Fantasy Achanak ka Kanoon

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Introduction​

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[ragish7357]

update 3​

itni jaldi kyu aaya shaadi hone ke baad aata Aadi..... Jee ha is anjaan ladke ka name aadi hain aur isko dekhte hi anvi ke chahre par khushi ko koi dekh skta tha.


Ab aage-


Aadi- are sorry yarr thoda let gaya.

Anvi - thoda let ho gaya hota to abhi ye mujhse shaadi kar chuka hota.

Aadi- me hoo na yarr mere rahte hame koi alag nahi kar sakta.

Aadi anvi ka hath pakdta hain aur use lekar nikalta hain aur anvi ke pita ko bolta hain... Uncle me koi bura insaan nahi hu lakin jis trah aap anvi ke jubarjusti shaadi kara rahe the mujhe bura banana pada..... Aadi itna bolkar hi nikal jaata hain.


Aadi aur anvi is waqt gaadi me baithe huwe the thodi der baad aadi apna phone nikalta hain aur apne kisi dost ke pass phone lagata hain.

Ha bhai aur kaisa hain..

Voh dusra ladka phone par-- bor ho raha hu yarr. Sun tu khaali baitha hain kya

Aadi- tu bol tujhe kya kaam hain

Dusra ladka- agar tu khaali baitha hain to mila hila de..

Aadi- tum jaise logo ki wajah se gaaliya khud bolti hain "prabhu hamara istemaal kijiye" saale jaldi aaja idhar xxxx mandir me.

Dusra ladka- kya ho gaya jo tujhe baghwaan ke pass jane ke jarurat pad gayi.

Aadi- shaadi kar raha hu

Itna sunte hi vaha se phone cute ho jaata hain.
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Chalte hain Neel ke pass


Yaha Neel bistar pe pada huwa tha. Aur apne dost ke aayi call ke baare me soch raha tha.

Saala babhi ko ghar bagha laya aur hame sab hone ke baad bata raha h.

Abhi Neel khada huwa aur shaadi waale kapde pahan ke mandir ke liye nikalne laga.


Bhaiya kaha ja raha hain... Ye puchne waali Nikita thi.

Kahi nahi ja raha bas aise hi kapde pahne hain.... Itna bolke Neel ne joote ke feete (shoeless) bandh liye aur khada ho gaya.

Bata de na kaha ja raha h... Nikita badi badi aankhe karke Neel boli

Nahi bataunga...

Bata do na bhaiya please.... Baat nahi banti to ye Nikita har baar ki trah pyar se baat karne pe aa jaati hain.

Kya bola tune.... Neel ne pucha

Bata do na... Nikita ne kaha

Ha aise hi raha kar hamesha... Aur Neel itna bolke ghar bahar nikla aur jor chillaya... Apne dost ke sath ghoomne ja raha hu..
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Neel yaha mandir pahuch chuka hain abhi Neel mandir pahuchne ke baad mandir ke bahar angdayi le hi raha tha ki achanak Neel ko kuch feel huwa. Jaise koi aas pass ho. Aur vo koi dark energy jaisa kuch ho par Neel ko feel huwa ki ye bahut halka hain aur mandir me ghusna chahta hain.

Neel apna ek hath halka hawa me uthata hain dheere dheere mandir ke andar chalta huwa jaata hain. Neel aisa chal raha tha maano uska hath hawa ko touch ho raha hain. Jaise hi mandir me enter hota hain Neel ke hath halka jhatka khata hain jaise current ko touch kar liya ho.

Neel ab seedha mandir me enter karta hain aur mandir me 6 log hote hain...

Anvi apni dono saheliyo ke sath aayi thi jinka name ginni aur arti tha.

Yaha aadi ke sath ek ladka khada tha jiska name Surendra tha. Ye Neel aur aadi ka common friend hain.

superbb update bro

 

[Vik1006]

Introduction​

Ye ek gareeb parivaar hain.

Rajendra (Father)- Age 48 hain aur ek majdur. Aur monthly 10 hajar rupees kama lete hain

Kusum- Rajendra ki wife hain aur age 38 hain. Ye ek housewife hain.

Dono hi pade likhe nahi hain par ache log hain.

Neel- ye hamara hero hain. Neel ki age 19 hain aur ye abhi study kar raha hain. Mind me thoda sharp hain aur jyada baat nahi karta lakin dimag bhale hi tej ho. study me iska dimag nahi lagta. Ye sabki kahani hain ap me se kon kon hain jo exam se ek din pahle hi kitaabe khol ke baithta hain ye bhi aisa hi hain.

Nikita- ye Neel ki chhoti bahan hain. Lakin sirf age me ye chhoti hain. Ye Neel ko jyadatar aise treat karti jaise Nikita badi ho. Lakin pyari bhi bahot hain. Bhai bahan wala jhagda aaye din hota hi rahta hain.

ye family ek Normal family ki trah hi hain. Yaha sirf ek baat strange hain vo hain Neel.

Vaise me bata du me pahli baar likh raha hu kuch. To koi galati ho jarur bataye.

Iska pahla update Aaj raat ko 10 baje aa jayega.

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Congrats for new thread...

 

[Vik1006]

Update 1


Neel subah ke 5 baje uthkar meditation kar raha hain. Kareen 6 baje meditation se free hokar Neel bad par letkar mobile chalane lag jaata hain. Chalate chalate subah 8 baj gaye. Neel ke papa Rajendra subah 5 baje hi apne kaam par chale gaye the.

bahar Neel ki mummy Kusum awaaj lagati hain.... Lala utha kab tak mobile chalata rahega utha ja ab.

neel bolta hain... Ha mummy bas uth raha hu 5 minute aur.

iske thodi der baad hi Neel uth jaata hain aur naha dhokar Neel apne exam ke liye ready ho jaata hain. Aaj Neel bsc ka last year ka first exam hain to Neel aaj college jaldi ja raha hain.

mummy me ja rahu... Itna bolkar Neel apni mummy ke pair chhuta hain aur nikalne ke liye apni 7 saal purani atlas ki cycle nikalta hain. Itne me hi Nikita aa jaati hain.

bhaiya mere bhi pair chhiyo tumko punya milega... Nikita itna bolkar apni ankhe badi aur chahre pe smile le aati hain.

hatt me aur tere pair chhiyu shakal dekhi hain....


ha tumse to achi hi hain..


peper hain uska aaj ladayi mat kar Nikita...... Mummy bich me aati hain aur Nikita ko dantne lagti hain.


neel bhi cycle lekar nikal jaata hain apne college jaha use exam dena hain. Aaj ka exam dene ke baad Neel ka agla exam 4 din baad hain.


Subah 10 baje college

neel yaha college ke bahar khada hain. College ke andar entry 11:30 pe milni thi to kuch college ke bahar khade the to kuch yaha vaha ghoom rahe the. 8 ladkiyo ka group bhi ek jagah khada tha. Jo apas me gappe mar rahi thi. In ladkiyo me ek ladki thi. Ladkiyo ka ye group kaaafi khubsurat ladkiyo se bhara huwa tha. Par inme se aisi koi ladki nahi thi jo neel ko pasand aa jaye.

Kuch der baad college ke andar entry hona suru ho jaati hain. Uske baad exam bhi start ho jaata hain. Sab log exam kar rahe hote hain.


exam Neel ke liye bahut hi easy tha. Kyuki lockdown hatne ke baad ye exam suru huwe the aur jo log is waqt exam de rahe hain unko pata hi hoga exam kyu easy hain. Akhir ek subject ke 3 part ko mix karke ek hi paper bana diya voh Multiple choice questions.

exam Neel ne half hour me complete kar diya. Ab Neel ne socha ye log time up hone ke baad hi answer sheet lenge to kyu na kuch der so liya jaaye.

kuch der hi huwi thi ke ek jor ka thappad Neel ke gal pe padta. Neel hadbada ke uthta hain aur zor se bolta hain ... Teri ma ki chuuuuu

Itna bolte hi Neel ruk jaata hain aur use hosh aata hain ki voh exam hall me hain aur thappad marne waala Shaqs uska examinar hain.

Examinar- tujhe sone ke liye kisne kaha tha. Pad kar to aate nahi hain tum jaise log aur yaha aake sone lag jaate ho. Answer sheet pe ek 500 ka note chipkake tum jaiso ko lagta hain pass ho jaoge.

Neel (gusse me) - aisa hain sir ye exam gayi baad me pahle ye batao aapne mujhe thappad kyu maara. Me abhi police apke khilaf complent karne ja raha hu. Voh laga hain camra jisme recording hain ki apne mujhe maara aur dusri baat maine mera paper complete kar liya hain.


examinar ki to dar ki wajah se hawa tight ho gayi. Examinar aaj ghar me Biwi se ladkar aaya tha aur yaha akaar apni frustration nikalna chahta tha. Jab usne Neel ko dekha to use aur gussa aa gaya aur Neel ko ye sab bolne laga tha. Examinar ne Neel se maafi mangi.


lakin Neel ki himmat dekhkar exam hall me baithi ladkiyo Neel se kuch kuch impress to ho gyi thi.


Neel ghaar gaya is shaam ke 4 baj rahe the. Aaj ke din isse jyada kuch khaash huwa nahi isi trah raat bhi ho aur sab sone chale gaye. Neel ne bhi kuch der mobile chalaya aur so gaya.


is raat me kahi aur prathvi se koso dur ek planet pe is waqt kuch log baate kar rahe the.

anajan 1- kya voh din aa gaya hain.

anjan 2- ji, asur mantri ji voh ghadi najdeek aa rahi hain bahut kam samay bacha hain jab hame hamare maharaj mil jayenge.

Asur mantri- jald hi hame hamare maharaj mil jayenge aur ham log ek fir se un insaano pe raaj kar payenge asur guru.

Asur guru- lakin mantri ji me us ghatna ko yaad karta hu to chinta ho jaati hain. Ki kahi koi gadbad na ho jaaye. Maharaaj milne ke baad me ham fir se shaktishaali ho jayenge. Aur ho sakta hain ek fir se ham hamare asur zinda ho jaaye.

Asur mantri- sab theek hoga hamare maharaaj burai aur kaali takato ke Badshah honge. Koi achhai unka kuch nahi bigaad sakti.

Nice update...

 

[Vik1006]

Update 2​

Neel roj ki trah subah 5 baje utha aur meditation karne baith karne baith gaya. 1 ghante meditation karne ke baad Neel soch raha tha ke aaj ke kya kiya jaaye. Neel ka next exam 5 din baad tha isiliye uske paas bahut time tha.

kuch der baad Neel Mobile lekar bad par let gaya aur mobile chalane lag gaya. Abhi muskil 5 minute hi nikle honge ki zor se chillane ki awaaj aati hain.

uth ja yaha se me ghar ki saaf safai kar rahi hu aur tu yaha susta raha hain ye nahi chalega...... Ye aawaaz Neel ki bahan Nikita ki thi. Voh aaj saaf safai karne ke mood me thi aur hamesha ki trah aisa show kar rahi thi jaise Neel uska bada bhai nahi chhota bhai ho.


Ye baat aaram se bhi bol liya kar, tere gale me dj laga huwa hain kya..... Neel ne itna kaha aur bahar chala gaya.

Neel apne ghar ki chhat par baitha huwa tha, thodi der baad voh chhat par tahalne lag gaya. Neel ke ghar bagal me ek aur ghar tha jaha ek lady aur unki daughter rahti hain. Us lady ka pati bahut saal daaru pine ki wajah se mar gaya tha. To ghar me ye dono hi thi. Unka 100 gaj ka t plot hain jisme 30 gaj ka ek kamra hain aur baaki ka area khula tha. Kamre thoda aage bathroom hain hain.

us bathroom se me voh lady nahi rahi thi. Neel unke ghar taraf hi dekh raha tha ki tabhi bathroom se voh aunty full nude bahar aa gayi. Gaana haste huwe geele kapde taar par daal rahi thi.

YE nahi sudharne waali inka ye hamesha ka hain.....Neel ye sab soch raha tha. Darshal Neel ko voh lady mahine ek baar to is trah se dikh hi jaati thi par kabhi toka nahi tha lakin abhi baar voh zor se chillata hain..


aunty kapde pahan lo thand lag jayegi baarish ka mausham hain..... Jaise hi us lady ne suna voh jhatt se bathroom me ghus gayi. Sharam se puri laal ho gayi thi.

Us lady ka name maavi hain aur kabhi voh aise nude bahar aa jaati thi kyuki kisi ka koi chance hi nahi tha ki koi dekh le Neel ghar pe bhi chhat bahut kam hi log jaate the aur jaate bhi thi voh Neel ki ma ya bahan hi thi.


Neel haste huwe vaha chala gaya voh to bas maavi aunty ke saath masti kar raha tha. Isse jyada uska plan nahi tha.


Subah ke 10 baje

Yaha sahar me kahi ek jagah pe koi program ho raha hain. Kareeb 100 log vaha kursiyo par baithe huwe hain. ek jawan ladka aur ladki hawan ke pass baithe huwe hain. Aur pandit mantra pad raha hain.

jee ha yaha shaadi ka program chal raha hain. Dulhan dikhne heroine jaisi lag rahi thi. Dulha to usse dekhkar lattoo ho gaya aur suhagraat ke sapne sajane me lag raha tha.

par dulhan bilkul shant thi, uske chahre par zara bhi haav bhaav change nahi ho rahe the. Jaise maano Chahre pe ghar chhodne bilkul bhi gam nahi ho.

dulhan pita apni beti ko shanth dekh andar bahut khush the.

haashh ye Aanvi ko dekhkar lag raha hain ye koi drama nahi karne waali.... Dulhan ke pita yahi soch kar khush ho raha tha. Inka name shyam tha.

tabhi vaha us marriage hall me ek ek black color ki audi aa jaati hain. Sabke liye ye koi shock se kam nahi tha. Log gaadiya marriage hall ke bahar park karte hain aur ye ladka andar hi le aays jaha shaadi ho rahi thi.

jab us anjaan ladke ko shyaam mandap ki traf aata dekhta hain to andar se bahut dar jaata hain.

voh kuch logo ko ishara karta hai yaha ane se rokne ke liye.


4 log chalkar use vahi rok dete hain lakin agle hi un chaaro ke paseene chhutne lagta hai.

VO anjaan ladka jeb me revolver lekar aaya tha.

Pandit ji ya to mantra rok dijiye ya fir apni saanse.... hath me revolver dekhkar to jaise pandit ji ki saanse hi ruk gayi. Lakin turant hi unhone mantr rok diye.

itni jaldi kyu aaya shaadi hone ke baad aata Aadi..... Jee ha is anjaan ladke ka name aadi hain aur isko dekhte hi anvi ke chahre par khushi ko koi dekh skta tha.

Fantastic update...

 

[Vik1006]

update 3​

itni jaldi kyu aaya shaadi hone ke baad aata Aadi..... Jee ha is anjaan ladke ka name aadi hain aur isko dekhte hi anvi ke chahre par khushi ko koi dekh skta tha.


Ab aage-


Aadi- are sorry yarr thoda let gaya.

Anvi - thoda let ho gaya hota to abhi ye mujhse shaadi kar chuka hota.

Aadi- me hoo na yarr mere rahte hame koi alag nahi kar sakta.

Aadi anvi ka hath pakdta hain aur use lekar nikalta hain aur anvi ke pita ko bolta hain... Uncle me koi bura insaan nahi hu lakin jis trah aap anvi ke jubarjusti shaadi kara rahe the mujhe bura banana pada..... Aadi itna bolkar hi nikal jaata hain.


Aadi aur anvi is waqt gaadi me baithe huwe the thodi der baad aadi apna phone nikalta hain aur apne kisi dost ke pass phone lagata hain.

Ha bhai aur kaisa hain..

Voh dusra ladka phone par-- bor ho raha hu yarr. Sun tu khaali baitha hain kya

Aadi- tu bol tujhe kya kaam hain

Dusra ladka- agar tu khaali baitha hain to mila hila de..

Aadi- tum jaise logo ki wajah se gaaliya khud bolti hain "prabhu hamara istemaal kijiye" saale jaldi aaja idhar xxxx mandir me.

Dusra ladka- kya ho gaya jo tujhe baghwaan ke pass jane ke jarurat pad gayi.

Aadi- shaadi kar raha hu

Itna sunte hi vaha se phone cute ho jaata hain.
,
,
,
Chalte hain Neel ke pass


Yaha Neel bistar pe pada huwa tha. Aur apne dost ke aayi call ke baare me soch raha tha.

Saala babhi ko ghar bagha laya aur hame sab hone ke baad bata raha h.

Abhi Neel khada huwa aur shaadi waale kapde pahan ke mandir ke liye nikalne laga.


Bhaiya kaha ja raha hain... Ye puchne waali Nikita thi.

Kahi nahi ja raha bas aise hi kapde pahne hain.... Itna bolke Neel ne joote ke feete (shoeless) bandh liye aur khada ho gaya.

Bata de na kaha ja raha h... Nikita badi badi aankhe karke Neel boli

Nahi bataunga...

Bata do na bhaiya please.... Baat nahi banti to ye Nikita har baar ki trah pyar se baat karne pe aa jaati hain.

Kya bola tune.... Neel ne pucha

Bata do na... Nikita ne kaha

Ha aise hi raha kar hamesha... Aur Neel itna bolke ghar bahar nikla aur jor chillaya... Apne dost ke sath ghoomne ja raha hu..
,
,


Neel yaha mandir pahuch chuka hain abhi Neel mandir pahuchne ke baad mandir ke bahar angdayi le hi raha tha ki achanak Neel ko kuch feel huwa. Jaise koi aas pass ho. Aur vo koi dark energy jaisa kuch ho par Neel ko feel huwa ki ye bahut halka hain aur mandir me ghusna chahta hain.

Neel apna ek hath halka hawa me uthata hain dheere dheere mandir ke andar chalta huwa jaata hain. Neel aisa chal raha tha maano uska hath hawa ko touch ho raha hain. Jaise hi mandir me enter hota hain Neel ke hath halka jhatka khata hain jaise current ko touch kar liya ho.

Neel ab seedha mandir me enter karta hain aur mandir me 6 log hote hain...

Anvi apni dono saheliyo ke sath aayi thi jinka name ginni aur arti tha.

Yaha aadi ke sath ek ladka khada tha jiska name Surendra tha. Ye Neel aur aadi ka common friend hain.

Superb Update...

 

[Vik1006]

Waiting for next update...

 

[Junaid devil😈]

Zabardast Update Bhai

 

[Prashant gautam]

Lajawab bhai

 

[Shanu]

For new thread bro

 

[mashish]

update kab tak aayega writer ji