Fantasy Antariksh Ka Badshah Shan

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[Naughtyrishabh]

Update 17

Agle din subah sab ik sath jage or fresh ho ke dihan me baith gai
Aj me apni nai power ko or control karne me lag gaya or serpent ne b mere jism me leo ke tarah jagah bana le
Ab white and black urja dono stable the gurudev ne b koi sampark nhi kiya is liye dihan se utne ke baad hum sab is nai desh me gumne lage sara din aj sirf matargashti karte rahe raat ko dinner b bahir kiya us ke baad hotel wapis lot ayye
Jab lote to gurudev ne mujh se sampark kiya or me dihan me chala gaya
Shan…pranam gurudev
Guru g…vijay bawa
Shan…bataye gurudev mera agla parao kaha hai
Guru g…ye me b nhi janta
Un ke ye baat sun ke me heran reh gaya q k mujhe is jawab le umeed nhi the
Shan…kya matlab gurudev
Guru g…beta is greh pe kai aise raaz hai jin ko abbi thak suljaya nhi gaya or kai aise hai jin ka in ke wehm o guma b nhi ho ga
Shan…gurudev zara vistar me bata de ta ke me b samjh sako
Guru g…beta kai hazar warsho pehle yaha pe ik bht shakti shali mahrani howa karti the jis ne apne praja ko ik aise jaga or ik aise zindagi deni chahe jaha na mrityu jo na gham na dukh ne jhoot na koi galat kam
Is ke liye us mahrani ne apni kai jadugar or yudhao ke zindagi b gawa de likin ik aise jaga ka nirman kiya jaha pe wo sab kuch tha jo us ne chaha tha or apni praja ke sath rato taat gaib ho gai aj thak koi usse khoj nhi paya ke wo sab kaha gai
Me b gurudev ke khani bari ghoor se sun raha tha mere maan me b ashanka peda ho gai
Shan…to us ne wo jaga kaise bana le or gai kaise
Guru g…me wahi batane ja raha ho beta jaise ke me ne kaha us ne ik aise jaga ka nirman kiya jo hawa me tairta hai or us ke sari praja b usse ke sath wahi rehti hai wo kisi ik jaga pe teherti he nhi bas issi wayumandal me gumti rehti hai or wo b adrishya issi liye aj thak koi usse khoj nhi paya
Shan…agar aisa hai to me usse kaise khojo ga gurudev
Guru g…yahi pe me b attac gaya tha iss liye us ka pata kiya
Shan…to bataye na
Guru g…beta darti ke vishal maha sagar me ik jaga pe us jaga pe jane ke chabi hai agar wo tum me dond le to waha jana phr mushkil nhi hai
Shan…par guru g me usse waha kaise dondo ga maha sagar vishal hai zindagi b kam phar jai ge usse dondte dondte or hamre pass itna same nhi hai
Guru g…janta ho beta me ne us ke liye ilaka daikh le hai ke wo kis jaga par hai maha sagar me is se zyada me kuch pata nhi kar paya
Shan…thek hai guru g mujhe wo jaga bata de baki me koshish karta ho
Phr guru g ne mere sar me ik roshni chor se jis se mujhe wo jaga dikh gai
Guru g…time kal he nikalna ho ga beta
Shan…samjh gaya gurudev agya de
Is ke baad me dihan se uth gaya or apni ranion ke sath so gaya
Agle din uth ke sab tayar ho gai nashta kiya or portal kol ke nikla gai portal me ne ik beach me kola tha jo guru g ke dwara drishye me dika tha
Waha ponch kar tamal ko me ne ik youth ke liye kaha or tamal ne usse waqt youth ka nirman kiya
Me or mere ranian us me char gai or nikal gai apne agle parao ko dondne me
Us jagha thak ponchne me hame dopeher ho gai
Sona…jaan hum maha sagar me kya kar rahe hai
Phr me ne sab ko mere or guru g ke darmiyan jo wartalab howa tha wo bata diya
Jisse sun ke un ko b ascharya howa likin kaha kuch nhi
Shan…lo devion hum ponch gai us jaga par jaha ka guru g ne bataya tha
Sital…mtlb yaha kahi sagar ke gehrai me wo jaga hai
Shan…haan lagta to aisa he hai likin me guru g se pochna bhol gaya ke waha hume dondna kya hai
Husna…wo baad me pehle yaha kya dondna hai or kaise wo sochye
Shan…Tamal
Tabhi tamal prakht howa
Tamal…hukum malik
Shan…tamal tum diya or riya ko sath mil kar is sagar ke gehrai ko chan maro or koi aise chez dondo jo yaha nhi hone chahye
Tamal…jo hukam malik
Ye kehte he wo adrishya ho gaya
Sonam…ap ne srf un theno ko q baij diya mere wali jin kob baij daite
Shan…wo ab tumara hai or waise us ka naam kya hai
Sonam…me ne pocha he nhi us se
Shan…chalo usse bolao or pocho us se
Sonam…jinni mere samne ao
Tabhi wo sonam ke samne prakht ho gai
Sonam…tumara naam kya hai
Jinni…mera naam miya hai
Sonam…hhmmmm miya acha miya kya tum je suna jo inno ne kaha
Miya…g malkin
Sonam…to tum jao or dondo us chez ko
Miya…jo agya malkin
Ye kehte sath he wo b adrishya ho gai
Shan…ab hamare pass intizar karne ke ilawa koi rah nhi hai
Swarna…to q na guru g se poche ke hume waha karna kya hai
Shan…haan ye sahi hai
Is ke baad hum sab dihan me baith gai
Guru g…kaho beta kaise yaad kiya
Shan…gurudev ap ne ye to bataya nhi ke mujhe waha kya dondna hai
Mere is baat pe wo shash o panjh me mobtila ho gai ke kya jawab de
Shan…kya baat hai gurudev
Guru g…beta waha pe tume talwar lene jana hai
Shan…talwar likin gurudev mere pass to pehle se he talwar hai
Guru g…janta ho beta likin jo tumare pass hai wo dev lok ke hai yani pure white urja
Shan…to phr???
Guru g…likin jo talwar tum waha se parapt karo ge wo shetan lok yani pure black urja hai
Shan…gurudev me ab jo b shakti pa raha ho wo khali q hai
Guru g…beta tum me zarorat se zyada white urja hai jis ke waja se tum kafi dayalu or naram dil ho or yahi tumari sab se bare kamzori hai
Shan…kya ye galat hao gurudev agar me galat nhi ho to issi waja se ap ne mujhe apna sishya banaya tha
Guru g…bilkul likin tab ke paristiti or ab ke paristiti me kafi antar hai is liye ab tumare pass serpent hai to ye talwar apnane me time koi mushkil nhi ho ge
Shan…likin ap ye jawab dene me itna sankoch q kar rahe the mtlb kuch or b hai jo pareshani ka bais hai
Guru g…haan beta aisa he hai baat darasal ye hai ke ye talwar pana itna asan nhi hai q k wo mahrani ab b jewet hai or wo tume itne asani se wo hasil nhi karne de ge
Shan…gurudev har chez pana asan nhi hota likin koshish to karni hai na
Guru g…beta is safar me tumari or tumari patnion ke jaan b ja sakti hai q k wo mahrani utni he taqatwar hai jitna ke tum is waqt ho
Shan…to is me itna gabrane ke kya baat hai
Guru g…beta lagta hai ab mujhe khul kar tume sab batana ho ga warna tumare prashan khatam nhi ho ge to suno
Waha ja ke tum apne serpent ke shakti ka upyog nhi kar sakte agar kiya to wo talwar serpent ke sare urja kench le ga
Tumare andar ik aise urja hai jo abhi thak tum se or mujh se chupe howe hai or usse kaise khola jai is ka haal wohi pe hai ab ue kaise urja hai me b kuchn hi janta likin kholne ka sankeet wahi se mujhe mila tha
Or sab se zarori baat jo pareshani ka wishai hai
Tum sab me se kisi ik ke jaan ja sakti hai waha
Gurudev ke akhri baat sun kar mere chehre pe kinchao a gaya q k pancho meri zindagi ka ahem satoon the agar unne kuch b ho gaya to me khud nhi janta me kya kar guzru ga
Guru g…bas yahi meri pareshani ka sabab hai jis waja se me tume bata nhi raha tha likin ye sirf ik possibility hai reality nhi aisa ho b sakta hai or nhi b
Shan…me aisa kuch nhi hone do ga gurudev warna me kya kar guzru ga ye me b nhi janta
Or issi ke sath mere dihan toot gaya dihan se bahir anne ke baad bahir ka mosam daikha to me b heran ho gaya
Likin zayada heran me mosam se nhi bal ke apni pancho ranion ko daikh ke howa jo ship ke gird hawa me goom rahi the or is waqt un ke ankhain or baal sunehri the
Ship par bahir ke tufan ka koi asar nhi phar raha tha jaise ik shield ship ko protect kar rahi ho
Mere daikhte he daikhte mosam b shant ho gaya or mere patnian b wapis normal hone lage
Jab wo normal howe to me ne herat se pocha
Shan…ye sab kya tha
Sital…ye hame ap se pochna chahye ke ap ko kya howa tha
Shan…mujhe kya hona hai
Husna…ap ke waja se mosam bigarne laga tha
Sona…haan aisa lag raha thaa p kafi gusse me hai
Sona ke baats un ke mujhe yaad a gaya ke gurudev ke baat sun kar mujhe gussa ayya tha
Shaid usse waja se meri kundli jagrit howe or mosam b badal gaya
Sonam…us ke baad he pata nhi q hamare jisam khud ba khud harkat me a gai or ye sab howa
Shan…chalo ab sab thek hai tora rest kar lo
Me ne abbi ye kaha he tha ke Tamal ke sath sath baki theno b waha prakhat ho gai
Shan…bolo tamal kuch mila
Tamal…g malik ik aise chez hai jis ka waha hone ke koi waja nhi hai
Shan…kya hai wo???
Tamal…malik ik flat jagha hai or us ke upar 6 pillar hai or us ke bilkul bich me ik white pathar hai hum ne sare jaga chan mari likin us ke ilawa or koi aise chez nhi mili
Shan…lagta hai yahi hamari chabi hai waha jane ke
Sital…ab kya irada hai
Shan…abbi yahi toraa ram kar lete hai kal daikhe ge ke kya karna hai
Us ke baad hum sab apne kamre me ja ke so gai

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[Naughtyrishabh]

Update 18

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[Prince2000]

Update 21

Nana g…beta kya howa tume
Sona…boliye na ye ap ko itna pasina q a raha hai
Likin mujh se kuch bola he nhij a raha tha akhir nana g ne mujhe janjhor diya to me hosh me ayya or sab khali nazro se daikhne laga
Nana g…beta kya howa tume
Shan…nana g me hamesha ik sapna daikhta ho jis me ik orat or ik mard ik aise jaga pare hote hai jaha har taraf andera hota hai bas un dono ko ik roshni ke hisar ya sheild keh le gaira hota hai or un dono ne bilkul aise kapre pehne hote hai
Shan ne tasveer me space wale kapre daikhe jin suits me wo black hole me chale gai the
Shan…nana g mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise maa or pita g zinda hai
Nana g…kyaaaaa
Sital…magar wo srf ik sapna b to ho sakta hai
Shan…haan ho sakta tha agar ik do bar dikai daita likin musalsal dikne wala sapna nhi ho sakta
Nana g…kya meri bachi
Bas itna kehte he wo rone lagte hai
Tab thak mamu b a jate hai or un ke peche naina or komal b or oper se rabi b
Mamo jaldi se nana g ke pass atte hai
Mama g…kya howa pita g ap q ro rahe hai
Nana g…tum ne suna beta tere behen zinda hai
Mamo ye sun kar shocked ho jate hai baki b
Mama g…pita g ye ap kya keh rahe hai renu ab nhi rahi
Shan phr sab ko wahi batata hai jo us ne nana g ko bataya
Mama g….par beta ye ik ittefaq b ho sakta hai
Shan…ho sakta hai mamo likin me ab is baat ke the tahk ja ke rahu ga q k ab mamla ab mere maa or pita ka hai
Nana g…haa beta mujhe mere renu chahye
Shan…ap chinta na kare nana g me unne ab dond ke rahu ga
Phr sab fresh hone chale jate hai me b fresh ho ke neche atta ho sab mil kar dinner karte hai
Likin mera mind ab kahe or tha
Mama g…haa ik baat to me batana bhool gaya ke RJ companies ke sath deal ho gai hai ab hamare company b bare companies me shumar ho ge
Rabi…really papa ye to khushi ke baat hai
Nana g b ab thak khud ko sambhal chuke the
Nana g…is se zyada khushi ke baat me batao kya
Mama g…kya pita g
Nana g…me ne rabi ka rishta tai kar diya hai
Nana g ke baat pe naina komal or mamo shocked ho jate hai jab ke rabi baghle jankne lagta hai
Mama g…par kis se pita g
Nana g…fikar mat kar wo rabi ko b pasand hai bhol rabi pasand hai na nhi to cancel b ho sakta hai
Rabi…nhi nhi dada g mujhe bht pasand hai
Us ke baat pe hum sab hansne lagte hai
Mama g…par hai khon
Nana g…victor ke beti mariya
Mama g…what???
Nana g…haan or me ne rishte ke baat kar le hai aj kal me wo jawab de de ge
Mama g kuch sochne lagte hai jab ke naina or komal apne bhai ke liye kafi khush hote hai
WAHI SHAN KE DADA G KE TARAF
Dada g hall me bethe the tabhi sikander waha atta hai
Dada g…haan sikander bolo
Sikander…malik wo larka wapis a gaya hai abbi mujhe mere admion se pata chala
Dada g…us ke past ke bare me kuch pata chala
Sikander…nhi malik
Dada g…ab kaha hai
Likin sikander jawab nhi deta
Dada g…kya howa me ne kuch pocha hai tum se
Sikander…g wo aj kal ap ke dushman raghukant ke ghar me reh raha hai
Dada g…kya baqwas kar rahe ho
Dada g ko gusse me daikh ke sikander apna sar neche kar leta hai
Sikander…ye sach hai malik
Dada g…ab sara masla us ke past se haal ho sakta hai
Tabhi waha survi or priya atte hai or dada g ke gale lagti hai
Survi…kaise hai dada g
Dada g…me thek ho bacho jao fresh ho jao
Priya…ok dada g
Dada g…waise wo biswa aj kal college a raha hai kya
Survi…nhi dada g us din ke baad us se hamare mulakat nhi howe
Priya…kya howa dada g kairyat to hai
Dada g…haan beta kairyat hai itne din se ayya nhi is liye poch liya
Survi…wo dada g un ka number to hai hamare pas likin is din ke baad na hum ne un se contect he nhi kiya
Dada g…thek hai beta ap jao fresh ho jao
Survi or priya chali gai waha se
Dada g(maan me)…akhir wo waha kaise reh raha hai or kis liye agar wo hamara khoon hai to usse yaha rehna chahye na ke udar likin jo us ne kaha wo yaqeen karne laik nhi hai ab pata nhi kya sach hai or kya jhoot
Dada g sar pakar kar baithe the unne kuch samjh nhi a raha tha kya sach kya jhoot
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Agle din shan or us ke ranian uth kar dihan me baith gai shan apne antar maan me gurudev ko yaad karta hai to gurudev prakht ho jate hai
Shan…pranam gurudev
Guru g…vijat bawa putra batao kaise yaad kiya
Shan…gurudev ap to sab jante hai
Guru g…putra me tumare mous e sunna chahta ho
Shan…gurudev jo me sapne daikhta ho or kal jo tasveer me ne daikhe kya me jo soch raha ho wo sach hai
Shan ke baat par gurudev ke honto pe ik vijay muskan a gai
Guru g…haan putra jo tum soch rahe ho wo sach hai or wo kewal sapna nhi hai balke tumare mata pita ka sandesh hai tumare liye ke tume he un ko bachana hai
Shan ye sun kar kushi se polle nhi samma raha tha
Shan…kripya gurudev rasta bataye ke me unne kaise waha se bachao
Guru g…putra ye filhal sambav nhi hai ke tum unne bacha sako par asambhav b nhi is ke liye pehle tume us bare khatre ko khatam karna ho ga us ke bad he tum apne mata pita ko waha se azad kar sakte ho
Shan…likin gurudev abbi q nhi or mere mata pita abbi thak waha zinda kaise hai
Guru g…ye sab tumari waja se sambhav howa hai black hole me jate waqt tumare mata pita ko tumare chinta the magar niyati ko kuch or he manjoor tha jaise he tumare maa ka shareer black hole ko touch howa tum un ke khookh se bahir nikal kar swarna desh ponch gai likin nikalne se pehle tumare jisam se ik roshni nikli jis ne tumare mata pita ko apne hisar me le liya wo kawach tumara sab se mazboot kawach hai jisse koi b nhi baid sakta tumare mata pita ke umar usse waqt me rukh gai jis waqt us kawach ne unne apne hisar me liya tha or wo kawach thab thak un ko bachaye rakhe ga jab thak ya to tum khud un thak na ponch pao ya phr tumare mrityu na ho jai
Gurudev ke batao se me thora relax ho gaya or khush b
Shan…bht bht danewad gurudev mujhe mere sawalo ke jawb mil gai hai ab
Issi ke sath gurudev gaib ho gai or me b dihan se uth gaya

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