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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*
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thank you so much bhai apna sugession dene k liye.main si bare me jarur sochunga jaisa vaha ki story chal raha hai yaha bhi chale. lekin agar ya xxx jada demand huva to tab main sxx add ko add karunga.other wise no.any other sugession hoga to bhai jarur share karna .i m very gald.thank you bhai.keep supporting.next updte thodi der me.
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thank you so much bhai.keep supporting. koee sugession hoga is story ko le kar to jarur share karna bhai.next update thodi der me.
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thank you so much bhai.keep suppoting bhai aise hi sath bane rahana aur support karte rahana.next upadte thodi der me bhai.koee sugession ho story ko le kar to jarur share karna.keep supporting
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UPDATE -27
Recap-
Ab tak dosto aap sabhi logo ne pichhle update me padha kis tarah group 1 aur group 2 ne dono (2 no) daravaajo ka rahasya hal kar k sabhi surakhchit gupha (cave) me vapas aa jate hai.
Ab aage----
Main-jaise hi main aur mere group k log daravaje se bahar aate hai turant hum sabhi log apne dusare tarf dekhne lagte hai .abhi hum sabhi ne apni mundi dusare taraf kiya hi tha ki dusre daravaaje k pass pahali se hi group 2 k log khade the vo sabhi bhi hamare taraf hi dekh rahe thai.un sabhi ko dekh k aisa lag rah tha jaise vo log bhi hame hi dhoondh (find) rahe hai.aur jaise hi hum sabhi logo ne ek dusare ko dekha to. tab ja hum sabhi logo ne chain ki saas li. aur usi k sath sabhi apas me baate karne lage jaise ki un k sath daravaaje ko paar karne k baad kya huva aur kaise un sabhi ne uska saamana kiya. abhi sabhi log apas me bate kar rahe the maine bhi isi baat ka fayda tha k apne dusre rup ko apne andar vapas sama liya q ki uska kaam pura ho gaya tha.dosto abhi in sabhi logo ka thoda apas me bate karne dete hai aur hum chalte hai teharma raajya me…
Teharma raajya-
Teharma raajya k sabhi log ko ye khel ki pratiyogita bahot hi pasand aa raha tha q ki aaj tak vaha k logo ne aisa khel apni puri jindagee me kabhi nahi dekha tha.aur to aur sirf teharma raajya k logo ko hi nahi teharma raajya me aaye huve sabhi desho k raaja aur mehamaano k liya bhi ye khel kisi sapne se kam nahi tha.kisi ne bhi ye nahi soch tha ki kuchh platinum k sikko k liye unlogo ko inta khona pade ga.jiska unlogo ne kapana bhi nahi kiya tha aur koee bhi teharma k raaja ko kuchh bol bhi nahi sakta tha q ki sabhi desh k raajao ne khud hi apne bahadur yoddha o ko is khel me shamil kiya tha.bahot se raajao ko ab dukh ho raha tha is khel me bhag le k q ki un k bahot se bahadur yoddha is khel ki bali chad gaye the aur kuchh desh k raaja aabhi bhi is khel ko jitne ki aasha rakhe huve the q ki un k yoddha abhi bhi is khel me zinda the.aur to aur bahot se log abhi bhi is bharam me the kya ye log jo mare gaye aur jo kuchh bhi dikh rah hai ye sach hai ya koee maaya hai.lekin ek baat to hai jo sabhi log intazaar kar rahe the ki aage kya ho ga aur kya hone vala hai.vo log bhi jiske liye ye khel ek bharam hai vo bhi aur jin logo ko pata hai ye sab kuchh sach hai vo log bhi.aage kya hone vala hai.sabhi log bus isis baat ka intazaar kar rahe the.tabhi
Minata-apne mahaamantree ko apne pass bula kar us ke kaan kahata hai ki mahaamantree abhi tak karma ki beti yumina zinda hai.aur vo kaun hai jisko vo sabhi log usko kya naam se bulate hai ..haa….yaad aaya… shadow uske bare bhi jaldi pata lago nahi to hamara plan kahi vo shadow kharaab na kar de.jaldi se uska kuchh karo samjh gaye na tum.itna bol kar minata shaant ho jata hai.aur vahee
Mahaamantre-bhi mahaaraaj k kaan me dhire se bolta hai ki .aap nischint rahe abhi bhi hamre pass 3-4 ausar aur hai jisame uski maut ya kaid hamesa k liye pakki hai.aakhir kaab tak uska nasib sath dega.aur rahi baat jisko vo log shadow bol rahe hai agar vo aakhir me pahoch bhi gaya to aap ko to pata hi kaid ho jaya vo shadow ya uski maut hona hi hai.aur jaise hi
Minata-apne mahaamantree ki baat sunta hai ek baar phir se santust ho jata hai.
[dosto teharama k raaja aur mahaamantri ko 4th jadugar k razz k bare me nahi pata jisne apni atma ko do rakashas k andar rakaha tha aur aur usko koee shadow hi maar sakta hai.philal update jisne padha hoga un sabhi ko us jadugar ka razz pata ho ga]
Shina;Lelina-bhi maje le rahi thi is khel ka aur to aur undono ko bhi abhi tak yahi lag raha ki ye khel me jo bhi log mar rahe hai vo sabhi baad me zinda ho jayenge.survaat me vo dono bhi pahale padaav ko dekh k ghabarah gai thi.lekin ab vo dono bhi ki aage kya hoga is khel me uska besabri se intajaar kar rahi thi. Aur mere rup me husna thi un sabhai k sath.isiliye vo dono nischint ho kar khel ka maza le rahe the aur dono logo ko shor aur majedaar khel k vaja se un dono ka dhyan 1 min k liye bhi kisi ka idhar se udar nahi ho raha tha.aur to aur ye khel pratiyogita hi aisa chal raha tha ki kisi ka bhi dhyan bhatak hi nahi sakta hai.aur teharma me sirf abhi ek hi ghanta (1hr) huva tha.chalo dosto phir se chalte hai apne gupha me aur in sabhi ko is khel ka anand lene dete hai.
Main-sabhi se dosto abhi bate karne ka samay nahi hai abhi hum sab ne ye padaav paar nahi kiya hai.turant
Sabhi log-meri baat sunkar mere tarf dekhne lagte hai.aur sath hi apni baate karna band kar dete hai.
Main-ab sabhi log serious ho gaye the meri baat sunne k baad.dosto ab aage kya karna hai kisi ko kuchh pata hai.
Ruchi-shadow g mujhe to lagta hai hum sabhi ne jo abhi dono daravaajo ka rahasya ko suljhaya hai usi se aage bhadne me kuchh madat mil sakta hai.
Yumina-ha shadow g mera bhi yahi maana hai jo ruchi bol rahi hai.aur to aur mujhe is sher k murti me hi kuchh chupa huva rahasy lag raha hai.
Sabhi log-hume bhi yahi lagta hai.q ki us jadugar ne uske baad hume kuchh bataya bhi to nahi hai.
Main-ha dosto mujhe bhi yahi lag raha tha.jaise ki tum sabhi ko pata hi ho ga hum sabhi parchhaee uttar de kar hi yaha vapas aaye the.jaur us uttar ka aur sher ki murti ka kuchh lena dena hai.
Sabhi log-ek sath bolte hai shadow tumhara sochna sahi hai. Itna bol kar sabhi sochne lagte hai.
Main-sabhi ko dekh raha tha aur sabhi log idar udar ghum rahe the aur kuchh log sher k murti k pass to kuchh us se dur ghum rahe the .abhi sabhi logo ko dekh k to ye hi kahana thik hoga ki sabhi log koee suraag talas kar rahe hai.tabhi yumina ek masal le kar sher k murti k munh me dekh ne lagi.main bhi use hi dekhne lagta hu ki aakhir vo kya kar rahi hai.aur jaise hi main pichhe muda to mujhe us sher ki parchhaee gupha k dival par padti huvi dikh rahi thi .jisko dekh kar mere dimak k ghode daudane lage aur sath hi mujhe ye bhi pata chal gaya ki kaise ham log is padaav ko par kar sakte hai.turant
Maine-sher ki parchhaee jis dival par pad rahi thi usko bahot dhayan se dekhne laga jisase mujhe pata chal gaya black stone kaha hai.maine turant sabhi se dosto mujhe pata chal gaya ki black stone kaha hai.
Sabhi log-meri baat sun kar .sabhi ek sath bolte hai kaha par hai aur tuhme kaise pata chala.
Main-dosto black stone vaha par hai jis dival par sher ki murti ki parchhaee pad rahi hai.rahi baat mujhe kaise pata chala to dosto jis uttar ki madat se hum sab ya vapas aaye the us si se mujhe pata chala.maine us dival pe apne fire magic use kar diya jise ab sabhi ko black stone dikhne laga .hum sabhi turant ja kar ek ek black stone apne hath me le liya .
Sabhi log-ab aur kya karna hai.ab tak to hum sab ko agle padaav me pahoch jana chahi tha.
Main-achchha ek kam karte hai ye black stone hum sab sher ki murti k taraf le kar chalte hai.sabhi meri baat maan kar mere sath apna apna black stone le kar sher k murti k pass pahoch jate hai.abhi koee kuchh aur bolta ki sabhi k black stone sher ki murti k munh me chala jata hai.aur jaise hi black stone sher kmunh me jata hai ki uske turant baad sher k munh se white roshni nikal kar hum sabhi par girne lagti hai.jaise hi vo roshni hum sabhi par padti hai. hum sabhi logoki ankhe apne aap band ho jati hai.aur jab hum sabhi k kano me kisi ki aavaaj sunaee deti hai tab kahi ja kar hum sab apni ankhe khote hai.
Jadugar-aakhir tum sab abhi tak zinda ho.
Sabhi log-(dosto hum sab ne jis ka aavaaj suna tha vo aavaaj jadugar ka tha) jadugar tujhe kya laga ki hum log kabhi us ghupha se bahar nahi aa payenge.
Jadugar-haaa haaa (jor jor se hasne laga)chalo achchha huva yaha aa gaye.ab main tum sab ko khud apne hatho se marunga aur itna bol kar phir se jor se hasna lagta hai jadugar.
Main-jadugar se humne tumhare sare padav ko paar liya hai aur black stone bhi hame mila tha phir bhi hum sabhi abhi tak agle padav me q nahi pahuche.
Jadugar-haa haa haste huve tum sabne ne bhale hi sare padav paar kar liya ho ya black stone bhi tum logo ko mila ho.phir bhi tum sabhi is padaav k aage nahi badh sakte ho.tum sabko mere hatho hi marna hai.aur mujhe marne vala aaj tak paida nahi huva hai.itna bol kar ho vo hum sabhi par aag ki baris karne lagta hai jisse sabhi log apne aap ko bachane k liye idhar udar bahagne lagte hai.
Main-sidha apna black shadow sword ko lekar jadugar k sine k aar paar kar deta hau aur uske kaan me dhire se bolta hu.main kaun hu tujhe pata hai.tera kal hu.aur usu k sath main apna talvaar uske sine se bahar nikal leta hu.ye sab kuchh maine tab kiya jab sabhi log us jadugar k aag k barish se bach rahe tha.aur maine apni speed k madat se us jadugar ka kaam tamaam kar diya aur kisi ne mere sword ko dekh bhi nahi jo mere liya bahot achchha tha.
Ab aag ka barish band ho chuka tha lekin jaise hi jadugar mara uske sarir k pass bhi safed roshni ne gher liya tha.aur to aur hum sabhi log bhi jaha khade the hamare charo taraf safed hi safed har cheej dikh rahi thi jameen bhi ped bhi sabhi cheej. hum sab kaha the jab se us sher ki roshni hum sab pe padi thi hume pata hi nahi chala tha.aur jaha hum sabh kahade the ya jis jagah par the us bare me bhi kuchh pata kar pate use pahale hi jadugar ne hamla kar diya tha.
Sabhi log-is samay us jadugar ko dekh rahe the .ab kya hone val hai.sabhi k maan me yahi chal raha tha kya ab agle padaav me jayenge ya abhi kuchh aur bhi karna baki hai agle padaav me hane k liye.tabhi ek aavaaj aati hai.hum sabhi idar udar dekte hai lekin koee dikhaee nahi deta hai.
Aavaaj-are tum sab log idhar udhar kaha dekh rahe ho.yaha dekho bol kar ek seedhee(starirs) aa jati hai.tum sabhi ko agar agle padaav me jana hai to mujhe paar kar hi jana ho ga.itna bol kar shaant vo jata hai.
Main-jaise hi hum sabhi ne vo aavaaj suna to sach me hum sab k same ek bahot ki khoobsurat seedhee aa gai thi.dosto iske alava hum kuchh kar bhi nahi sakte hai.inta bol kar main aur mere sath sabhi log us seedhee k pass pahoch jate hai.dekh k lag raha tha is seedhee k 10 steps hi hai sirf.hum sabhi us seedhee k pass abhi khade hi the tabhi phir se ek aavaaj hm logo ko sunaee deta hai.
Aavaaj-is ka niyam hai ki tum log kisi ka shara nahi loge nahi seedhee k side ko chhuna(touch) hai .1 step ko left leg se lekin left side me aur sath hi right leg have (air)me hona cha hiye .2nd step ko right leg se right side me hi vo bhi jump kar k aur left leg hava me rahna chahiye isi tarah se sare steps ko complete karna hai .aur jis kisi ne galati kiya uska ek part uske body(shareer) se gaya ho jaye ga jab vo sare steps clear kar le ga .tab uske sare parts usko vapas mil gaye ga.nahi paar kar paya to death(maut).
Maine-sabhi se dosto main tum sab ko kar k dhikhata hu.itna bol kar maine 1st step me apna left leg rakha aur right leg hawa me phir jump kar k 2nd step par apne right leg rakha aur left leg mera hava me vop bhi right side me.is tarah maine sabhi steps ko paar kar diya. Aur jaise hi maine last step ko paar kiya main sidha pratiyogita k maidaan me pahoch gaya. Aur Kuchh hi der baad me yumina ;ruchi. Aa gaye aur dekhte dekhte sabhi log aa gaye lekin 2 log nahi aa paye. iska matlab hum sab samajh gaye ab vo kabhi nahi aane vale hai un do me ek ladki aur ek ladka tha .ab hum sab 8 sirf bache the.hum sabhi khus bhi the q ab ja kar hum teharma aaye the.mujhe to aisa lag raha tha jaise mahino bit gaye ho.hum sabhi ko dekh kar teharma k logo taliya baja kar swagat kar rahe the……ab hum sabhi k maan me yahe chal rha tha akhiri padaav me kya hone val hai…..
to be continued ….
Recap-
Ab tak dosto aap sabhi logo ne pichhle update me padha kis tarah group 1 aur group 2 ne dono (2 no) daravaajo ka rahasya hal kar k sabhi surakhchit gupha (cave) me vapas aa jate hai.
Ab aage----
Main-jaise hi main aur mere group k log daravaje se bahar aate hai turant hum sabhi log apne dusare tarf dekhne lagte hai .abhi hum sabhi ne apni mundi dusare taraf kiya hi tha ki dusre daravaaje k pass pahali se hi group 2 k log khade the vo sabhi bhi hamare taraf hi dekh rahe thai.un sabhi ko dekh k aisa lag rah tha jaise vo log bhi hame hi dhoondh (find) rahe hai.aur jaise hi hum sabhi logo ne ek dusare ko dekha to. tab ja hum sabhi logo ne chain ki saas li. aur usi k sath sabhi apas me baate karne lage jaise ki un k sath daravaaje ko paar karne k baad kya huva aur kaise un sabhi ne uska saamana kiya. abhi sabhi log apas me bate kar rahe the maine bhi isi baat ka fayda tha k apne dusre rup ko apne andar vapas sama liya q ki uska kaam pura ho gaya tha.dosto abhi in sabhi logo ka thoda apas me bate karne dete hai aur hum chalte hai teharma raajya me…
Teharma raajya-
Teharma raajya k sabhi log ko ye khel ki pratiyogita bahot hi pasand aa raha tha q ki aaj tak vaha k logo ne aisa khel apni puri jindagee me kabhi nahi dekha tha.aur to aur sirf teharma raajya k logo ko hi nahi teharma raajya me aaye huve sabhi desho k raaja aur mehamaano k liya bhi ye khel kisi sapne se kam nahi tha.kisi ne bhi ye nahi soch tha ki kuchh platinum k sikko k liye unlogo ko inta khona pade ga.jiska unlogo ne kapana bhi nahi kiya tha aur koee bhi teharma k raaja ko kuchh bol bhi nahi sakta tha q ki sabhi desh k raajao ne khud hi apne bahadur yoddha o ko is khel me shamil kiya tha.bahot se raajao ko ab dukh ho raha tha is khel me bhag le k q ki un k bahot se bahadur yoddha is khel ki bali chad gaye the aur kuchh desh k raaja aabhi bhi is khel ko jitne ki aasha rakhe huve the q ki un k yoddha abhi bhi is khel me zinda the.aur to aur bahot se log abhi bhi is bharam me the kya ye log jo mare gaye aur jo kuchh bhi dikh rah hai ye sach hai ya koee maaya hai.lekin ek baat to hai jo sabhi log intazaar kar rahe the ki aage kya ho ga aur kya hone vala hai.vo log bhi jiske liye ye khel ek bharam hai vo bhi aur jin logo ko pata hai ye sab kuchh sach hai vo log bhi.aage kya hone vala hai.sabhi log bus isis baat ka intazaar kar rahe the.tabhi
Minata-apne mahaamantree ko apne pass bula kar us ke kaan kahata hai ki mahaamantree abhi tak karma ki beti yumina zinda hai.aur vo kaun hai jisko vo sabhi log usko kya naam se bulate hai ..haa….yaad aaya… shadow uske bare bhi jaldi pata lago nahi to hamara plan kahi vo shadow kharaab na kar de.jaldi se uska kuchh karo samjh gaye na tum.itna bol kar minata shaant ho jata hai.aur vahee
Mahaamantre-bhi mahaaraaj k kaan me dhire se bolta hai ki .aap nischint rahe abhi bhi hamre pass 3-4 ausar aur hai jisame uski maut ya kaid hamesa k liye pakki hai.aakhir kaab tak uska nasib sath dega.aur rahi baat jisko vo log shadow bol rahe hai agar vo aakhir me pahoch bhi gaya to aap ko to pata hi kaid ho jaya vo shadow ya uski maut hona hi hai.aur jaise hi
Minata-apne mahaamantree ki baat sunta hai ek baar phir se santust ho jata hai.
[dosto teharama k raaja aur mahaamantri ko 4th jadugar k razz k bare me nahi pata jisne apni atma ko do rakashas k andar rakaha tha aur aur usko koee shadow hi maar sakta hai.philal update jisne padha hoga un sabhi ko us jadugar ka razz pata ho ga]
Shina;Lelina-bhi maje le rahi thi is khel ka aur to aur undono ko bhi abhi tak yahi lag raha ki ye khel me jo bhi log mar rahe hai vo sabhi baad me zinda ho jayenge.survaat me vo dono bhi pahale padaav ko dekh k ghabarah gai thi.lekin ab vo dono bhi ki aage kya hoga is khel me uska besabri se intajaar kar rahi thi. Aur mere rup me husna thi un sabhai k sath.isiliye vo dono nischint ho kar khel ka maza le rahe the aur dono logo ko shor aur majedaar khel k vaja se un dono ka dhyan 1 min k liye bhi kisi ka idhar se udar nahi ho raha tha.aur to aur ye khel pratiyogita hi aisa chal raha tha ki kisi ka bhi dhyan bhatak hi nahi sakta hai.aur teharma me sirf abhi ek hi ghanta (1hr) huva tha.chalo dosto phir se chalte hai apne gupha me aur in sabhi ko is khel ka anand lene dete hai.
Main-sabhi se dosto abhi bate karne ka samay nahi hai abhi hum sab ne ye padaav paar nahi kiya hai.turant
Sabhi log-meri baat sunkar mere tarf dekhne lagte hai.aur sath hi apni baate karna band kar dete hai.
Main-ab sabhi log serious ho gaye the meri baat sunne k baad.dosto ab aage kya karna hai kisi ko kuchh pata hai.
Ruchi-shadow g mujhe to lagta hai hum sabhi ne jo abhi dono daravaajo ka rahasya ko suljhaya hai usi se aage bhadne me kuchh madat mil sakta hai.
Yumina-ha shadow g mera bhi yahi maana hai jo ruchi bol rahi hai.aur to aur mujhe is sher k murti me hi kuchh chupa huva rahasy lag raha hai.
Sabhi log-hume bhi yahi lagta hai.q ki us jadugar ne uske baad hume kuchh bataya bhi to nahi hai.
Main-ha dosto mujhe bhi yahi lag raha tha.jaise ki tum sabhi ko pata hi ho ga hum sabhi parchhaee uttar de kar hi yaha vapas aaye the.jaur us uttar ka aur sher ki murti ka kuchh lena dena hai.
Sabhi log-ek sath bolte hai shadow tumhara sochna sahi hai. Itna bol kar sabhi sochne lagte hai.
Main-sabhi ko dekh raha tha aur sabhi log idar udar ghum rahe the aur kuchh log sher k murti k pass to kuchh us se dur ghum rahe the .abhi sabhi logo ko dekh k to ye hi kahana thik hoga ki sabhi log koee suraag talas kar rahe hai.tabhi yumina ek masal le kar sher k murti k munh me dekh ne lagi.main bhi use hi dekhne lagta hu ki aakhir vo kya kar rahi hai.aur jaise hi main pichhe muda to mujhe us sher ki parchhaee gupha k dival par padti huvi dikh rahi thi .jisko dekh kar mere dimak k ghode daudane lage aur sath hi mujhe ye bhi pata chal gaya ki kaise ham log is padaav ko par kar sakte hai.turant
Maine-sher ki parchhaee jis dival par pad rahi thi usko bahot dhayan se dekhne laga jisase mujhe pata chal gaya black stone kaha hai.maine turant sabhi se dosto mujhe pata chal gaya ki black stone kaha hai.
Sabhi log-meri baat sun kar .sabhi ek sath bolte hai kaha par hai aur tuhme kaise pata chala.
Main-dosto black stone vaha par hai jis dival par sher ki murti ki parchhaee pad rahi hai.rahi baat mujhe kaise pata chala to dosto jis uttar ki madat se hum sab ya vapas aaye the us si se mujhe pata chala.maine us dival pe apne fire magic use kar diya jise ab sabhi ko black stone dikhne laga .hum sabhi turant ja kar ek ek black stone apne hath me le liya .
Sabhi log-ab aur kya karna hai.ab tak to hum sab ko agle padaav me pahoch jana chahi tha.
Main-achchha ek kam karte hai ye black stone hum sab sher ki murti k taraf le kar chalte hai.sabhi meri baat maan kar mere sath apna apna black stone le kar sher k murti k pass pahoch jate hai.abhi koee kuchh aur bolta ki sabhi k black stone sher ki murti k munh me chala jata hai.aur jaise hi black stone sher kmunh me jata hai ki uske turant baad sher k munh se white roshni nikal kar hum sabhi par girne lagti hai.jaise hi vo roshni hum sabhi par padti hai. hum sabhi logoki ankhe apne aap band ho jati hai.aur jab hum sabhi k kano me kisi ki aavaaj sunaee deti hai tab kahi ja kar hum sab apni ankhe khote hai.
Jadugar-aakhir tum sab abhi tak zinda ho.
Sabhi log-(dosto hum sab ne jis ka aavaaj suna tha vo aavaaj jadugar ka tha) jadugar tujhe kya laga ki hum log kabhi us ghupha se bahar nahi aa payenge.
Jadugar-haaa haaa (jor jor se hasne laga)chalo achchha huva yaha aa gaye.ab main tum sab ko khud apne hatho se marunga aur itna bol kar phir se jor se hasna lagta hai jadugar.
Main-jadugar se humne tumhare sare padav ko paar liya hai aur black stone bhi hame mila tha phir bhi hum sabhi abhi tak agle padav me q nahi pahuche.
Jadugar-haa haa haste huve tum sabne ne bhale hi sare padav paar kar liya ho ya black stone bhi tum logo ko mila ho.phir bhi tum sabhi is padaav k aage nahi badh sakte ho.tum sabko mere hatho hi marna hai.aur mujhe marne vala aaj tak paida nahi huva hai.itna bol kar ho vo hum sabhi par aag ki baris karne lagta hai jisse sabhi log apne aap ko bachane k liye idhar udar bahagne lagte hai.
Main-sidha apna black shadow sword ko lekar jadugar k sine k aar paar kar deta hau aur uske kaan me dhire se bolta hu.main kaun hu tujhe pata hai.tera kal hu.aur usu k sath main apna talvaar uske sine se bahar nikal leta hu.ye sab kuchh maine tab kiya jab sabhi log us jadugar k aag k barish se bach rahe tha.aur maine apni speed k madat se us jadugar ka kaam tamaam kar diya aur kisi ne mere sword ko dekh bhi nahi jo mere liya bahot achchha tha.
Ab aag ka barish band ho chuka tha lekin jaise hi jadugar mara uske sarir k pass bhi safed roshni ne gher liya tha.aur to aur hum sabhi log bhi jaha khade the hamare charo taraf safed hi safed har cheej dikh rahi thi jameen bhi ped bhi sabhi cheej. hum sab kaha the jab se us sher ki roshni hum sab pe padi thi hume pata hi nahi chala tha.aur jaha hum sabh kahade the ya jis jagah par the us bare me bhi kuchh pata kar pate use pahale hi jadugar ne hamla kar diya tha.
Sabhi log-is samay us jadugar ko dekh rahe the .ab kya hone val hai.sabhi k maan me yahi chal raha tha kya ab agle padaav me jayenge ya abhi kuchh aur bhi karna baki hai agle padaav me hane k liye.tabhi ek aavaaj aati hai.hum sabhi idar udar dekte hai lekin koee dikhaee nahi deta hai.
Aavaaj-are tum sab log idhar udhar kaha dekh rahe ho.yaha dekho bol kar ek seedhee(starirs) aa jati hai.tum sabhi ko agar agle padaav me jana hai to mujhe paar kar hi jana ho ga.itna bol kar shaant vo jata hai.
Main-jaise hi hum sabhi ne vo aavaaj suna to sach me hum sab k same ek bahot ki khoobsurat seedhee aa gai thi.dosto iske alava hum kuchh kar bhi nahi sakte hai.inta bol kar main aur mere sath sabhi log us seedhee k pass pahoch jate hai.dekh k lag raha tha is seedhee k 10 steps hi hai sirf.hum sabhi us seedhee k pass abhi khade hi the tabhi phir se ek aavaaj hm logo ko sunaee deta hai.
Aavaaj-is ka niyam hai ki tum log kisi ka shara nahi loge nahi seedhee k side ko chhuna(touch) hai .1 step ko left leg se lekin left side me aur sath hi right leg have (air)me hona cha hiye .2nd step ko right leg se right side me hi vo bhi jump kar k aur left leg hava me rahna chahiye isi tarah se sare steps ko complete karna hai .aur jis kisi ne galati kiya uska ek part uske body(shareer) se gaya ho jaye ga jab vo sare steps clear kar le ga .tab uske sare parts usko vapas mil gaye ga.nahi paar kar paya to death(maut).
Maine-sabhi se dosto main tum sab ko kar k dhikhata hu.itna bol kar maine 1st step me apna left leg rakha aur right leg hawa me phir jump kar k 2nd step par apne right leg rakha aur left leg mera hava me vop bhi right side me.is tarah maine sabhi steps ko paar kar diya. Aur jaise hi maine last step ko paar kiya main sidha pratiyogita k maidaan me pahoch gaya. Aur Kuchh hi der baad me yumina ;ruchi. Aa gaye aur dekhte dekhte sabhi log aa gaye lekin 2 log nahi aa paye. iska matlab hum sab samajh gaye ab vo kabhi nahi aane vale hai un do me ek ladki aur ek ladka tha .ab hum sab 8 sirf bache the.hum sabhi khus bhi the q ab ja kar hum teharma aaye the.mujhe to aisa lag raha tha jaise mahino bit gaye ho.hum sabhi ko dekh kar teharma k logo taliya baja kar swagat kar rahe the……ab hum sabhi k maan me yahe chal rha tha akhiri padaav me kya hone val hai…..
to be continued ….
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Main-aur mere sath sirf 7 aur log chauthe padaav ko paar karne me kaamayaab ho kar aakhiri padaav me pahoch paye the.hum sab is samay teharma raajya me the.jaha is pratiyogita ka arambh huva tha.hum sabhi ka teharma raajya me upasthit sabhi log pure josh se swagat kar rahe the.hum sabhi log bhi is pal ka anand le rahe the.tabhi
Minata-apni jagah se khada ho kar apna hath upar kar k sabko shaant hone ka ishaara karte hai.
Sabhi log-apne raaja ko dekh kar shaant ho jate hai.
Minata-swagat hai tum sabhi 8 yoddha o ka ek baar phir se teharma raajya me aur is khel ki pratiyogita me aur meri shubhakaamana tum sabhi k sath hai.inta bol kar vo apne singhasan par baith jata hai.aur apni mahaamantree ko kuchh ishaara karta hai.
Mahaamantree-(apne raja ka ishaara pate hi mahaamantree sabh kuchh samajh jata hai usko kya karna hai).turant apni jagah se thoda aage aa kar yoddhao aap sabhi ka main phir se abhinandan karta hu.aur main tum sabhi logo ko bata deta hu ye tum sabhi ka aur is khel ka aakhri padaav hai matlab paanchavaan (5th) padaav hai.is padaav me tumhare saamane 8 yoddha honge.unko harao aur tum jo bhi inaam chahate ho us inaam ko hasil kar lo.bus itna hi karna hai.itna bol kar vo shaant ho jata hai.
Main-apne sabhi dosto se .dosto sambhal k jab bhi ye log kahate hai padaav ko par karne k liye jada kuchh nahi karna hai.tab tab hum sabhi ne us padaav me apne bahot se dosto ko khoya hai.main abhi aur kuchh bol pata ek bar phir se pratiyogita ko dekhne vale logo ka shoor hum sabhi ko aane laga.phir kya tha dekhte hi dekhte hum sab k saamane 8 yoddha jameen se nikal kar hum sab k samne aane lage jisko dekh kar logo ka aavaaj aur un sabhi ka shoor phir se suru ho gaya.aur hota bhi q nahi .q ki jitne bhi yoddha jameen me se nikal kar hum sab k samne aaye the.vo sabhi yoddha hum jaise hi dikh rahe the .un sabhi ka hum jaisa hi pahnava bhi tha jisko dekh kar koee bhi nahi bata sakta tha ye asli nahi nakli hai hum bhi khud ashcharya the un yoddha ko dekh kar.sab k sab hum logo k jaise hi dikh rahe the.
Main-apne maan me kya maaya rach hai.kamal hai.yahi sabhi k maan me bhi kuchh na kuch chal raha tha.aur vaha baithe sabhi logo k maan me bhi yahi chal raha tha ki aage kya ho ga aur kya hone vala hai.
Mahaamantree-ab khel ko main aarambh karta hu.
Main-mahaamantree k inta bolte hi jameen se nikle 8 yoddha hum par humla karne k liye hamare taraf badhne lagte hai.hum sab bhi bilkul taiyar the un sabhi ka saamana karne k liye.phir ek baar suru ho jata hai mahaa yuddh.mahaa yuddh is liye q ki ye sabhi hum sab ka nakal kar rahe the.jaisa hum talvaar chalate vo bhi vahi karte .jo bhi magic hum log use karte vo bhi vahi karte.ab hum sab ko dekh kar koee nahi bata sakta tha kaun asli hai kaun nakli hai.
Ab tak hum sabne un nakli yoddha ka kuchh bhi nahi kar paye the aur nahi hi un logo ne.isi tarah hum sabhi ladte rahe kafi der tak lekin vo hai ki rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahe the.mere samane vala jisne mere jaisa hi talvaar mere jisa shadow baane ka koisis kar raha tha .maine bhi apne maan me bolta hu ab bahot ho gaya is k bohot sath khel liya mere pass samay nahi hai. Agar koee mujhe pahale us kitab k pass chala gaya to vo hamesa hamesa k liye usme kaid ho jaye ja.ab mere pass yahi sahi mauka hai jab tak sabhi in yoddha k sath yuddh karte rahenge tab tak mujhe apna kaam karna hi pade ga.phir kya tha maine apni puri takat laga kar apne saamane vale youdha par vaar kar diya jisko vo sambhal nahi paya .mere saamane ka yoddha phir se mitti me mil gaya.
Main-ne jaise hi apne samane vale ka kaam tamaam kiya sabhi logo ka shoor ana suru ho gaya.mera dekh kar sabhi apna puri takat laga apne samne vale yoddha se yuddh karne lage .main ab aage badhne laga jaise maine aage badha tha. kisi ki cheekhe ghune lagi .lekin mere pass samay nahi tha .is liye maine main us kitaab k pass pahoch gaya.jis ko ek bahot hi khas kale kapde me lapet kar rakha gaya tha .jaise jaise main us kitaab k najdeek pahochte ja raha tha asmaan me kale badal chhane laga aur phir kya tha puri ki puri jagah hi kali andheri raat me badal gai.jaha kuchh der pahle ek dum suhana mausam tha aab vaha anderi raat ho gai thi.
Mujhe-us anderi raat me bilkul saaf dikhaee de raha tha .maine apne ass pass dekha to jaise sab kuchh tham sa gaya tha sabhi log jaise jaam gaye hai.
Main-apne maan me ye sab kya ho raha hai…ye sabhi logo ko kya huva hai.tabhi ek aavaaj.
Knowledge book-kaun ho tum aur tum ne ye sab kya kiya hai.mujhe apna paichaan batao.nahi to maine tumhe abhi aur hamsa hamesa k liye kaid kar lungi apne kitaab me.
Main-dosto jo aavaaj maine suna tha vo aavaaj us kitaab ki thi.maine bhi jor se kaun bol raha hai.samne aao nahi to…..
Knowledge book-(tabhi vo chamkne lagti hai) main vahi bol rahi hu jisko pane k liye tum yaha par rahe ho.tum ab apna parichay do nahi to ….
Main-achchha to tum vahi maaya bi kitaab ho.aur ab kya jamaana aa gaya hai.aaj kal kitaabe bhi bolne lagi hai.main hu king of shadow.
Knowledge book-aur main maaya bi kitaab hu.achchha to tum shadow ho mujhe apna pahachaan bato.mujhe to nahi lgta itna jaldi koee shadow aaye ga.isliye jaise main kah rahi hu vaise hi karo.apna hath mere pahle pane par rakho tab pata chale ga tum sach bol rahe ho ya nahi.agar jhoot bol rahe ho ge to main tumhe apne is kitaab me kaid kar lungi.
Main-us kitaab k itna bolte hi maine apne sarir se sare sainik k kavach hata diya ab main puri tarah apni shadow rup me tha.jaise us kitaab ne kaha tha maine us kitaab k pahle panne par apna hath rakh diya .jaise hi maine us kitaab pe apna hath rakha vo kitaab aur bhi jada kala ho gaya.abhi main usko bahot dhayan se dekh raha tha kya ho raha hai.tabhi
Knowledge book-ab tum apna hath hata sakte ho .mujhe pata chal gaya hai tum ek shadow ho.tum ko pata hoga na mujhe pane k liye kya kya karna hai .
Main-haa mujhe thoda bahot pata hai lekin tum mujhe ek baar phir se bata do to achchha hoga…..
Knowledge book-thik hai…
To be continued dosto kal khule ga knowledge book ko pane ka raaz aur aap logo ko ye bhi pata chale ga q koee dusra us maaya bi kitaab ko nahi paa sakta hai...............
Main-aur mere sath sirf 7 aur log chauthe padaav ko paar karne me kaamayaab ho kar aakhiri padaav me pahoch paye the.hum sab is samay teharma raajya me the.jaha is pratiyogita ka arambh huva tha.hum sabhi ka teharma raajya me upasthit sabhi log pure josh se swagat kar rahe the.hum sabhi log bhi is pal ka anand le rahe the.tabhi
Minata-apni jagah se khada ho kar apna hath upar kar k sabko shaant hone ka ishaara karte hai.
Sabhi log-apne raaja ko dekh kar shaant ho jate hai.
Minata-swagat hai tum sabhi 8 yoddha o ka ek baar phir se teharma raajya me aur is khel ki pratiyogita me aur meri shubhakaamana tum sabhi k sath hai.inta bol kar vo apne singhasan par baith jata hai.aur apni mahaamantree ko kuchh ishaara karta hai.
Mahaamantree-(apne raja ka ishaara pate hi mahaamantree sabh kuchh samajh jata hai usko kya karna hai).turant apni jagah se thoda aage aa kar yoddhao aap sabhi ka main phir se abhinandan karta hu.aur main tum sabhi logo ko bata deta hu ye tum sabhi ka aur is khel ka aakhri padaav hai matlab paanchavaan (5th) padaav hai.is padaav me tumhare saamane 8 yoddha honge.unko harao aur tum jo bhi inaam chahate ho us inaam ko hasil kar lo.bus itna hi karna hai.itna bol kar vo shaant ho jata hai.
Main-apne sabhi dosto se .dosto sambhal k jab bhi ye log kahate hai padaav ko par karne k liye jada kuchh nahi karna hai.tab tab hum sabhi ne us padaav me apne bahot se dosto ko khoya hai.main abhi aur kuchh bol pata ek bar phir se pratiyogita ko dekhne vale logo ka shoor hum sabhi ko aane laga.phir kya tha dekhte hi dekhte hum sab k saamane 8 yoddha jameen se nikal kar hum sab k samne aane lage jisko dekh kar logo ka aavaaj aur un sabhi ka shoor phir se suru ho gaya.aur hota bhi q nahi .q ki jitne bhi yoddha jameen me se nikal kar hum sab k samne aaye the.vo sabhi yoddha hum jaise hi dikh rahe the .un sabhi ka hum jaisa hi pahnava bhi tha jisko dekh kar koee bhi nahi bata sakta tha ye asli nahi nakli hai hum bhi khud ashcharya the un yoddha ko dekh kar.sab k sab hum logo k jaise hi dikh rahe the.
Main-apne maan me kya maaya rach hai.kamal hai.yahi sabhi k maan me bhi kuchh na kuch chal raha tha.aur vaha baithe sabhi logo k maan me bhi yahi chal raha tha ki aage kya ho ga aur kya hone vala hai.
Mahaamantree-ab khel ko main aarambh karta hu.
Main-mahaamantree k inta bolte hi jameen se nikle 8 yoddha hum par humla karne k liye hamare taraf badhne lagte hai.hum sab bhi bilkul taiyar the un sabhi ka saamana karne k liye.phir ek baar suru ho jata hai mahaa yuddh.mahaa yuddh is liye q ki ye sabhi hum sab ka nakal kar rahe the.jaisa hum talvaar chalate vo bhi vahi karte .jo bhi magic hum log use karte vo bhi vahi karte.ab hum sab ko dekh kar koee nahi bata sakta tha kaun asli hai kaun nakli hai.
Ab tak hum sabne un nakli yoddha ka kuchh bhi nahi kar paye the aur nahi hi un logo ne.isi tarah hum sabhi ladte rahe kafi der tak lekin vo hai ki rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahe the.mere samane vala jisne mere jaisa hi talvaar mere jisa shadow baane ka koisis kar raha tha .maine bhi apne maan me bolta hu ab bahot ho gaya is k bohot sath khel liya mere pass samay nahi hai. Agar koee mujhe pahale us kitab k pass chala gaya to vo hamesa hamesa k liye usme kaid ho jaye ja.ab mere pass yahi sahi mauka hai jab tak sabhi in yoddha k sath yuddh karte rahenge tab tak mujhe apna kaam karna hi pade ga.phir kya tha maine apni puri takat laga kar apne saamane vale youdha par vaar kar diya jisko vo sambhal nahi paya .mere saamane ka yoddha phir se mitti me mil gaya.
Main-ne jaise hi apne samane vale ka kaam tamaam kiya sabhi logo ka shoor ana suru ho gaya.mera dekh kar sabhi apna puri takat laga apne samne vale yoddha se yuddh karne lage .main ab aage badhne laga jaise maine aage badha tha. kisi ki cheekhe ghune lagi .lekin mere pass samay nahi tha .is liye maine main us kitaab k pass pahoch gaya.jis ko ek bahot hi khas kale kapde me lapet kar rakha gaya tha .jaise jaise main us kitaab k najdeek pahochte ja raha tha asmaan me kale badal chhane laga aur phir kya tha puri ki puri jagah hi kali andheri raat me badal gai.jaha kuchh der pahle ek dum suhana mausam tha aab vaha anderi raat ho gai thi.
Mujhe-us anderi raat me bilkul saaf dikhaee de raha tha .maine apne ass pass dekha to jaise sab kuchh tham sa gaya tha sabhi log jaise jaam gaye hai.
Main-apne maan me ye sab kya ho raha hai…ye sabhi logo ko kya huva hai.tabhi ek aavaaj.
Knowledge book-kaun ho tum aur tum ne ye sab kya kiya hai.mujhe apna paichaan batao.nahi to maine tumhe abhi aur hamsa hamesa k liye kaid kar lungi apne kitaab me.
Main-dosto jo aavaaj maine suna tha vo aavaaj us kitaab ki thi.maine bhi jor se kaun bol raha hai.samne aao nahi to…..
Knowledge book-(tabhi vo chamkne lagti hai) main vahi bol rahi hu jisko pane k liye tum yaha par rahe ho.tum ab apna parichay do nahi to ….
Main-achchha to tum vahi maaya bi kitaab ho.aur ab kya jamaana aa gaya hai.aaj kal kitaabe bhi bolne lagi hai.main hu king of shadow.
Knowledge book-aur main maaya bi kitaab hu.achchha to tum shadow ho mujhe apna pahachaan bato.mujhe to nahi lgta itna jaldi koee shadow aaye ga.isliye jaise main kah rahi hu vaise hi karo.apna hath mere pahle pane par rakho tab pata chale ga tum sach bol rahe ho ya nahi.agar jhoot bol rahe ho ge to main tumhe apne is kitaab me kaid kar lungi.
Main-us kitaab k itna bolte hi maine apne sarir se sare sainik k kavach hata diya ab main puri tarah apni shadow rup me tha.jaise us kitaab ne kaha tha maine us kitaab k pahle panne par apna hath rakh diya .jaise hi maine us kitaab pe apna hath rakha vo kitaab aur bhi jada kala ho gaya.abhi main usko bahot dhayan se dekh raha tha kya ho raha hai.tabhi
Knowledge book-ab tum apna hath hata sakte ho .mujhe pata chal gaya hai tum ek shadow ho.tum ko pata hoga na mujhe pane k liye kya kya karna hai .
Main-haa mujhe thoda bahot pata hai lekin tum mujhe ek baar phir se bata do to achchha hoga…..
Knowledge book-thik hai…
To be continued dosto kal khule ga knowledge book ko pane ka raaz aur aap logo ko ye bhi pata chale ga q koee dusra us maaya bi kitaab ko nahi paa sakta hai...............
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