Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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VIDEOUS ki Takate ko dekh kar KADAM Mere DAGMAGAAYE the

Aage badhu ya WAPAS Laut Chalu Aise Khyal Mere MANE Mein Aaye The

KHYAL ne man mein aate hi Apna Kamal dikha diya jo Kadam ab tak Beparwah chal rahe the UN kadmo Ko thama Diya

Atma Sandhay ke hajaron Bhawar mere man mein Uth rahe the
Mein Safal houga yah Vifal??
Aise Na Jaane kitne Sawal Mere Dil Mein Uth rahe the

Shwalo k bhawar Ne bhi apna Kamal dikha diya jo Kadam ab tak Aage badh rahe the UN kadmon ko Piche hatane ke liye Mana liya

Piche Hath ne wala tha mai ki tabhi yah sawale mere Kanoo mai gunja Gaya

Kya Piche hatne Ke Liye Hi Main Itna Aage aaya hu??

Kya Har mane ne ke liye Hi mai es VIDEOUS se takraya hu??

Ine sawalon nai Mera Josh 2 Guna Badha Diya Jo Kadam rukhne wale the unko dugaane Gati se Aage badhne ke liye Mana liya

Aage Badh Raha Tha Main tabhi Kisi Ne Mujhe Mera ASTITIV Yad Dila Diya


Mein RAAZ kyu hu esh baate ka Ehsaas mujhe kara diya
wow....

lag raha hai baaki sab kahani padh rahe hain par aap khudko kirdaaron se jod unhe mehsoos kar rahe hain..

just like a true ATTITUDER...and thanks for being that..
 

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VIDEOUS ki Takate ko dekh kar KADAM Mere DAGMAGAAYE the

Aage badhu ya WAPAS Laut Chalu Aise Khyal Mere MANE Mein Aaye The

KHYAL ne man mein aate hi Apna Kamal dikha diya jo Kadam ab tak Beparwah chal rahe the UN kadmo Ko thama Diya

Atma Sandhay ke hajaron Bhawar mere man mein Uth rahe the
Mein Safal houga yah Vifal??
Aise Na Jaane kitne Sawal Mere Dil Mein Uth rahe the

Shwalo k bhawar Ne bhi apna Kamal dikha diya jo Kadam ab tak Aage badh rahe the UN kadmon ko Piche hatane ke liye Mana liya

Piche Hath ne wala tha mai ki tabhi yah sawale mere Kanoo mai gunja Gaya

Kya Piche hatne Ke Liye Hi Main Itna Aage aaya hu??

Kya Har mane ne ke liye Hi mai es VIDEOUS se takraya hu??

Ine sawalon nai Mera Josh 2 Guna Badha Diya Jo Kadam rukhne wale the unko dugaane Gati se Aage badhne ke liye Mana liya

Aage Badh Raha Tha Main tabhi Kisi Ne Mujhe Mera ASTITIV Yad Dila Diya


Mein RAAZ kyu hu esh baate ka Ehsaas mujhe kara diya
fantastic poem
 

Azhar mujeeb

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your a true writer in the xf bro


matlub.....kya kahu me samaj nahi a araha

yakeen mano bhai

8.30 pm ko me padne baita hun abhi 1 baj raha hai matlub 4.30 hour me maine iss update ko teen baar pada hu kyun?

pasand ayi isliye

nahi.....

samjne ke liye

ek ek shabd ko repeat karke pada hun

varna aise hi update pada chala gaya aisa hota tho mai isse padta hi nahi tha

thank you bhai


hollywood me agar koi hindi samajnewala is story ko pada tho ab tak ki marwel films thi jo avengerse batman super man spidermane iron man wo sab bekaar lagegi

jisko ye baat sach lagti hai wo sab meri comment qoute karke agree likh do jisse pata chal jaaye v j bhai ko ki unki story kaisi bani hai
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF APNE JEEVAN KAN KO DAAV PAR LAGAKAR ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR HIDA IMMORTAL SHIELD KO OPAQUE SE TRANSPARENT BANA DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS RAAZ,MAHI AUR ALFREEN KO APNE TEEN IMPORTANT LOG,HEMINE,AROZ AUR TIFER SE INTRODUCE KARATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



MEGA UPDATE-155



PLANET-MIRO


PLACE-THE CONVERSION SHACK






NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI.........


ghutno ke bal kabhi bhi neeche gir jaane waali position me baithi MABEL ki adhkhuli bojhil niras par saath hi saath pathrayi aankhon ke beech jab aansu ke katre jame,toh jaise ek jhanaka sa hua uske dimag me jisne uske sochne aur samajhne ki shakti ko ek pal me hi wapas jaagrut kar diya..

aur aisa hote hi jo saamne dikha,us scene ko dekh hriday vidarak cheekh ke saath apne dard ko bas "NAHI" shabd ke dwara dikhate hue waise hi ghutno ke bal khudko ragdaati hui si us saamne ke 'DRISHYA" ki taraf badh chali MABEL...




"A SMALL FLASHBACK"




KYA BAAT HAI RAAZ...AAJ DENE KE LIYE KOI PUNCH LINES NAHI HAIN...


apni baat ko aage badhate hue kahi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jispar..


MAI-aaj waqt tera hai..bol bhi tu hi le,aur punch lines bhi tu hi maar le...

kyunki jaise hi waqt ne karwat li,punch lines ke saath teri bhi maar lunga mai....

VIDEOUS-see now that's what i like about you..what an ATTITUDE...

aukaad 100 rupay ki par akad 1 crore ka...

MAI-tu aakhri sidhi par khada hai VIDEOUS aur mai pehli par...

haan sach hai ye ki tere paas 1 crore hai aur mere paas 100 rupay..but teri limit bhi bas 1 crore ki hi hai aur meri,teri soch se pare...

aur jis din apni aukaad naapte hue note ginane baithunga naa,tu apni doulat bhul jaayega...

VIDEOUS-note cashier ginte hain, managers account dekhte hain,meri toh puri bank hai,teri doulat bhi mere hi yahan jama hogi beta...

MAI-phir waada raha,tera sabse bada client, customer mai hi banunga..aisa customer jiski daulat naa toh tera koi cashier gin paayega aur naahi jiska hisaab tera koi manager rakh paayega....

VIDEOUS-customer se yaad aaya,tum sabke pehchaan waali ek customer mere paas bhi hai jiski taakat numa daulat ka use mere log karte aa rahe the...


DHAPPPP...

VIDEOUS ki baat puri hote hi mere,MAHI aur uske beech koi aakar gira yaa phir to be precise,aakar giri jisse dekh...


MAHI/ALFREEN-MABELLLLLL..


MABEL hi prakat hokar giri thi hamare saamne jisse dekh uska naam cheekhte hue uske paas pahunche MAHI aur ALFREEN...

MABEL hosh me hi thi par haalat uski bohot zyada kharab thi...

atyadhik kamzori ki wajah se joki lagatar uske power consumption ke kaaran hua tha,sukh kar kaanta ho chuki thi MABEL...

aankhen andar ki taraf dhas si gayi thi..gora nuraani chehra peela padh gaya tha...

filhal neeche sameen par padi thi MABEL par dekh kar usko lag raha tha jaise apne dum par mahino tak khadi nahi ho paayegi woh...

khair,uske paas pahunch MAHI ne uske sir ko apni godh me liya aur uske sir par haath rakh uski urja ke kan loutane ke SPELL budbudane lagi jiski wajah se kuch hi palon me MABEL apni sense me aa chuki thi..

par apne GOD GIFTED POWER ke lagatar use hone ki wajah se jo weakness uske andar thi,woh MAHI ke SPELL se bhi turant theek nahi jo sakti thi.

usme time lagna tha aur isiliye pysical kamzori kam hone par woh kisi tarah uth kar baith gayi aur aisa karne ke baad uski nazar uske paas baithi MAHI aur ALFREEN par aur phir mujhpar gayi...

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke bodies humse thoda piche pade hue the isiliye MABEL unhe nahi dekh paayi thi..

khair,hume dekhne ke baad MABEL ki nazar padi VIDEOUS par..

VIDEOUS ki asliyat janane ke baad saamne se saakshat pehli baar dekh rahi thi MABEL usko par woh jaanti thi ki jo bhi uske saath hua hai,woh VIDEOUS ke orders par hi hua hai aur isiliye...


MABEL-please VIDEOUS...mere mom dad mujhe louta do....


jahan is guhaar ko lagate waqt aankhen bhar aayi thi MABEL ki wahin uski baat sun muskura utha VIDEOUS aur...


VIDEOUS-kitni baar kaha VIRAAZ ne tumhe ki hume pure dil se apna lo...

par nahi,tumpar toh acchayi ka bhoot sawar tha...apne doston ki fikr thi...kya mila acchayi ka saath dekar..

khair,tumse vaada kiya gaya tha ki tumse hamara kaam nikalne ke baad tumhe azaad aur tumhare mom dad ko tumhe sounp diya jaayega...

apne doston ke beech ho tum, matlab azaad ho chuki ho..

ab bache tumhare mom dad, toh ye lo,sambhalo inhe..


DHABBBBB.....

VIDEOUS ki baat puri hote hi do log MABEL se thoda aage prakat hokar niche gire...

ye uske mom dad the...par apne mom dad ko saamne dekh khush hone ke bajaaye pehle MABEL ki aankhen badi hui aur phir badi hokar pathra si gayi..

REASON...

uske mom dad uske saamne zaroor the but they were DEAD....

apne mom dad ki dead bodies ko ek tak bina palke jhapkaye dekh rahi thi MABEL...

same haalat ALFREEN aur MAHI ki bhi thi..woh bhi MABEL ke mom dad ki bodies ki dekh stabdh se reh gaye the..

mai bhi shaant baitha VIDEOUS ko hi dekh raha tha jispar...


VIDEOUS-vaada pura hua..maa baap loutane ki baat hui thi,loutathe waqt woh zinda rahenge,ye promise nahi kiya tha...

bewakuf,hamari baat maan leti toh ye din nahi dekhna padta..

RAAZ mere bhai...ye hamari aakhri informal mulakat hai..

agli baar jab aamne saamne honge,tab logon ke dil ki dhadkane badh jaayengi aur teri hamesha ke liye band ho jaayegi...

ZZZHHHHHHH....


jahan VIDEOUS ki baat khatm hote hi woh, HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER grey roshni bankar gayab ho gaye wahin MABEL jiski aankhen apne mom dad ki dead bodies dekhkar pathra gayi thi,unme aansu aate hi woh "NAHI" shabd ko lagatar repeat kar cheekhte hue apne mom dad ke taraf badh chali...


FLASHBACK ENDS:-



MOM,DAD...... please wake up...?? aankhen kholiye,i beg you, please....


buri tarah rote hue apne mom dad ki bodies ko jhakjhorte hue kahi ye baat MABEL ne..

wahin ALFREEN aur MAHI bhi aankhon me aansu liye bas bebas bhari nazaron se MABEL ke dard ko feel karne lage...

aur mai,saala meri ulti khopdi ye sochkar khudko positive rakhne ke liye motivate karne ki koshish kar rahi thi ki mere aur ALFREEN ke mom dad nipte,MAHI ke mom dad ka hona naa hona bhi ek saa hai, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke mom dad bhi khatm ho chuke hain,MABEL bhi anath ho gayi...

matlab dard ek saa hi baant raha hai hum sabme upar waala...yahi toh hona chahiye...

equality...

bhale us barabari ke liye hamare maa baap ko marna pade..GAZAB LOGIC....

par saala BRAWNY ke maa baap kaise bach gaye..???ye toh bhedh bhaav ho gaya...

unka nipatna hi toh is chain ko pura karega...!!!!

is maha akhand chutiyape bhare aur insensitive sawal ne meri saari positivity par paani fer diya aur meri nazar gayi saare HALTIJAS par joki MAHI aur ALFREEN ki hi tarah sir jhukaye sad khade hue MABEL ke mom dad ke liye mourn kar rahe the...

un HALTIJAS ko dekh aankhein dehki meri aur...


MAI-uske mom dad mare hain,toh uska rona toh banta hai...par tum sab ye udaas hone ki noutanki kyun rahe ho be...???


DHAABBBBBBBB...AHHHHHH..


apni baat bolte hue hi maine un saare HALTIJAS ki taraf jinki sankhya kayi thousands me thi,apna haath badhaya aur apni ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke AURA se ek wave create kar apne haath ko halka sa jhatak diya..

mere aisa karte hi woh saare HALTIJAS halke cheekhte hue kayi feets tak piche udte hue jaakar gire..

mai jaanta tha ki un sab par sirf ALOUKIK SHAKTIYAN hi kaam karengi aur isiliye hi maine uske AURA se un sabko hit kiya tha..

wahin mere waar ko aur us waar ke shorth ko feel kar HALTIJAS samajh gaye ki unki shakti mujhpar kaam nahi karegi aur isiliye woh kaafi dar chuke the...

aankhon me dar liye woh sab khade hue aur unke beech khada SHOWHI uththe hi meri taraf badha aur...


SHOWHI-SHOWHI MAHABALI RAAZ se maafi ki guhaar lagata hai.... SHOWHI MAHABALI RAAZ ko batana chahta hai ki SHOWHI ke saathi bure log nahi hain...

un sabne bas apne logon aur prajati ko bachane ke liye VIDEOUS ka saath diya..

isiliye SHOWHI ek baar phirse MAHABALI RAAZ se MAAFI ki darkhwast karta hai..


MAI-

PEEDAHEM VRIDHYATI

PAIN WITH CONTINOUS UPSERGE


SHOWHI ki baat ko ansuna kar is continuous pain growth SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine jiske baad...

AHHHHHHHH...

pura mahoul saare HALTIJAS ke, excluding SHOWHI,cheekhon se gunj utha...

hadh se zyada pain jo har pal badhta jaa raha tha,usse jhelte hue zamin par lot pot ho tadap rahe the saare HALTIJAS...

aur ye sab dekh jahan is baar SHOWHI bina kuch kahe,bas mere pairon ke paas baith apne haath jode bas mujhe maafi-e-iltijaaye nazaron se dekhe jaa raha tha wahin MAHI turant mere paas pahunchi aur..


MAHI-stop it RAAZ...


halke ghusse se bhari awaaz me ye bol mere spell ko kaatne ke iraade se apna haath aage kiya MAHI ne jispar..


MAI-do it and i will set there bodies on fire...


bade araam se ye dhamki di thi maine par iska asar turant hua MAHI ke upar..

uske haath turant neeche hue aur..


MAHI-kyun kar rahe ho ye sab..??unhone jo kiya, apne saathiyon ke liye,apne logon ko bachane ke liye kiya...

MAI-aur mai jo kar raha hun,apne self satisfaction ke liye kar raha hun...

MAHI-stop being such a devil RAAZ...CONVERSION spell bolte waqt maine in sabke faces dekhe the,unhe waisa karne me bilkul bhi acha nahi lag raha tha..

they were regreting there actions...par apne saathiyon ke liye unhone woh kiya..

aur ek tum ho,MABEL friend hai tumhari,uske mom dad ki dead bodies uske saamne padi hai,woh ro rahi hai,aur tumhare face par uske dard ko,uske loss ko dekh halka sa bhi afsos nahi dikha..

MABEL ke mom dad ko chhodo,kuch der pehle tumhare chaaron friends ne tumhare maksad ke liye apni jaan de di...

par tumhari face par unki kurbaani,unke marne ka bhi gum nahi...how can be you such insensitive....???


yahan MAHI mujhe ye saari baatein suna rahi thi,aur wahan doston waali baat sun MABEL ki nazar kuch door saamne pade ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ki bodies par padi jisse dekh uske andar pehle se hi panap raha dard aur badh gaya..

un sabke baare me aur khaas kar ACCHUTA ke baare me soch uski aankhein aur zyada gili ho chuki thi...

khair,MAHI ki baat sun usse ghoor kar dekha maine aur..


MAI-

SATYAM DARSHISTA

TRUTH REVEAL


MABEL ke mom ki bodies ki taraf dekh kahi ye baat maine aur mere aisa karte hi un dono ki bodies se ek combined ray nikal unke upar ghumne lagi jo kuch hi palon me ek drishyam me badal gayi aur aisa hote hi jo sach saamne aaya,usse dekh,MABEL, ALFREEN aur MAHI ki aankhein badi ho gayi...

REASON..

us drishyam me dikh raha tha woh scene jab MABEL ke mom dad ko maara gaya tha..

ye kaam kiya tha ek kaale labade me dhake VIDEOUS ke bande ne par un teeno ke chowkne ka main reason tha woh waqt aur tarika jab un dono ko maara gaya tha..

un dono ko abhi yaa kuch din pehle nahi balki ussi waqt maar diya gaya tha yaa phir ye kahun ki jala diya gaya tha jab mai aur MAHI VIDEOUS se bachkar GALEN pahunchne ke process me the...

uske baad MABEL ko bandi bana liya gaya tha par aisa karne se pehle hi uske mom dad ko jala unki raakh se un dono ke do clones bana taaki unki asliyat par shakh naa ho,plant kar diya gaya tha..

ab tak MABEL jin do logon ko bachane ke liye VIDEOUS ke logon ki baat maan rahi thi,woh toh uske mom dad the hi nahi...

ye scene dekh aur sacchayi jaan stabdh si ho apni jagah par jadh ho chuki thi MABEL..

wahin saari sacchayi dikhane ke baad mai MAHI ki taraf palta aur..


MAI-GALEN pahunchne se pehle CHOSENS me apni ALOUKIK shaktiyon ke jaane se just pehle hi is sach se waakif ho chuka tha mai..

aur phir jab meri yaadasht wapas aayi thi,toh apne mom dad ke liye jo aansu mere aankhon se bahe the,unme kuch katre MABEL ke mom dad ke liye bhi the...

aur baar baar rone ki aadat RAAZ ki nahi...aur rahi baat mere baaki ke chaar doston ke mout ki, toh jab woh wakayi mar jaayenge,toh thode aansu unke liye bhi baha lunga mai..


jahan MABEL ke mom dad ka sach jaan hairan hue khadi thi MAHI,wahin ACCHUTA, SLUNDER BRAWNY aur HIDA ke baare me jaan ki woh zinda hai, aankhen chamak uthi uski par isse pehle ki woh kuch reaction deti..


MAI-apni khushi aur excitement control me rakho..haan,woh chaaron filhal zinda hain,mere ALOUKIK shaktiyon ki AURA se unke SOUL'S ko joki ab bhi unke bodies ke andar hain,feel kar sakta hun mai..

par ye zyada der tak nahi ho paayega.. thoda hi waqt bacha hai un chaaron ke paas.

agar is beech unki heart beat nahi karti, toh woh officially mar jaayenge..

MAHI-toh kaise bachaya jaaye unhe...!!!

MAI-tarika nahi pata mujhe.. par haan,us tarike ko jaanane ka tarika jaanta hun mai..

MAHI-matlab...aur please,sabse pehle in HALTIJAS ki taklif door karo..

apne spell ka asar roko...

MAI-nope..ye taklif zaroori hai..aur rahi baat un charon ko bachane ke tarike ko jaanane ki,toh us process ko shuru karne se pehle kuch sawal hai mere,jinka jawab mujhe abhi chahiye..

aur isiliye..


apni baat bol ek HALTIJA ko dekh haath wave kiya maine apne aur mere aisa karte hi na sirf uska pain jaata raha,balki woh hawa me udta hua sa theek mere pairon ke paas aakar gira jiske baad...


MAI-bina rooke ek baar me VIDEOUS yahan kya karwa raha tha,bata mujhe...


woh HALTIJA joki mujhse kaafi zyada dara hua tha,usne badi mushkil se apne sookh chuke gale ko tar karne ke liye apne thook ko gutka aur...


HALTIJA- SHOWHI ne aap sabko hum HALTIJAS ki SHOW,HIDA aur CONVERSION power ke baare me bataya hoga..

jab VIDEOUS hamare paas aaya toh uske saath kul 4 log the...

MAI-4 log....par abhi toh 3 hi the..

HALTIJA-jee,mai wahi batane jaa raha tha..

us VIDEOUS ne hum sabhi HALTIJAS ko apni ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON se joda aur phir apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki shakti ko jaagrit karte hue usne hamare shakti ko sabse pehle ussi AMPLIFICATION ke saath baandh diya...

aapne dekha hoga ki hum HALTIJAS ki CONVERSION shakti se bane rays VIDEOUS ke through uske teeno logon me sama rahe the..

theek waise hi unse pehle unki jagah ek dusra shaksh leta tha..

kyunki sabse powerful SOUL hi hota hai, isiliye CONVERSION karte waqt usse jude vyakti ko akele hi power dena padta hai..

isiliye woh shaksh sabse pehle aur akele hi is process se guzra tha..

MAI-SOUL AMPLIFICATION..iska matlab ye baaki teeno HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER BRAIN,BODY aur BLOOD AMPLIFICATION process ke through CONVERSION se guzar rahe the...

HALTIJA-jee...

MAI-let me guess...woh pehla shaksh kuch kuch mere jaisa dikhta tha...right...???

HALTIJA-jee..kaafi zyada resemblence thi usme aapki...

MAI-VIRAAZ....

MAHI-par ye sab kyun...!!!!???kya mila VIDEOUS ko ye sab karke..!!!


jahan MAHI apna sawal puch rahi thi,wahin mere dimag me pehle se hi ghum rahe is sawal ka jawab gunj utha aur aisa hote hi..


MAI-FOREMOST POWERS & INVISIBLE IMMORALITY...


aanken badi karte hue kahi ye baat maine jiska matlab naa samajh..


MAHI-matlab...

MAI-ye koi mamuli COVERSION process nahi tha..

is process ko pura karne ke liye sabse pehle VIDEOUS ne apno IMMORALITY khud gawayi..

haan,usse usne kawach zaroor banaya par ye ek bohot bada daav tha..us waqt koi mamuli shaksh bhi usse maar sakta tha...

uske baad usne pehle se hi apne create kiye chaar anshon me apne CHAARON AMPLIFICATION modes ki shakti ko transfer kiya...

aisa karte hi naa sirf uski shakti joki pehle se hi bohot zyada thi,100 times aur badh gayi balki saath hi saath usne apni LIFE SOURCE apne anshon me transfer karte hue unhe khudse jod diya...

iska matlab ye hai ki ab VIDEOUS ko maarne ke liye uske saath uske anshon ko bhi maarna hoga aur woh bhi ek hi waqt par....

agar pehle uske anshon ko maara toh unke bonds VIDEOUS se kat jaayenge aur unki shakti bhi VIDEOUS me sama jaayegi, result,woh jo pehle se hi ek impossible target hai,us target ki doori aur badh jaayegi..

kyunki un chaaron ko maarne ke liye hi itni taakat ikattha karni hogi jiske baad VIDEOUS toh door ki baat hai,kisi chote bache ko bhi maarne ki taakat nahi bachegi kisike andar...

hence, VIDEOUS has planned, worked & blessed himself with FOREMOST POWERS & INVISIBLE IMMORALITY and the summery of my explanation is...

hamari buri tarah se lag chuki hai..

taakat me maamle me uske aage sirf ek hi super strong chunouti thi..tum MAHI..

par ab tumhari aur meri mili hui complete ALOUKIK SHAKTIYAN bhi kuch nahi hain uske saamne..

we are officially doomed....


ek lambi saans chhodte hue kahi ye aakhri baat maine.

wahin meri baat sun MAHI aur uske piche khadi meri behen ALFREEN toh khade khade hi sadme me jaa chuke the..

koi kuch bol raha tha nahi aur shayad same khamoshi se bhara mahoul aage bhi rehta par tabhi..


KHOON.....

SHOWHI ke mooh se nikla tha ye shabd..


apne saathiyon ke paas jo ab bhi waise hi neeche lete tadap rahe the,aur is waqt jinke mooh se halka sa hi sahi par khoon nikal raha tha,usse hairani aur dar se dekh kahi thi ye baat SHOWHI ne jisse dekh apne haath ko firse wave kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi mere SPELL ka asar aur saath hi un sab HALTIJAS ka tadapna bhi khatm ho gaya..

lambi lambi saansein lete hue woh sab dheere dheere uthkar baithne lage the...

wahin apne haath ko wave kar SPELL ke asar ko rokne ke baad mai chalta hua SHOWHI ke paas pahuncha aur sabse pehle uske brain se jud man hi man usse kuch kaha maine jispar usne fauran amal kiya but phir aankhon me wapas hairani liye woh kabhi mujhe toh kabhi apne saathiyon ko dekhne laga..

wahin uski hairangi dekh..


MAI-kya baat hai SHOWHI..apne saathiyon ke nikalte khoon ko dekh bade hairan ho rahe ho tum..

isiliye hi naa kyunki aaj se pehle aisa kabhi hua hi nahi..HALTIJAS ka khoon kabhi nikalta nahi,kamsekam tumhari knowledge aur 500 years ki zindagi me toh naa tumne aisa kabhi suna hai aur naahi kabhi dekha.. right.!!!!


meri baat sun SHOWHI ko aur zyada bada jhatka laga tha..

HALTIJAS ka secret jiska sach VIDEOUS bhi nahi jaan paaya tha,usse yakin nahi ho raha tha ki woh RAAZ uske saamne khada RAAZ jaan chuka tha..

par kaise..???ye ek covered secret truth tha jisse uncover nahi kiya jaa sakta tha...

ab aur zyada badh chuke aakhon ki hairangi aur sawal ke saath SHOWHI mujhe dekh raha tha aur isiliye..


MAI-tumhe kya lagta hai SHOWHI... tum mere dimag me KAALI SHAKTIYON ke zeher hone ki baat HIDE karoge,sab kuch theek hai,ye SHOW karoge,in short mere dimag me ghus uske saath kheloge aur mai kuch nahi karunga...

bhale hi mere paas tumhari tarah SHOW aur HIDE naam ki gifts nahi hai par SEEK gift mere andar INBORN hai...

apne kaam ki chizen dhund hi leta hun mai...

DEVILS HAVEN me un kaali shaktiyon ke zeher ke saath jab tumhari shakti mere dimag me thi aur phir jab mai apne ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke AURA ko release kar apne brain aur body ke har hisse me circulate karne ke liye kaamiyab ho gaya tab tumhari dono shaktiyan,HIDE aur SHOW us circulation ke beech fas gayi aur aisa hote hi tumhare prajati ka ye secret mere dimag me reveal ho gaya...

par saath hi ek aur chiz bhi jaan gaya mai jo ab tak tum sab apne hi khoon ke baare me khud bhi nahi jaante...


meri baat par saare HALTIJAS aur mere piche khade ALFREEN,MAHI bhi curiousity se bhar mujhe dekhne lage the jispar...


MAI-kuch kaha tha apni prajati ka intro dete waqt tumne SHOWHI...

yahi ki HALTIJAS ek RIGHTOUS MONASTIC PRAJAATI hai...apne baare me ye baat tumhe aur tumhare logon ko tumhare ancestors se zariye pata chali thi, right...!!!

but kya kabhi reason jaanane ki koshish ki...???

SHOWHI-SHOWHI MAHABALI RAAZ ko batana chahega ki humse pehle ke saare HALTIJAS ko bhi bas utna hi pata tha jitna ki hume...

par haan, SHOWHI ye zaroor bata de ki SHOWHI ke sabhi purvaj ye batate the ki hamara ye ohda, RIGHTOUS MONASTIC PRAJAATI,iska pura sach sirf hamare planet ke first HALTIJA ko pata tha...

MAI-joki billions of years pehle mar chuke hain...

SHOWHI-SHOWHI batane chaahega ki MAHABALI RAAZ bilkul sahi hain...

MAI-tum sabke blood me GOD PARTICLES hai...

BOOMMMM...


meri is sidhi straight revelation ko sun aur jaan dhamaka sa hua HALTIJAS aur mere saathiyon ke dimag me...


MAHI-what...???kya bol rahe ho...???and how can you be so sure about it...!!!

MAI-sirf ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke AURA ke saath,bhale hi woh HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke saath merge hokar hi kyun naa hua ho,jitni taakat maine dikhayi hai,woh possible nahi thi..

VIDEOUS ke khudke AMPLIFICATION MODES se bane woh teen log,HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER,unki taakat utni thi jo mere pure ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke mere paas hone se hoti hai...

par maine sirf apne us shakti ke AURA se unhe takkar di...ye sirf isiliye hua kyunki jab meri woh power HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke saath merge hokar activate ho rahi thi,toh SHOWHI ki power mere dimag me thi aur jab meri shakti ke jaagne par iski shakti unstable hui toh HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ne SHOWHI ke khoon ki asliyat ko pehchaante hue bina isse pata lagne diye iske maatra ek rakht ka kan invisible mode me mere andar transfer kar diya aur aisa hote hi mere ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke AURA ki taakat 10 guna zyada badh gayi...

jahan mere is naye revelation se hadh se zyada shocked ho chuke the wahan khade sabhi log wahin mai yahan bas secrets reveal karne toh aaya nahi tha aur naahi maine saare HALTIJAS ka khoon bina matlab nikala tha aur isiliye...



MAI-

YADUVANTHATE

COLLECT...


un saare HALTIJAS ko dekhte hue uccharit kiya maine ye SPELL aur mere aisa karte hi un sabke naak aur mooh se nikal rahe khoon ki bunde unse alag hote hue ek saath merge ho mere paas aa gaye..

ek bowl joki maine pehle hi prakat kar liya tha,usme woh saara khoon aakar jama ho gaya...

aisa kar mai apne ek haath me cut karne hi waala tha ki tabhi meri mansha jaan MAHI aur ALFREEN turant mere paas aaye aur..


ALFREEN-wait BHAI..pehle batao toh sahi ki karna kya chahte ho..??

MAI-exactly toh mujhe bhi nahi pata..par ek HALTIJA ke khoon ne meri ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke AURA ko taakat di hai...

mere andar beh rahi HELL'S BLAZING FIRE se jalne ke bajaaye usse bhi nurture kiya hai..

kuch toh matlab hoga iska...???ussi matlab ko jaanana chahta hun mai...

MAHI-phir mai bhi tumhare saath ye process,ye ritual karti hun...

MAI-MAHI,maana ki tum LORD OF ANGELS ki beti ho,par ye kahani meri hai..

isse iske anjaam tak pahunchane ke liye jo bhi karna padega,woh sirf mai karunga...

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ne dakhal dene ki koshish ki,dekhlo unka haal...


apni baat bolte hue hi HALTIJAS ke khoon se bhare BOWL ke upar haath rakh maine usme ek cut bana liya tha aur aisa hote hi jab mere khoon ki kuch bunde us bowl me gir HALTIJAS ke khoon ke saath mili toh...

bowl ke andar us khoon me ek bhavar sa utha jisse ek itni strong energy gush create hui jisse pure MIRO ka climate change ho gaya..

aasman me bijli kadakne lage the..hawa behadh tez chalne lagi thi...

us hawa me itna zyada force tha ki MAHI aur ALFREEN toh kisi tarah apni jagah par khade rahe par HALTIJAS ke pair dagmagane lage...

khair, bhanwar ke uththe hi BOWL toot gaya par aisa hone ke baad bhi uske andar rakha khoon neeche zamin par nahi gira balki usne khudko ek tornado me badal liya aur tez ghumta hua pehle upar aasman ki taraf gaya aur phir tezi se neeche jahan mai khada tha,aaya aur agle hi pal mai us tornado ke andar tha...

bahar se dekh rahe saare HALTIJAS,MAHI, ALFREEN aur MABEL ko toh kuch samajh me aa hi nahi raha tha par jab kuch der baad tornado dheere hote hue khatm hua toh saamne ka nazara dekh sabki aankhen badi ho gayi..

REASON...

tornado ke saath mai bhi gayab ho chuka tha...


RAAZZZZZ,BHAIIIII...


mera naam lete hue zor se cheekhe MAHI aur ALFREEN par mai kahin aas paas rehta,tab toh unki awaaz sunta..

tornado ke beech faste hi meri aankhen band ho chuki thi aur jab kuch der baad maine us tornado ki shakti ko feel karna band kiya aur apni aankhen kholi toh man hi man hairan ho gaya tha mai...

REASON..

is waqt mai ek alag hi jagah par tha..ek aisi jagah jahan pysically toh mai pehli baar aaya tha par phir bhi jaanta achi tarah se tha mai is jagah ko...

ek lambi saans chhod us jagah ko dekh uski asliyat ko yaad kiya maine aur..


MAI- PECULIAR SPACE....

(NOTE:-WAHI JAGAH JAHAN VIDEOUS VIPEROUS BANISHMENT ME KAID THA..UPDATE 5 & 51)





PLACE- THE PECULIAR SPACE





WHAT THE HELL AM I DOING HERE...????


chaaron taraf nazar ghumate hue pucha ye sawal maine khudse jiske turant baad...


YOU ARE HERE TO MEET YOUR CREATORS...


mere saamne do urja jinka tej 100 suns se bhi zyada strong hoga,create hone lage..

unhi do urja se aayi thi ye statement...

khair,kuch hi palon me un dono urjaon ne apna roop complete kar liya aur aisa hote hi mere saamne dono GOD'S SON khade the....

unhe dekh mai toh bhaavhin khada raha wahin kuch seconds mujhe muskurate hue dekhne ke baad...


VIKRAM-GOD PARTICLES aur unhe istamaal karne ka tarika.....bohot umda RAAZ...door darshita aur anumaan lagane ki kaabiliyat wakayi kaafi satik aur kaabile taarif hai tumhari..

MAI-aisa nahi hai..agar hota toh apne maa baap ko bohot pehle hi pehchaan chuka hota mai...

ASMODEUS-naarazgi,gile shikwe,phir kisi din door karenge RAAZ...

aaj waqt ki thodi kami hai..ye jagah kabhi laakhon saalon tak VIDEOUS ka ghar tha...

naa hone ke baawjud woh is jagah ko saaf mehsoos kar sakta hai..

HALTIJAS ka blood bas thodi der tak hi is jagah par tumhari aur humari moujudgi ko usse chuppa sakta hai..

isiliye jitne bhi sawal hai, jaldi pucho..

MAI-apne doston ko kaise bachaun mai..??? aur ye toh pata hi hoga aap dono ko ki VIDEOUS ab invisible ban chuka hai,mai ab kuch bhi nahi raha uske saamne..hara nahi sakta usko...???

toh aage kya..???

VIKRAM-haan,VIDEOUS invisible ban chuka hai,par tum kuch bhi nahi ho uske saamne,ye galatfehmi hai tumhari...

abhi tumhe khud bhi nahi pata ki kya ho tum...???

kabhi socha hai tumne ki KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL jaisa weird aur super complexed concept tumpar hi laagu kyun hua hai..???

kyun tumhare dimag ko ANGEL aur dil ko DEVIL hona hai...

khair,tumhe jawab dene ke badle ek sawal puchta hun...???mouka ek hi milega tumhe,sahi jawab diya toh tumhare doston ko bachane ka tarika pata chal jaayega tumhe...

is puri kahani me sabse powerful kirdaar kaun hai...???soch samajh kar jawab dena...


VIKRAM ki baat sun aankhen band ho gayi meri...puri kahani mere band aankhon ke beech rewind hoti chali gayi..

scenes toh bohot the is kahani me jinme shakti pradarshan dikhaya gaya tha par un sabme sirf ek hi chiz aisi thi jiske aage VIDEOUS ka bas nahi chala tha..

aur jaise hi us CHIZ ka chitr mere dimag me ghuma,aankh khul gayi meri aur..


MAI-LORDS SWORD...

VIKRAM-bohot ache..par woh LORD matlab ki meri milkiyat nahi thi,mai bas uska ek dhaarak tha..sirf ek yogya dhaarak...


VIKRAM ke is aakhri line ko jo usne halka stress karte hue kaha tha,sochne ke andaz me aankhen choti hoti chali gayi meri aur...


MAI-DHAARAK....as in...???

VIKRAM-sahi soch rahe ho..jaise WHITE aur BLACK ENERGY me HOLDER aur OWNER hote hain,theek ussi tarah us DIVINE SWORD ke bhi HOLDER aur OWNER hain...

AGRASENA aur fir mai,hum dono us SWORD ke sirf dhaarak the...

kabhi socha hai tumne, kitni shaktishaali hogi woh SWORD jisne GOD ke ek SON ko reject kiya(ASMODEUS)aur dusre SON ko bas apna user,holder banaya...

kabhi us SWORD ki rachna ke piche ki kahani jaanane ki jigyasa uthi tumhare dil me...???

MAI-ek second..pehle thoda reverse maarte hain..aapne abhi AGRASENA ko aur khudko SWORD ka holder bataya..

mujhe nahi..woh sword mere paas bhi toh thi...


meri baat sun ek dusre ko dekh muskuraye dono GOD'S SON aur phir..


ASMODEUS-tum SWORD ke HOLDER ban hi nahi sakte RAAZ..aur woh isiliye kyunki tum SWORD ke OWNER ho..

haan, ab tak ye uplabdhi tumhe haasil nahi hui hai,par ho jaayegi..

tumse pehle sirf EK hi aise rahe hain jo SWORD ke OWNER the...aur sirf OWNER hi nahi,woh us SWORD ke CREATOR bhi rahe hain..

pehli baar SWORD unhi ke haathon se chali thi aur naa mai,ya VIKRAM SWORD ke maamle me unke SUCCESSOR hain..

woh true SUCCESSOR,woh sacche UTTARADHIKARI sirf tum ho...

MAI-kiski baat kar rahe hain..kiska SUCCESSOR hun mai..!!!

VIKRAM/ASMODEUS-hamare PITAH......GOD.......


BOOMMMMMM.....

un dono ki baat sun dhamaka sa hua mere dimag me..samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kaise react karun...!!!!

wahin,meri manosthithi se waakif the GOD'S SONS aur isiliye..


VIKRAM-haan, VIDEOUS invinsible hai..par jab tumhe apni asli taakat milegi,SWORD ko paane ke baad jab tum usse uski asli taakat loutaoge jiske baad woh aur tum ek ho jaaoge,tab tum uske THE TRUE SUCCESSOR banoge aur saath hi tum bhi INVINSIBLE ban jaaoge...

aur tab pysically tumhe VIDEOUS se nahi balki VIDEOUS ko tumse khatra hoga...

MAI-hang on a sec... SWORD haasil karne ke baad jab mai usse uski asli taakat loutaunga...

iska kya matlab hua...???

VIKRAM- THE WRATH OF GOD.... SWORD haasil karne ke baad usse hold karte hue pehle ENOCHIAN aur phir DEMONIC language me in shabdon ko dohrana,sab samajh me aa jaayega...

MAI-par mujhe toh pata hi nahi hai ki SWORD hai kahan..??aur mere friends kaise bachenge,ye nahi bataya aap dono ne mujhe...???

VIKRAM-HALTIJAS ke khoon ka asar kuch hi pal bhar ka bacha hai RAAZ..hume jaana hoga..


VIKRAM ke is baat ke baad ek taraf woh aur ASMODEUS aur dusri taraf mai dheere dheere gayab hone lage aur aisa hote waqt....


VIKRAM-tumhare doston ko bachane ka tarika bhi SWORD hi hai..usse haasil karo,woh chaaron bach jaayenge...

rahi baat SWORD kahan hain toh...!!!



do kadam piche hath jaane ka matlab ye nahi ki JIGAR BUZDIL HAI...

sirf kinaare par nahi,beech samandar me bhi agar sukoon mile toh wahi SAAHIL HAI...

taakat nahi,dimag lagana hai tujhe...

tere aghaase-e-kahani se milti shuruat hi teri agli MANZIL HAI...

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....



















AAPKA APNA V....J......
Bichara videous kuchh power multi hain to uske mukabale 10 guna power raaz ko de di jati hain matalab ab ho sakta hain raaz ko aur bhi power milegi to woh aur ek level upgrade ho jayega to much fun bhai magar isame khul ke raaz L lagne wale hain


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creator aur maa baap me fark hota hai brother... CREATOR toh hum sabka bhi upar waala hai..aapke sawal ke hissab se toh fir saari ladkiyan hamari behen hui..!!!🤔🤔🤔😉😉😉..

naa... mai naa deta ye kurbaani...

RONIT aur ANJALI RAAZ ke ma baao hain, VIKRAM aur AVANTIKA MAHI ke..
Yahi sahi rahega bhai sabhi readers se request hai ki Raaj maahi ko bhai bahin banana band Karen Han chaho to maahi ko videus ki bahin bana sakte ho vaise bhi wo Vikram ko apna father kehta hai. Raj aur maahi ki to love story ka besabri se intizar hai
 

Suryaa

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wow....

lag raha hai baaki sab kahani padh rahe hain par aap khudko kirdaaron se jod unhe mehsoos kar rahe hain..

just like a true ATTITUDER...and thanks for being that..
Thanks for compliment brother

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Use moment ko pura mahsus karo

Agar Life k har moment ko mahsus nahin kiya To Kya khak Jiya

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creator aur maa baap me fark hota hai brother... CREATOR toh hum sabka bhi upar waala hai..aapke sawal ke hissab se toh fir saari ladkiyan hamari behen hui..!!!🤔🤔🤔😉😉😉.

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