Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ALFREEN AUR MABEL,TEENO HI APNE PEHLE TARGET KO PURA KAR KHUDKO MAGIC KARNE KE YOGYA BANA LETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MOKALSAR SHAILA AUR AKSHAANT KO BATATE HAIN KI BRAIN HI KI TARAH RAAZ KE PAAS BLOOD BHI NAHI HAI.


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-22




PLANET-ELYSIAN



PLACE- MAHI'S ABODE




KYA KAR RAHI HAI HAMARI BETI??????


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi jo FLORIN aur ALFREEN ke saath shaam ke waqt MAHI ke abode pahunchi thi....

ALFREEN toh MAHI ke ghar aate hi rehti thi but aaj MARIA aur FLORIN ko apne ghar aata dekh MAHI kaafi khush ho gayi.....


MAHI-arre uncle,aunty,aaj aap dono yahan!!!!

MARIA-kyun,hum yahan nahi aa sakte kya???

MAHI-arre aunty..is ghar me mujhse zyada aap logon ka hak hai...

woh toh maine aap dono ko yahan expect nahi kiya tha,isiliye puch liya.....

FLORIN-expect...matlab apna maanti ho hume...kyunki expectations toh apno se hi rakhi jaati hai....


FLORIN ki baat sun MAHI bas muskura uthi....


MARIA-hum toh aaj bohot proud feel kar rahe hain... aakhir hamari dono betiyan wo pehli do SAVENTS bani jinhone apne dimag ke MAGIC barrier ko toda diya.....


ye bol MARIA ne MAHI ke maathe ko chum liya...

MARIA ne jo kaha hai,wo completely genuine tha aur is baat ko MAHI ke dil ne jaan liya tha...

zindagi bhar akeli rehne waali MAHI ke liye ye sab bilkul naya tha...

wo toh bachpan se hi har kaam me perfect rahi hai..har chiz me usne excel kiya hai but uski success ko uske talent ko dil se celebrate karne waala, uski khushi me khush rehna waala usse pehle kabhi nahi mila tha...

shayad yahi wo wajah thi ki itne saalon me pehli baar MAHI ko mom dad ke importance ka matlab samajh aaya tha...

aur filhal usse is naye safar me mili uski pehli jeet ki khushi FLORIN aur MARIA me dikh rahi thi....


FLORIN-first toh dono aaye hain but kya faayda???yahan toh hum kahin celebrate karne bhi nahi jaa sakte....

apne earth me hote,toh mai pure CLUJ NAPOCA ko dulhan ki tarah saja deta...

pura sheher ne aaj apne history ki sabse badi party dekhi hoti....


FLORIN ke baat karte waqt unki awaaz me,and most importantly unke ATTITUDE me jo sacchayi thi,wo MAHI saaf mehsoos kar rahi thi...


MAHI-aapne itna socha,mere liye toh yahi kisi party se kam nahi hai uncle....


MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN ek tak usse dekhne lage...unki aankhon me ek udasi thi jo MAHI ki nazaron se chhup nahi paayi aur isiliye....


MAHI-kya baat hai uncle??did i said something wrong....???

FLORIN-ye tum hi tay karo...taali ke bajne ke liye dono haathon ke milne ki zaroorat hoti hai...ye kaam ek haath se toh ho nahi sakta...

maine jo kaha,wo isiliye kaha kyunki janm se naa sahi par dil se maine infact humne tumhe apni beti maana hai....

par jo tumne kaha,kya ek beti apne pita se aisa kehti....!!!!

jaanti ho rishte me sabse zyada zaroori shabd kya hota hai???

HAKH...kisi bhi chiz par hakh rakhna....bhale hi wo chiz materialistic ho,ya fir emotions se bhari ho...

hakh hi wo jasba hai ho bharose aur apnepan,dono hi ehsaason ko darshata hai...

tumhari baaton me mere liye respect thi,pyar bhi tha par sabse important,HAKH nahi tha....


FLORIN ki baat sun aur us baat ki gehrayi ko samajh MAHI turant unke gale lag gayi....

MARIA ne bhi piche se MAHI ke sir par apni mamta ka haath fera....

wahin ALFREEN jo ab bhi chupchaap hi khadi thi,muskurate hue is behtarin lamhe ko dekh bhi rahi thi aur jee bhi rahi thi...

aaj abhi MAHI ki palken bheegi zaroor thi par ye wo paani tha jiska nikalna behad zaroori tha...

reason....


MAHI ne ab tak jo zindagi jee thi,wo kisi robot ke jaisi thi...saare upgradation hote chale aaye the ab tak uski zindagi me,but feelings,apnapan pyar...

in shabdon aur unke mayne se bilkul anjaan thi MAHI....

aur ab jis safar par wo nikal chuki thi,wahan in shabdon ki samajh hona atti aawashyak tha...

kyunki jis level ka talent MAHI ke andar tha,us talent ko contain karne ke liye feelings ka,apnepan ka,pyar ka hona bohot zaroori tha..

kyunki yahi wo chizen hain jo acchayi ko burayi se alag karte hain....

agar MAHI ke andar ye jasbaat apna ghar nahi banate,toh dharm aur adharm ek ho sakte the aur aisa hona sirf vidhwansh laata hai aur kuch nahi....

aaj tak MAHI ke dimag ne kaam kiya tha...par aaj FLORIN ke seene se lag pehli baar MAHI ka dil kaam kar raha tha...

wo dil jiske bina dimag ki koi haisiyat nahi... jiske bina roshni aur andhere me koi antar nahi...

wo dil jisse sahi tarah dhadakne ka hunar THE CHOSENS jaisa mahan institute bhi nahi sikha sakta tha....

FLORIN toh yahan bas MAHI ko ye ehsaas dilane aaye the ki wo is anant bramhaand me akeli nahi hai....

wo ye jatane aaye the ki ALFREEN aur MAHI unke liye ek hi sikke ke wo do pehlu hain jinke bina us sikke ka koi mol nahi...

par wo ye nahi jaante the ki jaane anjane me unhone MAHI naam ki is human robot ko wo sikha diya hai jo uske super talented WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS nahi sikha paaye aur naa kabhi sikha paayenge...

PYAR....SAMARPAN.....TYAG....

wo teen feelings jinki wajah se janm hota hai ek ANGEL ka

aur jiski absence paida karti hai ek DEVIL ko....

wo teen shabd jinhe agar saath laaya jaaye toh judkar banta hai ek naya shabd....

ATTITUDE......



PLACE-HOSTEL




YAAR RAAZ,EK BAAT BATA...TU HAMESHA BED PAR YUN SIR KO TIKA KAR BAITHA AANKHEN BAND KAR KYA SOCHTA REHTA HAI????


yahan bhi shaam ka hi waqt hai...mai apne bed par aankh band kar baitha tha ki tabhi mere kaano me ye awaaz padi jo ki nikli thi hamare ACCHUTA bhaisahab ke mooh se jo SLUNDER ke saath mere room me padhare the....


MAI-sochta nahi hun... pray karta hun....

ACCHUTA-prayer aur tu!!!!tere haav bhaav dekhkar toh lagta hi nahi ki tu GOD par believe bhi karta hoga...

waise agar koi bohot bada secret nahi hai toh tu apna prayer humse share kar sakta hai...

MAI-mai yahi pray karta hun ki tum dono mere room me kabhi naa aao....


meri baat par ACHHUTA toh has diya par SLUNDER ka chehre par meri baat sun naarazgi dikhne lagi thi...


ACCHUTA-arre bhai,koi aisi dua maang jo kubool ho...teri ye wish toh jeeteji kubool hone se rahi...


ye bol ACHHUTA ki nazar SLUNDER ke taraf gayi jisse dekh wo samajh gaya ki usse meri baat pasand nahi aayi hai....


ACHHUTA-arre yaar,tu har choti choti baat par mooh kyun phula leta hai....????

saale,bas hardware hi ladke ka hai..lagta hai tera poora software loundiyon waala bana hai....

SLUNDER-bura lagne waali baat par bura toh lagega hi.....par afsos,tune toh ye hunar sikha hi nahi...

ACCHUTA-bhai hunar wahi sikhna chahiye jisse faayda ho...jis hunar se khud hi kaa khun jale,aisi kaabiliyat ko khudse jitna door rakho,utna acha hai....

par afsos tune ye hunar sikha hi nahi.....


aakhri line ACHHUTA ne SLUNDER ki copy karte hue kahi jisse sun pehli baar SLUNDER bhi muskura utha....


ACCHUTA-oye teri.....ye kya keher dhaa raha hai bhai tu!!!!tujhe hasna bhi aata hai....gazab!!!!

par bhai,ek baat kahun,tu naa serious hi thik hai....tere hasne se tere daanth aur bhayanak dikhte hain....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ne usse ek baar ghur kar dekha,but fir muskura diya...

ACHHUTA fir usse kuch kehme waala tha ki....


MAI-ye saari baatein is room se baahar jaakar bhi kar sakte ho...filhal,yahan kyun aaye ho,ye batao????


meri baat sun ek lambi saans chhod.....


SLUNDER-tujhe apne baare me kuch batana hai....

MAI-kyun????

SLUNDER-jo log apni tanhaiyon se nikal dusron ki khamoshi me dakhal dete hain,aksar shor macha uththe hain unke RAAZ....(update 17..last line)

us din tumhare kahe is baat ka,is parable ka matlab jaanta hun mai RAAZ....

tere naam ki hi tarah hamare bhi kuch RAAZ hain...aise RAAZ jo koi nahi jaanta... siwaye SOVEREIGN'S ke....

hume ye toh nahi pata ki tujhe humare RAAZ ho sakte hain,iska shak kaise hua,par us din teri baat ya ye kahun ki tere bole parable ka yahi matlab tha aur isiliye...

hum tujhe apne wo RAAZ batana chahte hain...

MAI-sawal ab bhi wahi hai..kyun????

SLUNDER-bhai iska exact reason toh hum bhi nahi jaante....par pata nahi kyun,tu apna sa lagta hai...aisa lagta hai tujhse hum kuch bhi share kar sakte hain...bina is dar ke ki kahin tu hamari baat kisi ko bata naa de???

MAI-bina pause liye bol....


ek baar meri taraf dekh...


SLUNDER-yahan is institution me hostlers tab bante hain jab us SAVENT ke mom dad nahi hote...

but mere infact mere aur ACCHUTA dono ke hi mom dad zinda hain...

but wo jis condition me hain,us condition ko maut hi maana jaanta hai....

mai CARAPACE planet se hun....aur ACCHUTA ARROW planet se...

hum dono ke hi grah ek hi solar system ke part hain aur saath hi ek dusre ke rivals bhi...

aur rahi baat hum dono ki toh hum dono ka hi background bohot strong hai...

mai apne planet ka prince hun wahin ACCHUTA ARROW planet ka uttaradhikari hai...

hamare solar system me kul 22 planets hain jinme se 12 me human existence hai...

aur in 12 planets me hum dono ke planets sabse aage hain...isiliye trade treaty ke tahat hum dono planets baaki ke 10 planets ko chalate hain....

hum dono ke hi planets technology ke maamle par shikher par hain..wahin baaki ke 10 planets har equipment ke liye,hathiyar ke liye,har department ke upgradation ke liye hum dono planets par dependent hain....

aur yahi wajah hai ki hum dono ke Planets rivals hain....

dono hi planets ke brilliant minds ki yahi koshish rehti hai ki dusre planet se kisi tarah aage nikle...

trade par kisi tarah sirf khud ka hi control ho....but dono hi planets par hamesha se equal talent hi raha hai...

par mere paida hone aur bade hone ke saath saath meri kaabiliyat sabko dikhne lagi thi...

jo mere planet ke 1000 genius mature log milkar bhi nahi kar sakte the,wo bohot choti umar me mai aasani se kar paa raha tha...

jisse mere mom dad aur baaki sabko laga ki ab hum ARROW planet se aage nikal jaayenge but fir hume pata chala ki meri hi tarah ARROW planet me bhi ek genius ne janm liya hai..

jo ki meri hi umar ka hai aur usme meri hi tarah capabilities hai....aur issi wajah se hum dono ke planets wapas equal level par aa gaye....

but fir yahan aane se 1 week pehle mere aur mere mom dad ke saamne hawa me ek roshni utpann hui jisme se ek awaaz nikli...

aur us awaaz ne hi mujhe apne baare me aur yahan ke baare me bataya jisse sun mujhse zyada mere mom dad khush ho gaye...

hum me se kisi ko kuch khaas idea toh nahi tha ki mera ye naya safar kaisa hoga but mom dad ne itna toh andaza laga hi liya tha ki agar mai apne is naye safar me kaamiyab hua toh mai itna kabil ban jaauga ki apne Planet ko ARROW PLANET se aage le jaaunga....

us din hamare pure Planet me jashn manaya gaya.....raat ko sone jaane ke waqt bhi mere mom dad ke chehre khile hue the but unke chehre ki wo muskaan shayad unki aakhri muskaan thi...

raat ke karib 2 baje jab mai soya hua tha tab achanak mujhe bechaini si hui jiski wajah se mai jaag gaya....

aur jaagte hi mere kadam mere mom dad ke room ki taraf badh chale...

par jab mai unke room ke saamne pahuncha toh mujhe ajeeb laga kyunki unka room khula hua tha....

jigyasa vash me jab andar gaya toh andar ka nazara dekh mujhe jhakta laga...

reason.....

andar mom dad ke bed ke theek side me ek aadmi khada tha jiske haath se kaali rays nikal mere mom dad ke sir me sama rahi thi...

ye sab dekh maine chillakar usse awaaz di..mere awaaz sun wo piche palta aur muskurate hue mujhse bas itna kaha ki mai fikr naa karun...

wo bas mere mom dad ko ek gehri neend me sula raha hai... aaj ke baad mere mom dad ko kabhi koi taklif nahi hogi....

kyunki ab mere mom dad kabhi bhi nahi uth paayenge...usne mujhse kaha ki mai darun naa,mere mom dad jeevit hain par jeeven jaisi koi baat ab unme kabhi nahi dikhegi...

uski baat sun mai uski aur tezi se badha aur uske paas pahunch jaise hi maine usse maarne ki koshish ki,wo gayab ho gaya...

par wo ab bhi wahin hi tha kyunki agle hi pal mujhe uski awaaz firse sunayi di....

jisme usne khud ka naam bataya aur saath hi kaha ki mai apne mata pitah ko thik karne ki koshish naa karun kyunki mera har prayas vyarth jaayega...

iske baad uski awaaz nahi aayi...mai turant apne mom dad ki taraf palta aur jaise hi maine un dono ke sir ko chhua,toh mujhe jhatka laga...

reason.. dono ke hi sharir thande the jaise ki kisi murde ke hote hain...

mujhe laga ki wo dono mar gaye jiski wajah se mai rote hue pehle apni mom ke seene se jaa laga par fir agle hi pal mujhe fir ek jhatka laga....

reason....

mom ka heart beat kar raha tha... aakhon me ascharya liye maine dad ke pulse ko check kiya...

unka bhi pulse chaalu tha..iska matlab us anjaan shatru ne sach kaha tha...

mere mom dad zinda the but jeeven jaisa ab unme kuch nahi bacha tha...

agle din ye baat pure planet me fail gayi jisse hamara pura planet shok grast ho gaya...

hamare grah ke uchh koti ke doctors ne mere mom dad ki condition ke baare me samajhne aur unhe theek karne me apni puri jaan lagadi par jaisa us shatru ne kaha tha,koi result nahi nikla...sabhi behad nirash ho gaye the.

par is beech shaam hote hote mujhe ek nayi surprising baat pata chali...mujhe pata chala ki jo kal yahan mere mom dad ke saath hua tha,wahi same chiz ARROW grah me bhi wahan ke king aur queen ke saath hui thi...

mere kuch din yunhi shok manate hi guzar gaye...

par fir ek din AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN mere saamne prakat hue..unhone mujhe apni pehchaan batayi aur saath hi mere mom dad ko dekhne ki iccha zaahir ki...

unke baare me jaankar mujhe bhi ek aasha bandhi thi...mai unhe mom dad ke kaksh me le gaya jahan wo ussi jeeven maran ke beech ki haalat me lete hue the...

AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN ne un dono ke sir par haath rakh koi spell bola jiske kuch der baad unke maathe par pareshaani ke bal ubhar aaye...

unhone mujhe bataya ki mere mom dad ke upar ek aisa dark energy se bhara SPELL bola gaya hai jiski wajah se mere mom dad ke dimag ka har conscious aur subconscious nerve bimar padh gaya hai jiski wajah se mere mom dad PERSITANT VEGITATIVE STATE me chale gaye hain....

is state me insaan gehre unconscious me chala jaata hai...isme higher brain ka funtion kaam karna completely band ho jaata hai...

(ye condtion,ye state,scientifically real hai doston..bas dark energy waali baat imaginary hai...)


NIRWAHALIKA.....yahi naam bataya tha SOVEREIGN ne us spell ka jisse mere mom dad ki wo haalat hui thi....

unhone bola ki unconsciousness me bhejne ke liye bas yahi ek aisa spell hai jisse yunhi kaata nahi jaa sakta...

is state se kisiko baahar sirf CHETANA BUTI se hi laaya jaa sakta hai jo sirf ek hi jagah paayi jaati hai aur wo jagah ELYSIAN matlab yahan hain..

but unfortunately wo jagah pratibandhit hai...wahan jaaya nahi jaa sakta...

AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN ki baat sun mai ek baar firse nirash ho gaya...

unhone mujhse pucha ki kya mai ab ELYSIAN jaana chahta hun...

ispar maine socha ki wahan CARAPACE me rehkar bhi koi faayda nahi kyunki mom dad toh waise bhi thik hone waale nahi isiliye mai yahan aa gaya....

aur waise bhi mom dad ko thik karne ke liye jo chiz chahiye thi,wo bhi yahin thi...

haan, SOVEREIGN ne us jagah ko pratibandhit bataya tha par mai bina koshish kiye haar nahi maan sakta tha....

aur fir mai yahan aa gaya...mere saath saath ACCHUTA bhi pahuncha tha....

hamare solar system me kisi ek planet me har saal trade ke liye sandhi sammelan hota hai.. pichle saal ke sammelan me maine ACCHUTA ko dekha tha isiliye isse turant pehchaan gaya tha...

waise toh ye mere rival Planet ka prince hai but kyunki ye bhi ussi condition se guzar raha tha jisme mai tha isiliye mujhe isse dekh zara bhi shatru waali feeling nahi aayi....

balki ek ajeeb si sanvenda ka bhaav mere hriday me iske liye jaaga tha.....

kyunki hum dono ke hi maata pita jis condition me the,us condition ko jeevit aur mrit dono hi condition me gina jaa sakta hai isiliye SOVEREIGN'S ne hum dono se kaha ki hamara yahan ka stay hamari marzi ke hisaab se hoga...

hum ABODE me bhi reh sakte hain aur HOSTEL me bhi...

aisho aaram zindagi bhar kiya hi tha humne.ab uski aur chaah bachi hi nahi thi aur isiliye hum dono ne hostel chuna....

hostel aakar ACCHUTA ne mujhe apne side ki kahani sunayi thi...


ACHHUTA-jo slunder ke saath hua tha,wahi mere saath bhi hua tha...

bas alag tha wo shaksh jisne mere mom dad ko ussi marne waali condition me pahunchaya tha....

mere mom dad ko us condition me pahunchane waale ka naam tha DORIAN...

SLUNDER-aur jisne mere mom dad ko jeete ji maar diya tha,uska naam tha GASTON.....

ACCHUTA-iske planet me AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN gaye the wahin mere Planet me SHAILA SOVEREIGN aayi thi...

SLUNDER-aur wo jagah jahan is waqt hamare mom dad ka ilaj chuppa hai,us jagah ka naam hai THE FORBIDDEN FOREST...

joki yahi ELYSIAN Planet me hi kahin hai... yahan pahunchne ke agle hi din mai apne INSTITUTION ke library me gaya tha jahan par mujhe FORBIDDEN FOREST ki book mili thi jisse maine apne paas rakh li aur har din usme uske baare me padhta rehta hun taaki ek din wahan jaakar kisi bhi tarah hum dono ke parents ke liye wo CHETNA BUTI nikal paaun....


SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA dono hi apni apni kahani khudme khoye hue,un saare palon ko jo unke saath ghati thi,usse firse jeete hue bata rahe the...

unka dhyan ab tak mujhpar nahi gaya tha but ab jab wo apni dastan bata chuke the,toh unki nazar mujhpar gayi aur aisa hote hi wo dono chownk gaye....

reason...


meri ankh band aur mooh khula hua tha...matlab mai so chuka tha...

mujhe aisa dekh aaj pehli baar SLUNDER ko nahi balki ACCHUTA ko ghussa aaya tha...


ACCHUTA-ye saala kaisa banda hai yaar..isme koi feelings hai bhi yaa nahi....

SLUNDER-chhod naa yaar...ek ka dard dusre ke liye tamasha hi hota hai.... chal,chalte hain...


ye bol SLUNDER ACHHUTA ke saath mere room se nikal gaya aur unke jaate hi.....


meri aankhen khul gayi....




tumhari khwahishon ke saath
bohot kuch AZAAD HOGA....

mera bhi toh aarambh
anth ke BAAD HOGA....









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V.J....
 
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ALFREEN AUR MABEL,TEENO HI APNE PEHLE TARGET KO PURA KAR KHUDKO MAGIC KARNE KE YOGYA BANA LETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MOKALSAR SHAILA AUR AKSHAANT KO BATATE HAIN KI BRAIN HI KI TARAH RAAZ KE PAAS BLOOD BHI NAHI HAI.


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-22




PLANET-ELYSIAN



PLACE- MAHI'S ABODE




KYA KAR RAHI HAI HAMARI BETI??????


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi jo FLORIN aur ALFREEN ke saath shaam ke waqt MAHI ke abode pahunchi thi....

ALFREEN toh MAHI ke ghar aate hi rehti thi but aaj MARIA aur FLORIN ko apne ghar aata dekh MAHI kaafi khush ho gayi.....


MAHI-arre uncle,aunty,aaj aap dono yahan!!!!

MARIA-kyun,hum yahan nahi aa sakte kya???

MAHI-arre aunty..is ghar me mujhse zyada aap logon ka hak hai...

woh toh maine aap dono ko yahan expect nahi kiya tha,isiliye puch liya.....

FLORIN-expect...matlab apna maanti ho hume...kyunki expectations toh apno se hi rakhi jaati hai....


FLORIN ki baat sun MAHI bas muskura uthi....


MARIA-hum toh aaj bohot proud feel kar rahe hain... aakhir hamari dono betiyan wo pehli do SAVENTS bani jinhone apne dimag ke MAGIC barrier ko toda diya.....


ye bol MARIA ne MAHI ke maathe ko chum liya...

MARIA ne jo kaha hai,wo completely genuine tha aur is baat ko MAHI ke dil ne jaan liya tha...

zindagi bhar akeli rehne waali MAHI ke liye ye sab bilkul naya tha...

wo toh bachpan se hi har kaam me perfect rahi hai..har chiz me usne excel kiya hai but uski success ko uske talent ko dil se celebrate karne waala, uski khushi me khush rehna waala usse pehle kabhi nahi mila tha...

shayad yahi wo wajah thi ki itne saalon me pehli baar MAHI ko mom dad ke importance ka matlab samajh aaya tha...

aur filhal usse is naye safar me mili uski pehli jeet ki khushi FLORIN aur MARIA me dikh rahi thi....


FLORIN-first toh dono aaye hain but kya faayda???yahan toh hum kahin celebrate karne bhi nahi jaa sakte....

apne earth me hote,toh mai pure CLUJ NAPOCA ko dulhan ki tarah saja deta...

pura sheher ne aaj apne history ki sabse badi party dekhi hoti....


FLORIN ke baat karte waqt unki awaaz me,and most importantly unke ATTITUDE me jo sacchayi thi,wo MAHI saaf mehsoos kar rahi thi...


MAHI-aapne itna socha,mere liye toh yahi kisi party se kam nahi hai uncle....


MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN ek tak usse dekhne lage...unki aankhon me ek udasi thi jo MAHI ki nazaron se chhup nahi paayi aur isiliye....


MAHI-kya baat hai uncle??did i said something wrong....???

FLORIN-ye tum hi tay karo...taali ke bajne ke liye dono haathon ke milne ki zaroorat hoti hai...ye kaam ek haath se toh ho nahi sakta...

maine jo kaha,wo isiliye kaha kyunki janm se naa sahi par dil se maine infact humne tumhe apni beti maana hai....

par jo tumne kaha,kya ek beti apne pita se aisa kehti....!!!!

jaanti ho rishte me sabse zyada zaroori shabd kya hota hai???

HAKH...kisi bhi chiz par hakh rakhna....bhale hi wo chiz materialistic ho,ya fir emotions se bhari ho...

hakh hi wo jasba hai ho bharose aur apnepan,dono hi ehsaason ko darshata hai...

tumhari baaton me mere liye respect thi,pyar bhi tha par sabse important,HAKH nahi tha....


FLORIN ki baat sun aur us baat ki gehrayi ko samajh MAHI turant unke gale lag gayi....

MARIA ne bhi piche se MAHI ke sir par apni mamta ka haath fera....

wahin ALFREEN jo ab bhi chupchaap hi khadi thi,muskurate hue is behtarin lamhe ko dekh bhi rahi thi aur jee bhi rahi thi...

aaj abhi MAHI ki palken bheegi zaroor thi par ye wo paani tha jiska nikalna behad zaroori tha...

reason....


MAHI ne ab tak jo zindagi jee thi,wo kisi robot ke jaisi thi...saare upgradation hote chale aaye the ab tak uski zindagi me,but feelings,apnapan pyar...

in shabdon aur unke mayne se bilkul anjaan thi MAHI....

aur ab jis safar par wo nikal chuki thi,wahan in shabdon ki samajh hona atti aawashyak tha...

kyunki jis level ka talent MAHI ke andar tha,us talent ko contain karne ke liye feelings ka,apnepan ka,pyar ka hona bohot zaroori tha..

kyunki yahi wo chizen hain jo acchayi ko burayi se alag karte hain....

agar MAHI ke andar ye jasbaat apna ghar nahi banate,toh dharm aur adharm ek ho sakte the aur aisa hona sirf vidhwansh laata hai aur kuch nahi....

aaj tak MAHI ke dimag ne kaam kiya tha...par aaj FLORIN ke seene se lag pehli baar MAHI ka dil kaam kar raha tha...

wo dil jiske bina dimag ki koi haisiyat nahi... jiske bina roshni aur andhere me koi antar nahi...

wo dil jisse sahi tarah dhadakne ka hunar THE CHOSENS jaisa mahan institute bhi nahi sikha sakta tha....

FLORIN toh yahan bas MAHI ko ye ehsaas dilane aaye the ki wo is anant bramhaand me akeli nahi hai....

wo ye jatane aaye the ki ALFREEN aur MAHI unke liye ek hi sikke ke wo do pehlu hain jinke bina us sikke ka koi mol nahi...

par wo ye nahi jaante the ki jaane anjane me unhone MAHI naam ki is human robot ko wo sikha diya hai jo uske super talented WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS nahi sikha paaye aur naa kabhi sikha paayenge...

PYAR....SAMARPAN.....TYAG....

wo teen feelings jinki wajah se janm hota hai ek ANGEL ka

aur jiski absence paida karti hai ek DEVIL ko....

wo teen shabd jinhe agar saath laaya jaaye toh judkar banta hai ek naya shabd....

ATTITUDE......



PLACE-HOSTEL




YAAR RAAZ,EK BAAT BATA...TU HAMESHA BED PAR YUN SIR KO TIKA KAR BAITHA AANKHEN BAND KAR KYA SOCHTA REHTA HAI????


yahan bhi shaam ka hi waqt hai...mai apne bed par aankh band kar baitha tha ki tabhi mere kaano me ye awaaz padi jo ki nikli thi hamare ACCHUTA bhaisahab ke mooh se jo SLUNDER ke saath mere room me padhare the....


MAI-sochta nahi hun... pray karta hun....

ACCHUTA-prayer aur tu!!!!tere haav bhaav dekhkar toh lagta hi nahi ki tu GOD par believe bhi karta hoga...

waise agar koi bohot bada secret nahi hai toh tu apna prayer humse share kar sakta hai...

MAI-mai yahi pray karta hun ki tum dono mere room me kabhi naa aao....


meri baat par ACHHUTA toh has diya par SLUNDER ka chehre par meri baat sun naarazgi dikhne lagi thi...


ACCHUTA-arre bhai,koi aisi dua maang jo kubool ho...teri ye wish toh jeeteji kubool hone se rahi...


ye bol ACHHUTA ki nazar SLUNDER ke taraf gayi jisse dekh wo samajh gaya ki usse meri baat pasand nahi aayi hai....


ACHHUTA-arre yaar,tu har choti choti baat par mooh kyun phula leta hai....????

saale,bas hardware hi ladke ka hai..lagta hai tera poora software loundiyon waala bana hai....

SLUNDER-bura lagne waali baat par bura toh lagega hi.....par afsos,tune toh ye hunar sikha hi nahi...

ACCHUTA-bhai hunar wahi sikhna chahiye jisse faayda ho...jis hunar se khud hi kaa khun jale,aisi kaabiliyat ko khudse jitna door rakho,utna acha hai....

par afsos tune ye hunar sikha hi nahi.....


aakhri line ACHHUTA ne SLUNDER ki copy karte hue kahi jisse sun pehli baar SLUNDER bhi muskura utha....


ACCHUTA-oye teri.....ye kya keher dhaa raha hai bhai tu!!!!tujhe hasna bhi aata hai....gazab!!!!

par bhai,ek baat kahun,tu naa serious hi thik hai....tere hasne se tere daanth aur bhayanak dikhte hain....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ne usse ek baar ghur kar dekha,but fir muskura diya...

ACHHUTA fir usse kuch kehme waala tha ki....


MAI-ye saari baatein is room se baahar jaakar bhi kar sakte ho...filhal,yahan kyun aaye ho,ye batao????


meri baat sun ek lambi saans chhod.....


SLUNDER-tujhe apne baare me kuch batana hai....

MAI-kyun????

SLUNDER-jo log apni tanhaiyon se nikal dusron ki khamoshi me dakhal dete hain,aksar shor macha uththe hain unke RAAZ....(update 17..last line)

us din tumhare kahe is baat ka,is parable ka matlab jaanta hun mai RAAZ....

tere naam ki hi tarah hamare bhi kuch RAAZ hain...aise RAAZ jo koi nahi jaanta... siwaye SOVEREIGN'S ke....

hume ye toh nahi pata ki tujhe humare RAAZ ho sakte hain,iska shak kaise hua,par us din teri baat ya ye kahun ki tere bole parable ka yahi matlab tha aur isiliye...

hum tujhe apne wo RAAZ batana chahte hain...

MAI-sawal ab bhi wahi hai..kyun????

SLUNDER-bhai iska exact reason toh hum bhi nahi jaante....par pata nahi kyun,tu apna sa lagta hai...aisa lagta hai tujhse hum kuch bhi share kar sakte hain...bina is dar ke ki kahin tu hamari baat kisi ko bata naa de???

MAI-bina pause liye bol....


ek baar meri taraf dekh...


SLUNDER-yahan is institution me hostlers tab bante hain jab us SAVENT ke mom dad nahi hote...

but mere infact mere aur ACCHUTA dono ke hi mom dad zinda hain...

but wo jis condition me hain,us condition ko maut hi maana jaanta hai....

mai CARAPACE planet se hun....aur ACCHUTA ARROW planet se...

hum dono ke hi grah ek hi solar system ke part hain aur saath hi ek dusre ke rivals bhi...

aur rahi baat hum dono ki toh hum dono ka hi background bohot strong hai...

mai apne planet ka prince hun wahin ACCHUTA ARROW planet ka uttaradhikari hai...

hamare solar system me kul 22 planets hain jinme se 12 me human existence hai...

aur in 12 planets me hum dono ke planets sabse aage hain...isiliye trade treaty ke tahat hum dono planets baaki ke 10 planets ko chalate hain....

hum dono ke hi planets technology ke maamle par shikher par hain..wahin baaki ke 10 planets har equipment ke liye,hathiyar ke liye,har department ke upgradation ke liye hum dono planets par dependent hain....

aur yahi wajah hai ki hum dono ke Planets rivals hain....

dono hi planets ke brilliant minds ki yahi koshish rehti hai ki dusre planet se kisi tarah aage nikle...

trade par kisi tarah sirf khud ka hi control ho....but dono hi planets par hamesha se equal talent hi raha hai...

par mere paida hone aur bade hone ke saath saath meri kaabiliyat sabko dikhne lagi thi...

jo mere planet ke 1000 genius mature log milkar bhi nahi kar sakte the,wo bohot choti umar me mai aasani se kar paa raha tha...

jisse mere mom dad aur baaki sabko laga ki ab hum ARROW planet se aage nikal jaayenge but fir hume pata chala ki meri hi tarah ARROW planet me bhi ek genius ne janm liya hai..

jo ki meri hi umar ka hai aur usme meri hi tarah capabilities hai....aur issi wajah se hum dono ke planets wapas equal level par aa gaye....

but fir yahan aane se 1 week pehle mere aur mere mom dad ke saamne hawa me ek roshni utpann hui jisme se ek awaaz nikli...

aur us awaaz ne hi mujhe apne baare me aur yahan ke baare me bataya jisse sun mujhse zyada mere mom dad khush ho gaye...

hum me se kisi ko kuch khaas idea toh nahi tha ki mera ye naya safar kaisa hoga but mom dad ne itna toh andaza laga hi liya tha ki agar mai apne is naye safar me kaamiyab hua toh mai itna kabil ban jaauga ki apne Planet ko ARROW PLANET se aage le jaaunga....

us din hamare pure Planet me jashn manaya gaya.....raat ko sone jaane ke waqt bhi mere mom dad ke chehre khile hue the but unke chehre ki wo muskaan shayad unki aakhri muskaan thi...

raat ke karib 2 baje jab mai soya hua tha tab achanak mujhe bechaini si hui jiski wajah se mai jaag gaya....

aur jaagte hi mere kadam mere mom dad ke room ki taraf badh chale...

par jab mai unke room ke saamne pahuncha toh mujhe ajeeb laga kyunki unka room khula hua tha....

jigyasa vash me jab andar gaya toh andar ka nazara dekh mujhe jhakta laga...

reason.....

andar mom dad ke bed ke theek side me ek aadmi khada tha jiske haath se kaali rays nikal mere mom dad ke sir me sama rahi thi...

ye sab dekh maine chillakar usse awaaz di..mere awaaz sun wo piche palta aur muskurate hue mujhse bas itna kaha ki mai fikr naa karun...

wo bas mere mom dad ko ek gehri neend me sula raha hai... aaj ke baad mere mom dad ko kabhi koi taklif nahi hogi....

kyunki ab mere mom dad kabhi bhi nahi uth paayenge...usne mujhse kaha ki mai darun naa,mere mom dad jeevit hain par jeeven jaisi koi baat ab unme kabhi nahi dikhegi...

uski baat sun mai uski aur tezi se badha aur uske paas pahunch jaise hi maine usse maarne ki koshish ki,wo gayab ho gaya...

par wo ab bhi wahin hi tha kyunki agle hi pal mujhe uski awaaz firse sunayi di....

jisme usne khud ka naam bataya aur saath hi kaha ki mai apne mata pitah ko thik karne ki koshish naa karun kyunki mera har prayas vyarth jaayega...

iske baad uski awaaz nahi aayi...mai turant apne mom dad ki taraf palta aur jaise hi maine un dono ke sir ko chhua,toh mujhe jhatka laga...

reason.. dono ke hi sharir thande the jaise ki kisi murde ke hote hain...

mujhe laga ki wo dono mar gaye jiski wajah se mai rote hue pehle apni mom ke seene se jaa laga par fir agle hi pal mujhe fir ek jhatka laga....

reason....

mom ka heart beat kar raha tha... aakhon me ascharya liye maine dad ke pulse ko check kiya...

unka bhi pulse chaalu tha..iska matlab us anjaan shatru ne sach kaha tha...

mere mom dad zinda the but jeeven jaisa ab unme kuch nahi bacha tha...

agle din ye baat pure planet me fail gayi jisse hamara pura planet shok grast ho gaya...

hamare grah ke uchh koti ke doctors ne mere mom dad ki condition ke baare me samajhne aur unhe theek karne me apni puri jaan lagadi par jaisa us shatru ne kaha tha,koi result nahi nikla...sabhi behad nirash ho gaye the.

par is beech shaam hote hote mujhe ek nayi surprising baat pata chali...mujhe pata chala ki jo kal yahan mere mom dad ke saath hua tha,wahi same chiz ARROW grah me bhi wahan ke king aur queen ke saath hui thi...

mere kuch din yunhi shok manate hi guzar gaye...

par fir ek din AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN mere saamne prakat hue..unhone mujhe apni pehchaan batayi aur saath hi mere mom dad ko dekhne ki iccha zaahir ki...

unke baare me jaankar mujhe bhi ek aasha bandhi thi...mai unhe mom dad ke kaksh me le gaya jahan wo ussi jeeven maran ke beech ki haalat me lete hue the...

AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN ne un dono ke sir par haath rakh koi spell bola jiske kuch der baad unke maathe par pareshaani ke bal ubhar aaye...

unhone mujhe bataya ki mere mom dad ke upar ek aisa dark energy se bhara SPELL bola gaya hai jiski wajah se mere mom dad ke dimag ka har conscious aur subconscious nerve bimar padh gaya hai jiski wajah se mere mom dad PERSITANT VEGITATIVE STATE me chale gaye hain....

is state me insaan gehre unconscious me chala jaata hai...isme higher brain ka funtion kaam karna completely band ho jaata hai...

(ye condtion,ye state,scientifically real hai doston..bas dark energy waali baat imaginary hai...)


NIRWAHALIKA.....yahi naam bataya tha SOVEREIGN ne us spell ka jisse mere mom dad ki wo haalat hui thi....

unhone bola ki unconsciousness me bhejne ke liye bas yahi ek aisa spell hai jisse yunhi kaata nahi jaa sakta...

is state se kisiko baahar sirf CHETANA BUTI se hi laaya jaa sakta hai jo sirf ek hi jagah paayi jaati hai aur wo jagah ELYSIAN matlab yahan hain..

but unfortunately wo jagah pratibandhit hai...wahan jaaya nahi jaa sakta...

AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN ki baat sun mai ek baar firse nirash ho gaya...

unhone mujhse pucha ki kya mai ab ELYSIAN jaana chahta hun...

ispar maine socha ki wahan CARAPACE me rehkar bhi koi faayda nahi kyunki mom dad toh waise bhi thik hone waale nahi isiliye mai yahan aa gaya....

aur waise bhi mom dad ko thik karne ke liye jo chiz chahiye thi,wo bhi yahin thi...

haan, SOVEREIGN ne us jagah ko pratibandhit bataya tha par mai bina koshish kiye haar nahi maan sakta tha....

aur fir mai yahan aa gaya...mere saath saath ACCHUTA bhi pahuncha tha....

hamare solar system me kisi ek planet me har saal trade ke liye sandhi sammelan hota hai.. pichle saal ke sammelan me maine ACCHUTA ko dekha tha isiliye isse turant pehchaan gaya tha...

waise toh ye mere rival Planet ka prince hai but kyunki ye bhi ussi condition se guzar raha tha jisme mai tha isiliye mujhe isse dekh zara bhi shatru waali feeling nahi aayi....

balki ek ajeeb si sanvenda ka bhaav mere hriday me iske liye jaaga tha.....

kyunki hum dono ke hi maata pita jis condition me the,us condition ko jeevit aur mrit dono hi condition me gina jaa sakta hai isiliye SOVEREIGN'S ne hum dono se kaha ki hamara yahan ka stay hamari marzi ke hisaab se hoga...

hum ABODE me bhi reh sakte hain aur HOSTEL me bhi...

aisho aaram zindagi bhar kiya hi tha humne.ab uski aur chaah bachi hi nahi thi aur isiliye hum dono ne hostel chuna....

hostel aakar ACCHUTA ne mujhe apne side ki kahani sunayi thi...


ACHHUTA-jo slunder ke saath hua tha,wahi mere saath bhi hua tha...

bas alag tha wo shaksh jisne mere mom dad ko ussi marne waali condition me pahunchaya tha....

mere mom dad ko us condition me pahunchane waale ka naam tha DORIAN...

SLUNDER-aur jisne mere mom dad ko jeete ji maar diya tha,uska naam tha GASTON.....

ACCHUTA-iske planet me AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN gaye the wahin mere Planet me SHAILA SOVEREIGN aayi thi...

SLUNDER-aur wo jagah jahan is waqt hamare mom dad ka ilaj chuppa hai,us jagah ka naam hai THE FORBIDDEN FOREST...

joki yahi ELYSIAN Planet me hi kahin hai... yahan pahunchne ke agle hi din mai apne INSTITUTION ke library me gaya tha jahan par mujhe FORBIDDEN FOREST ki book mili thi jisse maine apne paas rakh li aur har din usme uske baare me padhta rehta hun taaki ek din wahan jaakar kisi bhi tarah hum dono ke parents ke liye wo CHETNA BUTI nikal paaun....


SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA dono hi apni apni kahani khudme khoye hue,un saare palon ko jo unke saath ghati thi,usse firse jeete hue bata rahe the...

unka dhyan ab tak mujhpar nahi gaya tha but ab jab wo apni dastan bata chuke the,toh unki nazar mujhpar gayi aur aisa hote hi wo dono chownk gaye....

reason...


meri ankh band aur mooh khula hua tha...matlab mai so chuka tha...

mujhe aisa dekh aaj pehli baar SLUNDER ko nahi balki ACCHUTA ko ghussa aaya tha...


ACCHUTA-ye saala kaisa banda hai yaar..isme koi feelings hai bhi yaa nahi....

SLUNDER-chhod naa yaar...ek ka dard dusre ke liye tamasha hi hota hai.... chal,chalte hain...


ye bol SLUNDER ACHHUTA ke saath mere room se nikal gaya aur unke jaate hi.....


meri aankhen khul gayi....




tumhari khwahishon ke saath
bohot kuch AZAAD HOGA....

mera bhi toh aarambh
anth ke BAAD HOGA....









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V.J....
Sahi baat hai...... Ant hi rarambh hai.... Ab ye raaz ka kya reaction or action hota hai dekhte hain..... Bahut hi achha update hai
 

Chinturocky

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tumhari khwahishon ke saath
bohot kuch AZAAD HOGA....

mera bhi toh aarambh
anth ke BAAD HOGA....

kya likhate Ho BHAI
maza aa gaya.
dono ke baare me jankar bahut dukh hua.
raaz to wakai me raaz hai.
Kab kya bolta hai
kya karta hai aur
sabse jaruri baat
kya sochata hai?
????
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ALFREEN AUR MABEL,TEENO HI APNE PEHLE TARGET KO PURA KAR KHUDKO MAGIC KARNE KE YOGYA BANA LETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MOKALSAR SHAILA AUR AKSHAANT KO BATATE HAIN KI BRAIN HI KI TARAH RAAZ KE PAAS BLOOD BHI NAHI HAI.


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-22




PLANET-ELYSIAN



PLACE- MAHI'S ABODE




KYA KAR RAHI HAI HAMARI BETI??????


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi jo FLORIN aur ALFREEN ke saath shaam ke waqt MAHI ke abode pahunchi thi....

ALFREEN toh MAHI ke ghar aate hi rehti thi but aaj MARIA aur FLORIN ko apne ghar aata dekh MAHI kaafi khush ho gayi.....


MAHI-arre uncle,aunty,aaj aap dono yahan!!!!

MARIA-kyun,hum yahan nahi aa sakte kya???

MAHI-arre aunty..is ghar me mujhse zyada aap logon ka hak hai...

woh toh maine aap dono ko yahan expect nahi kiya tha,isiliye puch liya.....

FLORIN-expect...matlab apna maanti ho hume...kyunki expectations toh apno se hi rakhi jaati hai....


FLORIN ki baat sun MAHI bas muskura uthi....


MARIA-hum toh aaj bohot proud feel kar rahe hain... aakhir hamari dono betiyan wo pehli do SAVENTS bani jinhone apne dimag ke MAGIC barrier ko toda diya.....


ye bol MARIA ne MAHI ke maathe ko chum liya...

MARIA ne jo kaha hai,wo completely genuine tha aur is baat ko MAHI ke dil ne jaan liya tha...

zindagi bhar akeli rehne waali MAHI ke liye ye sab bilkul naya tha...

wo toh bachpan se hi har kaam me perfect rahi hai..har chiz me usne excel kiya hai but uski success ko uske talent ko dil se celebrate karne waala, uski khushi me khush rehna waala usse pehle kabhi nahi mila tha...

shayad yahi wo wajah thi ki itne saalon me pehli baar MAHI ko mom dad ke importance ka matlab samajh aaya tha...

aur filhal usse is naye safar me mili uski pehli jeet ki khushi FLORIN aur MARIA me dikh rahi thi....


FLORIN-first toh dono aaye hain but kya faayda???yahan toh hum kahin celebrate karne bhi nahi jaa sakte....

apne earth me hote,toh mai pure CLUJ NAPOCA ko dulhan ki tarah saja deta...

pura sheher ne aaj apne history ki sabse badi party dekhi hoti....


FLORIN ke baat karte waqt unki awaaz me,and most importantly unke ATTITUDE me jo sacchayi thi,wo MAHI saaf mehsoos kar rahi thi...


MAHI-aapne itna socha,mere liye toh yahi kisi party se kam nahi hai uncle....


MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN ek tak usse dekhne lage...unki aankhon me ek udasi thi jo MAHI ki nazaron se chhup nahi paayi aur isiliye....


MAHI-kya baat hai uncle??did i said something wrong....???

FLORIN-ye tum hi tay karo...taali ke bajne ke liye dono haathon ke milne ki zaroorat hoti hai...ye kaam ek haath se toh ho nahi sakta...

maine jo kaha,wo isiliye kaha kyunki janm se naa sahi par dil se maine infact humne tumhe apni beti maana hai....

par jo tumne kaha,kya ek beti apne pita se aisa kehti....!!!!

jaanti ho rishte me sabse zyada zaroori shabd kya hota hai???

HAKH...kisi bhi chiz par hakh rakhna....bhale hi wo chiz materialistic ho,ya fir emotions se bhari ho...

hakh hi wo jasba hai ho bharose aur apnepan,dono hi ehsaason ko darshata hai...

tumhari baaton me mere liye respect thi,pyar bhi tha par sabse important,HAKH nahi tha....


FLORIN ki baat sun aur us baat ki gehrayi ko samajh MAHI turant unke gale lag gayi....

MARIA ne bhi piche se MAHI ke sir par apni mamta ka haath fera....

wahin ALFREEN jo ab bhi chupchaap hi khadi thi,muskurate hue is behtarin lamhe ko dekh bhi rahi thi aur jee bhi rahi thi...

aaj abhi MAHI ki palken bheegi zaroor thi par ye wo paani tha jiska nikalna behad zaroori tha...

reason....


MAHI ne ab tak jo zindagi jee thi,wo kisi robot ke jaisi thi...saare upgradation hote chale aaye the ab tak uski zindagi me,but feelings,apnapan pyar...

in shabdon aur unke mayne se bilkul anjaan thi MAHI....

aur ab jis safar par wo nikal chuki thi,wahan in shabdon ki samajh hona atti aawashyak tha...

kyunki jis level ka talent MAHI ke andar tha,us talent ko contain karne ke liye feelings ka,apnepan ka,pyar ka hona bohot zaroori tha..

kyunki yahi wo chizen hain jo acchayi ko burayi se alag karte hain....

agar MAHI ke andar ye jasbaat apna ghar nahi banate,toh dharm aur adharm ek ho sakte the aur aisa hona sirf vidhwansh laata hai aur kuch nahi....

aaj tak MAHI ke dimag ne kaam kiya tha...par aaj FLORIN ke seene se lag pehli baar MAHI ka dil kaam kar raha tha...

wo dil jiske bina dimag ki koi haisiyat nahi... jiske bina roshni aur andhere me koi antar nahi...

wo dil jisse sahi tarah dhadakne ka hunar THE CHOSENS jaisa mahan institute bhi nahi sikha sakta tha....

FLORIN toh yahan bas MAHI ko ye ehsaas dilane aaye the ki wo is anant bramhaand me akeli nahi hai....

wo ye jatane aaye the ki ALFREEN aur MAHI unke liye ek hi sikke ke wo do pehlu hain jinke bina us sikke ka koi mol nahi...

par wo ye nahi jaante the ki jaane anjane me unhone MAHI naam ki is human robot ko wo sikha diya hai jo uske super talented WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS nahi sikha paaye aur naa kabhi sikha paayenge...

PYAR....SAMARPAN.....TYAG....

wo teen feelings jinki wajah se janm hota hai ek ANGEL ka

aur jiski absence paida karti hai ek DEVIL ko....

wo teen shabd jinhe agar saath laaya jaaye toh judkar banta hai ek naya shabd....

ATTITUDE......



PLACE-HOSTEL




YAAR RAAZ,EK BAAT BATA...TU HAMESHA BED PAR YUN SIR KO TIKA KAR BAITHA AANKHEN BAND KAR KYA SOCHTA REHTA HAI????


yahan bhi shaam ka hi waqt hai...mai apne bed par aankh band kar baitha tha ki tabhi mere kaano me ye awaaz padi jo ki nikli thi hamare ACCHUTA bhaisahab ke mooh se jo SLUNDER ke saath mere room me padhare the....


MAI-sochta nahi hun... pray karta hun....

ACCHUTA-prayer aur tu!!!!tere haav bhaav dekhkar toh lagta hi nahi ki tu GOD par believe bhi karta hoga...

waise agar koi bohot bada secret nahi hai toh tu apna prayer humse share kar sakta hai...

MAI-mai yahi pray karta hun ki tum dono mere room me kabhi naa aao....


meri baat par ACHHUTA toh has diya par SLUNDER ka chehre par meri baat sun naarazgi dikhne lagi thi...


ACCHUTA-arre bhai,koi aisi dua maang jo kubool ho...teri ye wish toh jeeteji kubool hone se rahi...


ye bol ACHHUTA ki nazar SLUNDER ke taraf gayi jisse dekh wo samajh gaya ki usse meri baat pasand nahi aayi hai....


ACHHUTA-arre yaar,tu har choti choti baat par mooh kyun phula leta hai....????

saale,bas hardware hi ladke ka hai..lagta hai tera poora software loundiyon waala bana hai....

SLUNDER-bura lagne waali baat par bura toh lagega hi.....par afsos,tune toh ye hunar sikha hi nahi...

ACCHUTA-bhai hunar wahi sikhna chahiye jisse faayda ho...jis hunar se khud hi kaa khun jale,aisi kaabiliyat ko khudse jitna door rakho,utna acha hai....

par afsos tune ye hunar sikha hi nahi.....


aakhri line ACHHUTA ne SLUNDER ki copy karte hue kahi jisse sun pehli baar SLUNDER bhi muskura utha....


ACCHUTA-oye teri.....ye kya keher dhaa raha hai bhai tu!!!!tujhe hasna bhi aata hai....gazab!!!!

par bhai,ek baat kahun,tu naa serious hi thik hai....tere hasne se tere daanth aur bhayanak dikhte hain....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ne usse ek baar ghur kar dekha,but fir muskura diya...

ACHHUTA fir usse kuch kehme waala tha ki....


MAI-ye saari baatein is room se baahar jaakar bhi kar sakte ho...filhal,yahan kyun aaye ho,ye batao????


meri baat sun ek lambi saans chhod.....


SLUNDER-tujhe apne baare me kuch batana hai....

MAI-kyun????

SLUNDER-jo log apni tanhaiyon se nikal dusron ki khamoshi me dakhal dete hain,aksar shor macha uththe hain unke RAAZ....(update 17..last line)

us din tumhare kahe is baat ka,is parable ka matlab jaanta hun mai RAAZ....

tere naam ki hi tarah hamare bhi kuch RAAZ hain...aise RAAZ jo koi nahi jaanta... siwaye SOVEREIGN'S ke....

hume ye toh nahi pata ki tujhe humare RAAZ ho sakte hain,iska shak kaise hua,par us din teri baat ya ye kahun ki tere bole parable ka yahi matlab tha aur isiliye...

hum tujhe apne wo RAAZ batana chahte hain...

MAI-sawal ab bhi wahi hai..kyun????

SLUNDER-bhai iska exact reason toh hum bhi nahi jaante....par pata nahi kyun,tu apna sa lagta hai...aisa lagta hai tujhse hum kuch bhi share kar sakte hain...bina is dar ke ki kahin tu hamari baat kisi ko bata naa de???

MAI-bina pause liye bol....


ek baar meri taraf dekh...


SLUNDER-yahan is institution me hostlers tab bante hain jab us SAVENT ke mom dad nahi hote...

but mere infact mere aur ACCHUTA dono ke hi mom dad zinda hain...

but wo jis condition me hain,us condition ko maut hi maana jaanta hai....

mai CARAPACE planet se hun....aur ACCHUTA ARROW planet se...

hum dono ke hi grah ek hi solar system ke part hain aur saath hi ek dusre ke rivals bhi...

aur rahi baat hum dono ki toh hum dono ka hi background bohot strong hai...

mai apne planet ka prince hun wahin ACCHUTA ARROW planet ka uttaradhikari hai...

hamare solar system me kul 22 planets hain jinme se 12 me human existence hai...

aur in 12 planets me hum dono ke planets sabse aage hain...isiliye trade treaty ke tahat hum dono planets baaki ke 10 planets ko chalate hain....

hum dono ke hi planets technology ke maamle par shikher par hain..wahin baaki ke 10 planets har equipment ke liye,hathiyar ke liye,har department ke upgradation ke liye hum dono planets par dependent hain....

aur yahi wajah hai ki hum dono ke Planets rivals hain....

dono hi planets ke brilliant minds ki yahi koshish rehti hai ki dusre planet se kisi tarah aage nikle...

trade par kisi tarah sirf khud ka hi control ho....but dono hi planets par hamesha se equal talent hi raha hai...

par mere paida hone aur bade hone ke saath saath meri kaabiliyat sabko dikhne lagi thi...

jo mere planet ke 1000 genius mature log milkar bhi nahi kar sakte the,wo bohot choti umar me mai aasani se kar paa raha tha...

jisse mere mom dad aur baaki sabko laga ki ab hum ARROW planet se aage nikal jaayenge but fir hume pata chala ki meri hi tarah ARROW planet me bhi ek genius ne janm liya hai..

jo ki meri hi umar ka hai aur usme meri hi tarah capabilities hai....aur issi wajah se hum dono ke planets wapas equal level par aa gaye....

but fir yahan aane se 1 week pehle mere aur mere mom dad ke saamne hawa me ek roshni utpann hui jisme se ek awaaz nikli...

aur us awaaz ne hi mujhe apne baare me aur yahan ke baare me bataya jisse sun mujhse zyada mere mom dad khush ho gaye...

hum me se kisi ko kuch khaas idea toh nahi tha ki mera ye naya safar kaisa hoga but mom dad ne itna toh andaza laga hi liya tha ki agar mai apne is naye safar me kaamiyab hua toh mai itna kabil ban jaauga ki apne Planet ko ARROW PLANET se aage le jaaunga....

us din hamare pure Planet me jashn manaya gaya.....raat ko sone jaane ke waqt bhi mere mom dad ke chehre khile hue the but unke chehre ki wo muskaan shayad unki aakhri muskaan thi...

raat ke karib 2 baje jab mai soya hua tha tab achanak mujhe bechaini si hui jiski wajah se mai jaag gaya....

aur jaagte hi mere kadam mere mom dad ke room ki taraf badh chale...

par jab mai unke room ke saamne pahuncha toh mujhe ajeeb laga kyunki unka room khula hua tha....

jigyasa vash me jab andar gaya toh andar ka nazara dekh mujhe jhakta laga...

reason.....

andar mom dad ke bed ke theek side me ek aadmi khada tha jiske haath se kaali rays nikal mere mom dad ke sir me sama rahi thi...

ye sab dekh maine chillakar usse awaaz di..mere awaaz sun wo piche palta aur muskurate hue mujhse bas itna kaha ki mai fikr naa karun...

wo bas mere mom dad ko ek gehri neend me sula raha hai... aaj ke baad mere mom dad ko kabhi koi taklif nahi hogi....

kyunki ab mere mom dad kabhi bhi nahi uth paayenge...usne mujhse kaha ki mai darun naa,mere mom dad jeevit hain par jeeven jaisi koi baat ab unme kabhi nahi dikhegi...

uski baat sun mai uski aur tezi se badha aur uske paas pahunch jaise hi maine usse maarne ki koshish ki,wo gayab ho gaya...

par wo ab bhi wahin hi tha kyunki agle hi pal mujhe uski awaaz firse sunayi di....

jisme usne khud ka naam bataya aur saath hi kaha ki mai apne mata pitah ko thik karne ki koshish naa karun kyunki mera har prayas vyarth jaayega...

iske baad uski awaaz nahi aayi...mai turant apne mom dad ki taraf palta aur jaise hi maine un dono ke sir ko chhua,toh mujhe jhatka laga...

reason.. dono ke hi sharir thande the jaise ki kisi murde ke hote hain...

mujhe laga ki wo dono mar gaye jiski wajah se mai rote hue pehle apni mom ke seene se jaa laga par fir agle hi pal mujhe fir ek jhatka laga....

reason....

mom ka heart beat kar raha tha... aakhon me ascharya liye maine dad ke pulse ko check kiya...

unka bhi pulse chaalu tha..iska matlab us anjaan shatru ne sach kaha tha...

mere mom dad zinda the but jeeven jaisa ab unme kuch nahi bacha tha...

agle din ye baat pure planet me fail gayi jisse hamara pura planet shok grast ho gaya...

hamare grah ke uchh koti ke doctors ne mere mom dad ki condition ke baare me samajhne aur unhe theek karne me apni puri jaan lagadi par jaisa us shatru ne kaha tha,koi result nahi nikla...sabhi behad nirash ho gaye the.

par is beech shaam hote hote mujhe ek nayi surprising baat pata chali...mujhe pata chala ki jo kal yahan mere mom dad ke saath hua tha,wahi same chiz ARROW grah me bhi wahan ke king aur queen ke saath hui thi...

mere kuch din yunhi shok manate hi guzar gaye...

par fir ek din AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN mere saamne prakat hue..unhone mujhe apni pehchaan batayi aur saath hi mere mom dad ko dekhne ki iccha zaahir ki...

unke baare me jaankar mujhe bhi ek aasha bandhi thi...mai unhe mom dad ke kaksh me le gaya jahan wo ussi jeeven maran ke beech ki haalat me lete hue the...

AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN ne un dono ke sir par haath rakh koi spell bola jiske kuch der baad unke maathe par pareshaani ke bal ubhar aaye...

unhone mujhe bataya ki mere mom dad ke upar ek aisa dark energy se bhara SPELL bola gaya hai jiski wajah se mere mom dad ke dimag ka har conscious aur subconscious nerve bimar padh gaya hai jiski wajah se mere mom dad PERSITANT VEGITATIVE STATE me chale gaye hain....

is state me insaan gehre unconscious me chala jaata hai...isme higher brain ka funtion kaam karna completely band ho jaata hai...

(ye condtion,ye state,scientifically real hai doston..bas dark energy waali baat imaginary hai...)


NIRWAHALIKA.....yahi naam bataya tha SOVEREIGN ne us spell ka jisse mere mom dad ki wo haalat hui thi....

unhone bola ki unconsciousness me bhejne ke liye bas yahi ek aisa spell hai jisse yunhi kaata nahi jaa sakta...

is state se kisiko baahar sirf CHETANA BUTI se hi laaya jaa sakta hai jo sirf ek hi jagah paayi jaati hai aur wo jagah ELYSIAN matlab yahan hain..

but unfortunately wo jagah pratibandhit hai...wahan jaaya nahi jaa sakta...

AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN ki baat sun mai ek baar firse nirash ho gaya...

unhone mujhse pucha ki kya mai ab ELYSIAN jaana chahta hun...

ispar maine socha ki wahan CARAPACE me rehkar bhi koi faayda nahi kyunki mom dad toh waise bhi thik hone waale nahi isiliye mai yahan aa gaya....

aur waise bhi mom dad ko thik karne ke liye jo chiz chahiye thi,wo bhi yahin thi...

haan, SOVEREIGN ne us jagah ko pratibandhit bataya tha par mai bina koshish kiye haar nahi maan sakta tha....

aur fir mai yahan aa gaya...mere saath saath ACCHUTA bhi pahuncha tha....

hamare solar system me kisi ek planet me har saal trade ke liye sandhi sammelan hota hai.. pichle saal ke sammelan me maine ACCHUTA ko dekha tha isiliye isse turant pehchaan gaya tha...

waise toh ye mere rival Planet ka prince hai but kyunki ye bhi ussi condition se guzar raha tha jisme mai tha isiliye mujhe isse dekh zara bhi shatru waali feeling nahi aayi....

balki ek ajeeb si sanvenda ka bhaav mere hriday me iske liye jaaga tha.....

kyunki hum dono ke hi maata pita jis condition me the,us condition ko jeevit aur mrit dono hi condition me gina jaa sakta hai isiliye SOVEREIGN'S ne hum dono se kaha ki hamara yahan ka stay hamari marzi ke hisaab se hoga...

hum ABODE me bhi reh sakte hain aur HOSTEL me bhi...

aisho aaram zindagi bhar kiya hi tha humne.ab uski aur chaah bachi hi nahi thi aur isiliye hum dono ne hostel chuna....

hostel aakar ACCHUTA ne mujhe apne side ki kahani sunayi thi...


ACHHUTA-jo slunder ke saath hua tha,wahi mere saath bhi hua tha...

bas alag tha wo shaksh jisne mere mom dad ko ussi marne waali condition me pahunchaya tha....

mere mom dad ko us condition me pahunchane waale ka naam tha DORIAN...

SLUNDER-aur jisne mere mom dad ko jeete ji maar diya tha,uska naam tha GASTON.....

ACCHUTA-iske planet me AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN gaye the wahin mere Planet me SHAILA SOVEREIGN aayi thi...

SLUNDER-aur wo jagah jahan is waqt hamare mom dad ka ilaj chuppa hai,us jagah ka naam hai THE FORBIDDEN FOREST...

joki yahi ELYSIAN Planet me hi kahin hai... yahan pahunchne ke agle hi din mai apne INSTITUTION ke library me gaya tha jahan par mujhe FORBIDDEN FOREST ki book mili thi jisse maine apne paas rakh li aur har din usme uske baare me padhta rehta hun taaki ek din wahan jaakar kisi bhi tarah hum dono ke parents ke liye wo CHETNA BUTI nikal paaun....


SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA dono hi apni apni kahani khudme khoye hue,un saare palon ko jo unke saath ghati thi,usse firse jeete hue bata rahe the...

unka dhyan ab tak mujhpar nahi gaya tha but ab jab wo apni dastan bata chuke the,toh unki nazar mujhpar gayi aur aisa hote hi wo dono chownk gaye....

reason...


meri ankh band aur mooh khula hua tha...matlab mai so chuka tha...

mujhe aisa dekh aaj pehli baar SLUNDER ko nahi balki ACCHUTA ko ghussa aaya tha...


ACCHUTA-ye saala kaisa banda hai yaar..isme koi feelings hai bhi yaa nahi....

SLUNDER-chhod naa yaar...ek ka dard dusre ke liye tamasha hi hota hai.... chal,chalte hain...


ye bol SLUNDER ACHHUTA ke saath mere room se nikal gaya aur unke jaate hi.....


meri aankhen khul gayi....




tumhari khwahishon ke saath
bohot kuch AZAAD HOGA....

mera bhi toh aarambh
anth ke BAAD HOGA....









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V.J....



Dear bhai ji,

Bahut hi sundar update hai or sad bhi jo in dono ke sath hua lagta hai yahi Kari sabit hogi kahi na kahi raaz ke unfold hone ki

Jese kata hai
Mera bhi arambh
Ant ke baad hoga

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ALFREEN AUR MABEL,TEENO HI APNE PEHLE TARGET KO PURA KAR KHUDKO MAGIC KARNE KE YOGYA BANA LETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MOKALSAR SHAILA AUR AKSHAANT KO BATATE HAIN KI BRAIN HI KI TARAH RAAZ KE PAAS BLOOD BHI NAHI HAI.


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-22




PLANET-ELYSIAN



PLACE- MAHI'S ABODE




KYA KAR RAHI HAI HAMARI BETI??????


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi jo FLORIN aur ALFREEN ke saath shaam ke waqt MAHI ke abode pahunchi thi....

ALFREEN toh MAHI ke ghar aate hi rehti thi but aaj MARIA aur FLORIN ko apne ghar aata dekh MAHI kaafi khush ho gayi.....


MAHI-arre uncle,aunty,aaj aap dono yahan!!!!

MARIA-kyun,hum yahan nahi aa sakte kya???

MAHI-arre aunty..is ghar me mujhse zyada aap logon ka hak hai...

woh toh maine aap dono ko yahan expect nahi kiya tha,isiliye puch liya.....

FLORIN-expect...matlab apna maanti ho hume...kyunki expectations toh apno se hi rakhi jaati hai....


FLORIN ki baat sun MAHI bas muskura uthi....


MARIA-hum toh aaj bohot proud feel kar rahe hain... aakhir hamari dono betiyan wo pehli do SAVENTS bani jinhone apne dimag ke MAGIC barrier ko toda diya.....


ye bol MARIA ne MAHI ke maathe ko chum liya...

MARIA ne jo kaha hai,wo completely genuine tha aur is baat ko MAHI ke dil ne jaan liya tha...

zindagi bhar akeli rehne waali MAHI ke liye ye sab bilkul naya tha...

wo toh bachpan se hi har kaam me perfect rahi hai..har chiz me usne excel kiya hai but uski success ko uske talent ko dil se celebrate karne waala, uski khushi me khush rehna waala usse pehle kabhi nahi mila tha...

shayad yahi wo wajah thi ki itne saalon me pehli baar MAHI ko mom dad ke importance ka matlab samajh aaya tha...

aur filhal usse is naye safar me mili uski pehli jeet ki khushi FLORIN aur MARIA me dikh rahi thi....


FLORIN-first toh dono aaye hain but kya faayda???yahan toh hum kahin celebrate karne bhi nahi jaa sakte....

apne earth me hote,toh mai pure CLUJ NAPOCA ko dulhan ki tarah saja deta...

pura sheher ne aaj apne history ki sabse badi party dekhi hoti....


FLORIN ke baat karte waqt unki awaaz me,and most importantly unke ATTITUDE me jo sacchayi thi,wo MAHI saaf mehsoos kar rahi thi...


MAHI-aapne itna socha,mere liye toh yahi kisi party se kam nahi hai uncle....


MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN ek tak usse dekhne lage...unki aankhon me ek udasi thi jo MAHI ki nazaron se chhup nahi paayi aur isiliye....


MAHI-kya baat hai uncle??did i said something wrong....???

FLORIN-ye tum hi tay karo...taali ke bajne ke liye dono haathon ke milne ki zaroorat hoti hai...ye kaam ek haath se toh ho nahi sakta...

maine jo kaha,wo isiliye kaha kyunki janm se naa sahi par dil se maine infact humne tumhe apni beti maana hai....

par jo tumne kaha,kya ek beti apne pita se aisa kehti....!!!!

jaanti ho rishte me sabse zyada zaroori shabd kya hota hai???

HAKH...kisi bhi chiz par hakh rakhna....bhale hi wo chiz materialistic ho,ya fir emotions se bhari ho...

hakh hi wo jasba hai ho bharose aur apnepan,dono hi ehsaason ko darshata hai...

tumhari baaton me mere liye respect thi,pyar bhi tha par sabse important,HAKH nahi tha....


FLORIN ki baat sun aur us baat ki gehrayi ko samajh MAHI turant unke gale lag gayi....

MARIA ne bhi piche se MAHI ke sir par apni mamta ka haath fera....

wahin ALFREEN jo ab bhi chupchaap hi khadi thi,muskurate hue is behtarin lamhe ko dekh bhi rahi thi aur jee bhi rahi thi...

aaj abhi MAHI ki palken bheegi zaroor thi par ye wo paani tha jiska nikalna behad zaroori tha...

reason....


MAHI ne ab tak jo zindagi jee thi,wo kisi robot ke jaisi thi...saare upgradation hote chale aaye the ab tak uski zindagi me,but feelings,apnapan pyar...

in shabdon aur unke mayne se bilkul anjaan thi MAHI....

aur ab jis safar par wo nikal chuki thi,wahan in shabdon ki samajh hona atti aawashyak tha...

kyunki jis level ka talent MAHI ke andar tha,us talent ko contain karne ke liye feelings ka,apnepan ka,pyar ka hona bohot zaroori tha..

kyunki yahi wo chizen hain jo acchayi ko burayi se alag karte hain....

agar MAHI ke andar ye jasbaat apna ghar nahi banate,toh dharm aur adharm ek ho sakte the aur aisa hona sirf vidhwansh laata hai aur kuch nahi....

aaj tak MAHI ke dimag ne kaam kiya tha...par aaj FLORIN ke seene se lag pehli baar MAHI ka dil kaam kar raha tha...

wo dil jiske bina dimag ki koi haisiyat nahi... jiske bina roshni aur andhere me koi antar nahi...

wo dil jisse sahi tarah dhadakne ka hunar THE CHOSENS jaisa mahan institute bhi nahi sikha sakta tha....

FLORIN toh yahan bas MAHI ko ye ehsaas dilane aaye the ki wo is anant bramhaand me akeli nahi hai....

wo ye jatane aaye the ki ALFREEN aur MAHI unke liye ek hi sikke ke wo do pehlu hain jinke bina us sikke ka koi mol nahi...

par wo ye nahi jaante the ki jaane anjane me unhone MAHI naam ki is human robot ko wo sikha diya hai jo uske super talented WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS nahi sikha paaye aur naa kabhi sikha paayenge...

PYAR....SAMARPAN.....TYAG....

wo teen feelings jinki wajah se janm hota hai ek ANGEL ka

aur jiski absence paida karti hai ek DEVIL ko....

wo teen shabd jinhe agar saath laaya jaaye toh judkar banta hai ek naya shabd....

ATTITUDE......



PLACE-HOSTEL




YAAR RAAZ,EK BAAT BATA...TU HAMESHA BED PAR YUN SIR KO TIKA KAR BAITHA AANKHEN BAND KAR KYA SOCHTA REHTA HAI????


yahan bhi shaam ka hi waqt hai...mai apne bed par aankh band kar baitha tha ki tabhi mere kaano me ye awaaz padi jo ki nikli thi hamare ACCHUTA bhaisahab ke mooh se jo SLUNDER ke saath mere room me padhare the....


MAI-sochta nahi hun... pray karta hun....

ACCHUTA-prayer aur tu!!!!tere haav bhaav dekhkar toh lagta hi nahi ki tu GOD par believe bhi karta hoga...

waise agar koi bohot bada secret nahi hai toh tu apna prayer humse share kar sakta hai...

MAI-mai yahi pray karta hun ki tum dono mere room me kabhi naa aao....


meri baat par ACHHUTA toh has diya par SLUNDER ka chehre par meri baat sun naarazgi dikhne lagi thi...


ACCHUTA-arre bhai,koi aisi dua maang jo kubool ho...teri ye wish toh jeeteji kubool hone se rahi...


ye bol ACHHUTA ki nazar SLUNDER ke taraf gayi jisse dekh wo samajh gaya ki usse meri baat pasand nahi aayi hai....


ACHHUTA-arre yaar,tu har choti choti baat par mooh kyun phula leta hai....????

saale,bas hardware hi ladke ka hai..lagta hai tera poora software loundiyon waala bana hai....

SLUNDER-bura lagne waali baat par bura toh lagega hi.....par afsos,tune toh ye hunar sikha hi nahi...

ACCHUTA-bhai hunar wahi sikhna chahiye jisse faayda ho...jis hunar se khud hi kaa khun jale,aisi kaabiliyat ko khudse jitna door rakho,utna acha hai....

par afsos tune ye hunar sikha hi nahi.....


aakhri line ACHHUTA ne SLUNDER ki copy karte hue kahi jisse sun pehli baar SLUNDER bhi muskura utha....


ACCHUTA-oye teri.....ye kya keher dhaa raha hai bhai tu!!!!tujhe hasna bhi aata hai....gazab!!!!

par bhai,ek baat kahun,tu naa serious hi thik hai....tere hasne se tere daanth aur bhayanak dikhte hain....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ne usse ek baar ghur kar dekha,but fir muskura diya...

ACHHUTA fir usse kuch kehme waala tha ki....


MAI-ye saari baatein is room se baahar jaakar bhi kar sakte ho...filhal,yahan kyun aaye ho,ye batao????


meri baat sun ek lambi saans chhod.....


SLUNDER-tujhe apne baare me kuch batana hai....

MAI-kyun????

SLUNDER-jo log apni tanhaiyon se nikal dusron ki khamoshi me dakhal dete hain,aksar shor macha uththe hain unke RAAZ....(update 17..last line)

us din tumhare kahe is baat ka,is parable ka matlab jaanta hun mai RAAZ....

tere naam ki hi tarah hamare bhi kuch RAAZ hain...aise RAAZ jo koi nahi jaanta... siwaye SOVEREIGN'S ke....

hume ye toh nahi pata ki tujhe humare RAAZ ho sakte hain,iska shak kaise hua,par us din teri baat ya ye kahun ki tere bole parable ka yahi matlab tha aur isiliye...

hum tujhe apne wo RAAZ batana chahte hain...

MAI-sawal ab bhi wahi hai..kyun????

SLUNDER-bhai iska exact reason toh hum bhi nahi jaante....par pata nahi kyun,tu apna sa lagta hai...aisa lagta hai tujhse hum kuch bhi share kar sakte hain...bina is dar ke ki kahin tu hamari baat kisi ko bata naa de???

MAI-bina pause liye bol....


ek baar meri taraf dekh...


SLUNDER-yahan is institution me hostlers tab bante hain jab us SAVENT ke mom dad nahi hote...

but mere infact mere aur ACCHUTA dono ke hi mom dad zinda hain...

but wo jis condition me hain,us condition ko maut hi maana jaanta hai....

mai CARAPACE planet se hun....aur ACCHUTA ARROW planet se...

hum dono ke hi grah ek hi solar system ke part hain aur saath hi ek dusre ke rivals bhi...

aur rahi baat hum dono ki toh hum dono ka hi background bohot strong hai...

mai apne planet ka prince hun wahin ACCHUTA ARROW planet ka uttaradhikari hai...

hamare solar system me kul 22 planets hain jinme se 12 me human existence hai...

aur in 12 planets me hum dono ke planets sabse aage hain...isiliye trade treaty ke tahat hum dono planets baaki ke 10 planets ko chalate hain....

hum dono ke hi planets technology ke maamle par shikher par hain..wahin baaki ke 10 planets har equipment ke liye,hathiyar ke liye,har department ke upgradation ke liye hum dono planets par dependent hain....

aur yahi wajah hai ki hum dono ke Planets rivals hain....

dono hi planets ke brilliant minds ki yahi koshish rehti hai ki dusre planet se kisi tarah aage nikle...

trade par kisi tarah sirf khud ka hi control ho....but dono hi planets par hamesha se equal talent hi raha hai...

par mere paida hone aur bade hone ke saath saath meri kaabiliyat sabko dikhne lagi thi...

jo mere planet ke 1000 genius mature log milkar bhi nahi kar sakte the,wo bohot choti umar me mai aasani se kar paa raha tha...

jisse mere mom dad aur baaki sabko laga ki ab hum ARROW planet se aage nikal jaayenge but fir hume pata chala ki meri hi tarah ARROW planet me bhi ek genius ne janm liya hai..

jo ki meri hi umar ka hai aur usme meri hi tarah capabilities hai....aur issi wajah se hum dono ke planets wapas equal level par aa gaye....

but fir yahan aane se 1 week pehle mere aur mere mom dad ke saamne hawa me ek roshni utpann hui jisme se ek awaaz nikli...

aur us awaaz ne hi mujhe apne baare me aur yahan ke baare me bataya jisse sun mujhse zyada mere mom dad khush ho gaye...

hum me se kisi ko kuch khaas idea toh nahi tha ki mera ye naya safar kaisa hoga but mom dad ne itna toh andaza laga hi liya tha ki agar mai apne is naye safar me kaamiyab hua toh mai itna kabil ban jaauga ki apne Planet ko ARROW PLANET se aage le jaaunga....

us din hamare pure Planet me jashn manaya gaya.....raat ko sone jaane ke waqt bhi mere mom dad ke chehre khile hue the but unke chehre ki wo muskaan shayad unki aakhri muskaan thi...

raat ke karib 2 baje jab mai soya hua tha tab achanak mujhe bechaini si hui jiski wajah se mai jaag gaya....

aur jaagte hi mere kadam mere mom dad ke room ki taraf badh chale...

par jab mai unke room ke saamne pahuncha toh mujhe ajeeb laga kyunki unka room khula hua tha....

jigyasa vash me jab andar gaya toh andar ka nazara dekh mujhe jhakta laga...

reason.....

andar mom dad ke bed ke theek side me ek aadmi khada tha jiske haath se kaali rays nikal mere mom dad ke sir me sama rahi thi...

ye sab dekh maine chillakar usse awaaz di..mere awaaz sun wo piche palta aur muskurate hue mujhse bas itna kaha ki mai fikr naa karun...

wo bas mere mom dad ko ek gehri neend me sula raha hai... aaj ke baad mere mom dad ko kabhi koi taklif nahi hogi....

kyunki ab mere mom dad kabhi bhi nahi uth paayenge...usne mujhse kaha ki mai darun naa,mere mom dad jeevit hain par jeeven jaisi koi baat ab unme kabhi nahi dikhegi...

uski baat sun mai uski aur tezi se badha aur uske paas pahunch jaise hi maine usse maarne ki koshish ki,wo gayab ho gaya...

par wo ab bhi wahin hi tha kyunki agle hi pal mujhe uski awaaz firse sunayi di....

jisme usne khud ka naam bataya aur saath hi kaha ki mai apne mata pitah ko thik karne ki koshish naa karun kyunki mera har prayas vyarth jaayega...

iske baad uski awaaz nahi aayi...mai turant apne mom dad ki taraf palta aur jaise hi maine un dono ke sir ko chhua,toh mujhe jhatka laga...

reason.. dono ke hi sharir thande the jaise ki kisi murde ke hote hain...

mujhe laga ki wo dono mar gaye jiski wajah se mai rote hue pehle apni mom ke seene se jaa laga par fir agle hi pal mujhe fir ek jhatka laga....

reason....

mom ka heart beat kar raha tha... aakhon me ascharya liye maine dad ke pulse ko check kiya...

unka bhi pulse chaalu tha..iska matlab us anjaan shatru ne sach kaha tha...

mere mom dad zinda the but jeeven jaisa ab unme kuch nahi bacha tha...

agle din ye baat pure planet me fail gayi jisse hamara pura planet shok grast ho gaya...

hamare grah ke uchh koti ke doctors ne mere mom dad ki condition ke baare me samajhne aur unhe theek karne me apni puri jaan lagadi par jaisa us shatru ne kaha tha,koi result nahi nikla...sabhi behad nirash ho gaye the.

par is beech shaam hote hote mujhe ek nayi surprising baat pata chali...mujhe pata chala ki jo kal yahan mere mom dad ke saath hua tha,wahi same chiz ARROW grah me bhi wahan ke king aur queen ke saath hui thi...

mere kuch din yunhi shok manate hi guzar gaye...

par fir ek din AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN mere saamne prakat hue..unhone mujhe apni pehchaan batayi aur saath hi mere mom dad ko dekhne ki iccha zaahir ki...

unke baare me jaankar mujhe bhi ek aasha bandhi thi...mai unhe mom dad ke kaksh me le gaya jahan wo ussi jeeven maran ke beech ki haalat me lete hue the...

AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN ne un dono ke sir par haath rakh koi spell bola jiske kuch der baad unke maathe par pareshaani ke bal ubhar aaye...

unhone mujhe bataya ki mere mom dad ke upar ek aisa dark energy se bhara SPELL bola gaya hai jiski wajah se mere mom dad ke dimag ka har conscious aur subconscious nerve bimar padh gaya hai jiski wajah se mere mom dad PERSITANT VEGITATIVE STATE me chale gaye hain....

is state me insaan gehre unconscious me chala jaata hai...isme higher brain ka funtion kaam karna completely band ho jaata hai...

(ye condtion,ye state,scientifically real hai doston..bas dark energy waali baat imaginary hai...)


NIRWAHALIKA.....yahi naam bataya tha SOVEREIGN ne us spell ka jisse mere mom dad ki wo haalat hui thi....

unhone bola ki unconsciousness me bhejne ke liye bas yahi ek aisa spell hai jisse yunhi kaata nahi jaa sakta...

is state se kisiko baahar sirf CHETANA BUTI se hi laaya jaa sakta hai jo sirf ek hi jagah paayi jaati hai aur wo jagah ELYSIAN matlab yahan hain..

but unfortunately wo jagah pratibandhit hai...wahan jaaya nahi jaa sakta...

AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN ki baat sun mai ek baar firse nirash ho gaya...

unhone mujhse pucha ki kya mai ab ELYSIAN jaana chahta hun...

ispar maine socha ki wahan CARAPACE me rehkar bhi koi faayda nahi kyunki mom dad toh waise bhi thik hone waale nahi isiliye mai yahan aa gaya....

aur waise bhi mom dad ko thik karne ke liye jo chiz chahiye thi,wo bhi yahin thi...

haan, SOVEREIGN ne us jagah ko pratibandhit bataya tha par mai bina koshish kiye haar nahi maan sakta tha....

aur fir mai yahan aa gaya...mere saath saath ACCHUTA bhi pahuncha tha....

hamare solar system me kisi ek planet me har saal trade ke liye sandhi sammelan hota hai.. pichle saal ke sammelan me maine ACCHUTA ko dekha tha isiliye isse turant pehchaan gaya tha...

waise toh ye mere rival Planet ka prince hai but kyunki ye bhi ussi condition se guzar raha tha jisme mai tha isiliye mujhe isse dekh zara bhi shatru waali feeling nahi aayi....

balki ek ajeeb si sanvenda ka bhaav mere hriday me iske liye jaaga tha.....

kyunki hum dono ke hi maata pita jis condition me the,us condition ko jeevit aur mrit dono hi condition me gina jaa sakta hai isiliye SOVEREIGN'S ne hum dono se kaha ki hamara yahan ka stay hamari marzi ke hisaab se hoga...

hum ABODE me bhi reh sakte hain aur HOSTEL me bhi...

aisho aaram zindagi bhar kiya hi tha humne.ab uski aur chaah bachi hi nahi thi aur isiliye hum dono ne hostel chuna....

hostel aakar ACCHUTA ne mujhe apne side ki kahani sunayi thi...


ACHHUTA-jo slunder ke saath hua tha,wahi mere saath bhi hua tha...

bas alag tha wo shaksh jisne mere mom dad ko ussi marne waali condition me pahunchaya tha....

mere mom dad ko us condition me pahunchane waale ka naam tha DORIAN...

SLUNDER-aur jisne mere mom dad ko jeete ji maar diya tha,uska naam tha GASTON.....

ACCHUTA-iske planet me AKSHAANT SOVEREIGN gaye the wahin mere Planet me SHAILA SOVEREIGN aayi thi...

SLUNDER-aur wo jagah jahan is waqt hamare mom dad ka ilaj chuppa hai,us jagah ka naam hai THE FORBIDDEN FOREST...

joki yahi ELYSIAN Planet me hi kahin hai... yahan pahunchne ke agle hi din mai apne INSTITUTION ke library me gaya tha jahan par mujhe FORBIDDEN FOREST ki book mili thi jisse maine apne paas rakh li aur har din usme uske baare me padhta rehta hun taaki ek din wahan jaakar kisi bhi tarah hum dono ke parents ke liye wo CHETNA BUTI nikal paaun....


SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA dono hi apni apni kahani khudme khoye hue,un saare palon ko jo unke saath ghati thi,usse firse jeete hue bata rahe the...

unka dhyan ab tak mujhpar nahi gaya tha but ab jab wo apni dastan bata chuke the,toh unki nazar mujhpar gayi aur aisa hote hi wo dono chownk gaye....

reason...


meri ankh band aur mooh khula hua tha...matlab mai so chuka tha...

mujhe aisa dekh aaj pehli baar SLUNDER ko nahi balki ACCHUTA ko ghussa aaya tha...


ACCHUTA-ye saala kaisa banda hai yaar..isme koi feelings hai bhi yaa nahi....

SLUNDER-chhod naa yaar...ek ka dard dusre ke liye tamasha hi hota hai.... chal,chalte hain...


ye bol SLUNDER ACHHUTA ke saath mere room se nikal gaya aur unke jaate hi.....


meri aankhen khul gayi....




tumhari khwahishon ke saath
bohot kuch AZAAD HOGA....

mera bhi toh aarambh
anth ke BAAD HOGA....









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V.J....
Badiya update bhaiii.....
 
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