"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
like RAAZ, VIDEOUS and now ALFREEN are also the bearers of both WHITE and BLACK energy...Raaz is the only person who can handle both black and white powers and this feature will be useful for him in the future. Both powers have to be balanced because it would be wrong to choose one. Well the white power inside Raaz is asking him to help his friends but will Raaz do this?
The snake was huge and dangerous and full of elusive powers, seeing that it seemed impossible to defeat him because he already knew what was going to happen next. You created a very frightening and thrilling scene, everything looked real, I enjoyed a lot. The mind is desperate to know what will happen next.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
lot's more to come..be along