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Incest Akhir kyu? From hatred to love (with pics) (Completed)

Kya hero ne jo bhi kiya wo sahi kiya? (Voting aap sabhi 2-3 update pdhne k baad karna)

  • Hn sahi kiya

    Votes: 338 67.3%
  • Nahi, apni behan k sath aisa nhi krna tha

    Votes: 56 11.2%
  • Rahul nirdosh hai

    Votes: 89 17.7%
  • Neha nirdosh hai

    Votes: 19 3.8%

  • Total voters
    502

Werewolf

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Update - 91

Ab tak...

D'Souza ke speed dial karte hi dusre side maujood logo ko samajh me aa gaya ki kuch gadbad hai aur wo forun dhadalle se andar aaye aur bandook taan ke rahul aur baaki sabhi ko gher liya.

D'Souza : mene kaha tha na ladki! Tum mere adde par ho aur mere ek ishaare se tum sab maut ke ghaat utroge...hahahaha!!!


Ab aage...

"Shit!!! Mujhe nahi laga tha, dusri side aur bhi log honge. Total 15 ho gaye hai ab toh. This is a huge problem. Kya karu?? Kuch toh karna hi padega, warna sab ke sab maare jaenge" rahul ne apne aas paas khade gundo ko dekhte hue apne mann me socha.

Sthiti inn sabhi ke liye kahi se bhi sahi nahi lag rahi thi. Rahul aur team tight spot me the.

Tina : ohh no!!! Ab kya kare? Miss natasha! Do you have any idea??

Natasha : Sadly! I don't have any idea. I can shoot that bastard D'Souza and kill him on the spot. but... But... The moment I'll shoot they will start shooting too. I don't know what to do.

Natasha ke chehre par tension saaf jhalak aa rahi thi. Baat sahi bhi toh thi. Nastasha jese hi fire karti, D'Souza ke aadmi chup thodi baithate, wo bhi shoot karna chaalu kar dete aur aise me kisi ki bhi jaan jaa sakti thi.

Natasha bolt and action sniper lii hui thi, jiske chalte wo lagataar shoot nahi kar sakti thi. Isliye wo koi bhi kadam lene se ghabra rahi thi.

Tina : par hume kuch toh karna hoga na??

Natasha : shittt!!!

D'Souza : apni apni guns neeche fekk do, tum sab bhi jaante ho ki tumlog sirf 7 log ho aur mere paas 15 aadmi hai. Yadi goliya chali toh kiska kya haal hona hai ye sabhi ko pata hi hai

Rahul : bhale hi tumhare paas aadmi zyada ho par mera nishaana toh tum par hi rahega toh tum jaante ho ki bhale hi hum marr jae par hamare saath saath tum bhi maroge.

D'Souza rahul ki baat sunn kar usse dekhne laga aur fir muskuraate hue usne ek ishaara kiya toh 15 aadmi D'Souza ke saamne shield ban kar khade ho gaye aur rahul aur unki team ki taraf aim karne lage.

D'Souza : hahahaha! Ab kya bolte ho? Ab toh mein dikhunga hi nahi tumhe fir kya karoge?

Rahul ne dheere se apni shirt ke andar chhupe flashbang ko nikala jo uski shirt ke peeche andar side tha. usne emergency ke liye chippaaya hua tha. Usne apne haath peeche le jaake sabhi ko flashbang dikhaaya aur haatho se ishaara karne laga.

Uska ishaara saaf tha. Wo 3 tak ginte hi flashbang fekega aur uske baad sabhi ko shoot karna hai. Ye rahul ki chaal thi darasal.

Yadi saare aadmi unhe gher ke khade hote toh ye tareeqa kaam nahi karta. Par ab baat alag thi. Iss baar sabhi aadmi ek hi jagah par khade hue the saamne. Rahul ne jaan boojh kar D'Souza ko uski safety ko lekar daraaya taaki wo aadmiyo ko apne paas bula le.

Rahul ne flashbang vivek se liya tha emergency ke time ke liye. Rahul ne ek jhalak natasha ke Direction me dekha aur fir wapas se D'Souza ko dekhne laga.

Uske haath ke ishaaro se sabhi samajh gaye the ki wo kya karne waala hai. Bus dikkat thi toh cover fire karne ki. Jese hi flashbang fekega usse cover fire ki zaroorat padegi.

Ye boht hi risky kaam tha. Bomb fekte hi gunde uss par poori goliya barsaenge aur isliye rahul jhijak raha tha.

Vivek varun peter aur james hoshiyaar the isliye wo samajh gaye ki kya karna hai. Natasha bhi taiyaar thi. Natasha ne sniper ek gunde ki upar focus kii aur uske baad apni pistol bhi nikaal li. Uska plan ye tha ki wo ek ko sniper se niptaegi aur jese hi sniper ka shot lagega uske baad wo pistol se dusre bande ko niptaegi.

Toh wo ek baar me 2 bande niptaegi. Vivek varun peter aur james bhi cover dene waale the, ab wo kitne bande maar paaenge ye unke upar tha.

Par abhi bhi rahul ko risk tha boht aur rahul ko confidence nahi tha zyaada. Gehri saas lete hue usne flashbang fekne ke liye taiyaar kiya. 3 tak usne apne haath peeche le jaakar ishaara kiya aur 3 ginte hi usne flashbang saamne ki or fek diya.

Flashbang girte hi ek tezz flash chamka, rahul aur baaki sabhi ne aankhein band kar lii thi par gunde prepared nahi the aur kayi gundo ki aankhein chaundhiya gayi.

Par jab rahul ne flashbang feka tha ussi waqt kayi gundo ne fire kar diya raha. Rahul ne side me khadi monica ko lapak ke pakda aur roll karte hue side me chala gaya.

Mauke ka fayda uthaate hue varun aur baaki sabhi ne firing kii, ab kyuki D'Souza samet uske gundo ko kuch dikh hi nahi raha tha toh sabki khopdi udd gayi.

Samay na gawaate hue. Varun aur baaki sabhi ne goliyo kii barsaat kardi. Kareeb 15 me se 11 toh udhar hi dherr ho gaye. Ab sirf 4 bache hue the.

Rahul monica ke upar roll karne ke baad leta hua tha aur dheere se wo utha, usne monica ko dekha aur dheere se smile paas kii.

Monica ne bhi usse dekha aur raahat lekar halki sii smile paas kii par achaanak hi monica ko apne gale par kuch garam garam mehsoos hua.

Jab usne dekha toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Rahul ke kandhe se khoon behkar monica ke gale me gir raha tha. Boond boond karke bhayanak laal rang ka khoon Tapak raha tha.

Pal bhar ke liye toh jese monica sann hi reh gayi aur uski saas hi atak gayi aur fir wo ekdum se chillayi, "rahullllll"
Monica ke aasu pal bhar me hi nikal aaye aur wo kaapne lagi.

Rahul ke chehre par dard bhare bhaav the par fir bhi wo muskura raha tha, wo nahi chaah raha tha ki monica panic kar jaaye.

Rahul : sssshhhh!!! I'm okay!! Don't worry!!

Monica (rote hue) : noooooooo... You're not okaayyyyy!!! Tumhe goli lagi hai... Why??? Why did you saved me??

Rahul : aap bhi na dii? Abhi thodi derr pehle hi mene...aarrgghh... Mene kaha tha ki I love you!! Aap toh meri pyaari monica dii ho... Aapko kese kuch hone de sakta hu?

Monica (rote hue) : noooooooo... Why????

Rahul apne haath par zorr na dete hue uth ke side me baith jaata hai. Uski baat sunn ke monica aur zorr se rone lagti hai.

Yaha varun ne 2 aur ko shoot kar diya raha aur ab keval 2 gunde aur D'Souza hi bacha hua tha.

Rahul : mein theek hu don't worry!

Monica apni shirt phaadne hi waali thi rahul ke kandhe par baandhne ke liye ki itne me vivek apni shirt ki ek sleeve phaad ke monica ko de deta hai, jisse monica rahul ke kandhe par baandh deti hai.

Natasha udhar se ek bande ko headshot deti hai toh dusra banda ekdum se fire kar deta hai aur goli jaake urvashi ko jaangh me lag jaati hai.

Vivek mauka dekh ke dusre bande ko bhi maar deta hai. Dard se karaahti hui urvashi ko utha ke rahul ke bagal me vivek baithaata hai aur apni shirt ki dusri sleeve bhi wo faad ke monica ko de deta hai jiss se khoon band ho sake. Urvashi ke aasu nikle jaa rahe the.

Monica : Urvashi!! Be strong! Tunhe aur rahul ko kuch nahi hoga. Mein kuch nahi hone dungi tumlogo ko.

Varun aim lagae D'Souza ke paas pohuch raha tha. Bechaara D'Souza kaapte hue darr ke maare peeche ki or jaane laga. Usse pata tha ab usse koi nahi bacha sakta, usne dekha ki side me jo deal karne aaya tha uske saath wo bhi mara dala hai. Ye dekh ke uski pent hi geeli ho gayi. Idhar mauka dekh ke tina aur natasha bhi aa gayi.

Tina : usko mein maarungi...

Rahul : dii! Jaiye... Aapke mom dad ka hatyaara aapke saamne maujood hai.

Monica aur tina dono hi D'Souza ke saamne khadi thi gun se aim laga kar.

Monica : mene kaha tha na... Aaj tu idhar hi marega.

D'Souza diwaar se satt ke khada tha aur usne ekdum se peeche lage hue ek switch ko dabaaya aur zorr zorr se hassne laga.

D'Souza : hahahaha! Saalo... Mere saath saath tum bhi maroge...

Uske itna kehte hi monica uske seene pe ek fire karti hai aur tina bhi fire karti hai. Saari ki saari revolver ki goliyaa monica aur tina uske seene me bhoon deti hai. Khoon se latpat D'Souza apni akhiri saas leta hai aur gir padta hai.

Monica aur tina dono ke hi haath kaap rahe the aur gun unke haatho se chhoth kar neeche gir jaati hai. Ye pehli baar tha jab unhone kisi ki jaan lii aur wo bhi dono ke parents ke hatyaare ki. Dono rote hue ek dusre ke gale lag gayi.

Tina (rote hue) : we did it... We dit it.

Varun : mission accomplished!

Vivek : par isne aakhiri me wo switch kiska dabaaya?

Varun : wahi toh samajh nahi aa raha

Monica rahul aur urvashi ke paas jaake unki chot dekhne lagti hai ki tabhi nastasha ko kuch abhaas hota hai,

Natasha : hey!! Did you hear that?

Varun : hear what?

Natasha : try to hear...

Sabhi shaant hoke sunane lagte hai toh sabhi ko kuch awaaz sunayi dene lagti hai aur awaaz dheere dheere aisa lag raha tha maano nazdeek aa rahi ho.

Sabhi abhi soch rahe the ki natasha ki aankhein fel jaati hai aur uske rongte khade ho jaate hai.

Natasha : it's... it's water... RUN!!!

Uski chetaavni sunn jese sabhi hosh me aaye aur exit ki taraf sabhi bhaagne lage. Urvashi ko vivek ne apni peeth pe sawaar kar liya aur rahul khud hi daud raha tha.

D'Souza ne marne se pehle jo switch press kiya tha wo emergency ke liye tha. Jese kabhi uspe hamla ho jaaye toh bach ke kese bhaga jaaye aur hamlawaro ko kese maara jaaye usne iske liye ye system banwaaya tha.

Switch press karte hi ek hidden door khul gaya jo ki thoda neeche side tha. Ab kyuki sabhi underground the, paani teevr gati se labalab bhar ke kisi tsunami ki tarah aane laga. D'Souza ne toh jese neeche poori colony bana ke rakhi thi. Corridor se leke kamre bhi the kuch. Underground space kaafi badi thi isliye paani ekdum se nahi aaya. Jese hi awaaz ki pehchaan natasha ko hui usse samajh me aa gaya tha ki kya hua hai.

Rahul ne dekha ki paiso se bhara suitcase toh wahi pada hua hai toh wo uthaane ke liye rahul wapas aa gaya aur suitcase uthaaya hi tha ki usne dekha paani ki ek boht hi bhayanak lehar tezzi se uski taraf aa rahi hai. Ye dekh ke maano uske rongte hi khade ho gaye. Usne suitcase uthaaya aur apni full speed me exit ki or bhaagne laga.

Idhar exit ki taraf pohuchte hi ek bada sa gate tha bilkul ek lift ki tarah. Par thoda kam chauda tha.

Varun aur peter james milke usse khulne lage aur kareeb 20 - 25 second ke baad itni mashaqqat karne ke baad wo gate khula. Par ye kya? Gate retractable tha?

Matlab? Matlab ye ki jese hi usse koi chorrega gate dubaara se band ho jaega. Varun aur peter james gate ko pakde pakde hi bahar ki or shift ho gaye aur baaki sabhi ko forun baahar aane ke liye kaha.

Sabhi ek ek karke gate ke baahar nikle toh monica ek dum se sehem gayi,

Monica : Rahul kaha hai?? Kaha hai rahul???

Uske sawaal puchne par sabhi ek dusre ko dekhne lage aur sabhi ki bauhe sikud gayi.
Jab sab yaha hai toh rahul kaha hai?

Monica ka dil zorr zorr se dhadak raha tha. Wo dubaara andar jaane ke liye hui toh vivek ne usse rok liya,

Vivek : miss! Don't worry! Rahul sir aate hi honge...

Idhar rahul full speed me bhaag raha tha aur jese hi usne palat ke dekha toh paani itni tezzi se aaya aur seedha uspe zorr se pada aur lehar usse zorr se paani ke teevr bahaav ke saath lekar chal padi.

Idhar monica ka haal behaal ho raha tha aur tabhi Achanak awaaz aur tezz badh gayi aur ekdum se ek mod se itna saara paani ek bhayanak lehar ke saath aaya, jisse dekh ke sabke rongte khade ho gaye. Sab ne dekha ki rahul ussi lehar me maujood hai aur wo kuch nahi kar paa raha,

Varun : ohhh shitttt...

Ek tezz bahaav aaya aur seedha exit gate par lehar ka ek zorrdaar thapeda pada. Itni tezz force se varun aur peter james ke haatho se grip chooth gayi aur darwaaza band ho gaya.

Monica ye dekh ekdum seham gayi aur zorr se cheekhte hue chillaayi,

Monica : kya kar rahe ho tumlog???? Darwaza kholoooooo jaldiiiiii.... Kholooo darwaazaaaa rahul andar haiiiii... Kholooooo

Aur wo zorr zorr se siskate hue rone lagti hai.

Idhar varun aur baaki sabhi athak prayaas kar rahe the par dusri side paani itna tha ki jese hi wo thoda sa gate kholte, pani ka pressure unhe gate ki grip chorrne par majboor kar deta. Koi fayda nahi.

Monica zorr zorr se darwaaza peetne lagi aur pagalo ki tarah rahul ki awaaz lagaa ke chillaane lagi. Wo varun aur vivek ki chaathi par apne ghuse barsaati aur darwaaza kholne ke liye kehti. Par kya hi ho sakta tha?

Urvashi rote rote hi behosh ho gayi. Jab usne rahul ko pani ki lehar me behte dekha aur darwaaza band hote dekha usse tezz jhatka laga aur wo behosh ho gayi. Natasha apne nichle honth ko dabaye hue khud ko calm karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Usse pata tha ki yadi rahul ne wo flashbang nahi feka hota aur wo goli khud pe nahi lii hoti toh shayad aaj sab marrte yaha par. Pata nahi kyu par uski aankho me achanak aasu aa gaye.

Usne monica ko dekha aur usse calm karne ki koshish karne lagi par koi fayda nahi.

Idhar rahul pani me behte hue exit ke gate ke paas jab pohucha toh uss area me paani tezzi se bharne laga aur rahul exit se hatke kahi aur direction me jaane laga. Uska haath me abhi bhi suitcase tha. Ye toh acchi baat thi rahul ko terrna aata tha par ab uska kya use?

Lehar aisi thi ki kuch kiya hi nahi jaa sakta tha. Uapr se rahul ke kandhe par lagi chot. Ab uska dard aur bhi badh chuka tha. Usse darr tha ki wo pass out na ho jaaye kahi.

Paani ab lagbhag ceiling ko touch kar raha tha aur itne force ke saath beh raha tha ki rahul sirf baha jaa raha tha aur ab uske senses kam hote jaa rahe the.

"Is this the end?? Kya yahi meri maut likhi hai??" Khud se rahul ne sawal kiya mann me.

Uska muh ab paani ke andar tha aur wo saas ko roke hue tha,

"Richu...tanisha... Vanshu dii... Anshu... Monica dii... Chhipkali... khushi...preeti... saurabh... urvashi... Nikita...dad...mom... Gudiya... Looks like...
This is the end for me"
Behte behte usne apni aankhein band rakhi, chehre par ek halki muskaan aur edkum se jese andhera sa chhaane laga uske saamne.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!

Dhanyawad!!
 
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Don't worry, Sept tak time hey as per Lone-Wolf's remark sometime back.
Eise bhi is se achha ek naya story ayega jarur Lone-Wolf ke fingers se.
Good update as expected always. Get well soon bro.
Awesome update..
Very nice update
? Hmm
New story to aayega hi but aese lgta h is story connect ho gye h ...
That's why expections were to high
I thought of 400-500 updates !


Sorry ! ?
Awesome update bhai ji achchha laga padkar
Dekhate hai aage kya hota hai
waiting for the next update eagerly.
Superb update
Mast update hai bhaii ji.
Deesuja ki chaal me sab fans gai.
Ab toh Ram hi jaan bachaye beda paar lagye.
Superb......
Nice update bro
Rahul & party charo taraf se ghir gayi dekhte h kaise bachte h akhir monica n rahul ko bol hi dia ki m tumse pyar kerti hu aur rahul n bhi accept ker bahot achchi baat h tow kul milaker filha 6 ya 7 ho gayi h dekhte story end hote hote aur kitni judti h
Shaandaar update dene k liye shukriya aapka
Nice update
Nice update
Jaisa soche the wahi hua
Keep posting
Ye to hona hi tha
Awesome update. Monica ne aaj Rahul se apni muhabbat ka izhar kar hi diya.
Yah Urvashi itni udas kiun hai lagta hai yah bhi pyar ke chakar me pad gai hai.
D'Souza ke 6 admi mare ge lekin abhi bhi 15 baki hai dekhte hai Rahul kaise apni team ko aur khud ko bachata hai.
Awesome updates
Mast update bhai to akhirkaar Monica bol hii dali ab to Rahul ka turn hai kaise bachate hai inlogo ko dekhte hain agle update me
Shandar bro cary on
Bohot hi sandaar update bhai
Awesome update
Ek no update bhai ??
Nice update keep updating the contents
Nice update Bhai
Zabardast update
Nice one
Now Natasha will do her job
Such mein deep connection ban gaya hey. Rahul ka character will be one of the best in the history of Xforum really.
Nice update...
Bada hi dumdar scene tha maza agaya..
Monica ne is bar bazi mar hi Li hahaha.
Ab age bada hi action scene ane wala hai i hope ke kisi ko koi nuksan na ho.
Waiting for next!
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aage ka intjaar
nice update, waiting for next update.
nice and superb update....
interesting
Waiting for update.....
Awesome update bhai thanks
Waiting for next update please jaldi se dedo update
Waiting for next update bhai
awosome stoey bhai bhai bahan ka pyaar vo bhi is kadar mind blowing bhai suparb updates he story ka

par ...bhai story ke updates bhohothi short ya chotti hoti he


But.....your story is my faverate category main se ek hei mana ye story pichle 3 dino se lagatar pard raha hui muje
story me fear love dikh raha hei

Ab bus next upadates ka intjar he bhai

Bast of luck for your future bhai
Bhai ignore such things. Kisi ki baat ko dil pe nahi lena chahiye. Aap apni story pe focus karo hum pehle bhi aap ke sath aur age bhi rahe ge.
Next update kab tak aye ga.
ok bhai bast of luck

kya koi new kuch socha he aapne is story ke bad kuch or ho payega kya ??
wating new update bhaii
Fantastic update
Waiting for next update bro
Maine chapete laa deni towde kaan thaille veer ji tussi navi story likhoge te jarur likhoge e saadi dil di pukar hai.
Love you brother Werewolf
waiting for the Next update
:congrats::congrats::applause::applause::applause::applause::claps:

Pahle to congress for new story

Ab fir koyi y kahe itna late to bta du ek time dusra main problem eyes problem thi so ...

Story ka pilot super h main role or story m suspens or action b kamaal k the emotions ko b bahut ache dikhaya

Super duper hit & Awesome & Mast & Very nice updates Bro




Waiting
Bhai apni story pe kab update do ge??
Agla update kab aayega bhai
Eagerly waiting
Bhai aap ki kitani story pad chuka hu aaye har story ek se bad ke ek
Waiting for next update
Behad ही shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

To aakhirkaar khul hi gya raaz....
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar
Gajab story hai bas jaldi jaldi update dete raho bhai
Waiting for next update bro
Waiting for the next update
Waiting for the update which is due now.
Bhai thoda lambi update dena
Waiting for next update
Aaj ayega kya update? Eagerly waiting............
Koi baat nahi, please do not mind. Just mera expectation kuch jyaada hi hey aapse, kyun ki aap ki story itni mast hey kya bataun.
Bus bhai palak pawne bichye wait ker rhy h ??
Intazar rahega bhai update ka
Update has been posted guys!!
 
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Update - 91

Ab tak...

D'Souza ke speed dial karte hi dusre side maujood logo ko samajh me aa gaya ki kuch gadbad hai aur wo forun dhadalle se andar aaye aur bandook taan ke rahul aur baaki sabhi ko gher liya.

D'Souza : mene kaha tha na ladki! Tum mere adde par ho aur mere ek ishaare se tum sab maut ke ghaat utroge...hahahaha!!!


Ab aage...

"Shit!!! Mujhe nahi laga tha, dusri side aur bhi log honge. Total 15 ho gaye hai ab toh. This is a huge problem. Kya karu?? Kuch toh karna hi padega, warna sab ke sab maare jaenge" rahul ne apne aas paas khade gundo ko dekhte hue apne mann me socha.

Sthiti inn sabhi ke liye kahi se bhi sahi nahi lag rahi thi. Rahul aur team tight spot me the.

Tina : ohh no!!! Ab kya kare? Miss natasha! Do you have any idea??

Natasha : Sadly! I don't have any idea. I can shoot that bastard D'Souza and kill him on the spot. but... But... The moment I'll shoot they will start shooting too. I don't know what to do.

Natasha ke chehre par tension saaf jhalak aa rahi thi. Baat sahi bhi toh thi. Nastasha jese hi fire karti, D'Souza ke aadmi chup thodi baithate, wo bhi shoot karna chaalu kar dete aur aise me kisi ki bhi jaan jaa sakti thi.

Natasha bolt and action sniper lii hui thi, jiske chalte wo lagataar shoot nahi kar sakti thi. Isliye wo koi bhi kadam lene se ghabra rahi thi.

Tina : par hume kuch toh karna hoga na??

Natasha : shittt!!!

D'Souza : apni apni guns neeche fekk do, tum sab bhi jaante ho ki tumlog sirf 7 log ho aur mere paas 15 aadmi hai. Yadi goliya chali toh kiska kya haal hona hai ye sabhi ko pata hi hai

Rahul : bhale hi tumhare paas aadmi zyada ho par mera nishaana toh tum par hi rahega toh tum jaante ho ki bhale hi hum marr jae par hamare saath saath tum bhi maroge.

D'Souza rahul ki baat sunn kar usse dekhne laga aur fir muskuraate hue usne ek ishaara kiya toh 15 aadmi D'Souza ke saamne shield ban kar khade ho gaye aur rahul aur unki team ki taraf aim karne lage.

D'Souza : hahahaha! Ab kya bolte ho? Ab toh mein dikhunga hi nahi tumhe fir kya karoge?

Rahul ne dheere se apni shirt ke andar chhupe flashbang ko nikala jo uski shirt ke peeche andar side tha. usne emergency ke liye chippaaya hua tha. Usne apne haath peeche le jaake sabhi ko flashbang dikhaaya aur haatho se ishaara karne laga.

Uska ishaara saaf tha. Wo 3 tak ginte hi flashbang fekega aur uske baad sabhi ko shoot karna hai. Ye rahul ki chaal thi darasal.

Yadi saare aadmi unhe gher ke khade hote toh ye tareeqa kaam nahi karta. Par ab baat alag thi. Iss baar sabhi aadmi ek hi jagah par khade hue the saamne. Rahul ne jaan boojh kar D'Souza ko uski safety ko lekar daraaya taaki wo aadmiyo ko apne paas bula le.

Rahul ne flashbang vivek se liya tha emergency ke time ke liye. Rahul ne ek jhalak natasha ke Direction me dekha aur fir wapas se D'Souza ko dekhne laga.

Uske haath ke ishaaro se sabhi samajh gaye the ki wo kya karne waala hai. Bus dikkat thi toh cover fire karne ki. Jese hi flashbang fekega usse cover fire ki zaroorat padegi.

Ye boht hi risky kaam tha. Bomb fekte hi gunde uss par poori goliya barsaenge aur isliye rahul jhijak raha tha.

Vivek varun peter aur james hoshiyaar the isliye wo samajh gaye ki kya karna hai. Natasha bhi taiyaar thi. Natasha ne sniper ek gunde ki upar focus kii aur uske baad apni pistol bhi nikaal li. Uska plan ye tha ki wo ek ko sniper se niptaegi aur jese hi sniper ka shot lagega uske baad wo pistol se dusre bande ko niptaegi.

Toh wo ek baar me 2 bande niptaegi. Vivek varun peter aur james bhi cover dene waale the, ab wo kitne bande maar paaenge ye unke upar tha.

Par abhi bhi rahul ko risk tha boht aur rahul ko confidence nahi tha zyaada. Gehri saas lete hue usne flashbang fekne ke liye taiyaar kiya. 3 tak usne apne haath peeche le jaakar ishaara kiya aur 3 ginte hi usne flashbang saamne ki or fek diya.

Flashbang girte hi ek tezz flash chamka, rahul aur baaki sabhi ne aankhein band kar lii thi par gunde prepared nahi the aur kayi gundo ki aankhein chaundhiya gayi.

Par jab rahul ne flashbang feka tha ussi waqt kayi gundo ne fire kar diya raha. Rahul ne side me khadi monica ko lapak ke pakda aur roll karte hue side me chala gaya.

Mauke ka fayda uthaate hue varun aur baaki sabhi ne firing kii, ab kyuki D'Souza samet uske gundo ko kuch dikh hi nahi raha tha toh sabki khopdi udd gayi.

Samay na gawaate hue. Varun aur baaki sabhi ne goliyo kii barsaat kardi. Kareeb 15 me se 11 toh udhar hi dherr ho gaye. Ab sirf 4 bache hue the.

Rahul monica ke upar roll karne ke baad leta hua tha aur dheere se wo utha, usne monica ko dekha aur dheere se smile paas kii.

Monica ne bhi usse dekha aur raahat lekar halki sii smile paas kii par achaanak hi monica ko apne gale par kuch garam garam mehsoos hua.

Jab usne dekha toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Rahul ke kandhe se khoon behkar monica ke gale me gir raha tha. Boond boond karke bhayanak laal rang ka khoon Tapak raha tha.

Pal bhar ke liye toh jese monica sann hi reh gayi aur uski saas hi atak gayi aur fir wo ekdum se chillayi, "rahullllll"
Monica ke aasu pal bhar me hi nikal aaye aur wo kaapne lagi.

Rahul ke chehre par dard bhare bhaav the par fir bhi wo muskura raha tha, wo nahi chaah raha tha ki monica panic kar jaaye.

Rahul : sssshhhh!!! I'm okay!! Don't worry!!

Monica (rote hue) : noooooooo... You're not okaayyyyy!!! Tumhe goli lagi hai... Why??? Why did you saved me??

Rahul : aap bhi na dii? Abhi thodi derr pehle hi mene...aarrgghh... Mene kaha tha ki I love you!! Aap toh meri pyaari monica dii ho... Aapko kese kuch hone de sakta hu?

Monica (rote hue) : noooooooo... Why????

Rahul apne haath par zorr na dete hue uth ke side me baith jaata hai. Uski baat sunn ke monica aur zorr se rone lagti hai.

Yaha varun ne 2 aur ko shoot kar diya raha aur ab keval 2 gunde aur D'Souza hi bacha hua tha.

Rahul : mein theek hu don't worry!

Monica apni shirt phaadne hi waali thi rahul ke kandhe par baandhne ke liye ki itne me vivek apni shirt ki ek sleeve phaad ke monica ko de deta hai, jisse monica rahul ke kandhe par baandh deti hai.

Natasha udhar se ek bande ko headshot deti hai toh dusra banda ekdum se fire kar deta hai aur goli jaake urvashi ko jaangh me lag jaati hai.

Vivek mauka dekh ke dusre bande ko bhi maar deta hai. Dard se karaahti hui urvashi ko utha ke rahul ke bagal me vivek baithaata hai aur apni shirt ki dusri sleeve bhi wo faad ke monica ko de deta hai jiss se khoon band ho sake. Urvashi ke aasu nikle jaa rahe the.

Monica : Urvashi!! Be strong! Tunhe aur rahul ko kuch nahi hoga. Mein kuch nahi hone dungi tumlogo ko.

Varun aim lagae D'Souza ke paas pohuch raha tha. Bechaara D'Souza kaapte hue darr ke maare peeche ki or jaane laga. Usse pata tha ab usse koi nahi bacha sakta, usne dekha ki side me jo deal karne aaya tha uske saath wo bhi mara dala hai. Ye dekh ke uski pent hi geeli ho gayi. Idhar mauka dekh ke tina aur natasha bhi aa gayi.

Tina : usko mein maarungi...

Rahul : dii! Jaiye... Aapke mom dad ka hatyaara aapke saamne maujood hai.

Monica aur tina dono hi D'Souza ke saamne khadi thi gun se aim laga kar.

Monica : mene kaha tha na... Aaj tu idhar hi marega.

D'Souza diwaar se satt ke khada tha aur usne ekdum se peeche lage hue ek switch ko dabaaya aur zorr zorr se hassne laga.

D'Souza : hahahaha! Saalo... Mere saath saath tum bhi maroge...

Uske itna kehte hi monica uske seene pe ek fire karti hai aur tina bhi fire karti hai. Saari ki saari revolver ki goliyaa monica aur tina uske seene me bhoon deti hai. Khoon se latpat D'Souza apni akhiri saas leta hai aur gir padta hai.

Monica aur tina dono ke hi haath kaap rahe the aur gun unke haatho se chhoth kar neeche gir jaati hai. Ye pehli baar tha jab unhone kisi ki jaan lii aur wo bhi dono ke parents ke hatyaare ki. Dono rote hue ek dusre ke gale lag gayi.

Tina (rote hue) : we did it... We dit it.

Varun : mission accomplished!

Vivek : par isne aakhiri me wo switch kiska dabaaya?

Varun : wahi toh samajh nahi aa raha

Monica rahul aur urvashi ke paas jaake unki chot dekhne lagti hai ki tabhi nastasha ko kuch abhaas hota hai,

Natasha : hey!! Did you hear that?

Varun : hear what?

Natasha : try to hear...

Sabhi shaant hoke sunane lagte hai toh sabhi ko kuch awaaz sunayi dene lagti hai aur awaaz dheere dheere aisa lag raha tha maano nazdeek aa rahi ho.

Sabhi abhi soch rahe the ki natasha ki aankhein fel jaati hai aur uske rongte khade ho jaate hai.

Natasha : it's... it's water... RUN!!!

Uski chetaavni sunn jese sabhi hosh me aaye aur exit ki taraf sabhi bhaagne lage. Urvashi ko vivek ne apni peeth pe sawaar kar liya aur rahul khud hi daud raha tha.

D'Souza ne marne se pehle jo switch press kiya tha wo emergency ke liye tha. Jese kabhi uspe hamla ho jaaye toh bach ke kese bhaga jaaye aur hamlawaro ko kese maara jaaye usne iske liye ye system banwaaya tha.

Switch press karte hi ek hidden door khul gaya jo ki thoda neeche side tha. Ab kyuki sabhi underground the, paani teevr gati se labalab bhar ke kisi tsunami ki tarah aane laga. D'Souza ne toh jese neeche poori colony bana ke rakhi thi. Corridor se leke kamre bhi the kuch. Underground space kaafi badi thi isliye paani ekdum se nahi aaya. Jese hi awaaz ki pehchaan natasha ko hui usse samajh me aa gaya tha ki kya hua hai.

Rahul ne dekha ki paiso se bhara suitcase toh wahi pada hua hai toh wo uthaane ke liye rahul wapas aa gaya aur suitcase uthaaya hi tha ki usne dekha paani ki ek boht hi bhayanak lehar tezzi se uski taraf aa rahi hai. Ye dekh ke maano uske rongte hi khade ho gaye. Usne suitcase uthaaya aur apni full speed me exit ki or bhaagne laga.

Idhar exit ki taraf pohuchte hi ek bada sa gate tha bilkul ek lift ki tarah. Par thoda kam chauda tha.

Varun aur peter james milke usse khulne lage aur kareeb 20 - 25 second ke baad itni mashaqqat karne ke baad wo gate khula. Par ye kya? Gate retractable tha?

Matlab? Matlab ye ki jese hi usse koi chorrega gate dubaara se band ho jaega. Varun aur peter james gate ko pakde pakde hi bahar ki or shift ho gaye aur baaki sabhi ko forun baahar aane ke liye kaha.

Sabhi ek ek karke gate ke baahar nikle toh monica ek dum se sehem gayi,

Monica : Rahul kaha hai?? Kaha hai rahul???

Uske sawaal puchne par sabhi ek dusre ko dekhne lage aur sabhi ki bauhe sikud gayi.
Jab sab yaha hai toh rahul kaha hai?

Monica ka dil zorr zorr se dhadak raha tha. Wo dubaara andar jaane ke liye hui toh vivek ne usse rok liya,

Vivek : miss! Don't worry! Rahul sir aate hi honge...

Idhar rahul full speed me bhaag raha tha aur jese hi usne palat ke dekha toh paani itni tezzi se aaya aur seedha uspe zorr se pada aur lehar usse zorr se paani ke teevr bahaav ke saath lekar chal padi.

Idhar monica ka haal behaal ho raha tha aur tabhi Achanak awaaz aur tezz badh gayi aur ekdum se ek mod se itna saara paani ek bhayanak lehar ke saath aaya, jisse dekh ke sabke rongte khade ho gaye. Sab ne dekha ki rahul ussi lehar me maujood hai aur wo kuch nahi kar paa raha,

Varun : ohhh shitttt...

Ek tezz bahaav aaya aur seedha exit gate par lehar ka ek zorrdaar thapeda pada. Itni tezz force se varun aur peter james ke haatho se grip chooth gayi aur darwaaza band ho gaya.

Monica ye dekh ekdum seham gayi aur zorr se cheekhte hue chillaayi,

Monica : kya kar rahe ho tumlog???? Darwaza kholoooooo jaldiiiiii.... Kholooo darwaazaaaa rahul andar haiiiii... Kholooooo

Aur wo zorr zorr se siskate hue rone lagti hai.

Idhar varun aur baaki sabhi athak prayaas kar rahe the par dusri side paani itna tha ki jese hi wo thoda sa gate kholte, pani ka pressure unhe gate ki grip chorrne par majboor kar deta. Koi fayda nahi.

Monica zorr zorr se darwaaza peetne lagi aur pagalo ki tarah rahul ki awaaz lagaa ke chillaane lagi. Wo varun aur vivek ki chaathi par apne ghuse barsaati aur darwaaza kholne ke liye kehti. Par kya hi ho sakta tha?

Urvashi rote rote hi behosh ho gayi. Jab usne rahul ko pani ki lehar me behte dekha aur darwaaza band hote dekha usse tezz jhatka laga aur wo behosh ho gayi. Natasha apne nichle honth ko dabaye hue khud ko calm karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Usse pata tha ki yadi rahul ne wo flashbang nahi feka hota aur wo goli khud pe nahi lii hoti toh shayad aaj sab marrte yaha par. Pata nahi kyu par uski aankho me achanak aasu aa gaye.

Usne monica ko dekha aur usse calm karne ki koshish karne lagi par koi fayda nahi.

Idhar rahul pani me behte hue exit ke gate ke paas jab pohucha toh uss area me paani tezzi se bharne laga aur rahul exit se hatke kahi aur direction me jaane laga. Uska haath me abhi bhi suitcase tha. Ye toh acchi baat thi rahul ko terrna aata tha par ab uska kya use?

Lehar aisi thi ki kuch kiya hi nahi jaa sakta tha. Uapr se rahul ke kandhe par lagi chot. Ab uska dard aur bhi badh chuka tha. Usse darr tha ki wo pass out na ho jaaye kahi.

Paani ab lagbhag ceiling ko touch kar raha tha aur itne force ke saath beh raha tha ki rahul sirf baha jaa raha tha aur ab uske senses kam hote jaa rahe the.

"Is this the end?? Kya yahi meri maut likhi hai??" Khud se rahul ne sawal kiya mann me.

Uska muh ab paani ke andar tha aur wo saas ko roke hue tha,

"Richu...tanisha... Vanshu dii... Anshu... Monica dii... khushi...preeti... saurabh... urvashi... Nikita...dad...mom... Gudiya... Looks like...
This is the end for me"
Behte behte usne apni aankhein band rakhi, chehre par ek halki muskaan aur edkum se jese andhera sa chhaane laga uske saamne.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!

Dhanyawad!!
Nice update
 

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Ab tak...

D'Souza ke speed dial karte hi dusre side maujood logo ko samajh me aa gaya ki kuch gadbad hai aur wo forun dhadalle se andar aaye aur bandook taan ke rahul aur baaki sabhi ko gher liya.

D'Souza : mene kaha tha na ladki! Tum mere adde par ho aur mere ek ishaare se tum sab maut ke ghaat utroge...hahahaha!!!


Ab aage...

"Shit!!! Mujhe nahi laga tha, dusri side aur bhi log honge. Total 15 ho gaye hai ab toh. This is a huge problem. Kya karu?? Kuch toh karna hi padega, warna sab ke sab maare jaenge" rahul ne apne aas paas khade gundo ko dekhte hue apne mann me socha.

Sthiti inn sabhi ke liye kahi se bhi sahi nahi lag rahi thi. Rahul aur team tight spot me the.

Tina : ohh no!!! Ab kya kare? Miss natasha! Do you have any idea??

Natasha : Sadly! I don't have any idea. I can shoot that bastard D'Souza and kill him on the spot. but... But... The moment I'll shoot they will start shooting too. I don't know what to do.

Natasha ke chehre par tension saaf jhalak aa rahi thi. Baat sahi bhi toh thi. Nastasha jese hi fire karti, D'Souza ke aadmi chup thodi baithate, wo bhi shoot karna chaalu kar dete aur aise me kisi ki bhi jaan jaa sakti thi.

Natasha bolt and action sniper lii hui thi, jiske chalte wo lagataar shoot nahi kar sakti thi. Isliye wo koi bhi kadam lene se ghabra rahi thi.

Tina : par hume kuch toh karna hoga na??

Natasha : shittt!!!

D'Souza : apni apni guns neeche fekk do, tum sab bhi jaante ho ki tumlog sirf 7 log ho aur mere paas 15 aadmi hai. Yadi goliya chali toh kiska kya haal hona hai ye sabhi ko pata hi hai

Rahul : bhale hi tumhare paas aadmi zyada ho par mera nishaana toh tum par hi rahega toh tum jaante ho ki bhale hi hum marr jae par hamare saath saath tum bhi maroge.

D'Souza rahul ki baat sunn kar usse dekhne laga aur fir muskuraate hue usne ek ishaara kiya toh 15 aadmi D'Souza ke saamne shield ban kar khade ho gaye aur rahul aur unki team ki taraf aim karne lage.

D'Souza : hahahaha! Ab kya bolte ho? Ab toh mein dikhunga hi nahi tumhe fir kya karoge?

Rahul ne dheere se apni shirt ke andar chhupe flashbang ko nikala jo uski shirt ke peeche andar side tha. usne emergency ke liye chippaaya hua tha. Usne apne haath peeche le jaake sabhi ko flashbang dikhaaya aur haatho se ishaara karne laga.

Uska ishaara saaf tha. Wo 3 tak ginte hi flashbang fekega aur uske baad sabhi ko shoot karna hai. Ye rahul ki chaal thi darasal.

Yadi saare aadmi unhe gher ke khade hote toh ye tareeqa kaam nahi karta. Par ab baat alag thi. Iss baar sabhi aadmi ek hi jagah par khade hue the saamne. Rahul ne jaan boojh kar D'Souza ko uski safety ko lekar daraaya taaki wo aadmiyo ko apne paas bula le.

Rahul ne flashbang vivek se liya tha emergency ke time ke liye. Rahul ne ek jhalak natasha ke Direction me dekha aur fir wapas se D'Souza ko dekhne laga.

Uske haath ke ishaaro se sabhi samajh gaye the ki wo kya karne waala hai. Bus dikkat thi toh cover fire karne ki. Jese hi flashbang fekega usse cover fire ki zaroorat padegi.

Ye boht hi risky kaam tha. Bomb fekte hi gunde uss par poori goliya barsaenge aur isliye rahul jhijak raha tha.

Vivek varun peter aur james hoshiyaar the isliye wo samajh gaye ki kya karna hai. Natasha bhi taiyaar thi. Natasha ne sniper ek gunde ki upar focus kii aur uske baad apni pistol bhi nikaal li. Uska plan ye tha ki wo ek ko sniper se niptaegi aur jese hi sniper ka shot lagega uske baad wo pistol se dusre bande ko niptaegi.

Toh wo ek baar me 2 bande niptaegi. Vivek varun peter aur james bhi cover dene waale the, ab wo kitne bande maar paaenge ye unke upar tha.

Par abhi bhi rahul ko risk tha boht aur rahul ko confidence nahi tha zyaada. Gehri saas lete hue usne flashbang fekne ke liye taiyaar kiya. 3 tak usne apne haath peeche le jaakar ishaara kiya aur 3 ginte hi usne flashbang saamne ki or fek diya.

Flashbang girte hi ek tezz flash chamka, rahul aur baaki sabhi ne aankhein band kar lii thi par gunde prepared nahi the aur kayi gundo ki aankhein chaundhiya gayi.

Par jab rahul ne flashbang feka tha ussi waqt kayi gundo ne fire kar diya raha. Rahul ne side me khadi monica ko lapak ke pakda aur roll karte hue side me chala gaya.

Mauke ka fayda uthaate hue varun aur baaki sabhi ne firing kii, ab kyuki D'Souza samet uske gundo ko kuch dikh hi nahi raha tha toh sabki khopdi udd gayi.

Samay na gawaate hue. Varun aur baaki sabhi ne goliyo kii barsaat kardi. Kareeb 15 me se 11 toh udhar hi dherr ho gaye. Ab sirf 4 bache hue the.

Rahul monica ke upar roll karne ke baad leta hua tha aur dheere se wo utha, usne monica ko dekha aur dheere se smile paas kii.

Monica ne bhi usse dekha aur raahat lekar halki sii smile paas kii par achaanak hi monica ko apne gale par kuch garam garam mehsoos hua.

Jab usne dekha toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Rahul ke kandhe se khoon behkar monica ke gale me gir raha tha. Boond boond karke bhayanak laal rang ka khoon Tapak raha tha.

Pal bhar ke liye toh jese monica sann hi reh gayi aur uski saas hi atak gayi aur fir wo ekdum se chillayi, "rahullllll"
Monica ke aasu pal bhar me hi nikal aaye aur wo kaapne lagi.

Rahul ke chehre par dard bhare bhaav the par fir bhi wo muskura raha tha, wo nahi chaah raha tha ki monica panic kar jaaye.

Rahul : sssshhhh!!! I'm okay!! Don't worry!!

Monica (rote hue) : noooooooo... You're not okaayyyyy!!! Tumhe goli lagi hai... Why??? Why did you saved me??

Rahul : aap bhi na dii? Abhi thodi derr pehle hi mene...aarrgghh... Mene kaha tha ki I love you!! Aap toh meri pyaari monica dii ho... Aapko kese kuch hone de sakta hu?

Monica (rote hue) : noooooooo... Why????

Rahul apne haath par zorr na dete hue uth ke side me baith jaata hai. Uski baat sunn ke monica aur zorr se rone lagti hai.

Yaha varun ne 2 aur ko shoot kar diya raha aur ab keval 2 gunde aur D'Souza hi bacha hua tha.

Rahul : mein theek hu don't worry!

Monica apni shirt phaadne hi waali thi rahul ke kandhe par baandhne ke liye ki itne me vivek apni shirt ki ek sleeve phaad ke monica ko de deta hai, jisse monica rahul ke kandhe par baandh deti hai.

Natasha udhar se ek bande ko headshot deti hai toh dusra banda ekdum se fire kar deta hai aur goli jaake urvashi ko jaangh me lag jaati hai.

Vivek mauka dekh ke dusre bande ko bhi maar deta hai. Dard se karaahti hui urvashi ko utha ke rahul ke bagal me vivek baithaata hai aur apni shirt ki dusri sleeve bhi wo faad ke monica ko de deta hai jiss se khoon band ho sake. Urvashi ke aasu nikle jaa rahe the.

Monica : Urvashi!! Be strong! Tunhe aur rahul ko kuch nahi hoga. Mein kuch nahi hone dungi tumlogo ko.

Varun aim lagae D'Souza ke paas pohuch raha tha. Bechaara D'Souza kaapte hue darr ke maare peeche ki or jaane laga. Usse pata tha ab usse koi nahi bacha sakta, usne dekha ki side me jo deal karne aaya tha uske saath wo bhi mara dala hai. Ye dekh ke uski pent hi geeli ho gayi. Idhar mauka dekh ke tina aur natasha bhi aa gayi.

Tina : usko mein maarungi...

Rahul : dii! Jaiye... Aapke mom dad ka hatyaara aapke saamne maujood hai.

Monica aur tina dono hi D'Souza ke saamne khadi thi gun se aim laga kar.

Monica : mene kaha tha na... Aaj tu idhar hi marega.

D'Souza diwaar se satt ke khada tha aur usne ekdum se peeche lage hue ek switch ko dabaaya aur zorr zorr se hassne laga.

D'Souza : hahahaha! Saalo... Mere saath saath tum bhi maroge...

Uske itna kehte hi monica uske seene pe ek fire karti hai aur tina bhi fire karti hai. Saari ki saari revolver ki goliyaa monica aur tina uske seene me bhoon deti hai. Khoon se latpat D'Souza apni akhiri saas leta hai aur gir padta hai.

Monica aur tina dono ke hi haath kaap rahe the aur gun unke haatho se chhoth kar neeche gir jaati hai. Ye pehli baar tha jab unhone kisi ki jaan lii aur wo bhi dono ke parents ke hatyaare ki. Dono rote hue ek dusre ke gale lag gayi.

Tina (rote hue) : we did it... We dit it.

Varun : mission accomplished!

Vivek : par isne aakhiri me wo switch kiska dabaaya?

Varun : wahi toh samajh nahi aa raha

Monica rahul aur urvashi ke paas jaake unki chot dekhne lagti hai ki tabhi nastasha ko kuch abhaas hota hai,

Natasha : hey!! Did you hear that?

Varun : hear what?

Natasha : try to hear...

Sabhi shaant hoke sunane lagte hai toh sabhi ko kuch awaaz sunayi dene lagti hai aur awaaz dheere dheere aisa lag raha tha maano nazdeek aa rahi ho.

Sabhi abhi soch rahe the ki natasha ki aankhein fel jaati hai aur uske rongte khade ho jaate hai.

Natasha : it's... it's water... RUN!!!

Uski chetaavni sunn jese sabhi hosh me aaye aur exit ki taraf sabhi bhaagne lage. Urvashi ko vivek ne apni peeth pe sawaar kar liya aur rahul khud hi daud raha tha.

D'Souza ne marne se pehle jo switch press kiya tha wo emergency ke liye tha. Jese kabhi uspe hamla ho jaaye toh bach ke kese bhaga jaaye aur hamlawaro ko kese maara jaaye usne iske liye ye system banwaaya tha.

Switch press karte hi ek hidden door khul gaya jo ki thoda neeche side tha. Ab kyuki sabhi underground the, paani teevr gati se labalab bhar ke kisi tsunami ki tarah aane laga. D'Souza ne toh jese neeche poori colony bana ke rakhi thi. Corridor se leke kamre bhi the kuch. Underground space kaafi badi thi isliye paani ekdum se nahi aaya. Jese hi awaaz ki pehchaan natasha ko hui usse samajh me aa gaya tha ki kya hua hai.

Rahul ne dekha ki paiso se bhara suitcase toh wahi pada hua hai toh wo uthaane ke liye rahul wapas aa gaya aur suitcase uthaaya hi tha ki usne dekha paani ki ek boht hi bhayanak lehar tezzi se uski taraf aa rahi hai. Ye dekh ke maano uske rongte hi khade ho gaye. Usne suitcase uthaaya aur apni full speed me exit ki or bhaagne laga.

Idhar exit ki taraf pohuchte hi ek bada sa gate tha bilkul ek lift ki tarah. Par thoda kam chauda tha.

Varun aur peter james milke usse khulne lage aur kareeb 20 - 25 second ke baad itni mashaqqat karne ke baad wo gate khula. Par ye kya? Gate retractable tha?

Matlab? Matlab ye ki jese hi usse koi chorrega gate dubaara se band ho jaega. Varun aur peter james gate ko pakde pakde hi bahar ki or shift ho gaye aur baaki sabhi ko forun baahar aane ke liye kaha.

Sabhi ek ek karke gate ke baahar nikle toh monica ek dum se sehem gayi,

Monica : Rahul kaha hai?? Kaha hai rahul???

Uske sawaal puchne par sabhi ek dusre ko dekhne lage aur sabhi ki bauhe sikud gayi.
Jab sab yaha hai toh rahul kaha hai?

Monica ka dil zorr zorr se dhadak raha tha. Wo dubaara andar jaane ke liye hui toh vivek ne usse rok liya,

Vivek : miss! Don't worry! Rahul sir aate hi honge...

Idhar rahul full speed me bhaag raha tha aur jese hi usne palat ke dekha toh paani itni tezzi se aaya aur seedha uspe zorr se pada aur lehar usse zorr se paani ke teevr bahaav ke saath lekar chal padi.

Idhar monica ka haal behaal ho raha tha aur tabhi Achanak awaaz aur tezz badh gayi aur ekdum se ek mod se itna saara paani ek bhayanak lehar ke saath aaya, jisse dekh ke sabke rongte khade ho gaye. Sab ne dekha ki rahul ussi lehar me maujood hai aur wo kuch nahi kar paa raha,

Varun : ohhh shitttt...

Ek tezz bahaav aaya aur seedha exit gate par lehar ka ek zorrdaar thapeda pada. Itni tezz force se varun aur peter james ke haatho se grip chooth gayi aur darwaaza band ho gaya.

Monica ye dekh ekdum seham gayi aur zorr se cheekhte hue chillaayi,

Monica : kya kar rahe ho tumlog???? Darwaza kholoooooo jaldiiiiii.... Kholooo darwaazaaaa rahul andar haiiiii... Kholooooo

Aur wo zorr zorr se siskate hue rone lagti hai.

Idhar varun aur baaki sabhi athak prayaas kar rahe the par dusri side paani itna tha ki jese hi wo thoda sa gate kholte, pani ka pressure unhe gate ki grip chorrne par majboor kar deta. Koi fayda nahi.

Monica zorr zorr se darwaaza peetne lagi aur pagalo ki tarah rahul ki awaaz lagaa ke chillaane lagi. Wo varun aur vivek ki chaathi par apne ghuse barsaati aur darwaaza kholne ke liye kehti. Par kya hi ho sakta tha?

Urvashi rote rote hi behosh ho gayi. Jab usne rahul ko pani ki lehar me behte dekha aur darwaaza band hote dekha usse tezz jhatka laga aur wo behosh ho gayi. Natasha apne nichle honth ko dabaye hue khud ko calm karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Usse pata tha ki yadi rahul ne wo flashbang nahi feka hota aur wo goli khud pe nahi lii hoti toh shayad aaj sab marrte yaha par. Pata nahi kyu par uski aankho me achanak aasu aa gaye.

Usne monica ko dekha aur usse calm karne ki koshish karne lagi par koi fayda nahi.

Idhar rahul pani me behte hue exit ke gate ke paas jab pohucha toh uss area me paani tezzi se bharne laga aur rahul exit se hatke kahi aur direction me jaane laga. Uska haath me abhi bhi suitcase tha. Ye toh acchi baat thi rahul ko terrna aata tha par ab uska kya use?

Lehar aisi thi ki kuch kiya hi nahi jaa sakta tha. Uapr se rahul ke kandhe par lagi chot. Ab uska dard aur bhi badh chuka tha. Usse darr tha ki wo pass out na ho jaaye kahi.

Paani ab lagbhag ceiling ko touch kar raha tha aur itne force ke saath beh raha tha ki rahul sirf baha jaa raha tha aur ab uske senses kam hote jaa rahe the.

"Is this the end?? Kya yahi meri maut likhi hai??" Khud se rahul ne sawal kiya mann me.

Uska muh ab paani ke andar tha aur wo saas ko roke hue tha,

"Richu...tanisha... Vanshu dii... Anshu... Monica dii... khushi...preeti... saurabh... urvashi... Nikita...dad...mom... Gudiya... Looks like...
This is the end for me"
Behte behte usne apni aankhein band rakhi, chehre par ek halki muskaan aur edkum se jese andhera sa chhaane laga uske saamne.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!

Dhanyawad!!
Rahul ko ab koi chamatkar ya Neha ki yaad hi chetna me la sakti hai. Bahut sunder update hai bhai ji.
 

kingkhankar

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Ab tak...

D'Souza ke speed dial karte hi dusre side maujood logo ko samajh me aa gaya ki kuch gadbad hai aur wo forun dhadalle se andar aaye aur bandook taan ke rahul aur baaki sabhi ko gher liya.

D'Souza : mene kaha tha na ladki! Tum mere adde par ho aur mere ek ishaare se tum sab maut ke ghaat utroge...hahahaha!!!


Ab aage...

"Shit!!! Mujhe nahi laga tha, dusri side aur bhi log honge. Total 15 ho gaye hai ab toh. This is a huge problem. Kya karu?? Kuch toh karna hi padega, warna sab ke sab maare jaenge" rahul ne apne aas paas khade gundo ko dekhte hue apne mann me socha.

Sthiti inn sabhi ke liye kahi se bhi sahi nahi lag rahi thi. Rahul aur team tight spot me the.

Tina : ohh no!!! Ab kya kare? Miss natasha! Do you have any idea??

Natasha : Sadly! I don't have any idea. I can shoot that bastard D'Souza and kill him on the spot. but... But... The moment I'll shoot they will start shooting too. I don't know what to do.

Natasha ke chehre par tension saaf jhalak aa rahi thi. Baat sahi bhi toh thi. Nastasha jese hi fire karti, D'Souza ke aadmi chup thodi baithate, wo bhi shoot karna chaalu kar dete aur aise me kisi ki bhi jaan jaa sakti thi.

Natasha bolt and action sniper lii hui thi, jiske chalte wo lagataar shoot nahi kar sakti thi. Isliye wo koi bhi kadam lene se ghabra rahi thi.

Tina : par hume kuch toh karna hoga na??

Natasha : shittt!!!

D'Souza : apni apni guns neeche fekk do, tum sab bhi jaante ho ki tumlog sirf 7 log ho aur mere paas 15 aadmi hai. Yadi goliya chali toh kiska kya haal hona hai ye sabhi ko pata hi hai

Rahul : bhale hi tumhare paas aadmi zyada ho par mera nishaana toh tum par hi rahega toh tum jaante ho ki bhale hi hum marr jae par hamare saath saath tum bhi maroge.

D'Souza rahul ki baat sunn kar usse dekhne laga aur fir muskuraate hue usne ek ishaara kiya toh 15 aadmi D'Souza ke saamne shield ban kar khade ho gaye aur rahul aur unki team ki taraf aim karne lage.

D'Souza : hahahaha! Ab kya bolte ho? Ab toh mein dikhunga hi nahi tumhe fir kya karoge?

Rahul ne dheere se apni shirt ke andar chhupe flashbang ko nikala jo uski shirt ke peeche andar side tha. usne emergency ke liye chippaaya hua tha. Usne apne haath peeche le jaake sabhi ko flashbang dikhaaya aur haatho se ishaara karne laga.

Uska ishaara saaf tha. Wo 3 tak ginte hi flashbang fekega aur uske baad sabhi ko shoot karna hai. Ye rahul ki chaal thi darasal.

Yadi saare aadmi unhe gher ke khade hote toh ye tareeqa kaam nahi karta. Par ab baat alag thi. Iss baar sabhi aadmi ek hi jagah par khade hue the saamne. Rahul ne jaan boojh kar D'Souza ko uski safety ko lekar daraaya taaki wo aadmiyo ko apne paas bula le.

Rahul ne flashbang vivek se liya tha emergency ke time ke liye. Rahul ne ek jhalak natasha ke Direction me dekha aur fir wapas se D'Souza ko dekhne laga.

Uske haath ke ishaaro se sabhi samajh gaye the ki wo kya karne waala hai. Bus dikkat thi toh cover fire karne ki. Jese hi flashbang fekega usse cover fire ki zaroorat padegi.

Ye boht hi risky kaam tha. Bomb fekte hi gunde uss par poori goliya barsaenge aur isliye rahul jhijak raha tha.

Vivek varun peter aur james hoshiyaar the isliye wo samajh gaye ki kya karna hai. Natasha bhi taiyaar thi. Natasha ne sniper ek gunde ki upar focus kii aur uske baad apni pistol bhi nikaal li. Uska plan ye tha ki wo ek ko sniper se niptaegi aur jese hi sniper ka shot lagega uske baad wo pistol se dusre bande ko niptaegi.

Toh wo ek baar me 2 bande niptaegi. Vivek varun peter aur james bhi cover dene waale the, ab wo kitne bande maar paaenge ye unke upar tha.

Par abhi bhi rahul ko risk tha boht aur rahul ko confidence nahi tha zyaada. Gehri saas lete hue usne flashbang fekne ke liye taiyaar kiya. 3 tak usne apne haath peeche le jaakar ishaara kiya aur 3 ginte hi usne flashbang saamne ki or fek diya.

Flashbang girte hi ek tezz flash chamka, rahul aur baaki sabhi ne aankhein band kar lii thi par gunde prepared nahi the aur kayi gundo ki aankhein chaundhiya gayi.

Par jab rahul ne flashbang feka tha ussi waqt kayi gundo ne fire kar diya raha. Rahul ne side me khadi monica ko lapak ke pakda aur roll karte hue side me chala gaya.

Mauke ka fayda uthaate hue varun aur baaki sabhi ne firing kii, ab kyuki D'Souza samet uske gundo ko kuch dikh hi nahi raha tha toh sabki khopdi udd gayi.

Samay na gawaate hue. Varun aur baaki sabhi ne goliyo kii barsaat kardi. Kareeb 15 me se 11 toh udhar hi dherr ho gaye. Ab sirf 4 bache hue the.

Rahul monica ke upar roll karne ke baad leta hua tha aur dheere se wo utha, usne monica ko dekha aur dheere se smile paas kii.

Monica ne bhi usse dekha aur raahat lekar halki sii smile paas kii par achaanak hi monica ko apne gale par kuch garam garam mehsoos hua.

Jab usne dekha toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Rahul ke kandhe se khoon behkar monica ke gale me gir raha tha. Boond boond karke bhayanak laal rang ka khoon Tapak raha tha.

Pal bhar ke liye toh jese monica sann hi reh gayi aur uski saas hi atak gayi aur fir wo ekdum se chillayi, "rahullllll"
Monica ke aasu pal bhar me hi nikal aaye aur wo kaapne lagi.

Rahul ke chehre par dard bhare bhaav the par fir bhi wo muskura raha tha, wo nahi chaah raha tha ki monica panic kar jaaye.

Rahul : sssshhhh!!! I'm okay!! Don't worry!!

Monica (rote hue) : noooooooo... You're not okaayyyyy!!! Tumhe goli lagi hai... Why??? Why did you saved me??

Rahul : aap bhi na dii? Abhi thodi derr pehle hi mene...aarrgghh... Mene kaha tha ki I love you!! Aap toh meri pyaari monica dii ho... Aapko kese kuch hone de sakta hu?

Monica (rote hue) : noooooooo... Why????

Rahul apne haath par zorr na dete hue uth ke side me baith jaata hai. Uski baat sunn ke monica aur zorr se rone lagti hai.

Yaha varun ne 2 aur ko shoot kar diya raha aur ab keval 2 gunde aur D'Souza hi bacha hua tha.

Rahul : mein theek hu don't worry!

Monica apni shirt phaadne hi waali thi rahul ke kandhe par baandhne ke liye ki itne me vivek apni shirt ki ek sleeve phaad ke monica ko de deta hai, jisse monica rahul ke kandhe par baandh deti hai.

Natasha udhar se ek bande ko headshot deti hai toh dusra banda ekdum se fire kar deta hai aur goli jaake urvashi ko jaangh me lag jaati hai.

Vivek mauka dekh ke dusre bande ko bhi maar deta hai. Dard se karaahti hui urvashi ko utha ke rahul ke bagal me vivek baithaata hai aur apni shirt ki dusri sleeve bhi wo faad ke monica ko de deta hai jiss se khoon band ho sake. Urvashi ke aasu nikle jaa rahe the.

Monica : Urvashi!! Be strong! Tunhe aur rahul ko kuch nahi hoga. Mein kuch nahi hone dungi tumlogo ko.

Varun aim lagae D'Souza ke paas pohuch raha tha. Bechaara D'Souza kaapte hue darr ke maare peeche ki or jaane laga. Usse pata tha ab usse koi nahi bacha sakta, usne dekha ki side me jo deal karne aaya tha uske saath wo bhi mara dala hai. Ye dekh ke uski pent hi geeli ho gayi. Idhar mauka dekh ke tina aur natasha bhi aa gayi.

Tina : usko mein maarungi...

Rahul : dii! Jaiye... Aapke mom dad ka hatyaara aapke saamne maujood hai.

Monica aur tina dono hi D'Souza ke saamne khadi thi gun se aim laga kar.

Monica : mene kaha tha na... Aaj tu idhar hi marega.

D'Souza diwaar se satt ke khada tha aur usne ekdum se peeche lage hue ek switch ko dabaaya aur zorr zorr se hassne laga.

D'Souza : hahahaha! Saalo... Mere saath saath tum bhi maroge...

Uske itna kehte hi monica uske seene pe ek fire karti hai aur tina bhi fire karti hai. Saari ki saari revolver ki goliyaa monica aur tina uske seene me bhoon deti hai. Khoon se latpat D'Souza apni akhiri saas leta hai aur gir padta hai.

Monica aur tina dono ke hi haath kaap rahe the aur gun unke haatho se chhoth kar neeche gir jaati hai. Ye pehli baar tha jab unhone kisi ki jaan lii aur wo bhi dono ke parents ke hatyaare ki. Dono rote hue ek dusre ke gale lag gayi.

Tina (rote hue) : we did it... We dit it.

Varun : mission accomplished!

Vivek : par isne aakhiri me wo switch kiska dabaaya?

Varun : wahi toh samajh nahi aa raha

Monica rahul aur urvashi ke paas jaake unki chot dekhne lagti hai ki tabhi nastasha ko kuch abhaas hota hai,

Natasha : hey!! Did you hear that?

Varun : hear what?

Natasha : try to hear...

Sabhi shaant hoke sunane lagte hai toh sabhi ko kuch awaaz sunayi dene lagti hai aur awaaz dheere dheere aisa lag raha tha maano nazdeek aa rahi ho.

Sabhi abhi soch rahe the ki natasha ki aankhein fel jaati hai aur uske rongte khade ho jaate hai.

Natasha : it's... it's water... RUN!!!

Uski chetaavni sunn jese sabhi hosh me aaye aur exit ki taraf sabhi bhaagne lage. Urvashi ko vivek ne apni peeth pe sawaar kar liya aur rahul khud hi daud raha tha.

D'Souza ne marne se pehle jo switch press kiya tha wo emergency ke liye tha. Jese kabhi uspe hamla ho jaaye toh bach ke kese bhaga jaaye aur hamlawaro ko kese maara jaaye usne iske liye ye system banwaaya tha.

Switch press karte hi ek hidden door khul gaya jo ki thoda neeche side tha. Ab kyuki sabhi underground the, paani teevr gati se labalab bhar ke kisi tsunami ki tarah aane laga. D'Souza ne toh jese neeche poori colony bana ke rakhi thi. Corridor se leke kamre bhi the kuch. Underground space kaafi badi thi isliye paani ekdum se nahi aaya. Jese hi awaaz ki pehchaan natasha ko hui usse samajh me aa gaya tha ki kya hua hai.

Rahul ne dekha ki paiso se bhara suitcase toh wahi pada hua hai toh wo uthaane ke liye rahul wapas aa gaya aur suitcase uthaaya hi tha ki usne dekha paani ki ek boht hi bhayanak lehar tezzi se uski taraf aa rahi hai. Ye dekh ke maano uske rongte hi khade ho gaye. Usne suitcase uthaaya aur apni full speed me exit ki or bhaagne laga.

Idhar exit ki taraf pohuchte hi ek bada sa gate tha bilkul ek lift ki tarah. Par thoda kam chauda tha.

Varun aur peter james milke usse khulne lage aur kareeb 20 - 25 second ke baad itni mashaqqat karne ke baad wo gate khula. Par ye kya? Gate retractable tha?

Matlab? Matlab ye ki jese hi usse koi chorrega gate dubaara se band ho jaega. Varun aur peter james gate ko pakde pakde hi bahar ki or shift ho gaye aur baaki sabhi ko forun baahar aane ke liye kaha.

Sabhi ek ek karke gate ke baahar nikle toh monica ek dum se sehem gayi,

Monica : Rahul kaha hai?? Kaha hai rahul???

Uske sawaal puchne par sabhi ek dusre ko dekhne lage aur sabhi ki bauhe sikud gayi.
Jab sab yaha hai toh rahul kaha hai?

Monica ka dil zorr zorr se dhadak raha tha. Wo dubaara andar jaane ke liye hui toh vivek ne usse rok liya,

Vivek : miss! Don't worry! Rahul sir aate hi honge...

Idhar rahul full speed me bhaag raha tha aur jese hi usne palat ke dekha toh paani itni tezzi se aaya aur seedha uspe zorr se pada aur lehar usse zorr se paani ke teevr bahaav ke saath lekar chal padi.

Idhar monica ka haal behaal ho raha tha aur tabhi Achanak awaaz aur tezz badh gayi aur ekdum se ek mod se itna saara paani ek bhayanak lehar ke saath aaya, jisse dekh ke sabke rongte khade ho gaye. Sab ne dekha ki rahul ussi lehar me maujood hai aur wo kuch nahi kar paa raha,

Varun : ohhh shitttt...

Ek tezz bahaav aaya aur seedha exit gate par lehar ka ek zorrdaar thapeda pada. Itni tezz force se varun aur peter james ke haatho se grip chooth gayi aur darwaaza band ho gaya.

Monica ye dekh ekdum seham gayi aur zorr se cheekhte hue chillaayi,

Monica : kya kar rahe ho tumlog???? Darwaza kholoooooo jaldiiiiii.... Kholooo darwaazaaaa rahul andar haiiiii... Kholooooo

Aur wo zorr zorr se siskate hue rone lagti hai.

Idhar varun aur baaki sabhi athak prayaas kar rahe the par dusri side paani itna tha ki jese hi wo thoda sa gate kholte, pani ka pressure unhe gate ki grip chorrne par majboor kar deta. Koi fayda nahi.

Monica zorr zorr se darwaaza peetne lagi aur pagalo ki tarah rahul ki awaaz lagaa ke chillaane lagi. Wo varun aur vivek ki chaathi par apne ghuse barsaati aur darwaaza kholne ke liye kehti. Par kya hi ho sakta tha?

Urvashi rote rote hi behosh ho gayi. Jab usne rahul ko pani ki lehar me behte dekha aur darwaaza band hote dekha usse tezz jhatka laga aur wo behosh ho gayi. Natasha apne nichle honth ko dabaye hue khud ko calm karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Usse pata tha ki yadi rahul ne wo flashbang nahi feka hota aur wo goli khud pe nahi lii hoti toh shayad aaj sab marrte yaha par. Pata nahi kyu par uski aankho me achanak aasu aa gaye.

Usne monica ko dekha aur usse calm karne ki koshish karne lagi par koi fayda nahi.

Idhar rahul pani me behte hue exit ke gate ke paas jab pohucha toh uss area me paani tezzi se bharne laga aur rahul exit se hatke kahi aur direction me jaane laga. Uska haath me abhi bhi suitcase tha. Ye toh acchi baat thi rahul ko terrna aata tha par ab uska kya use?

Lehar aisi thi ki kuch kiya hi nahi jaa sakta tha. Uapr se rahul ke kandhe par lagi chot. Ab uska dard aur bhi badh chuka tha. Usse darr tha ki wo pass out na ho jaaye kahi.

Paani ab lagbhag ceiling ko touch kar raha tha aur itne force ke saath beh raha tha ki rahul sirf baha jaa raha tha aur ab uske senses kam hote jaa rahe the.

"Is this the end?? Kya yahi meri maut likhi hai??" Khud se rahul ne sawal kiya mann me.

Uska muh ab paani ke andar tha aur wo saas ko roke hue tha,

"Richu...tanisha... Vanshu dii... Anshu... Monica dii... khushi...preeti... saurabh... urvashi... Nikita...dad...mom... Gudiya... Looks like...
This is the end for me"
Behte behte usne apni aankhein band rakhi, chehre par ek halki muskaan aur edkum se jese andhera sa chhaane laga uske saamne.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!

Dhanyawad!!
Wow, excellent update hey.
 
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