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Incest Akhir kyu? From hatred to love (with pics) (Completed)

Kya hero ne jo bhi kiya wo sahi kiya? (Voting aap sabhi 2-3 update pdhne k baad karna)

  • Hn sahi kiya

    Votes: 338 67.3%
  • Nahi, apni behan k sath aisa nhi krna tha

    Votes: 56 11.2%
  • Rahul nirdosh hai

    Votes: 89 17.7%
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    Votes: 19 3.8%

  • Total voters
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Shetan

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Ab tak...

Aaj k liye itna kaafi tha uske liye.
Isliye wo rahul ko akhiri baar uske lips pe kiss kr k goodnight keh k uss k sath chipak k so jaati h.

Ab aage...

Kahani aage badhaane se pehle ek short reminder de deta hu

Rahul- hero
Rajesh- hero k dad
Nisha- hero ki mom
Neha- hero ki sagi behan
Nikita- neha ki best friend
Richa- nikita ki badi behan, rahul ki best friend
Vinod- nikita aur richa k papa
Aarti- nikita aur richa ki mom
Rupesh- rahul aur neha k tau jii
Vineeta- rahul aur neha ki tai jii
Vanshika- Rupesh aur vineeta ki badi ladki, rahul ki badi cousin behan
Anshika- rupesh aur vineeta ki choti ladki, rahul ki choti cousin behan

Ab kahani ko aage badhaata hu..

Subah k 8:30 baj chuke the...
Aur rahul aur vanshika dono ek dusre ki baaho me, madmast, bekhabar, gehri neend me abhi tak so rahe the. Kal derr tak kissing scenes jo chal rahe the. Toh raat ko pyaari neend toh aani hi thi.
Islie abhi tak bistar pe hi pade the.
Itne me anshika aati h rahul k door pe zorr se awaaz lagaate hue khat khataati h...

"Diii!! So rahi ho kya abhi tak? Chaliye... Uthiye... Aaj hme baahr jana h ghumne..."

2-4 baar aur zor se khat khataane k baad rahul ki neend khulti h, vanshu toh abhi tak chipki hui besudh sii padi thi.
Rahul vanshu ko hila kar usse uthaata h aur gate kholne bolta h aur khud washroom me chala jaata h.

Vanshu k gate kholne par Anshika sawaal krne lagti h...

"Itna time kyu laga dii? Abhi tak so rahi thi kya??"

V: hnn woh! Neend thodi zyada derr lag gyi aaj..

A: hn chaliye, fresh ho jaiye aur breakfast krke hm log 11 baje nikalte h... Ok?

V: itni jaldi?

A: hnn, neha boli shopping bhi kar lenge, toh ussme toh time lagega hi boht.

V: ohkk...

Fir sabhi log fresh hoke, breakfast krte h... Aur teeno behne jaane k liye ready hone lagti h.

Idhar rahul k mann me vichaar chal rhe the.. usse toh allowed hi ni tha aana.
Nisha bhi beech beech me apne bete rahul ko dekh rhi thi jese kuch kehna chaah rhi ho par shyd keh nahi paa rahi thi.
Rahul samajh gya tha, islie woh sirf haan me sar hila deta h.
Aur nisha wapas kitchen me apne kaamo me lag jaati h.

Ab kyunki gaadi rajesh le gya tha, toh inka option tha ki yelog cab me jaae, kyuki bike chalana teeno me se kisi ko nahi aata tha. Aur bike se ghnta jaate ye log. Toh cab sabse sahi choice thi.
Neha ne cab book kari aur teeno ready hoke ghar se nikal gye...

Nisha: betuu!!!...

R: pata h maa!! Jaa raha hu...

Nisha(udaas hote hue, rahul k haath ko pakadti h) : mujhe maaf kar de...

R: maaa!!! Ye kya keh rahi ho aap, kitni baar bola h aapko. Bhool jaaiye usse, jaa raha hu mein.

Nisha(aasu pochte hue): hmm... Kuch baat ho toh turant call krna.

R: jii mom! Chalta hu.

Rahul apni gixxer utha k nikal jaata h.
Rahul ko saara plan pta tha ki ye sabhi log ka plan kya h aaj, usne breakfast krte time sab kuch suna tha...
Pehle ye ladkiya, movie dekhne jaengi, uske baad Domino's me pizza khaane, fir ye log shopping krengi, aur fir laut te waqt cafe jaengi, aur fir ghar wapas.

Rahul bhi bike laga deta h cab k peeche par nazar me naa aae utni doori bnae rakhta h.

Teeno ladkiya cab se utarti h, aap paas k log teeno ko dekh rahe the, akhir itni sundar jo thi...
Rahul thodi dur pe apni bike laga deta h aur teeno k andar jaane ka wait karta rehta h.
Uska kaam hi yahi tha ki wo chhup k unn teeno ki safety ka dhyaan rakhe. Kyuki teen javaan ladkiya akeli thi, koi mard bhi nahi tha. Na jaane kab kya ho jae. Ek mard ka rehna zaroori hota hi h saath me. Zamaana itna kharaab h. Islie rahul poori nigraani kiye tha.
Rahul bhi ek ticket leta h aur peeche ki seat me jaake baith jaata h.
Cinema tak koi problem nahi gyi, pizza bhi kha liya, yaha tak ki shopping bhi acche se ho gyi.
Koi dikkat nahi aayi. Rahul ko bhi laga ki woh faaltu hi itna tension le raha tha.
Andhera ho gya tha, shaam k 6:30 ho gye the, aur teeno boht thaki hui thi islie cafe jaake coffee peena tae kiya.

Rahul bhi dheere se andar gaya, aur seedha washroom me chala gya, waha se aaya aur gate k paas waali seat pe baith gya, aur menu card ko apne chehre k saamne haatho me le liya, apna chehra chupaane k liye.

Teeno ladkiya beech me baithi thi cafe me aur baato me lagi hui thi

Tabhi itne me cafe me 5 ladke aate h, aur rahul k aage waali seat pe baith jaate h. Rahul ko unki peeth dikh rahi thi.

Ab rahul ko paseena aana shuru ho gya tha.

R(mann me ghabrae hue) : damn it! Damn it! Damn it!!!!! Shiittt!! Abhi kyu? Ye chutiye.... Shitt!! Kuch karna padega... Par kese?? Inko bahr le jaana padega. Lucky behnchod!! Tune aaj yadi puraani harkat dohraii, toh tu bachega nahi aaj.... 5 h saale, par ye teen ladkiya bhi h...
Kaash mein akela hota yaha!! Fuckk! Fuck!!! Okkk... Okay!! Rahul!! Calm down, calm down. It's okay!! Tu sambhaal lega... Tujhe kisi bhi haalat me teeno ko bacha k rakhna h.

Rahul apne aap ko shaant karne ki koshish me laga hua tha. Uske dil ki dhadkan abhi sabse tezz thi. Rahul ko kisi bhi keemat pe apni teeno behno k saamne nahi aana h abhi aur unko ye bilkul bhi pta nahi chlna chahie ki rahul unko protect kar rha h. Ye rahul ka apne aap k liye mission tha. Ek kathin mission, jisse woh harr baar krta tha jab bhi neha akele kahi bhi jaati thi.
Hmesha uski parchhai banke protect karta tha.

Anshika washroom me thi, islie usse abhi kuch pta nahi tha, na hi 5 ladko ko...
Anshika washroom se nikli hi thi ki usne suna...

"Boss!! Boss!! Aapka target, aapka target!! Neha!!... Wo... Wo dekhiye, udhar... "

Anshika ne itna suna aur wo diwar se satt k khadi ho gyi aur aage sunn ne ki koshish krne lagi, baaki 5 ladke yaha tak ki rahul bhi usse nahi dekh sakta tha...

Unn 5 ladko me se ek lucky tha jo ki inn 4 baaki lafango ka boss tha.
Ye neha ki class ka hi bnda h. Yaha tak ki school me bhi neha ki hi class me tha.
Iski kahani aage pata chalegi...

Ladka 1: boss!! Neha ko dekha na aapne... Wo rahi... Aaj badla lelo boss! Dekho na.. saali akeli h. Aur hm 5 h. Uske saath bhi kya samaan ladki h, boss kya mast maal lag rahi h yrr!! Maza aa jaega aisi ki saath toh, aur aap apni neha k saath lage rehna...hehe

Rahul ne itna suna hi tha ki uski muthhi itni tezz bnd hui ki cup toot te... toot te...reh gya.
Apni behan k baare me kese ulta seedha sunn sakta tha.

L: chupp kar bsdk!! Pehle ye dekh uski shield aas paas toh nahi h? Saala lavde lag jaenge yadi wo haramkhor rahul yahi kahi hua toh...

{Lucky ko L aur baaki ladko ko L 1, 2, 3, 4 likhunga}

L1: boss! Kahi nahi dikh raha h, aur yadi hota toh saath me hi hota na...

L: nahi bsdk!! Neha ki apni bhai se nahi banti... Pata nahi h kya bsdk!! Bataya tha na mene, uss din k baad se hehe... Bhale hi mujhe maar sehni padi ho, par kya scene tha behnchod woh! Pichli baar toh bach gayi thi, aur wo harami rahul iska peecha nahi chodhta, par aaj akeli h.. lagta h apni behn k saath aayi h... Plan suno bhadwo!! Isko nikalne do baahr tab tak hm baahr wait krte h, jese hi niklegi, cafe k aage hi gali h, udhar kheench lenge isko aur gali k saamne meri car laga do, taaki kuch dikhai na de... Bss ek baar... Ek baar ye haath me aa gyi na fir dekhna... Chod chod k bhosda bana dunga iska...

Rahul ko abhi itna tezz gussa aa rha tha ki wo abhi khada hoke inki maa chod deta. Par abhi usse saamne nahi aana tha...

Idhar Anshika ne bhi saari baatein sunn li thi aur uske perr kap kapaane lage the. Anshika baahr se zaroor kathor bartaav rakhti thi.
Par aisi situations me wo ekdum seham si jaati thi. Usse ye roz roz rape cases ki khabre sunkar hi itna darr ho jaata tha ki woh hmesha akeli kahi nahi jaati thi. Hostel me bhi 2 saal kahi akeli nahi gyi. Gharwaale bhi uski aur Vanshika ki safety ka poora dhyaan rkhte the.
Par aaj un ladko ko aisi live planning krte hue usne suna..
Aur ye sab unke saath hone waala tha.
Kya karna chahiye usse ab?

A(mann me): meiinn... Mein... Ky..kyaa karu ab?? Ye log kon h?? Aur ...aur neha k peeche kyu h? Ye.. ye toh shyd wahi h.. jo uss din neha ki birthday party me tha.. hnn.. par ye.. ye yaha neha k peeche? Akhir kyu? Abb ab mein kya karu??

Itne me lucky washroom me jaata h par washroom k entrance pe Anshika dikh jaati h.

Lucky ki bhi pal bhar k liye fatt gyi thi. Usse pata tha ye ladki neha ki cousin h, aur ye yaha aisi khadi kya kar rhi thi? Matlab saaf tha, usne saari baatein sunn li thi.

L: ohhh!! Miss anshika... Toh.. toh.. tumne sab sunn liya? Hmm... I bet sunn hi liya hoga... Toh suno ab... Yadi bhalai chaahti ho toh jesa mein kahu wesa krna warna aaj tum sab k saath boht bura hoga, boht hi bura...hehe...

Anshika poori tarah se darri hui thi. Usse wese bhi bad boys pasand nahi the, upar se lucky jese gunde se toh wo aur bhi darr gyi thi...

Uski taangein aur shareer me kampan aa gya tha... Na uss se kuch bola jaa raha tha na kuch kiya jaa raha tha.

Lucky ne itne me uska purse cheen liya, jis se anshika poori tarah hil sii gyi...
Aur lucky ne purse me se phone nikal k usse purse wapas de diya..

L: ab tum soch rahi hogi, ki yaha itne bade cafe me din dahaade mne tumhe dhamki dii par kisi ko kaano kaan khabar nahi.. h na? Haha...
Actually na... Ye.. ye jo cafe h na, yaha koi bhi meri baat ko nahi taalta.. haha... Iss cafe ka jo malik h na? Wo mere dad ka right hand h samjhi?? Toh sunn ab!
Tujhe toh pata hi h ki mein neha ko kitna pasand karta hu h na??
Toh tu jaa aur araam se apni coffee enjoy kar! Aur tune jo kuch suna kisi ko bhi kaano kaan khabar nahi lagni chahie samjhi? Yadi tu aisa karti h toh kuch nahi hoga, mein sirf neha ko side me le jaake thodi private baat krna chaahta hu...
Bss thodi derr k liye.. hehe..
Tujhe aur teri badi behan ko kuch nahi karunga.. i promise... Na hi neha ko, bss baat karunga, uska friend hu mein...
Par yadi tune jaake abhi bataya unhe kuch toh fir tu dekhna aage kya hota h. Teri bhi maarunga aur unn dono ki bhi... Samjhi??

Anshika ko kuch smjh nahi aa rha tha ki ab woh kya kare....
Woh dheere dheere hilte hue jaake wapas apni seat pe baith jaati h

Rahul ne jab anshika ko washroom se baahr aate hue dekha toh chaunk gya..

R(mann me) : ye anshika... Ye.. ye jabse washroom me kya kar rhi thi? Shit!! Iske baare me toh dhyaan se nikal hi gya tha.. ek minute!! Abhi lucky bhi toh andar gya tha...
Itna time... Shit!! I'm damn sure lucky ne anshika se kuch kaha h. Tabhi itni ghabrai hui dikh rhi h.
Damn it!! Mujhe bahr jana chahiye...

Rahul baahr nikal jaata h...
Aur idhar baaki k 4 ladke car ko uss patli gali k saamne laga k gali k andhere me khade hue the.

Idhar anshika kap kapa rahi thi aur apni dono komal jesi pyaari behno ko dekh rahi thi. Aur lucky ki baat ko yaad kar rhi thi.
Usse kuch palle nahi pad rha tha ki kya kare, bata deti toh aage kya anjaam hoga uska darr, nahi bataati toh abhi kya hone waala h uska darr. Uska phone bhi nahi tha. Ek khayaal aaya usse ki rahul ko phone kare...kyuki lucky k muh se usne suna tha ki harr baar rahul aas paas rehta h, aur neha ki shield ki tarah h.
Iss baat se Anshika khud shocked thi. Ki rahul bhala kyu neha ki shield h?
Usse itna toh vishwaash ho gya tha ki abhi yadi koi kuch kar sakta h toh wo h rahul.
Anshika vanshu ka phone maangti h, pics dekhne ka bahaana kar k jo abhi thodi derr pehle unlog ne pizza khaate time lii thi.
Aur seedhe rahul ko call karti h.
Rahul ne apna phone silent pe kar liya tha taaki aisi situations me uska phone baj k koi museebat khadi na kar de...

Anshika k liye rahul hi akhiri umeed tha, par rahul ne phone nahi uthaya...
Uski akhiri umeed ekdum toot si gyi thi.

Saara bill chuka lene k baad neha aur vanshu cafe se nikl gyi, aur anshika abhi bhi cafe me baithe hue soch hi rhi thi ki kya kare, aur usne end me sabhi ko sach btaana hi behtar samjha, kyuki uski behne important h, wo lucky ki baat ka bilkul bhi bharosa nahi kr skti thi.
Jese hi usne decide kiya woh turant bataane k liye uthi... Par ye kya? Neha aur vanshu toh jaa chuki thi...
Uski dil ki dhadkan itni badh gayi thi maano heart attack hi aa jaega. Usse laga ki usne apna sab kuch kho diya...
Neha aur vanshu ne bill pay kiya aur seedha nikl gyi, unhe laga ki Anshika unke peeche aa hi rahi hogi...

Anshika turant hadbadi me daudti hui baahr nikli aur dekha ki vanshu aur neha uss gali k just saamne se hi nikl rhi h aur car bhi khadi hui h...

Itne me ek haath nikla gali k andhere se aur neha k chehre ki taraf bdha, uske peeche se...
Anshika ne ye dekha hi tha ki usne tezz awaaz me chillaya...

A: nehaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

Kya hoga aage? Kya neha pakdi jaegi? Kya lucky ki chaal kamyaab hoegi? Rahul kaha pe h?
Jaan ne k liye banne rahiye!! :budhau:
Sirf ek ward me bolu to amezing....
 
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UPDATE 1
Introduction:

1. RAJESH MISHRA (AGE-52)
peshe se sarkari bank me manager hai. Aur hero ke father hai.



2. NISHA MISHRA (AGE-48)
Ye housewife hai aur hero ki mother hai.



3. RAHUL MISHRA (AGE-21)
Hamara hero, yeh engineering kar raha hai computer science se aur last year me hai.



4. NEHA MISHRA (AGE-18)
Hero ki choti behan, ye Rahul ke hi college se engineering kar rahi hai same branch se, abhi 1st year me hai.



Baaki characters samay aane par introduce kara diye jaenge.

Ab thodi information inki family aur house construction ke baare me bhi de deta hu.

Rajesh Mishra- ek sarkari employee hai. Matlab sarkari bank me manager hai. Acchi khaasi income ho jati hai aur logo se contacts bhi zyada hai.
Akhir bank me kiska khata nahi hota? Bade se bade raees logo ka khata bank me rehta hai. Inki pohuch bhi hai aur pehchaan bhi hai.
Nature se khush mijaaz vyakti hai, apne dono pyaare baccho ko khoob chaahte hai. Rahul ko toh dost jesa maante hai. Shareer se utne fit toh nahi hai, halka fat aa gya hai belly me. Ab itni umr me toh ye laazmi hi hai.

Nisha mishra- ek housewife hai. Inhone arts se graduation kiya tha ye creative hai boht aur ghar chalana inhe boht acche se aata hai. Sundar bhi hai aur inke haath ka khana inki poori family me famous hai. Bachpan se singing karti aa rahi hai. Awaaz boht madhur hai. Apne dono baccho se khoob pyaar karti hai aur apne pati se bhi. Hindustani naari hai, saari maryadao ka dhyaan rakhti hai aur samaj me apne parivar ki image me chaar chand laga deti hai.

Rahul mishra- MITS se engineering kar raha hai aur akhiri year me hai. Branch computer science hai. School ke waqt 9th aur 11th me bhi computer science hi liya tha.
Padhne me boht hoshiyaar hai. Ek genius keh sakte hai isse. Ye jis cheez me jaata hai usme hi best ban jaata hai. Chaahe wo padhai ho, chaahe sports, chaahe drawing ya handwriting kuch bhi. Isse har cheez thodi boht aati hi hai. Aur adhiktar me ye maahir hai ekdum.
Jab 3rd year me tha toh poore saal gym gya aur acchi body bhi bna li hai. Itni body nahi ki ek dum fool gaya ho, bas itni ki koi bhi kapde pehne toh saare jachte hai ispe. Aur dikhne me toh hai hi smart.
Apne pairo pe khade hona chahta hai aur jald se jald paisa kamaana chaahta hai taaki ghar walo ka paisa ab ispe kharch na ho aur ye ghar ke liye kuch kar sake. Ye logo ko ek jhalak dekh ke hi parakh leta hai ki wo vyakti kis type ka hai. Dimag boht sharp hai iska. Khush mijaaz nature iska bhi hai apne papa se mila hai, singing me bhi boht accha hai, maa se aaya hai singing talent.

Neha mishra- rahul ke hi college me same branch se engineering kar rahi hai. Abhi 12th paas out hoke college me admission liya hai aur college jaate hue abhi 1 mahina hi hua hai. College ki doori ghar se 7-8km hai toh apni friend Nikita ke sath uski scooty me hi jaati hai. Kabhi kabhi uski scooty me petrol bhi bharwa deti hai. Dono acche dost hai. Rahul ko ye bilkul bhi nahi chaahti hai. Usko dekh ke hi isko gussa aane lagta hai. Boht hi sundar hai, maa se mili hai sundarta. Attitude bhi hai, par logo se lehze me bhi baat karti hai siwae rahul se. Dance karna isse boht pasand hai, aur lambi vacation trips pe jana isse aur bhi pasand hai.

Nikita dubey- Neha ki school time se friend hai aur saath me college le jaati hai usse apni scooty pe.
Dono ke beech boht achhi bonding hai.
Uska bhi ek reason hai. Jo rahul se hi juda hua hai. Nikita me rahul ke prati thodi boht feelings hai kyuki usse hamdardi hoti hai neha ke aise bartaav ke kaaran. Usse saari sachhai pata hai but fir bhi uska mann yahi kehta hai ki rahul ko itni hate nahi milni chahie jitni neha usse deti hai. Nikita chulbuli hai aur sath hi sath emotional bhi hai.

Ye tha family ka kuch basic introduction.
Ab thoda house structure bata deta hu.

Ghar me neeche ek bada hall hai.
Hall ke end me wall ke side se ek dining table hai. Fir right side me kitchen hai aur kitchen ke right side me ek washroom hai aur uske bagal me ek store room. Kitchen ke left side jao toh bedroom hai jaha Rahul ke mom aur dad sote hai aur unke room ke aur left me ek khali guest room hai.
Guest room ke entrance ke bagal hi stairs hai jo upar jaati hai.
Upar right side me rahul ka room hai aur left side me neha ka. Upar do hi room hai. Dono acche room hai. Dono me washroom attached hai. Corridor ke end me ek badi balcony hai kapde sukhane k liye aur ek jhoola bhi laga hua hai.
Side se stairs hai jo terrace pe jaati hai.
Toh ye thi saari information.


Dhanyavad dosto, ab kal raat ko agla update aaega. Bane rahiyega mere saath.
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Shetan

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Update-18

Ab tak...

Thodi derr baad rahul bhi aaya sabhi ne dinner kiya aur fir wapas sab apne room me jaane lage. Rahul ne anshika ko bol diya ki raat me neha ke saath soye aur usse poori tarah samjhae. Vanshu wapas se rahul ke room me aa gyi aur aaj ki beeti hui baato ko bhulaane ke liye rahul ko comfort dene ke liye usse wahi roz ki tarah kisses karne lagi.

Idhar neha jab apne room me aayi toh drawing book dekh ke uski aankhein chaudi ho gyi....

Ab aage...

Neha boht derr se athak prayas kar rahi thi, ek roti hui stree ka chehra banaane me par bana nahi paayi. Apne jazbaato ko shayad pencil se paper pe batlaana chaah rahi thi ki kya uthal puthal machi hai abhi uske dimag me. Dinner karne ke baad jab laut ke neha apne room me aayi toh drawing book pe ek boht hi sundar si stree ka khil khilaata hua chehra bana tha.

Ab ye chehra kaha se aaya? Kisne banaaya ye sketch? Kon tha jo neha ki gerr haziri me ye sab kiya?
Sawaal kayi the... Jawaab ek hi tha
Akhir poore ghar me hai hi kon jo kala me honhaar hai? Zaahir si baat thi rahul hi tha. Rahul hi abhi neha ke kamre me aaya tha aur ussi ne ye sundar kala ko chitrit kiya.

Ek aam parivaar me yadi koi bhai uski behan ke liye itna kar de toh behan toh khushi se fuli na samae aur ho sakta hai aapse pat bhi jae hehe!!

Par janaab ye toh rahul ki behan thi. Sketch dekhte se hi neha ka gussa charam seema pe pohuch gya aur usne drawing book se paper faad diya aur poora marod ke paas me hi study table pe rakhe ek pen holder me thoos diya.

Gusse me neha apne hi kamre me idhar se udhar ho rahi thi.

N(mann me) : bastard!! Fuckkk! Kya samajhta kya hai apne aap ko? Koi kuch bolta kyu nahi hai isko? Arre parivar ka chirag hai toh kya jo mann me aega wo karega... Uski himmat kese hui? Mom dad bhi mile hue hai, kabhi kuch nahi bolte itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi, sab usko chaahte hai... Kya mein jhoothi hu? Obviously not!! Mere saamne hi toh wo sab hua tha. Aa gya bade acche se sketch banaane idhar. Soch raha hoga ki mein sab bhool jaungi aur impress ho jaungi. Hmph!! Bewakoof thodi na hu. Aur wo sab toh kabhi bhi nahi bhool sakti mein...

Idhar neha yahi sab sochte hue apne poore room me chakkar laga rahi thi toh wahi anshika uske kamre ke door pe khade usse dekh rahi thi.

Jab dono ki nigaahe ek dusre se mili toh neha chup chaap apne bed pe baith gayi aur usne kuch bolna munaasib na samjha. Anshika ko bhi pata tha abhi neha krodh me hai aur krodh me aksar aadmi aapa kho baith ta hai aur vo nirnay le leta hai jo uske jeevan me aage chal ke musibat ka kaaran bante hai. Neha ko chintit dekh Anshika uske paas aake baithti hai aur bade hi pyaar se uss se baat kehti hai...

"Nehu dekh. I'm really sorry. Aur shayad sorry se kuch nahi hoga I know. But please trust me nehu. Hum dono ek dusre ko kab se samajhte aa rahe hai. koi bhi galti hum me se kisi se bhi hoti thi toh bhi hum ek dusre ko samajhte the na?

I know mujhse galti hui hai.
Galti ye hai ki tumhaari baat se mukar gayi. Jo cheez hame saath me karni thi uss se mein peeche hatt gyi.

Isliye tum gussa ho.... Jo ki... Jo ki laazmi hai nehu. Tumhara gussa hona banta hai. Par ek baar meri baat sunn lo please.

Mere aisa karne ke peeche bhi kaaran hai nehu, tumko wo baatein nahi pata hai jo mujhe pata hai
Aur mein wo saari baatein tumhe nahi bata sakti, mein majboor hu.

Aaj itne saalo baad wapas jab bhai se baat hui toh mujhe pata chala ki mere jeevan me kya kami thi. Aaj mein poori ho gayi. Par teri yadi naraazgi ab bhi rahi toh fir se adhuri ho jaungi.

Tu ye kabhi mat sochna nehu ki mere bhai ko paane ke baad tum akeli ho aur tumhari parvah kisi ko nahi hai.
Mein hamesha tumhaare saath hu aur rahungi par bss tum ab bhai se khafa hone ke liye mat kehna.

Jeevan me jab bhi tumhe meri zaroorat pade toh bas ek baar pukaarna mein haazir ho jaungi.
And once again sorry!!"

Anshika apni aankho me paani liye ye baate neha ko kehti toh neha bhi idhar pighal gayi. Uski sabse jigri behan jo thi anshika. Jese rahul aur vanshu bachpan se close the wese hi Anshika aur neha the.

Aaj apni pyaari behan ki boli sunn neha ka saara gussa chhumantar ho gya aur usne bhi rote hue anshika ko apne gale se laga liya.

N : dii! Mein aapko maaf kar sakti hu. Aapko mein bachpan se jaanti hu. Yadi koi baat h jo aap nahi bata paa rahi toh it's ok. Par usko kabhi bhi maaf nahi karungi...kabhi nahi ... Hargiz nahi.

A (mann me) : tum usko maaf karo... Tum iss auhde pe nahi ho nehu. Rahul yadi tumhe maaf kar diya toh ye tumhaare liye sabse badi baat hogi.

"Accha chalo! Ab so jaate hai..."
Anshika ne neha ko apni baaho se azaad karte hue kaha. Light off ki aur dono fir sone chal diye.

Agli subah jab rahul ki aankh khuli toh dekha ki vanshu uske bagal se lipte hue neend ke aaghosh me hai.

Peeche khidki se aati hui sooraj ki halki kiran vanshu ke chehre pe pad rahi thi. Uske gulaabi aur ruyi se bhi naram gaal, gulaabi raseele honth, kaali aur badi badi sundar palke, kaale chamakte hue lambe baal jo uski peeth tak bikhre the, bhagwaan ka diya hua anmol khubsoorat chehra, bade bade mulayam stan jinpe rahul ka ek haath abhi bhi rakha hua tha, Patli gori tangein jo usne ek rahul ke upar rakhi hui thi, mulayam hatheli jo rahul ke daaye gaal pe thi...

Sach me vanshu kisi pari se kam nahi thi. Ye nazara dekh rahul ka tent jo subah harr roz banta tha aaj kuch zyada hi ucha ban gaya tha. Kitni pyaari hai uski behan, jaha aaj sabhi log swarth dekhte hai wahi uski behan vanshu niswarth uss se prem karti hai aur uske liye kuch bhi kar jae. Vanshu ka anmol pyaar dekh aur uska sota paa ke rahul ko aaj bada pyaar aa rha tha uss pe.

Usne pyaar se vanshu k gaal ko nocha aur fir ek kiss kar diya.
Tabhi usse kuch khayaal aaya jis se rahul hadbadaate hue utha aur apna sar pakad ke baith gya...

"Ohhhh shitttt!!! Mein bhool gaya... Fuckkk!!! Kese??? Kal ki baat ke kaaran shayad....
Tanisha dii ne kaha tha ki jabtak chot sahi na ho jae mein roz unke paas checkup ke liye aau...
Aur Kal hi mein bhool gaya. Shittt!
Pakka naraaz hai mujh se warna unka call aa jata. Ab kya soch rahi hongi mere baare me. Ki kitna swarthi hu mein...

Kahi bura na maan gayi ho. Par obviously bura maan gyi h woh... Call toh karti warna, aur call pe hi mujhe khari khoti sunaati. Par na toh call aya na koi message, na koi reminder... Damn it! Ab manaana padega. Aaj jaata hu shaam ko, ya seedhe raat ko unke ghar hi jaata hu, kuch present bhi gift kar dunga. Haa ye sahi rahega..."
Rahul ne decide kiya ki aaj woh raat me tanisha se milega...

Sabhi log fir baari baari uthte hai aur naashta kar apne rooms me aate hai firse. Idhar neha carrom utha ke le aati hai aur anshika ko vanshu ko bulaane ke liye bhej deti hai ki issi bahaane time pass ho jaega...

Tabhi rahul ko richa ka call aa jata h. Call pe richa ka naam vanshu ne dekh liya tha par kuch boli nahi ...

R (call uthaate hue) hello? Hn bolo richa...

Ri: ........

R: hello!??

Ri (sharmaate hue) : he..hello...

R: hn richa bolo...

Ri: ummm...ke..kese ho rahul!?

R: mein? Mein badhiya hu... Bol na kya baat hai? Koi zaroori kaam?

Ri: zaroori kaam hoga tabhi call karungi kya mein rahul?

R: kesi baate karti h richa. Tu jab chaahe tab call kar sakti h.

Ri: actually! Aaj message aaya apne class ke whatsapp group pe... Pehli company aane waali h. 2 din baad...

R: ohhh! Mene check nahi kiya whatsapp. Accha! Thik hai. Thanks by the way.

Ri: thanks bss!?

R: aur kya chahiye hamari madam ko?

Ri: umm... Ummm....kuch.. kuch ni

R (muskuraate hue) : shaam ko aata hu tere ghar. Aunty se aur tujh se bhi mil lunga, wahi company ke baare me discuss kar lenge.

Ri (khush hote hue) : ohh..ohkkk... Mein wait karungi... Bbye...

R: sure! Bye!!

Call cut karne ke baad vanshu ne akhir puch hi liya...
"Kon thi cutie!? Girlfriend??"

R : nahi dii! Obviously friend h meri. Badi acchi dost hai. Yahi toh hai bss college me jis se meri baat cheet hoti h. Baaki koi nahi h.

"hnn hnn!! Poore college me itne log aur ek ladki bas teri dost h...
Wo bhi boht acchi waali...
Samajh rahi hu mein"
Chidhaate hue vanshu ne kaha...

"Arre dii! Aapse jhooth bola hai kabhi? We are friends"
Rahul vanshu ko gale lagaate hue kehta hai aur kaan me dheere se muskuraate hue kehta h...
"Aapko jalan ho rahi hai kya dii?"

Rahul ki garam saanse aur uski dheemi si awaaz sunn vanshu ki dhadkan tezz ho jaati hai aur baat bhi sahi thi, vanshu ko jalan hi toh ho rahi thi ...

"Huh!!!? Me..mein..mein kyu jealous hone lagi bhala!?"
Hadbadaate hue vanshu ne kaha...

Toh rahul ne vanshu ke ear lobes apne muh me le liye aur halka sa daato se kaat diya...

"Aaahhhhh ssssssssss" vanshu ki siski nikal gayi rahul ki iss harkat par , usse andaaza nahi tha ki rahul aggresive ho jaega...
Galti bhi toh thi uski, rahul se jhooth bol rahi thi ki wo jealous nahi hai.

"Accha baba! Thik... Thik... Mein.. mein jealousy feel kar rhi thi ok? Aur haan sirf friends hi rehna. Zyada gul chharre udae toh dekh lena fir hmph!!"
Vanshu ne apni baat ko admit kiya..

"Ye hui na baat. Jhooth nahi bolte. Chalo ab pyaari si kissy dedo ek..."
Rahul ne apne hoth vanshu ke honth ki taraf jhukte hue kaha.

Aaj rahul ki aggressiveness dekh k vanshu khush thi. Usne foran rahul ki collar pakdi aur apne gulaabi honth jad diye uske hontho par.

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Dono meethe chumban me khoe hue the ki anshika neha k room se nikli aur vanshu dii ko bulaane aayi thi carrom khelne ke liye. Par jab usne jo dekha toh maano uske perr jam se gaye rahul ke room k bahar.

Na uske muh se awaaz nikli na uski palke jhapki. Uski aankho ke saamne aisa manzar tha jisse dekh ke wo achambhit si murti bane khadi hui thi.
Saamne rahul aur vanshu dono lip to lip kissing me doobe hue the. Kiss waqai boht passionate tha.
Anshika badi himmat karke wapas peeche ho gayi aur dubaara se room me aane lagi magar iss baar usne awaaz pehle hi de di thi.

Awaaz sunn rahul aur vanshu alag hue aur vanshu rahul ko ankh maarte hue anshika k sath neha ke kamre me chali gayi.



Jaate jaate anshika rahul ko ghur rahi thi aur masoom sa chehra banae hue thi. Rahul ne usse ignore kiya aur apne room me araam karne k liye lait gaya.
Shaam ko usse richa ke ghar jaana tha aur fir raat me tanisha se check up karwaane bhi.

Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!!!
अमेज़िंग सीन क्रिएट किया है. संजोग और शारारत से भरा हुआ. But अभी तक ये समझ नहीं आया की लीड हीरोइन कोनसी है. कभी तो richa लड़ती है. तो कभी vansu. स्टार्टिंग से नेहा की नफरत से लगा था की यही लीड करेंगी.

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अमेज़िंग.....
 
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