Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Jay Sutar

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thanks brother for all the love and support throughout the attitude journey...

back to the day when i started writing here,you were among one of the very first readers who encouraged me continously..

and i am so proud of your transfiguration from a patient and admirable reader to an excellent writer..

i hope and wish that your story GODS & DEMONS reaches heights that hasn't been touched before..

and in between all this, explorations of our imaginary worlds,as i say SAATH BANE RAHIYE and as you say,PEACE..
Than you vj4u I appreciate your wishes.
 

gamechanger5

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ki agar mai tere ghar waalon ko humiliate nahi KARTA....

toh tu din raat apne hi guilt me kabhi nahi MARTA....

mere ussi ravvaiye se aaj taqdir jaagi hai teri,

fir bhi,nahi samajhna hai toh mat samajh,kyunki RAAZ ko fark nahi PADTA...
Bhai yeh bahut sahi likhi hai bus last line mai yeh likh do ki ganta farak nahi padta toh maja aa jayega
 

Rajesh

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF TEENO SOVEREIGN'S KO HOSH AA JAATA HAI,DUSRI TARAF RAAZ APNE POWERS KO LIMIT KARNE KE LIYE EK SPELL BOL RAHA HAI,TEESRI TARAF WOOGER NE ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KO UNKE PLANETS ME WAPAS BHEJ DIYA HAI WAHIN CHOWTHI TARAF VIDEOUS NE BEELZEBUB AUR DEFENDER KI SOUL KO KAID KAR UNHE MURCHIT KAR DIYA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-54



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST





YE SAB ACHANAK KAISE HO GAYA??? IS FORBIDDEN FOREST KI SHIELD AISE HI GAYAB HO GAYI, YUNHI....

KAUN HO SAKTA HAI JISNE IS NAYI SHIELD KO YAHAN LAGAYA AUR FIR BADE AARAM SE ISSE HATA BHI DIYA...BINA SAAMNE AAYE....


FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ke haththe hi uske pressure ke absense ko feel kiya tha chattan ke andar khudko chupaye hue DORIAN ne aur aisa feel hote hi wo us chattan se baahar aaya aur jab us saamne dekha toh SHIELD ko gayab dekh hairan ho gaya...

usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye anhoni aakhir hui kaise par jab kaafi der baad bhi uske dimag me uske sawal ka koi jawab nahi aaya toh usne apne dimag ko jhatka aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ki dehliz ko paar kar uske andar pahuncha...

A+ level ka banda tha DORIAN...nidar,takatwar aur aatm vishwas se bharpoor par aaj jab uske FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar ghusne ka barso purana sapna pura ho raha tha,usko jo daayitv mila tha,wo usse pura karne waala tha,toh uske man me ek ajeeb si ghabrahat ,bechaini aur khushi,teeno ne janm le liya tha...

fihal raat ka waqt tha,har taraf andhera hi andhera tha,par apne chamakdaar vision ke sahare DORIAN aage badhta chala jaa raha tha...

chalte hue uski nazaren har taraf ghum rahi thi aur wo un saari cheezon ko dekh raha tha,jisse usne aaj se pehle sirf FORBIDDEN FOREST ki book me padhi thi...

usse is baat ki bohot khushi thi ki aisa karne waala wo pehla banda ban chuka tha par saath hi usse CHOSENS ke current SAVENTS par halka koft bhi ho raha tha aur wo isiliye kyunki yahan aisi aisi cheezen thi,jisse current SAVENTS explore kar khudko aur nikharne waale the...

khair, FORBIDDEN FOREST ke un saare hisson ko jo ki uske yahan ke manzil par pahunchne se pehle aane waali thi,un sabko checkout karte hue finally wo us jagah par pahunch hi gaya jahan usse pahunchna tha...


ASPRIT CRYSTAL....


wo chiz jiske liye wo yahan aaya tha... ASPRIT CRYSTAL ek trikon shape liye BLUE CRYSTEL tha par filhal DORIAN ke saamne uska desired CRYSTEL nahi balki ek PED tha jiska naam tha CUPOLA jiska ek matlab VAULT bhi hota hai...

ek pal us ped ko dekh DORIAN aage badha aur usne us ped ke saamne pahunch usse khudme aise lapeta jaise usse gale laga raha ho aur...


APRADHATA SAKRAYATE SHAKTIYEM

RELEASE THE COMPLETE POWER


ped ko upar uthane ki koshish karte hue DORIAN ne is SPELL ko uccharit kiya jiske baad uski sharirik shakti chaar guna badh gayi aur aisa hote hi....

CRCRCRCR.......

ek ajeeb si awaaz ke saath us ped ka jad ukhadne laga....

is waqt chaaron PRIMES ki shakti moujud thi DORIAN ke andar par uske baad bhi usse kaafi masakkat karni padh rahi thi us ped ko ukhadne me par dheere dheere hi sahi, CUPOLA naam ke us ped ka root aakhir ukhad hi gaya par aisa hote hi jahan CUPOLA ka jad tha,wahan se ek tez prakash baahar aaya jiske prabhav se DORIAN ki aankhen kuch palon ke liye band ho gayi....

us prakash ki teevrata se aaspaas ka saara drishya bhi ab saaf dikhne laga tha...

kuch der tak aakhen band rakhne ke baad DORIAN ne apni aakhen kholi...

tej toh ab bhi utna hi tha par us roshni se DORIAN ki ankhon me koi taklif nahi ho rahi thi aur isiliye DORIAN ne neeche jhuk haath aage kiya aur agle hi pal CUPOLA ped ki jad se usne baahar nikala THE ASPRIT CRYSTAL jo ki ek dues ball ke size ka triangular shaped CRYSTEL tha...

apni is uplabdhi ko kuch pal tak mehsoos karta raha DORIAN aur fir wo us ASPRIT CRYSTAL ke saath gayab ho gaya...




PLACE-CHOSENS




IMPOSSIBLE...????MUJHE FORBIDDEN FOREST KI SHIELD MEHSOOS KYUN NAHI HO RAHI HAI....????


soyi hui thi MARILIZA WHIZZ par phir achanak unhe unke lagaye sensors se jo ki missing SAVENTS ke maamle ke baad unhone sirf CHOSENS me hi nahi balki pure ELYSIAN me laga diya tha,FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD mehsoos hona band ho gaya jiski wajah se unki aankhen khul gayi...

ab ye koi choti baat toh thi nahi..pehle bhi ek baar SHIELD badal chuki thi aur jab aisa hua tha toh unke INSTITUTION ke teen SAVENTS lapata ho gaye the aur ab toh SHIELD hi gayab ho chuki thi jiske baad pata nahi kya hone waala tha....

yahi sab soch MARILIZA turant apne bed se utri aur wo FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne jaane ke liye antardhyan hone hi waali thi ki tabhi....


KAHIN JAANE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI MARILIZA....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ke saamne ek saath teen tez roshniyan prakat hui jisme se ye awaaz aayi thi

wahin kuch wo teen roshniyan dheere dheere maanav aakruti me badalne lagi aur jab wo aakruti puri tarah se human form me aayi toh WHIZZ MARILIZA hairan bhi hui aur khush bhi...

teeno SOVEREIGN'S uske saamne the toh aise me hairan aur khush hona toh laazmi hi tha par fir achanak se hi MARILIZA ke chehre ke bhaav badle aur wo nirash ho gayi jisse dekh teeno SOVEREIGN'S muskura uthe...


SHAILA-kya baat hai MARILIZA...???kya aap hume dekhkar khush nahi hui...???

MARILIZA-aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta SOVEREIGN....!!!!par mai aapke saamne aane ke laayak nahi hun...

aap teeno ne is INSTITUTION ki zimmedari mujhe di thi par unfortunately me fail ho gayi..

CHOSENS ke 25 thousand years ke itihaas me aisa pehli baar hua jab yahan se SAVENTS gayab ho gaye aur ye hua mere incharge hone ke baad...


sir ko neeche rakh MARILIZA ne ye baat kahi jispar...


AKSHAANT-isme aapki koi galti nahi hai MARILIZA...???jo hua,wo bas ek sanjog tha....



AKSHAANT ki baat samajh me nahi aayi MARILIZA ko...


MARILIZA-mai samjhi nahi...

ab sach toh bata nahi sakte the SOVEREIGN'S aur kya batana hai,ye toh unhone pehle hi soch liya tha aur isiliye....


MOKALSAR-ye toh aapko pata hi hai ki us FOREST ki SHIELD humari shaktiyon se bani thi...

par ab us SHIELD ki zaroorat nahi hai...

par usse ek jhatke me hataya nahi jaa sakta tha kyunki wo SHIELD sirf zamin ke upar hi nahi balki uske andar is grah ke core tak dhasi hui thi...

aur isiliye hume pehle usse uske jad se hilana tha,usse kamzor karna tha aur wahi humne kiya...

par jab humne ye kiya, toh durbhagyapurn vash ye wahi waqt tha jab us SHIELD ke paas wo teeno SAVENTS moujud the...

humare pehli koshish me wo SHIELD kamzor hui aur dusri koshish ke baad SHIELD hat gayi par aisa hote waqt us SHIELD se ek gravitational pull ENERGY ke form me baahar nikla aur un teen SAVENTS se takraya jiski wajah se wo teeno FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar kheencha gaye...

MARILIZA-oh..par jab SHIELD hatane ka waqt aa gaya tha toh fir wahan pichle kuch samay tak ek dusri SHIELD lagi hui thi...aisa kyun hua aur wo SHIELD kisiki thi...???

AKSHAANT-humse upar bhi shaktiyan hain MARILIZA aur wo SHIELD unhi shaktiyon me se ek ki thi...

aur wo laga isiliye tha kyunki jaisa ki MOKALSAR ne bataya ki hamari SHIELD ka asar is PLANET ke core tak tha toh isiliye jab humara SHIELD hata toh uska asar yahan ke core me bhi hua aur usse thik karne ke kiye hi naya SHIELD lagaya gaya aur ab jab core ne khudko stable kar liya hai toh aise me us SHIELD ki koi zaroorat nahi thi isiliye wo SHIELD bhi hat gaya...

MARILIZA-aur un missing SAVENTS ka kya hua.???sabse important sawal toh ye hai ki CHOSENS se itni door wo gaye kaise...???

aur kya abhi bhi wo wahin hain...??i hope they are alright now...???


ek saath kayi sawal kar diye MARILIZA ne jispar...


SHAILA-nahi wo teeno ab wahan nahi hain..darasal FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar pull hone se pehle hi wo teeno behosh ho chuke the aur wo sab kaafi injured bhi the...

aur jab unhe us force se FOREST ke andar kheencha gaya toh unki haalat aur kharab ho gayi..

isiliye humne unhe ek dusri jagah par shift kar diya tha jahan unka upchaar ho sakta tha... filhal toh wo teeno behosh hi hain par bohot jald unhe hosh aa jaayega aur wo wapas aa jaayenge...

aur rahi baat ki wo teeno wahan FOREST ke paas pahunche kaise toh ye tum khud hi dekh lo...


SHAILA ke aisa bolte hi uske haathon se wk ray nikal MARILIZA ke saamne hawa me rook gayi...

ye ray ek chalchitra thi par khaas baat ye thi ki ye ek fake, jhutti chalchitra thi jisse MARILIZA ke man ko shaant karne ke liye banaya gaya tha..

khair, chalchitra shuru ho chuka tha aur aisa hote hi MARILIZA hairan ho gayi...

reason....

chalchitra me scene ye tha ki ek taraf RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade the aur dusri taraf MORANA aur ANWIR khade the jinhone apne puri SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki shakti ka istemal karte hue un teeno par ray chhoda jiske prabhav se RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,teeno hi hawa me piche ki taraf ud gaye aur ussi condition me zakhmi aur behosh hokar unki bodies FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne jakar giri...

scene ke yahan pahunchte hi chalchitra band hi gaya...


MARILIZA- ANWIR aur MORANA toh PHASE 2 me the aur ye teeno PHASE 1 me...aise me inki kya dushmani ho sakti hai....???

AKSHAANT-ye CHOSENS hai MARILIZA..yahan taakatwar kamzor ke saath kuch bhi kar sakta hai...

aur jahan tak mujhe maalum hai, RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER PHASE 1 ke sabse kamzor SAVENTS the aur ANWIR aur MORANA kamzoron ko kaise treat karte hain,ye chuppi baat toh hai nahi...

unke khudke PHASE me unhone najaane kitne SAVENTS ko takleef pahuchayi hai...

MARILIZA-par ye niyam second PHASE se lagu hota hai..aur ye teeno first PHASE ke the...

inke saath kuch galat karne ki permission PHASE 2 ya 3 ke SAVENTS ko nahi thi...

AKSHAANT-par jis jagah wo teeno khade the,wo PHASE 3 ki thi..unhe secure rakhne ke liye har waqt kisi strong SAVENT ka yaa fir WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ka unke saath hona zaroori tha par aisa hua nahi...

aur waise bhi,ye sab purani baatein hain,isiliye is baare me soch kar koi faayda nahi...

important hai aage jo hone waala hai, uske baare me sochna...

aur issi baare me baat karne ke liye hum yahan aaye hain....


iske baad SHAILA ne MARILIZA ko kuch baatein batayi jisse sun...


MARILIZA-par SOVEREIGN,ye kaise possible hai..??

AKSHAANT-kiske liye...???


AKSHAANT ki baat sun MARILIZA chup ho gayi...

reason....

MARILIZA flow flow me ye bhul gayi thi ki uske saamne wo teen shaksh khade hain jinhone is institution ki rachna ki hai toh aise me jo bhi hoga,unke hisaab se hi hoga...

wahin jab SOVEREIGN'S ko laga ki MARILIZA saari baatein samajh gayi hain toh wo teeno bhi baat ko lamba naa kheenchte hue gayab ho gaye...





PLANET-THE PAGAN



PLACE-OUTSIDE THE CONCEAL





FINALLY!!!!HUME ASPRIT CRYSTAL MIL HI GAYA.....


DORIAN ASPRIT CRYSTAL haasil kar sidhe yahan CONCEAL ke saamne pahuncha tha...

uske haathon me ASPRIT CRYSTAL chamak raha tha jisse dekh behad khushi ke saath GASTON ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


TRISTEN-wo sab toh thik hai par us nayi SHIELD ke yun achanak gayab hone ke baare me kuch pata chala...


DORIAN ko dekh TRISTEN ne ye sawal kiya....


DORIAN-nahi...jo bhi hua,wo itne achanak aur gupt tarike se hue ki kuch pata hi nahi chala....

UBEL-par ye ache sanket nahi hain... kyunki jis shield ko hum chaaron ki samast shakti bhi milkar tod nahi paayi,usse banane waala humare liye kitna khatarnaak saabit ho sakta hai,iska hum andaza bhi nahi laga sakte...

TRISTEN-bilkul satya kaha tumne...hume kisi bhi tarah us SHIELD aur usse lagane waale ke baare me pata lagana padega....


KAAM TUM SABKO BAS WAHI KARNA HAI JISKA TUMHE AADESH MILE...AUR KUCH NAHI....


ek nayi awaaz padi un chaaron ke kaano par jisse sun us awaaz ki disha me ghum gaya chaaron ka sir aur jab aisa hua toh un chaaron ki aankhen badi ho gayi...

reason...

jis CONCEAL numa shakti ke baahar wo chaaron khade the,us CONCEAL ke beech ka area khul gaya tha aur uske beech ek kaafi young but handsome aur lamba chowda ladka khada un chaaron kl dekh raha tha...

us ladke ke chehre me,uski personality me ek aisi vibe thi jisse mehsoos kar un chaaron ko apne andar ek ajeeb sa dar mehsoos hua jisse wo samajh nahi paa rahe the...

wahin apni baat keh woh ladka aage badha aur theek un chaaron ke beech DORIAN ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya aur aisa karne me baad usne DORIAN ki taraf apna haath aage badhaya..

pata nahi kya tha us bande me ki uske aisa karte hi DORIAN ne bina kuch kahe uske haathon me ASPRIT CRYSTAL rakh diya....

ASPRIT CRYSTAL ko haath me lekar wo ladka ek baar muskuraya aur fir...


UNKNOWN-VIDEOUS naam hai mera...aur mai wahin hun jisse tum chaaron ka astitv hai..

jisse tum sabko shakti bhi milti hai aur aadesh bhi....


bina koi bhumika baandhe VIDEOUS ne apne baare me bata diya jiske baad kuch pal ke liye wo chaaron shocked ho gaye par fir wo sab turant apne ghutno par aane ko hue jispar...


VIDEOUS-kya mujhe dekhkar,mere saamne khade hokar tum chaaron ko dar lag raha hai....???


VIDEOUS ki baat sun un chaaron ne ek baar ek dusre ko dekha aur fir...


SAB-ji....

VIDEOUS-toh fir jhukne ki zaroorat nahi hai..meri moujudgi se man me paida hone waala dar hi mujhe diya jaane waala samman hai....

aur kisi samman ki mujhe zaroorat nahi hai....


ye bol VIDEOUS firse ASPRIT CRYSTAL ko dekhne laga...wahin is ASPRIT CRYSTAL ke baare me jaanane ki tivr icha hui uske saamne khade un chaaron ke andar jisse VIDEOUS jaan chuka tha aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-ELYSIAN, CHOSENS aur FORBIDDEN FOREST....

in teeno ka nirman ek hi waqt par hua tha..

saath hi un chizon ka bhi jo FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar hain siway is ASPRIT CRYSTAL ke....

iski utappati ka waqt thik uske baad ka hai jab FORBIDDEN FOREST ke aage uski SHIELD lag rahi thi..

parat dar parat FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD lagi thi aur jab baari aayi thi us aakhri parat ki jiske baad FORBIDDEN FOREST impenetrable hone waala tha,tab maine ek alag si urja mehsoos ki thi...

jo SHIELD ke us aakhri hisse ke lagne se pehle FOREST ke andar ghussi thi...

ussi urja ke kuch kan us jungle ke ek bhaag me gire the...

aur unhi kano se bana tha ye ASPRIT CRYSTAL....

DORIAN-oh.. toh iske zariye aap us anjaan urja ke baare me pata laga paayenge...

VIDEOUS-hmm... khair,tum chaaron ke jaane ka waqt ho chuka hai...


VIDEOUS ke aisa kehte hi un chaaron ke dimag me unke aage ka kaam,unka daayitv ek circular ki tarah ghum gaya jiske baad ek baar apna apna sir VIDEOUS ke aage jhuka wo chaaron gayab ho gaye...

ab us jagah par akela bacha tha VIDEOUS aur isiliye....

VIDEOUS ne apne right hand ke index finger ko us CRYSTEL ke upar rakha aur...


GATHIYAME RAHASYAM

UNFOLD THE HIDDEN TRUTH


SPELL ke uccharit hote hi VIDEOUS ki ungli se wo ray nikli jisme uski WHITE ENERGY ki shakti thi aur aisa hote hi ek kamal ke phool ki tarah wo CRYSTEL khul gaya aur jab aisa hua toh....

ek AURA nikli uske andar se aur VIDEOUS ke ussi index finger ke tip me sama gayi jisse VIDEOUS ki aankhen band ho gayi...

is waqt VIDEOUS ka dimag us AURA ke through us crystal ke RAAZ ko jaanane ki koshish me lag gaya par usse isme koi safalta nahi mili...

uske baad VIDEOUS ka dimag us crystal ka central point matlab uske origin ko dhundne me lag gaya aur is baar usse mili safalta aur aisa hote hi jhatt se khul gayi VIDEOUS ki aankhen....


VIDEOUS-toh aap dono hain iske piche RONIT aur ANJALI....

hahahahaha.....

koi baat nahi,koi baat nahi.....




SANKET banaye hain aapne..
mai unhe ULJHAUNGA...

raaste aapke hain,aapke hi rahenge,

mai toh bas un raaston me
KAATEIN BICHAUNGA.....








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....







AAPKA APNA V...J...
Superb update bro maza aa
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SOVEREIGN'S MARILIZA KO RAAZ, ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE GAYAB HONE KI EK JHUTI KAHANI BATATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS KO ASPRIT CRYSTAL KE BAARE ME AADHI HI JAANKARI MILTI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-55



PLANET-ARROW


PLACE-THE KING'S BEDROOM





AAHHHH........


ek halki si karah ke saath aankh khuli ACCHUTA ki...

par sir me uth rahe bhaaripan ki wajah se usne turant apni aankh band kar li aur us bhaaripan aur pain ko zabt karne laga....

wahin in sab ke beech ek shaksh ACCHUTA ke thik saamne khada usse hi dekh raha tha...

ye shaksh aur koi nahi MAI tha....

apni shaktiyon ko apne SWORD ke andar daal mai apne agle padhav ki pehli sidhi ARROW planet pahuncha tha aur CHETNA BUTI ki madad se maine ACCHUTA ke senses usse wapas louta di thi...

par itne waqt tak us VEGITATIVE STATE ne rehne ki wajah se uske dimag ko thik se kaam karne me thoda waqt lagna tha aur filhal wahi lag raha tha...

aankhen band kiye ACCHUTA ka dimag filhal toh khaali tha par ye khaalipan bhi bas kuch pal ka hi mehmaan tha aur hua bhi wahi...

aaankhen band kiye ACCHUTA ke dimag me achanak uske saath hue aakhri drishya ghum gaye....

wahi drishya jisme ek shaksh ke haath se ek badi gaadhi ray nikal uske dimag me padi thi jiske baad uska sir bhaari hone laga tha aur fir wo chakkar khaate hue gir gaya tha...

is scene ke yaad aate hi ACCHUTA ko apne sir ke bhaaripan ka kaaran pata chal gaya par tabhi....

ACCHUTA ke dimag me wo drishya bhi ghum gaya jisme ussi shaksh ne usse pehle uske maata pitah ko bhi VEGITATIVE STATE me bheja tha aur ye yaad aate hi jhat se ACCHUTA ki aankhen khul gayi par aisa hote hi wo ekdum se hadbada bhi gaya...

reason....

apni gehri kaali aankho se jhaankta hua mai uske thik saamne khada usse hi dekh raha tha...

chehra mera sthir tha par us sthir chehre par bhi ek ajeeb si kathorta aur dridhta thi jisse dekh ACCHUTA chah kar bhi bol nahi paa raha tha par bolna toh tha hi aur isiliye...

ACHHUTA-kaun ho tum???aur yahan ROYAL CHAMBER me kya kar rahe ho...???

MAI-RAAZ naam hai mera....apne left dekho...


pehla sawal hi appropriate tha uska isiliye maine bas uska hi jawab diya...

wahin mere kehne par jaise hi ACCHUTA ne apne left ki taraf dekha toh uske agle hi pal wo hairan aur pareshan dono ho gaya....

reason...

uske baaju me uske mom aur dad ussi VEGITATIVE STATE me pade hue the jisme kuch der pehle tak wo bhi tha...

apne mom dad ko yun besudh pada dekh ACCHUTA ki aankhon me aansu aa gaye....

MOM,DAD kehte hue wo un dono se lipat kar rone laga....

kuch der tak yunhi rote rehne ke baad usse yaad aaya ki ek aur shaksh bhi is kamre me moujud hai...

usse lagne laga tha ki mai un do logon ka saathi hun jinhone uske mom dad ko us haal me pahunchaya tha...

is khayal ke uske man me uththe hi usse mujhpar behad krodh aaya par fir usse wo scene yaad aaya jab bina kisi prahar kiye un do logon ne uske mom dad ko is condition me pahuncha diya tha aur aise me agar mai unka saathi tha toh wo yaa fir uski sena bhi mera kuch bigad nahi paayegi...

is soch ke uske dimag me ubharte hi pehle usne khud ko shaant kiya aur wo wapas meri taraf palta....


ACCHUTA-kya tum bhi un dono ke saathi ho jisne mere MAATA PITAH ko is haal me pahunchaya tha...???

MAI-dusri taraf dekho....


meri baat ko sun pehle toh usne mujhe hi ajeeb nazar se dekha par fir jaise hi uski gardan uske right taraf mudi,usse laga jhatka....

reason...

uske right ki taraf jahan us bade se CHAMBER ka diwar hona chahiye tha,wahan is waqt ek bade se sqaure shape me khaali space bani hui thi jiski dusri taraf ek alag CHAMBER dikh raha tha par us CHAMBER ki banawat ACCHUTA ke mahal me bane CHAMBERS se bilkul alag thi...

wahin apni baat keh mai us diwar waali jagah jahan is waqt maine WORLD DOOR banaya hua tha,uski taraf badha aur...


MAI-mere piche aao....


apni baat keh mai aage badha aur us DOOR ke beech pahunch gaya...

wahin ACCHUTA ab bhi apni jagah par hi baitha mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha aur isiliye mai palta aur...


MAI-mujhe baatein dohrane ki aadat nahi hai ACCHUTA....


meri awaaz ko sun andar tak sihar sa utha ACHHUTA aur aisa hote hi uski body apne aap hi harkat me aayi jiski wajah se wo turant khada hua aur meri taraf badhne laga...

wahin mai bhi wapas palta aur WORLD DOOR se hota hua dusri taraf pahunch gaya jahan thik ACHHUTA ke hi parents ki tarah teen log besudh ek bed par pade hue the...

wahin mere piche piche world DOOR se hota hua jab ACCHUTA us room me enter hua toh saamne ka scene yaa fir ye kahun ki bed par lete logon ko dekhkar wo chownk pada....

reason....

SLUNDER aur uske mom dad jo ki is waqt saamne bed par lete hue the, ACHHUTA jaanta tha unhe...

(DORIAN AUR GASTON NE JAB WO ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE BHESH ME THE,TAB UNHONE APNI KAHANI BATATE WAQT IS BAARE ME BATAYA THA KI ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER UNKE SOLAR SYSTEM KE VARSHIK VYAPAR SAMMELAN KE DAURAN MILE THE)


SLUNDER aur uske mom dad ko dekhna ACCHUTA ne bilkil bhi expect nahi kiya tha aur isiliye....


ACCHUTA-ye teeno toh CARAPACE PLANET ki royal family se hain...ye yahan ARROW me kya kar rahe hain...???

MAI-ye teeno ARROW me nahi,tum is waqt CARAPACE me ho..


meri baat aun ACCHUTA behad chownka par isse pehle ki wo kuch kehta...


MAI-ye jo beech me ek nayi jagah si bani hui hai,ye ek WORLD DOOR hai jiske ek taraf tumhara PLANET aur tumhara CHAMBER hai aur dusri taraf hai ye jagah jo ki CARAPACE PLANET hai aur is waqt tum yahan ke ROYAL CHAMBER me ho....

jahan meri baat sun ACCHUTA ki aankhen hairani se badi ho gayi wahin apni baat keh maine apna haath aage kiya jiske baad mere haath se 1 Jyoti jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI thi, bahar nikli aur aage badhte hue bed lar lete SLUNDER ke dimag me ghus gayi aur aisa hone ke kuch pal baad hi dheere dheere SLUNDER ki aankhen khulne lagi...

ACCHUTA ko toh kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha isiliye aakhon me aascharya aur dher saare sawal liye wo bas mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha...

wahin jaisa aankh khulne ke baad ACCHUTA ke saath hua tha,wahi SLUNDER ke saath bhi hua...

sir ke behad bhaari lagne ki wajah se wo kuch der tak apni aakhen band kar baitha raha par fir jab uski aankhen khuli aur usne apne saamne ek anjaan shaksh yaani ki mujhe dekha toh wo behad haran hua par sabse zyada hairani usse tab hui jab usne mujhse thodi door khade ACCHUTA ko dekha aur isiliye...


SLUNDER-tum toh PLANET ARROW
ke prince ho naa...!!!tum yahan kaise...???

kahin tumne hi toh us shaksh ko nahi bheja tha jisne hamare saath hamare MAATA PITAH ko....


aage ki baat SLUNDER ke mooh ke andar hi reh gayi kyunki baaton baaton me jab uske mooh se MAATA PITAH nikla toh usse wo beeta hua scene yaad aa gaya jo uske aur uske parents ke saath ghata tha aur isiliye usne jhat se pehle apne right aur fir left ki tarar jahan uske mom dad behosh pade hue the,apni nazar ghumayi..

apne mom dad ko us haalat me dekh uski aankhon me bhi aansu aa gaye....

kuch der tak yunhi rote rehne ke baad...


SLUNDER-tumne karwaya hai naa PRINCE OF ARROW ye sab???


SLUNDER ki baat ka ACCHUTA koi jawab de,usse pehle hi....


MAI-tum aur tumhare mom dad ke saath jo hua tha wahi cheez is ACCHUTA par aur iske mom dad ke saath bhi hui thi...

aur ye kiya tha DORIAN aur GASTON naam ke do logon ne...

SLUNDER-par kyun...???kyun kiya un dono ne aisa humare saath...???

MAI-kuch chahiye tha unhe jisse sirf tum dono ki families ke through hi wo haasil kar sakte the..

unhe laga ki tum sab ko us PERSITANT VEGITATIVE STATE ki haalat me pahuncha kar unka kaam ho jaayega...


meri baat suanane ke baad SLUNDER toh khamosh hi raha par ACCHUTA jo khud toh usse di gayi mout si neend se jaag hi chuka tha par saath hi jisne mujhe SLUNDER ko bhi thik karte hue dekha tha,uski aankhen chamak gayi...

usse yakin ho chala tha ki uske aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah mai un dono ke mom dad ko bhi thik kar sakta hun aur isiliye....


ACCHUTA-tumne hum dono ko us mout ki neend se jagaya hai...iska arth hai ki tum hamare mom dad ko bhi thik kar sakte ho, haina..???


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ki ankhen bhi chamak uthi aur wo bhi mujhe ummid bhari nazaron se dekhne laga..

wahin un dono ki baat sun maine kuch kaha nahi bas apna right hand aage kar diya jiske baad mere hatheli ke upar chaar roshniyan chamakne lagi jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI hi thi...


MAI-ye chaar jyot,roshniyan tum dono ke mom dad ko jaga dengi...


meri baat sun un dono ki aankhon ki chamak aur badh gayi thi...


SLUNDER-toh der kis baat ki..mere mom dad ko jaldi se thik kar do...mai tumhara ye ehsaan kabhi nahi bhulunga...

ACCHUTA-haan...mere MAATA PITAH ke ilaaj ki roshniyan mujhe de do.. mai turant usse apne MAATA PITAH ko hosh me le aaunga...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER hairan bhi hua aur saath hi ACCHUTA ke piche ka scene matlab WORLD DOOR dekhkar usse jo pehle se hi hairani hi rahi thi,wo bhi badh gayi aur isiliye..


SLUNDER-turant kaise hosh me laaoge...???aur ye tumhare piche khaali sthaan jaisa kya hai..??wahan toh is room ki deewar thi naa...???

ACCHUTA-ye khali sthan nahi hai..ye ek PLANET DOOR jaisi koi chiz hai jiske dusri taraf mera PLANET hai jahan mere mom dad bhi tere mom dad ki sthithi me pade hue hain..


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ki hairani aur badhi jiske baad wo kuch kehne ko hua par in dono ki aukaad se zyada mai inhe explain kar chuka tha aur isiliye mere chest se jahan meri SWORD aur uske saath meri chuppi hui shakti thi,wahan se do rays nikal tezi se aage badhi aur sidhe un dono ke dimag me sama gayi aur jab aisa hua toh....

un dono ki aankhen ek baar firse band ho gayi....

aur uske baad un dono ke dimag me unke PERSISTENT VEGITATIVE STATE me jaane ke baad kya kya hua,wo sab unhe dikhne laga....

DORIAN aur GASTON ka unka roop lena, AKSHAANT aur SHAILA ka un dono ke PLANETS me aana aur unka roop dhare GASTON aur DORIAN ko unke mom dad ke saath kya hua hai,uske baare me batana, CHOSENS ke baare me janana,wahan un dono ke behroopiyon ka padhna,sab kuch jo un dono behroopiyon ne unka bhesh dhar sikhne ki acting ki,wo unhe dikhne laga...

saath hi yahan unke PLANETS me unke SAMRAT,unki wife aur bacche ko us marne jaisi haalat me dekh yahan ke logon ne unhe thik karne ke liye kiye gaye prayas bhi unhe dikhe...

itna hi nahi,is drishyam ke dauran un dono ka dimag ek baar firse bhaari ho gaya tha aur saath hi un dono ko apne sharirik aur aantarik jagahon par behad tez dard feel hone laga tha par in sabke beech un dono par is waqt ek sammohan tha...

mera sammohan jiski wajah se us tez dard ke bawjud un dono ki naa toh aankhen khuli aur naahi unhe dikhne waala drishyam gayab hua...

mai kaun hun aur mere saath DORIAN aur GASTON ne kya kiya tha,is cheez ko chhod un dono se related drishya un dono ko dikhne lage....

saare drishya aur unse judi baatein jaanane ke baad ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki aankhen khul gayi jisme is waqt dard aur hairani dono hi dikh rahi thi par waqt ke saath dard toh chala hi gaya par unki harani ab bhi wahin thi aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-hum pichle 18 mahino se behosh the aur is dauran itna kuch ho chuka hai...

SLUNDER-par ek baat samajh me nahi aayi ki wo dono jinhone hume aur hamare mom dad ko behosh kiya tha,wo dono hamara bhesh dhar CHOSENS me kyun gaye...???

MAI-kya is baare me drishyam me kuch dikhaya gaya tha...???

SLUNDER-nahi...

MAI-iska matlab hai ki wo baat tumhare kaam ki nahi hai...aur matlab unhi chizon se rakhna chahiye jo tumhare kaam ki ho..

isse zinda rehne ke chances bane rehte hain..


SLUNDER ki aankhon me dekh maine ye baat kahi jisse uske puri body me ek sihran si doud gayi...

usse aisa laga jaise mout uski aankhon se jhaankti hui uski rooh ko dekh rahi hai aur wo feeling dar ki aakhri hadh thi jisse SLUNDER aur uske saath hi is waqt ACCHUTA bhi feel karne laga tha...


MAI-is waqt tum dono ke hi kaam ki do chizen hain...

pehli....jo dard tum dono ke BRAIN BODY aur BLOOD ne feel kiya tha,wo dard asal me tum dono liye ek gift thi...

ACCHUTA-gift wo bhi dard...!!!hum samjhe nahi...???

MAI-CHOSENS ke first PHASE me BRAIN,BODY aur BLOOD ko AMPLIFY karne ke liye har din jis dard se guzarna padta hai,ye wahi dard tha..

aur ab tum dono ke hi brain, BODY aur BLOOD AMPLIFY ho chuke hain...


DRISHYAM me dikhaye scenes ki wajah se ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi CHOSENS ke first PHASE ke saare classes aur unme sikhane waali chizen aur vidhi,in sabhi ke baare me jaan chuke the aur ab jab unhe ye pata chala ki 4 me se 3 classes me hone waali AMPLIFICATION me ab wo dono bhi paarangat ho chuke hain toh woh dono kaafi khush ho gaye the...


MAI-dusri kaam ki chiz hai ye RAYS jinme tumhare mom dad ke senses hain....


apna wo haath jisme wo do roshniyan chamak rahi thi,unhe aage karte hue maine ye baat kahi jisse sun un dono ki aankhon me ek baar firse chamak aa gayi aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-please inhe jaldi se istemal kar hamare mom dad ko hosh me laa do...

MAI-bilkul...par ek choti si problem hai...!!!

SLUNDER-problem...???kaisi problem..???hume batao,shayad hum kuch madad kar paayen...


aakhri baat bolte waqt SLUNDER ki zuban ladhkhada si gayi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki usne mujhe madad karne ki baat kahi thi jo usse lagne laga tha ki uske haisiyat se baahar ki chiz hai par...


MAI-shayad nahi, sirf tum dono hi ho jo meri madad kar sakte ho...

ACCHUTA-agar aisa hai toh bolo..apne mom dad ke liye mai apni jaan bhi de sakta hun...

SLUNDER-mai bhi..

MAI-wahi toh chahiye....


meri baat sun hadbada se gaye wo dono aur...


SLUNDER-hum samjhe nahi...kya hume marna hoga...????

MAI-maut bohot sasti chiz hai..keemat zindagi ki hoti hai...

ACCHUTA-matlab???

MAI-jaise ek insaan me,jaanwar me,ped poudhon me zindagi hoti hai thik waisi hi zindagi us PLANET me bhi hoti hai,jahan ye sab rehte hain...

mujhe wahi zindagi chahiye...mujhe ARROW aur CARAPACE,ye dono hi PLANETS chahiye...


aankhen hi fat gayi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki meri baat sunkar....unhe samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki wo kaise react karen...???


ACCHUTA-tumhe hamare PLANETS chahiye....ye PLANETS hain,koi chiz nahi jo hum utha kar tumhe de denge...

MAI-mere liye ye PLANETS chiz hi hain...agar chahun toh inhe zabardasti le sakta hun... aur yakin maano,agar maine aisa karna chaha toh aisa koi nahi hai jo mujhe rok sakta hai...


ye bol maine ek baar fir jhaanka un dono ki ankhon me aur mere aisa karte hi meri taakat ka ek chota sa ansh un dono ko feel hua par itna kaafi tha unki haalat kharab karne ke liye...

mooh me jaise lakwa maar gaya un dono ka... aur isiliye maine apni baat ko age badhaya....


MAI-par mai aisa karna nahi chahta...tum dono apne apne planets ke heir ho,yuvraj ho, isiliye mai chahta hun ki ye faisla tum dono ki razamandi se ho.....


ACCHUTA-hum yuvraj hain,SAMRAT nahi..wo padh hamare PITAJI ka hai...toh faisle bhi wahi karenge naa...!!!

MAI-faisla mai karta hun ACCHUTA aur log us faisle ko follow karte hain....

aur jo nahi karte, unka patan nishchit hai...

rahi baat tum dono ke yuvraj hone ki toh mere liye itna hi kaafi hai...jis tarah se mai chahun,tum dono mujhe us tarah se vachan doge aur jab aisa hoga,toh yakin maano,apne mata pitah ko convince karna tum dono ke liye asaan ho jaayega...


meri baat sun dono hi gehri soch me padh gaye aur...


SLUNDER-ek baat batao...tumhe hamare PLANETS chahiye...iska kya matlab hai...???

kya tum hamare PLANETS ke naye SAMRAT banana chahte ho...???

MAI-nahi...mai chahta hun ki tum dono apne apne planets ko evacuate karwa lo....mujhe ye dono PLANETS khaali chahiye...

SLUNDER-par fir humare log kahan jaayenge...???

MAI-ye bhi mai hi bataun...??11 living PLANETS hain tumhare aur ACCHUTA ke PLANETS ko chhod kar is SOLAR SYSTEM me..

unme se kisi bhi planet me reh sakte hain tumhare log..waise bhi, ARROW aur CARAPACE is SOLAR SYSTEM ke sabse powerful PLANETS hain...

sadiyon se baaki ke 11 PLANETS in dono PLANETS par hi dependent rahe hain..toh ab ek return favour ke tahat itna toh wo sab kar hi sakte hain...


meri baaton ko sun SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA,dono hi tention me a gaye the...


MAI-zyada sochne se bhi koi faayda hoga nahi...agar mai chahun toh yahan rehne waale har shaksh ko maar kar in PLANETS ko khaali kara sakta hun par mai aisa chahta nahi...

toh ho sake toh mujhe aisa chahne par majboor mat karo...


meri baat sun un dono ne ek dusre ko dekha...bebasi aur dar..ye dono hi bhaav un dono ke chehron par saaf dikh rahe the...

par wo jaante the ki wo kuch nahi kar sakte the aur isiliye un dono ne kuch der tak dimagi manthan kiya aur fir....


ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-hum taiyar hain...

MAI-moukhik manzoori nahi chahiye mujhe...aantarik razamandi chahiye...

SLUNDER-aantarik razamandi..!!!iska kya arth hai....???

MAI-mere saamne aakar khade ho jaao....


meri baat sun kuch pal toh wo dono hichkichaye par fir wo mere saamne aakar khade ho gaye...

aisa hone par maine dono ke chest par haath rakha aur....


MAI-apni aakhen band karo aur man hi man dil se jo maine chaha hun,usse razamandi do....


jahan meri baat sun dono ne apni aankhen band ki aur meri khwahish par razamandi dene lage wahin un dono ke aisa karte waqt..


ANNJAVI SAMUDEYA BINJAVATI


maine ek DARK SPELL bola jiske uccharit hote hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki soul ka ek bhaag unke rakht ke saath milkar bahar nikla aur mere andar sama gaya...

is kriya ke douran un dono ne apne andar halka sa pain aur saath hi ek ajeeb sa khaalipan mehsoos kiya tha...

unhe lag raha tha jaise unka kisi chiz se wireless connection tha par ab wo connection toot raha tha...

wahin kuch hi palon me meri kriya samapt ho chuki thi aur isiliye maine apna haath un dono ke chest se hata liya aur mere aisa karte hi un dono ko aisa laga jaise unke andar se koi bohot hi ehem aur keemti cheez baahar nikal gayi thi...

is ehsaas ne ek baar phirse unke sir me bhaaripan paida kiya jiske asar se wo dono niche girte hue phir se behosh ho gaye....



MAI-jahan HADH ki SARHAD hai,
mai uske bhi paar JAA RAHA HUN..

tera KHEL tere saath KHELNE,
mai tere paas AA RAHA HUN....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....








AAPKA APNA V...j....
Awesome update bro maza aa gaya
 

AvniTaneja

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vj4u ji as expected what an amazing story this was. Sach well written characters and plots are too good to expect from new writer. Yeh usual story ki tarah nahi thi jo mai ab tak online forums par read karti aayi hoon. Kaafi amazing experience raha mera is story ke dono parts ke saat. Specially Raaz ka dark nature ka hona reality ko represent karta hai. Har koi reality fairytale ki tarah nahi ho sakta hai. Jiske paas kisi aur se zyada power hai vo apne powers ka apne se weak hai unhe oppress karne ke liye unka abuse karega hi.

Har ek baat kaafi detailed ke saath likhi hui hai is story mei. Kuch bhi randomness nahi lagta hai. Har ek baat ka meaning hai yaha par. Jo aage ke update ke saath link hota hai.

Waise aap ki yeh new style kaafi change la sakti hai hamare story section mei. Agar story well planned ho toh vo chahe small ho ya big usse read karne mei maza aata hai.

Once again thank you for such awesome story vj4u ji.
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI RAAZ ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER SE UNKE PARENTS KO HOSH ME LAANE KE BADLE UNHE UNKE PLANETS KHAALI KARNE KE LIYE KEHTA HAI JISSE WO DONO MAAN JAATE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)




UPDATE-56





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-ALFREENS ABODE





EK BAAT BATAYIYE MR FELLAR....???AAPKE PLANET ME 1 KING RULE HAI TOH AISE ME KYA EK PURE PLANET KO MANAGE KARNE ME PROBLEM NAHI HOTI HOGI...!!!!????


FELLAR-problem..!!!!bilkul nahi...haan,thodi bohot siyasati mushkilen aati rehti hain par wo toh har kingdom me common baat hai par aaj tak kabhi koi major problem nahi aayi hai...

FLORIN-wow, that's commendable....

FELLAR-waise aapne bataya ki aapke planet me KINGS rule nahi karte...???toh kya wahan KINGDOMS,RIYASATEN nahi hoti...

aur law and order ko kaise manage kiya jaata hai...???

FLORIN-well,hamare PLANETS me bhi KINGDOMS hoti hain par wahan unhe COUNTRIES kehkar bulaya jaata hai...

aur rahi baat unhe chalane ki toh jaise aapke planets me KINGS RULE chalta hai,waise hi hamare yahan P.M ya fir PRESIDENT rule chalta hai...

law and order kaayam rakhne ke liye har country ke apne apne laws hote hain...

har countries me bohot se state hote hain aur un states ko sambhalne ke liye bhi bohot se log appoint kiye jaate hain..


FLORIN ki baat ko samajhte hue FELLAR ne apne sir ko halki jumbish di...


subah ka waqt hai....MR & MRS FELLAR dono hi ALFREEN ke abode me aaye hue hain..

pichle PHASE ke waqt toh sabke ABODES ek dusre se kaafi door the aur socializing ka bhi mouka wahan milta nahi tha par kyunki second PHASE first ke complete opposite tha isiliye ab sabhi PHASE 2 ke PARENTS according to there wards catagory,ek dusre se jam karne waale the...

pichle kuch dino me FLORIN,MARIA,FELLAR aur unki wife GRACE ek dusre ke ache friends ban gaye the aur lagbhag har din ye chaaron ek dusre ke ghar gather hua karte the jaisa ki abhi hi raha tha..

khair, FLORIN aur FELLAR apni baat aage badhate ki tabhi...


AAP DONO KI POLITICAL TOPICS PAR BAATEIN KABHI KHATM HONE WAALI TOH HAI NAHI..

ISILIYE PEHLE BREAKFAST KAR LETE HAIN,FIR AAP LOG APNI BAATEIN KARTE RAHIYEGA...


jahan hall me enter hote hue MARIA ne ye baat kahi wahin unke saath aati hui GRACE....


GRACE-ELUSORY......jao...bacchiyon ko breakfast ke liye bula lao...

ELUSORY-right away MA'AM....


GRACE ki baat sun kuch door khadi ELUSORY ne apne sir ko jhukate hue ye baat kahi aur baahar bane pool ki taraf jahan is waqt MABEL, ALFREEN aur MAHI swimming kar rahi thi,chal padi aur kuch hi der me wo un teeno ko lekar hall me aa chuki thi...

wahin baccho ko dekh....


MARIA-tum teeno din bhar us pool me hi rehti ho,kahin tabiyat kharab ho gayi toh...!!!!

ALFREEN-oh common mom...humari kabhi tabiyat kharab nahi ho sakti..we are damn tough,right girls....

MAHI/MABEL-right....

MAHI-aur waise bhi aunty.... entertainment ke liye ye pool aur bahar garden ko chhod filhal hamare paas aur hai hi kya...???

GRACE-what are you saying...???itna khubsoorat, advanced aur happening PHASE hai ye... regularly checkout kiya karo...

MABEL-yaa right....check out???kya check out karen...yahan CLUBS hain,PUBS hain,MALLS hain,PARTY PALACES hain,PLAY ZONES hain,aur bhi bohot kuch hai par filhal hume kisi bhi jagah ke andar jaana allowed hai nahi..

matlab jo bhi dekhenge,wo baahar se hi dekh paayenge...toh kya faayda hua....???

MAHI-haan toh ELUSORIES ne bataya toh hai naa ki jab tak tum sabka ye PHASE shuru nahi ho jaata,tab tak har poshe aur entertainment wali jagah par hum nahi jaa sakte...

entry ke liye special cards hote hain jo hume PHASE 2 ke first day par allot kar diye jaayenge..

uske baad toh hume har jagah explore karni hi hai....

FLORIN-bilkul...waise hum bhi kaafi exited hain yahan ki har jagah ko check out karne ke liye...

waise bhi ab tum logon ke PHASE 2 start hone me zyada waqt bacha hi kahan hai....???

MABEL-just a WEEK uncle..aaj se thik saath din baad next session shuru...

which means in a week,we would be the official TRIO STELLAR of PHASE 2....






PLANET-CARAPACE/ARROW


PLACE-THE ROYAL CHAMBERS





KYA KIYA THA TUMNE HAMARE SAATH...???HUM BEHOSH KYUN HO GAYE THE...????


kuch der ki hi behoshi chaayi thi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER par...

kuch der baad jab dono hi hosh me aaye toh ek baar firse un dono ne mujhe apne saamne paaya jiske baad SLUNDER ne mujhse ye sawal kiya jispar...


MAI-piche dekho...


SLUNDER ke sawal ko darkinaar kar maine apni baat kahi jisse sun un dono ne pehle toh ek pal mujhe hi ghoora par phir jab wo dono piche palte toh ek baar fir un dono ki aankhen chamak uthi...

reason....

mere haathon se chaar jyoth jo ki CHETNA BUTI thi nikal kar aage badh chuki thi jinme se do baaju ke room jahan ACCHUTA ke PARENTS the,wahan chali gayi thi aur baaki do yahin is room me SLUNDER ke mom dad ke paas jaa rahi thi jisse dekh wo dono samajh chuke the ki unke mom dad bhi ab hosh me aane waale hain....

is baat ka ehsaas hote hi dono ye bhi bhul gaye ki kuch der pehle wo behosh hue the...

aabhar vyakt karne ke liye wo dono turant wapas meri taraf palte par tabhi...


MAI-ye lo.....


mere aisa kehte hi mere saamne hawa me ek ray ban kar rook gayi..


ACCHUTA-ye kya hai..???

MAI-jo dene ka vachan tum dono ne hi mujhe diya hai,uski pushti toh tumhare MAATA PITAH hi karenge naa...

un chaaron ke hosh me aate hi tum meri baat unke saamne rakhoge aur tab agar meri khawahish se tumhare mom dad iteffaq naa rakhen toh un chaaron ko is ray ko chunne ko keh dena...

aisa karte hi unhe tumhari baat samajh aa jaayegi...

unke haan kehte hi mai wapas aa jaaunga....


jo baatein maine ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko batayi thi,wahi baat mai un dono ke parents ke saamne repeat nahi karna chahta tha aur isiliye hi apni baat keh mai gayab ho chuka tha...

wahin ab tak CHETNA BUTI ne apna kaam kar diya tha... ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke parents hosh me aa chuke the...

aur aisa hote hi SLUNDER apne mom dad aur ACCHUTA apne parents ke paas pahunch unke gale log ro rahe the...

kyunki DORIAN aur GASTON dono ne hi in sabko sote hue hi us STATE me pahunchaya tha, isiliye un chaaron ko toh bas aisa lag raha tha jaise wo so kar uthe hain...

aur aise me jab unke bacche unke gale lag rone lage toh unhe kuch samajh me nahi aaya aur isiliye unhone is sudden emotion
ka kaaran pucha aur fir....

us taraf ACHHUTA aur is taraf SLUNDER apne apne mom dad ko unke saath ab tak kya kya ghat chuka hai,wo sab batate chale gaye jisse sun dono hi taraf ke KING aur QUEEN ki aankhen hairat se badi hoti chali gayi.....

un sab ko yakin hi nahi hua ki abhi abhi wo sab jis neend se jaage hain,wo neend 19 months lambi thi...

khair,abhi toh un sabko aur hairan hona tha...

jab unke bacchon ne bataya ki unke room ke beech se dusri duniya jo ki unka rival PLANET tha,wahan ka raasta bana hua tha,toh un sabki aakhen badi ho gayi...

unhe is baat par yakin nahi hua tha aur isiliye wo sab us raaste ki disha me badh chale...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,dono ke hi parents ek hi time par us WORLD DOOR ke saamne pahunche aur jab un sabne ek dusre ko dekha tab jaakar unhe apne bacchon ki har wo baat jo ab tak unhe batayi gayi thi,uspar unhe yakin hone laga...


ACCHUTA FATHER-hume toh ab bhi ye sab ek bure sapne ki tarah lag raha hai...

SLUNDER FATHER-sach kaha...par jab hume us mout ki neend me sula diya gaya tha toh fir hum hosh me kaise aaye aur aap dono ko itna sab pata kaise chala...???


SLUNDER ke father ki baat sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne RAAZ ne jo unhe bataya tha,wo sab bata diya...

ye jaankar ki RAAZ naam ke ladke ne un sabko unki chetna loutayi hai,wo sab uske liye aabhar mehsoos karne lage par fir jab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne unhe bataya ki kis shart ke tahat RAAZ ne ye sab kiya hai,wo jaankar un dono ke hi maata pitah ko krodh aa gaya aur...


SLUNDER FATHER-uska itna dushaas...hamare PLANETS ke badle usne hume hamari chetna loutayi hai....hume ye souda manzoor nahi....

ACCHUTA FATHER-sahi kaha..aur aap dono jo ki apne apne PLANETS ke yuvraaj hain,aapne uski baat par samarthan kiya kaise...???

aapke liye sabse mahatvpurn aapka PLANET aur yahan ke log hone chahiye naa ki hum...

uske prastaav ko sunte hi aapko usse mana kar dena chahiye tha...

ACCHUTA-wo prastaav nahi tha,uska aadesh tha...aur humne bhi uski baat isiliye nahi maani kyunki hume aap sabko CHETNA loutani thi,balki isiliye maani kyunki hum nahi chahte the ki hamare faisle ki wajah se hamare log maare jaayen..

hum chahen ya naa chahen, PLANETS toh hume usse dene hi hain toh aise me hum kyun vyarth me apne logon ki bali den....

ACCHUTA FATHER-aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain...

usne aap dono ko dhamkaya aur aap dono dar gaye...

itna toh sochiye ki baat 2 PLANETS ki ho rahi hai,do raajyon ki nahi...wo hoga shaktishali,par hamari sainya shakti bhi kisise kam nahi....

agar usne zabardasti ki toh usse iska moohtod jawab milega....


krodh se bhar ACCHUTA ke FATHER ne ye baat kahi thi..

wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jinhone RAAZ ki shakti ke ek maamuli se bhaag ko mehsoos kiya tha,jisse mehsoos kar wo jaan gaye the ki ladhna toh door,un dono ke PLANETS ki puri sena milkar bhi uske saamne khade tak nahi ho paayenge aur isiliye....


ACCHUTA-aapko kya lagta hai ki humne is baat par vichar nahi kiya hoga...??

par yakin maaniye,hum dono PLANETS ki samast sena,yahan tak ki hamare SOLAR SYSTEM ke pure 13 PLANETS ki taakat bhi agar mila di jaaye toh bhi hum us RAAZ ka kuch bigad nahi paayenge....

SLUNDER-haan PITASHRI...aur is baat ka ek jeeta jaagta pramaan hum sabhi hain..

humne aapko bataya naa ki CHOSENS naam ke ek institution me jahan maayavi sikhsha di jaati hai,wahan hum dono ka selection ho gaya tha aur jahan humara bhes dhar hume is mout si neend me sulane waale dono vyakti chale gaye the...

us CHOSENS ko jinhone banaya tha,jinme apaar shakti hai fir bhi wo hum sabko us neend se jagane me asamarth the par us RAAZ ne hum sabko ek jhatke me theek kar diya..

zara soch ke dekhiye ki wo kitna taakatwar hoga...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki baat sunane ke baad bhi unke parents RAAZ ki shart ko nahi maan rahe the aur isiliye ab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke paas bas ek aakhri raasta hi bacha tha...

raasta tha wo ray jo RAAZ ne aise hi waqt ke liye wahan chhodi thi aur jo ab bhi apni jagah par rooki hui thi..

dono ki hi nazar us ray ki tataf ghum gayi aur fir...


SLUNDER-jisse ladhne ke baare me aap sab soch rahe hain,uske paas ALOUKIK shaktiyan hain..aisi shaktiyan jinse lada nahi jaa sakta...

khair,agar aapko fir bhi lagta hai ki aap log usse yudh kar sakte hain toh usse pehle ek baar wo jo ray dikh rahi hai,usse touch kar lijiye..


us ray ki taraf ishara karte hue SLUNDER ne ye baat kahi....


ACHHUTA-wo ray ussi ne wahan rakhi hai aur kaha hai ki agar aap sab uski baat se sehmat naa hon toh ek baar us ray ko chhu kar dekh len...


ACCHUTA FATHER-aisa kya hai us ray me???

ACCHUTA-khud check kar lijiye...


halke dar aur ghabrahat ke beech SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ke FATHERS aage badhe aur us ray ke saamne jaakar khade ho gaye...

ek pal sochne ke baad un dono ne hi us ray ko chhu liya par tabhi....


SATYA DARPAN....


yahi naam tha us ray ka...jisse chhute hi.....


BOOM.........


dono ke kaano me ye awaaz gunj uthi jisse un dono ko ek tez jhatka laga...


reason.....

RAAZ us PLANET ke saath kya kya kar sakta hai,us ray ko chhute hi ye dikhne laga tha un dono ko..

unhone dekha ki sirf ek waar se RAAZ is pure PLANET ko uske core sahit nasht kar raha hai jisse hua tha wo dhamaka...

dono hi PLANETS ke log us waar ki wajah se jalkar raakh ho gaye....pal bhar me hi do livings PLANETS chote chote meteors ka roop dhar pure bramhaand me fail gaye the....

ye sab scene dekh dono ke haath pair kaampne lag gaye....jo ladhne ka jasba un dono ke andar jaaga tha,wo ek second me gayab ho gaya...

jaise hi SATYA DARPAN ke scenes khatm hue aur wo ray gayab hua toh....


ACCHUTA FATHER-thik hai....jaisa wo chahta hai,waisa hi hoga....

SLUNDER FATHER-haan..par sabse pehle hume hamare sahiyogi PLANETS ko ye suchit karna hoga ki hum aur hamare PLANETS ke log wahan basne waale hain...

baat pure PLANET ke logon ki evacuation ki hai..isme waqt lagega....

hamare paas jitne bhi SPACE SHIPS hain,unme hamare PLANETS ke har baashinde ko bhar kar kahin aur shift karane me bhi kaafi waqt lagega...

hume ummid hai ki wo hame is kaarya ke liye ucchit waqt denge...


ab bhi halke halke kaampte hue dono hi SAMRATON ne ye baat kahi jispar unki patniyan shocked hui par isse pehle ki wo kuch kahen...


MAI-ek hafta hai aap logon ke paas, apne logon ko yahan se rukhsati ke liye mana lijiye...


ek gehra kaala dhuan jiske beech ek white ray chamak rahi thi,wo ubhri un sabke saamne jiske andar se ye awaaz aayi thi...

wahin kuch hi palon me us dhuen ne human form le liya jiska matlab tha ki un sabke saamne MAI khada tha....

mujhe dekhkar jaisi feeling SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ko aayi thi,thik waisi hi sarsarahat un dono ke MAATA PITAH ko bhi mujhe dekhte waqt hui..

meri aankhon me dekhte waqt uski khamoshi ko un sabne apne andar ek virani me badalte hue mehsoos kiya jiski wajah se un sabme ek ajeeb sa ghabrahat bharne laga tha..

haalat bolne waali nahi bachi thi un sabki par prakat hote hote jo baat maine kahi thi,us baare me toh unhe baat karna hi tha aur isiliye...


SLUNDERS FATHER-ek hafta..??par ek hafte me evacuation kaise possible hai...???

ACCHUTAS FATHER-itne waqt me hum apne apne logon ko yahan se nikalne ke liye convince zaroor kar sakte hain,par yahan se lejaane ke process me toh waqt lagega hi...


MAI-aap sab sirf apne apne planets ke logon ko yahan se lejaane ke liye ready kijiye..

unhe bhejne kaise hai,iski chinta karne ki aapko zaroorat nahi hai...

ek hafte ke andar jab bhi aap dono ke PLANETS ke baashinde maan jaayen toh ...

jis bhi Planet me aap aur aapke log jana chahenge,wahan ke liye thik is DOOR ki hi tarah jitni zaroorat hogi,utne WORLD DOORS khul jaayenge jisse hote hue sab apne naye ghar me jaa sakenge....


meri awaaz un sabko sirf sunayi hi nahi de rahi thi,balki ye awaaz un sabko apne andar gunjti hui si mehsoos ho rahi thi..


aur is wajah se un sabko apne andar ek ajeeb sa dar feel hua tha aur mujhe ye DAR ACHA LAGA...


meri baat sun un sabke mooh se kuch nikla nahi..un sabne bas haan me apna sir hilaya jispar...


MAI-ACCHUTA,SLUNDER...do options hain tumhare paas...

pehli...apne family aur logon ke saath raho...

dusri....wo shiksha jo tumhare bhesh me ab tak tumhare behroopiyon ne li hai,usse ab tum aage badhao ..

waise bhi,jo shiksha un do behroopiyon ne li thi,usse maine tumhare andar daal diya hai...


meri baat sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke PITAH kuch bolne ko hue jispar...


MAI-aap dono jo chaah rahe hain,wo ho nahi paayega...


meri baat un dono ko hi samajh me nahi aayi aur isiliye...


ACCHUTAS FATHER-hum samjhe nahi....

MAI-mere options dete waqt aap dono ye soch rahe the ki aapke putron ko aapke saath hi rehna chahiye taaki jab aap sab nayi jagah par basen, tab aapke putr jo ki aapke sourya mandal me sabse goonvaan the,wo sabki madad kar saken..


meri baat sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke dads ki aankhen badi ho gayi thi...

ek aisa vyakti jo unke man me chal rahe vichar tak padh sakta tha,ye jaankar unka mere prati dar aur badh gaya tha...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue....


MAI-aapki is soch se koi faayda nahi hoga...

kyuki agar ye dono CHOSENS nahi gaye,toh inka extra tez dimag inse chinn liya jaayega...


meri baat sun wo sab behad shocked ho gaye the wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue,


MAI-ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,in dono ke hi dimag sirf isiliye hi tez hain kyunki ek din inhe CHOSENS me padhna tha...

jiski shuruat ek tarike se ho bhi chuki hai...ye dono bhale hi wahan ab tak nahi gaye hain,par inke behroopiyen toh wahan first PHASE me ek bada bhaag bita hi chuke hain...

aur ab ye dono wahan PHASE 2 me jaane waale hain..

aur us PHASE 2 ka ek niyam ye bhi hai ki agar koi wahan pahunchne ke baad backout karta hai toh usse uska extra tez chalne waala dimag aur hunar wapas le liya jaata hai...

ye dono yahan reh sakte hain par sirf ek common bande ki tarah jaise ki baaki sab hain...


jahan meri baat sun chaaron parents gehre soch me chale gaye the wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jinhone ab tak ki puri zindagi ek genius ke tag ke saath bitayi thi,wo soch rahe the ki bina us tag ke wo kaise survive karenge..!!!

ek aur chiz thi jo un dono ke man me chal rahi thi aur wo thi CHOSEN'S aur wahan ki exciting activities aur life...

wo life jo un jaison ke liye hi bani thi toh aise me bhala wo dono kaise wahan jaane se khud ko rok sakte the aur isiliye...


ACCHUTA-mom dad...mai CHOSENS jaana chahta hun.. wahi meri asli jagah hai...

SLUNDER-mai bhi...aur sochiye,yahan toh hum sirf science ke through ki achievement haasil kar paayenge par wahan ki studies se humare andar supernatural capabilities bhi jaagengi jisse hum humare naye thikane me kitna kuch kar sakenge...


SLUNDER ki baat me dum tha aur isiliye...


SLUNDERS/ACCHUTA FATHER-thik hai...jaise hi hum hamare logon ke saath yahan apne Planet se shift honge,tum CHOSENS chale jaana...

MAI-ek hafta...is ek hafte me aap sab CARAPACE aur ARROW khaali karenge aur tum dono,

BRAIN,BODY aur BLOOD..tumhare in teen bhaagon ko maine AMPLIFY toh kar diya hai par in bhaagon se milne waali shakti filhal tumhare andar unstable hain...

isiliye is ek hafte me jitna waqt use me laa sakte ho,lao aur apne AMPLIFIED powers ko stabelize karo...


uske baad tum dono chaloge mere saath......CHOSENS.....





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-PHASE 2




WELCOME TO PHASE 2....MAI EK ELUSORY HUN AUR AGLE DONO PHASE KE LIYE MAI AAPKI SLAVE HUN...


saamne khade ek shaksh ko dekhte hue ELUSORY ne ye baat kahi jispar wo shaksh bas muskura diya...

wahin apni baat kehne ke baad us ELUSORY ne u shaksh ke liye CHARIOT prakat ki aur...

ELUSORY-aayiye,aapke DESTINATION ki taraf chalte hain...

ELUSORY ki baat sun aur CHARIOT ko apne saamne dekh wo shaksh aage badha aur usme baith gaya..

uske baiththe hi CHARIOT aage badhta chala gaya.. gallery se hota hua wo CHARIOT PHASE 2 ki duniya me enter hua jahan ke nazare ko dekh us bande ke chehre par smile aa gayi...

wo yunhi har chiz ko checkout karta hua aage badhta chala jaa raha tha...

aage badhta hua uska CHARIOT us poshe colony me enter hua jahan usse jaana tha aur tabhi...

ELUSORY- welcome home..... MASTER VIDEOUS......








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......








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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MABEL BATATI HAI KI EK WEEK ME PHASE 2 SHURU HO JAAYEGA, DUSRI TARAF RAAZ ITNA HI WAQT DETA HAI ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE DADS KO UNKE PLANETS KHAALI KARNE KE LIYE WAHIN TEESRI TARAF VIDEOUS BHI PHASE 2 KI DUNIYA ME PAHUNCH CHUKA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



MEGA UPDATE-57




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE GREAT HALL






WOOO.THIS PLACE IS HUGE MAN......



THE GREAT HALL me enter karti hui ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi thi jispar MAHI aur MABEL ne bhi haami bhari....

THE GREAT HALL....jahan aaj naye session ke pehle din PHASE 2 aur PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS ikattha hone waale the.....

500 metres se bhi thoda lamba aur utna hi chowda hai THE GREAT HALL....

wahin is HALL ke end me kareeb 50 se zyada doors the jinke dusri taraf MAGICAL ROOMS the aur saath hi METAPHYSICAL ACTIVITIES ko trigger karne waali mayavi equipments bhi thi par ye kuch khaas rooms me hi moujud thi...

PHASE 2 aur 3 ke zyadatar practice sessions yahin issi HALL me hote hain....

hall ke chaaron taraf dekhti hui MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN HALL ke centre ki taraf jahan sitting arrangements ki gayi thi,badh rahi thi...

wahan pehle se hi bohot se SAVENTS aa gaye the jo apne apne groups me khade yaa fir jahan unke CATAGORIES ka naam likha tha,wahan baithe hue the...

wahin jahan SAVENTS ki sitting arrangements hui thi,uske theek aage hall ke beech me ek bada sa stage bana hua tha jahan filhal bohot se WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS aur saath hi the THREE SOVEREIGN'S bhi baithe hue the...

aage badhti hui MABEL ki nazar jab GROOMERS ke uniform par gayi toh...


MABEL-yaar,wo dekho, categorically uniforms me bhi differentiation hain...


saamne ek taraf jahan GROOMERS ka section tha,wahan khade SAVENTS ko dekh kar MABEL ne ye baat kahi thi....

reason....


PHASE 2 me teeno catagories ke SAVENTS ke uniform bhi alag alag the....


jahan is waqt MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN jo ki STELLARS the,unhone WHITE ROBE pehna hua tha wahin GROOMERS bhi robes hi pehente the par us ROBE ka colour pure white naa hokar muddy white tha saath hi unke uniform me use hone waale kapde ki quality bhi average thi jo dekhte hi samajh me aa rahi thi wahin WEAKLINGS catagory ke SAVENTS robes nahi balki normal MUDDY colour ki shirt aur faded black pant pehente the jisse dekhkar aisa lagta tha maano kisi ne barso use kiye jaa chuke second hand kapde pehne ho...

khair, GROOMERS ko ek baar dekhte hue wo teeno aage badh rahi thi ki tabhi ALFREEN ki nazar hall me right wing ki taraf gayi jahan khade the ANWIR aur MORANA...


ALFREEN-yaar dekho ye ANWIR aur MORANA ne WICKEDS se milte julte kapde pehne hue hain...


ALFREEN ki baat sun jab MAHI aur ALFREEN ne uski point ki hui jagah ki taraf dekha toh unhe ANWIR aur MORANA unke group ke saath dikhe...


saath hi unse kuch door ek dusra bada sa group bhi tha jinhone MORALS ke jaise kapde pehne hue the...


MAHI-hoga PHASE 3 ka kuch..

MABEL-ye dono pakka is saal hamare liye problems create karenge...

MAHI-wo hamare liye karenge toh hum unke liye karenge...


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MABEL muskura diye aur yunhi baat karte hue wo teeno pahunchne apne catagory STELLARS waali jagah par jahan unke liye LUXURIOUS COUCHES rakhe hue the aur filhal un couches par already 3 SAVENTS baithe hue the jinme se ek VALDIS bhi tha...

MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL,ye teeno bhi jaakar COUCHES me baith gaye..

32 SAVENTS the kul FIRST PHASE me jinme se sirf 6 logon ne hi STELLARS catagory ke liye qualify kiya tha aur wahi 6 is waqt couches me baithe hue the...



wahin couch par baith MAHI ne dekha ki GROOMERS ke liye couches nahi balki normal chairs rakhe gaye the aur bachi WEAKLING catagory...

unhe yahan baithna tak allowed nahi tha..is catagory ke SAVENTS ko jo ki filhal sirf BRAWNY tha,is hall me khada hi rehna tha aur isiliye BRAWNY filhal apna sir neeche kiye hue ek jagah par khada hua tha jisse MAHI ne dekh liya tha..


MAHI-ek educational institution bhi itna biased ho sakta hai,kabhi socha nahi tha...


MAHI ki baat MABEL aur ALFREEN ne sun ki thi ayr isiliye...


ALFREEN-yaar us SAVENT ko waise dekhkar bura toh mujhe bhi lag raha hai par ab kar bhi kya sakte hain...???

is baare me toh pehle hi clear kiya jaa chuka tha...yahan par agar acche se survive karna hai toh performance is must...

ab wo aisa nahi kar paaya isiliye wahan us position ke liye bounded hai...


ALFREEN ki baat par koi kuch kehta ki usse pehle...



GOOD MORNING SAVENTS....AAP SABKO PHASE 2 AUR PHASE 3 ME PAHUNCHNE KI BOHOT SAARI SHUBKAAMNAAYEN...



stage ke beech me khadi hui SHAILA ne kahi ye baat jiske baad sabhi SAVENTS ka dhyan unki taraf ghum gaya...


SHAILA-sabse pehle PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS...aap sabhi apni apni catagory ke WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ko jaan lijiye....

sabse pehle STELLARS....aap sabki class ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS hain MABBA,SAPIUS aur REGIS...


SHAILA ke aisa bolte hi unke side me MABBA, SAPIUS aur REGIS aakar khade ho gaye....


MABBA-STELLARS sirf ek catagory nahi hai,balki ek bohot badi zimmedari bhi hai....

zimmedari khud ke talent ko ek nayi unchayi par lejaane ki jisse STELLARS group ki garima bani reh...

aap sabse pehle jitne bhi batches is catagory se paas out hue hain,un sabne ye zimmedari bakhubi nibhayi hai,aur mujhe aap sabse bhi yahi ummid hai...


apne chir parichit ghamand se bhare awaaz ke saath MABBA ne ye baat kahi jispar SAPIUS aur REGIS bas muskura diye....


AKSHAANT-now GROOMERS...ye hain aapke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER...

EDWINA,ROVEL and PETRA...


AKSHAANT ke bolte hi stage ke dusri side do WHIZZ jinme se ek EDWINA aur dusri PETRA thi,wo khadi ho gayi aur unke baaju me khade the WHIZZDER ROVEL....

but unlike MABBA, apne intro ke baad bhi ye teeno muskurakar apne group GROOMERS ko dekhte hue bilkul shaant khade rahe....


MOKALSAR-and lastly WEAKLINGS catagory ki WHIZZ hain HIDA.....


MOKALSAR ke is naam ko pukarte hi ROVEL ke baaji me ek patli si choti kad ki lady jo ki WEAKLINGS catagory ki WHIZZ HIDA thi,aakar khadi ho gayi aur jab aisa hua toh...



HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.....


HIDA ko dekhte hi ANWIR & MORANA ka group zoron se hasne lag gaya jisse dekh jahan ek taraf PHASE 2 ke sabhi SAVENTS halke hairan hue wahin WHIZZ HIDA jo pehle hi dekhne par kaafi under confident lag rahi thi,unka chehra sharm se aur neeche ho gaya...


HIDA..... pichle 15 PHASES se WEAKLINGS ki eklouti WHIZZ jiski har naye session me us session ke STELLARS catagory ke kaafi SAVENTS ke through lagatar beizzati hoti chali aa rahi hai...

aur beizzati karne me ab tak sabse aage rahe the MORANA or ANWIR ka group jinhone pichle PHASE me lagatar laghbhag har din WHIZZ HIDA ki alag alag tarike se khichayi ki thi aur yahi wajah se thi ki HIDA ka naam anounce hote hi ANWIR ka group HIDA ki khilli udaane waali hasi hasne laga tha...

khair,HIDA ka intro ho chuka tha aur isiliye baat ko aage badhate hue...


SHAILA-aapke is PHASE ki classes kaise lagengi,aap sabke apne PHASES aur catagories ki complete activities,saath hi wo ACCESS CARDS jinki madad se aap PHASE 2 ke sabhi luxuries ka apne catagory ke hisaab se lutf utha paayenge,unke baare me aap sabko aapke appointed WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke through pata chal jaayega...

and for PHASE 3 SAVENTS...chune hue har WICKEDS aur MORALS ko hamari shubkaamnayen...

par jin SAVENTS ka chunaav in do groups me nahi ho paaya hai,wo PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory ke saath dobara khud ko nourish karenge...

hum ummid karte hain ki is session ke PHASE 2 aur PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS khudko ab tak ke CHOSENS ke itihas ke best SAVENTS saabit karenge.....


SAVENTS ke fresh allots se SOVEREIGN'S ki baat ho chuki thi aur isiliye sabhi SAVENTS ko ye laga ki ab essembly conclude hone waali hai par aisa tha nahi...

kyunki ab waqt tha aaj ke ya fir ye kahun ki ab tak ke sabse bade aur ehem announcements ki aur isiliye....


AKSHAANT-well humare paas teen news hai jo hum aap sabke saath share karna chahte hain...

pehli....aap sabko ye baat toh pata hi hai ki CHOSENS se kuch kilometers door ek FOREST hai... FORBIDDEN FORREST....

wo forest aisi bohot si cheezon se bhara hua hai jinse aap sabko apni metaphysical capabilities ko nikharne me madad mil sakti hai aur saath hi naye aur exciting adventures karne ke liye bhi us forest me kaafi spots hai...

aur kyunki wo forest ek empenitrable SHIELD se covered raha hai isiliye wahan koi kabhi jaa nahi paaya hai..

par ye jaankar aap sabko behad khushi hogi ki ab aisa nahi hai...us FOREST ke chaaron taraf lagi SHIELD hata di gayi hai aur isiliye aap sab ab wahan jaakar us FOREST ko explore kar paayenge but with supervision...

khudse wahan jaana khatre se bhara ho sakta hai isiliye aisa karna allowed nahi hai....


AKSHAANT ki baat sunkar sabhi SAVENTS bohot excited ho gaye the aur hona bhi chahiye....

jis jagah ke baare me un sabne sirf padha tha,us jagah ko,us FOREST ko ab wo sab explore kar sakte the aur ye koi choti baat nahi thi...

sabhi SAVENTS iske baare me ek dusre se baat kar hi rahe the ki tabhi....



MOKALSAR-shaant ho jaaiye....


gunj si uthi MOKALSAR ki awaaz us HALL me jiske turant baad pure hall me pin drop silence ho gaya tha...


MOKALSAR-dusri news ye hai ki jaisa ki aap sabko pata hai ki har saal pure universe ke alag alag planets se yahan CHOSENS me SAVENTS laaye jaate hain jo yahan metaphysical activities ki study karte hain...

pichle saal bhi ye kriya dohrayi gayi thi jiska natija yahan moujud PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS hain...

but aap sabhi ki tarah ek SAVENT aur tha jisse pichle session me CHOSENS join karna tha par kuch serious problems ki wajah se wo aisa kar nahi paaya...

wo SAVENT bhale hi yahan nahi aa paaya par humne usse uske hi PLANET me PHASE 1 ki study karwayi thi jisme usne acha perform karte hue apne soul ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya tha...


jiska matlab hai ki us SAVENT ne PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory me khudko qualify karwa liya hai...

aur isiliye is session me wo yahan PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory ka hissa hoga...


MOKALSAR ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS shocked ho gaye...kyunki aisa kuch pehli baar ho raha tha...

wahin ye sab sun MAHI, MABEL aur ALFREEN us naye SAVENT se jo ki ab unke hi catagory ka hissa tha,milne ke liye excited ho gaye the...

khair,ye toh thi dusri news par ab baari thi new number 3 ki aur isiliye.....



SHAILA-PHASE 2 SAVENTS...aap sabko yaad hoga ki aapke pichle PHASE me SWEEP-STAKE COMPETITION ke waqt aapke teen PHASE MATES,RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER laapata ho gaye the...

achi khabar ye hai ki wo teeno bilkul thik hain aur is PHASE me wo teeno aap sabko join karne waale hain...

infact,wo abhi thodi der me aap sabke saamne honge...


SHAILA ki baat sun sabhi PHASE 2 ke sabhi SAVENTS suprise bhi hue aur khush bhi...

ALFREEN ke man me bhi RAAZ par waar karne ka jo ek bojh sa tha,wo bhi ab kam hone laga tha...

MAHI bhi SHAILA ki baat sun behad khush thi par uski khushi ka reason kuch alag tha...

aur wo reason the MARIA aur FLORIN... MAHI ko pata tha ki wo dono RAAZ ke gumshuda hone ki wajah se sabse zyada dukhi hue the aur ab jab RAAZ wapas aa gaya hai,toh wo dono bhi kaafi khush hone waale the...

khair,baat ko aage badhate hue...


SHAILA-ye thi wo teen news...


aur ab sabse pehle aap sab apne us PHASE MATE se mil lijiye jo CHOSENS me sidhe PHASE 2 ke STELLARS catagory me enter karne waala hai...

VIDEOUS....


saamne ki taraf point karte hue halke zor se SHAILA ne ye naam pukara jisse sun...



MAHI-VIDEOUS....wierd name....


dheere se kaha MAHI ne ye aur uske baad uska aur uske saath sabhi ka chehra piche ki taraf jahan SHAILA ne point kiya tha,ghum gaya aur tabhi....


OH....MY...GOD.....



ek saath nikle ye shabd kayi ladkiyon ke mooh se...

reason....


VIDEOUS......naam hi kaafi hai...


STELLARS ki uniform pehne ek gora,muscular banda jiske chehre par itna tej tha ki pata nahi nahi chal raha tha ki zyada kya chamak raha hai...

wo white robe jo usne pehna hua tha ya fir uska confidence aur ATTITUDE se bhara handsome chehra...

aankhon me chamak,chehre par halki si muskaan aur chaal me zabardast confidence liye aage badhta chala aa raha tha VIDEOUS...

aur yunhi chalte hue jaise hi wo MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ke couch ke paas pahuncha toh....

uski nazar un teeno ki taraf yaa fir ye kahun ki MAHI ki taraf ghumi...

wahin MAHI jo ussiko dekh rahi thi,jab VIDEOUS ne usse dekha toh usne apni nazar sidhi kar li.....

ek pal ke liye hi dekha VIDEOUS ne MAHI ko aur fir nazar sidhi kar aage badh chala...


VIDEOUS ki personality se impress sirf girl SAVENTS hi nahi hui thi balki stage par khadi MABBA, EDWINA,PETRA aur yahan tak ki WHIZZ HIDA bhi hui thi jo ektak VIDEOUS ko dekhe jaa rahi thi....

stage par pahunch ek baar sabhi WHIZZ, WHIZZDER aur SOVEREIGN'S ko dekh VIDEOUS SAVENTS ki taraf face karkar khada ho gaya...


AKSHAANT-kuch kehna chahoge VIDEOUS....


AKSHAANT ki baat sun ek baar uski taraf dekh muskuraya VIDEOUS aur fir...


VIDEOUS-SHAKTI,is bramhaand ki sabse badi shiksha bhi hai aur ek maatra SACH bhi...

aur CHOSENS is shiksha aur sach ka ek jeeta jaagta swaroop hai...


mujhe khushi hai ki mai yahan hun..aur jin logon ki soch mere jaisi hai,woh aaj toh khush hain hi,aage bhi rehne waale hain......

ek karkashta thi VIDEOUS ki awaaz me jo naa sirf wahan moujud har kisike kaano me padh rahi thi balki kaano se utarti hui uski awaaz sabke dil tak ko jhanjhor rahi thi...

VIDEOUS ne jo kaha,usse koi aur khush ho naa ho par MABBA jiski soch bhi waisi hi thi jaisa VIDEOUS ne bola tha,bohot khush hui thi...

wahin VIDEOUS ki baat sun teeno SOVEREIGN'S muskura uthe....


MOKALSAR-ab baari hai aap sabki apne unhi teen missing PHASE MATES se milne ki...





PLACE-OUTSIDE THE INSTITUTION




WOW........




PHASE 2 ke pure area se guzarte hue finally institution ke sarhad par pahunchne tak bas ye WOW shabd hi nikalta raha ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke mooh se...


subah ka waqt hai aur finally wo din aa hi gaya jab PHASE 2 shuru hone waala tha aur isiliye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan CHOSENS me pahunch chuke the aur filhal institution ke PHASE 2 block ke gate ke baahar khade the...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke grah jis SOLAR SYSTEM me hai, wahan waise toh baaki sabhi grah in dono ke grah ki izzat karte the,par in sabke beech 2 aise Planets bhi hain jo CARAPACE aur ARROW ke sabse bade samarthak bhi hain aur us SOLAR SYSTEM ke area wise sabse bade PLANETS bhi...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke FATHER'S ne unhi do PLANETS se khudke aur khudke Planet ke logon ki survival ke liye refuge maangi thi jisse un dono PLANETS ke KINGS ne saharsh maan liya tha aur isiliye hi aaj subah hi RAAZ ke dwara khole gaye asankhya WORLD DOORS ki madad se CARAPACE aur ARROW ke pure log apne naye PLANET aur aashiyane me shift ho gaye the...

wahin in sab se alag ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke saamne jo WORLE DOOR khula tha,wo yahan ELYSIAN ka tha jiske dusri taraf tha PHASE 2 jahan pahunch chalte chalte PHASE 2 ki khubsoorat duniya ka deedar karte hue ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER yahan institution ke gate ke baahar pahunche the...


ACCHUTA-bhai,aakhir pahunch hi gaye...

SLUNDER-haan,par ek baat samajh nahi aati ki RAAZ ne kaha tha ki wo bhi hamare saath hi yahan padhenge fir wo hamare saath kyun nahi aaye....???

ACCHUTA-toh yahan tak ka raasta tere phupha ne bataya hai kya...???


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ne usse ghur kar dekha par iska ACCHUTA par koi fark nahi pada...


ACCHUTA-RAAZ ne hi toh hamare brain se judkar hume yahan tak ka raasta bataya hai..wo yahin hai bas saamne nahi aaya hai ab tak....


SLUNDER-hmm..chal hum toh andar chalte hi hain....

is gate se hote hue SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA dono hi institution ke gate se hote hue andar daakhil ho gaye....

wahin kuch door chalne ke baad un dono ko ek giant size ka hall dikha aur aisa hote hi unke dimag me unhe ussi hall ke andar jaane ka sanket diya....

ye sanket RAAZ ke through hi unhe mila tha jisse jaankar un dono ne apne kadam us HALL ke taraf hi badha diye..

par abhi un dono ne apna apna ek kadam hi aage badhaya tha ki tabhi....


SLUNDER-arre,ye kya ho raha hai...???ye kaise kapde aa gaye hakn mere sharir par...???

ACCHUTA-sirf tere nahi humare...???

saala ye kaise kapde hain..???kichad ki colour ka crushed shirt aur ye ghisi hui kaali pant...aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi bhikari ne 15 saal pehenane ke baad apne kapde daan diye hue hon...

SLUNDER-aur inka size bhi humare size se kaafi bada hai...


hall ke andar ghus age badhte hue dono ke mooh se ye baatein nikli thi par isse aage wo kuch kehte ki tabhi padi un dono ke kaan me ek awaaz jisme....



MOKALSAR-RAAZ ACCHUTA, SLUNDER,.....



RAAZ ke saath un dono ka naam bhi anounce ho chuka tha jisse sun dono ka hi dhyan saamne ki taraf gaya jahan is waqt bohot se bacche jo ko unke hi age ke lag rahe the,baithe hue the aur un sabke aage ek bada sa stage laga hua tha jahan bohot se log khade hue the aur unhike beech se unke naam pukare gaye the...

aur isiliye halki hickichahat ke saath wo dono aage stage ki taraf badh gaye...

wahin naam anounce hote hi sabhi SAVENTS aur khaas kar ALFREEN aur MAHI ne turant apni nazar puche ghumayi jahan unhe dikhai diye SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA par unhone dekha ki filhal RAAZ abhi nadarad tha...

wahin in sabse alag sabse zyada utsukta dikh rahi thi stage ke ek side me khade VIDEOUS ki jo obviously RAAZ ko dekhne liye hi thi par jab usne RAAZ ko ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke saath nahi dekha toh uske maathe par sochne ke bal padhne lage the...

in sabke beech ab tak ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER stage ke paas pahunch gaye the par isse pehle ki wo dono stage par chadhte....


JISSE DEKHKAR TUM DONO KE ANDAR MUJHE DEKHNE SE HONI WAALI GHABRAHAT MEHSOOS HO,JAWAB USSI KO DEKHKAR DENA...


RAAZ ki awaaz gunj uthi un dono ke dimag me jispar ek pal ke liye toh wo dono thithak se gaye par fir ek baar ek dusre ko dekh wo dono aage badh gaye...

stage ki sidhiyan chadhte waqt un dono ki nazar upar khade har shaskh par gayi aur aisa hote hote jab unki nazar VIDEOUS par gayi jo unhe hi dekh raha tha toh un dono ko laga wahi dar jo unhe RAAZ ki aankhon me dekhkar lagta tha...

halki halki ghabrahat ke beech wo dono MOKALSAR ke saamne pahunch gaye...


MOKALSAR-RAAZ kahan hai..???wo toh tumhare hi saath tha naa???

MOKALSAR ki baat sun ek baar ek dusre ko dekh un dono ne apni gardan ghumadi VIDEOUS ki taraf jo unke answer ki hi pratiksha kar raha tha...

ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-RAAZ ne kaha hai ki wo aa raha hai...tab tak intazar kijiye...

halki zor ki awaaz me kahi ye baat ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne jisse sun ek saath alag alag reactions saamne aaye...

jahan ek taraf teeno SOVEREIGN'S aur unke saath VIDEOUS ke chehte par bhi muskaan aa gayi wahin stage par khade baaki sabhi WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER hairan reh gaye par unke beech khadi MABBA ko aa gaya krodh...


ek SAVENT ne jo ki ek WEAKLING tha,usne un sab ko wait karne ke liye kaha tha,ye jaankar MABBA ko krodh toh aana hi tha...


MABBA-tum dono jaante bhi ho ki kya keh rahe ho aur kisse keh rahe ho...???

daanton ko bheenche hue halki halki gurrate hue MABBA ne ye kahi jisse sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi thode sehem gaye...

SLUNDER kuch kehne ko hua par tabhi ACCHUTA ki nazar saamne gayi aur....


ACCHUTA-HE IS HERE...RAAZ aa gaya....


haath aage point kar kahi thi ye baat ACCHUTA ne...


par sehme hue hone ki wajah se zara zyada zor se bol gaya ACCHUTA jis wajah se wahan moujud sabhi ko uski baat sunayi de gayi aur isiliye sabhi ki gardan ek baar firse piche ki taraf palti aur jab aisa hua toh....



BLOODY HELL.....WOW.........



nazar rook si gayi sabki wahan jahan is waqt khada tha...................MAI.................

aur jo shabd mujhe dekh nikle the,waise toh wo shabd wahan moujud har bandi aur shayad har bande ke dil me bhi gunja hoga par mooh se ye shabd nikle the MORANA ke jisse sun uske baaju me khade ANWIR ne usse ek look diya par MORANA mujhe dekhne me kuch aisi khoyi hui thi ki uska dhyan kahin aur gaya hi nahi....

wahin ek pal khade rehne ke baad mai badha aage...

filhal hum ek hall me the jahan par environment ko magic se cool banaye rakhne ke liye halki halki hawa chal rahi thi aur us hawa me lehra rahe the mere halke lambe baal...

jaw line meri perfect thi jisse mera fair chehra aur behtar bana raha tha...

gore chehre ke beech meri gehri kaali aankhen itni deep thi ki door se dekhne par bhi iski gehrayi saafi nazar aa sakti thi aur filhal wahan moujud lagbhag har bandi ki aankhen meri inhi kaali aankhon me jhaank rahi thi....

wahi muddy shirt pehni hui thi maine jo mere chowde biceps aur piche ki taraf cuts bana kar nikalte hue triceps me chipak kar ek alag hi look dene lagi thi.....

neeche ki meri faded pant narrow thi jo mere thighs se chipakne ki wajah se alag hi dikh rahi thi...

kuch pal khade rehne ke baad maine apne kadam aage badha diye aur badh chala mai stage ki taraf...


HAAYEEEE.........


har row jisse hote hue mai aage badh raha tha,wahan baithi bandiyon ke mooh se ek thandi aah nikal rahi thi par un sab bewajah ke human compliments ko ignore karte hue mai aage badh raha tha..

wahin insab ke beech sabse alag reactions the MAHI aur ALFREEN ke chehre par...

unhe yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ki jo ladka unke saamne se chala aa raha hai,ye wahi RAAZ hai jisse wo jaanti thi...

kahan wo dabbu sa,saanwla aur patla RAAZ aur kahan dusri taraf mai jo hatta katta tha aur jiski height 6 feet se bhi upar nikal rahi thi....

jiski naa toh hieght,naahi baaki koi personality us RAAZ se match khaati thi jisse wo dono jaanti thi...

kuch hi palon me mai unke row tak pahunch chuka tha par wahan pahunchne ke baad bhi maine un dono ki taraf ek second ke liye bhi apni nazarein nahi ghumayi aur sidhe stage ki taraf badh chala...

jab side se guzarte hue bhi maine MAHI ki tarar nahi dekha toh usse behad ajeeb feel hua tha...

wahin stage par khade har shaksh ki aankhen bhi mujhpar hi tiki hui thi....

jahan SOVEREIGN'S mere wajood ke pura hone ke baad pehli baar mujhe dekh khush ho rahe the,wahin WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS toh bas ek tak mujhe dekh hi rahe the..

un sabka dimag jaise mere presence me atak sa gaya tha....

MABBA jo mere aane se pehle ACCHUTA ki baat sun uspar aur mujhpar naaraz thi,wo bhi jaise apna wo ghussa bhul si gayi thi...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne toh mujhe dekhte hi apni nazarein neechi kar li thi...

aur in sabse alag khada tha VIDEOUS...jo behad chaaw aur excitement ke saath mujhe hi dekh raha tha...

wahin VIDEOUS se ulat maine uski taraf dekha tak nahi aur stage par chaddh gaya....


SHAILA-welcome back RAAZ..apne PHASE MATES se kuch kehna chahoge...????


SHAILA ki taraf ek baar dekh maine saamne dekha jahan sabki nazar mujhpar hi thi...


MAI-SHAKTI.....is bramhaand ka sabse bada JHOOTH hai ye shabd....

ye woh shabd hai jisse kaayar apni kaayarta chuppane ke liye istemaal karte hain...

universe ka ek maatra sach hai DAR....kyunki ek dar hi hai jo zinda hone ka pura ehsaas dilata hai....

mujhe khushi hai ki mai CHOSENS dobara aaya hun,aur jin logon ki soch mere jaisi hai ,wo filhal khush ho yaa naa hon,par bhavishya me wo khush rehne waale hain...


jab mai bol raha tha tab wahan moujud har SAVENT ko aur yahan tak ki mere baaju me khade WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS tak ko apne andar ek halka sa kampan mehoos ho raha tha par wo us feeling ko samajh nahi paa rahe the...

wahin VIDEOUS ne jo kaha tha,maine theek uska ulat bola jisse sun ek taraf mere sabhi PHASEMATES shocked the kyunki gayab hone se pehle jahan maine kabhi normal conversation bhi kabhi nahi ki thi par aaj maine ek mini speech de di thi,dusri taraf VIDEOUS jisne meri baatein jo uske ulat thi,usse sun wo halke se has diya tha aur teesri taraf MABBA jo VIDEOUS ki baat se itifaaq rakhti thi aur aise me jab maine ek alag hi baat kahi thi toh isiliye wo ghussa jo unka mujhpar mere aane se pehle tha,wo wapas jaag gaya tha aur isiliye...


MABBA-ek WEAKLING hokar itni badi badi baatein karna tumhe suit nahi karta ladke....


mujhe ghurti hui MABBA ne ye baat kahi jispar...


MAI- SOVEREIGN'S...kya ye aurat WEAKLINGS ko padhayengi....!!!

MABBA-mind your tounge young man...mai yahan ek respectable WHIZZ hun aur tum mujhe aurat keh rahe ho....

MAI-thik waise hi jaise mai yahan ek SAVENT hun aur aap mujhe ladka keh rahi hain...


meri baat sun MABBA ka ghussa aur badh gaya tha...wo fir se kuch kehne ko hui par...


MAI- SOVEREIGN'S...yahan WEAKLINGS ki WHIZZ kaun hai..???


MABBA ko point karte hue maine ye baat kahi jispar...


AKSHAANT-..HIDA..ye hain aapki WHIZZ...


HIDA WHIZZ ki taraf point karte kaha AKSHAANT ne...


MAI-then why is this WHIZZ talking to me...???


MABBA ki taraf dekh maine ye baat kahi aur fir bina kuch sune mai stage se utar us taraf badh chala jahan BROWNY khada tha...

wahin meri baat sun aur meri unhe yun ignore kar chale jaane se man hi man fat si padi thi MABBA par SOVEREIGN'S ke saamne hone ki wajah se wo kuch kar sakti nahi thi isiliye filhal ke liye unhone khudko shaant kar liya...

wahin kyunki ab saari announcements ho chuki thi isiliye....


AKSHAANT-so SAVENTS..we wish all of you a great PHASE ahead...

baaki ki baatein aapke appointed WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS aapse apne CATAGORY aur group ke hisaab se karenge....


ek baar VIDEOUS aur ek baar meri taraf dekh teeno SOVEREIGN'S stage se utarkar chale gaye....

wahin SOVEREIGN'S ke jaate hi sabhi WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS apne apne groups ke paas jaane lage....


MABBA-aayiye VIDEOUS...aap hamare saath apne catagory ke PHASE MATES ke paas chaliye...

jahan ye bol MABBA, SAPIUS aur REGIS STELLARS ki taraf chal pade
wahin unke jaate hi VIDEOUS ek dusri taraf chal pada...


WEAKLINGS catagory jahan filhal WHIZZ HIDA ke saath ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY khade the,unke baaju se hota hua VIDEOUS thoda aage chal diya jahan apni peeth karke akele khada hua tha MAI...

aur mai yahan khada bhi isiliye hi hua tha kyunki mujhe maalum tha ki sabse pehle VIDEOUS mere paas hi aayega aur wo hi gaya...


VIDEOUS-ye bohot galat baat hai...jiske astitv ki wajah se tujhe tera astitv mila, usse ab tak milna toh door dekha bhi nahi tune....

MAI-tere astitv ki wajah se nahi,balki tere astitv ko mitane ki wajah se mila hai mujhe mera astitv..

aur jab ek din tujhe gayab hi ho jaana hai, toh fir tujhe dekhne ka,tujhse milne ka kya faayda...!!!


VIDEOUS ki taraf palaththe hue uski aankhon me jhaank maine ye baat kahi jisse sun...


VIDEOUS-manushya sadharan ho yaa fir asadharan..ek baat toh sabme common hoti hi hai...khwab dekhna...tu bhi dekh le...isme koi burayi nahi...

MAI-dhyan se dekh mujhe...naa toh mai soya hua hun aur naahi meri aankhen band hai...

aur jaagte hue sapne dekhne ki mujhe aadat nahi....

aankh teri band thi hazaron saalon se,toh khwab aur us khwab me khudke liye galatfehmi paalna,tera kaam hai,mera nahi....

VIDEOUS-jinki rooh,jinka dimag apne hisaab se kaam karta hai,unhe aate hai khwab...

tere saamne the last level GENIUS KHADA HAI,

VIDEOUS khada hai.....

jiska dimag aur rooh dono hi uske hisaab se chalte hain...mere khwab dikhte baad me hain,pure pehle ho jaate hain....

MAI-ye baat tab tak sach thi jab tak MAI nahi tha...ab tere khwab pure ho naa hon,par tere din zaroor pure ho chuke hain....

bohot shouk hai naa tujhe competition ka,dekh tere saamne khada hai RAAZ...

wo naam jo agar kisi competition me likha hai,toh uska matlab hai,FIRST PLACE RESERVED...

VIDEOUS-tu sirf ek khiladi hai RAAZ....par mai koi khiladi nahi balki pura KHEL hun...

mujhme khela jaata hai,mujhse khela nahi jaa sakta...

MAI-har khel me khiladi hote hain... par kabhi na kabhi koi aisa khiladi zaroor aata hai jiske baad wo khel us khiladi ke naam se jaana jaata hai...

mai wahi khiladi hun VIDEOUS...is khel ke rules tune banaye hain,maidan bhi tune chuna hai(CHOSENS)...


ab dekh,tere hi saamne,
tere hi rules ke saath
tere hi KHEL ka,

NAKSHA BADAL DUNGA MAI....


tere har daav,tere har paitre
teri har chaal ko tujh par
hi palat ek din,

TUJHKO BHI MASAL DUNGA MAI...










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....










AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Kya dhamakedaar update hai bhai maza aa gaya

Akhirkar RAAZ aur VIDEOUS amne samne aa hi gaye
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF PHASE 2 KA PEHLA DIN SHURU HO CHUKA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ AUR VIDEOUS PEHLI BAAR AAMNE SAAMNE AATE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)




UPDATE-58



PLANET-PHASE 2


PLACE-THE GREAT HALL





HMM..TOH AAP SAB HAIN IS SESSION KE STELLARS....


THE GREAT HALL ke side me bane aneko rooms me se wo room jisse STELLARS catagory ke liye rakha gaya tha,wahan VIDEOUS ko milakar kul saath SAVENTS ek taraf bane seats par baithe hue the jinhe dekh MABBA ne ye baat kahi thi...

wahin un saathon ke group se kuch doori banaye hue ek aur 19 logon ka group baitha hua tha...

aur ye group the pichle 2 sessions ke PHASE 2 ke STELLARS SAVENTS jinhe is session me naa toh WICKEDS me aur naahi MORALS ki team me jagah mili thi aur isiliye wo sab bhi apna PHASE 2 repeat kar rahe the...

VIDEOUS ke group se ek baar mukhatib hone ke baad WHIZZ MABBA ki nazar ussi dusre group ki taraf ghumi aur....


MABBA-tum sab jaisi hi haalat hoti hai aksar un sabki jab jo taakat se upar kisi aur chiz ko rakhta hai...

STELLARS the tum pichle session me aur sirf ussiki wajah se is saal bhi is prestigious catagory me jagah mili hai tum sabko...

PHASE 3 me naa chune jaane se tum sabne bas ek hi chiz saabit ki hai aur wo ye hai ki you guys are good for nothing...

loosers hi ho tum sab...par fir bhi mouka mila hai tumhe,try karna ki pichli baar jaisi aadhi adhuri will power aur incompetency repeat naa ho....got it....


SAB-yes WHIZZ...


sharm se sar jo jhukaye hue un 19 SAVENTS ne ye kaha tha...


MABBA-waise tum sabke motivation ke liye kuch live example tumhare is batch me hi moujud hai..

MAHI,ALFREEN,MABEL,VALDIS yahan aayiye...


WHIZZ MABBA ke bulate hi ye chaaron aage badhte hue unke paas jaakar khade ho gaye....


MABBA-yahan moujud baaki sabhi SAVENTS first PHASE me apne apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar paaye the par unlike you all, mere saath jo ye chaar SAVENTS khade hain,wo tum sabse,infact har session me padhte chale aa rahe SAVENTS se aage nikal gaye hain...

jahan VALDIS ki soul 4 percent tak amplified ho gayi hai wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ne apne SOUL ko 5 percent tak AMPLIFY kar diya hai...

aur in sabse aage hai MAHI...jisne first PHASE me apne SOUL ko 8 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya hua hai jo ki CHOSENS ke ab tak ke itihaas me sabse zyada hai....

aise AMPLIFICATIONS har session me dekhne ko nahi milte aur isiliye hi inke talents se sikh tum sab bhi khudko nikharne ki koshish karo...

REGIS-MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN, VALDIS...we are really very proud of you...

SAPIUS-absolutely...aur hume tum chaaron se is session me bhi kaafi
ummiden hain...

CHAARON-thanks WHIZZDERS..we will give our best....


jab REGIS aur SAPIUS in chaaron ko congratulate kar rahe the,tab MABBA ki nazar baaki ke SAVENTS par padi jinme jitni bhi girls SAVENTS thi,wo sab VIDEOUS ko hi checkout kar rahi thi aur isiliye....


MABBA-focus SAVENTS....


girls ko ghurti hui MABBA ne ye baat kahi jispar wo sabhi girls hadbada kar saamne dekhne lagi..

wahin MABBA ki nazar VIDEOUS par aakar rooki jo unki taraf hi dekh raha tha...


MABBA-VIDEOUS..speech toh tumne bohot achi aur satik di thi...mujhe pasand aaya par SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke maamle me tum filhal borderline ko touch karke hi yahan STELLARS me jagah bana paaye ho jo ki bohot common baat hai...

par kyunki tumne ye yahan nahi balki apne planet me kiya hai joki karna wakayi mushkil hai isiliye mujhe lagta hai ki tum bohot aage jaa sakte ho...

mujhe tumse bohot ummiden hain....

MABBA ki baat sun VIDEOUS halke se muskura utha aur...


VIDEOUS-its just a matter of time WHIZZ..i will surprise you....

behad shaant par confident tarike se kahi VIDEOUS ne ye baat jisse sun MABBA ke chehre par bhi ek muskaan aa gayi...


MABBA-jaao,apni jagah par baith jaao....


MABBA ke aisa bolte hi MAHI, ALFREEN, MABEL aur VALDIS apni apni jagah par jaakar baith gaye...


REGIS-well aap sabki actual classes kal se shuru hongi...abhi hum aap sabko aapke is PHASE me hone waale important activities ke baare me batayenge aur saath hi institution se baahar jo PHASE 2 ki duniya hai,jo ki aap sabhi STELLARS aur aapki families ke liye kisi heaven se kam nahi hai,usse explore karne ke liye jin ACCESS CARDS aur teen different coins ki zaroorat padti hai,wo aapko provide karenge aur aapko in chizon ko use karne ke tarika bhi hum batayenge...

SAPIUS-so lets start...is PHASE me aapke kul 2 hi class honge...

pehli class ka naam hai CLASS OF EXPANSIONaur dusri ka CLASS OF ELABORATION...

details aapko kal class ke waqt bataya jaayega....

in do classes me aap jo bhi sikhenge,us growth ko 2 baar EXERTION naam ke ek test me check kiya jaayega...

baaki ke jo do catagories hain,wo bhi is test ka hissa hote hain...

PHASE 2 ka aapka tenure bhi 18 months ka hi hota hai par ye 18 mahine do bhaagon me divided hote hain...

har bhaag 8 months ka hota hai aur uske beech ke do mahine jo ki 9th aur 10th hota hai,usme PHASE 2 aur PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS ko majority choice ke hisaab se kisi ek tourist PLANET par le jaaya jaata hai...

details aur bhi hain par wo time ke saath saath aap sabko batayi jaayengi...

MABBA-ye thi INSTITUTION ke andar ki baat...ab baat karte hain aapki us life ki jo aap aur aapke saath aapki family INSTITUTION ke bahar enjoy karne waali hain....

aur enjoy karne ke liye aap sabko jin chizon ki zaroorat padne waali hai,wo hain ye...


apni baat keh MABBA ne hawa me hi apna haath lehraya jiske turant baad sabhi SAVENTS ke saamne line se chaar chizen prakat hui jisse dekh wo sab hairan bhi hue aur un chizon ko dekh khush bhi...


MABBA-in chaaron ke combination ko LUXURY GATEWAYS kaha jaata hai...

ye jo tum sab ke left me RED CARD hai,yahi hai is duniya ka ACCESS CARD....

is card ka use yahan kuch bhi kharidne ke liye kiya jaa sakta hai...

is card ki koi limit nahi hai par jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki is PHASE me 2 baar EXERTION naam ka ek test hota hai jisme tum sabki progress record ki jaati hai,us test ke result ka asar is card aur saath hi baaki ke teen LUXURY GATEWAYS par bhi padta hai...

ACCESS CARD ke side me jo PURPLE COIN hai,ye hai ETHERIUM...

ETHERIUM ka use tum sab pubs,clubs aur bohot si alag alag night life places me entry ke liye kar sakte ho...

third me rakhi BLUE COIN hai TETHER...magical thrill parks,private party venues,the SEA SWIMMING POOL,aisi alag alag amusing jagahon par aap sirf is TETHAR ko dikhakar jaa sakte hain....

and lastly jo yellow coin hai,ye hai RIPPLE....ye coin tumhare parents nahi balki sirf tumhare liye hai...

is coin se tum sab the ANYLIZER naam ki jagah me jaa sakte ho aur ye facility sirf STELLARS ko hi mili hui hai...

haan agar tum chaahon toh dusre catagory ke SAVENTS ko apne zimmedari me wahan le jaa sakte ho...

ANYLIZER ek aisi jagah hai jahan tum sabne jo kuch bhi yahan institution me sikha hai, usse wahan jaakar seconds wise tak dekh, samajh aur apni galtiyon ko rectify karna sikh sakte ho...

par kyunki woh jagah extreme metaphisycal activities ke har moov tak ko detect karti hai, isiliye wahan par air pressure bohot zyada hota hai jis wajah se zyada der tak wahan par rehna bohot muhskil hai....

toh ye hain in chaaron LUXURY GATEWAYS ke kaam...got it...!!!

ALFREEN-WHIZZ ye chaaron toh sirf ek,ek hi available hain..kya hamare parents bhi inhi ek GATEWAYS se sabhi cheezen access kar paayenge...

MABBA-family strength ke hisaab se hi cards aur coins baatein gaye hain...

tumhare GATEWAYS ke andar tumhare parents ke GATEWAYS moujud hain....

ACCESS CARD ko hold karo...


MABBA ke aisa kehte hi ALFREEN ne apne saamne pade ACCESS CARD ko utha liya...


MABBA-card ko do baar jhatko....


MABBA ke kahe anusar jab ALFREEN ne card ko do baar jhatka toh....

ek ke baad ek do baar us card ke andar se same do aur cards bahar aaye...


MABBA-tumhare haath me jo card hai, usse baari baari baaki ke dono cards ko touch karo...

MABBA ke kehne par jab ALFREEN ne waisa kiya toh wo dono cards automatically ALFREEN ke card ke andar sama gaye...

MABBA-coins ke saath bhi same process karna hota hai...

bas ek RIPPLE ko chhod kar..wo ek hi hota hai jisse sirf usse allot kiya hua SAVENT hi use kar sakta hai...

any questions....

VIDEOUS-EXERTION test me WEAKLINGS bhi participate karte hain naa!!!!


jaanbujh kar pucha tha ye sawal VIDEOUS ne aur jis maksad se pucha tha,wo maksad pura ho gaya...

kyunki jaise hi uske mooh se WEAKLING nikla,toh MABBA ke dimag me pehle ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki wo wait karne waali baat aur fir RAAZ ki usse ki gayi insult yaad aa gayi jiske zehen me uththe hi MABBA ka daba ghussa bahar aa gaya tha...


SAPIUS-haan,ye test har catagory ke liye hota hai bas tarike thode badle hote hain...

REGIS-aur wo aise ki unka us test me participation STELLARS par depend karta hai...

STELLARS agar chahen,aur jis tarah se chaahen, WEAKLINGS ka use us test me kar sakte hain..

but kyunki wo test ek average aur below average SAVENT ke liye khatarnaak ho sakte hain, isiliye zyada tar WEAKLINGS ko us test ke bade aur important tasks ke daayre se door rakha jaata hai...

MABBA-par is baar aisa nahi hoga..is baar hum WEAKLINGS ko bhi barabari ka mouka denge...

aakhir unhe bhi toh EXERTION test ka maza chakhna chahiye...


halki devilish muskaan ke saath MABBA ne ye baat kahi thi jisse sun pehle toh REGIS aur SAPIUS hairan hue aur wo isiliye kyunki isse pehle MABBA kabhi bhi WEAKLINGS ka kisi bhi task me involvement pasand nahi karti thi par jald hi wo samajhne lage the ki MABBA ye sab un teen SAVENTS ko sabak sikhne ke liye keh rahi jinhone jo pichle saal missing ho gaye the aur filhal WEAKLING catagory me the....

khair, STELLARS ko saari infos de di gayi thi aur isiliye...


MABBA-ok,toh ab aap sab apne apne ABODES jaaiye...PHASE 2 ki duniya ka key card aur coins ke roop me aapko mil chuka hai...

explore aur enjoy kijiye...kal milte hai aapki first class me...


ye bol teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS room se nikal gaye par jaate waqt MABBA ke man me jo khayal aa chuka tha,usse pura karne ke liye wo hall se bahar jaane ki jagah ek dusri taraf nikal padi...

wahin baaki ke sabhi SAVENTS bhi apne apne cards aur coins ko lekar PHASE enjoy karne ki excitement se bhare room se nikal apne ABODES ki taraf chal pade par in sake beech tha VIDEOUS jo room se toh nikla par fir hall se bahar naa jakar wo bhi us disha ki taraf chal pada jahan gayi thi MABBA....





GROOMERS ROOM:-




TOH YE HAIN AAPKE ACCESS CARD AUR TEENO COINS KA KAAM...


card aur coins ke use ki details ko batane ke baad kaha WHIZZ EDWINA ne....

SAVENTS toh jaan gaye,chaliye aap bhi thoda bohot GROOMERS ke is PHASE me hone waale major activities aur unhe mile hue card aur coins ke baare me jaan lijiye..

waise procedure is catagory ka bhi STELLARS catagory jaisa hi hai but with some restrictions..

aur wo aise ki jahan STELLARS EXERTION me directly bhaag lete hain wahin GROOMERS ko bhi aisa karna allowed hota hai par har GROOMER ko nahi...

sirf wo GROOMERS jinki apni padhyai me growth rate STELLARS jitni hoti hai,wahi us test me directly as a participant involve hote hai aur baaki GROOMERS WEAKLINGS ki tarah hi as a SIDE KICK STELLARS ki marzi ke hisaab se us test me involvement rakh paate hai..

wahin baat karen agar GROOMERS ko mile card aur coins ki toh iska bhi ek limit tay hota hai jo unke session me kiye performance ke hisaab se fluctuate hota rehta hai...

saari details ko disclose karne ke baad GROOMERS ke teen WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS EDWINA, ROVEL aur PETRA ne class ko conclude kiya aur class se nikal gaye wahin is dauran WHIZZ MABBA aur unke piche piche VIDEOUS pahunche...





PLACE-THE GREAT HALL....




BHAI,ISSE NAA DOUBLE LOUD SPEAKER KI ZAROORAT HAI....BOL KYA RAHI HAI,KUCH SAMAJH ME HI NAHI AA RAHA..!!!!


HIDA,jo ki WEAKLINGS ki ek maatra WHIZZ thi,wo wahan moujud unke catagory ke chararon SAVENTS ko is session me unke activities ke baare me bata rahi thi,par unki awaaz itni kam thi aur saath hi baat karte waqt wo itna atak rahi thi ki unki kahi ab tak ki koi bhi baat un chaaron ko thik se sunayi bhi nahi de rahi thi aur isiliye hi ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


SLUNDER-mujhe toh ye samajh nahi aa raha hai ki ek educational INSTITUTION me itna bhed bhaav kaise ho sakta hai...???

haan un do behroopiyon ki wajah se hume WEAKLING catagory me aana pada par SAVENTS ke saath itna apmaan janak vyavahar meri samajh se pare hai....

baaki dono catagories ke liye rooms allot kiye gaye hain aur hum yahin hall me hi hain aur toh aur humare liye baithne ka bhi koi prabandh nahi hai...

this is so embarrassing....

ACCHUTA-bhai ye toh shuruat hai..pata nahi aage kya kya dekhna pade..par mujhe ek baat samajh me nahi aati ki RAAZ kyun is catagory me hai...???

SLUNDER-puch ke dekh le...

ACCHUTA-puch ke dekh le..!!sidhe bol naa marwa ke dekh le...aise hi meri shakal kuch khaas nahi hai,uspar agar maine inhe kuch keh diya toh pata nahi mere thobde ka kya bhugol ban jaayega...

SLUNDER-kharabi ki aakhri hadh hai tera chehra..isse zyada aur kya kharab hoga...

ACCHUTA-haan bhai,tere chehre se toh noor tapak raha hai,kyun!!!!..

beta jinke ghar sheeshe ke hote hain naa,wo dusro ke ghar me pathar nahi maarte...

saale,bandar ke pichwade ki shakal liye tu mere thobde ki burayi kar raha hai....


is tarah SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ek dusre ki burayi karne me lag gaye, WHIZZ WIDA hume dheere dheere atak kar hamara schedule batati rahi jo ki naa ke hi barabar tha,BRAWNY toh bas chupchaap gumsoom sa hokar hi khada tha wahin mai in sabke beech hokar bhi nahi tha..

nazarein bhale hi meri saamne thi par andar hi andar mai pure ELYSIAN ko scan kar raha tha...

reason....

mujhe ye toh nahi pata tha ki mera agla step kya hone waala hai par itna zaroor andaza tha ki jo bhi hoga,wo yahin ELYSIAN ke andar hi hoga aur isiliye mere sharir se SEARCH RAY nikal pure ELYSIAN me ghum rahe the aur tabhi...

mere chehre par ek halki si muskaan aa gayi aur wo isiliye kyunki maine mehsoos kiya hamare paas aate hue WHIZZ MABBA aur VIDEOUS ko...

aisa hote hi pehli baar mera dhyan gaya mere saamne khadi WHIZZ HIDA par joki behad under confident dikh rahi thi aur ussi jhijhak ke saath baat bhi kar rahi thi par ye dekh meri smile halki gehri ho gayi....

HIDA jinki baat sirf unhe hi sunayi de rahi thi,unhone pura schedule abhi batana complete hi kiya tha ki tabhi....


OHO....DEKHO TOH....LAGTA HAI KOI ZABARDAST PLANNING HO RAHI HAI STELLARS KO COMPETITION DENE KI....


WHIZZ MABBA ki thi ye awaaz jo hamare piche se aayi thi...

awaaz sun BRAWNY palta aur uske saah hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi palatne waale the lekin....


PALATNE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI....


meri awaaz gunj uthi un dono ke dimag me jiske baad un dono ne meri taraf dekha aur fir wapas saamne dekhne lage...

wahin BRAWNY ke saath saath WHIZZ HIDA ki nazar bhi hamare piche gayi thi aur jab unhone MABBA ko dekha toh wo kaafi nervous ho gayi...

reason...

10 saal pehle WHIZZ MABBA bhi yahan ek SAVENT thi aur tab wo bhi bohot pareshan kar chuki thi WHIZZ HIDA ko..

aur ab jab wo khud ek WHIZZ hain,tab bhi wo aisa karne se baaz nahi aati thi par ye sab wo SAVENTS ke saamne nahi karti thi lekin aaj wo yahan hamare beech unke paas aa rahi thi,toh zaroor kuch na kuch negetive aur apmanjanak baat WHIZZ HIDA se karengi hi,yahi soch kar WHIZZ HIDA nervous feel karne lagi thi...

par in sabke beech jab MABBA ne ye dekha ki unki awaaz sunkar bhi naa toh mai palta hun,aur naahi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER toh unka ego pinch sa ho gaya...

hamare side se hokar hume ghurti hui wo WHIZZ HIDA ke paas jaakar khadi ho gayi...

wahin apne saamne MABBA ko dekhkar HIDA ki nazarein neechi ho
gayi thi aur dar ke maare wo halki kaampne bhi lagi thi...

ek vyang se bhari muskaan se WHIZZ HIDA ko dekh MABBA ki nazar hamari taraf ghumi par tabhi....

VIDEOUS jo humse thode piche hi khada har taraf dekh raha tha yaa fir ye kahun ki place checkout karne ka naatak kar raha tha,uspar WHIZZ MABBA ki nazar padi aur...


MABBA-VIDEOUS...tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..???

VIDEOUS-pehli baar yahan aaya hun WHIZZ toh bas is GREAT HALL ko checkout kar raha tha..

MABBA-hmm..chalo,idhar aao...


WHIZZ ke bulate hi mere baaju se apne shoulder ko halka takrate hue VIDEOUS aage badh gaya aur tabhi....


dekhne waalo ko VIDEOUS ka aisa karna mahaz ek shrug ki tarah hi lagna tha par asal me VIDEOUS ne apni shakti ka ek bohot bada bhaag apne shoulder ke through release kiya tha aur isiliye hi uske shoulder ke mere shoulder se takrate hi mujhe ek tez jhatka laga aur mai aage ki taraf girne ko hua par maine turant apna balance bana liya jisse mai girne se bach gaya...

par jahan VIDEOUS ke shrug se mere disbalance hone par ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER hairan ho gaye wahin MABBA ke chehre par ek khilli udane waali muskaan naach gayi...


MABBA-arre VIDEOUS..dhyan diya karo..ye WEAKLINGS hain, STELLARS nahi..

ye kamzor hote hain..tumhara chhuna bhi inke liye dhakke se kam nahi hoga....

waise bhi body bana lene se taakat nahi aa jaati..ye sab sirf ek show off hai...aur iski sirf kadh aur zuban hi lambi hai...hai toh ye bhi har WEAKLING ki tarah khokla hi...


MABBA ki baat sun jahan VIDEOUS muskura diya, HIDA ka sir ek baar fir se jhuk gaya wahin mai bilkul shaant hi khada tha...

kuch der tak mujhe ghurte rehne ke baad MABBA palti HIDA ki taraf aur...


MABBA-arre,aap itni nervous kyun ho rahi hain..???aapko toh khush hona chahiye kyunki mai yahan aapko ek khushkhabari dene aayi hun...


MABBA ki baat sun HIDA ki sawal bhari nazar uspar tik gayi...


MABBA-najaane pichle kitne hi sessions se aap mujhse har EXERTION test ke waqt request karti aayi hain ki mai aapke WEAKLINGS ko bhi thoda hi sahi par participate karne ka mouka dun...

par maine kabhi aisa karne ki ijazat nahi di...lekin is baar aisa nahi hoga..is session ke pehle EXERTION me aapke SAVENTS bhi bhaag lenge..

aur wo bhi test ke kisi ek part me nahi,balki STELLARS ki tarah pure test me....

jahan MABBA ki pehli baat jisme usne WEAKLINGS ko bhi EXERTION me hissa lene ke liye haan kaha tha,sunkar HIDA khush ho gayi thi wahin uski aage ki baat sunkar HIDA ke chehre par dar dikhne laga tha...

reason...

EXERTION test kaafi dangerous tha jisme STELLARS tak fail bhi hote hai aur chotil bhi toh aise me WEAKLING ki kya haalat ho sakti thi us test me,iska toh andaza bhi nahi lagaya jaa sakta tha...

aur isiliye HIDA aisa karne ke liye MABBA ko mana karne waali thi par tabhi...

ek invisible ray nikli mere chest se jo kisi aur ko toh nahi par VIDEOUS ko dikh gayi thi..

wo ray jo ki ek MIND MANIPULATOR thi,nikal sidhi HIDA ke dimag me ghus gayi aur jab aisa hua toh unke chehre ke expressions badal gaye..

dar,ghabrahat sab gayab ho gaya unke chehre se aur fir..


HIDA-challenge accepted...agar mukabla barabari ka hone waala hai,toh theek se taiyar karna apne SAVENTS ko...

kyunki WEAKLINGS se jeetne ki ummid bhale kisiko ho naa ho,par unhi WEAKLINGS se STELLARS haar jaayen,aisa kisi ne socha bhi nahi hoga...

par is baar hoga aisa hi...


halki unchi confident bhari awaaz se ye shabd nikle HIDA ke mooh se jisse sun MABBA ko laga jhatka....

jis HIDA ne kabhi ek puri line tak thik se ek saath nahi boli thi, abhi abhi usne naa sirf pure confidence se baat ki thi balki MABBA ke challenge ke jawab me ulta ek naya aur naamukin sa lagne waala challenge tak de diya tha...

aise me jhatka toh lagna hi tha...

wahin VIDEOUS, jisne us ray ko mujhse hokar HIDA ke dimag me samate dekha tha,wo mujhe hi dekhkar aise muskura raha tha maano maine koi bachkani harkat ki ho par wo ye nahi jaanta tha ki ek aur ray thi jo mujhse nikalkar kahin aur jaa ruki thi par bohot jald usse pata lag hi jaana tha..

kaise,aayiye khud dekh lijiye...

HIDA ki baat sun kuch pal lage MABBA ko shock se recover karne ke liye par fir...


MABBA-aukad se badi baat bol gayi aap HIDA...aap darpok hi thik thi..

pehli baar kuch confidence ke saath nikla aapke mooh se toh kya .???bewakufi se bhari bachkani baat....

CHOSENS shatranj ke khel ki tarah hai... jisme RAJA aur RANI hum hain,STELLARS...

GROOMERS hote hai WAZIR aur GHODE ki tarah jinka kamsekam ek respected ohda toh hota hi hai...

par WEAKLINGS sirf un PYADON ki tarah hote hain jo hum STELLARS naam ke KING aur QUEEN ke isharon par chalte hain..

unke khudka kuch wajud nahi....


hume dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat MABBA ne aur fir..


MABBA-chalo VIDEOUS...


ye bol MABBA aage badh gayi..


wahin HIDA jinke andar se meri ray ab gayab ho chuki thi,unka sir us ray ke release hone ka pressure jhel nahi paaya aur isiliye unhe chakkar aane laga aur wo ladkhadane lagi jisse ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ne dekh liya aur turant unki taraf badhe...

mujhe ghurte hue mere baaju se hote hui MABBA aage nikli aur unke piche mujhe muskurakar dekhte hue nikalne laga VIDEOUS aur tabhi...

maine apna kandhe se uske kandhe ko halka jhatka diya...

is jhatke me bohot pressure tha par VIDEOUS ko mere aisa kuch karne ka andaza pehle se hi hi tha aur isiliye wo taiyar tha...

issi wajah se us jhatke ka uspar koi asar nahi hua par wo mere baaju me rook zaroor gaya...


VIDEOUS-tu toh baccha nikla re RAAZ...ya fir wo jo MABBA ne abhi abhi bola..ek mamuli pyada jo bas badi badi baat hi kar sakta hai aur kuch.....


DHAPP...........DHAAMMM


NAHI....ye shabd VIDEOUS ke mooh se nikal hi nahi paaya kyunki usse pehle hi usse piche se uske right kandhe par ek tagda pressure pada aur aisa hote hi pura ek flip maarte hue niche gira VIDEOUS ...

ab ye kaise hua...????

toh ye hua us ray se jisse maine ACCHUTA ki body par bheja tha aur jo uski body se ek inch aage rook gaya tha..

wo ray mere BODY AMPLIFICATION ki shakti thi...aur jab HIDA ko sambhalne ke liye SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ke saath ACCHUTA aage badha toh maine usse aadhe raaste me hi mind to mind jodte hue bata diya ki usse kya karna hai..

aur isiliye ACCHUTA wapas palta aur tezi se aage badhte hue VIDEOUS ko apne shoulder ke through jahan meri body ki shakti thi,usse ek jhatka diya aur natija sabke saamne tha....

jahan ACCHUTA ki wajah se ghumte hue khudko neeche girta hua dekh VIDEOUS hairan ho gaya wahin MABBA jo thodi hi aage gayi thi,takrane aur girne ki awaaz sun jab wo palti toh unki bhi aankhen badi ho gayi..

kabhi wo neeche gire hue VIDEOUS ko dekhti toh kabhi uske baaju me muskukar khade hua mujhe aur fir hile mere honth....


MAI-arre WHIZZ...aapka KING toh ek PYADE se hi gir gaya...

par isme is bechare ki bhi kya galti...naahi isse aur naahi aapko shatranj ki baazi ke baare me thik se pata hai...

sahi waqt par sahi chaal chalte hue agar ek PYADA aage badhe toh wo aakhri ghar tak pahunch jaata hai aur jab aisa hota hai toh RAJA ho yaa RANI,us pyade ke aage har sir ko jhukna hi padta hai....


MABBA ki aankhon me jhaankte hue maine ye baat kahi thi jisse sun wo bolna toh bohot kuch chahti thi par uske lab khul hi nahi paaye..

ek baar VIDEOUS ko jo ab uth chuka tha,usse dekh aur ek baar mujhe ghoor MABBA wapas palti aur aage badh gayi...

wahin MABBA ke palaththe hi mai bhi VIDEOUS ki taraf palta aur..


MAI-sahi bola tha tune...baccha hi hun mai..dekh, khel hi toh raha hun tere saath...

par in a spirit of sportsmanship,ek raaye deta hun tujhe...


Kota jitna ho,
utna hi BAK...

nazar bhale saamne ho,
dhyan har taraf RAKH....


waise maalum hai mujhe ki...


dekhne ke maamle me
tu ek BAAZ hai...

par jiska waar dikhayi hi naa de,
wahi toh.........RAAZ...... hai.....











AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....








AAPKA APNA V...J.....
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