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Superb UpdateeUpdate 4
yaha me apko kuch naye characters ke intro de deta hu jo is waqt mandir me hain
Surendra- Age 19 hain, smart hain aur padhai me ye bhi Neel ki hi trah hain.
Aadi- age 20 hain sahar kaafi power wala banda hain, dosto ke liye ye kisi ko maar bhi sakta aur mar bhi sakta hain.
Avni- Aadi ki gf aur kuch hi der baad aadi wife bhi. Iski age 21 hain. Bahut sunder ladki hain. Simple ladki hain.
Aarti- iski age 21 hain aur sunder hone sath sath gussa nak pe rahta hain. Kisi par jaldi believe nahi karti hain.
Ginni- inki age 22 hain aur inke pita ji ek doctor hain. Pita ki ladli bitiya hain.
Let start story- (Neel ko writer mein likhega)
Main mandir ke andar pahuch daakhil (enter) ho gaya aur seedha jaake saamne khade sakhs se jor se ek awaaj lagate huwe gale mila jise sunke sab meri taraf mud ke dekhne lag gaye.
bosdeeeeke....
bosdike...
aur is trah gaaliyo ka len den karte dono ek dusre ke gale iss trah lagte hain jaise maano barso bichde ho.
ye dusra ladka jiske me gale mila tha iska ye Surendra tha.
In dono ke is trah ke milne ki ladkiyo ko bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi sath mandap me baithe Aadi ko ye to pata tha ki aise hi uske dono dost gale milenge par ye nahi pata tha ki iska shor itna uncha hoga.
thoda dheere se nahi bol skta tha.... Aadi ne ye man me socha,, idhar maine Surendra se gale milne ke baad aadi se jaakar uske kaan me bola.
badhai ho bhaiye aaj ke baad tere hatho me dard kabhi nahi hoga....
bc dheere dheere bol deta yu mandir me halla chodne ki kya jarurat hain... Aadi ne yahi kaha tha ki Avni ne turant boli..
ye shaadi hone ke baad sabse pahle tumhe hi dekhungi dever ji ko dantne se pahle khud ko dekho yaha mandap me baithe ho aur gaaliyan de rahe ho..... Avni ke itna kahne par Neel ki andar khushi ki lahar dhaud gayi aur
Bhaabheee... Maine kaha aur Avni ke aage hath badhaya aur Avni ne bhi apna hath aage badha dono ne hand shake kiya.
lagta hain babhi dever ki team ban gayi hain...
babhi hame bhi apni team me saamil karlo akhir me bhi to apka dever hi hu....itni der inki baate sun rahe sunrendra ne bhi bol hi diya.
ha ha ap aur Neel dono hi mere devar ho hamari team to suru se hi hain...Surendra ke javab me Avni ne kaha.
avni kaise dost hain tere aadi ke itni gandi gaaliya dete hain aur tu inse pyar se baat kar rahi hain.... Suruwaat se ab tak saari baate sun rahi Aarti ab jakar kuch boli.
Dono gaaliya jarur dete hain par isse ye sabeet nahi hota ki ye bure hain aur jaise bhi ho lakin teeno ek dusre ke liye bhai se badhkar hain itna... Avni ne kaha jise sunkar Aarti chup ho jaati hain. Avni aur aadi ki shaadi ho gayi aur ye dono mandir ke bahar aa gaye.
bahar ek cham chamati huwi ek gajab ki gaadi khadi huwi thi
Kya car hain yar... Arti ne kaha
Hmmm... Ginni ne kaha
Ye car aadi ki hain... Surendra ne kaha
Yaar tum dono mere bhai ho jo mera voh tumhara bhi hai... Aadi ne kaha.
chal chal baate band kar aur tum dono niklo aaj tum dono ki suhag raat hain... Surendra ne kaha
Surendra ki baat sunke Avni ki dono saheliya hasne lagi. Aise kuch der baate karne ke baat dono car me baith kar nikal gaye.
aur yaha rah gaye me Surendra aur Avni ki dono saheliya ginni aur Aarti.
aacha to fir chalte hain.. maine kaha
ha jarur... Arti ne kaha aur hamne handshake kiya.
Surendra ne fir ginni se hath milaya. Are hath milaya kya voh to hath se chipak gaya
Shaant gadadhari bheem shant hosh me aayiye... Maine Surendra se kaha aur Surendra ne hadbadahat me jaldi se hath chhod diya..
ab maine me bhi ginni se hath milaya. Jaise hi maine ginni se hath milaya mujhe fir se dark energy feel huwi. Hath milaata hi ginni ke aas pass ajeeb sa ghumte huwe mila jo ko chhoona chahta tha par chhoo nahi pa raha tha saamne Jab us ajeeb se aadmi ko laga ki me trah se kyu dekh raha hu aur jab usne Neel ko dekha to uske paseene aane laga aur bahut jyada dar gaya.
Aouch.. ginni ke mu se nikla
kya kar rahe ho itni jore bhi koi hath milata hain... Ginni ne kaha
sorry mera dhyaan kahi aur tha apki ring kaafi sunder hain..
thank u... Ginni ne kaha aur dono saheliya vaha se chali gayi aur Neel aur Surendra bhi apne ghar ke liye nikal gaye.
kon tha ye jo mujhe dekh pa raha tha aur mujhe isse dar kyu laga... Ginni apni activa se nikal gayi thi aur uske peeche vo ajeeb aadmi baitha yahi soch raha tha ginni is baat se anjaan thi ki koi ajeeb admi uske peeche hi gayab hoke baitha huwa tha.
