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Usse ke sath mere ankhain band ho gai or me b is damake ke chapet me a gaya q k me hawa me tha behosh hote sath he me neche girne laga jis se me us ke chapet me a gaya
Waha har taraf dua pail gaya jab dua hata to waha mera naam o nishan nhi raha or mere raniao ke ankhon me ansoo a gai
Sital…nhi ye nhi ho sakta me un ke shakti mehsoos nhi kar pa rahe
Sab gutno ke bal bait gai
KD…hahahahaha mere dushman me ne kaha tha na me tume sab se pehle khatam karo ga hahahaha daikh lo me ne apna wada pora kiya tumara naam o nishan he hamesha ke liye mita diya
Ab agge
KD ke ye baat sun ke sab ranion ke ankhon se angare nikalne lag gai
Sital chalang laga kar apne dragon roop me a gai or KD par aag barsane lage
Sona ne hawa tatwa se KD ko bawander me kaid kiya or sital ne usse bawander me agg pailana shuru kar diya
Anu ne b us me aag shamil karna shuru kar diya
Sonam ne b us bawander ko or hawa de
Husna ne us bawander me pather milane shuru kar diye
Is me us ka sath swarna de rahe the
In sab ke shakti jab mil gai to KD b zyada dair tik na saka usse b takleef hone lage
Q k kali shaktion ko roshni sehen nhi hote or inno ne to waha jahanam ke agg jala de the
KD zyada dair isse jail nhi paya or apni pore urja release kar de
Jis se ik damake se wo bawander bikar gaya
Sital ye daik ke us par japte or ik mukha mar kar zameen me paink diya jis se wo zameen me dans gaya
In se b sab ka gussa shant nhi howa or jis jaga wo dansa tha waha se apne apne tatwa se hamla shuru kar diya
Kafi dair thak hamla karne ke bad jab sab shant howe to waha ik gehra khada ban chuka tha
KD nazar nhi a raha tha likin tabhi zameen hilne lage or ik damke se KD us khade se bahir ayya
Chale daikhte hai shan ke sath kya howa
Jaise he us blast ke chapet me shan ayya us ke andar badlaw anne lage jo then urja ko milana guru g ne shuru kiya tha us me ik dam se tezi a gai or theno urja ka triger wo blast ban gaya jis se rainbow urja ka banna taiz ho gaya us blast ke waja se wo us battle se door ja gira or gurudev ke locket ne usse ik surakshah kawach me band kar diya tha ke KD ko pata na chale isl iye sital ko shan ke urja mehsoos nhi ho rahe the
Takreban 15 min me wo theno urja rainbow urja me convert ho gai ye wahi waqt tha jab KD blast kar ke us kadde se bahir ayya
Abbi shan ke body ko tora or time lagna tha q k is waqt wo behosh tha or wo urja apni jaga banna rahe the
KD…bas bht howa tum logo ka khel
Wo abbi itna he bola tha ke asman se sital sidha us ke upar ayye or isse sath le ke dobara zimeen me dhans diya or apne aag us par paink de
Baki ranion ne b ankhain band ke or un ke ankhain or bal sunahri jo gai
KD jab bahir nikala to sital ke sath wo pancho b mil gai kabhi ik marte kabhi dosri
Ab KD ko gussa anne laga or sab se pehle sital jo ke is waqt dragon the us ko garden se pakar kar zameen pe de marra
Q k sab se zyada taqleef isse sital ke aag de rahe the
Us ke baad wo baki pancho ke taraf palta or husna ke taraf apna hath kiya or is ke hath se ik black laser nikle jo sidha ja ke husna ko lage or wo b lahra kar ja ke sital ke pass gire
Ab reh gai char ab bari ayye sonam ke to wo us ke taraf bharra hamle us par ab b ho rahe the likin wo ab ik ikk ar ke sab ko maar raha tha
Sonam ke pas ponch kar us ke ankhain chamke or anginat gunse sonam ko pare wo b niche gir gai
Yahe hal is ne anu ka b kiya akhir me swarna or sona reh gai
KD ne dono ko gale se pakra or hawa me le ja ke tezi se zameen pe de mara
KD…ab tum sab ka akhri samme a gaya hai
Or isse ke sath shan ke rainbow urja active ho gai or us ke ankhain khol gai sath me wo kawach b toot gai wo pora planet hilne lag gaya
Jaise he kawach toota sare ranion ke ankhain khol gai or un ke gaow barne lage q k un ka maan mujh se jora howa tha
KD ko b urja ka abhas ho gaya tabhi us jaga se door ik damkha howa or ik roshni zameen se asman thak chali gai
Us roshni me shan khara ho gaya
Likin is waqt shan bilkul muktalif lag raha tha us ke baal silver color ke ho gai the or ankain b silver ho gai the
Wo KD ke taraf daikhta hai to itne door se b usse wo saaf saaf daikh raha tha abbi us ne ik kadam he liya tha or wo sidha KD ke samne ponch gaya KD b daikh nhi paya ke wo waha se yaha kaise ponch gaya
Shan ke ankhon me is waqt sirf khamoshi the
Ranian shan ko daikh ke khushi se rone lagi
Shan ne ik kick KD ko mare likin KD b ab tayar tha is liye is ne usse daikh liya or kick doghe kar ke usse mokha marna chaha jisse shan ne b doghe kar diya
Shuru howe dono ke antim larai
Ab dono ke larai barabar ke lag rahi the na shan KD ko mar pa raha tha na KD shan ko
Dono ke attacks ik dosre pe kafi tezz ho gai the likin dono he isse doghe kar rahe the
Ye daikh ke shan ne peche jump liya or apni ranio ke pass ponch gaya
Or apni urja apni ranio me transfer karne laga or apne thoughts b jis se us ke rania samjh gai ke unne karna kya hai
KD ye daikh ke samjh gaya ke shan kya karne wala hai
Wo teze se shan pe hamla kar daita hai jo sedha us ke chest pe tha shan ye sahan kar leta hai likin urja transfer nhi rokta
KD ab lagatar shan pe hamla karne lag jata hai likin shan kuch block kar leta hai or kuch bardasht kar leta hai
Tabhi urja transfer khatam ho jata hai or KD jaise he agla hamla karta hai shan usse kick marta hai or wo door ja girta hai
Shan apni dono swords nikal leta hai KD b ye daikh ke apne urja se do swords bana leta hai
Or lag jate hai ik dosre pe hamla tab thak rania KD ke peche ponch jate hai jisse KD nhi daikh pata q k wo shan se larne me masroof tha
Sare rania mil kar ik sath KD pe hamla kar daite hai KD ko hamle ka pata chal jata hai wo chah kar b usse block nhi kar sakta tha
Tabhi us ne wo move kela jo shan chahta tha us ne black hole apne peche khol diya
Jis se ranio ka sara attack black hole me chala jata hai
Guru g…bata abbbbb
Shan…Serpent
Tabhi serpent bahir atta hai or black hole ko nigal jata hai
Shan…bas ab bht howa me iss black hole ke waja se ab thak roka howa tha mujhe yahe chahye tha tum se
Isse ke sath wo dono swords ko jatka daita hai or KD peche ko ur jata hai
Jaha rania phir se apna attack tayar kar chuki the usse peche ko urte daikh kar wo apna attack is par karte hai jo sare rania ke pore urja hote hai
Or yaha shan dono swords le ke us pe hamla karta hai
KD dono attacks ke beach pass jata hai sab se pehle rania ka attack usse lagta hai or agge se shan apni dono swords ko x shape me kar ke agge se block kar daita hai
Jis se attack ke taqat or bhar jati hai or peche se KD jalne lagta hai
Isse ke sath shan b apni sare urja ko khol daita hai or shan ke sare urja us ke swords me a jati hai
KD is do tarfa hamle ko sehen ne kar pata jaal kar rakh me tabdeel ho jata hai
KD ke khatam ho jane ke baad shan or us ke ranio ke ankhain band hone lagte hai q k sab ne apni pore urja laga de the KD ko marne me is liye us ke khatam hote sath he sab behosh ho jate hai
Tabhi shan ka locket chamakne lagta hai or shan or us ke rania hawa me urne lagte hai
Tabhi portal khul jata hai or sab earth par ponch jate hai ik veran jaga par jaha koi nhi hota
Guru g…tamal salaka
Tabhi waha tamal or salaka a jate hai
Guru g…inne in ke ghar le jao
Ye keh ke tamal salaka in ko le ke in ke ghar le gai
Agle subah sab ke ankh khuli to ab be sab ka sar bhari tha
Ye to hona he tha jab sare urja laga de the ab kuch arse aisa he hona tha
Kuch din wo ghar pe he rahe ta ke in ke urja wapis a jai
Kuch din baad jab sab ke urja complete ho gai to shan ne ab black hole par qaboo karne laga jo zyada mushkil nhi tha us rainbow urja ke waja se
Us ke baad shan sab ko le ke ik registan me gaya or waha black hole khol diya
Us ke khulte he shan us me kinchta chala gaya jab ke us ne ranio ko waha se door rakha tha
Black hole me jate he use ik roshni dikhe wo urr ke us ke pass ponch gaya andar daikhte he us ke ankhon me ansoo a gai
Q k andar is ke parents jay or renu har chez se bekhabar ik lambi nend me sowe howe the ab un ko utane ka waqt a gaya
Shan ne us roshni pe hath rakha or apne parents ko us white gole me black hole se utta ke bahir le ayya
Bahir atte sath he wo sheild hat gai or shan ne black hole band kar diya
Shan ke rania us ke pass a gai sona ne shan ke ansoo ponche
Sona…ab to ap ke mata pita wapis a gai hai ab q roo rahe hai
Shan…nhi jaan ye to khushi ke ansoo hai
Sital…likin ye abbi hosh me q nhi ayye
Shan…lambi nend me hai likin mani kantak ke mani se ye hosh me a jai ge
Sonam…to chale inne ghar le chalte hai waha inne hosh me laye ga
Shan…tum thek keh rahe ho jaan chalo chale
Shan ne victor ke ghar ka portal khol diya apne kamre ka or unne waha le ayya
Waha ponchte he unne bistar par leta diya or khud ranio ke sath bahir a gaya
Jaha victor uncle aunty or maria bethe howe the
Victor…are ao beta a gai kaisa raha safar
Shan…bht he barya mujhe mere parents mil gai ab or kya chahye
Victor…mil gai kya matlab wo to….
Shan…nhi wo zinda the aj unne le ayya ho andar kamre me hai
Victor…kyyyaaaaa
Or bhag kar kamre me chala gaya jaha se me nikla tha jo us ne daikha usse apni ankhon pe wishwas nhi howa
Rose or maria b a gai wo mere parents ko nhi jante the likin pics daikhe the unne b jatka laga
Tori dair baas wo wapis loot ayye
Victor…beta ye possible kaise howa ye dono to black hole me pans gai the
Shan…g uncle ye sach hai or usse black hole me mere dwara banye gai shield me ye lambe nend me chale gai the ab inne hosh me lane ka same a gaya hai likin is se pehle me nana g ko yaha le ao us ke baad inne hosh me lao ga
Anu…hum b chale
Shan…nhi me bas unne le ke atta ho tab thak yahe raho
Ye keh ke me ne portal khol diya or nana g ke ghar ponch gaya
Nana g mujhe daikhte khush ho gai
Nana g…ao mere sher kaise ho
Shan…barya ho nana g baki sab kaha hai
Nana g…apne kamro me hai
Me ne ja ke sab ke darwaze bajana shuru kar diya or sab ko utha kar 5 min diye tayar hone ko
10 min me sab tayar ho ke a gai or portal ke zariye unne victor uncle ke banglo le ayya
Nana g…beta yaha q le ke ayye ho
Shan…surprize nana g
Ye keh ke me unne us kamre ke taraf le gaya jaha maa or pita g the
Peche peche mama g b a gai jaise he nana g ne maa ko daikha un ke ankho me ansoo ka silaab a gaya
Wo wahi larkara gai likin me ne jaldi se unne sambal liya
Shan…me ne wada pora kiya nana g ap ke beti or apni maa ko le ayya
Nana g(rote howe)…likin ye aise q lete howe hai
Shan…nana g maa abbi behosh hai q k ye tab se he aise hai abbi laya ho inne tori dair me me inne thek kar do ga
Ye keh ke me maa ke pass gaya or in ke sar par hath rakh diya jis se ik hare roshni un ke body me pail gai or un ke jism me harkat shuru ho gai
Ye daikh ke me pita g ke pass a gaya or un ke sath b yahi kiya tori dair me dono ne ahista ahista ankhain khol de
Dono he shuniya me daikhne lage jaise samjh nhi a raha ho kya ho raha hai
Nana g…renu beta
Nana g ne rote howe kaha
Un ke awaz sun ke maa ne un ke taraf daikha un ko jaise yaqeen na a raha tha ke un ke papa un ke samne kare hai
Jab yaqeen a gaya to baag ke un ke bahoo me sama gai or dharain maar maar kar rone lage
Nana g b rone lage jab un ka rona kam howa to mama g b keh itte
Mama g…guriya
Phr wahi family drama akhir me maa papa ke gale lag kar rone lage
Renu…hum zinda kaise hai hum to black hole me chale gai the
Phr maa ne apne pait pe hath pera
Renu…mera beta kaha hai jay mera beta kaha gaya
Victor…renu shant ho jao tum dono ko wapis daikh ke me bht khush ho
Papa victor uncle ke gale lag gai
Jay…yaar tu to bora ho gaya hai
Victor…wo to hona he tha 22 saal baad tum dono ko daikh raha ho
Renu…what 22 saal matlab or mera biswa kaha hai
Me or mere rania ik side ho ke ye sab daikh rahe the
Jay…or mere parents kidar hai kya wo nhi ayye
Victor…chalo bahir chalte hai tume sab batata ho ke kya howa
Phr sab haal me baith gai or victor uncle ne un ke sath kya howa me kaise yaha ayya sab bata diya
Sab sun ke maa mere pass ayye or mujhe apne gale laga liya
Aj zindagi me pehle bhar maa ka pyar mehsoos kiya tha me ne
Renu…mera biswa kitna bhara ho gaya hai
Or mujhe chumne lagi phr papa ne b mujhe gale lagaya
Phr me ne un ko un ke bahowo se milane lag gaya
Phr sab shant howe
Jay…ik baat samjh me nhi ayye me or renu abbi jawan kase hai
Shan…papa ap dono black hole me the or waha koi time nhi hota jo us ke andar hota hai un ke liye tume rukh jata hai ap ke sath b yahi howa ap us black hole me 22 sal se behosh the
Jay…or mere mummy papa
Shan…wo b yahi hai me ne un ko apni sachai batye the likin unno ne mera wishwas nhi kiya sirf nana g ne mera vishwas kiya
Nana g…kaise na karta tujh me mere renu muhe dikhe
Jay…waise he dosre greh ka kya scene hai
Phr me ne un ko waha ka sara bata diya unne b kafi jatke lahe ye sun ke ke anu ke ilawa sab dusre greh se hai
IN SHORT
Maa pita g phr dada g se b mile sara family drama howa likin ab un ka yaha rehna thek nhi tha q k is dunia ke liye ab wo zinda nhi hai is liye me unne apne sath apne rajya le ke ayya sirf nana g he hamare sath yaha ayye baki sab wahi reh gai agar ye baat media me pata chal jati ke renu or jay zinda hai to wo un ka jena haram kar dete
Me ne apni company mama g ko hand over kar de ab wo b mere dada g ke takhar ke hai or me apne parents ke sath apne rajya me khushi se apni zindagi guzarne laga

The End

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Sorry friends is story ko me waise nhi likh paya jaise likna chahye tha or bech me kai jaga gape b ayye jis ke waja se wo support na mil saka jo veer singh ko mila tha next time ya to apni story start karo ga ya phr koi incomplete story mgr kuch arse ke liye me likh nhi pao ga
Thank u so much to all the readers q k ap ke support ke bina me ye story me complete na kar pata
Ap ke comments he ik writer ko likhne ke taqat daite hai once again thank you so much for all the support we will meet again on this site with an other story till then takecare
Bahut mazedar story thi bhai
Maza aa gaya..........................
 

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Hello friends
I m a writer which complete incompleted stories many of my friends know me here i m starting this story on request of my many readers itw ill start from next month so plz support me like u previsly did
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Yar ye jo story tum ne recommend ki hai mil ni rhi ap thread ya pdf dedo
 
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