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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF FIRST PHASE KHATM HO CHUKA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE SWORD HAASIL KAR LI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-52



PLANET-CHOSENS


PLACE-PHASE 2





WELCOME MASTERS & MISTRESS....



ek saath teen logon ke mooh se ye greetings nikli thi...

reason....

MAHI, ALFREEN,MABEL aur unke PARENTS is waqt CHOSENS ke PHASE 2 gate ke gallery me khade the...

first PHASE khatm hue aaj ek hafta ho chuka tha aur aaj wo din tha jab pichle saal ke FIRST PHASE ke SAVENTS aur unke parents ko second PHASE me shift hona tha aur issi liye wo sab yahan pahunche hue the....

luggage transference ka tention toh tha nahi kyunki pichle saal aaye wo sabhi without luggage hi the aur unki saari zarooraton aur luxury ka saaman unhe wahin unke ABODES me available kara diya gaya tha aur is saal kyunki ye teeno SAVENTS STELLARS the, isiliye is baar bhi unke saath kuch aisa hi hone waala tha,infact pichle PHASE se bhi behtar stay hone waali thi un sab ki is PHASE me...

khair,jin teen logon ne in sab ko greet kiya tha,unhe ye sab halke shock me dekh rahe the aur iski wajah thi un teeno ka appearence...

lagbhag 4 feet lambe the wo teeno..

chehra halka patla,naak andar dabi hui, aankhen kaafi badi aur honth utne hi patle..lambi gardan aur sabse weird tha un teeno ka face complexion jo ki halka halka hara tha..

filhal wo teeno hi smile paas kar rahe the jisse unke daanth dikh rahe the jo ki behad sharp lag rahe the.....

dekh kar bataya nahi jaa sakta tha ki ye teeno male catagory me aate the yaa fir female....


body teeno ki ekdum same thi..naa moti naa thin...aur us body par ek purple lambi si dress thi jo unke shoulders se lekar niche pairon tak jaati thi..

dekh kar lag raha tha jaise ki ye unka uniform tha....

aisa kuch unsab ne pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha toh aise me hairani toh banti hi thi..

khair,un sab ka khudko yun ghurte hue pakar bhi un teeno ki smile gayab nahi hui infact kuch der rook kar un teeno ne ek baar firse sabhi ko greet kiya jisse sun....

FLORIN-hello....aap log kaun hain.???

ALFREEN-arre pops ye pucho ki aap log kya hain...???


ALFREEN ki baat sun MARIA ne usse aankh dikhayi maano keh rahi ho ki aise nahi bolte par tabhi...


UNKNOWN-hum ELUSORIES hain aur aap teeno families ke SLAVES....

MAHI-ELUSORIES...!!!matlab MAYAVI JEEV.....

ELUSORY-jee..hum pichle 25 thousand saal se PHASE 2 ke STELLAR group ke families ki dekhbhaal kar rahe hain...


smile ke saath ek ELUSORY ne apni baat kahi jisse sun sabhi hairan ho gaye....

FLORIN-25 thousand saal se...!!!

ELUSORY-jee....

MAHI-arre ye mayavi jeev hain.. isiliye they dont age...

ELUSORY-kya aap log apne apne ABODES me chalne ke liye ready hain....

SAB-yaa....


sabke sehmati milte hi teeno ELUSORIES ne apne apne haath aage kiye aur unke aisa karte hi us gallery me ek ke baad ek line se teen transparent plastic ki bani lambi vehicles prakat hui....

in vehicles me chakke nahi the aur ye zamin se kuch inch hawa me rooke hue the...

4 seaters ki jagah liye dikhne me bhi kaafi khubsoorat the ye vehicles....


1st ELUSORY-inhe yahan CHARIOTS kehte hain...ye aapki transportation hai....aayiye,baithiye....

waise mai MISS MAHI ki SLAVE hun aur ye left corner ki CHARIOT aapki hai..

2nd ELUSORY-mai MISS ALFREEN and family ki SLAVE hun aur ye beech waali CHARIOT aapki hai...

3rd ELUSORY-mai miss MABEL aur unke parents MR & MRS FELLAR ki SLAVE hun aur ye right corner ki CHARIOT aapki hai...


MR & MRS FELLAR.....alag alag bolun toh MR FELLAR aur unki patni MRS GRACE jo ki MABEL ke parents the....

ye family thi ENERWET naam ke planet se aur ye bhi wahan ki royal families me se ek thi...

FLORIN aur MARIA se inki mulakat SWEEP-STAKE competition ke waqt ho chuki thi...

intro abhi isiliye hua kyunki inka role ab hoga...


khair, ELUSORIES ke batane ke mutabik sabhi apne apne CHARIOTS me baith gaye aur aisa hote hi wo teeno CHARIOTS ek normal speed me aage badh gaye...

CHARIOTS ke aage badhte hi teeno ELUSORIES bhi un CHARIOTS ki hi tarah halke hawa me uthe hue unke piche ho liye the....

jaisa ki scene ke start me bataya gaya tha ki filhal wo sabhi ek gallery me the....

ye ek 20 feet chowdi gallery thi jo ki kareeb 100 metres tak lambi thi..

ye tha wo raasta jo PHASE 2 se connect hota tha...maamuli speed se badhte hue teeno CHARIOTS kuch hi der me us gallery ko cross kar gaye aur jab aisa hua toh..


AMAZING....


ye shabd sabhi ke mooh se ek saath nikla tha..

reason...


sabhi PHASE 2 ki duniya ke andar jo aa gaye the jiska nazara wakayi amazing tha...

jahan kuch waqt pehle gallery me sirf wo sab hi the wahin ab jahan wo the wahan unhe door door tak kaafi saare log dikh rahe the....

saath hi jaisa ki WHIZZ ne bataya tha,ye puri jagah apne aap me hi ek shahar ki tarah thi...

dheere dheere aage badhti hui sabhi ki chariots se jhaankte hue sab dekh rahe the,bohot hi khubsoorat aur different varieties ki buildings, BRIGHT ASPHALT jaisi lagne waali material se bani hui road jo kisi chamakdar marble floor se kam nahi lag rahi thi...

un buildings ke upar uski pehchaan bhi likhi hui thi jisse dekh sabhi hairan bhi the aur khush bhi..


FASHIONABLE PUBS, PREMIUM AIR ROOFTOP BAR,COOL HAPPENING CLUBS AND DISCOS, BANQUET HALLS,MALLS,FOOD COURTS,HOTELS JINHE 5 ya fir 7 STAR kehna unki bezzaiti hogi,in sabse aur inke saath aur bhi behatarin jagahon se bhara hua tha PHASE 2.....

ALFREEN, MABEL ki family aur MAHI dekh rahe the ki unke jaisi hi vehicle ya fir ye kahen ki chariot jaisi hi aur bhi kayi gaadiyan jinki ginti saikdon me thi,us pure area me ghoom rahi thi...


ALFREEN-jab WHIZZ ne PHASE 2 aur uske look,design ke baare me bataya tha tab bhi maine is jagah ko aise imagine nahi kiya tha...

this place looks crazy man....

FLORIN-haan wo toh hai par mujhe ye samajh me nahi aa raha hai ki achanak itne saare log kaise aa gaye...

i mean PHASE one me toh kuch 22 SAVENTS ke aaspaas ki strength thi,aur mujhe lagta hai ki tumse pehle waali batch ki bhi strength tumse bohot zyada nahi hogi toh fir itne saare log kahan se aa gaye...???


jis vehicle me ye sab baithe the,wo transparent toh thi hi par saath hi uske chalne se awaaz bhi behad kam hi aa rahi thi aur isiliye FLORIN ki baat baaki dono vehicles me baithe MABEL,uske parents aur MAHI ne bhi suni jinke man bhi same sawal chal raha tha aur tabhi...


ELUSORY 1-logon ki taadad isiliye zyada hai kyunki is jagah par sirf current SAVENTS aur unke parents nahi rehte balki pichle kayi batches me padhe hue SAVENTS ke parents rehte hain...

ELUSORY 2-aur wo purane SAVENTS jinhe un groups me nahi chuna gaya jo PHASE 3 ke baad activate hota hai,wo bhi yahin rehte hain...

ELUSORY 3-PHASE 3 me aise kayi SAVENTS hote hain jinki performance up to tha mark nahi hoti...aise me agar wo SAVENT chahe toh wo PHASE repeat kar sakta hai..

itna hi nahi,agar ek PHASE 2 ya 3 ka SAVENT chahe toh apne base ko jo ki PHASE 2 me hi hota hai,usse aur strong karne ke liye wo
dobara PHASE 2 me padh sakta hai...

aur wo bhi jitni baar chaahe,ye procedure wo repeat kar sakta hai...

ye jitne bhi malls,clubs,pubs aur baaki ki royal places aap dekh rahe hain,ye unki hai jinhone kabhi apne PHASE me acha perform kiya tha....

is nayi baat ya fir ye kahun ki is naye khulase ko sunkar sabhi bohot hairan hue...

aur yunhi saari jagahon ko check out karte karte sabhi ek poshe colony ek andar daakhil hue jiske entrace me laga gate automatic tha jo ki teeno ELUSORY ko sense karte hi khul gaya tha aur aisa hote hi teeno CHARIOTS us gate se hote hue andar daakhil hue aur jab aisa hua toh...

WOW.....

sabhi ke mooh se ye shabd ek saath nikla...

reason.....

view hi kuch aisa tha...

do hisso me bata hua tha us colony ka road jiske beech ek MAGICAL FOUNTAIN beh rahi thi....

is fountain ka paani sirf upar ki taraf hi nahi ucchal raha tha balki ek moti si parat banaye hue us paani ne ek water divider ka shape liya hua tha jo bina kisi daayre ke baawjud apni seema me lagatar flow kar rahi thi...

itna hi nahi,wo pura colony behatarin bunglows se ghira hua tha jinka daayra bhi kaafi bada tha....

ek se ek rang birange show plants jinki hieght kisi bade se ped jitni thi,wo us pure area me lagi hui thi..

apne apne CHARIOTS me aage badhte hue hamare kahani ke kirdar dekh rahe the ek circle ke roop me bada sa garden jisme alag alag activities karne ke liye equipments bhi lage hue the...

inhe saari chizon wo sab check out kar hi rahe the ki tabhi un sabki CHARIOTS ek jagah par aakar rook gayi jiske baad....


ELUSORY 1- we have reached aur destination....agle do saalon ke liye aap sabke ABODES ye rahenge...

apne saamne aur baaki sabke right me point karte hue us ELUSORY ne ye baat kahi jisse sun jab sabhi point kiye hue jagah ki taraf mude toh ek baar firse happily surprised ho gaye....

reason...

unke saamne ek ke baad ek teen bunglows the....

har bunglow ka daayra lagbhag 1 acre ka tha....

in bunglows ki bhi gate entry automatic thi....

ek triplex buglow jisme 12 rooms 3 halls,ek party lounge,50 cars storage jitna bada garage, swimming pools jisme se ek outdoor tha aur dusra bana tha bunglow ke andar second floor par jo ki indoor heated swimming pool tha....

aur bhi bohot kuch tha un bunglows me jo ki ab in sabke agle do PHASE ka thikana hone waala tha...

ek dusre se ek baar mil sabhi apne apne CHARIOT me baith chal pade apne naye ashiyane ke andar is baat se anjaan ki jis PHASE aur jis nayi zindagi ko dekh wo sab excited ho rahe the,wo zindagi bohot kuch badalne waali thi...





PLANET-ZEAL


PLACE-CAVERN




FLASHBACK:-(WHY RAAZ???)



YE MAI KAHAN AA GAYA...!!!!AUR THODI DER PEHLE KYA HUA THA MERE SAATH...????

MAI TOH US GUFA ME THA AUR US ROSHNI KI TARAF HAATH BADHAYA THA MAINE JISPAR MERE HAATHON PAR KISI CHIZ KA SPARSH HUA THA...(SWORD)

AUR FIR ACHANAK MERE DIMAG ME EK SAATH HI DO DO CHALCHITRA CHALNE LAGE THE....

EK TOH MERI HI ZINDAGI KE PAL THE PAR WO DUSRA CHACHITRA KYA THA...!!!!

AUR USSE DEKHTE WAQT MUJHE AISA KYUN LAGA JAISE MAI US DRISHYA SE JUDA HUA HUN....!!!!

AUR AB ACHANAK YE ANDHERI JAGAH....YE KAHAN SE AA GAYI....!!YE HO KYA RAHA HAI MERE SAATH...!!!!


apne aap me budbudata hua VIKRAM us ghane andhere me chaaron taraf apni nazaren ghuma raha tha par us kaale syah andhere me toh usse khud ka haath tak nahi dikh raha tha toh aisa me kuch aur dekh paana naamukin hi tha....

khair,jab kuch samajh me hi nahi aaya toh VIKRAM ne andhere me hi apne pair aage badhane ke baare me socha aur is soch ko liye usne apna ek pair aage badhaya hi tha ki tabhi....

VIKRAM ke just samne ek roshni ne janm liya aur dekhte hi dekhte us roshni ki prachandta itni badh gayi ki wo pura area chamak utha...

roshni ke yun achanak tez hone se kuch palo ke liye VIKRAM ki aankhen band ho gayi par jab uski aankhen khuli toh wo hairan ho gaya...

reason....

uske thik saamne ek bohot hi khubsurat SWORD zamin par dhasi hui thi aur ussi sword se ye roshni nikal rahi thi jisse pura drishya dikhne laga tha...

kuch palon ta SWORD ko dekhte rehne ke baad VIKRAM ki nazar sab taraf ghumi aur tab usne dekha ki wo ek bade se maidan jaisi jagah par hai jiska koi anth tak nahi dikh raha tha....

wo ye sab dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi....


SWAGAT HAI VIKRAM...PAR KEHNA PADEGA,TUMHARE RAICHAITAON NE BOHOT INTAZAR KARWAYA MUJHE....


ek awaaz gunji VIKRAM ke kaano me jo uske saamne se aayi thi jispar jab uski nazar saamne gayi toh usne dekha ki wahan ek aakruti banane lagi thi aur dekhte hi dekhte us aakruti ne ek shadow form le liya tha jisse dekh...


VIKRAM-tum????aakhir ho kaun tum..abhi kuch der pehle mere mastishk me tumhari koi kahani ghum rahi thi...

maine tumhe pehle kabhi nahi dekha hai,par pata nahi kyun,tumhe dekhte hi mujhe krodh aa raha hai..

aisa lag raha hai jaise tum mere shatru ho....!!!!!

UNKNOWN-VIDEOUS...VIDEOUS kehte hain mujhe...aur mai tumhara shatru hun nahi,par haan agar tum us laayak hue,toh ban zaroor jaaunga...

VIKRAM-mai samjh nahi....

VIDEOUS-sab samajh jaaoge par sab samajhne ke liye pehle tumhe apni kaabiliyat dikhani hogi...

ye jo SWORD tumhare saamne gadi hui hai,tumhe isse uthana hai aur fir iske zariye jo dikhaya jaaye, wo kaam karna hai..

agar tumne kar diya,toh tumhe mere baare me,apne baare me,sab kuch pata chal jaayega..


VIDEOUS ki baat sun VIKRAM ne thodi der tak socha aur fir...

VIKRAM-mai taiyar hun...


ye bol usne haath aage badhaya aur apne saamne gade SWORD ko utha liya...

uske aisa karte hi SWORD me halki vibrations hui jisse VIKRAM bhi halka tharthara gaya....


VIDEOUS-bohot ache...apne daayen dekho...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun jab VIKRAM ne apni gardan apne daayen taraf ghumayi toh usse ek baar fir jhatka laga...

reason....

is waqt uske saamne uske pitah,maata,wo bhai jisse usne kuch der pehle hi maara tha,wo aur saath hi wo ladki baithi hui thi jiski kuch der pehle uske bhai ne badsuluki kar hatya kar di thi...

VIKRAM bade aascharya se un sabko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...


VIDEOUS-toh tumhe karna ye hai ki jo talwar tumne pakdi hai,usse tumhe in sabko maar dena hai...

VIKRAM-kya!!!!ye sambhav nahi hai....!!!mai aisa kabhi nahi karunga...


ye bol VIKRAM ne talwar phenkne ki koshish ki par ye kya,talwar uske hathon me jaise chipak si gayi thi....


VIDEOUS-tum piche nahi hath sakte..jis waqt tumne gufa me kadam rakha,tum is pariksha ko dene ke liye baadhya ho chuke the...

waise mai tumhe bata dun ki ye log asli nahi ha,mayavi hain...aur jo karne ko kaha gaya hai,wo tumhari pariksha hai..

tumhari yogyata ki pratiksha...inhe maaro aur mera aur apna sach jaan lo...

ek baat aur hai....

pehli...bhale hi ye log mayavi hain,nakli hain par inhe maarte waqt tumhari bhaavnaaye asli honi chahiye..

tumhe apne man se inpar waar karna hai... kyunki agar aisa nahi hua toh tum is pariksha me viphal ho jaaoge aur agar aisa hua toh tumhe marna padega aur tumhare saath maregi tunhari ye duniya...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun VIKRAM bohot chownka..

man se waar karna wo bhi apne parivaar par aur saath hi us ladki par jisse usse prem tha,uske liye asambhav tha aur agar wo ye nahi karega toh uske saath saath uski puri duniya khatm ho jaane waali thi......

wo gehre asamanjas ki sthithi me fasa ye sab soch hi raha tha ki....


VIDEOUS-itna bhi mushkil nahi hai jitna tum soch rahe ho...tumhe bas kuch palon ke liye ek nakatarmak charitra ki chaadar ko odhna hai..bas..

waise bhi,tumhare ghar walon ne sabke saath galat hi kiya hai,toh un galtiyon aur gunahon ko yaad tum apne krodh ko hawa de sakte ho..

aur rahi baat is ladki ki, toh bas kuch shan ke liye uske prati nakaratmak hona kaun si badi baat hai...

VIDEOUS ki baat sun VIKRAM ne kuch pal socha...waise bhi uske paas aur koi option toh tha nahi aur isiliye usne apni aakhen band kar apne dimag aur dil ko apne parivaar aur us ladki ke prati nakaratmak karna shuru kiya...

VIKRAM ki iccha shakti gazab ki thi...wo kisi bhi paristhithi me khud ko dhaalna bohot achi tarah se jaanta tha aur isiliye is pariskha ke zaroorat me aane waali sthithi me bhi wo kuch hi palon me dhal gaya aur isiliye....

nakaratmakta se paripurn VIKRAM ne apni aankhen kholi aur


SOOBH....

line me sabse pehle VIKRAM ke pitah the...

unke hi gardan par VIKRAM ne talwar chalayi par talwar ki dhaar itni zyada thi ki wo ek ke baad ek wahan baithe sabhi logon ki gardan ko makhan ki tarah kaatthe hue nikal gayi...

aur aisa hoti hi...

VIKRAM ke SWORD me tez vibrations hone lage..sirf SWORD me hi nahi balki,jahan wo khada tha,wahan aur saath saath pura ZEAL PLANET hilne laga jisse dekh...


VIKRAM-ye kya ho raha hai...???

VIDEOUS-murkh...waar karne se pehle tune apne dimag ko aur hriday ko toh mana liya par teri aatma ka kya...???

wo toh apni hi karegi naa...uspar tera zor nahi..uski soch aur uska faisla ghatnaon ke hisaab se nahi badalta...

tera faisla aur teri SOUL ka faisla alag nikla aur isiliye tu ye chunouti haar gaya ya fir ye kahun ki...


VIDEOUS ne upar aasman ki taraf dekha aur.....

VIDEOUS-aap dono apni pehli kohish me haar gaye aur mai jeet gaya....

VIDEOUS ke itna kehte hi SWORD se ek ray nikli aur sidhe VIKRAM par padi jiske baad VIKRAM ek pal me hi jal kar raakh ho gaya wahin ZEAL ki vibrations bhi ab bohot tez ho gaye the jiske baad dekhte hi dekhte pura PLANET us quake me dab kar khatm ho gaya....

bacha sirf CAVERN aur us CAVERN ke andar moujud SWORD ki AURA jo ab us pure dead PLANET me fail chuka tha....

wahin kuch der pehle jab VIKRAM jal kar raakh hua toh uski raakh se ek jyoti nikal upar aasman me uththi chali gayi aur pahunchi...




PLACE-HEAVEN



YE SAB KYA THA...???KAISE HO GAYA YE....!!!!AAP DONO KA ANSH ITNI ASAANI SE HAAR GAYA...

HAARA TOH HAARA,APNE SAATH SAATH USNE USKE PURE PLANET KO BHI KHATM KAR DIYA....

AUR AAP DONO,BAS CHUPCHAAP YE TABAHI DEKHTE RAHE....


VIKRAM aur ZEAL ke saath jo hua,usse hazam nahi kar paa rahe the AVANTIKA aur ALESENDRA...

aur hazam karna asaan tha bhi nahi...ye dusri baar tha jab VIDEOUS unke husbands se jeeta tha...

aur is jeet ne najaane kitne begunaahon ki jaan le li thi..

aur isiliye hi ek ke baad ek kayi sawal puch daale AVANTIKA ne VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS se jo bas chupchaap ek jagah par baithe hue the aur tabhi....

ZEAL ke VIKRAM ki jyot heaven me pravesh kar gayi aur aage badhte hue us jyot ka ek bhaag VIKRAM me aur dusra ASMODEUS ke andar chala gaya..

par ab bhi VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS chup hi the jisse dekh...


AVANTIKA-aapse kuch pucha hai humne...???

VIKRAM-jo hua,usme naa toh hamara ansh kuch kar sakta tha aur naahi hum dono....

kyunki VIDEOUS ne jo kuch bhi kiya,wo SWORD ke zariye kiya jisse mai tab tak samajh nahi sakta tha jab tak VIKRAM us SWORD ka sparsh naa karle...

par jab VIKRAM ne us SWORD ka sparsh kiya toh us waqt SWORD se ek barrier nikal pure ZEAL planet me fail gayi jisse agar mai bhed bhi leta toh bhi pura Planet khatm ho jaata....


VIKRAM ki baat wahan moujud sabhi sun rahe the..

sabhi ka matlab hai ALESENDRA aur AVANTIKA toh the hi par saath hi RONIT, ANJALI, DEFENDER, BEELZEBUB, AKSHAANT, SHAILA, MOKALSAR wahan moujud the...

aur jaise hi VIKRAM ne apni baat puri ki toh...


RONIT-mujhe ek baat samajh me nahi aa rahi ki VIDEOUS ki us ajeeb si chunouti ka matlab kya tha...???

waisi chunouti dekar aakhir wo saabit kya karna chahta hai....???

ASMODEUS-wo hume ek messege dena chahta tha aur usne wo de diya..

SAB-messege...!!! kaisa messege....????

VIKRAM-yahi ki jo hum dono bhaiyon ki shakti hai,jo hamara kartavya hai,ya fir sahi shabd ko chunu toh jo hum dono ka ATTITUDE hai,uski wajah se is baar ki hi tarah hum hamesha haarenge....


VIKRAM ki baat sun sabhi behad hairan hue...unhe uski baat samajh me toh nahi aayi par itna andaza ho
unhe ho chuka tha ki baat bohot gehri hai...


ANJALI-hum samjhe nahi V.J...!!!

VIKRAM- itne varshon tak VIDEOUS ne SWORD se bas apni urja hi nahi nikali thi,balki SWORD ke jis bhaag par uski URJA ghussi thi,us bhaag me usne ek alag hi magic use kiya aur ussi magic ke asar ki wajah jo VIKRAM maara gaya...

BEELZEBUB-alag MAGIC...???wo kya Lord...???

VIKRAM-VIPRAYI NAMYATE....


ye ek bohot hi taakatwar spell hai jisse har koi istemal nahi kar sakta..aur agar kar bhi le toh bhi isse puri tarah use me nahi laaya ja sakta aur isiliye hi is SPELL ke baare me kisi SPELL BOOK me likha nahi gaya...

ALESENDRA-par is SPELL me hota kya hai...???aur isme aisa kya hai jiski wajah se iske baare me likha nahi gaya hai....

ASMODEUS-ye SPELL ATTITUDE aur CHARACTER ko change karne ke liye use me laaya jaata hai..

ATTITUDE aur CHARACTER..do aise bhaav jo har kisi ke maansik jasbaaton se jude hote hain..

ek tarah se ye dono hi bhaav kisi bhi vyakti ki aatma se SOUL se mile hue hote hain...

par is SPELL se in dono bhaavon me parivartan laaya jaa sakta hai..

par kyunki ye dono bhaavna SOUL se judi hoti hai,wo SOUL jo immortal hota hai, isiliye usse twist karna,ghumana,alter karna lagbhag naamumkin hota hai...

ye kaam tyag mangta hai..khudka tyag...saath hi isse istemal karne waala bohot zyada shaktishaali hona chahiye..

agar koi shaktishaali shaksh is spell ko kisi aur par istamal karna chahta ho toh usse apne SOUL ki kurbaani deni padti hai...

issi tyag se ye spell activate hota hai.. isiliye hi is SPELL ke use ko varjit kar diya gaya tha..

VIKRAM-par VIDEOUS ke liye is SPELL ko use me laana aur is naamukin kaam ko anjaam dena aur wo bhi bina kurbaani diye, bohot asaan ho gaya tha...

aur wo isiliye kyunki SWORD ke uske andar ghusse rehne ki wajah se uska SOUL aur uski zindagi uski hokar bhi uski nahi thi balki SWORD ki thi..

aur ye situation uske liye us spell ko use me laane ke liye best thi..

RONIT-acha.... isiliye usne us din us SWORD ko nikalne se mana kar diya tha..taaki wo apne aage ka kaam kar sake...

VIKRAM-hmm.... kyunki us SWORD ne VIDEOUS ko pehle hi haani pahuncha di thi isiliye wo SWORD uska kabhi nahi ho sakta tha...

usse ye bhi maalum tha ki bhavishya me bhale hi wo kitna hi taakatwar yun naa ban jaaye par tab bhi agar koi usse haani pahuncha sakta hai toh wo wahi SWORD haj jiska der sawer koi naa koi naya dhaarak toh banega hi..

usse ye bhi pata tha ki wo dhaarak hum dono bhaaiyon ka hi ansh hoga jisme sirf humari shaktiyon hi nahi hongi balki hamare gun bhi honge aur yahin wo khel khel gaya..

usne SWORD me aise alterations kare jisse humare jaisa koi bhi uska dhaarak banane ke laayak rahe hi nahi...

aur isiliye hi VIKRAM bach nahi paaya....

ALESENDRA-ye VIDEOUS ki soch toh wakayi aap dono ke jaisi hi hai...kitne aage ki planning kar rakhi thi isne...

ASMODEUS-thi nahi hai...isne aage ke liye bhi naa sirf yojna bana rakhi hai balki usne us yojna par kaam bhi kar liya hai...

AVANTIKA-ab aur kya kar diya hai usne...????

ASMODEUS-ye toh aap sabko pata hai ki har living PLANET ek dusre se ek invisible branch ke sahare jude hue hote hain..

aur is judaw ka mukhya kendra EARTH hai...

(first part me iske baare me bataya gaya hai...)

VIDEOUS ne apne urja ko ussi invisible branch ke saath milkar khudko is BRAMHAAND ke jar living planet ke root ke saath,uske zamin ke saath jod liya hai...

taaki jab kabhi bhi bhavishya me uska koi pratidwandi janm le toh wo uske baare me naa sirf pehle se jaan sake balki usne paida hote hi wo usse maar de...


(yahi tha wo reason jiski wajah se RAAZ ke janm ke waqt uski body tab tak hawa me hi rahi jab tak uski saari urja,uski shakti usse alag nahi ho gayi..aur isiliye hi WOOGER ne RAAZ ke CONSCIOUS brain ko uske CHOSENS ki dharti par pair rakhne se pehle hi wahan ke environment me faila diya tha kyunki VIDEOUS ki khaas nazar CHOSENS ke har SAVENT aur unki gatividhiyon par hamesha hi rahi hai)


aadhi baat toh sab samajh gaye the par thodi aur sabse important baat jo ki is kahani ka future decide karne waali thi,wo bachi thi aur ussike baare me janane ke liye...


ALESENDRA-par us SWORD ko toh sirf aap dono ka hi ansh utha sakta hai....???fir aise me aage kya hoga..??

kya VIDEOUS kabhi khatm nahi hoga...????


ALESENDRA ki baat sun VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ne ek dusre ko dekha aur muskura diye aur jaise hi ye muskurahat un dono ke chehron par aayi,wahan khade sabhike aankhen badi ho gayi...

reason...

kyunki sabhi jaante the ki wo smile jo us waqt un dono bhaiyon ke chehron par thi,wo smile aage hone waali puri kahani ki roop rekha thi...

aur isiliye...


ASMODEUS-aapne hamari baat dhyan se nahi suni....humne kaha ki us spell ke prabhav se hamare jaisa koi uska dhaarak nahi ban sakta...

par ye zaroori toh nahi ki hamara ansh hamare jaisa hi ho...!!!

SAB-matlab...???

VIKRAM-HERO....ek aisa shabd jisse jude bande ke dil me manushya jaati aur baaki living beings ke liye hamdardi hoti hai...

pyar hota hai....bhaavnaayen hoti hain..jo sahi ke saath sahi aur galat ke saath galat karne ki jurrat aur taakat rakhta hai..

in short,hum dono bhaiyon ka pratibimbh....

samajhne waali baat ye hai ki har kahani me ek HERO hota hai ya fir ek ANTI HERO jo us kahani ko uske anjaam tak le jaata hai...

par ye kahani alag hai.. bohot alag..kyunki is kahani me "HERO" ya "ANTI HERO".....

in do shabdon ki koi jagah hi nahi hai...

is kahani ko kisi aise ki zaroorat hai jiske liye uske lakshya se zyada aur kuch bhi important naa ho...

bhale hi us lakshya ko haasil karne ke liye usse maasumo aur begunaahon ki bali hi kyun naa deni pade,usse us baat se koi fark naa pade..

rehemdili,pyar jaise shabdon aur inke bhaavon se usse koi matlab naa ho...

bhale hi wo chalaki ke maamle me VIDEOUS jitna hi shaatir ho,par matlabparasti aur kaminepan me wo VIDEOUS ka bhi baap ho....


aur isiliye aisa pehli baar hoga jab kisi kahani ko uske ANJAAM tak pahunchane waala banda koi HERO nahi hoga,wo hoga....


EK VILLAIN......
(RAAZ)









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....








AAPKA APNA V...J.....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF FIRST PHASE KHATM HO CHUKA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE SWORD HAASIL KAR LI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-52



PLANET-CHOSENS


PLACE-PHASE 2





WELCOME MASTERS & MISTRESS....



ek saath teen logon ke mooh se ye greetings nikli thi...

reason....

MAHI, ALFREEN,MABEL aur unke PARENTS is waqt CHOSENS ke PHASE 2 gate ke gallery me khade the...

first PHASE khatm hue aaj ek hafta ho chuka tha aur aaj wo din tha jab pichle saal ke FIRST PHASE ke SAVENTS aur unke parents ko second PHASE me shift hona tha aur issi liye wo sab yahan pahunche hue the....

luggage transference ka tention toh tha nahi kyunki pichle saal aaye wo sabhi without luggage hi the aur unki saari zarooraton aur luxury ka saaman unhe wahin unke ABODES me available kara diya gaya tha aur is saal kyunki ye teeno SAVENTS STELLARS the, isiliye is baar bhi unke saath kuch aisa hi hone waala tha,infact pichle PHASE se bhi behtar stay hone waali thi un sab ki is PHASE me...

khair,jin teen logon ne in sab ko greet kiya tha,unhe ye sab halke shock me dekh rahe the aur iski wajah thi un teeno ka appearence...

lagbhag 4 feet lambe the wo teeno..

chehra halka patla,naak andar dabi hui, aankhen kaafi badi aur honth utne hi patle..lambi gardan aur sabse weird tha un teeno ka face complexion jo ki halka halka hara tha..

filhal wo teeno hi smile paas kar rahe the jisse unke daanth dikh rahe the jo ki behad sharp lag rahe the.....

dekh kar bataya nahi jaa sakta tha ki ye teeno male catagory me aate the yaa fir female....


body teeno ki ekdum same thi..naa moti naa thin...aur us body par ek purple lambi si dress thi jo unke shoulders se lekar niche pairon tak jaati thi..

dekh kar lag raha tha jaise ki ye unka uniform tha....

aisa kuch unsab ne pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha toh aise me hairani toh banti hi thi..

khair,un sab ka khudko yun ghurte hue pakar bhi un teeno ki smile gayab nahi hui infact kuch der rook kar un teeno ne ek baar firse sabhi ko greet kiya jisse sun....

FLORIN-hello....aap log kaun hain.???

ALFREEN-arre pops ye pucho ki aap log kya hain...???


ALFREEN ki baat sun MARIA ne usse aankh dikhayi maano keh rahi ho ki aise nahi bolte par tabhi...


UNKNOWN-hum ELUSORIES hain aur aap teeno families ke SLAVES....

MAHI-ELUSORIES...!!!matlab MAYAVI JEEV.....

ELUSORY-jee..hum pichle 25 thousand saal se PHASE 2 ke STELLAR group ke families ki dekhbhaal kar rahe hain...


smile ke saath ek ELUSORY ne apni baat kahi jisse sun sabhi hairan ho gaye....

FLORIN-25 thousand saal se...!!!

ELUSORY-jee....

MAHI-arre ye mayavi jeev hain.. isiliye they dont age...

ELUSORY-kya aap log apne apne ABODES me chalne ke liye ready hain....

SAB-yaa....


sabke sehmati milte hi teeno ELUSORIES ne apne apne haath aage kiye aur unke aisa karte hi us gallery me ek ke baad ek line se teen transparent plastic ki bani lambi vehicles prakat hui....

in vehicles me chakke nahi the aur ye zamin se kuch inch hawa me rooke hue the...

4 seaters ki jagah liye dikhne me bhi kaafi khubsoorat the ye vehicles....


1st ELUSORY-inhe yahan CHARIOTS kehte hain...ye aapki transportation hai....aayiye,baithiye....

waise mai MISS MAHI ki SLAVE hun aur ye left corner ki CHARIOT aapki hai..

2nd ELUSORY-mai MISS ALFREEN and family ki SLAVE hun aur ye beech waali CHARIOT aapki hai...

3rd ELUSORY-mai miss MABEL aur unke parents MR & MRS FELLAR ki SLAVE hun aur ye right corner ki CHARIOT aapki hai...


MR & MRS FELLAR.....alag alag bolun toh MR FELLAR aur unki patni MRS GRACE jo ki MABEL ke parents the....

ye family thi ENERWET naam ke planet se aur ye bhi wahan ki royal families me se ek thi...

FLORIN aur MARIA se inki mulakat SWEEP-STAKE competition ke waqt ho chuki thi...

intro abhi isiliye hua kyunki inka role ab hoga...


khair, ELUSORIES ke batane ke mutabik sabhi apne apne CHARIOTS me baith gaye aur aisa hote hi wo teeno CHARIOTS ek normal speed me aage badh gaye...

CHARIOTS ke aage badhte hi teeno ELUSORIES bhi un CHARIOTS ki hi tarah halke hawa me uthe hue unke piche ho liye the....

jaisa ki scene ke start me bataya gaya tha ki filhal wo sabhi ek gallery me the....

ye ek 20 feet chowdi gallery thi jo ki kareeb 100 metres tak lambi thi..

ye tha wo raasta jo PHASE 2 se connect hota tha...maamuli speed se badhte hue teeno CHARIOTS kuch hi der me us gallery ko cross kar gaye aur jab aisa hua toh..


AMAZING....


ye shabd sabhi ke mooh se ek saath nikla tha..

reason...


sabhi PHASE 2 ki duniya ke andar jo aa gaye the jiska nazara wakayi amazing tha...

jahan kuch waqt pehle gallery me sirf wo sab hi the wahin ab jahan wo the wahan unhe door door tak kaafi saare log dikh rahe the....

saath hi jaisa ki WHIZZ ne bataya tha,ye puri jagah apne aap me hi ek shahar ki tarah thi...

dheere dheere aage badhti hui sabhi ki chariots se jhaankte hue sab dekh rahe the,bohot hi khubsoorat aur different varieties ki buildings, BRIGHT ASPHALT jaisi lagne waali material se bani hui road jo kisi chamakdar marble floor se kam nahi lag rahi thi...

un buildings ke upar uski pehchaan bhi likhi hui thi jisse dekh sabhi hairan bhi the aur khush bhi..


FASHIONABLE PUBS, PREMIUM AIR ROOFTOP BAR,COOL HAPPENING CLUBS AND DISCOS, BANQUET HALLS,MALLS,FOOD COURTS,HOTELS JINHE 5 ya fir 7 STAR kehna unki bezzaiti hogi,in sabse aur inke saath aur bhi behatarin jagahon se bhara hua tha PHASE 2.....

ALFREEN, MABEL ki family aur MAHI dekh rahe the ki unke jaisi hi vehicle ya fir ye kahen ki chariot jaisi hi aur bhi kayi gaadiyan jinki ginti saikdon me thi,us pure area me ghoom rahi thi...


ALFREEN-jab WHIZZ ne PHASE 2 aur uske look,design ke baare me bataya tha tab bhi maine is jagah ko aise imagine nahi kiya tha...

this place looks crazy man....

FLORIN-haan wo toh hai par mujhe ye samajh me nahi aa raha hai ki achanak itne saare log kaise aa gaye...

i mean PHASE one me toh kuch 22 SAVENTS ke aaspaas ki strength thi,aur mujhe lagta hai ki tumse pehle waali batch ki bhi strength tumse bohot zyada nahi hogi toh fir itne saare log kahan se aa gaye...???


jis vehicle me ye sab baithe the,wo transparent toh thi hi par saath hi uske chalne se awaaz bhi behad kam hi aa rahi thi aur isiliye FLORIN ki baat baaki dono vehicles me baithe MABEL,uske parents aur MAHI ne bhi suni jinke man bhi same sawal chal raha tha aur tabhi...


ELUSORY 1-logon ki taadad isiliye zyada hai kyunki is jagah par sirf current SAVENTS aur unke parents nahi rehte balki pichle kayi batches me padhe hue SAVENTS ke parents rehte hain...

ELUSORY 2-aur wo purane SAVENTS jinhe un groups me nahi chuna gaya jo PHASE 3 ke baad activate hota hai,wo bhi yahin rehte hain...

ELUSORY 3-PHASE 3 me aise kayi SAVENTS hote hain jinki performance up to tha mark nahi hoti...aise me agar wo SAVENT chahe toh wo PHASE repeat kar sakta hai..

itna hi nahi,agar ek PHASE 2 ya 3 ka SAVENT chahe toh apne base ko jo ki PHASE 2 me hi hota hai,usse aur strong karne ke liye wo
dobara PHASE 2 me padh sakta hai...

aur wo bhi jitni baar chaahe,ye procedure wo repeat kar sakta hai...

ye jitne bhi malls,clubs,pubs aur baaki ki royal places aap dekh rahe hain,ye unki hai jinhone kabhi apne PHASE me acha perform kiya tha....

is nayi baat ya fir ye kahun ki is naye khulase ko sunkar sabhi bohot hairan hue...

aur yunhi saari jagahon ko check out karte karte sabhi ek poshe colony ek andar daakhil hue jiske entrace me laga gate automatic tha jo ki teeno ELUSORY ko sense karte hi khul gaya tha aur aisa hote hi teeno CHARIOTS us gate se hote hue andar daakhil hue aur jab aisa hua toh...

WOW.....

sabhi ke mooh se ye shabd ek saath nikla...

reason.....

view hi kuch aisa tha...

do hisso me bata hua tha us colony ka road jiske beech ek MAGICAL FOUNTAIN beh rahi thi....

is fountain ka paani sirf upar ki taraf hi nahi ucchal raha tha balki ek moti si parat banaye hue us paani ne ek water divider ka shape liya hua tha jo bina kisi daayre ke baawjud apni seema me lagatar flow kar rahi thi...

itna hi nahi,wo pura colony behatarin bunglows se ghira hua tha jinka daayra bhi kaafi bada tha....

ek se ek rang birange show plants jinki hieght kisi bade se ped jitni thi,wo us pure area me lagi hui thi..

apne apne CHARIOTS me aage badhte hue hamare kahani ke kirdar dekh rahe the ek circle ke roop me bada sa garden jisme alag alag activities karne ke liye equipments bhi lage hue the...

inhe saari chizon wo sab check out kar hi rahe the ki tabhi un sabki CHARIOTS ek jagah par aakar rook gayi jiske baad....


ELUSORY 1- we have reached aur destination....agle do saalon ke liye aap sabke ABODES ye rahenge...

apne saamne aur baaki sabke right me point karte hue us ELUSORY ne ye baat kahi jisse sun jab sabhi point kiye hue jagah ki taraf mude toh ek baar firse happily surprised ho gaye....

reason...

unke saamne ek ke baad ek teen bunglows the....

har bunglow ka daayra lagbhag 1 acre ka tha....

in bunglows ki bhi gate entry automatic thi....

ek triplex buglow jisme 12 rooms 3 halls,ek party lounge,50 cars storage jitna bada garage, swimming pools jisme se ek outdoor tha aur dusra bana tha bunglow ke andar second floor par jo ki indoor heated swimming pool tha....

aur bhi bohot kuch tha un bunglows me jo ki ab in sabke agle do PHASE ka thikana hone waala tha...

ek dusre se ek baar mil sabhi apne apne CHARIOT me baith chal pade apne naye ashiyane ke andar is baat se anjaan ki jis PHASE aur jis nayi zindagi ko dekh wo sab excited ho rahe the,wo zindagi bohot kuch badalne waali thi...





PLANET-ZEAL


PLACE-CAVERN




FLASHBACK:-(WHY RAAZ???)



YE MAI KAHAN AA GAYA...!!!!AUR THODI DER PEHLE KYA HUA THA MERE SAATH...????

MAI TOH US GUFA ME THA AUR US ROSHNI KI TARAF HAATH BADHAYA THA MAINE JISPAR MERE HAATHON PAR KISI CHIZ KA SPARSH HUA THA...(SWORD)

AUR FIR ACHANAK MERE DIMAG ME EK SAATH HI DO DO CHALCHITRA CHALNE LAGE THE....

EK TOH MERI HI ZINDAGI KE PAL THE PAR WO DUSRA CHACHITRA KYA THA...!!!!

AUR USSE DEKHTE WAQT MUJHE AISA KYUN LAGA JAISE MAI US DRISHYA SE JUDA HUA HUN....!!!!

AUR AB ACHANAK YE ANDHERI JAGAH....YE KAHAN SE AA GAYI....!!YE HO KYA RAHA HAI MERE SAATH...!!!!


apne aap me budbudata hua VIKRAM us ghane andhere me chaaron taraf apni nazaren ghuma raha tha par us kaale syah andhere me toh usse khud ka haath tak nahi dikh raha tha toh aisa me kuch aur dekh paana naamukin hi tha....

khair,jab kuch samajh me hi nahi aaya toh VIKRAM ne andhere me hi apne pair aage badhane ke baare me socha aur is soch ko liye usne apna ek pair aage badhaya hi tha ki tabhi....

VIKRAM ke just samne ek roshni ne janm liya aur dekhte hi dekhte us roshni ki prachandta itni badh gayi ki wo pura area chamak utha...

roshni ke yun achanak tez hone se kuch palo ke liye VIKRAM ki aankhen band ho gayi par jab uski aankhen khuli toh wo hairan ho gaya...

reason....

uske thik saamne ek bohot hi khubsurat SWORD zamin par dhasi hui thi aur ussi sword se ye roshni nikal rahi thi jisse pura drishya dikhne laga tha...

kuch palon ta SWORD ko dekhte rehne ke baad VIKRAM ki nazar sab taraf ghumi aur tab usne dekha ki wo ek bade se maidan jaisi jagah par hai jiska koi anth tak nahi dikh raha tha....

wo ye sab dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi....


SWAGAT HAI VIKRAM...PAR KEHNA PADEGA,TUMHARE RAICHAITAON NE BOHOT INTAZAR KARWAYA MUJHE....


ek awaaz gunji VIKRAM ke kaano me jo uske saamne se aayi thi jispar jab uski nazar saamne gayi toh usne dekha ki wahan ek aakruti banane lagi thi aur dekhte hi dekhte us aakruti ne ek shadow form le liya tha jisse dekh...


VIKRAM-tum????aakhir ho kaun tum..abhi kuch der pehle mere mastishk me tumhari koi kahani ghum rahi thi...

maine tumhe pehle kabhi nahi dekha hai,par pata nahi kyun,tumhe dekhte hi mujhe krodh aa raha hai..

aisa lag raha hai jaise tum mere shatru ho....!!!!!

UNKNOWN-VIDEOUS...VIDEOUS kehte hain mujhe...aur mai tumhara shatru hun nahi,par haan agar tum us laayak hue,toh ban zaroor jaaunga...

VIKRAM-mai samjh nahi....

VIDEOUS-sab samajh jaaoge par sab samajhne ke liye pehle tumhe apni kaabiliyat dikhani hogi...

ye jo SWORD tumhare saamne gadi hui hai,tumhe isse uthana hai aur fir iske zariye jo dikhaya jaaye, wo kaam karna hai..

agar tumne kar diya,toh tumhe mere baare me,apne baare me,sab kuch pata chal jaayega..


VIDEOUS ki baat sun VIKRAM ne thodi der tak socha aur fir...

VIKRAM-mai taiyar hun...


ye bol usne haath aage badhaya aur apne saamne gade SWORD ko utha liya...

uske aisa karte hi SWORD me halki vibrations hui jisse VIKRAM bhi halka tharthara gaya....


VIDEOUS-bohot ache...apne daayen dekho...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun jab VIKRAM ne apni gardan apne daayen taraf ghumayi toh usse ek baar fir jhatka laga...

reason....

is waqt uske saamne uske pitah,maata,wo bhai jisse usne kuch der pehle hi maara tha,wo aur saath hi wo ladki baithi hui thi jiski kuch der pehle uske bhai ne badsuluki kar hatya kar di thi...

VIKRAM bade aascharya se un sabko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...


VIDEOUS-toh tumhe karna ye hai ki jo talwar tumne pakdi hai,usse tumhe in sabko maar dena hai...

VIKRAM-kya!!!!ye sambhav nahi hai....!!!mai aisa kabhi nahi karunga...


ye bol VIKRAM ne talwar phenkne ki koshish ki par ye kya,talwar uske hathon me jaise chipak si gayi thi....


VIDEOUS-tum piche nahi hath sakte..jis waqt tumne gufa me kadam rakha,tum is pariksha ko dene ke liye baadhya ho chuke the...

waise mai tumhe bata dun ki ye log asli nahi ha,mayavi hain...aur jo karne ko kaha gaya hai,wo tumhari pariksha hai..

tumhari yogyata ki pratiksha...inhe maaro aur mera aur apna sach jaan lo...

ek baat aur hai....

pehli...bhale hi ye log mayavi hain,nakli hain par inhe maarte waqt tumhari bhaavnaaye asli honi chahiye..

tumhe apne man se inpar waar karna hai... kyunki agar aisa nahi hua toh tum is pariksha me viphal ho jaaoge aur agar aisa hua toh tumhe marna padega aur tumhare saath maregi tunhari ye duniya...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun VIKRAM bohot chownka..

man se waar karna wo bhi apne parivaar par aur saath hi us ladki par jisse usse prem tha,uske liye asambhav tha aur agar wo ye nahi karega toh uske saath saath uski puri duniya khatm ho jaane waali thi......

wo gehre asamanjas ki sthithi me fasa ye sab soch hi raha tha ki....


VIDEOUS-itna bhi mushkil nahi hai jitna tum soch rahe ho...tumhe bas kuch palon ke liye ek nakatarmak charitra ki chaadar ko odhna hai..bas..

waise bhi,tumhare ghar walon ne sabke saath galat hi kiya hai,toh un galtiyon aur gunahon ko yaad tum apne krodh ko hawa de sakte ho..

aur rahi baat is ladki ki, toh bas kuch shan ke liye uske prati nakaratmak hona kaun si badi baat hai...

VIDEOUS ki baat sun VIKRAM ne kuch pal socha...waise bhi uske paas aur koi option toh tha nahi aur isiliye usne apni aakhen band kar apne dimag aur dil ko apne parivaar aur us ladki ke prati nakaratmak karna shuru kiya...

VIKRAM ki iccha shakti gazab ki thi...wo kisi bhi paristhithi me khud ko dhaalna bohot achi tarah se jaanta tha aur isiliye is pariskha ke zaroorat me aane waali sthithi me bhi wo kuch hi palon me dhal gaya aur isiliye....

nakaratmakta se paripurn VIKRAM ne apni aankhen kholi aur


SOOBH....

line me sabse pehle VIKRAM ke pitah the...

unke hi gardan par VIKRAM ne talwar chalayi par talwar ki dhaar itni zyada thi ki wo ek ke baad ek wahan baithe sabhi logon ki gardan ko makhan ki tarah kaatthe hue nikal gayi...

aur aisa hoti hi...

VIKRAM ke SWORD me tez vibrations hone lage..sirf SWORD me hi nahi balki,jahan wo khada tha,wahan aur saath saath pura ZEAL PLANET hilne laga jisse dekh...


VIKRAM-ye kya ho raha hai...???

VIDEOUS-murkh...waar karne se pehle tune apne dimag ko aur hriday ko toh mana liya par teri aatma ka kya...???

wo toh apni hi karegi naa...uspar tera zor nahi..uski soch aur uska faisla ghatnaon ke hisaab se nahi badalta...

tera faisla aur teri SOUL ka faisla alag nikla aur isiliye tu ye chunouti haar gaya ya fir ye kahun ki...


VIDEOUS ne upar aasman ki taraf dekha aur.....

VIDEOUS-aap dono apni pehli kohish me haar gaye aur mai jeet gaya....

VIDEOUS ke itna kehte hi SWORD se ek ray nikli aur sidhe VIKRAM par padi jiske baad VIKRAM ek pal me hi jal kar raakh ho gaya wahin ZEAL ki vibrations bhi ab bohot tez ho gaye the jiske baad dekhte hi dekhte pura PLANET us quake me dab kar khatm ho gaya....

bacha sirf CAVERN aur us CAVERN ke andar moujud SWORD ki AURA jo ab us pure dead PLANET me fail chuka tha....

wahin kuch der pehle jab VIKRAM jal kar raakh hua toh uski raakh se ek jyoti nikal upar aasman me uththi chali gayi aur pahunchi...




PLACE-HEAVEN



YE SAB KYA THA...???KAISE HO GAYA YE....!!!!AAP DONO KA ANSH ITNI ASAANI SE HAAR GAYA...

HAARA TOH HAARA,APNE SAATH SAATH USNE USKE PURE PLANET KO BHI KHATM KAR DIYA....

AUR AAP DONO,BAS CHUPCHAAP YE TABAHI DEKHTE RAHE....


VIKRAM aur ZEAL ke saath jo hua,usse hazam nahi kar paa rahe the AVANTIKA aur ALESENDRA...

aur hazam karna asaan tha bhi nahi...ye dusri baar tha jab VIDEOUS unke husbands se jeeta tha...

aur is jeet ne najaane kitne begunaahon ki jaan le li thi..

aur isiliye hi ek ke baad ek kayi sawal puch daale AVANTIKA ne VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS se jo bas chupchaap ek jagah par baithe hue the aur tabhi....

ZEAL ke VIKRAM ki jyot heaven me pravesh kar gayi aur aage badhte hue us jyot ka ek bhaag VIKRAM me aur dusra ASMODEUS ke andar chala gaya..

par ab bhi VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS chup hi the jisse dekh...


AVANTIKA-aapse kuch pucha hai humne...???

VIKRAM-jo hua,usme naa toh hamara ansh kuch kar sakta tha aur naahi hum dono....

kyunki VIDEOUS ne jo kuch bhi kiya,wo SWORD ke zariye kiya jisse mai tab tak samajh nahi sakta tha jab tak VIKRAM us SWORD ka sparsh naa karle...

par jab VIKRAM ne us SWORD ka sparsh kiya toh us waqt SWORD se ek barrier nikal pure ZEAL planet me fail gayi jisse agar mai bhed bhi leta toh bhi pura Planet khatm ho jaata....


VIKRAM ki baat wahan moujud sabhi sun rahe the..

sabhi ka matlab hai ALESENDRA aur AVANTIKA toh the hi par saath hi RONIT, ANJALI, DEFENDER, BEELZEBUB, AKSHAANT, SHAILA, MOKALSAR wahan moujud the...

aur jaise hi VIKRAM ne apni baat puri ki toh...


RONIT-mujhe ek baat samajh me nahi aa rahi ki VIDEOUS ki us ajeeb si chunouti ka matlab kya tha...???

waisi chunouti dekar aakhir wo saabit kya karna chahta hai....???

ASMODEUS-wo hume ek messege dena chahta tha aur usne wo de diya..

SAB-messege...!!! kaisa messege....????

VIKRAM-yahi ki jo hum dono bhaiyon ki shakti hai,jo hamara kartavya hai,ya fir sahi shabd ko chunu toh jo hum dono ka ATTITUDE hai,uski wajah se is baar ki hi tarah hum hamesha haarenge....


VIKRAM ki baat sun sabhi behad hairan hue...unhe uski baat samajh me toh nahi aayi par itna andaza ho
unhe ho chuka tha ki baat bohot gehri hai...


ANJALI-hum samjhe nahi V.J...!!!

VIKRAM- itne varshon tak VIDEOUS ne SWORD se bas apni urja hi nahi nikali thi,balki SWORD ke jis bhaag par uski URJA ghussi thi,us bhaag me usne ek alag hi magic use kiya aur ussi magic ke asar ki wajah jo VIKRAM maara gaya...

BEELZEBUB-alag MAGIC...???wo kya Lord...???

VIKRAM-VIPRAYI NAMYATE....


ye ek bohot hi taakatwar spell hai jisse har koi istemal nahi kar sakta..aur agar kar bhi le toh bhi isse puri tarah use me nahi laaya ja sakta aur isiliye hi is SPELL ke baare me kisi SPELL BOOK me likha nahi gaya...

ALESENDRA-par is SPELL me hota kya hai...???aur isme aisa kya hai jiski wajah se iske baare me likha nahi gaya hai....

ASMODEUS-ye SPELL ATTITUDE aur CHARACTER ko change karne ke liye use me laaya jaata hai..

ATTITUDE aur CHARACTER..do aise bhaav jo har kisi ke maansik jasbaaton se jude hote hain..

ek tarah se ye dono hi bhaav kisi bhi vyakti ki aatma se SOUL se mile hue hote hain...

par is SPELL se in dono bhaavon me parivartan laaya jaa sakta hai..

par kyunki ye dono bhaavna SOUL se judi hoti hai,wo SOUL jo immortal hota hai, isiliye usse twist karna,ghumana,alter karna lagbhag naamumkin hota hai...

ye kaam tyag mangta hai..khudka tyag...saath hi isse istemal karne waala bohot zyada shaktishaali hona chahiye..

agar koi shaktishaali shaksh is spell ko kisi aur par istamal karna chahta ho toh usse apne SOUL ki kurbaani deni padti hai...

issi tyag se ye spell activate hota hai.. isiliye hi is SPELL ke use ko varjit kar diya gaya tha..

VIKRAM-par VIDEOUS ke liye is SPELL ko use me laana aur is naamukin kaam ko anjaam dena aur wo bhi bina kurbaani diye, bohot asaan ho gaya tha...

aur wo isiliye kyunki SWORD ke uske andar ghusse rehne ki wajah se uska SOUL aur uski zindagi uski hokar bhi uski nahi thi balki SWORD ki thi..

aur ye situation uske liye us spell ko use me laane ke liye best thi..

RONIT-acha.... isiliye usne us din us SWORD ko nikalne se mana kar diya tha..taaki wo apne aage ka kaam kar sake...

VIKRAM-hmm.... kyunki us SWORD ne VIDEOUS ko pehle hi haani pahuncha di thi isiliye wo SWORD uska kabhi nahi ho sakta tha...

usse ye bhi maalum tha ki bhavishya me bhale hi wo kitna hi taakatwar yun naa ban jaaye par tab bhi agar koi usse haani pahuncha sakta hai toh wo wahi SWORD haj jiska der sawer koi naa koi naya dhaarak toh banega hi..

usse ye bhi pata tha ki wo dhaarak hum dono bhaaiyon ka hi ansh hoga jisme sirf humari shaktiyon hi nahi hongi balki hamare gun bhi honge aur yahin wo khel khel gaya..

usne SWORD me aise alterations kare jisse humare jaisa koi bhi uska dhaarak banane ke laayak rahe hi nahi...

aur isiliye hi VIKRAM bach nahi paaya....

ALESENDRA-ye VIDEOUS ki soch toh wakayi aap dono ke jaisi hi hai...kitne aage ki planning kar rakhi thi isne...

ASMODEUS-thi nahi hai...isne aage ke liye bhi naa sirf yojna bana rakhi hai balki usne us yojna par kaam bhi kar liya hai...

AVANTIKA-ab aur kya kar diya hai usne...????

ASMODEUS-ye toh aap sabko pata hai ki har living PLANET ek dusre se ek invisible branch ke sahare jude hue hote hain..

aur is judaw ka mukhya kendra EARTH hai...

(first part me iske baare me bataya gaya hai...)

VIDEOUS ne apne urja ko ussi invisible branch ke saath milkar khudko is BRAMHAAND ke jar living planet ke root ke saath,uske zamin ke saath jod liya hai...

taaki jab kabhi bhi bhavishya me uska koi pratidwandi janm le toh wo uske baare me naa sirf pehle se jaan sake balki usne paida hote hi wo usse maar de...


(yahi tha wo reason jiski wajah se RAAZ ke janm ke waqt uski body tab tak hawa me hi rahi jab tak uski saari urja,uski shakti usse alag nahi ho gayi..aur isiliye hi WOOGER ne RAAZ ke CONSCIOUS brain ko uske CHOSENS ki dharti par pair rakhne se pehle hi wahan ke environment me faila diya tha kyunki VIDEOUS ki khaas nazar CHOSENS ke har SAVENT aur unki gatividhiyon par hamesha hi rahi hai)


aadhi baat toh sab samajh gaye the par thodi aur sabse important baat jo ki is kahani ka future decide karne waali thi,wo bachi thi aur ussike baare me janane ke liye...


ALESENDRA-par us SWORD ko toh sirf aap dono ka hi ansh utha sakta hai....???fir aise me aage kya hoga..??

kya VIDEOUS kabhi khatm nahi hoga...????


ALESENDRA ki baat sun VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ne ek dusre ko dekha aur muskura diye aur jaise hi ye muskurahat un dono ke chehron par aayi,wahan khade sabhike aankhen badi ho gayi...

reason...

kyunki sabhi jaante the ki wo smile jo us waqt un dono bhaiyon ke chehron par thi,wo smile aage hone waali puri kahani ki roop rekha thi...

aur isiliye...


ASMODEUS-aapne hamari baat dhyan se nahi suni....humne kaha ki us spell ke prabhav se hamare jaisa koi uska dhaarak nahi ban sakta...

par ye zaroori toh nahi ki hamara ansh hamare jaisa hi ho...!!!

SAB-matlab...???

VIKRAM-HERO....ek aisa shabd jisse jude bande ke dil me manushya jaati aur baaki living beings ke liye hamdardi hoti hai...

pyar hota hai....bhaavnaayen hoti hain..jo sahi ke saath sahi aur galat ke saath galat karne ki jurrat aur taakat rakhta hai..

in short,hum dono bhaiyon ka pratibimbh....

samajhne waali baat ye hai ki har kahani me ek HERO hota hai ya fir ek ANTI HERO jo us kahani ko uske anjaam tak le jaata hai...

par ye kahani alag hai.. bohot alag..kyunki is kahani me "HERO" ya "ANTI HERO".....

in do shabdon ki koi jagah hi nahi hai...

is kahani ko kisi aise ki zaroorat hai jiske liye uske lakshya se zyada aur kuch bhi important naa ho...

bhale hi us lakshya ko haasil karne ke liye usse maasumo aur begunaahon ki bali hi kyun naa deni pade,usse us baat se koi fark naa pade..

rehemdili,pyar jaise shabdon aur inke bhaavon se usse koi matlab naa ho...

bhale hi wo chalaki ke maamle me VIDEOUS jitna hi shaatir ho,par matlabparasti aur kaminepan me wo VIDEOUS ka bhi baap ho....


aur isiliye aisa pehli baar hoga jab kisi kahani ko uske ANJAAM tak pahunchane waala banda koi HERO nahi hoga,wo hoga....


EK VILLAIN......
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AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....








AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Very nice update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN AUR UNKE PARENTS PHASE 2 KE APNE NAYE GHAR NE ENTER KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIKRAM AUR ASMODEUS HEAVEN ME SABKO VIDEOUS KI PLANNING KE BAARE ME BATATE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


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UPDATE-53



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TOH AAKHIR WO WAQT AA HI GAYA JAB IS KAHANI KE VILLAIN KE BANAYE KHEL ME AAP DONO KA BANAYA VILLAIN UTARNE WAALA HAI....


muskurate hue AVANTIKA ne ye baat kahi jisse sun VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ke chehre par bhi muskaan aa gayi....


VIKRAM-is khel me RAAZ utar toh bohot pehle hi gaya tha par haan,uske khelne ki baari ab aayi hai...

ASMODEUS-waise hamare waale villain ko villain banane ka pura shray mujhe jaata hai...

kyunki ye janab us WAQT darshak hi the....


VIKRAM ko dekhte hue ASMODEUS ne ye baat kahi jispar...


VIKRAM-bilkul BHAI...jo bhi ho paaya hai,ye aapki wajah se hi ho paaya hai....

us kriya ko karte waqt aapne apni immortality daav par lagayi thi...aise me mai koi shray le bhi kaise sakta hun...!!!!????


VIKRAM ne ASMODEUS ki baat par puri tarah sehmati dikhayi jispar...


ASMODEUS-yaar kabhi toh aisa vyavahar dikha jaise ek PARMESHWAR PUTR ko dikhana chahiye....

mujhse bhi bohot upar hai tu mere BHAI...teri pratispraddha,tera COMPETITION kisi se ho hi nahi sakta bhai aur iska ek jeevant udaharan wahi kriya hai jisse hum apni yojna ko anjaam de paaye hain...

log apni galtiyon se sikhte hain,par tu dusron tak ki jeet ko unke zariye apni jeet me badalne ki nazar aur hunar rakhta hai...

maana maine apni immortality daaw par lagayi thi,par tune naa sirf us daaw ka kaaran dhund nikala tha balki meri immorality par koi aanch naa aaye,iske liye bhi tu ready tha....

aur mujhe maalum hai ki humne jaisa socha tha,agar us planning me halki si aur gadbad hui hoti toh tu mujhe bachane ke liye khudko daaw par laga deta...

par sabse mahatvpurn baat...tu ye kaise bhul jaata ki hum dono jude hue hain...

teri har soch se mai bhali bhaati parichit rehta hun..aur mujhe maalum hai ki tune meri badhayi isiliye ki taaki mai khudse tujhe sarvshresta maanu....haina..!!???


ASMODEUS ki baat par VIKRAM ke saath saath AVANTIKA aur ALESENDRA bhi has pade par fir...


ALESENDRA-atahas bohot hua...ab aap dono ke us kaam ka waqt ho gaya hai jisse KAHANI ke agle padaw ka raasta banega...

ASMODEUS-acha..!!!kya hum jaan sakte hain ki aap kis kaam ko baat kar rahi hain...???

AVANTIKA-aapke mitra aur CHOSENS ke teeno SOVEREIGN'S ko unki neend se jagane ka aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ki wajah se unki bhuli yuhi yaadasht unhe wapas dene ka kaam....

VIKRAM-wakayi waqt ke saath aap dono kaafi akalmand ho gayi hain...


VIKRAM ki baat par wo dono bas muskura di jiske baad....

VIKRAM ne apna right hand aage kiya aur uske aisa karte hi teeno SOVEREIGN'S ki behosh body hawa me prakat hui aur wahin rook gayi.....

aisa hone ke baad VIKRAM ke left hand se teen CHETNA URJA nikal aage badhe aur AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ke sir me sama gaye jiske kuch pal baad teeno ki hi aankhen dheere dheere khul gayi aur jab aisa hua toh unki body sidhi hoti hui zamin par aa gayi...

kaafi samay ke baad teeno SOVEREIGN'S ek mout jaisi neend se jaage the jiski wajah se unhe normal hone me kuch waqt laga par jab wo normal hue toh apne saamne LORD OF ANGELS aur CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ko dekh turant apne ghutno par aa gaye....

ghutno par aate hi unke dimag me wo saare drishya ghum gaye jiski wajah se wo teeno behosh hue the aur wo sab yaad kar unke man me ek baar fir RAAZ ko lekar jigyasa ne janm liya par wo teeno chup hi rahe...


VIKRAM-khade ho jaaiye....


VIKRAM ke aisa bolte hi teeno khade ho gaye jiske baad...


VIKRAM-kuch sawal chal rahe hain ap teeno ke man me...!!!!puchna nahi chahenge unhe...!!!

AKSHAANT-LORD...aapse kya chuppa hua hai...???aapko toh sab pata hai....


waise toh AKSHAANT ya fir baaki ke dono VIKRAM ko normally naam se hi bulate the par jab bhi ASMODEUS saamne hota tha,tab ye teeno VIKRAM ko bhi as a friend nahi balki uske ohde ke hisaab se hi baat karte the...


SHAILA-kya aaj aap hume RAAZ ke baare me batayenge....??

VIKRAM-nahi....


VIKRAM ki naa sun teeno man hi man nirash ho gaye par tabhi...


VIKRAM-ab hume tum teeno ko kuch bhi batane ki zaroorat nahi hai...kyunki apni jis shakti ke bhaag ko aur ussi tyag ke saath apni yaadasht ke jis bhaag ko dekar tum teeno ne FORBIDDEN FOREST ke kawach ko banaya tha,ab tumhari wo shakti tumhe wapas milne waali hai....

aur jab aisa hoga,tab tum teeno ko sirf RAAZ ke baare me hi nahi,balki puri kahani hi yaad aa jaayegi...


VIKRAM ki baat sun teeno SOVEREIGN'S hairan ho gaye.. kyunki bhale hi unhe apni Shakti ke sabse bade bhaag ke tyag ki wajah se hi jo kuch bhi ho raha hai,uski jaankari nahi thi par unhe ye zaroor bata diya gaya tha ki kisi bohot hi mahatvpurn CHEEZ ki raksha ke liye hi unki shakti roopi kawach ki rachna hui thi aur ab jab VIKRAM keh raha hai ki unki wo shakti unhe wapas milne waali hai toh iska matlab tha ki wo khaas CHEEZ ab beparda ho sakti hai....

(writers note:-toh baat ye hai ki jab AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR CHOSENS ke SOVEREIGN'S bane tab VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ne unki shakti ko ek shield ne badla aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagaya par iske saath un dono ne in teeno ki yaadasht bhi le li aur wo isiliye kyunki agar wo aisa nahi karte toh RAAZ ko banane ki planning VIDEOUS ko pata chal jaati,saath hi FORBIDDEN FOREST me SHIELD lagte waqt ek aur chiz hui thi,uske baare me bhi usse pata chal jaata par ab jab RAAZ saamne aa chuka hai toh aise me SHIELD shakti ke through yaadasht ko lautane me koi harz nahi hai)



SOVEREIGN'S ki soch ko VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS dono hi samajh rahe the aur isiliye....


ASMODEUS-zyada mat socho.. jaise hi tum teeno ko tumhari shakti wapas milegi tab tumhe apne aap hi tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil jaayenge....


jaise hi ASMODEUS ki baat khatm hui,VIKRAM ne apna haath aage kiya jiske baad uske haathon se ek saath teen rays nikli...

ye teen rays FORBIDDEN FOREST ki wahi kawach thi jo RAAZ ke BARRIER lagane se pehle pichle 25 thousand years se us FOREST ka kawach bani hui thi....

dekhte hi dekhte wo shakti numa rays apne asli maalik THE THREE SOVEREIGN'S ke body me samati chali gayi jisse feel kar un teeno ki aankhen band ho gayi....

is prakriya ke douran naa sirf un teeno ko apni khoyi hui shakti wapas mil rahi thi,balki saath hi unki bhul chuki yaadasht bhi unhe wapas milti jaa rahi thi...


VIDEOUS ka janm,uski demands,ZEAL ke VIKRAM ki utpatti,uska aur pure ZEAL ka vinash aur uske baad RAAZ ki utpatti ka idea, CHOSENS ka banana aur uske baad wo khaas CHIZ jiski suraksha ke liye unhe apni shakti ka 75 pratishat bhaag aur apni yaadasht ko kurbaan karna pada,wo sab yaad aa gaya...

itna hi nahi,unke behosh hone ke baad CHOSENS me kya kya hua tha,wo sab bhi unhe pata chal gaya aur aise unhe ASMODEUS ki baat ka matlab samajh aaya jisme usne kaha tha ki unke saare sawalon ke jawab unhe unki shakti milne par apne aap pata chal jaayenge....

kuch waqt laga,is shakti ke adaan pradaan ki kriya ko pura hone me par jab aisa hua toh AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ke sharir me ek baar firse ANGELS ke kapde aa gaye...

aur aisa hote hi wo teeno ek baar firse ASMODEUS aur VIKRAM ke saamne jhukne ko hue par...


VIKRAM-jhukne ki zaroorat nahi hai doston...aapko bas wahi mila hai jo pehle se aapka tha...

aur ab jab aapko saari kahani dobara yaad aa gayi hai toh ye batane ki zaroorat nahi hai ki aapko apne diye padh aur kartavya par wapas loutna hai aur is khel ke agle padhav ka raasta banana hai...

AKSHAANT-aisa hi hoga LORD....

ASMODEUS-hume pata hai ki aap teeno apni bhaawnao ko sayyamit rakhenge par is khel ka wo chuppa hua bhaag,jo ab apko yaad aa chuka hai,usse VIDEOUS se chupana atti aawashyak hai aur isiliye....


ASMODEUS ke haathon se ek GODS BARRIER ray nikli aur aage badhte hue teeno SOVEREIGN'S ke dimag ke us hisse me fit ho gayi jisme wo jaankari thi jisse VIDEOUS se chuppana tha...

aur jab ASMODEUS ne apna kaam kar diya toh...


ASMODEUS-ab aap teeno jaa sakte hain...


ek baar un dono ke saamne jhuk aur fir ALESENDRA aur AVANTIKA ko smile dekar wo teeno gayab ho gaye....


ALESENDRA-abhi tak kisi naa kisi tarah aap dono ka is kahani me hastakshep raha hai par ab aakhir wo waqt aa hi gaya jab aap dono bhi sirf ek darshak banane waale ho....

ASMODEUS-iska bhi apna ek maza hai.....

AVANTIKA-par kya aapko ye soch kar dar nahi lagta, ghabrahat nahi hoti ki jaisa RAAZ hai,usse kahin puri baazi ulti naa padh jaaye....

aur uske upar VIDEOUS jisne itne varshon me apni shakti aur badha bhi li hai aur sthir bhi kar liya hai...

VIKRAM-dar,ghabrahat soch ke hi hisse hote hain...aur soch faisla lene se pehle li gayi cheez hai,baad ki nahi...

aur faisla toh hum pehle hi le chuke hain... toh ab darne ya ghabrane ka koi arth nahi...

VIDEOUS ne jo chaha,wo usne kar diya hai...RAAZ jo chahega,wo karega...

laskhya uska fixed hai,dekhna ye hai ki us lakshya tak pahunchne ke liye uska raasta kya hota hai..???

waise shuruat toh achi hai...


neeche ZEAL ki taraf dekhte hue VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi jiske baad sabhi ki nazar wahan chali gayi jahan is waqt paalthi maarkar baitha hua tha RAAZ....

KYUN???aayiye khud jaan lijiye...





PLANET-ZEAL


PLACE-THE CAVERN





AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA


is waqt paalthi maar baitha hua tha mai aur mere saamne hawa me rooki hui thi meri talwar...

aur lagatar baar baar ye SPELL nikal raha tha mere mooh se jiski wajah se mere sir se lekar pair tak,har jagah se ek gaadhi ray nikalkar mere SWORD me sama rahi thi....

par hai kya ye SPELL aur mere iske uccharan karne ki wajah kya hai!!!


toh baat ye hai ki mera jo pehla padaaw tha aur jo ki mera agla padhav bhi tha,THE CHOSEN'S,wahan jaane ke liye is spell ko kaam me laana zaroori tha...


AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA...


jiska matlab hai SUBMERGE MY POWERS...


aur iske asar se is waqt mere BRAIN,BLOOD, BODY ke aur khaas kar SOUL ki lagbhag puri shakti nikalkar mere SWORD me sama rahi thi....

mere aisa karne ka kaaran ye tha ki mai apni shaktiyon ke saath CHOSENS me as a SAVENT nahi ghus sakta tha...

aur wo isiliye kyunki CHOSENS me SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke jis kriya ke dwara shakti ko naapa jaata hai,mera SOUL is AMPLIFICATION ke daayre se baahar tha....

meri shakti ko naapa nahi jaa sakta tha...par fir bhi agar jigyasa purv isse measure kiya bhi jaaye toh meri SOUL ki shakti ka 1 percent bhi kisi 20 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION waale SAVENT se zyada powerful tha....

aise me apni SOUL ki power ko chuppana hi sahi tha warna agar ye halka sa bhi kaam me aa jaata toh pura hi CHOSENS hil jaane tha...

ye toh hui SOUL ki baat.....ab agar baat karen baaki teen power sources ki matlab BRAIN, BODY, aur BLOOD ki toh mere sharir ka ye bhaag bhi kuch zyada hi shaktishaali tha...

sidhi bhaasha me kahun toh mera BRAIN,meri BODY aur mera BLOOD itne AMPLIFIED the ki wo kisi bhi COMPLETE 100 % SOUL AMPLIFIED SAVENT ko bhi araam se hara sakta tha....

aur isiliye hi mai apni shaktiyon ke bohot bade bhaag ko ek ghere me,ek kawach me bhar kar apne SWORD ke andar daal raha tha kyunki ek meri sword hi aisi chiz thi jo naa sirf mere shaktiyon ke kendron ko sambhal sakti thi,balki unhe khudme chuppakar khudko aur un shaktiyon ko invisible bhi kar sakti thi....

kyunki mai iska DHAARAK tha, isiliye mujhe chhod isse koi detect bhi nahi kar sakta tha....VIDEOUS bhi nahi....

par ye kriya time taking thi aur isiliye....


AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA....


yahan mera spell uccharit karna chalu hi raha aur wahan....





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST




AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA....


RAAZ dwara ki jaa rahi enchantment ki awaaz FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar bhi gunj rahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki yahan 2 behosh nirjeev se pade shariron ke saamne khada tha WOOGER....

aur ussike dimag me gunj rahi thi ye enchantment jisse sun...


WOOGER-MASTER ne apni kriya shuru kar di jiska arth hai ki mere kaam ka waqt aa gaya....

apni baat bol WOOGER ne ek disha me dekha aur uske aisa karte hi kuch door par bane ek poudhe me halki hulchul hui aur fir....

tezi se kuch phool jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI the,wo us poudhe se toot kar udte hue aaye aur WOOGER me sama gaye aur kyunki WOOGER RAAZ ka hi hissa tha, isiliye usme samate hi wo buti RAAZ ke paas pahunch chuke the....

jab ye kaam pura hua toh WOOGER wapas un do behosh logon ki taraf jo ki ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER the,palta aur....


WOOGER-bohot khushnaseeb ho tum dono kyunki tum dono mere MASTER ke kaam aane waale ho...

kuch din ki neend aur le lo,fir aankh toh khul hi jaayegi...

haan,par kitne waqt ke liye khuli reh paayengi tum dono ki aankhen,kitna jeeven shesh bacha hai tumhara,ye toh MASTER hi decide karenge...

filhal toh ghar waapsi ka waqt ho chala hai tum dono ka...


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi uske right aur left,dono side ek ek WORLD DOOR khul gaye...

ek taraf tha CARAPACE matlab SLUNDER ka world aur dusri taraf tha ARROW jo ki ACCHUTA ki duniya thi...

aisa hone ke baad ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ka sharir hawa me uth gaya aur agle hi pal dono ka sharir apne apne WORLD ke DOOR se hota hua dusri taraf chala gaya...

dono hi doors ke dusri taraf tha wahi room jiske aalishan beds par dono Planets ke rulers jo ko ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ke parents the,unke VEGITATIVE STATE waale bodies ko rakha gaya tha...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke bodies bhi unke PARENTS ke side me jaakar sthir ho gaye aur aisa hone par WORLD DOOR band ho gaya...

wahin yahan ka apna kaam khtam hote hi WOOGER bhi gaayab ho gaya par akele nahi,apne saath le gaya WOOGER wo SHIELD jo ki FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagi hui thi.....

jiska matlab tha ki ab FORBIDDEN FOREST me bina rok tok sabhi ka swagat hai....






PLACE-INSIDE THE CONCEAL




TUMHE AISA KYUN LAGTA HAI VIDEOUS KI TUM HUME UN DONO KI NAZRON SE CHHUPA SAKTE HO....!!!!


ye baat do logon ne ek saath kahi thi jisse sun....


VIDEOUS-mujhe lagta nahi hai..mai jaanta hun ki mere FATHERS VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS tumhe tab tak nahi dekh sakte jab tak tum yahan par ho...

ye jagah meri hai..sirf meri jo ki meri shaktiyon ke kawach se bani hai...isse bheda nahi jaa sakta...

haan,agar tum chaaho tob yahan se nikalkar apne aakaon se meri shikayat kar sakte ho...

mai rokunga nahi tumhe..bas jo maine pucha hai,mere us sawal ka jawab de do...


UNKNOWN-arre,tum toh hamare LORDS ki urja se bane ho..mind read karna toh tumhare gifts me se ek hai...

padh lo dimag aur jaan lo sach....

VIDEOUS-sarcastic,haan...!!!!


tumhare dimag ke information wala bhaag blocked hai jisse filhal mai bhed nahi paa raha hun...

ye blockage tabhi hatega jab tum dono dil se aisa chahoge par mai jaanta hun ki tum dono aisa karoge nahi.

koi naa, alternative toh har kisi ka hota hai....is problem ka bhi hai....


VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi hi thi ki tabhi usse FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ke hatne ka sense hua jisse mehsoos kar uske chehre par smile aa gayi aur....


VIDEOUS-ab tum dono ki mujhe zaroorat nahi...

afsos ki IMMORTAL ho tum dono..maar mai tum dono ko sakta nahi par.....

mout se milti julti haalat me toh pahuncha hi sakta hun naa...


SARVATOMUKHA UPPARUNADHI

LOCK THE SOUL


ye spell bhi ABANDON tha.iska prayag nishedh tha...


reason...is spell ko asar me sirf isse bolne waale ki SOUL hi laa sakti hai...aur isiliye isse bolne waale ke SOUL ko bohot powerful aur negetive hona hi chahiye...

jispar bhi ye SPELL uccharit hota hai,uska SOUL uski body ke andar ek jail me kaid ho jaata hai..

ek aisi jail jisme SOUL ke saath saath us SOUL ke maalik ka sharir bhi bhale hi wo kisi bhi form me ho,nirjeev sa ho jaata hai aur abhi yahi hua....

VIDEOUS ke spell uccharit karte hi uske SOUL se hota hua ek ray saamne baithe un dono shaksh ke body se takraya aur us body ko bhedte hue wo ray unke andar gaya jiske agle hi pal un dono ka sharir dheela padh gaya aur neeche gir pade...

BEELZEBUB aur DEFENDER....










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....







AAPKA APNA V..J...
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF TEENO SOVEREIGN'S KO HOSH AA JAATA HAI,DUSRI TARAF RAAZ APNE POWERS KO LIMIT KARNE KE LIYE EK SPELL BOL RAHA HAI,TEESRI TARAF WOOGER NE ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KO UNKE PLANETS ME WAPAS BHEJ DIYA HAI WAHIN CHOWTHI TARAF VIDEOUS NE BEELZEBUB AUR DEFENDER KI SOUL KO KAID KAR UNHE MURCHIT KAR DIYA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-54



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST





YE SAB ACHANAK KAISE HO GAYA??? IS FORBIDDEN FOREST KI SHIELD AISE HI GAYAB HO GAYI, YUNHI....

KAUN HO SAKTA HAI JISNE IS NAYI SHIELD KO YAHAN LAGAYA AUR FIR BADE AARAM SE ISSE HATA BHI DIYA...BINA SAAMNE AAYE....


FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ke haththe hi uske pressure ke absense ko feel kiya tha chattan ke andar khudko chupaye hue DORIAN ne aur aisa feel hote hi wo us chattan se baahar aaya aur jab us saamne dekha toh SHIELD ko gayab dekh hairan ho gaya...

usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye anhoni aakhir hui kaise par jab kaafi der baad bhi uske dimag me uske sawal ka koi jawab nahi aaya toh usne apne dimag ko jhatka aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ki dehliz ko paar kar uske andar pahuncha...

A+ level ka banda tha DORIAN...nidar,takatwar aur aatm vishwas se bharpoor par aaj jab uske FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar ghusne ka barso purana sapna pura ho raha tha,usko jo daayitv mila tha,wo usse pura karne waala tha,toh uske man me ek ajeeb si ghabrahat ,bechaini aur khushi,teeno ne janm le liya tha...

fihal raat ka waqt tha,har taraf andhera hi andhera tha,par apne chamakdaar vision ke sahare DORIAN aage badhta chala jaa raha tha...

chalte hue uski nazaren har taraf ghum rahi thi aur wo un saari cheezon ko dekh raha tha,jisse usne aaj se pehle sirf FORBIDDEN FOREST ki book me padhi thi...

usse is baat ki bohot khushi thi ki aisa karne waala wo pehla banda ban chuka tha par saath hi usse CHOSENS ke current SAVENTS par halka koft bhi ho raha tha aur wo isiliye kyunki yahan aisi aisi cheezen thi,jisse current SAVENTS explore kar khudko aur nikharne waale the...

khair, FORBIDDEN FOREST ke un saare hisson ko jo ki uske yahan ke manzil par pahunchne se pehle aane waali thi,un sabko checkout karte hue finally wo us jagah par pahunch hi gaya jahan usse pahunchna tha...


ASPRIT CRYSTAL....


wo chiz jiske liye wo yahan aaya tha... ASPRIT CRYSTAL ek trikon shape liye BLUE CRYSTEL tha par filhal DORIAN ke saamne uska desired CRYSTEL nahi balki ek PED tha jiska naam tha CUPOLA jiska ek matlab VAULT bhi hota hai...

ek pal us ped ko dekh DORIAN aage badha aur usne us ped ke saamne pahunch usse khudme aise lapeta jaise usse gale laga raha ho aur...


APRADHATA SAKRAYATE SHAKTIYEM

RELEASE THE COMPLETE POWER


ped ko upar uthane ki koshish karte hue DORIAN ne is SPELL ko uccharit kiya jiske baad uski sharirik shakti chaar guna badh gayi aur aisa hote hi....

CRCRCRCR.......

ek ajeeb si awaaz ke saath us ped ka jad ukhadne laga....

is waqt chaaron PRIMES ki shakti moujud thi DORIAN ke andar par uske baad bhi usse kaafi masakkat karni padh rahi thi us ped ko ukhadne me par dheere dheere hi sahi, CUPOLA naam ke us ped ka root aakhir ukhad hi gaya par aisa hote hi jahan CUPOLA ka jad tha,wahan se ek tez prakash baahar aaya jiske prabhav se DORIAN ki aankhen kuch palon ke liye band ho gayi....

us prakash ki teevrata se aaspaas ka saara drishya bhi ab saaf dikhne laga tha...

kuch der tak aakhen band rakhne ke baad DORIAN ne apni aakhen kholi...

tej toh ab bhi utna hi tha par us roshni se DORIAN ki ankhon me koi taklif nahi ho rahi thi aur isiliye DORIAN ne neeche jhuk haath aage kiya aur agle hi pal CUPOLA ped ki jad se usne baahar nikala THE ASPRIT CRYSTAL jo ki ek dues ball ke size ka triangular shaped CRYSTEL tha...

apni is uplabdhi ko kuch pal tak mehsoos karta raha DORIAN aur fir wo us ASPRIT CRYSTAL ke saath gayab ho gaya...




PLACE-CHOSENS




IMPOSSIBLE...????MUJHE FORBIDDEN FOREST KI SHIELD MEHSOOS KYUN NAHI HO RAHI HAI....????


soyi hui thi MARILIZA WHIZZ par phir achanak unhe unke lagaye sensors se jo ki missing SAVENTS ke maamle ke baad unhone sirf CHOSENS me hi nahi balki pure ELYSIAN me laga diya tha,FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD mehsoos hona band ho gaya jiski wajah se unki aankhen khul gayi...

ab ye koi choti baat toh thi nahi..pehle bhi ek baar SHIELD badal chuki thi aur jab aisa hua tha toh unke INSTITUTION ke teen SAVENTS lapata ho gaye the aur ab toh SHIELD hi gayab ho chuki thi jiske baad pata nahi kya hone waala tha....

yahi sab soch MARILIZA turant apne bed se utri aur wo FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne jaane ke liye antardhyan hone hi waali thi ki tabhi....


KAHIN JAANE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI MARILIZA....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ke saamne ek saath teen tez roshniyan prakat hui jisme se ye awaaz aayi thi

wahin kuch wo teen roshniyan dheere dheere maanav aakruti me badalne lagi aur jab wo aakruti puri tarah se human form me aayi toh WHIZZ MARILIZA hairan bhi hui aur khush bhi...

teeno SOVEREIGN'S uske saamne the toh aise me hairan aur khush hona toh laazmi hi tha par fir achanak se hi MARILIZA ke chehre ke bhaav badle aur wo nirash ho gayi jisse dekh teeno SOVEREIGN'S muskura uthe...


SHAILA-kya baat hai MARILIZA...???kya aap hume dekhkar khush nahi hui...???

MARILIZA-aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta SOVEREIGN....!!!!par mai aapke saamne aane ke laayak nahi hun...

aap teeno ne is INSTITUTION ki zimmedari mujhe di thi par unfortunately me fail ho gayi..

CHOSENS ke 25 thousand years ke itihaas me aisa pehli baar hua jab yahan se SAVENTS gayab ho gaye aur ye hua mere incharge hone ke baad...


sir ko neeche rakh MARILIZA ne ye baat kahi jispar...


AKSHAANT-isme aapki koi galti nahi hai MARILIZA...???jo hua,wo bas ek sanjog tha....



AKSHAANT ki baat samajh me nahi aayi MARILIZA ko...


MARILIZA-mai samjhi nahi...

ab sach toh bata nahi sakte the SOVEREIGN'S aur kya batana hai,ye toh unhone pehle hi soch liya tha aur isiliye....


MOKALSAR-ye toh aapko pata hi hai ki us FOREST ki SHIELD humari shaktiyon se bani thi...

par ab us SHIELD ki zaroorat nahi hai...

par usse ek jhatke me hataya nahi jaa sakta tha kyunki wo SHIELD sirf zamin ke upar hi nahi balki uske andar is grah ke core tak dhasi hui thi...

aur isiliye hume pehle usse uske jad se hilana tha,usse kamzor karna tha aur wahi humne kiya...

par jab humne ye kiya, toh durbhagyapurn vash ye wahi waqt tha jab us SHIELD ke paas wo teeno SAVENTS moujud the...

humare pehli koshish me wo SHIELD kamzor hui aur dusri koshish ke baad SHIELD hat gayi par aisa hote waqt us SHIELD se ek gravitational pull ENERGY ke form me baahar nikla aur un teen SAVENTS se takraya jiski wajah se wo teeno FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar kheencha gaye...

MARILIZA-oh..par jab SHIELD hatane ka waqt aa gaya tha toh fir wahan pichle kuch samay tak ek dusri SHIELD lagi hui thi...aisa kyun hua aur wo SHIELD kisiki thi...???

AKSHAANT-humse upar bhi shaktiyan hain MARILIZA aur wo SHIELD unhi shaktiyon me se ek ki thi...

aur wo laga isiliye tha kyunki jaisa ki MOKALSAR ne bataya ki hamari SHIELD ka asar is PLANET ke core tak tha toh isiliye jab humara SHIELD hata toh uska asar yahan ke core me bhi hua aur usse thik karne ke kiye hi naya SHIELD lagaya gaya aur ab jab core ne khudko stable kar liya hai toh aise me us SHIELD ki koi zaroorat nahi thi isiliye wo SHIELD bhi hat gaya...

MARILIZA-aur un missing SAVENTS ka kya hua.???sabse important sawal toh ye hai ki CHOSENS se itni door wo gaye kaise...???

aur kya abhi bhi wo wahin hain...??i hope they are alright now...???


ek saath kayi sawal kar diye MARILIZA ne jispar...


SHAILA-nahi wo teeno ab wahan nahi hain..darasal FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar pull hone se pehle hi wo teeno behosh ho chuke the aur wo sab kaafi injured bhi the...

aur jab unhe us force se FOREST ke andar kheencha gaya toh unki haalat aur kharab ho gayi..

isiliye humne unhe ek dusri jagah par shift kar diya tha jahan unka upchaar ho sakta tha... filhal toh wo teeno behosh hi hain par bohot jald unhe hosh aa jaayega aur wo wapas aa jaayenge...

aur rahi baat ki wo teeno wahan FOREST ke paas pahunche kaise toh ye tum khud hi dekh lo...


SHAILA ke aisa bolte hi uske haathon se wk ray nikal MARILIZA ke saamne hawa me rook gayi...

ye ray ek chalchitra thi par khaas baat ye thi ki ye ek fake, jhutti chalchitra thi jisse MARILIZA ke man ko shaant karne ke liye banaya gaya tha..

khair, chalchitra shuru ho chuka tha aur aisa hote hi MARILIZA hairan ho gayi...

reason....

chalchitra me scene ye tha ki ek taraf RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade the aur dusri taraf MORANA aur ANWIR khade the jinhone apne puri SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki shakti ka istemal karte hue un teeno par ray chhoda jiske prabhav se RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,teeno hi hawa me piche ki taraf ud gaye aur ussi condition me zakhmi aur behosh hokar unki bodies FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne jakar giri...

scene ke yahan pahunchte hi chalchitra band hi gaya...


MARILIZA- ANWIR aur MORANA toh PHASE 2 me the aur ye teeno PHASE 1 me...aise me inki kya dushmani ho sakti hai....???

AKSHAANT-ye CHOSENS hai MARILIZA..yahan taakatwar kamzor ke saath kuch bhi kar sakta hai...

aur jahan tak mujhe maalum hai, RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER PHASE 1 ke sabse kamzor SAVENTS the aur ANWIR aur MORANA kamzoron ko kaise treat karte hain,ye chuppi baat toh hai nahi...

unke khudke PHASE me unhone najaane kitne SAVENTS ko takleef pahuchayi hai...

MARILIZA-par ye niyam second PHASE se lagu hota hai..aur ye teeno first PHASE ke the...

inke saath kuch galat karne ki permission PHASE 2 ya 3 ke SAVENTS ko nahi thi...

AKSHAANT-par jis jagah wo teeno khade the,wo PHASE 3 ki thi..unhe secure rakhne ke liye har waqt kisi strong SAVENT ka yaa fir WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ka unke saath hona zaroori tha par aisa hua nahi...

aur waise bhi,ye sab purani baatein hain,isiliye is baare me soch kar koi faayda nahi...

important hai aage jo hone waala hai, uske baare me sochna...

aur issi baare me baat karne ke liye hum yahan aaye hain....


iske baad SHAILA ne MARILIZA ko kuch baatein batayi jisse sun...


MARILIZA-par SOVEREIGN,ye kaise possible hai..??

AKSHAANT-kiske liye...???


AKSHAANT ki baat sun MARILIZA chup ho gayi...

reason....

MARILIZA flow flow me ye bhul gayi thi ki uske saamne wo teen shaksh khade hain jinhone is institution ki rachna ki hai toh aise me jo bhi hoga,unke hisaab se hi hoga...

wahin jab SOVEREIGN'S ko laga ki MARILIZA saari baatein samajh gayi hain toh wo teeno bhi baat ko lamba naa kheenchte hue gayab ho gaye...





PLANET-THE PAGAN



PLACE-OUTSIDE THE CONCEAL





FINALLY!!!!HUME ASPRIT CRYSTAL MIL HI GAYA.....


DORIAN ASPRIT CRYSTAL haasil kar sidhe yahan CONCEAL ke saamne pahuncha tha...

uske haathon me ASPRIT CRYSTAL chamak raha tha jisse dekh behad khushi ke saath GASTON ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


TRISTEN-wo sab toh thik hai par us nayi SHIELD ke yun achanak gayab hone ke baare me kuch pata chala...


DORIAN ko dekh TRISTEN ne ye sawal kiya....


DORIAN-nahi...jo bhi hua,wo itne achanak aur gupt tarike se hue ki kuch pata hi nahi chala....

UBEL-par ye ache sanket nahi hain... kyunki jis shield ko hum chaaron ki samast shakti bhi milkar tod nahi paayi,usse banane waala humare liye kitna khatarnaak saabit ho sakta hai,iska hum andaza bhi nahi laga sakte...

TRISTEN-bilkul satya kaha tumne...hume kisi bhi tarah us SHIELD aur usse lagane waale ke baare me pata lagana padega....


KAAM TUM SABKO BAS WAHI KARNA HAI JISKA TUMHE AADESH MILE...AUR KUCH NAHI....


ek nayi awaaz padi un chaaron ke kaano par jisse sun us awaaz ki disha me ghum gaya chaaron ka sir aur jab aisa hua toh un chaaron ki aankhen badi ho gayi...

reason...

jis CONCEAL numa shakti ke baahar wo chaaron khade the,us CONCEAL ke beech ka area khul gaya tha aur uske beech ek kaafi young but handsome aur lamba chowda ladka khada un chaaron kl dekh raha tha...

us ladke ke chehre me,uski personality me ek aisi vibe thi jisse mehsoos kar un chaaron ko apne andar ek ajeeb sa dar mehsoos hua jisse wo samajh nahi paa rahe the...

wahin apni baat keh woh ladka aage badha aur theek un chaaron ke beech DORIAN ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya aur aisa karne me baad usne DORIAN ki taraf apna haath aage badhaya..

pata nahi kya tha us bande me ki uske aisa karte hi DORIAN ne bina kuch kahe uske haathon me ASPRIT CRYSTAL rakh diya....

ASPRIT CRYSTAL ko haath me lekar wo ladka ek baar muskuraya aur fir...


UNKNOWN-VIDEOUS naam hai mera...aur mai wahin hun jisse tum chaaron ka astitv hai..

jisse tum sabko shakti bhi milti hai aur aadesh bhi....


bina koi bhumika baandhe VIDEOUS ne apne baare me bata diya jiske baad kuch pal ke liye wo chaaron shocked ho gaye par fir wo sab turant apne ghutno par aane ko hue jispar...


VIDEOUS-kya mujhe dekhkar,mere saamne khade hokar tum chaaron ko dar lag raha hai....???


VIDEOUS ki baat sun un chaaron ne ek baar ek dusre ko dekha aur fir...


SAB-ji....

VIDEOUS-toh fir jhukne ki zaroorat nahi hai..meri moujudgi se man me paida hone waala dar hi mujhe diya jaane waala samman hai....

aur kisi samman ki mujhe zaroorat nahi hai....


ye bol VIDEOUS firse ASPRIT CRYSTAL ko dekhne laga...wahin is ASPRIT CRYSTAL ke baare me jaanane ki tivr icha hui uske saamne khade un chaaron ke andar jisse VIDEOUS jaan chuka tha aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-ELYSIAN, CHOSENS aur FORBIDDEN FOREST....

in teeno ka nirman ek hi waqt par hua tha..

saath hi un chizon ka bhi jo FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar hain siway is ASPRIT CRYSTAL ke....

iski utappati ka waqt thik uske baad ka hai jab FORBIDDEN FOREST ke aage uski SHIELD lag rahi thi..

parat dar parat FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD lagi thi aur jab baari aayi thi us aakhri parat ki jiske baad FORBIDDEN FOREST impenetrable hone waala tha,tab maine ek alag si urja mehsoos ki thi...

jo SHIELD ke us aakhri hisse ke lagne se pehle FOREST ke andar ghussi thi...

ussi urja ke kuch kan us jungle ke ek bhaag me gire the...

aur unhi kano se bana tha ye ASPRIT CRYSTAL....

DORIAN-oh.. toh iske zariye aap us anjaan urja ke baare me pata laga paayenge...

VIDEOUS-hmm... khair,tum chaaron ke jaane ka waqt ho chuka hai...


VIDEOUS ke aisa kehte hi un chaaron ke dimag me unke aage ka kaam,unka daayitv ek circular ki tarah ghum gaya jiske baad ek baar apna apna sir VIDEOUS ke aage jhuka wo chaaron gayab ho gaye...

ab us jagah par akela bacha tha VIDEOUS aur isiliye....

VIDEOUS ne apne right hand ke index finger ko us CRYSTEL ke upar rakha aur...


GATHIYAME RAHASYAM

UNFOLD THE HIDDEN TRUTH


SPELL ke uccharit hote hi VIDEOUS ki ungli se wo ray nikli jisme uski WHITE ENERGY ki shakti thi aur aisa hote hi ek kamal ke phool ki tarah wo CRYSTEL khul gaya aur jab aisa hua toh....

ek AURA nikli uske andar se aur VIDEOUS ke ussi index finger ke tip me sama gayi jisse VIDEOUS ki aankhen band ho gayi...

is waqt VIDEOUS ka dimag us AURA ke through us crystal ke RAAZ ko jaanane ki koshish me lag gaya par usse isme koi safalta nahi mili...

uske baad VIDEOUS ka dimag us crystal ka central point matlab uske origin ko dhundne me lag gaya aur is baar usse mili safalta aur aisa hote hi jhatt se khul gayi VIDEOUS ki aankhen....


VIDEOUS-toh aap dono hain iske piche RONIT aur ANJALI....

hahahahaha.....

koi baat nahi,koi baat nahi.....




SANKET banaye hain aapne..
mai unhe ULJHAUNGA...

raaste aapke hain,aapke hi rahenge,

mai toh bas un raaston me
KAATEIN BICHAUNGA.....








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V...J...
Very nice update bro
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SOVEREIGN'S MARILIZA KO RAAZ, ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE GAYAB HONE KI EK JHUTI KAHANI BATATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS KO ASPRIT CRYSTAL KE BAARE ME AADHI HI JAANKARI MILTI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-55



PLANET-ARROW


PLACE-THE KING'S BEDROOM





AAHHHH........


ek halki si karah ke saath aankh khuli ACCHUTA ki...

par sir me uth rahe bhaaripan ki wajah se usne turant apni aankh band kar li aur us bhaaripan aur pain ko zabt karne laga....

wahin in sab ke beech ek shaksh ACCHUTA ke thik saamne khada usse hi dekh raha tha...

ye shaksh aur koi nahi MAI tha....

apni shaktiyon ko apne SWORD ke andar daal mai apne agle padhav ki pehli sidhi ARROW planet pahuncha tha aur CHETNA BUTI ki madad se maine ACCHUTA ke senses usse wapas louta di thi...

par itne waqt tak us VEGITATIVE STATE ne rehne ki wajah se uske dimag ko thik se kaam karne me thoda waqt lagna tha aur filhal wahi lag raha tha...

aankhen band kiye ACCHUTA ka dimag filhal toh khaali tha par ye khaalipan bhi bas kuch pal ka hi mehmaan tha aur hua bhi wahi...

aaankhen band kiye ACCHUTA ke dimag me achanak uske saath hue aakhri drishya ghum gaye....

wahi drishya jisme ek shaksh ke haath se ek badi gaadhi ray nikal uske dimag me padi thi jiske baad uska sir bhaari hone laga tha aur fir wo chakkar khaate hue gir gaya tha...

is scene ke yaad aate hi ACCHUTA ko apne sir ke bhaaripan ka kaaran pata chal gaya par tabhi....

ACCHUTA ke dimag me wo drishya bhi ghum gaya jisme ussi shaksh ne usse pehle uske maata pitah ko bhi VEGITATIVE STATE me bheja tha aur ye yaad aate hi jhat se ACCHUTA ki aankhen khul gayi par aisa hote hi wo ekdum se hadbada bhi gaya...

reason....

apni gehri kaali aankho se jhaankta hua mai uske thik saamne khada usse hi dekh raha tha...

chehra mera sthir tha par us sthir chehre par bhi ek ajeeb si kathorta aur dridhta thi jisse dekh ACCHUTA chah kar bhi bol nahi paa raha tha par bolna toh tha hi aur isiliye...

ACHHUTA-kaun ho tum???aur yahan ROYAL CHAMBER me kya kar rahe ho...???

MAI-RAAZ naam hai mera....apne left dekho...


pehla sawal hi appropriate tha uska isiliye maine bas uska hi jawab diya...

wahin mere kehne par jaise hi ACCHUTA ne apne left ki taraf dekha toh uske agle hi pal wo hairan aur pareshan dono ho gaya....

reason...

uske baaju me uske mom aur dad ussi VEGITATIVE STATE me pade hue the jisme kuch der pehle tak wo bhi tha...

apne mom dad ko yun besudh pada dekh ACCHUTA ki aankhon me aansu aa gaye....

MOM,DAD kehte hue wo un dono se lipat kar rone laga....

kuch der tak yunhi rote rehne ke baad usse yaad aaya ki ek aur shaksh bhi is kamre me moujud hai...

usse lagne laga tha ki mai un do logon ka saathi hun jinhone uske mom dad ko us haal me pahunchaya tha...

is khayal ke uske man me uththe hi usse mujhpar behad krodh aaya par fir usse wo scene yaad aaya jab bina kisi prahar kiye un do logon ne uske mom dad ko is condition me pahuncha diya tha aur aise me agar mai unka saathi tha toh wo yaa fir uski sena bhi mera kuch bigad nahi paayegi...

is soch ke uske dimag me ubharte hi pehle usne khud ko shaant kiya aur wo wapas meri taraf palta....


ACCHUTA-kya tum bhi un dono ke saathi ho jisne mere MAATA PITAH ko is haal me pahunchaya tha...???

MAI-dusri taraf dekho....


meri baat ko sun pehle toh usne mujhe hi ajeeb nazar se dekha par fir jaise hi uski gardan uske right taraf mudi,usse laga jhatka....

reason...

uske right ki taraf jahan us bade se CHAMBER ka diwar hona chahiye tha,wahan is waqt ek bade se sqaure shape me khaali space bani hui thi jiski dusri taraf ek alag CHAMBER dikh raha tha par us CHAMBER ki banawat ACCHUTA ke mahal me bane CHAMBERS se bilkul alag thi...

wahin apni baat keh mai us diwar waali jagah jahan is waqt maine WORLD DOOR banaya hua tha,uski taraf badha aur...


MAI-mere piche aao....


apni baat keh mai aage badha aur us DOOR ke beech pahunch gaya...

wahin ACCHUTA ab bhi apni jagah par hi baitha mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha aur isiliye mai palta aur...


MAI-mujhe baatein dohrane ki aadat nahi hai ACCHUTA....


meri awaaz ko sun andar tak sihar sa utha ACHHUTA aur aisa hote hi uski body apne aap hi harkat me aayi jiski wajah se wo turant khada hua aur meri taraf badhne laga...

wahin mai bhi wapas palta aur WORLD DOOR se hota hua dusri taraf pahunch gaya jahan thik ACHHUTA ke hi parents ki tarah teen log besudh ek bed par pade hue the...

wahin mere piche piche world DOOR se hota hua jab ACCHUTA us room me enter hua toh saamne ka scene yaa fir ye kahun ki bed par lete logon ko dekhkar wo chownk pada....

reason....

SLUNDER aur uske mom dad jo ki is waqt saamne bed par lete hue the, ACHHUTA jaanta tha unhe...

(DORIAN AUR GASTON NE JAB WO ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE BHESH ME THE,TAB UNHONE APNI KAHANI BATATE WAQT IS BAARE ME BATAYA THA KI ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER UNKE SOLAR SYSTEM KE VARSHIK VYAPAR SAMMELAN KE DAURAN MILE THE)


SLUNDER aur uske mom dad ko dekhna ACCHUTA ne bilkil bhi expect nahi kiya tha aur isiliye....


ACCHUTA-ye teeno toh CARAPACE PLANET ki royal family se hain...ye yahan ARROW me kya kar rahe hain...???

MAI-ye teeno ARROW me nahi,tum is waqt CARAPACE me ho..


meri baat aun ACCHUTA behad chownka par isse pehle ki wo kuch kehta...


MAI-ye jo beech me ek nayi jagah si bani hui hai,ye ek WORLD DOOR hai jiske ek taraf tumhara PLANET aur tumhara CHAMBER hai aur dusri taraf hai ye jagah jo ki CARAPACE PLANET hai aur is waqt tum yahan ke ROYAL CHAMBER me ho....

jahan meri baat sun ACCHUTA ki aankhen hairani se badi ho gayi wahin apni baat keh maine apna haath aage kiya jiske baad mere haath se 1 Jyoti jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI thi, bahar nikli aur aage badhte hue bed lar lete SLUNDER ke dimag me ghus gayi aur aisa hone ke kuch pal baad hi dheere dheere SLUNDER ki aankhen khulne lagi...

ACCHUTA ko toh kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha isiliye aakhon me aascharya aur dher saare sawal liye wo bas mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha...

wahin jaisa aankh khulne ke baad ACCHUTA ke saath hua tha,wahi SLUNDER ke saath bhi hua...

sir ke behad bhaari lagne ki wajah se wo kuch der tak apni aakhen band kar baitha raha par fir jab uski aankhen khuli aur usne apne saamne ek anjaan shaksh yaani ki mujhe dekha toh wo behad haran hua par sabse zyada hairani usse tab hui jab usne mujhse thodi door khade ACCHUTA ko dekha aur isiliye...


SLUNDER-tum toh PLANET ARROW
ke prince ho naa...!!!tum yahan kaise...???

kahin tumne hi toh us shaksh ko nahi bheja tha jisne hamare saath hamare MAATA PITAH ko....


aage ki baat SLUNDER ke mooh ke andar hi reh gayi kyunki baaton baaton me jab uske mooh se MAATA PITAH nikla toh usse wo beeta hua scene yaad aa gaya jo uske aur uske parents ke saath ghata tha aur isiliye usne jhat se pehle apne right aur fir left ki tarar jahan uske mom dad behosh pade hue the,apni nazar ghumayi..

apne mom dad ko us haalat me dekh uski aankhon me bhi aansu aa gaye....

kuch der tak yunhi rote rehne ke baad...


SLUNDER-tumne karwaya hai naa PRINCE OF ARROW ye sab???


SLUNDER ki baat ka ACCHUTA koi jawab de,usse pehle hi....


MAI-tum aur tumhare mom dad ke saath jo hua tha wahi cheez is ACCHUTA par aur iske mom dad ke saath bhi hui thi...

aur ye kiya tha DORIAN aur GASTON naam ke do logon ne...

SLUNDER-par kyun...???kyun kiya un dono ne aisa humare saath...???

MAI-kuch chahiye tha unhe jisse sirf tum dono ki families ke through hi wo haasil kar sakte the..

unhe laga ki tum sab ko us PERSITANT VEGITATIVE STATE ki haalat me pahuncha kar unka kaam ho jaayega...


meri baat suanane ke baad SLUNDER toh khamosh hi raha par ACCHUTA jo khud toh usse di gayi mout si neend se jaag hi chuka tha par saath hi jisne mujhe SLUNDER ko bhi thik karte hue dekha tha,uski aankhen chamak gayi...

usse yakin ho chala tha ki uske aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah mai un dono ke mom dad ko bhi thik kar sakta hun aur isiliye....


ACCHUTA-tumne hum dono ko us mout ki neend se jagaya hai...iska arth hai ki tum hamare mom dad ko bhi thik kar sakte ho, haina..???


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ki ankhen bhi chamak uthi aur wo bhi mujhe ummid bhari nazaron se dekhne laga..

wahin un dono ki baat sun maine kuch kaha nahi bas apna right hand aage kar diya jiske baad mere hatheli ke upar chaar roshniyan chamakne lagi jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI hi thi...


MAI-ye chaar jyot,roshniyan tum dono ke mom dad ko jaga dengi...


meri baat sun un dono ki aankhon ki chamak aur badh gayi thi...


SLUNDER-toh der kis baat ki..mere mom dad ko jaldi se thik kar do...mai tumhara ye ehsaan kabhi nahi bhulunga...

ACCHUTA-haan...mere MAATA PITAH ke ilaaj ki roshniyan mujhe de do.. mai turant usse apne MAATA PITAH ko hosh me le aaunga...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER hairan bhi hua aur saath hi ACCHUTA ke piche ka scene matlab WORLD DOOR dekhkar usse jo pehle se hi hairani hi rahi thi,wo bhi badh gayi aur isiliye..


SLUNDER-turant kaise hosh me laaoge...???aur ye tumhare piche khaali sthaan jaisa kya hai..??wahan toh is room ki deewar thi naa...???

ACCHUTA-ye khali sthan nahi hai..ye ek PLANET DOOR jaisi koi chiz hai jiske dusri taraf mera PLANET hai jahan mere mom dad bhi tere mom dad ki sthithi me pade hue hain..


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ki hairani aur badhi jiske baad wo kuch kehne ko hua par in dono ki aukaad se zyada mai inhe explain kar chuka tha aur isiliye mere chest se jahan meri SWORD aur uske saath meri chuppi hui shakti thi,wahan se do rays nikal tezi se aage badhi aur sidhe un dono ke dimag me sama gayi aur jab aisa hua toh....

un dono ki aankhen ek baar firse band ho gayi....

aur uske baad un dono ke dimag me unke PERSISTENT VEGITATIVE STATE me jaane ke baad kya kya hua,wo sab unhe dikhne laga....

DORIAN aur GASTON ka unka roop lena, AKSHAANT aur SHAILA ka un dono ke PLANETS me aana aur unka roop dhare GASTON aur DORIAN ko unke mom dad ke saath kya hua hai,uske baare me batana, CHOSENS ke baare me janana,wahan un dono ke behroopiyon ka padhna,sab kuch jo un dono behroopiyon ne unka bhesh dhar sikhne ki acting ki,wo unhe dikhne laga...

saath hi yahan unke PLANETS me unke SAMRAT,unki wife aur bacche ko us marne jaisi haalat me dekh yahan ke logon ne unhe thik karne ke liye kiye gaye prayas bhi unhe dikhe...

itna hi nahi,is drishyam ke dauran un dono ka dimag ek baar firse bhaari ho gaya tha aur saath hi un dono ko apne sharirik aur aantarik jagahon par behad tez dard feel hone laga tha par in sabke beech un dono par is waqt ek sammohan tha...

mera sammohan jiski wajah se us tez dard ke bawjud un dono ki naa toh aankhen khuli aur naahi unhe dikhne waala drishyam gayab hua...

mai kaun hun aur mere saath DORIAN aur GASTON ne kya kiya tha,is cheez ko chhod un dono se related drishya un dono ko dikhne lage....

saare drishya aur unse judi baatein jaanane ke baad ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki aankhen khul gayi jisme is waqt dard aur hairani dono hi dikh rahi thi par waqt ke saath dard toh chala hi gaya par unki harani ab bhi wahin thi aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-hum pichle 18 mahino se behosh the aur is dauran itna kuch ho chuka hai...

SLUNDER-par ek baat samajh me nahi aayi ki wo dono jinhone hume aur hamare mom dad ko behosh kiya tha,wo dono hamara bhesh dhar CHOSENS me kyun gaye...???

MAI-kya is baare me drishyam me kuch dikhaya gaya tha...???

SLUNDER-nahi...

MAI-iska matlab hai ki wo baat tumhare kaam ki nahi hai...aur matlab unhi chizon se rakhna chahiye jo tumhare kaam ki ho..

isse zinda rehne ke chances bane rehte hain..


SLUNDER ki aankhon me dekh maine ye baat kahi jisse uske puri body me ek sihran si doud gayi...

usse aisa laga jaise mout uski aankhon se jhaankti hui uski rooh ko dekh rahi hai aur wo feeling dar ki aakhri hadh thi jisse SLUNDER aur uske saath hi is waqt ACCHUTA bhi feel karne laga tha...


MAI-is waqt tum dono ke hi kaam ki do chizen hain...

pehli....jo dard tum dono ke BRAIN BODY aur BLOOD ne feel kiya tha,wo dard asal me tum dono liye ek gift thi...

ACCHUTA-gift wo bhi dard...!!!hum samjhe nahi...???

MAI-CHOSENS ke first PHASE me BRAIN,BODY aur BLOOD ko AMPLIFY karne ke liye har din jis dard se guzarna padta hai,ye wahi dard tha..

aur ab tum dono ke hi brain, BODY aur BLOOD AMPLIFY ho chuke hain...


DRISHYAM me dikhaye scenes ki wajah se ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi CHOSENS ke first PHASE ke saare classes aur unme sikhane waali chizen aur vidhi,in sabhi ke baare me jaan chuke the aur ab jab unhe ye pata chala ki 4 me se 3 classes me hone waali AMPLIFICATION me ab wo dono bhi paarangat ho chuke hain toh woh dono kaafi khush ho gaye the...


MAI-dusri kaam ki chiz hai ye RAYS jinme tumhare mom dad ke senses hain....


apna wo haath jisme wo do roshniyan chamak rahi thi,unhe aage karte hue maine ye baat kahi jisse sun un dono ki aankhon me ek baar firse chamak aa gayi aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-please inhe jaldi se istemal kar hamare mom dad ko hosh me laa do...

MAI-bilkul...par ek choti si problem hai...!!!

SLUNDER-problem...???kaisi problem..???hume batao,shayad hum kuch madad kar paayen...


aakhri baat bolte waqt SLUNDER ki zuban ladhkhada si gayi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki usne mujhe madad karne ki baat kahi thi jo usse lagne laga tha ki uske haisiyat se baahar ki chiz hai par...


MAI-shayad nahi, sirf tum dono hi ho jo meri madad kar sakte ho...

ACCHUTA-agar aisa hai toh bolo..apne mom dad ke liye mai apni jaan bhi de sakta hun...

SLUNDER-mai bhi..

MAI-wahi toh chahiye....


meri baat sun hadbada se gaye wo dono aur...


SLUNDER-hum samjhe nahi...kya hume marna hoga...????

MAI-maut bohot sasti chiz hai..keemat zindagi ki hoti hai...

ACCHUTA-matlab???

MAI-jaise ek insaan me,jaanwar me,ped poudhon me zindagi hoti hai thik waisi hi zindagi us PLANET me bhi hoti hai,jahan ye sab rehte hain...

mujhe wahi zindagi chahiye...mujhe ARROW aur CARAPACE,ye dono hi PLANETS chahiye...


aankhen hi fat gayi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki meri baat sunkar....unhe samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki wo kaise react karen...???


ACCHUTA-tumhe hamare PLANETS chahiye....ye PLANETS hain,koi chiz nahi jo hum utha kar tumhe de denge...

MAI-mere liye ye PLANETS chiz hi hain...agar chahun toh inhe zabardasti le sakta hun... aur yakin maano,agar maine aisa karna chaha toh aisa koi nahi hai jo mujhe rok sakta hai...


ye bol maine ek baar fir jhaanka un dono ki ankhon me aur mere aisa karte hi meri taakat ka ek chota sa ansh un dono ko feel hua par itna kaafi tha unki haalat kharab karne ke liye...

mooh me jaise lakwa maar gaya un dono ka... aur isiliye maine apni baat ko age badhaya....


MAI-par mai aisa karna nahi chahta...tum dono apne apne planets ke heir ho,yuvraj ho, isiliye mai chahta hun ki ye faisla tum dono ki razamandi se ho.....


ACCHUTA-hum yuvraj hain,SAMRAT nahi..wo padh hamare PITAJI ka hai...toh faisle bhi wahi karenge naa...!!!

MAI-faisla mai karta hun ACCHUTA aur log us faisle ko follow karte hain....

aur jo nahi karte, unka patan nishchit hai...

rahi baat tum dono ke yuvraj hone ki toh mere liye itna hi kaafi hai...jis tarah se mai chahun,tum dono mujhe us tarah se vachan doge aur jab aisa hoga,toh yakin maano,apne mata pitah ko convince karna tum dono ke liye asaan ho jaayega...


meri baat sun dono hi gehri soch me padh gaye aur...


SLUNDER-ek baat batao...tumhe hamare PLANETS chahiye...iska kya matlab hai...???

kya tum hamare PLANETS ke naye SAMRAT banana chahte ho...???

MAI-nahi...mai chahta hun ki tum dono apne apne planets ko evacuate karwa lo....mujhe ye dono PLANETS khaali chahiye...

SLUNDER-par fir humare log kahan jaayenge...???

MAI-ye bhi mai hi bataun...??11 living PLANETS hain tumhare aur ACCHUTA ke PLANETS ko chhod kar is SOLAR SYSTEM me..

unme se kisi bhi planet me reh sakte hain tumhare log..waise bhi, ARROW aur CARAPACE is SOLAR SYSTEM ke sabse powerful PLANETS hain...

sadiyon se baaki ke 11 PLANETS in dono PLANETS par hi dependent rahe hain..toh ab ek return favour ke tahat itna toh wo sab kar hi sakte hain...


meri baaton ko sun SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA,dono hi tention me a gaye the...


MAI-zyada sochne se bhi koi faayda hoga nahi...agar mai chahun toh yahan rehne waale har shaksh ko maar kar in PLANETS ko khaali kara sakta hun par mai aisa chahta nahi...

toh ho sake toh mujhe aisa chahne par majboor mat karo...


meri baat sun un dono ne ek dusre ko dekha...bebasi aur dar..ye dono hi bhaav un dono ke chehron par saaf dikh rahe the...

par wo jaante the ki wo kuch nahi kar sakte the aur isiliye un dono ne kuch der tak dimagi manthan kiya aur fir....


ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-hum taiyar hain...

MAI-moukhik manzoori nahi chahiye mujhe...aantarik razamandi chahiye...

SLUNDER-aantarik razamandi..!!!iska kya arth hai....???

MAI-mere saamne aakar khade ho jaao....


meri baat sun kuch pal toh wo dono hichkichaye par fir wo mere saamne aakar khade ho gaye...

aisa hone par maine dono ke chest par haath rakha aur....


MAI-apni aakhen band karo aur man hi man dil se jo maine chaha hun,usse razamandi do....


jahan meri baat sun dono ne apni aankhen band ki aur meri khwahish par razamandi dene lage wahin un dono ke aisa karte waqt..


ANNJAVI SAMUDEYA BINJAVATI


maine ek DARK SPELL bola jiske uccharit hote hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki soul ka ek bhaag unke rakht ke saath milkar bahar nikla aur mere andar sama gaya...

is kriya ke douran un dono ne apne andar halka sa pain aur saath hi ek ajeeb sa khaalipan mehsoos kiya tha...

unhe lag raha tha jaise unka kisi chiz se wireless connection tha par ab wo connection toot raha tha...

wahin kuch hi palon me meri kriya samapt ho chuki thi aur isiliye maine apna haath un dono ke chest se hata liya aur mere aisa karte hi un dono ko aisa laga jaise unke andar se koi bohot hi ehem aur keemti cheez baahar nikal gayi thi...

is ehsaas ne ek baar phirse unke sir me bhaaripan paida kiya jiske asar se wo dono niche girte hue phir se behosh ho gaye....



MAI-jahan HADH ki SARHAD hai,
mai uske bhi paar JAA RAHA HUN..

tera KHEL tere saath KHELNE,
mai tere paas AA RAHA HUN....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....








AAPKA APNA V...j....
Very nice update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI RAAZ ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER SE UNKE PARENTS KO HOSH ME LAANE KE BADLE UNHE UNKE PLANETS KHAALI KARNE KE LIYE KEHTA HAI JISSE WO DONO MAAN JAATE HAIN.


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CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)




UPDATE-56





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-ALFREENS ABODE





EK BAAT BATAYIYE MR FELLAR....???AAPKE PLANET ME 1 KING RULE HAI TOH AISE ME KYA EK PURE PLANET KO MANAGE KARNE ME PROBLEM NAHI HOTI HOGI...!!!!????


FELLAR-problem..!!!!bilkul nahi...haan,thodi bohot siyasati mushkilen aati rehti hain par wo toh har kingdom me common baat hai par aaj tak kabhi koi major problem nahi aayi hai...

FLORIN-wow, that's commendable....

FELLAR-waise aapne bataya ki aapke planet me KINGS rule nahi karte...???toh kya wahan KINGDOMS,RIYASATEN nahi hoti...

aur law and order ko kaise manage kiya jaata hai...???

FLORIN-well,hamare PLANETS me bhi KINGDOMS hoti hain par wahan unhe COUNTRIES kehkar bulaya jaata hai...

aur rahi baat unhe chalane ki toh jaise aapke planets me KINGS RULE chalta hai,waise hi hamare yahan P.M ya fir PRESIDENT rule chalta hai...

law and order kaayam rakhne ke liye har country ke apne apne laws hote hain...

har countries me bohot se state hote hain aur un states ko sambhalne ke liye bhi bohot se log appoint kiye jaate hain..


FLORIN ki baat ko samajhte hue FELLAR ne apne sir ko halki jumbish di...


subah ka waqt hai....MR & MRS FELLAR dono hi ALFREEN ke abode me aaye hue hain..

pichle PHASE ke waqt toh sabke ABODES ek dusre se kaafi door the aur socializing ka bhi mouka wahan milta nahi tha par kyunki second PHASE first ke complete opposite tha isiliye ab sabhi PHASE 2 ke PARENTS according to there wards catagory,ek dusre se jam karne waale the...

pichle kuch dino me FLORIN,MARIA,FELLAR aur unki wife GRACE ek dusre ke ache friends ban gaye the aur lagbhag har din ye chaaron ek dusre ke ghar gather hua karte the jaisa ki abhi hi raha tha..

khair, FLORIN aur FELLAR apni baat aage badhate ki tabhi...


AAP DONO KI POLITICAL TOPICS PAR BAATEIN KABHI KHATM HONE WAALI TOH HAI NAHI..

ISILIYE PEHLE BREAKFAST KAR LETE HAIN,FIR AAP LOG APNI BAATEIN KARTE RAHIYEGA...


jahan hall me enter hote hue MARIA ne ye baat kahi wahin unke saath aati hui GRACE....


GRACE-ELUSORY......jao...bacchiyon ko breakfast ke liye bula lao...

ELUSORY-right away MA'AM....


GRACE ki baat sun kuch door khadi ELUSORY ne apne sir ko jhukate hue ye baat kahi aur baahar bane pool ki taraf jahan is waqt MABEL, ALFREEN aur MAHI swimming kar rahi thi,chal padi aur kuch hi der me wo un teeno ko lekar hall me aa chuki thi...

wahin baccho ko dekh....


MARIA-tum teeno din bhar us pool me hi rehti ho,kahin tabiyat kharab ho gayi toh...!!!!

ALFREEN-oh common mom...humari kabhi tabiyat kharab nahi ho sakti..we are damn tough,right girls....

MAHI/MABEL-right....

MAHI-aur waise bhi aunty.... entertainment ke liye ye pool aur bahar garden ko chhod filhal hamare paas aur hai hi kya...???

GRACE-what are you saying...???itna khubsoorat, advanced aur happening PHASE hai ye... regularly checkout kiya karo...

MABEL-yaa right....check out???kya check out karen...yahan CLUBS hain,PUBS hain,MALLS hain,PARTY PALACES hain,PLAY ZONES hain,aur bhi bohot kuch hai par filhal hume kisi bhi jagah ke andar jaana allowed hai nahi..

matlab jo bhi dekhenge,wo baahar se hi dekh paayenge...toh kya faayda hua....???

MAHI-haan toh ELUSORIES ne bataya toh hai naa ki jab tak tum sabka ye PHASE shuru nahi ho jaata,tab tak har poshe aur entertainment wali jagah par hum nahi jaa sakte...

entry ke liye special cards hote hain jo hume PHASE 2 ke first day par allot kar diye jaayenge..

uske baad toh hume har jagah explore karni hi hai....

FLORIN-bilkul...waise hum bhi kaafi exited hain yahan ki har jagah ko check out karne ke liye...

waise bhi ab tum logon ke PHASE 2 start hone me zyada waqt bacha hi kahan hai....???

MABEL-just a WEEK uncle..aaj se thik saath din baad next session shuru...

which means in a week,we would be the official TRIO STELLAR of PHASE 2....






PLANET-CARAPACE/ARROW


PLACE-THE ROYAL CHAMBERS





KYA KIYA THA TUMNE HAMARE SAATH...???HUM BEHOSH KYUN HO GAYE THE...????


kuch der ki hi behoshi chaayi thi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER par...

kuch der baad jab dono hi hosh me aaye toh ek baar firse un dono ne mujhe apne saamne paaya jiske baad SLUNDER ne mujhse ye sawal kiya jispar...


MAI-piche dekho...


SLUNDER ke sawal ko darkinaar kar maine apni baat kahi jisse sun un dono ne pehle toh ek pal mujhe hi ghoora par phir jab wo dono piche palte toh ek baar fir un dono ki aankhen chamak uthi...

reason....

mere haathon se chaar jyoth jo ki CHETNA BUTI thi nikal kar aage badh chuki thi jinme se do baaju ke room jahan ACCHUTA ke PARENTS the,wahan chali gayi thi aur baaki do yahin is room me SLUNDER ke mom dad ke paas jaa rahi thi jisse dekh wo dono samajh chuke the ki unke mom dad bhi ab hosh me aane waale hain....

is baat ka ehsaas hote hi dono ye bhi bhul gaye ki kuch der pehle wo behosh hue the...

aabhar vyakt karne ke liye wo dono turant wapas meri taraf palte par tabhi...


MAI-ye lo.....


mere aisa kehte hi mere saamne hawa me ek ray ban kar rook gayi..


ACCHUTA-ye kya hai..???

MAI-jo dene ka vachan tum dono ne hi mujhe diya hai,uski pushti toh tumhare MAATA PITAH hi karenge naa...

un chaaron ke hosh me aate hi tum meri baat unke saamne rakhoge aur tab agar meri khawahish se tumhare mom dad iteffaq naa rakhen toh un chaaron ko is ray ko chunne ko keh dena...

aisa karte hi unhe tumhari baat samajh aa jaayegi...

unke haan kehte hi mai wapas aa jaaunga....


jo baatein maine ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko batayi thi,wahi baat mai un dono ke parents ke saamne repeat nahi karna chahta tha aur isiliye hi apni baat keh mai gayab ho chuka tha...

wahin ab tak CHETNA BUTI ne apna kaam kar diya tha... ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke parents hosh me aa chuke the...

aur aisa hote hi SLUNDER apne mom dad aur ACCHUTA apne parents ke paas pahunch unke gale log ro rahe the...

kyunki DORIAN aur GASTON dono ne hi in sabko sote hue hi us STATE me pahunchaya tha, isiliye un chaaron ko toh bas aisa lag raha tha jaise wo so kar uthe hain...

aur aise me jab unke bacche unke gale lag rone lage toh unhe kuch samajh me nahi aaya aur isiliye unhone is sudden emotion
ka kaaran pucha aur fir....

us taraf ACHHUTA aur is taraf SLUNDER apne apne mom dad ko unke saath ab tak kya kya ghat chuka hai,wo sab batate chale gaye jisse sun dono hi taraf ke KING aur QUEEN ki aankhen hairat se badi hoti chali gayi.....

un sab ko yakin hi nahi hua ki abhi abhi wo sab jis neend se jaage hain,wo neend 19 months lambi thi...

khair,abhi toh un sabko aur hairan hona tha...

jab unke bacchon ne bataya ki unke room ke beech se dusri duniya jo ki unka rival PLANET tha,wahan ka raasta bana hua tha,toh un sabki aakhen badi ho gayi...

unhe is baat par yakin nahi hua tha aur isiliye wo sab us raaste ki disha me badh chale...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,dono ke hi parents ek hi time par us WORLD DOOR ke saamne pahunche aur jab un sabne ek dusre ko dekha tab jaakar unhe apne bacchon ki har wo baat jo ab tak unhe batayi gayi thi,uspar unhe yakin hone laga...


ACCHUTA FATHER-hume toh ab bhi ye sab ek bure sapne ki tarah lag raha hai...

SLUNDER FATHER-sach kaha...par jab hume us mout ki neend me sula diya gaya tha toh fir hum hosh me kaise aaye aur aap dono ko itna sab pata kaise chala...???


SLUNDER ke father ki baat sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne RAAZ ne jo unhe bataya tha,wo sab bata diya...

ye jaankar ki RAAZ naam ke ladke ne un sabko unki chetna loutayi hai,wo sab uske liye aabhar mehsoos karne lage par fir jab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne unhe bataya ki kis shart ke tahat RAAZ ne ye sab kiya hai,wo jaankar un dono ke hi maata pitah ko krodh aa gaya aur...


SLUNDER FATHER-uska itna dushaas...hamare PLANETS ke badle usne hume hamari chetna loutayi hai....hume ye souda manzoor nahi....

ACCHUTA FATHER-sahi kaha..aur aap dono jo ki apne apne PLANETS ke yuvraaj hain,aapne uski baat par samarthan kiya kaise...???

aapke liye sabse mahatvpurn aapka PLANET aur yahan ke log hone chahiye naa ki hum...

uske prastaav ko sunte hi aapko usse mana kar dena chahiye tha...

ACCHUTA-wo prastaav nahi tha,uska aadesh tha...aur humne bhi uski baat isiliye nahi maani kyunki hume aap sabko CHETNA loutani thi,balki isiliye maani kyunki hum nahi chahte the ki hamare faisle ki wajah se hamare log maare jaayen..

hum chahen ya naa chahen, PLANETS toh hume usse dene hi hain toh aise me hum kyun vyarth me apne logon ki bali den....

ACCHUTA FATHER-aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain...

usne aap dono ko dhamkaya aur aap dono dar gaye...

itna toh sochiye ki baat 2 PLANETS ki ho rahi hai,do raajyon ki nahi...wo hoga shaktishali,par hamari sainya shakti bhi kisise kam nahi....

agar usne zabardasti ki toh usse iska moohtod jawab milega....


krodh se bhar ACCHUTA ke FATHER ne ye baat kahi thi..

wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jinhone RAAZ ki shakti ke ek maamuli se bhaag ko mehsoos kiya tha,jisse mehsoos kar wo jaan gaye the ki ladhna toh door,un dono ke PLANETS ki puri sena milkar bhi uske saamne khade tak nahi ho paayenge aur isiliye....


ACCHUTA-aapko kya lagta hai ki humne is baat par vichar nahi kiya hoga...??

par yakin maaniye,hum dono PLANETS ki samast sena,yahan tak ki hamare SOLAR SYSTEM ke pure 13 PLANETS ki taakat bhi agar mila di jaaye toh bhi hum us RAAZ ka kuch bigad nahi paayenge....

SLUNDER-haan PITASHRI...aur is baat ka ek jeeta jaagta pramaan hum sabhi hain..

humne aapko bataya naa ki CHOSENS naam ke ek institution me jahan maayavi sikhsha di jaati hai,wahan hum dono ka selection ho gaya tha aur jahan humara bhes dhar hume is mout si neend me sulane waale dono vyakti chale gaye the...

us CHOSENS ko jinhone banaya tha,jinme apaar shakti hai fir bhi wo hum sabko us neend se jagane me asamarth the par us RAAZ ne hum sabko ek jhatke me theek kar diya..

zara soch ke dekhiye ki wo kitna taakatwar hoga...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki baat sunane ke baad bhi unke parents RAAZ ki shart ko nahi maan rahe the aur isiliye ab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke paas bas ek aakhri raasta hi bacha tha...

raasta tha wo ray jo RAAZ ne aise hi waqt ke liye wahan chhodi thi aur jo ab bhi apni jagah par rooki hui thi..

dono ki hi nazar us ray ki tataf ghum gayi aur fir...


SLUNDER-jisse ladhne ke baare me aap sab soch rahe hain,uske paas ALOUKIK shaktiyan hain..aisi shaktiyan jinse lada nahi jaa sakta...

khair,agar aapko fir bhi lagta hai ki aap log usse yudh kar sakte hain toh usse pehle ek baar wo jo ray dikh rahi hai,usse touch kar lijiye..


us ray ki taraf ishara karte hue SLUNDER ne ye baat kahi....


ACHHUTA-wo ray ussi ne wahan rakhi hai aur kaha hai ki agar aap sab uski baat se sehmat naa hon toh ek baar us ray ko chhu kar dekh len...


ACCHUTA FATHER-aisa kya hai us ray me???

ACCHUTA-khud check kar lijiye...


halke dar aur ghabrahat ke beech SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ke FATHERS aage badhe aur us ray ke saamne jaakar khade ho gaye...

ek pal sochne ke baad un dono ne hi us ray ko chhu liya par tabhi....


SATYA DARPAN....


yahi naam tha us ray ka...jisse chhute hi.....


BOOM.........


dono ke kaano me ye awaaz gunj uthi jisse un dono ko ek tez jhatka laga...


reason.....

RAAZ us PLANET ke saath kya kya kar sakta hai,us ray ko chhute hi ye dikhne laga tha un dono ko..

unhone dekha ki sirf ek waar se RAAZ is pure PLANET ko uske core sahit nasht kar raha hai jisse hua tha wo dhamaka...

dono hi PLANETS ke log us waar ki wajah se jalkar raakh ho gaye....pal bhar me hi do livings PLANETS chote chote meteors ka roop dhar pure bramhaand me fail gaye the....

ye sab scene dekh dono ke haath pair kaampne lag gaye....jo ladhne ka jasba un dono ke andar jaaga tha,wo ek second me gayab ho gaya...

jaise hi SATYA DARPAN ke scenes khatm hue aur wo ray gayab hua toh....


ACCHUTA FATHER-thik hai....jaisa wo chahta hai,waisa hi hoga....

SLUNDER FATHER-haan..par sabse pehle hume hamare sahiyogi PLANETS ko ye suchit karna hoga ki hum aur hamare PLANETS ke log wahan basne waale hain...

baat pure PLANET ke logon ki evacuation ki hai..isme waqt lagega....

hamare paas jitne bhi SPACE SHIPS hain,unme hamare PLANETS ke har baashinde ko bhar kar kahin aur shift karane me bhi kaafi waqt lagega...

hume ummid hai ki wo hame is kaarya ke liye ucchit waqt denge...


ab bhi halke halke kaampte hue dono hi SAMRATON ne ye baat kahi jispar unki patniyan shocked hui par isse pehle ki wo kuch kahen...


MAI-ek hafta hai aap logon ke paas, apne logon ko yahan se rukhsati ke liye mana lijiye...


ek gehra kaala dhuan jiske beech ek white ray chamak rahi thi,wo ubhri un sabke saamne jiske andar se ye awaaz aayi thi...

wahin kuch hi palon me us dhuen ne human form le liya jiska matlab tha ki un sabke saamne MAI khada tha....

mujhe dekhkar jaisi feeling SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ko aayi thi,thik waisi hi sarsarahat un dono ke MAATA PITAH ko bhi mujhe dekhte waqt hui..

meri aankhon me dekhte waqt uski khamoshi ko un sabne apne andar ek virani me badalte hue mehsoos kiya jiski wajah se un sabme ek ajeeb sa ghabrahat bharne laga tha..

haalat bolne waali nahi bachi thi un sabki par prakat hote hote jo baat maine kahi thi,us baare me toh unhe baat karna hi tha aur isiliye...


SLUNDERS FATHER-ek hafta..??par ek hafte me evacuation kaise possible hai...???

ACCHUTAS FATHER-itne waqt me hum apne apne logon ko yahan se nikalne ke liye convince zaroor kar sakte hain,par yahan se lejaane ke process me toh waqt lagega hi...


MAI-aap sab sirf apne apne planets ke logon ko yahan se lejaane ke liye ready kijiye..

unhe bhejne kaise hai,iski chinta karne ki aapko zaroorat nahi hai...

ek hafte ke andar jab bhi aap dono ke PLANETS ke baashinde maan jaayen toh ...

jis bhi Planet me aap aur aapke log jana chahenge,wahan ke liye thik is DOOR ki hi tarah jitni zaroorat hogi,utne WORLD DOORS khul jaayenge jisse hote hue sab apne naye ghar me jaa sakenge....


meri awaaz un sabko sirf sunayi hi nahi de rahi thi,balki ye awaaz un sabko apne andar gunjti hui si mehsoos ho rahi thi..


aur is wajah se un sabko apne andar ek ajeeb sa dar feel hua tha aur mujhe ye DAR ACHA LAGA...


meri baat sun un sabke mooh se kuch nikla nahi..un sabne bas haan me apna sir hilaya jispar...


MAI-ACCHUTA,SLUNDER...do options hain tumhare paas...

pehli...apne family aur logon ke saath raho...

dusri....wo shiksha jo tumhare bhesh me ab tak tumhare behroopiyon ne li hai,usse ab tum aage badhao ..

waise bhi,jo shiksha un do behroopiyon ne li thi,usse maine tumhare andar daal diya hai...


meri baat sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke PITAH kuch bolne ko hue jispar...


MAI-aap dono jo chaah rahe hain,wo ho nahi paayega...


meri baat un dono ko hi samajh me nahi aayi aur isiliye...


ACCHUTAS FATHER-hum samjhe nahi....

MAI-mere options dete waqt aap dono ye soch rahe the ki aapke putron ko aapke saath hi rehna chahiye taaki jab aap sab nayi jagah par basen, tab aapke putr jo ki aapke sourya mandal me sabse goonvaan the,wo sabki madad kar saken..


meri baat sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke dads ki aankhen badi ho gayi thi...

ek aisa vyakti jo unke man me chal rahe vichar tak padh sakta tha,ye jaankar unka mere prati dar aur badh gaya tha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue....


MAI-aapki is soch se koi faayda nahi hoga...

kyuki agar ye dono CHOSENS nahi gaye,toh inka extra tez dimag inse chinn liya jaayega...


meri baat sun wo sab behad shocked ho gaye the wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue,


MAI-ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,in dono ke hi dimag sirf isiliye hi tez hain kyunki ek din inhe CHOSENS me padhna tha...

jiski shuruat ek tarike se ho bhi chuki hai...ye dono bhale hi wahan ab tak nahi gaye hain,par inke behroopiyen toh wahan first PHASE me ek bada bhaag bita hi chuke hain...

aur ab ye dono wahan PHASE 2 me jaane waale hain..

aur us PHASE 2 ka ek niyam ye bhi hai ki agar koi wahan pahunchne ke baad backout karta hai toh usse uska extra tez chalne waala dimag aur hunar wapas le liya jaata hai...

ye dono yahan reh sakte hain par sirf ek common bande ki tarah jaise ki baaki sab hain...


jahan meri baat sun chaaron parents gehre soch me chale gaye the wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jinhone ab tak ki puri zindagi ek genius ke tag ke saath bitayi thi,wo soch rahe the ki bina us tag ke wo kaise survive karenge..!!!

ek aur chiz thi jo un dono ke man me chal rahi thi aur wo thi CHOSEN'S aur wahan ki exciting activities aur life...

wo life jo un jaison ke liye hi bani thi toh aise me bhala wo dono kaise wahan jaane se khud ko rok sakte the aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-mom dad...mai CHOSENS jaana chahta hun.. wahi meri asli jagah hai...

SLUNDER-mai bhi...aur sochiye,yahan toh hum sirf science ke through ki achievement haasil kar paayenge par wahan ki studies se humare andar supernatural capabilities bhi jaagengi jisse hum humare naye thikane me kitna kuch kar sakenge...


SLUNDER ki baat me dum tha aur isiliye...


SLUNDERS/ACCHUTA FATHER-thik hai...jaise hi hum hamare logon ke saath yahan apne Planet se shift honge,tum CHOSENS chale jaana...

MAI-ek hafta...is ek hafte me aap sab CARAPACE aur ARROW khaali karenge aur tum dono,

BRAIN,BODY aur BLOOD..tumhare in teen bhaagon ko maine AMPLIFY toh kar diya hai par in bhaagon se milne waali shakti filhal tumhare andar unstable hain...

isiliye is ek hafte me jitna waqt use me laa sakte ho,lao aur apne AMPLIFIED powers ko stabelize karo...


uske baad tum dono chaloge mere saath......CHOSENS.....





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-PHASE 2




WELCOME TO PHASE 2....MAI EK ELUSORY HUN AUR AGLE DONO PHASE KE LIYE MAI AAPKI SLAVE HUN...


saamne khade ek shaksh ko dekhte hue ELUSORY ne ye baat kahi jispar wo shaksh bas muskura diya...

wahin apni baat kehne ke baad us ELUSORY ne u shaksh ke liye CHARIOT prakat ki aur...

ELUSORY-aayiye,aapke DESTINATION ki taraf chalte hain...

ELUSORY ki baat sun aur CHARIOT ko apne saamne dekh wo shaksh aage badha aur usme baith gaya..

uske baiththe hi CHARIOT aage badhta chala gaya.. gallery se hota hua wo CHARIOT PHASE 2 ki duniya me enter hua jahan ke nazare ko dekh us bande ke chehre par smile aa gayi...

wo yunhi har chiz ko checkout karta hua aage badhta chala jaa raha tha...

aage badhta hua uska CHARIOT us poshe colony me enter hua jahan usse jaana tha aur tabhi...

ELUSORY- welcome home..... MASTER VIDEOUS......








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......








AAPKA APNA V...J......
Very Nice Update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MABEL BATATI HAI KI EK WEEK ME PHASE 2 SHURU HO JAAYEGA, DUSRI TARAF RAAZ ITNA HI WAQT DETA HAI ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE DADS KO UNKE PLANETS KHAALI KARNE KE LIYE WAHIN TEESRI TARAF VIDEOUS BHI PHASE 2 KI DUNIYA ME PAHUNCH CHUKA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



MEGA UPDATE-57




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE GREAT HALL






WOOO.THIS PLACE IS HUGE MAN......



THE GREAT HALL me enter karti hui ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi thi jispar MAHI aur MABEL ne bhi haami bhari....

THE GREAT HALL....jahan aaj naye session ke pehle din PHASE 2 aur PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS ikattha hone waale the.....

500 metres se bhi thoda lamba aur utna hi chowda hai THE GREAT HALL....

wahin is HALL ke end me kareeb 50 se zyada doors the jinke dusri taraf MAGICAL ROOMS the aur saath hi METAPHYSICAL ACTIVITIES ko trigger karne waali mayavi equipments bhi thi par ye kuch khaas rooms me hi moujud thi...

PHASE 2 aur 3 ke zyadatar practice sessions yahin issi HALL me hote hain....

hall ke chaaron taraf dekhti hui MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN HALL ke centre ki taraf jahan sitting arrangements ki gayi thi,badh rahi thi...

wahan pehle se hi bohot se SAVENTS aa gaye the jo apne apne groups me khade yaa fir jahan unke CATAGORIES ka naam likha tha,wahan baithe hue the...

wahin jahan SAVENTS ki sitting arrangements hui thi,uske theek aage hall ke beech me ek bada sa stage bana hua tha jahan filhal bohot se WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS aur saath hi the THREE SOVEREIGN'S bhi baithe hue the...

aage badhti hui MABEL ki nazar jab GROOMERS ke uniform par gayi toh...


MABEL-yaar,wo dekho, categorically uniforms me bhi differentiation hain...


saamne ek taraf jahan GROOMERS ka section tha,wahan khade SAVENTS ko dekh kar MABEL ne ye baat kahi thi....

reason....


PHASE 2 me teeno catagories ke SAVENTS ke uniform bhi alag alag the....


jahan is waqt MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN jo ki STELLARS the,unhone WHITE ROBE pehna hua tha wahin GROOMERS bhi robes hi pehente the par us ROBE ka colour pure white naa hokar muddy white tha saath hi unke uniform me use hone waale kapde ki quality bhi average thi jo dekhte hi samajh me aa rahi thi wahin WEAKLINGS catagory ke SAVENTS robes nahi balki normal MUDDY colour ki shirt aur faded black pant pehente the jisse dekhkar aisa lagta tha maano kisi ne barso use kiye jaa chuke second hand kapde pehne ho...

khair, GROOMERS ko ek baar dekhte hue wo teeno aage badh rahi thi ki tabhi ALFREEN ki nazar hall me right wing ki taraf gayi jahan khade the ANWIR aur MORANA...


ALFREEN-yaar dekho ye ANWIR aur MORANA ne WICKEDS se milte julte kapde pehne hue hain...


ALFREEN ki baat sun jab MAHI aur ALFREEN ne uski point ki hui jagah ki taraf dekha toh unhe ANWIR aur MORANA unke group ke saath dikhe...


saath hi unse kuch door ek dusra bada sa group bhi tha jinhone MORALS ke jaise kapde pehne hue the...


MAHI-hoga PHASE 3 ka kuch..

MABEL-ye dono pakka is saal hamare liye problems create karenge...

MAHI-wo hamare liye karenge toh hum unke liye karenge...


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MABEL muskura diye aur yunhi baat karte hue wo teeno pahunchne apne catagory STELLARS waali jagah par jahan unke liye LUXURIOUS COUCHES rakhe hue the aur filhal un couches par already 3 SAVENTS baithe hue the jinme se ek VALDIS bhi tha...

MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL,ye teeno bhi jaakar COUCHES me baith gaye..

32 SAVENTS the kul FIRST PHASE me jinme se sirf 6 logon ne hi STELLARS catagory ke liye qualify kiya tha aur wahi 6 is waqt couches me baithe hue the...



wahin couch par baith MAHI ne dekha ki GROOMERS ke liye couches nahi balki normal chairs rakhe gaye the aur bachi WEAKLING catagory...

unhe yahan baithna tak allowed nahi tha..is catagory ke SAVENTS ko jo ki filhal sirf BRAWNY tha,is hall me khada hi rehna tha aur isiliye BRAWNY filhal apna sir neeche kiye hue ek jagah par khada hua tha jisse MAHI ne dekh liya tha..


MAHI-ek educational institution bhi itna biased ho sakta hai,kabhi socha nahi tha...


MAHI ki baat MABEL aur ALFREEN ne sun ki thi ayr isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar us SAVENT ko waise dekhkar bura toh mujhe bhi lag raha hai par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain...???

is baare me toh pehle hi clear kiya jaa chuka tha...yahan par agar acche se survive karna hai toh performance is must...

ab wo aisa nahi kar paaya isiliye wahan us position ke liye bounded hai...


ALFREEN ki baat par koi kuch kehta ki usse pehle...



GOOD MORNING SAVENTS....AAP SABKO PHASE 2 AUR PHASE 3 ME PAHUNCHNE KI BOHOT SAARI SHUBKAAMNAAYEN...



stage ke beech me khadi hui SHAILA ne kahi ye baat jiske baad sabhi SAVENTS ka dhyan unki taraf ghum gaya...


SHAILA-sabse pehle PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS...aap sabhi apni apni catagory ke WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ko jaan lijiye....

sabse pehle STELLARS....aap sabki class ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS hain MABBA,SAPIUS aur REGIS...


SHAILA ke aisa bolte hi unke side me MABBA, SAPIUS aur REGIS aakar khade ho gaye....


MABBA-STELLARS sirf ek catagory nahi hai,balki ek bohot badi zimmedari bhi hai....

zimmedari khud ke talent ko ek nayi unchayi par lejaane ki jisse STELLARS group ki garima bani reh...

aap sabse pehle jitne bhi batches is catagory se paas out hue hain,un sabne ye zimmedari bakhubi nibhayi hai,aur mujhe aap sabse bhi yahi ummid hai...


apne chir parichit ghamand se bhare awaaz ke saath MABBA ne ye baat kahi jispar SAPIUS aur REGIS bas muskura diye....


AKSHAANT-now GROOMERS...ye hain aapke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER...

EDWINA,ROVEL and PETRA...


AKSHAANT ke bolte hi stage ke dusri side do WHIZZ jinme se ek EDWINA aur dusri PETRA thi,wo khadi ho gayi aur unke baaju me khade the WHIZZDER ROVEL....

but unlike MABBA, apne intro ke baad bhi ye teeno muskurakar apne group GROOMERS ko dekhte hue bilkul shaant khade rahe....


MOKALSAR-and lastly WEAKLINGS catagory ki WHIZZ hain HIDA.....


MOKALSAR ke is naam ko pukarte hi ROVEL ke baaji me ek patli si choti kad ki lady jo ki WEAKLINGS catagory ki WHIZZ HIDA thi,aakar khadi ho gayi aur jab aisa hua toh...



HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.....


HIDA ko dekhte hi ANWIR & MORANA ka group zoron se hasne lag gaya jisse dekh jahan ek taraf PHASE 2 ke sabhi SAVENTS halke hairan hue wahin WHIZZ HIDA jo pehle hi dekhne par kaafi under confident lag rahi thi,unka chehra sharm se aur neeche ho gaya...


HIDA..... pichle 15 PHASES se WEAKLINGS ki eklouti WHIZZ jiski har naye session me us session ke STELLARS catagory ke kaafi SAVENTS ke through lagatar beizzati hoti chali aa rahi hai...

aur beizzati karne me ab tak sabse aage rahe the MORANA or ANWIR ka group jinhone pichle PHASE me lagatar laghbhag har din WHIZZ HIDA ki alag alag tarike se khichayi ki thi aur yahi wajah se thi ki HIDA ka naam anounce hote hi ANWIR ka group HIDA ki khilli udaane waali hasi hasne laga tha...

khair,HIDA ka intro ho chuka tha aur isiliye baat ko aage badhate hue...


SHAILA-aapke is PHASE ki classes kaise lagengi,aap sabke apne PHASES aur catagories ki complete activities,saath hi wo ACCESS CARDS jinki madad se aap PHASE 2 ke sabhi luxuries ka apne catagory ke hisaab se lutf utha paayenge,unke baare me aap sabko aapke appointed WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke through pata chal jaayega...

and for PHASE 3 SAVENTS...chune hue har WICKEDS aur MORALS ko hamari shubkaamnayen...

par jin SAVENTS ka chunaav in do groups me nahi ho paaya hai,wo PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory ke saath dobara khud ko nourish karenge...

hum ummid karte hain ki is session ke PHASE 2 aur PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS khudko ab tak ke CHOSENS ke itihas ke best SAVENTS saabit karenge.....


SAVENTS ke fresh allots se SOVEREIGN'S ki baat ho chuki thi aur isiliye sabhi SAVENTS ko ye laga ki ab essembly conclude hone waali hai par aisa tha nahi...

kyunki ab waqt tha aaj ke ya fir ye kahun ki ab tak ke sabse bade aur ehem announcements ki aur isiliye....


AKSHAANT-well humare paas teen news hai jo hum aap sabke saath share karna chahte hain...

pehli....aap sabko ye baat toh pata hi hai ki CHOSENS se kuch kilometers door ek FOREST hai... FORBIDDEN FORREST....

wo forest aisi bohot si cheezon se bhara hua hai jinse aap sabko apni metaphysical capabilities ko nikharne me madad mil sakti hai aur saath hi naye aur exciting adventures karne ke liye bhi us forest me kaafi spots hai...

aur kyunki wo forest ek empenitrable SHIELD se covered raha hai isiliye wahan koi kabhi jaa nahi paaya hai..

par ye jaankar aap sabko behad khushi hogi ki ab aisa nahi hai...us FOREST ke chaaron taraf lagi SHIELD hata di gayi hai aur isiliye aap sab ab wahan jaakar us FOREST ko explore kar paayenge but with supervision...

khudse wahan jaana khatre se bhara ho sakta hai isiliye aisa karna allowed nahi hai....


AKSHAANT ki baat sunkar sabhi SAVENTS bohot excited ho gaye the aur hona bhi chahiye....

jis jagah ke baare me un sabne sirf padha tha,us jagah ko,us FOREST ko ab wo sab explore kar sakte the aur ye koi choti baat nahi thi...

sabhi SAVENTS iske baare me ek dusre se baat kar hi rahe the ki tabhi....



MOKALSAR-shaant ho jaaiye....


gunj si uthi MOKALSAR ki awaaz us HALL me jiske turant baad pure hall me pin drop silence ho gaya tha...


MOKALSAR-dusri news ye hai ki jaisa ki aap sabko pata hai ki har saal pure universe ke alag alag planets se yahan CHOSENS me SAVENTS laaye jaate hain jo yahan metaphysical activities ki study karte hain...

pichle saal bhi ye kriya dohrayi gayi thi jiska natija yahan moujud PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS hain...

but aap sabhi ki tarah ek SAVENT aur tha jisse pichle session me CHOSENS join karna tha par kuch serious problems ki wajah se wo aisa kar nahi paaya...

wo SAVENT bhale hi yahan nahi aa paaya par humne usse uske hi PLANET me PHASE 1 ki study karwayi thi jisme usne acha perform karte hue apne soul ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya tha...


jiska matlab hai ki us SAVENT ne PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory me khudko qualify karwa liya hai...

aur isiliye is session me wo yahan PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory ka hissa hoga...


MOKALSAR ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS shocked ho gaye...kyunki aisa kuch pehli baar ho raha tha...

wahin ye sab sun MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN us naye SAVENT se jo ki ab unke hi catagory ka hissa tha,milne ke liye excited ho gaye the...

khair,ye toh thi dusri news par ab baari thi new number 3 ki aur isiliye.....



SHAILA-PHASE 2 SAVENTS...aap sabko yaad hoga ki aapke pichle PHASE me SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION ke waqt aapke teen PHASE MATES,RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER laapata ho gaye the...

achi khabar ye hai ki wo teeno bilkul thik hain aur is PHASE me wo teeno aap sabko join karne waale hain...

infact,wo abhi thodi der me aap sabke saamne honge...


SHAILA ki baat sun sabhi PHASE 2 ke sabhi SAVENTS suprise bhi hue aur khush bhi...

ALFREEN ke man me bhi RAAZ par waar karne ka jo ek bojh sa tha,wo bhi ab kam hone laga tha...

MAHI bhi SHAILA ki baat sun behad khush thi par uski khushi ka reason kuch alag tha...

aur wo reason the MARIA aur FLORIN... MAHI ko pata tha ki wo dono RAAZ ke gumshuda hone ki wajah se sabse zyada dukhi hue the aur ab jab RAAZ wapas aa gaya hai,toh wo dono bhi kaafi khush hone waale the...

khair,baat ko aage badhate hue...


SHAILA-ye thi wo teen news...


aur ab sabse pehle aap sab apne us PHASE MATE se mil lijiye jo CHOSENS me sidhe PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory me enter karne waala hai...

VIDEOUS....


saamne ki taraf point karte hue halke zor se SHAILA ne ye naam pukara jisse sun...



MAHI-VIDEOUS....wierd name....


dheere se kaha MAHI ne ye aur uske baad uska aur uske saath sabhi ka chehra piche ki taraf jahan SHAILA ne point kiya tha,ghum gaya aur tabhi....


OH....MY...GOD.....



ek saath nikle ye shabd kayi ladkiyon ke mooh se...

reason....


VIDEOUS......naam hi kaafi hai...


STELLARS ki uniform pehne ek gora,muscular banda jiske chehre par itna tej tha ki pata nahi nahi chal raha tha ki zyada kya chamak raha hai...

wo white robe jo usne pehna hua tha ya fir uska confidence aur ATTITUDE se bhara handsome chehra...

aankhon me chamak,chehre par halki si muskaan aur chaal me zabardast confidence liye aage badhta chala aa raha tha VIDEOUS...

aur yunhi chalte hue jaise hi wo MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ke couch ke paas pahuncha toh....

uski nazar un teeno ki taraf yaa fir ye kahun ki MAHI ki taraf ghumi...

wahin MAHI jo ussiko dekh rahi thi,jab VIDEOUS ne usse dekha toh usne apni nazar sidhi kar li.....

ek pal ke liye hi dekha VIDEOUS ne MAHI ko aur fir nazar sidhi kar aage badh chala...


VIDEOUS ki personality se impress sirf girl SAVENTS hi nahi hui thi balki stage par khadi MABBA, EDWINA,PETRA aur yahan tak ki WHIZZ HIDA bhi hui thi jo ektak VIDEOUS ko dekhe jaa rahi thi....

stage par pahunch ek baar sabhi WHIZZ, WHIZZDER aur SOVEREIGN'S ko dekh VIDEOUS SAVENTS ki taraf face karkar khada ho gaya...


AKSHAANT-kuch kehna chahoge VIDEOUS....


AKSHAANT ki baat sun ek baar uski taraf dekh muskuraya VIDEOUS aur fir...


VIDEOUS-SHAKTI,is bramhaand ki sabse badi shiksha bhi hai aur ek maatra SACH bhi...

aur CHOSENS is shiksha aur sach ka ek jeeta jaagta swaroop hai...


mujhe khushi hai ki mai yahan hun..aur jin logon ki soch mere jaisi hai,woh aaj toh khush hain hi,aage bhi rehne waale hain......

ek karkashta thi VIDEOUS ki awaaz me jo naa sirf wahan moujud har kisike kaano me padh rahi thi balki kaano se utarti hui uski awaaz sabke dil tak ko jhanjhor rahi thi...

VIDEOUS ne jo kaha,usse koi aur khush ho naa ho par MABBA jiski soch bhi waisi hi thi jaisa VIDEOUS ne bola tha,bohot khush hui thi...

wahin VIDEOUS ki baat sun teeno SOVEREIGN'S muskura uthe....


MOKALSAR-ab baari hai aap sabki apne unhi teen missing PHASE MATES se milne ki...





PLACE-OUTSIDE THE INSTITUTION




WOW........




PHASE 2 ke pure area se guzarte hue finally institution ke sarhad par pahunchne tak bas ye WOW shabd hi nikalta raha ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke mooh se...


subah ka waqt hai aur finally wo din aa hi gaya jab PHASE 2 shuru hone waala tha aur isiliye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan CHOSENS me pahunch chuke the aur filhal institution ke PHASE 2 block ke gate ke baahar khade the...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke grah jis SOLAR SYSTEM me hai, wahan waise toh baaki sabhi grah in dono ke grah ki izzat karte the,par in sabke beech 2 aise Planets bhi hain jo CARAPACE aur ARROW ke sabse bade samarthak bhi hain aur us SOLAR SYSTEM ke area wise sabse bade PLANETS bhi...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke FATHER'S ne unhi do PLANETS se khudke aur khudke Planet ke logon ki survival ke liye refuge maangi thi jisse un dono PLANETS ke KINGS ne saharsh maan liya tha aur isiliye hi aaj subah hi RAAZ ke dwara khole gaye asankhya WORLD DOORS ki madad se CARAPACE aur ARROW ke pure log apne naye PLANET aur aashiyane me shift ho gaye the...

wahin in sab se alag ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke saamne jo WORLE DOOR khula tha,wo yahan ELYSIAN ka tha jiske dusri taraf tha PHASE 2 jahan pahunch chalte chalte PHASE 2 ki khubsoorat duniya ka deedar karte hue ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan institution ke gate ke baahar pahunche the...


ACCHUTA-bhai,aakhir pahunch hi gaye...

SLUNDER-haan,par ek baat samajh nahi aati ki RAAZ ne kaha tha ki wo bhi hamare saath hi yahan padhenge fir wo hamare saath kyun nahi aaye....???

ACCHUTA-toh yahan tak ka raasta tere phupha ne bataya hai kya...???


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ne usse ghur kar dekha par iska ACCHUTA par koi fark nahi pada...


ACCHUTA-RAAZ ne hi toh hamare brain se judkar hume yahan tak ka raasta bataya hai..wo yahin hai bas saamne nahi aaya hai ab tak....


SLUNDER-hmm..chal hum toh andar chalte hi hain....

is gate se hote hue SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA dono hi institution ke gate se hote hue andar daakhil ho gaye....

wahin kuch door chalne ke baad un dono ko ek giant size ka hall dikha aur aisa hote hi unke dimag me unhe ussi hall ke andar jaane ka sanket diya....

ye sanket RAAZ ke through hi unhe mila tha jisse jaankar un dono ne apne kadam us HALL ke taraf hi badha diye..

par abhi un dono ne apna apna ek kadam hi aage badhaya tha ki tabhi....


SLUNDER-arre,ye kya ho raha hai...???ye kaise kapde aa gaye hakn mere sharir par...???

ACCHUTA-sirf tere nahi humare...???

saala ye kaise kapde hain..???kichad ki colour ka crushed shirt aur ye ghisi hui kaali pant...aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi bhikari ne 15 saal pehenane ke baad apne kapde daan diye hue hon...

SLUNDER-aur inka size bhi humare size se kaafi bada hai...


hall ke andar ghus age badhte hue dono ke mooh se ye baatein nikli thi par isse aage wo kuch kehte ki tabhi padi un dono ke kaan me ek awaaz jisme....



MOKALSAR-RAAZ ACCHUTA, SLUNDER,.....



RAAZ ke saath un dono ka naam bhi anounce ho chuka tha jisse sun dono ka hi dhyan saamne ki taraf gaya jahan is waqt bohot se bacche jo ko unke hi age ke lag rahe the,baithe hue the aur un sabke aage ek bada sa stage laga hua tha jahan bohot se log khade hue the aur unhike beech se unke naam pukare gaye the...

aur isiliye halki hickichahat ke saath wo dono aage stage ki taraf badh gaye...

wahin naam anounce hote hi sabhi SAVENTS aur khaas kar ALFREEN aur MAHI ne turant apni nazar puche ghumayi jahan unhe dikhai diye SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA par unhone dekha ki filhal RAAZ abhi nadarad tha...

wahin in sabse alag sabse zyada utsukta dikh rahi thi stage ke ek side me khade VIDEOUS ki jo obviously RAAZ ko dekhne liye hi thi par jab usne RAAZ ko ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke saath nahi dekha toh uske maathe par sochne ke bal padhne lage the...

in sabke beech ab tak ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER stage ke paas pahunch gaye the par isse pehle ki wo dono stage par chadhte....


JISSE DEKHKAR TUM DONO KE ANDAR MUJHE DEKHNE SE HONI WAALI GHABRAHAT MEHSOOS HO,JAWAB USSI KO DEKHKAR DENA...


RAAZ ki awaaz gunj uthi un dono ke dimag me jispar ek pal ke liye toh wo dono thithak se gaye par fir ek baar ek dusre ko dekh wo dono aage badh gaye...

stage ki sidhiyan chadhte waqt un dono ki nazar upar khade har shaskh par gayi aur aisa hote hote jab unki nazar VIDEOUS par gayi jo unhe hi dekh raha tha toh un dono ko laga wahi dar jo unhe RAAZ ki aankhon me dekhkar lagta tha...

halki halki ghabrahat ke beech wo dono MOKALSAR ke saamne pahunch gaye...


MOKALSAR-RAAZ kahan hai..???wo toh tumhare hi saath tha naa???

MOKALSAR ki baat sun ek baar ek dusre ko dekh un dono ne apni gardan ghumadi VIDEOUS ki taraf jo unke answer ki hi pratiksha kar raha tha...

ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-RAAZ ne kaha hai ki wo aa raha hai...tab tak intazar kijiye...

halki zor ki awaaz me kahi ye baat ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne jisse sun ek saath alag alag reactions saamne aaye...

jahan ek taraf teeno SOVEREIGN'S aur unke saath VIDEOUS ke chehte par bhi muskaan aa gayi wahin stage par khade baaki sabhi WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER hairan reh gaye par unke beech khadi MABBA ko aa gaya krodh...


ek SAVENT ne jo ki ek WEAKLING tha,usne un sab ko wait karne ke liye kaha tha,ye jaankar MABBA ko krodh toh aana hi tha...


MABBA-tum dono jaante bhi ho ki kya keh rahe ho aur kisse keh rahe ho...???

daanton ko bheenche hue halki halki gurrate hue MABBA ne ye kahi jisse sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi thode sehem gaye...

SLUNDER kuch kehne ko hua par tabhi ACCHUTA ki nazar saamne gayi aur....


ACCHUTA-HE IS HERE...RAAZ aa gaya....


haath aage point kar kahi thi ye baat ACCHUTA ne...


par sehme hue hone ki wajah se zara zyada zor se bol gaya ACCHUTA jis wajah se wahan moujud sabhi ko uski baat sunayi de gayi aur isiliye sabhi ki gardan ek baar firse piche ki taraf palti aur jab aisa hua toh....



BLOODY HELL.....WOW.........



nazar rook si gayi sabki wahan jahan is waqt khada tha...................MAI.................

aur jo shabd mujhe dekh nikle the,waise toh wo shabd wahan moujud har bandi aur shayad har bande ke dil me bhi gunja hoga par mooh se ye shabd nikle the MORANA ke jisse sun uske baaju me khade ANWIR ne usse ek look diya par MORANA mujhe dekhne me kuch aisi khoyi hui thi ki uska dhyan kahin aur gaya hi nahi....

wahin ek pal khade rehne ke baad mai badha aage...

filhal hum ek hall me the jahan par environment ko magic se cool banaye rakhne ke liye halki halki hawa chal rahi thi aur us hawa me lehra rahe the mere halke lambe baal...

jaw line meri perfect thi jisse mera fair chehra aur behtar bana raha tha...

gore chehre ke beech meri gehri kaali aankhen itni deep thi ki door se dekhne par bhi iski gehrayi saafi nazar aa sakti thi aur filhal wahan moujud lagbhag har bandi ki aankhen meri inhi kaali aankhon me jhaank rahi thi....

wahi muddy shirt pehni hui thi maine jo mere chowde biceps aur piche ki taraf cuts bana kar nikalte hue triceps me chipak kar ek alag hi look dene lagi thi.....

neeche ki meri faded pant narrow thi jo mere thighs se chipakne ki wajah se alag hi dikh rahi thi...

kuch pal khade rehne ke baad maine apne kadam aage badha diye aur badh chala mai stage ki taraf...


HAAYEEEE.........


har row jisse hote hue mai aage badh raha tha,wahan baithi bandiyon ke mooh se ek thandi aah nikal rahi thi par un sab bewajah ke human compliments ko ignore karte hue mai aage badh raha tha..

wahin insab ke beech sabse alag reactions the MAHI aur ALFREEN ke chehre par...

unhe yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ki jo ladka unke saamne se chala aa raha hai,ye wahi RAAZ hai jisse wo jaanti thi...

kahan wo dabbu sa,saanwla aur patla RAAZ aur kahan dusri taraf mai jo hatta katta tha aur jiski height 6 feet se bhi upar nikal rahi thi....

jiski naa toh hieght,naahi baaki koi personality us RAAZ se match khaati thi jisse wo dono jaanti thi...

kuch hi palon me mai unke row tak pahunch chuka tha par wahan pahunchne ke baad bhi maine un dono ki taraf ek second ke liye bhi apni nazarein nahi ghumayi aur sidhe stage ki taraf badh chala...

jab side se guzarte hue bhi maine MAHI ki tarar nahi dekha toh usse behad ajeeb feel hua tha...

wahin stage par khade har shaksh ki aankhen bhi mujhpar hi tiki hui thi....

jahan SOVEREIGN'S mere wajood ke pura hone ke baad pehli baar mujhe dekh khush ho rahe the,wahin WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS toh bas ek tak mujhe dekh hi rahe the..

un sabka dimag jaise mere presence me atak sa gaya tha....

MABBA jo mere aane se pehle ACCHUTA ki baat sun uspar aur mujhpar naaraz thi,wo bhi jaise apna wo ghussa bhul si gayi thi...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne toh mujhe dekhte hi apni nazarein neechi kar li thi...

aur in sabse alag khada tha VIDEOUS...jo behad chaaw aur excitement ke saath mujhe hi dekh raha tha...

wahin VIDEOUS se ulat maine uski taraf dekha tak nahi aur stage par chaddh gaya....


SHAILA-welcome back RAAZ..apne PHASE MATES se kuch kehna chahoge...????


SHAILA ki taraf ek baar dekh maine saamne dekha jahan sabki nazar mujhpar hi thi...


MAI-SHAKTI.....is bramhaand ka sabse bada JHOOTH hai ye shabd....

ye woh shabd hai jisse kaayar apni kaayarta chuppane ke liye istemaal karte hain...

universe ka ek maatra sach hai DAR....kyunki ek dar hi hai jo zinda hone ka pura ehsaas dilata hai....

mujhe khushi hai ki mai CHOSENS dobara aaya hun,aur jin logon ki soch mere jaisi hai ,wo filhal khush ho yaa naa hon,par bhavishya me wo khush rehne waale hain...


jab mai bol raha tha tab wahan moujud har SAVENT ko aur yahan tak ki mere baaju me khade WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS tak ko apne andar ek halka sa kampan mehoos ho raha tha par wo us feeling ko samajh nahi paa rahe the...

wahin VIDEOUS ne jo kaha tha,maine theek uska ulat bola jisse sun ek taraf mere sabhi PHASEMATES shocked the kyunki gayab hone se pehle jahan maine kabhi normal conversation bhi kabhi nahi ki thi par aaj maine ek mini speech de di thi,dusri taraf VIDEOUS jisne meri baatein jo uske ulat thi,usse sun wo halke se has diya tha aur teesri taraf MABBA jo VIDEOUS ki baat se itifaaq rakhti thi aur aise me jab maine ek alag hi baat kahi thi toh isiliye wo ghussa jo unka mujhpar mere aane se pehle tha,wo wapas jaag gaya tha aur isiliye...


MABBA-ek WEAKLING hokar itni badi badi baatein karna tumhe suit nahi karta ladke....


mujhe ghurti hui MABBA ne ye baat kahi jispar...


MAI- SOVEREIGN'S...kya ye aurat WEAKLINGS ko padhayengi....!!!

MABBA-mind your tounge young man...mai yahan ek respectable WHIZZ hun aur tum mujhe aurat keh rahe ho....

MAI-thik waise hi jaise mai yahan ek SAVENT hun aur aap mujhe ladka keh rahi hain...


meri baat sun MABBA ka ghussa aur badh gaya tha...wo fir se kuch kehne ko hui par...


MAI- SOVEREIGN'S...yahan WEAKLINGS ki WHIZZ kaun hai..???


MABBA ko point karte hue maine ye baat kahi jispar...


AKSHAANT-..HIDA..ye hain aapki WHIZZ...


HIDA WHIZZ ki taraf point karte kaha AKSHAANT ne...


MAI-then why is this WHIZZ talking to me...???


MABBA ki taraf dekh maine ye baat kahi aur fir bina kuch sune mai stage se utar us taraf badh chala jahan BROWNY khada tha...

wahin meri baat sun aur meri unhe yun ignore kar chale jaane se man hi man fat si padi thi MABBA par SOVEREIGN'S ke saamne hone ki wajah se wo kuch kar sakti nahi thi isiliye filhal ke liye unhone khudko shaant kar liya...

wahin kyunki ab saari announcements ho chuki thi isiliye....


AKSHAANT-so SAVENTS..we wish all of you a great PHASE ahead...

baaki ki baatein aapke appointed WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS aapse apne CATAGORY aur group ke hisaab se karenge....


ek baar VIDEOUS aur ek baar meri taraf dekh teeno SOVEREIGN'S stage se utarkar chale gaye....

wahin SOVEREIGN'S ke jaate hi sabhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS apne apne groups ke paas jaane lage....


MABBA-aayiye VIDEOUS...aap hamare saath apne catagory ke PHASE MATES ke paas chaliye...

jahan ye bol MABBA, SAPIUS aur REGIS STELLARS ki taraf chal pade
wahin unke jaate hi VIDEOUS ek dusri taraf chal pada...


WEAKLINGS catagory jahan filhal WHIZZ HIDA ke saath ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY khade the,unke baaju se hota hua VIDEOUS thoda aage chal diya jahan apni peeth karke akele khada hua tha MAI...

aur mai yahan khada bhi isiliye hi hua tha kyunki mujhe maalum tha ki sabse pehle VIDEOUS mere paas hi aayega aur wo hi gaya...


VIDEOUS-ye bohot galat baat hai...jiske astitv ki wajah se tujhe tera astitv mila, usse ab tak milna toh door dekha bhi nahi tune....

MAI-tere astitv ki wajah se nahi,balki tere astitv ko mitane ki wajah se mila hai mujhe mera astitv..

aur jab ek din tujhe gayab hi ho jaana hai, toh fir tujhe dekhne ka,tujhse milne ka kya faayda...!!!


VIDEOUS ki taraf palaththe hue uski aankhon me jhaank maine ye baat kahi jisse sun...


VIDEOUS-manushya sadharan ho yaa fir asadharan..ek baat toh sabme common hoti hi hai...khwab dekhna...tu bhi dekh le...isme koi burayi nahi...

MAI-dhyan se dekh mujhe...naa toh mai soya hua hun aur naahi meri aankhen band hai...

aur jaagte hue sapne dekhne ki mujhe aadat nahi....

aankh teri band thi hazaron saalon se,toh khwab aur us khwab me khudke liye galatfehmi paalna,tera kaam hai,mera nahi....

VIDEOUS-jinki rooh,jinka dimag apne hisaab se kaam karta hai,unhe aate hai khwab...

tere saamne the last level GENIUS KHADA HAI,

VIDEOUS khada hai.....

jiska dimag aur rooh dono hi uske hisaab se chalte hain...mere khwab dikhte baad me hain,pure pehle ho jaate hain....

MAI-ye baat tab tak sach thi jab tak MAI nahi tha...ab tere khwab pure ho naa hon,par tere din zaroor pure ho chuke hain....

bohot shouk hai naa tujhe competition ka,dekh tere saamne khada hai RAAZ...

wo naam jo agar kisi competition me likha hai,toh uska matlab hai,FIRST PLACE RESERVED...

VIDEOUS-tu sirf ek khiladi hai RAAZ....par mai koi khiladi nahi balki pura KHEL hun...

mujhme khela jaata hai,mujhse khela nahi jaa sakta...

MAI-har khel me khiladi hote hain... par kabhi na kabhi koi aisa khiladi zaroor aata hai jiske baad wo khel us khiladi ke naam se jaana jaata hai...

mai wahi khiladi hun VIDEOUS...is khel ke rules tune banaye hain,maidan bhi tune chuna hai(CHOSENS)...


ab dekh,tere hi saamne,
tere hi rules ke saath
tere hi KHEL ka,

NAKSHA BADAL DUNGA MAI....


tere har daav,tere har paitre
teri har chaal ko tujh par
hi palat ek din,

TUJHKO BHI MASAL DUNGA MAI...










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....










AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Very nice update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF PHASE 2 KA PEHLA DIN SHURU HO CHUKA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ AUR VIDEOUS PEHLI BAAR AAMNE SAAMNE AATE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)




UPDATE-58



PLANET-PHASE 2


PLACE-THE GREAT HALL





HMM..TOH AAP SAB HAIN IS SESSION KE STELLARS....


THE GREAT HALL ke side me bane aneko rooms me se wo room jisse STELLARS catagory ke liye rakha gaya tha,wahan VIDEOUS ko milakar kul saath SAVENTS ek taraf bane seats par baithe hue the jinhe dekh MABBA ne ye baat kahi thi...

wahin un saathon ke group se kuch doori banaye hue ek aur 19 logon ka group baitha hua tha...

aur ye group the pichle 2 sessions ke PHASE 2 ke STELLARS SAVENTS jinhe is session me naa toh WICKEDS me aur naahi MORALS ki team me jagah mili thi aur isiliye wo sab bhi apna PHASE 2 repeat kar rahe the...

VIDEOUS ke group se ek baar mukhatib hone ke baad WHIZZ MABBA ki nazar ussi dusre group ki taraf ghumi aur....


MABBA-tum sab jaisi hi haalat hoti hai aksar un sabki jab jo taakat se upar kisi aur chiz ko rakhta hai...


STELLARS the tum pichle session me aur sirf ussiki wajah se is saal bhi is prestigious catagory me jagah mili hai tum sabko...

PHASE 3 me naa chune jaane se tum sabne bas ek hi chiz saabit ki hai aur wo ye hai ki you guys are good for nothing...

loosers hi ho tum sab...par fir bhi mouka mila hai tumhe,try karna ki pichli baar jaisi aadhi adhuri will power aur incompetency repeat naa ho....got it....


SAB-yes WHIZZ...


sharm se sar jo jhukaye hue un 19 SAVENTS ne ye kaha tha...


MABBA-waise tum sabke motivation ke liye kuch live example tumhare is batch me hi moujud hai..

MAHI,ALFREEN,MABEL,VALDIS yahan aayiye...


WHIZZ MABBA ke bulate hi ye chaaron aage badhte hue unke paas jaakar khade ho gaye....


MABBA-yahan moujud baaki sabhi SAVENTS first PHASE me apne apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar paaye the par unlike you all, mere saath jo ye chaar SAVENTS khade hain,wo tum sabse,infact har session me padhte chale aa rahe SAVENTS se aage nikal gaye hain...

jahan VALDIS ki soul 4 percent tak amplified ho gayi hai wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ne apne SOUL ko 5 percent tak AMPLIFY kar diya hai...

aur in sabse aage hai MAHI...jisne first PHASE me apne SOUL ko 8 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya hua hai jo ki CHOSENS ke ab tak ke itihaas me sabse zyada hai....

aise AMPLIFICATIONS har session me dekhne ko nahi milte aur isiliye hi inke talents se sikh tum sab bhi khudko nikharne ki koshish karo...

REGIS-MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN, VALDIS...we are really very proud of you...

SAPIUS-absolutely...aur hume tum chaaron se is session me bhi kaafi
ummiden hain...

CHAARON-thanks WHIZZDERS..we will give our best....


jab REGIS aur SAPIUS in chaaron ko congratulate kar rahe the,tab MABBA ki nazar baaki ke SAVENTS par padi jinme jitni bhi girls SAVENTS thi,wo sab VIDEOUS ko hi checkout kar rahi thi aur isiliye....


MABBA-focus SAVENTS....


girls ko ghurti hui MABBA ne ye baat kahi jispar wo sabhi girls hadbada kar saamne dekhne lagi..

wahin MABBA ki nazar VIDEOUS par aakar rooki jo unki taraf hi dekh raha tha...


MABBA-VIDEOUS..speech toh tumne bohot achi aur satik di thi...mujhe pasand aaya par SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke maamle me tum filhal borderline ko touch karke hi yahan STELLARS me jagah bana paaye ho jo ki bohot common baat hai...

par kyunki tumne ye yahan nahi balki apne planet me kiya hai joki karna wakayi mushkil hai isiliye mujhe lagta hai ki tum bohot aage jaa sakte ho...

mujhe tumse bohot ummiden hain....

MABBA ki baat sun VIDEOUS halke se muskura utha aur...


VIDEOUS-its just a matter of time WHIZZ..i will surprise you....

behad shaant par confident tarike se kahi VIDEOUS ne ye baat jisse sun MABBA ke chehre par bhi ek muskaan aa gayi...


MABBA-jaao,apni jagah par baith jaao....


MABBA ke aisa bolte hi MAHI, ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS apni apni jagah par jaakar baith gaye...


REGIS-well aap sabki actual classes kal se shuru hongi...abhi hum aap sabko aapke is PHASE me hone waale important activities ke baare me batayenge aur saath hi institution se baahar jo PHASE 2 ki duniya hai,jo ki aap sabhi STELLARS aur aapki families ke liye kisi heaven se kam nahi hai,usse explore karne ke liye jin ACCESS CARDS aur teen different coins ki zaroorat padti hai,wo aapko provide karenge aur aapko in chizon ko use karne ke tarika bhi hum batayenge...

SAPIUS-so lets start...is PHASE me aapke kul 2 hi class honge...

pehli class ka naam hai CLASS OF EXPANSIONaur dusri ka CLASS OF ELABORATION...

details aapko kal class ke waqt bataya jaayega....

in do classes me aap jo bhi sikhenge,us growth ko 2 baar EXERTION naam ke ek test me check kiya jaayega...

baaki ke jo do catagories hain,wo bhi is test ka hissa hote hain...

PHASE 2 ka aapka tenure bhi 18 months ka hi hota hai par ye 18 mahine do bhaagon me divided hote hain...

har bhaag 8 months ka hota hai aur uske beech ke do mahine jo ki 9th aur 10th hota hai,usme PHASE 2 aur PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS ko majority choice ke hisaab se kisi ek tourist PLANET par le jaaya jaata hai...

details aur bhi hain par wo time ke saath saath aap sabko batayi jaayengi...

MABBA-ye thi INSTITUTION ke andar ki baat...ab baat karte hain aapki us life ki jo aap aur aapke saath aapki family INSTITUTION ke bahar enjoy karne waali hain....

aur enjoy karne ke liye aap sabko jin chizon ki zaroorat padne waali hai,wo hain ye...


apni baat keh MABBA ne hawa me hi apna haath lehraya jiske turant baad sabhi SAVENTS ke saamne line se chaar chizen prakat hui jisse dekh wo sab hairan bhi hue aur un chizon ko dekh khush bhi...


MABBA-in chaaron ke combination ko LUXURY GATEWAYS kaha jaata hai...

ye jo tum sab ke left me RED CARD hai,yahi hai is duniya ka ACCESS CARD....

is card ka use yahan kuch bhi kharidne ke liye kiya jaa sakta hai...

is card ki koi limit nahi hai par jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki is PHASE me 2 baar EXERTION naam ka ek test hota hai jisme tum sabki progress record ki jaati hai,us test ke result ka asar is card aur saath hi baaki ke teen LUXURY GATEWAYS par bhi padta hai...

ACCESS CARD ke side me jo PURPLE COIN hai,ye hai ETHERIUM...

ETHERIUM ka use tum sab pubs,clubs aur bohot si alag alag night life places me entry ke liye kar sakte ho...

third me rakhi BLUE COIN hai TETHER...magical thrill parks,private party venues,the SEA SWIMMING POOL,aisi alag alag amusing jagahon par aap sirf is TETHAR ko dikhakar jaa sakte hain....

and lastly jo yellow coin hai,ye hai RIPPLE....ye coin tumhare parents nahi balki sirf tumhare liye hai...

is coin se tum sab the ANYLIZER naam ki jagah me jaa sakte ho aur ye facility sirf STELLARS ko hi mili hui hai...

haan agar tum chaahon toh dusre catagory ke SAVENTS ko apne zimmedari me wahan le jaa sakte ho...

ANYLIZER ek aisi jagah hai jahan tum sabne jo kuch bhi yahan institution me sikha hai, usse wahan jaakar seconds wise tak dekh, samajh aur apni galtiyon ko rectify karna sikh sakte ho...

par kyunki woh jagah extreme metaphisycal activities ke har moov tak ko detect karti hai, isiliye wahan par air pressure bohot zyada hota hai jis wajah se zyada der tak wahan par rehna bohot muhskil hai....

toh ye hain in chaaron LUXURY GATEWAYS ke kaam...got it...!!!

ALFREEN-WHIZZ ye chaaron toh sirf ek,ek hi available hain..kya hamare parents bhi inhi ek GATEWAYS se sabhi cheezen access kar paayenge...

MABBA-family strength ke hisaab se hi cards aur coins baatein gaye hain...

tumhare GATEWAYS ke andar tumhare parents ke GATEWAYS moujud hain....

ACCESS CARD ko hold karo...


MABBA ke aisa kehte hi ALFREEN ne apne saamne pade ACCESS CARD ko utha liya...


MABBA-card ko do baar jhatko....


MABBA ke kahe anusar jab ALFREEN ne card ko do baar jhatka toh....

ek ke baad ek do baar us card ke andar se same do aur cards bahar aaye...


MABBA-tumhare haath me jo card hai, usse baari baari baaki ke dono cards ko touch karo...

MABBA ke kehne par jab ALFREEN ne waisa kiya toh wo dono cards automatically ALFREEN ke card ke andar sama gaye...

MABBA-coins ke saath bhi same process karna hota hai...

bas ek RIPPLE ko chhod kar..wo ek hi hota hai jisse sirf usse allot kiya hua SAVENT hi use kar sakta hai...

any questions....

VIDEOUS-EXERTION test me WEAKLINGS bhi participate karte hain naa!!!!


jaanbujh kar pucha tha ye sawal VIDEOUS ne aur jis maksad se pucha tha,wo maksad pura ho gaya...

kyunki jaise hi uske mooh se WEAKLING nikla,toh MABBA ke dimag me pehle ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki wo wait karne waali baat aur fir RAAZ ki usse ki gayi insult yaad aa gayi jiske zehen me uththe hi MABBA ka daba ghussa bahar aa gaya tha...


SAPIUS-haan,ye test har catagory ke liye hota hai bas tarike thode badle hote hain...

REGIS-aur wo aise ki unka us test me participation STELLARS par depend karta hai...

STELLARS agar chahen,aur jis tarah se chaahen, WEAKLINGS ka use us test me kar sakte hain..

but kyunki wo test ek average aur below average SAVENT ke liye khatarnaak ho sakte hain, isiliye zyada tar WEAKLINGS ko us test ke bade aur important tasks ke daayre se door rakha jaata hai...

MABBA-par is baar aisa nahi hoga..is baar hum WEAKLINGS ko bhi barabari ka mouka denge...

aakhir unhe bhi toh EXERTION test ka maza chakhna chahiye...


halki devilish muskaan ke saath MABBA ne ye baat kahi thi jisse sun pehle toh REGIS aur SAPIUS hairan hue aur wo isiliye kyunki isse pehle MABBA kabhi bhi WEAKLINGS ka kisi bhi task me involvement pasand nahi karti thi par jald hi wo samajhne lage the ki MABBA ye sab un teen SAVENTS ko sabak sikhne ke liye keh rahi jinhone jo pichle saal missing ho gaye the aur filhal WEAKLING catagory me the....

khair, STELLARS ko saari infos de di gayi thi aur isiliye...


MABBA-ok,toh ab aap sab apne apne ABODES jaaiye...PHASE 2 ki duniya ka key card aur coins ke roop me aapko mil chuka hai...

explore aur enjoy kijiye...kal milte hai aapki first class me...


ye bol teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS room se nikal gaye par jaate waqt MABBA ke man me jo khayal aa chuka tha,usse pura karne ke liye wo hall se bahar jaane ki jagah ek dusri taraf nikal padi...

wahin baaki ke sabhi SAVENTS bhi apne apne cards aur coins ko lekar PHASE enjoy karne ki excitement se bhare room se nikal apne ABODES ki taraf chal pade par in sake beech tha VIDEOUS jo room se toh nikla par fir hall se bahar naa jakar wo bhi us disha ki taraf chal pada jahan gayi thi MABBA....





GROOMERS ROOM:-




TOH YE HAIN AAPKE ACCESS CARD AUR TEENO COINS KA KAAM...


card aur coins ke use ki details ko batane ke baad kaha WHIZZ EDWINA ne....

SAVENTS toh jaan gaye,chaliye aap bhi thoda bohot GROOMERS ke is PHASE me hone waale major activities aur unhe mile hue card aur coins ke baare me jaan lijiye..

waise procedure is catagory ka bhi STELLARS catagory jaisa hi hai but with some restrictions..

aur wo aise ki jahan STELLARS EXERTION me directly bhaag lete hain wahin GROOMERS ko bhi aisa karna allowed hota hai par har GROOMER ko nahi...

sirf wo GROOMERS jinki apni padhyai me growth rate STELLARS jitni hoti hai,wahi us test me directly as a participant involve hote hai aur baaki GROOMERS WEAKLINGS ki tarah hi as a SIDE KICK STELLARS ki marzi ke hisaab se us test me involvement rakh paate hai..

wahin baat karen agar GROOMERS ko mile card aur coins ki toh iska bhi ek limit tay hota hai jo unke session me kiye performance ke hisaab se fluctuate hota rehta hai...

saari details ko disclose karne ke baad GROOMERS ke teen WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS EDWINA, ROVEL aur PETRA ne class ko conclude kiya aur class se nikal gaye wahin is dauran WHIZZ MABBA aur unke piche piche VIDEOUS pahunche...





PLACE-THE GREAT HALL....




BHAI,ISSE NAA DOUBLE LOUD SPEAKER KI ZAROORAT HAI....BOL KYA RAHI HAI,KUCH SAMAJH ME HI NAHI AA RAHA..!!!!


HIDA,jo ki WEAKLINGS ki ek maatra WHIZZ thi,wo wahan moujud unke catagory ke chararon SAVENTS ko is session me unke activities ke baare me bata rahi thi,par unki awaaz itni kam thi aur saath hi baat karte waqt wo itna atak rahi thi ki unki kahi ab tak ki koi bhi baat un chaaron ko thik se sunayi bhi nahi de rahi thi aur isiliye hi ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


SLUNDER-mujhe toh ye samajh nahi aa raha hai ki ek educational INSTITUTION me itna bhed bhaav kaise ho sakta hai...???

haan un do behroopiyon ki wajah se hume WEAKLING catagory me aana pada par SAVENTS ke saath itna apmaan janak vyavahar meri samajh se pare hai....

baaki dono catagories ke liye rooms allot kiye gaye hain aur hum yahin hall me hi hain aur toh aur humare liye baithne ka bhi koi prabandh nahi hai...

this is so embarrassing....

ACCHUTA-bhai ye toh shuruat hai..pata nahi aage kya kya dekhna pade..par mujhe ek baat samajh me nahi aati ki RAAZ kyun is catagory me hai...???

SLUNDER-puch ke dekh le...

ACCHUTA-puch ke dekh le..!!sidhe bol naa marwa ke dekh le...aise hi meri shakal kuch khaas nahi hai,uspar agar maine inhe kuch keh diya toh pata nahi mere thobde ka kya bhugol ban jaayega...

SLUNDER-kharabi ki aakhri hadh hai tera chehra..isse zyada aur kya kharab hoga...

ACCHUTA-haan bhai,tere chehre se toh noor tapak raha hai,kyun!!!!..

beta jinke ghar sheeshe ke hote hain naa,wo dusro ke ghar me pathar nahi maarte...

saale,bandar ke pichwade ki shakal liye tu mere thobde ki burayi kar raha hai....


is tarah SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ek dusre ki burayi karne me lag gaye, WHIZZ WIDA hume dheere dheere atak kar hamara schedule batati rahi jo ki naa ke hi barabar tha,BRAWNY toh bas chupchaap gumsoom sa hokar hi khada tha wahin mai in sabke beech hokar bhi nahi tha..

nazarein bhale hi meri saamne thi par andar hi andar mai pure ELYSIAN ko scan kar raha tha...

reason....

mujhe ye toh nahi pata tha ki mera agla step kya hone waala hai par itna zaroor andaza tha ki jo bhi hoga,wo yahin ELYSIAN ke andar hi hoga aur isiliye mere sharir se SEARCH RAY nikal pure ELYSIAN me ghum rahe the aur tabhi...

mere chehre par ek halki si muskaan aa gayi aur wo isiliye kyunki maine mehsoos kiya hamare paas aate hue WHIZZ MABBA aur VIDEOUS ko...

aisa hote hi pehli baar mera dhyan gaya mere saamne khadi WHIZZ HIDA par joki behad under confident dikh rahi thi aur ussi jhijhak ke saath baat bhi kar rahi thi par ye dekh meri smile halki gehri ho gayi....

HIDA jinki baat sirf unhe hi sunayi de rahi thi,unhone pura schedule abhi batana complete hi kiya tha ki tabhi....


OHO....DEKHO TOH....LAGTA HAI KOI ZABARDAST PLANNING HO RAHI HAI STELLARS KO COMPETITION DENE KI....


WHIZZ MABBA ki thi ye awaaz jo hamare piche se aayi thi...

awaaz sun BRAWNY palta aur uske saah hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi palatne waale the lekin....


PALATNE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI....


meri awaaz gunj uthi un dono ke dimag me jiske baad un dono ne meri taraf dekha aur fir wapas saamne dekhne lage...

wahin BRAWNY ke saath saath WHIZZ HIDA ki nazar bhi hamare piche gayi thi aur jab unhone MABBA ko dekha toh wo kaafi nervous ho gayi...

reason...

10 saal pehle WHIZZ MABBA bhi yahan ek SAVENT thi aur tab wo bhi bohot pareshan kar chuki thi WHIZZ HIDA ko..

aur ab jab wo khud ek WHIZZ hain,tab bhi wo aisa karne se baaz nahi aati thi par ye sab wo SAVENTS ke saamne nahi karti thi lekin aaj wo yahan hamare beech unke paas aa rahi thi,toh zaroor kuch na kuch negetive aur apmanjanak baat WHIZZ HIDA se karengi hi,yahi soch kar WHIZZ HIDA nervous feel karne lagi thi...

par in sabke beech jab MABBA ne ye dekha ki unki awaaz sunkar bhi naa toh mai palta hun,aur naahi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER toh unka ego pinch sa ho gaya...

hamare side se hokar hume ghurti hui wo WHIZZ HIDA ke paas jaakar khadi ho gayi...

wahin apne saamne MABBA ko dekhkar HIDA ki nazarein neechi ho
gayi thi aur dar ke maare wo halki kaampne bhi lagi thi...

ek vyang se bhari muskaan se WHIZZ HIDA ko dekh MABBA ki nazar hamari taraf ghumi par tabhi....

VIDEOUS jo humse thode piche hi khada har taraf dekh raha tha yaa fir ye kahun ki place checkout karne ka naatak kar raha tha,uspar WHIZZ MABBA ki nazar padi aur...


MABBA-VIDEOUS...tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..???

VIDEOUS-pehli baar yahan aaya hun WHIZZ toh bas is GREAT HALL ko checkout kar raha tha..

MABBA-hmm..chalo,idhar aao...


WHIZZ ke bulate hi mere baaju se apne shoulder ko halka takrate hue VIDEOUS aage badh gaya aur tabhi....


dekhne waalo ko VIDEOUS ka aisa karna mahaz ek shrug ki tarah hi lagna tha par asal me VIDEOUS ne apni shakti ka ek bohot bada bhaag apne shoulder ke through release kiya tha aur isiliye hi uske shoulder ke mere shoulder se takrate hi mujhe ek tez jhatka laga aur mai aage ki taraf girne ko hua par maine turant apna balance bana liya jisse mai girne se bach gaya...

par jahan VIDEOUS ke shrug se mere disbalance hone par ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER hairan ho gaye wahin MABBA ke chehre par ek khilli udane waali muskaan naach gayi...


MABBA-arre VIDEOUS..dhyan diya karo..ye WEAKLINGS hain, STELLARS nahi..

ye kamzor hote hain..tumhara chhuna bhi inke liye dhakke se kam nahi hoga....

waise bhi body bana lene se taakat nahi aa jaati..ye sab sirf ek show off hai...aur iski sirf kadh aur zuban hi lambi hai...hai toh ye bhi har WEAKLING ki tarah khokla hi...


MABBA ki baat sun jahan VIDEOUS muskura diya, HIDA ka sir ek baar fir se jhuk gaya wahin mai bilkul shaant hi khada tha...

kuch der tak mujhe ghurte rehne ke baad MABBA palti HIDA ki taraf aur...


MABBA-arre,aap itni nervous kyun ho rahi hain..???aapko toh khush hona chahiye kyunki mai yahan aapko ek khushkhabari dene aayi hun...


MABBA ki baat sun HIDA ki sawal bhari nazar uspar tik gayi...


MABBA-najaane pichle kitne hi sessions se aap mujhse har EXERTION test ke waqt request karti aayi hain ki mai aapke WEAKLINGS ko bhi thoda hi sahi par participate karne ka mouka dun...

par maine kabhi aisa karne ki ijazat nahi di...lekin is baar aisa nahi hoga..is session ke pehle EXERTION me aapke SAVENTS bhi bhaag lenge..

aur wo bhi test ke kisi ek part me nahi,balki STELLARS ki tarah pure test me....

jahan MABBA ki pehli baat jisme usne WEAKLINGS ko bhi EXERTION me hissa lene ke liye haan kaha tha,sunkar HIDA khush ho gayi thi wahin uski aage ki baat sunkar HIDA ke chehre par dar dikhne laga tha...

reason...

EXERTION test kaafi dangerous tha jisme STELLARS tak fail bhi hote hai aur chotil bhi toh aise me WEAKLING ki kya haalat ho sakti thi us test me,iska toh andaza bhi nahi lagaya jaa sakta tha...

aur isiliye HIDA aisa karne ke liye MABBA ko mana karne waali thi par tabhi...

ek invisible ray nikli mere chest se jo kisi aur ko toh nahi par VIDEOUS ko dikh gayi thi..

wo ray jo ki ek MIND MANIPULATOR thi,nikal sidhi HIDA ke dimag me ghus gayi aur jab aisa hua toh unke chehre ke expressions badal gaye..

dar,ghabrahat sab gayab ho gaya unke chehre se aur fir..


HIDA-challenge accepted...agar mukabla barabari ka hone waala hai,toh theek se taiyar karna apne SAVENTS ko...

kyunki WEAKLINGS se jeetne ki ummid bhale kisiko ho naa ho,par unhi WEAKLINGS se STELLARS haar jaayen,aisa kisi ne socha bhi nahi hoga...

par is baar hoga aisa hi...


halki unchi confident bhari awaaz se ye shabd nikle HIDA ke mooh se jisse sun MABBA ko laga jhatka....

jis HIDA ne kabhi ek puri line tak thik se ek saath nahi boli thi, abhi abhi usne naa sirf pure confidence se baat ki thi balki MABBA ke challenge ke jawab me ulta ek naya aur naamukin sa lagne waala challenge tak de diya tha...

aise me jhatka toh lagna hi tha...

wahin VIDEOUS, jisne us ray ko mujhse hokar HIDA ke dimag me samate dekha tha,wo mujhe hi dekhkar aise muskura raha tha maano maine koi bachkani harkat ki ho par wo ye nahi jaanta tha ki ek aur ray thi jo mujhse nikalkar kahin aur jaa ruki thi par bohot jald usse pata lag hi jaana tha..

kaise,aayiye khud dekh lijiye...

HIDA ki baat sun kuch pal lage MABBA ko shock se recover karne ke liye par fir...


MABBA-aukad se badi baat bol gayi aap HIDA...aap darpok hi thik thi..

pehli baar kuch confidence ke saath nikla aapke mooh se toh kya .???bewakufi se bhari bachkani baat....

CHOSENS shatranj ke khel ki tarah hai... jisme RAJA aur RANI hum hain,STELLARS...

GROOMERS hote hai WAZIR aur GHODE ki tarah jinka kamsekam ek respected ohda toh hota hi hai...

par WEAKLINGS sirf un PYADON ki tarah hote hain jo hum STELLARS naam ke KING aur QUEEN ke isharon par chalte hain..

unke khudka kuch wajud nahi....


hume dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat MABBA ne aur fir..


MABBA-chalo VIDEOUS...


ye bol MABBA aage badh gayi..


wahin HIDA jinke andar se meri ray ab gayab ho chuki thi,unka sir us ray ke release hone ka pressure jhel nahi paaya aur isiliye unhe chakkar aane laga aur wo ladkhadane lagi jisse ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ne dekh liya aur turant unki taraf badhe...

mujhe ghurte hue mere baaju se hote hui MABBA aage nikli aur unke piche mujhe muskurakar dekhte hue nikalne laga VIDEOUS aur tabhi...

maine apna kandhe se uske kandhe ko halka jhatka diya...

is jhatke me bohot pressure tha par VIDEOUS ko mere aisa kuch karne ka andaza pehle se hi hi tha aur isiliye wo taiyar tha...

issi wajah se us jhatke ka uspar koi asar nahi hua par wo mere baaju me rook zaroor gaya...


VIDEOUS-tu toh baccha nikla re RAAZ...ya fir wo jo MABBA ne abhi abhi bola..ek mamuli pyada jo bas badi badi baat hi kar sakta hai aur kuch.....


DHAPP...........DHAAMMM


NAHI....ye shabd VIDEOUS ke mooh se nikal hi nahi paaya kyunki usse pehle hi usse piche se uske right kandhe par ek tagda pressure pada aur aisa hote hi pura ek flip maarte hue niche gira VIDEOUS ...

ab ye kaise hua...????

toh ye hua us ray se jisse maine ACCHUTA ki body par bheja tha aur jo uski body se ek inch aage rook gaya tha..

wo ray mere BODY AMPLIFICATION ki shakti thi...aur jab HIDA ko sambhalne ke liye SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ke saath ACCHUTA aage badha toh maine usse aadhe raaste me hi mind to mind jodte hue bata diya ki usse kya karna hai..

aur isiliye ACCHUTA wapas palta aur tezi se aage badhte hue VIDEOUS ko apne shoulder ke through jahan meri body ki shakti thi,usse ek jhatka diya aur natija sabke saamne tha....

jahan ACCHUTA ki wajah se ghumte hue khudko neeche girta hua dekh VIDEOUS hairan ho gaya wahin MABBA jo thodi hi aage gayi thi,takrane aur girne ki awaaz sun jab wo palti toh unki bhi aankhen badi ho gayi..

kabhi wo neeche gire hue VIDEOUS ko dekhti toh kabhi uske baaju me muskukar khade hua mujhe aur fir hile mere honth....


MAI-arre WHIZZ...aapka KING toh ek PYADE se hi gir gaya...

par isme is bechare ki bhi kya galti...naahi isse aur naahi aapko shatranj ki baazi ke baare me thik se pata hai...

sahi waqt par sahi chaal chalte hue agar ek PYADA aage badhe toh wo aakhri ghar tak pahunch jaata hai aur jab aisa hota hai toh RAJA ho yaa RANI,us pyade ke aage har sir ko jhukna hi padta hai....


MABBA ki aankhon me jhaankte hue maine ye baat kahi thi jisse sun wo bolna toh bohot kuch chahti thi par uske lab khul hi nahi paaye..

ek baar VIDEOUS ko jo ab uth chuka tha,usse dekh aur ek baar mujhe ghoor MABBA wapas palti aur aage badh gayi...

wahin MABBA ke palaththe hi mai bhi VIDEOUS ki taraf palta aur..


MAI-sahi bola tha tune...baccha hi hun mai..dekh, khel hi toh raha hun tere saath...

par in a spirit of sportsmanship,ek raaye deta hun tujhe...


Kota jitna ho,
utna hi BAK...

nazar bhale saamne ho,
dhyan har taraf RAKH....


waise maalum hai mujhe ki...


dekhne ke maamle me
tu ek BAAZ hai...

par jiska waar dikhayi hi naa de,
wahi toh.........RAAZ...... hai.....











AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....









AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Very nice update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WHIZZ AUR WHIZZDERS APNE APNE CATAGORY KO PHASE 2 KE DETAILS DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF EK BAAR FIRSE VIDEOUS AUR RAAZ KA AAMNE SAAMNE HOTA HAI JISME RAAZ ACCHUTA KE THROUGH VIDEOUS KO NEECHE GIRA DETA HAI


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(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)




UPDATE-59




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-WEAKLINGS STAY





AHHH.....AHHHHH....AHHHH.......


ek saath teen baar ACCHUTA ke mooh se dard bhari AHHHH nikli thi...kyun..???aayiye khud jaan lijiye...


ACCHUTA-abbe saale kaise macchar hain ye...???saalon ka size toh normal maccharon ka one fourth bhi nahi hai par kamine kaaththe normal maccharon se 10 guna zyada tagda hain...


apne haath ke us jagah ko masalte hue ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi jispar abhi abhi ek saath teen baar maccharon ne kaata tha aur ussi wajah se uske mooh AHHHH nikli thi...

shaam ka waqt hai..halka halka andhera chaane laga hai par kyunki WEAKLINGS ki quarter jahan is waqt ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER baithe hain,wahan light ki suvidha nahi hai, isiliye wahan andhera abhi se ghar kar chuka hai...

RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER...in teeno ko ek hi quarter allot hua hai wahin BRAWNY aur uske parents ke liye ek quater jo in teeno ke quater se thode hi door me hain....

aaj classes ke baad ye teeno yahan paidal hi pahunche the jo ki institution se aur PHASE 2 ke city se kuch 6 kms door hai....

jab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan quater pahunche toh yahan ki haalat dekh jo ki dekhne layak thi hi nahi,unki haalat kharab ho gayi...

baithne ke liye chairs, couches ya sofa nahi balki ek hi badi si chatayi thi aur sone ke naam par bed nahi balki teen khatiya...

paani peene ke liye ek bada sa matka jiske side me teen glass pade the..ek chota sa kitchen jisme naam maatra ki kitchen equipments the aur saath hi mahine bhar ka rashan bhi jisse inhe khud pakana tha...

toilet aur bathroom ek ek hi the aur unki haalat toh aisi thi ki pucho hi mat...

jahan RAAZ toh institution se aate hi apne search rays ko aur shaktishali banane ke liye quarter se bahar ek ghane se ped ke niche paused CEREBRATION me baith gaya wahin ye sab dekhte hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER is jagah ki hazar nooks nikalne me lag gaye the....

khair, ACCHUTA ki baat sun.....


SLUNDER-tu toh aise bol raha hai jaise apne planet ke maccharon ke kaatne ke impact ko measure kiya hua hai tune..


apne haath ko idhar udhar hilakar maccharon ko khudse door karte hue kaha SLUNDER ne...


ACCHUTA-bhai,tere har sadhe hue mazak ko tere chehre ki tarah hi jhel lunga mai par filhal apna mooh band rakh...

saale in invisible maccharon ne haath pair ko kaat kaat kar ga**d ki tarah suja diya hai...

SLUNDER-mujhe toh yakin nahi aata ki apne planet ka yuvraj hokar mai aisi ghatiya jagah par reh raha hun...

ACCHUTA-abbe kya sirf tu hi yuvraj hai...???mai kya apne planet ke kisi school ka chaprasi hun...!!!

mujhe kaun si aadat hai aisi jagah par rehne ki par ab jab sir okhki me daal hi diya hai toh kar bhi kya sakte hain...???


SABSE PEHLE COMPLAINT KARNA BAND KARO...????


quater ke darwaze par ek parchayi joki MERI thi,dikhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko jiske mooh se ye baat nikli thi aur meri awaaz aur baat ko sunane ke baad toh wo dono rehna chhodo jeene ki bhi complaint karne ki haalat me nahi rehte the...

wahin apni baat keh mai un dono ki taraf badha aur SLUNDER jis khatiye par baitha hua tha,uspar baith gaya...

par mere baiththe hi SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA turant mere saamne khade ho gaye...


MAI-mujhe dekh ghabrana,sir jhukakar khade rehna,ye sab akele me allowed hai tum dono ko... institution me ya fir city me mere saath tum dono ko ek normal PHASE MATE ki tarah hi behave karna hai..

SLUNDER/ACCHUTA-jee....


mai itna taaktwar hun,fir kyun mai aisi jagah par reh raha hun..???agar mai chahun toh is jagah ko turant ek rajmahal me badal sakta hun...???fir kyun maine ab tak aisa nahi kiya....???

ye sab baatein chal rahi thi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke dimag me is waqt jispar...


MAI-jo baat ghum rahi hai tum dono ke dimag me is waqt,wo ho nahi sakta...!!!


meri baat sun meri taraf hairani se dekhne lage dono..ye baat alag thi ki andhere ki wajah se mai unhe dikhayi nahi de paa raha tha..

par fir jab unhe ehsaas hua ki mai unke man ki baat bhi padh sakta hun toh...


SLUNDER-kya mai jaan sakta hun kyun??


halke dar aur sankoch bhare awaaz se pucha tha SLUNDER ne ye sawal jispar...


MAI-CHOSENS ek maidan jaisa hai aur iska har PHASE aur uske niyam us maidan me khele jaane waale khel ke niyam ki tarah hai jinhe mai bhi nahi tod sakta...


OH....


dono ke mooh se bas itna hi nikal paaya par wo dono ek baar firse udas hone lage the jispar...


MAI-samasya ka samadhan sirf samasya ko khatm karkar hi nahi balki us samasya se khudko bachakar bhi nikala jaa sakta hai...

ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-matlab...!!!hum samjhe nahi..???

MAI-DRISHTI VARDHANAM

apne apne BRAIN, BODY aur BLOOD ko jodte hue is SPELL ko uccharit karo,pata chal jaayega...

meri baat sun ek pal ke liye ek dusre ko dekh wo dono wahin neeche baith gaye aur kiya apne apne CEREBRATION ko pause...

jab ARROW aur CARAPACE ke kings apne apne logon ke PLANET shifting par kaam kar rahe the tab mere kahe anusaar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER, dono hi apne AMPLIFICATION ke teeno active chakron ko steady karne me lage hue the..

waise toh dono hi kaafi hunarmand the,par maine jab unke BRAIN, BODY aur BLOOD ko AMPLIFY kiya tha toh saath hi unke seekhne ke process ko bhi thoda trigger kar diya tha jiski wajah se in dono ne 3 din ke andar hi apne teeno AMPLIFICATION ko sthir kar liya tha..

aur yahi wajah thi ki abhi jab dono ne apne apne CEREBRATION ko pause kiya toh uske kuch hi palon baad un dono ke teeno AMPLIFICATION chakra jud chuke the aur aisa hote hi.....


DRISHTI VARDHANAM....

ENHANCE THE VISION....


AADHESHAM mode ke antargat un dono ke mooh se ek saath ye baat uccharit hui jiske baad....

un dono ke aankhon se hota hua ek ray unki puri body me failne laga....

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jinki aankhen filhal band thi,un dono ne bhi apni aankhon se hote hue apne pure sharir me ek thandak feel ki thi...

aur kuch der baad jab unhe wo thandak feel honi band hui toh dono ne hi apni apni aankhen khol di aur aisa karte hi...


ACCHUTA-iski maa kaa,uski maa,sabki maa....mujhe toh sab clear dikh raha hai...


aankhen kholte hue ACCHUTA ne dekha ki ab usse andhere me bhi sab kuch clearly dikhne laga tha wahin SLUNDER bhi ab is andhere me clearly dekh paa raha tha..


MAI-tum dono ki bodies me jo chill tumne feel kiya tha,wo ek guard tha jiski wajah se ab tumhe yahan ke macchar pareshan nahi karenge...

meri baat sun un dono ka dhyan bhi apni body par gaya jispar ab wakayi me koi macchar nahi kaat raha tha...


SLUNDER-thank tou RAAZ.....

ACCHUTA-haan bhai,bohot bohot thank you...agar in maccharon ne mujhe yunhi kaatna jaari rakha hota toh mai pehla aisa banda hota jisne maccharon ke kaatne se pareshan hokar suicide kiya hota...

MAI-chalo, city ghum kar aate hain..


apni baat bol mai utha aur bahar ki taraf badh chala wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi mere piche piche bahar aa gaye..

aage badhte hue jab hum teeno BRAWNY ko alloted quarter ke baaju se nikle toh hume andar se halke halke rone ki awaazen sunayi di jo ki BRAWNY aur uske parents ki thi...


SLUNDER-bechara BRAWNY aur uske parents...wo bhi royal bloods hain...pata nahi kaise yahan survive karenge...???


SLUNDER ki baat sun mai uski taraf palta aur jab aisa hua toh uski haalat kharab ho gayi..usse laga ki usne kuch aisa bol diya hai jo usse nahi bolna chahiye tha...


MAI-humdardi se sirf bheek milti hai aur CHOSENS bhikariyon ki jagah nahi hai...

ye ek jungle hai..and every one who lives here,has to fight to survive here...

rone do usse...USKA FRUSTRATE HONA BOHOT ZAROORI HAI...


apni baat keh mai aage badh gaya wahin meri baat ka matlab naa samajh ek pal ke liye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne ek dusre ko dekha aur fir dimag ko jhatak mere piche hi liye...





PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE




WHAT....!!!! ITNI BADI BAAT AUR TUM YE HUME AB BATA RAHI HO...AUR ITNI DER TAK KAHAN THI TUM...???KYA CLASS ITNI LATE TAK CHALI....!!!!


sidhe shaam ke waqt pahunchi thi ALFREEN apne ABODE aur wapas aakar jaise hi usne MARIA aur FLORIN ko bataya ki RAAZ wapas aa chuka hai,toh laga un dono ko jhatka aur ek ke baad kayi sawal kar daale MARIA ne usse....


ALFREEN-mom itne dino se is jagah ko dekhne ka itna zyada man tha ki hum teeno INSTITUTION se nikalte hi sidhe kuch jagahon ko checkout karne ke liye nikal gaye the...

wahan waqt ka pata hi nahi chala aur isiliye aane me thodi der ho gayi..

pata hai pops,mom,ye jagah hamare imagination se bhi zyada cool hai....

hum bas teen hi jagah gaye the..ek tha ROYAL CLUB..it was like a KING'S PALACE with a modern touch..

dusra tha VENOM naam ka ek pub and that place was awesome...pata hai pops,us pub me pure universe ke har planet ke best music's play hote hain....

and lastly,hum gaye ek ILLUSIONARY OCEANERIUM me and guys,u have too see it..mai bataungi toh maza nahi aayega,aap sab khud hi check out kijiyega....


jahan ALFREEN yahan ke happening places ke baare me bata rahe the,wahin MARIA aur FLORIN ka dhyan RAAZ par hi atak gaya tha....

un dono ke andar usse dekhne bhar ki tez iccha jaagi hui thi aur isiliye....


FLORIN-AL.....RAAZ kis catagory me hai..???

ALFREEN-WEAKLINGS me....


ALFREEN aage kuch kehti,usse pehle hi FLORIN ne apni baat keh di thi...

wahin puche gaye sawal ka jawab dene ke baad ALFREEN ko bhi samajh aa gaya tha ki uske mom dad ne RAAZ ke return hone waale baat ke aage ki koi baat par dhyan nahi diya hai...

saath hi usse ye bhi realize hua ki usse pehle INSTITUTION se aakar ye khabar apni mom dad ko deni thi aur fir ghumne jaana tha par ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya...

wahin ALFREEN ki baat sun...


MARIA- ELUSORY....kya tumhe WEAKLING catagory ke SAVENTS ke alloted quarters kahan hai,ye pata hai...???

ELUSORY-yes MISTRESS...

MARIA-then lets go there...


MARIA aur FLORIN dono bahar jaane ke liye uthe aur hall se hote hue bahar lawn ki taraf chal diye...

lawn me unki CHARIOT khadi thi jispar wo teeno baithne hi waale the ki tabhi....


HAIN...!!!AAP TEENO HUMARE BINA HI CITY EXPLORE KARNE JAA RAHE HAIN....


un teeno ke piche se aayi ye awaaz jo ki MAHI ki thi..awaaz sun jab MARIA, FLORIN aur ALFREEN palte toh dekha ki MAHI apne kamar par dono haath tikaye unhe ghoor rahi thi aur uske saath khadi thi MABEL aur uske parents jinhe dekh ye teeno unki taraf badhe aur...


MARIA-tumne aisa kaise soch liya ki tum sabke bina hum city explore karenge...

MABEL-toh fir aap teeno CHARIOTS me baithkar kya apne hi ghar ke rounds maarne waale the..

MARIA-chup badmash...actually beta hum RAAZ se milne jaa rahe the...


RAAZ ka naam sunte hi MAHI ka ghurna bhi band ho gaya tha...usse bhi realize ho gaya tha ki jab tak uncle aunty RAAZ se mil nahi lete,tab tak unhe chain nahi aayega...

wahin mr and mrs FELLAR ke liye ye naam naya tha aur isiliye...


FELLAR-RAAZ!!!ye kaun hai..???


FELLAR ke sawal par FLORIN unhe RAAZ ke baare me sab batane lage jisse sun...


FELLAR-oh.. poor child...chaliye fir,hum bhi mil lete hain RAAZ se...

MAHI-haan uncle,hum sab chalte hain...


FELLAR aur MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN aur MARIA ek dusre ko dekhne lage...

reason....

bhale hi wo RAAZ se milne ke liye excited the,par wo jaante the ki RAAZ kaisa hai...???

usse kabhi dusro ki feelings se matlab nahi raha tha aur naahi zyada logon ko apne aas paas dekh wo kabhi comfortable feel karta tha...

toh aise me sabka uske saamne jaana,ye koi acha idea nahi tha..pata nahi RAAZ un sabko dekhkar kaise react karta aur agar usne apne aadat ke anusar kuch ulta sidha bol diya toh unki MR & MRS FELLAR ke saamne beizatti ho jaani thi...

FLORIN aur MARIA ki ye soch koi aur bhaampe naa bhaampe par MAHI bhaamp chuki thi aur isiliye...


MAHI-zyada mat sochiye uncle aunty..kuch nahi hoga...aur waise bhi ab aapka RAAZ wo purana RAAZ nahi raha..kaafi badal gaya hai...

appearence se bhi aur aadaton se bhi..pata hai,jo ladka kabhi kisi ek bande se bhi baat karne me uneasy
feel karta tha,aaj usne pure PHASE ke saamne ek choti si specch de di thi...


MAHI ki baat sun hairani dikhne lagi FLORIN aur MARIA ke chehre par..


wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MAHI-hairani bacha kar rakhiye.. kyunki asli hairani aap dono ko tab hogi jab wo aapke saamne aayega..pehchaan nahi paayenge aap usse...


MARIA-matlab...

MAHI-khud dekh lijiyega...ab chalen...


sir haan me hilate hue MARIA aur FLORIN wapas palte aur ALFREEN ke saath apne CHARIOT me jaakar baith gaye...

wahin baaki sab bhi apne apne CHARIOT me baith gaye jiske baad teeno ELUSORIES ne unke chariot ke navigation system me WEAKLING CATAGORY ka destination code daal diya aur aisa hote hi teeno CHARIOTS apni manzil ki taraf badh gaye...




BACK TO RAAZ:-




BHAI,HUM YAHAN KYUN AAYE HAIN...???


halki jhijhak ke saath pucha ye sawal ACCHUTA ne muhse jispar...


MAI-sabr ek aisi medicine hai jisse zinda rehne me asaani hoti hai..


ek baar ACCHUTA ki taraf nazar ghuma maine ye baat kahi aur uske baad wapas saamne us bade se gate ki taraf dekhne laga jiske bahar hum khade the...

wahin meri baat sunkar jahan SLUNDER ACCHUTA ko dekhkar hasne laga wahin ACCHUTA ka mooh sirf band hi nahi hua balki seal ho gaya...

khair,jiske liye mai yahan khada tha,wo pal aa chuka tha aur isiliye...

humse kuch door par laga wo automatic gate bin awaaz ke khulne laga aur jab wo pura khula toh...

ek saath teen teen chariot us gate se hote hue baahar nikle jinke andar FLORIN & party baithe hue the...

wahin jo chariot hamari taraf thi,wo MAHI ki thi aur isiliye sabse pehle mujhpar ussiki nazar padi thi aur aisa hote hi...


MAHI-UNCLE,AUNTY,wo dekhiye RAAZ...


meri taraf point karte hue halki chilla si uthi MAHI jiske baad...


FLORIN-stop....


CHARIOTS voice command bhi follow karte the aur isiliye FLORIN ke stop bolte hi unki CHARIOT rook gayi wahin unke baad baaki dono CHARIOTS bhi rook gaye...

FLORIN aur MARIA,dono ne hi mujhe ab tak dekha nahi tha..unhone toh bas MAHI ki baat sunte hi CHARIOT rukwa di thi par CHARIOT ke rookte hi jab wo dono usse utre toh har taraf dekhne lage..

unhe unse kuch door teen ladke zaroor dikhe par unme se koi bhi unhe RAAZ nahi laga tha aur isiliye....


FLORIN-beta MAHI..kahan hai RAAZ...???

MAI-mai yahan hun....


isse pehle ki MAHI meri taraf point kare,meri awaaz FLORIN aur MARIA ke kaano me gunj uthi jiske baad aankhon me avishwas liye wo dono meri taraf dekhne lage..

wahin apni baat keh mai unki taraf badh gaya aur thik unke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya...

mai bilkul un dono ke saamne khada tha aur wo dono aankhen phaade mujhe dekh rahe the aur fir..


MAI-kehte hain ki waqt ke saath sharir badal sakta hai,aakar badal sakta hai, chehra bhi badal sakta hai par aakhen nahi badalti...

meri aankhon me dekhiye,mere RAAZ hone ka saboot mil jaayega...


meri baat sun un dono ki nazar turant meri aankhon ki taraf gayi aur jab aisa hua toh....

mere wajud ke pura hone se pehle waale appearance me sirf meri aankhen hi aisi thi jo dekhne layak thi..

jab mai bohot chota tha,chal nahi sakta tha tab MARIA bohot baar kaafi der tak mujhe godh me liye meri aankhkon me dekhti rehti thi..

kabhi kabhi FLORIN bhi aisa karte the aur yahi wajah thi ki meri aankhon me dekhte hi wo dono mujhe pehchaan gaye aur aisa hote hi...

RAAZ....

FLORIN ke mooh se nikli thi ye awaaz jo halki bhaari bhi ho gayi thi..

aankhen nam MARIA ki bhi thi..wo dono hi mujhe gale lagana chahte the par mere swabhav ko yaad kar hichkicha rahe the par tabhi laga un dono ko aur unke saath thoda piche khadi ALFREEN aur MAHI ko ek tez jhatka...

reason...

chehre par halki muskurahat ke saath aage badh mai FLORIN ke gale lag gaya...

mere aisa karte hi pehle toh FLORIN ekdum jadh se ho gaye par fir unhone bhi mere ird gird apni baahein lapet li..

kaafi chowde the mere shoulder aur uske upar meri height joki FLORIN se zyada hi thi isiliye unke dono haath mere shoulders ke bas three fourth area ko hi cover kar paa rahe the...

kuch der FLORIN se gale lage rehne ke baad mai unse alag hokar MARIA ke gale lag gaya....

mujhse gale lagte hi ek baar firse MARIA aankhon se bhi aansu nikalne lage the..

wahin in sabse alag MAHI aur ALFREEN jo is scene ko aankhen faade dekh rahe the,wo,.....


ALFREEN-yaar,ye RAAZ nahi ho sakta..zaroor ye koi aur hi banda hai... kyunki shakal badal sakti hai,par fitrat nahi...

MAHI-agar hum apne planet me hote toh mai bhi yahi bolti..par mat bhool ki hum CHOSENS me hain aur isse SOVEREIGN'S lekar aaye hain...aur wo dokha nahi khaa sakte...

apni apni baat keh wo dono bhi hamare paas aa gaye aur ab tak gale lagne ka daur bhi tham chuka tha aur isiliye...


MAHI-tum yahan gate bahar kya kar rahe the...???

MAI-aap dono se milne hi aaya tha mai yahan..??par WEAKLINGS ko aapke colony me ghusna allowed nahi hai..

par mujhe laga tha ki city dekhne aap log nikloge hi, isiliye yahin wait kar raha tha...


MARIA ko dekhkar ye baat kahi maine jiske baad un dono ka dhyan mere pehne kapde par gaya jo ki WEAKLINGS ka uniform hi tha..


MARIA-ye kaise kapde pehne hue hain tumne...???

MAI-WEAKLINGS ko extra kapde nahi diye jaate...bas 2 uniforms hote hain,that sit...


meri baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN ko bohot bura laga aur isiliye...


MARIA-chalo fir,sabse pehle tunhare liye shopping karenge...


MARIA ki baat sun mere chehre par ek baar fir se smile aa gayi aur...


MAI-hum CHOSENS ke PHASE 2 me hain..yahan yunhi kuch nahi milta...

yahan har cheez haasil karni padti hai aur filhal mai extra kapde deserve nahi karta..but its just a matter of time...bohot jald ye equation badal jaayega...

tab tak mai aise hi rehna chahta hun...


MARIA aur FLORIN jaante the ki mai maanunga nahi isiliye unhone is baare me aur kuch nahi kaha..

par meri baat sun MAHI khudko bolne se nahi rok paayi aur...


MAHI-oho..matlab is baar tum bhi humare saath competition me part lene waale ho...

MAI-tumhara competition mujhse nahi,in dono se hoga...mera COMPETITION kisi aur se hai...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki taraf ishara karte hue maine kaha jispar...


MAHI-kisi aur se...???kisse...

MAI-jis competition ka hissa tum hone hi nahi waali,uske baare me jaan kar kya faayda...

MABEL-ye toh bata hi sakte ho ki tumhare appearence me itna change kaise aa gaya..???


MABEL jisne subah jab se mujhe dekha tha,tab se hi mere is badle hue appearence ke baare me puchna chahti thi,aaakhir usne puch hi liya jispar maine usse aur baaki sabko jo kahani SOVEREIGN'S ne MARILIZA ko mere gayab hone ki batayi thi,wo bata di aur saath hi bataya ki ussi wajah se mere appearence me change aaya hai...

baaaton ke dauran meri nazar ALFREEN par gayi jo mujhe hi ghoor rahi thi par jaise hi meri nazar uspar padi,usne apni nazarein ghuma li...

khair,saari baat batane ke baad....


MAI-acha uncle,aunty, I'll take your leave now..kuch kaam hai mujhe...

mere FLORIN aur MARIA ko uncle aur aunty bulane par wo dono bohot khush ho gaye aur wo isiliye kyunki ye do shabd rishte se baandhne waale the..wo rishte jinke naam se hi mujhe hamesha allergy rahi thi...


MARIA-thik hai..par promise karo ki tum ghar aaoge...

MAI-promise...

FLORIN-smile tumhare chehre par bohot achi lagti hai beta...hamesha aise hi muskurate raho...

MAI-aisa mat boliye uncle...kabhi kabhi kisi ek ki khushi kisi dusre ki taklif ban jaati hai...

MARIA-jisse taklif hogi,wo apna dekh lega..tum bas muskurate raho...


MARIA ki baat sun mai ek baar firse muskura diya aur fir un dono se bye bol ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,jo bilkul chupchaap ab tak ka mere conversation ko sun rahe the,unhe lekar nikal pada...

MARIA ki aakhri me kahi baat,"JISSE TAKLIF HOGI,WO APNA DEKH LEGA..TUM BAS MUSKURATE RAHO...."

is line ko yaad kar maine apna sir shake kiya aur....


MAI-

sharafat bhare alfaaz,
BADSULOOKH ho gaye....

pehle sirf naadan the log,
par waqt ke saath,

BEWAKOOF ho gaye...









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....









AAPKA APNA V...J......
Very nice update bhai
 

drx prince

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER APNE QUATER KO DEKHKAR NAAKHUSH HOTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ FLORIN AUR MARIA SE MILTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)




UPDATE-60





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S




STELLAR'S CLASS





TOH PHASE 2 KI AAPKI PEHLI CLASS SHURU KARTE HAIN...


bade excitement se REGIS ne apne CATAGORY ke SAVENTS jo ki STELLARS the,unse ye baat kahi jispar sabhi SAVENTS double excitement aur attentiveness ke saath sidhe alert mode me baith gaye the...

wahin in sabke beech baitha tha VIDEOUS jo abhi bhi casually relax hokar baitha hua tha....


subah ka waqt hai aur finally wo ghadi aa gayi thi jiska intazar sabhi SAVENTS kaafi dino se kar rahe the....

PHASE 2 ki classes jo ab shuru ho chuki thi...sabhi STELLAR'S wahin ussi THE GREAT HALL ke room me baithe the,jahan kal baithe the..

khair,REGIS ki baat ko aage badhte hue,


MABBA-jaisa ki kal maine aap sabko brief dete waqt bataya tha ki
is PHASE me aapke kul 2 classes hongi....

pehli hai CLASS OF EXPANSION aur dusri hogi CLASS OF ELABORATION....

class bhale hi do hain par in classes ko agar define kiya jaaye toh ye do classes us tree ki tarah hai jinme kaafi branches hote hain par root ek...


MABBA ki baat kisi SAVENT ko samajh me nahi aayi thi aur issi wajah se sabhi halke confuse dikh rahe the...


(JAB SAB SAVENTS KAHA JAAYE TAB USME RAAZ AUR VIDEOUS INCLUDE NAHI HONGE)


khair, MABBA ki baat ko aage badhate hue...


SAPIUS-confuse hone ki zaroorat nahi hai SAVENTS..abhi kuch der me sab clear ho jaayega...

sabse pehle,ye toh aap sabko pata hi hai ki elaboration aur expansion ka matlab kya hota hai aur dono me fark kya hota hai .???

elaborate matlab detailing hoti hai aur expansion ka arth hota hai kisi bhi chiz ko chote se bada karna...

yahi dono methods jisse magic ke through apni dono classes me aap sab sikhne waale hain...

pichle PHASE me aap sabne sirf apne apne BRAIN, BODY, BLOOD aur SOUL ko AMPLIFY karna sikha tha...

ek tarah se kahun toh aap sabne khudko magic karne ke layak banana sikha tha aur aapke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ussi seekh ko multiply kar rahe the...

par ye sab sirf METAPHYSICAL ACTIVITIES ka base tha..asli magic kya hota hai,wo aap is PHASE me sikhenge..

waise us magic ka ek chota sa example aap sab pichle session ke waqt SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION me MORALS aur WICKEDS ke beech dekh hi chuke hain...

wo saari adhbhudh chizen jo MORALS aur WICKEDS kar rahe the,uska main kaaran yahi do classes hain jo aap is session me padhne waale hain...

kaise,ab ye jaan lijiye....


REGIS-METAPHYSICAL ACTIVITIES kahen yaa fir MAGIC...ye trigger toh AMPLIFICATION se hote hain par inhe apne mutabik asar ke saath use karna ek alag chiz hoti hai aur yahin kaam me aata hai EXPANSION aur ELABORATION...

jis SPELL BOOK ki madad se spells ko memmorize kar aap sabne pichla session nikala tha,us book me bas BASE MAGIC ke SPELLS likhe hue the jo sirf ek had tak aapke AMPLIFICATION me kaam aane me madad karte the..

par is saal aap advanced MAGIC sikhne waale hain jiske liye second level MAGIC SPELLS use kiye jaate hain aur isiliye...


aage kuch kaha nahi REGIS ne bas apna haath halka sa saare SAVENTS ki taraf ghuma diya aur uske aisa karte hi,sabhi SAVENTS ke aage ek bohot moti si book aa gayi thi jiske upar likha tha ENHANCE....

sabhi SAVENTS us book ko dekh hi rahe the ki...


SAPIUS-ye book do hisso me divided hai.. pehle bhaag me aapko ek hi MAGIC ke liye alag alag spells milenge...

for example ASRAVA...is spell ke madad se aap apne pratidwandi ke sharir me pain paida kar sakte hain..

par ye pain normal hoga..par ASUKA spell jiska matlab bhi pain hi hota hai,iske uccharit karte hi pain ka level badhne lagta hai...

aise hi aur teen spells likhe honge in do spells ke neeche jinka kaam ek hi hai...pain,dard dena par alag alag asar ke saath...

aur isiliye is book ka pehla bhaag aapke pehle class EXPANSION ke liye hai...

kyunki aap is class me apne har spell aur hunar ko expand karna sikhenge...

understood...

SAB-yes WHIZZDER.....

MABBA-ab baat karte hain aapke dusre class jo ki ELABORATION ki hai,uske baare me...

ELABORATION class ek bohot hi complex class hai kyunki isme hoti hai aap sabke individual potential ki detailing....

jin SPELLS ko aap is saal padhkar istemaal me laane waale hain,wo aap yunhi nahi kar sakte....

aisa karna depend karega aapke BRAIN,BODY, BLOOD aur SOUL ke determination par....

jab bhi aap koi spell bolte hain,toh us spell se teeno AMPLIFICATION modes ke through aapke sharirik,maansik aur aatmik shakti ka ek hissa bhi release hota hai....

aur jitne strong aapke chaaron sources honge,utna strong aapka bola hua spell hoga aur saath hi utni hi jaldi aap agle spell ko bolne ke liye taiyar ho paayenge..

ELABORATION class me aap sabke chaaron sources ki shakti ko interlink karkar ek kiya jaata hai taaki spell bolte waqt uska asar aapke manmutabik ho aur saath hi aap ki recovery nano seconds tak tez ho jaaye...

itna hi nahi,har spell ke asar ke beech ek naye spell ko uccharit kar kuch naya bhi kiya jaa sakta hai,aur aisa karna bhi is class me sikhaya jaata hai....

is technique ko HOAX HIT kaha jaata hai..ye technique kisi bhi competition me bohot bada role play karta hai aur jitna zyada aap is technic me master kar paayenge, competitions me jitne ki aapke chances utne zyada badh jaayenge...

GOT IT....

SAB-yes WHIZZ....


jahan pure excitement ke saath sabhi SAVENTS ne ye baat kahi thi wahin VIDEOUS bas shaant baithkar ye sab sun raha tha jisse MABBA ne bhi note kiya tha..

kal WEAKLINGS ke saamne jo hua tha,wo MABBA bhuli nahi thi aur kal ki hui beizatti ka kaaran wo VIDEOUS ko hi maan rahi thi aur abhi jab MABBA ko lag raha tha ki VIDEOUS class me attentive nahi hai,toh uska ghussa andar hi andar aur badhne laga tha...

usne VIDEOUS ko punish karne ki thaani hui thi aur iske liye uske man me ek plan bhi tha jo wo ab apply karne waali thi...


SAPIUS-class ki shuruat me MABBA ne dono classes ko define karte hue ek tree ka example diya tha jiske bohot se branches hote hain par root ek...

ab mai aapko batata hun is example ka matlab kyunki ye example hi aapke dono hi classes ko naa sirf define karta hai balki aapke is PHASE me excel karne ki chaabi bhi yahi hai...

MABBA-par usse pehle, abhi tak humne jo bhi baatein aapko batayi hai,uska ek chota sa demonstration hoga...


SAPIUS ki baat ko kaaththe hue MABBA ne ye baat kahi jispar...


SAPIUS-demonstration!!!!


aakhon me sawal liye bas itna hi shabd nikla SAPIUS ke mooh se jisse avoid karte hue...


MABBA-jaise ki maine bataya tha ki har uccharit kiye spell par sharirik, maansik aur aatmik asar padta hai...

waise toh aap sabke AMPLIFICATION percentage ko jaante hue hume aapki capabilities ka pura andaza hai par kyunki ye PHASE 2 hai isiliye sirf AMPLIFICATION yahan kaam nahi aati..

jitna strong aapka will power hoga,is book me likhe spell bolte waqt release hone waale pressure ko absorb aur digest karne me utni asaani hoti hai aur abhi hum yahi demonstrate karenge....


MABBA ki baat sun buri tarah chownke SAPIUS aur REGIS aur


REGIS-ye kya bol rahi ho MABBA tum..???ENHANCE book me likhe spell ka asar bohot strong hota hai aur bina un baaton aur zariyon par kaam kiye jinse spell ka pressure kam kiya jaa sake,aisa karna SAVENTS ke liye dangerous ho sakta hai....


kaafi dheere se MABBA ke kaan ke paas aakar REGIS ne ye baat kahi jispar....


MABBA-tumhe nahi lagta ki mujhe mera kaam tumse zyada pata hai REGIS.... isiliye agar SAVENTS ke saamne apna mazak nahi banana chahte toh dobara naa toh meri baat kaatna aur naahi mujhe gyan dene ki koshish karna...


MABBA ne ye baat bhale hi REGIS se kahi thi par nazar uski SAPIUS par bhi thi jiska matlab tha ki ye baat uske liye bhi thi...

REGIS aur SAPIUS jaante the ki MABBA ko ab kuch bhi bolne ka koi matlab hoga nahi aur isiliye un dono ne aage baat ko nahi badhaya...

wahin REGIS ko warn karne ke baad....


MABBA-is demonstration ke liye mujhe aapme se kuch SAVENTS ki zaroorat padegi aur mai chahungi ki pichle PHASE ke top four SAVENTS, MAHI, ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS aap chaaron saamne aayen...

par dhyan rahe,is demonstration me tum sabko taklif hogi...


MABBA ki baat sun taklif waali baat ko completely ignore karte hue pure excitement se bhar wo chaaron aage aakar khade ho gaye...


MABBA-VIDEOUS....bina INSTITUTION join kiye hue bhi tumne khudko STELLARS ke liye qualify karwaya hai.

isiliye mai chahti hun ki tum bhi is demonstration ka hissa bano agar tumhe dar nahi lag raha hai toh...


MABBA ki baat chehre par muskaan aur man me MABBA ki chaal ko samajh uspar haste hue VIDEOUS bhi baaki chaaron ke saath aakar khada ho gaya....

aur ab jaisa ki MABBA ne kaha tha,waqt ho chala tha ek demonstration ka jisse ek taraf khade SAPIUS aur REGIS pareshan the,dusri taraf dekhen waale aur demonstration me bhaag lene waale SAVENTS excited the, teesri taraf MABBA jo ye sab bas VIDEOUS ko kal uske kamzor padne ke liye punish karne ke liye ab taiyar thi, wahin in sab se alag chowthi taraf khada tha VIDEOUS jo man hi MABBA ki bachkani harkat par has raha tha....





PLACE-WEAKLINGS CATAGORY





AAP CHAARON KE PHASE 2 KI ACTIVITIES KO START KARNE KA SAFAR TAB TAK NAHI HO SAKTA JAB TAK AAP SAB APNE APNE SOUL KO TRIGGER NAHI KAR LETE..

KYUNKI IS PHASE KI HAR ACTIVITY SOUL KE TRIGGER HONE KE BAAD HI KI JAA SAKTI HAI...


apni aadat ke anusar halki dabi hui awaaz me kahi ye baat WHIZZ HIDA ne jiske baad ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER kaafi excited ho gaye..

ho bhi kyun naa..un dono ke liye CHOSENS me officially ye pehla task jo tha...

pichle PHASE me un dono ke behroopiyon ne unhe jo looser ka tag pehna diya tha,ab waqt aa chuka tha us tag ko hatane ka...

wahin BRAWNY jisne pichle PHASE me kaafi under perform kita tha,uska confidence ab bhi shattered tha aur rahi sahi kasar PHASE 2 ki ghatiya life jo wo aur uski family jee rahe the,usne puri kar di thi...

aaj bhi hum ussi great hall ke open area me niche zamin par baithe jisse uska confidence aur hinder ho raha tha....

aur filhal ussi negetive ATTITUDE ke saath wo is class me baitha hua tha...

wahin in teeno se alag bilkul shaant baitha tha MAI...meri aankhen bhale hi saamne thi par mere nazaron ke aage ek saath do drishya chal rahe the...

ek jo ki mere saamne ka hi tha aur dusra drishya tha STELLAR ki claas ka aur wahan mai kyu dekh raha tha,ye toh aapko pata hi hai....

khair, WIDA ki baat sun ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY teeno hi paalthi maar kar baith gaye aur agle hi pal un teeno ki CEREBRATION process paused jo chuki thi...


ANTARAKA NIRUPAMA

SEARCH THE CORE....

apne apne brain,body aur blood ko interconnect karne ke baad un teeno ne hi is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske baad SOUL trigger karne ke process me jo hota hai,wo hone laga..

un teeno ke heart waali jagah ke upar ek halki si roshni jo ki unke soul ki shakti ka ek chota sa bhaag tha,prakashit hui jiske baad unhe apne sharir ke andar bhaar mehsoos hone laga jisse wo teeno zabt karne me lag gaye...

wahin in teeno ke beech baitha tha mai aur filhal meri bhi aankhen band thi par mai kuch aur kar raha tha...

mai apne sword ko jo ki mere andar thi,uske andar chhuppi meri shakti ke ek chote se bhaag ko invisible ray me badal apne body par kisi oil ki tarah mal raha tha...

mere is kaam ko meri SWORD ki shield ki wajah se koi detect nahi kar sakta tha, VIDEOUS bhi nahi par koi tha jo bhale hi mere is kaam ko detect nahi kar paa raha tha,par mai jo kar raha tha,usse nikalne waale strong aura ko wo thoda sa hi sahi,sense zaroor kar paa raha tha....

aur ye koi thi WHIZZ HIDA jo aankhon me hairani liya mujhe hi dekhe jaa rahi thi....

khair,jahan ek taraf BRAWNY ek baar firse us bhaar ko jo uske , BRAIN, BODY aur BLOOD feel kar rahe the,jhel nahi paaya aur haar kar aakhen khol baitha,wahin dusri tataf ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER lage rahe aur yahi kaaran tha ki thodi der baad....

in dono ke chest ke upar ek tez roshni khil uthi jisse dekh jahan ek taraf BRAWNY firse maayus ho gaya wahin dusri taraf WHIZZ HIDA khush ho gayi....

aur kuch der baad jab wo roshni kam hui aur ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne apni aankhen kholi toh....


HIDA-congrats ACCHUTA, SLUNDER...aisa pehli baar hua hai ki class ke pehle hi din kisi WEAKLING ne apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya ho....


kaafi waqt ke baad dil se khush dikh rahi thi HIDA wahin uski baat sun aur apni is achievement ko mehsoos kar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER, dono hi khush ho gaye...

aur is beech BRAWNY bas ye soch raha tha ki kya wo kabhi bhi apne SOUL ko trigger kar paayega bhi ki nahi....

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko congratulate karne ke baad...


HIDA- BRAWNY nirash mat ho...aur try karte raho...ek na ek din tum zaroor kaamiyab hoge...


BRAWNY ke chehre par dikhne waali nirasha ko bhaampte hue HIDA ne ye baat kahi jiske baad BRAWNY dobara paalthi maarkar baith gaya taaki firse try kar sake...

aur uske aisa karne ke baad..


HIDA-RAAZ....is taraf aao....


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se thoda door jaati hui HIDA ne mujhe apne saath aane ke liye kaha jispar mai unki taraf badh chala...





BACK TO VIDEOUS:-




MABBA-thodi der pehle pain ke liye jin do SPELLS ke baare me bataya gaya tha,ASRAVA,ASUKA..in do SPELLS ke baad pain ko badhane ke order me aur teen SPELLS aate hain jo hain PRAISA,AGHA aur finally bola jaata hak VIRADHANA jo ki dead spell se bhi zyada dard deta hai...

maine saare spells pain growth ke hisaab se hi ascending order me bole hain,inko issi order me memmorize kariye...


jahan MABBA ke bolte hi un chaaron ne turant un paanchon SPELLS ko memmorize kar liya wahin VIDEOUS bas shaant hi khada raha...


SAB-done WHIZZ...


spell memmorize karte hi chaaron SAVENTS ke mooh se ye nikla jiske baad...


MABBA-MAHI aur ALFREEN aap dono ek dusre ki taraf chehra karkar khade ho jaaiye...


MABEL aur VALDIS,aap bhi aisa hi kijiye...


MABBA ne jaisa bola,chaaron ne waisa kar diya jiske baad..


MABBA-VALDIS...aap mere saath ye demonstration karenge isiliye aap mujhe face karkar mere saamne khade ho jaaiye....


jahan MABBA ki baat sun VIDEOUS turant unke saamne aakar khada ho gaya wahin MABBA ki baat sun ek baar firse REGIS aur SAPIUS hauran bhi ho gaye aur saath hi pareshan bhi...

wo dono hi jaan chuke the ki MABBA ab VIDEOUS ko pain dene waali hai par wo dono ye nahi samajh paa rahe the ki wo aisa kyun kar rahi hai par wo dono kuch kar bhi toh sakte nahi the aur isiliye wo shaant hi rahe..


MABBA- COMMAND MODE ke tahat aap sabko ye spell man hi man uccharit karna hai....shuru kijiye..

MABBA ke bolte hi un chaaron ne pehle apne CEREBRATION ko pause kiya aur fir AADSHAM bolne ke baad


ASRAVA.....


man hi man is spell ko uccharit kiya ek dusre ko dekh kar un chaaron ne jiske baad un sabhi ke body me pain hone laga...

wahin spell bolne ki wajah se un sabko apne andar ek bhaaripan bhi mehsoos hone laga tha...

wahin VIDEOUS ko dekh MABBA ne bhi man hi man ASRAVA kaha tha aur fir kuch der wait karne ke baad usne apne man me kaha ASUKA jo ki second level pain ka SPELL tha...

par jahan is SPELL ko uccharit karne ke baad iske dono hi prabhav,pain aur spell uccharit karne par lagne waale bhaaripan ki wajah se MAHI, ALFREEN, MABEL aur ALFREEN ki haalat kharab ho chuki thi wahin VIDEOUS ke chehre par halki si dard ki lakeer tak nahi dikhi thi jisse dekh MABBA hairan ho gayi thi....

wahin ye sab dekh REGIS aur SAPIUS bhi hairan the.....

VIDEOUS ne ab tak khud koi spell nahi bola tha,wo bas shaant khada hi tha jisse dekh...


MABBA-tum bhi spell bolo VIDEOUS...


MABBA ki baat sun man hi man hasta hue VIDEOUS ke labh hile aur....


VIDEOUS-waar karna asaan hota hai WHIZZ...usse jhelna mushkil... isiliye spell bas aap boliye..i will receive it....


yahan VIDEOUS ki baat sun MABBA ki hairani aur badh gayi thi wahin dusri taraf second level pain ke spell ko kuch der jhelne ke baad ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS ki haalat kharab ho chuki thi aur isiliye un teeno ne quit kar liya tha aur apne dard ko zabt karte hue neeche baith gaye the...

waise halat toh MAHI ki bhi kuch khaas nahi thi par wo third level tak jaane ki haalat me zaroor thi par kyunki uske saamne khadi competitor ALFREEN quit kar chuki thi isiliye MAHI bhi uske saath shaant hokar neeche baith gayi thi..

wahin VIDEOUS ki baat se pehle toh MABBA hairan hui par fir unhe laga jaise VIDEOUS unhe challenge kar raha hai aur isiliye...


PRAISA....third level pain spell man hi man unhone uccharit kiya jiske asar se ab uske andar bhi bharipan ne karwat lena shuru kar diya tha...

wahin ab VIDEOUS ke chehre par bhi dard ki lakeer dikhne lagi thi..(FAKE)

par jab kaafi der tak bhi wo ussi pain waale face ke saath chupchaap khada hi raha toh MABBA ki hairani aur ghussa,dono hi badh gaye...

MABBA jaise bhul hi gayi ki wo koi SAVENT nahi balki ek WHIZZ hai.unhe ab ye ek challenge ki tarah lagne laga tha aur isiliye....


AGHA.....last second level pain ka SPELL uccharit kiya man hi man MABBA ne jiske baad unki khudki haalat thodi thodi kharab honi shuru ho chuki thi..

wahin ab VIDEOUS ke chehre par bhi kaafi dard dikh raha tha par sabko surprise kar wo ab bhi shaant khada hi tha...

aur in sabse alag REGIS aur SAPIUS jinhone MABBA ke man me SPELL uccharit karte waqt usse nikalte AURA ki wajah se ye jaan liya tha ki abhi filhal MABBA ne AGHA spell uccharit kiya hai,unka toh jaise dimag hi fuse ho chuka tha..

pehle toh wo ye nahi samajh paa rahe the ki MABBA ek fresher PHASE 2 SAVENT ke saath jiski aaj pehli hi class hai,aisa kaise kar sakti hak wahin VIDEOUS ki sehensheelta ko dekh bhi unhe achambha hua tha..

kyunki pehle aisa kuch unhone kabhi nahi dekha tha....

khair,kaafi der baad bhi jab VIDEOUS ne quit nahi kiya toh MABBA ka confidence jaise shatter hone laga..unhe laga jaise wo jo kabhi kisise haari nahi thi,aaj ek SAVENT se haarne waali thi aur is khayal ke man me ufante hi unka dinag bhi ufan gaya aur isiliye unhone man hi man PAIN ke final level spell ko uccharit karne ki thaani aur wo aisa kar bhi deti ki...


REGIS-ENOUGH.... aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai....


MABBA ki aankhon me dikhti chingari ko bhaamp gaya tha REGIS aur isiliye usne aisa kaha jiske baad jaise neend se jaagi thi MABBA...

unhe bhi suddenly ehsaas hua ki ghusse me wo kya karne jaa rahi thi...waise toh unhe kisi ke pain se koi lena dena nahi tha par agar jo wo soch rahi thi,wo kar deti toh unhe baaki SAVENTS ke saath pura PHASE nikalna mushkil ho jaata..

wahin is dauran baaki sabhi SAVENTS VIDEOUS ke chehre par ufante dard ko dekh rahe the... MAHI, ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS ko lag raha tha ki MABBA ke dusre level pain ASUKA spell ke prabhaav se hi VIDEOUS ke chehre par dard dikh raha tha aur us dard ko usne itni der tak jhela tha,ye dekh wo sab VIDEOUS se kaafi impressed ho gaye the aur isiliye REGIS ke interference ke baad wo chaaron turant uthe aur VIDEOUS ke paas jaakar usse congratulate karne lage...

wahin kuch der tak khud ko cool karne ke baad....


MABBA-i must say VIDEOUS...kaafi control hai tumhara khudpar...bohot aage jaaoge tum...

SAVENTS,aaj ki class khatm hoti hai...we will see you tomorrow....


ye bol MABBA aur uske saath REGIS aur SAPIUS teeno class se nikal gaye wahin unke jaane ke baad baaki ke SAVENTS bhi class se nikal gaye...

sabke jaane ke baad...


VIDEOUS-bewakuf ladki....kehti hai tum bhi spell bolo...

mere mooh se nikle sukoon dene waale SPELLS bhi dard dete hain...

AGAR MAINE DARD DENE WAALE SPELL BOL DIYE TOH TERI WO NASL JO AB TAK PAIDA BHI NAHI HUI,WO BHI TADAP UTHEGI.....





BACK TO RAAZ:-





KAHIYE WHIZZ...???KYA BAAT HAI...???


mere sawal par HIDA kuch der tak mujhe dekhti rahi aur fir...


HIDA-jab baaki teeno SAVENTS apne SOUL ko trigger karne me lage the,tab tum kya kar rahe the..??


WHIZZ thi HIDA...ek SAVENT se baat kar rahi thi par ab bhi wo behad underconfident lag rahi thi..


MAI-mai SOUL AMPLIFY kar raha tha...


meri baat sun chownki HIDA aur...


HIDA-AMPLIFY!!!par bina SOUL trigger kiye AMPLIFICATION kaise ho sakta hai..???

MAI-hone ko bohot kuch ho sakta hai WHIZZ...bas tarika maalum hona chahiye....


meri baat HIDA samajh toh sakti thi nahi aur isiliye...


MAI-relax WHIZZ...mazak kar raha tha...maine apne SOUL ko pehle hi trigger kar liya hai....


ek baar fir meri baat sun hairan hui HIDA aur fir unhone apna ek haath mere chest par rakha aur...


HIDA- AATMAM TAVASYAM...

SOUL STRENGTH.....


SOUL ke strength ko janane ke liye bola jaata hai ye spell aur HIDA ke aisa karte hi unke haath se ek ray nikal mere andar sama gayi aur aisa hote hi unhe pata chal gaya ki mai sach keh raha tha..

yaani meri SOUL trigger ho chuki thi aur ye pata lagte hi HIDA ki hairani aur badh gayi...

unhone apne haath ko mere chest se hata liya par aisa karte waqt unhe is baat ki bhanak nahi lagi ki unke haathon se ek extra ray nikal mere andar chali gayi thi...

khair,apna haath hata....


HIDA-fir tum WEAKLINGS me kya kar rahe ho..??aaj is PHASE me tumhari pehli class hai aur jab tumne pehle hi apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya tha toh fir tumhe GROOMERS catagory me hona chahiye....


MAI-maine apne soul ko trigger CHOSENS me nahi,balki bahar kiya tha aur isiliye kisiko is baare me maalum nahi hai..

aur waise bhi SOUL trigger karkar GROOMERS me jagah bana paana,ye PHASE 1 ka niyam tha..

PHASE 2 me agar ek WEAKLING ko GROOMERS me shaamil hona hai,toh fir usse apne SOUL ko kamsekam 2 percent AMPLIFY bhi karna hota hai jo filhal mai nahi kar paaya hun...

ek SAVENT kuch bhi kar sakta tha WEAKLING se GROOMERS catagory me upgrade hone ke liye par meri baaton ko sun HIDA ko aisa laga jaise mujhe aisa karne ki koi jaldi nahi hai aur ye baat unki hairani ko aur badhane ke liye kaafi thi...

wahin apni baat keh mai wapas jaane ke liye palat gaya aur maine apne kadam aage badhaye hi the ki...


HIDA-kaun ho tum RAAZ...??? aur kya chhupa rahe ho.....????


akhir wo sawal HIDA ke mooh se nikal hi gaya jo unke man me us waqt se chal raha tha jab se unhone mujhse koi shakti feel ki thi..

wahin unke sawal ko sun mai wapas unki taraf palta aur....


MAI-kya tum jaanti ho ki tum kaun ho...???aur kya chuppa hua hai tumhare andar....


aap ki jagah tum kaha maine par andaz mere bolne ka aisa tha ki andar tak hil si gayi thi HIDA...

saalon saal SAVENTS ne harass kiya tha unhe par tab bhi unhe waisa dar kabhi nahi laga jaisa filhal unhe meri aankhon me dekh kar lagne laga tha...

wahin apni baat keh mai aur thoda aage badha aur thik HIDA ke saamne khada ho gaya...


MAI-

ye dar jo teri aankhon me hai,
ye bas mujhtak hi RAHEGA.....

bohot seh liya tune,
ab tujhe satane waala SAHEGA...

jinhone nikale hain tere aansu,
ab ashk unki aankhon se BAHEGA....

MUJHE MAAF KARDO,tere kahe ye alfaz ab,tera har satane waala tujhse KAHEGA...









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V..J.....
Very nice update bhai
 
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