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Bahut khoobsurat update vapis padhne mai mjaa aa raha hai , aise he story start rakhna jald he readers aur comments jaida hone hm shuru ho jayenge
Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*
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UPDATE-98
Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise blue shadow dark ridersss ki Queen ko uski duniya me bhejti hai vo bhi bina usase lade.aur phir alfan ka portal band kar k alfan k jungle me vapas chali jati hai apni naee shakiyo ko janane k liye.aur vahee dusri taraf karma ki sari shaktiya bhi vapas karma k pass chali jati hai.bina kuchh pata lagye.
Ab aage-
Karma (main)-sabhi raajdarbariyo se bolta hu. Ab jab ki aap sabhi ko pata chal gaya hi kaun sa dungeon kaha aur kitne sankhaya me hai.to main ye bhi bata deta hu ki 2 (do) dungeon ko vapas unki duniya me maine bhej diya hai.
Sindriya dungeon ka to aap sabhi ko pata hi hai.lekin melbolina k dungeon ka rahasy bhi maine hal kar diya hai.2 (do) dungeon ka rahasy hal karne k baad sirf 4 (chaar) dungeon hi bacha tha kal tak.lekin aaj ek bhi dungeon ka koee sabhut nahi hai.tabhi
Raajdarbari(1)-mahaaraaj chhama chahata hu is tarah aap ki baat ko bichh me rokne k liye.agar aap ki aagya ho to main kuchh puchh sakta hu.bade der se mere maan me is prashn ne uthal puthal macha rakha hai.aur itna bol k vo raajdarbari apni mundi niche kar leta hai.
Main-ha me ishara karta hu apne haath se raajdarbari(1) ko.tabhi
Mahaamantree-(thode gusse me) bolta hai bolo kya prashn hai raajdarbari aur ha suno sabhi mere ek baat . sabhi ko chetavni di jati hai.istarah bichh ne koee nahi bole ga jab tak ki mahaaraaj ki aagya na ho.inta bol k mahaamantree shant ho jata hai.aur
Raajdarbari(1)-mahaaraaj main apni is galti ki phir se chhama chahata hu.darsal baat hi aisa hai.tabhi
Main-bolo kya baat hai.
Raajdarbari(1)-mahaaraaj abhi kuchh der pahale hi mahaamantree g ne kaha tha ki afan ka dungeon gayab ho gaya hai apne aap aaj subha hote hi aur aap kah rahe hai ki ab koee dungeon nahi raha hai.main kuchh samjha nahi mahaaraaj.inta bol k vo baith jata hai.tabhi
Main-phir se bolna shuru karta hu.ha to ab aap sabhi k maan me bhi yahee sari bate aane shuri ho gai hongi na.to koee baat nahi.ab main aage bata hu.jaise ki aap sabhi ko aaj mahaamantree se pata chala ki alfan ka dungeon gayab ho gaya.lekin maine abhi bola ki ab kal tak to 4(chaar) dungeon bache the ab ek bhi nahi hai.
Jab mujhe is baat kab pata chala alfan ka dungeon gayab hone ka tabhi maine sare dungeon k bare me janane k liye husna ko bheeja tha aur mujhe ye pata chala ki sabhi jagah k dungeon apne aap gayab ho gaye hai.ab aap sabhi ko mere kahane ka arth samajh me aa gaya hoga.q maine kaha ki kal tak 4 dungeon the aur ab ek bhi nahi.
Ha to ab btaye aap sabhi is bare me kya sochte hai.inta bol k main shant ho jata hu.
Raajdarbari(3)-mahaaraaj ye to badi achhi baat hai.lagta hai baki 4 (chaaro) dungeon aap k dar se vapas apni duniya me chale gaye.tabhi
Raajdarbari(2)-mahaaraaj aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki ye sab kuchh un sabhi dungeon ka ek chaal ho.jisase hum sabhi ko yahee lage ki dungeon apni duniya me vapas chale gaye hai.aur phir achank se hum pe hamla ho jaye .jaise aaj ki huvi ghatna dekh le aap.
Phir aise hi sabhi raajdarbari apni alag alag vichaar dete rahe.jab sab ka bol k ho jata hai aur sabhi shant ho jata hei tab.
Main-phir se bolna shuru karta hu.ha aap sabhi ki baat sunane k baad main is natije pe pahucha hu .abhi hum sabhi to savdhaan rahane ki jarurat hai.isliye sabse pahale mahamantree g aap sabhi desho ko phir se dungeon k Vishay me varta karne k liye milna hai.aisa kahabar bhejva de.aur dhyaan rahe koee bhi desh chhutana nahi chaiye .
Garga- kingdom k mahaaraaj Homra se kahana ki is baar k dungeon ka sabha garga me ho.aisa hamara (king karma ka) ichha hai agar un ko koee aitraaj na ho to.aur un sabhi desho me apne khaas shainik aur mage (jadugao) ko bhej do ja se dungeon gayab huve aur pata lagaya jaye ki. kuchh asmanay ghatna to nahi huva tha.aur sath hi un ko kuchh samay k liye vahee rahne ko kah dena taki kuchh bhi hota hai to hume pata chal sake ki sach me dungeon chale gaye hai yaha phir ye un ki chaal hai.aur
Koee desh hamre shainiko ko aur mage ko nahi jane ki anumati de ko gupt roop se un desh me nazar rakha jaye.
Phir aaj ki sabha yahee samapt karta hu main.aur koee baat hoja mahaamantree dvara aap ko pata chal jaye ga.itna bol k main yumina k sath vapas raajmahal me chalajata hu raajsabha me se .aur phir dhire dhire sabhi raaj darbari bhi jane lagte hai.
Main-raaj sabha se nikal kar sab se pahle apne kamare me jata hu.aur apne bistar pe let jata hu.q ki mera maan bechain aur ashant ho gaya tha.aur hota bhi q nahi ek sath mere dimaag me itna sara cheeg jo chal raha tha.aaj ki ghatna ka achanak se hona phir u dungeon ka gayab ho jana phir yumina ka achana k se dukhi hona aur to aur raat ka sapna aur mere sene me achanaka se bahot teji se dard hona…ye sari chhege mere dimaag me chal raha tha vo bhi ek sath jasie ki koee jang chal raha ho.
Tabhi mere maan ki aavaaj mujhe sunaee deta hai.ab kisis bare me bhai mat soch.nahi to dimaag phat jaye ga.isliye sab se pahale dhyaan me baith jao aur jitna jada ho sake apne maan ko shaant rakhne ki kosis karo aur philaal to vahee kaam karo jisme jada dimaag na laana ho aur phir dhire dhire sab theek ho jaye ga.
Mujhe bhi mere maan ki ye baat bahot pasand aata hai.isliye main turant apne bistar se utar k jameen pe baith jata hu dhyaan lagane k liye.kuchh der k baad mera man shaant hone lagata hai.aur ye prakriya tab tak chalta hai jab tak ki mere kano me jija g ka aavaaj nahi sunaee deta hai.tabhi
Princess Rose-jija g ye kya abhi tak aap taiyaar nahi huve kya.hum logo ko CAPITALCity k liye nikal bhi to hai.aur vahee
Main-jaise hi rose ki aavaaj suntan hu.vaise hi meri aankhe khul jati aur jaise hi mere najre rose se takrati hai.main to usko dekhta hi raha jata.jaise uski khoobsurti aur jada nikhar gaya ho.aur to aur mera chota karma bhi apna sar uthana laga tha rose ki khoobsurti ko dekh k.iska aisas hote hi main turart sapno ki duniya se bahar aa jata hu aur jameen pe baith k hi apni najare rose se niche kar k .rose k bahar jane ko kah deta hu.tabhi
Princess Rose-jija g jaildi se aana.itna bol k vo muskarate huve mere kamare se chali jatai aur apne maan me bolti dekhti hu kab tak aab apne aap ko mujhse bachao ge jija g.aur vahee
Main-apne maan me abhi huvi ghatna k bare me sochne lagta hu.ki akhir ye kya ho raha mere sath.aisa to kabhi nahi huva mere sath.tabhi mere maan ki aavaaj phir se sochne lag gaya na tu.bus apne maan ko shaant rakhne ki kosis karo.dekhna apne aap sab theek ho jaye ga.main bhi yahee soch k jaldi se fresh ho jata hu.aur apne kamare se nikal k sab se pahale yumina k kamare me chala jata hu.jaha
Yumina-bus taiyaar ho k nikalne vali thi.aur
Mujhe-dekhti hi dady aap. Cahliye main bus taiyaar ho hi gai hu.tabhi
Main-wow aaj to mere beti.ek pari lag rahi hai.turant
Yumina-ho to dady vo to main pahale se hi hu pari.itna bol k uske chehare pe ek muskarahat aa jata hai.
Main-beti hume aap se kuchh bate karna tha.itna bol k main sidha bolna sharu kar deta hu aur usase apna kasam de kar puchhta hu ki aaj vo achanak se q roni lagi thi.aur maine usko kasam apna isliye diya tha. taki vo mujhse sab sach bata de nahi to vo koee na koee bahana bana k nikal jati thi.lekin ab vo fas chuki thi.
Yumina-thoda sa pyari vali gussa me dady…ye aapne ne achha nahi kiya.aap ko apna kasam nahi dena chahiye tha.achha aap ko jana hai na to suniye .sab se pahale to aap ne hum sabhi se itna bada sach chhupaya aur aap ko kitna kuchh ho gaya .aap ne apni beti ko yahi mujhe tak kuchh bhi nahi bataya.aur batayenge bhi q main aap ka khoon thodi na hu.jo aap mujhse bayenge.itna bolte hi uske aankho se anshu bane lagta hai.
Main-bhi bina soche aur bina kuchh bole hi yumina ko apne sine se laga leta hu.aur shaant karne lagta hu.aur ek dar mujhe is baat ka tha ki main bahot emotional na ho jau aur ho gaya to kahee koee musibat na ho jaye.q ki har ek emotion mere kabu se bahar ho raha tha.chahe vo gussa ho ya pyaar ya dard ho.isliye main apne aap ko kabu karte huve .yumina ko samblae me lag gaya aur kisi tarah se maine usko shaant karaya.jab vo thoda sa shaant huvi.tab main yumina se gudiya aaj to aapne bol diya ki aaj mera khoon nahi lekin aaj k baad ye nahi bolna aap.tum meri jaan ho jaan tum me to meri jaan basti meri bachchi.ye bol k main khud bhauk ho gaya tha.lekin kaise bhi kar k maine khud ko sambhala.q ki agar main emotional ho jata ho gudiya ko kaun sambalta.tabhi
Yumina-dady main ek sapna dekha tha aaj subha .jisme aap hum sabhi ko chhod k hamesa k chale gai hai.main aap k bina nahi rah sakti ho aur phir se unkse ankho se aanshu aa jate itna bolte hi.turant
Main-yumina ki baat ko sambhalte huve meri gudiya main kabhi nahi jaunga tum sab ko chhod k.vo bus ek sapna tha.ab nahi rote .main ab aap se kuchh se nahi chupaunga beta.ab nahi rote aur mujhe koee kuchh nahi kar sakta hai.tabhi
Seona-ha princess aap k dady ko koee nahi maar sakta hai.aur unse takatwar koee nahi hai is duniya me.
Yumina-ne jaise hi se baat suni .to kya dekhti hai ek bahot pyari si ladki uske samne khadi thi.jisko dekhti hi yumina mere taraf dekhne lagti hai jaise puchh rahi hi ho ye kaun hai.
Main-gudiya inka naam seona hai.aur bahot se log inko knowledge book bhi kahate hai.jo kuchh bhi aur jis kisi k bare me tum ko jana hoga .tum seona se puchh sakti.
Seona-ab se tum gudiya k sath rahana aur uski surkhchha ki jimedari tum pe hai.
Seona - jo hukum mere maalik.
Yumina-dady mujhe kisi ki surakchha nahi chaiye .main to khud hi sabhi nani yaad dila sakti ho.
Main-ha meri gudiya.ye samjhlo aap k liye gift hai ya. ye kahu ki ye ab se aap ki friend hai. aur vo sirf aap ko hi dikhegi.aur ab aur bate nahi karenge nahi ko aap ki moms ko pata chala ki mere vaja se aap ki aankho me anshu aaya hi meri to kair nahi hogi.
Yumina-mere baat sun k.thoda ha muskara deti hai.aur ab uska rona bhi banad ho gaya tha.aur vahee
Main-yumina k muskarate dekh mujhe thoda sakun milta hai.tabhi husna bhi udte hu mere kande pe baith jati hai.aur mere sabhi jaan mujhe yaad kar rahi hai baati hai.isliye main bhi bina samay gave.apne jaano k pass pahoch jata hu. Jo ki ek dum jagab lag rahi thi.jaise asmaan se utri huvi apsare ho.tabhi
Mahaamantree –mahaaraaj maine sari taiyari kar diya aap k aur mahaaraniyo k jane ka.aur sena ki ek khass tukari bhi taiyaar hai.itna bata k mahaamantree chala jata hai.
Main-phir cahlo sab log.main aata hu kuchh der .phir sabhi log chale jate hai.aur main seona se captital city aur baki un jagaho pe apne magic use karne ko kahata hu .taki vaha mujhe sabhi ko ye na batan ho ki main kaise badal gaya.jo magic yaha use kiya tha vahee magic vaha bhi use karna .jisase sab ko yahee lage ki.dungeon me jane k vaja se main badal gaya .tabhi
Seon-ho gaya maalik.inta bol k vo yumina k pass chali jata hi.aur main bhi bahar pahoch jata hu mahaamantree k pass unko sab kuchh samjha k.apne ship k pass chala jata hai jisko bahot achhe tarike se sajaya gaya tha.aur vahee
Underworld me -yani ki hades wold me ek kamare me sirf 3 log baithe huve the.jisme se ek hades ek yamraaj aur unknown tha koee.jinko dekh to yahee lag raha tha jaise vo teeno kisi bahot mahatpurn vishya pe baat kar rahe ho.
To be continued…..
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fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota haiUPDATE-98
Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise blue shadow dark ridersss ki Queen ko uski duniya me bhejti hai vo bhi bina usase lade.aur phir alfan ka portal band kar k alfan k jungle me vapas chali jati hai apni naee shakiyo ko janane k liye.aur vahee dusri taraf karma ki sari shaktiya bhi vapas karma k pass chali jati hai.bina kuchh pata lagye.
Ab aage-
Karma (main)-sabhi raajdarbariyo se bolta hu. Ab jab ki aap sabhi ko pata chal gaya hi kaun sa dungeon kaha aur kitne sankhaya me hai.to main ye bhi bata deta hu ki 2 (do) dungeon ko vapas unki duniya me maine bhej diya hai.
Sindriya dungeon ka to aap sabhi ko pata hi hai.lekin melbolina k dungeon ka rahasy bhi maine hal kar diya hai.2 (do) dungeon ka rahasy hal karne k baad sirf 4 (chaar) dungeon hi bacha tha kal tak.lekin aaj ek bhi dungeon ka koee sabhut nahi hai.tabhi
Raajdarbari(1)-mahaaraaj chhama chahata hu is tarah aap ki baat ko bichh me rokne k liye.agar aap ki aagya ho to main kuchh puchh sakta hu.bade der se mere maan me is prashn ne uthal puthal macha rakha hai.aur itna bol k vo raajdarbari apni mundi niche kar leta hai.
Main-ha me ishara karta hu apne haath se raajdarbari(1) ko.tabhi
Mahaamantree-(thode gusse me) bolta hai bolo kya prashn hai raajdarbari aur ha suno sabhi mere ek baat . sabhi ko chetavni di jati hai.istarah bichh ne koee nahi bole ga jab tak ki mahaaraaj ki aagya na ho.inta bol k mahaamantree shant ho jata hai.aur
Raajdarbari(1)-mahaaraaj main apni is galti ki phir se chhama chahata hu.darsal baat hi aisa hai.tabhi
Main-bolo kya baat hai.
Raajdarbari(1)-mahaaraaj abhi kuchh der pahale hi mahaamantree g ne kaha tha ki afan ka dungeon gayab ho gaya hai apne aap aaj subha hote hi aur aap kah rahe hai ki ab koee dungeon nahi raha hai.main kuchh samjha nahi mahaaraaj.inta bol k vo baith jata hai.tabhi
Main-phir se bolna shuru karta hu.ha to ab aap sabhi k maan me bhi yahee sari bate aane shuri ho gai hongi na.to koee baat nahi.ab main aage bata hu.jaise ki aap sabhi ko aaj mahaamantree se pata chala ki alfan ka dungeon gayab ho gaya.lekin maine abhi bola ki ab kal tak to 4(chaar) dungeon bache the ab ek bhi nahi hai.
Jab mujhe is baat kab pata chala alfan ka dungeon gayab hone ka tabhi maine sare dungeon k bare me janane k liye husna ko bheeja tha aur mujhe ye pata chala ki sabhi jagah k dungeon apne aap gayab ho gaye hai.ab aap sabhi ko mere kahane ka arth samajh me aa gaya hoga.q maine kaha ki kal tak 4 dungeon the aur ab ek bhi nahi.
Ha to ab btaye aap sabhi is bare me kya sochte hai.inta bol k main shant ho jata hu.
Raajdarbari(3)-mahaaraaj ye to badi achhi baat hai.lagta hai baki 4 (chaaro) dungeon aap k dar se vapas apni duniya me chale gaye.tabhi
Raajdarbari(2)-mahaaraaj aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki ye sab kuchh un sabhi dungeon ka ek chaal ho.jisase hum sabhi ko yahee lage ki dungeon apni duniya me vapas chale gaye hai.aur phir achank se hum pe hamla ho jaye .jaise aaj ki huvi ghatna dekh le aap.
Phir aise hi sabhi raajdarbari apni alag alag vichaar dete rahe.jab sab ka bol k ho jata hai aur sabhi shant ho jata hei tab.
Main-phir se bolna shuru karta hu.ha aap sabhi ki baat sunane k baad main is natije pe pahucha hu .abhi hum sabhi to savdhaan rahane ki jarurat hai.isliye sabse pahale mahamantree g aap sabhi desho ko phir se dungeon k Vishay me varta karne k liye milna hai.aisa kahabar bhejva de.aur dhyaan rahe koee bhi desh chhutana nahi chaiye .
Garga- kingdom k mahaaraaj Homra se kahana ki is baar k dungeon ka sabha garga me ho.aisa hamara (king karma ka) ichha hai agar un ko koee aitraaj na ho to.aur un sabhi desho me apne khaas shainik aur mage (jadugao) ko bhej do ja se dungeon gayab huve aur pata lagaya jaye ki. kuchh asmanay ghatna to nahi huva tha.aur sath hi un ko kuchh samay k liye vahee rahne ko kah dena taki kuchh bhi hota hai to hume pata chal sake ki sach me dungeon chale gaye hai yaha phir ye un ki chaal hai.aur
Koee desh hamre shainiko ko aur mage ko nahi jane ki anumati de ko gupt roop se un desh me nazar rakha jaye.
Phir aaj ki sabha yahee samapt karta hu main.aur koee baat hoja mahaamantree dvara aap ko pata chal jaye ga.itna bol k main yumina k sath vapas raajmahal me chalajata hu raajsabha me se .aur phir dhire dhire sabhi raaj darbari bhi jane lagte hai.
Main-raaj sabha se nikal kar sab se pahle apne kamare me jata hu.aur apne bistar pe let jata hu.q ki mera maan bechain aur ashant ho gaya tha.aur hota bhi q nahi ek sath mere dimaag me itna sara cheeg jo chal raha tha.aaj ki ghatna ka achanak se hona phir u dungeon ka gayab ho jana phir yumina ka achana k se dukhi hona aur to aur raat ka sapna aur mere sene me achanaka se bahot teji se dard hona…ye sari chhege mere dimaag me chal raha tha vo bhi ek sath jasie ki koee jang chal raha ho.
Tabhi mere maan ki aavaaj mujhe sunaee deta hai.ab kisis bare me bhai mat soch.nahi to dimaag phat jaye ga.isliye sab se pahale dhyaan me baith jao aur jitna jada ho sake apne maan ko shaant rakhne ki kosis karo aur philaal to vahee kaam karo jisme jada dimaag na laana ho aur phir dhire dhire sab theek ho jaye ga.
Mujhe bhi mere maan ki ye baat bahot pasand aata hai.isliye main turant apne bistar se utar k jameen pe baith jata hu dhyaan lagane k liye.kuchh der k baad mera man shaant hone lagata hai.aur ye prakriya tab tak chalta hai jab tak ki mere kano me jija g ka aavaaj nahi sunaee deta hai.tabhi
Princess Rose-jija g ye kya abhi tak aap taiyaar nahi huve kya.hum logo ko CAPITALCity k liye nikal bhi to hai.aur vahee
Main-jaise hi rose ki aavaaj suntan hu.vaise hi meri aankhe khul jati aur jaise hi mere najre rose se takrati hai.main to usko dekhta hi raha jata.jaise uski khoobsurti aur jada nikhar gaya ho.aur to aur mera chota karma bhi apna sar uthana laga tha rose ki khoobsurti ko dekh k.iska aisas hote hi main turart sapno ki duniya se bahar aa jata hu aur jameen pe baith k hi apni najare rose se niche kar k .rose k bahar jane ko kah deta hu.tabhi
Princess Rose-jija g jaildi se aana.itna bol k vo muskarate huve mere kamare se chali jatai aur apne maan me bolti dekhti hu kab tak aab apne aap ko mujhse bachao ge jija g.aur vahee
Main-apne maan me abhi huvi ghatna k bare me sochne lagta hu.ki akhir ye kya ho raha mere sath.aisa to kabhi nahi huva mere sath.tabhi mere maan ki aavaaj phir se sochne lag gaya na tu.bus apne maan ko shaant rakhne ki kosis karo.dekhna apne aap sab theek ho jaye ga.main bhi yahee soch k jaldi se fresh ho jata hu.aur apne kamare se nikal k sab se pahale yumina k kamare me chala jata hu.jaha
Yumina-bus taiyaar ho k nikalne vali thi.aur
Mujhe-dekhti hi dady aap. Cahliye main bus taiyaar ho hi gai hu.tabhi
Main-wow aaj to mere beti.ek pari lag rahi hai.turant
Yumina-ho to dady vo to main pahale se hi hu pari.itna bol k uske chehare pe ek muskarahat aa jata hai.
Main-beti hume aap se kuchh bate karna tha.itna bol k main sidha bolna sharu kar deta hu aur usase apna kasam de kar puchhta hu ki aaj vo achanak se q roni lagi thi.aur maine usko kasam apna isliye diya tha. taki vo mujhse sab sach bata de nahi to vo koee na koee bahana bana k nikal jati thi.lekin ab vo fas chuki thi.
Yumina-thoda sa pyari vali gussa me dady…ye aapne ne achha nahi kiya.aap ko apna kasam nahi dena chahiye tha.achha aap ko jana hai na to suniye .sab se pahale to aap ne hum sabhi se itna bada sach chhupaya aur aap ko kitna kuchh ho gaya .aap ne apni beti ko yahi mujhe tak kuchh bhi nahi bataya.aur batayenge bhi q main aap ka khoon thodi na hu.jo aap mujhse bayenge.itna bolte hi uske aankho se anshu bane lagta hai.
Main-bhi bina soche aur bina kuchh bole hi yumina ko apne sine se laga leta hu.aur shaant karne lagta hu.aur ek dar mujhe is baat ka tha ki main bahot emotional na ho jau aur ho gaya to kahee koee musibat na ho jaye.q ki har ek emotion mere kabu se bahar ho raha tha.chahe vo gussa ho ya pyaar ya dard ho.isliye main apne aap ko kabu karte huve .yumina ko samblae me lag gaya aur kisi tarah se maine usko shaant karaya.jab vo thoda sa shaant huvi.tab main yumina se gudiya aaj to aapne bol diya ki aaj mera khoon nahi lekin aaj k baad ye nahi bolna aap.tum meri jaan ho jaan tum me to meri jaan basti meri bachchi.ye bol k main khud bhauk ho gaya tha.lekin kaise bhi kar k maine khud ko sambhala.q ki agar main emotional ho jata ho gudiya ko kaun sambalta.tabhi
Yumina-dady main ek sapna dekha tha aaj subha .jisme aap hum sabhi ko chhod k hamesa k chale gai hai.main aap k bina nahi rah sakti ho aur phir se unkse ankho se aanshu aa jate itna bolte hi.turant
Main-yumina ki baat ko sambhalte huve meri gudiya main kabhi nahi jaunga tum sab ko chhod k.vo bus ek sapna tha.ab nahi rote .main ab aap se kuchh se nahi chupaunga beta.ab nahi rote aur mujhe koee kuchh nahi kar sakta hai.tabhi
Seona-ha princess aap k dady ko koee nahi maar sakta hai.aur unse takatwar koee nahi hai is duniya me.
Yumina-ne jaise hi se baat suni .to kya dekhti hai ek bahot pyari si ladki uske samne khadi thi.jisko dekhti hi yumina mere taraf dekhne lagti hai jaise puchh rahi hi ho ye kaun hai.
Main-gudiya inka naam seona hai.aur bahot se log inko knowledge book bhi kahate hai.jo kuchh bhi aur jis kisi k bare me tum ko jana hoga .tum seona se puchh sakti.
Seona-ab se tum gudiya k sath rahana aur uski surkhchha ki jimedari tum pe hai.
Seona - jo hukum mere maalik.
Yumina-dady mujhe kisi ki surakchha nahi chaiye .main to khud hi sabhi nani yaad dila sakti ho.
Main-ha meri gudiya.ye samjhlo aap k liye gift hai ya. ye kahu ki ye ab se aap ki friend hai. aur vo sirf aap ko hi dikhegi.aur ab aur bate nahi karenge nahi ko aap ki moms ko pata chala ki mere vaja se aap ki aankho me anshu aaya hi meri to kair nahi hogi.
Yumina-mere baat sun k.thoda ha muskara deti hai.aur ab uska rona bhi banad ho gaya tha.aur vahee
Main-yumina k muskarate dekh mujhe thoda sakun milta hai.tabhi husna bhi udte hu mere kande pe baith jati hai.aur mere sabhi jaan mujhe yaad kar rahi hai baati hai.isliye main bhi bina samay gave.apne jaano k pass pahoch jata hu. Jo ki ek dum jagab lag rahi thi.jaise asmaan se utri huvi apsare ho.tabhi
Mahaamantree –mahaaraaj maine sari taiyari kar diya aap k aur mahaaraniyo k jane ka.aur sena ki ek khass tukari bhi taiyaar hai.itna bata k mahaamantree chala jata hai.
Main-phir cahlo sab log.main aata hu kuchh der .phir sabhi log chale jate hai.aur main seona se captital city aur baki un jagaho pe apne magic use karne ko kahata hu .taki vaha mujhe sabhi ko ye na batan ho ki main kaise badal gaya.jo magic yaha use kiya tha vahee magic vaha bhi use karna .jisase sab ko yahee lage ki.dungeon me jane k vaja se main badal gaya .tabhi
Seon-ho gaya maalik.inta bol k vo yumina k pass chali jata hi.aur main bhi bahar pahoch jata hu mahaamantree k pass unko sab kuchh samjha k.apne ship k pass chala jata hai jisko bahot achhe tarike se sajaya gaya tha.aur vahee
Underworld me -yani ki hades wold me ek kamare me sirf 3 log baithe huve the.jisme se ek hades ek yamraaj aur unknown tha koee.jinko dekh to yahee lag raha tha jaise vo teeno kisi bahot mahatpurn vishya pe baat kar rahe ho.
To be continued…..
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Kaha ho bhai ji update kab aayega
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Dosto mere realative me ek death ho gaya tha parso. aur upar se 2 din pahale hamrae yaha bhot joor se raat me barish huvi aur bijali kadki thi .jis k vaha se mere wifi k operator k kuchh machine ud gaye the aur aap logo ko maine under ground electric wire ka kaam to bataya tha.inhi sab problem k vajah se main kuchh din se kuchh bhi nahi likh pa raha hu.aur vaise problem aur bhi hai filahal k liye jane dete hai unko.
Dosto kal nahi to parso se to pakka ....aap ko pura week daily update dene ki kosis karung.q ki jaha tak dekh jaye to story kafi jada slow chal raha hai.
kisi week me 3update to kisi me 2 aur to aur pichhle week me to sayd 1 ki de paya hu main update.
i hope aap logo aisa hi mere sath bane rahenge aur support karte rahenge.thank you so much mere sath bane rahane k liye aur mujhe support karne k liye.aur inspire karne k liye bhi.
Dosto kal nahi to parso se to pakka ....aap ko pura week daily update dene ki kosis karung.q ki jaha tak dekh jaye to story kafi jada slow chal raha hai.
kisi week me 3update to kisi me 2 aur to aur pichhle week me to sayd 1 ki de paya hu main update.
i hope aap logo aisa hi mere sath bane rahenge aur support karte rahenge.thank you so much mere sath bane rahane k liye aur mujhe support karne k liye.aur inspire karne k liye bhi.
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