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Incest Akhir kyu? From hatred to love (with pics) (Completed)

Kya hero ne jo bhi kiya wo sahi kiya? (Voting aap sabhi 2-3 update pdhne k baad karna)

  • Hn sahi kiya

    Votes: 338 67.3%
  • Nahi, apni behan k sath aisa nhi krna tha

    Votes: 56 11.2%
  • Rahul nirdosh hai

    Votes: 89 17.7%
  • Neha nirdosh hai

    Votes: 19 3.8%

  • Total voters
    502

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Bahut hi khubsurat story hai bhai main aapko xossip se hi padta raha hu apki story me ek ajib c sawad hota hai jis me pyar nafrat gussa aur naa Jane kitni feeling hoti hai jise aap bahut hi ache tarika se apni kalam se sanjiv chitran karte hai
Shukriya bhai!
 
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Saala jis kahani Ko padhna start karta hu uske update aane band ho jaate Hain
Toh ye baat aap yaha kyu bata rahe ho mitr? ಥ‿ಥ
 
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Yaar ye saspence jaldi khatm karo hun readers ka hum question ka answer nahi kar pa rhe pls dear writer
Overall nice update
Wate for next
Samay aane par sab saamne aa jaega mitr!
Abhi sahi samay nahi hai!
 

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Update - 70

Ab tak...

Neha : nahiiiiiiiiii....

Kehti hui neha ekdum se apne bistar se uthti hai. Uske chehre par paseena tha. Saasein tezz. Aur baal bikhre hue the. Kal lucky ke saath hui wo ghatna, aur aaj raat sapne me puraani bhayaanak ateet waali yaadein.

Neha (mann me) : kya chal raha hai? Kya mein kabhi chenn se jee paungi? Ab toh raat me sapno me bhi wahi puraane manzar dikhayi dete hai...

Mann me sochte hue wo uthti hai toh dekhti hai subah ke 6 baj rahe hai aur wo uth kar washroom me chali jaati hai.


Ab aage...

Ek dusre sheher me ek bade se ghar me balcony me ek khubsoorat se jhoole par ek khubsoorat sii ladki baithi hui chai ki chuski ka anand le rahi thi.

Subah ka waqt tha, aur ye ladki apne hi khayaalo me gum hokar na jaane kya soch rahi thi ki tabhi peeche se aayi ek awaaz ne jese usse hosh me laaya,

"Arre madam! Kya soch rahi ho jabse baith ke? Chai khatam ho gayi ho toh jao naha dho lo, 9 baj rahe hai" ek madhur sii awaaz ne jhoole par baithi hui ladki se kaha.

Ladki : kya ruchi didi? Aap jaiye na apne college aur padhaiye students ko... Subah subah mujhe kyu lecture dene lagi? Mein kitna focused thi abhi abhi aur aapne mera dhyaan bhatka diya

Ruchi jo ladki ki badi behan hai muskuraati hai, aur apne baal towel se sukhaate hue kehti hai,

Ruchi : jaa hi rahi hu madam, aur tum kya soch rahi thi subah subah? Haa? Apne sapno ka rajkumaar mil gaya kya?

Ladki (blush) : n..nahi toh. Kyu?

Ruchi : dekh rahi hu mein...tu kabhi kabhi baith ke kuch na kuch sochti rehti hai. Chalo! Tum baith ke usse yaad karo, mein toh chali...

Kehte hue wo palat kar neeche chali jaati hai college ke liye,

Idhar wo ladki muskuraate hue chai pee rahi thi aur apne pyaar ko yaad kar rahi thi

Ladki (mann me) : kitne din guzar gaye tumse mile, pata nahi tum kya kar rahe hoge iss waqt. Na jaane kya aisa jaadu kiya hai tumne ki ab toh baat karne me bhi sharam aati hai. I miss you... Chapadganju!!

Tabhi peeche se ek aur awaaz aati hai, "Taniya beti!!! Chal neeche aa jaa, tera naashta thanda ho raha hai"

Taniya : aayi maaa......

Aur fir daudte hue wo neeche chali jaati hai.

Idhar gwalior me nikita neha ko lekar college me pohuchi, dono ke beech raaste bhar koi baat cheet nahi hui. Nikita ko kal ki hui vardaat ke baare me kuch nahi pata tha, usse sirf itna pata tha ki neha kal college se lucky ke saath nikli thi aur aaj wo sahi salaamat hai toh iska kya matlab hai? Matlab ki ye ki lucky ne kuch nahi kiya ya fir rahul ne neha ki help kari hogi.

College pohuchne ke baad hi dono saath me hi baithi hui thi, ek do lectures tak dono me abhi bhi koi baat nahi hui. Neha baar baar bolne ke liye apna muh kholti par fir kuch keh hi nahi paati. Usse boht guilty feel ho raha tha, usne apni best friend ki baat ko ansuna kar diya aur fir anjaam bhukta. Badi himmat karke neha ne akhir apna muh khola,

Neha : nikki... We need to talk.

Nikita : hmm!!

Neha : I'm sorry!!!

Neha ke ekdum se aise sorry kehne par nikita thodi chaunki aur sorry ka kaaran pucha,

Neha : I'm so sorry nikki! Tum sahi thi. Tumne kal sab kuch sahi kaha tha. Wo lucky... Wo lucky mere saath kal zabardasti karne ki koshish kar raha tha. I...I...

Nikita (neha ka haath thaamte hue) : don't worry! Araam se kaho... Don't panic! Mein yahi hu.

Apni best friend ki baat sunn neha bhawuk ho jaati hai aur usse apne gale se laga leti hai, beech class me sabhi log inn dono ko hi dekh rahe the.

Nikita : it's okay neha!! Koi baat nahi!! Aur ab chorr bhi.. sab hame hi dekh rahe hai.

Neha apne aasu pochte hue shaant hoti hai toh nikita usse aage ki baat bataane ke liye kehti hai, jab neha kal ki hui poori vardaat sunaati hai toh nikita gusse se laal ho jaati hai aur Lucky ko khari khoti sunaane lagti hai,

Nikita (gusse me) : mujhe pata tha iski nazar shuru se hi tujh par bigdi hui hai, kameena kahi ka... Par tune dekha na... Rahul bhaiya ne hi tujhe bachaya...

Neha uski iss baat par kuch nahi bolti hai ki tabhi unki class teacher aa jaati hai aur saath hi roshni ma'am bhi aati hai jo rahul ke batch ki class teacher thi.

Class teacher : students!! Aaj se aapki class teacher roshni ma'am hai. Aur ye aapko maths padhaengi...

Nikita : ye toh richa didi aur rahul bhaiya ki class ki teacher thi na? Ab ye hume padhaengi? I'm excited...hihihi!!

Roshni Ma'am : hello students! My name is roshni and from today onwards I'll be teaching you guys mathematics and also I will be your class teacher. Is that clear?

Sab ek saath : yes ma'am

Fir puraani class teacher chali jaati hai aur roshni ma'am class me sabka introduction lene lagti hai, jab neha apna intro deti hai toh roshni Ma'am samajh jaati hai ki neha rahul ki behan hai. Par unko dono ke beech ki nafrat ke baare me kuch nahi pata.

Roshni ne ek question board par likha aur uske muh se achanak hi nikal gaya,
"Rahul! Go and solve that"

Nikita : ahem... Ma'am!! Hamari class me rahul koi bhi nahi hai

Roshni jese ye sunn ke hosh me aati hai, rahul ko question dekar uss se solve karwaana uski aadat ban chuki thi.

Roshni : I'm sorry students! Mujhe tumhaare ek senior bhaiya ki yaad aa gayi...

Neha : aur kon hai wo senior ma'am?

Roshni (smiles) : tumhaara bada bhai. He was the best student I've ever had.

Neha : ........

Idhar neha ki life me thodi adhchane zaroor thi par wo surakshit thi filhal ke liye toh.

Yaha mumbai me rahul khushi aur preeti ke saath unki class me lecture ke dauraan roz ki tarah peeche khada hua tha ki tabhi uska phone baj utha,

Rahul : hello?

Saurabh : abe saale.... Tu yaha mujhe chorr kar kaha ghum raha hai? Kitne dino se mein maggi aur bread kha kha ke nikaal raha hu, kaha hai tu?

Saurabh ki baat sunn rahul ki hassi chhoot gayi, bechara waha maggi aur bread kha kha ke apna pait bhar raha tha.

Karta bhi kya? Uss se inke alawa kuch aata hi nahi tha.

Rahul : I'm sorry yaar! Mein kaafi busy hu. 3 mahine aise hi chalega. Tu tension mat le, mein tere liye tiffin lagwa deta hu. Aur kaam kaha tak pohucha?

Saurabh : bhai! Courses saare khatam kar diye hai mene.

Rahul : kya baat hai mere sher! Ye hui na kuch baat. Ab sunn! Ab chuki tune courses kar liye hai toh mein drive par tujhe ek protocol bhej raha hu.

Saurabh : kis cheez ka protocol?

Rahul : ek software hai. Jis par mene 4 saal mehnat ki hai.

Saurabh : kya? Toh ab tak tu ye chhupa ke rakha tha?

Rahul : yadi tu courses nahi karta toh tujhe samajh nahi aati iski coding. Isliye tujhe pehle courses karwae mene. Ab mein jo bhej raha hu usse acche se samajhna aur fir bataana apne views.

Saurabh : toh aage ka kya plan hai?

Rahul : aage ka mission hi toh sabse important hai mere bhai. Chal! Mein baad me baat karta hu.

*Call ends*

Lunch hote hi rahul washroom ke liye nikalta hai toh usse corridor ke paas hi ek ladki dikhayi deti hai jo usse ishaare kar ke bula rahi thi.

Rahul aage badha toh dekha ki ladki kaafi khubsoorat thi. Patla slim figure, medium size ke boobs, gora rang, kaale baal, aur teekhe nain.

Rahul : aapne mujhe bulaaya?

Ladki : jii haa!! Mein urvashi!! Aur aap?

Rahul : I'm rahul.

Urvashi : zara waha andar chaliye na, mene suna hai aap kisi student ke body guard ho toh aapke alaawa ye kaam aur kon kar sakta hai?

Rahul : kesa kaam?

Urvashi : waha hamare classroom me wo board nikal gaya hai, please laga dijiye.

Urvashi ne apne nichle honth ko daanto me dabaate hue kaha

Rahul : well! Okay! Thik hai! Chaliye!

Urvashi rahul ko lekar sabse upar ki floor me le gayi aur waha ek classroom ke andar jab rahul pohucha toh dekha ki kareeb 8 se 10 ladkiya waha baithi hui hai aur board ek side se gira hua hai.

Rahul (mann me) : kuch gadbad zaroor hai. Itne upar ke floor me kon si class lagne lagi? Aur yaha pe baaki classrooms me toh koi bhi nahi hai, sab kuch khaali pada hai. Toh fir yaha ye sirf 8-10 ladkiya kya kar rahi hai? Aur inke bags kaha hai? Zaroor kuch gadbad hai...

Rahul bina kuch kahe aage badhta hai aur board ko set karne lagta hai, saari ladkiya usse khaa jaane waali nazro se dekh rahi thi. Jese maano registaan me unhe paani mil gaya ho.

Abhi rahul board set kar hi raha tha ki itne me urvashi ne gate ko andar se lock kiya aur baaki baithi hui sabhi ladkiya rahul par jhapat padi aur usse chaaro or se gher kar uske haath perr pakad liye.

Rahul khud ko chudhaane ki koshish kiya par 8-10 ladkiya uss se chumbak ke bhaati chipki hui thi, tabhi urvashi aayi aur rahul ke saamne aake khadi ho gayi aur uski chin apne haatho me lekar uske kareeb aayi,

Urvashi : koi akhiri khwahish ho toh bata do mere raja.

Kehte hue Achanak hi usne ek chaaku nikal liya aur rahul ke gale par rakh diya,

Rahul : ye sab chal kya raha hai?

Urvashi : haa! I think tumhaare marrne se pehle tumhe ye toh pata chalna hi chahiye!

Rahul : ..........

Urvashi : toh suno! Hum yaha keval khushi ke liye hai. Hamaara target sirf aur sirf khushi hai. Ab kyuki tum hamaare raaste me ho isliye tumhe maarna pad raha hai warna hamaari tumse koi dushmani nahi hai.

Rahul : tum log kon ho? Kisne bheja hai tumhe?

Urvashi : well! Thik hai mein tumhe bataati hu. I guess tumhe kuch bhi nahi pata. Toh suno dhyaan se...
Mein iss gang ki leader hu. Naam toh tum jaante hi ho. Ab humko mission mila hai ki khushi ko kidnap karke dena hai toh badle me hume paise milenge. Toh bas isliye hum yaha par hai, hume nahi pata aage khushi ke saath kya kiya jaega.

Rahul : oh accha!? Maan na padega jisne bhi ye mission tum log ko diya hai wo waqai boht bada bewakoof insaan hai. Ladkiyo ko bhej diya kidnap karne?

Urvashi : hahahaha! Par tum bhi toh mere jhaase me fass gaye na? Ladki par koi shaq nahi karta, bas yahi kaaran hai ki hum yaha par hai. Hume sirf paiso se matlab hai. I'm sorry! But boht ho gayi baatein. Ab tum ko jaana hoga iss duniya se...

Rahul : ek sawaal aur hai

Urvashi : theek hai! Wo bhi pooch lo...

Rahul : tumlog yaha aae kese aur kisi ko kuch pata hi nahi chala? Aur toh aur khule aam mujhe pakad bhi liya fir bhi kisi ko kaano kaan khabar bhi nahi hai?

Urvashi : hmm! Theek ye! Ye bhi jaan hi lo ab. Hum tumpar kayi dino se nigraani rakhe hue the. Aur college me entry dilwaana toh maamuli kaam hai. Humko ye sab arrange kar ke diya gaya tha jisne humko ye mission diya ussi ne sab arrange karwaaya. College ki uniform bhi aise hi mil gayi, aur upar ye floor abhi construction par hai toh koi aata jaata nahi. Ab itne bade college me kon pehchaanega humko ki hum naye hai ya puraane students. Simple!

Rahul : kamaal hai! Aur ek akhiri sawaal. Wo kon hai jisne tumlogo ko mission par bheja?

Urvashi : boht ho gaye sawaal jawaab! Ab tumhara the end bolne ka time aa gaya.

Rahul : arre arre! Dekho! Mein toh marrne hi waala hu kam se kam mujhe sacchayi jaan ne ka haq toh do. Kam se kam mujhe pata toh chale marrne se pehle.

Urvashi : nahi!! Hume ye bataane se mana kiya gaya hai.

Rahul : accha toh fir meri aakhiri khwahish hi poori kar do.

Urvashi : aur kitni khwahish hai tumhaari?

Rahul : please! Dekho! Mein marrne waala hu, kam se kam apni ek iccha poori karke toh maru.

Urvashi : kaho!

Rahul : bas ek lip to lip kiss karni hai aapko

Urvashi (shocked) : whaaat??? Ye kya bakwaas hai? Girls! Isse thikaane lagao!

Rahul : please!! Dekhiye! Mene kabhi bhi kisi ladki ke saath kiss nahi kari, aap itni sundar ho. Ek kiss de dogi toh kya bigad jaega? Fir aap jo chaahe kar lena.

Urvashi (blush) : mein...mein... Ayy rupa! Tum kiss karo isse aur fir isse hum thikaane lagae.
Mein koi bhi kaam beimaani se nahi karti.

Rupa (blush) : kyaaa??? Par... par... Bosss!!

Urvashi : tum karti ho ya nahi?

Rupa darr ke maare rahul ki taraf badhti hai aur apni aakhein band kar leti hai, rahul bhi apni aakhein band kar ke rupa ke gulaabi hontho ki taraf badhta hai aur unhe apne muh me bhar leta hai.



Rupa ki siski nikal jaati hai, ye uske jeevan ka pehla chumban tha. Uski pakad rahul par se dheeli hone lagti hai aur wo madhur chumban ke ehsaas me doobne lagti hai.

Baaki sabhi ladkiya bhi bas dono ke honth aur jeebh apas me lipte hue dekh rahi thi aur dheere dheere wo bhi garam ho gayi aur unki pakad bhi rahul par dheeli ho gayi. Urvashi bhi apne nichle honth ko daant se daba kar rahul aur Rupa ke ho rahe chumban ko dekh kar ke uska ehsaas lene ki koshish kar rahi thi. Aise pehle unke saath kabhi nahi hua tha.

Sabhi saamne ho rahe nazaare me ghum the ki itne me rahul ne mauka dekh ke rupa ko ekdum se ghuma diya aur apni khud ki chaku jo uske jeb me rakhi hui thi usse nikaal kar rupa ke gale par laga dii.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto!
Ye arc poora khushi ke baare me hai. Ye sirf kuch updates tak chalega. Jab rahul inn sab se deal kar lega tab wo apni business journey start karega.
 

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Nice one bhai
Hmmm... To aaj raaz khul hi gya k neha kyu hero se nafrat karti hai. Aur iska karan bas mom dad aur rahul teeno ko pta hai.
Awesome updates
Yr to.aadha hi raaz tha
Bahut hi Khubsurat update
bhai aise hi Kahani Ko banae rakhen Lekin in San me Hero ko lucky se thoda Jyada Badla Lena chahie mujhe lagta hai ki hero lucky ke liye thoda Naram hai
Jabardasttt update bhai
Aakhir pta chal gya neha kyu nafrat krti h hero se
Acha to ye tha mega update
Jis ki waja sy 1 din late howa h


Bro ye pehly ki trha normal lenght Wala update h.
Mast emotional full update bhai ye to adha hii hua hai neha ke taraf se bhi sahi hai rahul ko konsa pressure ban gaya tha jo aisa kiya dekhte hain agle update me
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

To aakhirkaar monica ne bacha hi liya Bheema ke sath milkar neha ko lucky ke changul se.
Bahut hi behtareen update yaaraa.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar
Superb.......
Update ki ek ek line romanchak thi bhai..10 min lage pdne main magar jo padha ho feel kia wo ahsaas hi alag tha yaar.. It's just fantastic will be waiting for next update
Awesome update bhai..
Ise hi kehte hain bina poori baat sune samjhe faisla lena nhi chahiye..
Superb Update bhai waiting again for next ?
अभी अभी पड़ा है अपडेट तो फिलहाल यही कहूंगा की सुपर बेहतरीन कोई जवाब नहीं:superb::thanks:
और बधाई हो आपको 400 पेज पुरे होने पर :congrats:
Nice update
Awesome update
Nice update parh kar maja aaya
Zabardast update
Superb updates, waiting for new twist.
Wah bhai maja aagaya padke vo raaz jaanne intazaar rahegaa..
Waiting for the next one....
Brother maza Agaya update pad kar neha ka flashback ka scene amazing hai aur yeh waja hai uksa Rahul se hate karni ki ab Agaya dekte hai age Kya hoga
And ab Rahul ka reason bhi dekta hai ki use ese Kyu kiya. Congrats 400 pages complete Kar ne ke liya .
Agle Update ka intezar rahe ga
Oo teri ki.. suspens pe suspens... Abb Rahul ne Aisa kyo kaha... Ye bhi sochne wala baat hai.. aur asli Raj Neha ko kab pata chalne wala hai..

Khair bro update to ekdam fadu tha.. keep it rocking...
fantastic update maja
agaya
Jabardast update raaz janne ke liye ugla update tak intejer karna parga waiting bhai
Sandar update...............?

Keep posting...................?

Waiting for next???.................?
Ye kya tha.....
Rahul jise hum hero sMjte the usne apni bahan k bare me esa kaha.ki kash vo paida hi na hoti ya mar jay.....
Bhai ye baat to ek bahan k liye sahime ghatak he.....
Neha bilkool sahi kar rahi he ese bhai ko to sajaa deni chahiye 2 taffado se kuchh nahi hoga....
Lekin rahul ne esa kaha ye baat bhi galle nahi utar rahi.....
Koi to reason hoga jo rahul ne esa kiya....???
Wse update jabrdast tha...
Keep rocking....
Badi chalaki se aadha hi flashback dikhaya bhai... Man na padega ....
Mast update tha bhai mujhe to lagta hai rahul ne Neha ki baat phone p pehle hi sun li(kiss wali) thi iss liye ye sab kiya ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai waiting for next update bhai.
Nice update Bhai
Awesome fabulous update
Lakin flashbacks h ki sapna pata hi nahi chal RHA h
Keep posting
अदभुत अपडेट
Nice update

Waiting for the next update bro
Ek no bhai. Adha raaz janke ab pura raaz janne ka mann badh gya hai....

Also congratulations for reaching 400 pages.
Fantastic update
Nice update bhai
Nice update bro
Waiting for next update
Update achha tha Bhai
Lekin Rahul ne aisa kyo kiya aur uske Maa Baap ne agar uska sath nahi diya to use roka bhi nahi aise kyo agar wo usi din sab clear kara lete to Aaj dono Bhai Bahen ke bich Itni nafrat na hoti.
Aapne kya Socha hai aage aapko hi Pata Bas koshish karna Neha ke Aankho Se ek ek kar nafrat ke parde jald hate aur har parda hatne par Neha ki Rahul ke liye Tadap badhti jaye.
Agle update ka intezaar hai
awsm update
Excellent update brother keep posting waiting your next update
Thank you
Mai is baat par believe nahi karta neha ka sach a jane ke baad bhi boht ziyada story ban sakti haiabi to story mai meri nazar mai just starting hai hero ne ab professional life mai kadam rakha hai to kiya banta hai kitne power hasil karta hai dekhu ga
Thora update jaldi diya karen ap ki story bohat achi hai is liye
Waiting for next update
Ek baat bolna to bhool he geya yeh jo last update thi beshak neha ko galat fehmi he kui na hui ho but wo pyar karti thi apne bhai se jo suna dekha us par believe kiya us ne is mai definately galti rahul ki hai neha dil se pyar karti thi aur ap ki ek update k to mai full against hu mind ni karna rahul ki choti behan hai neha rahul ne kui ek update mai hath marora tha neha ka why choti behan hai hazaar dukh bardasht kar ly lakin uff b na boly rahul ko chaiye khud ko sahi sabit kare neha k liye
My view neha ek pyari larki hai bas dil ko chot lagi hai us ke rahul k liye test hai yeh beshak powerfull ban kar he kui na aye neha us ki jaan ho sab se ziyada
Bahut khoob ab rahul ne aisi baten akhir kyu kahin thi kya neha uski sagi behan nahi hai?
Hmmm,, mind-blowing.
Shaandaar update
It's beautiful
Nice and hot update...
Bahut hi khubsurat story hai bhai main aapko xossip se hi padta raha hu apki story me ek ajib c sawad hota hai jis me pyar nafrat gussa aur naa Jane kitni feeling hoti hai jise aap bahut hi ache tarika se apni kalam se sanjiv chitran karte hai
Saala jis kahani Ko padhna start karta hu uske update aane band ho jaate Hain
As per schedule update to Wednesday ko Ana tha
But
Last update was delay by one day
So I think there should be a update today.
Yaar ye saspence jaldi khatm karo hun readers ka hum question ka answer nahi kar pa rhe pls dear writer
Overall nice update
Wate for next
Bhai Aaj ka Update nahi diya Aapne
Eagerly Waiting for Update
Waiting for today's update
Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...
Please update Brother
Woh Na Aayega Humein Malum Tha Iss Shaam Bhi,
Intzaar Uska Magar Kuchh Soch Kar Karte Rahe.
Khud hi decide kiya tha updates Tuesday Thursday Sarurday ko milenge .. ab na time pe updates aa rahe hain .. na Saturday ko diya update time se na hi tuesday wala update aya .. Why bro ?
Flow nahi rehta agar timely updates na mile itni sahi story hai .. aise mat karo :(
Kabtak aayega update aaj update ka date tha n update aaya hi nahiii....
Lone_wolf
bhai aap waade ke pakke nahi ho jo kahte thai bilkul nhi kiye where is Tuesday update?
Bhai kidhar ho.....?
:protest: Bhai update do......
Bro update na bhi do to kam se kam bata diya kijiye..... smjh mein aata h ki bade update likhne mein time lagta h....

Last update bhut accha tha..... Neha ke gusse ki vajah bhi bata di aur story ka suspense bhi nhi khola...... :applause: :laughclap: ............

Just ek suggestion h Jab bhi story ke update nhi de paa rahe ho to bata diya kijiye.... Aap baki sare comments ka reply kar dete h but update mangne vale comments ka reply update dene ke baad karte h..... Unka bhi reply ussi time kar ke hame inform kar diya kare....
Aapko ye schedule nai lana chaiye tha jaisa chal rha tha waisa hi chalne dete.
Mujhe to lagta hai aaj v nahi aayega update ?
waiting for update.
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update
Bahut khoob superb.

Keep rocking
Huh.
Let's wait for next update
Waiting for update
Werewolf bhai aaj kitne baje tak update de rahe ho?
Lagta he ab time aa geya he neha or Rahul ka bom phtane ka

Nice story bhai
Bus update ka intezar
Waiting bro
Eagerly waiting dear..
Update has been posted guys!
Dhanyawad!
Ye arc jald hi khatam ho jaega.
 

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Ab tak...

Neha : nahiiiiiiiiii....

Kehti hui neha ekdum se apne bistar se uthti hai. Uske chehre par paseena tha. Saasein tezz. Aur baal bikhre hue the. Kal lucky ke saath hui wo ghatna, aur aaj raat sapne me puraani bhayaanak ateet waali yaadein.

Neha (mann me) : kya chal raha hai? Kya mein kabhi chenn se jee paungi? Ab toh raat me sapno me bhi wahi puraane manzar dikhayi dete hai...

Mann me sochte hue wo uthti hai toh dekhti hai subah ke 6 baj rahe hai aur wo uth kar washroom me chali jaati hai.


Ab aage...

Ek dusre sheher me ek bade se ghar me balcony me ek khubsoorat se jhoole par ek khubsoorat sii ladki baithi hui chai ki chuski ka anand le rahi thi.

Subah ka waqt tha, aur ye ladki apne hi khayaalo me gum hokar na jaane kya soch rahi thi ki tabhi peeche se aayi ek awaaz ne jese usse hosh me laaya,

"Arre madam! Kya soch rahi ho jabse baith ke? Chai khatam ho gayi ho toh jao naha dho lo, 9 baj rahe hai" ek madhur sii awaaz ne jhoole par baithi hui ladki se kaha.

Ladki : kya ruchi didi? Aap jaiye na apne college aur padhaiye students ko... Subah subah mujhe kyu lecture dene lagi? Mein kitna focused thi abhi abhi aur aapne mera dhyaan bhatka diya

Ruchi jo ladki ki badi behan hai muskuraati hai, aur apne baal towel se sukhaate hue kehti hai,

Ruchi : jaa hi rahi hu madam, aur tum kya soch rahi thi subah subah? Haa? Apne sapno ka rajkumaar mil gaya kya?

Ladki (blush) : n..nahi toh. Kyu?

Ruchi : dekh rahi hu mein...tu kabhi kabhi baith ke kuch na kuch sochti rehti hai. Chalo! Tum baith ke usse yaad karo, mein toh chali...

Kehte hue wo palat kar neeche chali jaati hai college ke liye,

Idhar wo ladki muskuraate hue chai pee rahi thi aur apne pyaar ko yaad kar rahi thi

Ladki (mann me) : kitne din guzar gaye tumse mile, pata nahi tum kya kar rahe hoge iss waqt. Na jaane kya aisa jaadu kiya hai tumne ki ab toh baat karne me bhi sharam aati hai. I miss you... Chapadganju!!

Tabhi peeche se ek aur awaaz aati hai, "Taniya beti!!! Chal neeche aa jaa, tera naashta thanda ho raha hai"

Taniya : aayi maaa......

Aur fir daudte hue wo neeche chali jaati hai.

Idhar gwalior me nikita neha ko lekar college me pohuchi, dono ke beech raaste bhar koi baat cheet nahi hui. Nikita ko kal ki hui vardaat ke baare me kuch nahi pata tha, usse sirf itna pata tha ki neha kal college se lucky ke saath nikli thi aur aaj wo sahi salaamat hai toh iska kya matlab hai? Matlab ki ye ki lucky ne kuch nahi kiya ya fir rahul ne neha ki help kari hogi.

College pohuchne ke baad hi dono saath me hi baithi hui thi, ek do lectures tak dono me abhi bhi koi baat nahi hui. Neha baar baar bolne ke liye apna muh kholti par fir kuch keh hi nahi paati. Usse boht guilty feel ho raha tha, usne apni best friend ki baat ko ansuna kar diya aur fir anjaam bhukta. Badi himmat karke neha ne akhir apna muh khola,

Neha : nikki... We need to talk.

Nikita : hmm!!

Neha : I'm sorry!!!

Neha ke ekdum se aise sorry kehne par nikita thodi chaunki aur sorry ka kaaran pucha,

Neha : I'm so sorry nikki! Tum sahi thi. Tumne kal sab kuch sahi kaha tha. Wo lucky... Wo lucky mere saath kal zabardasti karne ki koshish kar raha tha. I...I...

Nikita (neha ka haath thaamte hue) : don't worry! Araam se kaho... Don't panic! Mein yahi hu.

Apni best friend ki baat sunn neha bhawuk ho jaati hai aur usse apne gale se laga leti hai, beech class me sabhi log inn dono ko hi dekh rahe the.

Nikita : it's okay neha!! Koi baat nahi!! Aur ab chorr bhi.. sab hame hi dekh rahe hai.

Neha apne aasu pochte hue shaant hoti hai toh nikita usse aage ki baat bataane ke liye kehti hai, jab neha kal ki hui poori vardaat sunaati hai toh nikita gusse se laal ho jaati hai aur Lucky ko khari khoti sunaane lagti hai,

Nikita (gusse me) : mujhe pata tha iski nazar shuru se hi tujh par bigdi hui hai, kameena kahi ka... Par tune dekha na... Rahul bhaiya ne hi tujhe bachaya...

Neha uski iss baat par kuch nahi bolti hai ki tabhi unki class teacher aa jaati hai aur saath hi roshni ma'am bhi aati hai jo rahul ke batch ki class teacher thi.

Class teacher : students!! Aaj se aapki class teacher roshni ma'am hai. Aur ye aapko maths padhaengi...

Nikita : ye toh richa didi aur rahul bhaiya ki class ki teacher thi na? Ab ye hume padhaengi? I'm excited...hihihi!!

Roshni Ma'am : hello students! My name is roshni and from today onwards I'll be teaching you guys mathematics and also I will be your class teacher. Is that clear?

Sab ek saath : yes ma'am

Fir puraani class teacher chali jaati hai aur roshni ma'am class me sabka introduction lene lagti hai, jab neha apna intro deti hai toh roshni Ma'am samajh jaati hai ki neha rahul ki behan hai. Par unko dono ke beech ki nafrat ke baare me kuch nahi pata.

Roshni ne ek question board par likha aur uske muh se achanak hi nikal gaya,
"Rahul! Go and solve that"

Nikita : ahem... Ma'am!! Hamari class me rahul koi bhi nahi hai

Roshni jese ye sunn ke hosh me aati hai, rahul ko question dekar uss se solve karwaana uski aadat ban chuki thi.

Roshni : I'm sorry students! Mujhe tumhaare ek senior bhaiya ki yaad aa gayi...

Neha : aur kon hai wo senior ma'am?

Roshni (smiles) : tumhaara bada bhai. He was the best student I've ever had.

Neha : ........

Idhar neha ki life me thodi adhchane zaroor thi par wo surakshit thi filhal ke liye toh.

Yaha mumbai me rahul khushi aur preeti ke saath unki class me lecture ke dauraan roz ki tarah peeche khada hua tha ki tabhi uska phone baj utha,

Rahul : hello?

Saurabh : abe saale.... Tu yaha mujhe chorr kar kaha ghum raha hai? Kitne dino se mein maggi aur bread kha kha ke nikaal raha hu, kaha hai tu?

Saurabh ki baat sunn rahul ki hassi chhoot gayi, bechara waha maggi aur bread kha kha ke apna pait bhar raha tha.

Karta bhi kya? Uss se inke alawa kuch aata hi nahi tha.

Rahul : I'm sorry yaar! Mein kaafi busy hu. 3 mahine aise hi chalega. Tu tension mat le, mein tere liye tiffin lagwa deta hu. Aur kaam kaha tak pohucha?

Saurabh : bhai! Courses saare khatam kar diye hai mene.

Rahul : kya baat hai mere sher! Ye hui na kuch baat. Ab sunn! Ab chuki tune courses kar liye hai toh mein drive par tujhe ek protocol bhej raha hu.

Saurabh : kis cheez ka protocol?

Rahul : ek software hai. Jis par mene 4 saal mehnat ki hai.

Saurabh : kya? Toh ab tak tu ye chhupa ke rakha tha?

Rahul : yadi tu courses nahi karta toh tujhe samajh nahi aati iski coding. Isliye tujhe pehle courses karwae mene. Ab mein jo bhej raha hu usse acche se samajhna aur fir bataana apne views.

Saurabh : toh aage ka kya plan hai?

Rahul : aage ka mission hi toh sabse important hai mere bhai. Chal! Mein baad me baat karta hu.

*Call ends*

Lunch hote hi rahul washroom ke liye nikalta hai toh usse corridor ke paas hi ek ladki dikhayi deti hai jo usse ishaare kar ke bula rahi thi.

Rahul aage badha toh dekha ki ladki kaafi khubsoorat thi. Patla slim figure, medium size ke boobs, gora rang, kaale baal, aur teekhe nain.

Rahul : aapne mujhe bulaaya?

Ladki : jii haa!! Mein urvashi!! Aur aap?

Rahul : I'm rahul.

Urvashi : zara waha andar chaliye na, mene suna hai aap kisi student ke body guard ho toh aapke alaawa ye kaam aur kon kar sakta hai?

Rahul : kesa kaam?

Urvashi : waha hamare classroom me wo board nikal gaya hai, please laga dijiye.

Urvashi ne apne nichle honth ko daanto me dabaate hue kaha

Rahul : well! Okay! Thik hai! Chaliye!

Urvashi rahul ko lekar sabse upar ki floor me le gayi aur waha ek classroom ke andar jab rahul pohucha toh dekha ki kareeb 8 se 10 ladkiya waha baithi hui hai aur board ek side se gira hua hai.

Rahul (mann me) : kuch gadbad zaroor hai. Itne upar ke floor me kon si class lagne lagi? Aur yaha pe baaki classrooms me toh koi bhi nahi hai, sab kuch khaali pada hai. Toh fir yaha ye sirf 8-10 ladkiya kya kar rahi hai? Aur inke bags kaha hai? Zaroor kuch gadbad hai...

Rahul bina kuch kahe aage badhta hai aur board ko set karne lagta hai, saari ladkiya usse khaa jaane waali nazro se dekh rahi thi. Jese maano registaan me unhe paani mil gaya ho.

Abhi rahul board set kar hi raha tha ki itne me urvashi ne gate ko andar se lock kiya aur baaki baithi hui sabhi ladkiya rahul par jhapat padi aur usse chaaro or se gher kar uske haath perr pakad liye.

Rahul khud ko chudhaane ki koshish kiya par 8-10 ladkiya uss se chumbak ke bhaati chipki hui thi, tabhi urvashi aayi aur rahul ke saamne aake khadi ho gayi aur uski chin apne haatho me lekar uske kareeb aayi,

Urvashi : koi akhiri khwahish ho toh bata do mere raja.

Kehte hue Achanak hi usne ek chaaku nikal liya aur rahul ke gale par rakh diya,

Rahul : ye sab chal kya raha hai?

Urvashi : haa! I think tumhaare marrne se pehle tumhe ye toh pata chalna hi chahiye!

Rahul : ..........

Urvashi : toh suno! Hum yaha keval khushi ke liye hai. Hamaara target sirf aur sirf khushi hai. Ab kyuki tum hamaare raaste me ho isliye tumhe maarna pad raha hai warna hamaari tumse koi dushmani nahi hai.

Rahul : tum log kon ho? Kisne bheja hai tumhe?

Urvashi : well! Thik hai mein tumhe bataati hu. I guess tumhe kuch bhi nahi pata. Toh suno dhyaan se...
Mein iss gang ki leader hu. Naam toh tum jaante hi ho. Ab humko mission mila hai ki khushi ko kidnap karke dena hai toh badle me hume paise milenge. Toh bas isliye hum yaha par hai, hume nahi pata aage khushi ke saath kya kiya jaega.

Rahul : oh accha!? Maan na padega jisne bhi ye mission tum log ko diya hai wo waqai boht bada bewakoof insaan hai. Ladkiyo ko bhej diya kidnap karne?

Urvashi : hahahaha! Par tum bhi toh mere jhaase me fass gaye na? Ladki par koi shaq nahi karta, bas yahi kaaran hai ki hum yaha par hai. Hume sirf paiso se matlab hai. I'm sorry! But boht ho gayi baatein. Ab tum ko jaana hoga iss duniya se...

Rahul : ek sawaal aur hai

Urvashi : theek hai! Wo bhi pooch lo...

Rahul : tumlog yaha aae kese aur kisi ko kuch pata hi nahi chala? Aur toh aur khule aam mujhe pakad bhi liya fir bhi kisi ko kaano kaan khabar bhi nahi hai?

Urvashi : hmm! Theek ye! Ye bhi jaan hi lo ab. Hum tumpar kayi dino se nigraani rakhe hue the. Aur college me entry dilwaana toh maamuli kaam hai. Humko ye sab arrange kar ke diya gaya tha jisne humko ye mission diya ussi ne sab arrange karwaaya. College ki uniform bhi aise hi mil gayi, aur upar ye floor abhi construction par hai toh koi aata jaata nahi. Ab itne bade college me kon pehchaanega humko ki hum naye hai ya puraane students. Simple!

Rahul : kamaal hai! Aur ek akhiri sawaal. Wo kon hai jisne tumlogo ko mission par bheja?

Urvashi : boht ho gaye sawaal jawaab! Ab tumhara the end bolne ka time aa gaya.

Rahul : arre arre! Dekho! Mein toh marrne hi waala hu kam se kam mujhe sacchayi jaan ne ka haq toh do. Kam se kam mujhe pata toh chale marrne se pehle.

Urvashi : nahi!! Hume ye bataane se mana kiya gaya hai.

Rahul : accha toh fir meri aakhiri khwahish hi poori kar do.

Urvashi : aur kitni khwahish hai tumhaari?

Rahul : please! Dekho! Mein marrne waala hu, kam se kam apni ek iccha poori karke toh maru.

Urvashi : kaho!

Rahul : bas ek lip to lip kiss karni hai aapko

Urvashi (shocked) : whaaat??? Ye kya bakwaas hai? Girls! Isse thikaane lagao!

Rahul : please!! Dekhiye! Mene kabhi bhi kisi ladki ke saath kiss nahi kari, aap itni sundar ho. Ek kiss de dogi toh kya bigad jaega? Fir aap jo chaahe kar lena.

Urvashi (blush) : mein...mein... Ayy rupa! Tum kiss karo isse aur fir isse hum thikaane lagae.
Mein koi bhi kaam beimaani se nahi karti.

Rupa (blush) : kyaaa??? Par... par... Bosss!!

Urvashi : tum karti ho ya nahi?

Rupa darr ke maare rahul ki taraf badhti hai aur apni aakhein band kar leti hai, rahul bhi apni aakhein band kar ke rupa ke gulaabi hontho ki taraf badhta hai aur unhe apne muh me bhar leta hai.



Rupa ki siski nikal jaati hai, ye uske jeevan ka pehla chumban tha. Uski pakad rahul par se dheeli hone lagti hai aur wo madhur chumban ke ehsaas me doobne lagti hai.

Baaki sabhi ladkiya bhi bas dono ke honth aur jeebh apas me lipte hue dekh rahi thi aur dheere dheere wo bhi garam ho gayi aur unki pakad bhi rahul par dheeli ho gayi. Urvashi bhi apne nichle honth ko daant se daba kar rahul aur Rupa ke ho rahe chumban ko dekh kar ke uska ehsaas lene ki koshish kar rahi thi. Aise pehle unke saath kabhi nahi hua tha.

Sabhi saamne ho rahe nazaare me ghum the ki itne me rahul ne mauka dekh ke rupa ko ekdum se ghuma diya aur apni khud ki chaku jo uske jeb me rakhi hui thi usse nikaal kar rupa ke gale par laga dii.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto!
Ye arc poora khushi ke baare me hai. Ye sirf kuch updates tak chalega. Jab rahul inn sab se deal kar lega tab wo apni business journey start karega.

Superb update, waiting for next update.
 
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Very Nice Update Bhai
Aaj Aapne Bahot dino ke Baad Tanya ko waapas dikhaya hai wo bhi ab Rahul ke Pyar ki Diwani ho chuki hai Wah Bahot Khub aur aage chalkar Ruchi didi ka bhi Koi Scene banne wala hai kya Rahul ke sath? Neha ne Nikita ko yeh kyo nahi bataya ke Rahul ne hi uski madad ki hai aur agar bataya hoga to Nikita ne Rahul ke liye kuch achha kyu nahi kaha Neha se aur ab Roshni ma'am ke aajane se aur unke Neha ko Rahul ki bahan ke rup me pahechan lene se wo shayad Neha par special dhyan degi aur Roshni ma'am ke kaaran Rahul ki Bahot si achhi bate Neha ke saamne aayegi aur uski Aankho Se Nafrat ka parda hatne lagega aur ab yeh Urvashi koun aa gayi hai nayi Character dekhte hai aage ke liye Aapne aur Kya Kya Socha hai.
Waiting for the next Update
Aur please aap as par schedule jo aap ne decide kiya hai Updates dete rahiye usme changes mat kariye Bhai Hum readers se jyada wait nahi hota hai. Please Update time se de Diya kare.
 
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