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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Kill_monger

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HEyyyyyy VJ bhaiiiiiiiiiiiii First of all Congrats for Part 2 ...actually yeh mera first comment h is story pe even mai is story ko apke is forum pe likhne se pehle se follow kr rhaa hu like from 5th or 6th update se Yhaa pe toh aapne i think 50-60% complete krne ke baad start kiya tha..khair leave it..
i wanna write a review bigger than your updates but fir readers meko gaaliya denge ki unhe lgaa update aagya isliye chote me niptata deta hu..PArt 1 ki baat kru toh It was a life chaging story for me...u don't beleive but mera jo positive attitude 40% tha use 90% tak increase krne me sbse bdaa kaam apki story ne kiya thaa ...we are blessed to have a writer like you..
Part 1 ke liye mai kitna bhi likh lu words kam rhenge humesha isliye Part 2 ka review deta..

SO, one more masterpiece ...iska Plot thoda boht smjhne ki kosish ki thi mene like future me kya ho skta h use review ke sath hi likh dunga..

1st update or saturaday wle update me likhi baatein poori tarah common h...
jesa aapne likha h URJA KA EK BDAA BHAAG JUNGLE KI DUSRI DISHA ME OR EK RAAZ KE PAAS THI OR JAB WO URJAA RAAJ ME SAMAYI TAB RAAZ KA COLOUR JO 'WHITE' THA WOH 'SAWLA' pehle toh mene ispe dhyaan nhi diya tha but last update ki yeh line ne mujhe is baat ki yaad dila di
mera bhi toh aarambh
anth ke BAAD HOGA....

but the fact is Raaz ke aarambh hone me abhi 2 saal ka waqt hai ...
or apke first update ki yeh line
MERE SPARSH SE SAB SAMAJH JAYEGA,
YAAD RAKH......
MERA WAJOOD HAR WAQT TUJHME HAI...... shayad us jaanwar ki hai jisne raaz ki help ki thi or fir Choosens aate waqt bhi raaz se mila tha..


or wo do log jinhone Raaz ko maara tha first update me voh yhi dono h jinhone Acchuta or Slunder ke maa-baap pe woh spell use kiya tha..

Anyway boht kuch h abhi likhne ko next update ke sath likhta rhunga...

Waiting for next update
 

vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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HEyyyyyy VJ bhaiiiiiiiiiiiii First of all Congrats for Part 2 ...actually yeh mera first comment h is story pe even mai is story ko apke is forum pe likhne se pehle se follow kr rhaa hu like from 5th or 6th update se Yhaa pe toh aapne i think 50-60% complete krne ke baad start kiya tha..khair leave it..
i wanna write a review bigger than your updates but fir readers meko gaaliya denge ki unhe lgaa update aagya isliye chote me niptata deta hu..PArt 1 ki baat kru toh It was a life chaging story for me...u don't beleive but mera jo positive attitude 40% tha use 90% tak increase krne me sbse bdaa kaam apki story ne kiya thaa ...we are blessed to have a writer like you..
Part 1 ke liye mai kitna bhi likh lu words kam rhenge humesha isliye Part 2 ka review deta..

SO, one more masterpiece ...iska Plot thoda boht smjhne ki kosish ki thi mene like future me kya ho skta h use review ke sath hi likh dunga..

1st update or saturaday wle update me likhi baatein poori tarah common h...
jesa aapne likha h URJA KA EK BDAA BHAAG JUNGLE KI DUSRI DISHA ME OR EK RAAZ KE PAAS THI OR JAB WO URJAA RAAJ ME SAMAYI TAB RAAZ KA COLOUR JO 'WHITE' THA WOH 'SAWLA' pehle toh mene ispe dhyaan nhi diya tha but last update ki yeh line ne mujhe is baat ki yaad dila di
mera bhi toh aarambh
anth ke BAAD HOGA....

but the fact is Raaz ke aarambh hone me abhi 2 saal ka waqt hai ...
or apke first update ki yeh line
MERE SPARSH SE SAB SAMAJH JAYEGA,
YAAD RAKH......
MERA WAJOOD HAR WAQT TUJHME HAI...... shayad us jaanwar ki hai jisne raaz ki help ki thi or fir Choosens aate waqt bhi raaz se mila tha..


or wo do log jinhone Raaz ko maara tha first update me voh yhi dono h jinhone Acchuta or Slunder ke maa-baap pe woh spell use kiya tha..

Anyway boht kuch h abhi likhne ko next update ke sath likhta rhunga...

Waiting for next update
bohot hi umda review hai brother....kaafi saari baatein sahi hain aur kuch chizen misplaced hain but wo toh hoga hi as bohot kuch fasa hua hai filhal story me...

jaankar behad khushi hui mujhe ki aap mere sabse purane readers me se ek hain...

aur shayad isse bada compliment mujhe kam hi mila hoga jab kisine kaha hi ki meri likhi baaton se uska ATTITUDE nikhra ho....

kuch din pehle mera birthday tha par best gift aapke is baat ke through aaj mujhe mila hai...

and for that,thank you my friend......

ab aap comment karen ya naa karen but har update likhte waqt aapki ye positive ATTITUDE waali baat yaad rakhunga mai....
 
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