Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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vj4u

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Well last ke sabhi updates read kar liye.....kafi kuch ho gaya hai.......achhuta aur slunder ka past.......wahi mokalsar ka coma mein jana.... ASMODEUS ki Shaila aur akshaant se ki hui baat... Sabhi ka savents banna.....aage ki studies.....aur unke tasks.....kafi adventuring hai.......aur yeh update jaha sabhi ne soul amplification ke baremein jana.......Vikaram aur Asmodeus ki baate......kafi awesome tha.......rahi baat us puzzel ki shayad Raaz ne usse solve mar liya hai.....jo khud itna bada puzzle hai vo aise puzzle ko toh solve kar hi sakta hai.....well let's see what happens next.
PEACE.
thanks 4 the review brother..saath bane rahiye
 

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Very nice update lekin asha hua yar har bar ki tarha is bar jhtke kam or suspense ziyada de gaye warna update k akhir me thora bohat cheeze clear hoti rehti hy bhaly 10 raaz unse jude ho ye baat raat ko sone ni degi k akhir anjali or ronit gaye kaha apne jigri dost ko shod kr jo uski ankho me to hy lekin puhanch se bohat door shayad unhone shadi k baad apna alag ashiyana banane ki sochi ho kher ye to ab agle updates me pta chalega eagerly awaiting for next update
thanks brother 4 the review....aage bohot kuch hoga..yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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Tagda update brother. Classes to as usual chal hi rahi h blood brain soul hota hi rahega ab hero to hai nahi class m to whizz sb se dialogue bazi v nahi ho rha h. Acchuta aur slunder ki nokjhok waqaii m kamal h jis tarah ek dusre ko sunate h mazaa aa jata h. VJ ne bilkul thik kaha ki Asmodeus ka waha jana bilkul thik tha VJ jata to molaskar k wajah se wo hadd se jyada dukhi the wo usse behes pe utar jate jiska na to koii fayada tha na hi koii uddesya. Ronit Anjali v iss update m aaye h magar ye kya h ki nazar m hai per saamne nahi. Kahi aisa to nahi ki forbidden forest m jo top 2 angels ne apna kavach lagaya h wo yahi dono hai. Ek nayi niyati jo unhone khud likhi iska ishara iss taraf v ho skta h. Wese v RONIT + ANJALI = RAAJ bnta h. Khi in dno ka beta hi na ho. Dekhna h aage kya hota h umeed h ki jald hi RONIT ANJALI kha h ye pata lage aur sath hi raaz v thoda serious ho jaye . VIDEUS v ab tak gayab h use v bulao story m kuch to kare baith k khali aiyasshi kar raha h nalayak. Brother pls next update pls
thanks brother...sab apne waqt par ho jaayega brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI SAVENTS KE CHAARON CLASSES SHURU HO CHUKE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-27



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS



1 MONTH LATER......



AADESHAM......

ARAMATI.......



SAVENTS ke AADESHAM bolte hi un sabke dimag se ek urja nikli par isse pehle ki wo urja unke sharir se baahar nikle,sabhi ne turant apne apne body aur blood ko feel karte hue ARAMATI jiska matlab STOP hota hai,usse uccharit kiya aur sabke aisa karte hi wo urja baahar naa nikal sabhi SAVENTS ke sharir aur khoon me mil gayi jisse un sabhi ko halka jhatka toh laga but zyada fark nahi pada...

filhal subah ka waqt hai...aur jaisa ki upar padhkar aapko pata chal gaya hoga ki aaj SAVENTS ke classes ko regularly chalte hue 1 month ho chuka hai aur in ek mahine me sabhi SAVENTS ke BRAIN, BODY aur BLOOD ke AMPLIFICATION me kaafi fark aa achuka hai...

jahan sabhike brains spells ke lagatar uccharan ke kaaran aur tez ho gaye hain wahin un sabke bodies bhi pehle se kaafi sakht ho chuke hain...

saath hi un sabke blood me bhi ek AURA ka nirman hone laga hai jiski wajah se sabhi SAVENTS ke sharir ke aage halka sa hi sahi but ek invisible natural shield banane laga tha....

jiski wajah se sabhi ka naa sirf defense strong hota jaa raha tha balki saath hi un sabke 6th sense ki shakti me bhi izafa hua tha...

filhal SAVENTS ka first class matlab BRAIN AMPLIFICATION chalu tha aur ab SAVENTS first MODE ANURODHAM nahi balki MAGIC ka second MODE joki COMMAND tha,usse use me laa rahe the...

aur yahi wajah thi un sabke seekhne ki speed ke rapid hone ki....

par kyunki ye magic ka second MODE tha,isiliye isme hone waala asar bhi zyada tha jiski wajah se ARAMATI kehne ke baad sabhi ke sharir aur khoon me halka tez jhatka laga....

par BODY aur BLOOD ke strong hone ki wajah se sabhi SAVENTS is jhatke ke asar se jaldi hi ubhar bhi chuke the....

wahin in sabke beech MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL,ye teeno hi kaafi aage nikal chuki thi...

jahan baaki sabhi BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ki class me 5 se 6 baar hi is use me laane waale procedure ki repeat kar paate the wahin ye teeno 10 se zyada baar aisa karne ke kaabil ban chuke the...

infact MAHI toh isse zyada bhi kar sakti thi but ALFREEN aur MABEL ki wajah se wo bhi bas itne baar hi attempt karti thi but ye baat ALFREEN, MABEL aur saath hi OPHILIA WHIZZ se chuppi nahi thi.....


OPHILIA-welldone SAVENTS....aap sabhi naa sirf COMMAND MODE ke through khudko amplify karne me kaamiyab ho rahe ho balki apni apni AMPLIFICATION ki speed ko bhi lagatar badhate jaa rahe ho...

and MAHI, ALFREEN, MABEL...i must say ki aap teeno ko jo second PHASE ke best group STELLARS me rehne ki liberty mili hai,aap teeno hi uske rightful hakdaar hain....

aap teeno hi apne brains ko jis tarah AMPLIFY karte aa rahe ho,wo sach me kaabile taarif hai....

SAVENTS-thank you WHIZZ....


sabhi SAVENT ne ye thank you bola tha jisse dekh...


OPHILIA-ACCHUTA,SLUNDER...jo bhi baatein maine kahi hain,ye baki sabke liye hai,bas aap dono ke liye nahi....

kyunki aap dono ka hi performance baaki sabhi SAVENTS ke mukable bohot weak hai....and this is not good for your future...

agar aapne jaldi hi khudko buckle up nahi kiya aur apne apne performance me nikhar nahi laaya toh next PHASE aap dono ke liye kaafi tough ho jaayega kyunki abhi jaisi aapki performance aapko us PHASE ke WEAKLINGS catagory me daal degi....

aur us catagory me aap dono ki life style bhi affected hogi...so you both better start focusing....


ACCHUTA dheere se-maar gayi...bina lu***d aur tel ke maar gayi hum dono ki GAA***D...saala,agar izzat utarni hi thi toh akele me utar leti lekin nahi,sabke saamne lene ka shouk chadha hai inhe toh...

SLUNDER-chup kar tu..kya galat kaha WHIZZ ne....baakiyon ke mukable humari performance weak hi toh hai...

aur sabke saamne unhone ye sab isiliye hi bola hai taaki hum embarace feel kare aur apne apne focus ko aur strong banaye...

ACCHUTA-ghante ka strong..yahan jhatka lag lag kar haalat kharab hui padi hai aur ye hume focus karne ko bol rahe hain....

paani ke andar haath pair baandh kar rakh dene ke baad koi bhala tair sakta hai kya...!!!

SLUNDER-jhatke sirf hum dono ko hi lagte hain kya..???baaki sabhi SAVENTS bhi same pain feel karte aa rahe hain but sirf hum hi hain jo aage nahi badh paa rahe...

ACCHUTA-beta mujhe pata tha..apne in asuri daanton ke piche tu WHIZZ ke liye laar chhupaye baitha hai...

tujhe unki baat galat kaise lag sakti hai....!!!

SLUNDER-chi chi chi...apne WHIZZ ke liye koi aisa bolta hai kya???saale,lagta hai WHIZZ ki baat se tera dimagi santulan hil gaya hai...

ACCHUTA- naam ke beech tu LU***D liye ghumta hai toh hil mera kaise sakta hai....???

tu hi hila bhai aur mera sikhaya yogasan karna mat bhuliyo....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER kuch bolne hi waala tha ki....


OPHILIA-so SAVENTS,aaj ki aapki ye class khatm hoti hai... but jaane se pehle aap sabke liye ek anouncement hai...

aapke first teeno classes se aap sabne khudme jo nikhar laaya hai,kal us nikhar ka first test hoga..

kehne ka matlab hai ki kal aap sabka ek chota sa exam hai jisme hum ye check karenge ki aap sab kitna sikhe hain...

so,guyzz,be prepped....


ye bol OPHILIA WHIZZ class se nikal gayi wahin unki baat sun puri class kaafi excited ho chuki thi....



BODY AMPLIFICATION CLASS



STHVIRA PHALAKA

STURDY LAYERS



SPELL uccharit karte hi jaisa pichle ek mahine se hota aa raha hai,aaj phir hua...

ek tez jhatka laga sabhi SAVENTS ko par kyunki ab sabhi ke body layers kaafi strong hone lage the, isiliye kisike bhi mooh se aah nahi nikli siway do SAVENTS ke...

arre wahi do.....hamare dono priya SAVENTS... ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jinke mooh se halki si hi sahi par karah zaroor nikli jisse OMMIN WHIZZDER ne sun liya tha...

unhe bhi pata tha ki ye dono class ke sabse kamzor SAVENTS hain aur isiliye unhone zyada dhyan nahi diya...

wahin jhatka lagne ke kuch der baad sabhi ka CEREBRATION process wapas shuru ho gaya par aisa hone ke kuch der baad sabhi SAVENTS ne ek baar firse same prakriya repeat ki aur is baar wo sabhi khudke body ko jhatka lagne ke baad bhi kaafi der tak amplify karte rahe jisse dekh OMMIN WHIZZDER kaafi khush hue aur...


OMMIN-kal ke exam ke baare me toh aap sabko pata chal hi gaya hoga...

SAVENTS-yes WHIZZDER...

OMMIN-ummid karta hun ki aap sab usme apna best denge...aaj ki class yahi khatm karte hain...


ye bol OMMIN WHIZZDER bhi class se nikal gaye aur unke baad BLOOD AMPLIFICATION ki class shuru hui jisme bhi saare SAVENTS ne AURAVA VIBHUTIEN spell ko bohot ache se prayog me laate hue apne apne blood se milne waale AURA ko halka sa aur strong kiya aur is prakar aaj ki third class bhi samapt ho gayi...

aur ab baari thi SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki class ki..wo class jisme kisi bhi SAVENT ko abhi tak ek percent ka bhi success haasil nahi hua tha....


SOUL AMPLIFICATION CLASS...


VOILET-mujhe pata hai ki aap sabko is class me 1 mahine ho chuke hain...aap sabhi ne is ek mahine me bohot koshish ki hai apne apne task ko pura karne ki par abhi tak aap sab kaamiyab nahi hue hain...

aur is wajah se aap sabka motivation level bhi thoda down hai...but SAVENTS,jo aapke saath ho raha hai,ye aap se pehle ke sabhi SAVENTS ke saath hi chuka hai...

ATTACH MODE ko trigger karna bohot hi mushkil kaam hota hai... bohot saara waqt aur focus lagta hai isse 1 percent bhi activate karne ke liye...

fishing toh jaante hi honge aap sab...jaise fishing karte waqt ye baat nirdharit nahi hoti ki itna waqt lagega ek machli bhi pakadne me thik waisi hi SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki class bhi hai..

aap bas pure dhairya,focus aur determination ke saath lage rahiye,kaamiyabi zaroor milegi but kyunki kal aap sabka aapke first three AMPLIFICATION ka exam hai
isiliye aaj aap sabko is class se chutti milti hai... apne destinations me jaaiye aur rest kijiye...

kal aapko apni puri energy ki zaroorat padegi.....


MAHI-but WHIZZ,kamsekam ek baar toh try kar lete hain...


MAHI ki baat sun VIOLET muskura uthi.unhe bhi MAHI ke focus aur baakiyon se zyada sikhne ki chah ke baare me pata tha...


VIOLET- MAHI...tumhara lagan,sikhne ke prati tumhari lalak atulniya hai par kabhi kabhi ek break lena bhi zaroori hota hai...

aur khaas kar abhi jab tumhari urja ka tumhare bheetar rehna zyada zaroori hai...isiliye apne ABODE jaaiye aur apne mastishk ko purn viraam dijiye taaki kal wo aur ache se chal sake...

kal milte hain...


ye bol VIOLET WHIZZ class se nikal gaye... WHIZZ ke jaane ke baad sabhi SAVENTS bhi ek ek kar nikalne lage...

MABEL, ALFREEN aur MAHI bhi apne apne ABODES ki taraf chal pade...

kal in sabki pehli pariksha thi air isiliye ye apne apne rate SPELLS ke baare me disscuss karte hue jaa rahe the jiski wajah se ye sabse piche ho chuke the...

discuss karte karte jaate hue achanak MAHI ki nazar ek jagah padi par fir wo ALFREEN aur MABEL ke saath aage badh gayi....

kuch der chalne ke baad MABEL ka ABODE aa chuka tha jiske baad in dono ko bye bol wo apne ABODE ke andar chali gayi..

uske jaane ke baad ALFREEN ne bhi apne ghar jaane ke liye apne kadam aage badhaye par tabhi MAHI ne uska haath pakda aur...


MAHI-ghar nahi..hume pehle kahin aur chalna hai...

ALFREEN-kahin aur???kahan!!!

MAHI-chal...pata chal jaayega...


ye bol MAHI ALFREEN ke saath kuch der pehle jahan uski nazar padi thi,us taraf chal padi...



PLACE-CROSSWAY TO CHOSEN'S



WO,WO TOH RAAZ HAI NAA...!!!!


ye sawal nikla tha ALFREEN ke mooh se jisse sun...


MAHI-haan wahi hai..aur hum ussike paas jaa rahe hain...

ALFREEN-what!!!!but kyun????

MAHI-yaar,humne jo us din kiya tha,uske liye aunty aur uncle se sorry kaha tha but actual sorry toh hume RAAZ se hi maangi chahiye thi...

par itne dino me aisa koi mouka hi nahi aaya jab hum usse maafi maang saken...

but ye time perfect hai,chal jaakar usse apologize kar lete hain...

ALFREEN-arre chhod naa yaar...wo apne raaste aur hum apne fir kyun zabardasti usse chhedna...!!!

MAHI-AL,chedd hum usse already chuke hain aur ussi galti ki wajah se uncle aunty humse naaraz hue the..

aur jab galti ki hai toh maafi maangne me burayi hi kya hai....????

ALFREEN-burayi maafi maangne me nahi hai,balki uske baad jo hoga usme hai..

tu jaanti toh hai usse, ulti khoodi hai uski..jitni bhi sahi baat bolo,utna ulta matlab nikalta hai wo...

pata chala hum maafi maangne gaye aur usne fir kuch naya suna diya....

MAHI-arre aisa kuch nahi hoga...wo tabhi galat bolta hai jab koi usse kuch apne hisaab se karne ko kehta hai....

hum toh bas usse sorry bolne waale hain....sorry bolkar hum apne ABODE ke liye nikal jaayenge...

ALFREEN- pata nahi yaar but mera man nahi hai uski shakal dekhne ka....

MAHI-tu naa bas chup chaap chal......


ye bol MAHI ALFREEN ka haath pakad meri taraf badhne lagi wahin maine bhi un dono ko meri taraf aate dekh liya tha but fir maine apni nazaren ghuma li aur yunhi baitha raha.....


MAHI-hi RAAZ.....

MAI-kuch kaam tha!!!!


mere paas aate hi MAHI ke wish ke jawab me maine sidhe sawal kiya jisse sun MAHI halki si hadbada gayi wahin ALFREEN ne ek baar ghoor kar dekha mujhe...


MAHI-haan,wo hum tumse hamare us din ke behaviour aur harkat ke liye sorry bolna chahte hain...


MAHI ki baat sun mai bas uski taraf dekhta raha jispar...


MAHI-we are really sorry RAAZ..hume tumhare saath waisa nahi karma chahiye tha...


apni baat bol MAHI ne ALFREEN ka haath dabaya jispar....


ALFREEN-sorry....

MAI-sorry.....paanch alphabets ka ye shabd kya us wajah ko mita sakta hai jiski wajah se is shabd ka istemal karna pad raha hai...???


meri tark ko MAHI aur ALFREEN dono hi ache se samajh chuke the...

wo jaan gaye the ki mai us dard ki baat kar raha hun jo mujhe un dono ke current balls ke lagne se hua tha....


MAHI- RAAZ,hum apna past to nahi badal sakte but atleast we can make our present and future better right...!!!

MAI-DEEDS OF OUR PAST AUR THE CREATOR OF OUR FUTURE....


beete kal me kiye gaye hamare karm hi hamare bhavishya ka nirman karte hain...

ALFREEN-kehna kya chahte ho..!!!!jaisa humne tumhare saath kiya tha,waisa hi kuch tum bhi hamare saath karoge...

par kaise????

humne jo kiya aur jis tarah se kiya uske liye jis hunar ki zaroorat hoti hai,wo hai kya tumme????

tumne toh khud hi khudko INSTITUTION se nikal liya hai...and on the contrary we are the best SAVENTS of PHASE 1....

agar galti se bhi tumne humse ulajhne ki koshish ki toh jo pain tumne us din feel kiya tha,usse 10 times zyada feel karoge...


MAHI ALFREEN ko shaant karne ki koshish karti rahi par ALFREEN ne apni bhadas nikal hi di....


MAI-kamal hai...SORRY ka definition aisa bhi hi sakta hai,ye nahi pata tha mujhe....

baat maafi ki,pashchataap ki par bhaavna krodh ki....!!!

kya kaha tha tumne...!!!!!best SAVENTS!!!!

GHUSSA,NAFRAT ya fir aur koi bhi bhaavna ho, genuine honi chahiye.....itna sa hunar nahi hai tumne aur tum best SAVENT ho...????


meri baat sun ALFREEN ko kuch kehte nahi bana but fir bhi wo mujhe ghur ghur kar dekhti rahi wahin MAHI bina kuch kahe, ALFREEN ka haath pakda aur apne ABODE ki taraf nikalne lagi...


MAI-ek baat reh gayi hai....???wo bhi sunte jaao...????


meri awaaz sun dono ke kadam rook gaye aur agle hi pal dono meri taraf palat gaye...


MAI-jo dard mujhe us din tum tum dono ne diya aur agar aage bhi dene ka man kare toh wo dard sharirik hoga aur u
har sharirik dard ki ek samay seema hoti hai...

wo seema khatm,dard khatm par jis din maine tumhe dard diya,toh wo dard tumhe apne sharir ke pare bhi mehsoos hoga aur us dard ki koi samay seema nahi hogi....

aur isiliye hi maine us din bhi kaha tha aur aaj fir kehta hun ki.....

dobara waisa kuch karne ka dil kare,toh bada karna...

itna bada ki meri aankhen kuch aisi band hon ki dobara kabhi naa khulen kyunki agar aisa nahi hua toh....



aakhen band hon,
ya khuli,

sirf MAI DIKHUNGA.....

ek takdir tumhari
KHUDA ne likhi hai,

dusri MAI LIKHUNGA.....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V.J....
 

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Bhai itna chotu sa update aur upar se adha line to purana wala hi tha pls ek aur update de do. Bakiyo ka to pata nahi but acchuta aur slunder hi story k asli heroes h arre nahi padhte to kya comedian ki apni value hoti hai aur naam k bich l....d le k ghumne wala baat aj hi pata laga isse phle kabhi dhyan nahi gya tha. Alfreen kuch jyada hi us rahi h isko v sabak ki jarurat h mai av aisa kuch nahi keh Raha but isko ek tagda ghav milna hi chahiye jaise 1st part m Avantika and family ko mila tha.
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