Incest Akhir kyu? From hatred to love (with pics) (Completed)

[maitik jain]

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[Rinku48079]

Bhai Intezaar hai Update ka

 

[Werewolf]

Update will come tonight. 9 se 10 baje ke beech aa jaega.

 

[parkas]

Update will come tonight. 9 se 10 baje ke beech aa jaega.

Waiting dear...

 

[spritemathews]

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills! Waiting for the next update

 

[Werewolf]

Kyi veer gusse ne k update nu keha c te update nai aaya

I agree

Jdo update di wait howe te update na aawe ta gussa aaunda prr ik vrr apne aap nu writr di jagah te rkh k dkho

Apni ik glti nl writr di sari mehntt te paani fir jnaa

Aapn ta hurry krde aa k update dao prr oss ne hune kmm finish kita so ik ta 22 relax ni hona ohde mind ch hje so recent work kita ohde thoughts hongee

Story te kive focus kru

J writer e relax ni ta oh apni story te kive work kru kive oh apne aap nu prepare kru story de flow lyi

J writer nu e likhn ch maza ni aaya fr aapn nu read krn ch kitho aaju

Oh ta apne kahe te likh dau jeho jeha likh hou bdd ch aapn e sbb kahage k update vdia ni c aah kami c update so ohnu ohde hisaab nl likhn dau

J update ik do din agg piche ho v gya ta fr ki ho gya

Jdo v aau update piche update nlo best hou

Bki veer v apne lyi o likh rhaa ohnu kehra money mildi aa veer v as a hobby likh rhaa

So 22 apna best dena chaunda so ohnu incourge kro veer

Bki veere bhtt sohni story aa

Keep it up

Hindi eni likhni aaundi ni ess lyi punjabi ch likh rhaa

Take ur time veere

Boht boht dhanyawad paaji for encouragement.

 

[Werewolf]

Bhai Aapne Khushi ka character jo ke shuru me dikhaya tha usse kahi jyada pyara aur cute ab dikha rahe ho use dekhkar lagta hai jaise ek Maasum bachchi apne manpasand khilone ko khona nahi chahti aur na hi wo khilona Kisi Dusare ke paas dekhna chahti hai wahi haal Khushi ka hai Rahul ko lekar na wo preeti ko aur na hi Monica ko Rahul ke karib dekhna chahti hai. Idhar Neha bhi Rahul ke baare me jaanne ke liye Roshani Ma'am ke paas pahunch gayi aur use ye jaankar ke Rahul ki job lucky ne hatwayi thi use shock laga use yad aaya Kaise wo Rahul ko berozgar aur nakara kahe kar tourchar kiya karti thi aur Nikita ke ghar jane par wo usko ye baate zarur batayegi aur shayad jo Nikita jaanti hai wo sab Neha ko Bata de, Anshu se bhi Pata chal jaye ke kaise Rahul ne use ab tak lucky se bachaya hai agar aisa Huaa to Ruchi ki shadi tak Neha ko lagbhag Rahul ke baare me sab Pata lag Jayega aur phir shayad wahi par last suspense se parda hat jaye. Dekhte hai wo waqt Kab aata hai.
Waiting for the next Update

Aapne jo jo khushi ke baare me kaha ekdum satya kaha. Mene yahi readers ko dikhaane ki koshish kari hai pichle update me ki kese khushi ek masoom si bacchi ki tarah behave karti hai rahul ke saamne. Aapne bakhubi usko samjha, matlab mein safal ho gaya apne vichaar vyakt karne me. Uske liye aapka dhanyawaad!!

 

[Werewolf]

bhai thoda bada hi krdo yar update ka size itne mai kich bhi ni bnta 10 min Mai khatam ho jata hai yar update.. Likhte aap bahut sahi ho but thoda chhota likhte ho yaar bura mt manna but yar plz thoda size bada krdo yar plz.. Baki new arc and plot was very good maza aa raha hai padhke and yahi umeed rahegi ki agla bhi tgda bnaoge and with more length.. All the best waiting for next update

Chota nahi hai bhai. Boht mehnat se itna bada likhta hu. Yadi aap shuru ke updates padhoge aur ab ke padhoge toh aapko size samajh aa jaega ki kitna badh gaya hai. Mein koshish kar raha hu zyaada se zyaada keywords ke update likhne ki.

 

[Werewolf]

Update - 76

Ab tak...

Nikita : raat ko dii jaane waali hai.

Neha : kya? Aaj? Shit! Mein abhi aati hu tere yaha. Unse milne ke liye.

Nikita : haa yaar! Aa jaana! Dii ki joining hai 4 din baad se toh dad unko lekar Bangalore jaa rahe hai. Unko settle karwaane.

Neha : haa! Mein aati hu bas abhi.

Nikita : okay!

*Call ends*

Ab aage...

Neha roshni ma'am ke ghar se jaldi jaldi unke haath ki banayi noodles khaa ke seedhe nikita ke ghar ki or prasthaan karti hai. Waha pohuchte hi wo dekhti hai ki richa apne bag me samaan set kar rahi hai.

Neha : richa didi?

Richa : neha?? Aa gayi tum?



Neha aage badh ke richa ke gale lagti hai aur wahi sofe par baith jaati hai, nikita aur uske mom dad se baat cheet shuru ho jaati hai,

Aarti (richa aur nikita ki maa) : aur beta? Nisha kesi hai? Thik hai na?

Neha : haa aunty sab badhiya...

Aarti : chalo accha hai. Aur rahul kidhar hai?

Nikita (zorr se) : mom...

Nikita ke zorr se kehte hi aarti ko dhyaan aata hai ki neha aur rahul ki aapas me nahi banti aur usse ye sawaal nahi puchna chaahiye tha neha se par ab kya? Ab toh muh se nikal gaya. Ab usse wapas thodi laaya jaa sakta hai. Par ascharya ki baat ye thi ki neha ne bina koi gussa dikhae normally hi jawaab de diya.

Neha : wo mumbai me hai aunty.

Neha ke iss jawaab se sabhi hairaan the, khaaskar nikita. Wo toh ascharya janik bhaav se neha ko ghoor rahi thi. Neha ne rahul ke baare me normally answer diya? Aisa kese?

Kherr! Nikalne ka samay hua, apno se gale milte hue richa cab me vinod (nikita aur richa ke dad) ke saath baith gayi aur aarti ne rote rote usse vida kiya. Neha bhi thodi derr baithne ke baad nikita ko uske room me le gayi.

Nikita : haa bol ab. Kya baat hai? Ab toh kamre me bhi aa gaye.

Neha : mein Roshni ma'am ke ghar gayi thi.

Nikita : roshni ma'am ke? Wo kyu?

Neha : unse rahul ki college life ke baare me puchne...

Nikita (shocked) : wait!!! Did you?? Did you just called him 'Rahul'??

Neha : .....

Nikita : I can't believe this! Tum toh hamesha unko bastard kehkar bulaati thi na? Ye... Ye sudden change kese? Kya hua? Tumhari aur unki sulaah ho gayi kya? Ya fir teri Tabiyat kbaraab hai?

Neha : noooo wayyyy nikki! Shut up! Don't talk nonsense! Mein bas puchne gayi thi aur mujhe kuch pata chala hai...

Nikita : kya??

Neha : yahi ki uski job wo sanjay sir ne hatwaayi thi aur fir usne sanjay sir ka raaz khola aur sanjay sir ke khilaaf FIR bhi hui... yahi sab...

Nikita : ohh wo baat! Wo toh mujhe pata hai.

Neha (shocked) : kya matlab tumhe pata hai? Tumhe pata tha toh mujhe bataya kyu nahi nikki?

Nikita : yaar! Tu hi toh kehti hai ki mere se kabhi bhi uske baare me baat mat kiya karo toh mein fir kya karu? Mene rahul bhaiya ke baare me baat karna isliye chorr diya hai tere se...

Neha : but... Thik hai fine! I'm going now.

Neha waha se muh latka ke fir wapas apne ghar laut jaati hai

Idhar Train me baithne ke baad jab vinod toilet gaye toh richa ne rahul ko phone kiya,

Rahul : haa richu!!

Richa : kese ho honey?

Rahul : mein thik hu richu par tumhaari yaad lagi rehti hai...

Richa (smiles) : mujhe bhool gaye ho kya?

Rahul : ye kesi baat hui?

Richa : tum mujhe yaad kar rahe ho na? Matlab tum mujhe bhool gaye, tabhi toh yaad kar rahe ho

Rahul (smiles) : pagli... Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai? Tum toh meri ho. Tumhe kese bhool sakta hu mein?

Rahul ke ye kehne se ki richa sirf uski hai pata nahi kyu par richa ke dil ki dhadkan tezz ho gayi, mann praffullit ho utha.

Richa (blush) : of course mein tumhari hu. Accha suno! I'm leaving!! Mein abhi train me hu dad ke saath.

Rahul : ohh!! Then have a safe journey. Waha pohuch ke call karna mujhe. Aur safe rehna okay? Koi bhi problem ho mujhe bina jhijak ke call kar dena okay?

Richa : accha baba theek hai. Ab rakhti hu, dad aa rahe hai. Bye bye, take care... Muuuaaahhhhh

Rahul (smiles) : hmmm...bye!!

*Call ends*

Aise hi samay ka pahiya aage badha aur inn beete hue dino me boht si baatein hui, boht se changes aae sabhi ki life me.

Rahul ne apna business saurabh ke saath milkar start kar diya tha. Uske 4 saal ke banaye hue software me thode boht changes saurabh ne apni taraf se kiye aur ek security software banaya. Saurabh ki madad se wo software khud ki official site pe daala as a trial version. Na keval itna hi par rahul ne khushi ke college ko apna software lene ke liye insist kiya aur college maan bhi gaya. Ab scene kuch aisa tha ki rahul schools, colleges, hospitals harr ek jagah jaha par data ko secure rakhna padta hai system me unko apna security software bechne laga. Dheere dheere uski site par traffic badhne laga aur boht se personal users, athwa choti companies bhi software download karne lagi. Rahul ne ek amount rakh diya paid version ke liye. Aur iss se dono ko kaafi paisa milne laga. Aage ke plan ke liye dono hi taiyaar the par uske liye unko revenue generate karna tha jo ki accha khaasa ho raha tha bas ab wait karna tha thode din.

Idhar 3 months ho chuke the toh rahul khushi ke ghar se wapas se saurabh ke paas aa gaya. Khushi kaafi royi but rahul ne usse promise kiya hua tha ki jab chaahe wo rahul ke paas aa sakti hai aur jab bhi usse rahul ki zaroorat ho toh rahul uske liye aa jaega. Bechaari inn beete hue mahino me rahul ke boht close ho gayi thi aur ab toh rahul usse ek parivaar ke hisse ki tarah lagne laga tha. Rahul uske liye harr ek type ka role play kar raha tha. Rahul usse kitchen me ek maa ki tarah dish banaana, sabziyaa kaatna, serve karna sab kuch sikhaata, ek baap ki tarah usse seekh deta, kab aur kon si cheez kese karni chaahiye, buddhimatta se kese chalna chahiye, pyaar se jab bhi rahul uske sar par haath ferta toh khushi ko ek alag hi feeling milti. Ek bhai ki tarah wo khushi ko protect karta, koi bhi aanch nahi aane deta uspe, aur ek lover ki tarah uska khayaal rakhta uski baatein maanta, aur usse pyaar bhi deta.

Rahul ye sab apne normal character ki wajah se hi karta tha, uska koi maqsad nahi tha ki khushi ko pataana hai. Par khushi ke point of view se rahul uske liye ek complete package tha wo boht protective feel karti jab jab wo rahul ke saath rehti. Kab 3 mahine complete ho gaye aur rahul jab uske saamne jaa raha tha toh wo sabke saamne hi ro padi. Boht samjhaane bujhaane par wo maani. Khushi ek jungli billi ki tarah thi jisse rahul ne poori tarah control kar liya tha aur ab toh jese khushi rahul ke bina reh hi nahi sakti thi ye haal ho gaya tha.

Preeti bhi kaafi close ho gayi thi rahul ke par wo hamesha thoda distance bana ke rakhti thi. Usse pata tha khushi ke andar rahul ke prati koi feelings hai aur wo rahul ke kareeb jaakar khushi ko dukhi nahi karna chaahti thi.

Monica ne rahul ko uski payment 3 months ke hisaab se already de dii thi aur wo wapas se gwalior chali gayi thi. Dono touch me bane hue the.

Neha ki life bhi kuch normal nahi thi. Wo roshni ma'am se samay milne par rahul ke baare me puchti aur fir uske baare me soch vichaar karti but fir wapas se rahul ke gande bol aur vyawhaar ko yaad karke firse gusse se aag baboola ho jaati.

Waade ke anusaar rahul ko 3 mahine ke baad ab ghar laut aa jaana chahiye tha nisha se milne par 2 mahine baad ruchi didi ki shaadi thi isliye ye decide hua ki rahul sabhi se ruchi didi ke ghar par hi milega. Nisha kaafi naraaz hui rahul ke iss decision se but fir baad me maan gayi.

Richa Bangalore settle ho chuki thi aur uska waha sab badhiya chal raha tha. Time to time wo rahul ko call kar uss se baatein karti aur rahul ke mana karne ke baad bhi jaan bujh ke apni payment me se kuch hissa rahul ke account me transfer kar deti.

Tanisha bhi rahul ko kaafi miss kar rahi thi. Apne dincharya se wo kaafi bore hone lagi thi. Nisha se milne wo zaroor jaati rehti aur dono nisha aur tanisha me shaadi ke pehle se hi kaafi tagdi bonding bann chuki thi.

Anshu aur vanshu bhi apni daily life me busy rehne lagi par wo dono bhi rahul ko kaafi miss kar rahi thi. Keval call pe hi baat hoti. Par taniya ne anshu aur vanshu ko bhi with family invite kiya hua tha isliye dono 2 mahine ke baad ka wait kar rahi thi ki kab wo rahul se waha par milengi.

Ye toh tha poora varnan ki 3 mahine baad sabhi ki life me kya kya changes aae. Ab iss se pehle ki hum agle do mahine ke time skip pe chale, aaiye tab tak dekhte hai ki khushi aur preeti ke beech kya vartalaap hua 3 mahine baad.

Khushi : preeti...

Preeti : kya hua khushi? Tu harr baar mujhe bulaati hai aur jab mein puchti hu kya hua toh muh latka ke baith jaati hai aur kuch bolti hi nahi hai...

Khushi : I'm sad...very sad...

Preeti : Rahul chala gaya isliye?

Khushi : I think so...

Preeti : I think so ki bacchi... Seedhe seedhe bol na ki tujhe uske jaane se accha nahi lag raha aur isliye tu sad hai. Baatein kyu ghuma rahi hai?

Khushi : okay okay...! I admit! Preeti...

Preeti : hmmm!?

Khushi (blush) : I think... I think I love him

Preeti (smiles) : I know!!

Khushi (surprised) : tujhe kese pata?

Preeti : yaar! Sab ko pata hai. Already dikhta hai. Teri harqate, teri nazre uski taraf dekhte waqt, tera ravaiyaa uske prati, tere bol chaal sab kuch dikhta hai, aur koi bhi bata dega ki tujhe uss se pyaar hai.

Khushi (blush) : ......

Khushi ekdum se preeti ke gale lag jaati hai aur apne chehra sharm ke maare uske kandho me chhupa leti hai.

Khushi : preeti....

Preeti : hmm!?

Khushi : you love him too right?

Preeti (haklaate hue) : wh..wha..whaatt?? N..noo wayy!! Mein...mein kyu pyaar karne lagi u..usse.??

Khushi : Preeti! Don't fool me! I know! You love him! Jese tu mujhe padh sakti hai wese hi mein bhi tujhe padh sakti hu. And I know... Ki tum mere khaatir uske zyaada paas nahi jaati. Hai na? Bolo... Tumhe meri kasam!

Preeti (kuch derr baad) : hmm!!

Khushi (smiles) : I knew it. Par mein sirf tere saath share kar sakti hu. Sirf tere saath okay?

Preeti : khushi? Tu pagal hai kya? Wo koi toffee nahi hai...

Khushi : wo toffee hi hai hehe!! Ek taraf se mein khaungi aur ek taraf se tum

Preeti (blush) : pagal hai kya? Kya bole jaa rahi ho ye tum?

Khushi (blush) : wtf preeti?? Mera matlab wo nahi tha. Mera matlab choti waali toffee se hi tha.

Preeti : haa! Woh toh dekh hi liya tha humne uss din college ke boys toilet me ki kitne size ki hai wo toffee?

Khushi (blush) : preeetttiiiiii.... Dhattt!!! Besharam kahi ki...

Preeti : waah! Ab mein besharam ho gayi?

Khushi(gale lagte hue) : I love him. You Love him too! Mein sirf teri khaatir usse share kar sakti hu tere saath, because I love you too. Mein nahi chaahti ki tu sad hoye.

Preeti (emotional hote hi) : tujhe mere liye itna karne ki koi zaroorat nahi pagli. Mein toh yahi chahti hu ki tu khush rahe bas aur kuch nahi.

Khushi : Nooo! We will be happy together.

Preeti : hmm!!!

Aise hi 2 mahine beet gaye, rahul aur saurabh ki earning chaalu ho chuki thi aur ab wo aatmnirbhar bann ne lage the par abhi bhi manzil boht dur thi, rahul ne thodi badi companies se contact karne ka soch liya tha, uske liye usse apna software uss level ka karna padega aur saath hi saath aur bhi cheeze laani padengi par unn sab ke liye paisa lagega aur wo hi revenue abhi usse generate karna hai.

Kherr! Wo samay aa hi gaya, ruchi didi ki shaadi ka samay. Rahul ne thode din ke liye gap lene ke liye saurabh ko bhi apne saath rakh liya thoda refreshment ho jaega dono ka. Pichle kuch mahino me boht bhaag daud jo ho gayi thi.

Idhar nisha nikalne ki taiyaari me lagi hui thi.

Nisha : nehaaaa!?? Arre wo snacks waala bag kitchen me hi reh gaya, bahar le aa.

Neha : laayi mom...

Rajesh : sab kuch ready hai na? Cab aane hi waali hai...

Nisha : aap tension mat lo, sab kuch ready hai.

Thodi hi derr me cab aa jaati hai aur sabhi log baith ke ghar lock kar ke station ki taraf nikal padte hai.

Station par pohuchte hi andar hi unhe anshu, vanshu, aur Vineeta, rupesh aur vedant (anshu aur vanshu ke mom dad aur chota bhai) mil gaye. Sabhi invited the toh sabhi ne saath me jaane ka plan kar liya tha.

Rupesh : chote... Sab samaan rakh liya na? Koi cheez bhoole toh nahi ho na?

Rajesh : haa bhaiya! Sab ready hi hai.

Vineeta : aa gayi meri gudiya... Aaja aaja apni tai jii ke paas.

Neha jaake apni tai jii ke gale milti hai, unke charan sparsh karti hai wahi nisha bhi dono Anshu vanshu aur vishal ko gale se lagati hai.

Kuch hi derr baad gapshap me time beet jaata hai aur train aa jaati hai, sabhi samaan andsr rakhwaate hai aur birth dhoondne ke baad samaan rakh kar settle ho jaate hai.

Lucknow tak ka safar tae karna hai, uss hisaab se dono hi ghar ke logo ne khaana peena ready kar rakha tha, nisha ne kachoriya aur pulao banaaya tha toh wahi vineeta ne train ke safar ke hisaab se puri aur aloo ki sabziya taaki bacche bhar pait khaa sake.

Bade log apne me lage hue the toh wahi neha, anshu aur vanshu apne me lagi hui thi, vishal toh mobile me hi game khel raha tha aur yaha inki ladkiyo waali gossip shuru ho chuki thi.

Anshu : college kesa chal raha hai nehu?

Neha : badhiya didi! Sab kuch accha hai.

Anshu : chalo accha hai!!

Vanshu : choti cutie aa raha hai na?

Anshu : haa dii! Phone par toh bataya tha bhai ne ki woh aaenge par unhone date nahi batayi.

Vanshu : ohhh!! Kherr waha pohuch ke toh pata lag hi jaega.

Idhar ye dono apne me lagi hui thi aur kaafi excited thi waha pohuchne ke liye par yaha hamaari neha khidki ke side se baithe hue chalti train se baahar ke raat ke andhere aur chaand ki roshni se ujaagar ho rahe nazaare ko dekh khoyi hui kisi soch me padi thi, kya uska bada bhai aaega? Yadi aaega toh wo kese face kare usse? Kya kych badla hoga uske baare me itne mahino me? Kya wo ab bhi wesa hi hai? Yadi haa toh sabke muh se uski tareef kyu sunn ne ko milti hai? Rahul ki asli pehchaan kya hai?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Next update se boht saara drama, romance, emotional scenes, sex scenes dekhne ko milenge aapko. Action pehle hi dikha diya hai mene toh aane waale iss arc me action kam rahega, boht kam but romance, hot scenes boht milenge, emotional scenes bhi dekhne ko milenge.
Tab tak ke liye... Dhanyawad!

 

[Werewolf]

wonderfull update bhai ji

Awesome updates

Monica ko to pehle se hi pata hai ki Rahul ki ek gf bhi hai fir ghabrana kis baat kaa
Vaise Master hi main villian naa ban jaaye khushi aur rahul ki shadi ke chakkar mai

Super duper fabulous update.......?

Superb update bro....

nice update

Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha

superb updates, waiting for some unexpected things.

Awesomeupdate
WAITING for NEXT
Kahan Dhoondhoge Mujhko, Mera Pata Lete Jao,
Ek Kabr Nai Hogi Us Par Jalta Diya Ho.

कहाँ ढूंढोगे मुझको, मेरा पता लेते जाओ,
एक कब्र नई होगी उस पर जलता दिया होगा।

Waiting for n ext

Awsome update good job ??

bhai thoda bada hi krdo yar update ka size itne mai kich bhi ni bnta 10 min Mai khatam ho jata hai yar update.. Likhte aap bahut sahi ho but thoda chhota likhte ho yaar bura mt manna but yar plz thoda size bada krdo yar plz.. Baki new arc and plot was very good maza aa raha hai padhke and yahi umeed rahegi ki agla bhi tgda bnaoge and with more length.. All the best waiting for next update

Bahot shaandar update bhai maza aa gaya.

Nice update bhai... Update me pic bhi add karo..

Very nice update

Awesome update

fantastic update

Beautiful update

bhot acha update tha bhai..... New chapter shuru ho gaya h aab

Agle update ka wait h

Nice update. Neha ko eaise hi surprise milte rahana chahiye Rahul k bare me.

Superb update

Awesome update
Bangalore ja rhi h Matlab milna to hoga
Keep posting

Sandarrrr update bhai

mast mast ,,
great going .... emotions beautifully portrayed

keep rocking

Nice update

Nice one

Nice update

Nice Update Bhai
Lagta hai New Arc me Bahot Maza aane wala hai.
Waiting for the next Update

Mast update bhai ab sayad Monica apni bat bata de aur neha rahul ke bare me kyu puch rahi hai lagta hai sach ugalba hii lega

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai bhai..
Nice and hot update...

Nice update keep updating the story

wating new update bhaii

Any Chance of update today?

बहुत ही लाजवाब अपडेट दोस्त शुक्रिया आपका

Awesome update bahut badhiya bhai
Waiting for the next update

Hello Bhai kidr h.
Update kidr h

Very nice going

Nice update

Waiting for the next update

Bhai Aapne Khushi ka character jo ke shuru me dikhaya tha usse kahi jyada pyara aur cute ab dikha rahe ho use dekhkar lagta hai jaise ek Maasum bachchi apne manpasand khilone ko khona nahi chahti aur na hi wo khilona Kisi Dusare ke paas dekhna chahti hai wahi haal Khushi ka hai Rahul ko lekar na wo preeti ko aur na hi Monica ko Rahul ke karib dekhna chahti hai. Idhar Neha bhi Rahul ke baare me jaanne ke liye Roshani Ma'am ke paas pahunch gayi aur use ye jaankar ke Rahul ki job lucky ne hatwayi thi use shock laga use yad aaya Kaise wo Rahul ko berozgar aur nakara kahe kar tourchar kiya karti thi aur Nikita ke ghar jane par wo usko ye baate zarur batayegi aur shayad jo Nikita jaanti hai wo sab Neha ko Bata de, Anshu se bhi Pata chal jaye ke kaise Rahul ne use ab tak lucky se bachaya hai agar aisa Huaa to Ruchi ki shadi tak Neha ko lagbhag Rahul ke baare me sab Pata lag Jayega aur phir shayad wahi par last suspense se parda hat jaye. Dekhte hai wo waqt Kab aata hai.
Waiting for the next Update

Koi Baat nahi Bhai Hum Intezaar kar lenge.

Good, bro keep in touch. You inform us about your social activities now everybody will wait and didn't gossip

Nice update

Nice update dear aapne kahani ko ek naya mod de diya hai ab dekhna hai ki kahani kis oor jati hai. Keep writing and keep thinking to make it batter then more batter keep it up

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Bhai Aaj update Milega kya??

Update bhai

waiting

Waiting for the next update...

सायद मुश्किल है आज भी

Mast

Waiting for next update bhai

Waiting for next update

Don't Worry Bhai.
Writer ka kaam hey likhna
Reader ka kaam hey support and encourage kana
Hence take your time and write.
Our support always there for delay due to genuine reasons

waiting new update

Bhai tumhe jab update dena hai do bas pahle ye na bola karo ki aaj update aayga..kal update aayga..bas de diya karo ....

wating new update bhaiii

Kyi veer gusse ne k update nu keha c te update nai aaya

I agree

Jdo update di wait howe te update na aawe ta gussa aaunda prr ik vrr apne aap nu writr di jagah te rkh k dkho

Apni ik glti nl writr di sari mehntt te paani fir jnaa

Aapn ta hurry krde aa k update dao prr oss ne hune kmm finish kita so ik ta 22 relax ni hona ohde mind ch hje so recent work kita ohde thoughts hongee

Story te kive focus kru

J writer e relax ni ta oh apni story te kive work kru kive oh apne aap nu prepare kru story de flow lyi

J writer nu e likhn ch maza ni aaya fr aapn nu read krn ch kitho aaju

Oh ta apne kahe te likh dau jeho jeha likh hou bdd ch aapn e sbb kahage k update vdia ni c aah kami c update so ohnu ohde hisaab nl likhn dau

J update ik do din agg piche ho v gya ta fr ki ho gya

Jdo v aau update piche update nlo best hou

Bki veer v apne lyi o likh rhaa ohnu kehra money mildi aa veer v as a hobby likh rhaa

So 22 apna best dena chaunda so ohnu incourge kro veer

Bki veere bhtt sohni story aa

Keep it up

Hindi eni likhni aaundi ni ess lyi punjabi ch likh rhaa

Take ur time veere

Koi Baat nahi aap kaam kar rahe hai ise hum samajhte hai aur waise bhi inteja ka phal meeth hota hai suna hai to dekhte hai is intejar me kya milta hai we waiting

Nic update w8ing next

waiting

Bhai Intezaar hai Update ka

Waiting dear...

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills! Waiting for the next update

Update has been posted guys!!