Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Raaz is the only person who can handle both black and white powers and this feature will be useful for him in the future. Both powers have to be balanced because it would be wrong to choose one. Well the white power inside Raaz is asking him to help his friends but will Raaz do this?
The snake was huge and dangerous and full of elusive powers, seeing that it seemed impossible to defeat him because he already knew what was going to happen next. You created a very frightening and thrilling scene, everything looked real, I enjoyed a lot. The mind is desperate to know what will happen next.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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like RAAZ, VIDEOUS and now ALFREEN are also the bearers of both WHITE and BLACK energy...

lot's more to come..be along

 

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Ek ladai bahar chl rhi h jo filhal ek trfa bni hui h..aur ek party usme khatam hone wali h..wahi ek ghamasan raaz ke andr bhi chhida hua h...jahan black energy apni aadat anusar usko laalach de rhi h ki mujhe chuno main tumhe wo sab dunga jiski tumhe khwahish h bikul hmare bhrast netao ki trha jo waade kuchh krte h aur kaam kuchh aur hi krte h...srf aise kaam jinse unko hi fayda ho ..waisa hi black energy ka bhi h..wo raaz ko use krna chahti h apne maqsad ke liye..wahi dusri taraf white energy jo usko lalkaar rhi h ki aao mere sang aur apni niyati khud bnao...haan main tumhe wo sab na de saku jo wadein black energy kr rhi h...par main tumhe wo de skta h..jo black energy kbhi nhi de skti..pyaar, dosti, aur bhi bahut kuchh jo amulya h kisi bhi taqat se jyada...ek aise yoddha bn skte ho tum jo jb bhi yaad kiya jaayega sbko garv hi hoga...ab dekhte h raaz kya krta h.kisko chunta h..par filhal to usko wo decision lena h jisse wo apne dosto ko bacha sakega....waise to wo vision serpent ko itni der se observe kr hi rha h to apne andr chhide dwand ko smapt kr usko vision serpent ko khtm krne ke liye 2 move nhi 3-4 move aage ki sochni hogi.. Aur raaz capable h iss cheez me..uski soch bahut dur tk jaati h..pr fir bhi aasan to hoga nhi ye sb..khair dekhte h kitni der me raaz ke andr chal rha dwand smapt hota h taki wo apne frnds ko jaldi hi bcha ske jitni der use lgegi ..utne paas wo sbhi maut ke jaate jaayenge...
So waiting fir the raaz action...

thanks for the review brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

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Superb Update

Behtareen update

Awesome update bro

Nice update

Superb update bhai...

Nice update bhai

Waiting for next update

Hum asli ladai to raaz ke andar chal rahi hai jahan white energy aur black energy apas me lad rahi hain agar raaz black energy ko chunta hai to nishctit wo videos se takatwar ya uske aaspass ho jayega lekin ye ek taraf se videos ki jeet hogi ab wo bura fans gawa hai dekhte hain kya hota hai aage

Awesome update bro....

superb fantastic update bhai maza aa gya

Amazing fabulous update...............?
keep posting...................?
waiting for next...................?

Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai

Haha bhai kamal ka update tha toh ab raaz aa hi gaya maidan main

Waiting for new update bhai....

Haha bhai kamal ka update tha toh ab raaz aa hi gaya maidan main

Waiting for new update bhai....

nice update bro
ye sb to vision k changul m fas gyev
idhar raaz apne andar hi strugle kr rha h
ek trf white energy jo supt avstha m h to dusri trf black energy or uske prabhav
aakhir raaz apne andar ki ladai ko jitkar kese sbko bachata h..............

Awesome update

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Mast update

Fantastic superb update waiting for next

As always this update also awsm. Gjb mazedar dhamakedar. Kya hi kahe bhai. Amazing.

bahad khubsurat update bhai

Shaandaar update bhai
Zaberdast shaandaar
Mazedaar lajawab
Bahot khoob superb

Awesome update

Super update hai Bhai

Zabardast update

Zabardast update

Super Duper Hit & Excellent & Fantastic & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah sach kamaal ka level h y iska challenge kuch vese hi lga jese apne calon se fight krna

Raaz ki white power behosh hone k bad b ek position action kr rhi h raaz ko apne dosto ko bachane k liye challenge de rhi h



Waiting

thanks brothers...be along

 

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Awesome extraordinary speechless amazing update

thanks brother..be along

 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR HIDA KO VISION SERPENT NE LAPET LIYA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KE ANDAR USKE BLACK ENERGY AUR WHITE ENERGY AURA KE BEECH YUDH CHIDDI HUI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-141



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE INFERIOR LEVEL



THE QUEST CONTINOUS


SECOND CHALLENGE:THE DARK DESERT






AHHHHHHHH......


ye cheekh ek saath do jagah se nikli thi...

pehli jagah thi VISION SERPENT ke giraft me fase un paanchon ke mooh se jinke andar woh BLACK ACIDIC POSION dheere dheere sama raha tha...

MAHI ke HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke activate hone ki wajah se jo AURA release ho raha tha,usne uske saath uske chaaron saathiyon ke body ko bhi ek shield ki covering di thi,par body me sama rahe DARK AROMA ki wajah se woh jis antoxicating haalat me the,us haalat me woh SHIELD bhi strongly kaam nahi kar paa raha tha...

yahi wajah thi ki un sabke body ki outer layer par ek kaali parath joki jalne ki wajah se aati hai,banti jaa rahi thi..

kuch hi pal aur tha un sabke paas,kyunki uske baad woh BLACK ACIDIC POSION un sabke bodies ko penetrate kar deta,aur aisa hone ke baad un sabke bachne ke koi chances nahi the..

wahin dusri cheekh nikli thi mere mooh se..aur iski wajah thi mere andar circulate kar rahe BLACK ENERGY aur uske against khadi hui WHITE ENERGY ke AURA ke beech takraav..

is takraav ki wajah se mere saare internal organs hil jaa rahe the..

ye toh acha tha ki WHITE ENERGY ki bas AURA activated thi,us energy ki shroth, ERRAPEL ki shaktiyan abhi bhi behosh thi..

kyunki agar woh hosh me hoti toh BLACK ENERGY ko apne area se khadedne ke chakkar me mere brain ko aur uske saath mujhe bhi khatm kar deti..

khair,meri cheekh mere man me gunji thi jiske baad un dono hi energies ko alag karne ke mansoobe ko liye mai ek baar phir unhe alag karne ko hua..

apne andar jhaankte hue maine un dono energies ko dekha joki is waqt ek dusre se gutham guthayi waale position ne bhidi hui thi..

problem ye thi ki is waqt mai unke beech jaa nahi sakta tha.. space jo nahi tha aur isiliye maine dusra tarika socha...


SOUL PENETRATION...


SOUL ko kisi bhi do chizon ke beech ghusne ke liye jagah ki zaroorat nahi hoti aur SOUL hoti bhi sabse powerful hai aur isiliye....


MAI-ATMAM STRUTIYEM

SOUL PERFORATE


apne andar jhankte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi kuch alag hi ho gaya...

darasal SPELL maine dono energies ko alag karne ke liye kaha tha,par mere SPELL ke uccharit hote hi meri SOUL ne un dono hi energies ko jaise khudme dhak hi diya...

aisa hote hi naa sirf mujhe ho raha pain jaata raha balki mera brain aur body PURE SALVATION STATE ME chale gaye...

ek aisa state jisme naahi paap ki bhaavna hoti hai aur naahi punya ki..

naa kisi ko paane ki chahat hoti hai aur naahi kisiko khone ka gum...ek abodh navjaat shishu jisse sahi galat kuch bhi pata nahi hota,us mind set me jaa chuka tha mai aur aisa hote hi mujhe apne andar flow ho rahi do chizen dikhi...

pehli...mere MOM DAD ki anshik shakti joki mere SOUL ke saath merged thi..

aur dusri,dono LORDS ki urja jisse meri uttpatti hui thi...

ye dono hi ansh aur urja mere andar nihit zaroor the par dekh aaj mai in dono ko hi pehli baar dekh raha tha...

khair,in dono hi shaktiyon ko dekhte hi un dono shaktiyon ke shroth joki LORDS aur SERAPHIM ANGELS the,unki life journey ek baar phirse mere brain me ghum gayi aur aisa hote hi meri aankhon me ek chamak aa gayi...

REASON...

MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ko us deadly situation jisme woh sab phase hue the,usse nikalne ka tarika pata chal chuka tha mujhe..

woh tarika jo ek baar pehle bhi use ho chuka tha par is kahani me nahi balki pichli kahani me....

NIYAT......

mere abhi ke situation me sabse key word yahi thi...

kyunki jaise hi mere brain me woh life saving tarika dikha,mere dil me us tarike ko un paanchon me transfer karne ki NIYAT jaagi aur jab aisa hua toh..

BOOMMMM....

ek baar phirse mere andar dhamaka hua par is baar dhamake ka reason kuch aur tha..

ye dhamaka meri soch joki mere X doston ke liye positive thi,usko wajah se aayi thi...

aur aisa hote hi mere andar KAALI SHAKTIYAN aur saath hi WHITE ENERGY ka AURA dheele padhte hue apni apni raah nikalne lage...

mai andar se free ho chuka tha...aur issi wajah se mere senses lout aaye the..

theek hote hi jab maine saamne dekha toh paaya ki un paanchon ke pura sharir ab tak 90 percent tak kaale zeher se dhak chuka tha..

aur jaise hi pratishat 100 par pahunchta,woh zeher MAHI ke HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE se bane barrier ko bhedathe hue un sabke andar chali jaati,jiska matlab tha un sabka GAME OVER...

waqt kam bacha tha mere paas isiliye...


MANORAHAM VIDYATE

RESTORE THE SENSES

apni apni raah jaate hue BLACK ENERGY aur WHITE ENERGY ke AURA ko kheench kar apne haathon me laakar is SPELL ko man hi man uccharit kiya maine jiske baad kaali ray jiske andar WHITE ENERGY se bani SPELL thi,woh un paanchon ki taraf badh chali..

aisa maine us VISION SERPENT ki wajah se kiya tha...

kyunki agar usse WHITE ENERGY ki bhanak lag jaati toh woh bina ek pal gawayen un paanchon ko turant maar deta..

BLACK ENERGY ke andar hone ki wajah se woh WHITE ENERGY ka AURA aur usme basi SPELL ki power surakshit the...

khair,woh kaali ray turant aage badhi aur un paanchon ke paas pahunch us dark POSION ke saath milte hue un paanchon ke bodies se chipak gayi.

par aisa hote hi uske andar chuppa mera SPELL bahar aate hue un sabke sharir me ghus gaya aur jab aisa hua toh...

ek jhatke me un sabki aankh khul gayi..

woh sab apne senses me aa chuke the...

aur mere SPELL ki power ki wajah se abhi kuch minutes unhe us dark POSION ka asar nahi hone waala tha aur itna waqt kaafi tha...

jaise hi un sabki aankh khuli,woh sab us saanp ki giraft se azaad hone ki koshish karne ko hue par tabhi...


MAI-RELAX GUYZZZ...aise azaad nahi ho sakte tum sab...bhulo mat,tum sab VISION SERPENT ke giraft me ho.. tumhara har move usse pehle se maalum hone waala hai...


un sabke brain se jud kahi thi ye baat maine jisse sun aur samajh woh sab shaant ho gaye aur tab..


MAI-ek scene bhej raha hun tum sabke brain me...dekho,samjho aur adapt karo...


DRISHYAM BHAAGNAM

SHARE THE SCENE


un sabse apni baat bol ia SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine..

PEHLE SPELL ki wajah se aur un sabke brains se connected hone ki wajah se mere SPELL ka asar sidhe un sabke brains me hua..

ek drishyam ki tarah un sabko ek scene dikhne lag gaya...

aur ye scene aur koi nahi wahi,wahi training thi jo VIKRAM ne apne dono dost aur mere is janam ke mom dad RONIT aur ANJALI ko di thi...

THE CLONE COMBAT.....jiski practice aur perfection un dono ne THE MAGICAL DIMENSION me ki thi...(ATTITUDE-1,UPDATE-72)

CLONE COMBAT:-

ek aisi yudh kala jisme sirf apne REFLEXES ki madad se attack kiya jaata hai.. koi taiyari nahi, koi purvanuman nahi...

thik attack karte waqt apne REFLEXES par bharosa kar saare daav chale jaate hain..

aur aisa ho paata hai jab is combat ko shuru karne se pehle hi yodha apne saare hunar ko,apne saari yudh shaili ko apne REFLEX area me transfer kar deta hai...

aisa kar woh khudko hi apne REFLEXES ke bharose chhod deta hai...

REFLEXES apne hisab se last moment me attack ko decide kar usse directly apne dhaarak ke brain me nahi balki body ke us part me ya phir us cell me transfer karta hai jisse usse waar karna hota hai...

ye karna tough hai,bohot tough.. but for a SAVENT and that to for these 5 lads, it's just a matter of knowing the technique jo maine un sabke brain me feed kar di thi aur ab un paanchon ka brain us COMBAT style ko naa sirf samajh raha tha,balki khudko us tarah ki battle karne ke liye taiyar bhi kar paa raha tha..

wahin is beech jab RONIT aur ANJALI ka combat training un sabke brain me chal raha tha,tab jo SPELLS un dono ne apne us combat ke waqt bole the,un paanchon ne bhi unhi SPELLS ko upyog me laane ka faisla kiya...

aur kyunki is waqt hum sab brain to brain connected the, isiliye mujhe bhi unki soch aur plan ke baare me pata chal gaya tha...

ek halka sa modification karna tha,jo sahi waqt aane par mai kar dene waala tha.

haan,woh modification kya aur kyun karna hai,ye baat maine un paanchon ke brain me daal di thi...

anyways, saari baatein clear thi aur ab waqt tha un baaton aur plan ko adaptation mode me laane ka aur isiliye....


BHUMIKAM URJAWAHAM....

EARTH AURA...


sabse pehle is SPELL ko uccharit kiya tha MAHI ne jisse as usual, VISION SERPENT ne pehle hi predict kar liya tha but is baar MAHI ko is baat se fark nahi pada tha...

REASON...

MAHI ka bole SPELL asal me jahan woh serpent khada tha,uske neeche ki reth aur mitti par MAHI ke EARTH ENERGY joki pure thi, uke AURA ko create karne ka tha...

aur is SPELL se woh SERPENT sirf khudko bacha sakta tha,us spell ko khatm nahi kar sakta tha..

aur MAHI ka yahi plan tha jo uske SPELL bolte hi successfully pura bhi ho gaya..

MAHI ke SPELL ke asar se jab SERPENT ke neeche ki reth me EARTH ENERGY create hone lagi,toh usse just pehle hi us SERPENT ne khudko wahan se hata liya aur thoda door chala gaya aur aisa karte hue usne un paanchon ko apne grip se azaad kar diya..

ab yahi toh wlh paanchon chahte the..

azaad hote hi back flips maarte hue woh sab thoda aur piche ho gaye taaki unke aur us SERPENT ke beech gap halka badh jaaye..

jaise hi woh sab free hue,MAHI ka HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE thoda zyada active ho gaya jiski wajah se un sabke bodies ke upar chaddhi kaali parath bhi jaati rahi..

khair,gap create kar apne plan ko ek baar phirse sochne lage woh paanchon..

is beech woh VISION SERPENT bade araam se khada un sabke agli chaal ka wait kar raha tha taaki un chaalon ko pehle se sense kar unhe dodge deta hua is baar ek jhatke me hi un sabka khel khatm kar sake...

wahin kuch pal us VISION SERPENT ko dekhne ke baad un sabki nazar ek dusre par padi jispar..


MAHI-let's do this guyz... let's kill this bloody bitch...

CHAARON-oh yeh.....


apni baat bol ek second shaant rahe woh sab par phir....


BRAWNY-PRAVAHA AVIDHYATI.......

CURRENT SWING......


SLUNDER-SPANDOLIKA..........

SPIN BACKWARDS & FORWARD......


ACCHUTA-JALAM PARIGRAH.........

WATER FORCE........


HIDA-PRATILOMAKA ABHISARA.....

REVERSE ATTACK.......


un chaaron ne ye chaar mantra ek ke baad ek lagatar bole the...par pehle do mantra ka uccharit hona aur unka asar ek sa tha wahin teesre aur chouthe mantron ka uccharit hona aur asar alag...

wo isiliye kyunki pehle do mantra joki BRAWNY aur SLUNDER ne uccharit kiye the,woh unhone pehle se hi soch kar uccharit kiye the par teesre aur chouthe mantra joki ACCHUTA aur HIDA ke mooh se uccharit hue the,woh SPELLS unke REFLEX SPELLS the joki apne aap nikle the...

unhe uccharit karne se pehle un dono ke dimag me bas yahi khayal aaya tha ki unhe VISION SERPENT ko nuksaan pahunchana hai.....

BRAWNY ke pehle mantra ke bolte hi uske sharir se current ki rays nikalkar usse kuch door khade SERPENT ki taraf jaane lagi...

aisa hote hi us SERPENT ne ek black wooden rotating cart taiyar kiya taaki uske paas aane se pehle hi usse generated wooden wave se takrakar current rays khatm ho jaayen par tabhi SLUNDER ke uccharit kiye SPELL ke prabhav me aakar wo CURRENT RAYS aage aur piche dono taraf se float karte hue us VISION SERPENT ki taraf jaane lage....

ye dono humle milkar aur ghatak ho chuke the par us VISION SERPENT ke liye isse handle karna koi badi baat toh thi nahi...

is dusre attack se aaye parivartan ko dekh sur mehsoos kar VISION SERPENT ne apni hi jagah par gol gol ghumna shuru kar diya jiski wajah se uske har taraf hawa ka ek bawandar uth gaya...

aur jaise hi uski taraf chhode gaye CURRENT RAYS us bawandar ke paas pahunche,us bawandar ne CURRENT RAYS ko apne andar kheench liya....

CURRENT RAYS ke bawandar ke andar jaate hi bawandar ke ghumne ki speed aur badh gayi aur kuch hi palon me us bawandar ne CURRENT ki saari urja nichod li.....

par tabhi............

ACCHUTA ke dwara uccharit kiye gaye teesre SPELL ne apna aadhe se zyada kaam kar diya tha......

jaisa ki maine bataya ki ACCHUTA aur HIDA dwara uccharit aakhri ke dono mantra ko un dono ne bina soche bola tha isiliye ACCHUTA ka teesra SPELL jo ki WATER FORCE ka tha,usne us bawandar ko jo ki lagbhag khatm ho hi gaya tha,uske beech se hote hue VISION SERPENT ke body se takraya....

ye humla bohot ghaatak tha,par kyunki VISION SERPENT ka body bhi kuch zyada hi strong tha isiliye usse zyada kuch hua nahi...

bas usse apne sharir me halka dhakka sa laga aur wo lehrate hue thoda piche ho gaya tha...

par woh chaaron bhi bas itna hi chahte the..ACCHUTA ke SPELL ko naa rok paane aur peeche ki taraf hatne ki wajah se VISION SERPENT ka dimag ghuma aur tabhi HIDA dwara uccharit 4th SPELL ne apna kaam kar diya.....

uska choutha SPELL VISION SERPENT ke bole gaye SPELL ko wapas ussi ki taraf ghumane ka tha......

piche hatehthe hi VISION SERPENT ne ACCHUTA par ek energy ray se humla kiya par uska chodda gaya ray thoda aage jaakar wapas ghum gaya aur jaakar usse hi takra gaya...

kyunki ye ray uski khud ki shakti ka ek roop tha isiliye us ray ke takraate hi VISION SERPENT door jaakar gira...

wahin MAHI joki ab tak bas khadi hui is combat ko dekh rahi thi,usne jaise hi VISION SERPENT ke chhode gaye energy ray ko wapas ghumte hue dekha,usne apne haathon ko upar kiya...

uske aisa karte hi maine apne VAGUS NERVE me basi puri BLACK ENERGY ke AURA se ek SWORD create ki aur usse MAHI ki taraf ucchal di....

yahi tha woh modification jo maine socha tha...darasal VISION SERPENT par yahan INFERIOR LEVEL yaa phir ye kahun ki VIDEOUS ki duniya me WHITE ENERGY ke kisi bhi astra shashtra se nahi haraya jaa sakta tha..

aisa karne ke liye BLACK ENERGY se bane astra aur shashtra hi kaam me aa sakte the aur wahi maine abhi kiya tha..

khair,meri feki SWORD ko lapakte hue MAHI apne sthaan se saamne ki taraf kudi aur ray ke prabhav se VISION SERPENT jahan par gira tha,woh ussi jagah par pahunch gayi aur agle hi pal...


SOOBHHHHH.....

uski talwar bijli ki speed se chali....

VISION SERPENT jo har waar ko pehle hi predict kar leta tha,last waar ki wajah se uski prediction capability kuch seconds ke liye block ho chuki thi aur yahi wajah thi ki MAHI ka uske paas aana naa toh woh predict kar paaya aur chot lagne ki wajah se naahi usse dekh paaya..

woh toh abhi tak ye bhi samajh nahi paaya tha ki hua kya hai,jab tak woh sambhal paata,MAHI ki SWORD chal chuki thi jisne ke hi baar me us VISION SERPENT ke fun ko uske gardan samet uda diya tha....

bina cheekhe pehle kaale dhuen me
badal aur phir ek chote daayre me par strong thunder me badal woh VISION SERPENT tezi se upar hawa me udte hue dheere dheere faint hone laga...

is scene ko dekh woh paanchon samajh gaye ki unhone VISION SERPENT ka khel samapt kar diya hai aur saath hi saath is DARK DESERT ke challenge ko bhi successfully paar kar liya hai..

aur isiliye woh paanchon behadh khushi se bhar ek dusre ko hug karne lage..

wahin mai shaant khada un paanchon ko dekh raha tha....

woh paanchon ek dusre ko hug kar badhayi dete hue meri taraf palat aage badhne ko hue hi the ki tabhi..


MAI-KNUCKLE DOWN GUYZZZ....


halke zor se boli thi maine ye baat...aur aisa bolte hue hi maine khudko ek badi si kaali chaadar joki BLACK ENERGY se bani thi,usme convert kar liya aur tezi se un paanchon ki taraf badh gaya...

wahin woh paanchon jinhone abhi abhi apne REFLEXES ki madad se VISION SERPENT ko haraya tha,unke woh reflexes abhi bhi active the..

yahi wajah thi ki mere yun achanak bolne ke baad phir agle hi pal kaali chadar me badal un sabki taraf badhne se pehle hi woh sab bina zyada soche neeche jhuk chuke the aur tabhi...

SRSRSRSRSRSRS.....

aasman se un sabki taraf wahi VISION SERPENT jo kuch der pehle kaale dhuan ke chakrawat me badalkar gayab hua tha,woh wapas apne roop me aate hue apne bade se FUN ko pura khol un paanchon ko nigalne ke mansubo ko liye un sabke sir ke paas pahunch chuka tha par tabhi...

mai joki is waqt ek kaali chaadar me badal chuka tha,woh un paanchon ke thik upar kisi chhat ki tarah bich gaya aur...

us VISION SERPENT ke mere kareeb aate hi maine usse khudme lapet liya...

jis kaali chaadar mai maine khudko badla tha,ye ussi BLACK ENERGY se bani thi jisse kuch der pehle maine SOUL PERFORATE SPELL ke dwara piche dhakela tha..

aur us push ki wajah se woh kaali urja kaafi ghusse me bhi thi...

yahi wajah thi ki jab maine usse bahar nikal apne saath milate hue us kaali chaadar me badla toh usse apni frustration ko nikalne ka ek mouka mil chuka tha...

aur is mouke ka bharpoor faayda uthaya usne...

us SERPENT ko khudme lapet mai tezi se khudko shrink karte hue uspar dabaw banane laga...

aur tab bina mere aadesh ke hi kaali urja ne ek piercing ray se us serpent ke body ko penetrate karna shuru kar diya...

ANNNNNNNNNNN...

mujhme ghira hua woh SERPENT ek ajeeb si par behadh tez awaaz nikalte hue cheekhne laga...

aur tabhi....

VARNAM BHEDAM....

POINT PIERCE...

uske aankhon ke beech halke upari part ko dekhte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi woh piercing ray sidhe mere pointed jagah ko bhedhte chala gaya aur jab woh point pierce hua toh....

BOOMMMMM.......

ek tez dhamake ke beech woh VISION SERPENT blast hote hue khatm ho gaya..

ye sab us kaali chaadar ke andar ho raha tha..par aisa hote waqt jab woh SERPENT chhatpata raha tha,toh woh aur mai ek dusre se gutham gutha hote hue upar aasman me bohot upar tak uth chuke the aur jab woh SERPENT blast hote hue khatm hua toh pura aasman hi kaale rays se joki uske astitv ki nishaani thi,bhar gaya..

wahin mai bhi us chaadar se apne asli roop me aata hua aasman se tez raftar pakde neeche un paanchon ke paas aakar land sa hua...

DHABBBB....

issi awaaz ke saath us point par jahan mai land hua tha,reth har taraf ud gaya..

par kuch der baad jab reth se bana dhuan chatta aur mai un paanchon ko araam se apni jagah par khada dikha toh woh sab turant mere paas aaye..

un sabke face par khushi bhi thi par saath hi doubt bhi jisse dekh aur samajh..


MAI-relax..woh SERPENT khatm ho chuka hai...


mere jawab ko sun woh sab completely relaxed ho gaye par sawal toh the unke man me aur isiliye...


HIDA-RAAZ,tumhe pata kaise chala ki pehli baar me woh SERPENT khatm nahi hua tha..???

MAI-MAHI ne jab chakrawat banakar uspar humla kiya tha aur ussi hit laga tha,tab uske aankhon ke upar andar ki taraf se centre point par ek redish line chamki thi..

us redish line me uske upari body ki hi tarah ek aur parath thi...

usse dekh mai samajh gaya tha ki VISION ke saath saath us SERPENT ko dual body ka gift bhi mila hai..

tum sabne jab usse pehli baar khatm kiya aur uske sharir ka dhuan upar akash me utha,toh mai jaan gaya tha ki woh ek distraction hai..

tumhare ease out hote hi us SERPENT ka second layer tum sab par zaroor humla karega..

isiliye mai us sudden waar ke liye ready tha..


SLUNDER-par us VISION SERPENT ne tere waar ko predict kaise nahi kiya..???

MAI-MAHI ke first hit lagne ki wajah se jab uske aankhon ke upar woh red layer aaya tha,toh thodi der ke liye uske body se SENSE AURA joki usne tum sabke attacks ko predict karne ke liye chhoda hua tha,woh gayab ho gaya tha..

ye dekh mai samajh gaya tha ki VISION ki shakti uske sirf pehle layer of body me hi thi...second me nahi...


BOHOT KHUB RAAZ....BOHOT KHUB....HALL KE BAHAR JO RAAY MAINE TUMHARE BAARE ME RAKHI THI,US RAAY KO BADAL DIYA HAI TUMNE..

I AM REALLY IMPRESSED...BINA APNI ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON KE BHI KAAFI KHATARANAK HO TUM...

TUMHARI SUJH BUJH KAABILE TAARIF HAI...PAR THODI SI JEET SE OVERCONFIDENT MAT HO JAANA..

ABHI BOHOT DE HURDLES CROSS KARNA BAAKI HAI AUR UNHE PAAR KARNA, IT'S GOING TO BE TOUGH...VERY VERY TOUGH...

UPAR SE APNE SAATH PAANCH PAANCH KAMZORIYAN SAATH LEKAR CHAL RAHE HO TUM....

MAZA AAYEGA DEKHNE ME KI KITNE AAGE TAK JAA PAATE HO TUM AUR YE PAANCHON...!!!!

ALL THE BEST RAAZ....DEVIL KA BANAYA HAVEN AUR GOD KA BANAYA HEAVEN,DONO HI WAIT KAR RAHE HAIN TUMHARA...

DEKHTE HAIN,KAHAN PAHUNCHTE HO TUM...!!!!!

ek tez awaaz pure INFERIOR LRVEL me gunj uthi thi joki VIRAAZ ki thi...

us awaaz se jo tarange bahar nikal rahi thi,uska impact itna strong tha ki ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY,HIDA aur yahan tak ki MAHI ke dil me bhi sensations paida hone laga tha...

pura DARK DESERT us awaaz ki shakti se hil gaya tha...

khair,VIRAAZ ki awaaz sun mere face par ek cold look ne ghar karna shuru kar diya jiske baad...


MAI-

tu mujhe DABA kar dikha,mai khudko UTHA KAR DIKHAUNGA...

teri duniya me apne naam ka danka mai BAJA KAR DIKHAUNGA....

jitni chunoutiyan fekni hai mere aage,fekhta jaa...

teri har chunouti ka janaza mai SAJA KAR DIKHAUNGA....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......


















AAPKA APNA V....J......

 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR HIDA KO VISION SERPENT NE LAPET LIYA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KE ANDAR USKE BLACK ENERGY AUR WHITE ENERGY AURA KE BEECH YUDH CHIDDI HUI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-141



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE INFERIOR LEVEL



THE QUEST CONTINOUS


SECOND CHALLENGE:THE DARK DESERT






AHHHHHHHH......


ye cheekh ek saath do jagah se nikli thi...

pehli jagah thi VISION SERPENT ke giraft me fase un paanchon ke mooh se jinke andar woh BLACK ACIDIC POSION dheere dheere sama raha tha...

MAHI ke HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke activate hone ki wajah se jo AURA release ho raha tha,usne uske saath uske chaaron saathiyon ke body ko bhi ek shield ki covering di thi,par body me sama rahe DARK AROMA ki wajah se woh jis antoxicating haalat me the,us haalat me woh SHIELD bhi strongly kaam nahi kar paa raha tha...

yahi wajah thi ki un sabke body ki outer layer par ek kaali parath joki jalne ki wajah se aati hai,banti jaa rahi thi..

kuch hi pal aur tha un sabke paas,kyunki uske baad woh BLACK ACIDIC POSION un sabke bodies ko penetrate kar deta,aur aisa hone ke baad un sabke bachne ke koi chances nahi the..

wahin dusri cheekh nikli thi mere mooh se..aur iski wajah thi mere andar circulate kar rahe BLACK ENERGY aur uske against khadi hui WHITE ENERGY ke AURA ke beech takraav..

is takraav ki wajah se mere saare internal organs hil jaa rahe the..

ye toh acha tha ki WHITE ENERGY ki bas AURA activated thi,us energy ki shroth, ERRAPEL ki shaktiyan abhi bhi behosh thi..

kyunki agar woh hosh me hoti toh BLACK ENERGY ko apne area se khadedne ke chakkar me mere brain ko aur uske saath mujhe bhi khatm kar deti..

khair,meri cheekh mere man me gunji thi jiske baad un dono hi energies ko alag karne ke mansoobe ko liye mai ek baar phir unhe alag karne ko hua..

apne andar jhaankte hue maine un dono energies ko dekha joki is waqt ek dusre se gutham guthayi waale position ne bhidi hui thi..

problem ye thi ki is waqt mai unke beech jaa nahi sakta tha.. space jo nahi tha aur isiliye maine dusra tarika socha...


SOUL PENETRATION...


SOUL ko kisi bhi do chizon ke beech ghusne ke liye jagah ki zaroorat nahi hoti aur SOUL hoti bhi sabse powerful hai aur isiliye....


MAI-ATMAM STRUTIYEM

SOUL PERFORATE


apne andar jhankte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi kuch alag hi ho gaya...

darasal SPELL maine dono energies ko alag karne ke liye kaha tha,par mere SPELL ke uccharit hote hi meri SOUL ne un dono hi energies ko jaise khudme dhak hi diya...

aisa hote hi naa sirf mujhe ho raha pain jaata raha balki mera brain aur body PURE SALVATION STATE ME chale gaye...

ek aisa state jisme naahi paap ki bhaavna hoti hai aur naahi punya ki..

naa kisi ko paane ki chahat hoti hai aur naahi kisiko khone ka gum...ek abodh navjaat shishu jisse sahi galat kuch bhi pata nahi hota,us mind set me jaa chuka tha mai aur aisa hote hi mujhe apne andar flow ho rahi do chizen dikhi...

pehli...mere MOM DAD ki anshik shakti joki mere SOUL ke saath merged thi..

aur dusri,dono LORDS ki urja jisse meri uttpatti hui thi...

ye dono hi ansh aur urja mere andar nihit zaroor the par dekh aaj mai in dono ko hi pehli baar dekh raha tha...

khair,in dono hi shaktiyon ko dekhte hi un dono shaktiyon ke shroth joki LORDS aur SERAPHIM ANGELS the,unki life journey ek baar phirse mere brain me ghum gayi aur aisa hote hi meri aankhon me ek chamak aa gayi...

REASON...

MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ko us deadly situation jisme woh sab phase hue the,usse nikalne ka tarika pata chal chuka tha mujhe..

woh tarika jo ek baar pehle bhi use ho chuka tha par is kahani me nahi balki pichli kahani me....

NIYAT......

mere abhi ke situation me sabse key word yahi thi...

kyunki jaise hi mere brain me woh life saving tarika dikha,mere dil me us tarike ko un paanchon me transfer karne ki NIYAT jaagi aur jab aisa hua toh..

BOOMMMM....

ek baar phirse mere andar dhamaka hua par is baar dhamake ka reason kuch aur tha..

ye dhamaka meri soch joki mere X doston ke liye positive thi,usko wajah se aayi thi...

aur aisa hote hi mere andar KAALI SHAKTIYAN aur saath hi WHITE ENERGY ka AURA dheele padhte hue apni apni raah nikalne lage...

mai andar se free ho chuka tha...aur issi wajah se mere senses lout aaye the..

theek hote hi jab maine saamne dekha toh paaya ki un paanchon ke pura sharir ab tak 90 percent tak kaale zeher se dhak chuka tha..

aur jaise hi pratishat 100 par pahunchta,woh zeher MAHI ke HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE se bane barrier ko bhedathe hue un sabke andar chali jaati,jiska matlab tha un sabka GAME OVER...

waqt kam bacha tha mere paas isiliye...


MANORAHAM VIDYATE

RESTORE THE SENSES

apni apni raah jaate hue BLACK ENERGY aur WHITE ENERGY ke AURA ko kheench kar apne haathon me laakar is SPELL ko man hi man uccharit kiya maine jiske baad kaali ray jiske andar WHITE ENERGY se bani SPELL thi,woh un paanchon ki taraf badh chali..

aisa maine us VISION SERPENT ki wajah se kiya tha...

kyunki agar usse WHITE ENERGY ki bhanak lag jaati toh woh bina ek pal gawayen un paanchon ko turant maar deta..

BLACK ENERGY ke andar hone ki wajah se woh WHITE ENERGY ka AURA aur usme basi SPELL ki power surakshit the...

khair,woh kaali ray turant aage badhi aur un paanchon ke paas pahunch us dark POSION ke saath milte hue un paanchon ke bodies se chipak gayi.

par aisa hote hi uske andar chuppa mera SPELL bahar aate hue un sabke sharir me ghus gaya aur jab aisa hua toh...

ek jhatke me un sabki aankh khul gayi..

woh sab apne senses me aa chuke the...

aur mere SPELL ki power ki wajah se abhi kuch minutes unhe us dark POSION ka asar nahi hone waala tha aur itna waqt kaafi tha...

jaise hi un sabki aankh khuli,woh sab us saanp ki giraft se azaad hone ki koshish karne ko hue par tabhi...


MAI-RELAX GUYZZZ...aise azaad nahi ho sakte tum sab...bhulo mat,tum sab VISION SERPENT ke giraft me ho.. tumhara har move usse pehle se maalum hone waala hai...


un sabke brain se jud kahi thi ye baat maine jisse sun aur samajh woh sab shaant ho gaye aur tab..


MAI-ek scene bhej raha hun tum sabke brain me...dekho,samjho aur adapt karo...


DRISHYAM BHAAGNAM

SHARE THE SCENE


un sabse apni baat bol ia SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine..

PEHLE SPELL ki wajah se aur un sabke brains se connected hone ki wajah se mere SPELL ka asar sidhe un sabke brains me hua..

ek drishyam ki tarah un sabko ek scene dikhne lag gaya...

aur ye scene aur koi nahi wahi,wahi training thi jo VIKRAM ne apne dono dost aur mere is janam ke mom dad RONIT aur ANJALI ko di thi...

THE CLONE COMBAT.....jiski practice aur perfection un dono ne THE MAGICAL DIMENSION me ki thi...(ATTITUDE-1,UPDATE-72)

CLONE COMBAT:-

ek aisi yudh kala jisme sirf apne REFLEXES ki madad se attack kiya jaata hai.. koi taiyari nahi, koi purvanuman nahi...

thik attack karte waqt apne REFLEXES par bharosa kar saare daav chale jaate hain..

aur aisa ho paata hai jab is combat ko shuru karne se pehle hi yodha apne saare hunar ko,apne saari yudh shaili ko apne REFLEX area me transfer kar deta hai...

aisa kar woh khudko hi apne REFLEXES ke bharose chhod deta hai...

REFLEXES apne hisab se last moment me attack ko decide kar usse directly apne dhaarak ke brain me nahi balki body ke us part me ya phir us cell me transfer karta hai jisse usse waar karna hota hai...

ye karna tough hai,bohot tough.. but for a SAVENT and that to for these 5 lads, it's just a matter of knowing the technique jo maine un sabke brain me feed kar di thi aur ab un paanchon ka brain us COMBAT style ko naa sirf samajh raha tha,balki khudko us tarah ki battle karne ke liye taiyar bhi kar paa raha tha..

wahin is beech jab RONIT aur ANJALI ka combat training un sabke brain me chal raha tha,tab jo SPELLS un dono ne apne us combat ke waqt bole the,un paanchon ne bhi unhi SPELLS ko upyog me laane ka faisla kiya...

aur kyunki is waqt hum sab brain to brain connected the, isiliye mujhe bhi unki soch aur plan ke baare me pata chal gaya tha...

ek halka sa modification karna tha,jo sahi waqt aane par mai kar dene waala tha.

haan,woh modification kya aur kyun karna hai,ye baat maine un paanchon ke brain me daal di thi...

anyways, saari baatein clear thi aur ab waqt tha un baaton aur plan ko adaptation mode me laane ka aur isiliye....


BHUMIKAM URJAWAHAM....

EARTH AURA...


sabse pehle is SPELL ko uccharit kiya tha MAHI ne jisse as usual, VISION SERPENT ne pehle hi predict kar liya tha but is baar MAHI ko is baat se fark nahi pada tha...

REASON...

MAHI ka bole SPELL asal me jahan woh serpent khada tha,uske neeche ki reth aur mitti par MAHI ke EARTH ENERGY joki pure thi, uke AURA ko create karne ka tha...

aur is SPELL se woh SERPENT sirf khudko bacha sakta tha,us spell ko khatm nahi kar sakta tha..

aur MAHI ka yahi plan tha jo uske SPELL bolte hi successfully pura bhi ho gaya..

MAHI ke SPELL ke asar se jab SERPENT ke neeche ki reth me EARTH ENERGY create hone lagi,toh usse just pehle hi us SERPENT ne khudko wahan se hata liya aur thoda door chala gaya aur aisa karte hue usne un paanchon ko apne grip se azaad kar diya..

ab yahi toh wlh paanchon chahte the..

azaad hote hi back flips maarte hue woh sab thoda aur piche ho gaye taaki unke aur us SERPENT ke beech gap halka badh jaaye..

jaise hi woh sab free hue,MAHI ka HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE thoda zyada active ho gaya jiski wajah se un sabke bodies ke upar chaddhi kaali parath bhi jaati rahi..

khair,gap create kar apne plan ko ek baar phirse sochne lage woh paanchon..

is beech woh VISION SERPENT bade araam se khada un sabke agli chaal ka wait kar raha tha taaki un chaalon ko pehle se sense kar unhe dodge deta hua is baar ek jhatke me hi un sabka khel khatm kar sake...

wahin kuch pal us VISION SERPENT ko dekhne ke baad un sabki nazar ek dusre par padi jispar..


MAHI-let's do this guyz... let's kill this bloody bitch...

CHAARON-oh yeh.....


apni baat bol ek second shaant rahe woh sab par phir....


BRAWNY-PRAVAHA AVIDHYATI.......

CURRENT SWING......


SLUNDER-SPANDOLIKA..........

SPIN BACKWARDS & FORWARD......


ACCHUTA-JALAM PARIGRAH.........

WATER FORCE........


HIDA-PRATILOMAKA ABHISARA.....

REVERSE ATTACK.......


un chaaron ne ye chaar mantra ek ke baad ek lagatar bole the...par pehle do mantra ka uccharit hona aur unka asar ek sa tha wahin teesre aur chouthe mantron ka uccharit hona aur asar alag...

wo isiliye kyunki pehle do mantra joki BRAWNY aur SLUNDER ne uccharit kiye the,woh unhone pehle se hi soch kar uccharit kiye the par teesre aur chouthe mantra joki ACCHUTA aur HIDA ke mooh se uccharit hue the,woh SPELLS unke REFLEX SPELLS the joki apne aap nikle the...

unhe uccharit karne se pehle un dono ke dimag me bas yahi khayal aaya tha ki unhe VISION SERPENT ko nuksaan pahunchana hai.....

BRAWNY ke pehle mantra ke bolte hi uske sharir se current ki rays nikalkar usse kuch door khade SERPENT ki taraf jaane lagi...

aisa hote hi us SERPENT ne ek black wooden rotating cart taiyar kiya taaki uske paas aane se pehle hi usse generated wooden wave se takrakar current rays khatm ho jaayen par tabhi SLUNDER ke uccharit kiye SPELL ke prabhav me aakar wo CURRENT RAYS aage aur piche dono taraf se float karte hue us VISION SERPENT ki taraf jaane lage....

ye dono humle milkar aur ghatak ho chuke the par us VISION SERPENT ke liye isse handle karna koi badi baat toh thi nahi...

is dusre attack se aaye parivartan ko dekh sur mehsoos kar VISION SERPENT ne apni hi jagah par gol gol ghumna shuru kar diya jiski wajah se uske har taraf hawa ka ek bawandar uth gaya...

aur jaise hi uski taraf chhode gaye CURRENT RAYS us bawandar ke paas pahunche,us bawandar ne CURRENT RAYS ko apne andar kheench liya....

CURRENT RAYS ke bawandar ke andar jaate hi bawandar ke ghumne ki speed aur badh gayi aur kuch hi palon me us bawandar ne CURRENT ki saari urja nichod li.....

par tabhi............

ACCHUTA ke dwara uccharit kiye gaye teesre SPELL ne apna aadhe se zyada kaam kar diya tha......

jaisa ki maine bataya ki ACCHUTA aur HIDA dwara uccharit aakhri ke dono mantra ko un dono ne bina soche bola tha isiliye ACCHUTA ka teesra SPELL jo ki WATER FORCE ka tha,usne us bawandar ko jo ki lagbhag khatm ho hi gaya tha,uske beech se hote hue VISION SERPENT ke body se takraya....

ye humla bohot ghaatak tha,par kyunki VISION SERPENT ka body bhi kuch zyada hi strong tha isiliye usse zyada kuch hua nahi...

bas usse apne sharir me halka dhakka sa laga aur wo lehrate hue thoda piche ho gaya tha...

par woh chaaron bhi bas itna hi chahte the..ACCHUTA ke SPELL ko naa rok paane aur peeche ki taraf hatne ki wajah se VISION SERPENT ka dimag ghuma aur tabhi HIDA dwara uccharit 4th SPELL ne apna kaam kar diya.....

uska choutha SPELL VISION SERPENT ke bole gaye SPELL ko wapas ussi ki taraf ghumane ka tha......

piche hatehthe hi VISION SERPENT ne ACCHUTA par ek energy ray se humla kiya par uska chodda gaya ray thoda aage jaakar wapas ghum gaya aur jaakar usse hi takra gaya...

kyunki ye ray uski khud ki shakti ka ek roop tha isiliye us ray ke takraate hi VISION SERPENT door jaakar gira...

wahin MAHI joki ab tak bas khadi hui is combat ko dekh rahi thi,usne jaise hi VISION SERPENT ke chhode gaye energy ray ko wapas ghumte hue dekha,usne apne haathon ko upar kiya...

uske aisa karte hi maine apne VAGUS NERVE me basi puri BLACK ENERGY ke AURA se ek SWORD create ki aur usse MAHI ki taraf ucchal di....

yahi tha woh modification jo maine socha tha...darasal VISION SERPENT par yahan INFERIOR LEVEL yaa phir ye kahun ki VIDEOUS ki duniya me WHITE ENERGY ke kisi bhi astra shashtra se nahi haraya jaa sakta tha..

aisa karne ke liye BLACK ENERGY se bane astra aur shashtra hi kaam me aa sakte the aur wahi maine abhi kiya tha..

khair,meri feki SWORD ko lapakte hue MAHI apne sthaan se saamne ki taraf kudi aur ray ke prabhav se VISION SERPENT jahan par gira tha,woh ussi jagah par pahunch gayi aur agle hi pal...


SOOBHHHHH.....

uski talwar bijli ki speed se chali....

VISION SERPENT jo har waar ko pehle hi predict kar leta tha,last waar ki wajah se uski prediction capability kuch seconds ke liye block ho chuki thi aur yahi wajah thi ki MAHI ka uske paas aana naa toh woh predict kar paaya aur chot lagne ki wajah se naahi usse dekh paaya..

woh toh abhi tak ye bhi samajh nahi paaya tha ki hua kya hai,jab tak woh sambhal paata,MAHI ki SWORD chal chuki thi jisne ke hi baar me us VISION SERPENT ke fun ko uske gardan samet uda diya tha....

bina cheekhe pehle kaale dhuen me
badal aur phir ek chote daayre me par strong thunder me badal woh VISION SERPENT tezi se upar hawa me udte hue dheere dheere faint hone laga...

is scene ko dekh woh paanchon samajh gaye ki unhone VISION SERPENT ka khel samapt kar diya hai aur saath hi saath is DARK DESERT ke challenge ko bhi successfully paar kar liya hai..

aur isiliye woh paanchon behadh khushi se bhar ek dusre ko hug karne lage..

wahin mai shaant khada un paanchon ko dekh raha tha....

woh paanchon ek dusre ko hug kar badhayi dete hue meri taraf palat aage badhne ko hue hi the ki tabhi..


MAI-KNUCKLE DOWN GUYZZZ....


halke zor se boli thi maine ye baat...aur aisa bolte hue hi maine khudko ek badi si kaali chaadar joki BLACK ENERGY se bani thi,usme convert kar liya aur tezi se un paanchon ki taraf badh gaya...

wahin woh paanchon jinhone abhi abhi apne REFLEXES ki madad se VISION SERPENT ko haraya tha,unke woh reflexes abhi bhi active the..

yahi wajah thi ki mere yun achanak bolne ke baad phir agle hi pal kaali chadar me badal un sabki taraf badhne se pehle hi woh sab bina zyada soche neeche jhuk chuke the aur tabhi...

SRSRSRSRSRSRS.....

aasman se un sabki taraf wahi VISION SERPENT jo kuch der pehle kaale dhuan ke chakrawat me badalkar gayab hua tha,woh wapas apne roop me aate hue apne bade se FUN ko pura khol un paanchon ko nigalne ke mansubo ko liye un sabke sir ke paas pahunch chuka tha par tabhi...

mai joki is waqt ek kaali chaadar me badal chuka tha,woh un paanchon ke thik upar kisi chhat ki tarah bich gaya aur...

us VISION SERPENT ke mere kareeb aate hi maine usse khudme lapet liya...

jis kaali chaadar mai maine khudko badla tha,ye ussi BLACK ENERGY se bani thi jisse kuch der pehle maine SOUL PERFORATE SPELL ke dwara piche dhakela tha..

aur us push ki wajah se woh kaali urja kaafi ghusse me bhi thi...

yahi wajah thi ki jab maine usse bahar nikal apne saath milate hue us kaali chaadar me badla toh usse apni frustration ko nikalne ka ek mouka mil chuka tha...

aur is mouke ka bharpoor faayda uthaya usne...

us SERPENT ko khudme lapet mai tezi se khudko shrink karte hue uspar dabaw banane laga...

aur tab bina mere aadesh ke hi kaali urja ne ek piercing ray se us serpent ke body ko penetrate karna shuru kar diya...

ANNNNNNNNNNN...

mujhme ghira hua woh SERPENT ek ajeeb si par behadh tez awaaz nikalte hue cheekhne laga...

aur tabhi....

VARNAM BHEDAM....

POINT PIERCE...

uske aankhon ke beech halke upari part ko dekhte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi woh piercing ray sidhe mere pointed jagah ko bhedhte chala gaya aur jab woh point pierce hua toh....

BOOMMMMM.......

ek tez dhamake ke beech woh VISION SERPENT blast hote hue khatm ho gaya..

ye sab us kaali chaadar ke andar ho raha tha..par aisa hote waqt jab woh SERPENT chhatpata raha tha,toh woh aur mai ek dusre se gutham gutha hote hue upar aasman me bohot upar tak uth chuke the aur jab woh SERPENT blast hote hue khatm hua toh pura aasman hi kaale rays se joki uske astitv ki nishaani thi,bhar gaya..

wahin mai bhi us chaadar se apne asli roop me aata hua aasman se tez raftar pakde neeche un paanchon ke paas aakar land sa hua...

DHABBBB....

issi awaaz ke saath us point par jahan mai land hua tha,reth har taraf ud gaya..

par kuch der baad jab reth se bana dhuan chatta aur mai un paanchon ko araam se apni jagah par khada dikha toh woh sab turant mere paas aaye..

un sabke face par khushi bhi thi par saath hi doubt bhi jisse dekh aur samajh..


MAI-relax..woh SERPENT khatm ho chuka hai...


mere jawab ko sun woh sab completely relaxed ho gaye par sawal toh the unke man me aur isiliye...


HIDA-RAAZ,tumhe pata kaise chala ki pehli baar me woh SERPENT khatm nahi hua tha..???

MAI-MAHI ne jab chakrawat banakar uspar humla kiya tha aur ussi hit laga tha,tab uske aankhon ke upar andar ki taraf se centre point par ek redish line chamki thi..

us redish line me uske upari body ki hi tarah ek aur parath thi...

usse dekh mai samajh gaya tha ki VISION ke saath saath us SERPENT ko dual body ka gift bhi mila hai..

tum sabne jab usse pehli baar khatm kiya aur uske sharir ka dhuan upar akash me utha,toh mai jaan gaya tha ki woh ek distraction hai..

tumhare ease out hote hi us SERPENT ka second layer tum sab par zaroor humla karega..

isiliye mai us sudden waar ke liye ready tha..


SLUNDER-par us VISION SERPENT ne tere waar ko predict kaise nahi kiya..???

MAI-MAHI ke first hit lagne ki wajah se jab uske aankhon ke upar woh red layer aaya tha,toh thodi der ke liye uske body se SENSE AURA joki usne tum sabke attacks ko predict karne ke liye chhoda hua tha,woh gayab ho gaya tha..

ye dekh mai samajh gaya tha ki VISION ki shakti uske sirf pehle layer of body me hi thi...second me nahi...


BOHOT KHUB RAAZ....BOHOT KHUB....HALL KE BAHAR JO RAAY MAINE TUMHARE BAARE ME RAKHI THI,US RAAY KO BADAL DIYA HAI TUMNE..

I AM REALLY IMPRESSED...BINA APNI ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON KE BHI KAAFI KHATARANAK HO TUM...

TUMHARI SUJH BUJH KAABILE TAARIF HAI...PAR THODI SI JEET SE OVERCONFIDENT MAT HO JAANA..

ABHI BOHOT DE HURDLES CROSS KARNA BAAKI HAI AUR UNHE PAAR KARNA, IT'S GOING TO BE TOUGH...VERY VERY TOUGH...

UPAR SE APNE SAATH PAANCH PAANCH KAMZORIYAN SAATH LEKAR CHAL RAHE HO TUM....

MAZA AAYEGA DEKHNE ME KI KITNE AAGE TAK JAA PAATE HO TUM AUR YE PAANCHON...!!!!

ALL THE BEST RAAZ....DEVIL KA BANAYA HAVEN AUR GOD KA BANAYA HEAVEN,DONO HI WAIT KAR RAHE HAIN TUMHARA...

DEKHTE HAIN,KAHAN PAHUNCHTE HO TUM...!!!!!

ek tez awaaz pure INFERIOR LRVEL me gunj uthi thi joki VIRAAZ ki thi...

us awaaz se jo tarange bahar nikal rahi thi,uska impact itna strong tha ki ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY,HIDA aur yahan tak ki MAHI ke dil me bhi sensations paida hone laga tha...

pura DARK DESERT us awaaz ki shakti se hil gaya tha...

khair,VIRAAZ ki awaaz sun mere face par ek cold look ne ghar karna shuru kar diya jiske baad...


MAI-

tu mujhe DABA kar dikha,mai khudko UTHA KAR DIKHAUNGA...

teri duniya me apne naam ka danka mai BAJA KAR DIKHAUNGA....

jitni chunoutiyan fekni hai mere aage,fekhta jaa...

teri har chunouti ka janaza mai SAJA KAR DIKHAUNGA....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......


















AAPKA APNA V....J......

Superb Update

 

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Nice update bhai

 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR HIDA KO VISION SERPENT NE LAPET LIYA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KE ANDAR USKE BLACK ENERGY AUR WHITE ENERGY AURA KE BEECH YUDH CHIDDI HUI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-141



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE INFERIOR LEVEL



THE QUEST CONTINOUS


SECOND CHALLENGE:THE DARK DESERT






AHHHHHHHH......


ye cheekh ek saath do jagah se nikli thi...

pehli jagah thi VISION SERPENT ke giraft me fase un paanchon ke mooh se jinke andar woh BLACK ACIDIC POSION dheere dheere sama raha tha...

MAHI ke HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke activate hone ki wajah se jo AURA release ho raha tha,usne uske saath uske chaaron saathiyon ke body ko bhi ek shield ki covering di thi,par body me sama rahe DARK AROMA ki wajah se woh jis antoxicating haalat me the,us haalat me woh SHIELD bhi strongly kaam nahi kar paa raha tha...

yahi wajah thi ki un sabke body ki outer layer par ek kaali parath joki jalne ki wajah se aati hai,banti jaa rahi thi..

kuch hi pal aur tha un sabke paas,kyunki uske baad woh BLACK ACIDIC POSION un sabke bodies ko penetrate kar deta,aur aisa hone ke baad un sabke bachne ke koi chances nahi the..

wahin dusri cheekh nikli thi mere mooh se..aur iski wajah thi mere andar circulate kar rahe BLACK ENERGY aur uske against khadi hui WHITE ENERGY ke AURA ke beech takraav..

is takraav ki wajah se mere saare internal organs hil jaa rahe the..

ye toh acha tha ki WHITE ENERGY ki bas AURA activated thi,us energy ki shroth, ERRAPEL ki shaktiyan abhi bhi behosh thi..

kyunki agar woh hosh me hoti toh BLACK ENERGY ko apne area se khadedne ke chakkar me mere brain ko aur uske saath mujhe bhi khatm kar deti..

khair,meri cheekh mere man me gunji thi jiske baad un dono hi energies ko alag karne ke mansoobe ko liye mai ek baar phir unhe alag karne ko hua..

apne andar jhaankte hue maine un dono energies ko dekha joki is waqt ek dusre se gutham guthayi waale position ne bhidi hui thi..

problem ye thi ki is waqt mai unke beech jaa nahi sakta tha.. space jo nahi tha aur isiliye maine dusra tarika socha...


SOUL PENETRATION...


SOUL ko kisi bhi do chizon ke beech ghusne ke liye jagah ki zaroorat nahi hoti aur SOUL hoti bhi sabse powerful hai aur isiliye....


MAI-ATMAM STRUTIYEM

SOUL PERFORATE


apne andar jhankte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi kuch alag hi ho gaya...

darasal SPELL maine dono energies ko alag karne ke liye kaha tha,par mere SPELL ke uccharit hote hi meri SOUL ne un dono hi energies ko jaise khudme dhak hi diya...

aisa hote hi naa sirf mujhe ho raha pain jaata raha balki mera brain aur body PURE SALVATION STATE ME chale gaye...

ek aisa state jisme naahi paap ki bhaavna hoti hai aur naahi punya ki..

naa kisi ko paane ki chahat hoti hai aur naahi kisiko khone ka gum...ek abodh navjaat shishu jisse sahi galat kuch bhi pata nahi hota,us mind set me jaa chuka tha mai aur aisa hote hi mujhe apne andar flow ho rahi do chizen dikhi...

pehli...mere MOM DAD ki anshik shakti joki mere SOUL ke saath merged thi..

aur dusri,dono LORDS ki urja jisse meri uttpatti hui thi...

ye dono hi ansh aur urja mere andar nihit zaroor the par dekh aaj mai in dono ko hi pehli baar dekh raha tha...

khair,in dono hi shaktiyon ko dekhte hi un dono shaktiyon ke shroth joki LORDS aur SERAPHIM ANGELS the,unki life journey ek baar phirse mere brain me ghum gayi aur aisa hote hi meri aankhon me ek chamak aa gayi...

REASON...

MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ko us deadly situation jisme woh sab phase hue the,usse nikalne ka tarika pata chal chuka tha mujhe..

woh tarika jo ek baar pehle bhi use ho chuka tha par is kahani me nahi balki pichli kahani me....

NIYAT......

mere abhi ke situation me sabse key word yahi thi...

kyunki jaise hi mere brain me woh life saving tarika dikha,mere dil me us tarike ko un paanchon me transfer karne ki NIYAT jaagi aur jab aisa hua toh..

BOOMMMM....

ek baar phirse mere andar dhamaka hua par is baar dhamake ka reason kuch aur tha..

ye dhamaka meri soch joki mere X doston ke liye positive thi,usko wajah se aayi thi...

aur aisa hote hi mere andar KAALI SHAKTIYAN aur saath hi WHITE ENERGY ka AURA dheele padhte hue apni apni raah nikalne lage...

mai andar se free ho chuka tha...aur issi wajah se mere senses lout aaye the..

theek hote hi jab maine saamne dekha toh paaya ki un paanchon ke pura sharir ab tak 90 percent tak kaale zeher se dhak chuka tha..

aur jaise hi pratishat 100 par pahunchta,woh zeher MAHI ke HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE se bane barrier ko bhedathe hue un sabke andar chali jaati,jiska matlab tha un sabka GAME OVER...

waqt kam bacha tha mere paas isiliye...


MANORAHAM VIDYATE

RESTORE THE SENSES

apni apni raah jaate hue BLACK ENERGY aur WHITE ENERGY ke AURA ko kheench kar apne haathon me laakar is SPELL ko man hi man uccharit kiya maine jiske baad kaali ray jiske andar WHITE ENERGY se bani SPELL thi,woh un paanchon ki taraf badh chali..

aisa maine us VISION SERPENT ki wajah se kiya tha...

kyunki agar usse WHITE ENERGY ki bhanak lag jaati toh woh bina ek pal gawayen un paanchon ko turant maar deta..

BLACK ENERGY ke andar hone ki wajah se woh WHITE ENERGY ka AURA aur usme basi SPELL ki power surakshit the...

khair,woh kaali ray turant aage badhi aur un paanchon ke paas pahunch us dark POSION ke saath milte hue un paanchon ke bodies se chipak gayi.

par aisa hote hi uske andar chuppa mera SPELL bahar aate hue un sabke sharir me ghus gaya aur jab aisa hua toh...

ek jhatke me un sabki aankh khul gayi..

woh sab apne senses me aa chuke the...

aur mere SPELL ki power ki wajah se abhi kuch minutes unhe us dark POSION ka asar nahi hone waala tha aur itna waqt kaafi tha...

jaise hi un sabki aankh khuli,woh sab us saanp ki giraft se azaad hone ki koshish karne ko hue par tabhi...


MAI-RELAX GUYZZZ...aise azaad nahi ho sakte tum sab...bhulo mat,tum sab VISION SERPENT ke giraft me ho.. tumhara har move usse pehle se maalum hone waala hai...


un sabke brain se jud kahi thi ye baat maine jisse sun aur samajh woh sab shaant ho gaye aur tab..


MAI-ek scene bhej raha hun tum sabke brain me...dekho,samjho aur adapt karo...


DRISHYAM BHAAGNAM

SHARE THE SCENE


un sabse apni baat bol ia SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine..

PEHLE SPELL ki wajah se aur un sabke brains se connected hone ki wajah se mere SPELL ka asar sidhe un sabke brains me hua..

ek drishyam ki tarah un sabko ek scene dikhne lag gaya...

aur ye scene aur koi nahi wahi,wahi training thi jo VIKRAM ne apne dono dost aur mere is janam ke mom dad RONIT aur ANJALI ko di thi...

THE CLONE COMBAT.....jiski practice aur perfection un dono ne THE MAGICAL DIMENSION me ki thi...(ATTITUDE-1,UPDATE-72)

CLONE COMBAT:-

ek aisi yudh kala jisme sirf apne REFLEXES ki madad se attack kiya jaata hai.. koi taiyari nahi, koi purvanuman nahi...

thik attack karte waqt apne REFLEXES par bharosa kar saare daav chale jaate hain..

aur aisa ho paata hai jab is combat ko shuru karne se pehle hi yodha apne saare hunar ko,apne saari yudh shaili ko apne REFLEX area me transfer kar deta hai...

aisa kar woh khudko hi apne REFLEXES ke bharose chhod deta hai...

REFLEXES apne hisab se last moment me attack ko decide kar usse directly apne dhaarak ke brain me nahi balki body ke us part me ya phir us cell me transfer karta hai jisse usse waar karna hota hai...

ye karna tough hai,bohot tough.. but for a SAVENT and that to for these 5 lads, it's just a matter of knowing the technique jo maine un sabke brain me feed kar di thi aur ab un paanchon ka brain us COMBAT style ko naa sirf samajh raha tha,balki khudko us tarah ki battle karne ke liye taiyar bhi kar paa raha tha..

wahin is beech jab RONIT aur ANJALI ka combat training un sabke brain me chal raha tha,tab jo SPELLS un dono ne apne us combat ke waqt bole the,un paanchon ne bhi unhi SPELLS ko upyog me laane ka faisla kiya...

aur kyunki is waqt hum sab brain to brain connected the, isiliye mujhe bhi unki soch aur plan ke baare me pata chal gaya tha...

ek halka sa modification karna tha,jo sahi waqt aane par mai kar dene waala tha.

haan,woh modification kya aur kyun karna hai,ye baat maine un paanchon ke brain me daal di thi...

anyways, saari baatein clear thi aur ab waqt tha un baaton aur plan ko adaptation mode me laane ka aur isiliye....


BHUMIKAM URJAWAHAM....

EARTH AURA...


sabse pehle is SPELL ko uccharit kiya tha MAHI ne jisse as usual, VISION SERPENT ne pehle hi predict kar liya tha but is baar MAHI ko is baat se fark nahi pada tha...

REASON...

MAHI ka bole SPELL asal me jahan woh serpent khada tha,uske neeche ki reth aur mitti par MAHI ke EARTH ENERGY joki pure thi, uke AURA ko create karne ka tha...

aur is SPELL se woh SERPENT sirf khudko bacha sakta tha,us spell ko khatm nahi kar sakta tha..

aur MAHI ka yahi plan tha jo uske SPELL bolte hi successfully pura bhi ho gaya..

MAHI ke SPELL ke asar se jab SERPENT ke neeche ki reth me EARTH ENERGY create hone lagi,toh usse just pehle hi us SERPENT ne khudko wahan se hata liya aur thoda door chala gaya aur aisa karte hue usne un paanchon ko apne grip se azaad kar diya..

ab yahi toh wlh paanchon chahte the..

azaad hote hi back flips maarte hue woh sab thoda aur piche ho gaye taaki unke aur us SERPENT ke beech gap halka badh jaaye..

jaise hi woh sab free hue,MAHI ka HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE thoda zyada active ho gaya jiski wajah se un sabke bodies ke upar chaddhi kaali parath bhi jaati rahi..

khair,gap create kar apne plan ko ek baar phirse sochne lage woh paanchon..

is beech woh VISION SERPENT bade araam se khada un sabke agli chaal ka wait kar raha tha taaki un chaalon ko pehle se sense kar unhe dodge deta hua is baar ek jhatke me hi un sabka khel khatm kar sake...

wahin kuch pal us VISION SERPENT ko dekhne ke baad un sabki nazar ek dusre par padi jispar..


MAHI-let's do this guyz... let's kill this bloody bitch...

CHAARON-oh yeh.....


apni baat bol ek second shaant rahe woh sab par phir....


BRAWNY-PRAVAHA AVIDHYATI.......

CURRENT SWING......


SLUNDER-SPANDOLIKA..........

SPIN BACKWARDS & FORWARD......


ACCHUTA-JALAM PARIGRAH.........

WATER FORCE........


HIDA-PRATILOMAKA ABHISARA.....

REVERSE ATTACK.......


un chaaron ne ye chaar mantra ek ke baad ek lagatar bole the...par pehle do mantra ka uccharit hona aur unka asar ek sa tha wahin teesre aur chouthe mantron ka uccharit hona aur asar alag...

wo isiliye kyunki pehle do mantra joki BRAWNY aur SLUNDER ne uccharit kiye the,woh unhone pehle se hi soch kar uccharit kiye the par teesre aur chouthe mantra joki ACCHUTA aur HIDA ke mooh se uccharit hue the,woh SPELLS unke REFLEX SPELLS the joki apne aap nikle the...

unhe uccharit karne se pehle un dono ke dimag me bas yahi khayal aaya tha ki unhe VISION SERPENT ko nuksaan pahunchana hai.....

BRAWNY ke pehle mantra ke bolte hi uske sharir se current ki rays nikalkar usse kuch door khade SERPENT ki taraf jaane lagi...

aisa hote hi us SERPENT ne ek black wooden rotating cart taiyar kiya taaki uske paas aane se pehle hi usse generated wooden wave se takrakar current rays khatm ho jaayen par tabhi SLUNDER ke uccharit kiye SPELL ke prabhav me aakar wo CURRENT RAYS aage aur piche dono taraf se float karte hue us VISION SERPENT ki taraf jaane lage....

ye dono humle milkar aur ghatak ho chuke the par us VISION SERPENT ke liye isse handle karna koi badi baat toh thi nahi...

is dusre attack se aaye parivartan ko dekh sur mehsoos kar VISION SERPENT ne apni hi jagah par gol gol ghumna shuru kar diya jiski wajah se uske har taraf hawa ka ek bawandar uth gaya...

aur jaise hi uski taraf chhode gaye CURRENT RAYS us bawandar ke paas pahunche,us bawandar ne CURRENT RAYS ko apne andar kheench liya....

CURRENT RAYS ke bawandar ke andar jaate hi bawandar ke ghumne ki speed aur badh gayi aur kuch hi palon me us bawandar ne CURRENT ki saari urja nichod li.....

par tabhi............

ACCHUTA ke dwara uccharit kiye gaye teesre SPELL ne apna aadhe se zyada kaam kar diya tha......

jaisa ki maine bataya ki ACCHUTA aur HIDA dwara uccharit aakhri ke dono mantra ko un dono ne bina soche bola tha isiliye ACCHUTA ka teesra SPELL jo ki WATER FORCE ka tha,usne us bawandar ko jo ki lagbhag khatm ho hi gaya tha,uske beech se hote hue VISION SERPENT ke body se takraya....

ye humla bohot ghaatak tha,par kyunki VISION SERPENT ka body bhi kuch zyada hi strong tha isiliye usse zyada kuch hua nahi...

bas usse apne sharir me halka dhakka sa laga aur wo lehrate hue thoda piche ho gaya tha...

par woh chaaron bhi bas itna hi chahte the..ACCHUTA ke SPELL ko naa rok paane aur peeche ki taraf hatne ki wajah se VISION SERPENT ka dimag ghuma aur tabhi HIDA dwara uccharit 4th SPELL ne apna kaam kar diya.....

uska choutha SPELL VISION SERPENT ke bole gaye SPELL ko wapas ussi ki taraf ghumane ka tha......

piche hatehthe hi VISION SERPENT ne ACCHUTA par ek energy ray se humla kiya par uska chodda gaya ray thoda aage jaakar wapas ghum gaya aur jaakar usse hi takra gaya...

kyunki ye ray uski khud ki shakti ka ek roop tha isiliye us ray ke takraate hi VISION SERPENT door jaakar gira...

wahin MAHI joki ab tak bas khadi hui is combat ko dekh rahi thi,usne jaise hi VISION SERPENT ke chhode gaye energy ray ko wapas ghumte hue dekha,usne apne haathon ko upar kiya...

uske aisa karte hi maine apne VAGUS NERVE me basi puri BLACK ENERGY ke AURA se ek SWORD create ki aur usse MAHI ki taraf ucchal di....

yahi tha woh modification jo maine socha tha...darasal VISION SERPENT par yahan INFERIOR LEVEL yaa phir ye kahun ki VIDEOUS ki duniya me WHITE ENERGY ke kisi bhi astra shashtra se nahi haraya jaa sakta tha..

aisa karne ke liye BLACK ENERGY se bane astra aur shashtra hi kaam me aa sakte the aur wahi maine abhi kiya tha..

khair,meri feki SWORD ko lapakte hue MAHI apne sthaan se saamne ki taraf kudi aur ray ke prabhav se VISION SERPENT jahan par gira tha,woh ussi jagah par pahunch gayi aur agle hi pal...


SOOBHHHHH.....

uski talwar bijli ki speed se chali....

VISION SERPENT jo har waar ko pehle hi predict kar leta tha,last waar ki wajah se uski prediction capability kuch seconds ke liye block ho chuki thi aur yahi wajah thi ki MAHI ka uske paas aana naa toh woh predict kar paaya aur chot lagne ki wajah se naahi usse dekh paaya..

woh toh abhi tak ye bhi samajh nahi paaya tha ki hua kya hai,jab tak woh sambhal paata,MAHI ki SWORD chal chuki thi jisne ke hi baar me us VISION SERPENT ke fun ko uske gardan samet uda diya tha....

bina cheekhe pehle kaale dhuen me
badal aur phir ek chote daayre me par strong thunder me badal woh VISION SERPENT tezi se upar hawa me udte hue dheere dheere faint hone laga...

is scene ko dekh woh paanchon samajh gaye ki unhone VISION SERPENT ka khel samapt kar diya hai aur saath hi saath is DARK DESERT ke challenge ko bhi successfully paar kar liya hai..

aur isiliye woh paanchon behadh khushi se bhar ek dusre ko hug karne lage..

wahin mai shaant khada un paanchon ko dekh raha tha....

woh paanchon ek dusre ko hug kar badhayi dete hue meri taraf palat aage badhne ko hue hi the ki tabhi..


MAI-KNUCKLE DOWN GUYZZZ....


halke zor se boli thi maine ye baat...aur aisa bolte hue hi maine khudko ek badi si kaali chaadar joki BLACK ENERGY se bani thi,usme convert kar liya aur tezi se un paanchon ki taraf badh gaya...

wahin woh paanchon jinhone abhi abhi apne REFLEXES ki madad se VISION SERPENT ko haraya tha,unke woh reflexes abhi bhi active the..

yahi wajah thi ki mere yun achanak bolne ke baad phir agle hi pal kaali chadar me badal un sabki taraf badhne se pehle hi woh sab bina zyada soche neeche jhuk chuke the aur tabhi...

SRSRSRSRSRSRS.....

aasman se un sabki taraf wahi VISION SERPENT jo kuch der pehle kaale dhuan ke chakrawat me badalkar gayab hua tha,woh wapas apne roop me aate hue apne bade se FUN ko pura khol un paanchon ko nigalne ke mansubo ko liye un sabke sir ke paas pahunch chuka tha par tabhi...

mai joki is waqt ek kaali chaadar me badal chuka tha,woh un paanchon ke thik upar kisi chhat ki tarah bich gaya aur...

us VISION SERPENT ke mere kareeb aate hi maine usse khudme lapet liya...

jis kaali chaadar mai maine khudko badla tha,ye ussi BLACK ENERGY se bani thi jisse kuch der pehle maine SOUL PERFORATE SPELL ke dwara piche dhakela tha..

aur us push ki wajah se woh kaali urja kaafi ghusse me bhi thi...

yahi wajah thi ki jab maine usse bahar nikal apne saath milate hue us kaali chaadar me badla toh usse apni frustration ko nikalne ka ek mouka mil chuka tha...

aur is mouke ka bharpoor faayda uthaya usne...

us SERPENT ko khudme lapet mai tezi se khudko shrink karte hue uspar dabaw banane laga...

aur tab bina mere aadesh ke hi kaali urja ne ek piercing ray se us serpent ke body ko penetrate karna shuru kar diya...

ANNNNNNNNNNN...

mujhme ghira hua woh SERPENT ek ajeeb si par behadh tez awaaz nikalte hue cheekhne laga...

aur tabhi....

VARNAM BHEDAM....

POINT PIERCE...

uske aankhon ke beech halke upari part ko dekhte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi woh piercing ray sidhe mere pointed jagah ko bhedhte chala gaya aur jab woh point pierce hua toh....

BOOMMMMM.......

ek tez dhamake ke beech woh VISION SERPENT blast hote hue khatm ho gaya..

ye sab us kaali chaadar ke andar ho raha tha..par aisa hote waqt jab woh SERPENT chhatpata raha tha,toh woh aur mai ek dusre se gutham gutha hote hue upar aasman me bohot upar tak uth chuke the aur jab woh SERPENT blast hote hue khatm hua toh pura aasman hi kaale rays se joki uske astitv ki nishaani thi,bhar gaya..

wahin mai bhi us chaadar se apne asli roop me aata hua aasman se tez raftar pakde neeche un paanchon ke paas aakar land sa hua...

DHABBBB....

issi awaaz ke saath us point par jahan mai land hua tha,reth har taraf ud gaya..

par kuch der baad jab reth se bana dhuan chatta aur mai un paanchon ko araam se apni jagah par khada dikha toh woh sab turant mere paas aaye..

un sabke face par khushi bhi thi par saath hi doubt bhi jisse dekh aur samajh..


MAI-relax..woh SERPENT khatm ho chuka hai...


mere jawab ko sun woh sab completely relaxed ho gaye par sawal toh the unke man me aur isiliye...


HIDA-RAAZ,tumhe pata kaise chala ki pehli baar me woh SERPENT khatm nahi hua tha..???

MAI-MAHI ne jab chakrawat banakar uspar humla kiya tha aur ussi hit laga tha,tab uske aankhon ke upar andar ki taraf se centre point par ek redish line chamki thi..

us redish line me uske upari body ki hi tarah ek aur parath thi...

usse dekh mai samajh gaya tha ki VISION ke saath saath us SERPENT ko dual body ka gift bhi mila hai..

tum sabne jab usse pehli baar khatm kiya aur uske sharir ka dhuan upar akash me utha,toh mai jaan gaya tha ki woh ek distraction hai..

tumhare ease out hote hi us SERPENT ka second layer tum sab par zaroor humla karega..

isiliye mai us sudden waar ke liye ready tha..


SLUNDER-par us VISION SERPENT ne tere waar ko predict kaise nahi kiya..???

MAI-MAHI ke first hit lagne ki wajah se jab uske aankhon ke upar woh red layer aaya tha,toh thodi der ke liye uske body se SENSE AURA joki usne tum sabke attacks ko predict karne ke liye chhoda hua tha,woh gayab ho gaya tha..

ye dekh mai samajh gaya tha ki VISION ki shakti uske sirf pehle layer of body me hi thi...second me nahi...


BOHOT KHUB RAAZ....BOHOT KHUB....HALL KE BAHAR JO RAAY MAINE TUMHARE BAARE ME RAKHI THI,US RAAY KO BADAL DIYA HAI TUMNE..

I AM REALLY IMPRESSED...BINA APNI ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON KE BHI KAAFI KHATARANAK HO TUM...

TUMHARI SUJH BUJH KAABILE TAARIF HAI...PAR THODI SI JEET SE OVERCONFIDENT MAT HO JAANA..

ABHI BOHOT DE HURDLES CROSS KARNA BAAKI HAI AUR UNHE PAAR KARNA, IT'S GOING TO BE TOUGH...VERY VERY TOUGH...

UPAR SE APNE SAATH PAANCH PAANCH KAMZORIYAN SAATH LEKAR CHAL RAHE HO TUM....

MAZA AAYEGA DEKHNE ME KI KITNE AAGE TAK JAA PAATE HO TUM AUR YE PAANCHON...!!!!

ALL THE BEST RAAZ....DEVIL KA BANAYA HAVEN AUR GOD KA BANAYA HEAVEN,DONO HI WAIT KAR RAHE HAIN TUMHARA...

DEKHTE HAIN,KAHAN PAHUNCHTE HO TUM...!!!!!

ek tez awaaz pure INFERIOR LRVEL me gunj uthi thi joki VIRAAZ ki thi...

us awaaz se jo tarange bahar nikal rahi thi,uska impact itna strong tha ki ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY,HIDA aur yahan tak ki MAHI ke dil me bhi sensations paida hone laga tha...

pura DARK DESERT us awaaz ki shakti se hil gaya tha...

khair,VIRAAZ ki awaaz sun mere face par ek cold look ne ghar karna shuru kar diya jiske baad...


MAI-

tu mujhe DABA kar dikha,mai khudko UTHA KAR DIKHAUNGA...

teri duniya me apne naam ka danka mai BAJA KAR DIKHAUNGA....

jitni chunoutiyan fekni hai mere aage,fekhta jaa...

teri har chunouti ka janaza mai SAJA KAR DIKHAUNGA....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......


















AAPKA APNA V....J......

Nice update bhai