aisa lagne laga maano sabhi wahan ki floor se chipak se gaye hain....

itne strong force ko feel kar ek second ke liye toh VIOLET WHIZZ bhi hairan hui par fir unhe laga ki MAHI ke itni jaldi ye achievement karne ki wajah se aisa hua hai...

wahin kuch der tak wo magnetic force yunhi pure class me faili rahi par fir dheere dheere wo urja MAHI ke andar sama gayi aur aisa hote hi magnetic field jo us urja ki wajah se paida hui thi,wo bhi khatm ho gayi aur MAHI ki aankhen khul gayi...

aankh khulte hi uski nazar uske saamne khadi VIOLET WHIZZ par gayi jo aankhon me proudness liye ussi ki taraf dekh rahi thi....


VIOLET- CHOSEN'S ke 25 hazar saal ke itihaas me aisa kabhi nahi hua ki kisi bhi NEW BORN SAVENT ne season ke pehle 6 month ke andar apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya ho...

MAHI you are the very first to achieve this feat....and i am very proud and honoured to witness this moment...


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun aabhi SAVENTS shocked ho gaye the...

unke beech itna rare talent moujud hai,ye unme se kisi ne bhi nahi socha tha...


VIOLET-and ALFREEN, MABEL...aapne bhi aaj khud ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki journey ko start kar diya hai..

so congrats.....

MABEL/ALFREEN-thanks WHIZZ...


ALFREEN aur MABEL ke baare me jaankar MAHI bhi bohot khush ho gayi thi....

wo un dono ko congratulate karne hi waali thi ki...


VIOLET-so SAVENTS...aaj ki classes yahin khatm hoti hai.. jaisa ki aap sabko pata hai ki kal classes nahi lagengi...

kal aap sab SWEEP-STAKE competition dekhne jaayenge aur uske liye aap sab har din ki tarah regular waqt par hi yahan baahar ground me assemble honge..

yahan se jaisa formation bataya gaya tha,ussike hisaab se aap sab INSTITUTION ke third PHASE ke block ki taraf jaayenge...

ok then.. I'll see you tomorrow....


ye bol WHIZZ class se nikal gayi....


WHIZZ ke jaate hi MAHI ne turant ALFREEN aur MABEL ko hug kar unke achievement ki badhayi di...

un dono ne bhi MAHI ko aaj ke uske achievement ke liye usse congrats kaha...

in teeno ke ek dusre ko badhayi dene ke baad sabhi SAVENTS jo wahan par the, unhone bhi teeno ko congrats kaha...

aur is tarah in sabki aaj ki classes aur saath hi is INSTITUTION ke first 6 months pure hue....



WAHIN DUSRI CLASS ME:-



OMMIN-ACCHUTA,SLUNDER aur BROWNY.... unfortunately bas aap teeno hi aise hain jinhone ab tak apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ko trigger nahi kiya hai...

aur isiliye aap sab apne baaki fellow SAVENTS se alag kal competition dekhenge....

ACCHUTA- WHIZZDER,kya aisa nahi ho sakta ki hum teeno ye competition dekhna skip kar den...

NOX-bilkil nahi...aur teen nahi chaar...SWEEP-STAKE CHOSEN'S ki pratha hai jisme yahan ke har SAVENT ko shaamil hona hi padta hai...

aur isiliye ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER...kal morning regular time me hi aap apne saath RAAZ ko bhi lekar aayiyega... uska kal competition ko dekhne aana compulsary hai....


dono WHIZZDERS ke bolne ya fir ye kahun ki faisla sunaane ke baad ACCHUTA ke paas bolne ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi tha...

wahin apni baat bol teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS class se nikal gaye...

WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ke jaane ke baad BROWNY naam ka wo SAVENT bhi chupchaap class se nikal gaya....


ACHHUTA-yaar SLUNDER...ek baat toh bata....wo kaun sa gadha hoga jiske lu**d se hamari kismat likhi gayi hai...

SLUNDER-sun,mera dimag waise hi bohot kharab hai,tu mujhe aur ghussa mat dila...

ACCHUTA-abbe apne ghusse ko apni ga**d me ghussa le...kuch toh sahi istemaal hoga uska...

SLUNDER-abbe yahan kal hume bhikariyon ki tarah alag khada hokar competition dekhna hoga aur tujhe abhi bhi mazak sujh raha hai...

ACCHUTA-bhai sujh toh mera gaa*d gaya hai itne dino se ye AMPLIFICATION ko ragadte ragadte....

amplification naam ka ghanta toh baja nahi, lekin hamari zaroor baj gayi...par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain.....

bajayenge kal ghanta......


ye bol ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi class se nikal gaye....




PLACE-HEAVEN



HUMAN FORM KO CHHODE SADIYA BEET CHUKI HAIN,PAR NAZARON SE JAZBAAT ZAAHIR KARNE KA HUNAR AAPKO AAJ BHI KHUB AATA HAI AV....


aankhen band thi VIKRAM ki..par dekhne ke liye aankhon ki zaroorat toh thi nahi LORD OF ANGELS ko...

aur jab baat AVANTIKA aur uske bhaavon ki ho toh usse toh VIKRAM insaani form me bhi bina dekhe mehsoos kar leta tha...

apni taraf ghurti hui AV ko mehsoos kar muskurate hue VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi jisse sunane ke baad bhi jab AVANTIKA ne kuch kaha nahi toh VIKRAM ne aankhen khol uski khubsoorat chehre ki taraf rukh kiya...

narazagi,fikr,udaasi sab dikh raha tha is waqt AVANTIKA ke chehre par jisse dekh....


VIKRAM-har haalaat ka tod nikal sakta hun mai,par tere rukhsaar ko dekh apni bigadti haalat ko kaise sambhalu....!!!!


ek baar fir muskurate hue VIKRAM ne apni baat kahi jisse sun....


AVANTIKA-ye mazak ka waqt nahi hai VIKRAM...

VIKRAM-sach...ek aisi bhaavna jo kayi nayi bhavnaaon ko janm deti hai..

kabhi isse sun krodh janm leta hai,toh kabhi prem...aur filhal aapko satya mazak laga toh isme mai kya kar sakta hun....

AVANTIKA-aap sab kuch kar sakte hain par sawal ye hai ki kya aap kuch karna chahenge bhi...!!!!

MAI-mai toh apna kaam hamesha se hi karta chala aa raha hun..mai wo rasta hun jo har raahgir ko uski manzil tak le jaa sakta hai...

par us raaste par chalna,aur apni manzil tak pahunchna,ye faisla raahgir ka hai...


AVANTIKA ko pata tha ki behes aur tark vitark me wo VIKRAM se nahi jeet sakti aur isiliye usne sidhe mudde par aane ki sochi....


AVANTIKA-jo hua,jo dikhaya gaya,keh dijiye ki wo bas ek matibhram tha aur kuch nahi....

VIKRAM-matibhram aur vaastavikta soch rupi sikke ke do pehlu hain....

jo pehlu nazaron ke saamne hota hai,wo vaastavikta ka pramaan hota hai aur jo chuppa hua hai,wo us waqt ke liye ek matibhram hai....

AVANTIKA-kya ye tarika uchit hoga...!!!!

VIKRAM-uchit aur anuchit ki paribhasha bohot pechida hoti hai AV....

pida dene waale ko pida uchit lagti hai par pida sehne waale ko wahi pida anuchit pratit hoti hai...

par in dono shabd ke beech jo sabse mahatvapurn shabd chuppa hua hai,wo hai kaaran....

aur usse samajhna sabse zyada zaroori hota hai....


VIKRAM ki baaton ka koi jawab nahi tha AVANTIKA ke paas par phir bhi wo disturbed lag rahi thi...


MAI-AV...hum apne ANGEL aur DEVIL khud paida karte hain...

aur paida hote hi chaahen ya naa chaahen,un dono me dwandh aarambh ho hi jaata hai...

ab is dwandh me kaun jeetatha hai aur kaun haarta hai,ye koi aur tay nahi kar sakta...hum bhi nahi......

isiliye chinta chhodo aur apne soch ki drishti dusri taraf mod zara dekho....


WO WAQT JIS WAQT KA HAR WAQT KO INTAZAR THA,WO WAQT AA GAYA HAI...

WO WAQT JAB KARWAT LEGA YE ADHYAY.........

GHUMEGI PURI KAHANI AUR...........

EK BAAR FIR SE BADAL JAAYEGA PURA


.............ATTITUDE................






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V..J....
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Tagda update tha brother. Bilkul mazaa aa gya. Shuru m Mabel nahi alfreen hoga check it kyunki wo sapna alfreen ko aaya tha but apne Mabel use kiya h. 3 log av v bach gye soul trigger karne se achhuta aur slunder v ek h pata nahi kyu mujhe to laga tha ki maa baap ka sun k ye log har keemat pe haasil karnge apni takat ko but ye dno nahi hi sudhre. Browny kon h ye to pata nahi but uspe itna focus kiya gya h matlab kuch na kuch special hi hoga usme. Raaz ka v aana jaruri h us pratiyogita m. Yaha ya to alfreen kuch karegi ya fr koii aur matlab kuch na kuch aisa jrur hoga ki raaz ka attitude badle. VJ aur AV ji baaton se to aisa hi lagta h.
Attitude badla v to kya karega raaz aur kya hoga aage ye sochne ki baat h. Let's see aage kya hota h.
Eagerly waiting for next update brother
arre haan.. ALFREEN ki jagah MABEL ho gaya h... yahi hota jab hadbadi me rechecking hoti hai toh... anyway,mai abhi change kar dunga us naam ko...

aur rahi baat RAAZ ke ATTITUDE ke change hone ki toh brother.. VIKRAM ne ye bhi kaha hai ki badalne waali hai Puri kahani...

kehne ka matlab hai ki jis chiz ka intazar aap sabko tha, UNFOLD THE RAAZ....uska waqt aa chuka hai...aur jaise hi yeh kahani,aapko kahani hi alag lagne lagegi....
and trust me when i day this, wo hoga jo kisine socha bhi nhi hoga....
 

Nadan Dill

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Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha
 

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Bohot hi wadiya update bhai .... RAAZ ka essence jo aap har update mein daalte ho ye
bohot sahi lagta hai


Aur iss update ki speed forward wali soch bhi ek bohot sahi step pakda hai bhai



Kulmila kar update ko shandaar bana diya !!!!!!??????


Very. Nice Update brother !!!
ALWAYS AND EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE OF YOUR MASTERPIECE !!!!
thanks brother.. pre-planned chizen aksar sahi hi hoti hai brother...

training me jo dikhana tha,readers ko samjhana tha,wo maine detail mw samjha diya hai..ab aisa kyin zaroori tha,ye toh aage hi pata chalega but kehna mai ye chahta hun ki jab training sessions ka important hissa dikhaya jaa chuka hai toh fir usse khinchne ka koi matlab nahi hai...

aur ab hogi main kahani shuru jiski shuruat next update se ho jaayegi...

aane waale do updates MEGA UPDATE hain jinme bohot kuch reveal hoga infact is chapter ka sabkuch open ho jayega....

saath bane rahiyega....
 
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Nadan Dill

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bhaii mara khayal sa ap ko ak dafa Anjali&Rohit ki taraf be nazar dal doo baki ap ki marzii ap jasa bhatar samjoo





Ab dako ap raz ka raz kb kholta ho us updatr ka intazar ha jb raz ka raz khola gaa
 

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Bahut hi shanadar update hai bhai wakai mja aa gya
SWEEP-STAKE competition me kuch bahut bada hone wala hai. Agle update ka ab intzaar hai??
 
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