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Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)
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Pehlea toa mafi chahungi itne din gayab hone ke liye..
Mea trip par gayi thi so koi review ni dea payi..
Par ab free hu toa fir se aagayi hu..
Story bohot he shandar chalrahi hea..
Khaskar rocky ka character ab or b jada interesting ho chala hea mahakal se milne ke baad..
Waa kya twist tha jaha ham samje anju se he story suru honi thi or usse pane mea he hurdles aayengea wahi aapne ye wala twist dal diya..
Ab rocky ko apne bareme janna hoga or anju ki raksha b karni hea par kisse??
Or wo kaise manu or priya ko manayega ye b dekhne mea maja aayega ..
Khas kar tab jab dono rocky ke powers ke karan uske taraf attract hongi par gussa hone ke karan kya karengi dekhne layak hoga..
Pallavi ke sath b kya karega rocky janna hea..
Us baat ko bhul mat jana..
Pallavi ka character b kafi acha hea .
Bohot kuch hogaya hea story mea last wale review se..
Overall u r rocking..
N
Keep rocking further also..
Mea trip par gayi thi so koi review ni dea payi..
Par ab free hu toa fir se aagayi hu..
Story bohot he shandar chalrahi hea..
Khaskar rocky ka character ab or b jada interesting ho chala hea mahakal se milne ke baad..
Waa kya twist tha jaha ham samje anju se he story suru honi thi or usse pane mea he hurdles aayengea wahi aapne ye wala twist dal diya..
Ab rocky ko apne bareme janna hoga or anju ki raksha b karni hea par kisse??
Or wo kaise manu or priya ko manayega ye b dekhne mea maja aayega ..
Khas kar tab jab dono rocky ke powers ke karan uske taraf attract hongi par gussa hone ke karan kya karengi dekhne layak hoga..
Pallavi ke sath b kya karega rocky janna hea..
Us baat ko bhul mat jana..
Pallavi ka character b kafi acha hea .
Bohot kuch hogaya hea story mea last wale review se..
Overall u r rocking..
N
Keep rocking further also..
Raj
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WAAH BHAI RACKY KI TIH LAGA DI AAP NE
KHAIR ACHCHHA HUA ANJU NE SAMJHA DIYA ROCKY KO NAHI TOH BECHARA SOCH SOCH KE PAGAL HO JATA
MAHAKAAL NE KHUD DARSHAN DE KAR USKI HIMMAT BADHAYI HAI
AAGE KE LIYE TAIYAR RAHANE KO KAHA HAI
AB BAHANO KO BHI MANANA HAI BAHUT HI INTERESTING SEEN HOGA WOH
DEKHATE HAIN AAGE KYA HOTA HAI
KHAIR ACHCHHA HUA ANJU NE SAMJHA DIYA ROCKY KO NAHI TOH BECHARA SOCH SOCH KE PAGAL HO JATA
MAHAKAAL NE KHUD DARSHAN DE KAR USKI HIMMAT BADHAYI HAI
AAGE KE LIYE TAIYAR RAHANE KO KAHA HAI
AB BAHANO KO BHI MANANA HAI BAHUT HI INTERESTING SEEN HOGA WOH
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Update - 36
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Or main gym complete karke fresh hokar breakfast par pohoch gaya,
or apni akarshan shakti ko shuru kar diya.
.
NEXT --
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Maine sabko morning wish kiya,
or jakar baith gaya mansi ke paas,
.
Mere baithte hi mansi uth kar saamne ja baithi, jahan pariya pehle se baithi hui thi,
usi ki bagal me baith gayi,
Un dono ne apna face neeche kiya hua tha,
vo meri taraf dekh bhi nahin rahin thin,
.
Mansi or priya ko mujhse door baitha dekhkar baki logon ko bada ashcharya hua,
or aakhir dad bol hi pade-
.
Dad - Rocky, ye kya chal raha hai,
tum teeno ke beech me, hmm??
.
Main - kuchh nahin dad,
ye dono mujhse thoda naraaz hain,
.
Mom - Are ye to hota hi rehta hai,
jahan pyaar hai,
vahan ladai bhi chalti rehti hai.
.
Dad - hmmm,
par jaldi hi inko mana lena,
.
Main - jee dad koshish to poori hai,
.
Phir main (masoom si shakal bana kar, dono hath jodkar, oopar ko muh karke) - baaki bhagwan maalik hai.
.
Ye sab dekhkar priya ki hasi chhoot gayi, or mansi use ghoorkar dekhne lagi,
jisse vo dobara muh bana kar baith gayi,
par dono ektak mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thin, (aakarshan power on jo thi) par dono control bohot kar rahi thin.
.
Abhi ham breakfast kar hi rahe the ki mera phone baja,
maine turant receive kiya.
.
Main (phone par)- Hello, gudiya
.
Sheetal - Hello bhai.. kaise hain aap?
.
Main - main eksdam jhakkas hun,
tum batao itni subha kaise yaad aa gayi.
.
Sheetal - i knew it,
mujhe pata tha ki aap bhool jayenge,
aaj aapko,
mujhe school drop karna hai.
.
Main - are nahin nahin main bhula nahin hun, chalo tayyar ho jaao,
Main aata hun tumhen pick karne.
.
Usne khushi se O.K. kehkar phine kqat diya,
Jab maine sar utha kar priya & mansi ko dekha to vo dono mujhme hi khoi hui thin,
main man hi man khush ho raha tha,
.
Maine unke aakhon ke aage apna hath lehraya, jisse vo dono hosh me aa gayin,
Or sharmakar dono ne apna chehra jhuka liya, or muskurane lagin,
.
Ab mujhe lag raha tha, ki bohot jaldi ye mujhe vapas mil hi jayengi..
Tabhi dad bole-
.
Dad - Rocky beta, jab tum sheetal ko apni behen maan hi chuke ho or itna pyaar bhi karte ho, to kal trip par usko bhi invite kar lo,
.
Main - jee dad, main yahi soch raha tha,
Or uske alava ek behen or bhi hai,
soch raha hun,
usko bhi sath le lun.
.
Dad (haste hue) - abe kitni behen banayega,
(Phir mom se) - archna, sun rahi ho na
Apni ladle ki kartooten,
batao hamne kuchh kiya hi nahin or pata nahin kahan se hamari auladen badhti ja rahi hain,
.
Dad ki is baat par breakfast karti hui mom ki hasi chhoot gayi or vo sharma bhi rahi thin,
.
Mom - Aji sab ke saamne kaisi baaten kar rahe hain, kam se kam apne javaan bete or beti ka to khayaal kijiye,
.
Dad - lo ji kar lo baat,
bhai abhi to ham javaan hain,
.
Bua (mom se)- haan bhabhi,
abhi to ek or chhota rocky aa sakta hai..
.
Sabhi zor - zor se hasne lage..
Or mom sharam se paani - paani ho gayin.
.
Phir main nikla apne garage ki taraf apni car nikalne.
Par phir kuchh naya karne ka socha or bike nikaalne laga.
Harley-Davidson
.
.
Mere bike par baitne ke baad maine dekha to priya & mansi mujhe hi dekh rahi thin, maine apne peechhe baitnne ka ishara kiya to do apna muh sikodkar
Apni car me baith gayin..
.
Maine bhi bike start ki or tezi se chalata hua, chal diya sheetal ke ghar ki taraf.
(Raste me maine apni "akarshan shakti" band kar li thi,)
Or phir sheetal ke ghar pohochkar usko phone karke bahar bulaya..
Or kuchh hi seconds me vo mujhe apna hath hilakar aati hui dikhi..
.
Sheetal (paas aate hue)- bhai aapko mummy bula rahi hain, ghar to chalo ek baar,
mummy aapko bohot dino se miss kar rahi hain.
.
Main - Gudiya main baad me ghar aaunga, abhi chal jaldi se,
phir mujhe mere college bhi jana hai,
.
Sheetal - pakka aayoge na baad me.
.
Main - haan meri maa, pakka aaunga.
.
.
Phir, Vo mere pechhe bike par baith gayi,
Or maine bike aage badha di.
.
Main (bike chalate hue) - gudiya kal ham sab log ek family trip par ja rahe hain,
or tum bhi aa rahi ho,
.
Sheetal - par bhai main kaise....
.
Main (beech me)- ye mera order hai..
.
Sheetal (ek saans chhodte hue)- O.K. bhai, abhi tak kabhi gayi nahin hun trip par,
to kuchh alag sa feel ho raha hai..
.
Or vo apni khushi zahir karte hue mujhe bike par hi hug karke baith gayi.
.
.
Or thodi hi der me ham pohoch gaye uske school ke gate par.
Jab vo utri to mujhe ek baar or hug kar liya,
or tezi se apne school ke andar ki or bhagne lagi, jisse uske beg se ek dairy gir gayi,
.
Maine usko awaaz bhi lagai, par vo pehle hi late ho rahi thi, isliye nahin ruki,
or chali gayi,
Maine bike se utarkar, dairy uthakar apne college bag me daal li,
Or chal diya apne college ki taraf.
.
Or bike par hi maine phone lagaya Raju ko..
.
Raju (phone par)- haan bhai,
main college pohoch chuka hun
Tu aaja jaldi.
.
Main - haan aa raha hun.
Bas 10 minute me..., Waise ye Bata ki teri pallavi se baat hui ki nahin?
.
Raju - haan bhai, meri baat hui usse,
Use maine sab kuchh bata diya tha,
Or wo bohot ro rahi thi,
Or aaj vo tujhse maafi maangne ke liye betaab hai, tera hi intzaar kar rahi hai.
.
Main - theek hai, main bas aata hun college.. or aaj pallavi ko uska sabak de hi deta hun..
.
Maine sabko morning wish kiya,
or jakar baith gaya mansi ke paas,
.
Mere baithte hi mansi uth kar saamne ja baithi, jahan pariya pehle se baithi hui thi,
usi ki bagal me baith gayi,
Un dono ne apna face neeche kiya hua tha,
vo meri taraf dekh bhi nahin rahin thin,
.
Mansi or priya ko mujhse door baitha dekhkar baki logon ko bada ashcharya hua,
or aakhir dad bol hi pade-
.
Dad - Rocky, ye kya chal raha hai,
tum teeno ke beech me, hmm??
.
Main - kuchh nahin dad,
ye dono mujhse thoda naraaz hain,
.
Mom - Are ye to hota hi rehta hai,
jahan pyaar hai,
vahan ladai bhi chalti rehti hai.
.
Dad - hmmm,
par jaldi hi inko mana lena,
.
Main - jee dad koshish to poori hai,
.
Phir main (masoom si shakal bana kar, dono hath jodkar, oopar ko muh karke) - baaki bhagwan maalik hai.
.
Ye sab dekhkar priya ki hasi chhoot gayi, or mansi use ghoorkar dekhne lagi,
jisse vo dobara muh bana kar baith gayi,
par dono ektak mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thin, (aakarshan power on jo thi) par dono control bohot kar rahi thin.
.
Abhi ham breakfast kar hi rahe the ki mera phone baja,
maine turant receive kiya.
.
Main (phone par)- Hello, gudiya
.
Sheetal - Hello bhai.. kaise hain aap?
.
Main - main eksdam jhakkas hun,
tum batao itni subha kaise yaad aa gayi.
.
Sheetal - i knew it,
mujhe pata tha ki aap bhool jayenge,
aaj aapko,
mujhe school drop karna hai.
.
Main - are nahin nahin main bhula nahin hun, chalo tayyar ho jaao,
Main aata hun tumhen pick karne.
.
Usne khushi se O.K. kehkar phine kqat diya,
Jab maine sar utha kar priya & mansi ko dekha to vo dono mujhme hi khoi hui thin,
main man hi man khush ho raha tha,
.
Maine unke aakhon ke aage apna hath lehraya, jisse vo dono hosh me aa gayin,
Or sharmakar dono ne apna chehra jhuka liya, or muskurane lagin,
.
Ab mujhe lag raha tha, ki bohot jaldi ye mujhe vapas mil hi jayengi..
Tabhi dad bole-
.
Dad - Rocky beta, jab tum sheetal ko apni behen maan hi chuke ho or itna pyaar bhi karte ho, to kal trip par usko bhi invite kar lo,
.
Main - jee dad, main yahi soch raha tha,
Or uske alava ek behen or bhi hai,
soch raha hun,
usko bhi sath le lun.
.
Dad (haste hue) - abe kitni behen banayega,
(Phir mom se) - archna, sun rahi ho na
Apni ladle ki kartooten,
batao hamne kuchh kiya hi nahin or pata nahin kahan se hamari auladen badhti ja rahi hain,
.
Dad ki is baat par breakfast karti hui mom ki hasi chhoot gayi or vo sharma bhi rahi thin,
.
Mom - Aji sab ke saamne kaisi baaten kar rahe hain, kam se kam apne javaan bete or beti ka to khayaal kijiye,
.
Dad - lo ji kar lo baat,
bhai abhi to ham javaan hain,
.
Bua (mom se)- haan bhabhi,
abhi to ek or chhota rocky aa sakta hai..
.
Sabhi zor - zor se hasne lage..
Or mom sharam se paani - paani ho gayin.
.
Phir main nikla apne garage ki taraf apni car nikalne.
Par phir kuchh naya karne ka socha or bike nikaalne laga.
Harley-Davidson
.
.
Mere bike par baitne ke baad maine dekha to priya & mansi mujhe hi dekh rahi thin, maine apne peechhe baitnne ka ishara kiya to do apna muh sikodkar
Apni car me baith gayin..
.
Maine bhi bike start ki or tezi se chalata hua, chal diya sheetal ke ghar ki taraf.
(Raste me maine apni "akarshan shakti" band kar li thi,)
Or phir sheetal ke ghar pohochkar usko phone karke bahar bulaya..
Or kuchh hi seconds me vo mujhe apna hath hilakar aati hui dikhi..
.
Sheetal (paas aate hue)- bhai aapko mummy bula rahi hain, ghar to chalo ek baar,
mummy aapko bohot dino se miss kar rahi hain.
.
Main - Gudiya main baad me ghar aaunga, abhi chal jaldi se,
phir mujhe mere college bhi jana hai,
.
Sheetal - pakka aayoge na baad me.
.
Main - haan meri maa, pakka aaunga.
.
.
Phir, Vo mere pechhe bike par baith gayi,
Or maine bike aage badha di.
.
Main (bike chalate hue) - gudiya kal ham sab log ek family trip par ja rahe hain,
or tum bhi aa rahi ho,
.
Sheetal - par bhai main kaise....
.
Main (beech me)- ye mera order hai..
.
Sheetal (ek saans chhodte hue)- O.K. bhai, abhi tak kabhi gayi nahin hun trip par,
to kuchh alag sa feel ho raha hai..
.
Or vo apni khushi zahir karte hue mujhe bike par hi hug karke baith gayi.
.
.
Or thodi hi der me ham pohoch gaye uske school ke gate par.
Jab vo utri to mujhe ek baar or hug kar liya,
or tezi se apne school ke andar ki or bhagne lagi, jisse uske beg se ek dairy gir gayi,
.
Maine usko awaaz bhi lagai, par vo pehle hi late ho rahi thi, isliye nahin ruki,
or chali gayi,
Maine bike se utarkar, dairy uthakar apne college bag me daal li,
Or chal diya apne college ki taraf.
.
Or bike par hi maine phone lagaya Raju ko..
.
Raju (phone par)- haan bhai,
main college pohoch chuka hun
Tu aaja jaldi.
.
Main - haan aa raha hun.
Bas 10 minute me..., Waise ye Bata ki teri pallavi se baat hui ki nahin?
.
Raju - haan bhai, meri baat hui usse,
Use maine sab kuchh bata diya tha,
Or wo bohot ro rahi thi,
Or aaj vo tujhse maafi maangne ke liye betaab hai, tera hi intzaar kar rahi hai.
.
Main - theek hai, main bas aata hun college.. or aaj pallavi ko uska sabak de hi deta hun..
To.. Be... Continued
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Rohan008
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Bht Hi umda update h bhai
Zyada kuch to nhi likh paaun
Kal exam jo h but kal last exam h
Bas isme or pass ho jaun qki lagta h is baar ek mein to fail hun
Bht pyara update tha
Dad Di mom se chedkhani sabse pyaari thi
Keep rocking bhai
Zyada kuch to nhi likh paaun
Kal exam jo h but kal last exam h
Bas isme or pass ho jaun qki lagta h is baar ek mein to fail hun
Bht pyara update tha
Dad Di mom se chedkhani sabse pyaari thi
Keep rocking bhai
