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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SABHI SAVENTS CLASS ME ATTENTIVELY DHYAN DE RAHE HAIN WAHIN RAAZ KA FOCUS NIL HAI.


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-17




PLANET- ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S HOSTEL




TUJHE JAANA HAI TOH JAA,PAR MUJHE APNI BEIZATTI KARANE KA KOI SHOUK NAHI HAI...


ye bol nikle the SLUNDER ke mooh se....


shaam ka waqt hai... subah class khatm hone ke baad jab saare SAVENTS wapas jaa rahe the aur RAAZ ko OMMIN WHIZZDER ne awaaz dekar roka tha,toh aisa hote hue ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ne dekha tha...

unka man tha RAAZ aur OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sunne ka,but wo dono hi ye jaante the ki ye koi normal aur mamuli istitution toh hai nahi....

jisme wo taaka jhaanki karenge aur pata nahi chalega...wahin RAAZ ke ATTITUDE ko dekh wo ye samajh gaye the ki OMMIN sir ne agar usse kuch kaha toh RAAZ unhe bhi suna dega...

aur isiliye unhe dar tha ki kahin OMMIN WHIZZDER aur baaki instructors ke ghusse ke radar me RAAZ ke saath saath wo bhi naa aajayen isiliye wo dono wahan se nikal liye the...

par jahan ek taraf SLUNDER kuch hi der me is baat ko bhul gaya tha wahin ACCHUTA ki khujli ka kida jaaga hua tha aur isiliye shaam ko thakan kam hote hi usne SLUNDER ko RAAZ ke paas chalne ko kaha jisse sun SLUNDER ne mana karte hue apni baat kahi thi..


ACHHUTA-haan beta..tu toh apne planet ka king hai naa jiski kabhi beizatti hui hi nahi hai...

abbe chal naa, RAAZ se puchte hain ki OMMIN WHIZZDER ne usse kyun roka tha...


ye bol usse ACCHUTA khinchte hue RAAZ ke room ki taraf le jaane laga...


SLUNDER-abbe saale, pehle apna haath mujhse door tak... pata nahi kahan kahan khujlate rehta hai....

kisi jaanwar se bhi zyada bacteria honge tere andar...


ACCHUTA-jaanwar kyun bol raha hai???sidhe sidhe apna naam nahi le sakta kya????

tu kisi jaanwar se kam thodi naa hai...aur saale,jitna bacteria mere pure body me nahi hoga naa,usse zyada toh tu apne daanth me liye ghumta hoga....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ka dimag kharab ho gaya...


SLUNDER-saale teri tarah nahi hun mai jo saal me ek baar brush karta hai..mai daily 2 baar brush karta hun...

mere mooh me aur daanton me bacteria ho hi nahi sakta...

ACCHUTA-ab bhai hamare daanth normal size ke hain...saal me ek baar bhi karen toh pure saaf ho jaate hain...

but bhai,tere daanton ke size ke hisaab se toh tujhe din me kamsekam 50 baar brush karna chahiye...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun garam ho SLUNDER usse dhakka de wapas apne room ki taraf mood gaya but....


ACCHUTA-arre bhai,tu toh naraz ho gaya....mai toh mazak kar raha tha..ab doston ke beech toh mazak chalta rehta hai naa...


SLUNDER ko rokte hue ACHHUTA ne apni baat kahi....


SLUNDER-tu kab mera dost ban gaya...tujhse dosti karne se acha mai zindagi bhar akela hi rahun...

ACCHUTA-abbe dosti bola maine,propose nahi kiya hai tujhe jo zindagi bhar nibhane ke liye bol raha hai....

aur ab tu bata,tune bhi toh mujhse ulti baat kahi,par mai toh naaraaz nahi hua..

phir RAAZ ki baat ko tu kyun itna dil par le raha hai...lena hi hai toh muh me le le....


SLUNDER-tu toh hai hi besharam..ek minute,kya bola tu...

saale,tera mooh hai ya chaddi...jab bhi khulta hai,lou***a hi nikalta hai....

ACHHUTA- kya baat hai!!!!baatein karna sikh gaya lounda....

lekin bhai, tu mere mooh ko chaddi bol raha hai jabki tu apne naam ke saath LU***D chipkaye ghum raha hai ....

SLUNDER-Tujhse baat hi karna bekar hai...mai chala...


ye bol SLUNDER wapas muda hi tha ki....


ACHHUTA-yaar tu fir serious ho gaya...chal thik hai bhai,tu jeeta mai haara,khush...

chal ab RAAZ ke room chalte hain..nahi toh yahin khade khade raat ho jaani hai...


ye bol halka push karte karte ACHHUTA SLUNDER ko liye RAAZ ke room ki taraf chal pada....



PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE



GOOD EVENING UNCLE....GOOD EVENING AUNTY.....


ye awaaz thi MAHI ki jo just ALFREEN ke ghar pahunchi thi....


FLORIN-good evening angel....kya baat hai!!!aaj toh hamari super energetic MAHI bhi thaki thaki lag rahi hai....

MAHI-aaj institution me humne apna first mode active karne ki koshish ki thi...ussiki wajah se thodi weakness lag rahi hai...

ALFREEN ne toh bataya hoga aapko....!!!!

HAAN,BATAYA THA...AUR USKI HAALAT BHI SAME HI HAI..JAB SE INSTITUTION SE WAPAS AAYI HAI,APNE ROOM ME HI HAI....


ye awaaz thi MARIA ki jo piche room se MAHI aur FLORIN ki tataf aayi thi...


MAHI-wo abhi tak so rahi hai???

MARIA-may be!!!2 ghante pehle jab mai uske room me gayi thi,tab toh wo soyi hui hi thi....

FLORIN-uth jaayegi.... MAHI,coffee piyogi....

MAHI-no uncle,thanks..abhi apne ABODE se kuch snacks khakar hi aa rahi ho...

MARIA-haan,toh coffee se kaun sa pet bhar jaayega...aur upar se yahan coffee chhodo,kuch bhi banane ke liye mehenat hi nahi lagti...

jo bhi chahiye,bas bol do,wo chiz turant saamne aajaati hai....

3 COFFEES.....


MARIA ke aisa kehte hi unke saamne teen coffee se bhare mug prakat hue jisse haste hue teeno ne utha liya...


MAHI-VRADAHAN KAROTI.....

ye wish grant ki spell hai jisse is planet ke har ghar me uccharit kiya gaya hai...

issiki wajah se jo bhi regular stuffs mango,haazir ho jaata hai....

FLORIN-arre waah..tumne toh spells yaad rakhne bhi shuru kar diye hain....

MAHI-par kya faayda uncle..maza toh tab aaye jab bole gaye spells kaam bhi karen....

warna toh wo sab sirf shabd hi hain.....

FLORIN-arre beta,din hi kitne hue hain tum logon ko yahan aaye...????

aur upar se aaj hi toh tumhare practical koshishen shuru hui hain...

time toh lagega hi naa....

MAHI-wo toh hai uncle...aur aap dekhna,sabse jaldi spells ko kaam me laana mai aur ALFREEN hi shuru karenge...

FLORIN-now that's my girl.....


FLORIN aur MARIA MAHI ki baat sun bohot khush hue the...kyunki MAHI ne sirf khudki nahi balki unki beti ki bhi baat ki thi...

isse unhe pata chal gaya tha ki MAHI dil se ALFREEN ko apna friend maanti hai....

jahan ye dono is baat ko lekar man hi man khush ho rahe the,wahin MAHI ke dimag me bhi kuch chal raha tha aur isiliye.....


MAHI-uncle,aunty,can i ask you guyz something???

MARIA-tumhe permission ki zaroorat kab se padh gayi..tum humse kuch bhi puch sakti ho....

MAHI-its about RAAZ.....


RAAZ ka naam sun FLORIN aur MARIA chownke but fir....


FLORIN-what about him????

MAHI-anything...i mean usse aap dono ne hi paala hai...toh uske baare me sabse zyada toh aap dono hi jaante honge...

MARIA- RAAZ bilkul apne naam ki hi tarah hai....ek RAAZ...usse samjha nahi jaa sakta....

agar quote me kahen toh he is a writing without a language....


MARIA ki baat sun FLORIN aur MAHI muskura diye....


MAHI-fir bhi..i mean,wahan aapke orphanage me,uske school me uska ravaiyya, behaviour, ATTITUDE kaisa tha????


KAISA HOGA???WAISA HI HOGA JAISA ABHI HAI...GHATIYA....JHAGDAALU.... THANKLESS UNGRATEFUL MORON....


ye awaaz thi ALFREEN ki jo abhi abhi apne room se nikal stairs se hote hue niche aayi thi aur aate hi usse MAHI ke puche gaye sawal sunayi diye jisse sun uske aankhon ke saamne RAAZ ka chehra aa gaya aur uske mooh se RAAZ ki taarif ke shabd nikle....

wahin RAAZ ke liye ALFREEN ki baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN chownke....


MARIA-ye sab kya keh rahi hai AL...????

ALFREEN-us MORON ki identify bata rahi hun....ek coffee....


ALFREEN ke coffee kehte hi uske saamne bhi ek coffee ka mug aa chuka tha...

par ALFREEN ki baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN samajh gaye the ki zaroor unki beti aur RAAZ ke beech kuch hua hai aur isiliye....


FLORIN-kuch hua hai kya tere aur RAAZ ke beech!!!!


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN kuch bolne hi waali thi ki....


MAHI-kuch khaas nahi uncle..bas thodi behas ho gayi thi usse....

ALFREEN-thodi behes....!!!!usne hume kitna kuch suna diya aur tu thodi si behes bol rahi hai....

hume toh chhod,usne toh OPHILIA WHIZZ ki bhi respect nahi ki...


jahan MAHI baat ko dabana chahti thi,wahin ALFREEN ki RAAZ ke liye chidh ne usse kaafi kuch ugalwa diya tha jisse sun MARIA aur FLORIN dono hi firse chownke the...


FLORIN- OPHILIA WHIZZ toh tumhare is PHASE ki teacher hain naa...unse bhi RAAZ ki behas ho gayi....

ALFREEN-Behes nahi pops,usne WHIZZ ki insult ki...


fir ALFREEN ne MARIA aur FLORIN ko bataya ki institution me aaj kya kya hua tha jisse sun MARIA aur FLORIN aur zyada shocked ho gaye...

par RAAZ ne jo ALFREEN se kaha tha,usse sun MARIA ko RAAZ par ghussa aa gaya tha...


MARIA-how can he say such words to our daughter???i think we should complaint this matter to the authority....


MARIA ne FLORIN se ye baat kahi jo apne hi soch me goom the....


FLORIN-MAHI,ek baat batao....kya RAAZ khud chalkar tum dono ke paas aaya aur ye saari baatein kahin????

MAHI-nahi uncle,hum dono gaye the uske paas....

FLORIN-aur WHIZZ se uski jo behes hui,uski shuruat kisne ki thi....???

MAHI-shuruat jaisi koi baat thi hi nahi uncle... RAAZ books lekar nahi aaya tha,aur WHIZZ ne bas ussike baare me usse pucha tha but usne ulta jawab diya...

FLORIN-kya tha uska jawab????

MAHI-man nahi kiya...ye tha uska answer....


MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN muskura uthe aur....


FLORIN-jahan tak mujhe lagta hai,in sab me RAAZ ki puri galti nahi hai...


FLORIN ki baat sun chehre par hairani aur sawal liye teeno unki taraf dekhne lage jisse FLORIN ne bhi bhaamp liya aur.....


FLORIN-aag se agar haath jal jaaye toh isme aag ka kya kusoor....???


wo toh hota hi garam hai..bana hi jalane ke liye hai....ehtiyat haath ko baratni chahiye...usse aag ko chhuna hi nahi chahiye....


FLORIN ki baat ka matlab teeno ladies samajh chuke the...


ALFREEN-but pops,hum toh bas usse samjhane gaye the ki WHIZZ se aise baat nahi karni chahiye..


FLORIN-haath ne bhi toh aag ko bas chhua tha,usse maara nahi tha...but chhune bhar se hi jal gaya naa....

beta aag ki hi tarah har kisi ki apni fitrat hoti hai..aur wo fitrat uski haqiqat hoti hai..uski pehchaan hoti hai..

kyunki hum aise hain,ek certain tarike,trend ko follow kar chalte hain,toh iska ye matlab nahi ki har koi wahi kare...

aur RAAZ toh ek unique case hai...wo khudse kabhi kisi ko chhedta nahi, par agar koi usse chedde,toh wo chhodta nahi....

MAHI-ye baat toh thik hai uncle but humne usse chheda nahi tha bas normal baatein hi ki thi...

FLORIN-aisa tumhe lagta hai....but tumhari soch tumpar laagu hoti hai, RAAZ par nahi...jo tumhare liye sirf baatein hain,uske liye taunt hai..uski zindagi me koi kisi bhi tarah dakhal de, ye usse pasand nahi...

tumne usse wo bola jisse usse bura laga isiliye usne tumhe wo bola jisse tum dono ko bura laga....

wo shuru se hi aisa hai...wo kabhi kisi se khud nahi bhidta..apne kaam se kaam rakhta hai...jo dil aaye wo karta hai,but kisi dusre ka nuksaan nahi karta...

bas apne me rehta hai..but agar koi uske ravaiye par sawal kare,usse gyan de toh usse pasand nahi...

ALFREEN-but jo usne WHIZZ se kaha,kya wo bhi sahi tha???

FLORIN-bilkul nahi..but uski baat me ek point tha...

ALFREEN-point..kaisa point???

FLORIN-yahi ki usse yahan bulaya gaya hai,wo khud yahan nahi aaya hai....ab uska dil karega toh wo yahan padhega warna usse bound nahi kiya jaa sakta...

haan,agar class ke dauran usne kisi aur ko disturb kiya hota,toh wo completely galat hota but i am damn sure,ki usne aisa kuch nahi kiya hoga....

kyunki usse matlab hi nahi hai ki kaun kya kar raha hai???

aur rahi baat uski tumhare WHIZZ ke saath behaviour ki,to usse tum logon ka kya lena dena???

us matter ko apne WHIZZ par chhod do..ab ye unhe decide karna hai ki RAAZ ko kaise handle kiya jaaye...

it's none of your business,right!!!!


FLORIN ki baat sahi thi jispar naa toh MAHI aur naahi ALFREEN behes kar sakte the but unke andar ka haal alag tha...

jo insult RAAZ ne un dono ki thi,usse itni asaani se wo dono bhul nahi sakti thi aur isiliye...


MAHI'S/ALFREEN'S MIND-hum OPHILIA WHIZZ nahi hain jo usse itni asaani se jaane denge....

JANNAT hai ye jagah,but RAAZ,tere liye hum isse NARK bana denge.....



BACK TO HERO:-




ABBE ITNI DER SE HUM BHONKE JAA RAHE HAIN,KUCH TOH JAWAB DE DE BHAI....


ye shabd nikle the ACHHUTA ke mooh se...

reason....


shaam ka waqt hai..mai apne room me baitha hi hua tha ki tabhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER padhare...

mere subah bole baaton ki wajah se SLUNDER toh chup hi raha but ACCHUTA bhai sahab ko chain kahan....

wo mujhse puch raha tha ki OMMIN WHIZZDER ne mujhe kyun roka tha..????

but jab 2,3 baar puchne par bhi maine koi jawab nahi diya toh wo thoda jhunjla utha....

is baar bhi maine kuch nahi kaha par jawab ACCHUTA ko mila, SLUNDER se....


SLUNDER-hum nahi tu bhonk raha hai...aur agar usse jawab dena hota toh pehli baar me hi de deta....

jab wo interested nahi hai toh fir fizul me apna time waste kyun kar raha hai....???

chal,chalte hain yahan se.....


ye bol SLUNDER wapas muda hi tha ki....


MAI-ek minute....tune aaj sirf apni ek hi book yahan se li thi..ye teri dusri book yahi reh gayi thi....


ye bol maine FORBIDDEN FOREST naam ki uski book apne pillow ke neeche se nikal usse de di....


SLUNDER-thanks...waise RAAZ,kya tu yahan comfortable nahi hai...agar koi problem hai toh tu humse share kar sakta hai,shayad hum teri koi help kar den....

MAI-CARAPACE se hai naa tu....

SLUNDER-haan,kyun???

MAI-ye book toh first PHASE ki hai nahi,fir tujhe ye kahan se mili..???

meri baat sun SLUNDER halka bechain ho gaya tha but khud ko control kar...


SLUNDER-ye toh mai apne ghar se lekar aaya tha..mujhe adventurous books padhna bohot pasand hai....

par tu ye sab kyun puch raha hai...????

MAI-tune share shabd bola,toh ye khayal aa gaya....


maine uski aankhon me dekh ye baat boli jisse sun wo ek baar firse bechain ho gaya tha....


ACHHUTA-arre ye kya baat lekar baith gaye dono..yaar RAAZ,tu batana,tujhe OMMIN WHIZZDER kya keh rahe the???

kya OPHILIA WHIZZ se hui teri behas ke liye tujhe koi punishment mili hai...

ya koi aur secret hai..yaar,ab hum PHASEMATES hain...tu apne secrets humse share kar sakta hai....

MAI-pehle tu ek baat bata
..ye SLUNDER kabhi tujhse thik se baat nahi karta,aur naahi tu sidhe mooh isse kuch kehta hai...

but fir bhi tum dono hamesha saath hi rehte ho...kyun???

ACCHUTA-arre,mai toh bas iske saath mazak karta hun,aur kuch nahi...

MAI- kya baat hai....aag aur paani bhi mix ho sakte hain, pehli baar dekh raha hun....


is baar bechain hone ki baari ACCHUTA ki thi...

but same feeling SLUNDER me bhi thi...


ACCHUTA-bhai,hum puch kya rahe hain,tu bol kya raha hai???

MAI-wo tune bhi share shabd bola naa,toh ye khayal aa gaya....

ACHHUTA-teri baatein bhi tere naam ki hi tarah hain,RAAZ....


haste hue ACCHUTA ne apni baat kahi but aaj pehli baar ACCHUTA ki hasi me nervousness ki milawat thi.....


MAI-RAAZ....is shabd ke maayne se ek aur baat zehen me uth rahi hai,but wo bhi ek parable jaisi hi hai,kaho toh bolun...????


meri baat sun dono ki aakhon me sawal aur chehron me bechaini dikhne lagi thi...


MAI-jo log apni TANHAIYON se nikal dusron ki KHAMOSHI me dakhal dete hain,aksar shor macha uththe hain unke RAAZ.....






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......





AAPKA APNA V.J......
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SABHI SAVENTS CLASS ME ATTENTIVELY DHYAN DE RAHE HAIN WAHIN RAAZ KA FOCUS NIL HAI.


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-17




PLANET- ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSEN'S HOSTEL




TUJHE JAANA HAI TOH JAA,PAR MUJHE APNI BEIZATTI KARANE KA KOI SHOUK NAHI HAI...


ye bol nikle the SLUNDER ke mooh se....


shaam ka waqt hai... subah class khatm hone ke baad jab saare SAVENTS wapas jaa rahe the aur RAAZ ko OMMIN WHIZZDER ne awaaz dekar roka tha,toh aisa hote hue ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ne dekha tha...

unka man tha RAAZ aur OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sunne ka,but wo dono hi ye jaante the ki ye koi normal aur mamuli istitution toh hai nahi....

jisme wo taaka jhaanki karenge aur pata nahi chalega...wahin RAAZ ke ATTITUDE ko dekh wo ye samajh gaye the ki OMMIN sir ne agar usse kuch kaha toh RAAZ unhe bhi suna dega...

aur isiliye unhe dar tha ki kahin OMMIN WHIZZDER aur baaki instructors ke ghusse ke radar me RAAZ ke saath saath wo bhi naa aajayen isiliye wo dono wahan se nikal liye the...

par jahan ek taraf SLUNDER kuch hi der me is baat ko bhul gaya tha wahin ACCHUTA ki khujli ka kida jaaga hua tha aur isiliye shaam ko thakan kam hote hi usne SLUNDER ko RAAZ ke paas chalne ko kaha jisse sun SLUNDER ne mana karte hue apni baat kahi thi..


ACHHUTA-haan beta..tu toh apne planet ka king hai naa jiski kabhi beizatti hui hi nahi hai...

abbe chal naa, RAAZ se puchte hain ki OMMIN WHIZZDER ne usse kyun roka tha...


ye bol usse ACCHUTA khinchte hue RAAZ ke room ki taraf le jaane laga...


SLUNDER-abbe saale, pehle apna haath mujhse door tak... pata nahi kahan kahan khujlate rehta hai....

kisi jaanwar se bhi zyada bacteria honge tere andar...


ACCHUTA-jaanwar kyun bol raha hai???sidhe sidhe apna naam nahi le sakta kya????

tu kisi jaanwar se kam thodi naa hai...aur saale,jitna bacteria mere pure body me nahi hoga naa,usse zyada toh tu apne daanth me liye ghumta hoga....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ka dimag kharab ho gaya...


SLUNDER-saale teri tarah nahi hun mai jo saal me ek baar brush karta hai..mai daily 2 baar brush karta hun...

mere mooh me aur daanton me bacteria ho hi nahi sakta...

ACCHUTA-ab bhai hamare daanth normal size ke hain...saal me ek baar bhi karen toh pure saaf ho jaate hain...

but bhai,tere daanton ke size ke hisaab se toh tujhe din me kamsekam 50 baar brush karna chahiye...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun garam ho SLUNDER usse dhakka de wapas apne room ki taraf mood gaya but....


ACCHUTA-arre bhai,tu toh naraz ho gaya....mai toh mazak kar raha tha..ab doston ke beech toh mazak chalta rehta hai naa...


SLUNDER ko rokte hue ACHHUTA ne apni baat kahi....


SLUNDER-tu kab mera dost ban gaya...tujhse dosti karne se acha mai zindagi bhar akela hi rahun...

ACCHUTA-abbe dosti bola maine,propose nahi kiya hai tujhe jo zindagi bhar nibhane ke liye bol raha hai....

aur ab tu bata,tune bhi toh mujhse ulti baat kahi,par mai toh naaraaz nahi hua..

phir RAAZ ki baat ko tu kyun itna dil par le raha hai...lena hi hai toh muh me le le....


SLUNDER-tu toh hai hi besharam..ek minute,kya bola tu...

saale,tera mooh hai ya chaddi...jab bhi khulta hai,lou***a hi nikalta hai....

ACHHUTA- kya baat hai!!!!baatein karna sikh gaya lounda....

lekin bhai, tu mere mooh ko chaddi bol raha hai jabki tu apne naam ke saath LU***D chipkaye ghum raha hai ....

SLUNDER-Tujhse baat hi karna bekar hai...mai chala...


ye bol SLUNDER wapas muda hi tha ki....


ACHHUTA-yaar tu fir serious ho gaya...chal thik hai bhai,tu jeeta mai haara,khush...

chal ab RAAZ ke room chalte hain..nahi toh yahin khade khade raat ho jaani hai...


ye bol halka push karte karte ACHHUTA SLUNDER ko liye RAAZ ke room ki taraf chal pada....



PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE



GOOD EVENING UNCLE....GOOD EVENING AUNTY.....


ye awaaz thi MAHI ki jo just ALFREEN ke ghar pahunchi thi....


FLORIN-good evening angel....kya baat hai!!!aaj toh hamari super energetic MAHI bhi thaki thaki lag rahi hai....

MAHI-aaj institution me humne apna first mode active karne ki koshish ki thi...ussiki wajah se thodi weakness lag rahi hai...

ALFREEN ne toh bataya hoga aapko....!!!!

HAAN,BATAYA THA...AUR USKI HAALAT BHI SAME HI HAI..JAB SE INSTITUTION SE WAPAS AAYI HAI,APNE ROOM ME HI HAI....


ye awaaz thi MARIA ki jo piche room se MAHI aur FLORIN ki tataf aayi thi...


MAHI-wo abhi tak so rahi hai???

MARIA-may be!!!2 ghante pehle jab mai uske room me gayi thi,tab toh wo soyi hui hi thi....

FLORIN-uth jaayegi.... MAHI,coffee piyogi....

MAHI-no uncle,thanks..abhi apne ABODE se kuch snacks khakar hi aa rahi ho...

MARIA-haan,toh coffee se kaun sa pet bhar jaayega...aur upar se yahan coffee chhodo,kuch bhi banane ke liye mehenat hi nahi lagti...

jo bhi chahiye,bas bol do,wo chiz turant saamne aajaati hai....

3 COFFEES.....


MARIA ke aisa kehte hi unke saamne teen coffee se bhare mug prakat hue jisse haste hue teeno ne utha liya...


MAHI-VRADAHAN KAROTI.....

ye wish grant ki spell hai jisse is planet ke har ghar me uccharit kiya gaya hai...

issiki wajah se jo bhi regular stuffs mango,haazir ho jaata hai....

FLORIN-arre waah..tumne toh spells yaad rakhne bhi shuru kar diye hain....

MAHI-par kya faayda uncle..maza toh tab aaye jab bole gaye spells kaam bhi karen....

warna toh wo sab sirf shabd hi hain.....

FLORIN-arre beta,din hi kitne hue hain tum logon ko yahan aaye...????

aur upar se aaj hi toh tumhare practical koshishen shuru hui hain...

time toh lagega hi naa....

MAHI-wo toh hai uncle...aur aap dekhna,sabse jaldi spells ko kaam me laana mai aur ALFREEN hi shuru karenge...

FLORIN-now that's my girl.....


FLORIN aur MARIA MAHI ki baat sun bohot khush hue the...kyunki MAHI ne sirf khudki nahi balki unki beti ki bhi baat ki thi...

isse unhe pata chal gaya tha ki MAHI dil se ALFREEN ko apna friend maanti hai....

jahan ye dono is baat ko lekar man hi man khush ho rahe the,wahin MAHI ke dimag me bhi kuch chal raha tha aur isiliye.....


MAHI-uncle,aunty,can i ask you guyz something???

MARIA-tumhe permission ki zaroorat kab se padh gayi..tum humse kuch bhi puch sakti ho....

MAHI-its about RAAZ.....


RAAZ ka naam sun FLORIN aur MARIA chownke but fir....


FLORIN-what about him????

MAHI-anything...i mean usse aap dono ne hi paala hai...toh uske baare me sabse zyada toh aap dono hi jaante honge...

MARIA- RAAZ bilkul apne naam ki hi tarah hai....ek RAAZ...usse samjha nahi jaa sakta....

agar quote me kahen toh he is a writing without a language....


MARIA ki baat sun FLORIN aur MAHI muskura diye....


MAHI-fir bhi..i mean,wahan aapke orphanage me,uske school me uska ravaiyya, behaviour, ATTITUDE kaisa tha????


KAISA HOGA???WAISA HI HOGA JAISA ABHI HAI...GHATIYA....JHAGDAALU.... THANKLESS UNGRATEFUL MORON....


ye awaaz thi ALFREEN ki jo abhi abhi apne room se nikal stairs se hote hue niche aayi thi aur aate hi usse MAHI ke puche gaye sawal sunayi diye jisse sun uske aankhon ke saamne RAAZ ka chehra aa gaya aur uske mooh se RAAZ ki taarif ke shabd nikle....

wahin RAAZ ke liye ALFREEN ki baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN chownke....


MARIA-ye sab kya keh rahi hai AL...????

ALFREEN-us MORON ki identify bata rahi hun....ek coffee....


ALFREEN ke coffee kehte hi uske saamne bhi ek coffee ka mug aa chuka tha...

par ALFREEN ki baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN samajh gaye the ki zaroor unki beti aur RAAZ ke beech kuch hua hai aur isiliye....


FLORIN-kuch hua hai kya tere aur RAAZ ke beech!!!!


FLORIN ki baat sun ALFREEN kuch bolne hi waali thi ki....


MAHI-kuch khaas nahi uncle..bas thodi behas ho gayi thi usse....

ALFREEN-thodi behes....!!!!usne hume kitna kuch suna diya aur tu thodi si behes bol rahi hai....

hume toh chhod,usne toh OPHILIA WHIZZ ki bhi respect nahi ki...


jahan MAHI baat ko dabana chahti thi,wahin ALFREEN ki RAAZ ke liye chidh ne usse kaafi kuch ugalwa diya tha jisse sun MARIA aur FLORIN dono hi firse chownke the...


FLORIN- OPHILIA WHIZZ toh tumhare is PHASE ki teacher hain naa...unse bhi RAAZ ki behas ho gayi....

ALFREEN-Behes nahi pops,usne WHIZZ ki insult ki...


fir ALFREEN ne MARIA aur FLORIN ko bataya ki institution me aaj kya kya hua tha jisse sun MARIA aur FLORIN aur zyada shocked ho gaye...

par RAAZ ne jo ALFREEN se kaha tha,usse sun MARIA ko RAAZ par ghussa aa gaya tha...


MARIA-how can he say such words to our daughter???i think we should complaint this matter to the authority....


MARIA ne FLORIN se ye baat kahi jo apne hi soch me goom the....


FLORIN-MAHI,ek baat batao....kya RAAZ khud chalkar tum dono ke paas aaya aur ye saari baatein kahin????

MAHI-nahi uncle,hum dono gaye the uske paas....

FLORIN-aur WHIZZ se uski jo behes hui,uski shuruat kisne ki thi....???

MAHI-shuruat jaisi koi baat thi hi nahi uncle... RAAZ books lekar nahi aaya tha,aur WHIZZ ne bas ussike baare me usse pucha tha but usne ulta jawab diya...

FLORIN-kya tha uska jawab????

MAHI-man nahi kiya...ye tha uska answer....


MAHI ki baat sun FLORIN muskura uthe aur....


FLORIN-jahan tak mujhe lagta hai,in sab me RAAZ ki puri galti nahi hai...


FLORIN ki baat sun chehre par hairani aur sawal liye teeno unki taraf dekhne lage jisse FLORIN ne bhi bhaamp liya aur.....


FLORIN-aag se agar haath jal jaaye toh isme aag ka kya kusoor....???


wo toh hota hi garam hai..bana hi jalane ke liye hai....ehtiyat haath ko baratni chahiye...usse aag ko chhuna hi nahi chahiye....


FLORIN ki baat ka matlab teeno ladies samajh chuke the...


ALFREEN-but pops,hum toh bas usse samjhane gaye the ki WHIZZ se aise baat nahi karni chahiye..


FLORIN-haath ne bhi toh aag ko bas chhua tha,usse maara nahi tha...but chhune bhar se hi jal gaya naa....

beta aag ki hi tarah har kisi ki apni fitrat hoti hai..aur wo fitrat uski haqiqat hoti hai..uski pehchaan hoti hai..

kyunki hum aise hain,ek certain tarike,trend ko follow kar chalte hain,toh iska ye matlab nahi ki har koi wahi kare...

aur RAAZ toh ek unique case hai...wo khudse kabhi kisi ko chhedta nahi, par agar koi usse chedde,toh wo chhodta nahi....

MAHI-ye baat toh thik hai uncle but humne usse chheda nahi tha bas normal baatein hi ki thi...

FLORIN-aisa tumhe lagta hai....but tumhari soch tumpar laagu hoti hai, RAAZ par nahi...jo tumhare liye sirf baatein hain,uske liye taunt hai..uski zindagi me koi kisi bhi tarah dakhal de, ye usse pasand nahi...

tumne usse wo bola jisse usse bura laga isiliye usne tumhe wo bola jisse tum dono ko bura laga....

wo shuru se hi aisa hai...wo kabhi kisi se khud nahi bhidta..apne kaam se kaam rakhta hai...jo dil aaye wo karta hai,but kisi dusre ka nuksaan nahi karta...

bas apne me rehta hai..but agar koi uske ravaiye par sawal kare,usse gyan de toh usse pasand nahi...

ALFREEN-but jo usne WHIZZ se kaha,kya wo bhi sahi tha???

FLORIN-bilkul nahi..but uski baat me ek point tha...

ALFREEN-point..kaisa point???

FLORIN-yahi ki usse yahan bulaya gaya hai,wo khud yahan nahi aaya hai....ab uska dil karega toh wo yahan padhega warna usse bound nahi kiya jaa sakta...

haan,agar class ke dauran usne kisi aur ko disturb kiya hota,toh wo completely galat hota but i am damn sure,ki usne aisa kuch nahi kiya hoga....

kyunki usse matlab hi nahi hai ki kaun kya kar raha hai???

aur rahi baat uski tumhare WHIZZ ke saath behaviour ki,to usse tum logon ka kya lena dena???

us matter ko apne WHIZZ par chhod do..ab ye unhe decide karna hai ki RAAZ ko kaise handle kiya jaaye...

it's none of your business,right!!!!


FLORIN ki baat sahi thi jispar naa toh MAHI aur naahi ALFREEN behes kar sakte the but unke andar ka haal alag tha...

jo insult RAAZ ne un dono ki thi,usse itni asaani se wo dono bhul nahi sakti thi aur isiliye...


MAHI'S/ALFREEN'S MIND-hum OPHILIA WHIZZ nahi hain jo usse itni asaani se jaane denge....

JANNAT hai ye jagah,but RAAZ,tere liye hum isse NARK bana denge.....



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ABBE ITNI DER SE HUM BHONKE JAA RAHE HAIN,KUCH TOH JAWAB DE DE BHAI....


ye shabd nikle the ACHHUTA ke mooh se...

reason....


shaam ka waqt hai..mai apne room me baitha hi hua tha ki tabhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER padhare...

mere subah bole baaton ki wajah se SLUNDER toh chup hi raha but ACCHUTA bhai sahab ko chain kahan....

wo mujhse puch raha tha ki OMMIN WHIZZDER ne mujhe kyun roka tha..????

but jab 2,3 baar puchne par bhi maine koi jawab nahi diya toh wo thoda jhunjla utha....

is baar bhi maine kuch nahi kaha par jawab ACCHUTA ko mila, SLUNDER se....


SLUNDER-hum nahi tu bhonk raha hai...aur agar usse jawab dena hota toh pehli baar me hi de deta....

jab wo interested nahi hai toh fir fizul me apna time waste kyun kar raha hai....???

chal,chalte hain yahan se.....


ye bol SLUNDER wapas muda hi tha ki....


MAI-ek minute....tune aaj sirf apni ek hi book yahan se li thi..ye teri dusri book yahi reh gayi thi....


ye bol maine FORBIDDEN FOREST naam ki uski book apne pillow ke neeche se nikal usse de di....


SLUNDER-thanks...waise RAAZ,kya tu yahan comfortable nahi hai...agar koi problem hai toh tu humse share kar sakta hai,shayad hum teri koi help kar den....

MAI-CARAPACE se hai naa tu....

SLUNDER-haan,kyun???

MAI-ye book toh first PHASE ki hai nahi,fir tujhe ye kahan se mili..???

meri baat sun SLUNDER halka bechain ho gaya tha but khud ko control kar...


SLUNDER-ye toh mai apne ghar se lekar aaya tha..mujhe adventurous books padhna bohot pasand hai....

par tu ye sab kyun puch raha hai...????

MAI-tune share shabd bola,toh ye khayal aa gaya....


maine uski aankhon me dekh ye baat boli jisse sun wo ek baar firse bechain ho gaya tha....


ACHHUTA-arre ye kya baat lekar baith gaye dono..yaar RAAZ,tu batana,tujhe OMMIN WHIZZDER kya keh rahe the???

kya OPHILIA WHIZZ se hui teri behas ke liye tujhe koi punishment mili hai...

ya koi aur secret hai..yaar,ab hum PHASEMATES hain...tu apne secrets humse share kar sakta hai....

MAI-pehle tu ek baat bata
..ye SLUNDER kabhi tujhse thik se baat nahi karta,aur naahi tu sidhe mooh isse kuch kehta hai...

but fir bhi tum dono hamesha saath hi rehte ho...kyun???

ACCHUTA-arre,mai toh bas iske saath mazak karta hun,aur kuch nahi...

MAI- kya baat hai....aag aur paani bhi mix ho sakte hain, pehli baar dekh raha hun....


is baar bechain hone ki baari ACCHUTA ki thi...

but same feeling SLUNDER me bhi thi...


ACCHUTA-bhai,hum puch kya rahe hain,tu bol kya raha hai???

MAI-wo tune bhi share shabd bola naa,toh ye khayal aa gaya....

ACHHUTA-teri baatein bhi tere naam ki hi tarah hain,RAAZ....


haste hue ACCHUTA ne apni baat kahi but aaj pehli baar ACCHUTA ki hasi me nervousness ki milawat thi.....


MAI-RAAZ....is shabd ke maayne se ek aur baat zehen me uth rahi hai,but wo bhi ek parable jaisi hi hai,kaho toh bolun...????


meri baat sun dono ki aakhon me sawal aur chehron me bechaini dikhne lagi thi...


MAI-jo log apni TANHAIYON se nikal dusron ki KHAMOSHI me dakhal dete hain,aksar shor macha uththe hain unke RAAZ.....






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......






AAPKA APNA V.J......
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Superb and completely finest update...

Bahot khub.....

Is kahani ka AB TAK ka sabse best thinking character florin he hai,
Wo samne wale bande ke saath agar thida sa bhi time nikal leta h to apni soch je hisab se best decision leta h....

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